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*Shorten article particularly history |
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* '''Reduce size of History section by moving details to History of Iran article and using ]. Suggested length: 10 paragraphs.''' |
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*Confirm image copyrights and licensing |
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* Improve writing style in Economic section (too many short, shoppy paragraphs that start with "Iran..." |
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* Consolidate Government section into one long section describing the federal government, deferring "main article" links to the main Politics in Iran article |
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* Add brief coverage of current student reform efforts, e.g. http://www.daneshjoo.org/ |
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* Better explain democratic elections in early 1950s (put details in History article). Could someone add a paragraph to flesh this out? How were democratically held elections implemented? The Shah was reinstated, the article states, but does not explain how he had lost power... |
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* Fix the nonfactual reference to the Bush administration’s plans to use nuclear force. These plans are not only unconfirmed, but also alleged. Furthermore, the source article is post dated. |
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* Give more information about main cities that are not Tehran. |
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* In the sub-heading 'Administrative divisions', i think it will be a good idea to note the recent changes in provincial boundries such as those of Mazandaran, Yazd and Khorasan provinces. |
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* Improve pictures early in the article so they are less pale and lifeless. |
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* Add coverage about refugess e.g. from Iraq and Afghanistan, in Demographics. |
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* Add boundary disputes to 'Geography and climate' section, e.g. from CIA: |
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:ex. Iran protests Afghanistan's limiting flow of dammed tributaries to the Helmand River in periods of drought; Iraq's lack of a maritime boundary with Iran prompts jurisdiction disputes beyond the mouth of the Shatt al Arab in the Persian Gulf; Iran and UAE dispute Tunb Islands and Abu Musa Island, which are occupied by Iran; Iran stands alone among littoral states in insisting upon a division of the Caspian Sea into five equal sectors |
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* Add section for Communication and Transportation in Iran; including cellphone use, Tv, Roads, Airports, Radios, Internet and etc. |
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* Add section for military |
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* Discuss U.S. claim of Iran possessing chemical |
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<!-- *Complete reference section, including correctly formatted citations for statistics --> |
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<!-- *Expand ] and include in it a mention of the media in Iran. --> |
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*Confirm all image copyrights and licensing |
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<!--**Make rationales for or replace fair use images in cities gallery (gallery removed) --> |
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**Continue to police for unsourced images |
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<!-- *Create topics box to replace most see alsos and lists --> |
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<!-- *Reduce ], including those to government sites and those not directly relevant to Iran as a whole --> |
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<!-- *Improve method of image presentation --> |
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<!--*The government and politics section needs to be expanded--> |
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<!--*The history section is badly done. http://www.thebritishmuseum.ac.uk/persia/index.html |
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The British Museum (I live in London) had a very intersting exibit about Iran/Persia. |
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The first human rights and freedom of religion can be traced back to Darius the break. There is actually a block about 5 ft by 2 ft. (still exists) that talks about this.--> |
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