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Much further down the page, we find: "Her first pregnancy five years after marriage ended in despair and humiliation when her infant son died shortly after birth." This would have been 1871 or 1872. If this is the case, then dad-in-law's directive could not have been in response to the death of Min's first son. Much further down the page, we find: "Her first pregnancy five years after marriage ended in despair and humiliation when her infant son died shortly after birth." This would have been 1871 or 1872. If this is the case, then dad-in-law's directive could not have been in response to the death of Min's first son.


== Item for reclaim with reference ==
== Title ==

Our article on the ] implies it was established in 1897, and this person seems to have died before that. This leads me to suspect most English-language reliable sources probably call her "Queen Min" (Donald Keene's ''Emperor of Japan: Meiji and His World, 1852–1912'' definitely does). Is there any reason we don't? ] (<small>]]</small>) 08:42, 11 November 2020 (UTC)

:Late reply, but based on old talk posts I think it's part confusion about wikipedia policies (assuming last official title is prioritized) and part nationalism (wanting her to be elevated and assuming anyone who doesn't is a Japanese nationalist). I agree that it probably should be "Queen Min" ] (]) 19:30, 27 August 2023 (UTC)

== Split proposed ==

{{Discussion top|result=The result of this discussion was to be bold and split ] (]) 05:53, 12 July 2023 (UTC)}}

Hi, I propose that we split off the Assassination section into a separate article.

For size, the current article is pretty long (as indicated by template on page as of 10 July 2023). As per , the number of bytes of readable prose in the article is 55,665. It fits in the "May need to be divided" category of ].

But I have more arguments beyond size:
* It seems like a separate-enough topic to me, and the Korea wiki agrees . The assassination itself is surrounded by additional significant controversy that could/should be discussed in greater detail in a separate article, and not on the article for the Empress.
** Anecdotal, but I've when I've written on Korea-related pages, I've needed to refer to the assassination specifically on a number of occasions, but not the Empress herself.
* The current article has a lot of issues; fixing them is honestly daunting even for me because of its sheer length (especially if you include the assassination portion). The full article is probably a 20-40 minute read; I'm betting the vast majority of people don't read much of the body because they're put off by the length and mixed quality.
** The assassination portion I'd argue is somewhat better off; if it's split into its own article, that article wouldn't be so rough.
** In other words, splitting could help compartmentalize areas that need fixing and make it less daunting of a task. People would actually read more of each article, so potentially more fixes

Thanks! First time doing a split proposal like this, lmk if I did something wrong ] (]) 23:41, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

:Almost forgot: Title.
:I'm open to ideas, but will explain my reasoning below:
:For the title of the new article, I think either "Assassination of Empress Myeongseong" or "Eulmi Incident" could work. An alternative is "Assassination of Queen Min", which but I think consistency with the title of this article is important.
:'''Research'''
:
:Google Scholar (exact string match, case insensitive):
:* Assassination of Empress Myeongseong: 46 results
:* Eulmi Incident: 69 results
:* Assassination of Queen Min: 258 results
:Google Books (exact string match, case insensitive):
:* Assassination of Empress Myeongseong: 539 results
:* Eulmi Incident: 313 results
:* Assassination of Queen Min: 1930 results
:If anything, "Assassination of Queen Min" seems most common. Anecdotally, this fits what I've seen too. However, as per ], if we assume the title "Empress Myeongseong" for this article is appropriate (idk, haven't researched this) then we should do "Assassination of Empress Myeongseong".
:I personally prefer "Assassination of Empress Myeongseong". It's more descriptive; "Eulmi Incident" is jargony even in Korean. ] (]) 00:00, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
::Tbh I don't think you're gonna get much resistance (or much discussion here at all). I would suggest that you be ] and do it. As for the title, I generally believe it's important that it be consistent with the article title here, though that doesn't necessarily have to be the case. <nowiki>:</nowiki>3 ] (]]) 05:04, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
:::Thanks as always for the input. This is a relatively more popular article than the ] one so wanted to play it safe. I'll go ahead and make the change. ] (]) 05:49, 12 July 2023 (UTC)


I removed this direct quote because there is no reference. Please return it if one is available. It came from Early years in the Personal section.
{{Discussion bottom}}


She once allegedly remarked to a close friend, "He disgusts me." ] (]) 09:51, 23 September 2023 (UTC)
== Renaming article ==


== Removal of template ==
Hi, I did some research and I think the article should be named "Queen Min" instead of "Empress Myeongseong".


I am minded to remove the template regarding multiple issues. Though, like all articles, it could benefit from more citations, the template now seems to me to be satisfied for the most part.
Reasoning:


Does anyone have a contrary view? ] (]) 11:15, 23 September 2023 (UTC)
See ]. The most ] in reliable English publications is "Queen Min" on , Google Books (12,100 vs 489), and Google Scholar (1,420 vs 242). It also matches the ].


I'll go ahead and make the change, but please respond if disagree. ] (]) 06:13, 12 July 2023 (UTC) :Agreed to removing the citation needed and tone ones; I added a lead too long one, I think that stands. See ]; {{tq|The lead has no heading; its length should be commensurate with that of the article, but is normally no more than four paragraphs}}. I think the shorter paragraphs can be merged into longer ones ] (]) 22:47, 23 September 2023 (UTC)
::Thanks for your Reply.
::I have edited the Summary down to 4 paras, the first being quite short.
::Apologies for overlooking the Summary editing earlier. I hope the edit is satisfactory.
::Do you think the template can now be removed? ] (]) 10:03, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
:::Yes, please go ahead. No need to apologize, thanks for your hard work ] (]) 10:15, 24 September 2023 (UTC)


== Item for reclaim if referenced ==
:Ok actually nvm, I just saw the dumpster fire that is ]
:I disagree with most of the oppose arguments made in there, but think the point about name overlap is a valid concern. Anecdotal but I still think "Queen Min" is way more common than "Empress Myeongseong" in Eng lang literature. I'll hold back, not really looking to dive into the weeds of that rn.
:Complicates things a little for the upcoming assassination section split. "Assassination of Queen Min" genuinely seems to be more common than "Assassination of Empress Myeongseong", although maybe some other "Queen Min" has been assassinated before (googling doesn't seem to show that). Based on ] and the {{tq|Volgograd}} part of ] I think there's a reasonably strong argument to use "Queen Min" for that article. But there's some wiggle room.
:I'm going to name it "Empress Myeongseong" for now, but I'm very much on the fence. I think not making it consistent will just make it confusing to the average reader who doesn't know/care about Misplaced Pages policies. And there hasn't been much momentum to rename this article to "Queen Min" in recent years, idk if that'll change and I'm not looking to be the changer. ] (]) 06:45, 12 July 2023 (UTC)


I removed sentence "The queen consort summoned Chinese envoys and persuaded them to keep 2,000 Chinese soldiers disguised as Joseon police or merchants."
== Image in infobox? ==


Reason: The item relates to 1885 and the post-treaty behaviour of the Chinese/Koreans. I have not been able to verify this using Hulbert's detailed chronicle Chapters 16 and 17 or elsewhere.
Afaik there's hot debate on whether an image of her exists; even the kowiki refrains from having an image. I'm not an expert on the topic though. Does anyone know if we should have the image? ] (]) 19:20, 27 August 2023 (UTC)


:See this archived post for reference: ] ] (]) 19:22, 27 August 2023 (UTC) Please reinstate/ modify if referenced. ] (]) 09:59, 24 September 2023 (UTC)


== Gallery ==
::I just added an image without seeing this section. I also didn't notice at first that the image I added seems to be based on the photo of dispute authenticity. Yet, the drawing is from 1898 and the photo is from a 1901 publication... You can see a scan of the original 1898 page . The actual version of the file is not the original French version... ] (]) 22:51, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
:::Yes, I think we should refrain from having an image. It's still heavily debated even in academic circles ] (]) 23:33, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
::::Is there any debate in English to which you could point me? The source certainly seems good enough on its own to support the picture currently there. ] (]) 01:02, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
:::::Peer reviewed:
:::::*
:::::* (abstract only in English)
:::::note that the conclusions of both papers is that it's complicated and uncertain whether any photos are actually of her.
:::::
:::::
:::::I don't think we should rely on a single source to make this judgement call. This topic has been debated over for decades, with no clear conclusion. ] (]) 01:11, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
::::::Just to be clear, you are saying that the sketch is based on the photo and the photo was, even in 1898, mistakenly believed to be of the queen? ] (])
:::::::Not quite, I have no opinion on the sketch or photo, or even any on the entire topic. My point is that it's consensus that whether any photos exist of her at all is controversial. I don't know much about the sketch. I'd try to research thoroughly whether the sketch is considered an accurate likeness of her. Ideally that research should cover the Korean lang consensus as well. But until you're reasonably certain I'd hold back from having it in the infobox, as people seem to be opinionated on the topic. Body with caveats is definitely fine though. ] (]) 04:17, 11 September 2023 (UTC)


@] Hey, sorry just a headsup that I deleted the gallery. I feel bad about it; I know it must have been a chunk of time/work, so please discuss if disagree. The decision had to do with ] and also with general policies around images in articles. Generally the link between images and article content is expected to be very direct I think. ] (]) 14:48, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
==Direct quotes needing references==
I removed the following words from the Aftermath section ie after the queen's assassination.
"Gojong, a man who had always been used by others and never used his own voice for his own causes, was noted by scholars as having said, "I would rather slit my wrists and let them bleed than disgrace the woman who saved this kingdom."
There is a need for two references, one for the King's previous attitude on non-interference; one for the words themselves. If anyone can reference these, that part of the removed words can be reinstated/ adapted. I hesitate to remove material but this really does need referencing, not least because the words may come from one of the many subsequent dramatic representations of the events in question.
I am trying to reduce the narrative to referenced factual content and would welcome back the quote if it can be traced properly. {{unsigned|PineappleDolly|12:29, 16 September 2023}}


:Hi there
:Agree with your choice; to you and others, please don't hesitate to remove text that is unsourced and has multiple issues. Non-neutral POV, poor grammar/prose, etc.
:I think that this particular biography is almost completely inaccessible to many readers without quite a lot of visual input. The more so in that most of the photos are contemporary.
:It's better to have an article with some holes in it that's well-written and well-cited, than a bloated article that's poorly written that never gets sourced/improved significantly. Many Korea-related articles have huge chunks of poorly-written text that have gone unsourced for 10+ years. ] (]) 08:53, 17 September 2023 (UTC)
:Of course it was a lot of work to source these, and I had chosen the pictures as directly things that were an inescapable part of the narrative in the biography.
:However, I daresay it would not have been removed if you had not been more or less convinced.
:Interpreting how far one should go is something that editors will vary with.
:It would be helpful to me if you could discuss with one or two of the other editors that input to the page before making your final choice. Thanks
:Regards ] (]) 17:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
:2:
:If you are decided to remove the entire Gallery, I do suggest that the burial/cremation sketch and the Queen's memorial should be retained somewhere, possibly the Assassination site.
:The same is probably true for the Japanese Legation building photo and the Russian Legation building. ] (]) 18:16, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
:3:
:In the above by "inaccessible" I mean that it is a lost world that is hard to imagine: no photo of the subject, most of the buildings lost, a politics centred round foreign colonial powers. An independent, opulent monarchy also soon to disappear.
:No criticism of the biography at all, which is such an important one. ] (]) 18:49, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
::We can undo the decision for now until a discussion is had. I'll request for comment about it. I'm reasonably certain that it does not apply by ] though, at the very least the size of it is very large. ] (]) 21:44, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
:::I do agree that it could usefully be cut back somewhat. I will do this to see if that makes it more acceptable.
:::Regards ] (]) 00:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
:::2: as cut back, the following survived the cull:
:::*Japanese and Russian Legations, both integral to various parts of the narrative and both to the events of 1995-7
:::*the cremation site of the queen
:::*the monument to the queen by her husband (later pulled down)
:::*the wooden hair support that features in the photographs of the queen debate. It is an object of fascination including because seeing it worn makes it hard to tell what it in fact is. This is an item from the palace's own collection..
:::] (]) 00:54, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
::::That's much better yes. If you can find a way to weave these into the article body without using a gallery section that'd be ideal, but this is acceptable ] (]) 01:23, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
:::::Russian Legation photo to the separate site for Gojong's exile; Japanese Legation and all remnant photos taken into text. Gallery gone.
:::::Regards ] (]) 21:10, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

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Eulmi Incident grammar and style issues

There are numerous grammatical errors and style issues in the Eulmi Incident section. A bit of it will require familiarity with Misplaced Pages style standards, which I don't have.

anachronism

There seems to be some unacknowledged time-travel involved here: "By age 20, the queen consort began to wander outside her apartments at Changgyeong Palace and play an active part in politics in spite of the Daewongun and various high officials who viewed her as becoming meddlesome. The political struggle between the queen consort and Heungseon Daewongun became public when the son she bore died prematurely 4 days after birth. Heungseon Daewongun publicly accused her of being unable to bear a healthy male child, while she suspected her father-in-law of foulplay through the ginseng emetic treatment he had brought her. The Daewongun then directed Gojong to conceive through a concubine, Lee Gwi-in from the Yeongbo Hall (영보당귀인 이씨), and on 16 April 1868, she gave birth to Prince Wanhwa (완화군), whom the Daewongun entitled as crown prince."

When Queen Min was 20, it would have been 1871. The "concieve-an-heir-via-a-concubine" directive must have happened no later than early 1867.

When did QMin give birth to her son? - it could have been no later than early 1867, within two years of the marriage, when she could have been no more than just turned 17. Was father-in-law on her case already at that stage?

Much further down the page, we find: "Her first pregnancy five years after marriage ended in despair and humiliation when her infant son died shortly after birth." This would have been 1871 or 1872. If this is the case, then dad-in-law's directive could not have been in response to the death of Min's first son.

Item for reclaim with reference

I removed this direct quote because there is no reference. Please return it if one is available. It came from Early years in the Personal section.

She once allegedly remarked to a close friend, "He disgusts me." PineappleDolly (talk) 09:51, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

Removal of template

I am minded to remove the template regarding multiple issues. Though, like all articles, it could benefit from more citations, the template now seems to me to be satisfied for the most part.

Does anyone have a contrary view? PineappleDolly (talk) 11:15, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

Agreed to removing the citation needed and tone ones; I added a lead too long one, I think that stands. See MOS:LEAD; The lead has no heading; its length should be commensurate with that of the article, but is normally no more than four paragraphs. I think the shorter paragraphs can be merged into longer ones toobigtokale (talk) 22:47, 23 September 2023 (UTC)
Thanks for your Reply.
I have edited the Summary down to 4 paras, the first being quite short.
Apologies for overlooking the Summary editing earlier. I hope the edit is satisfactory.
Do you think the template can now be removed? PineappleDolly (talk) 10:03, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
Yes, please go ahead. No need to apologize, thanks for your hard work toobigtokale (talk) 10:15, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Item for reclaim if referenced

I removed sentence "The queen consort summoned Chinese envoys and persuaded them to keep 2,000 Chinese soldiers disguised as Joseon police or merchants."

Reason: The item relates to 1885 and the post-treaty behaviour of the Chinese/Koreans. I have not been able to verify this using Hulbert's detailed chronicle Chapters 16 and 17 or elsewhere.

Please reinstate/ modify if referenced. PineappleDolly (talk) 09:59, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Gallery

@PineappleDolly Hey, sorry just a headsup that I deleted the gallery. I feel bad about it; I know it must have been a chunk of time/work, so please discuss if disagree. The decision had to do with WP:GALLERY and also with general policies around images in articles. Generally the link between images and article content is expected to be very direct I think. toobigtokale (talk) 14:48, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi there
I think that this particular biography is almost completely inaccessible to many readers without quite a lot of visual input. The more so in that most of the photos are contemporary.
Of course it was a lot of work to source these, and I had chosen the pictures as directly things that were an inescapable part of the narrative in the biography.
However, I daresay it would not have been removed if you had not been more or less convinced.
Interpreting how far one should go is something that editors will vary with.
It would be helpful to me if you could discuss with one or two of the other editors that input to the page before making your final choice. Thanks
Regards PineappleDolly (talk) 17:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
2:
If you are decided to remove the entire Gallery, I do suggest that the burial/cremation sketch and the Queen's memorial should be retained somewhere, possibly the Assassination site.
The same is probably true for the Japanese Legation building photo and the Russian Legation building. PineappleDolly (talk) 18:16, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
3:
In the above by "inaccessible" I mean that it is a lost world that is hard to imagine: no photo of the subject, most of the buildings lost, a politics centred round foreign colonial powers. An independent, opulent monarchy also soon to disappear.
No criticism of the biography at all, which is such an important one. PineappleDolly (talk) 18:49, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
We can undo the decision for now until a discussion is had. I'll request for comment about it. I'm reasonably certain that it does not apply by WP:GALLERY though, at the very least the size of it is very large. toobigtokale (talk) 21:44, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
I do agree that it could usefully be cut back somewhat. I will do this to see if that makes it more acceptable.
Regards PineappleDolly (talk) 00:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
2: as cut back, the following survived the cull:
  • Japanese and Russian Legations, both integral to various parts of the narrative and both to the events of 1995-7
  • the cremation site of the queen
  • the monument to the queen by her husband (later pulled down)
  • the wooden hair support that features in the photographs of the queen debate. It is an object of fascination including because seeing it worn makes it hard to tell what it in fact is. This is an item from the palace's own collection..
PineappleDolly (talk) 00:54, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
That's much better yes. If you can find a way to weave these into the article body without using a gallery section that'd be ideal, but this is acceptable toobigtokale (talk) 01:23, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
Russian Legation photo to the separate site for Gojong's exile; Japanese Legation and all remnant photos taken into text. Gallery gone.
Regards PineappleDolly (talk) 21:10, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
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