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== Semi-protected edit request on 17 January 2018 == == Semi-protected edit request on 15 March 2022 ==


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In the subsection Chaika (Gull), link to ]. It currently mentions only that the song is based on findings from the ]. ] (]) 17:03, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
The introductory sentence in the 2nd paragraph of the Feminism section "This appeal from popular culture was mostly due to the group's feminist notions" does not seem like a relevant sentence; nor does it seem relevant to require citation as tagged. It does not describe the following paragraph adequately and the following statements and sentences are properly cited.
:{{done}}. Thanks. ] (]) 18:41, 15 March 2022 (UTC)


Thanks for edit, but slight correction. The ] was the one to release ], not Pussy Riot. I'd replace 'findings of the Anti-corruption Foundation' with a link to the film, or do the | thing. ] (]) 15:53, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
#1lib1ref ] (]) 16:44, 17 January 2018 (UTC)
:{{done}} Have adjusted further. Thanks. ] (]) 21:44, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
::{{Yo|Martinevans123}} When closing edit requests, please deactivate the template. Closing it now ] '''Already done'''<!-- Template:ESp --> Happy Editing--''']]''' 00:12, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
:::I closed it once. Thought there might be another suggestion. lol. ] (]) 10:30, 20 March 2022 (UTC)


== Cossacks? ==
:Are you proposing that it should simply be removed? Thanks. ] (]) 16:47, 17 January 2018 (UTC)
:] '''Done'''<!-- Template:ESp --> I believe that {{u|Bird 2204}}'s request to remove that sentence is reasonably clear and correct. It is an unsourced claim tagged with a CN tag for more than two years which adds nothing to understanding the feminist ideology of the band. ] ] ] 19:34, 17 January 2018 (UTC)


Is it really that important to describe the security guards as Cossacks? I'm not sure what their identity has a people has to do with the crack down. ] <sup>]</sup>] 19:40, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
== External links modified (January 2018) ==


:It is used quite prominently in the sources cited. ]&nbsp;] 17:52, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
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== Semi-protected edit request on 27 August 2022 ==
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Would like to mention her collaboration with MARINA, specifically the song "Purge the Poison" where she had her own verse. ] (]) 12:40, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
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== 4th member of case ==
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Cheers.—] <span style="color:green;font-family:Rockwell">(])</span> 14:51, 21 January 2018 (UTC)

== Semi-protected edit request on 16 July 2018 ==

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No doubt the link to a "source" provided for ''"Tolokonnikova was part of a performance in which couples were photographed having public sex in the Timiryazev State Biology Museum in Moscow in February 2008."'' in 2nd paragraph of '''Trial Aftermath/Pussy Riot and Voina''' section should be replaced with a link to a credible source, because the current one leads to an article written by an unknown person (also the name of the article, written in Russian, is "Pussy Riot whores on trial in Moscow"). It obviously ought to be removed. ] (]) 10:30, 16 July 2018 (UTC)
:] '''Not done:'''<!-- Template:ESp --> please provide an alternative source. ] (]) 11:10, 16 July 2018 (UTC)


https://www.bbc.com/russian/features-52889179 - a few years ago 4th member of stage action perfomance "Mother of God, Drive Putin Away" has been named ] (]) 23:49, 18 September 2023 (UTC)
== We Now Know More About the Apparent Poisoning of the Pussy Riot Member Pyotr Verzilov ==


== GA concerns ==
https://www.newyorker.com/news/our-columnists/we-now-know-more-about-the-apparent-poisoning-of-the-pussy-riot-member-pyotr-verzilov ] (]) 17:26, 21 October 2018 (UTC)


I am concerned that this article no longer meets the ]. Some of my concerns are listed below:
== They are no Dissidents ==


*There is uncited text throughout the article.
They are actually only a-political Attention Whores.--] (]) 13:40, 18 February 2019 (UTC)
*At over 10,000 words, ] recommends that information be spun out. Is there information that can be summarised more effectively and moved to other articles?
*There is an orange "update needed" banner on top of the "Imprisonment" section that needs to be addressed.
*"Amnesty International concert and membership controversy" Has a very large block quote that I do not think is necessary. Can this be summarised and removed?
*Lenta is used as a citation, which according to ] is on the Misplaced Pages spam blacklist. These sources should be replaced.
*There are sources listed in "Further reading" that are not used as inline citations. Can these be used in the article, or should they be removed?


Is anyone willing to address these concerns, or should this be sent to ]? ] (]) 20:23, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
== Graffiti in Warsaw ==


== The lead is too long and detailed ==
https://en.wikipedia.org/Pussy_Riot#/media/File:Czyste,_Warsaw,_Poland_-_panoramio_-_Roman_Eugeniusz_(7).jpg


The lead is supposed to be a summary. ] ] (]) 09:12, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
This mural was painted by '''Artur Wabik for Amnesty International in 2012'''. I think it should be copyrighted. More details here (in Polish): https://amnesty.org.pl/kalendarze-empatii-na-maratonie-pisania-list%C3%B3w/ <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 11:15, 26 June 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:It is recommended that leads be of one, two, three or four paragraphs which summarise the most important content of the article.--] (]) 16:49, 13 October 2024 (UTC)

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In the subsection Chaika (Gull), link to Chaika (film). It currently mentions only that the song is based on findings from the Anti-Corruption Foundation. 207.72.1.93 (talk) 17:03, 15 March 2022 (UTC)

 Done. Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 18:41, 15 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for edit, but slight correction. The Anti-Corruption Foundation was the one to release Chaika (film) , not Pussy Riot. I'd replace 'findings of the Anti-corruption Foundation' with a link to the film, or do the | thing. 207.72.1.93 (talk) 15:53, 18 March 2022 (UTC)

 Done Have adjusted further. Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 21:44, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
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I closed it once. Thought there might be another suggestion. lol. Martinevans123 (talk) 10:30, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

Cossacks?

Is it really that important to describe the security guards as Cossacks? I'm not sure what their identity has a people has to do with the crack down. CaptainEek 19:40, 10 May 2022 (UTC)

It is used quite prominently in the sources cited. Aircorn (talk) 17:52, 11 May 2022 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 27 August 2022

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Would like to mention her collaboration with MARINA, specifically the song "Purge the Poison" where she had her own verse. Zoraxia (talk) 12:40, 27 August 2022 (UTC)

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 20:36, 27 August 2022 (UTC)

4th member of case

https://www.bbc.com/russian/features-52889179 - a few years ago 4th member of stage action perfomance "Mother of God, Drive Putin Away" has been named 95.24.128.66 (talk) 23:49, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

GA concerns

I am concerned that this article no longer meets the good article criteria. Some of my concerns are listed below:

  • There is uncited text throughout the article.
  • At over 10,000 words, WP:TOOBIG recommends that information be spun out. Is there information that can be summarised more effectively and moved to other articles?
  • There is an orange "update needed" banner on top of the "Imprisonment" section that needs to be addressed.
  • "Amnesty International concert and membership controversy" Has a very large block quote that I do not think is necessary. Can this be summarised and removed?
  • Lenta is used as a citation, which according to WP:RS/P is on the Misplaced Pages spam blacklist. These sources should be replaced.
  • There are sources listed in "Further reading" that are not used as inline citations. Can these be used in the article, or should they be removed?

Is anyone willing to address these concerns, or should this be sent to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 20:23, 15 September 2024 (UTC)

The lead is too long and detailed

The lead is supposed to be a summary. MOS:LEAD Jontel (talk) 09:12, 13 October 2024 (UTC)

It is recommended that leads be of one, two, three or four paragraphs which summarise the most important content of the article.--Johnsoniensis (talk) 16:49, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
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