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Today's Advisory Opinion by the ICJ uses the term "Occupied Palestinian Territory", as does the ICJ's 2004 Advisory Opinion. I see that the article says that this term has been used, for many years, by other international bodies and national governments and that the UN used it till 2012, when Palestine was admitted as a non-member observer state, under the name "State of Palestine". Should we change the article title to either "Palestinian territory" or "Occupied Palestinian Territory"? Misha Wolf (talk) 15:02, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

This article title is an antique, a hangover from the days of yore, difficult to get rid of because so many RS still use the term, even now.

The "territories" have long been legally considered as one territory and that was reiterated at the ICJ today.

And we now have the ICJ opinion that the occupation is itself illegal (apart from all the other illegal things).

If it was down to me, I'd put Illegally occupied Palestinian territory :/ Selfstudier (talk) 15:07, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

We could solve the RS issue through a redirect. Misha Wolf (talk) 15:13, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

I would absolutely support a move to Occupied Palestinian Territory, it is overwhelmingly used in legal sources—which is what the article is about. (t · c) buidhe 16:46, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

So would I. Misha Wolf (talk) 18:28, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

How can we progress a change of title? Misha Wolf (talk) 15:46, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

It's a good question. Stepping back for a moment, let's look at the ICJ opinion (there are sufficient RS covering it so we we can speak to it directly here). A couple of things in there, first the legal position that Gaza and the West bank (incl EJ) are a single territorial unit (equivalent to the territory claimed by the SoP). The current title implies separateness but this only true in a strict geographical sense and a narrative promoted by Israel/US (see CIA "fact"book for example).

Secondly it was determined as a matter of law that the entire territory is occupied even if the Gaza occupation is of the functional variety.

Thirdly the ICJ uses, just like most authoritative sourcing does, the name Occupied Palestinian Territory as well as determining as a matter of law, that said territory is illegally occupied.

So, to reiterate, in my view, the current title is an historical anachronism and should be changed. Selfstudier (talk) 16:22, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

It's definitely potentially merited. Ngrams shows the proper noun phrase (in both singular and plural) holding up well against the generalism. Iskandar323 (talk) 16:17, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

As per above, because this phrase was used for so long (such that some RS style guides mention it), there is an inertia factor at work, that's why the ngrams hold up for Pt. Selfstudier (talk) 16:25, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

Also, I ran out of space in the Ngrams search bar, but some "Palestinian territories" hits are also for "occupied Palestinian territories" (sentence case) – which, if run separately, implies that "Palestinian territories" actually falls well below OPT(s), both individually in the singular and certainly collectively. Iskandar323 (talk) 16:50, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

(Ahem, and that's before we even count the Misplaced Pages mirrors.) Iskandar323 (talk) 16:51, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

So how do we move this along? It's nearly 25 years since the UN and ISO adopted the term "Occupied Palestinian Territory" (in October 1999). I know that we want to avoid Recentism, but 25 years should be long enough. I know that the UN and ISO have since moved on to "State of Palestine" but that describes the political entity as opposed to the geographical area. Misha Wolf (talk) 17:22, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

If you want to define it in purely geographical terms, there is nothing wrong with the current title. But given the scope that is clearly not the intention. Selfstudier (talk) 17:31, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

True. I'll rephrase that as " but that describes the proposed political entity as opposed to the existing mess." Misha Wolf (talk) 22:16, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

Well, the thing to do is put up an RM -> Occupied Palestinian territory No? (it's aka oPt as well so that would work or we can consider OPT as a "name" in which case capitalize everything. Selfstudier (talk) 22:22, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

I would argue that it is a name. Indeed, ISO 3166-1 Newsletter No. V-2 of 1999-10-01 (cited source ) states in row 2 "Official name Occupied Palestinian Territory".

In cited source , the EU also treats it as a name , eg in "European Union, Trade in goods with Occupied Palestinian Territory".

As I expect that you are far more familiar with the RM process than I am, would you be willing to do it? Misha Wolf (talk) 22:39, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

Requested move 5 August 2024

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The result of the move request was: Moved to Occupied Palestinian territories. We're in a bit of a WP:NOGOODOPTIONS situation here. There is strong - unanimous in fact - consensus that a move is advisable, but no clear consensus on exactly where to move. The main points of debate are (a) whether to capitalise the whole thing as a proper name, and (b) whether to use singular or plural for territory. Everyone agrees that the word Occupied should be prepended, however, so in closing this I'm taking the path of least change and simply adding that word on to the front of the existing title. As there isn't a definite consensus for the specific title, editors are welcome to start a fresh RM in the future to explore a different variant if anyone feels strongly about that.  — Amakuru (talk) 10:38, 12 September 2024 (UTC)

Palestinian territories → Occupied Palestinian Territory – This terminology has become standard across all official sources, the United Nations, itself and in its resolutions, and at the International Court of Justice (ICJ), in 2004 and reaffirmed in 2024, the EU and in many secondary sources. The ICJ concluded that the West Bank and Gaza are a single territorial unit: However, the Court recalls that, from a legal standpoint, the Occupied Palestinian Territory constitutes a single territorial unit, the unity, contiguity and integrity of which is to be preserved and respected. Thus, all references in this Opinion to the Occupied Palestinian Territory are references to this single territorial unit. Although still used in sources, and should remain as an aka, the existing title is currently an anachronism. Note that the OPT is also equivalent geographically to the area claimed by the State of Palestine. Selfstudier (talk) 10:17, 5 August 2024 (UTC) — Relisting. Frost 16:15, 12 August 2024 (UTC) — Relisting. FOARP (talk) 15:22, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

• Support per nom. Misha Wolf (talk) 20:21, 5 August 2024 (UTC)

Relisting comment: Seeking more participation Frost 16:15, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

Note: WikiProject Palestine has been notified of this discussion. Frost 16:16, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

• Move to Occupied Palestinian Territories: It's much, much better. Waqar💬 17:00, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

  But is different from the name ("Occupied Palestinian Territory") adopted by the UN, ISO and the ICJ. Misha Wolf (talk) 17:12, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

@Misha Wolf: I support both, but Occupied Palestinian Territories is better in my opinion. Waqar💬 17:23, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

• Support per nomination. Di (they-them) (talk) 18:53, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
• (edit conflict) I have no issue with adding occupied to the title, but I oppose capitalizing the letter T in territories. That seems out of line with a significant portion of mainstream usage which lowercases the letter t. Remember that Misplaced Pages titles use sentence case and only words and phrases that are consistently capitalized in a substantial majority of independent, reliable sources are capitalized in Misplaced Pages (MOS:CAPS). The fact that the Red Cross, the Associated Press, Al Jazeera, PBS, the WHO, and even different parts of the UN capitalize it as "occupied Palestinian territory" suggests there is no substantial majority. As for plural or singular, ngrams usage suggests that the singular is more common now (and substantial reasoning behind it), so I support that as well. ~ F4U (talk • they/it) 19:22, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
• Without the excess capitalization, I support – News typically has "occupied Palestinian territory" (or territories). It's not a name. The fact that the UN caps it does not make it a proper name. Dicklyon (talk) 23:32, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
• Relist comment - Based strictly on the above there is consensus to move. However, there has been a bit of discussion around capitalisation and pluralisation that could be better explored. I also strongly suspect that once this move is carried out it will be more controversial than it presently appears, though obviously I could be wrong about that. FOARP (talk) 15:22, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

  @FOARP: I also strongly suspect that once this move is carried out it will be more controversial than it presently appears Why? Selfstudier (talk) 15:59, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

  Because every single I-P related move discussion I've seen lately has been so. It would be a pleasant surprise if this one is not so. FOARP (talk) 19:16, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

• Support per nom but would prefer Israeli-occupied Palestinian territories. This would be consistent with Allied-occupied Germany, German-occupied Europe, Russian-occupied territories of Ukraine, Israeli occupation of the West Bank, Israeli-occupied territories

Kowal2701 (talk) 18:40, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

• Support Term is widely used in the media and in government sources. It is an improvement on the current title. Would also support "Israeli-occupied" similar to Russian-occupied territories of Ukraine but that seems to have less general usage. AusLondonder (talk) 14:33, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
• Support per nom. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 14:52, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
• Strong support per nom. Lewisguile (talk) 18:38, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
• Support per nom, would also support Israeli-occupied Palestinian territory (based on Kowal2701's comment, singular form per the ICJ) - Ïvana (talk) 02:22, 7 September 2024 (UTC)

Discussion

Below, I've pasted in some of my earlier contributions which are now included in collapsed regions of this Talk page.Misha Wolf (talk) 12:07, 2 September 2024 (UTC) (Tidied up the indentation of my text below 16:36, 4 September 2024 (UTC))

... like the ICJ, the ICRC uses "Occupied Palestinian Territory". The UN and ISO used that name until 2012, when Palestine was admitted to the UN as a non-member observer state. Misha Wolf (talk) 22:29, 21 August 2024 (UTC)

• I've now discovered that the UN and some or all of its agencies still use the term "Occupied Palestinian Territory" when referring to the relevant portion of the Earth's surface, even though they switched in 2012 to "State of Palestine" when referring to the political entity. See, for example, here and here. Misha Wolf (talk) 23:02, 21 August 2024 (UTC)

And here. Misha Wolf (talk) 12:16, 22 August 2024 (UTC)

... see the ICRC's "Israel and the Occupied Palestinian Territory: The law of occupation must be respected" of 2024-07-19.

The UN has consistently used the term "Occupied Palestinian Territory" since October 1999 to describe the territory, as opposed to the legal entity. That's coming up to 25 years. I consider the position of the UN, with its 193 member states, to be authoritative. Misha Wolf (talk) 12:25, 22 August 2024 (UTC)

Resolution A/RES/77/247 adopted by the UN General Assembly on 30 December 2022, which requested that the ICJ renders an advisory opinion regarding the occupation, repeatedly uses the term "Occupied Palestinian Territory".

Note also the title of the ICJ's advisory opinion of July 2004, "Legal Consequences of the Construction of a Wall in the Occupied Palestinian Territory". Misha Wolf (talk) 12:54, 22 August 2024 (UTC) (Amended to remove an excess word 12:57, 22 August 2024 (UTC))

In response to the relisting comment about singular/plural and capitalization, I give (20 August 2024) Le Monde "Not only does the ICJ declare the Israeli occupation "unlawful," but it also considers "the Occupied Palestinian Territory constitutes a single territorial unit," regardless of the different statuses that Israel has imposed on it since 1967. The reversal of perspective implied by the use of the singular, rather than the usual plural, by the highest body of international law is particularly significant for Gaza." and (2024) Oxfam America and an interesting discussion in 2023 of the Australian parliament "On 8 August 2023, the Minister for Foreign Affairs, Penny Wong, noted in Parliament that 'Australia is proposing to adopt or will be adopting or returning to the term "Occupied Palestinian Territories"'." (also includes a brief review of what "peer nations" are doing wrt terminology, their example for the EU is correct except that the EU does usually capitalize). Maybe editors have other examples we could look at? Selfstudier (talk) 22:03, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

As you mention, and as noted in para 2 of the article's lead, the EU normally uses the term "Occupied Palestinian Territory". Misha Wolf (talk) 22:17, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

References

1. "European Union, Trade in goods with Occupied Palestinian Territory" (PDF). European Commission / Directorate-General for Trade. 4 November 2016. Archived (PDF) from the original on 2019-05-28. Retrieved 29 November 2016.

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Please update "135 UN Member Nations have recognized the State of Palestine." to "145 UN Member Nations have recognized the State of Palestine." as the number has since increased. AG202 (talk) 04:50, 9 August 2024 (UTC)

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. MadGuy7023 (talk) 07:16, 9 August 2024 (UTC)

@MadGuy7023: I am matching the number found at State of Palestine and International recognition of the State of Palestine, which is the page that the aforementioned source links to, meaning that we have a clear and blatant discrepancy that needs to be updated. However, if it's necessary to give a source with the explicit number of "145", here's one: https://www.al-monitor.com/originals/2024/06/armenia-recognizes-palestinian-state-israel-furious-summons-ambassador. AG202 (talk) 15:00, 9 August 2024 (UTC)

Done ({{Numrec|Pal}} and it should autoupdate.) Selfstudier (talk) 15:13, 9 August 2024 (UTC)

Ngrams

Shows a clear preference for the singular over the plural. Onceinawhile (talk) 18:29, 12 September 2024 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the cap version is most common but it can wait for a while. Selfstudier (talk) 16:46, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

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