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==Lincoln was not at all a racist== |
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I am appalled that a racist was allowed to spread ignorance in Misplaced Pages which is much too refined for this. Just using a reference, one can make up anything they would like. Abraham Lincoln said what he said in order to win votes in order to be elected president so he could put an end to slavery. He had to speak to the same audiences as Stephen Douglas. Lincoln knew what he had to say to win.](]) 21:14, 1 May 2024 (UTC) |
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== Evaluation == |
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The article is written well in the correct tone of voice. It flows smoothly and is arranged well with a solid outline/structure. More visuals can be added to the article, and more substantive information can be inserted into the section being edited. Most importantly, the author needs to be concise in describing the material, as the article is lengthy and droning text will only bore readers (the author isn’t droning and their text is concise; this is just a point to keep in mind.) ] (]) 01:51, 4 November 2021 (UTC) |
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This article is extremely well written an engulfs all the aspects of racism in the united states. Its chronological structure an easy to read sections allow readers with little knowledge on the subject to understand. My only suggestion would just be to keep growing on what it already here. There are historical acts of tolerance and intolerance pertaining to racism each year in the united states. racism in the United States is always changing so this article must be kept up to date consistently. The author could continue to use scholarly sources which neutrally convey acts of racism in the united states ] (]) 16:12, 22 November 2021 (UTC) |
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:We need reliable sources. The hagiographic curriculum in middle school isn't sufficient ] ] 04:53, 2 May 2024 (UTC) |
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:nahh, it's very middling in quality. a lot of the claims in the end of the lede are virtually unprovable drivel and are sourced from places like the UN.....which...let's just say, is not a very good source for an agenda free thoughful claim ] (]) 04:59, 23 October 2022 (UTC) |
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:I agree that it is erroneous to ascribe Abraham Lincoln's words during the Fourth Lincoln-Douglas debate to his "ingrained racist attitudes". I'm sure it was something that he would rather not have had to say, but he was backed into a corner by Douglas and to say anything else at that time would have been political suicide. ] (]) 02:55, 3 October 2024 (UTC) |
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I found this quite interesting article on ]. Maybe it has some use in this or some related articles. Fwiw, it includes a list of sources. ] (]) 11:42, 29 March 2024 (UTC) |
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The lead sentence in this section (already marked as dubious) is completely false. It states ''"Politically, the "winner-takes-all" structure that applies to 48 out of 50 states in the electoral college benefits white representation, as no state has voters of color as the majority of the electorate"'' ... however, 6 states, 1 federal jurisdictions, and 5 U.S. Territories have voters of color in the majority. Hawaii, New Mexico, California, Texas, Nevada, and Maryland, the District of Columbia, and American Samoa, Guam, the Northern Mariana Islands, Puerto Rico, and the U.S. Virgin Islands, respectively. Notably, the 5 U.S. Territories cannot vote in Presidential election, however, they can vote in primaries. Hawaii has ALWAYS been a majority voters of color and combined with D.C. and the other 5 states, this makes up close to 1/3 of the U.S. population. This needs to be changed. I saw the "dubious" tag but didn't see anything in here in its regard. ] (]) 14:02, 27 April 2022 (UTC) |
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I am appalled that a racist was allowed to spread ignorance in Misplaced Pages which is much too refined for this. Just using a reference, one can make up anything they would like. Abraham Lincoln said what he said in order to win votes in order to be elected president so he could put an end to slavery. He had to speak to the same audiences as Stephen Douglas. Lincoln knew what he had to say to win.Daviddaniel37(talk) 21:14, 1 May 2024 (UTC)