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== "while winning the popular vote" ==

Just for the record, in case it comes up again – there's been a bit of back and forth in a sentence in the lead in the last few days:
* {{u|Keeper of Albion}} ] "despite winning the popular vote" to "while winning the popular vote". Edit comment: ''There’s nothing ‘despite’ about it.''
* I ] it back to "despite". Edit comment: ''"despite" is clearer, especially for readers who may not know the details of the US presidential election system. It's been "despite" for years. Let's keep it that way.''
* KoA ] it back to "while". Edit comment: ''It reads as though the page is arguing that she should have been elected because she won the popular vote. "Despite" was removed from the lede section of the Donald Trump article this year in much the same way. She lost perfectly legitimately. There’s nothing "despite" about it.''

I then looked at the ] talk archives and found the discussions ] (June 2024) and ] (June 2023).

Many editors think "despite" simply expresses the fact that the result may be unexpected, especially for readers who are not familiar with the US electoral college. Many others think "despite" expresses some kind of illegitimacy and "while" is more neutral. In the end, a majority seemed to prefer "while". It's also been changed from "despite" to "while" in ] and ].

I think both iterpretations of "despite" are reasonable, but I'm not terribly opposed to "while". And in the interest of consistency and (as some argue) neutrality, I think we should now stick with "while" until a new consensus emerges. That's all for now. :-) — ] (]) 22:40, 31 October 2024 (UTC)


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:would work well. :would work well.
:I think the first or third image would work best, with a lean towards the third one in my own personal preference. ] (]) 02:11, 7 November 2024 (UTC) :I think the first or third image would work best, with a lean towards the third one in my own personal preference. ] (]) 02:11, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
::I made a crop of the third image you proposed (])
::I think it's better than the first image you gave as her smile seems slightly more natural than her smile in the first image. Of course, they are ultimately very similar images so it doesn't matter that much in the long run.
::I just hope we can update the lead image ASAP.
::Also, should the current lead image (Clinton in 2016) be moved down the article in the section about her 2016 presidential campaign? It seems it would fit. ] 19:47, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Yes; it would probably be best to move that lead image down there.
:::Activity on this article is very slow. Technically, it's consensus now that the image needs to be changed, but only a few people have voted. Somebody should bring this to other people's attentions. ] (]) 01:21, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
:I really like your first suggestion for the infobox. ] (]) 08:37, 15 November 2024 (UTC) :I really like your first suggestion for the infobox. ] (]) 08:37, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
:'''Support''' It is about time the lead image is changed. Either of them can work but @]'s suggestions are good too. ] 21:05, 20 November 2024 (UTC) :'''Support''' It is about time the lead image is changed. Either of them can work but @]'s suggestions are good too. ] 21:05, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
:That SMILE! Eughh! The old one is good ] (]) 15:22, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

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Photo for infobox

Should we update to any of the pics from the 2020s? The one from 2016 is... from 2016. That, and if you look at List of first ladies of the United States, there is another photo of Clinton being used.

Incumbent photo: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/e/ec/Hillary_Clinton_by_Gage_Skidmore_4_%28cropped%29.jpg

Suggestions:

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/e/ec/Former_United_States_Secretary_of_State_Hillary_Rodham_Clinton_at_the_U.S._Department_of_State_on_September_26%2C_2023_in_Washington%2C_D.C._14_%28cropped%29.jpg

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/e/e6/Hillary_Clinton_53663388489_o_%281%29.jpg DougheGojiraMan (talk) 04:39, 1 November 2024 (UTC)

It depends on how recent you want to go. It's better to focus on a strong, high quality image with Clinton as the focus though, I think.
I also propose the first image:
File:Former United States Secretary of State Hillary Rodham Clinton at the U.S. Department of State on September 26, 2023 in Washington, D.C. 14 (cropped).jpg
But I also believe that crops of:
File:Official Portrait of Former Secretary Clinton Unveiled at the U.S. Department of State on September 26, 2023 in Washington, D.C. 22.jpg
&
File:Official Portrait of Former Secretary Clinton Unveiled at the U.S. Department of State on September 26, 2023 in Washington, D.C. 21.jpg
would work well.
I think the first or third image would work best, with a lean towards the third one in my own personal preference. TheodoresTomfooleries (talk) 02:11, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
I made a crop of the third image you proposed (File:Official Portrait of Former Secretary Clinton Unveiled at the U.S. Department of State on September 26, 2023 in Washington, D.C. 21 - Crop.jpg)
I think it's better than the first image you gave as her smile seems slightly more natural than her smile in the first image. Of course, they are ultimately very similar images so it doesn't matter that much in the long run.
I just hope we can update the lead image ASAP.
Also, should the current lead image (Clinton in 2016) be moved down the article in the section about her 2016 presidential campaign? It seems it would fit. 𝔅𝔦𝔰-𝔖𝔢𝔯𝔧𝔢𝔱𝔞? 19:47, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
Yes; it would probably be best to move that lead image down there.
Activity on this article is very slow. Technically, it's consensus now that the image needs to be changed, but only a few people have voted. Somebody should bring this to other people's attentions. TheodoresTomfooleries (talk) 01:21, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
I really like your first suggestion for the infobox. 3df (talk) 08:37, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
Support It is about time the lead image is changed. Either of them can work but @3df's suggestions are good too. 𝔅𝔦𝔰-𝔖𝔢𝔯𝔧𝔢𝔱𝔞? 21:05, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
That SMILE! Eughh! The old one is good 68.57.163.100 (talk) 15:22, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
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