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	Good to see some expansion of this article. I'm disappointed not to see more images added, as this is something that an article on a more modern women is lacking, and there are many of her film performances in public circulation. Let's fix that. Also, can we get an image of her grave? The "Life after Stardom" "Charitable Service" and "Legacy Sections" have seen some good additions/expansions. Good. These also have some fragment and run-on sentences, so lets get those revised for correctness. Let's get these changes made by December 2016 so that her page is as sparkling as she was! ] (]) 20:55, 14 November 2016 (UTC)		Good to see some expansion of this article. I'm disappointed not to see more images added, as this is something that an article on a more modern women is lacking, and there are many of her film performances in public circulation. Let's fix that. Also, can we get an image of her grave? The "Life after Stardom" "Charitable Service" and "Legacy Sections" have seen some good additions/expansions. Good. These also have some fragment and run-on sentences, so lets get those revised for correctness. Let's get these changes made by December 2016 so that her page is as sparkling as she was! ] (]) 20:55, 14 November 2016 (UTC)

			== Citation needed for her burial in Columbia Cemetary ==

			Would this do?

			https://www.findagrave.com/memorial/5971689/jane-froman ] (]) 15:33, 16 November 2022 (UTC)

			:Well technically, findagrave.com doesn't meet ], because it is a user generated website, but it’s good enough for me. I can go confirm in person, if necessary. ] (]) 17:23, 16 November 2022 (UTC)

			:{{re\|Meower68}} Thanks again for the source. You inspired me to find a ] (]) 20:08, 16 November 2022 (UTC)

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Looks great so far, don't forget to cite the source that describes her as a "girl singer" or change this to female singer. I would also consider condensing some of your sections such as tv and film could be under one heading and I would also think about combining family, retirement and death into one heading entitled "life after singing" or something like that. Either way these are just small suggestions. Sean Dwyer (talk) 17:08, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

Feedback from Prof. P

Good to see some expansion of this article. I'm disappointed not to see more images added, as this is something that an article on a more modern women is lacking, and there are many of her film performances in public circulation. Let's fix that. Also, can we get an image of her grave? The "Life after Stardom" "Charitable Service" and "Legacy Sections" have seen some good additions/expansions. Good. These also have some fragment and run-on sentences, so lets get those revised for correctness. Let's get these changes made by December 2016 so that her page is as sparkling as she was! MeganPeiser (talk) 20:55, 14 November 2016 (UTC)

Citation needed for her burial in Columbia Cemetary

Would this do?

https://www.findagrave.com/memorial/5971689/jane-froman Meower68 (talk) 15:33, 16 November 2022 (UTC)

Well technically, findagrave.com doesn't meet WP:Reliable source, because it is a user generated website, but it’s good enough for me. I can go confirm in person, if necessary. Grey Wanderer (talk) 17:23, 16 November 2022 (UTC)

@Meower68: Thanks again for the source. You inspired me to find a news video from the Columbia Missourian Grey Wanderer (talk) 20:08, 16 November 2022 (UTC)

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