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Cleanup needed

Hi, I'm the one that added the tags (cleanup, story, source) to this article. I'm adding a talk header here, and adding this to the list of the Christianity Project articles. Not trying to be a jerk or anything. I'm being bold and assuming good faith. I'd love to see this article cleaned up and achieve higher standards of writing. Have a nice day! Nswinton 17:13, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

Significant revisions today

This evening I did some significant changes to the article.

• I removed the following images:
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I have no problem with the images being re-added to the page, given that they are placed in an appropriate place in the article, and have a caption, explaining the image. The article was basically an image-dump. Images like these need an explanation.

• I removed the NPOV tag finally, because I removed all the NPOV wording that I could find. The article is truly a stub now.
• I removed the {{Christianity}} banner, because it wasn't really contributing to the article, and was almost larger than the article. If the article was much larger, it'd be fine to replace the banner again.
• I properly cited the single good source that I could find in the article. Other sources should follow the model I used, as it keeps the page clean and organized.
• I put {{fact}} tags after each sentence that still needs to be referenced (most sentences in the article). This article still needs significant work.

Nswinton 00:00, 26 April 2007 (UTC)

Assertions must be supported see WP:V

I deleted some assertions that had no backing source and had been marked as such since April. I also added the tag to some new assertions made in the article since April. This article really needs to be cleaned up or deleted. Especially because it is WP:BLP. Regards, Bill Huffman 18:44, 1 August 2007 (UTC)

I also added the tag to Dr. Baymon's claimed credentials since at least the institution that bestowed the credential should be listed. I'll remove the claimed credentials in a week or two if the institution isn't named. I also note that I searched Google for some reliable sources and the only thing that I came up with were two sources for the arrestassault charge. Regards, Bill Huffman 21:06, 1 August 2007 (UTC)

I've removed unsourced assertions that might reasonably be challenged (and were in my paragraphs above  :-) ). Before adding information such as this back into a WP:BLP article please first carefully review WP:V#Burden_of_evidence. Thanks, Bill Huffman 17:05, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

There was never any arrest. There was an araingnment and the Chargs were later dismissed.

Fixed, thank you. BTW, Please sign all entries on talk pages with four asterisks tildes (~~~~). Thanks, Bill Huffman 16:54, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

I am the Official Public Relations Officer for Archbishop Timothy Paul, Metropolitan of the International Communion of the Holy Christian Orthodox Church. The information listed on this site is inaccurate. Kevin Riley

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