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This section is transcluded from Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Objectivism/Cross talk. (edit | history)There doesn't seem to be much use of the Objectivism cross-talk page lately. I'm the only one who has used it since February. Is it still relevant? --RL0919 (talk) 20:41, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
- Perhaps not. Although I love it, I have to say it now seems like an esoteric feature. Karbinski (talk) 14:25, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
Legacy: Minor Tidying
I tried moving presidents, supreme court judges and academics out of the "popular influence" section and dropping them back in the article at the top of the main section. Query whether we need the reference to Penn Jillette (which didn't have a cite, unless I somehow lost it). Jillette is a popular entertainer, but it's not like he does Objectivist magic tricks. For all I know, hundreds of popular entertainers are Rand fans, but what's notable about that? Limbaugh, the comic books, yes - I can see the argument that Rand influenced the work, the content. But if Celine Dion was a Rand fan, who would care unless (like Rush) she had a song about it. Delete?KD Tries Again (talk) 15:20, 21 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- This is good work, K. I am bracing myself to tidy up the philosophy sections. There are two of these, one under 'Philosophy' and the other under 'criticism'. It would make sense to merge these, also to add important criticisms, one in the Routledge article, the other by Mike Huemer (in a published piece). I just don't have the energy at the moment. Peter Damian (talk) 19:07, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
- I recommend against trying to intersperse criticism within the exposition of Rand's own ideas, because it obscures the exposition so that the reader gets a misleading impression that Rand's ideas are just a collection of separate unrelated notions. Several months back we had a separate article Criticisms of Objectivism (originally Criticisms of Objectivism (Ayn Rand)) which discussed many of the more rational arguments against her ideas; however in the interim somebody has turned that into a link to the main article Objectivism (Ayn Rand) without incorporating any of the criticism into the main article. I have asked for this to be fixed, but don't know how to do it myself when the article has been turned into just a link. — DAGwyn (talk) 14:15, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- Ahem...Jillette is an outspoken libertarian and as a fellow of the Cato Institute is not exactly lightweight. That said, I wouldn't object if a lot of that section went missing. Skomorokh 00:15, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
- I certainly don't want to battle to delete Jillette, but I'm a reasonably well-informed reader and didn't really know any of that. That's the problem; unexplained, the comment seems a bit arbitrary; explained, it just lengthens the article, and is it worth it?KD Tries Again (talk) 02:49, 22 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- A year or so ago, there was a very long list (with citation), since moved into the "Influenced" tab in the Info box. I don't know how the remaining named individuals in the Popular Influence section were selected; there are many possible candidates. — DAGwyn (talk) 14:15, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
On the notion of rigour
The issue of whether Rand was 'rigorous' has cropped up a number of times, and it is not clear this idea has been understood. It is not synonymous with 'dotting i's and crossing t's'. Nor does rigour require a strictly formalist-deductive approach. The use of 'handwaving' - the omission of important but self-evident assumptions, and the omission of logical steps that are manifest, is not inconsistent with rigour in the philosophical sense.
You can get a good idea of what a rigorous approach is by studying carefully and understanding the paper by Huemer and the piece by Vallicella. . They show, by means of their own strict and rigorous approach, exactly why Rand's approach was neither strict nor rigorous. Rigour in the required sense is identifying clearly
- the actual claims that are being disputed (this is to avoid accusations of ground-shifting and straw man that are so characteristic of amateur philosophical argument)
- the assumptions of the argument (so as to distinguish the claims that remain assumptions, from the claims that will be argued for or proved)
- the actual steps being used in the argument, in order to highlight the logical progression from the premisses to the conclusion
Note how both Vallicella and Huemer make use of numbered statements. For example, Vallicella argues that Rand's claim about the 'primacy of existence' conflates three distinct propositions:
- P1: Each thing exists independently of any consciousness.
- P2: Each thing satisfies the Law of Identity in that, for each x, x = x.
- P3: The identity of each thing consists in its possession of a specific nature.
The use of such numbered propositions allows the reader to focus on and separate each proposition in order to understand the distinction between them. The numbering also allows writer and reader to refer back to the claims in a way that is unambiguous (to avoid ground-shifting and confusion).
Huemer's article uses the same technique in a much more complex way (although it is still understandable and accessible to the average reader who takes the time, trouble and intellectual effort to work through his argument). It is well worth the effort: no one who makes the effort to work through these pieces carefully will have any trouble identifying for themselves the problems with Rand's approach to philosophy.
"Rand illustrates the perils of being an amateur philosopher. By the way, the difference between a professional and an amateur philosopher is not the difference between one who makes money from philosophy and one who does not. It is the difference between one whose work meets a certain standard of competence and rigor, and one whose work does not."
Peter Damian (talk) 09:06, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- That's well and good, Peter, but Misplaced Pages is also written to be accessible. Consider the average reader who has not had formal philosophical training. When they see the claim that Rand lacked rigour, stated without qualification, as Misplaced Pages claiming that she is a sloppy or bad philosopher. Despite the fact that I agree with you that that is precisely what she is, it is not the place of Misplaced Pages to say so or imply so, even unintentionally. Again, don't think about rigor the way your, ahem, rigorously trained academic mind would. Think about, say, an intelligent teenager who sees it, and the message they would take away. It will come off as a value judgment--the kind of judgment Misplaced Pages cannot make. On the other hand I really do see your concern about weasel words, especially given the history of the article. How about something like: "Vallicella has been sharply critical of Rand's work, criticizing it as lacking philosophical rigour." That avoids weasel words while still avoiding the impression that Misplaced Pages is passing judgment on Rand.
- On a completely different note, do people feel like an article on what constitutes philosophical rigour might make a good addition to the encyclopaedia? I'm not sure that there is one. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:42, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- The point I take away from this is that the average reader will see what Vallicella says, and will not be analysing as closely as editors here the way in which it is presented. I'd also like to emphasize that, not for the first time, this edit is being treated as a special case because of what Valicella says. Throughout not just Misplaced Pages, but in this very article, views are attributed to individuals without being dressed up in special language to warn the reader that it's a view - even where the view is controversial, which - as Peter points out - Valicella's is not.KD Tries Again (talk) 13:44, 23 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Well there is an article about Handwaving, although parts of it are rather strange. I'll see what I can do.
- Examining in a rigorous way the argument you give here. First you say that Misplaced Pages is also written to be accessible. Correct, and very important, but that doesn't mean that anything in Misplaced Pages should be wrong, or should gloss over the truth, or misrepresent things. You then say "When they see the claim that Rand lacked rigour, stated without qualification, as Misplaced Pages claiming that she is a sloppy or bad philosopher. " which is not a finished sentence, so I don't know what you mean by that. You then say that you agree, but "it is not the place of Misplaced Pages to say so or imply so, even unintentionally". To say what? And why? How is your statement that Misplaced Pages shouldn't say something (that Rand was not rigorous? That she was a sloppy or bad philosopher?) connected with your assertion that Misplaced Pages should be accessible? You then say that an intelligent teenager would take away the message that Misplaced Pages is passing a value judgment. So? If judging a writer's work as 'lacking rigour' is a value judgment, and if reliable sources say her work lacked rigour, then Misplaced Pages should be making that judgment. Once again, the question is not about value judgments, but about what reliable sources say.
- On accessibility in general, I use Misplaced Pages myself for reference, and it is very useful for some things (it was the only internet source I could find with the 200 bus route, for example, including the Transport for London website). I think it's important for the encyclopedia to present a generally fair and balanced view of its subject, whoever is reading it. But when I came across the Rand article some time ago, despite a strong background in twentieth century philosophy (and indeed philosophical history generally) I was surprised because I had never heard of her. Yet the article did not present Rand as in any way unusual or different from a standard twentieth century philosopher. It took some work and research using reliable sources to discover 'the truth'. Which Misplaced Pages hadn't been giving us.
- On how Rand should be treated, I think it is perfectly possible to balance criticism with fairness, indeed a positive tone. Vallicella, Huemer and Watson actually express qualified admirationof her, whilst being fiercely critical of her lack of rigour, sloppy thinking and so forth. Peter Damian (talk) 15:15, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
Misplaced Pages can, should and does make such value judgments when they are well supported. William McGonagall - "He is comically renowned as one of the worst poets in the English language." Colley Cibber - "Cibber's poetical work was ridiculed in his time, and has been remembered only for being bad." Amanda McKittrick Ros - "her eccentric, over-written, circumlocutory writing style has a cult following among critics as being some of the worst prose and poetry ever written." I am not making any comparison between Rand and these writers, just observing that there is no policy against making negative statements as such.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:30, 23 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Misplaced Pages should never make value judgements. There is a very clear distinction between the first two examples you've given and the last one; only in the latter does Misplaced Pages endorse a negative view of the subject. Just as the Vallicella wording has Misplaced Pages endorsing a claim of lack of rigour, the McKittrick Ros wording has Misplaced Pages - not critics - claiming that her writing style was "eccentric, over-written, circumlocutory". Skomorokh 13:01, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
- The McKittrick Ros wording explicitly mentions critics. I understand the distinction you are trying to draw, but I don't see the relevance when what is clearly proposed is a view of Rand as expressed by her philosophical critics. It is not our job to wave a flag telling the reader the critics might be wrong (unless someone can find serious, independent disagreement about the matter): there is no implication that, for example, MacGonagall is believed or claimed by some to have been a lousy poet; there is no backing away from the judgement.KD Tries Again (talk) 14:47, 24 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Misplaced Pages should never make value judgements. There is a very clear distinction between the first two examples you've given and the last one; only in the latter does Misplaced Pages endorse a negative view of the subject. Just as the Vallicella wording has Misplaced Pages endorsing a claim of lack of rigour, the McKittrick Ros wording has Misplaced Pages - not critics - claiming that her writing style was "eccentric, over-written, circumlocutory". Skomorokh 13:01, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
Here is a selection of criticism of Rand drawn mainly from Huemer. I will collate some more, then attempt the more difficult task of turning into elegant prose.
- She offers no argument for the position on which her ethics, making only a bald assertion
- She doesn't even explicitly state some assumptions, indeed, she seems simply not to have noticed that she was assuming them
- Lacks clarity, and makes statements for which a number of conflicting interpretations are possible.
- Makes question begging arguments. Rand claimed to have an argument, a proof even, for ethical egoism. But one of the required premisses for that proof essentially just is ethical egoism!
- She seriously misrepresents the history of ethics.
- Her description of the history of ethics is a gross caricature, and she makes no effort to document her claims with any citations.
- She draws plausibility for her position by attacking straw men.
- She makes illegitimate shifts between equivocal interpretations
- She gives no criteria for the classifications she makes.
- Many of her claims are simply arbitrary declarations.
- She uses fudge words: i.e. words that can be interpreted to mean whatever it is convenient for them to mean at a particular time, and which can be used to insulate her thesis from testing and to enable her to claim that her theory supports, or doesn't support, anything; since there is no precise and unambiguous definition of these terms.
- Her arguments rest squarely on her intuitions.
- She thinks her theory, as she sets it out , is an exact science, but this claim would not withstand a casual acquaintance with any actual exact science. "
- She represents her intuitions and philosophical theories are 'scientific proofs,' and then derides the philosophical theories of others for being unscientific and therefore 'mystical.'
- She refers to philosophers that she does not identify, and probably does not identify them because she did not know.
- She makes no effort to document her claims and they are in fact impossible to document because not true.
- She was very ignorant of the history of her subject. This explains, in part, why her ethics is so flawed.
Note hardly any of these are 'value judgments'. They might be taken to reflect negatively on Rand's work, but that is no reason for not making them. Peter Damian (talk) 17:35, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- OK. I think you've convinced me Peter. My only request is that it read that her work lacked philosophical rigour, rather than just rigour, because it appears the philosophical definition of rigorous is something of a special case (for instance, mathematical rigour doesn't allow for hand-waving). TallNapoleon (talk) 18:06, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- All it means is that Rand's style of working differed from that of mainstream academic philosophy, which given that most of it was targeted at the general public rather than academicians is hardly surprising. Most if not all of the above list of criticisms could be rebutted, and many similar claims could be made about opposing philosophers, but this is not the place. It is regrettable that Rand's main philosophical points, some of them quite well supported and original, are obscured by focussing on minutiae instead. Rand herself decried the "analytic" school of academic philosophy, and cited several examples of patently absurd articles resulting from that style. As to the article, it is appropriate to indicate the widespread lack of acceptance by academic philosophers, since that's a verifiable fact. However, presenting a long list of such criticisms would call for rebuttal, which would not make for a good article. A year or so ago, I set up a Misplaced Pages article specifically for Criticisms of Objectivism (Ayn Rand) within which various reasonably justified criticisms could be discussed; however, since then that article has been replaced by a link but the criticism text has been lost. That needs fixing. — DAGwyn (talk) 14:52, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Requested quotation on Rand and homosexuality
160 requests a full quotation from Walker regarding Rand's characterisation of homosexuality as "disgusting". From what I can access on Google Books of page 119 of ISBN 0812693906: ""immoral...It's proper among consenting adults, ...legally. Morally, it's immoral. And more than that, if you want my really sincere opinion, it's disgusting." In Rand's view then...". Perhaps one of has direct access to the book or those of you in different legal jurisdictions than I have a better view on Google? Skomorokh 16:21, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I appreciate there might be issues of context with the previous version, but this seems like muting the full extent of Rand's position. Skomorokh 16:26, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I heard her views on this on a couple of occasions. She evidently thought that heterosexuality was part of the inherent nature of Man, and that homosexuality was largely the result of (bad) choices or psychological aberrations. (Obviously if the race had been totally homosexual, it would not have survived.) I don't think she seriously considered that homosexuality might sometimes stem from natural biochemical factors. The existing text is okay. — DAGwyn (talk) 15:04, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
A couple questions
Are her views on war and the Vietnam war in particular still in the article? And secondly, the criticism seciton is extensive, but does it still include positive assessments like: Jim Powell, a senior fellow at the Cato Institute, considers Rand one of the three founders (along with Rose Wilder Lane and Isabel Paterson) of modern American libertarianism, although she rejected libertarianism and the libertarian movement. ref ""Three Women Who Inspired the Modern Libertarian Movement"". Retrieved 2008-01-17. /ref ? ChildofMidnight (talk) 16:42, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I am a little confused as to why you are asking what's in the article.KD Tries Again (talk) 16:52, 25 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- I was trying to compare article versions. And it looked like the section on her war views got taken out.
I don't know if it was discussed, or if it was just moved, so that's why I'm asking.Nevermind it's there, I just missed it. I'll see if the bit giving her credit as one of the "three" founders of the libertarian movement is there too. Seemed interesting and notable. ChildofMidnight (talk) 02:46, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I was trying to compare article versions. And it looked like the section on her war views got taken out.
Three A's cited in Pennsylvania State University Press
Anon IP address 72.199.110.160 removed the following cited passage from a book published with Pennsylvania State University Press:
Rand had a high opinion of her own legacy, remarking in a tape-recorded question-and-answer session that in the history of philosophy she could only recommend "three A's" —Aristotle, Aquinas, and Ayn Rand.
72.199.110.160 also calls the re-insertion of this passage as "VANDALISM", stating "no source for Rand's 'allegedly high opinion of own legacy.'"
I don't have access to the book right now, but will be stopping by the library this afternoon to verify the citation. My question is: assuming the passage is both accurate and verifiable in Sciabarra's book, what is objectionable to the anon IP -- the citation itself for lack of historical cross-referencing (plausible) or something else? It's unclear to me what the problem is. J Readings (talk) 22:59, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- Does it matter? If he's not willing to engage on the talk page, it's not our job to read his mind. TallNapoleon (talk) 23:08, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think what the IP is getting at is that the first clause of the removed claim, "Rand had a high opinion of her own legacy", is editorialising; the "three A's" itself remark is cited, though without context: Sciabarr cites "Peikoff 1976T" for the anecdote, full ref should be visible here. One would need access to Peikoff's collection of her interviews (see link) for that. And though 160 raises useful objections on occasions, I'm with TallNapoleon in that we don't have to satisfy them if they are not willing to discuss their edits. Skomorokh 23:15, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- Skomorokh: And though 160 raises useful objections on occasions, I'm with TallNapoleon in that we don't have to satisfy them if they are not willing to discuss their edits. Thanks to everyone for their comments. Just so we are clear here, what is the bottom-line with regard to 72.199.110.160? Every time someone disagrees with its edits, a quick revert without talk page discussion amongst ourselves is acceptable? I just want to understand the WP:CONSENSUS on this issue. Thanks, J Readings (talk) 23:32, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- As far as I am concerned, if there is an existing talkpage discussion on an issue, and an editor involved in that discussion objects to one of 160's edits related to that issue, it's fine to revert while referring to the discussion. Articles can't be held hostage to one editor's perspective. That said, it would be productive if reverting editors would follow CABlankenship's example and accommodate any useful points 160 raises. I think there is enough of a reasonable distribution of editors watching the article that the IP's points will get a fair hearing. Skomorokh 23:39, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, when the IP makes 50 edits in a day without any discussion, that's disruptive. If he won't engage on the talk page, he needs to be blocked, at least temporarily. TallNapoleon (talk) 01:10, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- At the least, anon should be checked out. His style of throwing around accusations of vandalism whenever he disagrees with something is remarkably similar to Kjaer. Furthermore, anon only appeared after the arbcom bans. CABlankenship (talk) 01:17, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Actually, IP has been editing related articles long before, KD Tries Again (talk) 04:12, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- At the least, anon should be checked out. His style of throwing around accusations of vandalism whenever he disagrees with something is remarkably similar to Kjaer. Furthermore, anon only appeared after the arbcom bans. CABlankenship (talk) 01:17, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, when the IP makes 50 edits in a day without any discussion, that's disruptive. If he won't engage on the talk page, he needs to be blocked, at least temporarily. TallNapoleon (talk) 01:10, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
It would just seem to follow that if she believed that she was one of the three greatest philosophers in history that she had a "high opinion" of her legacy. CABlankenship (talk) 23:24, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- Just to be clear, making edits is not disruptive. All edits are subject to WP:BRD - thats the concensus. Anyone who wants to challenge the concensus is welcome to do so on the appropriate policy pages and forums. --Karbinski (talk) 02:42, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- True, and this IP editor clearly has very detailed knowledge of the subject and has made many improvements to this article and to other related articles. At the same time - and you can check the editor's talk page - the editor is intent on working unilaterally rather than engaging in any discussion. That makes things difficult. Specifically, we can't have this anonymous editor deleting content sourced to the Routledge Encyclopaedia of Philosophy just because he/she finds it unappealing. For what it's worth, I placed a warning on the editor's talk page.KD Tries Again (talk) 03:25, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Just to be clear, making edits is not disruptive. All edits are subject to WP:BRD - thats the concensus. Anyone who wants to challenge the concensus is welcome to do so on the appropriate policy pages and forums. --Karbinski (talk) 02:42, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Also, check this diff - a sweeping revision of the academic philosophy section yesterday, removing plenty of supported material, with no discussion. Everyone okay with this?KD Tries Again (talk) 04:21, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
Anon160 appears to have gone off the deep end. It seems that hysterical ranting is not merely confined to Rand's "technical philosophy", but has perhaps become a critical part of the Objectivist system. CABlankenship (talk) 06:13, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
I reverted this morning . This is not encouraging. To the more moderate supporters of Rand here: I am doing considerable research to arrive at a fair and neutral assessment of Rand's work, based on reliable sources. I am beginning to feel this is pointless, and that it will be undone as soon as completed. One is tempted to leave the article to rot until it is proof that Misplaced Pages has no effective mechanism for dealing with extreme partisan groups. The comments left by the IP ("Commie swine", "may you rot" and so on) are also extremely disturbing. Peter Damian (talk) 07:50, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
So now that Anon160 has declared himself to be an implacable foe of Misplaced Pages, may I gather that we no longer have to assume good faith concerning his edits? CABlankenship (talk) 08:39, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I put in a complaint at WP:ANI and it is has been blocked for 31h. Peter Damian (talk) 09:08, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Good grief, now I'm apparently a Communist. If that's his attitude towards Misplaced Pages, permaban him and be done with it. We'll see if his attitude improves when--and if--he returns. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:16, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- One important point to take away from all this is that if WP is saying much the same thing as other encyclopaedias from reputable publishers, we're probably on the right track.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:09, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Good grief, now I'm apparently a Communist. If that's his attitude towards Misplaced Pages, permaban him and be done with it. We'll see if his attitude improves when--and if--he returns. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:16, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Reviewing
I'm going to go through the latest batch of edits from 160, reverting where appropriate. If anyone has any concerns or objections, please raise them here so we can come to consensus on what should stay and what should go. Thanks, Skomorokh 23:41, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- See changes. There is a lot I didn't touch, so feel free to review this series of edits for anything else that might be improved upon. Skomorokh 01:07, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- Anon IP is back, removed the three A's statement again, and still is not engaging on the talk page, despite his block. That means that he's edit-warring. Also, on an unrelated tangent, why on earth is Boisevert described as "opining". Really? TallNapoleon (talk) 06:04, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
Merrill again
I just found an interesting record of the lobbying by the Ayn Rand society chairman Allan Gotthelf. . It turns out they were not pleased by the entry. But in any case there is a reference to R. Merrill's The Ideas of Ayn Rand, as "an amateurish work by a non-philosopher.", which sums up very well my immediate impressions of Merrill's work. Given that the source would be considerable reliable by Randians, and that Merrill's work would not be considered reliable by any trained philosopher, do we have everyone's agreement about my striking out the Merrill references? Thanks. Peter Damian (talk) 07:08, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- If we want Objectivist philosophers, why on earth should we bother with Merrill? There's Tara Smith, for one, and Sciabarra, for another. Hell, there's the entire Journal of Ayn Rand Studies. Peikoff and ARI are in my opinion too partisan to be worthwhile, but David Kelley and his crowd may be worth looking into. One of my professors is actually an Obectivist philosopher. Would folks like me to ask him if he knows of some good third party sources? TallNapoleon (talk) 09:13, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Quite - it's just that there was a dispute above about whether M. was a reliable source. On your second point, I would very much appreciate you asking your prof. I am particularly challenged on finding any reliable sources on Rand's epistemology. Peter Damian (talk) 09:31, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- She actually wrote a monograph on it, Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology. Obviously that's not an independent source, but my understanding is that she goes into a bit more depth there on her epistemology. This may also be of use if you have access to Cambridge journals. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:57, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks - I was aware of this, and I will look at it at some point. The problem is that it is a 'primary source' and therefore OR to discuss it. The need is for reliable secondary sources. I have written to Sciabarra, who seems a reasonable chap, to give us some pointers. If there really is no reliable secondary source, all the material in the sub-articles should be flagged. Peter Damian (talk) 10:58, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- It'd be OR to use it as an evaluation of her philosophy, but Rand is presumably an expert on her own epistemology, so I don't see any reason why we couldn't cite her talking about what her philosophy is. TallNapoleon (talk) 11:11, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I have the book and was prompted to open it while working on this article. It's a short book, about a hundred pages, and deals mainly with her theory of concepts (and the three axioms). I'll browse through and see if there are any useful summary statements (I do find it hard to paraphrase her prose).KD Tries Again (talk) 15:12, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- It'd be OR to use it as an evaluation of her philosophy, but Rand is presumably an expert on her own epistemology, so I don't see any reason why we couldn't cite her talking about what her philosophy is. TallNapoleon (talk) 11:11, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks - I was aware of this, and I will look at it at some point. The problem is that it is a 'primary source' and therefore OR to discuss it. The need is for reliable secondary sources. I have written to Sciabarra, who seems a reasonable chap, to give us some pointers. If there really is no reliable secondary source, all the material in the sub-articles should be flagged. Peter Damian (talk) 10:58, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- She actually wrote a monograph on it, Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology. Obviously that's not an independent source, but my understanding is that she goes into a bit more depth there on her epistemology. This may also be of use if you have access to Cambridge journals. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:57, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Quite - it's just that there was a dispute above about whether M. was a reliable source. On your second point, I would very much appreciate you asking your prof. I am particularly challenged on finding any reliable sources on Rand's epistemology. Peter Damian (talk) 09:31, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Some points:
- That someone of Gotthelf's stature and inclination disparages Merrill's book does cast a negative light on it. That said, the two books on Rand the (independent) Routledge entry recommends are Den Uyl and Rasmussen and Merrill.
- I think as far as describing Rand's philosophy, it would be negligent of us to ignore Peikoff (except perhaps where his interpretation of what Rand said is contested by others e.g. Kelley and company); obviously we should not be citing Peikoff for a neutral assessment of Rand's importance/technical ability/grasp of the subject.
- Primary sources don't have to be independent to be reliable – how could they? The only danger in citing them is that the editor citing will have to engage in interpretation to get a sense of what the author meant, which runs the risk of being original research. TallNapoleon is on the mark that "Rand is presumably an expert on her own epistemology".
- Gotthelf's own On Ayn Rand (ISBN 0534576257) is a technical overview of Rand's philosophy, including her epistemology and might be of use. Skomorokh 16:00, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Peikoff and Gotthelf may be the only sources we can use. My best effort at paraphrasing Rand herself (from the Mentor paperback edition of Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology) is this:
The central topic of Rand's epistemology (p1) is her attempt to clarify how we form concepts of "universals" although we only perceive "particulars" (or "abstractions" and "concepts" as she also calls them (pp1-2)). For Rand, this is explicitly an epistemological rather than a metaphysical question (p114). Her solution is to argue that we form concepts by mentally isolating general characteristics shared by entities, while disregarding particular differences between them (pp111-112).
Hardly original, but that's her position. This kind of paraphrasing is routine on other philosophy pages, but I understand it might be regarded as unacceptable OR when it comes to Rand. Best I could do, anyway.KD Tries Again (talk) 16:56, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Rather more difficult is her rejection of the analytic-synthetic distinction. As far as I can understand it, she rejects it because all truths are analytic. We don't know all analytic truths, however, because the full content of concepts is as yet unknown to us. This strikes me as bizarre, but I don't have her own formulation of it, and don't know how much this owes to Peikoff. Peter Damian (talk) 17:06, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Does she formulate it anywhere? There's an appendix at the back of the epistemology book on the subject, but it's written by Peikoff.KD Tries Again (talk) 20:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- I just read it, and it seems my paragraph above misses an important point. Although the individual forms concepts by grasping similarities among particulars (concretes), the concept includes all properties of those particulars, and not the sub-set on which the formation of the concept was based (or any other subset). For example, an individual might form the concept "man" by noticing that "rationality" and "being a biped" are similarities among a group of entities. But the concept "man" also includes "smoking a pipe", "being dead", "liking coffee" and "being a dentist." It also, obviously, includes "not liking coffee" and "not being a dentist". For Rand/Peikoff, this is because concepts are somehow really instantiated in the entities which fall within their scope - they are not Platonic ideas. This dissolves the analytic/synthetic dichotomy, in Peikoff's view, because any concept includes all possible empirical observations about the entities which fall under it - whether we know it or not. I have the impression that this is exclusively Peikoff's work, based on Rand's theory of concept formation, but I am open to correction. I admit, I can't see how it follows from this line of argument that "a batchelor is an unmarried man" is not analytically true; just because the concept "batchelor" includes all empirical properties of any batchelor ever, few of those properties seem relevant to determining the meaning of the concept. Smoking a pipe is just not part of what batchelor means. (Quine, of course, evades that objection by acknowledging that some observations are more important than others)KD Tries Again (talk) 20:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Your final point is absolutely spot on. I think there is a confusion here between the internalist/externalist question about whether meanings are 'in the head' or not, and the analytic-synthetic question, of whether the meaning of the predicate is always included in the subject or not. You could validly hold that 'water' means H2O, and that it always meant H2O even in Aristotle's time when they didn't know that water actually is H2O, but still uphold the analytic-synthetic distinction (for example, it is not part of the 'externalist' view that 'water fell as rain in London on Friday 24 April 2009 12:00 BST'. But according to the article Objectivist epistemology, Rand's view is 'a version of content-externalism'. Now I look at this I am even more confused. The article says "Which particulars a concept subsumes, according to Rand, depends upon what the concept-coiner was discriminating from what when he or she formed the concept (this appears to be how Rand accommodates Gottlob Frege's insight that there are different "modes of presentation" of the same content). This view is a version of content externalism, similar in certain ways to the views of Hilary Putnam and Tyler Burge." As I understand the view, it is not at all similar to content-externalism. Rather, it seems similar to Leibniz' view that in every true proposition the predicate is included in the subject (I have a Latin formulation of this somewhere) and that the name 'Adam' includes every fact, past present and future, about Adam. Peter Damian (talk) 08:23, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- I just read it, and it seems my paragraph above misses an important point. Although the individual forms concepts by grasping similarities among particulars (concretes), the concept includes all properties of those particulars, and not the sub-set on which the formation of the concept was based (or any other subset). For example, an individual might form the concept "man" by noticing that "rationality" and "being a biped" are similarities among a group of entities. But the concept "man" also includes "smoking a pipe", "being dead", "liking coffee" and "being a dentist." It also, obviously, includes "not liking coffee" and "not being a dentist". For Rand/Peikoff, this is because concepts are somehow really instantiated in the entities which fall within their scope - they are not Platonic ideas. This dissolves the analytic/synthetic dichotomy, in Peikoff's view, because any concept includes all possible empirical observations about the entities which fall under it - whether we know it or not. I have the impression that this is exclusively Peikoff's work, based on Rand's theory of concept formation, but I am open to correction. I admit, I can't see how it follows from this line of argument that "a batchelor is an unmarried man" is not analytically true; just because the concept "batchelor" includes all empirical properties of any batchelor ever, few of those properties seem relevant to determining the meaning of the concept. Smoking a pipe is just not part of what batchelor means. (Quine, of course, evades that objection by acknowledging that some observations are more important than others)KD Tries Again (talk) 20:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- ""Which particulars a concept subsumes, according to Rand, depends upon what the concept-coiner was discriminating from what when he or she formed the concept". That doesn't seem to be right; that's how the concept is formed, but - according to Peikoff, anyway - it subsumes every property, every fact about, any particular which falls under it. Hence, for Peikoff, any truth is a logical (or analytic) truth. I support blanking and re-directing Objectivist epistemology in any case, as it seems to be an original interpretation.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:13, 27 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- At the risk of inducing apoplexy in Karbinski, I have located the idea of Leibniz I was thinking about. It is called the 'predicate-in-notion' principle by Leibniz scholars. See here. It derives directly from Arnauld and Nicole, and (according to the author of the SEP, | am not so sure) has its ancestry in Posterior Analytics I.4. I don't see any great harm in discussion around the subject on these talk pages, and indeed it is difficult to write about the subject at all without some basic and background knowledge. Peter Damian (talk) 17:01, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- Does she formulate it anywhere? There's an appendix at the back of the epistemology book on the subject, but it's written by Peikoff.KD Tries Again (talk) 20:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
Objectivist_epistemology for deletion?
I now think we should seriously consider nominating Objectivist_epistemology for deletion. The reason is not that it is badly written to the point of incoherence. That is not grounds for deletion (rather, for careful well-sourced re-writing). The grounds for deletion are (1) that nothing would possibly count as reliable sources for the article. I have tried very hard to locate such sources and they don't exist. There are reliable sources for other aspects of her philosophy (e.g. on politics and possibly ethics). No serious philosopher, as far as I can tell, has written about her 'epistemology'. I am not sure there is even a coherent view to write about. (2) Her views in any case is not notable. The authoritative SEP article on the analytic-synthetic article contains a list of 104 philosophers who have worked on the subject, some of whom have less notability than others. (Quine is clearly notable, Kahneman, Slovic & Kersey probably not). Rand is not mentioned at all. Therefore there is no reason to include her views in Misplaced Pages. What do we think? Peter Damian (talk) 12:09, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think you are on the wrong talk page - not once but twice (Objectivist epistemology and Analytic-synthetic distinction). Your personal exploration of Rand's ideas above should be on some forum, blog, or even your wiki user talk page. As well, your user sub-pages have discussion tabs (User_talk:Peter_Damian/Ayn_Rand). --Karbinski (talk) 14:56, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- Support for blanking can be expressed at the cross-talk page here. I am not sure if any editors other than Karbinski and myself are using that page. We do need to emerge from the discussion of Rand's views, but what prompted it was the difficulty in finding any reliable source encapsulating these views. If we had a good third party source which put Rand's epistemological and metaphysical views into a nutshell, we needn't bother with this.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:17, 27 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- On the contrary: how much weight is given to Rand's philosophy on this page, as opposed to sub-pages, is highly relevant to this page. In addition, this page is the most read of the Rand pages, it would have been necessary to advertise the issue here anyway. Does that not seem reasonable? Peter Damian (talk) 15:18, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- If there wasn't already an open discussion, that was already advertised here (via the cross-talk page), it would be reasonable to open the discussion on one page or the other and link to the discussion from the second article's talk page. --Karbinski (talk) 16:55, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm sorry I didn't know about the cross-talk page until now. I shall be sure to put things in the right place from now on. Peter Damian (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- If there wasn't already an open discussion, that was already advertised here (via the cross-talk page), it would be reasonable to open the discussion on one page or the other and link to the discussion from the second article's talk page. --Karbinski (talk) 16:55, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
Non TOC headers
Are we able to use headers for the Views and Bibliography sub-sections that are _format only_ headers so they don't show in the TOC? If not for the View section, how about just for the Bibliography section?
- Yes, but why would we want to do that? It would seem to hamper the reader's ability to navigate to their section of interest. Skomorokh 23:39, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
What is NPOV for this article
That Ayn Rand created a philosophy deserves some space. The facts are essentially a history of her writing and editing, followed by things like the NBI courses and some of the legacy content, ect.
Her philosophy deserves a little less space, linking to the main article, followed by some macro-level facts such as National Review's review by Chambers, that Objectivism has been largely ignored by acadamia, the exceptions to that being a number of academic philosophers who explicitly advocate Objectivism and a number of libertarian philosophers who respect her politics yet mostly disregard her declared metaphysics, epistemology, and ethics. As well, that philosopher x and y (or the publication they published in) considers her philosophy to be bad. None of these macro-level facts are more deserving of space than the others, and as an aggregate should be shorter than the summary of the philosophy.
Her views deserve a little space in-so-far as they are notable. Gender roles - you have the feminist movement, anti-communist - you have the congressional testimony, Vietnam and war - who discusses her views on this (other than her)? (I don't know), Kant - we have nothing notable enough to mention in her biographical summary that I'm aware of, that is: there is no "Chambers" or "National Review" publication covering her view on Kant that I'm aware of - its only relevant within the topic of Objectivism, Capitalism/Egoism/Reason/Reality - indeed relevant to her bio, but already covered (at least potentially) by the summary report on Objectivism. The sources tell the tale.
Individual opinions on the technical aspects of her philosophy, opinions informed by careful reading of Rand's essays, have no weight for inclusion in this article. --Karbinski (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- The current philosophy section in this article doesn't seem unduly long, and does link to Objectivism (Ayn Rand). I am inclined to agree that that's where the detail should be, but so far I don't see any sign that Peter is planning a much longer section. Still waiting to see what he comes up with.KD Tries Again (talk) 18:41, 27 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- For once I agree with Karbinski. The relevant facts are that she created a philosophy, that she isn't currently taken seriously be academia together with some reasons why she isn't - a cut down version of the draft I linked to above would be sufficient (together with some of the positive views which I haven't yet included in the draft. The whole article on Objectivist philosophy needs a radical overhaul, however. Peter Damian (talk) 18:46, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- While it is true that the section(s) on Rand's ideas could stand a thorough overhaul, I suggest that it not be done by those who don't take those ideas seriously. The notion that disregard from the people whose work Rand criticized should be emphasized, but regard from the much greater number of people who found Rand's ideas worthy of consideration should not be mentioned, illustrates the problem. It is hard not to call it intellectual snobbery; at any rate, it does not result in a fair presentation of all the relevant facts. — DAGwyn (talk) 15:23, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- I suggest that's next, with the Metaphysics and Epistemology articles redirecting there.KD Tries Again (talk) 20:16, 27 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
Deletion of Criticism Content
I made, a now reverted, edit that deleted a chunk of the criticism section.
The Objectivism article reports criticisms on her philosophy and I see no need to duplicate what is already in that article in this article. The criticism this article will have concerning her philosophy should be in the Philosophy section as that section introduces the Objectivism article (where one will get more detail on its criticisms). As well, as discussed in the above section, the criticisms of Objectivism relevant for this article are at the summary/macro level.
Perhaps as a first step to fixing the Philosophy section, we should merge in the philosophy criticism content? --Karbinski (talk) 12:14, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- And merge literary criticism into the Fiction section, to be consistent?KD Tries Again (talk) 13:11, 28 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Wiki has policies that state that criticism sections are an indicator of a poorly written article. I agree with this, personally. This article needs a major trim to clear up space for the biography section, which should be the main focus of the article. I suggest merging the criticism sections with the relevant articles/sections, removing most of the legacy section, and a great deal of the political and social views section. In my opinion, removal of the following sections would improve the article, while making space for more important biographical information: Rand's work and academic philosophy, Institutes, and merging all of the political and social views into a shorter, summary paragraph. CABlankenship (talk) 15:20, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- I may agree with some of the specific proposals, but I am not sure why there's an urge to make the article primarily a biographical article. Whether you look at novelists (Henry James, Joseph Conrad), philosophers (Immanuel Kant, Friedrich Nietzsche) or cultural figures generally (Paul Cezanne), the typical Misplaced Pages article has a summary of the life balanced by equal treatment of the work, often including legacy and/or criticism sections. The Rand article looks fairly normal in that respect, although it is certainly loaded with irrelevant detail.KD Tries Again (talk) 17:30, 28 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- That is a good point. Similarly the article on Wittgenstein which comprehensively covers both his life and his philosophy. The problem with Rand though is how to deal with her philosophy in the face of a near-unanimous critical rejection of her work, and thus the lack of any reliable sources to cover it. Peter Damian (talk) 18:17, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- I may agree with some of the specific proposals, but I am not sure why there's an urge to make the article primarily a biographical article. Whether you look at novelists (Henry James, Joseph Conrad), philosophers (Immanuel Kant, Friedrich Nietzsche) or cultural figures generally (Paul Cezanne), the typical Misplaced Pages article has a summary of the life balanced by equal treatment of the work, often including legacy and/or criticism sections. The Rand article looks fairly normal in that respect, although it is certainly loaded with irrelevant detail.KD Tries Again (talk) 17:30, 28 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
These are good points that you both raise. Another problem I'm encountering is that a lot of the material on Rand's life has a sort of L.Ron Hubbard and Church of Scientology quality to it; it reads like propaganda and personality cult idolization. CABlankenship (talk) 18:23, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- Well, duh! as the kids say nowadays. Ever read "Mozart Was A Red" or Elegy for a Soprano? The lady was the Dear Leader of her own little cult of personality. --Orange Mike | Talk 00:31, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
My reason for reverting is that the Ayn Rand article is the appropriate place for criticism of Rand herself, while Objectivism (Ayn Rand) should be reserved for the criticism of that philosophy. Much of what passes for Philosophical criticism in this article regards Rand's ability, methodology, rigour and so on. Read the section: it's not about Objectivism. I have no objection to merging the criticism to the relevant sections internal to the article. Skomorokh 18:25, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
It doesn't seem to me that trying to work with 160 will get anywhere, so I have reverted his deletion of my latest entry. Everyone on this talk page is pretty reasonable, so if someone else believes that this entry is unfair or NPOV, I won't object if it is edited or removed. CABlankenship (talk) 00:08, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- The edit summaries are becoming aggressive again ("That Rand PUBLICLY condemned blind foll. also just FACT - ESSENCE of R.'s phil. boils down to "think independently and think for yourself"e.g. hero Roark. READ mater. or stop edit"), not to say confused ("Valliant reproduces raw the Rand journals which are FIRST PERSON CONTEMPORANEOUS Rand notes about what she told Branden. JUST FACT."). I will post again on the user's Talk Page, but if the behavior continues it will need to be reported again.KD Tries Again (talk) 14:58, 30 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
I removed a pointless series of statements regarding Kant and Rand. Having just started my first round of reading Critique of Pure Reason, it's clear that a few sentences cannot come close to giving a fair view of Kant's positions and alleged mysticism. To give an example of how deep and complicated is the field of Kantian scholarship, A. D. Lindsay points out that there is a serious dispute between the primacy of the first and second editions of Critique of Pure Reason, noting that Kant "quite definitely held that he had been misunderstood in the first edition" which many felt upheld "subjective idealism", and that Kant "made the changes in his second edition principally to correct that misunderstanding", which "lends itself to a realist rather than to an idealist interpretation of Kant". Lindsay says that "There are other critics who treat Kant mainly as a notorious expounder of certain idealist fallacies to which the philosophic mind is prone. Such critics naturally prefer the first edition, into which it is not difficult to read these errors, to the second where Kant is obviously, but in their view inconsistently, trying to correct them. But in face of Kant's explicit declaration about his intention in making the changes in the second edition, such attitudes are surely historically indefensible." It seems clear to me that this is an issue that is far too complex for us to reasonably deal with it in a short summary on a page about Ayn Rand. It's enough to simply state that Rand seems to have not even read Kant, which explains the contempt which many have for her opinions about the man and his work. CABlankenship (talk) 06:53, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
Rand, the Enlightenment, and Romanticism
There's something really interesting about Rand that I think may be worth mentioning. Rand is interesting for attempting (no matter what one thinks of the results) to square the ultimate philosophical-historical circle: to unite Enlightenment and Romantic thinking. You can see it in the bizarre fusion of Nietzsche and Locke, her "Romantic Realist" esthetics and various other facets of her thinking. Now personally I think she made a real hash of it, fusing the worst aspects of both movements instead of the best. But I think just the fact that she made the attempt is interesting, and fairly unusual. I wonder if any of our more philosophically trained contributors could comment on this? Is it a line of thinking/research we ought to consider further? TallNapoleon (talk) 22:48, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think you are right, FWIW. But not an area of competence for me - this sort of thing is not really part of philosophy. In any case, we need reliable secondary sources that deal with this issue. Which we don't have. Peter Damian (talk) 10:57, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
James S. Valliant
Here is another author whose book, The Passion of Ayn Rand's Critics, I find even more suspect in its repeated citation throughout the Ayn Rand article than Roger Merrill's The Ideas of Ayn Rand.
Valliant is a self-described "Objectivist" who has taken it upon himself to defend Ayn Rand from two of her most notable critics -- Nathaniel Branden and his ex-wife Barbara Branden. While I have absolutely no objection to Valliant's OPINION from being briefly expressed in this article, I am still very cautious about presenting anything in his book as unadulterated FACT, which is how anon IP 160 would choose to present his views.
I have checked the following databases to see if I could find any articles that support either the notability of "James S. Valliant" or of his book (title above). These are my findings:
JSTOR - 0 hits
LexisNexis - 0 hits
Google News - 0 hits
Google Scholar - 0 hits
I also wanted to cross-check Valliant's background. Unlike Tara Smith, Valliant is not a credentialed academic, nor apparently is he a well-respected author. He is, apparently, a lawyer who happens to be a follower of Ayn Rand and, according to his publisher, found it necessary to publish this book "for supporters of Ayn Rand."
In any case, I have tagged the passages with "dubious" because I was unable to find the "reliable source" tag for an in-line citation.
I apologize for not posting to the reliable source noticeboard yet. My day-job prevents me from sitting down and composing a coherent message to the noticeboard regarding Merrill. I'll try to do this in the next day or so. When I request experienced third-party opinions on Merrill's work and his publisher, I'll post a similar (but separate) query regarding Valliant's work. I would stress, however, that the issue with Valliant (as I see it) is presenting his published partisan arguments as pure FACTS, while the issue with Merrill is allowing his book or opinion to be mentioned AT ALL. J Readings (talk) 03:50, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not entirely sure why Valliant's opinion should be included at all. But it certainly should not be treated as fact, considering how minor a source it is. TallNapoleon (talk) 04:01, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- I am considering putting the James S. Valliant article up for deletion. It fails the notability guidelines on almost every level. J Readings (talk) 14:06, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Strongly agree. Thanks for finding that nugget. Peter Damian (talk) 14:51, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- I am considering putting the James S. Valliant article up for deletion. It fails the notability guidelines on almost every level. J Readings (talk) 14:06, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
Criticism by Nathaniel Branden: Notable?
Why do we need the paragraph about Branden under the heading Criticism? We know there was an intimate relationship between Branden and Rand which turned sour. If anything, that makes the comments back and forth less interesting, in my view. Why is it notable that Rand had a closed mind about ESP? I am sure countless individuals with WP articles devoted to them had closed minds about ESP. Who cares? The only arguably notable comment is Branden's about Rand's "dogmatic religion," but in the tradition of this page we now have a quote from Rand back at him intended to neutralize the point. I'd lose the whole paragraph. Thoughts?KD Tries Again (talk) 15:54, 1 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- I think Branden, as the highest-ranking Objectivist dissident, is noteworthy enough to mention, though I'd agree that the ESP issue is trivial. It would be best to cover Branden's philosophical/methodological/psychological differences with Rand in the biographical or Legacy sections of the article, in keeping with the proposal to merge criticism where possible. Given the acrimony between the two, I think this is one point on which Rand deserves the right of reply in the article, though her views shouldn't be given equal weight. Ideally, I'd like to see (after the article has adequately explained the important biographical details of their relationship) a succinct paragraph on Branden's theoretical objections to Rand's work and attitude, perhaps padded out with info on Greenspan's ideological development and Kelley's criticism of "closed system" Objectivism. Skomorokh 16:20, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
- Removed the irrelevant remark about ESP. Someone tagged the reference to Rand's private diaries as dubious; I have at least revised the comment to represent the diaries as what Rand said - I don't think her private diary entries can be said to "show" that she told Branden anything, especially given the circumstances. Also, I strongly endorse "dubious" - the footnote has some quotes from the source, but the word "goddess" doesn't appear. That needs to go unless someone can confirm, with a full cite, that it's in her diaries.KD Tries Again (talk) 02:58, 3 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- For the record, I agree with KD's changes here. Skomorokh 03:02, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- The point about N. Branden is that he was indeed for many years Rand's closest intellectual associate, and worked with her to produce the first comprehensive presentations of her philosophy. (I was privileged to attend these.) Thus, his opinion about what parts of her ideas are provably right and what aren't, is notable. He toned down his critical remarks after a while, and he has always maintained that he remains in agreement with many of Rand's basic tenets. His main professional concern has always been the field of psychology, and he has identified perceived psychological risks to some of the more dogmatic followers of Rand, including himself. (He played a leading rôle in the infamous "purges," which he later regretted.)
- Rand's rejection of ESP was based on the valid observations that the notion historically stemmed from mysticism and the phenomenon had never been satisfactorily demonstrated, which is still the case. Certainly, Rand's scientific views were conservative, as one would expect from her education. In itself that's not necessarily a flaw, as numerous (non-Objectivist) scientists have expressed serious reservations about many developments in science; the most notable case is Bohr vs. Einstein, but there are many legitimate questioners of accepted beliefs even today. If Rand's philosophy sprang from her understanding of science, it would be an issue, but for the most part it didn't. — DAGwyn (talk) 15:51, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Tisdale
I don't think we need to preface that quote with "Tisdale says". Either US News is a reliable source, or it's not--let the information stand on its own with a proper cite instead of trying to marginalize it as just one person's opinion. TallNapoleon (talk) 23:55, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
- I agree.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:27, 2 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- That's a non-starter I'm afraid – all quotes must be attributed inline per the MOS. Skomorokh 02:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Are you sure? The MOS actually says that only quotations of a sentence or more should be attributed in the main text. The quote in question is not a full sentence. Peter Damian (talk) 06:49, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Hah. I deserved that for not checking it weekly. The new wording of MOS:QUOTE ("The author of a quote of a full sentence or more should be named; this is done in the main text and not in a footnote. However, attribution is unnecessary for quotations from the subject of the article or section.") is ambiguous. The idea was that readers shouldn't be forced to dig through the References section to find out who is being quoted. I appreciate that an author who has already been identified need not have their short quotations attributed multiple times in a paragraph, but dropping "sophomoric, preachy and unoriginal" out of the sky strikes me as terribly confusing. One solution would be to paraphrase Tisdale rather than quoting her, and state the paraphrase as fact, but I don't think this can be done neutrally while remaining faithful to the source. Skomorokh 06:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- The paraphrase would be something along the lines of "The academic community has largely taken a dim view of Rand's work", or something along those lines. TallNapoleon (talk) 08:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Tisdale was specifically talking about Atlas Shrugged, not Rand's entire career -- though, truth be told, the vast majority of academic philosophers do either ignore Rand or think she's irrelevant to serious philosophical studies. The problem is that's probably original research to synthesize that statement into the article, UNLESS we were to quote the Routledge Encyclopedia of Philosophy. I recall it stated something similar. J Readings (talk) 09:06, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- For what it's worth, I don't like the quote. (a) It's by a columnist, not a philosopher (b) it's rather strident (c) it has the Americanism 'sophomoric' which I think means 'in the style of an undergraduate', which I tend to confuse with 'soporific', though that would equally apply to Rand's writing. What is needed is a subtle form of wording which would confirm the truth to anyone who suspected the truth, but which would not be offensive to lovers of the Rand genre. Something like Rand's work being almost entirely neglected by academic philosophers. Academic philosophers would then nod knowingly, and lovers of Rand would conclude this is because there is an academic conspiracy against Rand. This is the best way to deal with WP:FRINGE subjects. Peter Damian (talk) 09:33, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, no agenda in evidence here. Can't imagine why anyone would consider it pointless to engage in discussion such as the ISP editor you all whine about. To tallnap, I'd say my input is as constructive as the comment I'm responding to.TheDarkOneLives (talk) 20:54, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
- For what it's worth, I don't like the quote. (a) It's by a columnist, not a philosopher (b) it's rather strident (c) it has the Americanism 'sophomoric' which I think means 'in the style of an undergraduate', which I tend to confuse with 'soporific', though that would equally apply to Rand's writing. What is needed is a subtle form of wording which would confirm the truth to anyone who suspected the truth, but which would not be offensive to lovers of the Rand genre. Something like Rand's work being almost entirely neglected by academic philosophers. Academic philosophers would then nod knowingly, and lovers of Rand would conclude this is because there is an academic conspiracy against Rand. This is the best way to deal with WP:FRINGE subjects. Peter Damian (talk) 09:33, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Tisdale was specifically talking about Atlas Shrugged, not Rand's entire career -- though, truth be told, the vast majority of academic philosophers do either ignore Rand or think she's irrelevant to serious philosophical studies. The problem is that's probably original research to synthesize that statement into the article, UNLESS we were to quote the Routledge Encyclopedia of Philosophy. I recall it stated something similar. J Readings (talk) 09:06, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- The paraphrase would be something along the lines of "The academic community has largely taken a dim view of Rand's work", or something along those lines. TallNapoleon (talk) 08:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Hah. I deserved that for not checking it weekly. The new wording of MOS:QUOTE ("The author of a quote of a full sentence or more should be named; this is done in the main text and not in a footnote. However, attribution is unnecessary for quotations from the subject of the article or section.") is ambiguous. The idea was that readers shouldn't be forced to dig through the References section to find out who is being quoted. I appreciate that an author who has already been identified need not have their short quotations attributed multiple times in a paragraph, but dropping "sophomoric, preachy and unoriginal" out of the sky strikes me as terribly confusing. One solution would be to paraphrase Tisdale rather than quoting her, and state the paraphrase as fact, but I don't think this can be done neutrally while remaining faithful to the source. Skomorokh 06:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Are you sure? The MOS actually says that only quotations of a sentence or more should be attributed in the main text. The quote in question is not a full sentence. Peter Damian (talk) 06:49, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
I'm sympathetic to these objections, but I do think we need to have a lead-in statement on the history of Rand's relationship of academic that is rigourously sourced, and the Tisdale quote is one of those. I'm not sure replacing it with the Routledge line is a move in the right direction given the controversy of the latter. These are some potential alternatives from news sources (not endorsing any of these, just throwing them out here):
- "Ayn Rand's novels of headstrong entrepreneurs' battles against convention enjoy a devoted following in business circles. While academia has failed to embrace Ms. Rand, calling her philosophy simplistic, schools have agreed to teach her works in exchange for a donation. " Bloomberg/Globe and Mail
- "Every few years, journalists write that the study of Ayn Rand's philosophy is making a comeback at mainstream universities. (I'm guilty!) It's perpetually sort of true. But the fuller truth remains that while she has fierce adherents, often in campus libertarian groups or on the fringes of philosophy departments, most academics look down their noses at her." The Boston Globe
- "Historically, American academia has been dismissive of Ayn Rand, but in recent years her work is increasingly being included in mainstream curricula." The Jerusalem Post
- "A sui generis philosopher, who looked at the world anew, Ayn Rand has long puzzled the intellectual establishment. Academia has usually met her views with antagonism or avoidance -- unable to fathom that she was an individualist but not a subjectivist, an absolutist but not a dogmatist. And they have thus ignored her original solutions to such seemingly intractable problems as how to ground values in facts. But even in academia her ideas are finding more acceptance, e.g., university fellowships and a subgroup within the American Philosophical Association to study objectivism. " The Pittsburgh Tribune/Mens News Daily
- "Educators have until now largely been absent from the roll-call , though, perhaps not surprisingly given the scorn Rand seemed to reserve for universities and their faculties, which she often viewed as being intellectually corrupt." The Guardian
- "...ow she is back in fashion of a sort. Her theories have made inroads into academia. Objectivism is taught at more than 30 universities, with fellowships at several leading philosophy departments. The Ayn Rand Institute has a war chest of over $7m to promote her ideas and more than a million high school pupils are being given free copies of her novels to read." The Independent
These are from a (not remotely exhausted) Google News search (I found Scholar and Books too noisy to be useful). The most comprehensive treatments of the topic are in books (e.g. Merrill, Walker) that have been called into question here unfortunately, but I think the above sources can be used to support a neutral and informative summary. Skomorokh 16:14, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
Comments invited
I have made a number of changes to the Objectivism (Ayn Rand) page, most of which are being fiercely resisted, particularly by Karbinski. The main issue is a section on the academic reception of Rand . The main objections are
- Since objectivism is more than just the personal philosophy of Ayn Rand, the section is not appropriate for that article. I don't follow this. When I attempted to put a similar section in th Ayn Rand page, the objection was that this page was about Ayn Rand, the woman, and not her philosophy. This reasoning would exclude any criticism of her philosophy in Misplaced Pages, which is absurd. Also, the title of the article is "Objectivism (Ayn Rand)", note the explicit reference to Rand in the title. Furthermore, when I look at definitions of Randian objectivism in other publications, there is a clear reference to the fact it is indeed Rand's personal philosophy (with an unspecified admixture of Peikoff). We could consider having a separate article on 'Ayn Rand's philosophy', but this seems to be an obvious POV fork.
- It is full of 'weasel' and 'peacock' terms. Happy to change the style, as long as the main point is made clear: there is an overwhelming consensus among academic philosophers who have studied her work, that her writing is ill-thought out, unsystematic, lacks rigour, and is filled with elementary philosophical and logical errors. If we omit that important fact, we are failing our duty to report what is verifiable from mainstream, academic sources.
Karbinski is proving very difficult - I have recommended he read an elementary textbook on logic so he understands the very basic terms used in the discussion on the talk page. I am happy to provide a footnote in the main article that will explain these issues to the non-technical reader, although I should stress these really are very elementary. I am close to losing patience, however. Peter Damian (talk) 12:03, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
- People who "talk down" like that generally know far less than they think they do. — DAGwyn (talk) 16:01, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- Talk:Objectivism (Ayn Rand) You can follow user Peter Damian's lack of discussion on the article's talk page. --Karbinski (talk) 14:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
As far as the academic reception goes, I am in favor either of having a section here on the academic reception of Rand's work, or a section at the other article on the reception of Objectivism generally. Unless those sections are very different, I am not in favor of having such a section in each article. I think the other disputes reflect a very real drafting problem: it is very difficult to offer an exposition of Rand's ideas without highlighting the confusions. Anyway, I commented over there.KD Tries Again (talk) 14:35, 6 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- A year or so ago, the article Criticisms of Objectivism (evolved from the original "Criticism of Objectivism (Ayn Rand)") contained discussions of several of the better reasoned arguments against Rand's ideas. I set it up that way because the main articles were becoming cluttered with distracting digressions, obscuring the presentation of the philosophy as an integrated whole. Unfortunately, since then somebody has turned it into a link to the main article, without including the contents into the main article. That needs fixing. — DAGwyn (talk) 16:01, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- No reason to lose valuable content, I agree.KD Tries Again (talk) 18:24, 6 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- No content that was deemed valuable has been lost: see the discussion. Skomorokh 18:27, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- No reason to lose valuable content, I agree.KD Tries Again (talk) 18:24, 6 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
Latest two edits
The ones by the IP (not our problem IP) discussing Rand's "oversimplified argument" about Israel and the Arabs need to be changed to be NPOV. It's not our place to say that her argument is oversimplified. TallNapoleon (talk) 21:44, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
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This section is transcluded from Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Objectivism/Cross talk. (edit | history)There doesn't seem to be much use of the Objectivism cross-talk page lately. I'm the only one who has used it since February. Is it still relevant? --RL0919 (talk) 20:41, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
- Perhaps not. Although I love it, I have to say it now seems like an esoteric feature. Karbinski (talk) 14:25, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
Legacy: Minor Tidying
I tried moving presidents, supreme court judges and academics out of the "popular influence" section and dropping them back in the article at the top of the main section. Query whether we need the reference to Penn Jillette (which didn't have a cite, unless I somehow lost it). Jillette is a popular entertainer, but it's not like he does Objectivist magic tricks. For all I know, hundreds of popular entertainers are Rand fans, but what's notable about that? Limbaugh, the comic books, yes - I can see the argument that Rand influenced the work, the content. But if Celine Dion was a Rand fan, who would care unless (like Rush) she had a song about it. Delete?KD Tries Again (talk) 15:20, 21 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- This is good work, K. I am bracing myself to tidy up the philosophy sections. There are two of these, one under 'Philosophy' and the other under 'criticism'. It would make sense to merge these, also to add important criticisms, one in the Routledge article, the other by Mike Huemer (in a published piece). I just don't have the energy at the moment. Peter Damian (talk) 19:07, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
- I recommend against trying to intersperse criticism within the exposition of Rand's own ideas, because it obscures the exposition so that the reader gets a misleading impression that Rand's ideas are just a collection of separate unrelated notions. Several months back we had a separate article Criticisms of Objectivism (originally Criticisms of Objectivism (Ayn Rand)) which discussed many of the more rational arguments against her ideas; however in the interim somebody has turned that into a link to the main article Objectivism (Ayn Rand) without incorporating any of the criticism into the main article. I have asked for this to be fixed, but don't know how to do it myself when the article has been turned into just a link. — DAGwyn (talk) 14:15, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- Ahem...Jillette is an outspoken libertarian and as a fellow of the Cato Institute is not exactly lightweight. That said, I wouldn't object if a lot of that section went missing. Skomorokh 00:15, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
- I certainly don't want to battle to delete Jillette, but I'm a reasonably well-informed reader and didn't really know any of that. That's the problem; unexplained, the comment seems a bit arbitrary; explained, it just lengthens the article, and is it worth it?KD Tries Again (talk) 02:49, 22 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- A year or so ago, there was a very long list (with citation), since moved into the "Influenced" tab in the Info box. I don't know how the remaining named individuals in the Popular Influence section were selected; there are many possible candidates. — DAGwyn (talk) 14:15, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
On the notion of rigour
The issue of whether Rand was 'rigorous' has cropped up a number of times, and it is not clear this idea has been understood. It is not synonymous with 'dotting i's and crossing t's'. Nor does rigour require a strictly formalist-deductive approach. The use of 'handwaving' - the omission of important but self-evident assumptions, and the omission of logical steps that are manifest, is not inconsistent with rigour in the philosophical sense.
You can get a good idea of what a rigorous approach is by studying carefully and understanding the paper by Huemer and the piece by Vallicella. . They show, by means of their own strict and rigorous approach, exactly why Rand's approach was neither strict nor rigorous. Rigour in the required sense is identifying clearly
- the actual claims that are being disputed (this is to avoid accusations of ground-shifting and straw man that are so characteristic of amateur philosophical argument)
- the assumptions of the argument (so as to distinguish the claims that remain assumptions, from the claims that will be argued for or proved)
- the actual steps being used in the argument, in order to highlight the logical progression from the premisses to the conclusion
Note how both Vallicella and Huemer make use of numbered statements. For example, Vallicella argues that Rand's claim about the 'primacy of existence' conflates three distinct propositions:
- P1: Each thing exists independently of any consciousness.
- P2: Each thing satisfies the Law of Identity in that, for each x, x = x.
- P3: The identity of each thing consists in its possession of a specific nature.
The use of such numbered propositions allows the reader to focus on and separate each proposition in order to understand the distinction between them. The numbering also allows writer and reader to refer back to the claims in a way that is unambiguous (to avoid ground-shifting and confusion).
Huemer's article uses the same technique in a much more complex way (although it is still understandable and accessible to the average reader who takes the time, trouble and intellectual effort to work through his argument). It is well worth the effort: no one who makes the effort to work through these pieces carefully will have any trouble identifying for themselves the problems with Rand's approach to philosophy.
"Rand illustrates the perils of being an amateur philosopher. By the way, the difference between a professional and an amateur philosopher is not the difference between one who makes money from philosophy and one who does not. It is the difference between one whose work meets a certain standard of competence and rigor, and one whose work does not."
Peter Damian (talk) 09:06, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- That's well and good, Peter, but Misplaced Pages is also written to be accessible. Consider the average reader who has not had formal philosophical training. When they see the claim that Rand lacked rigour, stated without qualification, as Misplaced Pages claiming that she is a sloppy or bad philosopher. Despite the fact that I agree with you that that is precisely what she is, it is not the place of Misplaced Pages to say so or imply so, even unintentionally. Again, don't think about rigor the way your, ahem, rigorously trained academic mind would. Think about, say, an intelligent teenager who sees it, and the message they would take away. It will come off as a value judgment--the kind of judgment Misplaced Pages cannot make. On the other hand I really do see your concern about weasel words, especially given the history of the article. How about something like: "Vallicella has been sharply critical of Rand's work, criticizing it as lacking philosophical rigour." That avoids weasel words while still avoiding the impression that Misplaced Pages is passing judgment on Rand.
- On a completely different note, do people feel like an article on what constitutes philosophical rigour might make a good addition to the encyclopaedia? I'm not sure that there is one. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:42, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- The point I take away from this is that the average reader will see what Vallicella says, and will not be analysing as closely as editors here the way in which it is presented. I'd also like to emphasize that, not for the first time, this edit is being treated as a special case because of what Valicella says. Throughout not just Misplaced Pages, but in this very article, views are attributed to individuals without being dressed up in special language to warn the reader that it's a view - even where the view is controversial, which - as Peter points out - Valicella's is not.KD Tries Again (talk) 13:44, 23 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Well there is an article about Handwaving, although parts of it are rather strange. I'll see what I can do.
- Examining in a rigorous way the argument you give here. First you say that Misplaced Pages is also written to be accessible. Correct, and very important, but that doesn't mean that anything in Misplaced Pages should be wrong, or should gloss over the truth, or misrepresent things. You then say "When they see the claim that Rand lacked rigour, stated without qualification, as Misplaced Pages claiming that she is a sloppy or bad philosopher. " which is not a finished sentence, so I don't know what you mean by that. You then say that you agree, but "it is not the place of Misplaced Pages to say so or imply so, even unintentionally". To say what? And why? How is your statement that Misplaced Pages shouldn't say something (that Rand was not rigorous? That she was a sloppy or bad philosopher?) connected with your assertion that Misplaced Pages should be accessible? You then say that an intelligent teenager would take away the message that Misplaced Pages is passing a value judgment. So? If judging a writer's work as 'lacking rigour' is a value judgment, and if reliable sources say her work lacked rigour, then Misplaced Pages should be making that judgment. Once again, the question is not about value judgments, but about what reliable sources say.
- On accessibility in general, I use Misplaced Pages myself for reference, and it is very useful for some things (it was the only internet source I could find with the 200 bus route, for example, including the Transport for London website). I think it's important for the encyclopedia to present a generally fair and balanced view of its subject, whoever is reading it. But when I came across the Rand article some time ago, despite a strong background in twentieth century philosophy (and indeed philosophical history generally) I was surprised because I had never heard of her. Yet the article did not present Rand as in any way unusual or different from a standard twentieth century philosopher. It took some work and research using reliable sources to discover 'the truth'. Which Misplaced Pages hadn't been giving us.
- On how Rand should be treated, I think it is perfectly possible to balance criticism with fairness, indeed a positive tone. Vallicella, Huemer and Watson actually express qualified admirationof her, whilst being fiercely critical of her lack of rigour, sloppy thinking and so forth. Peter Damian (talk) 15:15, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
Misplaced Pages can, should and does make such value judgments when they are well supported. William McGonagall - "He is comically renowned as one of the worst poets in the English language." Colley Cibber - "Cibber's poetical work was ridiculed in his time, and has been remembered only for being bad." Amanda McKittrick Ros - "her eccentric, over-written, circumlocutory writing style has a cult following among critics as being some of the worst prose and poetry ever written." I am not making any comparison between Rand and these writers, just observing that there is no policy against making negative statements as such.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:30, 23 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Misplaced Pages should never make value judgements. There is a very clear distinction between the first two examples you've given and the last one; only in the latter does Misplaced Pages endorse a negative view of the subject. Just as the Vallicella wording has Misplaced Pages endorsing a claim of lack of rigour, the McKittrick Ros wording has Misplaced Pages - not critics - claiming that her writing style was "eccentric, over-written, circumlocutory". Skomorokh 13:01, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
- The McKittrick Ros wording explicitly mentions critics. I understand the distinction you are trying to draw, but I don't see the relevance when what is clearly proposed is a view of Rand as expressed by her philosophical critics. It is not our job to wave a flag telling the reader the critics might be wrong (unless someone can find serious, independent disagreement about the matter): there is no implication that, for example, MacGonagall is believed or claimed by some to have been a lousy poet; there is no backing away from the judgement.KD Tries Again (talk) 14:47, 24 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Misplaced Pages should never make value judgements. There is a very clear distinction between the first two examples you've given and the last one; only in the latter does Misplaced Pages endorse a negative view of the subject. Just as the Vallicella wording has Misplaced Pages endorsing a claim of lack of rigour, the McKittrick Ros wording has Misplaced Pages - not critics - claiming that her writing style was "eccentric, over-written, circumlocutory". Skomorokh 13:01, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
Here is a selection of criticism of Rand drawn mainly from Huemer. I will collate some more, then attempt the more difficult task of turning into elegant prose.
- She offers no argument for the position on which her ethics, making only a bald assertion
- She doesn't even explicitly state some assumptions, indeed, she seems simply not to have noticed that she was assuming them
- Lacks clarity, and makes statements for which a number of conflicting interpretations are possible.
- Makes question begging arguments. Rand claimed to have an argument, a proof even, for ethical egoism. But one of the required premisses for that proof essentially just is ethical egoism!
- She seriously misrepresents the history of ethics.
- Her description of the history of ethics is a gross caricature, and she makes no effort to document her claims with any citations.
- She draws plausibility for her position by attacking straw men.
- She makes illegitimate shifts between equivocal interpretations
- She gives no criteria for the classifications she makes.
- Many of her claims are simply arbitrary declarations.
- She uses fudge words: i.e. words that can be interpreted to mean whatever it is convenient for them to mean at a particular time, and which can be used to insulate her thesis from testing and to enable her to claim that her theory supports, or doesn't support, anything; since there is no precise and unambiguous definition of these terms.
- Her arguments rest squarely on her intuitions.
- She thinks her theory, as she sets it out , is an exact science, but this claim would not withstand a casual acquaintance with any actual exact science. "
- She represents her intuitions and philosophical theories are 'scientific proofs,' and then derides the philosophical theories of others for being unscientific and therefore 'mystical.'
- She refers to philosophers that she does not identify, and probably does not identify them because she did not know.
- She makes no effort to document her claims and they are in fact impossible to document because not true.
- She was very ignorant of the history of her subject. This explains, in part, why her ethics is so flawed.
Note hardly any of these are 'value judgments'. They might be taken to reflect negatively on Rand's work, but that is no reason for not making them. Peter Damian (talk) 17:35, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- OK. I think you've convinced me Peter. My only request is that it read that her work lacked philosophical rigour, rather than just rigour, because it appears the philosophical definition of rigorous is something of a special case (for instance, mathematical rigour doesn't allow for hand-waving). TallNapoleon (talk) 18:06, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- All it means is that Rand's style of working differed from that of mainstream academic philosophy, which given that most of it was targeted at the general public rather than academicians is hardly surprising. Most if not all of the above list of criticisms could be rebutted, and many similar claims could be made about opposing philosophers, but this is not the place. It is regrettable that Rand's main philosophical points, some of them quite well supported and original, are obscured by focussing on minutiae instead. Rand herself decried the "analytic" school of academic philosophy, and cited several examples of patently absurd articles resulting from that style. As to the article, it is appropriate to indicate the widespread lack of acceptance by academic philosophers, since that's a verifiable fact. However, presenting a long list of such criticisms would call for rebuttal, which would not make for a good article. A year or so ago, I set up a Misplaced Pages article specifically for Criticisms of Objectivism (Ayn Rand) within which various reasonably justified criticisms could be discussed; however, since then that article has been replaced by a link but the criticism text has been lost. That needs fixing. — DAGwyn (talk) 14:52, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Requested quotation on Rand and homosexuality
160 requests a full quotation from Walker regarding Rand's characterisation of homosexuality as "disgusting". From what I can access on Google Books of page 119 of ISBN 0812693906: ""immoral...It's proper among consenting adults, ...legally. Morally, it's immoral. And more than that, if you want my really sincere opinion, it's disgusting." In Rand's view then...". Perhaps one of has direct access to the book or those of you in different legal jurisdictions than I have a better view on Google? Skomorokh 16:21, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I appreciate there might be issues of context with the previous version, but this seems like muting the full extent of Rand's position. Skomorokh 16:26, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I heard her views on this on a couple of occasions. She evidently thought that heterosexuality was part of the inherent nature of Man, and that homosexuality was largely the result of (bad) choices or psychological aberrations. (Obviously if the race had been totally homosexual, it would not have survived.) I don't think she seriously considered that homosexuality might sometimes stem from natural biochemical factors. The existing text is okay. — DAGwyn (talk) 15:04, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
A couple questions
Are her views on war and the Vietnam war in particular still in the article? And secondly, the criticism seciton is extensive, but does it still include positive assessments like: Jim Powell, a senior fellow at the Cato Institute, considers Rand one of the three founders (along with Rose Wilder Lane and Isabel Paterson) of modern American libertarianism, although she rejected libertarianism and the libertarian movement. ref ""Three Women Who Inspired the Modern Libertarian Movement"". Retrieved 2008-01-17. /ref ? ChildofMidnight (talk) 16:42, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I am a little confused as to why you are asking what's in the article.KD Tries Again (talk) 16:52, 25 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- I was trying to compare article versions. And it looked like the section on her war views got taken out.
I don't know if it was discussed, or if it was just moved, so that's why I'm asking.Nevermind it's there, I just missed it. I'll see if the bit giving her credit as one of the "three" founders of the libertarian movement is there too. Seemed interesting and notable. ChildofMidnight (talk) 02:46, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I was trying to compare article versions. And it looked like the section on her war views got taken out.
Three A's cited in Pennsylvania State University Press
Anon IP address 72.199.110.160 removed the following cited passage from a book published with Pennsylvania State University Press:
Rand had a high opinion of her own legacy, remarking in a tape-recorded question-and-answer session that in the history of philosophy she could only recommend "three A's" —Aristotle, Aquinas, and Ayn Rand.
72.199.110.160 also calls the re-insertion of this passage as "VANDALISM", stating "no source for Rand's 'allegedly high opinion of own legacy.'"
I don't have access to the book right now, but will be stopping by the library this afternoon to verify the citation. My question is: assuming the passage is both accurate and verifiable in Sciabarra's book, what is objectionable to the anon IP -- the citation itself for lack of historical cross-referencing (plausible) or something else? It's unclear to me what the problem is. J Readings (talk) 22:59, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- Does it matter? If he's not willing to engage on the talk page, it's not our job to read his mind. TallNapoleon (talk) 23:08, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think what the IP is getting at is that the first clause of the removed claim, "Rand had a high opinion of her own legacy", is editorialising; the "three A's" itself remark is cited, though without context: Sciabarr cites "Peikoff 1976T" for the anecdote, full ref should be visible here. One would need access to Peikoff's collection of her interviews (see link) for that. And though 160 raises useful objections on occasions, I'm with TallNapoleon in that we don't have to satisfy them if they are not willing to discuss their edits. Skomorokh 23:15, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- Skomorokh: And though 160 raises useful objections on occasions, I'm with TallNapoleon in that we don't have to satisfy them if they are not willing to discuss their edits. Thanks to everyone for their comments. Just so we are clear here, what is the bottom-line with regard to 72.199.110.160? Every time someone disagrees with its edits, a quick revert without talk page discussion amongst ourselves is acceptable? I just want to understand the WP:CONSENSUS on this issue. Thanks, J Readings (talk) 23:32, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- As far as I am concerned, if there is an existing talkpage discussion on an issue, and an editor involved in that discussion objects to one of 160's edits related to that issue, it's fine to revert while referring to the discussion. Articles can't be held hostage to one editor's perspective. That said, it would be productive if reverting editors would follow CABlankenship's example and accommodate any useful points 160 raises. I think there is enough of a reasonable distribution of editors watching the article that the IP's points will get a fair hearing. Skomorokh 23:39, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, when the IP makes 50 edits in a day without any discussion, that's disruptive. If he won't engage on the talk page, he needs to be blocked, at least temporarily. TallNapoleon (talk) 01:10, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- At the least, anon should be checked out. His style of throwing around accusations of vandalism whenever he disagrees with something is remarkably similar to Kjaer. Furthermore, anon only appeared after the arbcom bans. CABlankenship (talk) 01:17, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Actually, IP has been editing related articles long before, KD Tries Again (talk) 04:12, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- At the least, anon should be checked out. His style of throwing around accusations of vandalism whenever he disagrees with something is remarkably similar to Kjaer. Furthermore, anon only appeared after the arbcom bans. CABlankenship (talk) 01:17, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, when the IP makes 50 edits in a day without any discussion, that's disruptive. If he won't engage on the talk page, he needs to be blocked, at least temporarily. TallNapoleon (talk) 01:10, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
It would just seem to follow that if she believed that she was one of the three greatest philosophers in history that she had a "high opinion" of her legacy. CABlankenship (talk) 23:24, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- Just to be clear, making edits is not disruptive. All edits are subject to WP:BRD - thats the concensus. Anyone who wants to challenge the concensus is welcome to do so on the appropriate policy pages and forums. --Karbinski (talk) 02:42, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- True, and this IP editor clearly has very detailed knowledge of the subject and has made many improvements to this article and to other related articles. At the same time - and you can check the editor's talk page - the editor is intent on working unilaterally rather than engaging in any discussion. That makes things difficult. Specifically, we can't have this anonymous editor deleting content sourced to the Routledge Encyclopaedia of Philosophy just because he/she finds it unappealing. For what it's worth, I placed a warning on the editor's talk page.KD Tries Again (talk) 03:25, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Just to be clear, making edits is not disruptive. All edits are subject to WP:BRD - thats the concensus. Anyone who wants to challenge the concensus is welcome to do so on the appropriate policy pages and forums. --Karbinski (talk) 02:42, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Also, check this diff - a sweeping revision of the academic philosophy section yesterday, removing plenty of supported material, with no discussion. Everyone okay with this?KD Tries Again (talk) 04:21, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
Anon160 appears to have gone off the deep end. It seems that hysterical ranting is not merely confined to Rand's "technical philosophy", but has perhaps become a critical part of the Objectivist system. CABlankenship (talk) 06:13, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
I reverted this morning . This is not encouraging. To the more moderate supporters of Rand here: I am doing considerable research to arrive at a fair and neutral assessment of Rand's work, based on reliable sources. I am beginning to feel this is pointless, and that it will be undone as soon as completed. One is tempted to leave the article to rot until it is proof that Misplaced Pages has no effective mechanism for dealing with extreme partisan groups. The comments left by the IP ("Commie swine", "may you rot" and so on) are also extremely disturbing. Peter Damian (talk) 07:50, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
So now that Anon160 has declared himself to be an implacable foe of Misplaced Pages, may I gather that we no longer have to assume good faith concerning his edits? CABlankenship (talk) 08:39, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I put in a complaint at WP:ANI and it is has been blocked for 31h. Peter Damian (talk) 09:08, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Good grief, now I'm apparently a Communist. If that's his attitude towards Misplaced Pages, permaban him and be done with it. We'll see if his attitude improves when--and if--he returns. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:16, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- One important point to take away from all this is that if WP is saying much the same thing as other encyclopaedias from reputable publishers, we're probably on the right track.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:09, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Good grief, now I'm apparently a Communist. If that's his attitude towards Misplaced Pages, permaban him and be done with it. We'll see if his attitude improves when--and if--he returns. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:16, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Reviewing
I'm going to go through the latest batch of edits from 160, reverting where appropriate. If anyone has any concerns or objections, please raise them here so we can come to consensus on what should stay and what should go. Thanks, Skomorokh 23:41, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- See changes. There is a lot I didn't touch, so feel free to review this series of edits for anything else that might be improved upon. Skomorokh 01:07, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- Anon IP is back, removed the three A's statement again, and still is not engaging on the talk page, despite his block. That means that he's edit-warring. Also, on an unrelated tangent, why on earth is Boisevert described as "opining". Really? TallNapoleon (talk) 06:04, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
Merrill again
I just found an interesting record of the lobbying by the Ayn Rand society chairman Allan Gotthelf. . It turns out they were not pleased by the entry. But in any case there is a reference to R. Merrill's The Ideas of Ayn Rand, as "an amateurish work by a non-philosopher.", which sums up very well my immediate impressions of Merrill's work. Given that the source would be considerable reliable by Randians, and that Merrill's work would not be considered reliable by any trained philosopher, do we have everyone's agreement about my striking out the Merrill references? Thanks. Peter Damian (talk) 07:08, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- If we want Objectivist philosophers, why on earth should we bother with Merrill? There's Tara Smith, for one, and Sciabarra, for another. Hell, there's the entire Journal of Ayn Rand Studies. Peikoff and ARI are in my opinion too partisan to be worthwhile, but David Kelley and his crowd may be worth looking into. One of my professors is actually an Obectivist philosopher. Would folks like me to ask him if he knows of some good third party sources? TallNapoleon (talk) 09:13, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Quite - it's just that there was a dispute above about whether M. was a reliable source. On your second point, I would very much appreciate you asking your prof. I am particularly challenged on finding any reliable sources on Rand's epistemology. Peter Damian (talk) 09:31, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- She actually wrote a monograph on it, Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology. Obviously that's not an independent source, but my understanding is that she goes into a bit more depth there on her epistemology. This may also be of use if you have access to Cambridge journals. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:57, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks - I was aware of this, and I will look at it at some point. The problem is that it is a 'primary source' and therefore OR to discuss it. The need is for reliable secondary sources. I have written to Sciabarra, who seems a reasonable chap, to give us some pointers. If there really is no reliable secondary source, all the material in the sub-articles should be flagged. Peter Damian (talk) 10:58, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- It'd be OR to use it as an evaluation of her philosophy, but Rand is presumably an expert on her own epistemology, so I don't see any reason why we couldn't cite her talking about what her philosophy is. TallNapoleon (talk) 11:11, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I have the book and was prompted to open it while working on this article. It's a short book, about a hundred pages, and deals mainly with her theory of concepts (and the three axioms). I'll browse through and see if there are any useful summary statements (I do find it hard to paraphrase her prose).KD Tries Again (talk) 15:12, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- It'd be OR to use it as an evaluation of her philosophy, but Rand is presumably an expert on her own epistemology, so I don't see any reason why we couldn't cite her talking about what her philosophy is. TallNapoleon (talk) 11:11, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks - I was aware of this, and I will look at it at some point. The problem is that it is a 'primary source' and therefore OR to discuss it. The need is for reliable secondary sources. I have written to Sciabarra, who seems a reasonable chap, to give us some pointers. If there really is no reliable secondary source, all the material in the sub-articles should be flagged. Peter Damian (talk) 10:58, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- She actually wrote a monograph on it, Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology. Obviously that's not an independent source, but my understanding is that she goes into a bit more depth there on her epistemology. This may also be of use if you have access to Cambridge journals. TallNapoleon (talk) 09:57, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Quite - it's just that there was a dispute above about whether M. was a reliable source. On your second point, I would very much appreciate you asking your prof. I am particularly challenged on finding any reliable sources on Rand's epistemology. Peter Damian (talk) 09:31, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Some points:
- That someone of Gotthelf's stature and inclination disparages Merrill's book does cast a negative light on it. That said, the two books on Rand the (independent) Routledge entry recommends are Den Uyl and Rasmussen and Merrill.
- I think as far as describing Rand's philosophy, it would be negligent of us to ignore Peikoff (except perhaps where his interpretation of what Rand said is contested by others e.g. Kelley and company); obviously we should not be citing Peikoff for a neutral assessment of Rand's importance/technical ability/grasp of the subject.
- Primary sources don't have to be independent to be reliable – how could they? The only danger in citing them is that the editor citing will have to engage in interpretation to get a sense of what the author meant, which runs the risk of being original research. TallNapoleon is on the mark that "Rand is presumably an expert on her own epistemology".
- Gotthelf's own On Ayn Rand (ISBN 0534576257) is a technical overview of Rand's philosophy, including her epistemology and might be of use. Skomorokh 16:00, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Peikoff and Gotthelf may be the only sources we can use. My best effort at paraphrasing Rand herself (from the Mentor paperback edition of Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology) is this:
The central topic of Rand's epistemology (p1) is her attempt to clarify how we form concepts of "universals" although we only perceive "particulars" (or "abstractions" and "concepts" as she also calls them (pp1-2)). For Rand, this is explicitly an epistemological rather than a metaphysical question (p114). Her solution is to argue that we form concepts by mentally isolating general characteristics shared by entities, while disregarding particular differences between them (pp111-112).
Hardly original, but that's her position. This kind of paraphrasing is routine on other philosophy pages, but I understand it might be regarded as unacceptable OR when it comes to Rand. Best I could do, anyway.KD Tries Again (talk) 16:56, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Rather more difficult is her rejection of the analytic-synthetic distinction. As far as I can understand it, she rejects it because all truths are analytic. We don't know all analytic truths, however, because the full content of concepts is as yet unknown to us. This strikes me as bizarre, but I don't have her own formulation of it, and don't know how much this owes to Peikoff. Peter Damian (talk) 17:06, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- Does she formulate it anywhere? There's an appendix at the back of the epistemology book on the subject, but it's written by Peikoff.KD Tries Again (talk) 20:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- I just read it, and it seems my paragraph above misses an important point. Although the individual forms concepts by grasping similarities among particulars (concretes), the concept includes all properties of those particulars, and not the sub-set on which the formation of the concept was based (or any other subset). For example, an individual might form the concept "man" by noticing that "rationality" and "being a biped" are similarities among a group of entities. But the concept "man" also includes "smoking a pipe", "being dead", "liking coffee" and "being a dentist." It also, obviously, includes "not liking coffee" and "not being a dentist". For Rand/Peikoff, this is because concepts are somehow really instantiated in the entities which fall within their scope - they are not Platonic ideas. This dissolves the analytic/synthetic dichotomy, in Peikoff's view, because any concept includes all possible empirical observations about the entities which fall under it - whether we know it or not. I have the impression that this is exclusively Peikoff's work, based on Rand's theory of concept formation, but I am open to correction. I admit, I can't see how it follows from this line of argument that "a batchelor is an unmarried man" is not analytically true; just because the concept "batchelor" includes all empirical properties of any batchelor ever, few of those properties seem relevant to determining the meaning of the concept. Smoking a pipe is just not part of what batchelor means. (Quine, of course, evades that objection by acknowledging that some observations are more important than others)KD Tries Again (talk) 20:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Your final point is absolutely spot on. I think there is a confusion here between the internalist/externalist question about whether meanings are 'in the head' or not, and the analytic-synthetic question, of whether the meaning of the predicate is always included in the subject or not. You could validly hold that 'water' means H2O, and that it always meant H2O even in Aristotle's time when they didn't know that water actually is H2O, but still uphold the analytic-synthetic distinction (for example, it is not part of the 'externalist' view that 'water fell as rain in London on Friday 24 April 2009 12:00 BST'. But according to the article Objectivist epistemology, Rand's view is 'a version of content-externalism'. Now I look at this I am even more confused. The article says "Which particulars a concept subsumes, according to Rand, depends upon what the concept-coiner was discriminating from what when he or she formed the concept (this appears to be how Rand accommodates Gottlob Frege's insight that there are different "modes of presentation" of the same content). This view is a version of content externalism, similar in certain ways to the views of Hilary Putnam and Tyler Burge." As I understand the view, it is not at all similar to content-externalism. Rather, it seems similar to Leibniz' view that in every true proposition the predicate is included in the subject (I have a Latin formulation of this somewhere) and that the name 'Adam' includes every fact, past present and future, about Adam. Peter Damian (talk) 08:23, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- I just read it, and it seems my paragraph above misses an important point. Although the individual forms concepts by grasping similarities among particulars (concretes), the concept includes all properties of those particulars, and not the sub-set on which the formation of the concept was based (or any other subset). For example, an individual might form the concept "man" by noticing that "rationality" and "being a biped" are similarities among a group of entities. But the concept "man" also includes "smoking a pipe", "being dead", "liking coffee" and "being a dentist." It also, obviously, includes "not liking coffee" and "not being a dentist". For Rand/Peikoff, this is because concepts are somehow really instantiated in the entities which fall within their scope - they are not Platonic ideas. This dissolves the analytic/synthetic dichotomy, in Peikoff's view, because any concept includes all possible empirical observations about the entities which fall under it - whether we know it or not. I have the impression that this is exclusively Peikoff's work, based on Rand's theory of concept formation, but I am open to correction. I admit, I can't see how it follows from this line of argument that "a batchelor is an unmarried man" is not analytically true; just because the concept "batchelor" includes all empirical properties of any batchelor ever, few of those properties seem relevant to determining the meaning of the concept. Smoking a pipe is just not part of what batchelor means. (Quine, of course, evades that objection by acknowledging that some observations are more important than others)KD Tries Again (talk) 20:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- ""Which particulars a concept subsumes, according to Rand, depends upon what the concept-coiner was discriminating from what when he or she formed the concept". That doesn't seem to be right; that's how the concept is formed, but - according to Peikoff, anyway - it subsumes every property, every fact about, any particular which falls under it. Hence, for Peikoff, any truth is a logical (or analytic) truth. I support blanking and re-directing Objectivist epistemology in any case, as it seems to be an original interpretation.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:13, 27 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- At the risk of inducing apoplexy in Karbinski, I have located the idea of Leibniz I was thinking about. It is called the 'predicate-in-notion' principle by Leibniz scholars. See here. It derives directly from Arnauld and Nicole, and (according to the author of the SEP, | am not so sure) has its ancestry in Posterior Analytics I.4. I don't see any great harm in discussion around the subject on these talk pages, and indeed it is difficult to write about the subject at all without some basic and background knowledge. Peter Damian (talk) 17:01, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- Does she formulate it anywhere? There's an appendix at the back of the epistemology book on the subject, but it's written by Peikoff.KD Tries Again (talk) 20:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
Objectivist_epistemology for deletion?
I now think we should seriously consider nominating Objectivist_epistemology for deletion. The reason is not that it is badly written to the point of incoherence. That is not grounds for deletion (rather, for careful well-sourced re-writing). The grounds for deletion are (1) that nothing would possibly count as reliable sources for the article. I have tried very hard to locate such sources and they don't exist. There are reliable sources for other aspects of her philosophy (e.g. on politics and possibly ethics). No serious philosopher, as far as I can tell, has written about her 'epistemology'. I am not sure there is even a coherent view to write about. (2) Her views in any case is not notable. The authoritative SEP article on the analytic-synthetic article contains a list of 104 philosophers who have worked on the subject, some of whom have less notability than others. (Quine is clearly notable, Kahneman, Slovic & Kersey probably not). Rand is not mentioned at all. Therefore there is no reason to include her views in Misplaced Pages. What do we think? Peter Damian (talk) 12:09, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think you are on the wrong talk page - not once but twice (Objectivist epistemology and Analytic-synthetic distinction). Your personal exploration of Rand's ideas above should be on some forum, blog, or even your wiki user talk page. As well, your user sub-pages have discussion tabs (User_talk:Peter_Damian/Ayn_Rand). --Karbinski (talk) 14:56, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- Support for blanking can be expressed at the cross-talk page here. I am not sure if any editors other than Karbinski and myself are using that page. We do need to emerge from the discussion of Rand's views, but what prompted it was the difficulty in finding any reliable source encapsulating these views. If we had a good third party source which put Rand's epistemological and metaphysical views into a nutshell, we needn't bother with this.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:17, 27 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- On the contrary: how much weight is given to Rand's philosophy on this page, as opposed to sub-pages, is highly relevant to this page. In addition, this page is the most read of the Rand pages, it would have been necessary to advertise the issue here anyway. Does that not seem reasonable? Peter Damian (talk) 15:18, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- If there wasn't already an open discussion, that was already advertised here (via the cross-talk page), it would be reasonable to open the discussion on one page or the other and link to the discussion from the second article's talk page. --Karbinski (talk) 16:55, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm sorry I didn't know about the cross-talk page until now. I shall be sure to put things in the right place from now on. Peter Damian (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- If there wasn't already an open discussion, that was already advertised here (via the cross-talk page), it would be reasonable to open the discussion on one page or the other and link to the discussion from the second article's talk page. --Karbinski (talk) 16:55, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
Non TOC headers
Are we able to use headers for the Views and Bibliography sub-sections that are _format only_ headers so they don't show in the TOC? If not for the View section, how about just for the Bibliography section?
- Yes, but why would we want to do that? It would seem to hamper the reader's ability to navigate to their section of interest. Skomorokh 23:39, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
What is NPOV for this article
That Ayn Rand created a philosophy deserves some space. The facts are essentially a history of her writing and editing, followed by things like the NBI courses and some of the legacy content, ect.
Her philosophy deserves a little less space, linking to the main article, followed by some macro-level facts such as National Review's review by Chambers, that Objectivism has been largely ignored by acadamia, the exceptions to that being a number of academic philosophers who explicitly advocate Objectivism and a number of libertarian philosophers who respect her politics yet mostly disregard her declared metaphysics, epistemology, and ethics. As well, that philosopher x and y (or the publication they published in) considers her philosophy to be bad. None of these macro-level facts are more deserving of space than the others, and as an aggregate should be shorter than the summary of the philosophy.
Her views deserve a little space in-so-far as they are notable. Gender roles - you have the feminist movement, anti-communist - you have the congressional testimony, Vietnam and war - who discusses her views on this (other than her)? (I don't know), Kant - we have nothing notable enough to mention in her biographical summary that I'm aware of, that is: there is no "Chambers" or "National Review" publication covering her view on Kant that I'm aware of - its only relevant within the topic of Objectivism, Capitalism/Egoism/Reason/Reality - indeed relevant to her bio, but already covered (at least potentially) by the summary report on Objectivism. The sources tell the tale.
Individual opinions on the technical aspects of her philosophy, opinions informed by careful reading of Rand's essays, have no weight for inclusion in this article. --Karbinski (talk) 17:50, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- The current philosophy section in this article doesn't seem unduly long, and does link to Objectivism (Ayn Rand). I am inclined to agree that that's where the detail should be, but so far I don't see any sign that Peter is planning a much longer section. Still waiting to see what he comes up with.KD Tries Again (talk) 18:41, 27 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- For once I agree with Karbinski. The relevant facts are that she created a philosophy, that she isn't currently taken seriously be academia together with some reasons why she isn't - a cut down version of the draft I linked to above would be sufficient (together with some of the positive views which I haven't yet included in the draft. The whole article on Objectivist philosophy needs a radical overhaul, however. Peter Damian (talk) 18:46, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
- While it is true that the section(s) on Rand's ideas could stand a thorough overhaul, I suggest that it not be done by those who don't take those ideas seriously. The notion that disregard from the people whose work Rand criticized should be emphasized, but regard from the much greater number of people who found Rand's ideas worthy of consideration should not be mentioned, illustrates the problem. It is hard not to call it intellectual snobbery; at any rate, it does not result in a fair presentation of all the relevant facts. — DAGwyn (talk) 15:23, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- I suggest that's next, with the Metaphysics and Epistemology articles redirecting there.KD Tries Again (talk) 20:16, 27 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
Deletion of Criticism Content
I made, a now reverted, edit that deleted a chunk of the criticism section.
The Objectivism article reports criticisms on her philosophy and I see no need to duplicate what is already in that article in this article. The criticism this article will have concerning her philosophy should be in the Philosophy section as that section introduces the Objectivism article (where one will get more detail on its criticisms). As well, as discussed in the above section, the criticisms of Objectivism relevant for this article are at the summary/macro level.
Perhaps as a first step to fixing the Philosophy section, we should merge in the philosophy criticism content? --Karbinski (talk) 12:14, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- And merge literary criticism into the Fiction section, to be consistent?KD Tries Again (talk) 13:11, 28 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- Wiki has policies that state that criticism sections are an indicator of a poorly written article. I agree with this, personally. This article needs a major trim to clear up space for the biography section, which should be the main focus of the article. I suggest merging the criticism sections with the relevant articles/sections, removing most of the legacy section, and a great deal of the political and social views section. In my opinion, removal of the following sections would improve the article, while making space for more important biographical information: Rand's work and academic philosophy, Institutes, and merging all of the political and social views into a shorter, summary paragraph. CABlankenship (talk) 15:20, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- I may agree with some of the specific proposals, but I am not sure why there's an urge to make the article primarily a biographical article. Whether you look at novelists (Henry James, Joseph Conrad), philosophers (Immanuel Kant, Friedrich Nietzsche) or cultural figures generally (Paul Cezanne), the typical Misplaced Pages article has a summary of the life balanced by equal treatment of the work, often including legacy and/or criticism sections. The Rand article looks fairly normal in that respect, although it is certainly loaded with irrelevant detail.KD Tries Again (talk) 17:30, 28 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- That is a good point. Similarly the article on Wittgenstein which comprehensively covers both his life and his philosophy. The problem with Rand though is how to deal with her philosophy in the face of a near-unanimous critical rejection of her work, and thus the lack of any reliable sources to cover it. Peter Damian (talk) 18:17, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- I may agree with some of the specific proposals, but I am not sure why there's an urge to make the article primarily a biographical article. Whether you look at novelists (Henry James, Joseph Conrad), philosophers (Immanuel Kant, Friedrich Nietzsche) or cultural figures generally (Paul Cezanne), the typical Misplaced Pages article has a summary of the life balanced by equal treatment of the work, often including legacy and/or criticism sections. The Rand article looks fairly normal in that respect, although it is certainly loaded with irrelevant detail.KD Tries Again (talk) 17:30, 28 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
These are good points that you both raise. Another problem I'm encountering is that a lot of the material on Rand's life has a sort of L.Ron Hubbard and Church of Scientology quality to it; it reads like propaganda and personality cult idolization. CABlankenship (talk) 18:23, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- Well, duh! as the kids say nowadays. Ever read "Mozart Was A Red" or Elegy for a Soprano? The lady was the Dear Leader of her own little cult of personality. --Orange Mike | Talk 00:31, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
My reason for reverting is that the Ayn Rand article is the appropriate place for criticism of Rand herself, while Objectivism (Ayn Rand) should be reserved for the criticism of that philosophy. Much of what passes for Philosophical criticism in this article regards Rand's ability, methodology, rigour and so on. Read the section: it's not about Objectivism. I have no objection to merging the criticism to the relevant sections internal to the article. Skomorokh 18:25, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
It doesn't seem to me that trying to work with 160 will get anywhere, so I have reverted his deletion of my latest entry. Everyone on this talk page is pretty reasonable, so if someone else believes that this entry is unfair or NPOV, I won't object if it is edited or removed. CABlankenship (talk) 00:08, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- The edit summaries are becoming aggressive again ("That Rand PUBLICLY condemned blind foll. also just FACT - ESSENCE of R.'s phil. boils down to "think independently and think for yourself"e.g. hero Roark. READ mater. or stop edit"), not to say confused ("Valliant reproduces raw the Rand journals which are FIRST PERSON CONTEMPORANEOUS Rand notes about what she told Branden. JUST FACT."). I will post again on the user's Talk Page, but if the behavior continues it will need to be reported again.KD Tries Again (talk) 14:58, 30 April 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
I removed a pointless series of statements regarding Kant and Rand. Having just started my first round of reading Critique of Pure Reason, it's clear that a few sentences cannot come close to giving a fair view of Kant's positions and alleged mysticism. To give an example of how deep and complicated is the field of Kantian scholarship, A. D. Lindsay points out that there is a serious dispute between the primacy of the first and second editions of Critique of Pure Reason, noting that Kant "quite definitely held that he had been misunderstood in the first edition" which many felt upheld "subjective idealism", and that Kant "made the changes in his second edition principally to correct that misunderstanding", which "lends itself to a realist rather than to an idealist interpretation of Kant". Lindsay says that "There are other critics who treat Kant mainly as a notorious expounder of certain idealist fallacies to which the philosophic mind is prone. Such critics naturally prefer the first edition, into which it is not difficult to read these errors, to the second where Kant is obviously, but in their view inconsistently, trying to correct them. But in face of Kant's explicit declaration about his intention in making the changes in the second edition, such attitudes are surely historically indefensible." It seems clear to me that this is an issue that is far too complex for us to reasonably deal with it in a short summary on a page about Ayn Rand. It's enough to simply state that Rand seems to have not even read Kant, which explains the contempt which many have for her opinions about the man and his work. CABlankenship (talk) 06:53, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
Rand, the Enlightenment, and Romanticism
There's something really interesting about Rand that I think may be worth mentioning. Rand is interesting for attempting (no matter what one thinks of the results) to square the ultimate philosophical-historical circle: to unite Enlightenment and Romantic thinking. You can see it in the bizarre fusion of Nietzsche and Locke, her "Romantic Realist" esthetics and various other facets of her thinking. Now personally I think she made a real hash of it, fusing the worst aspects of both movements instead of the best. But I think just the fact that she made the attempt is interesting, and fairly unusual. I wonder if any of our more philosophically trained contributors could comment on this? Is it a line of thinking/research we ought to consider further? TallNapoleon (talk) 22:48, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think you are right, FWIW. But not an area of competence for me - this sort of thing is not really part of philosophy. In any case, we need reliable secondary sources that deal with this issue. Which we don't have. Peter Damian (talk) 10:57, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
James S. Valliant
Here is another author whose book, The Passion of Ayn Rand's Critics, I find even more suspect in its repeated citation throughout the Ayn Rand article than Roger Merrill's The Ideas of Ayn Rand.
Valliant is a self-described "Objectivist" who has taken it upon himself to defend Ayn Rand from two of her most notable critics -- Nathaniel Branden and his ex-wife Barbara Branden. While I have absolutely no objection to Valliant's OPINION from being briefly expressed in this article, I am still very cautious about presenting anything in his book as unadulterated FACT, which is how anon IP 160 would choose to present his views.
I have checked the following databases to see if I could find any articles that support either the notability of "James S. Valliant" or of his book (title above). These are my findings:
JSTOR - 0 hits
LexisNexis - 0 hits
Google News - 0 hits
Google Scholar - 0 hits
I also wanted to cross-check Valliant's background. Unlike Tara Smith, Valliant is not a credentialed academic, nor apparently is he a well-respected author. He is, apparently, a lawyer who happens to be a follower of Ayn Rand and, according to his publisher, found it necessary to publish this book "for supporters of Ayn Rand."
In any case, I have tagged the passages with "dubious" because I was unable to find the "reliable source" tag for an in-line citation.
I apologize for not posting to the reliable source noticeboard yet. My day-job prevents me from sitting down and composing a coherent message to the noticeboard regarding Merrill. I'll try to do this in the next day or so. When I request experienced third-party opinions on Merrill's work and his publisher, I'll post a similar (but separate) query regarding Valliant's work. I would stress, however, that the issue with Valliant (as I see it) is presenting his published partisan arguments as pure FACTS, while the issue with Merrill is allowing his book or opinion to be mentioned AT ALL. J Readings (talk) 03:50, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not entirely sure why Valliant's opinion should be included at all. But it certainly should not be treated as fact, considering how minor a source it is. TallNapoleon (talk) 04:01, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- I am considering putting the James S. Valliant article up for deletion. It fails the notability guidelines on almost every level. J Readings (talk) 14:06, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Strongly agree. Thanks for finding that nugget. Peter Damian (talk) 14:51, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- I am considering putting the James S. Valliant article up for deletion. It fails the notability guidelines on almost every level. J Readings (talk) 14:06, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
Criticism by Nathaniel Branden: Notable?
Why do we need the paragraph about Branden under the heading Criticism? We know there was an intimate relationship between Branden and Rand which turned sour. If anything, that makes the comments back and forth less interesting, in my view. Why is it notable that Rand had a closed mind about ESP? I am sure countless individuals with WP articles devoted to them had closed minds about ESP. Who cares? The only arguably notable comment is Branden's about Rand's "dogmatic religion," but in the tradition of this page we now have a quote from Rand back at him intended to neutralize the point. I'd lose the whole paragraph. Thoughts?KD Tries Again (talk) 15:54, 1 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- I think Branden, as the highest-ranking Objectivist dissident, is noteworthy enough to mention, though I'd agree that the ESP issue is trivial. It would be best to cover Branden's philosophical/methodological/psychological differences with Rand in the biographical or Legacy sections of the article, in keeping with the proposal to merge criticism where possible. Given the acrimony between the two, I think this is one point on which Rand deserves the right of reply in the article, though her views shouldn't be given equal weight. Ideally, I'd like to see (after the article has adequately explained the important biographical details of their relationship) a succinct paragraph on Branden's theoretical objections to Rand's work and attitude, perhaps padded out with info on Greenspan's ideological development and Kelley's criticism of "closed system" Objectivism. Skomorokh 16:20, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
- Removed the irrelevant remark about ESP. Someone tagged the reference to Rand's private diaries as dubious; I have at least revised the comment to represent the diaries as what Rand said - I don't think her private diary entries can be said to "show" that she told Branden anything, especially given the circumstances. Also, I strongly endorse "dubious" - the footnote has some quotes from the source, but the word "goddess" doesn't appear. That needs to go unless someone can confirm, with a full cite, that it's in her diaries.KD Tries Again (talk) 02:58, 3 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- For the record, I agree with KD's changes here. Skomorokh 03:02, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- The point about N. Branden is that he was indeed for many years Rand's closest intellectual associate, and worked with her to produce the first comprehensive presentations of her philosophy. (I was privileged to attend these.) Thus, his opinion about what parts of her ideas are provably right and what aren't, is notable. He toned down his critical remarks after a while, and he has always maintained that he remains in agreement with many of Rand's basic tenets. His main professional concern has always been the field of psychology, and he has identified perceived psychological risks to some of the more dogmatic followers of Rand, including himself. (He played a leading rôle in the infamous "purges," which he later regretted.)
- Rand's rejection of ESP was based on the valid observations that the notion historically stemmed from mysticism and the phenomenon had never been satisfactorily demonstrated, which is still the case. Certainly, Rand's scientific views were conservative, as one would expect from her education. In itself that's not necessarily a flaw, as numerous (non-Objectivist) scientists have expressed serious reservations about many developments in science; the most notable case is Bohr vs. Einstein, but there are many legitimate questioners of accepted beliefs even today. If Rand's philosophy sprang from her understanding of science, it would be an issue, but for the most part it didn't. — DAGwyn (talk) 15:51, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Tisdale
I don't think we need to preface that quote with "Tisdale says". Either US News is a reliable source, or it's not--let the information stand on its own with a proper cite instead of trying to marginalize it as just one person's opinion. TallNapoleon (talk) 23:55, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
- I agree.KD Tries Again (talk) 15:27, 2 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- That's a non-starter I'm afraid – all quotes must be attributed inline per the MOS. Skomorokh 02:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Are you sure? The MOS actually says that only quotations of a sentence or more should be attributed in the main text. The quote in question is not a full sentence. Peter Damian (talk) 06:49, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Hah. I deserved that for not checking it weekly. The new wording of MOS:QUOTE ("The author of a quote of a full sentence or more should be named; this is done in the main text and not in a footnote. However, attribution is unnecessary for quotations from the subject of the article or section.") is ambiguous. The idea was that readers shouldn't be forced to dig through the References section to find out who is being quoted. I appreciate that an author who has already been identified need not have their short quotations attributed multiple times in a paragraph, but dropping "sophomoric, preachy and unoriginal" out of the sky strikes me as terribly confusing. One solution would be to paraphrase Tisdale rather than quoting her, and state the paraphrase as fact, but I don't think this can be done neutrally while remaining faithful to the source. Skomorokh 06:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- The paraphrase would be something along the lines of "The academic community has largely taken a dim view of Rand's work", or something along those lines. TallNapoleon (talk) 08:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Tisdale was specifically talking about Atlas Shrugged, not Rand's entire career -- though, truth be told, the vast majority of academic philosophers do either ignore Rand or think she's irrelevant to serious philosophical studies. The problem is that's probably original research to synthesize that statement into the article, UNLESS we were to quote the Routledge Encyclopedia of Philosophy. I recall it stated something similar. J Readings (talk) 09:06, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- For what it's worth, I don't like the quote. (a) It's by a columnist, not a philosopher (b) it's rather strident (c) it has the Americanism 'sophomoric' which I think means 'in the style of an undergraduate', which I tend to confuse with 'soporific', though that would equally apply to Rand's writing. What is needed is a subtle form of wording which would confirm the truth to anyone who suspected the truth, but which would not be offensive to lovers of the Rand genre. Something like Rand's work being almost entirely neglected by academic philosophers. Academic philosophers would then nod knowingly, and lovers of Rand would conclude this is because there is an academic conspiracy against Rand. This is the best way to deal with WP:FRINGE subjects. Peter Damian (talk) 09:33, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, no agenda in evidence here. Can't imagine why anyone would consider it pointless to engage in discussion such as the ISP editor you all whine about. To tallnap, I'd say my input is as constructive as the comment I'm responding to.TheDarkOneLives (talk) 20:54, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
- For what it's worth, I don't like the quote. (a) It's by a columnist, not a philosopher (b) it's rather strident (c) it has the Americanism 'sophomoric' which I think means 'in the style of an undergraduate', which I tend to confuse with 'soporific', though that would equally apply to Rand's writing. What is needed is a subtle form of wording which would confirm the truth to anyone who suspected the truth, but which would not be offensive to lovers of the Rand genre. Something like Rand's work being almost entirely neglected by academic philosophers. Academic philosophers would then nod knowingly, and lovers of Rand would conclude this is because there is an academic conspiracy against Rand. This is the best way to deal with WP:FRINGE subjects. Peter Damian (talk) 09:33, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Tisdale was specifically talking about Atlas Shrugged, not Rand's entire career -- though, truth be told, the vast majority of academic philosophers do either ignore Rand or think she's irrelevant to serious philosophical studies. The problem is that's probably original research to synthesize that statement into the article, UNLESS we were to quote the Routledge Encyclopedia of Philosophy. I recall it stated something similar. J Readings (talk) 09:06, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- The paraphrase would be something along the lines of "The academic community has largely taken a dim view of Rand's work", or something along those lines. TallNapoleon (talk) 08:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Hah. I deserved that for not checking it weekly. The new wording of MOS:QUOTE ("The author of a quote of a full sentence or more should be named; this is done in the main text and not in a footnote. However, attribution is unnecessary for quotations from the subject of the article or section.") is ambiguous. The idea was that readers shouldn't be forced to dig through the References section to find out who is being quoted. I appreciate that an author who has already been identified need not have their short quotations attributed multiple times in a paragraph, but dropping "sophomoric, preachy and unoriginal" out of the sky strikes me as terribly confusing. One solution would be to paraphrase Tisdale rather than quoting her, and state the paraphrase as fact, but I don't think this can be done neutrally while remaining faithful to the source. Skomorokh 06:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Are you sure? The MOS actually says that only quotations of a sentence or more should be attributed in the main text. The quote in question is not a full sentence. Peter Damian (talk) 06:49, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
I'm sympathetic to these objections, but I do think we need to have a lead-in statement on the history of Rand's relationship of academic that is rigourously sourced, and the Tisdale quote is one of those. I'm not sure replacing it with the Routledge line is a move in the right direction given the controversy of the latter. These are some potential alternatives from news sources (not endorsing any of these, just throwing them out here):
- "Ayn Rand's novels of headstrong entrepreneurs' battles against convention enjoy a devoted following in business circles. While academia has failed to embrace Ms. Rand, calling her philosophy simplistic, schools have agreed to teach her works in exchange for a donation. " Bloomberg/Globe and Mail
- "Every few years, journalists write that the study of Ayn Rand's philosophy is making a comeback at mainstream universities. (I'm guilty!) It's perpetually sort of true. But the fuller truth remains that while she has fierce adherents, often in campus libertarian groups or on the fringes of philosophy departments, most academics look down their noses at her." The Boston Globe
- "Historically, American academia has been dismissive of Ayn Rand, but in recent years her work is increasingly being included in mainstream curricula." The Jerusalem Post
- "A sui generis philosopher, who looked at the world anew, Ayn Rand has long puzzled the intellectual establishment. Academia has usually met her views with antagonism or avoidance -- unable to fathom that she was an individualist but not a subjectivist, an absolutist but not a dogmatist. And they have thus ignored her original solutions to such seemingly intractable problems as how to ground values in facts. But even in academia her ideas are finding more acceptance, e.g., university fellowships and a subgroup within the American Philosophical Association to study objectivism. " The Pittsburgh Tribune/Mens News Daily
- "Educators have until now largely been absent from the roll-call , though, perhaps not surprisingly given the scorn Rand seemed to reserve for universities and their faculties, which she often viewed as being intellectually corrupt." The Guardian
- "...ow she is back in fashion of a sort. Her theories have made inroads into academia. Objectivism is taught at more than 30 universities, with fellowships at several leading philosophy departments. The Ayn Rand Institute has a war chest of over $7m to promote her ideas and more than a million high school pupils are being given free copies of her novels to read." The Independent
These are from a (not remotely exhausted) Google News search (I found Scholar and Books too noisy to be useful). The most comprehensive treatments of the topic are in books (e.g. Merrill, Walker) that have been called into question here unfortunately, but I think the above sources can be used to support a neutral and informative summary. Skomorokh 16:14, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
Comments invited
I have made a number of changes to the Objectivism (Ayn Rand) page, most of which are being fiercely resisted, particularly by Karbinski. The main issue is a section on the academic reception of Rand . The main objections are
- Since objectivism is more than just the personal philosophy of Ayn Rand, the section is not appropriate for that article. I don't follow this. When I attempted to put a similar section in th Ayn Rand page, the objection was that this page was about Ayn Rand, the woman, and not her philosophy. This reasoning would exclude any criticism of her philosophy in Misplaced Pages, which is absurd. Also, the title of the article is "Objectivism (Ayn Rand)", note the explicit reference to Rand in the title. Furthermore, when I look at definitions of Randian objectivism in other publications, there is a clear reference to the fact it is indeed Rand's personal philosophy (with an unspecified admixture of Peikoff). We could consider having a separate article on 'Ayn Rand's philosophy', but this seems to be an obvious POV fork.
- It is full of 'weasel' and 'peacock' terms. Happy to change the style, as long as the main point is made clear: there is an overwhelming consensus among academic philosophers who have studied her work, that her writing is ill-thought out, unsystematic, lacks rigour, and is filled with elementary philosophical and logical errors. If we omit that important fact, we are failing our duty to report what is verifiable from mainstream, academic sources.
Karbinski is proving very difficult - I have recommended he read an elementary textbook on logic so he understands the very basic terms used in the discussion on the talk page. I am happy to provide a footnote in the main article that will explain these issues to the non-technical reader, although I should stress these really are very elementary. I am close to losing patience, however. Peter Damian (talk) 12:03, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
- People who "talk down" like that generally know far less than they think they do. — DAGwyn (talk) 16:01, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- Talk:Objectivism (Ayn Rand) You can follow user Peter Damian's lack of discussion on the article's talk page. --Karbinski (talk) 14:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
As far as the academic reception goes, I am in favor either of having a section here on the academic reception of Rand's work, or a section at the other article on the reception of Objectivism generally. Unless those sections are very different, I am not in favor of having such a section in each article. I think the other disputes reflect a very real drafting problem: it is very difficult to offer an exposition of Rand's ideas without highlighting the confusions. Anyway, I commented over there.KD Tries Again (talk) 14:35, 6 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- A year or so ago, the article Criticisms of Objectivism (evolved from the original "Criticism of Objectivism (Ayn Rand)") contained discussions of several of the better reasoned arguments against Rand's ideas. I set it up that way because the main articles were becoming cluttered with distracting digressions, obscuring the presentation of the philosophy as an integrated whole. Unfortunately, since then somebody has turned it into a link to the main article, without including the contents into the main article. That needs fixing. — DAGwyn (talk) 16:01, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- No reason to lose valuable content, I agree.KD Tries Again (talk) 18:24, 6 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
- No content that was deemed valuable has been lost: see the discussion. Skomorokh 18:27, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
- No reason to lose valuable content, I agree.KD Tries Again (talk) 18:24, 6 May 2009 (UTC)KD Tries Again
Latest two edits
The ones by the IP (not our problem IP) discussing Rand's "oversimplified argument" about Israel and the Arabs need to be changed to be NPOV. It's not our place to say that her argument is oversimplified. TallNapoleon (talk) 21:44, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
- Sciabarra, Chris (1995). Ayn Rand. University Park: Pennsylvania State University Press. p. 12. ISBN 0271014415.
- Sciabarra, Chris (1995). Ayn Rand. University Park: Pennsylvania State University Press. p. 12. ISBN 0271014415.