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| '''OVERALL REVIEW'''</br> | |||
| After reviewing this article, I have decided to fail the article at this time. There are numerous issues that standout that keep this article from reaching good article status. First of all, the layout of the article needs some work. There are sections that need to be subsections and there are details that need to organized in a better fashion. Second, there are several details that aren't specific enough. When dealing with names of music reviewers, you need to be specific with who they are (i.e. Alex Lai of Contactmusic.com). Third, a lot of the references have either inactive links or do not properly source the information in the article. | |||
| You are welcome to renominate this article when the problems addressed here have been fixed. Good luck next time. - <font face="Comic Sans MS"><span style="color:#0f0">]</span></font><font color="CCCCCC">]</font> 04:46, 27 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
| #Is it '''reasonably well written'''? | |||
| #:A. Prose quality: {{GAList/check|no}} | |||
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| #Is it '''factually accurate''' and ''']'''? | |||
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| #Is it '''broad in its coverage'''? | |||
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| #Is it '''stable'''? | |||
| #: No ], etc: {{GAList/check|yes}} | |||
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| #Does it '''contain ]''' to illustrate the topic? | |||
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| '''Background''' | |||
| * This section seems fine; needs "Record and getting signed" and "Artwork" as subsections | |||
| '''Record and getting signed''' | |||
| * The "Record and getting signed" section should be a subsection in the "Background" section | |||
| '''Singles''' | |||
| * The released date of the singles should be stated separately for each individual single | |||
| * Discuss each single and everything about it (music video, release date, chart history) in separate, individual paragraphs | |||
| * Difficult to follow at times because of disorganization of details | |||
| *{{!xt|"Four of the album's singles appeared on the UK Singles Chart..."}} - Specify which singles | |||
| *{{!xt|"...where it peaked inside the Top 80."}} - Specify what number it was on the chart | |||
| *{{!xt|"The video for "Blessed Night" was shot from inside a 1976 Buick LeSabre Custom Coupe."}} - No reference | |||
| '''Artwork''' | |||
| * Should be a subsection in "Background" section | |||
| '''Promotion, release and reception''' | |||
| *{{!xt|"They played Camden Crawl and the NME New Music Tour."}} - Doesn't make sense | |||
| *{{!xt|"Niall O'Keeffe noted its depth and range..."}} - Specify who Niall O' Keeffe is | |||
| *{{!xt|"Chris Waugh admired Joel's guitar playing..."}} - Specify who Chris Waugh is | |||
| *{{!xt|"Richard Hughes drew comparisons..."}} - Specify who Richard Hughes is | |||
| *{{!xt|"Less favourable reviews came from David Renshaw..."}} - Specify who David Renshaw is | |||
| *{{!xt|"Tim DiGravina wrote that..."}} - Specify who Tim DiGravina is | |||
| *{{!xt|"Emily Mackay compared the band..."}} - Specify who Emily Mackay is | |||
| '''Track listing''' | |||
| * You need to write whoever writes each song in the track list. Here is a basis to guide off of: | |||
| :- Write the full name of the person on the first song. If they have written another song, just put their last name on each song they write. | |||
| * There is no reference to source '''ALL''' of the information in this section | |||
| '''Personnel''' | |||
| * There is no working reference to support the information in this section; please find another source | |||
| '''Release history, charts, accolades''' | |||
| * Each section should be a subsection, not bold-faced | |||
| * No references for singles chart information | |||
| '''References''' | |||
| * Most of the references seem OK, but others are either inactive or do not cite the information given in the sections | |||
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Reviewer: Rp0211 03:49, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
OVERALL REVIEW
After reviewing this article, I have decided to fail the article at this time. There are numerous issues that standout that keep this article from reaching good article status. First of all, the layout of the article needs some work. There are sections that need to be subsections and there are details that need to organized in a better fashion. Second, there are several details that aren't specific enough. When dealing with names of music reviewers, you need to be specific with who they are (i.e. Alex Lai of Contactmusic.com). Third, a lot of the references have either inactive links or do not properly source the information in the article.
You are welcome to renominate this article when the problems addressed here have been fixed. Good luck next time. - Rp0211 04:46, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Background
- This section seems fine; needs "Record and getting signed" and "Artwork" as subsections
Record and getting signed
- The "Record and getting signed" section should be a subsection in the "Background" section
Singles
- The released date of the singles should be stated separately for each individual single
- Discuss each single and everything about it (music video, release date, chart history) in separate, individual paragraphs
- Difficult to follow at times because of disorganization of details
- "Four of the album's singles appeared on the UK Singles Chart..." - Specify which singles
- "...where it peaked inside the Top 80." - Specify what number it was on the chart
- "The video for "Blessed Night" was shot from inside a 1976 Buick LeSabre Custom Coupe." - No reference
Artwork
- Should be a subsection in "Background" section
Promotion, release and reception
- "They played Camden Crawl and the NME New Music Tour." - Doesn't make sense
- "Niall O'Keeffe noted its depth and range..." - Specify who Niall O' Keeffe is
- "Chris Waugh admired Joel's guitar playing..." - Specify who Chris Waugh is
- "Richard Hughes drew comparisons..." - Specify who Richard Hughes is
- "Less favourable reviews came from David Renshaw..." - Specify who David Renshaw is
- "Tim DiGravina wrote that..." - Specify who Tim DiGravina is
- "Emily Mackay compared the band..." - Specify who Emily Mackay is
Track listing
- You need to write whoever writes each song in the track list. Here is a basis to guide off of:
- - Write the full name of the person on the first song. If they have written another song, just put their last name on each song they write.
- There is no reference to source ALL of the information in this section
Personnel
- There is no working reference to support the information in this section; please find another source
Release history, charts, accolades
- Each section should be a subsection, not bold-faced
- No references for singles chart information
References
- Most of the references seem OK, but others are either inactive or do not cite the information given in the sections