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Please note: If I gave you a warning for edits that you do not think were disruptive, leave me a note below and I'll look into it as soon as I possibly can. If I tagged your article for speedy deletion, please don't yell at me. It won't help your case. You are welcome to contest the speedy deletion nomination by clicking the appropriate link in the template notice. It will probably help if you specify a valid reason, though. With the exception of warning templates, if I've left a message on your talk page, it is already on my watchlist and I will see your reply shortly. There is no need to leave me a talkback notice in these cases. And finally, if I've done something mind-blowingly stupid, trout me!

help me with my portal

Will you help my with My new Prtal, Portal:Call of duty. Thanks and please notify any experts on call of duty to help me or contact me. --Pacman451 (talk) 16:30, 13 June 2012 (UTC)--Pacman451 (talk) 16:30, 13 June 2012 (UTC)--Pacman451 (talk) 16:30, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

help with WikiProject

Will you Help me with WikiProject: Call of duty. You can be Co-Creator. Thanks- --Pacman451 (talk) 17:18, 13 June 2012 (UTC)

I very much appreciate the offers, Mr. Pacman, but video games and suchlike isn't a big strength of mine. If you need help with just grammar or copyediting or something like that, let me know. I appreciate the offer, though. : ) Evanh2008 23:13, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

Please revert the changes made by you to the Indian Ordfnance Factories Board page.

Dear Evan, I edited an article "Ordnance Factories Board" which previously lacked vital information and was a stub. I provided the necessary citations and references from "reputable sources", even then, the page was reverted to its previous state. My father has worked in OFB for the past 33 years and is currently working as the General Manager of Ordnance Factory Tiruchirappalli. He has worked as a Scientist in the DRDO for 3 years. OFB is a great organisation and has a great sentimental value in our hearts. If you want, you can expand the article yourself or rollback changes you made. I'm an Electrical & Electronics engineer myself and a true patriotic son of my motherland, India. I won't do anything to defame its pride or its belongings'.

With all due respect (and I certainly don't doubt the qualifications of either you or your father), I'm only trying to help the article. Before I reverted to a previous revision the article was simply not up to standards, particularly linguistically. I removed quite a bit of material, true, but had I not, the article would still probably have needed to be rewritten entirely. I'll revert the article to what it was before my last revert, but it is in need of major, major work, so I. I wouldn't have reverted it if I thought it would have been easier, simpler or better to work with the article as it was.

I suppose I have enough free time (and I hope you to do) to commit to cleaning up the article to an acceptable standard, as soon as possible. But if there isn't major improvements on the article soon, someone else is going to come along and, very likely, do the same thing I did.

I'm restoring the content for now, so let's work together to make it better. Evanh2008 05:15, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

I changed "18th of March" to "March 18" in the lead section. Is that the correct date format for India, or would "18 March" be more common? Evanh2008 05:26, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Oh thanks a lot dear, I'm kind of new to Misplaced Pages editing and I don't really know about the "quality" of the content maybe you can direct me on the required changes or it would be great if you can spare some time for editing before someone comes across it and deletes it. Yes, 18th of March is correct as in India, we follow the UK's date format (DD/MM/YYYY) but I guess the US format would be more apt. Please guide me on the issues below: 1.When I search for OFB, the wiki page doesn't show up in the first page of search engine's results. 2.There's a page "Ordnance Factories Organisation" which shows up in the disambiguation results. There's no such organisation in India. Please delete that page and link this page to the disambiguation list. 3.I was unable to put up the OFB logo and the photos of the products manufactured at its factories. I don't think that I'd be able to do all this by myself and I really need your help. I can mail you the photographs and logo with the captions as their filenames so that you can directly upload them. No information provided is made up, hyped or biased, would be genuine, backed up with facts.

thanking you for your kindness and future help :D

Sorry for the delayed response. To answer your questions:

1. On my search engine, the Ordnance Factories Board page is showing up as the fourth result.

2. Ordnance Factories Organisation is a redirect to Ordnance Factories Board. I'm not seeing it listed on any disambiguation page.

3. Yes, I could probably help you upload some pictures, but I'll need to know first of all where you got them from. We have very strict guidelines for fair use on images in our articles, so if you didn't take the pictures yourself, or if they aren't otherwise in the public domain, it will raise some issues. Most government documents are in the public domain in India, I believe, so if these are government-produced images, that shouldn't be a problem. Just let me know from where these pictures came, and we can upload them soon. Evanh2008 21:47, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

First of all, I'm extremely sorry to have reverted some changes you made, like:

1.OFB is the largest and the oldest industrial setup run by the Government of India, employing a total workforce of about 150,000. TO 1*.OFB is the largest and the oldest industrial organisation run by the Government of India. It has a total workforce of about 150,000. Since, the the former one reflects that its largest in terms of workforce and there are MUCH larger government as well as private organisations in India in terms of workforce. I wonder what the "oldest" would have denoted. :P

2. "The Colonial Era" to "the beginning", as beginning sounds more appropriate when used to describe an initial state.

3. "Growth (1947-present)" was made a separate heading as it was listed under "History" as the "present" cannot be history today. Tomorrow, it surely will be!

4."Timeline" was changed to "Main Events" as timeline is a much more detailed and exhaustive list of either of the two and requires more events.

I sincerely hope you don't mind the above and I understand that my reasoning could be wrong. If so, please correct me. I finally was able to fix the disambiguation page. Yeah, the images of the products and the logo are on the website of the Board, which is maintained by the GoI. But, the images are of real bad quality and very low res. So, is there any way we can put up some images giving full credits to its author(s)?

Thanks in anticipation. :) --VivekMishra2010 (talk) 12:43, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for the delayed response; I just noticed your last reply. I've since made some more edits to the article that I think are an improvement in the area you mentioned. I should have more time to get the article in proper condition later this week. Thanks! Evanh2008 03:00, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

Hi, Thanks for your inputs! I'm looking forward to some pictorial improvements.

Warm regards, Vivek Mishra. --VivekMishra2010 (talk) 16:52, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

re Harrison albums

Hi Evanh2008. I've left a message for you on my talk page about the Harri albums thing. Cheers, JG66 (talk) 07:40, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Talkback

Frood! _{What did I break now?} 22:42, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Rollback

I think that if you just wait a day, ask on his talk page, you will get better results. WilliamH and I have very different ways of doing things, but my experience has been that he is a good guy and is very reasonable. He does take a more strict view on 3RR, but he is also quick to reconsider. I disagree with you on one point, in that this was not the proper place to use rollback. I would have instead explained this in great detail here, rather than take your rollback, but I understand (even if I disagree) with why he took it. In the interest of keeping the peace, respecting our differences of opinion, and restoring your rollback, I strongly suggest just talking with him about it in a calm way, on his talk page. At least give it a try. Dennis Brown - 2¢ © 13:03, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

I'll be glad to see this in the rear-view mirror, but I would just like to say (in case William happens to be reading this) that my problem was not with the fact that he took my rollback powers. My problem was that he did so while disregarding my repeated attempts at communication with the Nazi troll in question; and yes, I believe he violated policy in doing so. For someone with the responsibility of a longstanding admin, he should have (and, in fact, is required by policy to have) actually checked before acting hastily. Had he taken the time to thoroughly examine the diffs in question and to even check to see if I had attempted communication, which he clearly did not, and had he not come out of the gate with both guns blazing, asking for me to be blocked, this would not have escalated the way it did. I've seen new admins get de-sysopped for less. I can't disagree with your assessment of him personally; I can only go by what I saw yesterday.

That said, my incivility was out of line, and everyone was right to point that out. I thank you, User:BrownHairedGirl, and everyone else for getting in between us. Evanh2008 20:46, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

McCartney's 2002 'Driving' tours merging

Hey, I was wondering, as it is now the Macca tour articles include three 'Driving' tours. These need to be merged into one, but as I have never attempted a merge I am ignorant as to how to proceed. Do you have the time, and are you willing to collaborate on this?

Driving USA Tour – 24 shows, 2002 Driving Mexico Tour – 3 shows, 2002 Driving Japan Tour – 5 shows, 2002

One might also argue that his Back in the U.S. tour should also be merged into the forthcoming "Driving" world tour article. Any thoughts, suggestions? — GabeMc (talk) 00:55, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Hm. Interesting issue, that one. Will there need to be a proposal made before doing that, or would it be noncontroversial enough to not require that (or maybe there was a discussion already that I missed)?

Regardless, I'll do what I can to help. I've taken part in a few merge discussions in the past but I've never actually helped carry out the merge itself. I'll do some reading up on it, though. (I guess it's time I learned how anyway). If we were to just merge the "Driving" articles, I guess we could call the new article Driving World Tour or something like that? Not sure how that would be affected with the addition of Back in the US, but it does look as though that one should be included.

In short, I'm not totally sure how to proceed, but once we've figured it out, I'll be glad to help. Evanh2008 01:43, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

I'm not totally sure how to proceed either. There has not been a discussion in this regard (that I know of), though I doubt anything about it would be contentious, I could be wrong. This could be a good learning experience for both of us. If you feel we need to open a discussion before proceding I'll defer to your judgement and agree, otherwise, I say lets just be bold and go for it. — GabeMc (talk) 01:54, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look like anything contentious to me, so being bold should be fine in this case, I think. The whole process is actually a lot simpler than I expected it to be.

It looks like "Driving World Tour" is a common enough name to satisfy WP:COMMONNAME, particularly for the purposes of not having three or more extraneous articles cluttering up the topic. The most high-profile pages and/or templates that link to any of the to-be-merged articles should be updated with the new target link as soon as possible, so maybe one of us could create the content and the other go through and fix the wikilinks? Just a suggestion, but let me know if you have any thoughts on that. I should be online for a while longer tonight, so if you have the time we can get on this right now. Evanh2008 02:05, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I agree and I think we are fine to take the initiative here. I'm willing to do whatever aspect of this operation you would prefer to avoid. So feel free to delegate the tasks as you see fit. Thanks Evan! I won't have much time to work on this tonight in any depth, but I could certianly pick-up my slack on the morrow, and in days to come. — GabeMc (talk) 02:12, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

I wouldn't object to creating the actual article, so if you want to get started on some of the more important articles that link to any of the articles in question, you could get started on that whenever you have the time. It's not actually as time-sensitive as I might have made it sound, given that the merged articles will be redirects to the new page. I'll get right on it! Evanh2008 02:18, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Consider it merged! Evanh2008 02:49, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

And actually, you probably don't need to worry about the links and stuff. WP:MERGE says that bots should take care of any problems in that regard. I fixed the template, and I think the article itself is in reasonably good order now. I kept each of the four "legs" as sections of the article, as they really were promoted as separate entities in a way, but we can discuss that if you disagree. If you see any problems, let me know. G'night! Evanh2008 03:05, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Great work Evan! Thanks. — GabeMc (talk) 03:11, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Talkback

70.248.176.136 (talk) 06:33, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Rock of Ages

If you read the plot, the two characters do enter into a committed homosexual relationship during the course of Rock of Ages. They kiss onscreen---I thought it was gross but there you have it. --70.49.220.226 (talk) 07:36, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

You are correct. I misidentified the edit as vandalism, and have corrected myself. My apologies. Evanh2008 07:38, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Thank you

Thank you very much for the barnstar. It is much appreciated. By the way did you know that you are a Journeyman Editor? Can I put that service award on your user page? Surge_Elec (talk) 08:00, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

You're very welcome! Keep up the good work. And no, I didn't know I had attained any rank in particular. Go for it, if you feel like it! Evanh2008 08:03, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Thank you. I have put the award on your userpage. Hope you like it. Surge_Elec (talk) 08:13, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! I appreciate it. : ) Evanh2008 08:16, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Talkback

WilliamH (talk) 22:34, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Speedy

Speedy A7 cannot be used for schools -- see WP:CSD. Even a primary or intermediate school can be redirected or merged somewhere--the town, or diocese or school board. DGG ( talk ) 04:06, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

St. Michael's High School

I was going to tell you how to do page protection and request such but I see you have beaten me to it! Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 06:23, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your help! I wonder what triggered that insanity. Evanh2008 06:25, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

One wonders. Schools just out. Maybe texting, or a forum? Jim1138 (talk) 06:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

WP:ANISUCKS ! Jim1138 (talk) 07:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Haha! Truth. I try to avoid it as much as I possibly can. Thanks for the laugh! : ) Evanh2008 07:36, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Reminds me of Jokes by numbers Lots of humor sprinkled about. Jim1138 (talk) 08:17, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Wolf's Rain

"Looking back on this, everything except the bit about the Cyrillic lettering can stay" And why that's so? It's just facts, so you are vandaling good-faith changes. Or maybe you have some arguments? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 188.242.61.168 (talk) 00:15, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

Please read WP:OR, which I cited in my original revert. You may also be interested in reading WP:NOT VANDALISM. Evanh2008 00:24, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

I know Misplaced Pages rules, thanks. It is not original research, it is fact that understandable from the subject of article. Just look thia anime-serial and make sure of it. So, please, don't do vandal changes. Or I will need to adress to administration of english section wiki. And we will see who is right of us. You are just going againts facts. --188.242.61.168 (talk) 00:32, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

Don't accuse me of vandalism. If you think I've vandalised, then take it to AN/I or AIV. Otherwise, I'm not interested in discussing your baseless accusations. If you can't cite sources when you add something to an article, don't get upset when it's removed. If you knew "Misplaced Pages rules", as you put it, you would already understand that. Evanh2008 00:36, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

If you say such things then you should delete more than half of Misplaced Pages content. It's like you want to say that even every word must be with sourse. Please, look WP:POINT. Obvious things that understandable from the article subject don't need sourses, just as I said. P.S. Sorry for not very good english. --188.242.61.168 (talk) 00:44, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

I've done nothing to violate WP:POINT. If you ask an administrator, they will tell you the same thing. On the other hand, what you added to the article is both original research and synthesis. If reliable, third-party sources have made the same observations, then you can cite the material and it can stay. Otherwise, my assessment of it as WP:OR and synthesis is correct. In the interests of civility (and not edit-warring) I'll give you twelve hours to provide a reliable source for your addition regarding the Cyrillic lettering. If you haven't provided one by then, the material will be removed. If you still believe I'm a vandal or that I'm disrupting the site to make a point, then you can feel free to go tell on me. Probably here is the best place to make a report. Evanh2008 00:50, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: Kheri shila

Hello Evanh2008, and thanks for patrolling new pages! I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Kheri shila, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Not nonsense - there is meaningful content. You may wish to review the Criteria for Speedy Deletion before tagging further pages. Thank you. ϢereSpielChequers 09:02, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

Replied. Evanh2008 09:35, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

Living in the Material World GA assessment

Hi Evanh2008. I see you've made a number of changes to the article in line with the GA review comments for Living in the Material World, which is great, because you've done them well, without just following the instructions to the letter necessarily. Thought I'd get in touch because I in fact undid many of the changes (done by yeepsi previously) that the reviewer had requested, because it seemed to me that Rp0211 had asked for a lot of unnecessary, rather pedantic changes to be made (removing dates for single in infobox; adding year in parenthesis each and every time an album was named; having mentions of a year unabbreviated, as a blanket rule). Although a number of issues were raised in the review that were valid and very useful, I felt RP0211 really hadn't attempted to get into the spirit of the article, more a case of imposing a number of personally preferred style points (ones that I can't find at all in any MoS guidelines or the WikiAlbums style guide), and taking a lot away from the text in the process. Not only that, but the instructions were plain wrong at times: eg, the point about the song "So Sad" should be in parenthesis, because it's not on this album and the section in question is discussing songs written and recorded for LITMW; and, like "Living in the Material World (song)", "The Lord Loves the One (That Loves the Lord)" was also "Prabhupada-inspired", so they needed to be linked together. I realise I could've taken each issue up with the reviewer, but to be honest, it didn't seem worth it. As I've said (ranted?) on yeepsi (Time for a chat?)'s talk page, my feeling was to let this GA nom go (as it now has, with time having expired) rather than sacrifice a good article for the sake of a Good Article rating − particularly as another piece I did a lot of work on, Dark Horse, has just been successfully nominated as a GA without any of the unnecessary requirements that Rp0211 felt the need to impose on LITMW. So I'm thinking of re-submitting Living in the Material World soon and requesting that GreatOrangePumpkin (the DH reviewer) be the one to assess it, same with The Concert for Bangladesh. Not sure what luck I'll have there, but we'll see.

Anyway, I don't mean to sound "precious" about article content. It's just that, judging by the situation with the Dark Horse article, many of the Living in the Material World review's instructions are not in fact GA requirements, but they take a degree of accessibility away from the text. Please feel free to give me your comments − perhaps I've been in HarrisonAlbumLand a bit too long and need a reality check ... Just thought I'd raise this issue with you, so you won't be too surprised if I reword the "Prabhupada-inspired" mention, say, or reinstate brackets around the "So Sad" sentence. Cheers, JG66 (talk) 03:52, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

Hey, no worries! I got the same feeling about a few of the requested changes, so feel free to do whatever you think makes the article better. I've been planning for some time to go through each of the Harrison album articles and get them up to standard in a few areas where there's room for improvement. I think we can definitely squeeze a few Good Article statuses out of the bunch without sacrificing quality. Do you have any input on how we should go about getting consensus on how to order the albums in each article's lead section (i.e., whether Electronic Sound or All Things Must Pass should be listed as his first studio album)? That's something I feel we need to get a widespread agreement on soon. Evanh2008 04:00, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

Hey, good to meet someone else with a wiki-wide view of GH's album articles! Over the last six months I've been working on everything from All Things Must Pass up to The Best of, including song articles, trying to get the albums up to a B rating and the songs up to a C at least. The albums are all Bs now, which is great, but I agree, a few GAs are definitely possible. ATMP still needs quite a bit of work to tie the whole piece together, though. Anyway, your point about GH discography and the place of Elec Sound in the scheme of things − I guess the way to go would be a straw poll, not that I know too much about the process. Personally, as a lifelong fan, George's first proper studio album was ATMP; Wonderwall was a soundtrack (damn good, though), Electronic Sound was a Zapple experimental album. I'd say put it to the vote ... Cheers, JG66 (talk) 07:25, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

Just FYI, I've started a threaded discussion on the subject here. Evanh2008 02:46, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: Countries Applying Biometrics

Hi Evanh2008, you tagged Countries Applying Biometrics for deletion under "A10. Recently created article that duplicates an existing topic." Per Misplaced Pages:Criteria_for_speedy_deletion#A10:

"This does not include split pages or any article that expands or reorganizes an existing one or that contains referenced, mergeable material. "

The new article is, indeed, a split from Biometrics, as you can see from Special:Contributions/Octavius_SV. Please be more careful with this and other speedy deletion tags in the future. Thanks, Melchoir (talk) 07:45, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

Yep, I noticed that just before you took down the tag. Apologies, and I'll keep a closer eye out in the future. Thanks for notifying me! Evanh2008 07:50, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

Poulenc

Thank you for your message. There are plenty of links in the text I have added which provide all the references needed. The page as it was before I added to it did not mention any works between the late 30s and the sonatas, at the end of the composer's life. Dialogues of the Carmelites is not even referred to. Please use all the links I have provided and you will see for yourself. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.253.156.85 (talk) 02:31, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

You haven't added any links to the article. What are you talking about? Evanh2008 02:34, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

39 new links. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.253.156.85 (talk) 02:38, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

No new links. Absolutely none. Do you think repeating it over and over again is going to make it true? Evanh2008 02:41, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

(Butting in) Hi Evan -- I think 82. means wikilinks. The added material, to my eye (going on memory -- I know Poulenc's music pretty well -- and reading the article in the French wiki) is accurate. It just needs references, which are also lacking in the French article, although there are several good biographies listed at the bottom from which it would be easy find citations, provided one had access. Cheers, Antandrus (talk) 02:46, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

Okay, yes, that's probably it. Thanks for clarifying. Anyway, I haven't reverted anything yet and don't intend to. I'd rather not get involved at all, really, but when I see large additions of content with no inline citations I feel the need to at least notify the user in question. If it's not contentious, it probably can stay until someone provides inline citations, but that should happen as soon as possible. Thanks! Evanh2008 02:48, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

GA Review Anne Rice

I have initiated a review of the Anne Rice article you nominated for good article status. You can see the review page here.--The Devil's Advocate (talk) 22:14, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

My final review has been put on hold so there can be additional changes made to the article. See my initial review to see where I think there is need for improvement.--The Devil's Advocate (talk) 01:47, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

July 2006

You added deadend and wikify tags to July 2006 but I think that was unjustified. The article is mostly transclusions of various templates and what little text is natural to the page doesn't need any linking, IMO. I think AWB might be in error here and I have removed the tags. Dismas| 10:26, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

That seems reasonable to me. AWB is a little weird sometimes, so you can feel free to revert anything I do with it that looks off-kilter or unhelpful. Thanks for letting me know! Evanh2008 22:44, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

Paul McCartney FAC

Are you able to find a WP:RS for "Sir Paul McCartney's agent was Hubert Chesshyre, LVO, Clarenceux King of Arms", I assume this is accurate, he seems to be the person who would have performed that duty, but I cannot find it in any reliable sources. Any help on that would be greatly appreciated. Cheers! ~ GabeMc (talk) 04:29, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

I found this (it's a PDF, so you might have to right-click to download), which is an official publication of the Worshipful Company of Gold and Silver Wyre Drawers, an established Livery Company in London. It mentions McCartney as a "client" of Chesshyre's, which I believe would make Chesshyre, McCartney's "agent", though I'm not sure that's specific enough. I think it definitely meets WP:RS, though. Evanh2008 04:48, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

Well, I think that pdf source was there before, and I may have judged it unreliable and deleted it, I could be wrong, it looks like a self-published newsletter. I've summarized this material now in the article chronology, so if we have to remove the arms altogether, that's not a big deal. You could run that source by the folks at WP:RSN if you have the time. ~ GabeMc (talk) 05:50, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

It's not self-published in the true sense (published directly by the author of the work), but it may be a little too WP:PRIMARY for these purposes. I'll take it to the WP:RSN to see what others say. Evanh2008 05:54, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for making the effort to help out Evan, I hope you're right (that it's a RS). ~ GabeMc (talk) 06:16, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

I've added some summary detail on Rubber Soul, Revolver, and Sgt. Pepper, per FAC comments. If you have the time, I'm sure the Beatles section could use a once over, as I am sure I must have left an error or two in my wake. ~ GabeMc (talk) 02:21, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Will do! I just made a few edits that I think tidy up a few problems right up until the section on Revolver. I'll go through the rest of the section later tonight. Great work so far! Evanh2008 02:44, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks again Evan! ~ GabeMc (talk)

You're welcome! I think I caught all or most of the punctuation and grammatical errors in the "Beatles" section, but I'll try to give the whole article another look tomorrow to see if anything ele jumps out at me. Evanh2008 08:23, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks again. What did you think of the content? ~ GabeMc (talk) 08:58, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

It looks great! I saw the comments at the FAC that you had gotten a little off-topic with it, but I don't think that's the case, overall. There may be a few places that could be trimmed a little bit, but I'm way too tired to go through and pick those spots out, if they even exist. I'll look through tomorrow and let you know if anything needs to be cut. Keep up the good work! Evanh2008 09:04, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Most of the material relies on, or benefits from the support of the previous material or upcoming material, so I can't find a great place to trim. Though there may well be. I hear you on tired man, I'm averaging 4 hours per night this month, brutal! See if you can figure out how to avoid using three "Epstein's death"s in one graph. I can't find a solution without messing up the subject. ~ GabeMc (talk) 09:15, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

The "Epstein's death" issue is resolved! Time to sleep. ~ GabeMc (talk) 09:49, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Cool! Sleep well. : ) Evanh2008 09:52, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

If we remove the paragraph about the Pepper cover, then we have to remove the image as well. Also, I strongly disagree with you here. If Macca sketched the most famous album cover of all time, that that is surely notable. ~ GabeMc (talk) 08:50, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Per, "I think also the last paragraph of this subsection (beginning "Between 1962 and 1970") is also unnecessary. We've already covered the major singles and albums in detail, and don't need to summarize here" Yeah, we mention them, but not their chart history, in fact it's not even mentioned that they had a #1 album at all, or a #1 single in the entire section, until the last graph, which is there is summarize the band's achievements. ~ GabeMc (talk) 08:58, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

You are correct about the lack of a chart history mention prior to that paragraph, so I will retract that suggestion. I would suggest, though, that it might be something that could fit better in the lede, perhaps in abbreviated form. Regarding the Pepper thing, notability isn't actually the criterion for inclusion an article (see WP:N, "Notability does not directly affect the content of articles, but only whether the topic should have its own article."). And I'm not sure the cover actually would have to be removed if we cut out the bit about Paul having sketched it, as it would still be adjacent to material related to the album (though fair use policy might disagree with me on that). In an ideal world, I don't think I'd cut anything from the section on the Beatles. As I said at the FAC, I don't actually think the article is too long, but people are telling you to cut, so I'm just trying to give some ideas in that regard by telling you which bits I could live without. Evanh2008 09:06, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

According to Noleander, who did the image review and supported as was, the article must critically analyze the content of the cover, or its not a good rationale for use, thus copyvio, thus not FA. I have to go with him on that. But thanks for the lesson on notability. I'm just really fatigued. ~ GabeMc (talk) 09:24, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Per your above suggestion: "it might be something that could fit better in the lede", nothing should be included in the lede, which isn't also included in the article body Evan.~ GabeMc (talk) 09:27, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, you're right about that. I should have thought that through before posting it. The only reason I mentioned it is that it breaks the chronological flow. After we've read through the Beatles' entire career, we're suddenly jumping back for an eight-year summary of their success, and then in the next paragraph we're talking about his solo career. I guess I mentioned putting it in the lead because it looked a summary statement to me, which it actually isn't, even though it kind of looks like one.

I might suggest putting it in the "Recognition and achievements" section, but maybe that would make it look too Macca-specific when we're talking about the whole band charting, etc.

Anyway, I've been knee-deep in secondary sources, doing research for another article for a few hours now and am not thinking too clearly. I didn't get to look through the McCartney article in as much depth today as I had planned, so I'll try to have some more clear-headed suggestions for you tomorrow. Good luck in the meantime. Evanh2008 09:36, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, you make a good point about the broken chrono, and I see what you mean about the redundancy. I think I fixed it now. ~ GabeMc (talk) 10:10, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

I've trimmed alot of the article, but if you can see anything else that could be cut, please do let me know. ~ GabeMc (talk) 05:00, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the notification! Just scrolling through the article, it looks great to me, but I'll give it a more thorough read here soon and let you know. As far as Pepper goes, I'd be glad to help out with that if I have the time. A lot of my time of late has been devoted to a GA review I'm currently working (at Anne Rice), so once that is over, hopefully later this week, I should have some free time. Evanh2008 05:10, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

SM Mall of Asia

Please could you leave an explanation about the deletion of the Unity Run section and its references at Talk:SM Mall of Asia? Thanks. 2.26.132.72 (talk) 11:44, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

 Done Evanh2008 22:36, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Sgt. Pepper

Hey, the next article I was planning on taking through FAC is "Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band"; incredibly it is not even currently GA. Would you like to team-up on the article, as co-noms through FAC promotion? You would have to buy any of the books you don't already have of course, and I insist on the same Harv/sfn citation method I used at McCartney. Any thoughts? ~ GabeMc (talk) 01:51, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

Reviewer

Hi Evan, just so you know, I've flagged you with the Reviewer right. Message me if you have any questions! Best, Keilana| 07:09, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks very much! I appreciate it. Evanh2008 10:36, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

British English

In terms of consistency with British English, is describes equivalent to described? I notice we are switching over to wrote from writes for example. ~ GabeMc 05:38, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Wasn't it the anonymous IP that's been inciting that? Anyway, it wasn't primarily the tense I was fixing, but the comma splice that had managed to sneak in there somewhere. The present participle (any verb form ending in ing) need not be limited to the present tense only. This link does a fairly good job of describing the exceptions. It's perfectly acceptable to use this in past-tense writing, and you'll see it at least once a page in any novel that's written in the past tense. As an example, a passage from Flow My Tears, the Policeman Said, by Philip K. Dick (it's not a perfect example, but it's the book I have closest at hand):

She sat on a high stool, hand-arranging a line of type. He made out pale hair, very long but thin, dribbling down the back of her neck onto her cotton work shirt.

All emphasis is mine, and I hope I'm explaining this adequately. The -ing words are still present participles, but they're expressed in a framework that makes them do the job of past-tense words. This is perfect acceptable English and, to my knowledge, there is no international variation in its acceptance. Evanh2008 05:55, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Great explanation Evan, thanks. As far as tense, I'm pretty sure we do need to be present, in order to comply with BRitish English. I have a British/American English guidebook on its way to me, as well as the Chicago Mos and MLA handbook. Thanks again for the help. ~ GabeMc 06:02, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Gabe! I'm taking copious notes on the article right now and will have a new revision with some fixes later tonight, as long as my power doesn't go out (it's thundering pretty loud right now, so I can't make any promises). Tomorrow afternoon at the latest; then this article will be perfect. Evanh2008 06:07, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

You rock! ~ GabeMc 06:09, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

I see User:Lfstevens has tied up all the loose ends I left. Looks perfect now; congratulations on all the hard work you've put into this, Gabe! Evanh2008 01:59, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Evan, but without your, and numerous other editors help this would not have been possible. ~ GabeMc 00:00, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

OK, here's a dif

There was no mistake, nor any apology.

Now stay the fuck off my talk page. Radiopathy •talk• 02:14, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

For the record, I only left a message at your talk page regarding your use of the undo function because I had recently gone through an ordeal which involved by rollback rights being temporarily removed after I used them to combat a Nazi troll at American Third Position Party. I was trying to be friendly and help you avoid getting into any similar trouble. Don't worry, I sure won't make that mistake again.

The world does not revolve around you, as hard as that may be to believe. When I make an edit, it's because I want to improve the article; when I leave a reply at a talk page, it's because I want to contribute to the discussion. The reply I left at Talk:Roger Waters was one I had been planning to make for some time, long before you came along. Whether you want to believe that or not is none of my concern. It is not my mission in life to make you happy or to satisfy your demands that I cease editing the same pages as you. The heliocentric model prevails once more.

Without fail, every one of the accusations you made in your initial post at my talk page was either off-base entirely or flat-out false. To name one example, you accused me of reverting your edits at Paul McCartney, something which I know for a fact I have never done. Your claim was a falsehood; in common parlance, a lie.

You have selected two edits I've made to the infobox at Alfred Hitchcock on which to hang your wholesale dismissal of me as nothing more than a wikihound, bent on discrediting you and undercutting your work (for some reason -- I still haven't figured out what my motivation is supposed to be). Of my c. 5,000 edits to Misplaced Pages, exactly two have involved reversion of edits made by you. If you think that's compelling evidence of wikihounding, you are fully capable of going to an administrator and telling on me. If you think that will accomplish something, then do it. As of now, your baseless posturing here and at Talk:The Beatles is ineffectual and utterly pointless.

As to your demands: No. I refuse to change my editing habits to placate your irrational paranoia. Get over yourself. Evanh2008 02:18, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Sorry man

Look, Lfstevens also said to remove the detail about the Pepper cover, just as you had a few days ago. Also, they suggested removing the summary graph at the end of the section, also your suggestion from last week. I want to apologize for being snippy. Yes, I was tired and fatigued and not at all my highest self, but that's not an excuse to be a jerk. So, I'm sorry. You were right, I was wrong. Also, I re-read what Noleandser said about fair-use, and I misread it. As long as the article discusses the album, then we can use the cover image. Sorry about that too, I'll listen better in the future. ~ GabeMc 02:43, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

No worries at all, man! I didn't take it as "snippy", and I thought it was clear that you were tired and probably (rightly) frustrated that the FAC was taking so long and whatnot. You're very kind to offer an apology, but it's not a problem at all. :-) Evanh2008 02:49, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, but really, I'll be more respectful in the future. That was very poor form and I want to be a better contributor than that! ~ GabeMc 02:59, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Post noms in infobox at John Lennon

There is currently a discussion taking place here. Your input would be appreciated. ~ GabeMc 01:00, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

Replied. Thanks for the notification, Gabe! Evanh2008 02:15, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for watching Macca

Thanks for keeping an eye on Macca. I was hoping I would not be the only one fighting off andreas' attempts to degrade the high-quality prose that numerous editors worked so hard to acheive. ~ GabeMc 00:21, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

No need to thank me! I'm just trying to keep things sensible around here... Evanh2008 07:44, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

We share an opinion

The opinion shared by you, me, and almost all other editors is that IP Only editors make valid contributions. I see we each messaged the same editor on his talk page to tell him or her so. I was as disturbed as you by the curt reversion message. Fiddle Faddle (talk) 07:41, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

Absolutely. Thanks for taking the initiative to let him know. Hopefully it'll make an impression. Evanh2008 07:46, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

I had a pleasant response. You may have seen it already. There is always hope in any awkward situation. Fiddle Faddle (talk) 13:08, 11 July 2012 (UTC)