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Geez, the reception section here is such a mess

Anyway, if someone would actually try and rewrite it, here is some more NOTABLE reception (instead of stupid "she looks like ..." opinions on random websites and such):

Tom's Games
GamesRadar
The Inquirer (also Tidus)
Complex (also Paine)

--Barry Sandwich (talk) 10:45, 30 April 2011 (UTC)

Then be bold-Tintor2 (talk) 13:36, 30 April 2011 (UTC)

It's not "mine" article, so you be bold. --Barry Sandwich (talk) 13:16, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

Nobody owns an article in wikipedia.Tintor2 (talk) 14:35, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

Also (UGO.com). --Barry Sandwich (talk) 13:20, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

Okinawan kimono? KIMONO of Okinawa style does not exist.

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_SdA_Z-aRPsw/SxTAIyN627I/AAAAAAAAABU/6f0ULnWBdW4/s1600/hakama2.jpg

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/1/16/Mariko%27s_Graduation_%2796.jpg

It is style of HAKMA obviously. HAKAMA is Japanese clothing(not Okinawa style).

A developer is a Japanese. The Japanese knows HAKAMA by all means. Would a fan make the word "Okinawan kimonos"(LOL)?

61.214.5.118 (talk) 07:39, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

Discussion

A centralized discussion whether we should use video games as sources for voice actors in this article is taking place here. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 01:27, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Just no refs in the leads altogether. --Niemti (talk) 01:44, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Please read Misplaced Pages:Manual of Style/Lead section on how to use citations in the lead section. Also, per the relevant guideline, "The presence of citations in the introduction is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article." Thanks, Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 01:51, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

When Advent Children got de-GAd, presence of refs in the lead was one of the reasons. (And I only then noticed how FAs are like that.) --Niemti (talk) 01:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

At least we should use few or none citations to comply with WP:LEADCITE. However, the guideline states that there is not an exception to citation requirements specific to leads, as this is a non-controversial article. As such, you are free to add a few citations. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 02:00, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Better just run a fine copyedit through this article because I suck at English tenses. --Niemti (talk) 02:07, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Since I am a good copyeditor, I am going to copyedit the article myself. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 02:19, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Reception too. --Niemti (talk) 02:44, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

By "copyedit", I didn't mean "revert all my work, then keep reverting". --Niemti (talk) 15:20, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

STOP IT. --Niemti (talk) 15:23, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Please calm down. It would be more helpful if you were more civil. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 15:25, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

So don't revert my work when I asked you to do "a fine copyedit". If I wanted you to "go and revert all my edits, and keep reverting", I'd say this, but I asked to correct any grammar errors. --Niemti (talk) 15:31, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

And you can still do it now. --Niemti (talk) 15:34, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Sjones23 said he was going to copyedit the article and nobody disagreed so wait for him to finish before editing to avoid edit conflicts.Tintor2 (talk) 15:36, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

I asked him to do a copyedit, and then I even asked him to do "Reception too". I just didn't ask him to start by reverting all of my (prior) edits, and then to keep reverting them, without discussing or even not explaining anything. And that's a disruption. --Niemti (talk) 15:52, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

I had to revert some of the edits, because I felt some of them were tedious and had spelling errors. I have no intention of disruption in anyway, but I don't want people to interfere with copyedits, so please wait until I finish before editing to avoid edit conflicts. I am requesting a GOCE copyedit as well to see if others can help. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 16:07, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

I think it's pretty much complete. Unlike Rikku. --Niemti (talk) 16:39, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

GA revamp

Here's what we need to do to get this article revamped for GA:

Lead - must be expanded to three or four paragraphs.
Creation and development - find anything on voice acting and how they got into it. Also, expand upon the development section with information from other staff members as well.
Reception section - needs to be expanded with FFX reviews, and we should mention reviewer names for websites. See Raiden (Metal Gear) and Cloud Strife for examples.
Copyedit - even though it is done, just another run through should do.

Any other comments would be appreciated. Thanks, Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 17:09, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Nope on "reviewer names for websites". Because I didn't do it to make Kratos A-class (Kratos (God of War)). Raiden and Cloud use the names only because someone placed them and might be as well all removed because it's all redunant (the names are all in the references already), they're not requisite for anything. --Niemti (talk) 17:24, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

I disagree. I think reviewers are notable and I am discussing about this on Misplaced Pages talk:WikiProject Video games/Article guidelines#Reception to seek others' opinions about it. I feel that we should just at least mention them in the body of the article to explain unfamiliar readers of the article. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 17:30, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

That's your opinion what makes a GA, and I showed you how I ACTUALLY made an A (which is higher than GA). Reviewers are notable when they have their articles (and the policy that you just linked as "notable" refers precisely to this notability needed for any subject to have an own article). --Niemti (talk) 17:34, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

I have already moved the discussion to WT:CVG to seek more opinions there. Please wait until I speak with them. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 17:39, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

You sure love debating. --Niemti (talk) 17:41, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Also the lead is already "expanded to three or four paragraphs". More precisely, to three. --Niemti (talk) 17:28, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

And the actual problems were all listed here: http://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Good_article_reassessment/Yuna_(Final_Fantasy)/1 --Niemti (talk) 17:31, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

These were already addressed by other users as well. Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 17:34, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

And it was years ago. But you're just making artifictial and even completely non-existing "problems", like demanding an expansion to 3 paragraphs after expanding to 3 paragraphs. Just nominate it already. --Niemti (talk) 17:54, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

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