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*the entire article needs to be sectionalized (try more headings and subheadings); it doesn't look or read like a summary. |
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*the entire article needs to be sectionalized (try more headings and subheadings); it doesn't look or read like a summary. |
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*all images need sources and fair use rationales. |
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*all images need sources and fair use rationales. |
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*The section titles are not written with an encyclopedic tone |
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*<s>The section titles are not written with an encyclopedic tone</s> |
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*the sections themselves are extremely long. It seems like they could be reorganized so that instead of a chronology of the band, each section focused on one element of the band and how it changed throught the band's history. |
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*the sections themselves are extremely long. It seems like they could be reorganized so that instead of a chronology of the band, each section focused on one element of the band and how it changed throught the band's history. |
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*Lead should be a summary of the articles content, and is rather brief considering the length of the article and the 40+ years the band have existed |
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*<s>Lead should be a summary of the articles content, and is rather brief considering the length of the article and the 50+ years the band have existed</s> |
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*Fannish tone. |
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*Fannish tone. |
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*After cleanup, improve to good article status. |
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*unlike many articles for major musical artists, this page has no section about legacy or influence. |