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*Address FAR concerns |
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*Renominate for FA status when ready |
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*Add more references, make sure everything in the article is cited. |
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*There is still a substantial amount of sloppy writing and stylistic inconsistencies and infelicities throughout the article; thorough copyedit needed: |
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*As another example, we later have a paragraph that begins, egregiously: "1958 Kurosawa film '']'' was a strong influence, many elements are included such as the two bickering peasants (who evolved into C-3PO and R2-D2), elements of the Obi-Wan/Luke relationship and the Darth Vader-like evil general wears a kamon, commonly called simply a 'mon', a Japanese family crest similar to the Imperial Crest." |
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*As a final example, chosen virtually at random, examine the first sentence of the "]" section: "''Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope'' debuted in 37 theaters and broke 36 house records, and effectively become the very first ] film." |
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*This is untrue (''Star Wars'' was by no reasonable reckoning the "first blockbuster film"), awkwardly stated (what does it mean to be, not the "first" or even the "very first," but "effectively the very first"?), and misspelled ("become"?!). |
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*Create the Videogames section |
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*REsubmit for GA |
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