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| You'll notice that I raised objections to the way in which the prose is structured in the "Development" section. I've already done some copy editing but it requires more work. I draw your attention to this specific paragraph: "<u>On March 14, 2014</u> the Nevada Film Office announced that Sony Pictures had been awarded the first certificate of eligibility for the tax credit for the film Mall Cop 2. Nevada Film Office Director, Eric Preiss, indicated that the production would get $4.3 million in tax credits based on the proposal in their application. <u>On March 25, 2014</u> Neal McDonough was added to the cast of the film to play the role of villain. Daniella Alonso was also added to the cast <u>on April 7</u>, she would play Divina Martinez, the general manager of the Wynn Hotel, who is completely perplexed when Blart presumes that she's hitting on him. <u>On April 2</u>, Sony set the film for an April 17, 2015 release date. <u>On April 25</u> D. B. Woodside joined the cast of the film.". This sequential order of events makes this section read quite clumsily. Why not name all the actors who were added to the cast, regardless of when they were added. My edit summary said the article read like a news release. The prose needs improvement so fix it if you wish the tag to be removed. ] (]) 00:26, 3 May 2014 (UTC) | |||