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| * Edit article using less one sided and subjective language. Article is worded from a bias pro-life point of view with use of such phrases as "expulsion from the uterus of a fetus/embryo, resulting in or caused by its death" (embryo's death;conveying the idea of an embryo's death is extremely subjective language and point of view) | |||
| * <s>Expand lead</s> | |||
| * <s>Properly source the majority of information under "Forms of abortion" and "Health effects."</s> | |||
| * Create more balanced sub-section on abortion and mental health to better describe scope of controversy in both science and politics. | |||
| * Source and write a sub-section on compulsory abortion for "Social issues" (see ] for a draft). | |||
| * Add statistics on national abortion rates. Rework the table for "Incidence" (see ] for a work-in-progress version) | |||
| * Discuss creation of "Historical perspectives" topic under "Abortion debate." | |||
| * Discuss potential summary section of ] article. | |||
| * Discuss potential creation of "Abortion in art, literature, and film" section. | |||
| * Streamline article per ]. Copyedit to simplify prose and discuss content which could be reduced or removed. | |||
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