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Misspelling!

I came here from the Lenin mausoleum article as the reference seemed disturbing. Now I see the error is even in the title, his first name is Josif correctly. And if I remember well, his original name is Ioseb (in Georgian). I was quite surprised no one realized such a mistake yet. Didn't want to just change a title though, I am not aware of the process technically - not to damage references or something. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 37.76.81.254 (talk) 22:02, 7 February 2017 (UTC)

In the English-speaking world Stalin's first name is most frequently Anglicized to "Joseph". Xelkman (talk) 10:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Russian national heroes promoted by Stalin

Alexander Nevsky (film)

Ivan the Terrible (film)

Pyotr Pervyy, based on Peter I by Aleksey Nikolayevich Tolstoy

Alexander Suvorov#Legacy

A Life for the Tsar rewritten as Ivan Susanin.Xx236 (talk) 09:35, 31 January 2017 (UTC)

Yes, but his regime also promoted other culture:

• The 750th anniversary of Shota Rustaveli's Georgian epic "The Knight in the Panther Skin" was celebrated in 1938.
• Stalin obviously liked Alexander Kazbegi's Georgian novel, The Patricide, because he took from it his pseudonym "Koba", and the author was honoured in many ways.
• And Quiet Flows the Don (a novel which became a film ) celebrated Cossack culture.
• As did the film Cossacks of the Kuban.
• Armenian composer Aram Khachaturian, who used Armenian folk tunes in his music, was highly decorated.
• Ukrainian Cossack leader Bohdan Khmelnytsky was glorified as a hero of class struggle and a film made about him in 1941.
• Ukrainian activist Taras Shevchenko was honoured in a number of ways, including by the naming of Taras Shevchenko National University of Kyiv.

The regime also promoted non-Soviet heroes such as Spartacus and welcomed activists from around the world like Paul Robeson. As pointed out before, the USSR had a Russian majority. It is not surprising that the Russian language, culture, and history would feature in education, books, films etc.--Jack Upland (talk) 23:43, 7 February 2017 (UTC)

Portraits

I've taken this out:

After the Soviet victory in World War II, all official portraits of Stalin omitted his Georgian origins, although this process had begun earlier, since the 1930s official portraits had begun to soften his prominent Caucasian features.(Medvedev, Zhores A. (2006) The unknown Stalin p. 248)

Firstly, because it's badly written. Secondly, it's a very big call. It was widely known that Stalin was Georgian, and he spoke with a Georgian accent. Could it just be that Stalin's hair was going white? I don't know what Mevdedev actually says, and what the basis for it is.--Jack Upland (talk) 09:21, 8 February 2017 (UTC)

we can reqrite it--but wiki editors can't argue with leading RS. See https://books.google.com/books?id=v3BrNF80AzUC&pg=PA248 for the statement. Rjensen (talk) 09:51, 8 February 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the link, but this seems to be trivial speculation. Medvedev spends a lot of time on the rumour that Stalin was Nikolay Przhevalsky. According to Simon Sebag Montefiore, this is an "absurdity" and Przhevalsky was actually gay (Young Stalin, p 24). At the same time, there were biographies of Stalin and memoirs of people who knew him in the early days, so there was no doubt he was Georgian. I also don't think it fits under "Culture". It overlaps with information given under "Appearance". Maybe there should be a section "Portrayal"...--Jack Upland (talk) 22:35, 8 February 2017 (UTC)

Stalin spent a lot of attention on his image and historians have paid attention to the Stalin cult and "the image of Stalin projected by the mass media". Davies (2004) says " While the cult of the leader has been a distinctive feature of communist regimes since the time of Lenin, Stalin's cult was a particularly striking example of the phenomenon. A recent study regards it as the defining theme of public culture in the Stalin era." . the portrait info looks good. I think you're missing the point: everyone knew he was Georgian. The idea was to glorify his heroism in the media and portray him as a hero to all groups in USSR. Take a look at North Korea imagery in 2017 to get a feel for USSR in 1950. Rjensen (talk) 23:12, 8 February 2017 (UTC)

Yes, and as I said maybe we should have a section about that.--Jack Upland (talk) 23:15, 8 February 2017 (UTC)

I agree --separate section - good idea. Rjensen (talk) 23:17, 8 February 2017 (UTC)

The section "Cult of Personality" also talks about the portrayal of Stalin. (Incidentally, it gives a different measurement for his height). I think it would be appropriate to consolidate all information about the portrayal of Stalin there.--Jack Upland (talk) 18:38, 9 April 2017 (UTC)

I've done some tidying up. There seems to be somewhat of a contradiction, in that the Medvedevs claim that his portraits were trying to airbrush away his Georgian origin, but we also record that the leading actor that depicted him in film was the Georgian Mikheil Gelovani... I think we need more information on this.--Jack Upland (talk) 01:53, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

All portraits, except one in the Stalin museum, hide his prominent pockmarks. Notable?

Gravuritas (talk) 03:05, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

I think that's just normal.--Jack Upland (talk) 03:08, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Stalin started World War II

Without the Molotov-Ribbentrop Pact Hitler (and Stalin) could not have invaded Poland in September 1939. (2A00:23C4:638F:5000:1DE8:35B4:521D:6763 (talk) 20:31, 12 February 2017 (UTC))

This article compared to Winston Churchill

There is an extreme bias, especially in the introduction of this article to questionable interpretations of historical events. If we compare this article to that of an equally controversial contemporary leader Winston Churchill, it looks very unbalanced and makes Misplaced Pages look partisan.

• Various "Famines" are mentioned in the introduction of this article and a supposed "kill count" in the millions provided, but the Bengal Famine (where millions of people died) is not mentioned in the introduction of Churchill's article.
• Churchill as Secretary of War supported the suppression of dissident groups and civilians in Ireland through the Black and Tans, who often murdered political dissidents without trial (for instance George Clancy, the Mayor of Limerick) and tortured civilians. That is not mentioned in the introduction for Churchill's article, yet here the trials of some Trotskyist and Bukharianite anti-Soviet elements is portrayed in bias language as a "show trial" and a "suppression" in the introduction of this article.
• This article is laughably put into the category of "Antisemitism in Russia", yet Churchill, who wrote an article for the Sunday Herald in 1920 entitled "Zionism versus Bolshevism" claiming that Bolshevism was an "international Jewish conspiracy" somehow does not have such a category attached to his Misplaced Pages article.

IMO we either need some balance across the board, or a re-write, de-emphasising the tabloid-esque controversy mongering which is so prominent on this article. Claíomh Solais (talk) 01:59, 9 March 2017 (UTC)

You have made several good suggestions for the Churchill article. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:20, 12 March 2017 (UTC)

And it does show bias in this article. There is no reason that similar events should be treated differently because their alleged perpetrator is English or Georgian, Conservative or Communist. Misplaced Pages is neutral.--Jack Upland (talk) 08:49, 18 March 2017 (UTC)

Misplaced Pages's job is to report what the reliable sources say, whether favourable or negative. Misplaced Pages is only "neutral" regarding disputes between reliable sources. Otherwise It is not neutral about Stalin -- instead it reflects the consensus of RS that he was a very nasty person. Rjensen (talk) 10:24, 18 March 2017 (UTC)

The supposed "kill count", the "famines", all nicely put into quotations marks. It's a rather sickening comment, denying historical facts, in the same way some deny that the holocaust ever happened. If anything, the OP's original comment is extremely biased, and that's putting it mildly. As Rjensen indicated, what matters is what reliable sources report, and the consensus on historians on Stalin and his court is quite clear. 81.204.120.137 (talk) 23:37, 18 March 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, OP kind of lost me at "equally controversial contemporary leader Winston Churchill". There's really false equivalency there. Churchill wasn't responsible for the Bengal Famine, in any meaningful way (he did make a shockingly callous remark about it, but that's quite a different thing). And so forth. Not even exactly clear what OP wants, specifically. Herostratus (talk) 04:26, 19 March 2017 (UTC)

The underlying issue is what happens if reliable sources and venerable Wikipedians are biased. Churchill's article does suggest he was responsible for the Bengal Famine, and he was head of government for the British Empire, so the responsibility lies ultimately with him. However, mainstream historians do not calculate a "kill count" for Churchill. With Stalin, however, for some historians this is all they do. No one has found an executive order by Stalin saying that he wanted the crops in Ukraine to fail. But this doesn't matter.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:01, 19 March 2017 (UTC)

The idea that Stalin intentionally starved people in the Ukraine, just for being Ukrainian is a highly contentious suggestion. There have been famines in the Russian Empire for a long time before the Soviet Union ever existed and there were also famines in the Russian part of the Soviet Union at exactly the same time. It is in no way comparable to the Holocaust. So to put in the introduction that Stalin killed millions of Ukrainians, while not saying that Churchill killed millions of Bengalis is extremely bias as an interpretation.

The point is that, like in Bengal under Churchill's watch (there were active independence movements there too), many people did die in a famine.... but for one we put a sinister spin on it (Stalin) and in the other it does not get mentioned in the intro at all (Churchill). We mention purges of Trots and other insurgents against the Soviet state, but we do not mention Saint Winston's kill 'em all and let god sort them out antics in Ireland. The overall picture is systematically bias.

At the end of the day, Stalin dragged up a feudal nation to the status of an industrial superpower, raising the living standard of millions, saved the population of Eastern Europe from being reduced to the status of helots under the self-appointed herrenvolk of the Third Reich, stopped the successful completion of the Holocaust and the post-WWII "threat" of the Red Army forced Western governments to concede a social welfare state to their citizens. So Rjensen's assertion that it is a settled fact that he was a "baddie" of history and Winnie a "goodie" isn't so clear. Misplaced Pages should reflect that. Claíomh Solais (talk) 22:03, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

I agree.--Jack Upland (talk) 01:09, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Well, but the Bengal Famine and the Ukraine Famine were different events. It makes no sense to say "If Stalin caused the Ukraine one, then Churchill caused the Bengal one; and if Churchill didn't cause the Bengal one, then Stalin didn't cause the Ukraine one". And that seems to be the gist of your argument. The two events have to be considered separately.

Stalin had a complicated legacy. IMO you're entirely correct that Stalin probably saved the world from Hitler (a Russia under a Czar, or Kerensky, or a White regime, or even Trotsky would probably have fallen to the Nazis, who probably would have attacked regardless of who was ruling Russia) and did other good things. So? Does that mean we should give him a pass on the other stuff? Hitler built good roads and was kind to animals, but so?

Churchill's Britain just quite simply didn't have anything like the Gulag. It just didn't, is all. I did Yakov Taubin's article, which has "Taubin was executed... This place is now Yuri Gagarin Park within the city limits of Samara and contains the mass graves of several thousand victims of execution by Soviet authorities". It's just a simple plain fact that they haven't dug up any mass graves from Churchill's regime in Finsbury Circus. IMO this is a significant difference between the figures, and I think that most people would agree. Herostratus (talk) 14:46, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Stalin's Soviet Union was a totalitarian oppressive dictatorship, there wasn't just Holodomor, there was also stuff like GULAG, executions, mass deportations, purges, overall a lots of really nasty stuff that happened on practically whole duration of Stalin's rule. Churchill's record doesn't really compare, which is also the reason why historical depictions of those two leaders are quite different.--Staberinde (talk) 18:49, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

It would help if Claiomh Solais or Jack Upland would make concrete suggestions for the article, backed up by reliable sources. Instead of providing cynical commentary, defending not only a brutal mass murderer, but even worse, defending even his murderous actions. Not different at all from those who come to the Holocaust article and claim that it never happened. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:C04E:3594:1796:89BC (talk) 22:08, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

At least we could remove the category "Antisemitism in Russia" which is not supported by the article.--Jack Upland (talk) 04:37, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Stalin did not save anyone in eastern Europe - he began a world war by invading Poland in conjunction with Nazi Germany in 1939, and then invaded and enslaved all of eastern Europe and the Baltic States for the next 50 years. Stalin did not stop the Holocaust - he actually refused to bomb the death camps. (AndreMonahan (talk) 18:58, 23 March 2017 (UTC))

With your last comment, I think you are thinking of Roosevelt: see Auschwitz bombing debate.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:59, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Stalin refused to use his huge air force to bomb the death camps in eastern Europe. He also kept the Japanese informed on US movements and positions throughout the Pacific War. (AndreMonahan (talk) 23:42, 23 March 2017 (UTC))

Is that you, Harvey?--Jack Upland (talk) 03:33, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

What? My grandfather was murdered by the Soviets in Poland in September 1939, without trial. I find the idea that Stalin "saved" anyone in eastern Europe highly offensive. Do not forget the Soviets supplied the fuel the Germans used to wage war in 1939-41. (AndreMonahan (talk) 12:24, 24 March 2017 (UTC))

Stalin's alliance with Nazi Germany almost destroyed the Soviet Union in 1941. Without the pact Hitler would not have been able to overrun France or invade the USSR. (81.135.14.62 (talk) 21:33, 5 April 2017 (UTC))

Hmmm, lucky he never got his hands on Bury St Edmunds, eh? Martinevans123 (talk) 21:36, 5 April 2017 (UTC)

Antisemitism

Further to the point which got lost in the arguments above, I don't think the category "Antisemitism in Russia" is useful here. The main article is Stalin and antisemitism. This makes it clear that the sources and the evidence are equivocal. Historian Albert Lindemann is quoted as saying: "Determining Stalin's real attitude to Jews is difficult. Not only did he repeatedly speak out against anti-Semitism but both his son and daughter married Jews, and several of his closest and most devoted lieutenants from the late 1920s through the 1930s were of Jewish origin, for example Lazar Moiseyevich Kaganovich, Maxim Litvinov, and the notorious head of the secret police, Genrikh Yagoda." According to Simon Sebag Montefiore (Stalin: The Court of the Red Tsar, pp 270-71), Stalin's "antisemitism" was a "mannerism", consisting of jokes etc, but he also campaigned against antisemitism, set up the Jewish Autonomous Oblast, and associated with Jews. I think this issue is complex and can't be reduced to a label.--Jack Upland (talk) 03:10, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Maybe for a start you should refrain from misrepresenting sources. You claim that Montefiore describes Stalin's antisemitism as a mannerism, consisting of joke (how harmless!), but the sentence in question is: "Stalin was an anti-semite by most definitions, but until after the war, it was more a Russian mannerism than a dangerous obsession.". And to cite the Jewish Autonomous Oblast as evidence for the absence of Antisemitism, that's either naive or cynical, your choice. In any case, even ignoring your misrepresentation of sources, including Stalin in this category does not imply that he was an antisemite, but rather, that antisemitism is one of the defining feature of this person. That so many historians and scholarly sources devote so much attention to this question shows that indeed it is one of his defining features. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:10AD:C5A4:9EE1:64E0 (talk) 09:45, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Stalin was planning a new Holocaust at the time of his death. (2A00:23C4:6392:3C00:B98A:425B:9BF6:AD48 (talk) 11:39, 25 March 2017 (UTC))

I was referring to the whole two pages written by Montefiore, not the first sentence.--Jack Upland (talk) 12:08, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

And?? To summarize these pages as saying that Stalin just liked to make jokes about Jews is a gross misrepresentation. That you keep insisting doesn't make it better. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:20CF:BE7A:7A79:8171 (talk) 12:18, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

There are historians besides Montefiore who are of the opinion that Stalin was in fact antisemitic. There is no reason to put all the WP:UNDUE WP:WEIGHT on the former.--Galassi (talk) 13:06, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

I think both of you are going off on a tangent. Yes, Montefiore labels Stalin as an "anti-Semite", but he goes on to paint a more complex picture:

• "He enjoyed the Jewish jokes... But he also enjoyed jokes about Armenians and Germans..." And his close henchman Anastas Mikoyan was Armenian.
• "On the other hand, most of the women around him, and many of his closest collaborators, from Yagoda to Mekhlis, were Jewish."
• "Stalin was aware that his regime had to stand against anti-Semitism..."
• "Stalin founded a Jewish homeland, Birobizhan, on the inhospitable Chinese border..." (Not that the area is particularly inhospitable. It has high rainfall and is linked to the rest of the world by the Transiberian Railway.)
• "In 1937... formed a majority in the Government."
• After hearing Kaganovich's complaint about Jewish jokes, "He never again allowed such jokes in front of Kaganovich".

As I said, I don't think this can be reduced to a simple label. Any serious analysis of Stalin and antisemitism has to weigh up a range of issues, but the category "Antisemitism in Russia" doesn't do that. It gives undue weight to something not discussed in detail in the article, and a similar category is not used for people such as Churchill, Richard Nixon etc.--Jack Upland (talk) 23:03, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Montefiore makes it very clear that Stalin was an Antisemite. That there are some nuances to this, fine, there always are. After all Hitler also protected some Jews, like Ernst Moritz Hess. In any case, the question is not whether Stalin was an Antisemite or not, but rather, whether this is one of his defining features. The fact that so many scholars and historians discuss Stalin's antisemitism indicates that yes, indeed, it is one of his defining feature. Much more so than many of the other categories. Your quotes, by they way, are selective and taken out of context. But I guess you know that. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:5042:69BE:99F7:76D4 (talk) 23:36, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

It's a difficult question. One vibe I kind of get from some editors is "Stalin was an evil monster, so let's put him in every possible bad category" which might not be the best way to approach it. Looking at another member of this category, Itzik Feffer, who "was a Soviet Yiddish poet executed on the Night of the Murdered Poets". Apparently this was part of the liquidation of the Jewish Anti-Fascist Committee. All these people were Jewish, which makes sense given the name of the organization. But whether these people were killed specifically for being Jewish or just under Stalin's "let's kill lots of people generally, especially members of organizations" policy I'm not sure; probably the latter IMO. If there was a Catholic Anti-Fascist Committee or whatever I bet they didn't fare too well either. So maybe wiping out this particular group of Jews all at once just solidifies Stalin's membership in the category "All-round evil monster" rather than "Antisemitic evil monster". And so forth for a lot of the other stuff.

Since its contended, I wouldn't put him in the category. Categories are crude instruments and unlike text material you can't hedge membership with reasons and counter-examples; you're in or out. Because of this I think the question is not "Was Stalin antisemitic as a defining characteristic" but "Was Stalin antisemitic as a defining characteristic beyond reasonable doubt". I don't think you can answer "yes" to the latter question, so I wouldn't include him. Herostratus (talk) 00:01, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

Whether Stalin was an Antisemite or not is irrelevant. What's relevant is that the question of Stalin's antisemitism is widely discussed in scholarly sources, and it is for that reason that he should be included in this category. That's what the policy on categories states. Case in point, the category is named Antisemitism in Russia, not Antisemites from Russia. But the article should be moved into the category Antisemitism in the Soviet Union. More appropriate. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:5042:69BE:99F7:76D4 (talk) 13:03, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

You make a good point. It's not "Antisemites", and since Stalin's antisemitism is widely discussed, and there is the doctor's plot and all, I can see how it would be a service for a reader looking into the general subject of antisemitism in the Soviet Union to be directed to this article. So I withdraw my objection and concur with your suggestion. Herostratus (talk) 13:58, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

There is very little in this article about antisemitism. The category makes sense at the Doctor's Plot and Stalin and antisemitism articles, but it is not useful here.--Jack Upland (talk) 20:43, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

Stalin as an "anti-semite" is an American Cold War propaganda fiction. Anti-semitism as an ideology was criminalised in the Soviet Union and illegal throughout Stalin's time, being associated with White-guardists and Christian mysticism. Stalin and other Bolsheviks were opposed to reactionary tendencies in the Jewish community, such as the rabbis and ethno-nationalism (Zionism; especially after it became clear that it was allied to American Imperialism), but at the same time encouraged proletarian and progressive elements of the Jewish community (evidenced by the likes of Kaganovich). Just as the Bolsheviks were opposed to reactionary tendencies within all other communities. Bukharin was an ethnic Russian, does that make Stalin a Russophobe for opposing him? Or for removing Yezhov from power? Claíomh Solais (talk) 23:26, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

And in regards to espionage, there were absolutely pro-American spies in the Soviet Union (whether medical practitioners or otherwise), just as there were pro-Soviet spies in the United States during the Cold War. Some of these people happened to be of Jewish descent. By describing suppression of spies for carrying out espionage as antisemitic, we may as well say on Dwight D. Eisenhower's article that he was "killing Jews" because Julius and Ethel Rosenberg were executed during his presidency. It is silliness. Claíomh Solais (talk) 23:47, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

In the same spirit one could call your comment Stalinist propaganda. No thanks, I'd rather go with "American Cold War propaganda". At least that propaganda is supported by facts and scholarly sources, and displays human decency. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:3D10:EE4B:CB0F:30BA (talk) 11:22, 27 March 2017 (UTC)

The point is we are meant to uphold a neutral point of view, not take sides. Just because the Americans and their associates found it useful to portray Stalin as an antisemite during the Cold War as an attempt to get the Jewish community to support their cause doesn't mean we should spout this war propaganda as if it were fact. Of course Imperialist publications are going to support an imperialist narratives, what does that prove? Claíomh Solais (talk) 17:22, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Wiki rule is that we are neutral between the scholarly reliable sources. If you have reliable sources that say Stalin was not anti-semitic and was not planning to kill the Jewish doctors, please add it. No one has to be neutral between the killer and his victims. Rjensen (talk) 18:42, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Stalin carried out genocide against Jews and allowed the Warsaw Uprising to be crushed. He was beginning a new holocaust when he died. (2A00:23C4:6392:3C00:E911:27CD:6EA:A466 (talk) 18:52, 28 March 2017 (UTC))

Even in Israel, despite the tumultuous relationship between the Soviet Union and Zionism, President Shimon Peres stated to President Vladimir Putin in 2012; "Without the Red Army victory it is unclear if we would be able to meet here as a free people." If Stalin was such a hardcore antisemite, as the Americans/British claim in their quest to prop up neoliberalism, why would leaders of a Jewish state praise an army under his leadership? Even those on the Israeli right such as Netanyahu have stated in 2016 of supposed genocidal antisemite Stalin's Army, "We will never forget that the Red Army liberated Auschwitz." - Claíomh Solais (talk) 19:32, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Re "Stalin carried out genocide against Jews and allowed the Warsaw Uprising to be crushed", what did the Warsaw Uprising have to do with Jews? It didn't have much of anything to do with Jews. I think this is an example of "Stalin was horrible, he killed my grandfather, he was a monster, the worst person ever, we need to put him in every bad category. Put him in Category:Coprophiliacs and every other bad category". This isn't helpful.

We need to think about what the purpose of a category is for the reader. Categories are to help the reader find and organize information, not for us to express our opinions. If a person is studying (or just perusing) articles about antisemitism in Russia and/or the Soviet Union, should we direct her to this article along with the others in that category? That is the main purpose of a category. Herostratus (talk) 19:41, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Peres was referring to the fact that Israel was only created because of World War II. Stalin began the war by invading Poland as an ally of Nazi Germany. If Stalin had cared about ending the Holocaust he would have bombed the death camps. Perhaps Netanyahu should remember the Holocaust would never have happened without Stalin helping the Nazis overrun Europe in 1939-41. (2A00:23C4:6392:3C00:E911:27CD:6EA:A466 (talk) 20:13, 28 March 2017 (UTC))

He/she probably meant the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising. But anyway, the discussion goes from absurd to even more absurd, between the dude whose ancestors got murdered by Stalin and the Stalinist dude who not only defends, but even embraces murder and repression. It's either excellent trolling or ***redacted***. Anyway, it's hard to dispute that Stalin's antisemitism (or absence of) is discussed quite extensively in a wide range of reliable sources (or what others call imperialist/neoliberal/whatever sources - heck, who knows, maybe these are even Trotskyite-Zinovievite sources, the worst of the worst). PS: I wouldn't take statements from politicians on state visits too serious ;) Nice try though. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:AC92:7CA2:B658:82B6 (talk) 20:22, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

What is absurd about someone's ancestors being murdered? (2A00:23C4:6392:3C00:E911:27CD:6EA:A466 (talk) 20:45, 28 March 2017 (UTC))

Well, yes, let's look at sources — rather than just talk about them.

• I don't agree that most biographies discuss this "extensively". For example, Stephen Kotkin's Stalin: Paradoxes of Power, 1878-1928 barely mentions the issue in 900 pages, but perhaps he will discuss it in later volumes. Nor does Sarah Davies and James Harris (ed) Stalin: A New History.
• Sheila Fitzpatrick (On Stalin's Team, p 217) says: "Whether Stalin was a lifelong anti-Semite or became one in his final decline is a matter of debate. Khrushchev said he was, but other members of the team denied it. What seems clear is that until close to the end, he was careful in public to follow the Bolshevik party line, which had always been strongly condemnatory of anti-Semitism. There was never any hint of anti-Semitism in his public statements... That prohibition remained in force even in Stalin's last years, when, with de facto state-supported anti-Semitism rampant, the press continued not only to avoid overt anti-Semitism, even in coverage of the Doctor's Plot, but also from time to time to report punishment of specific officials guilty of it."
• Robert Conquest (The Great Terror, p 65) says that Stalin was guilty of "anti-Semitic demagogy" not antisemitism.
• In a blog post Australian professor Roland Boer argues that Stalin was not antisemitic.

There is clearly a range of scholarly opinions, and (as I have said) the issue is complex and nuanced. (On the other hand, it is at best ridiculous to describe Hitler's antisemitism as "nuanced"!) While the category is "Antisemitism in Russia" (or the Soviet Union), almost all the people in these categories are either overt antisemites (and known for antisemitism) or victims of antisemitism. If readers are interested in the topic, they should be directed to Stalin and antisemitism rather than here.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:54, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for providing additional sources, that show that indeed Stalin's antisemitism is a recurring topic in scholarly sources. Which dovetails with why this category is accurate, needed and in line with the policy on categories. The sources you provide with the exception of the blog also show that Stalin indeed is considered an antisemite (or worse, an antisemitic demagogue, how nuanced is that?).

But I am also worried about how you misrepresent sources. Not cool. The quotes you provide are cherry-picked and conveniently leave out important parts that contradict your party line.

For example, you quote "There was never any hint of anti-Semitism in his public statements...". Full sentence, "Sheila Fitzpatrick - 2015 - ‎History

There was never any hint of anti-Semitism in his public statements, and as Khrushchev commented, "God forbid that anyone should quote publicly from any private conversation in which he made.. anti-Semitic remarks." .

One should be able to trust other editors that they accurately present sources, but in your case, I don't think that's the case. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:D9CF:57A1:9372:34D3 (talk) 20:07, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

I left out that Khrushchev comment because it was repetitive, and I was copying it from the book. By contrast, you haven't provided a single bit of evidence for what you are arguing.--Jack Upland (talk) 23:37, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Yes, of course, that's the only reason why you left out that part. How convenient. It's then no surprise that you misrepresent the whole discussion so far, by claiming that I did not present a single bit of evidence, when in my very first edit I present an excerpt from Montefiore that makes it clear that Montefiore considers Stalin to be an antisemite. You misrepresent sources, you mispresent discussions, there is really no point in continuing this discussion if you sink to such low standards. 2A02:A451:8B2D:1:C04E:3594:1796:89BC (talk) 20:33, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

User:Claíomh Solais: It's rather bad style to remove the category, while the discussion is ongoing. Please self revert and seek consensus first. Same for removing Trotsky's text, using a rather cynical edit summary. Your promotion of a mass-murderer and his ideology is problematic to say they least. Although at least you are not even pretending to edit from a neutral point of view. Abovesky (talk) 20:37, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Axis ally

There should be more coverage of the fact that Stalin was Hitler's ally for the first two years of World War II, beginning with their joint invasion of Poland. (2A00:23C4:6392:3C00:B403:49FD:D376:4706 (talk) 20:19, 31 March 2017 (UTC))

The Soviet Union was never a member of the Axis powers, nor was it ever in an alliance with the Third Reich. Unless you want to say that the British Empire and its proxy French Dominion were part of the Axis forces with the Munich Agreement in 1938 and collaborated with the takeover of Czechoslovakia. Never seen a picture of Stalin and Hitler together, but there are pictures of Chamberlain and Hitler palling around.

What the Soviet Union did have was a brief non-aggression pact in place, either side of defending against military attacks by the Third Reich in Spain and then the Eastern Front during the Second World War proper, after all other avenue, including approaching Poland for a defense pact, were frustrated. This article totally demolishes the bourgeois narrative about Molotov-Rippentrop and also outlines that the reactionary government in Poland was not just a passive bystander in the events. Claíomh Solais (talk) 19:48, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

no RS mentioned for the claim. our job is not to protect Stalin's reputation but to tell what the reliable sources say, They say alliance that involved military invasion of Poland & splitting control of much of eastern Europe--EG Baltic states became Soviet sphere--plus shipments of vital oil. look at the titles: 1) Roger Moorhouse - The Devils' Alliance: Hitler's Pact with Stalin, 1939-1941 (2014) at https://books.google.com/books?isbn=0465054927 2) Mark L. Haas - 2007 writes: "a tacit alliance with Germany against the Western powers with the signing of the Nazi-Soviet Pact in August 1939." 3) Timothy Snyder - 2010 - writes: "during the German-Soviet alliance (1939–1941)" 4) Angelo Tasca 1951 book title: The Russo-German Alliance: August 1939-June 1941; 5) a famous French historian: François Furet - 1999 writes: "The pact signed in Moscow by Ribbentrop and Molotov on 23 August 1939 inaugurated the alliance between the USSR and Nazi Germany. It was presented as an alliance and not just a nonaggression pact." Rjensen (talk) 20:21, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

These "bourgeois" sources are quite a bit more convincing then this article by a PhD candidate on an obscure webpage. Abovesky (talk) 20:28, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Stalin invaded Poland as an ally of Nazi Germany. The Molotov-Ribbentrop Pact was NOT a non-aggression pact, it was a pact to create aggression. Britain and France did not invade Czechoslovakia in 1938. Stalin offered to formally join the Axis Powers as a full belligerent against Britain on 25 November 1940. (81.158.250.96 (talk) 23:16, 4 April 2017 (UTC))

Saying that Stalin was an ally of Nazi Germany implies that he would have been cheering the Fall of France. In fact, he greatly disturbed by it. In fact, according to this , the annexation of Moldava and the Baltic states was intended to strengthen the USSR's position against a German invasion, rather than part of an alliance with Germany. Stalin's reaction to the Fall of France isn't mentioned in the article, and perhaps it should be.--Jack Upland (talk) 18:22, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

Stalin very much wanted France to be crushed and its vast colonial empire dismantled, he was just alarmed at the speed with which Hitler was able to defeat France in 1940 (as it showed how weak the Soviet Union was). The invasions of the Baltic States and Moldova were intended to recreate the Russian Empire as a Communist superpower. Stalin wanted the alliance with Nazi Germany to be maintained until the British Empire was destroyed. (FernandoHerndkl (talk) 21:09, 7 April 2017 (UTC))

Hi Fernando. Are you a sockpuppet of banned User:HarveyCarter? Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 21:15, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

It is also borderline obscene to quote the opinion of Leon Trotsky in the article under that section on the non-aggression pact. When the Nazis were rounding up Jews to send them to the gas chambers, many of Trotsky's disciples were organising strikes in Allied countries to try and retard the war effort. Trotskyists were careful to couch this as "revolutionary defeatism" for capitalist countries and making claims that they supported defence of the Soviet Union over the Third Reich (in reality, Trotskyist so-called "support" was used by them to try and infiltrate subversive propaganda against the Soviet government into Russia). Trotskyism was de facto pro-Nazism in WWII, no Trots ever fought in combat against Hitler, so lets spare the naked opportunism of their saints' quote (if he had lived to see Barbarossa, we don't know what position he would have taken, but his anti-Stalin views were certainly fanatical). Claíomh Solais (talk) 21:58, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

I think your opinion of Trotsky is unfair and irrelevant, but it does seem questionable to quote him here. 'Economic cooperation was so considerable that in 1939 Trotsky called Stalin "Hitler's quartermaster".' Well, Trotsky called Stalin a lot of things. Why is his opinion decisive here?--Jack Upland (talk) 08:27, 8 April 2017 (UTC)

Dictator?

I think it is somewhat contentious to use this word, in the introduction. It is essentially a snarl word used as a stand in for "bad guy." Simply describing him as the General Secretary of the CPSU is the most neutral;

Public policy in the Soviet Union was directed by the Politburo of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union, not just Stalin as an individual. Stalin also offered to stand down as General Secretary several times but the party refused to let him. This doesn't sound like something a dictator driven by the lust for power would do. Also, Stalin did not amass any sort of personal fortune from his position, he did not pass on any fortune to his family looted from the public purse. Most of this "totalitarian dictator" mystification comes from the influence of Hannah Arendt's writings/opinions/gibberish. Claíomh Solais (talk) 21:50, 2 April 2017 (UTC)

Well, biography.com is pretty clear, as is BBC, history.com and Encyclopedia Britannica. Just sayin'. Martinevans123 (talk) 21:56, 2 April 2017 (UTC)

British state media is not exactly going to have an balanced view of one of their most successful enemies. There was no Soviet equivelent of Hitler's Führerprinzip or even Mussolini's Duce in the system, marks of dictatorship of that age. The revolutionary vanguard in Marxist-Leninism leads the proletariat, it is true, but the vanguard isn't just one man, it is the party itself. Stalin was just the General Secretary. Claíomh Solais (talk) 22:06, 2 April 2017 (UTC)

Well, I don't know. I read Robert Conquest's book on him, but long ago, and Conquest (and similar things I have read) sure give the impression that Stalin was calling the shots. My understanding that there was the "cult of personality". But more importantly, I don't think that the politburo or his ministers acted as much of a brake on him. His ministers feared him IIRC. To say otherwise would be historical revisionism, which is not proof that it is wrong, but we tend here to go with the generally-accepted consensus on stuff, and for us do otherwise requires quite a heavy burden of proof. Herostratus (talk) 22:20, 2 April 2017 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that biography.com isn't "British state media", and neither is Encyclopædia Britannica. Martinevans123 (talk) 06:40, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

• It is a very much fringe view that Stalin was not a totalitatian dictator, it has no place in mainstream historiography. ·maunus · snunɐɯ· 06:59, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

It says "effectively the dictator of the state.", which is very much supported by reliable sources. Abovesky (talk) 20:25, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

As its article shows, the General Secretary of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union grew out of an ancillary position, which under Stalin became all-powerful. Stalin did not have a government post until the German invasion, when he became Chairman of the Sovnarkom (Premier), the position that Lenin had held as head of government. To say that he was just party secretary the rest of the time would put him in the same league as people like Ronna Romney McDaniel or Patrick McLoughlin. No, clearly, he was a dictator, but this was not official and legal as it was in Germany and Italy.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:45, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Legally officially was the general secretary of the Communist Party. The party made the decisions and USSR, and told government officials what to do. You do not have to be a government official to be a dictator. Rjensen (talk) 00:40, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

If Stalin as party secretary had the legal right to tell the government what to do, he would have had the right to tell Lenin what to do. He didn't. He did not have the legal right to amass the power that he did. The 1936 Soviet Constitution was the first constitution to mention the party, but still did not mention the party secretary, and did not say that the party had the right to tell the government what to do. A dictator by definition is a government role. You can't be a dictator and not in government. But Stalin, up till the German invasion, did not have an official government role. That was the reality of how he operated. That is not an argument that he wasn't a dictator. It is the opposite.--Jack Upland (talk) 09:02, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Stalin was a dictator like Gaddafi, who had no government role in Libya and was not head of state. (81.158.250.96 (talk) 23:18, 4 April 2017 (UTC))

Hi IP 81. :Hi Fernando. Are you a sockpuppet of banned User:HarveyCarter? Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 21:16, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

There is nothing contentious in describing Stalin as "effectively the dictator of the state". Opposing viewpoint is basically just fringe Stalinist revisionism. If you want to see sources, then you can check archives for previous times this discussion came up, or maybe just use google and don't limit your search to blogs ran by Stalin fanboys. There are buttloads of sources describing Stalin as dictator, many biographies use "dictator" even in title.--Staberinde (talk) 15:28, 5 April 2017 (UTC)

Jack Upland talks about "legal rights" under Lenin and Stalin. Who decides those rights? answer: the dictator does. Nobody tried to take him to court for violations. Rjensen (talk) 19:53, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

A gentle reminder: "This is the talk page for discussing improvements to the Joseph Stalin article. This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject."

Some of the recent sections of this talk page are too general, with too much wool-gathering about the person in general rather than precise suggestions for specific improvements. Granting that i've been as guilty as anyone of indulging in this scrum, maybe we should tone this down a bit; it's a time sink. I would say:

• General screeds such as "The general tone of this article is too harsh/kind, he was worse/better than depicted" aren't necessarily very helpful, and perhaps a good ignoring is called for.
• This is a mature article. Although this is not a hard rule, generally we want to make incremental changes, rather than rewriting whole sections.
• If you do want to rewrite whole sections, consider creating a draft in your user space for editors to view and consider.
• As for smaller changes -- it would be good to specify the exact text you want added/deleted/changed, and references are required, and they need to be good references, from respected and neutral historians or the the equivalent. Herostratus (talk) 19:03, 5 April 2017 (UTC)

But there are a lot of issues within the article that take a controversial or polemical view of Stalin and so some of these points need to be discussed and teased out. There is an orgy of diabolisation across not just this article, but many Marxist-Leninist articles in general (typically in the form of blood libels, "human rights" or whatever). A diabolisation which is not present on articles about bourgeois figures, ideas, states, dubious actions, legacies, etc. If Misplaced Pages is to properly apply a NPOV and avoid systemic biass, then we need to make sure there is no class motivated bias in articles. Claíomh Solais (talk) 19:47, 5 April 2017 (UTC)

I quite agree. Apparently someone even had the gall to suggest that Stalin wasn't a dictator. Martinevans123 (talk) 19:53, 5 April 2017 (UTC)

I seem to discern the handiwork of the diabolical User:HarveyCarter.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:20, 5 April 2017 (UTC)

Ah, yes. "Sword of Light", meet "broken spoon of plastic". Martinevans123 (talk) 08:46, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

In response to Herostratus's comment about this being a "mature" article, it is noteworthy that swathes of this article have no references at all, so to insist that any additions should have good references seems a bit perverse. Some of the information seems a bit quirky, such as the claim that Stalin (like a cartoon Captain Hook - see below) thought Hitler was still alive or that Truman thought that Stalin was a squirt. Sure, you can get references for these things, but do they belong in an article of this length? There is an issue of undue weight. Given that the Korean War, one of the major wars of the 20th century, is dealt with in two short paragraphs, the space given to many other issues seems excessive. Ironically, the Molotov-Ribbentrop Pact discussed above actually gets two whole sections, which is out of proportion to the short treatment of WW2, which doesn't mention the Battle of Stalingrad, the Siege of Sevastopol (1941–42), the Siege of Leningrad etc. In fact, it gives very little indication of Soviet contributions to WW2, even though that's a key part of Stalin's historical significance. Yes, this article has been around a long time. It might be mature; it might be decaying. But it is very far from a genuinely good article. If people want to discuss improvements — well, that cuts both ways. Critics should suggest concrete improvements with references etc. But equally other editors should accept fair criticism in a thoughtful and constructive manner. Dismissing criticism with flippant or bureaucratic remarks achieves nothing.--Jack Upland (talk) 10:48, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

The Soviet "contributions" included starting World War II by invading Poland in September 1939 in conjunction with Nazi Germany. (86.179.100.252 (talk) 10:48, 7 April 2017 (UTC))

Definitely Poland then, and not Bury St Edmunds? Martinevans123 (talk) 11:08, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

What??? Stalin invaded Poland in 1939 in a pre-arranged joint invasion with Germany. Without the Molotov-Ribbentrop Pact World War II would never have happened. Germany did not have the oil to fight until Stalin provided it in the German-Soviet Commercial Agreement. (86.179.100.252 (talk) 11:28, 7 April 2017 (UTC))

Has a branch in Suffolk, apparently. Martinevans123 (talk) 11:32, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

Stalin didn't believe that Hitler was dead...???

Further to the discussion about this "mature" article, the section Final victory states:

Despite the Soviets' possession of Hitler's remains, Stalin refused to believe that his old nemesis was actually dead, a belief that remained with him for years after the war ended.

While this has two citations, it is only one view, and I don't believe that it is the consensus view of historians. This is not exactly what the Death of Adolf Hitler page says either. I think it would be better to leave any speculation about this in the Death of Adolf Hitler article.--Jack Upland (talk) 05:35, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Whether Stalin believed that Hitler was dead or not, I think it's not really that relevant for this article. So I would not oppose a removal of this sentence. Abovesky (talk) 21:45, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

Agree. I think Stalin lost most of his beliefs after about a year, didn't he? Martinevans123 (talk) 22:01, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

I have removed the sentence and placed it on the Death of Adolf Hitler talk page. My understanding is that Stalin used to torment Zhukov by asking him whether he'd tracked down Hitler, never letting on that the NKVD had found the body. I think it was particularly objectionable to call Hitler Stalin's "old nemesis". I now realise it was more like "old Axis comrade".--Jack Upland (talk) 08:42, 8 April 2017 (UTC)

Religion

There are currently two sections called "Religion", one under "Changes to Soviet society" and one under "Personal Life". While theoretically these could be different topics, the current content essentially covers the same ground in each. I query whether we need a section under "Personal Life", as Stalin was an atheist. Of course, it is important to note his time in the seminary, but we have already done this under "Early Life".--Jack Upland (talk) 19:27, 9 April 2017 (UTC)

Merged.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:04, 18 April 2017 (UTC)

Controversies about Stalin

I think the contents of this, if kept, should be merged into the relevant sections or other articles.

• Harriman: this should go under "Personality". It is not really a controversy anyway.
• Birth date: as it stands, this is confusing. We are given the choice of 1878 (here) or 1878 (under "Early life"). In any case, this issue is already covered in a footnote to "Early life" and in the Early life of Joseph Stalin.
• Death of one man: This is already covered in Wikiquote . There seems to be some evidence that he did say it, so there's not much of a story here.
• Nicolay Przhevalsky: This really belongs in the Early life of Joseph Stalin article (if anywhere). According to Simon Montefiore there were many rumours about who Stalin's real father was. There doesn't seem any point in singling out one of them. As I said above, Montefiore considers this one to be ridiculous on the grounds that Przhevalsky was gay, among other things.
• Okhrana: This is already covered in the "Early Life" article. If mentioned here, it should be in the "Early Life" section.
• Red Terror: I'm not sure what this is supposed to mean and what the controversy is. The source doesn't use the phrase "Red Terror", and our article Red Terror refers to the period of Lenin. In any case, this would seem to belong under "Purges and deportations".

In all, there doesn't seem any point in this section, which is just a random collection of issues, some of them quite trivial.--Jack Upland (talk) 20:31, 9 April 2017 (UTC)

Done.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:04, 18 April 2017 (UTC)

He had painters shot

Under "Appearance", it says 'he had several painters shot who did not depict him "right"'. The source is Nicolai Tolstoy's Stalin's Secret War. I can only see it through Google books in snippet view, but it appears that this comes from an anecdote by the composer Shostakovich. If that's all it is, it doesn't seem a good enough source. Historians such as Montefiore and Sheila Fitzpatrick indicate that Stalin took an indirect role in the purges, and that his motives were often hard to understand, so this seems uncharacteristic. It seems more like the action of a cartoon tyrant...--Jack Upland (talk) 23:20, 18 April 2017 (UTC)

An indirect role in the purges? Yes, poor old Stalin had to forgo the pleasure of shooting so many people himself as he was rather busy. And as the numbers rose, even signing all those death warrants himself got a bit tiresome. Must have been quite irksome for the genocidal bastard. Motives? When he ever need those? For goodness sake stop this rubbish.

Gravuritas (talk) 18:32, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

It's not rubbish. You are misunderstanding what I'm saying. I'm not saying Stalin wasn't involved; I'm saying, in my understanding, it wasn't as simple as Stalin saying, "Shoot this man, he makes me look like a squirt". As you say yourself, when did Stalin need motives? But we are saying that painters were shot for not depicting him right. Even if they were shot, how would anyone know the motive?The main point is that Shostakovich is not a reliable source. How would he know? It's just a rumour. Unless there's more substantial evidence it should be removed.--Jack Upland (talk) 19:45, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Vsevolod Meyerhold, although not a painter, a friend of both Shostakovich and Prokofiev, was certainly shot under the Great Purge. James Meek in The Guardian discusses it here. So it would be no surprise if a few painters also met a similar fate. But you're saying we can't mention this as "Uncle Joe didn't actually pull the trigger", yes? Martinevans123 (talk) 20:00, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Of course he had painters shot, and writers, actors, etc. (although "he had them shot" is a simplification in many instances; rather, he created and ran a system that would allow and even ensure such people would be shot. How many of the people shot during the Stalin regime, how many of them were individually named by Stalin... most were not. And of course, although many were shot, more were sent to deadly camps and so forth.

Anyway, the question is not how many artists were liquidated under the Stalin regime, but whether Stalin actually said more or less "Comrade X painted me poorly, shoot him". I agree that that doesn't sound like Stalin, although it could be true.

Now, if it came to be understood that Stalin was unhappy with Comrade X's work, a very bad thing might happen to Comrade X somewhere down the line. The head of his local Artists Union, sensing the general climate, might not allow him to to renew his guild membership, and so he's unable to work. His friends avoid him. And from that he might be put on a list of unreliables. And then maybe the next year there's an arrest quota to fulfill. And so he's off to a camp, and dies there from pleurisy two years later.

But that's very different from "he had several painters shot who did not depict him "right""... who? How do we know this? This is not the sort of thing that good records were necessarily kept of. Herostratus (talk) 20:15, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Herostratus for understanding my point. Of course, Stalin murdered artists. But what's the evidence for this specific claim? As far as I can see, the evidence is just a rumour repeated by Shostakovich.--Jack Upland (talk) 20:25, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

David Remnick is quoted, by Antony Bell in his 2011 Great Leadership: What It Is and What It Takes in a Complex World, here making that claim. Martinevans123 (talk) 20:45, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

There is no evidence that Shostakovich is an unreliable source or is merely repeating rumours. After all, it seems that the source provided found it wortwhile to quote Shostakovich. Maybe someone should check the library and provide the full quote from this particular book. In any case, simple solution, attribute that claim to Shostakovich. Abovesky (talk) 20:49, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

The story is probably an urban legend and if it cannot be shown who, when and where, then it should not be included in the article. Meyerhold was executed for spying for foreign powers not for his essentially reactionary contribution to the world of art. Once again, the problem with "Stalin did this, Stalin did that", is that it makes it look like the Soviet Union was just one man on a rampage and the entire project of Marxist-Leninism was just whatever Stalin personally decided it to be on any given day, all by himself. Political violence against what was deemed to be class enemies was always part of Bolshevism in general, including under Lenin. Stalin didn't invent it. I leave you with a quote from, of all people, Trotsky who explains their perspective;

"As for us, we were never concerned with the Kantian-priestly and vegetarian-Quaker prattle about the 'sacredness of human life.' We were revolutionaries in opposition, and have remained revolutionaries in power. To make the individual sacred we must destroy the social order which crucifies him. And this problem can only be solved by blood and iron." Claíomh Solais (talk) 22:01, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Did you say leave? But thanks so much, I must remember to use "vegetarian-Quaker prattle" in a Talk page discussion now and again. Martinevans123 (talk) 22:10, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Your claim of this probably being an urban legend is most likely as well supported by evidence, as the claim that Meyerhold was executed for spying for foreign (as in, tortured, coerced into confessing, then murdered - as thousands of others). Abovesky (talk) 22:27, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Of course we know that Meyerhold was not a spy--so said the Soviet Supreme Court in 1955--see Robert Leach (2004). Makers of Modern Theatre: An Introduction. Psychology Press. p. 93. Rjensen (talk) 22:37, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

The wholesale "rehabilitations" under the revisionist regime of Khrushchev were politically motivated propaganda to oil the wheels of Khrushchev's Bonapartist ambitions (a man who in Stalin's day was regarded as little more than a court jester). So this should be taken with a huge grain of salt, as with the entire contents of the so-called secret speech. Nowhere was it actually demonstrated s that these people were innocent of the crimes for which they were convinced. Claíomh Solais (talk) 22:44, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Fundamentally, it is about what reliable sources say, as I attempted to say in my initial post. I will attempt to find Tolstoy's book. I can't access the book mentioned by Mr Evans. What does it say? I don't think a simple anecdote by Shostakovich is very reliable. If there was a document in the archives, or if Beria had told the story of Stalin ringing him up and saying, "Shoot this vegan pig, he made my nose look big!" Or if there was a consensus among historians. Quoting an anecdote doesn't amount to endorsement. For example, Khrushchev in his memoirs says that Roosevelt was an Irish immigrant. That says a lot about Khrushchev, but it certainly isn't true. Equally, some people say that Stalin forgot to end Daylight Saving Time one year and it just continued indefinitely because no one was brave enough to tell him. Great anecdote, but not true.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:45, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Ah right, it was just the nose, then? Remnick makes the claim in his book Lenin's Tomb: The Last Days of the Soviet Empire. I expect you'll be able to find a copy if you look for it. Martinevans123 (talk) 22:50, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

let's go over the reliable sources that user:Claíomh Solais is using about Khrushchev. He has neglected to mention them or to tell us why he distrusts the Soviet Supreme Court. Rjensen (talk) 22:54, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

No. I created this section to query a specific point, separate from other discussions. Instead, I am greeted with avalanche after avalanche of largely irrelevant verbiage. Can we get back to improving the article?--Jack Upland (talk) 11:27, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

The relevant quote from Remnick is given in the link provided by Martin above (which I have now been able to access). Thanks for that. "Stalin had his other painters shot and their paintings burned." However, the article here includes a portrait by Isaak Brodsky who apparently wasn't shot. The claim is vague and anecdotal. And both Nikolai Tolstoy and David Remnick are very polemical and populist writers.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:57, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

I don't see "very polemical and populist" at David Remnick. Maybe you need to add something over there? Martinevans123 (talk) 23:15, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

We do not need that kind of editorialising there or here. Intelligent readers can make up their own minds. Remnick is a journalist, not an academic historian, and you can see his polemical approach in this interview. The book's article describes it as an example of New Journalism, which (according to Misplaced Pages) entails having "a subjective perspective, a literary style reminiscent of long-form non-fiction and emphasizing 'truth' over 'facts'". It's the lack of factuality that concerns me. I would like to know who his source is and who was actually shot.--Jack Upland (talk) 23:59, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

Yes, I'd like to know those things too. You're saying that you don't like the Tolstoy source, as it comes from "an unreliable source" Shostakovich. But when a second source is presented, you don't like that one either, because the author, who is also notable, has a style that concerns you. We could attribute to Remnick and let the reader decide? We could even provide both attributions. If you think Remnick is generally thought of as untrustworthy, however, you really should add a section to his article on "Criticism", or "Narrative style", or whatever, backed up with reliable sources. That might help the reader to decide about Stalin? Martinevans123 (talk) 08:18, 21 April 2017 (UTC)

I have now tracked down the books. David Remnick (Lenin's Tomb, p 128) doesn't provide footnotes, but he has very similar information and phrasing to Nikolai Tolstoy, so it seems that there is ultimately a common source. Tolstoy (Stalin's Secret War, pp 19-20) quotes Shostakovich's memoirs, Testimony. Our article on the Testimony states that, "The authenticity of the book is still very much disputed". In any case, the book purports to be a collection of oral reminiscences, transcribed and edited by Solomon Volkov. In the book, Shostakovich begins a firsthand anecdote about meeting Stalin, and comments, "He didn't look anything like his numerous portraits" (p 254). Digressing, he tells an "Oriental parable" about a khan who executed portrait painters who didn't please him and adds "this khan sounds just like Stalin" (p 255). And then:

Stalin had several painters shot. They were called to the Kremlin to capture the leader and teacher for eternity, and apparently they didn't please him. Stalin wanted to be tall, with powerful hands, and he wanted the hands to be the same. Nalbandian fooled them all. In his portrait Stalin is walking straight at the viewer, his hands folded over his stomach. The view is from below, an angle that would make a Lilliputian look like a giant.

Shostakovich then goes on to mock the "luxurious dacha" that Nalbandian built with the money he got (p 256). (Apparently he's talking about this picture.) There is no suggestion that Shostakovich had firsthand knowledge about the painters being shot, and he doesn't name them. So the ultimate source is an secondhand anecdote recorded decades after the event in memoirs whose authenticity is disputed. And on the key part of the claim we use, the source says, "apparently they didn't please him", so even if we take this anecdote as reliable, it's only speculative. I think this claim fails verification. As it's only an aside in the "Appearance" section, it would be better to leave it out.--Jack Upland (talk) 06:43, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

That all seems very thorough and perfectly reasonable. Your claim that Remnick has the same source as Tolstoy is WP:OR supposition, of course, but it does look likely. So unless more solid sources can be found, I would not object to that being taken out. It might be useful, however, to replace it with a little more detail about how artists managed to please him - perhaps the bit about Nalbandian. Or don't you believe anything that Shostakovich says? Martinevans123 (talk) 08:55, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

Given Jack Upland's history of misrepresenting sources and distorting quotes, I would prefer if someone more reliable checks these sources and provides full quotes. The fact that Remnick, a Pulitzer-prize winning author includes this in his book, long after the controversy about the authencity of Shostakovich's memoirs came to light, suggests that we can indeed accept as fact that Stalin had painters shot. Abovesky (talk) 09:09, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

Alternatively I'd have no objection to having "Shostakovich claimed that Stalin had several painters shot." And I'd be surprised if Jack Upland would not want this too, as it would provide a correction to the unsourced statement in Remnick's book (not that it's Misplaced Pages's job to do this, of course). Or even "David Remnick claims that Stalin had several painters shot." Martinevans123 (talk) 09:31, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

All we can say about Shostakovich is he apparently said that Stalin had painters shot apparently because he didn't like the portraits. So it would be better to go with Remnick, because you can suppose that he has checked the story, even though he hasn't provided a footnote. In response to Martin's earlier question, yes, I think Shostakovich/Volkov are right about the composition of the Nalbandian portrait: it is both realistic and flattering, which is the point of the folktale about the khan. This seems to be a case of an anecdote being heavily embroidered. (And, if it matters, I think Shostakovich was a hero for what he did in Leningrad, but that doesn't make his memoirs infallible.) It's hard to prove a negative, but Jan Plamper in The Stalin Cult discusses the approving or disapproving of several Stalin portraits, but the story about painters being shot is conspicuous by its absence. In fact, several artists mentioned lived on for decades afterwards. Simon Montefiore has extensively researched Stalin's "court" and doesn't refer to this either, mentioning Alexander Gerasimov as a "court painter" but not Nalbandian. According to Montefiore, Stalin put on a show (at least) of being uncomfortable with the adulation (Court of the Red Tsar, pp 169-171, 504-506). He even defended a student who had hit his portrait with a paper plane as a good marksman (p 170). Stalin murdered a lot of people, but he didn't murder painters for getting his picture wrong. We should concentrate on facts that are well-documented, not anecdotes that are weakly sourced, vague, and misleading.--Jack Upland (talk) 21:32, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Thanks. I'll let Martin know. Martinevans123 (talk) 21:06, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

And please pass it on to Martine Vansize as well, just in case.--Jack Upland (talk) 21:43, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Will do. Martinevans123 (talk) 21:52, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Rise to power - no references

"In December 1934, the popular Communist Party boss in Leningrad, Sergei Kirov, was murdered. Stalin blamed Kirov's murder on a vast conspiracy of saboteurs and Trotskyites. He launched a massive purge against these internal enemies, putting them on rigged show trials and then having them executed or imprisoned in Siberian Gulags. "

This paragraph, with some quite startling claims has absolutely no references. It makes it sound like Stalin personally decided one day to kill everybody with his bare hands, just for fun. There is no real evidence that the Moscow trials were "rigged" or that the saboteurs were not actually working to overthrow the Soviet leadership. A lot of evidence exists to the contrary. In the United States, the death penalty for certain offenses exists; we do not attribute these to specific American presidents, so why are we attributing the capital punishment carried out on terrorists to Stalin personally? Prison labour is also common in many countries, including the US to this day (Federal Prison Industries and California Prison Industry Authority) so why are we treating criminals sent to them as "victims" (that word is even used!). Claíomh Solais (talk) 03:07, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

What you call "startling claims" is the scholarly consensus. Certainly citations should be added to this and other sections, but adding a fact tag is utterly inappropriate. WHat is startling are your absurd and offensive claims about the victims having been terrorists and criminals. Abovesky (talk) 17:54, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

WP policy is that we must assume good faith. On that basis, the OP's scepticism can only be explained by naivete and ignorance on a truly colossal scale. Go and read some more about the period and about Stalin's mass-murdering proclivities, then come back and use this talk page to apologise to any representatives of his victims, O ignoramus.

Gravuritas (talk) 18:11, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

The shortage of references in this article generally is very bad for such a prominent topic.--Jack Upland (talk) 19:48, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

WP policy is not that everything needs to referenced, it is that references are available if something is challenged. Some of the challenges recently on this talk page have been quite ludicrous, and in the light of Stalin's record, hugely offensive. Other editors are responding professionally, but I find it inappropriate to reply politely to Stalin admirers.

Gravuritas (talk) 06:11, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

If you compare this with comparable articles — Adolf Hitler, Winston Churchill, Franklin Roosevelt — it has far less references. The section on the Russian Revolution has no references at all! One sentence has been tagged "citation needed" since 2009. I think it's fair to say that references should be improved overall.--Jack Upland (talk) 11:40, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

If there are specific points which can genuinely be held in doubt, then by all means flag them and/or discuss them. But let's not bother too much with demands for references that the earth is not flat.

Gravuritas (talk) 14:10, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

Gravuritas -- the problem is, since 1917, the British Empire has upheld an anti-communist narrative out of political self-interest. Almost all of the claims that Lenin, Stalin and Mao are this grand "trinity of evil" who swanned around killing random people just for fun, is a direct result of Anglo-Saxon propaganda and fear porn, or so-called "anti-Stalinist left" figures tacitly sponsored by the British and Americans. So we get a situation where, for example, the Chinese Misplaced Pages has a completely different, 180 degrees opposite, presentation of who Chairman Mao was to the English Misplaced Pages. I find it offensive that you are suggesting we just trust that the Anglos are telling the truth and paint whoever they don't like from other countries as sociopathic monsters, without even bothering to provide citations for such claims. Claíomh Solais (talk) 11:45, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

Homegrown psychiatric diagnosis aside, I think Stalin was directly responsible for the deaths of hundreds of thousands of people. I think that's an historical fact. If I came to this article and was told this was a myth, resulting from an "anti-communist narrative out of political self-interest", I'd probably think it was a quaint (but fundamentally very offensive) fairy tale. Martinevans123 (talk) 12:25, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

@CS. Let's stick with Uncle Joe. It doesn't matter whether he killed people 'for fun' or to while away those long boring afternoons, the fact is that he did so on an (almost) unprecedented scale. Which makes you, as a denier of that fact, scum. 'Anglo-Saxon propaganda'? Ask the Ukrainians, the Poles, the Tatars, the Georgians.....

Gravuritas (talk) 14:10, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

it is not true that "since 1917, the British Empire has upheld an anti-communist narrative" No RS is provided for the claim and it overlooks the basic history as told in Russia–United Kingdom relations on March 16, 1921, the Anglo-Soviet Trade Agreement was concluded between the two countries....Britain was the first country to accept Lenin's offer of a trade agreement. It ended the British blockade, and Russian courts were open to British ships. Both sides agreed to refrain from hostile propaganda. It amounted to de facto diplomatic recognition and opened a period of extensive trade. Great Britain recognised the ... USSR on February 1, 1924. And of course they were allies 1941-45. In any case the "British Empire" was almost gone by 1960 so it did not sustain any narrative whatsoever. Rjensen (talk) 07:08, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

"O ignoramus", "Which makes you, as a denier of that fact, scum" - I strongly suggest that you apologise to Claíomh Solais for those remarks, Gravuritas. Whatever an editor's political beliefs, you are not entitled to break basic policies such as WP:Civility. Midnightblueowl (talk) 19:20, 22 April 2017 (UTC)

The problem is not CS's beliefs, whatever they may be, it's CS's statements. Flat dismissal of Stalin's mass-murdering record is so beyond the pale that civility is inappropriate, so an apology from me would also be inappropriate. Maybe an apology from you to Stalin's millions of victims would be a good idea, for defending the scum who deny their existence.

Gravuritas (talk) 08:15, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

Oh, Gravuritas. Civility is never inappropriate at Misplaced Pages - that's why it is one of the WP:Five pillars. Even if you don't feel like you can apologise to CS, please just hold your horses next time you want to insult someone. It is never necessary to call someone an "ignoramus" or "scum" on a Misplaced Pages talk page, regardless of how bizarre or offensive you may find their views. WP:Civility applies to everyone. You can't just break it whenever you feel like it. Midnightblueowl (talk) 18:23, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

Claíomh Solais - what do you mean by Anglos?

The Polish propaganda is much more radical then the Anglo-Saxon one, compare e.g. the Katyn lies by Western allies. Lithuania, Latvia and Estonia have similar opinions.Xx236 (talk) 11:47, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

Felix Dzerzhinsky, Vyacheslav Menzhinsky, Konstantin Rokossovsky would suggest that not all Poles were on the side of the reactionaries. Same with the Latvian Riflemen without whom the Bolshevik Revolution might not have been won. "Polish" propaganda was really only effective much later on, with Solidarity, Karol Wojtyla and the Vatican's Counter-Revolution (which by that point was a mere proxy of the Anglo-American Empire anyway). These issues are far too complex and multifaceted to say that all of the Balts and Poles were anti-Stalin and anti-Bolshevik, let alone "victims" of his. Claíomh Solais (talk) 15:29, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

I think WP:NOTAFORUM reminder is appropriate here. Also starting comment of this section suggests that editor either lacks general knowledge to effectively edit this article, or holds extremely fringe views that would be impossible to fit with wikipedia policies on reliable sources. Btw, Moscow trials are also covered in article's purges and deportations section, with sources.--Staberinde (talk) 20:27, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

I'm sorry I don't understand the connection between Claíomh Solais comments and biography of Joseph Stalin.

Generally Communists were atheistic internationalists. Some Christian nationalists survived Communist repressions and accepted some aspects of Communist politics, eg. Bolesław Piasecki in Poland, but they weren't notable for general history of Communism. Xx236 (talk) 07:42, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

the period of Stalin

Google doesn't support such name.Xx236 (talk) 11:35, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

A user introduced the phrase. It's OR, should be reverted.Xx236 (talk) 07:13, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

and other incidents

We have a pro-Soviet incident here.Xx236 (talk) 11:38, 25 April 2017 (UTC

BTW surely squabbles should be changed. Its not two children playing, it's two enormously powerful members of the communist party.

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Dzhugashvili and other spellings

Please choose one.Xx236 (talk) 12:14, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

Don't we need both English and Russian spellings, as appropriate? Martinevans123 (talk) 12:31, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

Besarion Jughashvili had a son Dzhugashvili?Xx236 (talk) 07:00, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Cooperation with Nazi Germany

The description in the lead is biased. Please read The Devils' Alliance: Hitler's Pact with Stalin, 1939-1941 by Moorhouse. Xx236 (talk) 12:17, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

The lead should summarize the article, regardless of what you'd like anyone to read. Martinevans123 (talk) 12:32, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

I find your comment impolite.

after failed attempts to conclude anti-Hitler pacts with other major European powers THe SU had the biggest army of the world in 1939 and the strongest arm industry. Cooperation with Stalin would have allowed him to annect continental Europe in 1939.

The West tried to cooperate with Stalin since 1941 and Stalin destroyed the cooperation starving hundreds of thousands of Soviet people after the war. Do you care about Soviet people or rather about Chairman Stalin?Xx236 (talk) 12:35, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

I find your instruction impolite. Martinevans123 (talk) 12:46, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

I'm sorry I don't understand you. Is Please read impolite?

The phrase with Chairman Stalin uses language of User:Claíomh Solais, it wasn't addressed to you. I'm sorry if you believed it was.Xx236 (talk) 08:06, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

This episode lasted two years and we have two sections devoted to it. I think that's enough.--Jack Upland (talk) 19:56, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

I have written The description in the lead is biased. Now you answer we have two sections.

The SU wanted in August 1939 to visit Poland. No Polish government would have accepted the Red Army (who had murdered, robbed and raped in Poland in 1920) nor the NKVD who murdered 111 000 of ethnic Poles, which was probably the biggest ethnic crime in Europe before 1941. So Stalin prefferred the business with Hitler.

Xx236 (talk) 08:06, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

OK, you're talking about the lead, not the body of the article, but you apparently want to add more detail to the lead, which arguably has too much information about this episode, given that it was only an interlude of two years. The article doesn't mention Stalin's role in the Spanish Civil War and his leadership of the antifascist movement internationally. This prelude made the signing of the pact a shock to the Left round the world... But the question is how much information do we want here? In any case, you don't seem to be disagreeing with the current text, but rather adding your own commentary on it. The article can't discuss hypothetical scenarios (such as an anti-Hitler pact in 1939). It's hard enough managing events that did happen, without having to include events that didn't happen!--Jack Upland (talk) 23:24, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

I don't like the phrase In August 1939, after failed attempts to conclude anti-Hitler pacts with Britain and France in the lead. It seems we have very similar opinions The article can't discuss hypothetical scenarios (such as an anti-Hitler pact in 1939)., especially the lead shouldn't. The pacts are being used by Soviet/Russian propaganda to rationalize the Soviet-Nazi cooperation.Xx236 (talk) 07:05, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

I agree with you. To explain, I just changed to "...Britain and France.." from "major European powers" as this seemed slightly less bad. I suggest "after....France" is deleted.

Gravuritas (talk) 08:56, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Forced settlements

This edit reinserts an attribution to Rudolph Rummel, for the claim that "up to 43% of the resettled population died of diseases and malnutrition." Maybe he did make that claim, maybe others did too. But the source currently given in support of this statement has no author. So Rummel's name is unsupported. In fact the nature and origin of that source is somewhat obscure. I think the source should be improved and/or Rummel's name removed. Martinevans123 (talk) 18:22, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

It can be checked through the URL of source, http://www.hawaii.edu/powerkills/ is Rummel's website maintained by University of Hawaii.--Staberinde (talk) 15:17, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

I searched there and failed to find it. Do you have a direct link to something? Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 18:05, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

Lethal Politics: Soviet Genocide and Mass Murder Since 1917 Appendix 1.2 Table 1.B. Soviet Transit, Camp, and Deportation Death Rates --Staberinde (talk) 18:32, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

Many thanks. That source has the phrase ""up to 43%" in it somewhere? I searched, but again could not find. Martinevans123 (talk) 20:43, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

As far as I know Rummels methodology was rather naive - Arithmetic mean of any trash available. Rummel lacked any mathematical knowlledge. He has died, so we aren't able to discuss it with him.Xx236 (talk) 07:15, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Your edit reinserts an attribution to Rudolph Rummel, for the claim that "up to 43% of the resettled population died of diseases and malnutrition." Could you explain that to us please? Martinevans123 (talk) 07:41, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

I'm sorry, the table doesn't contain 43%. The phrase is quoted in Counseling Around the World: An International Handbook

Thomas H. Hohenshil, Norman E. Amundson, Spencer G. Niles John Wiley & Sons, 12 sty 2015 - 468 but the book probbaly quotes Misplaced Pages.Xx236 (talk) 08:14, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

I'm getting a bit confused now. You are now giving the correct details of a source to support "43%"? How do we now if that book quotes Misplaced Pages or not? And that sounds an odd title in which to find such a figure. Where did that 43% originally come from? What has all this to do with Rummel? Is the existing source in the article still of any use? Martinevans123 (talk) 08:57, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

The book was probably published, when the Wiki page already existed (I haven't verified it).

I have misunderstood, that the table contains the 43% number, but it didn't.

Could you please sign your last post, so that we can keep a track of who has said what? Thanks. And could you then please explain why you added, and then re-added, the name of Rudolph Rummel to that passage in the article? Martinevans123 (talk) 09:25, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

My guess is that 43% was taken from "Average deported dead" line where estimates low, mid and high(43.17%) are. I guess that value of those numbers may be questionable as they seem as rough estimates based on summarizing of various rough estimates.--Staberinde (talk) 15:29, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Yes, you could well be right. But is the authorship and provenance of that source clear to you? Perhaps you have some idea about the relevance of Rummel, who's name persists in that sentence? Martinevans123 (talk) 15:55, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Legacy outside the Soviet Union

It might be worth adding to the article Stalin's influence outside of the Soviet Union. For example, one of the preeminent figures of the second half of the 20th century, Che Guevara was completely onside with Stalin and rejected the Khrushchevite line on supposed "crimes." When Nelson Mandela was arrested, a significant body of Marxist literature, including works authored by Stalin were taken from his home and in interviews he openly admitted to being influence by such writings. Claíomh Solais (talk) 01:57, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

The "Death and legacy" doesn't have much about his legacy and wastes space with various opinion polls. The article does not mention the Communist Party of China's continuing support for Stalin etc.--Jack Upland (talk) 04:33, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

At the same time, we need to be cautious not to allow any "Legacy" section to just become a mass of trivia. Obviously, someone like Stalin had a colossal impact on the world at large, influencing all manner of things and people, whether communist or anti-communist. We cannot simply start listing all of these things. Maybe restrict ourselves to mentioning things that the main Stalin biographers actually bring up as being particularly relevant? Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:42, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

I think we just need to exercise editorial judgement. An artificial restriction wouldn't help. If you want to talk about trivia, the two "Views on Stalin" sections are basically trivial, and could be reduced to a few sentences. On the other hand, the history of China and Maoism are clearly not trivial, but they are barely mentioned. But, no, we can't have a list of famous people who have read a book by Stalin etc. That would be a very long list.--Jack Upland (talk) 19:33, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

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'Critics' in the lede

@Midnightblueowl. Your words- 'critics see him as...' are trying to strike an artificial balance between different views of Stalin. However, those who view him as a tyrant and a mass-murderer are plainly right: you can't describe them as his 'critics' as this implies there are defenders who deny it. There are clearly a relatively small number of people who value his achievements and wish to offset those against his crimes, and that view should have appropriate weight in the article. But there is no legitimate view that he wasn't a tyrant: deniers of his murders have no place in the article (and preferably would have no place in WP talk pages). Hence those who view him as a tyrant are not his 'critics'- they are simply all rational people. My use of 'Most' was not a weasel word- it was correct- but on second thoughts it was too weak so I have now changed the wording to simply be that he was a tyrant etc. Gravuritas (talk) 04:39, 29 April 2017 (UTC)

I can appreciate the argument that "critics" may not necessarily be the best word. "Most" is, however, clearly a WP:Weasel word (or at least, I regularly see it tagged as a weasel word on Wiki articles). I've gone with "More widely, he has been criticised as..." which hopefully does the trick. It would be good to see what other editors had to say on this issue, too. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:44, 29 April 2017 (UTC)

"Most" may be weasel elsewhere, but in this usage it has the same meaning as "More widely". Both of them are true, but suffer from being too weak. Let's do it this way- is there any WP:RS which claims he was NOT a tyrant? If not, then the simple bald statement is better.

Gravuritas (talk) 12:09, 29 April 2017 (UTC)

I don't think that they are necessarily too weak, at least from a Misplaced Pages standpoint. I don't know if you are actively suggesting that we describe Stalin as a "tyrant" in the lede, but I think that a term like that is frankly far too emotive for the purposes of Misplaced Pages. I certainly appreciate your point that we need to be cautious not to fall into some sort of utter subjectivity where denialist views are given equal weight to those fully substantiated by historical research. At the same time we cannot use rhetoric that deliberately demonises Stalin; that would be un-encyclopedic. We can state the pertinent facts without putting any particular slant on them, whether pro- or anti-Stalin. It's not always easy, but it's a balance that we have to get right. Midnightblueowl (talk) 12:26, 29 April 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, old sport, that response of yours is way off the mark. Stalin was a tyrant. Look up the definition of the word. Was he described as such by WP:RS? Yes. Are there any dissenting RS voices that claim he wasn't a tyrant? No. And as for your insinuations of "deliberately demonising", "slant"- rubbish. too emotive? If an epithet fits the facts by WP:RS standards, why be mealy- mouthed? Finally, your preferred term clearly is inadequate- "more widely" would fit a situation in which say 66% of scholars say yes and 33% say no. That's not remotely the case here, so 'more widely' is too weak.

Gravuritas (talk) 13:21, 29 April 2017 (UTC)

If I understand correctly, both User:FreeKnowledgeCreator and User:SpikeballUnion have now also backed the inclusion of "Critics say..." or something to that effect. Gravuritas, if you want to stand your ground, then maybe we need an RfC on this issue?

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change ((Georgia|Georgian)) to ((History of Georgia (country)|Georgian)) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:541:4305:c70:e99d:bade:9a88:a4d9 (talk) 13:38, 30 April 2017‎ (UTC)

Partly done: Please be more specific about exactly where in the article you think a change is needed. I did find one instance of a link to the Georgia disambiguation page, in the "Childhood" section, which I have corrected to link to Georgia (country). If you believe that History of Georgia (country) would be a better link, please explain why, as the main country article seems appropriate to me. Thanks. Murph9000 (talk) 14:47, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Lead has been bastardised since 28 April 2017

Since revision 777616680 (the link works) on 28 April 2017, the lead has been completely changed, mostly by the editor Midnightblueowl. Of course, the intentions of the editor are good, however there has been a corruption of the lead since this time. The lead on/before 28 April 2017 was relatively neutral in its point of view and reflected the article well. It didn't include original presuppositions; "He was a totalitarian dictator", " policies ... contributed to the 1932-33 famine" and others, which, in the body of the article, are accurately represented as subjects of debate instead. Unimportant details such as "impoverished mother" have been added in, right at the top of the lead, instead of being left out for the Early life section (additionally in the "impoverished mother" sentence, his country of birth Georgia has been removed; only Gori and the Russian Empire have replaced it; this is not a representation of relevant information). There are other issues which I could go on regarding this, however I wish to hear the view of the editor(s) involved to see why they edited the lead in this manner. Additionally, some of my wording edits for neutral-point-of-view ("government" instead of "regime", "personality cults were established" rather than "established personality cults") to the original revisions have been eliminated. Indeed as a whole, the original lead was much more neutral in wording than this new revision. SpikeballUnion (talk) 19:22, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for your message, SpikeballUnion. I am certainly more than happy to see further changes made to the lede, but I really do not think that we should just return to the previous lede, which was far too lengthy, contained excessive detail on certain issues (particularly WW2), and omitted other pertinent facts (such as his family background, the Tiflis robbery, etc). My reformatting of the lede was designed to mirror the lede sections of FA-rated political biographies like Vladimir Lenin and Nelson Mandela, so I do think that the present structure is something worth keeping, even if it is tweaked in various places. Midnightblueowl (talk) 19:32, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for the response. What do you have to say specifically regarding the few specific issues I mentioned? Why do you think that his mother being impoverished and the omission of his country of birth is a more important summary of information than the inclusion of his country of birth? Additionally, why have you made those statements, the topics of which are shown as being under considerable debate in the body of the article? Also, what kind of a statement is " established personality cults around both Lenin and himself."? It gives the impression that Joseph Stalin grinned, drifted his hand through the air and suddenly parading people and posters of himself and Lenin appeared all over the Soviet Union. Exaggerations aside, you get my point. The details about his personality cult is already made clear in the body of the article - the statement you have written in the lead doesn't match what is written in the article. Finally, explain please how the original lead as a whole was not as good as the version you've written - i.e., explain why you can't simply remove the lengthy parts you don't see fit and leave the remainder as it is. SpikeballUnion (talk) 19:55, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

"He was a totalitarian dictator" is not my wording (or at least, not in its present context). I went with "Critics regard him as a totalitarian dictator" (again, mirroring the Lenin article) but Gravuritas has changed that to the present wording (there's a section about this above which you are more than welcome to contribute to). As for the " established personality cults around both Lenin and himself", that was my attempt to summarise the construction of the personality cult that occurred in the USSR but if you feel that it poorly reflects the situation then we can certainly change it; I nevertheless do think it pertinent to note in the lede that there was such a personality cult during the Stalinist period. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:02, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Is there anything that you feel was present in the previous version but which has been lost in the new one and which you think really is vital for inclusion in the lede? Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:03, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

By the way, editing an article to mirror the content of another article is not an advised procedure (I learnt that when trying to edit RT's lead based on other publicly owned TV networks). Sure, the other articles may be FA-rated, however only meeting the criteria to become a Featured article is what is required, not observing and copying the structure of any part of a Featured article per se. The people you mentioned are not the same, and their life and political careers cannot be paralleled. I don't see how the original revision of the lead was not worthy of simply being tweaked into something of Featured rating, i.e., resizing its content, as you wished, rather than having its entire wording changed. Out of the FA people you mentioned, Stalin has had the longest time period and largest part of his career directly involved in a major war. His decisions were crucial in determining how the 6-year World War played out, within his 20-year tenure. I think that the content in the lead regarding his role in the war was fine, but not only that, it was more neutral than the current version. Less did it demonise Stalin and portray him as an aggressor, and more did it simply describe the role he played in World War II. SpikeballUnion (talk) 20:16, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

In my many years experience of getting political biographies (and other biographies) to GA and FA level, I have found it very advisable to ensure that there is a level of standardisation among related topics (Lenin and Stalin of course being closely related). Moreover, I do not believe that the previous lede could just be "tweaked into something of Featured rating" - it had too many problems. That being said of course, the entire article is a very long way from being even GA-quality, let alone FA-quality. Anyway, let's wait and see what other editors have to say, and if you feel that there are any ways in which the present lede can be tweaked then it would be good to hear them. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:26, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

In reply to your 2nd post: yes indeed. Absolutely should the personality cult of Stalin be mentioned in the lead, however, in accordance with the info in the body, to claim, or should I say word, that he singlehandedly physically achieved it would be inaccurate, as that is impossible; it required the public support of the participating populace. Indeed, in the body it is stated that he felt humbled by the cult (a similar piece of information is stated in the Lenin article). Secondly, thank you for informing me of Gravuritas's edit to your revision. I made care to state that the overall current version of the lead was possibly the product of multiple editors. Regarding the statements and the edits, I would just say refer back to the version of 28 April 2017 linked above, as I think it serves as a good reference for the neutral wording I'm trying to get across. The thing I agree should be removed is the "capitalism" speech. The war summary however describes crucial events like the capture of Berlin, the division of Europe, the Battle of Stalingrad, etc. It's the wording which I'm most concerned about. SpikeballUnion (talk) 20:30, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

By the way, I very much understand your preference for standardisation. I had the same frustrations on my Balgo-Zaoce (link works) article. However, I do believe that tiny villages in Burkina Faso within the same Department, Province and Region are much more similar than Vladimir Lenin and Joseph Stalin, individuals with their own courses of life and different events notable for inclusion in their summaries. SpikeballUnion (talk) 20:38, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

With regard to the mention of personality cults, I've tweaked the prose to "while a cult of personality developed around him." I think that that works better; would you agree? Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:41, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

I've also added mention of the Battle of Berlin at the appropriate juncture of the lede. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:46, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

In reply to the second message above: yes, I agree that that works better. It is the same as is worded in the body of the article. The stain I can see in the lead now however is the "He was a totalitarian dictator", which I think you would agree would be appropriate for me to revert rather than you. Additionally, I wish to challenge the editor's inclusion of the phrase "human rights" in the lead, as during Stalin's time (particularly the time of most of the said "abuses" - pre-1939), there wasn't much of a concept of human rights, nor did the UN even exist to define them. I think that the original summary of deaths caused by his government was very much more appropriate than the current one overall. SpikeballUnion (talk) 20:48, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Additionally, if you don't mind, I wish to embark on an edit which would include most of my suggestions and concerns but within the framework of the lead you've written. I can revert it if you don't agree and don't wish to accrue reverts yourself. How does that sound? SpikeballUnion (talk) 20:55, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Be my guest. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:58, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

I published the edit. I've added some things from the original lead I felt were missing but kept it a reasonable length, and I adapted the wording in certain places for neutral point of view. I kept many of your added facts in the edit. SpikeballUnion (talk) 22:25, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

I shall point out that I took the out "priest" part from the lead, because it is mentioned in the body that he became an atheist within one year, and, out of all of his Early life section, the priest occupation only takes up a single phrase. I also took out the "impoverished mother" part for reasons aforementioned. SpikeballUnion (talk) 22:30, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

"During the 1940s, the Soviets annexed the Baltic states, installed Marxist-Leninist governments throughout the Eastern Bloc, and backed Marxist-Leninist takeovers in China, North Korea, and North Vietnam" is both far more honest and more to-the-point than "In the 1940s, in addition to the Soviet occupation the Baltic states, communist governments loyal to the Soviet Union gained power in most countries freed from German occupation by the Red Army, which later constituted the Eastern Bloc. Stalin also had close relations with Mao Zedong in China and Kim Il-sung in North Korea." In a sane world, we should restore the former language, but I know there are a surprisingly large number of commie editors out there who still prefer to think of these events as "People's Revolutions" that just happened to coincide with Soviet influence/occupation.TheTimesAreAChanging (talk) 22:32, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

I find this sentence in the lead problematic: "Ideologically a Marxist-Leninist and Russian nationalist, his policies and theories became known as Stalinism." The reference to Russian nationalism appears to reflect Robert Service's view, but Simon Montefiore (for one) has a different view. As discussed previously, the argument that he was Russian nationalist relies on a comparison with Lenin, who was an extreme internationalist. Stalin was not a Russian nationalist by the standards of the Russian Empire in which he was born. In addition, this sentence implies that Russian nationalism is inherent to Stalinism. However, there have been Stalinists all round the world (e.g., in China) who were not Russian nationalists. Overall, this sentence is misleading.--Jack Upland (talk) 22:35, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

As I say, it is best to describe what occurred rather than place individual entities as the sole participants involved, at least when it better summarises the article rather than says something new. Yes, while the Soviets did obviously have a major role in laying the foundation for these governments to be set up, they could not have been sustained without at least some support from the populace initially. There was not a Red Army soldier left in the country for every citizen of that country watching them closely. It was rather the legacy of Red Army occupation which fostered the sentiments needed to establish and sustain these communist governments. SpikeballUnion (talk) 22:42, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

I agree Jack. I placed that addition among the concerns I had with the new version of the lead. I don't even think it's appropriate to say ideologically he was a Marxist-Leninist, because he essentially invented the term to describe any of his policies during his tenure in the Soviet Union. I think the original lead is more appropriate with its lack of a statement regarding an ideology of Stalin, except for Stalinism (as it is described in the current version). SpikeballUnion (talk) 22:46, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Hmm. I feel that this new version restores too much of the older, problematic version. Again, it's just too long and includes trivia (do we really need to list all seven members of the first Politburo in the lede?). I've reverted, but let's continue the back-and-forth. We could perhaps go through each line in question and debate how it could be improved? Midnightblueowl (talk) 23:18, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

To address your concerns over the lead's length, I've seen many many leads which are of comparable length. However, I agree that the cabinet members he shared in the Politburo don't necessarily need to be included (although I do think it puts his role in perspective during that time). I will try to edit it again in a shorter version. SpikeballUnion (talk) 13:42, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Maybe provide a list here at the Talk Page of things that were in the older version and which you feel should be added into this one? That way we can discuss the different proposed sentences and the ways in which they might be reworded. Midnightblueowl (talk) 14:09, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Two problems with both your versions. In a misunderstanding of what NPOV means, you both try to say that "critics" say e.g he killed millions. But there is no RS denying that he killed millions, so your statement is misleading. He killed millions. And prefacing the non-aggression pact with the failure to sign other agreements suggests that one was a consequence of the other. Who says so?

Gravuritas (talk) 04:49, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Gravuritas I know that you have a personal problem with the way Stalin is portrayed in the encyclopaedia, however the job of Misplaced Pages is just to display what historians and academics think, not to point fingers itself, and on controversial and/or debated items it's even more important to point out that certain groups of people think certain things. Your claim is that he singlehandedly killed millions; I wish to refer you to the third message in this thread, the one about drifting Stalin's hand hand through the air and suddenly repression appearing. The various processes that resulted in people's deaths were absolutely not as simple as that, and it would be very misleading to portray it as such in the lead of the article. SpikeballUnion (talk) 13:06, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Plus, it is already stated that it is widely agreed that the number of deaths resulting from his government are in the order of millions. That is enough summarisation of the collective opinions of writers. To get even more specific on what happened and make claims based on it would be inappropriate, especially for the lead. SpikeballUnion (talk) 13:08, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Also, I'm sure you know the policy about words to watch - contentious labels. Whilst the definition of a word may seem to be suitable in someone's eyes for something, words carry connotations. The job of Misplaced Pages is to describe as neutrally as possible, and if there are views of writers which involve words that carry connotations, its job is to state them as views of writers. SpikeballUnion (talk) 13:11, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

I've published another lead edit, this time keeping much more to the original paragraphing structure. I removed the Politburo members, Trotsky's views on world revolution and several other things, and I added in more facts that Midnightblueowl added. I also put Soviet in the start for his nationality. If there are disagreements you can discuss them here or edit them in, however I do hope that this revision won't get reverted to the mess that the old one was. SpikeballUnion (talk) 19:16, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Looks good, SpikeballUnion. There are some areas where the prose could be tweaked (a few superfluous words etc) but generally I'm very happy with this version. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:10, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

You misstate, or misunderstand, my point, and it is not 'my personal problem', it is a matter of precision in the syntax. I am not particularly trying to select the epithet: dictator, mass- murderer, whatever. I am kicking against any construction of the form 'Critics say...' where what follows is not disputed. 'Critics say he was a dictator' implies that there are those (or rather there is some WP:RS) that says he was not a dictator. That's not true: his fans point to what they view as his achievements, but nobody well-informed and with a brain claims he was not a dictator, or was not responsible for millions of deaths. So I will keep deleting the inaccurate 'Critics say' clause when needed to restore a sentence to a non- mendacious version. Feel free to find an alternative version which is actually true, and also is sufficiently mealy- mouthed to satisfy your feelings on what a NPOV looks like. I am perfectly happy, for instance, with a slight restatement of your words above: the number of deaths resulting from his government were in the millions. Just don't put 'His critics say' in front of it.

Gravuritas (talk) 20:33, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

@Qzd. Suggest you deal with the reasoning in the para above before asserting that I'm POV pushing.

Gravuritas (talk) 01:18, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

It doesn't need a notice because the body of the article contains many viewpoints critical of Stalin; these are critics of Stalin. Also, the burden of proof is not on me to find writers who aren't critical of Stalin, but on whoever wants to claim that "He was a totalitarian dictator" or make other standalone statements critical of him. They have to find in the writings on Stalin every single one agree that he was a dictator. Regardless, in the body of the article it is stated that "54% of Russian youth agreed that Stalin did more good than bad while 46% disagreed that Stalin was a "cruel tyrant"", which already discredits any attempt to make these non-universally agreed statements. The part of the lead about opinions on Stalin is best left how it is. SpikeballUnion (talk) 16:02, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

First sentence is a thoroughly disingenuous sidestep of the point: shame on you. As you are fully aware, it is no part of my point to deny that critics say this: my whole point is that nobody RS denies it. My point is supported by all the RS that describes Stalin as such. And as you are equally aware, Joe public in Russia or any other country is not WP:RS, so trying to counter a point supported by lots of RS by reference to 'wot some people think' is a garbage argument. To emphasise: my point is that there is no RS that he wasn't a dictator, and your slithering this into a different point- that 'every single one agrees that he is a dictator' is a straw man argument. Now please refrain from rhetorical slithering and address the point fairly: can you find some significant RS that claims he was not a dictator? If not, then stop wasting time.

Gravuritas (talk) 17:58, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

Gravuritas, please keep your comments within the bounds of WP:Civility. You've been warned about this before, here, here, here, here, and here. There's really no excuse. Midnightblueowl (talk) 19:05, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

@ MBO. On this particular issue then you have been very free with your conclusions; keen to sprinkle unsupported assertions such as 'slant' or POV into the talk and the edit summaries; and yet very shy of engagng with the substantive argument. Stick to the knitting. Meantime, maybe you can explain why your 'side' of this discussion wishes to misrepresent my point; use a straw man argument; and most blatant of all, use an opinion poll as RS. Maybe you can encourage the reading and inward digestion of Fallacy and dispense your advice in a different direction. Or maybe you could just address the point, fairly.

Gravuritas (talk) 19:48, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

Supporters emphasise one thing about a figure; detractors and critics emphasise another. Both things can be based in reality (i.e. Stalin could be a hero of socialism and of the Second World War while at the same time being a tyrannical totalitarian dictator responsible for mass atrocities). However, specifying that "Supporters think x" while presenting the critical view in a totally different, and authoritative voice, raises concerns. Your perspective would effectively present the view that okay, his supporters think this, but the reality is that. There's a definite undercurrent of anti-Stalin prejudice there and that is not encyclopaedic (and I say this as someone who is most certainly not sympathetic to Stalin). That is why I favour something like "Critics emphasise that..." or "Critics highlight..." That way we can keep a more even-handed balance between 'critics' and 'supporters' while at the same time not presenting the view that mass killings and repressions only occurred in some subjective anti-Stalin view of the universe. I also think it worth pointing out that similar forms of 'critics/supporters' wording are employed in FA-rated political biographies like Vladimir Lenin and Nelson Mandela, so there is certainly a precedent there. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:28, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for engaging with the point, and I love the typo- there is 'certainly a president there', though probs not an apt precedent. Let me try to distinguish the cases once more. Let's consider e.g. the fast- paced industrialisation. Afaik, which is not far in this particular topic, nobody disputes that he achieved this. So, and I haven't checked the article, it would be best to say something along the lines of "Stalin (or his government) achieved very fast industrialisation, with steel production rising by a factor 10 in 15 years" or whatever. I would deprecate the use of "Supporters say Stalin achieved..." because there is a false implication in that syntax. The false implication is that Stalin's detractors deny that he achieved fast industrialization. The statement 'achieved fast industrialisation' deserves to be "in an authoratitive voice" because it is not seriously disputed. Similarly, if you wish there to be anything in the lede about Stalin being a dictator, we should not shy away from saying so "in an authoratitive voice" just because it doesn't sound nice. The appropriate test to make the full, unqualified statement must be: Does any RS deny that statement?

PS Let me answer my own question. This issue has been rumbling around for sometime now, with multiple posts. My repeated challenge to find RS denying that Stalin was a dictator has not been picked up, and as you've found the time to research irrelevancies such as my previous less-than-polite treatment of wilful mendacity, then I can only assume that such a source has been looked for, and not found. Tant pis.

Gravuritas (talk) 21:03, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

@MBO. Following your latest edit to this bit of the lede "Critics emphasise...". then it is no longer misleading. Thank you.

Gravuritas (talk) 22:10, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

Stalin's nationality in the opening sentence

Midnightblueowl I wish to point out that Soviet was indeed a nationality; it's even listed in Stalin's infobox. Georgian was his other nationality, but the job of the lead is to convey the most important information as such, and his Georgian ethnicity is something that is more relevant to his early life rather than his life as the leader of the Soviet Union. SpikeballUnion (talk) 13:16, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

I can certainly understand why Stalin could be considered "Soviet" (is it a nationality though, or just a citizenship?), however he could only be considered such post-1922. He only became a Soviet citizen after he was forty-four years old. Given that he died at the age of seventy-four, this means that he was only a Soviet citizen for a minority of his life. For that reason I think that there are very serious problems with labelling him "Soviet" in the opening sentence. Conversely, he was Georgian from the moment that he was born to the moment that he died. Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:35, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

I still relatively strongly object to him being labelled as a "Georgian revolutionary" within the first few words of the entire article. It only serves to mislead and give wrong context, especially to uninformed readers. The most notable portion of his life, by far, was his tenure as the Soviet leader; he never had such fame or notability as a "Georgian". Additionally, it was his nationality too. There's nothing wrong with referring to his early life as Georgian and emphasising that the life we all know of Stalin was while he was Soviet. It in fact adds clarity rather than subtracts from it, especially since Georgian is already still mentioned in the lead right after the beginning. SpikeballUnion (talk) 13:48, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

In reading this debate, it seems that there may be a misconception about what "nationality" means. It is a common mistake to confuse "ethnicity" and "nationality". As the first sentence of our article explicitly says "nationality" is the legal relationship between a person and a state. While Stalin's ethnicity was undoubtedly Georgian, his nationality at birth couldn't have been Georgian, because there was no Georgian state until 1918. (see Georgia within the Russian Empire, Georgia Governorate) So at his birth in 1878, his nationality was technically Russian: he was a subject of the Russian Empire and that was really the only "legal relationship" he had to any existing state. After the foundation of the Soviet Union in 1922, Stalin a Soviet: his legal relationship was with the Soviet Union. So, while his ethnicity is always "Georgian", his nationality was "Russian" then "Soviet", but never "Georgian".--William Thweatt 20:07, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

Thank you. This was my hunch. I never had a confusion over what ethnicity and nationality are, however I was pulled into believing that he had a Georgian nationality, merely because it was established in the article. SpikeballUnion (talk) 20:18, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

However, that still doesn't change the fact that he wasn't of Soviet nationality for the majority of his life, because the Soviet Union simply did not exist. How about we find some kind of compromise by opening the sentence with "Georgian-Soviet"? Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:07, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

He was famous for being Soviet. He was a citizen of Soviet Russia since 1917, so that's roughly half his life. Georgian, while true, makes him sound as if his activities were largely based in Georgia. Georgian-Soviet is confusing, a kind of neologism which begs for a definition.--Jack Upland (talk) 12:55, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

My point exactly, Jack. SpikeballUnion (talk) 15:50, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

Only Russian nationalists appreciate Soviet WWII victory?

There are still some problems with the introduction;

"After the fall of the Soviet Union, Stalin has been praised by Russian nationalists for his role in defeating Nazi Germany and establishing the Soviet Union as a major world power."

I don't see why we should emphasise in the introduction that Russian nationalists in particular think it is good that the Soviet Union under Stalin defeated the Third Reich. Most people across the world, who aren't, you know, Nazis, think its good thing that Eastern Europe wasn't permanently subjugated under the Third Reich! Claíomh Solais (talk) 22:34, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

The prose does not claim that only Russian nationalists hold this view, but it is a view that is held by many Russian nationalists (and we have reliable sources cited in the article which state that). I think it important to reflect that Stalin does remain an important figure for many in the Russian nationalist milieu, both for his actions in WW2 and for establishing the USSR as a Soviet Union. Midnightblueowl (talk) 22:47, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

Unbalanced praise for Stalin's role in WW2 is largely limited to his fans. The grown-ups believe that, before helping to win WW2, he damn near lost it. Shooting most of his officers; poor strategy, and disregarding warnings from various sources were some of his major errors. And most people who aren't, you know, Stalinists, think it's a bad thing that Eastern Europe continued to be subjugated afterwards, by the Soviet imperialists.

Gravuritas (talk) 02:34, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

Here in the USA, Stalin has not been praised for his role in defeating Nazi Germany. I mean, not at all. Among the average person, well most people don't even think about WWII anymore, but when it was more current, people just mostly didn't think of crediting the Russians that much, and especially not Stalin. Ditto for our elite leaders, who within a few months of the close of WWII would have stopped praising Stalin (if the ever did) out of political expedience. Actual professional historians I don't know but they don't much matter. So for the USA at least you can't say Stalin was praised. For the UK and Europe, I dunno, maybe kind of the same (although the Europeans had communists, the USA didn't). So on that basis the statement kind of makes sense.

Maybe (probably) people who weren't Russian nationalists should have given Stalin more praise and credit. But if they didn't we can't say that they did. Herostratus (talk) 03:03, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

Well, Stalin has been widely praised for his efforts in WW2, being presented with the Sword of Stalingrad by the British government. This article contains a quote from American diplomat Harriman in 1972 which claims that Stalin was the greatest of the Allied leaders. A similar conclusion was reached by British historian Geoffrey Roberts in his 2006 book Stalin's Wars (for a summary, see here). Time magazine made Stalin "man of the year" twice and in 1943 Warners Bros produced the pro-Stalin Mission to Moscow. The US State Department historian currently says that, "Without the remarkable efforts of the Soviet Union on the Eastern Front, the United States and Great Britain would have been hard pressed to score a decisive military victory over Nazi Germany". At the time Stalin was praised as far afield as the Republic of China and Australia. Clearly this was affected by the Cold War and by nationalism, but to imply that only Russian nationalists have praised Stalin for his role in WW2 is very misleading.--Jack Upland (talk) 04:07, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

Well, that's true -- during the war of course. But not much after. But yes, during the war Stalin was heaped with praise generally, in the west. Herostratus (talk) 05:19, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

It was a businees, the UK and USA delivered arms and food, the SU delivered millions of mistreated soldiers. It's immoral to describe the business the way you do. It was exactly W. Averell Harriman who did the business with Stalin, don't expect him to understand anything and to tell the truth. Xx236 (talk) 06:52, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

The other problem is that some Russian nationalists deplore Stalin: some support the Tsar and some think the Soviet government was run by Jews. I think it would be better not to single out Russian nationalists. We could say something like Stalin has been widely credited with helping defeat Nazi Germany, but he has also been widely condemned for...--Jack Upland (talk) 12:45, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

The lead is biased

Soviet forces occupied the Baltic states and communist governments loyal to the Soviet Union gained power in most countries freed from German occupation by the Red Army, which later constituted the Eastern Bloc.

Czechoslovakia was the only state, where Communists gained power. Other states were occupied by the Red Army, NKVD and Smersh, it's yoyur opinion they were freed.

Part of Czechoslovakia was liberated the US Army.Xx236 (talk) 07:02, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

The author is User:SpikeballUnion. Please don't impose your POV.Xx236 (talk) 09:17, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

I am not the author of the use of the term "freed" - that was transferred from an earlier revision of the lead. If you don't like that particular word, feel free to change it. All I did in my edits was replace the the terms "annexed", "backed" and "takeovers" in the former edit, which were politically charged and were not NPOV, and not completely accurate choices of words. SpikeballUnion (talk) 15:23, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

I'm sorry to misunderstand so many edits. However it's you who invented and imposed The period of Stalin. Xx236 (talk) 06:21, 5 May 2017 (UTC)

Totalitarian censorship

The page does not describe the system of totalitarian censorship, in which people were imprisoned or killed because they had a pre-revolution book.Xx236 (talk) 07:22, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

Former Soviet leaders, especially Trotsky, were ereased from the Soviet history.Xx236 (talk) 07:25, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

And their texts deadly.Xx236 (talk) 07:09, 5 May 2017 (UTC)

The History of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union (Bolsheviks)

It's listed as Stalin's work. Stalin was an editor.

The page does not inform about the indoctrination of the society (and other nations). Any educated Soviet citizen had to learn the book by heart.Xx236 (talk) 07:29, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

The period of Stalin

User:SpikeballUnion introduced many times the - allegedly neutral - phrase. Unsourced, undiscussed. Xx236 (talk) 09:14, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

Soviet terror in occupied Poland should be mentioned

Other annexations are unproportionally described.Xx236 (talk) 06:23, 5 May 2017 (UTC)

What is Stalin government?

who had been publicly denounced twice by the Stalin government

Stalin personally decided.

What is the government?Xx236 (talk) 07:37, 10 May 2017 (UTC)

Service, an expert?

• Xx236 (talk) 08:03, 10 May 2017 (UTC)

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