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This is a 2006 Featured article, whose nominator has not edited Misplaced Pages for almost a decade. For ], we are evaluating which older FAs need to be submitted to ], and finding many that can be salvaged with a little bit of TLC. There is some uncited text that may be easy to cite. {{ping|Wehwalt|Balon Greyjoy}} would either of you be able to advise if you are able to patch up the uncited pieces here, and opine whether the article is good enough to be marked Satisfactory at ]? We aren't looking for FAC-level perfection; just an assurance that we wouldn't embarrass ourselves if this ran on the main page and an indication of whether a FAR is needed. If you are able to patch it up, you could indicate Satisfactory at URFA/2020. Thanks for any help you can provide! ] (]) 23:01, 15 December 2020 (UTC) |
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This is a 2006 Featured article, whose nominator has not edited Misplaced Pages for almost a decade. For ], we are evaluating which older FAs need to be submitted to ], and finding many that can be salvaged with a little bit of TLC. There is some uncited text that may be easy to cite. {{ping|Wehwalt|Balon Greyjoy}} would either of you be able to advise if you are able to patch up the uncited pieces here, and opine whether the article is good enough to be marked Satisfactory at ]? We aren't looking for FAC-level perfection; just an assurance that we wouldn't embarrass ourselves if this ran on the main page and an indication of whether a FAR is needed. If you are able to patch it up, you could indicate Satisfactory at URFA/2020. Thanks for any help you can provide! ] (]) 23:01, 15 December 2020 (UTC) |
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To reflect current FA standards, the article could use some expansion and less reliance on Lunney sources, more reliance on other sources now. Also, the lead will need expansion. ] (]) 15:21, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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To reflect current FA standards, the article could use some expansion and less reliance on Lunney sources, more reliance on other sources now. Also, the lead will need expansion. ] (]) 15:21, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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: {{u|MLilburne}} now that the article is off the mainpage and views have subsided, are you planning to incorporate new sources? There is new material in obits that could be incorporated, highlighting his importance in the Apollo 13 affair as well as other things, and the lead should probably be expanded. ] (]) 16:23, 30 March 2021 (UTC) |
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:: I'm afraid I don't have the time right now, although I agree that it would be an improvement to the article. ] (]) 14:34, 3 April 2021 (UTC) |
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No progress, listing at ]. ] (]) 03:01, 19 July 2022 (UTC) |
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:::: He worked for Rockwell until 1995 which, yes, is when United Space Alliance was formed. This is as cited in the article, you can also see his JSC History bio which gives the same dates: https://historycollection.jsc.nasa.gov/JSCHistoryPortal/history/oral_histories/LunneyGS/GSL_Bio.pdf I think the article is moderately clear that he retired from USA in 1999, not Rockwell? ] (]) 14:32, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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:::: He worked for Rockwell until 1995 which, yes, is when United Space Alliance was formed. This is as cited in the article, you can also see his JSC History bio which gives the same dates: https://historycollection.jsc.nasa.gov/JSCHistoryPortal/history/oral_histories/LunneyGS/GSL_Bio.pdf I think the article is moderately clear that he retired from USA in 1999, not Rockwell? ] (]) 14:32, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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::::: I was pointing out that the NASA press release seemed to have it wrong ... “ Lunney worked on the Mercury, Gemini, Apollo, Skylab, and Space Shuttle programs. He retired from NASA in 1985 as manager of the Space Shuttle Program, but continued to lead human spaceflight activities in private industry with Rockwell International and, later, United Space Alliance until his retirement in 1995.” . He retired overall in 1999, right ? ] (]) 15:24, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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::::: I was pointing out that the NASA press release seemed to have it wrong ... “ Lunney worked on the Mercury, Gemini, Apollo, Skylab, and Space Shuttle programs. He retired from NASA in 1985 as manager of the Space Shuttle Program, but continued to lead human spaceflight activities in private industry with Rockwell International and, later, United Space Alliance until his retirement in 1995.” . He retired overall in 1999, right ? ] (]) 15:24, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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:::::: Yes, he retired overall in 1999, so it seems that the NASA release does have it wrong. Interesting. ] (]) 22:18, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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: I've suggested listing this article on the main page under 'recent deaths' at ]. Thanks. ] (]) 09:39, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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: I've suggested listing this article on the main page under 'recent deaths' at ]. Thanks. ] (]) 09:39, 20 March 2021 (UTC) |
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::Just a further note - the quotes his son stating he died of stomach cancer in ]. ] (]) 12:49, 11 April 2021 (UTC) |
This is a 2006 Featured article, whose nominator has not edited Misplaced Pages for almost a decade. For Misplaced Pages:Unreviewed featured articles/2020, we are evaluating which older FAs need to be submitted to Featured article review, and finding many that can be salvaged with a little bit of TLC. There is some uncited text that may be easy to cite. @Wehwalt and Balon Greyjoy: would either of you be able to advise if you are able to patch up the uncited pieces here, and opine whether the article is good enough to be marked Satisfactory at WP:URFA/2020? We aren't looking for FAC-level perfection; just an assurance that we wouldn't embarrass ourselves if this ran on the main page and an indication of whether a FAR is needed. If you are able to patch it up, you could indicate Satisfactory at URFA/2020. Thanks for any help you can provide! SandyGeorgia (Talk) 23:01, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
To reflect current FA standards, the article could use some expansion and less reliance on Lunney sources, more reliance on other sources now. Also, the lead will need expansion. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:21, 20 March 2021 (UTC)