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Referring to the discussion in the article about the swagman, I agree that Australians do identify with "his precarious existence, his stubborn defiance of authority" and "his working-class status", but I don't see how he is "defying the odds". He stole a sheep then drowned himself; surely there is nothing "lucky" in that? | |||
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:Yes, can probably be dropped. --] <sup>(]/])</sup> 12:52, 4 January 2006 (UTC) | |||
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I removed the line which made the claim that the anthem is largely viewed as 'uninspiring' when compared with anthems of certain other countries. This statement made as one person's opinion would be an obviously subjective view, let alone it being represented as a commonly held opinion. | |||
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I have toned down the negative attitude to the anthem present in the article. Firstly, I would heartily disagree with the statement that "few" know the words. Yes, it's not universal, I would argue that particularly older Australians struggle sometimes, but I would think that a majority of Australians can now do a decent rendition. Secondly, nobody argues that we should go back to God Save The Queen. Waltzing Matilda is a point of contention, agreed, and the current edit reflects it. Finally, it seems worth mentioning some of the other patriotic songs, including Land Down Under and Peter Allen's classic.--] | |||
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:Regarding 'few knowing the words', Geoffery Robertson demonstrated this on his Hypotheticals program when asking the panel the second verse. Seceral of his guests were not even game to try. --] 06:43, 15 December 2006 (UTC) | |||
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I have an issue with the comparison with the Star Spangled Banner (SSB). I think this is very un-NPOV and should be radically altered. | |||
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Firstly, whether some tune is or is not "easier to sing" than any other tune you care to name, is very much a subjective judgement. I, for one, while disagreeing with many current American behaviours and attitudes, have nevertheless always loved the tune of the SSB, and I would disagree that Advance Australia Fair is easier to sing. | |||
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But whether I agree or not, I think this comparison entirely misses the point of the article. The article is about Advance Australia Fair, which exists in its own right and has whatever merits it has. The sentence "At least it's easier to sing than ...", makes Advance Australia Fair only marginally better than an anthem the writer appears to dislike, and so whatever the intention of the comparison was, all the reader understands is that it's being damned with faint praise, which is utterly demeaning. | |||
Who says the SSB is the benchmark against which other anthems are to be measured? Who says there should be any benchmark at all? I think this comparison displays an anti-American attitude on the part of the writer. Such an attitude may be completely justified in general terms, but what on earth is it doing in an article on the national anthem of another country? It is irrelevant. The article is not about the writer's attitude to America or any other country, it is about "Advance Australia Fair". Cheers ] 23:13, 2 Apr 2004 (UTC) | |||
:You are completely right. I have removed the biased comparison. | |||
:In a related topic, not being from an English-speaking country, I have never heard "Waltzing Matilda" performed. In fact, before reading about it here on Misplaced Pages I didn't even know it existed. I read the lyrics though, and although I have no idea of how it sounds when set to music, it appeared to me that it would not make such a good national anthem. I mean, I'm sure the song must be beautiful, but I really do think that "Advance Australia Fair" was indeed the better choice — how nice it is to hear a national anthem that doesn't allude to war, death or vengeance, Australians are to be commended for chosing that song! ] 23:22, 17 Aug 2004 (UTC) | |||
::Given the attitude of most Australians I know to the whole sorry business of Government, Waltzing Matilda is entirely fitting. -- ] (]) 14:45, 27 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
I seriously doubt that the popular belief is that Waltzing Matilda is our National Anthem... | |||
:Ditto to that, I was just going to mention that. — ] <sup>]/]</sup> 11:01, 9 October 2005 (UTC) | |||
:: You and the anonymous editor are both Australian and of course know which is our anthem. Those from overseas may not. ] 12:10, 9 October 2005 (UTC) | |||
:::I just ran a quick poll on a forum I frequent, and most people didn't know - Waltzing Matilda got almost as many votes as AAF. — ] <sup>]/]</sup> | |||
::No, no, the popular belief is that Waltzing Matilda SHOULD BE our National Anthem, and if it had beer in it Bob Hawke would definitely have pushed it through. -- ] (]) 14:45, 27 March 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Was the third version really performed in the presence of the PM? It's something you see doing the email rounds and stuff like that saying that it was the original version of the song (something the article confusingly says too) and how we've forgotten god and stuff like that. And what does it mean the song is "is only authorised for use on religious occassions." As far as I know there is at the moment no law saying you're not allowed to sing whatever song you like (although who knows what's in those laws he's proposed at the moment), but it's not the national anthem. In short, I don't beleive it belongs in this article (if it does, I propose that Adam Hills' "Whoa-o-o-o Advance Australia Fair" lyrics belong here too). | |||
On an unrelated note (other than its about this article about our anthem), did the dance remix really get a "mixed reaction"?, everyone I've talked to + the news story + ] said it was comlete rubbish. ] 14:27, 9 November 2005 (UTC) | |||
Hey, whoever wrote the explanation of why Waltzing Matilda would be an unsuitable national anthem, it is hilarious, intentionally or not. Just wanted to say that. | |||
== Heading 'version for religious occasions' == | |||
The material under the heading 'version for religious occasions' is wrong. There is no verse of the song/anthem penned by PD McCormick that reads as follows, or similar: | |||
With Christ our head and cornerstone, | |||
We'll build our Nation's might. | |||
Whose way and truth and light alone | |||
Can guide our path aright. | |||
Our lives, a sacrifice of love, reflect our Master's care. | |||
With faces turned to heaven above, Advance Australia fair. | |||
In joyful strains then let us sing, Advance Australia fair. | |||
See http://www.hamilton.net.au/advance.html for a debunking of the myth. To say that a three-verse version is "he original version of the anthem that is only authorised for use on religious occasions" is self-evidently wrong: firstly because, as set out earlier on the page, the original version was five verses long; and secondly because there are no shortage of official government pages on the anthem, which: | |||
a) confirm that the work is out of copyright and so cannot be "authorised" or de-authorised for use by anyone, and | |||
b) contain no reference to there being any 'version' for use on religious occasions. | |||
I've not edited the page myself as I'll leave it to those with more time/expertise. It's obviously a sufficiently well-circulated myth that it should still be referred to on the page, just under the heading of "Supposed 'religious' verse" or similar. | |||
== Uninspired? Some think so. == | |||
I've removed the cicumlocution/euphemism about how the anthem is criticised as being "unsuitable" and returned it to the criticism that it is ininspired. This is indeed a frequent criticism. Citation from Australian media is possible if this becomes a major point of contention. | |||
I also plan to move on the "third verse authorised for religious occasions" section. This is an internet urban legend with no apparent substantiation in fact. | |||
== Dating == | |||
"early in the 21st century": My school used the religious verse in the 20th. | |||
And this site refers to it being used in 1998. I'll correct the article from "early 21st" to "late 20th". ] 01:48, 13 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Trivia== | |||
I have added back the section on Trivia following its deletion by Zscout370. While this section is light hearted, other serious pages in Misplaced Pages have trivia section and it actually makes a point not noted elsewhere in the article about the meter of the song. Zscout370 I'm interested in your views. cheers ] 19:57, 10 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
:I found no sources for it, so that is why I removed it. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 21:01, 10 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Hmm..I did some searching around on Google and I did see some mentions of it, but only on forums and blog postings. I do not think it will be important enough to include in the article since no one has been documented as doing this and getting either public rebuke or admiration from it. It doesn't add anything to the article IMHO, since there are plenty of songs that their lyrics can fit the tune of other songs (I can easily stick the US anthem words to the Russian anthem) and some guy sung O Canada to a Christmas carol. However, unlike the Aussie Anthem/Gilligan's Isle connection, both of the examples I bring actually happened, documented and responses given. I am going to remove it again based on what I have found and discussed here. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 23:43, 10 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::I think it should be removed, this is an encyclopedia article after all, not a collection of random information.--] 23:44, 10 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
Hello again - I think the Famous Australian comedian Adam Hills performed this at the 2004 ] (but need to confirm) | |||
I'm not entirely sure about it being "random" information. I would not class the information as ]!? | |||
:There is much "fun facts" about songs, films and other items that have existed in the world. But a lot of them cause no significance to the subject matter. While there are many possible ways to sing a song, it is not our goal to list them all and even if we list them all, they will serve no purpose in the article other than just being there. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 04:04, 12 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Hills has performed - and even recorded - AAF to the tune of ''Working Class Man'', but not to the tune of ''Gilligan's Island'', AFAIK. The link above seems to confirm this. ] 04:50, 12 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::Is ] the same person yall are refering to? ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 05:13, 12 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::Read the article and find out.... ] 05:52, 12 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::A commedian signing a song to a different tune - I still can't see why this is of any relevance to an encyclopedia article.--] 05:22, 12 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::It's quite a popular act of his, and has even sold records. IMHO, it's much more worthy of note than a one-off performance of a dance remix at the 2004 NYE celebrations. I think it might as well stay in. ] 05:51, 12 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::::Hmm. On Second thoughts, maybe I'm letting my love of Hills' version cloud my judgement. It's already (rightly) mentioned on the ] page, so maybe that's enough. I'll take a "don't care" approach: if someone else thinks it should be removed, I won't object. ] 00:42, 13 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::::It can stay on the Hills article. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 01:25, 13 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::::What I meant is if someone thinks it should be removed from '''this''' article (''Advance Australia Fair'') I won't object; even though personally my slight preference is to leave it in. ] 04:11, 13 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Ok; well, I wish not to see the information on this article, but if people want to put it on Hill's article, then that is fine with me. Would that be a solution that will be good to all parties? ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 04:19, 13 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
There are similar comments (on national anthems set to different tunes) in the articles ], ] and ]. So if it's good enough in those articles, why not this one? Also, if someone had heard AAF to the tune of ''Working Class Man'', but didn't know who was the singer, and wanted to know more about it, he'd go this article rather than the ] article. So I say leave it in, though I won't engage in a revert war if it's cut. ] 04:41, 13 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
:I know there is a debate about the trivia at O Canada, I tried to split off the variants of the US anthem in their own article (looks like that is failing) and I have not touched GSTQ. But I will take a look and see if any of that can be pared down. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 05:02, 13 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
Well first off I don't think we'd include Working Class Anthem under trivia, it'd have it's own section. The actual song ] has a section on Working class anthem, so why not this article? If their are other versions aside from this then we deffinatly should have a section on other versions. ] 11:02, 5 November 2007 (UTC) | |||
==Proposed Merger== | |||
I have propsed the merger of this page with ]. That article contains the lyrics and a link to the . There is no need for duplication, and a redirect would provent this from happening again. ] <small>]</small> 09:21, 23 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
:The second page redirected to here. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 17:52, 23 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Thanks Zscout370. I thought that since there was already information there I should propose the merge and let it stand for a day, just so people knew what was going on, particularly those who edited the other page. Good on you for ]. ] <small>]</small> 09:23, 24 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::The only things that were on the other page were the lyrics and a link to an mp3 file. We got the lyrics and an OGG file that people can listen to, so the only logical thing I can think of is redirecting the second page to here. Plus, redirects are cheap and effective. :) Your welcome. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 18:22, 24 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Official lyrics are copyrighted == | |||
I just discovered that the official lyrics are copyrighted with non-commercial permission, so I have added info to the article with official source. This mean that we cannot sing it and then upload to Wikimedia Commons until the official copyright expires.--] 15:54, 20 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
:I see it at . I was thinking about launching the office a letter, but I am not sure how we can go about it. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 00:25, 21 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
::Wikimedia Commons is non-commerical use. So what's the problem? ] 00:41, 21 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Problem, we cannot accept non-commercial works since May of 2005. This includes Misplaced Pages, the Wikimedia Commons and other projects run by the Wikimedia Foundation. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 01:35, 21 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::As I read it the copyright only applies to the version approved as the national anthem in 1984. There would be a reasonable fair use argument for including the official lyrics - if someone was willing to write a bit more about why the shorter version was chosen and how it differs to the original. --] 02:05, 21 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::We have a short paragraph showing what changes were made. I might also suggest bolding the sections of the song that are currently used. I will plan on seeing if there is an Australia Consulate near my home so I could see what course of action I should take. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 04:07, 21 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::I was given guidance from the Australian Consulate in Los Angeles to send a letter to a certain office. I will do that soon and hopefully get this matter cleared. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 02:09, 22 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Claiming fair use on the official lyrics in the Misplaced Pages article should be possible. Otherwise, we have to remove the Maori lyrics of ] from Misplaced Pages as well as so many fair use images. Both official lyrics have non-commercial licenses. I am not scaring anyone, but I consider the fact important.--] 11:52, 22 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::I know you are not scaring folks, but with the way Misplaced Pages has been moving, this would have came up eventually. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 16:39, 22 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
=== This makes no sense === | |||
I just found , a government website, that stated this: "While permission is not required to use, perform or record the Australian National Anthem for non-commercial purposes, there is a requirement to seek permission for commercial use of the anthem. The words and music are in the public domain." It almost reminds me of the blasted Philippines Government images template; copyright is public domain but cannot use commercially (without jumping a few hoops first). What do yall think? ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 21:06, 25 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
:But previously the same page states: "The Commonwealth owns copyright in the words of the Australian National Anthem as proclaimed." The public domain statement wrt non-commercial use seems to be a incorrect interpretation of copyright. --] 05:25, 26 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
::I am going to try and write that letter and see how it goes. I just think this article looks strange without the official lyrics denote in some way, but we have to work within the policies set down by Jimbo and others at the Board. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 05:30, 26 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::There isn't much point asking for permission, as we can't use with-permission material on Misplaced Pages. I think we'll just have to settle for a link on this one, thanks to the overzealous attitudes towards fair use and fair dealing. ] 05:58, 26 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::Shi...that's right....hm...yeah, what Rebecca said is the only chance that we have is to link. I think the paragraph on the differences we have now qualifies for fair use/fair dealing. As for recordings, the only recording that is PD that I know of is by the USA Navy Band (by a release filed by them). Grrr...this sucks. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 06:08, 26 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::It makes sence if you know Australian copyright law, which allows for the seperate treatment of use eg performance/recording and word/written music. The words, written, can be allowed as public domain without inhibiting the copyright of use, which is offered standing permission for non-comercial purposes. Another difference between Australian Copyright and US (which I presume misunderstood from above) is we have "Fair Dealings" provision, not "Fair Use", and Misplaced Pages does not in my understanding qualify for "Fair Dealing". I believe that if you seek indepedent Australian legal advice you'll find you're allowed to have the text, but should note the retention copyright on use, including the general permission for non-commercial purposes. You would not be allowed to have a recording on this site, of the words and/or music, without specific permision. ] 13:59, 11 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::We need to accept works for commercial use also, so that is why I have removed them before. I have sent an email to the officials that run the Australia Honors/Symbols website on behalf of Misplaced Pages and I want to see what that does. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 01:48, 12 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I'm suprised to see the US Navy Band recording remains. It is not and can not be Public Domain, regardless of whether it was performed with or without permission, as Copyright on usage remains with the Australian Government. When someone performs a work copyright by another, they normally do so with permission or under license, and would normally create a seperate copyright for that effort, without affecting the underlying copyright. As there is no evidence that the Australain Government has assigned the underlying copyright to anyone, the US Navy Band can choose not to seek a seperate copyright to it's performance, but can not permit third parties usage in contravention of the underlying copyright. If this site holds itself to be commercial use this content requires express permission in Australia and under the US Free Trade Agreement with Australia. The Australian Government, however, does make it clear the text of the lyrics IS Public Domain. ] 09:47, 13 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::::That will be my fault there; I know about the derivative works there (been bit by it recently when doing Canadian images). When I talked to the US Navy Band via email, they told me that their recordings are the public domain and they only stressed on accuracy. I still see that "The words and music are in the public domain" statement on itsanhonour.gov.au, so that is why I wasn't told by Aussie admins to remove the music (I am a US national, so I am lost). I sent an email message to that office and I will assume they will take time to look at it. If they do not help me, there is a Consulate in Los Angeles, California I can see. I would hope to solve the issue once and for all, but it will have to involve the Aussie Government so I have firm answers. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 05:30, 14 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
I can't understand why Misplaced Pages keeps the lyrics to the McCormick version of 'Advance Australia Fair' hidden. From the Sydney Morning Herald, Sat April 13 1974: "The words of 'Advance Australia Fair', written in 1878 by a Scot, Peter Dodds McCormick, under the pen-name 'Amicus', were not subject to any copyright restrictions and were free for general use." a spokesman for the government of the day said. 20:05, 18 January 2008 | |||
:They're not hidden. They're in the article in a collapsible box. The collapsible box reduces the overall length of the article. --] (]) 09:38, 18 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I ''would'' say that somebody should put a recording up, since there is no way it is copyrighted in the US where Misplaced Pages is hosted. In Australia, the government probably doesn't have any basis to assert its claim of copyright because it . Of course, it is such a terrible song that it would be an embarrassment to Australia for anybody to post it. ] (]) 22:39, 5 December 2008 (UTC) | |||
:One point that should be mentioned about the copyright by the Australian Government, that it only applies to the amended wording. The original words are completely in the public domain and can be used as such in public or commercial performances without any permission being required. They just have to make sure they do NOT call it the Australian National Anthem.] (]) 08:17, 19 April 2010 (UTC) | |||
=== Copyright revisited === | |||
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The Australian government claim to copyright on the lyrics strikes me as a load of crap. Copyright under international law is automatic, and this makes the applicability of "copyright" as a verb in these circumstances highly questionable. Slight differences in a text that is already in the public domain will fail the test of originality. Using slight changes to claim a new copyright is nothing short of gaming the system. Admittedly, I don't know how Australian courts have handled the question of originality, but that must certainly require something more than a simple notice on a government bureaucracy website. A government has the right to pass legislation about this, and that law could be proven with a simple link. This would be valid law in Australia, but meaningless elsewhere. ] (]) 02:39, 19 August 2012 (UTC) | |||
I'm bad at politics and I'm not a lawyer, so don't take my comments more seriously than they deserve. | |||
Copyright belonged to the composer and his heirs until he had been dead 50 years. Since we know he died in 1916, the song was already public domain by 1967 at the latest. Once something has entered the public domain, both law and ordinary common sense dictate that that step can't be undone; public domain means it's your property and mine and everyone's, so logically the only way to get something removed from the public domain (assuming it had acquired that status legitimately) would be to successfully get written permission from every person on Earth. | |||
Or to craft a special law, using questionable logic and flimsy legal principles, which would apply only locally, etc, as you said. In that case it would make more sense to me to create some kind of "National Anthem Law", rather than to misuse the copyright laws. | |||
Also - and with this part I'm more sure of myself than I was with the rest - what's the point anyway? What does the government accomplish by declaring copyright? Everyone who wants to know the anthem knows it already. Parodies of copyrighted songs are explicitly legal. I think copyright makes it illegal to publish changed versions or translations if they're not obviously intended as parody - yet several such versions are listed here, with no apparent action being taken, and as far as I know, copyright laws say that if you substantially neglect to defend your copyright (i.e. you know of serious violations and you don't pursue them) then you lose your right to sue anyone else later on. So I don't get it. ] (]) 14:02, 7 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I've just replaced the dead link as to government copyright with the current link, which may or may not be the same document as before (it is undated). I'm also making this section a sub-section of the original discussion, to avoid duplication. ] (]) 15:29, 7 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Alternatives == | |||
This section reads oddly to me. This article is about Advance Australia Fair, not other possible anthems. The material in this section is nearly all speculation and none of it is cited. I proposal deletion. What do others think? ] 11:36, 9 March 2007 (UTC) | |||
:I mentioned about Waltzing Matilda earlier on the article and the Song of Australia, but from it reads now, I think we can safely remove it (for now). ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 16:11, 9 March 2007 (UTC) | |||
:: Removed ] 21:44, 13 March 2007 (UTC) | |||
:Alternatives should be included while "Australian National Anthem" ''redirects to this article''! | |||
:I have inserted the following | |||
:<small><nowiki>== Unofficial and popular alternative national anthems == | |||
Several songs have been accorded the status of 'popular' or 'unofficial' national anthems of Australia. Foremost among them are: | |||
* ]<ref>Down Under (1981) curator's notes on ASO - Australia's audio and visual heritage online </ref> | |||
* ] <ref></ref>,<ref></ref> | |||
* ]<ref></ref>.</nowiki></small> | |||
:If you don't feel it best belongs here, please try to be ''constructive'' and shift it to a new article, rather than being lazy and deleting it. | |||
:—DIV (] (]) 09:15, 31 January 2012 (UTC)) | |||
::Sorry, sport—none of those is at all relevant to this article. And, of course, none of the listed numbers is Australia's national anthem. Please take your edits out pending further discussion. My view is that you are wrong and that they don't belong here. ''You'' are the one who should be attempting to create a new article, if you believe that's justified by any citable facts. Cheers, ] (]) 15:23, 31 January 2012 (UTC) | |||
:::Agreed. The subject of the article is the song, Advance Australia Fair, and all content should be relevant to the song. It's necessary that its status as the national anthem be included as part of the article, but that doesn't mean that other songs that are unofficial anthems should be discussed. That may be appropriate in another article but not here. If the IP believes there is justification to include these somewhere, I suggest he/she ask at ] for guidance on where to add them. --] (]) 15:51, 31 January 2012 (UTC) | |||
== ABC == | |||
"Until then (1984), the song was sung in Australia as a patriotic song and to announce the news from the Australian Broadcasting Commission." So says the article. Has the writer confused this song with the ABC's famed fanfare used on news bulletins? ] 10:26, 22 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
:I agree that doesn't sound right. I listened and watched ABC news as far back as the early 1970s and I never remember AAF being used as the theme. The traditional ABC news theme is called "Majestic Fanfare". I found one site saying it was used from 1960 on Tasmanian ABC TV news, but I'm sure ABC used it elsewhere before that. I'll put a tag by the "fact". ] 11:00, 22 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
::Ah, you and I should learn to read the full article. Later on it says the ABC used it during WWII, which is believable (and I certainly can't dispute personally!). ] 11:04, 22 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
::: tells us it was used up till 31 December 1951, when it was replaced by "Majestic Fanfare" by ] (the British composer who also wrote "The Dream of Olwen"). What we need now is a date when Advance Australia Fair was first used by the ABC. Btw, I'm writing an article on "]" (<s>soon appearing on a screen near you</s> now showing). -- ] 02:22, 12 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
==Unfair criticism== | |||
As someone who is not Australian (and actually has never been to Australia), I happen to find most of the criticism directed at the Australian national anthem unjustified. True, "Advance Australia Fair" is rather unsophisticated, both in music and lyrics, when compared to other national anthems. However, I believe it reflects well the Australian character and national spirit: simple, unpretentious, joyful, upbeat, optimistic, and egalitarian. In the end, that's the main criterion I normally use to rate any national anthem. What's the value of an anthem that may be a symphonic masterpiece, but tells nothing about the character of the nation it claims to represent ? ] 15:31, 29 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
:I'd suggest that most of the criticism came from Australians themselves, who are famous for "knocking" many things Australian. I think it's firmly entrenched now, and I hear little criticism these days, apart from "girt by sea". -- ] 02:25, 12 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
I am certain that the lyrics read... | |||
"Australians all let us rejoice" rather than "Australia's sons..." <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 09:28, 27 September 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:The original words did say "Australia's sons", but when it became the official national anthem in 1984, these were changed to "Australians all" in the interests of inclusivity (?). -- ] (]) 23:39, 12 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
I'm sorry... did you just call me unsophisticated? Fuck you too. ] 21:21, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
I hope the irony was apparent... <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 21:43, 6 October 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
::The Internationale, Deutchland Uber Alles, March of the Volunteers...the worst the regime, the better the anthem.] (]) 05:24, 22 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
== This article is a joke == | |||
Why do we only have the original lyrics and 1901 changes? These are certainly not he lyrics I learnt at school. It appears as though this article has been taken over by a bunch of Australian Monarchists. I will be back to correct the article. "Australia's sons let us rejoice"? You have got to be kidding! | |||
] 21:20, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
While the original lyrics of the song might have contained 5 verses, the official national anthem contains only two. These are as follows | |||
ADVANCE AUSTRALIA FAIR | |||
Australians all let us rejoice, | |||
For we are young and free; | |||
We've golden soil and wealth for toil; | |||
Our home is girt by sea; | |||
Our land abounds in nature's gifts | |||
Of beauty rich and rare; | |||
In history's page, let every stage | |||
Advance Australia Fair. | |||
In joyful strains then let us sing, | |||
Advance Australia Fair. | |||
Beneath our radiant Southern Cross | |||
We'll toil with hearts and hands; | |||
To make this Commonwealth of ours | |||
Renowned of all the lands; | |||
For those who've come across the seas | |||
We've boundless plains to share; | |||
With courage let us all combine | |||
To Advance Australia Fair. | |||
In joyful strains then let us sing, | |||
Advance Australia Fair. | |||
This is as according to the Australian Department of Foreign Affairs and Trade web site... | |||
http://www.dfat.gov.au/facts/nat_anthem.html <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 21:31, 6 October 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:We been told to keep the lyrics out by Aussie administrators. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 21:33, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
Butthe current article is misleading. It presents the official national anthem as including the original lyrics with a few changes for political correctness... this simply isn't the case. The official anthem only includes 2 verses. This article appears to have been taken over by people with a politicla agenda. ] 21:47, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
:I'll see if the article can be reworked, since I know what you are getting at. But when it comes to printing the official lyrics, we cannot do it. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 21:50, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
:: I'd like to see the evidence where it says not to include them. Seems absurd. No such issues with ] or ]. I agree every effort should be made to put the correct lyrics on this page, and put the out-dated origin lyrics in a "navbox collapsible collapsed" format like GSTQ.] 22:41, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::NB DFAT website listed above says "McCormick died in 1916 and ‘Advance Australia Fair' became free of copyright in 1966."] 22:44, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::We have it listed in the article that the current official lyrics, those adopted by the Government, are under copyright. Since we want all texts and images to be used commercially in the future, we cannot accept non-commercial text anymore. Plus, I been told that we cannot paste full lyrics if they are copyrighted. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 22:51, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::: I would suggest that it is '''highly likely''' this represents not seeing the woods for the trees. I have made a template for the article which may be used when - eventually - it is accepted that current lyrics are acceptable on Misplaced Pages, (if only by common sense); I have included collapsible boxes for allow all lyrics to be listed and yet also keep a reasonable page length. It can be found here: Cheers ] 23:25, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
Ok. ] <small><sup>]</sup></small> 23:47, 6 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
Anyone feel like dropping a mention that nobody knows the second verse? ] (]) 19:19, 19 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Adam Hills Version== | |||
Is there a place in this article for the ] version set to ]? Alot of Australians have mentioned this version to me, I was wondering if maybe a ''in popular culture'' section should be created? ] 15:59, 4 November 2007 (UTC) | |||
:Discussed above at ]. I wanted it in, but consensus was to leave it at. Feel free to argue it again :) ] 05:34, 5 November 2007 (UTC) | |||
::Whoops, sorry, missed it in my scan of the page! <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 11:00, 5 November 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
::: I think that note could be placed on the article about how it fits in with the classic song "Working Class Man" by Jimmy Barnes (Cold Chisel), and how it is seen as something that is "very australian"--] (]) 07:44, 17 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::It ''is'' in the ] article. ] (]) 09:57, 17 December 2007 (UTC) | |||
== Pronounciation of Advance in the anthem? == | |||
Is the anthem's Advance read as "Edvense" or "Aavaanse" in the basis of Australian English? | |||
] (]) 11:12, 21 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Neither, actually. Some say "Ad-vaanse", some say "Ad-vanse". Not so long ago, "ad-vaanse" would have been the predominant pronunciation; but certain words have been changing their pronunciations, e.g. the second syllable of "com'''mand''''" and the middle syllable of "com'''man'''der" were always, always "mahn", but these days it's common to hear "man". -- ] (]) 11:00, 24 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:More importantly, it’s ''pronunciation''. | |||
:But OK, back to your question. There is not one Australian English. The word ‘advance’ is correctly pronounced /əd'vɑːns/ in quick speech and /æd'vɑːns/ in slow speech. The vowel /ɑː/ is fronted to by all but the poshest Australians. The ''ant-aunt'' distinction is sporadically lost in a few words in Australia, depending on the speaker, which means that this vowel is merged into /æ/. In turn, /æ/ is a rather close vowel in Australia, tending to amongst the most ocker. So, yes, you could have , but it would be rather Kath ’n’ Kim. — ] 10:43, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
==Issues with the history of the official anthem== | |||
The history of AAF as the official national anthem needs some work. | |||
It first became the official anthem in 1974, following the ABS poll. (God Save the Queen was still used for specifically royal occasions.) Why was it official? Because the Whitlam government said so. There was no formal proclamation involving the Governor-General, it was simply a government decision, but that’s still undoubtedly “official”. (It would be good to find a cite about Whitlam’s announcement, to get the exact flavour of AAF’s official status at that time. | |||
''"In January 1976, the Fraser Government reinstated the use of GSTQ for royal, vice-regal, defence and loyal toast occasions. AAF was played on all other official occasions."'' (quote from the Parliamentary Handbook) | |||
:So AAF was still the general official national anthem, except for certain defined occasions. GSTQ was now to be used on more occasions than previously, but that didn't change AAF's status as the official anthem for general use. | |||
Fraser then decided to poll the entire nation, not just the 60,000 the ABS had polled. ''"The National Song Poll was held on 21 May 1977, at the same time as four referendum proposals. AAF was the clear choice of the voters. The Minister for Administrative Services then announced that the anthem was Advance Australia Fair."'' (Parl Handbook) | |||
:So, the anthem that had been deemed the official anthem by Whitlam in 1974 was confirmed by the voters in 1977, and the Fraser government’s announcement simply reflected that result. It could hardly have done otherwise. It was now more “official” than ever, because (a) it now had the imprimatur of the entire nation, and (b) had been declared the national anthem by 2 successive governments from opposing sides of the political divide. | |||
What happened in 1984? I seem to recall this coming out of left field. There had been no great public debate about the anthem in the intervening years since 1977, because the matter was settled. AAF had been our official national anthem since 1974, except for minor fiddling in 1976 about its use on regal etc occasions. What Hawke did was to (a) change the sexist wording “Australia’s sons” to “Australians all”; (b) define exactly which verses the official anthem consisted of; (c) re-invented GSTQ as the Royal Anthem; and (d) gained a greater degree of “officialness” for both AAF and GSTQ by having the Governor-General formally proclaim them. This was widely hailed as a sort of birth of AAF in its official capacity, but that wasn’t so. I suppose one could argue that AAF in the precise form we now know it only came into being in 1984, but AAF in a slightly different version had already had official status for 10 years, and there is obviously a continuity that we can't pretend isn't there. | |||
So I now come to our lead para: ''"... the song was first performed in 1878, but did not gain its status as the official anthem until 1984. Until then, the song was sung in Australia as a patriotic song. In order for the song to become the anthem, it had to face a vote between the Royal anthem God Save the Queen and the "unofficial anthem" Waltzing Matilda.'' | |||
:For the reasons I stated above, this is wrong. It had been official since 1974. It was confirmed as “official” in 1976 and again in 1977, and became, if you like, “super-official” in 1984. The para also suggests that the 1984 officialdom more-or-less immediately followed a popular vote, which reads as if the vote happened in 1984 or late 1983. In fact it happened in 1977. So, even if we accept that this version of events is correct (which I don’t), it still confuses the timeline and connects events that were only marginally related, and separated by 7 years. | |||
I also take issue with the wording of ''"Other songs and marches have been influenced from Advance Australia Fair, such as the Australian Vice-Regal salute"''. I understand the Vice-Regal Salute was not just “influenced”, but completely changed, from the first verse of GSTQ, to the first verse of AAF. | |||
Any comments before I make a start on some edits along the lines outlined above? -- ] (]) 01:07, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:All looks good. Except that these government sources say nothing about what happened after the 1977 plebiscite. Maybe nothing did happen, and there really was no change between 1976 and 1984? But if there was some sort of proclamation by Fraser, we should find it and add it. | |||
:Also something on sport would be good. By my reading of it, both the 1974 and 1976 proclamations meant AAF was played at Olympic/Commonwealth Games medal ceremonies from 1974 onwards. (Not that there was any cause to use it in 1976!). ] (]) 01:51, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::The Parl Handbook says, of the 1977 plebiscite, ''"The Minister for Administrative Services then <u>announced</u> that the anthem was Advance Australia Fair"''. Slightly odd choice of words, since it had already been announced as the national anthem by the previous government 3 years earlier. Maybe "confirmed" would have been a better word. The first time there was ever a formal G-G Proclamation was in 1984; but that was for the reasons I stated above, and it did not introduce an officialness that wasn't already there. It just elevated it, perhaps. What happened between 1977 and 1984? Not much, afaik. That's because nothing needed to happen; we had an official national anthem. I think there may have been some minor community debate about how best to teach schoolkids the words; and whether it was ok or not for sportspeople not to sing it prior to major games or at the Olympics, just because they hadn't bothered to learn the words. Monarchists might have been mounting some rear-guard action to have GSTQ restored. But it was never front-page stuff in 1977-1984, from my memory. Which is why I said the 1984 proclamation came from out of left-field. -- ] (]) 02:12, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Maybe he undid the 1976 change and reverted to the 1974 status, i.e. AAF for all but royal occasions? Just a guess, because otherwise we were using GSTQ for defence and vice-regal occasions as late as early 1984. ] (]) 02:19, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::Yep, we do need some authoritative info about exactly when GSTQ was to be used, and the history of changes to its use between 1974 and 1984. Interestingly, the 1974 and 1977 announcements did not, afaik, specifically say that GSTQ was no longer considered the national anthem. They said that AAF was now the national anthem, so maybe it wasn't necessary to state the obvious. This was all cleared up in 1984 when GSTQ was given the new moniker of Royal Anthem and rules for its use were laid down (which were virtually identical to the rules Whitlam had decided in 1974). It all came a little unstuck at the 2006 Melbourne Commonwealth Games, though, about which there was a ''lot'' of debate. But that's a different issue from the one about which tune was the official anthem and from when. -- ] (]) 02:30, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::Late thought. All the sources I've seen focus on 19 April 1984 as the date on which it supposedly became "official". What we really need to counter this cemented-in date is the date of Whitlam's 1974 announcement. -- ] (]) 04:12, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::There's nothing "supposed" about the 1984 date. That's the date on which the GG proclaimed AAF to be the national anthem and green and gold the official colours, so passing those things into law. Before then, AAF wasn't actually officially the anthem. Governments had just announced it to be so but it wasn't law. In fact Fraser went against the polls and changed it back and it wasn't until the next Labor government that AAF became the anthem again. --] (]) 05:32, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::Answering my earlier sports question, AAF was played at the 1980 Olympics. The author (]) says ''"It was the first time ever 'Advance Australia Fair' was played as our national anthem"'' though I suspect he's using a bit of license there. ] (]) 05:50, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
(resetting indent) When a government announces that pensions are to be increased from 1 July, or that some tax rort is going to be stopped, or that some defence program has been approved, are those not official announcements? If the government announces that AAF is now the national anthem, how is this not official? Maybe not formal, but still official. | |||
Do Governor-General proclamations have the force of law? I don’t think they do, generally speaking. Exceptions would include proclamation of regulations made under an act of parliament; the act makes provision for the G-G to make regulations, and the way they come into effect is via a formal proclamation and a gazette notice. But matters relating to national symbols are not part of the law of the land, just part of our cultural deposit. There’s no act of parliament relating to national symbols afaik, apart from the Flags Act. With that one exception, our symbols can be changed on the whim of a government, and the G-G has to comply if there’s any proclamation involved. The Rudd government could, if it wanted, decide that the Australian national animal is the cane toad, make an announcement, and that would be that. That announcement satisfies the minimum requirement for establishing a symbol, and the G-G would not have to be involved if they didn’t want him to be. | |||
The two sources you give are inconsistent in some ways. | |||
*The Waltzing Matilda (WM) site says that AAF was made the “official anthem” by Whitlam. The Parliamentary Handbook (PH) site says Whitlam “changed the anthem to Advance Australia Fair”, but doesn’t use the word “official”. | |||
*WM says that Fraser reinstated GSTQ as the national anthem, but declared AAF to be the National Song. PH makes no mention of a national song except for the National Song Poll. In fact, it suggests that AAF continued to be the national anthem, because GSTQ was only reinstated “for royal, vice-regal, defence and loyal toast occasions. Advance Australia Fair was played '''on all other official occasions'''”, which means most occasions. In case there was any doubt about this, it also says, explicitly, “The Minister for Administrative Services then announced that the anthem was Advance Australia Fair." | |||
*WM says that AAF “finally and permanently” became the official anthem in April 1984. Apart from the issue of when something becomes “official”, the proclamation to which he refers is not permanent. It could be changed tomorrow by government decision, and the G-G would have no choice but to comply. -- ] (]) 12:32, 13 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:On pensions etc - The sorts of thing that you speak of are made under the authority of the appropriate minister who is acting under an already existing Act of Parliament (ie the law), usually under the regulations that are in force. Changes to Acts of Parliament require direct action by the whole parliament, which doesn't really need to involve itself in, or have time for, minor changes like increasing pension rates so Acts provide for a set of regulations and give individual ministers power to change things necessary for day to day implementation of Acts. | |||
::Not necessarily. If Wayne Swan called a press conference and said that XYZ tax minimisation scheme was going to be outlawed ASAP, what act of parliament is he invoking? The elimination of such a scheme may involve the amending of a single act, or various acts. But the announcement of the decision to amend is simply the communication of the fact that the government has made a decision to introduce legislation to the parliament proposing to make these amendments. They’re not law yet; and if the Senate isn’t happy, they may never be law. But Swan’s announcement is still an official announcement that might have to taken into account in certain legal proceedings. -- ] (]) 00:56, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Nothing you've said is inconsistent with what I wrote, except "Not necessarily". As you've pointed out, calling a press conference and making an announcement doesn't make something law. The appropriate Act(s) still need(s) amending unless the Act or regulations already provide for something to be implemented without needing changes to the Act. The minister has to work within the boundaries of the Act and regulations and something like outlawing a particular tax minimisation scheme may or may not be operating within the boundaries. Official announcements don't always lead to anything. "L.A.W. Law tax cuts" and "By 1990 no Australian child will live in poverty" are two priministerial decrees that immediately come to mind. Could a child living in poverty succeed in a legal action taken against the government of the basis of Hawke's decree? I doubt it. --] (]) 08:50, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::With respect, you're the one who introduced the topic of law, AussieLegend. I have never said, and I do not believe, that the national symbols - with the sole exception of the National Flag - are part of Australian law. I have been talking about when they become "official", and how one might best gauge that. This distinction relates to some of your later posts too. -- ] (]) 03:29, 18 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:As far as I'm aware (after searching) there's no provision for any minister to declare that any song is now the national anthem with the authority of an Act of Parliament or an Executive Proclamation. | |||
::By your reasoning, Whitlam’s pronouncement on 8 April 1974 did not have the effect of ditching God Save the Queen and replacing it with Advance Australia Fair, because there was no formal proclamation by Hasluck (or later by Kerr). If we accept that position, then what did Fraser think he was doing in 1976, when he amended the now limited circumstances under which GSTQ was to be sung, to make them not quite so limited? If AAF had no formal status whatsoever, why wouldn’t GSTQ be sung on 100% of occasions, as it was prior to 8 April 1974? | |||
:::The point you're missing here is that no individual can change a law by themselves. Changing the national anthem was not changing a law, it was just changing a policy. If somebody had wanted to use GSTQ as the national anthem after Whitlam's announcement they were quite in their rights to do so and many did just that. I remember refusing to stand and sing the national anthem on more than one occasion because the anthem that was being used was GSTQ and I supported AAF. --] (]) 08:50, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::So if we're talking about matters to do with policy, and not to do with law - a position with which I entirely agree (see above) - why introduce the subject of law in your opening sentence? -- ] (]) 03:29, 18 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::If AAF wasn’t the national anthem between 1974 and 1984, and GSTQ was, then we must have had a situation where 2 prime ministers supported an arrangement under which: | |||
::*the national anthem was downgraded to be played only on royal-related (and later some other) occasions, and | |||
::*AAF, although it was not the official national anthem, was officially sanctioned for use on all other occasions (which means the vast majority of occasions), in place of the real official national anthem. | |||
::Why on Earth would they do that? Why would they confuse the Australian people so badly? If a question had been asked in a quiz program in 1975 or 1976 “What is Australia’s National Anthem?”, who could possibly have given an answer with any confidence of being correct? Even Barry Jones would have struggled to answer it. -- ] (]) 00:56, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::I'm afraid that you'd have to ask the PMs in question why they didin't ask for a royal proclamation. I'll touch on this later. --] (]) 08:50, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Regarding GG proclamations - I suggest that you familiarise yourself with the Australian Constitution, which is the overriding document for all laws made in Australia. As the Queen's representative the GG has certain powers that exceed those given to the parliament. Making proclamations is one of them. The 1984 proclamation was made on the advice of the PM and therefore has the full force of the law behind it. The previous announcements were made by PM's without royal assent and without the backing of the parliament in the form of an Act. They really had little more authority, compared to the 1984 proclamation, than you or I declaring Kylie Minogue's (awful) version of "Locomotion" to be the new anthem. | |||
:"It could be changed tomorrow by government decision, and the G-G would have no choice but to comply." - That's not actually the case. Power of veto is one of the GG's reserve powers. While the GG would normally comply with the parliament's decision, he's not obligated to. --] (]) 02:47, 14 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::With the greatest respect, I think you yourself might do a bit of boning up about the machinery of government. You’ve confused a number of things. There’s nothing in the Constitution giving the the parliament any power to make laws in respect of national symbols. Nevertheless, it certainly exercised such a power when it passed the Flags Act 1953. So I assume the power is implied somewhere (I am no constitutional expert). And therefore I suppose they could bring all the other symbols under the protection of an act of parliament. But they haven’t done so. All the other national symbols have come into being NOT through such an act, but through either Royal Letters patent or Governor-General proclamation. These are uses of the reserve powers of the Crown, about which the Constitution is silent. They are part of the institutions of the Westminster system, but they are not laws of the land as such. The 1984 proclamation was indeed made on the advice of the PM, and it is fully formal and official, but it does not have the power of any law behind it. When the G-G makes a proclamation under the authority of a particular act, there's a reference to that act in the proclamation. But he can proclaim other matters about which there's no act of parliament. The 1984 proclamations on AAF and the national colours were examples of this. Stephen was advised to make the proclamation by Hawke, and he obliged (although, as you correctly point out, he could have said No). Rudd could, theoretically, advise Jeffery to issue an amending proclamation making "Locomotion" the new anthem. Parliament would not be involved, just as they weren’t involved in 1984, 1977, 1976, or 1974. That's not to say parliament wouldn't later have something to say about it; and they might perhaps seek to censure the government; but at the end of the day, even if the government were censured, and even if the government were forced to resign over the affair, the proclamation about "Locomotion" would still stand, until a later PM advised the G-G to change it back to AAF or whatever. (I'm going to extremes here, obviously, to make an argument about process and machinery of government. I'm not even remotely suggesting that any of these things are ever actually going to happen.) | |||
:::I suggest that you re-read what I wrote. The proclamation regarding the anthem and Australian colours was made the GG who ''does'' have the authority to make such a proclamation. As for your comments about Rudd, it's highly unlikely that the GG would agree to make such a proclamation solely on the PM's suggestion. He'd need backup to show that it was in the best interests of the nation or that the nation supported it, possibly in the form of results from a plebicite. This is probably one reason why earlier PMs didn't approach the GG. --] (]) 08:50, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::Of course the GG would have acted on the PM's advice. By convention, he always does. (Constitutional Crisis aside). ] (]) 10:04, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::In any case, confusion seems to reign supreme on this entire question of when the national anthem changed and under what circumstances. No two sources I’ve seen (I have about 10) give a consistent version of events. Even DFAT differs significantly from It’s an Honour, which differs from the Parliamentary Handbook. One would think at least all the official sources might speak with one voice on this question, but there you go. I’m going to do some analysis of my sources and identify all the inconsistences so we can focus on finding out what really happened and when, but it’ll take a little while. -- ] (]) 00:56, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::You need to ask yourself, if the anthem was official before the GG's proclamation why did he need to make the proclamation? The answer is obviously that it wasn't official. That's why the proclamation date is the date that is generally accepted. --] (]) 08:50, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::I think I addressed this right back at the start when I called it "super-official". Things can have official status prior to a proclamation, or an act of parliament. The ] was "official" - in every ordinary understanding of the word - ever since 1902 when Edward VII approved it. As far as I know, he simply gave his agreement but there was no proclamation about it. But I want to do some more analysis and research before getting too much more involved in discussion. Thanks for the dialogue so far. Cheers. -- ] (]) 03:29, 18 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
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In the history section, I think it's worth mentioning that although Gough Whitlam pushed to have Advance Australia Fair as the National Anthem, it was not sung as such in most situations. Many people stayed with God Save the Queen. I think it's also worth mentioning that in the publicity for the 1977 vote on the issue the matter was presented to the people as a Referendum and the words were included. I worked a polling booth that day, and we were instructed to say the vote on the National Anthem and National Song were a part of the referendum and we were voting on the songs as written on the papers displayed. The vote results were to retain God Save the Queen as the National Anthem and Advance Australia Fair was the National Song, which could be sung in place of the National Anthem unless the Governor-General or a member of the Royal Family were present; the choice of which you sang was up to the organisers of the event. The wording voted on and used opened with "Australian sons let us rejoice." This was voted on by the people, and those were the official words until 1984. | |||
Another point that should be mention is that Bob Hawke and his government did NOT, at any stage, refer to the people their decision to change the National Anthem by decree or to change the words, it was never put back before the people for discussion. The first the majority of the population knew about it was when the Governor-general made the declaration and it was in the papers. I'm also surprised that the copyright owners of the words and music did not take them to court for changing the words. It's also worth mentioning that a lot of older people do not recognise the current wording as valid wording or the National Anthem, as the changes were pushed on them by the government without any discussion with the people. | |||
These matters should be included in this article. | |||
On a side issue, I'm waiting for someone to make a period film set prior to 1984, with people singing the modern words created in 1984. Talk about a simple way to mess up. ] (]) 11:56, 8 March 2010 (UTC) | |||
== and the answer 2 ur question - yes a scotsman did compose the song ! == | |||
hey i was just wondering why did a scotsman invent there anthem ?! | |||
] (]) 18:44, 13 June 2010 (UTC) | |||
:The composer was permanently living in Australia at a time before Federation. --] (]) 21:30, 13 June 2010 (UTC) | |||
::The composer lived and died before Australia had separate citizenship, making him in fact a ]. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 08:21, 19 April 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
== Music == | |||
Did Peter Dodds McCormick come up with the tune? | |||
Did I read somewhere that a German composed it 200 years before. | |||
] (]) 09:14, 26 March 2011 (UTC) | |||
:According to a letter that he wrote to my grandfather, which is now in the National Library, he wrote the music after he got home. --] (]) 09:43, 26 March 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: What do you mean - "got home"? -- ] </font>]] 20:25, 26 March 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::It's ], in the quote from the letter: "''On the way home in a bus, I concocted the first verse of my song & when I '''got home''' I set it to music.''" --] (]) 03:54, 27 March 2011 (UTC) | |||
==VADALISM== | |||
over the last few days everytime i have gone here i have noticed some idiot keeps altering the lyrics to appear upside down and backwards. i have changed it when i can be cared to rewrite it but frankly its a pain and my knowledge of wiki editing is pretty limited so i am manually doing it each time. can someone lock the lyric section or put somehting in to stop the vandals? if this is done for a legit reason then i apologise but it makes no sense when compared to other anthems on wiki] (]) 04:00, 13 June 2012 (UTC) | |||
:Are you sure it's ''this'' article you're talking about? The only evidence of what you're talking is from today. --] (]) 05:58, 13 June 2012 (UTC) | |||
==Why was he born so beautiful?== | |||
Can anyone here shed any light on the origin of the birthday ditty ''Why was he born so beautiful, Why was he born at all?''?. I ask here because there's a strong connection to ''Advance Australia Fair'', although it was originally set to a different melody, the hymn tune "Ellacombe". | |||
I've raised a question at ]. We've got references as far back as 1928 at this stage, but it clearly predates that. I'm most interested in who wrote the original words, when and why. -- ♬ ] ♬ </sup></font>]] 20:01, 9 July 2012 (UTC) | |||
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:* The lyrics of the Yugambeh version can be obtained for free from the . It was performed at the ], on February 12, 2011 by students of the ]. The NRL has made of the entire match, including the performance of the national anthem, accessible for free on its website. You may need to register and set up an account to gain access, but this is free. Later that same year, on May 23, Tyrone Drahm and Alec Warner performed this version at the launch of the Dreamworld Reconciliation Action Plan (RAP). of their performance. | :* The lyrics of the Yugambeh version can be obtained for free from the . It was performed at the ], on February 12, 2011 by students of the ]. The NRL has made of the entire match, including the performance of the national anthem, accessible for free on its website. You may need to register and set up an account to gain access, but this is free. Later that same year, on May 23, Tyrone Drahm and Alec Warner performed this version at the launch of the Dreamworld Reconciliation Action Plan (RAP). of their performance. | ||
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I don't think it's fair or correct to say that the viceregal salute has been influenced by Advance Australia Fair, because it was either established custom or some type of regulation or law that dictated the inclusion of part of the country's national anthem in the salute. That is to say (at least as far as I can tell), when a viceregal salute is wanted, part of the home country's national anthem *will* be in there, that's simply how it's done. Its inclusion would therefore be expected and required, not a result of any influence from this particular anthem. ] (]) 13:01, 7 July 2021 (UTC) | I don't think it's fair or correct to say that the viceregal salute has been influenced by Advance Australia Fair, because it was either established custom or some type of regulation or law that dictated the inclusion of part of the country's national anthem in the salute. That is to say (at least as far as I can tell), when a viceregal salute is wanted, part of the home country's national anthem *will* be in there, that's simply how it's done. Its inclusion would therefore be expected and required, not a result of any influence from this particular anthem. ] (]) 13:01, 7 July 2021 (UTC) | ||
== Lyrics == | |||
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I have had a look at the image on this page of Advance Australia Fair and I am pretty sure that the word ‘young’ has become ‘one’?. Anyway, if anyone could change it that would be great. Thanks! ] (]) 03:56, 1 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Do you mean the infobox image? That image is from an 1878 postcard so use of "young" is correct. Regardless, the words of Advance Australia Fair are as they were up to 1984. Only the words used as the National Anthem, which is a variant, are changed. --] (]) 08:27, 1 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
Oh ok thanks ] (]) 20:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
== McFarlane Cowriter == | |||
It is commonly accepted that Advance Australia Fair was first published under the pen-name "Amicus", Latin for "Friend", and attributed to McCormick who later published under his own name. The decendents of John McFarlane passed down orally the story of John McFarlane, a teacher colleague of Peter Dodds McCormick, writing it together, with McFarlane penning the music and first verse. | |||
https://adb.anu.edu.au/biography/mccormick-peter-dodds-7323 | |||
The wording implies clarity to who "friend" was at the first publishing, should that be less absolute in phrasing? ] (]) 20:52, 26 December 2023 (UTC) | |||
== Sons vs All == | |||
Why does the lyric under The lyrics published in the second edition (1879) were as follows: say Australian's all, when the linked reference at says Australia's sons? ] (]) 02:07, 6 June 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I think the article's wording is correct, though it can take a careful reading see that. In 1879 the word "sons" was used, but it was changed to "all" in 1984, when it became the national anthem. ] (]) 03:52, 6 June 2024 (UTC) |
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Two "Eora" versions
One version from the Darug website, another reported in the papers. The orthography of the latter is pretty bad, but they're obviously completely different. Any idea what the history of this is? Has the first version ever been performed in a non-aboriginal context? — kwami (talk) 21:01, 5 December 2020 (UTC)
- There are a couple of problems with the article's coverage of these indigenous-language versions of Advance Australia Fair:
- The first sentence of the Dharawal lyrics section of the article mistakenly characterises Dharug as the language spoken by the Dharawal people. The Dharug and Dharawal are separate groups, each with their own language, although I believe the languages are thought to be so closely related that each was intelligible to the speakers of the other.
- This Dharawal version is mistakenly quoted as the one performed by Corey Kirk at the third 2010 state of of origin NRL match. Kirk's performance was actually of this version, slightly shortened by omission of the first four-bar phrase "iyura marriyalabilya ngyina guulyangarri". Here's a YouTube clip of the performance. Judging from this newspaper report of the performance, Richard Green, the author of its lyrics, asserts that they're in the Dharug language.
- A version reported as having been sung at the Wallabies vs Pumas rugby test on December 5, 2020, by Olivia Fox, is said by the article to be in the Dharug language. This may well be true, but neither of the cited sources says that. What they say is that it was sung in "Eora language" or "the language of the Eora nation". For all I know, it may well be the case that Eora is the same as, or a dialectal variant of, Dharug, but my impression is that there is some dispute about this amongst the local descendants of these indigenous groups.
- There are (at least) two other versions of Advance Australia Fair in this group of languages:
- One version, Naluyan Australiagal, was written by Matthew Doyle for the children of the Soldiers’ Settlement School, Matraville, and published by the Australian Children's Music Foundation in 2016. Here's a YouTube clip of a performance of this version by children of that school. According to the ACMF's pamphlet describing this version, it's in "a combination of Dharawal and Dharug languages".
- Another version, Barayabanyi Australiagal, was written by Jeremy Steele and published on his blog in 2016. The term "Biyal-Biyal", used by Steele to refer to the language of this version appears to be a synonym for "Eora".
- There have been several other public performances of versions of Australia's national anthem in at least four other Australian indigenous languages: Luritja, Yugambeh, Pitjantjatjara, and Ngunnawal.
- In 2010, a Luritja woman, Alison Anderson, and singer-song writer, Ted Egan, translated Advance Australia Fair into Luritja, and in 2011 published a kit of materials aimed at teaching the song to schoolchildren, and promoting the translation of Advance Australia Fair into other indigenous languages. According to an article in The Sydney Morning Herald in July 2011, the Australian Government committed funding of AU$130,000 to the distribution of 5,000 of these kits to schools across Australia.
- The lyrics of the Yugambeh version can be obtained for free from the Yugambeh Museum website. It was performed at the 2011 NRL indigenous all stars match, on February 12, 2011 by students of the Aboriginal Centre for the Performing Arts. The NRL has made a video of the entire match, including the performance of the national anthem, accessible for free on its website. You may need to register and set up an account to gain access, but this is free. Later that same year, on May 23, Tyrone Drahm and Alec Warner performed this version at the launch of the Dreamworld Reconciliation Action Plan (RAP). Here's a YouTube clip of their performance.
- Here's a YouTube clip of the performance of a version in Pitjantjatjara on September 10, 2011.
- According to the Canberra Times, the Gondwana Children's choir performed a version of the national anthem with a verse in Ngunnawal at Australia's Parliament House on September 6, 2017. Here's a YouTube clip of the Gondwana choirs performing this version of the anthem. The Canberra Times's assertion that this was the first translation into Ngunnawal may not be accurate, however. Some time between 2005 and 2010 a singer performed a version of the national anthem purporting to contain a verse in Ngunnawal, at a public event in Canberra (either Skyfire or New Year's day festivities—I don't remember which). Unfortunately, I haven't been able to track down the source where I saw this reported a year or two after it happened, or any other source which mentions it.
- 2001:8004:1D72:7930:70B9:B0DC:42CE:9F7A (talk) 14:10, 6 January 2021 (UTC)
Fair - what does it mean now, and what did it mean when the song was written?
When I look at http://webstersdictionary1828.com/Dictionary/fair the definition of fair begins:
FAIR, adjective
1. Clear; free from spots; free from a dark hue; white; as a fair skin; a fair complexion. hence,
Recent definitions and use of "fair" has clearly changed and many people now intend it in an almost exactly opposite meaning. They intend to include all people of all colours. Surely, the intention of the original author is relevant, and also relevant is the intention of the current users of the song.
How should this be discussed or ignored in the article? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2406:3400:311:5440:5F0:817E:7B1C:494F (talk) 03:04, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
- I have wondered the same thing myself. It's hard to get into the head of someone back in 1878. We cannot add anything without reliable sourcing, and I don't know where we would find anything to help. HiLo48 (talk) 03:33, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
Peter Dodds McCormick also wrote another song, "Awake Awake Australia", with similar lyrics regularly using the term "Australia fair", http://lachlan.bluehaze.com.au/aaf/awake.html — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2406:3400:311:5440:64DE:38BE:D942:A4DF (talk) 21:29, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
From " How fair is fair? the colour of justice in Australias official anthem " https://journal.media-culture.org.au/mcjournal/article/view/1964
"This paper asks, very simply, what is the meaning of the word fair in the title and the song." and "This song is specifically about the civilising process, about the white man's burden, as it applied to this particular far-flung reach of empire." and "The progress of the white race over the continent is an advance" — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2406:3400:311:5440:CC10:777E:73A1:E81B (talk) 22:37, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
Wikionary gives the following among its definitions:
- fair (archaic or literary): Beautiful, of a pleasing appearance, with a pure and fresh quality.
- Monday's child is fair of face.
- There was once a knight who wooed a fair young maid.
I'm sure he'd have been using a literary meaning. Hence, beautiful. A "fair young maid" could just as easily be a brunette as a blonde. -- Jack of Oz 07:15, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
I expect that the best source for this would be the Oxford English Dictionary online edition, available through institutional libraries subscribing to it (I don't have such access at the moment). It gives literary and other examples. Errantius (talk) 08:18, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
- Lots of speculation here. I'll add my own. Maybe the word's meaning is related to that in a fair go. HiLo48 (talk) 08:52, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
- Actually both literary and your suggestion are correct. at least that's what he told my grandfather. --AussieLegend (✉) 17:29, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
Rationale for “one and free”
I disagree that it's at all clear what the rationale for changing “young” to “one” is. The official media release (https://www.pm.gov.au/media/australians-one-and-free) states that it was changed “for all Australians”.
“'During the past year we have showed once again the indomitable spirit of Australians and the united effort that has always enabled us to prevail as a nation. It is time to ensure this great unity is reflected more fully in our national anthem,' the Prime Minister said.”
A part of the reason may be to recognise Aboriginal history, but nothing suggests that it is intended only to recognise that. See: “Also, while Australia as a modern nation may be relatively young, our country’s story is ancient, as are the stories of the many First Nations peoples whose stewardship we rightly acknowledge and respect.” Steepleman (t) 07:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- As I indicated, the reason is everywhere on the internet. The wording of the PM's press release makes it clear that the change was made to be inclusive of Australian Aboriginals and everyone has accepted that as the reason. Ironically, Australia as a nation did not formally exist until only 120 years ago and even if you go back to the First Fleet when we were only a British colony, that's only 232 years ago, which is pretty young for a nation. --AussieLegend (✉) 08:01, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- The press release indicates that it is one reason (and your sources suggest that it is more recognising the history of Aboriginal people), but that was not the sole purported purpose. “It is time to ensure this great is reflected more fully in our national anthem.” Steepleman (t) 12:30, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- The change was the result of an older proposal by the NSW Premier. If it was anything more than acknowledgement of the Aboriginal people, then "young and free" did not need to be changed as "young" still applied. The change to "one" was specifically to recognise that Aboriginal society is not young. --AussieLegend (✉) 12:47, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- I thnk that a clarificatory ref was needed and have added the first of those suggested by AussieLegend. Errantius (talk) 13:34, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- The change was the result of an older proposal by the NSW Premier. If it was anything more than acknowledgement of the Aboriginal people, then "young and free" did not need to be changed as "young" still applied. The change to "one" was specifically to recognise that Aboriginal society is not young. --AussieLegend (✉) 12:47, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- The press release indicates that it is one reason (and your sources suggest that it is more recognising the history of Aboriginal people), but that was not the sole purported purpose. “It is time to ensure this great is reflected more fully in our national anthem.” Steepleman (t) 12:30, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
Key
Is the anthem usually sung in the key that's shown in the example? Some people can't sing that high. A lot of people can sing that high, too - but in my experience even most of those who can are reluctant to do so. TooManyFingers (talk) 12:37, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
Questionable case of "influence"
I don't think it's fair or correct to say that the viceregal salute has been influenced by Advance Australia Fair, because it was either established custom or some type of regulation or law that dictated the inclusion of part of the country's national anthem in the salute. That is to say (at least as far as I can tell), when a viceregal salute is wanted, part of the home country's national anthem *will* be in there, that's simply how it's done. Its inclusion would therefore be expected and required, not a result of any influence from this particular anthem. TooManyFingers (talk) 13:01, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
Lyrics
Hi peoples
I have had a look at the image on this page of Advance Australia Fair and I am pretty sure that the word ‘young’ has become ‘one’?. Anyway, if anyone could change it that would be great. Thanks! Someone764 (talk) 03:56, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
- Do you mean the infobox image? That image is from an 1878 postcard so use of "young" is correct. Regardless, the words of Advance Australia Fair are as they were up to 1984. Only the words used as the National Anthem, which is a variant, are changed. --AussieLegend (✉) 08:27, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
Oh ok thanks Someone764 (talk) 20:17, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
McFarlane Cowriter
It is commonly accepted that Advance Australia Fair was first published under the pen-name "Amicus", Latin for "Friend", and attributed to McCormick who later published under his own name. The decendents of John McFarlane passed down orally the story of John McFarlane, a teacher colleague of Peter Dodds McCormick, writing it together, with McFarlane penning the music and first verse.
https://adb.anu.edu.au/biography/mccormick-peter-dodds-7323
The wording implies clarity to who "friend" was at the first publishing, should that be less absolute in phrasing? Greg (talk) 20:52, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
Sons vs All
Why does the lyric under The lyrics published in the second edition (1879) were as follows: say Australian's all, when the linked reference at says Australia's sons? Jmz668 (talk) 02:07, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- I think the article's wording is correct, though it can take a careful reading see that. In 1879 the word "sons" was used, but it was changed to "all" in 1984, when it became the national anthem. HiLo48 (talk) 03:52, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
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