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== The introduction article should address human rights criticism == | |||
== RfC == | |||
Similar to how Saudi Arabia article addresses the criticism it received from many human rights organizations, this article should address that Israel has been accused of being an apartheid regime or of committing a cultural genocide of Palestinians by a number of experts including the UNHRC, B'Tselem, Amnesty International, among others. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) </span> | |||
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Should the article ] be linked from this article, and if yes, where? | |||
:Possible answers: | |||
*'''No,''' it should not be linked | |||
*'''Yes,''' it should be linked in the lead. | |||
*'''Yes,''' it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph) | |||
cheers, ] (]) 22:20, 22 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Israel being castigated for human rights violations is not fringe nor is it antisemitic-tinged, and absolutely belongs in the lead. The lead skips past that bit of the occupation, and I may try to correct that. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 03:37, 3 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:No. Alleged occupation is already featured too heavily in the article. It certainy has to be described with due weight, but it is by far not the main defining feature of Israel. It's an article about State of Israel, not "everything we hate about Israel" or "all the awful things Israel did to poor palestinians". ]]] 09:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Think we are about due for another RFC.] (]) 12:41, 3 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Alleged occupation? Nonsense. Article leads are supposed to include criticism where present. Israel's occupation is something it has been criticized for routinely, and it merits inclusion. I will be adding to it. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 13:18, 3 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
Any new updates regarding this request? | |||
:I added a bit to the lead on the accusations of apartheid and the settlements. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 15:50, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
of properly sourced material is the latest bit of the denial typical at this page "This one-sided paragraph doesn't present the issue with due weight." Is that some kind of a joke? Properly sourced material is deleted because an editor doesn't like it?] (]) 15:34, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:A little bit of context and counter-argumentation is too much to ask? - <code>]</code><small>]</small> 15:54, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Add whatever you think is missing. Is that too much to ask instead of deleting well sourced material cus you dont like it? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 15:59, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
::Note that the Washington Post saw no need for any "context" or "counter-argumentation", it simply stated these matters as fact. It is true that both hr orgs reported as stated and the results of the surveys are what they are, which part of these facts do you intend to argue with, exactly? Of course you are free to bring sources of your own disputing that these orgs said what they said or that the surveys are wrong or biased or any such thing that you can locate. Simply deleting the material says it all, really.] (]) 16:06, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::The monkey cage is separate site published by WP seems to me like group blog. Hence clearly should be attributed and ] without opposing views ] (]) 16:17, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::Click on the link in order to see how wrong you are.] (]) 16:20, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::On what link? ] (]) 16:21, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::The link to Monkey cage in the WP article, I would have thought you would have done that rather than just giving your personal opinion of what you think it is.] (]) 16:25, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I looked it and says clearly "TMC is an independent site" does there is any editorial board or peer review?I ] (]) 16:29, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Here is a direct link if that helps you https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/2019/06/10/about-monkey-cage/. Any more after fact reasons for the material having been deleted? Oh wait, you didn't delete it, someone else did. I'm sure they will be grateful that you are trying to help them out.] (]) 16:34, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
"the lede should follow the body. this is not covered in the article." Well no, because you just deleted it. Also, since this edit undoes the action of another editor, I think this counts a 1R breach so please be good enough to revert yourself or risk a report to AE.] (]) 16:12, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
===Polling (RfC)=== | |||
What is the policy basis for removing this well sourced material. Tendentious editing may be reported to arbitration enforcement. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 16:21, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
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*'''Yes,''' it should be linked in the lead and the body of the article, attached to content similar to that {{u|Selfstudier}} developed above, and content similar to that {{u|Huldra}} developed in {{oldid2|1258656766}} would serve well in the lede. It's obviously something readers are going to be coming to this page to learn more about, and the information exists on the encyclopedia, the conversations about whether it belongs here or not have laready been had, so there's no reason this page should not serve reader needs. — ] 🚀 <sup>(] • ])</sup> 21:53, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes,''' adding content as Selfstudier's above, preferably at the end of the 21st century paragraph + add a single sentence to the end of lead , ] (]) 22:15, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:I don't understand why it would be necessary to add it as a completely separate paragraph (if we were to add it) instead of just putting at the end of the third paragraph, which is far more related, and less abrupt. ] (])<sup><span style="color: green"><small>Ping me!</small></span></sup> 20:46, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes,''' {{TQ|adding content as Selfstudier's above, preferably at the end of the 21st century paragraph}} and add a single sentence to the <s>end of</s> lead per Huldra, but I would modify their suggested text ''("In 2024, Israel was accused of committing the ])"'' to ''"In 2024, Israel was accused of committing ]"'' or similar. My logic for the change is that the accusation/dispute centres on whether Israel's actions in Gaza constitute genocide ''(or are legitimate self-defence/similar)'', rather than whether the 'Gaza genocide' is being committed by Israel ''(as opposed to some other State or body)'' which Huldra's text otherwise implies.] (]) 07:59, 24 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''', I agree with the inclusion in the lead. ] (]) 16:02, 24 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' to Selfstudier's suggestion in the body per the weight of reliable sources given (I'll leave to others to determine where), with a summary in the lead. Only suggestion is to add the arrest warrants on. '']''<sup>]</sup> 09:29, 25 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' it should be included in the lede and in the body text.--] (]) 14:21, 25 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' similarly to how self has suggested ] (]) 00:09, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No''' Not until a new article about Palestine's genocide against Israel is linked to the Palestine article.<ref name="b920">{{cite web | title=Situation in the State of Palestine: ICC Pre-Trial Chamber I issues warrant of arrest for Mohammed Diab Ibrahim Al-Masri (Deif) | website=International Criminal Court | date=2024-11-21 | url=https://www.icc-cpi.int/news/situation-state-palestine-icc-pre-trial-chamber-i-issues-warrant-arrest-mohammed-diab-ibrahim | access-date=2024-11-26}}</ref>] (]) 01:36, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:See ] and then perhaps think about making a policy based argument or your !vote will likely be ignored by whoever closes this RFC. '']''<sup>]</sup> 02:30, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No''' Given that there is no actual genocide. Very much not. ] (]) 05:06, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No''' The article "Gaza genocide" presents claims that lack broad consensus within the international community and are subject to significant dispute. Linking to such an article may mislead readers into perceiving these claims as established facts rather than contested allegations, thereby compromising the integrity of the host article. ] (]) 20:45, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No''' per MaskedSinger, Allthemilescombined1 and Eladkarmel; feels like including this would unduly shoehorn something in that doesn't belong in the general overview article. ''']'''<span style="border:2px solid #073642;background:rgb(255,156,0);background:linear-gradient(90deg, rgba(255,156,0,1) 0%, rgba(147,0,255,1) 45%, rgba(4,123,134,1) 87%);">]</span> 21:05, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Not in the lede'''. It should be made clear that these are accusations and many sources do not agree with this characterisation. Note that many country articles don't mention genocides in the lede even when there is a consensus that it happened (], ], ] (]), ], etc). ]<sub>]</sub> 21:38, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::] just a question: when you say "nor in the lead; does that mean you think it should be in the body? If so, which paragraph? ] (]) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes'''. There's a relevant section where it can be mentioned: ]. Right now, this article doesn't mention two important things: That the current Prime Minister of Israel, Benjamin Netanyahu, is a fugitive wanted for crimes against humanity by the International Criminal Court, and that Israel is being charged with genocide by South Africa in the International Court of Justice. I think there can be a new subsection in the "Israeli occupied territories" section, that mentions both facts. I see ] has given a sample text. I support that paragraph being added to the relevant section, but I think a mention of the ICC's arrest warrant of the Prime Minister of Israel (and Yoav Gallant's warrant too) could also be added, since it's also international litigation for crimes against humanity in Gaza. Mohammed Deif's arrest warrant doesn't need to be mentioned in this article. I think we can have a new subsection titled "Gaza Strip" that moves text that already exists in the section. So in addition to ]'s text, I would add the first sentence of the ] to the end of it, and make it look like ] (A link to a sandbox page that would show what the article would look like).--] (]) 05:43, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:As far as adding it to the lead, the already existing sentence in the lead, "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations and United Nations officials." seems to be a good enough summary, but I guess I would modify it to "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations, the International Criminal Court, and United Nations officials." The ICC is technically not a UN body, so it should be mentioned separately. But other than that, I think such a sentence would be fine. I'm open to suggestions on this though. ] (]) 05:48, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
<s>*'''No'''. The genocide allegation appears to be, at the moment, primarily a tool of propaganda. Unless substantial new evidence emerges, analyzed by impartial, non-politicized sources and supported by more than two vague statements and casualty figures (which include a significant number of Hamas militants but the Hamas-run Health Ministry prefers not to differentiate militants from civilians), such claims lack the rigor required for inclusion in serious, encyclopedic coverage. ] (]) 06:53, 27 November 2024 (UTC)</s><small>Blocked sock ] (]) 11:08, 12 December 2024 (UTC)</small> | |||
*:"The genocide allegation appears to be, at the moment, primarily a tool of propaganda." This is simply not true. See: ]. ] (]) 07:00, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''No'''. This article is about the State of Israel. Not news. Should the articles about the ], the ], ], and many others feature the various ''proven'' genocides that actually took place, or even in the lead? Might as well say "also known as the Z.E.", in the lead or anywhere, with some extra brackets for good measure? This is a matter of an ongoing armed conflict, with fog of war and disinformation throughout. Not only would it be "commenting on an ongoing investigation" as they say, but entirely inappropriate and irresponsible. ] (]) 11:38, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' Per ], required {{tq|mention of significant criticism or controversies}}, clearly true and which several of the No !votes have acknowledged as being the case. A mention should be added via inclusion within the sentence "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes <s>and</s> crimes against humanity ] ] against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations and United Nations officials." ] (]) 12:10, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Not in the lede''' - a good chunk of the lede is already criticism, so adding additional accusations would seem like POV shoehorning. Not necessarily against inclusion in the body, but there isn't a specific proposal to comment on. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 23:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::] there is a question about whether it should be in the body. ("Yes, it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph") So, if you agree: which paragraph? ] (]) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::{{Re|Huldra}} Relevant material is currently in the body, unless it is reverted. The original dispute was about a sentence being added to the lead not material being added to the body, something which is not usually a source of dispute unless the amount of such material is undue. Option 2 already assumes material present in the body, no?. And option 1 just says no, so the third option is not really necessary. ] (]) 10:36, 4 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::{{Re|Selfstudier}} When I started this RfC on the 22 nov, it wasn't in the body (that was first added the 27th) so the the third option is useful (necessary?) for keeping it there, ] (]) 23:09, 4 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I just think the two things should not be mixed up, this RFC should not attempt to rubber stamp the addition that I made to the body, that should just be subject to the normal editing process. Imagine that I had not added it and people voted option 2? Then there would have had to have been another discussion about what should be in the body, so yes I have attempted to remedy a deficiency in the way the RFC was drafted and hopefully it meets with approval. ] (]) 23:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes in the body and the lede''': There are prominent RS (UN Special Committee, Israeli holocaust scholar ] to cite two examples) supporting the charachterization that Israel has been committing a genocide in Gaza, so there is no reason why this shouldn't be mentioned in the body. Accordingly, lede summarizes the body, so it should include that, given that it is one of the most prominent controversies Israel is facing second to the crime of apartheid in the West Bank (I am in favor of including both in the lede), though admittedly genocide hasn't reached the threshold of being confirmed, that's why for now it can be described as an accusation. The perfect short phrasing in my opinion for the lede can be: {{cquote|Israel's practices in the occupied territories has drawn sustained international criticism for violating the human rights of the Palestinians, including for maintaining an apartheid regime in the West Bank, as well as being accused of committing a genocide in Gaza.}} ] (]) 07:29, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Update to my "admittedly genocide hasn't reached the threshold of being confirmed," that is beginning to change as Amnesty International launched a report today . While this does not yet mean the threshold has been reached, but it gives a whole new significance to the inclusion of the "accusation" to the lede. ] (]) 12:01, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes, both in the lead and body''': Per sources and my understanding of ]. Some of these policies and guidelines are: | |||
::1) ]. ] sources can be used to assess ]. My understanding is that once DUEness is established, Misplaced Pages articles can be kept up to date. This is actually a strength of Misplaced Pages. For example, no one would argue mentioning something about the economy in this article is ]. ] and overview ] sources about Israel would include something about the economy. It could be too much or too little, but something about the economy would be DUE in this article. However, economic stats in this article would probably be much more up to date than many published overview ] sources about Israel such as . | |||
::Similarly, ] sources mention Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict at length. As such, Gaza genocide would be DUE. If in several years, newly published ] sources do not mention this, it can be taken out of the lead. If in several years, both newly published ] and overview ] sources about Israel do not mention this, it can also be taken out of the body. But for now, to keep the article up to date, this is DUE. ('''Update: quote from intro chapter in overview secondary source provided below''' ] (]) 19:17, 3 January 2025 (UTC)) | |||
::Sources are below, I cannot give lengthy quotes due to word count restrictions in ] | |||
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::*Britannica mentions these issues in the lead, although it's more brief than here | |||
::*, Israel entry (accessible through Misplaced Pages library). Partial quote from the lead: | |||
::{{tq2|...That conflict, which became known as the Arab-Israeli conflict, has heavily influenced Israel's development, as security issues have dominated Israeli politics and society since 1948...}} | |||
::*, Israel entry (accessible through Misplaced Pages library). There's nothing similar to the Misplaced Pages lead. The "lead" in encyclopedia entry is just few sentences about geography. But the history section mentions these issues. | |||
::* Israel entry (accessible through Misplaced Pages library). There's no history section, but large coverage, especially under Contemporary politics section. | |||
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::More tertiary sources can be found using Google Books, Google Scholar, or the (for example: ) | |||
::{{small|wording suggestion removed}} | |||
::The above wording makes the lead neutral as only the accusation is added in Wikivoice. Similarly, the text in the body should be NPOV. | |||
::2) ]. Lots of ]. See ]. There are already ] sources about this such as by ]. This source also ties Gaza genocide with Israeli-Palestinian conflict: {{tq|In this urgent, insightful essay, a respected historian places the Israeli-Palestinian war in context, challenging Western attitudes about the region}} | |||
::3) ]. The above proposal would trim the lead word count by something like 26 words. It'd still be more than 400 words, but even many featured articles are longer than 400 words. ] (]) 17:27, 3 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::You linked to four tertiary sources, but I don't see the word "genocide" in any of them? (Britannica links to recent news about it, but that seems temporary.) Maybe this is a sign that our lede's focus should somehow be different, but in terms of accusations of genocide, if anything it seems like a sign that we should omit them. | |||
::I don't think there's any dispute that something like {{tq|accusations that it has committed genocide}} would pass ], but that isn't really an argument for highlighting material in a lede. That comes down mainly to ] and to ], which tell us to {{tq|briefly summarize the most important points covered in an article}}. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 01:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I gave my reasoning for this. | |||
:::This is a recent and ongoing event. The Oxford Encyclopedia of the Modern World, published in 2008, would not have mentioned 2024 events. It's a reliable source, but they are not clairvoyant. | |||
:::My DUE argument was due to heavy coverage of Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict in Israel entries in tertiary sources. | |||
:::If sources published in the next few years do not explicitly mention Gaza genocide, it can be taken out of the body or the lead. | |||
:::But for now, we can keep the article up to date. I believe this is the precedent in Misplaced Pages. Otherwise Misplaced Pages would be several years or longer behind everything if we had to wait for overview ] or ] sources for everything. Once those type of sources covering recent events are available however, those sources would determine how we proceed. ] (]) 11:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''', it should be linked in the lead, at the end of the third paragraph where it discusses war crimes and crimes against humanity. This text has been through various iterations, but would benefit from greater precision by means of specificity. A great many countries have been accused of war crimes, making that a rather generic, not outstanding observation. While it is probably more notable that Israel has been accused of a particularly voluminous number of different war crimes in the post-WWII period, sitting above that are the very specific crimes against humanity in which it has been implicated –namely apartheid and genocide. Now apartheid has already been through the RFC process and denied a mention (based on rationales that grow poorer by the day) but to the question here, yes, it is extremely pertinent to mention the particularly nation-defining crime against humanity of genocide – the so-called crime of crimes. ] (]) 18:32, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' it is notable enough for an article, therefore should be linked. ] (]) 23:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Yes, but not in the lead.''' There's some discussion of genocide in the 21st century section of the article and this link could be put there, but it's not clear why this should be added to the lead. I am '''strongly opposed''' to adding it to the lead and most of the arguments for inclusion into the lead can be discounted on ]/]/] grounds. ] (]) 22:07, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes for the body, no for the lead''' It is certainly notable enough to mention in a relevant part of the article, but I think it is too recent to mention in the lead, since we cannot assess long-term historical importance yet. ] (]) 15:24, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:{{u|QuicoleJR}}, can you point to the relevant ] for your argument? ] (]) 15:32, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::The bar for something being included in the lead is pretty high, much higher than inclusion in the body. According to ], emphasis on material, such as the Gaza genocide, should reflect its relative importance to the topic as described by reliable sources. I think the current state of the lead is fine, although I would also be fine with adding a sentence or two about how Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal. I don't think the Gaza genocide by itself has enough weight to warrant inclusion in the lead. ] (]) 15:42, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::Gaza genocide is part of the Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict, which is heavily covered in Israel entries in ] sources. See the sources above. ] (]) 15:46, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::Yes, and the Israeli-Palestinian conflict certainly warrants inclusion in the lead. However, is the Gaza genocide ''itself'' heavily covered in those entries? It is the level of coverage for the specific topic that matters, not the level of coverage of the wider subject it is part of. ] (]) 15:52, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::See the discussion above. ] (]) 15:59, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::] requires mention of significant criticism or controversies, this fits the bill, it needs no more than a wikilink. ] (]) 16:07, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::It says summarize the most important points. I am simply contending that this is not one of them. Israel is a sizable country with a lot of history, and I don't believe that this has enough DUE weight in reliable sources about Israel as a whole to warrant including prominently in the lead, although I think it is important enough to mention in the body. ] (]) 16:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::To be clear, the Israeli-Palestinian conflict definitely warrants inclusion in the lead, and we could probably add a sentence about the legality of Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank, but I think including the Gaza genocide specifically in the lead would be recentist and UNDUE, especially since the Israel-Hamas war is only covered by "several wars" in the lead. ] (]) 16:15, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::::See the wording suggestion above. This could be added into the lead while trimming the lead. For ], we can look at coverage of Arab-Israeli conflict. If newer tertiary sources in the upcoming years do not explicitly mention Gaza genocide, Gaza genocide can be taken out. Do we have any tertiary sources published in the past few months? | |||
*::::::::If the only sources were newspaper articles, recentist arguments would succeed. However, we have so many secondary sources on Gaza genocide now. ] (]) 16:26, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::::Yes, we have many secondary sources on the Gaza genocide. We also have many secondary sources on a variety of other things, like the 7 October attacks or the ] of Israeli athletes. Those aren't included in the lead either. My question is whether secondary or tertiary sources on the topic of Israel as a whole mention the genocide. If not, it shouldn't be in the lead yet. ] (]) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::::::Assessing DUEness of Munich massacre is easy, since it happened in 1972. Look at tertiary sources. ] (]) 16:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::::::Arguing that we should rush this into the lead because we can't assess long-term importance yet is pure recentism. I'm not saying we can't update the body to add this information, but we should wait on adding it to the lead until the long-term impact is more clear. ] (]) 16:35, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::::::::That wasn't my argument, I won't respond any further to not ] ] (]) 16:38, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::It says {{tq|summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies}} I can assure you this is a prominent controversy. Well, unless you can convince me it isn't. ] (]) 16:19, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::::It is a decently prominent controversy, but the State of Israel has had a ''lot'' of prominent controversies in its short history, and we can't stuff them all in the lead. I think mentioning that their occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal would cover the most important controversy, being their illegal occupation of Gaza and the West Bank. The Gaza genocide is arguably a subtopic of that. For an applicable example from another article, the featured article ] does not mention the atrocities they committed against China in World War II in the lead, even though it was, and still is, a very prominent controversy. Similarly, the lead of ] only gives the Holocaust two words in a sentence about the Nazi government. Similar considerations apply here. ] (]) 16:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::::And this would be exactly one word in the lead, per my suggestion. ] (]) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{od}} {{u|QuicoleJR}}, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? ] (]) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::What do you mean by that? ] (]) 14:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Please provide a recent (second half of 2024 for example) tertiary or overview ] source about Israel, and show that these issues are not mentioned. ] (]) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::The only one I have been able to find is Brittanica, which has been updated recently and makes no mention of the genocide. Very few overview sources have been published in that timeframe, and you are asking me to prove a negative. ] (]) 14:17, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::The ONUS is on you to prove that they ''are'' covered in such sources. ] (]) 14:18, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::And I did provide recent sources below. | |||
::::::Britannica's updates seem superficial. They have in history section, but it seems to stop at a certain point. ] (]) 14:23, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Only in the body''' while it’s a non-insignificant criticism, it’s not sufficiently significant to be included in the lead. Both based on the uncertain status and the recency of the accusation, the lead should instead continue referring to other, certain misconduct, per the relevant policies cited above, instead of referring to a disputed interpretation of some of the very recent actions. ] (]) 23:14, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:{{u|FortunateSons}}, can you please specify "the relevant policies"? ] (]) 16:19, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::], ], ], ] would probably be the most relevant ones ] (]) 08:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::{{u|FortunateSons}}, thank you for clarification. Note that ] and ] are not '''policies''', they are '''explanatory essays'''. You can get more information in ]. | |||
*:::For interpretation of ] and ], we disagree, but this has been discussed above, so I'm not going to get into it again. ] (]) 14:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::Of course, but they are broadly accepted as a concretisation of policy; nevertheless, thank you for the reminder. ] (]) 18:04, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{od}} {{u|FortunateSons}}, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? ] (]) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::What do you imagine this source to be? There are news reports that don't mention genocide, but that not what you mean? ] (]) 14:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Something like or an encyclopedia, but published on second half of 2024. ] (]) 14:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I would defer to the cited Britannica here; more importantly, the fact that we’re discussing less than a handful of sources and a timeframe of 6 Months (or a year) is a strong indication that this is in fact recency bias. ] (]) 15:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{u|FortunateSons}}, Britannica doesn't seem that updated. See above. ] (]) 19:19, 3 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Which seems like a strong indication that there has not been sufficient change to justify us updating either. ] (]) 22:11, 3 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::None have been published to my knowledge, and it is on you to prove that they do exist. ] (]) 17:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Plenty of sourcing, obviously relevant and controversial enough to outweigh proforma objections. ] (]) 17:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{u|QuicoleJR}}, source provided below ] (]) 19:18, 3 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
*'''Not in the lead''' per ]. Would prefer to wait until a court conviction or acquittal has been made to decide. ] (]) 04:10, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:The ] is not recent only the ] is and that is still a significant controversy, regardless. ] (]) 17:08, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::Since 1955, the population of Palestine has steadily increased. The life expectancy has increased, the infant mortality and child death rate has decreased. So I don’t understand how Israel has been genociding the Palestinians if all these numbers are improving for them. ] (]) 00:34, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::Reminder of ] and ]. ] (]) 00:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::Here is a source so it is not OR or NOTAFORUM. The source is a Jewish advocacy group. ] (]) 00:49, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::That isn’t a reliable source for the topic. ''']''' - 02:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::Without even getting into if the advocacy group source you provided is a reliable source, for accusation of genocide, we would use ] sources such as , so the source you provided does not invalidate those, per ]. ] (]) 14:27, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''' should be linked in lead per Iskandar323's reasoning. ] (]) 23:16, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Comment, newer sources''' | |||
:*Overview ] source: . From the '''introduction''' chapter: | |||
::{{tq2|In this context we should not overlook the latest turning point in the history of Palestine – the attack by Hamas on 7th October 2023 on Israeli settlements adjacent to Gaza and the subsequent genocidal war that the state of Israel has carried out in the Gaza strip}} | |||
::'''Although the title says Palestine, it covers Israel too. See the definition on page 3''' in | |||
:*. Although this is an entry about geopolitics, and not an entry about Israel as a country, the prominence of ] is notable. Genocide accusations are also mentioned. | |||
::Given no recent (second half of 2024 for example) overview secondary or tertiary sources about Israel have been provided in this RfC, and given the lengthy coverage of Arab-Israel conflict in older tertiary sources about Israel, and given the above sources, I now think that '''three things are due both in the lead and in the body:''' | |||
::{{Ordered list | |||
|] | |||
|Most recent ] | |||
|]}} | |||
:: ] (]) 14:01, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::The lack of recent overviews (I don't think many have been published) does not mean that we should include these things in the lead. I support adding the Israel-Hamas war, I think the other two would be both be giving UNDUE weight to recent events. ] (]) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::The lack of recent overviews means we have to use what we have (above), while keeping in mind the heavy coverage of Arab-Israeli conflict in older sources. I just pinged you to ask for newer sources though, no need to discuss what we already discussed above. ] (]) 14:26, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Yes''', the available sourcing here and on the related article indicates that it's a major part of the coverage and history of Israel. The arguments against inclusion don't make any sense, either; whether individual editors ''agree'' with it, or whether it's disputed, are reasons to be cautious about the precise wording for how we cover it, but they're not what we use to determine if we cover it at all - that question comes down to how broad and high-quality the sourcing is and how significant they treat it as. And the extensive academic sourcing clearly justifies treating it as a high-profile aspect of the topic worth discussing prominently here. A lead is supposed to contain {{tq|mention of significant criticism or controversies}}; we don't exclude high-profile stuff just because it's controversial. The sourcing disputing it above doesn't help; while it's not terribly high-quality, I'm sure higher-quality sourcing for that perspective exists... but it's written from the perspective of "this is an important and central argument over Israel", ie. a controversy worth covering even if they have a clear perspective on it. The sort of coverage that would be necessary to exclude it isn't just academics who disagree, but sourcing that establishes that it is broadly ''fringe'', which doesn't seem to be the case. --] (]) 15:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
=== Discussion (RfC) === | |||
Ive tagged the article due to the repeated baseless reverts of any material that is critical of Israel, despite our policies demanding their inclusion in the lead and the body. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 16:27, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:This doesn’t seem that actionable an RfC, or that productive a question. The content of the article is what is discussed, and links serve as navigational aids for delving into the content. Considering a link alone in the aether rather misses its purpose. ] (]) 09:02, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Seems that there should be first some material in the body related to the wikilink and ]. {{Re|Huldra}} Suggest you pull the RFC tag on this for now until some material can be put together for the article body. ] (]) 11:07, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Something like this perhaps | |||
:::] is accused of carrying out a ] against the ] by experts, governments, ] agencies, and ]s during ] of the ] in the ongoing ].<ref name="ohchr">{{cite web |author=<!--Not stated--> |date=16 November 2023 |title=Gaza: UN experts call on international community to prevent genocide against the Palestinian people |url=https://www.ohchr.org/en/press-releases/2023/11/gaza-un-experts-call-international-community-prevent-genocide-against |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20231224050530/https://www.ohchr.org/en/press-releases/2023/11/gaza-un-experts-call-international-community-prevent-genocide-against |archive-date=24 December 2023 |access-date=22 December 2023 |website=] |quote=Grave violations committed by Israel against Palestinians in the aftermath of 7 October, particularly in Gaza, point to a genocide in the making, UN experts said today. They illustrated evidence of increasing genocidal incitement, overt intent to "destroy the Palestinian people under occupation", loud calls for a 'second Nakba' in Gaza and the rest of the occupied Palestinian territory, and the use of powerful weaponry with inherently indiscriminate impacts, resulting in a colossal death toll and destruction of life-sustaining infrastructure.}}</ref><ref>{{cite magazine |last=Burga |first=Solcyré |date=13 November 2023 |title=Is What's Happening in Gaza a Genocide? Experts Weigh In |url=https://time.com/6334409/is-whats-happening-gaza-genocide-experts |magazine=] |access-date=24 November 2023 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20231125022352/https://time.com/6334409/is-whats-happening-gaza-genocide-experts/ |archive-date=25 November 2023}}; {{cite news |last=Corder |first=Mike |date=2 January 2024 |title=South Africa's genocide case against Israel sets up a high-stakes legal battle at the UN's top court |url=https://abcnews.go.com/International/wireStory/south-africas-genocide-case-israel-sets-high-stakes-106055104 |access-date=3 January 2024 |work=] |language=en |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240107013809/https://abcnews.go.com/International/wireStory/south-africas-genocide-case-israel-sets-high-stakes-106055104 |archive-date=7 January 2024}};{{Cite web |last=Quigley |first=John |date=3 July 2024 |title=The Lancet and Genocide By "Slow Death" in Gaza |url=https://arabcenterdc.org/resource/the-lancet-and-genocide-by-slow-death-in-gaza/ |access-date=13 July 2024 |website=Arab Center Washington DC |language=en-US |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240713161805/https://arabcenterdc.org/resource/the-lancet-and-genocide-by-slow-death-in-gaza/ |archive-date=13 July 2024}}</ref> Observers, including the ] and ] ],<ref name="Albanese_anatomy_of_a_genocide">{{cite Q|Q125152282|url-status=live}}</ref> have cited statements by senior Israeli officials that may indicate an "]" (in whole or in part) Gaza's population, a necessary condition for the legal threshold of genocide to be met.<ref name="ohchr"/><ref>{{harvnb|Burga|2023}}; {{cite journal |last=Soni |first=S. |date=December 2023 |title=Gaza and international law: The global obligation to protect life and health |journal=South African Journal of Bioethics and Law |volume=16 |number=3 |pages=80–81 |doi=10.7196/SAJBL.2023.v16i3.1764 |doi-access=free}}</ref><ref name="StateCrime">{{cite web |publisher=] |title=International Expert Statement on Israeli State Crime |website=statecrime.org |url=http://statecrime.org/international-expert-statement-on-israeli-state-crime |access-date=4 January 2024 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240106140101/http://statecrime.org/international-expert-statement-on-israeli-state-crime |archive-date=6 January 2024 |url-status=live}}</ref> A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide".<ref name="Brookings">{{cite web |url=https://www.brookings.edu/articles/gloom-about-the-day-after-the-gaza-war-pervasive-among-mideast-scholars/ |title=Gloom about the 'day after' the Gaza war pervasive among Mideast scholars |last1=Lynch |first1=Marc |last2=Telhami |first2=Shibley |date=20 June 2024 |publisher=] |access-date=29 June 2024 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240626215734/https://www.brookings.edu/articles/gloom-about-the-day-after-the-gaza-war-pervasive-among-mideast-scholars/ |archive-date=26 June 2024}}</ref> On 29 December 2023, South Africa instituted ] at the ] pursuant to the ],<ref name=":6">{{Cite news|date=December 29, 2023|title=South Africa launches case at top UN court accusing Israel of genocide in Gaza|url=https://apnews.com/article/south-africa-israel-un-court-palestinians-genocide-ffe672c4eb3e14a30128542eaa537b21|access-date=January 5, 2024|work=]|language=en|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240102144544/https://apnews.com/article/south-africa-israel-un-court-palestinians-genocide-ffe672c4eb3e14a30128542eaa537b21|archive-date=January 2, 2024|url-status=live}}</ref><ref>{{Cite news|last1=Rabin|first1=Roni Caryn|last2=Yazbek|first2=Hiba|last3=Fuller|first3=Thomas|date=2024-01-11|title=Israel Faces Accusation of Genocide as South Africa Brings Case to U.N. Court|url=https://www.nytimes.com/2024/01/11/world/middleeast/genocide-case-israel-south-africa.html|access-date=2024-01-13|work=The New York Times|language=en-US|issn=0362-4331|archive-date=13 January 2024|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240113053852/https://www.nytimes.com/2024/01/11/world/middleeast/genocide-case-israel-south-africa.html|url-status=live}}</ref><ref name="ICJ_SA_proceedings_vs_IL_29Dec2023">{{Cite web|date=December 29, 2023|title=Proceedings instituted by South Africa against the State of Israel on 29 December 2023|url=https://www.icj-cij.org/sites/default/files/case-related/192/192-20231228-app-01-00-en.pdf|access-date=January 5, 2024|website=]|url-status=live|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240105144115/https://www.icj-cij.org/index.php/node/203394|archive-date=January 5, 2024}} </ref><ref>{{Cite press release|date=December 29, 2023|title=South Africa institutes proceedings against Israel and requests the International Court of Justice to indicate provisional measures|issue=2023/77|url=https://www.un.org/unispal/document/icj-southafrica-israel-genocide-29dec2023/|location=The Hague, Netherlands|publisher=]|agency=]|access-date=January 5, 2023|archive-url=https://archive.today/20240105144230/https://www.un.org/unispal/document/icj-southafrica-israel-genocide-29dec2023/|archive-date=January 5, 2024|url-status=live}}</ref> | |||
:::This is just wrt the genocide issue, need something about the arrest warrants as well. ] (]) 15:43, 23 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::It doesn't seem very neutral to cover statements from sources like Albanese without also covering accusations of bias on their part. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 23:36, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::It doesn’t make sense to cover things that aren’t relevant to the topic, like accusations of bias instead of addressing the substance of the statement. ''']''' - 00:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::If we don't want to get into such accusations of bias then we shouldn't be using sources like Albanese in the first place. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 17:00, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::That makes no sense to me. We dont include accusations of bias against the Times of Israel anytime we use them as a source, or the NYTimes, or Benny Morris, or whatever other reliable sources we cite. The ad hominem of "she's biased" is not relevant to the argument she makes or the qualifications she has to make them. At most, such accusations belong in the biography of Albanese, or Morris, or whatever other article that covers the sources themselves, not whenever they are cited. ''']''' - 17:23, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::That's not at all comparable. NYT and Morris are occasionally criticized by both sides for various perceived biases. Accusations of bias against Albanese are far more significant, e.g. with officials from several different governments openly calling her antisemitic or unfit for her role. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 18:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::They are directly comparable, and governments arent reliable sources for anything other than the views of the politicians heading those governments. It is a basic ad hominem, and it has nothing to do with the actual content of her comments. ''']''' - 19:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::It doesn't really make sense to call this an ad hominem, when source selection inherently involves evaluating sources rather than the content of their statements. Surely the ] here would be uninvolved ones with some semblance of objectivity. | |||
::::::::::Covering Albanese's claim here is like covering 's claim that there isn't a genocide. Clearly neither is among the BESTSOURCES, and neither claim is noteworthy enough that it would need to be covered anyway. — ] <sup>]</sup>/<sub>]</sub>\<sup>]</sup> 19:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Biden is a politician speaking as a politician. Albanese is an expert in international law, speaking as an expert in international law. ''']''' - 20:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::I should add that she isn't just speaking as an expert in international law (which she undoubtedly is), but she is speaking as a UN official who is the current ]. To compare her speech with Biden (a non-expert politician who has absolutely no scholarship on the issue and doesn't have an international law background) is ridiculous. ] (]) 18:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::Special Rapporteurs are not UN officials, they are independent experts consulted by the UN, and they remain independent. See ] for an overview. ''']''' - 20:54, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::And Jews and others praising her, no? She must be doing something right. Afaics, she has tended to be ahead of the curve on most matters. ] (]) 19:06, 2 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{talk ref}} | |||
Selfstudier's addition to the body had been removed and was under discussion when Nableezy thought it was a good idea to add it to the LEDE??? I'm sorry, but this has bad faith written all over it; and AE should take that into account. Considering Nableezy's past AE cases, I don't think they should be that confrontational in issues like this. (and no, i didn't removed anything. I merely modified it for the time being) - <code>]</code><small>]</small> 16:30, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:My addition was about settlements and the accusations that Israel is guilty of apartheid. The removal of this material is based on exactly no policy or guideline, only an effort to suppress material an editor dislikes. And yes, hiding the addition is a revert, as it reverse my action of including it. If you do not self revert we can see how AE feels about this. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 16:32, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:Indeed so, I expect to see a self revert momentarily..] (]) 16:36, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Oh dear, looks like a refusal and we did ask so politely.] (]) 16:40, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I tell a lie, did the decent thing after all.] (]) 16:41, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
'''Comment''' Also recent ] had a clear consensus that we don't add anything of that kind to the lead . --] (]) 16:45, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:See no such consensus, I see a line of users offering zero policy basis for their lockstep voting. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 16:47, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
::Its you opinion but it doesn't mean you correct Anyhow ] was not met for such material not then and not now --] (]) 16:49, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::What exactly is the policy basis for removing the material from the body? What exactly is the policy basis for not including the material in the lead? ONUS requires reasons, and so far there have been none given. Just lockstep reverting on the basis of not liking it. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 16:50, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:::::The reason is ] those issues are sufficiently covered in the lead already as per previous discussions --] (]) 16:54, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Yep, also ], I think the evidence on the apartheid front has mounted up sufficiently to justify another look at the whole question and indeed another RFC if editors continue to block well sourced material from being added to the article (with bs excuses one after the other when one doesn't work try some other).] (]) 16:52, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::UNDUE????? UNDUE requires that material that has weight in sources be included. Are you seriously arguing that criticism of Israel's settlement policies does not have weight in reliable sources? Where wass the settlements covered in the lead? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 16:58, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:::::::The settlements are mentioned already, we rehash the previous discussion argument again. You may not agree with it but arguments that presented there are valid --] (]) 17:16, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::The previous RFC was not closed and it is easy enough to see why. I think we have enough material by now for several RFCs about different aspects insufficiently addressed in this article (apartheid, settlement activity, hr abuse, illegal evictions, forced displacement and demolitions of property) for it to be considered as meeting the requirements of NPOV and the neutrality tag should certainly stay until these concerns being expressed here are dealt with.] (]) 17:51, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::In view of the uh...voting issues, any new RFC should be advertised at ] in order to try and achieve a real consensus.] (]) 18:25, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::The only thing about the settlements is the application of Israeli law, which is among the most trivial of things related to the settlements. Israel's settlement program has been explicitly condemned as illegal by the UNSC and by the International Court of Justice. That is a significant criticism and per ] should be included. What is your response to that? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 18:31, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
I've reverted Nableezy's POV tag as I fail to see how it is helpful. Let's be clear: a user not getting their way is not a reason to add a tag, and any user who thinks it does should read ]. If we started a practice of every user adding a POV tag the moment their bold edits are reverted, we'd have tags absolutely everywhere. Given how much discussion there has been over the lede, the fact that a bold edit is reverted is not a POV issue at all. ] (]) 20:48, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The fact that there is a dispute about the neutrality is evident here. Read the tag, ]. This continued censorship is disruptive and tendentious, and it is in fact a blatant example of WP:OWN on your part. And oh by the way, you didnt even attempt to address the issue here. Just attempted to enforce your preferred position and on top of that remove any notice that there is a dispute. OWN indeed. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 21:00, 22 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:: I support the inclusion of the tag. There are good-faith NPOV concerns raised above, and they are sufficiently clear that anyone looking to remove the tag can edit the article to include the missing content. To frame it solely in terms of policy and guideline: {{blist|NPOV: the body of the article should "fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in the published, reliable sources."|per ]: "emphasis given to material should reflect its relative importance to the subject, according to published reliable sources. This is true for both the lead and the body of the article. If there is a difference in emphasis between the two, editors should seek to resolve the discrepancy"|currently, the lead does not mention at all any of the myriad human rights violations or allegations thereof|therefore, we should seek to resolve the discrepancy.}} This could alternatively be done by removing all mention of human rights violations from the body, if the proportion of prominence given to that topic by RS is ''none at all''. ] (]) 21:08, 22 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
If we look at ledes for similar countries such as ] (also occupies another nation since many decades, several human rights issues), the lede here at Israel is already much ''more'' critical of the subject. If we'd try to be a bit consistent, it's hard to see what POV issues exist here when compared to similar cases. ] (]) 10:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The don't look here, look over there argument. Right.] (]) 11:01, 23 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I suggest we make an up to date list of sources and see what they say, that's one way to proceed.] (]) 11:07, 23 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::], consistency is actually a relevant policy. And my comment was meant for users actually here to improve the article, not ] just (ab)using Misplaced Pages to push their own agenda all day long. ] (]) 11:14, 23 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::], which?. I did find ] which seems the most relevant to the applied tag. Which SPA accounts are you referring to?] (]) 11:21, 23 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Tag == | |||
No reply forthcoming so let's see about some sources: | |||
{{resolved}}-tag removed !<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 20:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{cite news|title=Global rights group accuses Israel of apartheid, persecution|url=https://apnews.com/article/west-bank-race-and-ethnicity-middle-east-israel-jerusalem-7fc491f53d6e659d7fb9657e76747d03|date=27 April 2021}} | |||
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{{Re|Moxy}} Reasons for , please? ] (]) 13:15, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Nothing but military info looks like nothing but conflict for 20+ years ...this article is not ]. Need info like ..90s saw first featuring direct election of the prime minister etc. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 13:22, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
<blockquote>In a sweeping, 213-page report, the New York-based Human Rights Watch joins a growing number of commentators and rights groups who view the conflict not primarily as a land dispute but as a single regime in which Palestinians — who make up roughly half the population of Israel, the West Bank and Gaza — are systematically denied basic rights granted to Jews.</blockquote> ] (]) 17:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::You tag says undue not that the section needs updating, which material is undue? And why? ] (]) 13:25, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::undue because its nothing but military history....no memtiom of any other history. Sounds like the most unstable country doing nothing but being at war. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 13:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::History on its own at 5116 words is half an article by itself. A lot is likely undue. ] (]) 13:47, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Agree so much details - over info that can be and is covred in sub articles that can be trimed like :''The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked in July 1947, with a series of widespread guerrilla raids culminating in the Sergeants affair, in which the Irgun took two British sergeants hostage as attempted leverage against the planned execution of three Irgun operatives. After the executions were carried out, the Irgun killed the two British soldiers, hanged their bodies from trees, and left a booby trap at the scene which injured a British soldier. The incident caused widespread outrage in the UK" <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 13:51, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::The section that has been tagged is ], a short section, the material {{tq|The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked...}} is not even in it, that material is in ] section, which has not been tagged. | |||
::::::So did you mean to tag something else? ] (]) 14:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Moxy explained that subsection above, it is just one of a few with similar issues. ] (]) 16:57, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::They haven't explained it, the material they quote is not tagged. ] (]) 16:59, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Sorry I thought I was pretty clear.... the whole section is just about military.... in fact we have two paragraphs for something that's happening in the past year. What we are looking for is substantial historical significant information about the country's social and historic evolution in that time. Best we simply don't regurgitate American news headlines. For example should mention ]... What kind of social human rights progress has there been? In 20 years there must be some sort of legal process that has changed.... democratic decline perhaps? What has happened on the diplomatic front.... like the mass increase in foreign aid? <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 20:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::{{tq|the whole section is just about military}} Which section? The only section that you tagged is the 21st Century section. If you meant to put the tag for the entire history section, then do that, I would also agree with that inline with multiple prior discussions asserting that it was way too long. ] (]) 21:05, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::{{green|Which section?}} Not interested in some sort of gameplay. Your initial post was about a tag in a section this is the topic of the ongoing conversation..... with mention by another and myself about the excess detail overall in the history section with an example that I gave. You either agree it's excessive or you don't.... best course of action would be to come up with some sort of prose for the section.... and a better summary. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 21:33, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::OK, you don't want to admit you got this all backwards, fine by me, bfn. ] (]) 23:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::What you have to ask yourself is does your approach to this conversation help improve that article or not. There is clearly a problem all over the history section...but the info in this tagged section is the topic of conversation...do you have any input what can be done to help the section? Then perhaps we can move on to other sections. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 15:57, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::I asked you what the problems were and your response was to quote something else from an untagged section, so if you can answer the original question that would be good. ] (]) 16:15, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::<s>Best you let someone that is competent deal with the tag</s>. <small>My bad just frustrated that the post has not moved forward in actual improvements. Will address the problem with prose after the content addition dispute is over.</small> <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 18:23, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::Couldn't agree more. ] (]) 18:30, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::What content addition dispute? ] (]) 19:50, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::::Was not aware of . Let's deal with the content issue after all the current concers. Last post from me here.<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 20:01, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::::::<s>I don't see what that has to do with the issue you have been describing in this section.</s>. OK, resolved for now. ] (]) 20:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 1 December 2024 == | |||
:], thanks for the quote. Personally, I think this criticism belongs in the article. Not that my personal opinion matters, but it is a criticism I share, so I'd have no problem with it being added. Having said that, whether it belongs in the lede is a matter for discussion. We don't usually add HRW reports to the lede of country articles. ] (]) 17:57, 23 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | |||
::I wasn't suggesting that we should include the report in the lead, that is a secondary source discussing it and pointing to other sources that have that opinion. What we need is to somehow encapsulate in summary form the most relevant/important hr aspects, not merely the apartheid question (I think significant others might be the settlement project and displacement of Palestinians in general but that is by no means exhaustive).] (]) 18:37, 23 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
In 21st century history, please change | |||
::DUE weight is determined by sources, not by comparing to other articles with bogus analogies. Has Morocco established illegal settlements in occupied territory? Have they been castigated for war crimes by both the UNSC and the ICJ? Is there worldwide coverage of the accusations that Morocco's actions constitute apartheid? No, there isnt. Any other bogus comparison you want to make? The settlement enterprise has been repeatedly and consistently and widely criticized by a huge number of international actors and that criticism has been widely covered in reliable sources. It is a defining feature of Israel in the international arena, and there are literally thousands of sources that discuss it in great depth, and any overview of Israel would cover it. For example, the discusses the settlements, noting ''The Palestinians in the West Bank and eastern Jerusalem have lived under Israeli occupation since 1967. The settlements that Israel has built in the West Bank are home to nearly 500,000 people and are deemed to be illegal under international law, although Israel disputes this.'' Notable controversies belong in the lead, per ]. That Israel has been repeatedly accused of war crimes, by no less the UNSC and the ICJ, is a notable controversy, widely covered in reliable sources. Does anybody dispute that? Does anybody dispute that Israel's settlement enterprise has been widely covered as being a violation of international law? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 23:29, 23 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
{{TextDiff|A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide".|A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars who were polled believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide".}} | |||
::https://www.haaretz.com/israel-news/twilight-zone/MAGAZINE-the-settler-outpost-has-water-its-palestinian-neighbors-don-t-this-is-apartheid-1.10237053 Head "The Illegal Settler Outpost Has Running Water. Its Palestinian Neighbors Don't. This Is Apartheid at Its Starkest" Subhead "The activists who were attacked by Israeli soldiers in the South Hebron Hills were bringing water to the Hamamdi family – who are denied that resource by Israel. Opposite them are the water pipes and electric cables of an outlaw settler outpost." Apartheid linked to illegal settlement activity (including by Israeli law, typically not enforced versus settlers only against Palestinians).] (]) 12:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Lol. Not having access to resources (in this case, tap water) is not what apartheid is, it's just grasping at straws to prove a point. That is actually just a common social-economic disparity. In US big cities, you'll certainly find fancy house not very far from homeless gathering spots. Arabs have more rights and freedoms in Israel than in any arab county. You'll find arabs in the parliament and supreme court. The way jews, women, gays, shias, apostates are treated in the arab world, including Palestine, more closely resembles apartheid (or even genocide) actually. - <code>]</code><small>]</small> 13:24, 24 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::Fortunately for us, your opinion of what constitutes apartheid is irrelevant. Find a source to back you up and I might take you more seriously.] (]) 14:14, 24 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::Kindly read ], if youd like to discuss ''he way jews, women, gays, shias, apostates are treated in the arab world, including Palestine, more closely resembles apartheid (or even genocide) actually'' you can find sources for that and discuss that in those articles or you can start a blog. We have sources here, not personal opinions. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 18:30, 24 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
<s>I'm sorry guys, but (needless to say for lede!). The Monkey Cage is a forum for political scientists, and MESA is a somewhat biased crowd - mostly Arab studies - that has discussed academic boycott of Israel in the past and has issued statements in support of Palestinians - e.g. https://mesana.org/advocacy/letters-from-the-board/2021/05/21/mesa-board-statement-in-support-of-palestinians | |||
Also lede is POV enough against Israel, specially with that crappy sentence "''Israel's occupation of the Palestinian territories is internationally considered to be the world's longest military occupation in modern times.''" (which is not even true, China for examples occupies Tibet since 1950, although it annexed the territory, but that wouldn't stop the anti-Israel crowd from calling the Golan Heights "occupied", despite the fact that Israel annexed that territory too). And the "partial annexation" of the West Bank in lede is disputed too. Israel never annexed parts of that territory, despite previous promises by Netanyahu and others. Regarding the apartheid controversy, it's a loose definition that is discussed elsewhere in article, including links to articles that talk about it extensively. It's not for lede in a million years.--] (]) 14:35, 24 September 2021 (UTC)</s><small>Blocked sock ] (]) 15:24, 19 October 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
"mostly US-based Middle East scholars" is not an identifiable group, the phrase as written doesn't have a concrete definition. Which Middle East scholars' beliefs are being talked about here? The scholars who were polled are being talking about. Adding language that clarifies the source of these statistics and defines the group in question could make the statistics more useful. Thank you for your consideration. ] (]) 17:00, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:While y'all thrashing about to find excuses for Israel (backed up by no sources), here's another source linking all three of the areas I mentioned above, apartheid, settlements and illegal displacement of Palestinians. https://theintercept.com/2021/05/15/israel-apartheid-palestine-jerusalem/ ] (]) 14:39, 24 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I should also give congrats on reaching 500 edits, first of many such that will appear here no doubt.] (]) 14:54, 24 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::That isnt helping. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 17:48, 24 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
Ok, forget apartheid here. Let's focus on the settlements. I repeat my question to anybody challenging the inclusion of a line on the criticism of Israel for its settlement enterprise in the occupied territories. ] requires significant controversies to be included in the lead of articles. Does anybody dispute that Israel's settlement program being widely and routinely castigated as a war crime by the ], , , countless human rights organizations is widely covered in reliable sources? Does anybody dispute that this is a significant controversy, significance as determined by reliable sources? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 17:48, 24 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:A quick look and I find just one reference to settlements in the lead, a wikilink to Israeli law in the West Bank settlements described as "pipelining", that's it unless I missed something. Settlements? What settlements? Probably right to forget about apartheid, can't see that anywhere in the article at all, obviously doesn't exist.] (]) 18:16, 24 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Work on adding it to the body. Would like somebody who opposes inclusion of the regular castigation of Israel for violating international law with its settlement enterprise to answer my questions. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 18:28, 24 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:::There seems to be consensus here that this topic is not fully covered in the body of the article. ] (]) 19:19, 24 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::I don't see any consensus the past discussion has included many editors if you want to show that something changed there should be similar discussion --] (]) 21:01, 24 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{Re|Nableezy}} Can we bring the unclosed RFC that Shrike keeps referring to out here together with this convo as a kind of RFCbefore so we can get on with a new one, since it is clear that objecting to the obvious is still a thing here? ] (]) 13:00, 25 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
:From the given citation, added "758" before "mostly" and "polled in 2024 by ]" before "believe" to clarify matters. ] (]) 17:42, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
@Nableezy. How about: "Israel's occupation of the Palestinian territories is internationally considered to be the world's longest military occupation in modern times<sup></sup> <u>and ]</u>." (underlined text being the addition to the current lede text) - <code>]</code><small>]</small> 14:02, 25 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
== "]" listed at ] == | |||
:What has that to do with the settlement project? Do pay attention.] (]) 14:09, 25 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
] | |||
::You pay attention. The occupation and the settlements are intrinsically related. And the link I added leads to a detailed criticism of the settlements (among other Israeli political takes). Anyway, this was just a "starting point" suggestion trying to engage in a compromise. Constructive feedback and suggestions are welcome. - <code>]</code><small>]</small> 14:31, 25 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
The redirect <span class="plainlinks"></span> has been listed at ] to determine whether its use and function meets the ]. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at '''{{slink|Misplaced Pages:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 December 7#"Israel"}}''' until a consensus is reached. <!-- Template:RFDNote --> ] <i><sup style="display:inline-flex;rotate:7deg;">]</sup></i> 15:00, 7 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Your 'starting point' isn't a compromise, it's blatantly posting a personal and controversial opinion. "Internationally agreed" by who, iran and syria? | |||
:::A better sentence would be "Israel has received international criticism from organizations such as the ], for alleged occupation of the ]". | |||
:::The word alleged allows the statement to maintain neutrality, because lets face it, just as there are international recognitions that it's an occupied territory, there is also international recognition that it's not. Saying any such sentence without the word is simply forcing down your personal opinion down people's throats, by omission. ] (]) 07:19, 27 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::The issue at hand right now is the settlement project, there is not really any serious argument about the occupation as such, it is covered more or less sufficiently (ie to the satisfaction of no-one).] (]) 10:11, 27 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::@Xland44, You should pay attention as well. The part you are criticizing is not the change that I'm hypothesizing, that is what the lede currently states. The change I put forward for consideration is solely the underlined text. - <code>]</code><small>]</small> 12:17, 27 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Lede == | |||
::::Another possibility: How about changing this: | |||
::::*"Israel's occupation of the Palestinian territories is internationally considered to be the world's longest military occupation in modern times" | |||
::::for this | |||
::::*"Israel's occupation of the Palestinian territories and the construction of settlements have drawn criticism." | |||
::::? - <code>]</code><small>]</small> 12:17, 27 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{ping|Terrainman}} Are these your first edits to articles on WP that relate to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict? If so, please familiarize yourself with ] and ] which states that adding contested content requires achieving consensus on the talk page, not reverting. This responsibility is known as onus lying with the inserter of the material. ] (]) 12:47, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
According to Daveout, we can't use collapsible boxes without offending mobile users eyeballs so we have to make do with a link to the previous unclosed RFC as below, the main point being that there was a partial consensus reached to include details re settlements in the lead.] (]) 12:48, 27 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
] | |||
:Ok, thank-you. The information I added was to improve the context of the paragraph, in a much needed way. From what I can see, nothing contested was added. ] (]) 12:51, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
The relevant part of reads "Israel's settlement policies have also drawn condemnation internationally, with the United Nations Security Council ] a flagrant violation of international law." ] (]) 12:59, 27 September 2021 (UTC) | |||
::{{ping|Terrainman}} Your additions to the lede/lead were reverted so the material is by definition is now contested, meaning you will have to gain consensus for them in the talk page, not revert. ] (]) 12:54, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I understand but your edit reason was to keep the brevity of the lead when my edit was rather brief in my view. It has been further edited by another user to make the additions more concise. ] (]) 13:14, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::{{ping|Terrainman}} Your additions still increased the material about the 1948 war from six to eight sentences in the lede. This needs to be trimmed even below six sentences. ] (]) 13:34, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I understand since that para is already very long, however unfortunately the topic is extremely complicated; hence why it was the longest para in the lead long before my edit. My addition provided essential context in my view, I also received thanks for it and it has been refined since by another editor. In my view if this para is to be made more concise we need to explore other options for that. ] (]) 13:48, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::{{ping|Terrainman}} Receiving thanks is not a measure of consensus, but discussion on the talk page. Your addition still duplicates mention of the UN partition plan in the second and third lede paragraphs, as well as non-summarizing elaborations on the Oslo Accords, which is also a duplicate mention in the third lede paragraph. ] (]) 14:03, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::The first sentence of the 3rd paragraph explains that the partition plan failed, which is crucial context! | |||
:::::::Regarding Oslo accords, it is not a duplication. The second mention references them in a sentence about progress since then. ] (]) 14:28, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Furthermore, if we are setting this low a threshold in what is essential to the lead, there are multiple parts of the third paragraph which elaborate to a significant extend, rather than merely state the existence of key historical events which are in-fact needed to provide context for the rest of the paragraph. ] (]) 14:41, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Then all should be trimmed. ] (]) 17:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Additionally, when you say Lede, do you mean Lead? I just want to be sure I am not missing something here. ] (]) 12:52, 15 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Lede and Lead are legitimate alternative spellings; both refer to the intro material which, in Misplaced Pages, should summarize the major points of rest of the article. A major issue for many Misplaced Pages articles is putting too much stuff in the lede. ] (]) 05:05, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Minor edit Request == | |||
I dont think "drawn criticism" is remotely neutral, it downplays the issue so much as to be entirely meaningless. Israel's settlement program has been repeatedly condemned as a war crime, that is not "drawn criticism". Will work on a phrasing, real life is kinda in the way for me rn though. But it should include that the settlements have been condemned internationally, including by the UNSC and the ICJ and UNGA, and human rights groups, as flagrant violations of international law. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 15:54, 27 September 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
Remove "synonymous with Canaan" from the lede. | |||
The tag is ridiculous and it should be removed. Look at the history of this talk page, every few months the same users opens a discussion or RfC on the same topics: remove democracy from the lead cause "Israel is not a democracy" and to put this neutarlity tag, again and again. It seems like there are users who wish to delegitimize Israel via Misplaced Pages. ] (]) 05:09, 1 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
1. The borders of ancient Canaan don't line up with modern day Israel. | |||
:At the moment we are simply debating whether a statement similar to Nableezy's above should be included in the lead, should we take your comment to mean no? ] (]) 10:38, 1 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:Yes, thanks for discussing the tag, the reason for its inclusion being this discussion. Is there a reason why something about the international condemnation of the settlement program should not go in the lead? Do you disagree that this is a significant criticism of Israel? Do you disagree that significant criticisms belong in the lead? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 00:03, 2 October 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
2. No real reason to mention ancient Canaan just like we don't mention that it's synonymous with British Mandatory Palestine or the Judea province of the Roman Empire. | |||
Agree with Nableezy, should be restored. The introduction implies that Israel is some sort of thriving democratic country lacking controversy, and it does not examine or add in counterpoints on whether the country truly meets that definition. It ''de facto'' rules the Palestinian territories in an apartheid manner, and that's not my own view - there's hundreds of sources out there saying so, including the UN Security Council itself. ] (]) 21:53, 5 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
*This was . The lead, if at all, has too much criticism and Arab-Israeli conflict.08:31, 7 October 2021 (UTC) <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) </span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:There was literally zero argument against including the settlements and the criticism the settlements have generated in that RFC. Which oh by the way was never closed. This not being a place where the number of votes count when they are not grounded in policy. Speaking of policy, do you dispute that the settlements and the sustained condemnation of the settlements is a significant controversy? <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 15:03, 7 October 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
I'm going to create a new section about the settlements specifically. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 15:05, 7 October 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
3. The fact that Canaanites lives there is in the following sentence. ] (]) 22:47, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Largest city of Israel == | |||
:{{done}} ] (]) 16:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
In the sidebar where it states that Jerusalem is the largest city, I think a note or something should be added that if East Jerusalem was excluded, Tel Aviv would be the largest city. This is mentioned in the ] that East Jerusalem has 573,330 inhabitants and Jerusalem (altogether) has 936,425 inhabitants. If East Jerusalem would be excluded then Jerusalem would have 363,095 inhabitants thus making Tel Aviv the largest city (460,613 inhabitants). ] (]) 17:02, 10 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::Restore Canaan and rephrase to avoid implying synonymity. ] (]) 16:57, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::This didn't address the points they made. 'Variably known as' still conflicts with all three points here. ] (]) 17:56, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== RFC: Human rights violations section == | |||
{{Reply to|Chxeese}} In 1980, Israel passed the Jerusalem Law, which declared that "Jerusalem, complete and united, is the capital of Israel". Israeli claims the entire land of Jerusalem maybe thats why its included.] I think the previous editor considered only Israels Point of view forgetting, theres citizens of Palestine also living there. --] (]) 09:09, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:It would be a good idea to take a neutral point of view. Jerusalem, both east and west, is de facto an Israeli city, and we are dealing here with facts on the ground, not with theoretical situations. There is a Palestinian claim to parts of the city, and it is explained here and in other articles, but at the end of the day, we have to consider the reality. By the way, all residents of Jerusalem are 'permanent residents' of Israel, i.e. they can live and work wherever they want in Israel. Many Palestinian Arabs who live in Jerusalem do not have Israeli passports, but they still have the 'permanent resident' status. Perhaps some of them had the right to vote in the Palestinian elections, but this fact does not make Jerusalem a Palestinian city. ] (]) 10:41, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::De facto is not de jure, that's the reality. Not only is East Jerusalem occupied territory, all unilateral attempts to change the ] are void, per ].] (]) 11:16, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::{{Reply to|79.183.205.72}} Even if you are right in saying Israel de facto controls Jerusalem, but as Chxeese implied, the population of Jerusalem is higher than Tel Aviv only if you also consider the Palestinian population who do have neither Israeli citizenship nor residency.--] (]) 12:32, 13 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::Is this an article about Israel or a lecture about international politics? People who land on this article want to learn about Israel as it is. If they wish to learn about the role of the UN in the Arab-Israeli conflict or about political views regarding Jerusalem, they will obviously search different articles or different websites altogether. ] (]) 13:37, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::And if they want a lesson in propaganda they can go visit the Israel Ministry of Foreign Affairs website, much better quality of propaganda there than here.] (]) 13:41, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::So basically, your view of the matter is the truth, and anything else is a propaganda? I thought our goal was to be neutral, or was I wrong? ] (]) 13:45, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::Neutral = per reliable sources, not what you think it means.] (]) 13:47, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::::A UNSC resolution is a reliable source about the UNSC's opinion. Nothing more, nothing less. I don't need a UNSC resolution to know whether the sky is blue, and I don't need such a resolution to know who runs Jerusalem. And besides, the US administration pubished a different view about Jerusalem. Why is it less important? When you look for reliable sources, you have to consider ALL available sources, not just those who state your favoured opinion. ] (]) 13:57, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Grandmother, eggs, etc.] (]) 13:58, 12 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::{{Reply to|79.183.205.72}} I am not trying to say that Jerusalem is a Palestinian City nor am I trying to promote ]. The ] represents the opinion of the international community, even if the USA does vote against it, it still shows that most do not support Jerusalem as the capital of Israel. From your previous comments and the fact that all your contributions are to things related to Israel, you are trying to discourage comments made in a pro-Israeli point of view without evidence. There is proof (that we just showed) as well that (despite its de facto status) Jerusalem is not the capital city of Israel. Merriam Webster literally defines "propaganda" as "ideas, facts, or allegations spread deliberately to further one's cause or to damage an opposing cause"<ref>https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/propaganda</ref> -- ] (]) 01:50, 17 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I believe since no agreement can be reached I will start a vote to see if a change should occur. -- ] (]) 01:57, 17 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
{{od}}Yes, Chxeese, but the discussion is not about whether Jerusalem is the capital city, but whether Jerusalem is the largest city. Jerusalem, despite its contentious status, is a city with a single municipal government. It is not two cities. And that city is the largest city in Israel. Or partially in Israel, from some points of view. ] ] 02:06, 17 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:The problem is if excluding the population of what is widely regarded as not "in Israel", that population is smaller than Tel Aviv. Think it needs a note that it includes East Jerusalem which is considered occupied territory. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 03:53, 17 October 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
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::Jerusalem is frequently described as a divided and disputed city, the single municipality was created via a disputed and unrecognized annexation. De facto reality is only that and says nothing about legality (de jure status). I agree it needs a note at the very least.] (]) 11:39, 17 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
I dont think we have to get in to anything besides clarifying that it is the largest city if including East Jerusalem, can be in a note. Thats how it was solved at ]. Ill try that now. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 16:46, 17 October 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
:added a note. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 17:03, 17 October 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
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:: {{U|Nableezy}} I think thats a perfect choice, you deserve another Barnstar of diplomacy lol, but i suggest changing "Jerusalem is Israel's largest city if including East Jerusalem, which is widely recognized as occupied territory." to "Jerusalem is Israel's largest city if East Jerusalem, which is widely recognized as occupied territory, is included. Excluding East Jerusalem, Tel Aviv is the largest city." and maybe include the fact that East Jerusalem includes Palestinean citizens too--] (]) 15:01, 18 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
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:::I think its enough as is but feel free to be bold if you dont. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 15:25, 19 October 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
Should this article include a top level section about violations of human rights by the state of Israel? ] (]) 17:36, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::{{U|Nableezy}} Sorry I am a little late to reply, but I do feel that LostCitrationHunter's statement is correct as it does provide context on Israel and its population. -- ] (]) 23:01, 29 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
:::::If anybody else wants to make an edit they can, I just dont feel anything else is needed beyond what I did. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 23:08, 29 December 2021 (UTC)</small> | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 4 November 2021 == | |||
===Survey=== | |||
{{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | |||
'''Comment''' Not currently a subject of dispute? Maybe just create one and see what happens first? I wouldn't object personally but do we need an RFC for this right now? ] (]) 17:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:] '''Not done:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a ] if appropriate.<!-- Template:EEp --> ] (]) 13:51, 4 November 2021 (UTC) | |||
:It was reverted quickly: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Israel&diff=1266366530&oldid=1266365841 ] (]) 18:04, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 5 November 2021 == | |||
::That might have been just the into the sea thing? {{Re|Remsense}}. I would have thought a hr top level section would have involved moving stuff from elsewhere in the article into it? ] (]) 18:09, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I made a mistake, please feel free to revert. Apologies. <span style="border-radius:2px;padding:3px;background:#1E816F">]<span style="color:#fff"> ‥ </span>]</span> 19:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Could you revert so that I don't annoy any admins violating 1rr (even though I have your permission)? ] (]) 20:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Done. Apologies, again. <span style="border-radius:2px;padding:3px;background:#1E816F">]<span style="color:#fff"> ‥ </span>]</span> 20:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::ah I see, I had totally misunderstood your edit summary. Thanks for reverting. ] (]) 20:21, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''No''' How many countries have human rights violations? I would maybe accept a top level section for ] because that is pretty unique and a big part of what Israel physically is. Absolutely no for HR violations generally. ] ] 23:48, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:Coverage of Israel in RS is very often centered around human rights. That's not the case for most other countries. We should follow RS and similarly give top level attention to coverage of human rights. ] (]) 01:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
*::Agreed that Israeli-occupied territories should be a top level section. There could be a Human rights subsection under Government and politics section ] (]) 16:56, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
* Information should be integrated into the article where it would be relevant rather than standing out on its own... ] = "Avoid ] or ]. Try to achieve a ] by folding debates into the narrative, rather than isolating them into sections. " This poor article really needs some work..... most of the articles is focused on military actions and one point in time.<span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:-15deg;color:darkblue">''']'''</span><span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:15deg;color:darkblue">]</span> 00:28, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
===Discussion=== | |||
{{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | |||
Article should mention that Israel is occupying what was previously Palestinian land. ] (]) 04:58, 5 November 2021 (UTC) | |||
:] '''Not done for now:''' please establish a ] for this alteration ''']''' using the {{tlx|edit extended-protected}} template.<!-- Template:EEp --> There is also already a section titled ]. <span class="nowrap">'' —]<sup>(My ] and ])</sup>''</span> 05:18, 5 November 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Sweep them into the sea == | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 11 November 2021 == | |||
Original sentence: 'The purpose of the invasion was to prevent the establishment of the Jewish state and to "sweep them into the sea".' | |||
{{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=yes}} | |||
The calender in Israel has ] (]) 07:55, 11 November 2021 (UTC) | |||
Proposed change: 'The purpose of the invasion was to prevent the establishment of the Jewish state.' | |||
:] '''Not done:''' it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a ] if appropriate.<!-- Template:EEp --> - ] <small>(] | ])</small> 08:23, 11 November 2021 (UTC) | |||
The quote that allegedly supports the inclusion of the the statement 'and to "sweep them into the sea"' is: | |||
{{tq2|A week before the armies marched, Azzam told Kirkbride: "It does not matter how many there are. We will sweep them into the sea.}} | |||
This quote is of course not consistent with the claim that the '''purpose''' of the invasion was to sweep the Jews into the sea. The other citations for this sentence include: | |||
{{tq2|Morris 2008, p. 396: "The immediate trigger of the 1948 War was the November 1947 UN partition resolution. The Zionist movement, except for its fringes, accepted the proposal."}} | |||
{{tq2|David Tal (2004). War in Palestine, 1948: Israeli and Arab Strategy and Diplomacy. Routledge. p. 469. ISBN 978-1-135-77513-1. Archived from the original on 19 December 2023. Retrieved 1 December 2018. "some of the Arab armies invaded Palestine in order to prevent the establishment of a Jewish state, Transjordan..."}} | |||
{{tq2|Morris 2008, p. 187: Ahmed Shukeiry, one of Haj Amin al-Husseini's aides (and, later, the founding chairman of the Palestine Liberation Organization), simply described the aim as "the elimination of the Jewish state." ... al-Quwwatli told his people: "Our army has entered ... we shall win and we shall eradicate Zionism"" }} | |||
None of these support the claim about sweeping Jews into the sea. | |||
Additionally: | |||
Ben-Ami: {{tq|The Arab states were driven to war in great measure by theperception that prevailed in their societies as to the Jewish state andthe threat it posed to the Arabs.}} | |||
Rouhanna: {{tq|One goal of some of these armies was to prevent the establishment of a Jewish state; the Jordanian army, however, also sought to prevent the establishment of a Palestinian state by conquering and annexing (after achieving the tacit understanding of the Zionist leadership) parts of Palestine for the Hashemite Kingdom.}} | |||
Shapira: {{tq|As the sheer magnitude of the Palestinian Arabs’ defeat emerged, and as the horror stories of the Jews’ alleged brutality spread throughout the Arab world, the pressure exerted by public opinion on the Arab states to come to the aid of their Palestinian brethren intensified. Despite difficulties arranging a unified military command, as well as mutual suspicion regarding each other’s objectives in Palestine, on April 30 the Arab states decided to invade.}} | |||
Shlaim: {{tq|Seven Arab states sent their armies into Palestine with the firm intention of strangling the Jewish state at birth.}} ] (]) 17:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Edit Request == | |||
Change the new "Human Rights violations" section, no other country the I checked (including those with serious human rights violation claims like North Korea, Saudi Arabia, Russia, Myanmar) have any kind of section named anywhere near as negatively. Those claims are usually found in the Government and Politics tab. The way it is now is a violation of ] ] (]) 20:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Yeah, this is extremely unusual. ] ] 23:42, 31 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Looks like we need an RFC after all. ] (]) 00:26, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::Sorry, I don't know what you mean. The HR violations section was created accidentally, right? ] ] 00:35, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::Nope. ] (]) 00:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::Are we both talking about the top level section I just deleted? ] ] 00:45, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::I created it. It was not created accidentally, please revert your edit. ] (]) 01:55, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Sorry, I was confused by a comment Remsense left. I think it's an extremely controversial addition. Is there some WP rule reason that I have to revert, or is there consensus I'm not seeing? ] ] 02:09, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::::There's definitely an open discussion.... Best leave it out till the process is done. Thinking about adding undue tags in relation to three or four sections... there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine. Will gather some thoughts together and bring it up at the project page see if we can help. <span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:-15deg;color:darkblue">''']'''</span><span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:15deg;color:darkblue">]</span> 02:14, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::{{tq|there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine}}, right, and its relationship with Palestine and Palestinians is a core part of the coverage of Israel in RS. I'm curious where you think the undue tags should go. ] (]) 02:33, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Article is to big ingeneral and suffers from in the new style - 21st century should be summarized much better. Israeli-occupied territories, International opinion and Accusations of Apartheid should be integrated into history and/ or foreign relations with just a few sentences for each topic leading our readers to main articles. See ] for how its done.,see also ] and ]. <span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:-15deg;color:darkblue">''']'''</span><span style="display:inline-flex;rotate:15deg;color:darkblue">]</span> 03:05, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::That seems like a strange suggestion, of course the occupation is relevant to the history, but it is also a crucial aspect of Israeli politics today. ] (]) 03:34, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Israel != Germany ] (]) 09:44, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
== Edit request regarding the map == | |||
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I respectfully request that the map be reverted to its previous version, which better reflects the official and internationally recognized borders. This change would ensure that Misplaced Pages adheres to its guiding principles of neutrality and accuracy. ] (]) 18:01, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:You don't have the needed qualifications to edit about this topic(you don't yet have 500 edits), please see your user talk page. ] (]) 18:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:]The map reflects Israel's international recognized borders and the territories it claims (East Jerusalem and the Golan Heights) and occupies militarily (West Bank excl. East Jerusalem and the Gaza Strip). This is mostly consistent with other country articles, such as ] (map depicts unrecognized claim over the former Sanjak of Alexandretta) and ] (map depicts claims over the Ukrainian territories it occupied since 2014). However, there is an argument to removing the West Bank (excl. East Jerusalem) and the Gaza Strip from the map and using ] instead, since Israel does not ''de jure'' claim the territory and it is internationally recognized as being part of the State of Palestine. ] 22:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::There is no basis for Israeli claims to either EJ or the Golan, they are unrecognized annexes and along with the West Bank and Gaza are considered as occupied territories. ] (]) 22:59, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::However, for consistency reasons, it would be justifiable to exclude territories not annexed by Israel, as locator maps don't typically include territories under military occupation, but do include territories unilaterally annexed. For example, the map of Russia does not include ] and ] in light green, despite them being internationally recognized as Russian-occupied territories, but does include Crimea, as it was illegally annexed in 2014. Similarly, the map of the ] does not include ]. as it is not annexed territory of the US. ] 23:20, 1 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::Anyone that wants to can see Green Line Israel by clicking on a radio button, the initial question really is what we want the default view to be, that or with occupied territories shown. If it were up to me I would show Green Line Israel, excluding Golan, as default. | |||
::::Then the alternate view should show all occupied territories, including purportedly annexed territories. Btw "disputed" is not a NPOV term here, see ]. | |||
::::Other article maps do not affect what happens with the situation here. ] (]) 11:02, 2 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
:::::If all territories under military occupation are to be included on the map, why are Southern Lebanon and parts of Southern Syria, newly occupied since 2024, excluded? There is also a significant difference in the legal status of East Jerusalem versus the rest of the West Bank. Israeli civil law is applied in East Jerusalem and the Golan Heights, whereas it is extended to Israeli settlers in the rest of the West Bank only via emergency regulations. Gaza remains militarily occupied due to control over its airspace, territorial waters, and borders, but Israeli civil law is not extended and Israel does not formally claim the territory as its own. Meanwhile, if militarily-occupied territories are to be included, Southern Lebanon nor the newly occupied parts of Syria are shown in light green. | |||
:::::The map of Russia excludes Ukrainian territories that are occupied but not annexed, and the Ukraine map omits its military occupation of parts of Kursk Oblast. The Russian article map did not include the four annexed oblasts until after they were annexed, despite Russia beginning settlement activities before then . Other Misplaced Pages articles consistently differentiate between annexed and occupied territories, marking only annexed areas. | |||
:::::The map should either show all territories under Israeli military presence or limit itself to lands Israel ''formally'' claims as its own. Unrecognized or illegal claims should be marked in light green, in contrast to the West Bank (beyond East Jerusalem) and Gaza, which are solely claimed by the State of Palestine. This distinction is already visible on the map for the State of Palestine, where annexed territories like East Jerusalem and Latrun are marked differently from areas claimed exclusively by Palestine. ] 19:20, 2 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
::::::Just to repeat that what we do here on this page for the map here does not depend on what is done at any other page. | |||
::::::Southern Lebanon and parts of Southern Syria have not as yet been declared as occupied territory by any competent authority afaik. | |||
::::::Lands that Israel {{tq|formally claims}} (EJ/Golan) are also illegal claims, so designated by the UNSC (reaffirmed recently by the ICJ in respect of EJ), so this distinction is of no import. | |||
::::::As things stand, I simply want to note the OP request as not done (no consensus of EC editors). Presumably you do not want to do that. So I suggest we wait and see if any other editors have a view. ] (]) 19:31, 2 January 2025 (UTC) | |||
== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 2 January 2025 == | |||
== Questionable removal of content == | |||
{{edit extended-protected|Israel|answered=no}} | |||
I request an edit change of the GDP (Nominal), GDP (PPP), GDP Per Capita (Nominal), and GDP Per Capita (PPP) of Israel to 2025 in Accordance to IMF's October 2024 Database. The source will remain the same as the source currently shown, but the access date will be changed to "2 January 2025". Please Change Before (X) to After (Y). | |||
Before (X): 2024 Estimate | |||
In , a bunch of material was removed from the lead under the claim that it was from a primary source. | |||
GDP (PPP) | |||
• Total | |||
Increase $541.343 billion (47th) | |||
• Per capita | |||
Increase $54,446 (29th) | |||
GDP (nominal) | |||
I don't see any evidence this book is a primary source. | |||
• Total | |||
Increase $528.067 billion (29th) | |||
• Per capita | |||
Increase $53,110 (18th) | |||
-- ] (]) 01:15, 8 December 2021 (UTC) | |||
After (Y): 2025 Estimate | |||
== Edit request on January 16, 2022 == | |||
GDP (PPP) | |||
• Total | |||
Increase $565.878 billion (47th) | |||
• Per capita | |||
Increase $55,847 (29th) | |||
GDP (nominal) | |||
{{edit extended-protected}} | |||
• Total | |||
Could someone please restore ? I believe I made significant improvements in terms of grammar and trimmed unnecessary text of a lede that is already too long compared to most countries. For the record, I only added my imput after multiple editors . Thanks.--] (]) 16:32, 16 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
Increase $550.905 billion (29th) | |||
:Not done, several of the changes are POV issues, such as removing ''and continues to occupy'' and making Israel "retain" control of territory it nearly acquired. <small style="border: 1px solid;padding:1px 3px;white-space:nowrap">''']''' - 16:37, 16 January 2022 (UTC)</small> | |||
• Per capita | |||
::So why don't you change those two things according to your desired version and leave the rest of the changes? It wasn't my intention to insert a specific POV. I wanted to improve the redaction and trim the excessive, unnecessary and over-detailed content. The supposed POV you mentioned is a minor and insignificant part of the overall changes that can be easily fixed or ignored. What about the excessive information on the revolts against the Romans for example? Or the unnecessary repetition about the Zionist movement? Or the inappropriate undue link on Jewish history in the land of Israel? Apparently you didn't pay attention to my changes.--] (]) 16:53, 16 January 2022 (UTC) | |||
Increase $54,370 (18th) ] (]) 18:18, 2 January 2025 (UTC) |
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view · edit Frequently asked questions Why is Jerusalem listed as Israel's capital in the infobox? Israel declares Jerusalem to be its capital, and has its seat of government there. However, the lack of international recognition is notable, hence the subtext was added "(limited recognition)" as the result of this RfC. For further information see Status of Jerusalem. |
RfC
Should the article Gaza genocide be linked from this article, and if yes, where?
- Possible answers:
- No, it should not be linked
- Yes, it should be linked in the lead.
- Yes, it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph)
cheers, Huldra (talk) 22:20, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
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- Yes, it should be linked in the lead and the body of the article, attached to content similar to that Selfstudier developed above, and content similar to that Huldra developed in would serve well in the lede. It's obviously something readers are going to be coming to this page to learn more about, and the information exists on the encyclopedia, the conversations about whether it belongs here or not have laready been had, so there's no reason this page should not serve reader needs. — penultimate_supper 🚀 21:53, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, adding content as Selfstudier's above, preferably at the end of the 21st century paragraph + add a single sentence to the end of lead like this, Huldra (talk) 22:15, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- I don't understand why it would be necessary to add it as a completely separate paragraph (if we were to add it) instead of just putting at the end of the third paragraph, which is far more related, and less abrupt. ARandomName123 (talk) 20:46, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes,
adding content as Selfstudier's above, preferably at the end of the 21st century paragraph
and add a single sentence to theend oflead per Huldra, but I would modify their suggested text ("In 2024, Israel was accused of committing the Gaza genocide)" to "In 2024, Israel was accused of committing genocide in Gaza" or similar. My logic for the change is that the accusation/dispute centres on whether Israel's actions in Gaza constitute genocide (or are legitimate self-defence/similar), rather than whether the 'Gaza genocide' is being committed by Israel (as opposed to some other State or body) which Huldra's text otherwise implies.Pincrete (talk) 07:59, 24 November 2024 (UTC) - Yes, I agree with the inclusion in the lead. JacktheBrown (talk) 16:02, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes to Selfstudier's suggestion in the body per the weight of reliable sources given (I'll leave to others to determine where), with a summary in the lead. Only suggestion is to add the arrest warrants on. TarnishedPath 09:29, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes it should be included in the lede and in the body text.--Ortizesp (talk) 14:21, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes similarly to how self has suggested DMH223344 (talk) 00:09, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- No Not until a new article about Palestine's genocide against Israel is linked to the Palestine article.Allthemilescombined1 (talk) 01:36, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- See WP:OTHERCONTENT and then perhaps think about making a policy based argument or your !vote will likely be ignored by whoever closes this RFC. TarnishedPath 02:30, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- No Given that there is no actual genocide. Very much not. MaskedSinger (talk) 05:06, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- No The article "Gaza genocide" presents claims that lack broad consensus within the international community and are subject to significant dispute. Linking to such an article may mislead readers into perceiving these claims as established facts rather than contested allegations, thereby compromising the integrity of the host article. Eladkarmel (talk) 20:45, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- No per MaskedSinger, Allthemilescombined1 and Eladkarmel; feels like including this would unduly shoehorn something in that doesn't belong in the general overview article. Andre🚐 21:05, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Not in the lede. It should be made clear that these are accusations and many sources do not agree with this characterisation. Note that many country articles don't mention genocides in the lede even when there is a consensus that it happened (Bosnia and Herzegovina, Iraq, Syria (Yazidi genocide), Uganda, etc). Alaexis¿question? 21:38, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- User:Alaexis just a question: when you say "nor in the lead; does that mean you think it should be in the body? If so, which paragraph? Huldra (talk) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes. There's a relevant section where it can be mentioned: Israel#Israeli-occupied_territories. Right now, this article doesn't mention two important things: That the current Prime Minister of Israel, Benjamin Netanyahu, is a fugitive wanted for crimes against humanity by the International Criminal Court, and that Israel is being charged with genocide by South Africa in the International Court of Justice. I think there can be a new subsection in the "Israeli occupied territories" section, that mentions both facts. I see Selfstudier has given a sample text. I support that paragraph being added to the relevant section, but I think a mention of the ICC's arrest warrant of the Prime Minister of Israel (and Yoav Gallant's warrant too) could also be added, since it's also international litigation for crimes against humanity in Gaza. Mohammed Deif's arrest warrant doesn't need to be mentioned in this article. I think we can have a new subsection titled "Gaza Strip" that moves text that already exists in the section. So in addition to Selfstudier's text, I would add the first sentence of the arrest warrant article to the end of it, and make it look like THIS (A link to a sandbox page that would show what the article would look like).--JasonMacker (talk) 05:43, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
- As far as adding it to the lead, the already existing sentence in the lead, "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations and United Nations officials." seems to be a good enough summary, but I guess I would modify it to "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimes and crimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations, the International Criminal Court, and United Nations officials." The ICC is technically not a UN body, so it should be mentioned separately. But other than that, I think such a sentence would be fine. I'm open to suggestions on this though. JasonMacker (talk) 05:48, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
*No. The genocide allegation appears to be, at the moment, primarily a tool of propaganda. Unless substantial new evidence emerges, analyzed by impartial, non-politicized sources and supported by more than two vague statements and casualty figures (which include a significant number of Hamas militants but the Hamas-run Health Ministry prefers not to differentiate militants from civilians), such claims lack the rigor required for inclusion in serious, encyclopedic coverage. ABHammad (talk) 06:53, 27 November 2024 (UTC)Blocked sock Selfstudier (talk) 11:08, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- "The genocide allegation appears to be, at the moment, primarily a tool of propaganda." This is simply not true. See: Expert opinions in the Gaza genocide debate. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 07:00, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
- No. This article is about the State of Israel. Not news. Should the articles about the United States, the United Kingdom, Germany, and many others feature the various proven genocides that actually took place, or even in the lead? Might as well say "also known as the Z.E.", in the lead or anywhere, with some extra brackets for good measure? This is a matter of an ongoing armed conflict, with fog of war and disinformation throughout. Not only would it be "commenting on an ongoing investigation" as they say, but entirely inappropriate and irresponsible. Skullers (talk) 11:38, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes Per WP:LEDE, required
mention of significant criticism or controversies
, clearly true and which several of the No !votes have acknowledged as being the case. A mention should be added via inclusion within the sentence "Israel's practices in its occupation of the Palestinian territories have drawn sustained international criticism—along with accusations that it has committed war crimesandcrimes against humanity against the Palestinian people—from human rights organizations and United Nations officials." Selfstudier (talk) 12:10, 27 November 2024 (UTC) - Not in the lede - a good chunk of the lede is already criticism, so adding additional accusations would seem like POV shoehorning. Not necessarily against inclusion in the body, but there isn't a specific proposal to comment on. — xDanielx /C\ 23:37, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- User:XDanielx there is a question about whether it should be in the body. ("Yes, it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph") So, if you agree: which paragraph? Huldra (talk) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Huldra: Relevant material is currently in the body, unless it is reverted. The original dispute was about a sentence being added to the lead not material being added to the body, something which is not usually a source of dispute unless the amount of such material is undue. Option 2 already assumes material present in the body, no?. And option 1 just says no, so the third option is not really necessary. Selfstudier (talk) 10:36, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Selfstudier: When I started this RfC on the 22 nov, it wasn't in the body (that was first added the 27th) so the the third option is useful (necessary?) for keeping it there, Huldra (talk) 23:09, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- I just think the two things should not be mixed up, this RFC should not attempt to rubber stamp the addition that I made to the body, that should just be subject to the normal editing process. Imagine that I had not added it and people voted option 2? Then there would have had to have been another discussion about what should be in the body, so yes I have attempted to remedy a deficiency in the way the RFC was drafted and hopefully it meets with approval. Selfstudier (talk) 23:19, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Selfstudier: When I started this RfC on the 22 nov, it wasn't in the body (that was first added the 27th) so the the third option is useful (necessary?) for keeping it there, Huldra (talk) 23:09, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Huldra: Relevant material is currently in the body, unless it is reverted. The original dispute was about a sentence being added to the lead not material being added to the body, something which is not usually a source of dispute unless the amount of such material is undue. Option 2 already assumes material present in the body, no?. And option 1 just says no, so the third option is not really necessary. Selfstudier (talk) 10:36, 4 December 2024 (UTC)
- User:XDanielx there is a question about whether it should be in the body. ("Yes, it should be linked from the body of the article (please specify which paragraph") So, if you agree: which paragraph? Huldra (talk) 22:03, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes in the body and the lede: There are prominent RS (UN Special Committee, Israeli holocaust scholar Omer Bartov to cite two examples) supporting the charachterization that Israel has been committing a genocide in Gaza, so there is no reason why this shouldn't be mentioned in the body. Accordingly, lede summarizes the body, so it should include that, given that it is one of the most prominent controversies Israel is facing second to the crime of apartheid in the West Bank (I am in favor of including both in the lede), though admittedly genocide hasn't reached the threshold of being confirmed, that's why for now it can be described as an accusation. The perfect short phrasing in my opinion for the lede can be:
“ | Israel's practices in the occupied territories has drawn sustained international criticism for violating the human rights of the Palestinians, including for maintaining an apartheid regime in the West Bank, as well as being accused of committing a genocide in Gaza. | ” |
Makeandtoss (talk) 07:29, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Update to my "admittedly genocide hasn't reached the threshold of being confirmed," that is beginning to change as Amnesty International launched a report today charachterizing that Israel is committing genocide in Gaza. While this does not yet mean the threshold has been reached, but it gives a whole new significance to the inclusion of the "accusation" to the lede. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:01, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, both in the lead and body: Per sources and my understanding of Misplaced Pages:Policies and guidelines. Some of these policies and guidelines are:
- 1) Misplaced Pages:Neutral_point_of_view#Due_and_undue_weight. WP:Tertiary sources can be used to assess WP:DUE. My understanding is that once DUEness is established, Misplaced Pages articles can be kept up to date. This is actually a strength of Misplaced Pages. For example, no one would argue mentioning something about the economy in this article is WP:UNDUE. WP:Tertiary and overview WP:Secondary sources about Israel would include something about the economy. It could be too much or too little, but something about the economy would be DUE in this article. However, economic stats in this article would probably be much more up to date than many published overview WP:Secondary sources about Israel such as Routledge Handbook on Contemporary Israel.
- Similarly, WP:Tertiary sources mention Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict at length. As such, Gaza genocide would be DUE. If in several years, newly published WP:Tertiary sources do not mention this, it can be taken out of the lead. If in several years, both newly published WP:Tertiary and overview WP:Secondary sources about Israel do not mention this, it can also be taken out of the body. But for now, to keep the article up to date, this is DUE. (Update: quote from intro chapter in overview secondary source provided below Bogazicili (talk) 19:17, 3 January 2025 (UTC))
- Sources are below, I cannot give lengthy quotes due to word count restrictions in Misplaced Pages:Contentious topics/Arab–Israeli conflict
Coverage of Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict in WP:Tertiary sources: |
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- More tertiary sources can be found using Google Books, Google Scholar, or the Misplaced Pages Library (for example: Oxford Reference Online database)
- wording suggestion removed
- The above wording makes the lead neutral as only the accusation is added in Wikivoice. Similarly, the text in the body should be NPOV.
- 2) Misplaced Pages:Verifiability. Lots of WP:RS. See Template:Expert opinions in the Gaza genocide debate. There are already WP:Secondary sources about this such as Gaza Faces History by Enzo Traverso. This source also ties Gaza genocide with Israeli-Palestinian conflict:
In this urgent, insightful essay, a respected historian places the Israeli-Palestinian war in context, challenging Western attitudes about the region
- 3) MOS:LEADLENGTH. The above proposal would trim the lead word count by something like 26 words. It'd still be more than 400 words, but even many featured articles are longer than 400 words. Bogazicili (talk) 17:27, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- You linked to four tertiary sources, but I don't see the word "genocide" in any of them? (Britannica links to recent news about it, but that seems temporary.) Maybe this is a sign that our lede's focus should somehow be different, but in terms of accusations of genocide, if anything it seems like a sign that we should omit them.
- I don't think there's any dispute that something like
accusations that it has committed genocide
would pass WP:V, but that isn't really an argument for highlighting material in a lede. That comes down mainly to WP:DUE and to MOS:LEDE, which tell us tobriefly summarize the most important points covered in an article
. — xDanielx /C\ 01:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC)- I gave my reasoning for this.
- This is a recent and ongoing event. The Oxford Encyclopedia of the Modern World, published in 2008, would not have mentioned 2024 events. It's a reliable source, but they are not clairvoyant.
- My DUE argument was due to heavy coverage of Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict in Israel entries in tertiary sources.
- If sources published in the next few years do not explicitly mention Gaza genocide, it can be taken out of the body or the lead.
- But for now, we can keep the article up to date. I believe this is the precedent in Misplaced Pages. Otherwise Misplaced Pages would be several years or longer behind everything if we had to wait for overview WP:Secondary or WP:Tertiary sources for everything. Once those type of sources covering recent events are available however, those sources would determine how we proceed. Bogazicili (talk) 11:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, it should be linked in the lead, at the end of the third paragraph where it discusses war crimes and crimes against humanity. This text has been through various iterations, but would benefit from greater precision by means of specificity. A great many countries have been accused of war crimes, making that a rather generic, not outstanding observation. While it is probably more notable that Israel has been accused of a particularly voluminous number of different war crimes in the post-WWII period, sitting above that are the very specific crimes against humanity in which it has been implicated –namely apartheid and genocide. Now apartheid has already been through the RFC process and denied a mention (based on rationales that grow poorer by the day) but to the question here, yes, it is extremely pertinent to mention the particularly nation-defining crime against humanity of genocide – the so-called crime of crimes. Iskandar323 (talk) 18:32, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes it is notable enough for an article, therefore should be linked. SKAG123 (talk) 23:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, but not in the lead. There's some discussion of genocide in the 21st century section of the article and this link could be put there, but it's not clear why this should be added to the lead. I am strongly opposed to adding it to the lead and most of the arguments for inclusion into the lead can be discounted on WP:10YT/WP:NOTTHENEWS/WP:RECENTISM grounds. Nemov (talk) 22:07, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes for the body, no for the lead It is certainly notable enough to mention in a relevant part of the article, but I think it is too recent to mention in the lead, since we cannot assess long-term historical importance yet. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:24, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, can you point to the relevant Misplaced Pages:Policies and guidelines for your argument? Bogazicili (talk) 15:32, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- The bar for something being included in the lead is pretty high, much higher than inclusion in the body. According to MOS:LEADNO, emphasis on material, such as the Gaza genocide, should reflect its relative importance to the topic as described by reliable sources. I think the current state of the lead is fine, although I would also be fine with adding a sentence or two about how Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal. I don't think the Gaza genocide by itself has enough weight to warrant inclusion in the lead. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:42, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Gaza genocide is part of the Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict, which is heavily covered in Israel entries in WP:Tertiary sources. See the sources above. Bogazicili (talk) 15:46, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, and the Israeli-Palestinian conflict certainly warrants inclusion in the lead. However, is the Gaza genocide itself heavily covered in those entries? It is the level of coverage for the specific topic that matters, not the level of coverage of the wider subject it is part of. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:52, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- See the discussion above. Bogazicili (talk) 15:59, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- WP:LEDE requires mention of significant criticism or controversies, this fits the bill, it needs no more than a wikilink. Selfstudier (talk) 16:07, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says summarize the most important points. I am simply contending that this is not one of them. Israel is a sizable country with a lot of history, and I don't believe that this has enough DUE weight in reliable sources about Israel as a whole to warrant including prominently in the lead, although I think it is important enough to mention in the body. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- To be clear, the Israeli-Palestinian conflict definitely warrants inclusion in the lead, and we could probably add a sentence about the legality of Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank, but I think including the Gaza genocide specifically in the lead would be recentist and UNDUE, especially since the Israel-Hamas war is only covered by "several wars" in the lead. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:15, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- See the wording suggestion above. This could be added into the lead while trimming the lead. For WP:DUE, we can look at coverage of Arab-Israeli conflict. If newer tertiary sources in the upcoming years do not explicitly mention Gaza genocide, Gaza genocide can be taken out. Do we have any tertiary sources published in the past few months?
- If the only sources were newspaper articles, recentist arguments would succeed. However, we have so many secondary sources on Gaza genocide now. Bogazicili (talk) 16:26, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, we have many secondary sources on the Gaza genocide. We also have many secondary sources on a variety of other things, like the 7 October attacks or the Munich massacre of Israeli athletes. Those aren't included in the lead either. My question is whether secondary or tertiary sources on the topic of Israel as a whole mention the genocide. If not, it shouldn't be in the lead yet. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Assessing DUEness of Munich massacre is easy, since it happened in 1972. Look at tertiary sources. Bogazicili (talk) 16:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Arguing that we should rush this into the lead because we can't assess long-term importance yet is pure recentism. I'm not saying we can't update the body to add this information, but we should wait on adding it to the lead until the long-term impact is more clear. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:35, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- That wasn't my argument, I won't respond any further to not WP:Bludgeon Bogazicili (talk) 16:38, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Arguing that we should rush this into the lead because we can't assess long-term importance yet is pure recentism. I'm not saying we can't update the body to add this information, but we should wait on adding it to the lead until the long-term impact is more clear. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:35, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Assessing DUEness of Munich massacre is easy, since it happened in 1972. Look at tertiary sources. Bogazicili (talk) 16:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, we have many secondary sources on the Gaza genocide. We also have many secondary sources on a variety of other things, like the 7 October attacks or the Munich massacre of Israeli athletes. Those aren't included in the lead either. My question is whether secondary or tertiary sources on the topic of Israel as a whole mention the genocide. If not, it shouldn't be in the lead yet. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says
summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies
I can assure you this is a prominent controversy. Well, unless you can convince me it isn't. Selfstudier (talk) 16:19, 18 December 2024 (UTC)- It is a decently prominent controversy, but the State of Israel has had a lot of prominent controversies in its short history, and we can't stuff them all in the lead. I think mentioning that their occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal would cover the most important controversy, being their illegal occupation of Gaza and the West Bank. The Gaza genocide is arguably a subtopic of that. For an applicable example from another article, the featured article Japan does not mention the atrocities they committed against China in World War II in the lead, even though it was, and still is, a very prominent controversy. Similarly, the lead of Germany only gives the Holocaust two words in a sentence about the Nazi government. Similar considerations apply here. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- And this would be exactly one word in the lead, per my suggestion. Bogazicili (talk) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- It is a decently prominent controversy, but the State of Israel has had a lot of prominent controversies in its short history, and we can't stuff them all in the lead. I think mentioning that their occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal would cover the most important controversy, being their illegal occupation of Gaza and the West Bank. The Gaza genocide is arguably a subtopic of that. For an applicable example from another article, the featured article Japan does not mention the atrocities they committed against China in World War II in the lead, even though it was, and still is, a very prominent controversy. Similarly, the lead of Germany only gives the Holocaust two words in a sentence about the Nazi government. Similar considerations apply here. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- To be clear, the Israeli-Palestinian conflict definitely warrants inclusion in the lead, and we could probably add a sentence about the legality of Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank, but I think including the Gaza genocide specifically in the lead would be recentist and UNDUE, especially since the Israel-Hamas war is only covered by "several wars" in the lead. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:15, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- It says summarize the most important points. I am simply contending that this is not one of them. Israel is a sizable country with a lot of history, and I don't believe that this has enough DUE weight in reliable sources about Israel as a whole to warrant including prominently in the lead, although I think it is important enough to mention in the body. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, and the Israeli-Palestinian conflict certainly warrants inclusion in the lead. However, is the Gaza genocide itself heavily covered in those entries? It is the level of coverage for the specific topic that matters, not the level of coverage of the wider subject it is part of. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:52, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Gaza genocide is part of the Israeli-Palestinian or Israeli-Arab conflict, which is heavily covered in Israel entries in WP:Tertiary sources. See the sources above. Bogazicili (talk) 15:46, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- The bar for something being included in the lead is pretty high, much higher than inclusion in the body. According to MOS:LEADNO, emphasis on material, such as the Gaza genocide, should reflect its relative importance to the topic as described by reliable sources. I think the current state of the lead is fine, although I would also be fine with adding a sentence or two about how Israel's occupation of Gaza and the West Bank is illegal. I don't think the Gaza genocide by itself has enough weight to warrant inclusion in the lead. QuicoleJR (talk) 15:42, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, can you point to the relevant Misplaced Pages:Policies and guidelines for your argument? Bogazicili (talk) 15:32, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? Bogazicili (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- What do you mean by that? QuicoleJR (talk) 14:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please provide a recent (second half of 2024 for example) tertiary or overview WP:Secondary source about Israel, and show that these issues are not mentioned. Bogazicili (talk) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The only one I have been able to find is Brittanica, which has been updated recently and makes no mention of the genocide. Very few overview sources have been published in that timeframe, and you are asking me to prove a negative. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:17, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The ONUS is on you to prove that they are covered in such sources. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:18, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- And I did provide recent sources below.
- Britannica's updates seem superficial. They have very detailed information about Netanyahu’s second stint in history section, but it seems to stop at a certain point. Bogazicili (talk) 14:23, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please provide a recent (second half of 2024 for example) tertiary or overview WP:Secondary source about Israel, and show that these issues are not mentioned. Bogazicili (talk) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- What do you mean by that? QuicoleJR (talk) 14:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? Bogazicili (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Only in the body while it’s a non-insignificant criticism, it’s not sufficiently significant to be included in the lead. Both based on the uncertain status and the recency of the accusation, the lead should instead continue referring to other, certain misconduct, per the relevant policies cited above, instead of referring to a disputed interpretation of some of the very recent actions. FortunateSons (talk) 23:14, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, can you please specify "the relevant policies"? Bogazicili (talk) 16:19, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- MOS:LEADNO, WP:Recentism, WP:10YT, WP:DUE would probably be the most relevant ones FortunateSons (talk) 08:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, thank you for clarification. Note that WP:10YT and WP:Recentism are not policies, they are explanatory essays. You can get more information in WP:SUPPLEMENTAL.
- For interpretation of WP:DUE and MOS:LEADNO, we disagree, but this has been discussed above, so I'm not going to get into it again. Bogazicili (talk) 14:15, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Of course, but they are broadly accepted as a concretisation of policy; nevertheless, thank you for the reminder. FortunateSons (talk) 18:04, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- MOS:LEADNO, WP:Recentism, WP:10YT, WP:DUE would probably be the most relevant ones FortunateSons (talk) 08:50, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, can you please specify "the relevant policies"? Bogazicili (talk) 16:19, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? Bogazicili (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- What do you imagine this source to be? There are news reports that don't mention genocide, but that not what you mean? FortunateSons (talk) 14:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Something like Routledge Handbook on Contemporary Israel or an encyclopedia, but published on second half of 2024. Bogazicili (talk) 14:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would defer to the cited Britannica here; more importantly, the fact that we’re discussing less than a handful of sources and a timeframe of 6 Months (or a year) is a strong indication that this is in fact recency bias. FortunateSons (talk) 15:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, Britannica doesn't seem that updated. See above. Bogazicili (talk) 19:19, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- Which seems like a strong indication that there has not been sufficient change to justify us updating either. FortunateSons (talk) 22:11, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, Britannica doesn't seem that updated. See above. Bogazicili (talk) 19:19, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- None have been published to my knowledge, and it is on you to prove that they do exist. QuicoleJR (talk) 17:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Plenty of sourcing, obviously relevant and controversial enough to outweigh proforma objections. Selfstudier (talk) 17:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- QuicoleJR, source provided below Bogazicili (talk) 19:18, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
- I would defer to the cited Britannica here; more importantly, the fact that we’re discussing less than a handful of sources and a timeframe of 6 Months (or a year) is a strong indication that this is in fact recency bias. FortunateSons (talk) 15:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Something like Routledge Handbook on Contemporary Israel or an encyclopedia, but published on second half of 2024. Bogazicili (talk) 14:27, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- What do you imagine this source to be? There are news reports that don't mention genocide, but that not what you mean? FortunateSons (talk) 14:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- FortunateSons, can you provide recent sources (second half of 2024 for example) that supports your interpretation of Wiki policies? Bogazicili (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Not in the lead per WP:RECENTISM. Would prefer to wait until a court conviction or acquittal has been made to decide. Wafflefrites (talk) 04:10, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- The Palestinian genocide accusation is not recent only the Gaza genocide is and that is still a significant controversy, regardless. Selfstudier (talk) 17:08, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Since 1955, the population of Palestine has steadily increased. The life expectancy has increased, the infant mortality and child death rate has decreased. So I don’t understand how Israel has been genociding the Palestinians if all these numbers are improving for them. Wafflefrites (talk) 00:34, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Reminder of WP:OR and WP:NOTAFORUM. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 00:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Here is a source so it is not OR or NOTAFORUM. The source is a Jewish advocacy group. Wafflefrites (talk) 00:49, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- That isn’t a reliable source for the topic. nableezy - 02:12, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Without even getting into if the advocacy group source you provided is a reliable source, for accusation of genocide, we would use WP:Secondary sources such as , so the source you provided does not invalidate those, per WP:NPOV. Bogazicili (talk) 14:27, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Here is a source so it is not OR or NOTAFORUM. The source is a Jewish advocacy group. Wafflefrites (talk) 00:49, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Reminder of WP:OR and WP:NOTAFORUM. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 00:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- Since 1955, the population of Palestine has steadily increased. The life expectancy has increased, the infant mortality and child death rate has decreased. So I don’t understand how Israel has been genociding the Palestinians if all these numbers are improving for them. Wafflefrites (talk) 00:34, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
- The Palestinian genocide accusation is not recent only the Gaza genocide is and that is still a significant controversy, regardless. Selfstudier (talk) 17:08, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes should be linked in lead per Iskandar323's reasoning. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 23:16, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Comment, newer sources
- Overview WP:Secondary source: Routledge Handbook on Palestine. From the introduction chapter:
In this context we should not overlook the latest turning point in the history of Palestine – the attack by Hamas on 7th October 2023 on Israeli settlements adjacent to Gaza and the subsequent genocidal war that the state of Israel has carried out in the Gaza strip
- Although the title says Palestine, it covers Israel too. See the definition on page 3 in pdf preview (click on preview pdf in the link)
- The Palgrave Handbook of Contemporary Geopolitics, Geopolitics in Israel entry. Although this is an entry about geopolitics, and not an entry about Israel as a country, the prominence of 7 October Hamas-led attack on Israel is notable. Genocide accusations are also mentioned.
- Given no recent (second half of 2024 for example) overview secondary or tertiary sources about Israel have been provided in this RfC, and given the lengthy coverage of Arab-Israel conflict in older tertiary sources about Israel, and given the above sources, I now think that three things are due both in the lead and in the body:
- Bogazicili (talk) 14:01, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The lack of recent overviews (I don't think many have been published) does not mean that we should include these things in the lead. I support adding the Israel-Hamas war, I think the other two would be both be giving UNDUE weight to recent events. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:15, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The lack of recent overviews means we have to use what we have (above), while keeping in mind the heavy coverage of Arab-Israeli conflict in older sources. I just pinged you to ask for newer sources though, no need to discuss what we already discussed above. Bogazicili (talk) 14:26, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, the available sourcing here and on the related article indicates that it's a major part of the coverage and history of Israel. The arguments against inclusion don't make any sense, either; whether individual editors agree with it, or whether it's disputed, are reasons to be cautious about the precise wording for how we cover it, but they're not what we use to determine if we cover it at all - that question comes down to how broad and high-quality the sourcing is and how significant they treat it as. And the extensive academic sourcing clearly justifies treating it as a high-profile aspect of the topic worth discussing prominently here. A lead is supposed to contain
mention of significant criticism or controversies
; we don't exclude high-profile stuff just because it's controversial. The sourcing disputing it above doesn't help; while it's not terribly high-quality, I'm sure higher-quality sourcing for that perspective exists... but it's written from the perspective of "this is an important and central argument over Israel", ie. a controversy worth covering even if they have a clear perspective on it. The sort of coverage that would be necessary to exclude it isn't just academics who disagree, but sourcing that establishes that it is broadly fringe, which doesn't seem to be the case. --Aquillion (talk) 15:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
Discussion (RfC)
- This doesn’t seem that actionable an RfC, or that productive a question. The content of the article is what is discussed, and links serve as navigational aids for delving into the content. Considering a link alone in the aether rather misses its purpose. CMD (talk) 09:02, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- Seems that there should be first some material in the body related to the wikilink and South Africa's genocide case against Israel. @Huldra: Suggest you pull the RFC tag on this for now until some material can be put together for the article body. Selfstudier (talk) 11:07, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- Something like this perhaps
- Israel is accused of carrying out a genocide against the Palestinian people by experts, governments, United Nations agencies, and non-governmental organisations during its invasion of the Gaza Strip in the ongoing Israel–Hamas war. Observers, including the UN Special Committee to investigate Israeli practices and United Nations Special Rapporteur Francesca Albanese, have cited statements by senior Israeli officials that may indicate an "intent to destroy" (in whole or in part) Gaza's population, a necessary condition for the legal threshold of genocide to be met. A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide". On 29 December 2023, South Africa instituted proceedings against Israel at the International Court of Justice pursuant to the Genocide Convention,
- This is just wrt the genocide issue, need something about the arrest warrants as well. Selfstudier (talk) 15:43, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't seem very neutral to cover statements from sources like Albanese without also covering accusations of bias on their part. — xDanielx /C\ 23:36, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn’t make sense to cover things that aren’t relevant to the topic, like accusations of bias instead of addressing the substance of the statement. nableezy - 00:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- If we don't want to get into such accusations of bias then we shouldn't be using sources like Albanese in the first place. — xDanielx /C\ 17:00, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- That makes no sense to me. We dont include accusations of bias against the Times of Israel anytime we use them as a source, or the NYTimes, or Benny Morris, or whatever other reliable sources we cite. The ad hominem of "she's biased" is not relevant to the argument she makes or the qualifications she has to make them. At most, such accusations belong in the biography of Albanese, or Morris, or whatever other article that covers the sources themselves, not whenever they are cited. nableezy - 17:23, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- That's not at all comparable. NYT and Morris are occasionally criticized by both sides for various perceived biases. Accusations of bias against Albanese are far more significant, e.g. with officials from several different governments openly calling her antisemitic or unfit for her role. — xDanielx /C\ 18:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- They are directly comparable, and governments arent reliable sources for anything other than the views of the politicians heading those governments. It is a basic ad hominem, and it has nothing to do with the actual content of her comments. nableezy - 19:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't really make sense to call this an ad hominem, when source selection inherently involves evaluating sources rather than the content of their statements. Surely the WP:BESTSOURCES here would be uninvolved ones with some semblance of objectivity.
- Covering Albanese's claim here is like covering Biden's claim that there isn't a genocide. Clearly neither is among the BESTSOURCES, and neither claim is noteworthy enough that it would need to be covered anyway. — xDanielx /C\ 19:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Biden is a politician speaking as a politician. Albanese is an expert in international law, speaking as an expert in international law. nableezy - 20:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- I should add that she isn't just speaking as an expert in international law (which she undoubtedly is), but she is speaking as a UN official who is the current United Nations Special Rapporteur on the occupied Palestinian territories. To compare her speech with Biden (a non-expert politician who has absolutely no scholarship on the issue and doesn't have an international law background) is ridiculous. JasonMacker (talk) 18:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Special Rapporteurs are not UN officials, they are independent experts consulted by the UN, and they remain independent. See United Nations special rapporteur for an overview. nableezy - 20:54, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- I should add that she isn't just speaking as an expert in international law (which she undoubtedly is), but she is speaking as a UN official who is the current United Nations Special Rapporteur on the occupied Palestinian territories. To compare her speech with Biden (a non-expert politician who has absolutely no scholarship on the issue and doesn't have an international law background) is ridiculous. JasonMacker (talk) 18:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Biden is a politician speaking as a politician. Albanese is an expert in international law, speaking as an expert in international law. nableezy - 20:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- And Jews and others praising her, no? She must be doing something right. Afaics, she has tended to be ahead of the curve on most matters. Selfstudier (talk) 19:06, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- They are directly comparable, and governments arent reliable sources for anything other than the views of the politicians heading those governments. It is a basic ad hominem, and it has nothing to do with the actual content of her comments. nableezy - 19:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- That's not at all comparable. NYT and Morris are occasionally criticized by both sides for various perceived biases. Accusations of bias against Albanese are far more significant, e.g. with officials from several different governments openly calling her antisemitic or unfit for her role. — xDanielx /C\ 18:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- That makes no sense to me. We dont include accusations of bias against the Times of Israel anytime we use them as a source, or the NYTimes, or Benny Morris, or whatever other reliable sources we cite. The ad hominem of "she's biased" is not relevant to the argument she makes or the qualifications she has to make them. At most, such accusations belong in the biography of Albanese, or Morris, or whatever other article that covers the sources themselves, not whenever they are cited. nableezy - 17:23, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- If we don't want to get into such accusations of bias then we shouldn't be using sources like Albanese in the first place. — xDanielx /C\ 17:00, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn’t make sense to cover things that aren’t relevant to the topic, like accusations of bias instead of addressing the substance of the statement. nableezy - 00:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't seem very neutral to cover statements from sources like Albanese without also covering accusations of bias on their part. — xDanielx /C\ 23:36, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- Seems that there should be first some material in the body related to the wikilink and South Africa's genocide case against Israel. @Huldra: Suggest you pull the RFC tag on this for now until some material can be put together for the article body. Selfstudier (talk) 11:07, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
References
- "Situation in the State of Palestine: ICC Pre-Trial Chamber I issues warrant of arrest for Mohammed Diab Ibrahim Al-Masri (Deif)". International Criminal Court. 2024-11-21. Retrieved 2024-11-26.
- ^ "Gaza: UN experts call on international community to prevent genocide against the Palestinian people". OHCHR. 16 November 2023. Archived from the original on 24 December 2023. Retrieved 22 December 2023.
Grave violations committed by Israel against Palestinians in the aftermath of 7 October, particularly in Gaza, point to a genocide in the making, UN experts said today. They illustrated evidence of increasing genocidal incitement, overt intent to "destroy the Palestinian people under occupation", loud calls for a 'second Nakba' in Gaza and the rest of the occupied Palestinian territory, and the use of powerful weaponry with inherently indiscriminate impacts, resulting in a colossal death toll and destruction of life-sustaining infrastructure.
- Burga, Solcyré (13 November 2023). "Is What's Happening in Gaza a Genocide? Experts Weigh In". Time. Archived from the original on 25 November 2023. Retrieved 24 November 2023.; Corder, Mike (2 January 2024). "South Africa's genocide case against Israel sets up a high-stakes legal battle at the UN's top court". ABC News. Archived from the original on 7 January 2024. Retrieved 3 January 2024.;Quigley, John (3 July 2024). "The Lancet and Genocide By "Slow Death" in Gaza". Arab Center Washington DC. Archived from the original on 13 July 2024. Retrieved 13 July 2024.
- Francesca Albanese (26 March 2024), Anatomy of a Genocide – Report of the Special Rapporteur on the situation of human rights in the Palestinian territories occupied since 1967, Francesca Albanese (PDF), Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, Wikidata Q125152282, archived (PDF) from the original on 25 March 2024
- Burga 2023; Soni, S. (December 2023). "Gaza and international law: The global obligation to protect life and health". South African Journal of Bioethics and Law. 16 (3): 80–81. doi:10.7196/SAJBL.2023.v16i3.1764.
- "International Expert Statement on Israeli State Crime". statecrime.org. International State Crime Initiative. Archived from the original on 6 January 2024. Retrieved 4 January 2024.
- Lynch, Marc; Telhami, Shibley (20 June 2024). "Gloom about the 'day after' the Gaza war pervasive among Mideast scholars". Brookings. Archived from the original on 26 June 2024. Retrieved 29 June 2024.
- "South Africa launches case at top UN court accusing Israel of genocide in Gaza". Associated Press. December 29, 2023. Archived from the original on January 2, 2024. Retrieved January 5, 2024.
- Rabin, Roni Caryn; Yazbek, Hiba; Fuller, Thomas (2024-01-11). "Israel Faces Accusation of Genocide as South Africa Brings Case to U.N. Court". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Archived from the original on 13 January 2024. Retrieved 2024-01-13.
- "Proceedings instituted by South Africa against the State of Israel on 29 December 2023" (PDF). International Court of Justice. December 29, 2023. Archived from the original on January 5, 2024. Retrieved January 5, 2024. ALT Link
- "South Africa institutes proceedings against Israel and requests the International Court of Justice to indicate provisional measures" (Press release). The Hague, Netherlands: International Court of Justice. United Nations Information System on the Question of Palestine. December 29, 2023. Archived from the original on January 5, 2024. Retrieved January 5, 2023.
Tag
Resolved-tag removed !Moxy🍁 20:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
@Moxy: Reasons for the tag, please? Selfstudier (talk) 13:15, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Nothing but military info looks like nothing but conflict for 20+ years ...this article is not History of the Israel Defense Forces. Need info like ..90s saw first featuring direct election of the prime minister etc. Moxy🍁 13:22, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- You tag says undue not that the section needs updating, which material is undue? And why? Selfstudier (talk) 13:25, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- undue because its nothing but military history....no memtiom of any other history. Sounds like the most unstable country doing nothing but being at war. Moxy🍁 13:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- History on its own at 5116 words is half an article by itself. A lot is likely undue. CMD (talk) 13:47, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Agree so much details - over info that can be and is covred in sub articles that can be trimed like :The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked in July 1947, with a series of widespread guerrilla raids culminating in the Sergeants affair, in which the Irgun took two British sergeants hostage as attempted leverage against the planned execution of three Irgun operatives. After the executions were carried out, the Irgun killed the two British soldiers, hanged their bodies from trees, and left a booby trap at the scene which injured a British soldier. The incident caused widespread outrage in the UK" Moxy🍁 13:51, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- The section that has been tagged is Israel#21st century, a short section, the material
The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked...
is not even in it, that material is in Israel#British_Mandate_for_Palestine section, which has not been tagged. - So did you mean to tag something else? Selfstudier (talk) 14:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Moxy explained that subsection above, it is just one of a few with similar issues. CMD (talk) 16:57, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- They haven't explained it, the material they quote is not tagged. Selfstudier (talk) 16:59, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry I thought I was pretty clear.... the whole section is just about military.... in fact we have two paragraphs for something that's happening in the past year. What we are looking for is substantial historical significant information about the country's social and historic evolution in that time. Best we simply don't regurgitate American news headlines. For example should mention Disengagement Plan... What kind of social human rights progress has there been? In 20 years there must be some sort of legal process that has changed.... democratic decline perhaps? What has happened on the diplomatic front.... like the mass increase in foreign aid? Moxy🍁 20:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
the whole section is just about military
Which section? The only section that you tagged is the 21st Century section. If you meant to put the tag for the entire history section, then do that, I would also agree with that inline with multiple prior discussions asserting that it was way too long. Selfstudier (talk) 21:05, 28 November 2024 (UTC)- Which section? Not interested in some sort of gameplay. Your initial post was about a tag in a section this is the topic of the ongoing conversation..... with mention by another and myself about the excess detail overall in the history section with an example that I gave. You either agree it's excessive or you don't.... best course of action would be to come up with some sort of prose for the section.... and a better summary. Moxy🍁 21:33, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- OK, you don't want to admit you got this all backwards, fine by me, bfn. Selfstudier (talk) 23:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- What you have to ask yourself is does your approach to this conversation help improve that article or not. There is clearly a problem all over the history section...but the info in this tagged section is the topic of conversation...do you have any input what can be done to help the section? Then perhaps we can move on to other sections. Moxy🍁 15:57, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- I asked you what the problems were and your response was to quote something else from an untagged section, so if you can answer the original question that would be good. Selfstudier (talk) 16:15, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
Best you let someone that is competent deal with the tag. My bad just frustrated that the post has not moved forward in actual improvements. Will address the problem with prose after the content addition dispute is over. Moxy🍁 18:23, 29 November 2024 (UTC)- Couldn't agree more. Selfstudier (talk) 18:30, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- What content addition dispute? Selfstudier (talk) 19:50, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- Was not aware of 'this'. Let's deal with the content issue after all the current concers. Last post from me here.Moxy🍁 20:01, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
I don't see what that has to do with the issue you have been describing in this section.. OK, resolved for now. Selfstudier (talk) 20:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- Was not aware of 'this'. Let's deal with the content issue after all the current concers. Last post from me here.Moxy🍁 20:01, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- I asked you what the problems were and your response was to quote something else from an untagged section, so if you can answer the original question that would be good. Selfstudier (talk) 16:15, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- What you have to ask yourself is does your approach to this conversation help improve that article or not. There is clearly a problem all over the history section...but the info in this tagged section is the topic of conversation...do you have any input what can be done to help the section? Then perhaps we can move on to other sections. Moxy🍁 15:57, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- OK, you don't want to admit you got this all backwards, fine by me, bfn. Selfstudier (talk) 23:08, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Which section? Not interested in some sort of gameplay. Your initial post was about a tag in a section this is the topic of the ongoing conversation..... with mention by another and myself about the excess detail overall in the history section with an example that I gave. You either agree it's excessive or you don't.... best course of action would be to come up with some sort of prose for the section.... and a better summary. Moxy🍁 21:33, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry I thought I was pretty clear.... the whole section is just about military.... in fact we have two paragraphs for something that's happening in the past year. What we are looking for is substantial historical significant information about the country's social and historic evolution in that time. Best we simply don't regurgitate American news headlines. For example should mention Disengagement Plan... What kind of social human rights progress has there been? In 20 years there must be some sort of legal process that has changed.... democratic decline perhaps? What has happened on the diplomatic front.... like the mass increase in foreign aid? Moxy🍁 20:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- They haven't explained it, the material they quote is not tagged. Selfstudier (talk) 16:59, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Moxy explained that subsection above, it is just one of a few with similar issues. CMD (talk) 16:57, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- The section that has been tagged is Israel#21st century, a short section, the material
- Agree so much details - over info that can be and is covred in sub articles that can be trimed like :The Jewish insurgency continued and peaked in July 1947, with a series of widespread guerrilla raids culminating in the Sergeants affair, in which the Irgun took two British sergeants hostage as attempted leverage against the planned execution of three Irgun operatives. After the executions were carried out, the Irgun killed the two British soldiers, hanged their bodies from trees, and left a booby trap at the scene which injured a British soldier. The incident caused widespread outrage in the UK" Moxy🍁 13:51, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- History on its own at 5116 words is half an article by itself. A lot is likely undue. CMD (talk) 13:47, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- undue because its nothing but military history....no memtiom of any other history. Sounds like the most unstable country doing nothing but being at war. Moxy🍁 13:29, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- You tag says undue not that the section needs updating, which material is undue? And why? Selfstudier (talk) 13:25, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 1 December 2024
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In 21st century history, please change
− | A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide". | + | A majority of mostly US-based Middle East scholars who were polled believe Israel's actions in Gaza were intended to make it uninhabitable for Palestinians, and 75% of them say Israel's actions in Gaza constitute either genocide or "major war crimes akin to genocide". |
"mostly US-based Middle East scholars" is not an identifiable group, the phrase as written doesn't have a concrete definition. Which Middle East scholars' beliefs are being talked about here? The scholars who were polled are being talking about. Adding language that clarifies the source of these statistics and defines the group in question could make the statistics more useful. Thank you for your consideration. Mikewem (talk) 17:00, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- From the given citation, added "758" before "mostly" and "polled in 2024 by Brookings" before "believe" to clarify matters. Selfstudier (talk) 17:42, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
""Israel"" listed at Redirects for discussion
The redirect "Israel" has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at Misplaced Pages:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 December 7 § "Israel" until a consensus is reached. Ca 15:00, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
Lede
@Terrainman: Are these your first edits to articles on WP that relate to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict? If so, please familiarize yourself with WP:ARBPIA and WP:ONUS which states that adding contested content requires achieving consensus on the talk page, not reverting. This responsibility is known as onus lying with the inserter of the material. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:47, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, thank-you. The information I added was to improve the context of the paragraph, in a much needed way. From what I can see, nothing contested was added. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 12:51, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Your additions to the lede/lead were reverted so the material is by definition is now contested, meaning you will have to gain consensus for them in the talk page, not revert. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:54, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I understand but your edit reason was to keep the brevity of the lead when my edit was rather brief in my view. It has been further edited by another user to make the additions more concise. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 13:14, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Your additions still increased the material about the 1948 war from six to eight sentences in the lede. This needs to be trimmed even below six sentences. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:34, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I understand since that para is already very long, however unfortunately the topic is extremely complicated; hence why it was the longest para in the lead long before my edit. My addition provided essential context in my view, I also received thanks for it and it has been refined since by another editor. In my view if this para is to be made more concise we need to explore other options for that. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 13:48, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Receiving thanks is not a measure of consensus, but discussion on the talk page. Your addition still duplicates mention of the UN partition plan in the second and third lede paragraphs, as well as non-summarizing elaborations on the Oslo Accords, which is also a duplicate mention in the third lede paragraph. Makeandtoss (talk) 14:03, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- The first sentence of the 3rd paragraph explains that the partition plan failed, which is crucial context!
- Regarding Oslo accords, it is not a duplication. The second mention references them in a sentence about progress since then. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 14:28, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Furthermore, if we are setting this low a threshold in what is essential to the lead, there are multiple parts of the third paragraph which elaborate to a significant extend, rather than merely state the existence of key historical events which are in-fact needed to provide context for the rest of the paragraph. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 14:41, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Then all should be trimmed. Makeandtoss (talk) 17:00, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Furthermore, if we are setting this low a threshold in what is essential to the lead, there are multiple parts of the third paragraph which elaborate to a significant extend, rather than merely state the existence of key historical events which are in-fact needed to provide context for the rest of the paragraph. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 14:41, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Receiving thanks is not a measure of consensus, but discussion on the talk page. Your addition still duplicates mention of the UN partition plan in the second and third lede paragraphs, as well as non-summarizing elaborations on the Oslo Accords, which is also a duplicate mention in the third lede paragraph. Makeandtoss (talk) 14:03, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I understand since that para is already very long, however unfortunately the topic is extremely complicated; hence why it was the longest para in the lead long before my edit. My addition provided essential context in my view, I also received thanks for it and it has been refined since by another editor. In my view if this para is to be made more concise we need to explore other options for that. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 13:48, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Your additions still increased the material about the 1948 war from six to eight sentences in the lede. This needs to be trimmed even below six sentences. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:34, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I understand but your edit reason was to keep the brevity of the lead when my edit was rather brief in my view. It has been further edited by another user to make the additions more concise. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 13:14, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Terrainman: Your additions to the lede/lead were reverted so the material is by definition is now contested, meaning you will have to gain consensus for them in the talk page, not revert. Makeandtoss (talk) 12:54, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Additionally, when you say Lede, do you mean Lead? I just want to be sure I am not missing something here. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 12:52, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Lede and Lead are legitimate alternative spellings; both refer to the intro material which, in Misplaced Pages, should summarize the major points of rest of the article. A major issue for many Misplaced Pages articles is putting too much stuff in the lede. Erp (talk) 05:05, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Minor edit Request
Remove "synonymous with Canaan" from the lede.
1. The borders of ancient Canaan don't line up with modern day Israel.
2. No real reason to mention ancient Canaan just like we don't mention that it's synonymous with British Mandatory Palestine or the Judea province of the Roman Empire.
3. The fact that Canaanites lives there is in the following sentence. Fyukfy5 (talk) 22:47, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done QuicoleJR (talk) 16:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Restore Canaan and rephrase to avoid implying synonymity. Makeandtoss (talk) 16:57, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- This didn't address the points they made. 'Variably known as' still conflicts with all three points here. 𝙏𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙣𝙢𝙖𝙣地形人 (talk) 17:56, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Restore Canaan and rephrase to avoid implying synonymity. Makeandtoss (talk) 16:57, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
RFC: Human rights violations section
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Should this article include a top level section about violations of human rights by the state of Israel? DMH223344 (talk) 17:36, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Survey
Comment Not currently a subject of dispute? Maybe just create one and see what happens first? I wouldn't object personally but do we need an RFC for this right now? Selfstudier (talk) 17:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- It was reverted quickly: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Israel&diff=1266366530&oldid=1266365841 DMH223344 (talk) 18:04, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- That might have been just the into the sea thing? @Remsense:. I would have thought a hr top level section would have involved moving stuff from elsewhere in the article into it? Selfstudier (talk) 18:09, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- I made a mistake, please feel free to revert. Apologies. Remsense ‥ 论 19:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Could you revert so that I don't annoy any admins violating 1rr (even though I have your permission)? DMH223344 (talk) 20:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Apologies, again. Remsense ‥ 论 20:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- ah I see, I had totally misunderstood your edit summary. Thanks for reverting. DMH223344 (talk) 20:21, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Apologies, again. Remsense ‥ 论 20:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Could you revert so that I don't annoy any admins violating 1rr (even though I have your permission)? DMH223344 (talk) 20:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- I made a mistake, please feel free to revert. Apologies. Remsense ‥ 论 19:55, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- That might have been just the into the sea thing? @Remsense:. I would have thought a hr top level section would have involved moving stuff from elsewhere in the article into it? Selfstudier (talk) 18:09, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- No How many countries have human rights violations? I would maybe accept a top level section for Israeli-occupied territories because that is pretty unique and a big part of what Israel physically is. Absolutely no for HR violations generally. Bitspectator ⛩️ 23:48, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Coverage of Israel in RS is very often centered around human rights. That's not the case for most other countries. We should follow RS and similarly give top level attention to coverage of human rights. DMH223344 (talk) 01:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Agreed that Israeli-occupied territories should be a top level section. There could be a Human rights subsection under Government and politics section Bogazicili (talk) 16:56, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Coverage of Israel in RS is very often centered around human rights. That's not the case for most other countries. We should follow RS and similarly give top level attention to coverage of human rights. DMH223344 (talk) 01:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Information should be integrated into the article where it would be relevant rather than standing out on its own... WP:COUNTRYSECTIONS = "Avoid sections focusing on criticisms or controversies. Try to achieve a more neutral text by folding debates into the narrative, rather than isolating them into sections. " This poor article really needs some work..... most of the articles is focused on military actions and one point in time.Moxy🍁 00:28, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Discussion
Sweep them into the sea
Original sentence: 'The purpose of the invasion was to prevent the establishment of the Jewish state and to "sweep them into the sea".'
Proposed change: 'The purpose of the invasion was to prevent the establishment of the Jewish state.'
The quote that allegedly supports the inclusion of the the statement 'and to "sweep them into the sea"' is:
A week before the armies marched, Azzam told Kirkbride: "It does not matter how many there are. We will sweep them into the sea.
This quote is of course not consistent with the claim that the purpose of the invasion was to sweep the Jews into the sea. The other citations for this sentence include:
Morris 2008, p. 396: "The immediate trigger of the 1948 War was the November 1947 UN partition resolution. The Zionist movement, except for its fringes, accepted the proposal."
David Tal (2004). War in Palestine, 1948: Israeli and Arab Strategy and Diplomacy. Routledge. p. 469. ISBN 978-1-135-77513-1. Archived from the original on 19 December 2023. Retrieved 1 December 2018. "some of the Arab armies invaded Palestine in order to prevent the establishment of a Jewish state, Transjordan..."
Morris 2008, p. 187: Ahmed Shukeiry, one of Haj Amin al-Husseini's aides (and, later, the founding chairman of the Palestine Liberation Organization), simply described the aim as "the elimination of the Jewish state." ... al-Quwwatli told his people: "Our army has entered ... we shall win and we shall eradicate Zionism""
None of these support the claim about sweeping Jews into the sea.
Additionally:
Ben-Ami: The Arab states were driven to war in great measure by theperception that prevailed in their societies as to the Jewish state andthe threat it posed to the Arabs.
Rouhanna: One goal of some of these armies was to prevent the establishment of a Jewish state; the Jordanian army, however, also sought to prevent the establishment of a Palestinian state by conquering and annexing (after achieving the tacit understanding of the Zionist leadership) parts of Palestine for the Hashemite Kingdom.
Shapira: As the sheer magnitude of the Palestinian Arabs’ defeat emerged, and as the horror stories of the Jews’ alleged brutality spread throughout the Arab world, the pressure exerted by public opinion on the Arab states to come to the aid of their Palestinian brethren intensified. Despite difficulties arranging a unified military command, as well as mutual suspicion regarding each other’s objectives in Palestine, on April 30 the Arab states decided to invade.
Shlaim: Seven Arab states sent their armies into Palestine with the firm intention of strangling the Jewish state at birth.
DMH223344 (talk) 17:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Edit Request
Change the new "Human Rights violations" section, no other country the I checked (including those with serious human rights violation claims like North Korea, Saudi Arabia, Russia, Myanmar) have any kind of section named anywhere near as negatively. Those claims are usually found in the Government and Politics tab. The way it is now is a violation of WP:NPOV Fyukfy5 (talk) 20:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, this is extremely unusual. Bitspectator ⛩️ 23:42, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Looks like we need an RFC after all. Selfstudier (talk) 00:26, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I don't know what you mean. The HR violations section was created accidentally, right? Bitspectator ⛩️ 00:35, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Nope. Selfstudier (talk) 00:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Are we both talking about the top level section I just deleted? Bitspectator ⛩️ 00:45, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- I created it. It was not created accidentally, please revert your edit. DMH223344 (talk) 01:55, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I was confused by a comment Remsense left. I think it's an extremely controversial addition. Is there some WP rule reason that I have to revert, or is there consensus I'm not seeing? Bitspectator ⛩️ 02:09, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- There's definitely an open discussion.... Best leave it out till the process is done. Thinking about adding undue tags in relation to three or four sections... there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine. Will gather some thoughts together and bring it up at the project page see if we can help. Moxy🍁 02:14, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine
, right, and its relationship with Palestine and Palestinians is a core part of the coverage of Israel in RS. I'm curious where you think the undue tags should go. DMH223344 (talk) 02:33, 1 January 2025 (UTC)- Article is to big ingeneral and suffers from in the new style - 21st century should be summarized much better. Israeli-occupied territories, International opinion and Accusations of Apartheid should be integrated into history and/ or foreign relations with just a few sentences for each topic leading our readers to main articles. See Germany for how its done.,see also Misplaced Pages:Summary style and WP:COUNTRYSECTIONS. Moxy🍁 03:05, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- That seems like a strange suggestion, of course the occupation is relevant to the history, but it is also a crucial aspect of Israeli politics today. DMH223344 (talk) 03:34, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Israel != Germany Selfstudier (talk) 09:44, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Article is to big ingeneral and suffers from in the new style - 21st century should be summarized much better. Israeli-occupied territories, International opinion and Accusations of Apartheid should be integrated into history and/ or foreign relations with just a few sentences for each topic leading our readers to main articles. See Germany for how its done.,see also Misplaced Pages:Summary style and WP:COUNTRYSECTIONS. Moxy🍁 03:05, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- There's definitely an open discussion.... Best leave it out till the process is done. Thinking about adding undue tags in relation to three or four sections... there's more to this country than it's relationship with with Palestine. Will gather some thoughts together and bring it up at the project page see if we can help. Moxy🍁 02:14, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I was confused by a comment Remsense left. I think it's an extremely controversial addition. Is there some WP rule reason that I have to revert, or is there consensus I'm not seeing? Bitspectator ⛩️ 02:09, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- I created it. It was not created accidentally, please revert your edit. DMH223344 (talk) 01:55, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Are we both talking about the top level section I just deleted? Bitspectator ⛩️ 00:45, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Nope. Selfstudier (talk) 00:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry, I don't know what you mean. The HR violations section was created accidentally, right? Bitspectator ⛩️ 00:35, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Looks like we need an RFC after all. Selfstudier (talk) 00:26, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Edit request regarding the map
I am writing to express concern about the recent changes to the map. The current map includes territories marked in green, representing areas such as Palestinian territories and even the Golan Heights. This change departs from the previous map, which accurately reflected the internationally recognized borders as endorsed by the United Nations. Marking these territories in green introduces a controversial interpretation that is not widely accepted by major international organizations.
1. Lack of Consensus: Major international bodies such as the United Nations, the European Union, and other globally recognized entities do not depict these territories in a distinct color that implies sovereignty or control by specific nations. The new map’s coloration could mislead readers into assuming a level of recognition or legitimacy that does not exist.
2. Neutrality Concerns: Misplaced Pages strives to maintain a neutral perspective, especially on contentious geopolitical issues. By adopting a map with disputed territories marked differently, the page risks appearing to take a stance, which could alienate users and detract from Misplaced Pages’s reputation as an impartial source.
3. Consistency with Historical Usage: The previous map, in use for over 20 years, was widely accepted as a neutral representation of the region. It respected international consensus and did not introduce contentious visual elements. Returning to this map would preserve the neutrality and credibility of the content.
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I respectfully request that the map be reverted to its previous version, which better reflects the official and internationally recognized borders. This change would ensure that Misplaced Pages adheres to its guiding principles of neutrality and accuracy. AIexperts (talk) 18:01, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- You don't have the needed qualifications to edit about this topic(you don't yet have 500 edits), please see your user talk page. 331dot (talk) 18:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- The map reflects Israel's international recognized borders and the territories it claims (East Jerusalem and the Golan Heights) and occupies militarily (West Bank excl. East Jerusalem and the Gaza Strip). This is mostly consistent with other country articles, such as Syria (map depicts unrecognized claim over the former Sanjak of Alexandretta) and Russia (map depicts claims over the Ukrainian territories it occupied since 2014). However, there is an argument to removing the West Bank (excl. East Jerusalem) and the Gaza Strip from the map and using File:Israel (orthographic projection) with disputed territories.svg instead, since Israel does not de jure claim the territory and it is internationally recognized as being part of the State of Palestine. 2018rebel 22:36, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- There is no basis for Israeli claims to either EJ or the Golan, they are unrecognized annexes and along with the West Bank and Gaza are considered as occupied territories. Selfstudier (talk) 22:59, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- However, for consistency reasons, it would be justifiable to exclude territories not annexed by Israel, as locator maps don't typically include territories under military occupation, but do include territories unilaterally annexed. For example, the map of Russia does not include Abkhazia and South Ossetia in light green, despite them being internationally recognized as Russian-occupied territories, but does include Crimea, as it was illegally annexed in 2014. Similarly, the map of the United States does not include Al-Tanf. as it is not annexed territory of the US. 2018rebel 23:20, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Anyone that wants to can see Green Line Israel by clicking on a radio button, the initial question really is what we want the default view to be, that or with occupied territories shown. If it were up to me I would show Green Line Israel, excluding Golan, as default.
- Then the alternate view should show all occupied territories, including purportedly annexed territories. Btw "disputed" is not a NPOV term here, see Status of territories occupied by Israel in 1967#Disputed territories.
- Other article maps do not affect what happens with the situation here. Selfstudier (talk) 11:02, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
- If all territories under military occupation are to be included on the map, why are Southern Lebanon and parts of Southern Syria, newly occupied since 2024, excluded? There is also a significant difference in the legal status of East Jerusalem versus the rest of the West Bank. Israeli civil law is applied in East Jerusalem and the Golan Heights, whereas it is extended to Israeli settlers in the rest of the West Bank only via emergency regulations. Gaza remains militarily occupied due to control over its airspace, territorial waters, and borders, but Israeli civil law is not extended and Israel does not formally claim the territory as its own. Meanwhile, if militarily-occupied territories are to be included, Southern Lebanon nor the newly occupied parts of Syria are shown in light green.
- The map of Russia excludes Ukrainian territories that are occupied but not annexed, and the Ukraine map omits its military occupation of parts of Kursk Oblast. The Russian article map did not include the four annexed oblasts until after they were annexed, despite Russia beginning settlement activities before then . Other Misplaced Pages articles consistently differentiate between annexed and occupied territories, marking only annexed areas.
- The map should either show all territories under Israeli military presence or limit itself to lands Israel formally claims as its own. Unrecognized or illegal claims should be marked in light green, in contrast to the West Bank (beyond East Jerusalem) and Gaza, which are solely claimed by the State of Palestine. This distinction is already visible on the map for the State of Palestine, where annexed territories like East Jerusalem and Latrun are marked differently from areas claimed exclusively by Palestine. 2018rebel 19:20, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
- Just to repeat that what we do here on this page for the map here does not depend on what is done at any other page.
- Southern Lebanon and parts of Southern Syria have not as yet been declared as occupied territory by any competent authority afaik.
- Lands that Israel
formally claims
(EJ/Golan) are also illegal claims, so designated by the UNSC (reaffirmed recently by the ICJ in respect of EJ), so this distinction is of no import. - As things stand, I simply want to note the OP request as not done (no consensus of EC editors). Presumably you do not want to do that. So I suggest we wait and see if any other editors have a view. Selfstudier (talk) 19:31, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
- However, for consistency reasons, it would be justifiable to exclude territories not annexed by Israel, as locator maps don't typically include territories under military occupation, but do include territories unilaterally annexed. For example, the map of Russia does not include Abkhazia and South Ossetia in light green, despite them being internationally recognized as Russian-occupied territories, but does include Crimea, as it was illegally annexed in 2014. Similarly, the map of the United States does not include Al-Tanf. as it is not annexed territory of the US. 2018rebel 23:20, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- There is no basis for Israeli claims to either EJ or the Golan, they are unrecognized annexes and along with the West Bank and Gaza are considered as occupied territories. Selfstudier (talk) 22:59, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 2 January 2025
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I request an edit change of the GDP (Nominal), GDP (PPP), GDP Per Capita (Nominal), and GDP Per Capita (PPP) of Israel to 2025 in Accordance to IMF's October 2024 Database. The source will remain the same as the source currently shown, but the access date will be changed to "2 January 2025". Please Change Before (X) to After (Y).
Before (X): 2024 Estimate GDP (PPP) • Total Increase $541.343 billion (47th) • Per capita Increase $54,446 (29th)
GDP (nominal) • Total Increase $528.067 billion (29th) • Per capita Increase $53,110 (18th)
After (Y): 2025 Estimate
GDP (PPP)
• Total
Increase $565.878 billion (47th)
• Per capita
Increase $55,847 (29th)
GDP (nominal) • Total Increase $550.905 billion (29th) • Per capita Increase $54,370 (18th) AviationLover27 (talk) 18:18, 2 January 2025 (UTC)
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