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The article seems to have started out as draft created by {{u|110347nbtough}} in November 2020, who subsequently seemed to claim they were Bunasawa himself over on Wikimedia Commons and . The draft was then approved by {{u|DN27ND}} about a month later, even though the DN27ND account was only four days old and seems to have no experience as an ] reviewer. Moreover, DN27ND is an ] whose primary focus on ], ] and ] has been creating/editing content about Bunasawa; in other words, it seems that the account was specifically and only created for that purpose.{{pb}}I wasn't sure about the subject's Misplaced Pages notablity per ] and asked about the article at ]. DN27ND was pinged into the discussion but never responded. It was then suggested on my ] that the article be nominated for deletion. I tried some more ] but found nothing resembling significant coverage. I also tried looking at the Japanese Misplaced Pages article ] and the Egyptian Arabic Wikiepdia article ] but found nothing resembling significant coverage being cited in either of them. -- ] (]) 12:19, 22 July 2024 (UTC) |
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The article seems to have started out as draft created by {{u|110347nbtough}} in November 2020, who subsequently seemed to claim they were Bunasawa himself over on Wikimedia Commons and . The draft was then approved by {{u|DN27ND}} about a month later, even though the DN27ND account was only four days old and seems to have no experience as an ] reviewer. Moreover, DN27ND is an ] whose primary focus on ], ] and ] has been creating/editing content about Bunasawa; in other words, it seems that the account was specifically and only created for that purpose.{{pb}}I wasn't sure about the subject's Misplaced Pages notablity per ] and asked about the article at ]. DN27ND was pinged into the discussion but never responded. It was then suggested on my ] that the article be nominated for deletion. I tried some more ] but found nothing resembling significant coverage. I also tried looking at the Japanese Misplaced Pages article ] and the Egyptian Arabic Wikiepdia article ] but found nothing resembling significant coverage being cited in either of them. -- ] (]) 12:19, 22 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Keep''' Potential COI issues aside, the subject evidently seems to be a notable coach at Olympic and World Championship level, and for US colleges. Other pursuits as a magazine publisher/author and film consultant (?) would probably not rise to notability themselves, but the coverage for all three careers being mostly in 50+ year old newspapers – paired with the subject being otherwise covered by not only non-English, but non-Latin-alphabet, media – would be the AGF reason for fewer substantial sources (which is satisfactory here). The article could do with some clean-up, but from a glancing view I would also say it is not short on sources for its coverage, and that the coverage generally indicates notability. ] (]) 13:39, 22 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Keep''' Potential COI issues aside, the subject evidently seems to be a notable coach at Olympic and World Championship level, and for US colleges. Other pursuits as a magazine publisher/author and film consultant (?) would probably not rise to notability themselves, but the coverage for all three careers being mostly in 50+ year old newspapers – paired with the subject being otherwise covered by not only non-English, but non-Latin-alphabet, media – would be the AGF reason for fewer substantial sources (which is satisfactory here). The article could do with some clean-up, but from a glancing view I would also say it is not short on sources for its coverage, and that the coverage generally indicates notability. ] (]) 13:39, 22 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:There is no conflict of interest. I'm not getting paid by Bunasawa. In order to get leads on sources and information, we do have a working relationship (as a reporter would on their subject) where I could reach out and obtain information. I do have drafts of other judokas in the works but am working on securing their contact information in order to get additional leads to sources and information. |
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:There is no conflict of interest. I'm not getting paid by Bunasawa. In order to get leads on sources and information, we do have a working relationship (as a reporter would on their subject) where I could reach out and obtain information. I do have drafts of other judokas in the works but am working on securing their contact information in order to get additional leads to sources and information. |
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:There are multiple sources online in various languages (English, Japanese, Russian, etc.) which indicates notability. |
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:There are multiple sources online in various languages (English, Japanese, Russian, etc.) which indicates notability. |
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:::Is that not a podium sweep where one team had a decisive victory over the other teams? That is the time of only 2 times this has happened in the sports history. If the phrases "dream team" or "talented group" is not appropriate to describe the sporting results. Perhaps those words need to be censored from all other wikipedia articles about sports where these words have been used to describe competition results. ] (]) 12:42, 23 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Is that not a podium sweep where one team had a decisive victory over the other teams? That is the time of only 2 times this has happened in the sports history. If the phrases "dream team" or "talented group" is not appropriate to describe the sporting results. Perhaps those words need to be censored from all other wikipedia articles about sports where these words have been used to describe competition results. ] (]) 12:42, 23 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::'''That 1969 World Judo team had multiple World and Olympic champions on them'''. In the sport of judo, the World Championships are regarded as a more difficult achievement than the Olympics due to their respective qualification processes. ] (]) 12:49, 23 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::You have been updating many articles on wikipedia regarding Korean poltics. Everyone knows about the history of the Japanese-Korean rivalry. This is not the thread to hold a grudge. |
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:::This is the article is for the sport of judo. You are biased and you have a political agenda. ] (]) 22:30, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:'''There are also many other newspaper and magazine articles that show Bunasawa's notability on the wikipedia article.''' |
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:Rezell, John (March 3, 1988). "Top Judo Instructor comes to the defense of self-defense". '''''Orange County Register'''''. |
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:Rezell, John (March 3, 1988). "Top Judo Instructor comes to the defense of self-defense". '''''Orange County Register'''''. |
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*::Fears, Randy (October 1975). "U.S. Judo team". ''Rogers Daily News'' ] (]) 18:59, 26 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::Fears, Randy (October 1975). "U.S. Judo team". ''Rogers Daily News'' ] (]) 18:59, 26 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::I'll enjoy following the source analysis table ] (]) 19:00, 26 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::I'll enjoy following the source analysis table ] (]) 19:00, 26 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Keep''' The subject of the articles is notable as a US coach at the Olympic, World, and collegiate levels. He is also involved in the movie industry and has multiple credits. His '''''The Toughest Man Who Ever Lived''.''' Is in the process of being adapted into a motion picture. |
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*'''Keep''' The subject of the articles is notable as a US coach at the Olympic, World, and collegiate levels. He is also involved in the movie industry and has multiple credits. His '''''The Toughest Man Who Ever Lived''.''' Is in the process of being adapted into a motion picture. |
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| reliability = ? | rel_just = This would appear to be UGC content with very little if any kind of rigorous editorial control. I don't think the OCJAA would knowingly post anything false, but they might not have the capability to the type of strenuous fact checking expected of a RS. It's certainly doesn't seem to be a major news publication; it doesn't even seem to be close to the level of the '']''. It's published in Japanese and its target audience is most likely Japanese-Americans, Japanese nationals or other Japanese speakers living/working in the area. The April 2023 issue in which the the article "Judo" is supposed to appear isn't available any longer on the OCJAA website, but the cover can be seen . I tried to see if I could find an archived version of of the issue from an archived version of the main page like or and work backwards, but had no luck. |
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|significance = y | sig_just = Clearly states that Bunasawa (runner up in the All-Japan Championships in 1969) and Zeelenburg (seargent in the Air Force) were coaches on the USA World Team that competed in Vienna. The author had a typo in which he states that the Vienna Judo World Championships were in 1976, but in actuality they were in 1975 |
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*'''Lean delete''' per table above, unless it is updated with other sources. The COI is a contributing factor. DN27ND, please do not try to convince me otherwise of COI, you had several essays worth of space to do so and you have not yet. ] (]) 20:54, 26 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Lean delete''' per table above, unless it is updated with other sources. The COI is a contributing factor. DN27ND, please do not try to convince me otherwise of COI, you had several essays worth of space to do so and you have not yet. ] (]) 20:54, 26 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::Who are you and what are your qualifications? The '''wikipedia article created on Bunasawa is very well sourced'''. If there is doubt, the onus is on you to do your research. The Bunasawa is way more sourced than many articles on wikipedia. Regarding the table, there are no requirements for contributors to make one. You and people who doubt the authenticity or notability should make one. This is a blatant attempt of censorship. ] (]) 23:26, 26 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::Who are you and what are your qualifications? The '''wikipedia article created on Bunasawa is very well sourced'''. If there is doubt, the onus is on you to do your research. The Bunasawa is way more sourced than many articles on wikipedia. Regarding the table, there are no requirements for contributors to make one. You and people who doubt the authenticity or notability should make one. This is a blatant attempt of censorship. ] (]) 23:26, 26 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::It isn't an attempt at censorship, it's an attempt at determining whether or not the article belongs on Misplaced Pages by judging it against Misplaced Pages policy. Or do you believe that there's a reason why some kind of non policy-related conspiracy might lead to the article being deleted? ] (]) 15:47, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::It isn't an attempt at censorship, it's an attempt at determining whether or not the article belongs on Misplaced Pages by judging it against Misplaced Pages policy. Or do you believe that there's a reason why some kind of non policy-related conspiracy might lead to the article being deleted? ] (]) 15:47, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::In essence, Bunasawa is a US coach involved in both domestic and international competitions and he's involved in the movie business. There is a combination of both sources from minor websites, the bio section of the novel he co-authored, and to legitimate local newspapers. If there are disagreements regarding the style or to a source given, you are free to edit the Bunasawa article, it's public. |
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::::To delete it completely is censorship. ] (]) 12:09, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::If you feel a section is not properly sourced, then add a tag. If you feel that there are COI, then add the COI notification label. Like I said, to delete the article completely without checking all the sources to see if there is truth in what is written, is censorship. ] (]) 12:13, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::The summary of what I'm saying is, do the fact-checking first, then decide whether or not to delete. ] (]) 12:15, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:Here are the main papers which state that Bunasawa has coached at the Olympic & World level are these ones |
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:The article is '''extensively sourced''', and the onus is on the accuser to do their research. ] (]) 02:12, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:The article is '''extensively sourced''', and the onus is on the accuser to do their research. ] (]) 02:12, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Sure delete it. Did you update your table using those sources? ] (]) 02:57, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Those articles clearly state that Bunasawa was the US Judo World and Olympic coach at one point in his career ] (]) 02:59, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Those articles clearly state that Bunasawa was the US Judo World and Olympic coach at one point in his career ] (]) 02:59, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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* '''Delete''' on the basis that this discussion suggests that the subject doesn't meet ]. Also, the article was originally written by a user who has claimed on Commons to be the subject. User DN27ND is clearly closely associated with the subject, if they are not actually the subject, and at the very least is editing directly on behalf of the subject. His claims to be a journalist are clearly questionable, as journalists do not post the results of their work on Misplaced Pages. COI users, however, do. ] (]) 14.39, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Delete''' I appreciate the analysis done by {{u|Marchjuly}}. I had started to put together my own list, but he published first. I generally agree with his analysis. I didn't see anything that convinces me that there are multiple cases of significant independent coverage in reliable sources. Passing mentions, being named a judo instructor, martial arts rank, demonstrating techniques, and listings of results have never been considered sufficient to provide the coverage necessary to show WP notability. There is no evidence that he meets ] which talks about having "success in a major international competition at the highest level." He didn't qualify for the Japanese team even though they were awarded two spots in each division. Being one of two team alternates in his division isn't enough, nor are high school or collegiate championships. I also don't see him meeting notability requirements as an author or actor. I would say he's a talented judoka, but that alone is not grounds for WP notability. ] (]) 16:15, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Delete''' I appreciate the analysis done by {{u|Marchjuly}}. I had started to put together my own list, but he published first. I generally agree with his analysis. I didn't see anything that convinces me that there are multiple cases of significant independent coverage in reliable sources. Passing mentions, being named a judo instructor, martial arts rank, demonstrating techniques, and listings of results have never been considered sufficient to provide the coverage necessary to show WP notability. There is no evidence that he meets ] which talks about having "success in a major international competition at the highest level." He didn't qualify for the Japanese team even though they were awarded two spots in each division. Being one of two team alternates in his division isn't enough, nor are high school or collegiate championships. I also don't see him meeting notability requirements as an author or actor. I would say he's a talented judoka, but that alone is not grounds for WP notability. ] (]) 16:15, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:::I wrote the article and sent it to Bunasawa's team. They might have thought I wanted them to post it? But that wasn't my intention of sending them the draft. I was hoping they look through the dates and make sure everything was in chronological order. I do research the sport and history of Judo extensively and was planning to create other Judo biographies of figures that do not currently have a wikipedia but I think are notable in the sport. That is my intention of creating a wikipedia account. I have another biography in the works, which will probably be released at the end of 2024 or early 2025. |
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*:::I wrote the article and sent it to Bunasawa's team. They might have thought I wanted them to post it? But that wasn't my intention of sending them the draft. I was hoping they look through the dates and make sure everything was in chronological order. I do research the sport and history of Judo extensively and was planning to create other Judo biographies of figures that do not currently have a wikipedia but I think are notable in the sport. That is my intention of creating a wikipedia account. I have another biography in the works, which will probably be released at the end of 2024 or early 2025. |
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*:::No it did not strike me as a COI. I wrote the article draft and sent it to the Bunasawa team. They provided me leads on info and additional newspaper clippings. If I didnt reach out to their team, I woudnt have gotten all those newspaper clippings. ] (]) 17:23, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:::No it did not strike me as a COI. I wrote the article draft and sent it to the Bunasawa team. They provided me leads on info and additional newspaper clippings. If I didnt reach out to their team, I woudnt have gotten all those newspaper clippings. ] (]) 17:23, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:::::Yes I wrote that. I send the draft to the Bunasawa team with the intention that they verify the dates and chronology of the article. I am not Nori Bunasawa. I have news that he is currently in the USA and I'm in another country. ] (]) 11:52, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::There is context to this. In the late 1960s and early 1970s, If you were a top national player in Japan, that was equivalent to being a World level player. The reason being is because the sheer number of competitors in Japan, and the developmental system of Judo in Japan (the birthplace of Judo). Being a top player in Japan at that time meant being top 3 in the world if you were selected by AJJF to compete and represent internationally. |
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*::There is context to this. In the late 1960s and early 1970s, If you were a top national player in Japan, that was equivalent to being a World level player. The reason being is because the sheer number of competitors in Japan, and the developmental system of Judo in Japan (the birthplace of Judo). Being a top player in Japan at that time meant being top 3 in the world if you were selected by AJJF to compete and represent internationally. |
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*::This is a reason that he was appointed as the '''US Judo coach in 1972 Olympic in Munich and 1975 World Championships in Vienna'''. Which is to elevate the level of those teams. |
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*:::Experienced judo competitors are aware of this. ] (]) 17:27, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:::At many IBJJF events, you can simply sign up and compete (especially at senior 2, 3, etc. aka the old men divisions) there are no qualification process where you have to win a prior tournament to enter the present tournament. ] (]) 17:32, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:Papaursa, you were editing ]'s wikipedia article. Do you really think the IBJJF Pan Championship as a brown belt (Senior 2) and black belt (Senior 2) divisions are legitimate competitive divisions? The IBJJF classifies those divisions are for 56 to 60 years old players. That is the grandfather division. The brackets of these divisions have small numbers of participants. Those divisions were created for older hobbyist jiujitsu players who are well past their physical prime, to compete in so that the IBJJF could collect tournament fees. Most of these older jiujitsu players use the senior 2 division (which means past one's physical prime division) as an opportunity to travel to south America and enjoy the local festivities. Its also very fun for those athletes in the senior 2 division to have their grandkids come out to cheer them on as well. |
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*:If you really think the past one's physical prime division (aka senior 2 division) is a competitive international division which makes a person wikipedia notable, then I have some snake oil to sell you. ] (]) 22:15, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::Let me translate "snake oil" for you: 뱀기름 |
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*::It's definitely puffery ] (]) 22:18, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*DN27ND, I suggest you look at ]. The notability of other articles has no bearing on the WP notability of this article. If you feel those articles about about non-notable subjects, you are welcome to put them up for deletion. If the U.S. head coach at the 1972 Olympics isn't notable, why would the technical coach be notable? I would also caution you about ]. I mention these other guidelines because the fact you haven't contributed to any other articles means you might not be aware of other relevant policies and guidelines. You should be aware that open events mean they are open to all (hence the name). They are often different from national championships, especially in sports that can only accommodate a limited number of competitors. For example, this year's U.S. Open in chess has over 300 competitors, but the U.S. championship invites the highest ranked 10 Americans (according to world rankings). ] (]) 17:53, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:I'm not aware of the sign up procedures of the US open of chess or the US national chess championships. In judo, the open tournaments hosted in nations of lessor developed judo programs have lower turnouts, qualification processes, and to be frank, a lower talent pool. Just because an athlete competes internationally, doesn't mean they are notable in judo (which was one of the criteria mentioned above for a requirement of notability. |
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*:Why wouldn't an Olympic coach be notable? Are collegiate coaches notable? |
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*:He's a notable collegiate basketball coach, and his article lists that he coached at a high school level. |
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*:Is coaching at a high school level notable? Or is this info included to illustrate the progression of his career? |
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*:I'm not making an argument that the subject in the other articles aren't notable. What I'm saying is that they are notable. Movie stars, coaches, pioneers of the sport, they are notable in their own way. That's your opinion that they aren't notable. |
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*:I may think that a certain chess player is not notable. But I know nothing of chess, and I would have an uneducated opinion. In that case, I wouldn't vote because I wouldn't be able to tell whether that chess player is notable or not, I would defer to the chess fans, followers and experts. |
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*:In Bunasawa's case, not only is he a notable judo coach by coaching 3 levels (Olympic, World, Collegiate), but also an author that is having his book adapted by a major production company. "Dead or Alive" is connected both Bunasawa and Jose Padilla. ] (]) 18:57, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::Why would I trust a judo expert to vote whether a chess expert is notable or not and vice versa? Perhaps if it were a vote amongst members of the USA judo community, I would view that as more legitimate than a vote of an uninformed mob ] (]) 18:59, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:::So you view the AfD process as akin to an uninformed mob? |
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*:::The problem is your lack of understanding of Misplaced Pages policies like conflict of interest, reliable sources, notability, etc. etc. Those policies exist so that things can be dealt with objectively, rather than just using your opinions on those topics, which seem to be very much at odds with policy if your comments here are anything to go by. ] (]) 19:28, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::::I'm informed about COI, reliable sources, and notability. I can see why readers suspect COI, but it is what it is. If I did not have contact with the subject and his team, I wouldn't have gain access to information and the newspaper clippings and there would be no article. So put a COI disclaimer on the article. |
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*::::I'm aware what reliable sources are. The article contains a mix of both reliable sources and sources that are potentially less reliable. For evidence of the subject's role as a US judo coach at the Olympic, World, and collegiate level, those are very reliable sources. For evidence of his involvement in the movie industry and upcoming project, those are semi-reliable and inferences were made (ie José Padilha is involved in the Mitsuyo Maeda movie "Dead or Alive", Bunasawa is involved in the Mitsuyo Maeda movie "Dead or Alive", Bunasawa co-authored a book on Mitsuyo Maeda therefore, his book is being adapted to a movie by a major production company (Stampede productions), which was also stated on Judoinside.com). I could ask Bunasawa and his team to take a picture of his contract and post it on wikimedia commons and there is a good chance they could do that. The contract would be considered a primary source and I regard that has having greater integrity than secondary sources. But I'm not sure if this is allowed. |
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*::::Whether or not Judoinside.com is a reliable source is debatable. It's a website that is supposed to have accurate judo competition records and biographies. Can it make mistakes? Absolutely. "Reliable sources" like the New York Times also make mistakes on reports. I would say judoinside.com could perhaps be classified as semi-reliable. The point is, through my contact with Bunasawa, I was informed that he signed a contract with the production company. When I tried to search this online, Judoinside.com was the only source of information which verified this. |
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*::::In terms of notability, Judo has grown into a large global Olympic sport since the 1960s. Judo became an Olympic sport in 1964, and around the time the subject of this article entered college as a freshman. This individual was operating within the judo world since the beginning of the institution of weight classes to development of international competitions. He is part of the history of the sport. |
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*::::The other information such as him founding a martial art, his involvement with his newspaper company comes from his book and his newspapers. In terms of notability of the book and the newspaper, you would have to assess it by sales, circulation and whether it is used as a citation on other papers. I heard the book did very good sales numbers on the google bookstore and on Amazon. |
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*::::In terms of his fighting records, those are from newspaper clippings from Japanese sports newspapers such as ''Nippon Judo Shimbun'', and ''The Judo Shimbun''. The inclusion of his national japan fighting record is to give some context to his coaching involvement in the USA. That competition is well respected in the Judo world in the around the time of the 1960s. So to judge notability, knowledge of historical context of the sport is required. |
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*::::So yes, if you don't have knowledge of the historical context of the sport, it is akin to an uninformed mob voting on a subject of which they have no information about. |
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*::::When writing this article, I was thinking about how the English reader could understand the article without me actually writing and explaining the historical situation of the sport in a biographical article. I still haven't figured it out, but I have included some sources such as Leitner, Katrin (2011). "The Japanese Corporate Sports System: a Unique style of Sports Promotion". Vienna Journal of East Asian Studies. 2: 27–54. doi:10.2478/vjeas-2011-0008 – via Researchgate which includes the history for interested readers. ] (]) 17:28, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:::::On the sport of judo and notability in judo. Let's get real and we'll use judo in the USA as an example. There are a lot of international competitors that the US puts out that I would call no-hopers. The majority of US judo athletes get eliminated in the first round at major international tournaments. If they get a lucky bracket, maybe they will get eliminated in the 2nd round. If you are in the sport long enough, at some of the less competitive tournaments (like the Pan-Americans, most of US athletes might win Bronze or Silver). Some of these athletes market themselves, try to get endorsements to cover their travel and competition expenses, but really use it as a vacation. To travel the world on their own dime or their sponsor's dime, but in actually, they are the no-hopers (they wont medal in the Olympics or World championships). There are exceptions to the rule, (Jimmy Pedro, Mike Swain, Kayla Harrison, Kevin Asano, etc) but the exceptions are rare. |
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*:::::A player who medals in the All Japan Championships in the 1960s and the 1970s, if they get selected by the AJJF to compete in the Olympics or the Worlds, it is almost a certainty that they will get a onto the podium to get a medal (there are exceptions to the rule, but it is a huge chance they will medal). Since this is the reality of Judo, then you will understand why Bunasawa is a notable US coach and why I included the details of his 1969 All Japan National Judo tournament in his bio. And trust me, Bunasawa is a lot more notable than the US judo athletes that have been on the international circuit post-2016 Rio Olympics. There's a lot of no-hopers on the US judo team post-2016 Rio Olympics that are a lot less notable than Bunasawa. |
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*:::::If you are informed about the sport of judo in the USA, you would know this. ] (]) 17:50, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::::::Read ]. And then post the links to the articles you think work towards ]. Anything else is just wasting your own time and other people's. ] (]) 18:46, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::Also since this is the format, for non-judo people to vote on notability. Perhaps research on judo as a sport in the late 1960s. The only international events at that time for the sport of were either the World Championships or the Olympic games. Meaning there were literally no other international events in 1969. If the AJJF did not select you, other international competitions were not available. Today in modern times, there is a saturation of international events in judo. But that doesnt mean an international judo player is notable. |
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*::In the 1960s, if you at the top of Japan Judo. You were very notable in the judo world. ] (]) 19:04, 27 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:Papaursa, I suggest you look up the senior 2 division of the IBJJF before editing Tim Cartmell's wikipedia article. It's a division for 56-60 year olds. Grandkids love coming out to cheer for their grandpas in those divisions. Are you saying competitors in this BJJ division (which is not an Olympic sport) are more notable than an Olympic level coach? Please clarify ] (]) 22:33, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Comment/Question''' I've stopped trying to read through the avalanche of text by DN27ND. Am I wrong or are both of the keep votes from him? ] (]) 00:58, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:No, one is from Kingsif. ] (]) 03:33, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::Am I wrong to keep votes from you? You who believes IBJJF senior 2 divisions count as notable because they are international competitions ] (]) 22:34, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::I hate to interrupt your monologue, but you might want to get your facts correct. I never said Cartmell was notable. My editing of his page was to remove 3000+ characters of text, as was agreed to at the AfD discussion. Any search of my edits would show I have frequently argued for removal of articles based on age group titles. Harping on 14 year old edits from a then new user shows how much you don't understand about how WP works. ] (]) 22:54, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*I've ] two entries from the source assessment table that were added by ], on the basis that the source assessment table above is clearly marked "prepared by User:Marchjuly" and so it is misleading to add source analysis that is not actually prepared by Marchjuly. DN27ND is free to re-add this analysis separately if it is clearly indicated with who it's coming from. ] (]) 01:41, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:There were users who wanted me to add to the table. I shouldnt have to do Marchjuly's homework, but ok I'll entertain him. I posted 2 of the relevant photographs of newspaper clippings rather than add those sources to his table list before its deletion, he choose to hide them before deletion. This is censorship of sourced information and of sources. ] (]) 03:15, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::I think it would be useful to have some input from ] and ] on whether the two sources in the table below genuinely count towards satisfying ]. My understanding of previous comments in this thread is that references to someone having been a coach do not confer notability. |
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*::Personally I'm very reluctant to take the word of an editor who has admitted to having approved a draft that they had themselves authored, in clear contravention of policy, and who seems to be very unfamiliar with broader policy here. Not to mention, of course, the fact that they have a ] but have yet to declare it on their user page. ] (]) 04:24, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:::I agree with this. I think it's possible the subject of the article is notable, but the draft creation and approval process is so suspect that I don't think we should keep the article up. It sets a bad precedent. If someone really wants this article back, then they can recreate in future, without a COI and without this extreme belligerence. The conduct from DN27ND in this thread has been unacceptable. Throwing around accusations of censorship, walls of text, poor understanding of Misplaced Pages policy and refusal to learn the policy, refusal to adjust the POV language. It just keeps going. |
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*:::I already voted above, but we should delete the article. ] (]) 05:16, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::::My conduct is unacceptable to you? What are your qualifications? |
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*::::Perhaps you should clean up the article? I contributed to the article using language that is in common usage in North America. The selection of the wording is appropriate to give the information in a relatively terse manner. ] (]) 05:27, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*::::Just wondering, is North American english your first language? You dont have to answer if you don't want to ] (]) 05:28, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:::::The issue raised directly above related to whether some of the language used was in accordance with ] (as per discussions further up this thread), not whether it was good English. You really are doing yourself no favours by continually arguing, especially when so much of what you are saying is contrary to policy. |
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*:::::You've been asked now twice to knock off the ]. This discussion is about reaching a consensus on the right course of action, not for you to make the overwhelming majority of contributions saying things that no one else agrees with. ] (]) 06:12, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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{{od|5}}As I posted above and in my ], I "]" the images per ] because they were copyvios uploaded to Misplaced Pages Commons and were subsequently deleted as such by a Commons' administrator. DN27ND was advised not to do this, but went ahead and did so anyways. As I also posted above, I would've happily unhid the files if Commons would've kept them. DN27ND was also advised that they could post at ] and explain why the two uploads weren't copyvios. DN27ND can still request the undeletion of the files at ] if they feel the files were wrongly deleted. If DN27ND thinks I censored them or otherwise did something else inappropriate by doing this, they're free to seek administrator assistance at ]; if hiding the files was wrong, an administrator will let me know and even possibly sanction me for it. A Misplaced Pages administrator can't restore the files, though, since they were uploaded to Commons (please don't misunderstand this as meaning it's OK to reupload them to locally to Misplaced Pages though) and need to restroed by a Commons administrator.{{pb}}As for the source assessment table, DN27ND or anyone else re-assess the same sources I did or assess other yet-to-be assessed sources (with or without using a table), but it would be better to do so as their own separate post (maybe a brief assessment or table here on this AFD page and more further analysis on the AfD's talk page if needed my be a good idea). Others, however, really shouldn't be modifying my post to add their assessments to my table per ] because doing so makes it seems as if it's my assessment and not theirs; this is why {{u|DanCherek}}, who's a Misplaced Pages administrator, reverted DN27ND's edit to the table I created. If DN27ND feels DanCherek censored them by doing this, they're free to discuss things with Dan at ] or seek other administrator assistance at WP:ANI. It's not a question of doing someone else's homework for them, but rather a question of misrepresenting what someone else has posted by modifying it in some way (i.e. putting your words into their mouth) without a really good Misplaced Pages policy based reason for doing so. If DN27ND and others mistakenly thought the table I created was for them to build on, then my apologies for not making it clear that it wasn't. Now, if anyone disagrees with my source analysis, they're of course free to post why; once again, though, they should do so in their own post and not insert their comments into the middle of one of mine. FWIW, I've added a ] to the post DN27ND made to create their source assessment table since it was missing one. I did this per ] and didn't modify the post in any other way. If DN27ND wants to add some kind of introductory statement to the post, they can. They should also be able to expand the table with additional assessments if they want, but might want to follow ] if they do, particularly if others have already commented on the assessments given in the table and posted below the table.{{pb}} Finally, I've posted enough in this discussion already; others are more than capable of reading all that's been posted above (or what's yet to come) and making their own assessments regarding Bunasawa's Misplaced Pages notablity. DN27ND doesn't really need to convince me of this, but the ] is on them to establish a ] among others that Bunasawa is indeed Misplaced Pages notable. That's what the Misplaced Pages administrator who ultimately reviews the discussion ]. I've no problem leaving things to that administrator and ]. -- ] (]) 06:37, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::I meant to add this to my last post but forgot. A possible ] might be to ] so that it can continue to be worked on. I do think, however, that there should be a condition attached to this if that's what the consensus ends up being: the draft should be submitted for ] review and not moved back to the mainspace by either the article's creator, any other (new) account with an ], but might be able to skip AfC if assessed and moved by an account which is ] or an established record of problem-free article creation. That's not a guarantee that the article won't or can't end up at AfD again, but it might address any COI concerns. -- ] (]) 07:31, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::For why I advocate for deletion over draftify: I'm a bit uncomfortable with the likely COI's impact on the article's content. I think deleting would be cleaner. |
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:::If we do draftify, I'd prefer if the reviewer be informed about the conditions under which the article was created, and that the POV language gets toned down before approval. ] (]) 08:12, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::With all due respect, you really don't know what you are talking about Sir. If you want to change the wording of "he was chosen as a part of a talented group (which included future Olympic champions in Toyokazu Nomura, Isamu Sonoda, and the national judo 'dream team' that eventually swept the competition at the 1969 World Judo Championships)" then by all means do it. |
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::::You can change "talented group" to "a group which included multiple World Champions, Olympic champions, and future world and olympic champions" |
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::::The point I was trying to make was in choosing the wording of "talented group" and "dream team", is that 1969 World team wasn't a normal team. If you have 2 world or Olympic champions on a team in a single year, that's already a rare event. The total gold medal count for both Worlds and Olympics of all individuals on that 1969 Japan team (and this is just gold) is '''around 13 gold medals!'''. I'll repeat that, If you add up all the Olympic and World golds of individuals on that 1969 Japan team, '''its around 13 gold medals'''. I could change the word "talented group" to a group that eventually had a total of 13 world and Olympic gold medals if you want me to. ] (]) 18:15, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Why does this matter in a bio of a US coach? If you were part of the US Judo sporting committee, who would you rather choose as your judo coach? ], ], or someone that has been on a selected to be part of a team of a collective 13 World & Olympic judo gold medals? |
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:::::Its not puffery, the wording was chosen to illustrate that point. ] (]) 18:24, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::I could see why you would interpret it as flowery or puffery. But this is not the case if you understand the context. ] (]) 18:27, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::That's like comparing the bench player of the USA men's basketball team to the National basketball team in Fiji. Even 2nd or 3rd string players of the USA national basketball team could wipe out the 1st-string starters of the Fiji national basketball team |
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::::::In this comparison, Japanese judo players who reach the All Japan National level are the equivalent (and even surpasses) 1st string starters in many many other countries where the judo program is less developed ] (]) 22:40, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::For context, the developed and competitive judo nations currently include: |
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:::::::The US isn't one of the more competitive judo nations. ] (]) 22:42, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::And for more context, in modern days, even 3rd string Japanese national judo players, or Korean players, or Brazilian players could take out the players that represent the US in the Olympics. |
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::::::I'm not bias, check the competition results. ] (]) 22:45, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::If I take out "dream team" and "talented group" and replace it with "the group that eventually won a total of more than 13 golds in the worlds and Olympics", would you stop complaining about language? ] (]) 18:39, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::And also I'll be real with you. I'm American. I'm not partial to the Japanese judo team. I'm a fan of the sport of Judo. If the Russian team won all the golds in a sport I'm a fan of, I would use the same language, because this is sports history. If the Chinese or Iranian team were breaking records in sports history, I would still use the same language to describe a rare event. My contribution is not about nationalism. NBA player Bill Russell won an unprecedented 11 NBA championships. I don't think this will ever be replicated by another NBA all star. This is a record in sports history and I use words appropriate to the description. |
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::::You are contributing to a lot of wikipedia pages that are related to Korean culture and Korean history. There are some historical articles that you have edited that have been related to the Japanese-Korean war conflict. I think you are biased against my wording in regards to the Japanese team. If the Korean team had 13 total gold medals in a single team for a particular year, I would use the same language. Its not puffery or flowery, it's words that describe the magnitude of that accomplishment in sports history. ] (]) 19:28, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::I'm very glad to have this user, who is part of the peanut gallery, to weigh in on this complex issue. Look up the term "peanut gallery", its definitely puffery. Let me translate that for you: 땅콩 갤러리 ] (]) 21:51, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Are you really trying to bring my race into this? Are you sure this is the path you want to go down in a publicly visible forum? ] (]) 01:15, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Or I could post the sources, you can assess them and clean up the article. If its moved to the draftspace, people are going to lag on investigating the sources. Like I offered, I can post some of the sources, you look over them and clean up the article to your liking. ] (]) 18:03, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:Your table consists of mostly sources that are available online and that's fine. It's what is readily available that's within a few clicks a mouse. The article created on Bunasawa includes many sources from the 1960s to 1980s. These sources are more difficult to obtain (it would take time to track them down, but they do exist). Perhaps track these sources down first so that the administrators can make an informed decision of notability and whether to keep the article or delete it? Right now they don't have access to all of the info. I'm volunteering to post the newspaper clippings, but due to copywrite issues, I cannot post them. I think look for and present all the info, so administrators then make an informed decision. ] (]) 07:15, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::I've been trying to find sources at ], but haven't had many responses yet. Ultimately, though, the onus falls on you as explained in ] and ] to provide information about such sources. They can be ], but again the onus falls upon you to convince others that they are what they say they are. You don't need to convince me if you or someone else can establish a consensus that they are. -- ] (]) 07:31, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::I'm not sending individual emails of the sources. This would require great time commitment. I could post the sources on some agreed upon website, then everyone can have a link to go and view them. ] (]) 08:21, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::There are a lot of sources on various wikipedia articles. And many of them are not online by from various books or textbooks. Are the contributors required to post all of the sources they use to some website or to email them to wikipedia admin? |
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:::I could post these sources as a courtesy, but If your accusing the article of fabricating sources, then provide evidence. ] (]) 08:23, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Misplaced Pages policy states that the onus is on you to prove that the sources exist, not on others to prove that they don't. |
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::::When people give you links to clarify Misplaced Pages policies, as Marchjuly did above, it is in the hope that you will acquaint yourself with the policies concerned and stop pursuing lines of argument that carry no water. |
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::::Given that pretty much everything you've said in this discussion so far has been contrary to policy, it will be interesting to see the four sources you've indicated below to see if your estimation of "Reliable Source?", "Significant Coverage?" and "Counts towards GWG?" matches up with Misplaced Pages policy. ] (]) 08:43, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::No problem. I have access to the newspaper clippings. What public website do you suggest I post them to? I want everyone to be able to view them to assess for themselves, not just a select few via email. ] (]) 09:12, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::@DN27ND: This is really my last post here (at least for the time being). I would be careful about adding any ] to any Misplaced Pages page if you reasonably suspect the website you're linking to be hosting potentially copyrighted content without the consent of the original copyright holder of said content. Such a thing would be prohibited per ]. I know you disregarded my advice above about uploading scans/photos of said articles, but I really think it would be wise for you to seek input at ], ] or even ] first before doing anything like that. It would, in principle, be much better to find links to official websites where such articles might be found, but perhaps an archival site like newspapers.com is also OK. -- ] (]) 09:12, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Like I stated, these sources are from newspapers in the 1960s to 1980s. I don't know if they are online. I have some of the clippings. The others sources on the wikipedia article, I viewed them and referenced them before including it on the article and would take time for me to be able to request them from individuals. If you have suggestions on how I can post the ones I have saved, for the public to view, then I'm open to suggestions. ] (]) 09:15, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:Marchjuly is an extremely biased person. When I uploaded these sources (as a screenshot) |
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:Fears, Randy (October 1975). "U.S. Judo team". Rogers Daily News. |
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:Rezell, John (March 3, 1988). "Top Judo Instructor comes to the defense of self-defense". Orange County Register |
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:for him to update his table, instead of using them to update his table, then hiding them, he choose to hide them without updating his table. The sources were right there for you to evaluate, instead you hid them from public view without updating your table. Copyright issues aside, if they were going to be deleted anyways, why not assess them before the deletion? |
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:Instead of quickly adding those sources to his table, he quickly made claims of COI on other threads. Perhaps Marchjuly has an agenda ] (]) 21:35, 28 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::An absolutely incredibly amount of bludgeoning which caused significant disruption to this deletion discussion. I have taken liberty to collapse a large amount of it. ] (]) 06:28, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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| independence = y | ind_just = Independently published newspaper article . |
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| reliability = y | rel_just = Article in the October 1975 newspaper put out by the ] |
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|significance = y | sig_just = Clearly states that Bunasawa (runner up in the All-Japan Championships in 1969) and Zeelenburg (seargent in the Air Force) were coaches on the USA World Team that competed in Vienna. The author had a typo in which he states that the Vienna Judo World Championships were in 1976, but in actuality they were in 1975 |
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|source = Rezell, John (March 3, 1988). "Top Judo Instructor comes to the defense of self-defense". Orange County Register |
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| independence = y | ind_just = Independently published newspaper article . |
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| reliability = y | rel_just = Article in the March 1988 newspaper put out by the ] |
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|significance = y | sig_just = Clearly states that Bunasawa was a US Olympic coach in 1972 |
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|source = "New Judo Instructor at 'Y' Here". Indiana Evening Gazette. February 21, 1975. |
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| reliability = y | rel_just = Article in the February 1975 newspaper put out by the ] |
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|significance = y | sig_just = Clearly states that Bunasawa was coaching the IUP (Indiana University of Pennsylvania) judo team . |
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|source = "Instructor on Show". Rogers Daily News. April 1975. |
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|significance = y | sig_just = States that Bunasawa was one of the coaches for the US World judo team at Vienna. Also that he had an exhibition at the Ichiban that was accompanied by ]. Also states that he was coaching the IUP (Indiana University of Pennsylvania) judo team. |
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*'''Admin comment''', I have p-blocked {{noping|DN27ND}} ] ] 01:49, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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**And I have collapsed large portions of the bludgeoning that led to this pblock. I have also installed a section break to make it easier for new editors to contribute. ] (]) 06:28, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:<p class="xfd_relist" style="margin:0 0 0 -1em;border-top: 1px solid #AAA; border-bottom: 1px solid #AAA; padding: 0px 2em;"><span style="color: #FF6600;">'''{{resize|91%|] to generate a more thorough discussion and clearer consensus.}}'''</span><br />'''Relisting comment:''' I am hesitant to relist this, but I do not think consensus has been reached yet (though we could be close). Could new comments please focus on the two source assessments provided?<br /><small>Please add new comments below this notice. Thanks, '''] (])''' 14:51, 29 July 2024 (UTC)</small><!-- from Template:XfD relist --></p> |
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::The former of the two source assessment tables is based on online sources which can be checked. It is by an experienced contributor and indicates that GNG hasn't been met. That was also the opinion of three other contributors to this discussion. |
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::The latter of the two source assessment tables is based on sources that have only been seen by a contributor with an admitted COI. From their contributions above their understanding of Misplaced Pages policies is clearly faulty and I don't think their assessment of GNG can be given any credence. |
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::Now that the latter user has been blocked from contributing to this discussion I don't see how the rest of us are likely to be able to see the sources that they refer to. While that is unfortunate, the chances of those sources having satisfied GNG must surely be assessed as exceptionally low. |
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::Apart from the COI contributor, the only other contributor to vote KEEP did so on the basis that "from a glancing view I would also say is not short on sources", but no one disputes the quantity of the sources, the issue is the quality. ] (]) 15:49, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Delete''' Per Source analysis table, no ], thus ] not met. ] (]) 15:41, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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* Has anyone looked at the offline(?) sources mentioned by the user trying to keep? ] (]) 18:19, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*:It would appear not, based on this resource request at WikiProject Resource Exchange . ] (]) 19:35, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*As a follow-up to Marchjuly's ], I'd be happy to share a full-text copy of the ''Orange County Register'' source via email with anyone who wants it. Just let me know! I don't have time to otherwise contribute to this AFD, so will leave that for others. ] (]) 22:22, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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**I received an email from DanCherek about a 1988 ''Orange Country Register'' article by John Rezell titled "Top Judo Instructor comes to the defense of self-defense" a few days ago in response to my WP:RX request. However, I wasn't sure if it would be OK to post the link here; so, I asked about it at ]. I did look at the article and did come up with my own assessment of it, but the reason I didn't add to my "source assessment table" above was because I don't think it really qualifies as significant coverage to establish Misplaced Pages notability on its own. It certainly has value as a reliable source in support of certain article content, and it is about Bunasawa; however, it's mainly about his involvement in teaching elementary school students judo with some quotes and a bit of background as well. To me it seemed like a nice local interest story but not really a strong claim for Misplaced Pages notability. Given the tenor of the discussion at that time and that the article's creator had provided their own assessment, I didn't want to add mine to the table until I could also add a link to the article; so, that others can see and assess it for themselves. I also didn't offer to email the link to anyone else because it didn't come from me and I didn't want to do so without checking with DanCherek first. I've been trying to find some of the other articles mentioned above online somewhere but haven't had much success. I don't have a membership to newspapers.com and their may be some stuff there. Finally, my assessments of this offline source and the other sources in my source assessment table are just my assessments. It should go without saying that others can freely check those links and disagree with my assessments if they feel the need to do so. Others are also free to get the link that I got from DanCherek, but there are issues posting it on Misplaced Pages that you should be aware. DanCherek will probably explain these to you if you ask. Finally, there are various newly created accounts posting which would be considered ] type "keep" !votes at ] and ]. If someone wants to incoporate these !votes into this discussion, then please do. Since it appears that word of this AfD has probably been sent via text/email/social media/whatever to these other persons (I don't think their posts are a coincidence), it might also be a good idea to add {{tl|Not a ballot}} to the top of this AfD. -- ] (]) 00:41, 30 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*'''Comments on DN27ND's sources''' Stating facts does not make coverage significant. Nobody has disputed he was a US team coach, though being a technical coach is less than being the head coach. When even appearing at the event as a competitor isn't sufficient to show WP notability, it's clear that coaching is even less likely to show notability--especially when the teams he was coaching won no medals. Coaching the IUP collegiate team is even less of a notability indicator (see ]). That's why many MMA fighters have been deleted, nobody disputed the facts but fight coverage, results, and databases are not considered sufficient to show significant coverage. I hope I am now finished with this topic. ] (]) 22:54, 29 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*: I think I was able to find one of the sources mentioned above by DN27ND, but it's behind a paywall. Being behind a paywall doesn't mean it can't be used per ], but it does make it harder to verify.{{pb}}The source is as follows: {{cite news|url=https://indianagazette.newspaperarchive.com/indiana-evening-gazette/1975-02-21/|url-access=subscription|title=New Judo Instructor at 'Y' Here|date=February 21, 1975|work=]|via=]}}{{pb}}In addition, I was able to find some other stuff: 2002 article in the '']'' is about Bunaswa being a local business owner representing a group involved in a zoning dispute with the City of ] that mentions he owns ''Judo Journal''; is 2017 '']'' article is about Bunaswa teaching a seminar in the Philippines and describes him as "legendary"; describes Bunaswa being inducted into a "Masters Hall of Fame" in 2000; is a 1996 '']'' article quotes Bunaswa about the performance of the Japanese men's judo team at the 1996 Summer Olympics as refers to him as the publisher of ''Judo Journal''; and June 1977 issue of ''Black Belt'' magazine has a picture of Bunasawa and states he was a "former All-Japan Collegiate Judo Champion" as part of a larger article about someone or something else, If you Google Bunasawa, you'll get lots of hits to various YouTube videos and other stuff, but I'm not sure how much of it rises to the level generally needed per ] and how much is just ] as defined by the Misplaced Pages community.{{pb}}Many of the sources mentioned above by DN27ND like ''Rogers Daily News'', ''Orange County Register'' and ''Indiana Evening Gazette'' are newspapers per se, but they seem to be more local/county publications with limited subscription bases that cater specifically to their particular areas. They might do lots of features on local residents or local businesses just because that's part of the niche they're trying to carve out. Such sources don't immediately jump out (in my opinion) as being significnt coverage.{{pb}} Finally, I don't think a valid claim of notability for Bunasawa can be made per ] <u>or</u> ]<s> or ]</s>; so, it seems everything is riding on whether he meets ] or perhaps maybe maybe ]. Promotional tone or COI related issuses should be able to be sorted out if the consensus is that Bunasawa clearly meets ]; however, no amount of cleaning up will matter per ] if the consensus is that he doesn't. -- ] (]) 06:48, 30 July 2024 (UTC); <ins> post edited. -- 11:24, 30 July 2024 (UTC)</ins> |
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*::Many thanks for the sterling work above. |
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*::I share your concerns about local newspapers. The journalists have a certain amount of space to fill and anything vaguely outside of the norm that they happen to hear about will get covered. Often the coverage ends up being because the ''subjects approached the papers concerned'' and nothing else happened that week. So, the fact that something was reported does not infer SIGCOV or notability. |
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*::My vote is still for '''Delete'''. ] (]) 07:27, 30 July 2024 (UTC) |
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*: I think I might've of found another one of the sources mentioned above by DN27ND. It's referred to in the first collapsed section as being an article about one of Bunasawa's teen students using judo in self-defense against an assault. It's another one behind a paywall, but it's as follows: {{cite news|url=https://www.newspapers.com/image/112444033/|url-access=subscription|title=Youth Says Judo 'Saved Life'|date=May 27, 1982|page=19|newspaper=]|via=]}} -- ] (]) 11:24, 30 July 2024 (UTC) |
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Independently published newspaper article
Bunasawa in mentioned by name twice, but the main focus of the article is Willard Robertson and the Ichiban Sports Complex. Bunasawa is mentioned as being won of several "experts" Robertson brought in to work at the complex. Doesn't meet WP:SIGCOV but might be OK to use as a RS for certain article content.
Three of the four pages are photos of Bunsawa demonstrating some technique, but the first page is part interview and part biographical material. Not sure this qualifies as sigcov per se, but it seems enough of a RS to support some article content. The quoted parts of the article though probably need to be treated as WP:ABOUTSELF.