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== Dragon Age: The Veilguard == | ||
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* {{pagelinks| Zsa Zsa Gabor}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | ||
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* {{User|Sariel Xilo}} | ||
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* {{User|BMWF}} | ||
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* {{User|Wikibenboy94}} | ||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
1) Disagreement on if ] is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows ]/] & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows ] advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included. | |||
This has been a bone of contention on Misplaced Pages for ''fifteen years'', as you can see in and . It's never been resolved. | |||
2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus. | |||
3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose. | |||
Gabor wrote about an affair with Ataturk in her 1960 and 1991 autobiographies. Some additional references: | |||
*{{cite interview|series=''Larry King Live''|title=Zsa Zsa Gabor's tell-all autobiography|url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W6sBdgrZjMw|date=November 26, 1991|publisher=CNN|time=4:37}} | |||
*{{cite book|first=Kaylan|last=Muammar|title=The Kemalists: Islamic Revival and the Fate of Secular Turkey|year=2005|publisher=Prometheus Books|isbn=9781615928972|page=68}} | |||
*{{cite book|first1=Marty|last1=Wall|first2=Isabella|last2=Wall|first3=Robert Bruce|last3=Woodcox|title=Chasing Rubi|year=2005|publisher=Editoria Corripio|isbn=9780976476528|page=3}} | |||
*{{cite magazine|first=Leslie|last=Bennetts|url=https://www.vanityfair.com/culture/features/2007/10/zsazsa200710|title=It's a Mad, Mad, Zsa Zsa World|magazine=Vanity Fair|date=September 6, 2007}} | |||
*{{cite web|first=Suzanne|last=Moore|url=https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2016/dec/19/zsa-zsa-gabor-death|title=Zsa Zsa Gabor knew femininity was a performance. She played it perfectly|work=The Guardian|date=December 19, 2016}} | |||
*{{cite news|first=Louis|last=Bayard|url=https://www.washingtonpost.com/entertainment/books/were-zsa-zsa-and-eva-gabor-the-proto-kardashians/2019/08/19/bf9c48d0-c03e-11e9-a5c6-1e74f7ec4a93_story.html|title= Were Zsa Zsa and Eva Gabor the proto-Kardashians?|newspaper=The Washington Post|date=August 19, 2019}} | |||
A few editors are intent on removing any information about Ataturk's romance with Gabor. It's sourced content, and quite relevant to the personal life of such an important figure. I brought this to the NPOV noticeboard and was stonewalled. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
*Current discussion: ] | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | ||
An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a ] until the dispute is resolved. | |||
In the past the dispute has gone unresolved due to mass unwillingness to even participate in discussion. In order for a firm consensus to finally be reached, many editors need to engage. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by |
==== Summary of dispute by BMWF ==== | ||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | <div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | ||
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==== Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94 ==== | ||
The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion: | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
*'''Volunteer Note''' - The filing editor has not notified the other editor on their user talk page. Also, please check whether there are any other editors who should also be notified. ] (]) 15:30, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Volunteer Note''' - If there is an issue about the ] of Ms. Gabor's autobiography, that can be asked at ]. ] (]) 15:30, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Volunteer Note''' - The filing editor has added two editors, but still has not notified any of the other editors. ] (]) 04:43, 12 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::All three have since been notified. ] (]) 05:30, 12 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*]] '''Exclude''' -- As the nom notes, the argument over this possibly apocryphal dalliance has been ongoing for over a decade. | |||
:Sourcing: Gabor's 'tell-all autobiography' is the only primary source for this event. She claims to have been deflowered by Atatürk. All secondaries are derivative of that primary. None explore the merit of the claim. Gabor get nothing more than a brief mention in the only source ''about Kemal Atatürk''. The others are about the 'Mad, Mad, Zsa Zsa World' . Zsa Zsa was a proto-Kardashian, so fluff pieces are arguably useful for her article. They simply are not reasonable sources on a man who had enormous impact on the modern world. | |||
:Substance: In what ''possible'' way does this illuminate Atatürk? What does the reader learn about an international leader and founder a modern state by discovering that he had a brief, consensual affair with a woman who famously quipped: {{tq|When asked how many husbands she had had, she used to say: "You mean other than my own?"<ref>" ". ''The Guardian''.</ref>}} If the claim was that Atatürk took the virginity of, say, Rock Hudson or Rin Tin Tin, this would merit a mention; a tryst with a beautiful, famously promiscuous, female human just does not. It is wonderful gossip, great tabloid news, and cool trivia for pub night, but those are not what we're building. | |||
:I didn't fight to take it out until it again hit the Talk page. Policies, guidelines and essays are clear: The fact that this happened (a debatable statement itself) is not enough to warrant inclusion per BUTITSTRUE. This alleged tryst is not important to the subject of the article. Cheers ] (]) 14:14, 12 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to ], and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did. | |||
2. Including the ] player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much ''Dragon Age: Veilguard'' has sold. | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Ataturk and Gabor)=== | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two parties agree, and if at least two parties disagree about article content. Please read ] and indicate whether you agree to the rules. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so I will ask each editor to state what they want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. | |||
3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms". | |||
I see two related but different questions about ] that apply to the articles. The first is whether Gabor's autobiography is a ] for her account of the sexual encounter with Ataturk. That question can be asked at ]. This discussion will be paused if necessary to wait for an answer from ]. The second is whether a mention of the reported affair is ] in the article about Ataturk. | |||
4. The invoking of ] while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews". | |||
An editor who had not originally been listed has made a statement, and so has been added to the list of parties to this dispute. | |||
5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). ] (]) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I'm OK with you moderating, as well as taking the discussion to the Reliable Source Noticeboard. | |||
::As for what I want to change in the articles (''both'' Ataturk's and Gabor's), the phrasing doesn't really matter, I just want this to be acknowledged. If words like "claimed", "alleged", etc have to be used, that's fine by me. ] (]) 06:01, 14 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::So tell me what does a claim that's only verified by Gabor's autobiograhpy contributes to Atatürk's relations with other 4 women that were known by everyone? {{tq|I just want this to be acknowledged}} why? Are you Gabor? ] (]) 10:33, 15 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
=== Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion === | |||
===Zeroth statements by editors (Ataturk and Gabor)=== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both {{reply to|Wikibenboy94|p=}} and I agree that there are no ] issues in the topline summary sentences removed by {{reply to|BMWF|p=}} in and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute. | |||
In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: {{xt|''Veilguard'' was also subject to ] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "]". Some outlets noted that {{underline|while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative,}} the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on ], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove {{underline|offensive}} reviews}}. ] (]) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===First statement by moderator (Ataturk and Gabor)=== | |||
It appears that there is agreement that Gabor's account stating that she had a sexual involvement with Ataturk can be included in the article on Gabor. It also appears that there is agreement that that statement should be attributed to Gabor, not in Wikivoice. Is that correct? | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
It appears that there is disagreement about whether Gabor's account of the affair should be mentioned at all in the article on Ataturk, both because Gabor's account should not be considered a ] except about herself, and because it would be ]. Is that correct? If so, I will post an inquiry at ]. | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read ] and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. | |||
] (]) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). ] (]) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
Are there any other content issues? Are there any other questions? | |||
] (]) 00:40, 17 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::All correct. No further questions. ] (]) 00:22, 18 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
===First statements by editors (Ataturk and Gabor)=== | |||
====Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)==== | |||
I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that ] is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of ] applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in. | |||
] (]) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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===Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | ||
I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined , I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed & ), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. ] (]) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
I have posted questions about the ] of Gabor's account as a source about an affair between Gabor and Ataturk at ]. Please see ] and discuss there. We will resume discussion here after the volunteers at RSN have provided their opinions. | |||
===First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
Are there any other content issues? Are there any other questions? ] (]) 02:41, 21 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to ] and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to ]. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response. | |||
Are there any other questions? ] (]) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Second statements by editors (Ataturk and Gabor)=== | |||
:I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. ] (]) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Third statement by moderator (Ataturk and Gabor)=== | |||
::I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. ] (]) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
There have been several answers at ], that are consistent that Gabor is not a reliable source except as to the fact that she says she had a sexual encounter with Ataturk. Some of the editors have said that whether the report should be included in the biography of Ataturk is not a question of ] but of ]. I would like each of the editors to comment on what they think should be included in the biography of Gabor, and what if anything they think should be included in the biography of Ataturk. | |||
===First statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
Are there any other content issues? Are there any other questions? | |||
] (]) 05:34, 21 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Third statements by editors (Ataturk and Gabor)=== | |||
===Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about ], so that we can read a description of the review bombing. | |||
I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement. | |||
{{reflist-talk}} | |||
I don't understand what the ] issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the ] issue is. So please state more specifically what the ] issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a ] issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it. | |||
== Genocides in history (before World War I) == | |||
Please provide your rewritten sections. | |||
{{DR case status|open}} | |||
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{{drn filing editor|Jonathan f1|20:17, 11 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
Are there any other questions? | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
] (]) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Second statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
Proposed text: | |||
;Lead | |||
''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' released for ], ], and ] on October 31, 2024. {{strikethrough|After release ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record.}} The game received generally positive reviews from critics, '''who praised its cast, representation of ] characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat'''. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the ] and Innovation in Accessibility at ]. | |||
;Reception | |||
¶1 ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' received "generally favorable" reviews from critics {{strikethrough|for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions}} according to the ] website ].<ref name="MC XSXS Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://www.metacritic.com/game/dragon-age-the-veilguard/critic-reviews/?platform=xbox-series-x |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard (Xbox Series X Critic Reviews) |website=] |access-date=December 4, 2024}}</ref> ] determined that 68% of critics recommended the game.<ref name="OC Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://opencritic.com/game/17037/dragon-age-the-veilguard |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Reviews |website=] |access-date=November 12, 2024}}</ref> ''Veilguard'' was subject to ] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "]". '''{{underline|Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative}}''', the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on ], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove '''offensive reviews'''.<ref>{{Cite news |date=2024-11-05 |title=Metacritic responds after Dragon Age: The Veilguard review bombing |url=https://www.eurogamer.net/metacritic-responds-after-dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing |access-date=2024-11-06 |work=Eurogamer.net |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age The Veilguard is getting review bombed, and now Metacritic has something to say |url=https://www.pcgamesn.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard/metacritic-respond-review-bomb |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=PCGamesN |language=en-US}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Watson |first=Philip |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's Poor Review Bombing Leads To Metacritic Response |url=https://www.cgmagonline.com/news/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing/ |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=] |language=en-CA}}</ref> | |||
{{collapse top|Reception ¶2 is not under dispute but here for additional context if needed.}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
¶2 Hayes Madsen of '']'' called ''Veilguard'' a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset".<ref name=":2">{{Cite magazine |last=Madsen |first=Hayes |date=2024-10-28 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Is a Return to Form for a Beloved RPG Franchise |url=https://www.rollingstone.com/culture/rs-gaming/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-1235144960/ |access-date=2024-10-29 |magazine=Rolling Stone |language=en-US}}</ref> Leana Hafer for '']'' similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character".<ref name=":1">{{Cite web |last=Hafer |first=Leana |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Review |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review |access-date=2024-10-29 |website=] |language=en}}</ref> Andy Bickerton of ] viewed the game as a "well-executed ]". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of ''Veilguard''{{'}}s near-decade of troubled production".<ref name=":11">{{Cite news |last=Bickerton |first=Andy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Tonally inconsistent 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' is still BioWare's best action game |url=https://www.npr.org/2024/10/28/nx-s1-5165587/dragon-age-veilguard-review-story-tone |access-date=November 29, 2024 |work=]}}</ref> Lauren Morton of ''PC Gamer'' thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than ] at moments".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev">{{cite web |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review/ |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=]}}</ref> | |||
* {{pagelinks|Genocides in history (before World War I)}} | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
* {{User|Jonathan f1}} | |||
* {{User|The Banner}} | |||
* {{User|Gawaon}} | |||
* {{User|Cdjp1}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
¶3 '''Critics were mixed on the game's story.''' Matt Purslow from ''IGN'' '''thought that''' ''Veilguard'' was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric.<ref>{{cite web|url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-is-at-war-with-itself|title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Is at War With Itself|first=Matt|last=Purslow|work=]|date=November 9, 2024|accessdate=November 10, 2024}}</ref> Malindy Hetfeld of '']'' '''criticized''' the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in ''Veilguard'', describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions".<ref name="Guardian review">{{cite web |last=Hetfeld |first=Malindy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review — a good RPG, but an underwhelming Dragon Age game |url=https://www.theguardian.com/games/2024/oct/28/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bioware-electronic-arts |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=]}}</ref> She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer opined that ''Veilguard'' has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas.<ref name=":1" /> Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey.<ref name=":2" /> Ash Parrish of '']'' appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice".<ref name="Verge full review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-11-28 |title=The hardest part of Dragon Age: The Veilguard is making a choice |url=https://www.theverge.com/24307786/dragon-age-the-veilguard-full-review |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref> Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative,<ref name="Verge early review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard starts slow but strong |url=https://www.theverge.com/24281631/dragon-age-the-veilguard-early-review-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":2" /><ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name="PCGUS Morton rev"/><ref name=":3">{{Cite web |last=Hashimoto |first=Kazuma |date=2024-10-28 |title=I Played 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' and Got Myself Stuck in a Gay Love Triangle |url=https://www.them.us/story/dragon-age-the-veilguard-lgbtq-romance-options-essay-lucanis-davrin |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Them |language=en-US}}</ref> with some finding major decisions "few and far between".<ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name=":2" /> | |||
The editor Cdjp1 has the Irish Famine listed as an example of a pre-WWI 'genocide' despite the fact that this is a fringe pov among academics. My position is that this topic belongs on the main Irish Famine article, and in fact there's already a detailed section there that covers the controversy quite well. Instead of participating in a dialogue on talk, this editor keeps expanding the section with obscure sources and in a way that seems to bolster the fringe view. It's been about 2 weeks since there's been any feedback and it's now clear the involved editors don't want to engage with this issue. | |||
{{collapse top|The rest of the reception section for context on lead summary. While it uses similar summary style sentences as above (see bolded text), it is not under dispute.}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
¶4 Madsen praised ''Veilguard'' for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot".<ref name=":2" /> Todd Harper of '']'' emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways".<ref name=":4">{{Cite web |last=Harper |first=Todd |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the friend group simulator we've been waiting for |url=https://www.polygon.com/review/470712/review-dragon-age-the-veilguard-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Kazuma Hashimoto of '']'' commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions.<ref name=":3"/> Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in ''Veilguard'', highlighting that unlike previous ''Dragon Age'' games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path.<ref name="Verge full review" /> Conversely, Oliver Brandt of '']'' viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other ''Dragon Age'' games.<ref name=":8">{{Cite web |last=Brandt |first=Oliver |date=2024-10-31 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the first triple-A game to handle gender identity the right way |url=https://www.si.com/videogames/features/dragon-age-the-veilguard-taash-gender-identity |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=] |language=en-US}}</ref> Harvey Randall of ''PC Gamer'' highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity.<ref name=":9" /> Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations,<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev" /> noting that "good people don't make great characters".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts.<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev">{{Cite news |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=2024-11-15 |title=The Veilguard is the first Dragon Age game where my companions don't care enough about anything to argue with me |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/the-veilguard-is-the-first-dragon-age-game-where-my-companions-dont-care-enough-about-anything-to-argue-with-me/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> | |||
¶5 '''''Veilguard'' generally received praise for its inclusive ] and representation of ] and ] characters.'''<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":14">{{Cite web |last=Mora |first=Alyssa |date=September 19, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Preview: BioWare Finally Nails The Character Creator I've Always Wanted |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-preview-bioware-finally-nails-the-character-creator-ive-always-wanted |access-date=November 30, 2024 |website=IGN |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":10">{{Cite web |last=Bea |first=Robin |date=2024-11-06 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Makes Me Feel Seen As a Trans Player, But Still Disappointed |url=https://www.inverse.com/gaming/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-characters |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Inverse |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":12">{{Cite web |last=Henley |first=Stacey |date=2024-11-06 |title=Why Dragon Age: The Veilguard Uses The Term 'Non-Binary' |url=https://www.thegamer.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard-non-binary-modern-immersion-breaking/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=TheGamer |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Puc |first=Samantha |date=2024-11-03 |title=This 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' companion's story ruined me in the best way |url=https://www.themarysue.com/this-dragon-age-the-veilguard-companions-story-ruined-me-in-the-best-way/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Mary Sue}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Marshall |first=Cass |date=2024-11-01 |title=How role-playing a trans or nonbinary Rook works in Dragon Age: The Veilguard |url=https://www.polygon.com/gaming/472513/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-nonbinary-identity-role-play |access-date=2024-11-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Alyssa Mora of ''IGN'' emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless".<ref name=":14" /> Both Robin Bea of '']'' and Brandt commended Taash's story arc,<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":10" /> with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", ''Vanguard'' "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary".<ref name=":8" /> Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in ''Veilguard'' in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a ] narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character".<ref name=":10" /> Stacey Henley of '']'' appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to ''Inquisition''{{'s}} ], though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking".<ref name=":12" /> Randall was more critical, noting how ''Veilguard'' "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context".<ref name=":9">{{Cite news |last=Randall |first=Harvey |date=2024-11-13 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's leap forward in trans inclusion comes from a heartfelt place, but its problems left me feeling frustrated, angry, and tired |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguards-leap-forward-in-trans-inclusion-comes-from-a-heartfelt-place-but-its-problems-left-me-feeling-frustrated-angry-and-tired/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> They found the lack of a fictional ] connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting".<ref name=":9" /> | |||
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¶6 '''Critics enjoyed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat.''' Bickerton felt that ''Veilguard''{{'}}s strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish".<ref name=":11" /> He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players.<ref name=":11" /> Hetfeld viewed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars".<ref name="Verge full review" /> Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than ''Inquisition'' and the ''Mass Effect'' games.<ref name=":4" /> Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor",<ref name=":1" /> and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous".<ref name=":4" /> Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design".<ref name="Verge early review" /> Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points".<ref name=":11" /> Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of ''Veilguard''. She found it was better off for removing ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
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In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). ] (]) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
Ideally I'd like to come to an agreement on whether or not a genocide theory that's on the academic fringe and is more political than historical belongs in a list of historical genocides. I don't think so. | |||
I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. ] (]) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by The Banner ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
This discussion became a conflict due to the harsh words from Jonathan f1, including doubting that the added historians are worthwhile. | |||
===Third statement by moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
My opinion is the same: the genocide claim is very controversial, often based on political views. This controversy should be shown, not brushed away. | |||
The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place. | |||
Are there any questions? | |||
As I have no idea why I am involved in this dispute, as it is mainly a conflict between Cdjp1 and Jonathan f1, no further comment will be forthcoming from me. <span style="border:1px solid green; padding:0 2px">] ]</span> 03:29, 12 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 04:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? ] (]) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:The tone of the discussion is often enough to blow up a disagreement into a conflict. And the "minor penalty" is not so minor as portrait by Jonathan F1. But I repeat my opinion from above: the genocide claim is very controversial, often based on political views. This controversy should be shown, not brushed away. <span style="border:1px solid green; padding:0 2px">] ]</span> 21:34, 17 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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===Third statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | ||
I'm not knowledgeable enough in this area, so I'll stand by. ] (]) 09:15, 12 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
I'll also notice, for what it's worth, that ] is permanently blocked from editing in the article namespace. Opening a dispute resolution case here might therefore be considered a case of bad faith. ] (]) 09:35, 12 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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===Fourth statement by moderator (Dragon Age)=== | ||
Yes. Make the agreed-on changes. If they are reverted, follow my instructions above. ] (]) 04:54, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
Firstly I would like to clarify that despite the insinuation, the addition of the great famine pre-dates my work on the article. As I detailed in the talk page, as part of my wider work updating the page with some recent notable publications, I was planning to update the section with recent literature. Jonathan highlighted some of the minor authors that have existed in the section for quite a while, while seeming to ignore the additional citations from respected scholars in the field of genocide studies where their assessment/commentary is published in RS. | |||
===Fourth statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
As per the criteria for the series of articles on genocides in history, they detail the varying frameworks used in defining and understanding genocides, and include various instances that are discussed within the literature. | |||
{{Done}} per above instructions (). ] (]) 18:23, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Autism == | |||
On the note of it being "politically motivated" descriptor, this argument is touched on in the section referencing Mcveigh, who highlights that at the time of his writing there had been near zero analysis of Irish history using analytical tools of genocide studies, and how the response of of previous historians who claimed the description of events in Irish history as "genocide" were responding specifically to popular claims by political groups. As has started to be shown, there has been more recent literature that analysis events in Irish history as potential cases of genocide. --] (]) 21:56, 11 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{DR case status|open}} | |||
:For what little it's worth, I have no strong opinion on the specific inclusion of the great famine in the list. -- ] (]) 13:57, 12 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
{{collapsetop|Comment in your own section. ] (]) 05:40, 12 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
:You just added the disputed content to the ] article while this issue is in dispute resolution. Now the mediators can't see how that section used to read before you started adding content (check edit history). I opened a section in talk alerting the editors there that this issue is currently in DR and that you've added some of the content that's in dispute.] (]) 23:28, 11 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
As to moving information to the great famine article, despite Jonathan's characterisation, it is based on Jonathan's suggestion that the information be moved there that it has now been moved. --] (]) 14:03, 12 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
=== Genocides in history (before World War I) discussion === | |||
* {{pagelinks|Autism}} | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society. | |||
After seeing the comments left by The Banner, who's quite concerned with my tone, and Gawaon, who brings up a minor penalty I received that's got nothing to do with this article, I think it's best these two not participate in the discussion. This should be about sources and rules, not personal critiques of me. The dispute was primarily between myself and Cdjp1 anyway.] (]) 21:36, 17 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
On Misplaced Pages, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all. | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Genocide)=== | |||
I am ready to act as moderator for discussion. Please read ] and indicate whether you agree to the rules. Be civil and concise. Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so I will ask each editor to state concisely what they want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. See ]. State in detail what you want to change about what is said about the opinions of historians on whether the Irish famine is considered to be genocide. ] (]) 00:49, 17 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:An editor who is blocked from article space but is not blocked from talk space or project space is in good standing to participate in a discussion at DRN. ] (]) 02:49, 17 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Misplaced Pages has quite detailed guidelines for what to do ''within'' medicine, or ''outside'' of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about ''whether'' something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years. | |||
===Zeroth statements by editors (Jonathan f1 and Cdjp1)=== | |||
This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways. | |||
I agree to all the rules, and I'll try to make this brief. | |||
A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"? | |||
The section in question contains a number of scholars who lack relevant backgrounds, and should be removed on the grounds that the theory's widely rejected by historians of Britain and Ireland. Neysa King was removed from the main ] article after myself and another editor realized she wasn't a professional academic (see talk). King nevertheless acknowledges that: ''''''"Today, Irish and British historians categorically reject the notion that British actions during the Great Irish Potato Famine (1845-1849) amounted to genocide.''"'''' Mark McGowan similarly notes: ''""'''The fact that virtually all historians of Ireland have reached a verdict that eschews position, be they Irish-born scholars from Britain, North America or Australasia, has weakened the traditional populist account.'''"'' Cormac O Grada: ''"'''While no academic historian continues to take the claim of genocide seriously, the issue of blame remains controversial.'''"'' (p. 4 ). Liam Kennedy: "'''''“In the case of the Great Famine no reputable historian believes that the British state intended the destruction of the Irish people.'''."'' | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
In addition to King (who is still cited in this article), Cdjp1 cited a couple of genocide scholars (who study famines in Africa), two lawyers with no academic background in Irish history (as noted in the article on the Great Famine, but not in this article), and the lonely voice of Robbie McVeigh. Cdjp1 needs to demonstrate that this view is held by more than a tiny minority of scholars with questionable backgrounds, otherwise we are dealing with ]. Just to reiterate my position again: Equating the Irish Famine with genocide is a fringe pov, should not be listed as an example of a pre-WWI genocide, and the recent additions Cdjp1 made to the ] article in the genocide section (including linking it to the pre-WW1 genocides article) are undue.] (]) 21:27, 17 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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:I don't know where to post a reply to Cdjp1, but I have to say something. | |||
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:Please read Mark McGowan's paper which explicitly argues '''''against''''' genocide. McGowan: ''"This paper argues that it is '''inappropriate''' '''to affix the label of genocide''' on English action/inaction during the period of the Great Hunger in Ireland."'' (p. 88). The entire point of McGowan's paper was to defend the consensus pov (that it was not a genocide), yet he is cited in the article after pro-genocide content. | |||
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:McGowan's detailed paper also shows why it isn't enough to have a vaguely related background in "international law" or "famines" on continents like Africa (which is Alex de Waal's expertise). Scholars in genocide studies tend to specialize in specific areas, yet it is telling that not one of the genocide scholars cited by Cdjp1 has any background in Irish or British history. Rice and Boyle are law professors with no relevant historical background (as noted in the Irish Famine article), and Cdjp1's list is also padded with pseudo-scholars like Neysa King who isn't a professional academic of any kind (look her up). | |||
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:And finally, while Cdjp1 claims to have no personal bias, one does wonder why he's citing a source he hasn't read to defend content it explicitly rejects. My own view is that this matter is important beyond this particular issue, and goes right to the heart of how meaningful some of our core policies are if they can be circumvented so easily. ] (]) 19:05, 18 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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::I stated what is present in the article, and I never claimed not to be biased. Please engage with what is actually written, instead of arguing about things that have not been written. -- ] (]) 19:32, 18 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Related: ] | |||
:::As to McGowan, that was an error grab in the quick response I provided, he is cited to support the statement that later genocide scholars have considered it genocidal. So claiming he is cited for {{tqq|pro-genocide}} content, is a misreading of where he is actually used in the articles. -- ] (]) 19:44, 18 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::On what page does he say "later genocide scholars considered it genocidal"? McGowan wrote a 15 page essay (not including annotations) arguing against the genocide theory, with over 80 references. He talks about the divide between professional historians, and amateur commentators like Coogan who push these genocide theories. I believe it was you who cited McGowan with no page number except pp. 87 -104, which is the entire piece. | |||
::::You should also cross out Neysa King, who is not a professional academic; Rice and Boyle, who are law professors with no background in academic history; and Alex de Waal, who's a "specialist in famines" but specifically in Africa. There are some editors on here who think that one historian is much like another, but Irish history (and British history) is a particular specialization and someone with a background in Africa simply isn't going to have the technical or textual knowledge to cover this subject accurately. ] (]) 01:26, 19 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
Once again, my first point is to clarify that a claim that I added something to an article is plainly false. I did not add a link from the article on the Great Famine to the Genocides in history article. | |||
Scholars cited who argue it is a genocide in the article are as follows: | |||
* Legal scholar Charles E. Rice is detailed in an article by Mullin, James V. (2002) in the journal ''Eire-Ireland: Journal of Irish Studies''. | |||
* Legal scholar Francis Boyle is detailed in an article by Mullin, James V. (2002) in the journal ''Eire-Ireland: Journal of Irish Studies''. Boyle is a specialist in international law who has been a member of legal teams presenting cases of genocide in the ICJ. | |||
* Historian Mcveigh, Robbie (2008) article published in the '']'' | |||
* King, Neysa (2009) paper in the conference collection ''Re-Imaging Death and Dying'' | |||
* {{strikethrough|Historian McGowan, Mark G. (2017) published in the journal ''Genocide Studies International''. Specialist in Irish Catholic history}} - accidentally grabbed from the references in the article. | |||
* Genocide scholar Jacobs, Steven Leonard (2023) chapter in ''The Cambridge World History of Genocide''. Specialist in religious history, and the religious aspect of genocides. | |||
* Genocide scholar Conley, Bridget (2023) chapter in ''The Cambridge World History of Genocide''. Specialist in mass atrocities and memory studies. | |||
* Anthropologist de Waal, Alex (2023) chapter in ''The Cambridge World History of Genocide''. Specialist in famines. | |||
There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the ''route'' to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Misplaced Pages guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful. | |||
As Mcveigh points out (as is explained in the entry), while statements such as McGowan's on "virtually all" are correct, many of the arguments and historians have not engaged with genocide studies, it's tools, etc., and have nearly always denounced the assessment of potential genocide, due in part to the fact they were responding to activists and not scholars. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов ==== | |||
As previously stated, {{tqq|I have no strong opinion on the specific inclusion of the great famine in the list}}, while it is in the list I will work to make sure it is appropriately covered with relevant sources. | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
-- ] (]) 15:08, 18 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity. | |||
This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). | |||
== List of prime ministers of Sri Lanka == | |||
This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see ]. | |||
Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted. | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} | |||
{{drn filing editor|DinoGrado|09:15, 13 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed as declined by the other editors. The other editors were notified of this thread four days ago but have not responded. DRN is voluntary, and they appear to be declining to take part. Resume discussion on the article talk page. ], an ] may be in order. ] (]) 16:46, 17 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs. | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
* {{pagelinks|List of prime ministers of Sri Lanka}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
* {{User|DinoGrado}} | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan ==== | |||
Few users are changing the political party of former SriLankan PM Dinesh Gunawardene to his initial minor political party. but when he was appointed he was the leader of Sri Lanka Podujana Peramuna which has won the 2020 Sri Lankan general election. Reliable sources suggest that he is a member of then ruling Sri Lanka Podujana Peramuna but these users insists that his initial political party MEP as his party as the PM. However for the next PM Harini Amarasuriya the major political coalition she has contested is given as her party in the next entry. | |||
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Yes, as ] says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
https://en.wikipedia.org/Talk:List_of_prime_ministers_of_Sri_Lanka#Dinesh_Gunawardena_Political_party | |||
:I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Misplaced Pages. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. ] (]) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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::I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what. | |||
::My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Misplaced Pages'). ] (]) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8 ==== | |||
Specifying a consistent policy considering reliable sources to name the political party of the prime minister in this page | |||
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I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{tl|MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). ] (]) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Not Wlwtn ==== | |||
:@], let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the ] section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the ] process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use ] if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph. | |||
:(I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) ] (]) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion ==== | |||
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The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. ] (]) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by ] below, as well as ], and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the ''Zeroeth statements by editors'' section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section. | |||
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:Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. ] (]) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller"> (Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. ] (]) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC) </div> | |||
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=== Autism discussion === | ||
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== Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf == | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)=== | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} | |||
I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on ] and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include; | |||
{{drn filing editor|Titan2456|15:49, 14 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
*Be ]. Civility is required everywhere in Misplaced Pages, and is essential to resolving content disputes. | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed as pending in another forum. One of the editors has filed a complaint at ] against the other editor. DRN does not consider any dispute that is also pending in another content forum or in a conduct forum. Discuss conduct at ]. After the ] discussion is closed, survivors should resume discussing content at the article talk page, ]. ] (]) 18:53, 20 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
*Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a ] is likely to ignore it. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
*Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community. | |||
*Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article. | |||
*Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved. | |||
In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the ] of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form). | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
I don't yet know whether ] is the right forum to resolve disputes about ], but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
] (]) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
* {{pagelinks|Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
* {{User|Titan2456}} | |||
* {{User|SheriffIsInTown}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
:Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)? | |||
SheriffIsInTown added a large paragraph on the May 9 riots section under the History section of PTI, talking about one court order by a judge who implicated PTI's founder Imran Khan in starting the riots. I believe it is not WP:DUE, as it is lengthy and is not a significant event in PTI's history and is backed up by only one source. I have suggested either removing it entirely or heavily trimming it down. Sheriff has argued that it is to "balance" one of PTI's claims of a false flag operation in May 9, though the thing he is trying to balance is one sentence, while he is adding a heavyweight paragraph to "balance" it which is clearly an imbalance. | |||
:I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you. | |||
:Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied. | |||
:I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is (published in the ) and ], posted here and . You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. ] (]) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===First statement by possible moderator (Autism)=== | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
I asked for specific statements of how the ] should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read ]. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of ] describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the ] should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by ], and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by ]. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the ] standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary ]. | |||
If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the ]. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the ], and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised ]. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues. | |||
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I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as '''First statements by editors (Autism)''', because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic ] are met. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the ], I will know better whether ] is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? ] (]) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
The dispute has reached a deadlock and SheriffIsInTown is arguing that removing it is simply 'censorship', so it would request an implementation/enforcement of WP:DUE, as well as a resolution, with an action taken with consensus to fix this lengthy, imbalanced and not due paragraph. | |||
:Thanks @]! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by SheriffIsInTown ==== | |||
:@] has ] - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there? | |||
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:I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Misplaced Pages guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... ] (]) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
In August, they titled “Crackdown against PTI,” which lacked neutrality. My aim was to add balance and neutrality to that section as a whole, not just one sentence. In my view, if the section includes details of the crackdown, it should also address the reasons behind it. They seem to want to keep only the details of the crackdown while excluding the context, which I believe is an attempt to censor information. I will oppose the removal of any reliably sourced content. ] | ] | 16:14, 14 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::@]@] I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample): | |||
:::::: " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. " | |||
::] (]) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===First statements by editors (Autism)=== | |||
=== Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf discussion === | |||
==== 1. what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same ==== | |||
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The overall framing of the lead is very much within the medical model of autism, taking for granted various things which are hotly contested in the wider world - particularly among autistic people, but also among researchers in this field. | |||
Let's take the opening paragraph. | |||
===Zeroth statement by moderator (Pakistan)=== | |||
I am ready to act as moderator if the editors are requesting moderated discussion. Please read ] and agree that you recognize that this is a ] because ] is applicable to ] politics. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. Please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. ] (]) 01:02, 17 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{bq|Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or simply autism, is a ''neurodevelopmental disorder'' characterized by ''repetitive, restricted, and inflexible'' patterns of behavior, interests, and activities; ''deficits'' in social communication and social interaction; and the presence of high or low sensory sensitivity. A formal diagnosis requires that ''symptoms'' cause significant ''impairment'' in multiple functional domains, in addition to being atypical or excessive for the person's age and sociocultural context.}} | |||
:'''I agree with this moderation and accept Rule D. For ], I want this text:''' | |||
:In contrast to PTI's claims that government agencies orchestrated the May 9 riots as a "false flag operation," a detailed order from ] Judge Khalid Arshad implicated PTI's founder, Imran Khan, in orchestrating attacks on military installations, government properties, and police officials. The order revealed that Khan had instructed PTI leaders to create chaos and exert pressure for his release if arrested, as testified by two prosecution witnesses. The court order described a meeting held on 7 May 2023, where Khan allegedly directed PTI leaders to prepare for potential unrest on May 9, should he be detained. He purportedly warned through a video message of a scenario akin to ]; if he were to be arrested, encouraging party workers to engage in what he termed a "real ] for real freedom." The prosecution suggested that Khan orchestrated a ], rallying top PTI leadership to incite actions that culminated in the ], aiming to intimidate the government.<ref name=":0">{{cite news |author=Rana Yasif |date=11 July 2024 |title=Court order reveals Imran Khan's role in targeting military installations, govt properties |url=https://tribune.com.pk/story/2478818/court-order-reveals-imran-khans-role-in-targeting-military-installations-and-government-properties |access-date=14 August 2024 |publisher=]}}</ref><ref name=":1">{{cite news |author=Naveen Ali |date=11 July 2024 |title=May 9 mayhem: ATC rejects Imran Khan's 'political victimisation' allegations |url=https://www.thenews.com.pk/latest/1208687-may-9-mayhem-atc-rejects-imran-khans-political-victimisation-allegations |access-date=14 November 2024 |publisher=]}}</ref><ref name=":2">{{cite news |date=11 July 2024 |title=Pak court says actions of Imran Khan similar to that of a 'terrorist' |url=https://www.siasat.com/pak-court-says-actions-of-imran-khan-similar-to-that-of-a-terrorist-3059964/amp/ |access-date=14 November 2024 |publisher=]}}</ref> | |||
:'''To be condensed into this, as it is not ] for such lengthy text in a section about ]’s history:''' | |||
:In contrast to PTI's claims of a false flag operation, an order from ] (ATC) Judge Khalid Arshad implicated PTI's founder, Imran Khan, in orchestrating attacks on military installations, government properties, and police officials. The order asserted that Khan had instructed PTI leaders to create chaos and exert pressure for his release if arrested.<ref name=":0" /><ref name=":1" /><ref name=":2" /> ] (]) 02:06, 19 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
I've highlighted the particularly contentious terms! Essentially, this paragraph takes the mainstream psychiatric perspective on all of these things for granted. | |||
===Zeroth statements by editors (Pakistan)=== | |||
I agree to Rule D and recognize that this is a contentious topic because of the ArbCom decision on India and Pakistan. While the moderator was waiting for their response, instead of replying here, they very conveniently went to ANI against me ], I want to draw moderator's attention to that to see if it invalidates this DRN under rule D. That being said, I would not like to concede anything at this point as I already has given enough concessions during the discussion at the article talk. I see this demand regarding the removal of the presumably negative content a tantamount to an attempt to censor information. The decision to remove content will set a wrong precedent and will encourage supporters of political parties to remove negative information at will. This will have far reaching consequences. The article legnth at this point is a little over 6,000 readable prose words and there is still a room for article to safely grow up to 10,000 words. The article can further expand and contain more information. As the saying goes, no information is too much information. The content is fully supported by sources and goes into detail about the activities of the founder of party and other members which led to the crackdown. It is essential to mention that riots were pre-planned in case of arrest, and prior instructions for riots were there by the founder. The reference to Sri Lamka's unrest, the quote "real jihad for real freedom", and criminal conspiracy to attack military installations are necessary parts for the reader to understand the gravity of the situation which led to the crackdown. ] | ] | 15:22, 19 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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Here's one alternative version, which I contributed to in 2022, with instances of more neutral terms highlighted: | |||
== Ryan T._Anderson == | |||
{{bq|The autism spectrum, often referred to as just autism or in the context of a professional diagnosis autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or autism spectrum condition (ASC), is a neurodevelopmental ''condition'' (or conditions) characterized by ''difficulties'' in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication, and the ''presence'' of repetitive behavior and restricted interests. Other common ''signs'' include unusual responses to sensory stimuli. }} | |||
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{{drn filing editor|Marspe1|23:06, 14 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed due to lack of recent discussion. There has been no discussion on the article talk page in more than four months, so that the discussion on the article talk page is stale. Resume discussion on the article talk page. ] (]) 02:54, 17 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
Note that for the most part these terms convey the same information, without assuming a particular interpretation is the correct one. ''Condition'' is often thought to be a slightly less value-laden equivalent of ''disorder'',<ref>{{cite journal |doi=10.1177/1362361315588200 |url=https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/26134030/}}</ref> although arguably the difference is marginal. The hypothesis that autistic people have inherent ''deficits'' in social communication and interaction has been disproven quite convincingly (see ]); the ''difficulties'', however, certainly remain in many contexts, and are in practice all that diagnosticians can go by on this front. There are all sorts of issues with applying the term ''symptom'' to the ways that autism manifests, starting with the assumption that they're problems, as opposed to e.g. coping strategies or objectively neutral characteristics. | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
I recently simply to accurately reflect views associated with neurodiversity, correcting text based on blatant misunderstandings; variations on these edits have now been reverted at least four times, including after they have been restored by other editors. These reversions have not been accompanied by sensible edit summaries, instead claiming for example that they are ideologically motivated, and that my references (an academic textbook and a peer-reviewed paper researching community views) are somehow inadequate. I am aware that these reversions are starting to suggest that ] may be a more appropriate venue for resolving these issues. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
* {{pagelinks|Ryan T._Anderson}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
* {{User|Marspe1}} | |||
* {{User|Ttarta}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
The final paragraph of the lead is dubious, and largely reads like an advertisement for ] | |||
In debate over large content edits made to the page of Ryan T. Anderson. | |||
<small>Above entered by {{noping|Oolong}}</small> | |||
I am promoting this version of the page: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Ryan_T._Anderson&oldid=1230369906 | |||
====Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. ==== | |||
''Classification'' goes into enormous technical detail, and seems to overlap heavily with both | |||
Ttarta promotes this version of the page: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Ryan_T._Anderson&oldid=1244307532 | |||
''diagnosis'' and ''signs and symptoms''. | |||
We need to cover common aspects of autistic experience somewhere (see ] for some of these; there are many more) and it is not clear if they can fit in the above section, although they may be at least as important, just because they are not adequately covered by the current editions of diagnostic manuals. | |||
See the line-by-line critique of his edit that I wrote here: https://en.wikipedia.org/Talk:Ryan_T._Anderson#Line-By-Line_Critique_of_Edit_Promoted_by_Ttarta | |||
''Possible causes'' should obviously be no more than 2-3 paragraphs at most, in line with summary style. Likewise ''epidemiology''. | |||
Ttarta has threatened my account with action: https://en.wikipedia.org/User_talk:Marspe1#Warnings | |||
''Management'' is an awful framing; autism is a fundamental difference in a person, not an illness to be managed. I note that this heading is absent from the ] entry. Perhaps it would be constructive to replace this section with something around ''access'': access to healthcare, education, workplaces and so on. | |||
''Prognosis'' probably doesn't warrant a section at all: it's lifelong. If it's going to be there, it needs to be completely rewritten. | |||
I am new''ish'' to Misplaced Pages and would appreciate assistance from experienced editors. I have tried to maintain the article in ideological neutrality and I sincerely believe that I have followed Misplaced Pages guidelines to the best of my abilities. | |||
''History'' and especially ''society and culture'' probably deserve to be significantly higher up in the article. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
<small>Above entered by {{noping|Oolong}}</small> | |||
We have engaged on the talk page with more heat than light: https://en.wikipedia.org/Talk:Ryan_T._Anderson#Line-By-Line_Critique_of_Edit_Promoted_by_Ttarta. I have added my concerns in detail to the edit he promotes. He claims that I am engaged in mere edit warring, am implementing a biased version of the article, and am in blatant violation of Misplaced Pages policies. I am unsure of the validity of or deny the validity of each of these claims. | |||
Re your third question, I provided various links in my original submission - are those specific enough? | |||
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===Second statement by moderator (Autism)=== | |||
Calling balls and strikes on policy violations whether by myself or Ttarta, providing advice for future engagement and editing on Misplaced Pages whether or not I am indeed in violation, recommendations for how we can achieve greater consensus on the article content, and any other action that will ultimately place accurate information, free from loaded language and innuendo, on the text of Ryan's page. | |||
My explanation about ] is my own interpretation, based on the principle to ]. Other editors may disagree, but it is the rule that will be in place while I am moderating this discussion. | |||
The unregistered editor is strongly advised to ] if they wish to take part in this mediation. Their IPv6 address has changed between the time that this discussion was created and the time of this post. It is both difficult to remember IPv6 addresses and difficult to communicate with shifting IPv6 (or IPv4) addresses. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Ttarta ==== | |||
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The requested rewrite has no references. It also includes a statement of opinion that is not a summary of existing knowledge and is therefore not encyclopedic. On the other hand, the first sentence of the proposed rewrite is, in my opinion, a good starting point for a rewrite of the ]. The later sentences about differences between different autistic persons are, in my opinion, a good idea to be included somewhere in the article, but not necessarily in the ]. | |||
=== Ryan T._Anderson discussion === | |||
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*'''Volunteer Note''' - The filing editor has not yet notified the other editor on their user talk page. ] (]) 16:39, 16 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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In the above paragraph, I am taking a more active role in trying to lead this discussion than I usually take. If the participants agree with my taking an active role, I will write a new set of rules providing for a semi-active role by the moderator. If the participants would prefer that I be less active, I will step back somewhat, and will implement ]. | |||
== Talk:Hardeep Singh_Nijjar == | |||
Are there any other questions? | |||
] (]) 05:19, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:So I have issues with the proposed lede change, with interpreting the scientific consensus classification as a "medical model", among other issues. I'd like to clarify these per my involvement here, but I need time to formulate a reply. I saw an article stating that editors must reply within 48 hours but I cannot consistently do this with my time constraints. May I ask if this will be a significant issue and if it's a requirement can it not be so strict under the circumstances? Thanks. ] (]) 16:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::The provision about responding within 48 hours is in ], which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? ] (]) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::72 hours should be fine in general. I plan to respond quicker than that if I can of course, my only concern is that I occasionally am not free to reply within 72 hours as sometimes I won't be able to until the weekend. Apologies if this is causing some issues. I'm much more free now with Christmas over so I think it'll mainly become an issue if our discussions extend much into January. ] (]) 18:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:"The requested rewrite ... includes a statement of opinion." - Which part is a statement of opinion? I am not disputing your assessment; rather, I want to make sure I understand your point correctly. Thanks! - <span style="font-family: Papyrus; font-size: 14px;">] ]</span> <span style="font-family: Papyrus; font-size: 11px;"></span> 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Sri Lankan Vellalar == | |||
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A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources. | |||
Primarily determining the public figure/profile status of a person named Arsh Dalla. Both GhostOfDanGurney and Simonm223 are invoking WP:BLPCRIME as well as WP:COATRACK for this figure despite me highlighting numerous sources reporting on this individual since at least January 2023-thus fulfilling the requirement laid out in , sources in which Dalla has actively sought media attention by speaking to prominent journalists in which ''he himself confessed to killing people'' thus making him ineligible to be considered a low profile person as per , and naturally these confessions would make the media report on him. In addition, there is significant precedence and a near ubiquitous norm in Misplaced Pages crime articles in which a person accused of a well documented crime, who has not attained any notability outside their alleged criminal activity, whose conviction status is pending or criminal proceedings are underway, is named, the allegations against them are openly discussed, and their backgrounds exhaustively discussed. Simonm223 contests that to discuss accusations against a person, we must first establish notability independent of any accusations of criminal activity, and if lacking, establish that they have been convicted of a crime, to proceed. I have yet to come across any policy page which outlines such criteria. | |||
Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts. | |||
We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules. | |||
Also if a volunteer could clarify: how long am I allowed to make my section? And what are the rules for responding to others? | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | ||
This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points. | |||
Through neutral mediation | |||
==== Summary of dispute by |
==== Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy ==== | ||
First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed: | |||
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My issue with the edit to ] re: Arsh Dalla is beyond the BLPCRIME issue. It goes into the aspect of using another person's arrest to further a POV that Nijjar was a militant extremist. | |||
- Terminology differences | |||
Even if Dalla had a Misplaced Pages article, I would have still made that revert per ]/] and ]. I believe that section of the article already has sufficient (if not already overly sufficient) coverage on the unproven allegations of militancy (mostly via "Nijjar was friends with x, y, and z"). Adding this "breaking news" content on the arrest (just an arrest) of Dalla was unneeded piling-on (another "coat", per COATRACK). Similarly, it fails ], specifically 1) ], because Dalla and Nijjar's connection was also only alleged. ―<span style="background:#368ec9;border:solid 2px;border-radius:5px"> ''''']''''' </span> 04:01, 17 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
- The inclusion of the mythology section | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Simonm223 ==== | |||
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'''Terminology Differences''' | |||
Ultimately the core of this dispute is whether a BLP can become a ] on the basis of media attention for a crime they have not been convicted of. It is not disputed that Arsh Dalla has spoken to the press... Regarding the crimes he has been accused of in India and for which Canada has declined extradition. However this media coverage is only because of the high profile India has placed on him as the suspect of a crime. He is otherwise an unremarkable plumber from Surrey. In light of the strong language in ] regarding discussing unproven accusations against private people it is my contention that it is inappropriate to discuss him in a Misplaced Pages article or, frankly, at article talk. ] (]) 21:14, 16 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
The root of the terminology issue stems from my , where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were ]. | |||
=== Talk:Hardeep Singh_Nijjar discussion === | |||
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To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically: | |||
- {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}} refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the ]. | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Hardeep Singh_Nijjar)=== | |||
I am ready to conduct moderated discussion. Please read ]. This is a ] because it involves ] and so is within the scope of ]. By agreeing to participate in this discussion. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state concisely what they want to change that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Comment on content, not contributors. ] (]) 19:16, 20 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
- {{Langx|ta|வெள்ளாளர்|Veḷḷāḷar}} represents the caste name in contemporary usage. | |||
===Zeroth statements by editors (Hardeep Singh Nijjar)=== | |||
This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste ] often uses this term {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}}, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms. | |||
Hi, firstly thank you for agreeing to act as a moderator here @RobertMcClenon. This is a relatively esoteric and hyper partisan topic on Misplaced Pages, and I'm hoping this platform will guide us to consensus through Misplaced Pages policy. | |||
'''Inclusion of the Mythology Section''' | |||
I believe some context may be needed here: Hardeep Singh Nijjar was a Sikh activist who lived in British Columbia, who advocated for the secession of Punjab from India, in order to create a religious state called Khalistan; the movement faced a heavy crackdown in India during the 1980s and 1990s, and many supporters of the movement moved abroad. India had accused Nijjar of heading a Khalistani militant outfit and directing violent crime in India, well before he gained mainstream attention and notoriety in Canada after his 2023 killing. The Indian media released photos of Nijjar brandishing an AK-47 and Nijjar alongside another prominent Khalistani militant (who by his own account admitted to having directed killings in favour of the movement) a decade beforehand. His name was included on a "most wanted person list" the Chief Minister of Punjab gave to the Canadian Prime Minister in 2018. After his killing, Canadian authorities accused Indian government agents (and later diplomats) of having played a role in the killing, which incited a major diplomatic fallout. Canada and India have long had strained relations over the issue of the alleged harbouring of Khalistani militants, with India accusing Canada of being a refuge for them and being unwilling to crack down on Khalistan militants. | |||
The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well. | |||
We have a section on Nijjar's Misplaced Pages page "'''Allegations of militant activities'''" where India's accusations against him are discussed. A substantial amount of that section was written through this , which analyzed some of the claims against him, and seemingly corroborated some of them (indicating that Nijjar was affiliated and involved in some capacity with Khalistan Tiger Force, had connections with prominent militants, close Canadian associates stating he led 5 men in weapons, GPS, target practice in the BC wilderness etc) and disputed others (stating that Canadian authorities did not believe India provided sufficient evidence to arrest Nijjar, that Indian diplomats were overzealous in labelling some of Nijjar's activism as "terrorism".) | |||
The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste. | |||
India, for some time has alleged that Nijjar was associated with Arsh Dalla, reportedly a gangster who absconded to Canada in 2018, accused of directing crime and murders in India in favour of the Khalistan movement. Dalla and Nijjar lived in the same city, were in the same profession (plumbing), and Dalla went to the same Sikh temple Nijjar was the head of. Arsh Dalla has himself talked to the Indian media, , and was recently arrested in Ontario in connection to a violent shooting. India requested his extradition from Canada, but it supposedly was rejected. | |||
'''Third-Party Opinion''' | |||
My stance is that we should include a brief few sentences or paragraphs surrounding Dalla's alleged connection to Nijjar. This is consistent with the tone and content already in the aforementioned section, which was agreed upon between myself and GoDG back in June/July. As militancy is often conducted through concerted efforts with other like minded individuals, we should provide details of associations, if 1) Those associations were discussed or alleged in length in WP:RS and 2) if Nijjar used the association to conduct or facilitate clandestine activities, either though his own direct involvement or commands. | |||
Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed ] or not ], the concerned user should raise the issue on ]. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated. | |||
This is what the Globe and Mail report: {{talkquote|India also claims Mr. Nijjar was connected to yet another Sikh plumber from Surrey: Arshdeep Singh Gill, a 26-year-old who came to Canada from Punjab in 2018. India alleges Mr. Gill runs a criminal network that has close ties to the Khalistan cause, but Mr. Nijjar’s lawyer and friends dispute the alleged link between the pair. | |||
Mr. Gill is the reported head of the Dalla Lakhbir gang, accused of using Canada as a base for a violent extortion ring in Punjab. He’s recently toned down his flashy lifestyle and gone into hiding, according to his family, but occasionally surfaces to give interviews to Indian media, often discussing his rivalry with other gangs. Wire-transfer records and WhatsApp messages filed in Indian court show Mr. Gill, alias Arsh Dalla, along with his wife, sent tens of thousands of dollars via Western Union and other money-transfer services to men India alleges are part of an extortion and weapons-smuggling network. India alleges Mr. Gill co-ordinated the attempted murder of a Hindu pandit priest from Mr. Nijjar’s village in 2021, under direction from Mr. Nijjar. | |||
One of the accused in that case told police Mr. Gill called him on WhatsApp from Canada in January, 2021, and “told us that as per the order of Hardeep Singh Nijjar, you have to kill a priest namely Kamaldeep Sharma,” according to sworn statements filed in court. The priest was accused of sexually assaulting women in the village, according to the confession. But the priest, in an interview in Punjabi, told The Globe the attempted murder, a shooting, was a dispute over land and he did not believe Mr. Nijjar was behind the attempt on his life. | |||
Mr. Gill, who attended Mr. Nijjar’s temple, could not be reached for this story. In an interview this past April with a Punjabi journalist, he denied supporting the Khalistani militancy, but said he killed a Hindu leader who desecrated a Sikh holy book. The Globe was unable to corroborate any links between Mr. Nijjar and Mr. Gill’s group.}} | |||
I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article. | |||
These are 2 recent CTV (another prominent Canadian news organization) reports: states ''as a matter of fact'' that Dalla was a former associate of Nijjar's. | |||
=== Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion === | |||
We also have various reliable Indian news reports which state that Nijjar was associated with Dalla. I will be citing The Hindu and The Indian Express, both of which regularly provide very well researched and comprehensive news. There is already consensus on Misplaced Pages that these 2 sources are reliable- and . | |||
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states {{talk quote|Arsh Dalla was a close aide of the then KTF chief Hardeep Singh Nijjar, who was gunned down by unidentified assailants in the parking lot of a gurudwara in Canada’s Surrey on June 18, 2023. Subsequently, he took over as the outfit’s operations.}} | |||
states {{talk quote|The Canada Police have arrested Arsh Dalla, a designated terrorist by India’s National Investigation Agency (NIA) and a close aide of slain Khalistan separatist leader Hardeep Singh Nijjar. Dalla will be produced before a local court tomorrow...The NIA had designated 27-year-old Arsh Dala as an individual terrorist in 2023. He started off as a small-time gangster in Moga, Punjab, before fleeing to Canada in 2018. There, he came in contact with Khalistan Tiger Force chief Hardeep Singh Nijjar and began collaborating with him. The Globe and Mail has described Dalla as a plumber in Surrey who frequented the Guru Nanak Darbar gurdwara, where Nijjar was the president. The paper, unable to reach him, had reported: “He’s recently toned down his flashy lifestyle and gone into hiding, according to his family, but occasionally surfaces to give interviews to Indian media, often discussing his rivalry with other gangs.” An NIA chargesheet filed in July 2023 alleges that Dalla used his connections in Punjab to form a “terrorist gang”. “He, along with Nijjar, raised funds through extortion and targeted killings of businessmen and leaders from specific communities in Punjab,” states the chargesheet.}} | |||
My stance is specifically to summarize the Globe report, the CTV reports, and the last 2 sources to provide a brief explanation about Nijjar and Dalla's alleged association, something along the lines of {{tq|India has claimed that Hardeep Singh Nijjar was associated with Arsh Dalla (Arshdeep Singh Gill), reportedly a gangster accused of running a criminal network close to the Khalistan movement from Canada. In a case surrounding the attempted murder of a Hindu priest in Punjab in 2021, an accused person told the Indian police that Gill co-ordinated the murder at the behest of Nijjar. A June 2024 Globe report claimed it "was unable to corroborate any links between Mr. Nijjar and Mr. Gill's group." However, a November 2024 CTV news report, and various Indian news outlets assert that Gill was a former associate of Nijjar's. Dalla has denied supporting the Khalistan militancy.}} | |||
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- Has a multitude of reliable sources reporting on the subject. {{done}} as there are numerous Indian and Canadian sources reporting on him since Jan 2023. | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Sri Lankan Vellalar)=== | |||
: Persons who actively seek out media attention are not low-profile, regardless of whether or not they are notable. {{done}} per | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator if the participants want moderated discussion and if this does not involve a question about the ]. Please read ] and the ]. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state, first, whether they agree to ] and that discussions of South Asian social groupings are subject to special rules. Each editor is then asked, second, what changes they want to make to the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Each editor is asked, third, whether there are issues about the ]. If I determine that there are issues about the ], or if an editor states that there are such issues, I will close this discussion until that question is resolved at ]. | |||
Are there any other questions? | |||
|title=BLP policy surrounding Dalla}} (unsigned post by Southasianhistorian8 ends here) | |||
] (]) 05:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Zeroth statements by editors (Sri Lankan Vellalar)=== | |||
*Thanks, Robert. I would like the content on "Arsh Dalla" to '''not''' be inserted into the article. ―<span style="background:#368ec9;border:solid 2px;border-radius:5px"> ''''']''''' </span> 03:16, 21 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Kamaria Ahir == | |||
== Misplaced Pages:Articles for_deletion/Timeline_of_UFOs == | |||
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{{drn filing editor|Nlkyair012|20:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)}} | ||
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{{DRN archive top|Closed as also pending in another forum, ]. ] does not accept a dispute that is also pending in another content or conduct forum, and RSN is a content forum. When there are two types of issues about one article, it is not practical to try to resolve them in two forums at the same time, because often issues overlap, and because the resolution in one forum might change what is being discussed in the other forum. Finish the discussion at ] and decide whether there are any remaining content issues that are consistent with what has been decided about ]. If there are any remaining content issues, resume discussion on the article talk page. If the subsequent discussion on the article talk page is lengthy and inconclusive, a new case request can be filed here. ] (]) 03:10, 25 December 2024 (UTC)}} | ||
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The dispute revolves around the use of Raj-era sources, specifically K.S. Singh’s "Anthropological Survey of India," in the article on "Kamaria Ahir." One editor, Nlkyair012, is advocating for the removal of these sources, arguing that they are outdated and unreliable. However, these historical sources, particularly those from the British Raj, are still cited in reputable modern academic works as valuable historical references for caste dynamics and structures. The issue also includes the inclusion of living people's names without proper self-identification, which violates Misplaced Pages's Biographies of Living Persons policy (BLP). The goal of this dispute resolution is to determine whether the Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh’s work should be retained or replaced, and to ensure that the article adheres to Misplaced Pages's guidelines on neutrality and verifiability. | |||
I tried to construct a timeline article primarily on the modern investigations of unidentified anomalous phenomena (UAP), previously called unidentified flying objects (UFOs), because of the recent developments in the field that has led it gradually outside the shadow of controversies. Misplaced Pages doesn't yet have an article with such a timeline, but has articles for ufo conspiracies and hoaxes. The article was automatically assigned to the fringe topic discussion board and got into some unwelcoming discussion. The topic of uap studies should also be assigned to at least to the astronomy/aviation noticeboard for others to adjudicate on the content. I feel very much being misjudged by the numerous editors frequenting the fringe community, who are really focusing on the pre-historic (e.g. pre-2000s) aspect of the topic. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
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I tried to reason with the editors in discussion and continuously update the timeline article to steer away from fringe community topics. | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | ||
The dispute can be resolved by carefully reviewing the reliability of Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh's work, considering modern academic citations that rely on these sources, and determining whether they meet Misplaced Pages's standards of verifiability. Additionally, we can remove any names of living people to comply with the BLP policy while maintaining the historical and sociological content that is well-sourced. Collaboration on improving the article is key, and I suggest that experts in anthropology or caste studies provide input on the appropriateness of these sources for this article. | |||
By bringing in editors from other noticeboards (astronomy, aviation, physics, psychology, neuroscience, etc) that have stakes on this interdisciplinary topic. Given the developments in the past couple of years, the topic on UFOs/UAPs shouldn't be handled solely by the group of anti-fringe activists in the fringe community. | |||
The current dispute is about the inclusion of Raj-era sources, particularly from the British colonial period, in the article "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Kamaria_Ahir)." I believe these sources are valuable for understanding the historical context of caste structures in India, despite their age. While I acknowledge that (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Age_matters) advises caution with older sources, it does not outright prohibit their use, especially when they provide unique historical insights that modern works may lack. Raj-era ethnographic works were written by government officials and are often cited in contemporary research for their firsthand observations, making them relevant in understanding caste dynamics. | |||
=== Misplaced Pages:Articles for_deletion/Timeline_of_UFOs discussion === | |||
A central issue in this dispute is the use of K.S. Singh’s "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Anthropological_Survey_of_India)" (ASI), which I have cited in the article. The ASI, although created under government supervision, is a significant academic resource that continues to be referenced in Indian academia. While some may question its modern reliability, it remains an authoritative source, and dismissing it entirely without further scrutiny undermines its contribution to the topic. As per (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Scholarship), high-quality academic sources are essential, but older sources like K.S. Singh’s are still valid when used in conjunction with modern studies to provide a complete view of the topic. | |||
I also understand concerns related to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons), particularly regarding the inclusion of living people's names in caste articles. If specific names are a violation of (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BLP_categories), I agree they should be removed. However, this does not justify removing the entire article or historical context that is verifiable and supported by well-established sources. The article provides valuable historical and sociological context that should not be discarded simply due to concerns over individual names. | |||
The sources I have used are critical to the article’s depth and accuracy. While there are concerns over the accessibility and page numbers of some sources, I am willing to work to improve verifiability, such as by adding missing page numbers or citing additional resources. According to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Verifiability) and (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources), I aim to improve the article's citation standards, but my main goal is to maintain the article’s historical integrity while complying with Misplaced Pages’s standards for verifiability, neutrality, and reliability. | |||
(https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Ratnahastin) has raised concerns about the reliability and relevance of these sources, particularly due to their age. However, rather than removing content entirely, I propose that we retain these sources while improving the article’s clarity and citation standards. The article can be collaboratively improved to ensure it meets Misplaced Pages's guidelines while preserving the depth of the subject matter. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Ratnahastin ==== | |||
The OP does not really understand the purpose of WP:DR. The proper venue for this dispute was ]. - ] (]) 02:06, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I understand your concerns, but I’d appreciate if we could focus on constructive dialogue rather than dismissing my contributions as AI-generated or repetitive. I’ve put in considerable effort into researching and explaining my points here and on RSN, as you’ve acknowledged. | |||
:While RSN focuses strictly on source reliability, this discussion at DRN is broader—it’s about how content sourced from historical documents can be meaningfully incorporated into the article without violating Misplaced Pages’s guidelines like ] or ]. | |||
:I’d also like to emphasize that I’m not against incorporating modern tertiary sources. In fact, I’ve already proposed balancing the article with both historical and modern perspectives to ensure neutrality and depth. I am also willing to address verifiability concerns by adding specific page numbers or additional citations. | |||
:Accusing me of forum shopping is inaccurate—I brought the matter to RSN to address the reliability of specific sources, and to DRN to resolve content disputes that go beyond just reliability. These are distinct yet connected aspects of the same issue. | |||
:I hope we can focus on resolving the content dispute collaboratively rather than resorting to unproductive allegations. I look forward to hearing constructive feedback from DRN volunteers or other editors like @] and @], whom you’ve pinged. <span style="font-family:Georgia,serif; color:#FF4500; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold;">]</span> 05:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
=== Kamaria Ahir discussion === | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | <div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | ||
*'''Volunteer Note''' - This appears to be an issue about the ]. Is this a question about the ]? If so, the proper forum is ], where the volunteers are more familiar with the source reliability guidelines than at ]. This case will be closed within 48 hours unless an issue is identified about article content that is not a source reliability question. ] (]) 04:18, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thank you for your note. I acknowledge that source reliability is a critical aspect of this dispute, and as you mentioned, I have already brought up this matter on the ] (RSN) ] to evaluate the specific sources in question. | |||
:However, this dispute at DRN extends beyond just the reliability of sources. It involves a broader disagreement over how content from historical sources should be incorporated into the article while balancing compliance with Misplaced Pages's policies like ], ], and ]. | |||
:Here at DRN, I am seeking resolution on whether the historical context provided by these sources can be retained while ensuring the article aligns with community standards. This involves determining whether to refine, supplement, or restructure the article, rather than removing entire sections or sources outright. | |||
:I appreciate your efforts and hope this clarifies why this discussion is taking place here in addition to RSN. If DRN volunteers feel this still doesn’t meet the scope of this forum, I’d appreciate guidance on next steps. <span style="font-family:Georgia,serif; color:#FF4500; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold;">]</span> 05:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Old Government House, Parramatta == | |||
== Isles of_Scilly == | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} | {{DR case status|closed}} | ||
{{drn filing editor| |
{{drn filing editor|Itchycoocoo|06:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)}} | ||
{{DRN archive top|Closed for two reasons. First, the other editor hasn't replied. Second, it's unclear what the dispute even is; it appears to me that it is about large portion of the article being copied from a compatibly licensed source. As long as the appropriate attribution is given, it is legal. The guidelines that the filing editor has mentioned, which disallow copying large portions, are talking about copyrighted material where we don't have explicit permission to use them so we rely on ]. However, this isn't the case here, as the material is CC-BY licensed. I am not aware of any guideline that forbids articles from being primarily copied from a compatibly licensed source, instead, ] mentions: {{tqq|For sections or whole articles, add a section-wide or article-wide attribution template}}, so I believe there is no issue here. If there is any other issue, follow ]. Thanks. ] (]) 12:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed as not discussed in the proper place, and as possibly pending in another forum. The filing party has also started an RFC on the question. The RFC is not neutrally worded and is being contested, but DRN does not open a case while there is an RFC open. Also, the discussion on the article talk page only began less than 12 hours ago. Previous discussion on user talk pages was useful but not sufficient to be a prerequisite for DRN. Decide whether to use a neutrally worded RFC, or DRN. If you are using a neutrally worded RFC, DRN will defer to the RFC. If you want to conduct moderated discussion at DRN, close the non-neutral RFC. In the meantime, discuss at the article talk page. Do not edit-war/ ] (]) 06:47, 19 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | ||
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* {{User|Itchycoocoo}} | ||
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* {{User|The Drover's Wife}} | ||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article ] that extends to >90% of material from another website. | |||
Two editors are adding unsourced material to claim that the Isles of Scilly are subtropical. | |||
I have provided well sourced material to demonstrate the Isles of Scilly are not subtropical, which is being reverted. | |||
The User who posted much of this material contends that "The material is CC-BY licensed, as stated in the edit summary and correctly attributed, which is, and has always been, usable on Misplaced Pages, and was added as part of a massive project by a number of Australian editors to import quality CC-BY content from a number of heritage sources." | |||
I think that this material should be placed subject under WP:EL/ External Links, and follow the clearly defined rules of WP:COPYPASTE/ Copying text from other sources, WP:Plagiarism & WP:PARAPHRASE guidelines. | |||
Ignoring the numerous uncivil issues appearing on the Talkpage, the view is using material like this is legalistically quite correct regarding use of non-copyright material, but in my opinion, it exceed any 'fair use' of material in which it is almost completely paraphrased and could even be considered as plagiarism. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
] | |||
https://en.wikipedia.org/User_talk:Uness232 | |||
https://en.wikipedia.org/Talk:Isles_of_Scilly#Climate_section_(2019) | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | ||
Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Misplaced Pages pages? | |||
Assess the sourced material vs the unsourced claims. | |||
Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by RandomIntrigue ==== | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by |
==== Summary of dispute by The Drover's Wife ==== | ||
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=== Old Government House, Parramatta discussion === | ||
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=== Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House) === | |||
== Berbers == | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read ] and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues. | |||
It is my understanding that {{u|The Drover's Wife}} wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask {{u|Itchycoocoo}} what changes do you want ] and why? ] (]) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} | |||
{{drn filing editor|TahaKahi|06:33, 19 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed as declined by other editor. The other editor has deleted the notice of this case, which is a way of declining to participate, and participation is voluntary. Continue discussion at the article talk page. If the other party does not discuss, see ]. However, the other editor is restating their position, which meets the minimum requirement of discussion. If there is an impasse, consider a ]. A Request for Comments should be neutrally worded. You may ask here for assistance in formulating a neutrally worded RFC (even though that is not the primary purpose of this noticeboard) or may ask at ]. Do not edit-war. ] (]) 21:04, 19 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
:I don't really see what "dispute" exist here – this user hasn't even attempted to edit the article other than slapping a copyvio tag on it, and no one has tried to stop them from editing. I have even the user to ] and edit the article, which they haven't done. Itchycoocoo seems to believe the article is a copyright violation and/or plagiarism, despite three users (myself, The Drover's Wife, and Wizardman) explaining that ]. The editor is welcome to take their issue to a different noticeboard such as ] but they will get the same answer. Otherwise, again, they are free to make whatever edits they want to the article. <span style=white-space:nowrap;>] <span style="background-color:mistyrose;padding:2px 5px;border-radius:5px;font-family:Arial black">]</span></span> 02:36, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
=== Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House) === | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
* {{pagelinks|Berbers}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
* {{User|TahaKahi}} | |||
* {{User|M.Bitton}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up. | |||
A long-standing unresolved issue regarding including Arabic terms in an ethnic group article, particularly involving M.Bitton and me, has persisted on the page. Despite ongoing discussions, the argument has never reached a consensus. Recently, I re-added Neo-Tifinagh to the Berbers' Misplaced Pages page, as it is an ethnic script. However, M.Bitton moved the Arabic term to the first section of the right sidebar, claiming this aligns with the "COMMONNAME" guideline. They also deleted the endonym term that had been present in the article for months, alleging it was added by a "Berberist." | |||
I do accept '''Misplaced Pages DRN Rule B''', and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor. | |||
Here are the relevant edits for those reference: | |||
You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages. | |||
] | |||
] | |||
I will be very happy to do such culling. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Misplaced Pages pages. This is acknowledged. | |||
I have opened a discussion page. but it didn't seem to have become fruitful ] | |||
However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Misplaced Pages editors. e.g. According to ] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''" | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article. | |||
The dispute resolution board can facilitate a neutral consensus on the inclusion and placement of Tamazight names in the ethnic article, ensuring adherence to Misplaced Pages guidelines while preventing the discussion from veering into personal conflicts. | |||
In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Misplaced Pages editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in ] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''" | |||
==== Summary of dispute by M.Bitton ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
'''Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Misplaced Pages page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%?''' | |||
=== Berbers discussion === | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Misplaced Pages standards. However, looking at the other Misplaced Pages policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users. | |||
*'''Note''' - The filing editor has not notified the other editor on their user talk page. ] (]) 17:12, 19 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail. | |||
Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic. | |||
Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome. | |||
Thanks. | |||
:I have, they deleted it ] ] (]) 17:13, 19 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 06:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Imran Khan == | ||
{{DR case status}} | |||
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{{drn filing editor|SheriffIsInTown|15:56, 26 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} | |||
{{drn filing editor|The-demon-next-door|00:23, 20 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed as premature. I have changed the topic to ], the article in question, but the discussion at ] has been inadequate. Continue discussion at ]. If discussion is lengthy and inconclusive, consider asking for assistance at ]. ] (]) 18:06, 20 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | ||
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* {{User|WikiEnthusiast1001}} | ||
* {{User|Veldsenk}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
The content removed in this had been part of the article for over six years. It was initially removed by an editor citing ] and ]. Although I restored it, another editor subsequently removed it again. For context, ] is a former wife of the subject. After their marriage ended, she authored an autobiography titled ], published by ]. The author, the book, and the publisher are all notable, with HarperCollins being recognised as “one of the ‘Big Five’ English-language publishers,” as noted in its Misplaced Pages article. The removed content was also supported by five other secondary sources. Given the notability of the author, the book, and the publisher, as well as the reliable reporting, the content merits inclusion in the article. The removal occurred without consensus, despite the content being part of the article for years. The material only reported Reham Khan’s allegations, including claims that Imran Khan shared certain details with her. As Misplaced Pages editors, we are not arbiters of truth but rely on reliable sources. Additionally, ]. | |||
Hi, the user 162 etc. has come onto my user talk page to discuss recent edits I made to pages involving Willow Smith (I'm not sure why they came onto my user talk page rather than the Willow Smith talk page) regarding a source on Smith's pronouns. We have thus far been unable to come up with a compromise on the verifiability of the source, or on what to do with the article with regards to reverting it back to its original state or to changing it to something that meets in the middle. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
] | |||
Discussion primarily occurred at ]. | |||
Also briefly mentioned at ] after the discussion was taken up. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | ||
I am seeking the restoration of the removed content, along with some expansion to include her allegations regarding Imran Khan’s drug use and same-sex tendencies, all of which are supported by her book and other secondary sources. | |||
A third-party opinion on whether this source counts as verifiable and whether it should be included in the article (and if so, how) would be helpful. | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by WikiEnthusiast1001 ==== | ||
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See ]. Two words on an Insta bio is not sufficient verification. ] (]) 17:09, 20 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Veldsenk ==== | |||
=== User talk:The-demon-next-door discussion === | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
=== Imran Khan discussion === | |||
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== 2025 Bangladesh Premier League == | ||
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{{drn filing editor|Dushnilkin|21:20, 20 November 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} | |||
{{drn filing editor|UwU.Raihanur|02:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed as not an issue for which DRN can be helpful. My advice is similar to that given by ] in declining your ] request. Third Opinion and DRN are both for good-faith disagreements between editors who discuss their disagreements. The problem here is an unregistered editor who reverts and does not discuss. My advice concerning unregistered editors (IP addresses) who do not discuss normally is to request ] at ], and this is such a case. After the article is semi-protected, you can make your edits, and the article will be read-only for the unregistered editor. This may be an unregistered mobile user who never uses talk pages because they don't know about talk pages and don't know that they have a talk page. This is a problem that we sometimes encounter with mobile users, both registered and unregistered. In any case, I suggest requesting ]. In your request, state that the IP editor reverts but does not discuss. ] (]) 04:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | ||
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* {{User|103.59.179.16}} | ||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
I’ve been trying to add factual, sourced information to the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League article, but my edits are being reverted without explanation by another editor who hasn’t engaged in discussion despite multiple attempts. I’d like neutral input to resolve whether this edit complies with Misplaced Pages’s policies. | |||
There is a process of discussing one source, the question is being decided whether to include it in the article or not, at the moment the dispute has reached an impasse, so we need a third party's opinion on this, please. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
I have tried to resolve the dispute by initiating discussions at the following locations: | |||
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] | |||
Despite these efforts, the other editor has not engaged in meaningful dialogue. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | ||
I would appreciate input from neutral editors to determine whether my edit complies with Misplaced Pages's policies on verifiability, reliable sources, and relevance. A third-party perspective can help decide whether the reverted information should remain in the article or if adjustments are necessary to address any concerns. Additionally, guidance on how to handle the lack of engagement from the other editor would be helpful. | |||
To propose a solution that will satisfy both sides, or to resolve the right side, since the dispute has reached an impasse | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by 103.59.179.16 ==== | ||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | <div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | ||
The editor 103.59.179.16 has reverted my edits to the article multiple times without providing an explanation for the reversions. Despite my attempts to engage in discussions on their user talk page and the article talk page, they have not responded. The disputed content includes factual information about the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League, which is supported by a reliable, verifiable source. The other editor has not presented any concerns regarding the reliability or relevance of the information, nor have they participated in the discussion to clarify their reasons for the reverts. | |||
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*'''Volunteer Notes''' - The filing editor has not yet notified the other editor on their user talk page. There are two alternatives to mediation that might be quicker. The first would be to request a ] at ]. The second would be to ask the volunteers at the ] about the reliability of a biased source. This noticeboard is still available, after proper notice is given, but you might want to consider those alternatives either first or instead. ] (]) 02:37, 21 November 2024 (UTC) |
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Dragon Age: The Veilguard | In Progress | Sariel Xilo (t) | 22 days, | Robert McClenon (t) | 1 days, 15 hours | Sariel Xilo (t) | 1 days, 2 hours |
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Dragon Age: The Veilguard
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Sariel Xilo on 20:06, 5 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
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- Sariel Xilo (talk · contribs)
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- Wikibenboy94 (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
1) Disagreement on if WP:SYNTH is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows MOS:INTRO/Misplaced Pages:Summary style & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows WP:VG/REC advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included. 2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus. 3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
- Current discussion: Talk:Dragon Age: The Veilguard#Prose
- Previous discussion: Talk:Dragon Age: The Veilguard#Review bomb context
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a full lock until the dispute is resolved.
Summary of dispute by BMWF
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94
The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion:
1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to WP:SYNTH, and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did.
2. Including the Steam player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much Dragon Age: Veilguard has sold.
3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms".
4. The invoking of WP:SAID while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews".
5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). Wikibenboy94 (talk) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both @Wikibenboy94 and I agree that there are no WP:SYNTH issues in the topline summary sentences removed by @BMWF in this edit and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute.
In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: Veilguard was also subject to review bombing on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "woke". Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative, the user reviews of Veilguard on Steam, which requires users to play the game before leaving a review, have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove offensive reviews. Sariel Xilo (talk) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read DRN Rule A and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). Sariel Xilo (talk) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)
I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that User:Sariel Xilo is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of no harm, no foul applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)
I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined above, I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed in the lead in this edit & in the reception in this edit), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. Sariel Xilo (talk) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to DRN Rule A and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to DRN Rule A. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. Sariel Xilo (talk) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. Wikibenboy94 (talk) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
First statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about review bombing, so that we can read a description of the review bombing.
I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement.
I don't understand what the synthesis issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the synthesis issue is. So please state more specifically what the synthesis issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a synthesis issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it.
Please provide your rewritten sections.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
Second statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Proposed text:
- Lead
Dragon Age: The Veilguard released for PlayStation 5, Windows, and Xbox Series X/S on October 31, 2024. After release Dragon Age: The Veilguard topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record. The game received generally positive reviews from critics, who praised its cast, representation of sexual minority characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the Golden Joystick Awards and Innovation in Accessibility at The Game Awards.
- Reception
¶1 Dragon Age: The Veilguard received "generally favorable" reviews from critics for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions according to the review aggregator website Metacritic. OpenCritic determined that 68% of critics recommended the game. Veilguard was subject to review bombing on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "woke". Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative, the user reviews of Veilguard on Steam, which requires users to play the game before leaving a review, have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove offensive reviews.
Reception ¶2 is not under dispute but here for additional context if needed. |
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¶2 Hayes Madsen of Rolling Stone called Veilguard a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset". Leana Hafer for IGN similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character". Andy Bickerton of NPR viewed the game as a "well-executed action RPG". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of Veilguard's near-decade of troubled production". Lauren Morton of PC Gamer thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than RPG at moments". |
¶3 Critics were mixed on the game's story. Matt Purslow from IGN thought that Veilguard was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric. Malindy Hetfeld of The Guardian criticized the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in Veilguard, describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions". She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas. Hafer opined that Veilguard has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas. Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey. Ash Parrish of The Verge appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice". Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative, with some finding major decisions "few and far between".
The rest of the reception section for context on lead summary. While it uses similar summary style sentences as above (see bolded text), it is not under dispute. |
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¶4 Madsen praised Veilguard for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot". Todd Harper of Polygon emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways". Kazuma Hashimoto of Them commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions. Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character. Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in Veilguard, highlighting that unlike previous Dragon Age games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path. Conversely, Oliver Brandt of Sports Illustrated viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other Dragon Age games. Harvey Randall of PC Gamer highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity. Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations, noting that "good people don't make great characters". She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts. ¶5 Veilguard generally received praise for its inclusive character creator and representation of transgender and non-binary characters. Alyssa Mora of IGN emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless". Both Robin Bea of Inverse and Brandt commended Taash's story arc, with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", Vanguard "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary". Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in Veilguard in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a coming out narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character". Stacey Henley of TheGamer appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to Inquisition's Krem, though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking". Randall was more critical, noting how Veilguard "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context". They found the lack of a fictional etymology connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting". ¶6 Critics enjoyed Veilguard's graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat. Bickerton felt that Veilguard's strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish". He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players. Hetfeld viewed Veilguard's combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games. Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat. Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars". Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than Inquisition and the Mass Effect games. Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor", and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous". Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design". Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on Inquisition's "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points". Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of Veilguard. She found it was better off for removing Inquisition's "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings". References
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In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). Sariel Xilo (talk) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. Wikibenboy94 (talk) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Third statement by moderator (Dragon Age)
The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place.
Are there any questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 04:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? Sariel Xilo (talk) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Third statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Fourth statement by moderator (Dragon Age)
Yes. Make the agreed-on changes. If they are reverted, follow my instructions above. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:54, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Fourth statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Done per above instructions (see edit). Sariel Xilo (talk) 18:23, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Autism
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Oolong on 15:46, 20 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- Oolong (talk · contribs)
- Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk · contribs)
- Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talk · contribs)
- HarmonyA8 (talk · contribs)
- TempusTacet (talk · contribs)
- WhatamIdoing (talk · contribs)
- FactOrOpinion (talk · contribs)
- 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 (talk · contribs)
- GreenMeansGo (talk · contribs)
- Markworthen (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society.
On Misplaced Pages, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all.
Misplaced Pages has quite detailed guidelines for what to do within medicine, or outside of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about whether something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years.
This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways.
A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"?
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Autism Talk:Autism#Autism and disability Talk:Autism#Too little focus on anthropology and social dynamics; too intense focus on medical genetics. Talk:Autism#Extent of Scientific Consensus on Terminology & Reconciling Perspectives Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions] Related: Misplaced Pages:Dispute_resolution_noticeboard/Archive_228#Applied_behavior_analysis
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the route to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Misplaced Pages guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful.
Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity.
This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see list of quoted references.
Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted.
In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs.
While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations.
Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Yes, as User:Oolong says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here.
There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talk • contribs) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Misplaced Pages. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. 2A02:C7C:9B04:EA00:F104:371A:5F87:5238 (talk) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what.
- My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Misplaced Pages'). Oolong (talk) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by TempusTacet
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Oolong, let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the #First statements by editors (Autism) section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the Misplaced Pages:Edit requests process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use Template:Text diff if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph.
- (I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. FactOrOpinion (talk) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by Robert McClenon below, as well as DRN Rule A, and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the Zeroeth statements by editors section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section.
- Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. FactOrOpinion (talk) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0
(Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. 2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC)Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Comment in your own section. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it. |
Note: Editor is "done with the discussion" and will not be participating. --Oolong (talk) 09:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
Autism discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)
I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on Autism and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include;
- Be civil. Civility is required everywhere in Misplaced Pages, and is essential to resolving content disputes.
- Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a wall of text is likely to ignore it.
- Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community.
- Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article.
- Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved.
In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form).
I don't yet know whether DRN is the right forum to resolve disputes about autism, but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)?
- I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you.
- Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied.
- I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is Autism and Scientism (published in the Middletown Centre for Autism Research Journal) and Autism, Misplaced Pages and Epistemic Injustice, posted here and published in Thinking Person's Guide to Autism. You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. Oolong (talk) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
First statement by possible moderator (Autism)
I asked for specific statements of how the lede section should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read Be Specific at DRN. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of reliability describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the lede section should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by reliable sources, and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by medically reliable sources. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the medically reliable standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary standard of reliable sourcing.
If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the lede section. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the lede section, and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised lede section. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues.
I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as First statements by editors (Autism), because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic talk page guidelines are met.
After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the lede section, I will know better whether DRN is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Robert McClenon! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years.
- @Димитрий Улянов Иванов has has said that he won't "have the time to consistently respond within 48 hours. Hopefully that is not a strict requirement" - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there?
- I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Misplaced Pages guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... Oolong (talk) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
- " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. "
- @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
- 2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
First statements by editors (Autism)
1. what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same
The overall framing of the lead is very much within the medical model of autism, taking for granted various things which are hotly contested in the wider world - particularly among autistic people, but also among researchers in this field.
Let's take the opening paragraph.
Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or simply autism, is a neurodevelopmental disorder characterized by repetitive, restricted, and inflexible patterns of behavior, interests, and activities; deficits in social communication and social interaction; and the presence of high or low sensory sensitivity. A formal diagnosis requires that symptoms cause significant impairment in multiple functional domains, in addition to being atypical or excessive for the person's age and sociocultural context.
I've highlighted the particularly contentious terms! Essentially, this paragraph takes the mainstream psychiatric perspective on all of these things for granted.
Here's one alternative version, which I contributed to in 2022, with instances of more neutral terms highlighted:
The autism spectrum, often referred to as just autism or in the context of a professional diagnosis autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or autism spectrum condition (ASC), is a neurodevelopmental condition (or conditions) characterized by difficulties in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication, and the presence of repetitive behavior and restricted interests. Other common signs include unusual responses to sensory stimuli.
Note that for the most part these terms convey the same information, without assuming a particular interpretation is the correct one. Condition is often thought to be a slightly less value-laden equivalent of disorder, although arguably the difference is marginal. The hypothesis that autistic people have inherent deficits in social communication and interaction has been disproven quite convincingly (see double empathy problem); the difficulties, however, certainly remain in many contexts, and are in practice all that diagnosticians can go by on this front. There are all sorts of issues with applying the term symptom to the ways that autism manifests, starting with the assumption that they're problems, as opposed to e.g. coping strategies or objectively neutral characteristics.
I recently edited the third paragraph simply to accurately reflect views associated with neurodiversity, correcting text based on blatant misunderstandings; variations on these edits have now been reverted at least four times, including after they have been restored by other editors. These reversions have not been accompanied by sensible edit summaries, instead claiming for example that they are ideologically motivated, and that my references (an academic textbook and a peer-reviewed paper researching community views) are somehow inadequate. I am aware that these reversions are starting to suggest that administrators' noticeboard for incidents may be a more appropriate venue for resolving these issues.
The final paragraph of the lead is dubious, and largely reads like an advertisement for applied behavior analysis
Above entered by Oolong
Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change.
Classification goes into enormous technical detail, and seems to overlap heavily with both diagnosis and signs and symptoms.
We need to cover common aspects of autistic experience somewhere (see Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions for some of these; there are many more) and it is not clear if they can fit in the above section, although they may be at least as important, just because they are not adequately covered by the current editions of diagnostic manuals.
Possible causes should obviously be no more than 2-3 paragraphs at most, in line with summary style. Likewise epidemiology.
Management is an awful framing; autism is a fundamental difference in a person, not an illness to be managed. I note that this heading is absent from the gender dysphoria entry. Perhaps it would be constructive to replace this section with something around access: access to healthcare, education, workplaces and so on.
Prognosis probably doesn't warrant a section at all: it's lifelong. If it's going to be there, it needs to be completely rewritten.
History and especially society and culture probably deserve to be significantly higher up in the article.
Above entered by Oolong
Re your third question, I provided various links in my original submission - are those specific enough?
Second statement by moderator (Autism)
My explanation about source reliability is my own interpretation, based on the principle to use common sense. Other editors may disagree, but it is the rule that will be in place while I am moderating this discussion.
The unregistered editor is strongly advised to register an account if they wish to take part in this mediation. Their IPv6 address has changed between the time that this discussion was created and the time of this post. It is both difficult to remember IPv6 addresses and difficult to communicate with shifting IPv6 (or IPv4) addresses.
The requested rewrite has no references. It also includes a statement of opinion that is not a summary of existing knowledge and is therefore not encyclopedic. On the other hand, the first sentence of the proposed rewrite is, in my opinion, a good starting point for a rewrite of the lede. The later sentences about differences between different autistic persons are, in my opinion, a good idea to be included somewhere in the article, but not necessarily in the lede paragraph.
In the above paragraph, I am taking a more active role in trying to lead this discussion than I usually take. If the participants agree with my taking an active role, I will write a new set of rules providing for a semi-active role by the moderator. If the participants would prefer that I be less active, I will step back somewhat, and will implement DRN Rule A.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:19, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- So I have issues with the proposed lede change, with interpreting the scientific consensus classification as a "medical model", among other issues. I'd like to clarify these per my involvement here, but I need time to formulate a reply. I saw an article stating that editors must reply within 48 hours but I cannot consistently do this with my time constraints. May I ask if this will be a significant issue and if it's a requirement can it not be so strict under the circumstances? Thanks. Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk) 16:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- The provision about responding within 48 hours is in DRN Rule A, which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- 72 hours should be fine in general. I plan to respond quicker than that if I can of course, my only concern is that I occasionally am not free to reply within 72 hours as sometimes I won't be able to until the weekend. Apologies if this is causing some issues. I'm much more free now with Christmas over so I think it'll mainly become an issue if our discussions extend much into January. Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk) 18:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- The provision about responding within 48 hours is in DRN Rule A, which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- "The requested rewrite ... includes a statement of opinion." - Which part is a statement of opinion? I am not disputing your assessment; rather, I want to make sure I understand your point correctly. Thanks! - Mark D Worthen PsyD (talk) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
Second statements by editors (Autism)
Sri Lankan Vellalar
– New discussion. Filed by Kautilyapundit on 05:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
Dispute overview
A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources.
Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts.
We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Sri_Lankan_Vellalar
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points.
Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy
First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed:
- Terminology differences
- The inclusion of the mythology section
Terminology Differences
The root of the terminology issue stems from my edit, where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were WP:FRINGE.
To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically:
- Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the Akananuru.
- Tamil: வெள்ளாளர், romanized: Veḷḷāḷar represents the caste name in contemporary usage. This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste Vellalar often uses this term Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms.
Inclusion of the Mythology Section
The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well.
The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste.
Third-Party Opinion
Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed WP:FRINGE or not WP:RS, the concerned user should raise the issue on WP:RSN. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated.
I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article.
Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Sri Lankan Vellalar)
I am ready to act as the moderator if the participants want moderated discussion and if this does not involve a question about the reliability of sources. Please read DRN Rule D and the general sanctions concerning South Asian social groups. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state, first, whether they agree to DRN Rule D and that discussions of South Asian social groupings are subject to special rules. Each editor is then asked, second, what changes they want to make to the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Each editor is asked, third, whether there are issues about the reliability of sources. If I determine that there are issues about the reliability of sources, or if an editor states that there are such issues, I will close this discussion until that question is resolved at the Reliable Source Noticeboard.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Sri Lankan Vellalar)
Kamaria Ahir
– General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by Nlkyair012 on 20:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC).Closed as also pending in another forum, the Reliable Source Noticeboard. DRN does not accept a dispute that is also pending in another content or conduct forum, and RSN is a content forum. When there are two types of issues about one article, it is not practical to try to resolve them in two forums at the same time, because often issues overlap, and because the resolution in one forum might change what is being discussed in the other forum. Finish the discussion at RSN and decide whether there are any remaining content issues that are consistent with what has been decided about reliability of sources. If there are any remaining content issues, resume discussion on the article talk page. If the subsequent discussion on the article talk page is lengthy and inconclusive, a new case request can be filed here. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:10, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Have you discussed this on a talk page? Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved
Dispute overview The dispute revolves around the use of Raj-era sources, specifically K.S. Singh’s "Anthropological Survey of India," in the article on "Kamaria Ahir." One editor, Nlkyair012, is advocating for the removal of these sources, arguing that they are outdated and unreliable. However, these historical sources, particularly those from the British Raj, are still cited in reputable modern academic works as valuable historical references for caste dynamics and structures. The issue also includes the inclusion of living people's names without proper self-identification, which violates Misplaced Pages's Biographies of Living Persons policy (BLP). The goal of this dispute resolution is to determine whether the Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh’s work should be retained or replaced, and to ensure that the article adheres to Misplaced Pages's guidelines on neutrality and verifiability. How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here? ] ]
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute? The dispute can be resolved by carefully reviewing the reliability of Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh's work, considering modern academic citations that rely on these sources, and determining whether they meet Misplaced Pages's standards of verifiability. Additionally, we can remove any names of living people to comply with the BLP policy while maintaining the historical and sociological content that is well-sourced. Collaboration on improving the article is key, and I suggest that experts in anthropology or caste studies provide input on the appropriateness of these sources for this article. The current dispute is about the inclusion of Raj-era sources, particularly from the British colonial period, in the article "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Kamaria_Ahir)." I believe these sources are valuable for understanding the historical context of caste structures in India, despite their age. While I acknowledge that (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Age_matters) advises caution with older sources, it does not outright prohibit their use, especially when they provide unique historical insights that modern works may lack. Raj-era ethnographic works were written by government officials and are often cited in contemporary research for their firsthand observations, making them relevant in understanding caste dynamics. A central issue in this dispute is the use of K.S. Singh’s "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Anthropological_Survey_of_India)" (ASI), which I have cited in the article. The ASI, although created under government supervision, is a significant academic resource that continues to be referenced in Indian academia. While some may question its modern reliability, it remains an authoritative source, and dismissing it entirely without further scrutiny undermines its contribution to the topic. As per (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Scholarship), high-quality academic sources are essential, but older sources like K.S. Singh’s are still valid when used in conjunction with modern studies to provide a complete view of the topic. I also understand concerns related to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons), particularly regarding the inclusion of living people's names in caste articles. If specific names are a violation of (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BLP_categories), I agree they should be removed. However, this does not justify removing the entire article or historical context that is verifiable and supported by well-established sources. The article provides valuable historical and sociological context that should not be discarded simply due to concerns over individual names. The sources I have used are critical to the article’s depth and accuracy. While there are concerns over the accessibility and page numbers of some sources, I am willing to work to improve verifiability, such as by adding missing page numbers or citing additional resources. According to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Verifiability) and (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources), I aim to improve the article's citation standards, but my main goal is to maintain the article’s historical integrity while complying with Misplaced Pages’s standards for verifiability, neutrality, and reliability. (https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Ratnahastin) has raised concerns about the reliability and relevance of these sources, particularly due to their age. However, rather than removing content entirely, I propose that we retain these sources while improving the article’s clarity and citation standards. The article can be collaboratively improved to ensure it meets Misplaced Pages's guidelines while preserving the depth of the subject matter. Summary of dispute by RatnahastinThe OP does not really understand the purpose of WP:DR. The proper venue for this dispute was WP:RSN. - Ratnahastin (talk) 02:06, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Kamaria Ahir discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
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Old Government House, Parramatta
– General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by Itchycoocoo on 06:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC).Closed for two reasons. First, the other editor hasn't replied. Second, it's unclear what the dispute even is; it appears to me that it is about large portion of the article being copied from a compatibly licensed source. As long as the appropriate attribution is given, it is legal. The guidelines that the filing editor has mentioned, which disallow copying large portions, are talking about copyrighted material where we don't have explicit permission to use them so we rely on fair use. However, this isn't the case here, as the material is CC-BY licensed. I am not aware of any guideline that forbids articles from being primarily copied from a compatibly licensed source, instead, Misplaced Pages:Plagiarism#Where_to_place_attribution mentions: For sections or whole articles, add a section-wide or article-wide attribution template, so I believe there is no issue here. If there is any other issue, follow WP:BRD. Thanks. Kovcszaln6 (talk) 12:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved
Dispute overview Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article Old Government House, Parramatta that extends to >90% of material from another website.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here? Talk:Old Government House, Parramatta#This is a mess How do you think we can help resolve the dispute? Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Misplaced Pages pages? Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant. Summary of dispute by The Drover's WifePlease keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Old Government House, Parramatta discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House)I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read Misplaced Pages:DRN Rule B and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues. It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask Itchycoocoo what changes do you want exactly and why? Kovcszaln6 (talk) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House)Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up. I do accept Misplaced Pages DRN Rule B, and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor. You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages. I will be very happy to do such culling. But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Misplaced Pages pages. This is acknowledged. However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Misplaced Pages editors. e.g. According to WP:Copypaste "With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism." I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article. In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Misplaced Pages editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in Close paraphrasing "With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism." Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Misplaced Pages page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%? If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Misplaced Pages standards. However, looking at the other Misplaced Pages policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users. The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail. Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic. Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome. Thanks. Itchycoocoo (talk) 06:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
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Imran Khan
– New discussion. Filed by SheriffIsInTown on 15:56, 26 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- SheriffIsInTown (talk · contribs)
- WikiEnthusiast1001 (talk · contribs)
- Veldsenk (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
The content removed in this diff had been part of the article for over six years. It was initially removed by an editor citing WP:BLPGOSSIP and WP:GRAPEVINE. Although I restored it, another editor subsequently removed it again. For context, Reham Khan is a former wife of the subject. After their marriage ended, she authored an autobiography titled Reham Khan (memoir), published by HarperCollins. The author, the book, and the publisher are all notable, with HarperCollins being recognised as “one of the ‘Big Five’ English-language publishers,” as noted in its Misplaced Pages article. The removed content was also supported by five other secondary sources. Given the notability of the author, the book, and the publisher, as well as the reliable reporting, the content merits inclusion in the article. The removal occurred without consensus, despite the content being part of the article for years. The material only reported Reham Khan’s allegations, including claims that Imran Khan shared certain details with her. As Misplaced Pages editors, we are not arbiters of truth but rely on reliable sources. Additionally, Misplaced Pages is not censored.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
I am seeking the restoration of the removed content, along with some expansion to include her allegations regarding Imran Khan’s drug use and same-sex tendencies, all of which are supported by her book and other secondary sources.
Summary of dispute by WikiEnthusiast1001
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by Veldsenk
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Imran Khan discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.2025 Bangladesh Premier League
– General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by UwU.Raihanur on 02:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC).Closed as not an issue for which DRN can be helpful. My advice is similar to that given by User:Doniago in declining your Third Opinion request. Third Opinion and DRN are both for good-faith disagreements between editors who discuss their disagreements. The problem here is an unregistered editor who reverts and does not discuss. My advice concerning unregistered editors (IP addresses) who do not discuss normally is to request semi-protection at Requests for Page Protection, and this is such a case. After the article is semi-protected, you can make your edits, and the article will be read-only for the unregistered editor. This may be an unregistered mobile user who never uses talk pages because they don't know about talk pages and don't know that they have a talk page. This is a problem that we sometimes encounter with mobile users, both registered and unregistered. In any case, I suggest requesting semi-protection. In your request, state that the IP editor reverts but does not discuss. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Have you discussed this on a talk page? Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved
Dispute overview I’ve been trying to add factual, sourced information to the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League article, but my edits are being reverted without explanation by another editor who hasn’t engaged in discussion despite multiple attempts. I’d like neutral input to resolve whether this edit complies with Misplaced Pages’s policies. How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here? I have tried to resolve the dispute by initiating discussions at the following locations: Talk:2025 Bangladesh Premier League User talk:103.59.179.16 Despite these efforts, the other editor has not engaged in meaningful dialogue. How do you think we can help resolve the dispute? I would appreciate input from neutral editors to determine whether my edit complies with Misplaced Pages's policies on verifiability, reliable sources, and relevance. A third-party perspective can help decide whether the reverted information should remain in the article or if adjustments are necessary to address any concerns. Additionally, guidance on how to handle the lack of engagement from the other editor would be helpful. Summary of dispute by 103.59.179.16Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.The editor 103.59.179.16 has reverted my edits to the article multiple times without providing an explanation for the reversions. Despite my attempts to engage in discussions on their user talk page and the article talk page, they have not responded. The disputed content includes factual information about the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League, which is supported by a reliable, verifiable source. The other editor has not presented any concerns regarding the reliability or relevance of the information, nor have they participated in the discussion to clarify their reasons for the reverts. 2025 Bangladesh Premier League discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
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