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==Marine Corps Hearing== | |||
There are a few elements in the section regarding Kokesh's upcoming hearing that are inaccurate, from my understanding of the UCMJ and Marine Corps regulations. | |||
This really needs to be cleaned up. The man pulled out a shotgun in the centre of DC in 2016 and served jail time and most of the 2016 section is about his book. It's preposterous. The page should be deleted if no established editors are looking after it. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 19:24, 10 March 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
* They are not "changing" Kokesh's discharge. He has already been discharged once, from active duty to the IRR. The upcoming discharge is his complete discharge from the service. | |||
: ] and make edits you feel would improve the article. --] (]) 20:33, 10 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
* Being in the IRR does not mean you are not under Marine Corps jurisdiction. You are still a reservist, subject to the Uniform Code of Military Justice. | |||
:There's also no mention of his ties to the far-right conspiracy program Info Wars.--] (]) 06:11, 6 October 2017 (UTC) | |||
* He is not being recalled to active duty. He was given the opportunity to waive his right to appear before a hearing, and chose to do so. Doing so does not mean he is on "Active Duty." | |||
: {{u|Craigboy}} The issue originally addressed by the editors above seems to have already been addressed in the article. What changes are you proposing regarding ]? Just add them to the article as the other editor suggested. ] (]) 15:40, 6 October 2017 (UTC) | |||
:What "ties"? Sounds like a weasel word. I Googled Info Wars and Adam Kokesh, but found articles about him there. The website has articles about a whole bunch of public figures, not just Kokesh. Right-wing or not, it is a news website, and being written about or interviewed by them doesn't mean he has "ties" to it. I found an interview with him so if it's necessary to mention that he has been a guest, I can do that, but it sounds like trivia.--] (]) 16:52, 26 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:I mentioned it, but another editor removed it. So I'm leaving this alone now.--] (]) 17:38, 5 March 2018 (UTC) | |||
:I've added a "controversies" section. Feel free to contribute to it! ] (]) 04:06, 9 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
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Unless anyone can provide documentation that shows any of those elements are false, I'll be changing them shortly.--] 19:38, 3 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:I think you're probably right. There is just so much spin happening with this story that all of the media are reporting inaccurately. But that's standard. —] (]·]) 06:20, 4 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::The hearing is scheduled for today, I'll wait until after the hearing results are announced to make the needed changes. --] 16:06, 4 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Papers are reporting that the panel has recommended a General Discharge; whether higher will do that is unknown, as is whether Kokesh will appeal. I'd rather not edit the story, and there's no telling what mis-understandings of military law the papers have. http://www.chron.com/disp/story.mpl/ap/nation/4861746.html ] 03:48, 5 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::Your second point is incorrect. Reservists are not subject to the UCMJ except when under a paid status. UCMJ 1-802.2 is clearly worded on what persons are subject to the UCMJ. Even drilling reservists are not subject except during AT, ADT, and drill times. <small>—The preceding ] comment was added by ] (] • ]) 18:32, June 5, 2007 (UTC{{{3|}}})</small> | |||
:::::Your understanding seems to differ from the Air Force's html at http://www.au.af.mil/au/awc/awcgate/ucmj.htm ] 19:25, 5 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::Actually, that link confirms my statement. Let's go through it sentence by sentence if we must: 802. ART. 2. PERSONS SUBJECT TO THIS CHAPTER | |||
(a) The following persons are subject to this chapter: | |||
(1) Members of a regular component of the armed forces, including those awaiting discharge after expiration of their terms of enlistment; volunteers from the time of their muster or acceptance into the armed forces; inductees from the time of their actual induction into the armed forces; and other persons lawfully called or ordered into, or to duty in or for training in the armed forces, from the dates when they are required by the terms of the call or order to obey it. (Mr. Kokesh was not a member of a regular component so (1) does not apply.) | |||
(2) Cadets, aviation cadets, and midshipman. (None of these categories apply.) | |||
(3) Members of a reserve component while on inactive-duty training, but in the case of members of the Army National Guard of the United States or the Air National Guard of the United States only when in Federal Service. (Mr. Kokesh was not on inactive-duty training which includes ADT and AT as well as drills--none of which are performed by the IRR.) | |||
(4) Retired members of a regular component of the armed forces who are entitled to pay. (Again, does not apply.) | |||
(5) Retired members of a reserve component who are receiving hospitalization from an armed force. (Does not apply.) | |||
(6) Members of the Fleet Reserve and Fleet Marine Corps Reserve. (These are people who have retired with at least 20 years but fewer than 30 years of service, therefore it does not apply.) | |||
(7) Persons in custody of the armed forces serving a sentence imposed by a court-martial. (Does not apply.) | |||
(8) Members of the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, Public Health Service, and other organizations, when assigned to and serving with the armed forces. (Does not apply.) | |||
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(12) Subject to any treaty or agreement t which the United States is or may be a party to any accepted rule of international law, persons within an area leased by or otherwise reserved or acquired for use of the United States which is under the control of the Secretary concerned and which is outside the United States and outside the Canal Zone, the Commonwealth of Puerto Rico, Guam, and the Virgin Islands. (Does not apply.) | |||
Hello fellow Wikipedians, | |||
So, you see, "my interpretation" matches the plain text of the Uniform Code of Military Justice. <small>—The preceding ] comment was added by ] (] • ]) 00:29, June 6, 2007 (UTC{{{3|}}})</small> | |||
:It's been many many years, but my understanding is that he is, indeed, a member by (1); I am not a lawyer of any type, however, not even a seabag lawyer. We were taught (granted, back in the 1960's) that you were subject to the USMJ from the time you raised your hand until the end of your period of enlistment plus whatever Congress or the President wanted. I doubt it's shortened over the years, but it is possible (and if so, will be changed.) ] 03:21, 6 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::Your understanding (that he is a member under (1), would require Mr. Kokesh to be a member of a "regular component," which he clearly is not. He is a member of a Reserve Component. The definitions of these terms can be found in US Code: Title 10, 101. The clause of UCMJ-2.2(1) "including those awaiting discharge after expiration of their terms of enlistment", refers to Active duty members who have been involuntarily extended for reasons such as operational commitments, and stop-loss; who remain members of the Regular (Active) Component until they are transferred to the Reserves or fully discharged from service. <small>—The preceding ] comment was added by ] (] • ]) 16:39, June 6, 2007 (UTC{{{3|}}})</small> | |||
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That's interesting. However, note that he was not being punished under the UCMJ. He was being administratively separated, which is a procedure outside the UCMJ. Either way, this far exceeds my layman's understanding of the UCMJ and military law, so, I'm just going to drop it. :) ] 16:14, 7 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
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==Massive changes== | |||
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I've made some massive changes recently, including: | |||
* Expansion to the introduction, and mentioning he is a ] candidate | |||
* An expansion of background on Kokesh's early life, family, and military service | |||
* Replacing the headings in the "Activism" section to human-readable subjects rather than merely years/chronology | |||
* More background on his high-profile ''Iraq Veterans Against The War'' protests in 2007, including resulting discipline and protests in his support | |||
* Expansion on much of his activism (incl. the protest against the high-profile cursing ban in Middleborough) | |||
* Expansion of positions on government, abortion and foreign policy | |||
* Additional background about ''FREEDOM!'' and the "book bomb" in January | |||
* "Controversies" section, which is currently thin | |||
* Moving his bid for congress out of the "Activism" section | |||
I've added the best ]s I can find. Please let me know if there are any problems. I would appreciate any feedback! ] (]) 01:41, 9 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
== removing bad sources and puffery == | |||
This isn't a ], so I removed the excessive quotes and a lot of questionable non-RSes and self-sourcing - ] (]) 07:08, 5 October 2019 (UTC) |
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This really needs to be cleaned up. The man pulled out a shotgun in the centre of DC in 2016 and served jail time and most of the 2016 section is about his book. It's preposterous. The page should be deleted if no established editors are looking after it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 185.24.235.14 (talk) 19:24, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- WP:BEBOLD and make edits you feel would improve the article. --Weazie (talk) 20:33, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- There's also no mention of his ties to the far-right conspiracy program Info Wars.--Craigboy (talk) 06:11, 6 October 2017 (UTC)
- Craigboy The issue originally addressed by the editors above seems to have already been addressed in the article. What changes are you proposing regarding Info Wars? Just add them to the article as the other editor suggested. Saturnalia0 (talk) 15:40, 6 October 2017 (UTC)
- What "ties"? Sounds like a weasel word. I Googled Info Wars and Adam Kokesh, but found articles about him there. The website has articles about a whole bunch of public figures, not just Kokesh. Right-wing or not, it is a news website, and being written about or interviewed by them doesn't mean he has "ties" to it. I found an interview with him so if it's necessary to mention that he has been a guest, I can do that, but it sounds like trivia.--23mason (talk) 16:52, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
- I mentioned it, but another editor removed it. So I'm leaving this alone now.--23mason (talk) 17:38, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
- I've added a "controversies" section. Feel free to contribute to it! 84percent (talk) 04:06, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
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Hello,
I've made some massive changes recently, including:
- Expansion to the introduction, and mentioning he is a single-issue candidate
- An expansion of background on Kokesh's early life, family, and military service
- Replacing the headings in the "Activism" section to human-readable subjects rather than merely years/chronology
- More background on his high-profile Iraq Veterans Against The War protests in 2007, including resulting discipline and protests in his support
- Expansion on much of his activism (incl. the protest against the high-profile cursing ban in Middleborough)
- Expansion of positions on government, abortion and foreign policy
- Additional background about FREEDOM! and the "book bomb" in January
- "Controversies" section, which is currently thin
- Moving his bid for congress out of the "Activism" section
I've added the best WP:RSs I can find. Please let me know if there are any problems. I would appreciate any feedback! 84percent (talk) 01:41, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
removing bad sources and puffery
This isn't a WP:BROCHURE, so I removed the excessive quotes and a lot of questionable non-RSes and self-sourcing - David Gerard (talk) 07:08, 5 October 2019 (UTC)
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