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== Balance?? == | |||
I've heard a lot of great things about this product, backed by some very prestegious institutions, yet none of that appears in this article. It appears to be very one sided and biased. Can we at least see a balanced report of this product? Including, for example, studies like that conducted at the Medical University of Vienna, (http://www.jacn.org/cgi/content/full/23/3/205) which concluded that supplementation with mixed fruit and vegetable juice concentrates effectively increased plasma levels of important antioxidant nutrients and folate? | |||
==Mediation== | |||
Most of this article seems like it's straight from the "opinion" section of a periodical than based in fact. | |||
Folks, this is not a case of vandalism or disruptive editing, this is a difference of opinion. No one here is acting in bad faith. We all want a good article. There are just differences of opinion as to what "good" means. But please, you're not going to get the changes that you want into the article, by edit-warring about it. All that does is make ''everyone'' look bad. The key to working on articles at Misplaced Pages, is to build consensus, as such: | |||
] (]) 22:46, 2 May 2011 (UTC)jala7777 | |||
* Stop the edit-warring | |||
* Stop referring to other editors as vandals. No one here is acting in bad faith, it's just a difference of opinion | |||
* Stop referring to other editors as disruptive. No one here is acting in bad faith, it's just a difference of opinion. | |||
::We use review articles not primary research typically. --] (] · ] · ]) 03:03, 3 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
To get past this impasse, my strong recommendation is to proceed to the next step of ], which is ]. This will allow us to seek the participation of a neutral mediator, and everyone can have their say. I've had good luck with mediation in the past -- I've seen people go into it with profound mistrust, but come out with a compromise version of the article that is acceptable to both sides, and an improved spirit of cooperation all around. So please, I strongly recommend that we do this. But, it will only work if everyone is ''willing'' to mediate. If any of the key participants refuse, the mediation will be rejected. | |||
:::On the contrary, a research article directly assessing the product is a gold standard type of source, cited correctly. --] (]) 01:29, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Please see ] review articles are required to support the benefits of a treatment. ] (] · ] · ]) 01:31, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Don't see the problem (well, apart from the fact that it contradicts policy at one point!) it says "edits that rely on primary sources should only describe the conclusions of the source, and should describe these findings clearly so the edit can be checked by editors with no specialist knowledge". As long as it's straightforward and no WP:SYNTH a primary source is perfectly acceptable. --] (]) 01:36, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::You could ask for a second option over at ]. The study in question discusses no hard end points that people care about. Thus no health claims can be made using it. ] (] · ] · ]) 01:41, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::As Jala7777 stated it, there was no health claim, merely a claim about increased plasma levels. Not our job to decide if "people care about" it. --] (]) 02:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
{{od}}It appears there's been some serious POV editing problems on this article. I've been reading for example the "Memorial Sloan-Kettering" reference and it is used numerous times in the article to support critical statements of JP, but never once used to support positive claims, which the source has a number of. That's some serious cherry picking going on. --] (]) 04:26, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Primary studies are generally not notable ( so yes we do care ). The reason why the statements are critical of JP is that the source is critical.] (] · ] · ]) 04:29, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Notability of a source is not an issue on WP, whether they are ] and ] is the primary concern. Your second statement avoids the point. Yes, the source reports on critical studies of JuicePlus, and it's used in the article to support critical comments. That's fine. The thing is the source ''also'' reports on supportive studies of JuicePlus. It is never once used in the article as a source for supportive studies. There's no basis I can see for that and it's clearly not ] editing to do so. --] (]) 04:38, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
mlm watch is a subdivision of quackwatch which is a non profit corporation. Thus it is not self published but published by a corporation. The site also states "This site complies with the HONcode standard for trustworthy healt information." ] (] · ] · ]) 01:32, 30 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:Exactly Jmh. ] (]) 06:52, 31 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::] shows the issues that rise with ]; it simply has a higher bar then ] does.--] (]) 07:37, 31 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::But MEDRS isn't applicable here. This product is a supplement, not a drug. The fact that clinical trials are performed on a supplement doesn't make it into a drug. If studies suggest that it has positive effects on some aspects of health, e.g. circulation, such results don't make it into a drug. Forget MEDRS, it's irrelevant. | |||
:::As for Quackwatch, even Barrett slips into the first person when explaining who runs and funds Quackwatch: | |||
<blockquote> | |||
* '''I''' have no financial tie to any commercial or industrial organization. | |||
* '''My''' viewpoints are not for hire. Even if they were, none of '''my''' imaginary funders would actually have a reason to hire me. | |||
* Standard medicine and "alternative medicine" do not actually compete for patient dollars. Well-designed studies have shown that most "alternative" methods are used in addition to—rather than instead of—standard methods. | |||
* The total cost of operating our many Web sites is approximately $7,000 per year. If donations fall below what is needed, the rest comes out of '''my''' pocket.</blockquote> | |||
:::So it has no paid employees and Barrett pays for it out of his own pocket if donations dry up. Seems like a one-man-band, doesn't it. Maybe he has tax advantages from incorporating it, but it remains his project and it is obvious that he publishes it. | |||
So, who is with me? Who is willing to join mediation on this issue? If you would like to participate, please indicate below. If all the key participants agree, I'll file the paperwork. ]]] 15:59, 24 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
* '''Agree''' to mediation. --]]] 15:59, 24 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
* '''Agree''' to (and welcome) mediation. ] 23:31, 24 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
* '''Undecided/Possible Yes'''. I have mixed feelings about mediation. First, I am deeply disappointed that some of the editors involved in this dispute have requested escalating to mediation when other avenues for resolution had not been pursued. I don’t see that any effort was made on the part of those who deleted the AE section to engage in dialog on the issues that were raised. Rather they chose to simply delete content and wrongly claim that a consensus supported the decision without elaborating or providing reasonable justification. That is not consensus building. If I was being asked to mediate this dispute, I would be struck by the reluctance of these editors to provide justification and to discuss the issues reasonably on the talk page. Secondly, according to my understanding, the next logical step in resolving the dispute should have been a request for comment (]), not a request for mediation. It has been repeatedly pointed out that we should request input from outside editors but those requests were completely ignored. Lastly, and most importantly, nobody has yet properly framed the issue that we are asking mediation to solve. As I see it, the most pressing issue is to stop the arbitrary deletion of content and bypassing of WP policy and guidelines. To address that issue, I will happily agree to mediation. If we are to discuss issues of content then I would agree to mediation if the issues could be exposed to a wider audience of editors, but I think that a closed mediation cabal would not result in a fair resolution. In either case, I reiterate my disappointment that simpler preliminary steps toward resolution were not pursued by the other parties involved in this dispute. Although I am happy that the page has been locked because I think a 5-day rest will provide a much needed respite from the edit warring. Thanks admins! ] 02:03, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
*'''Agree''' to mediation. I'm one of the editors who has been quite vocal in my plea for outside opinions so the suggestion is like manna from heaven.] 07:06, 28 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
===Mediation requested=== | |||
The mediation request has been filed, at ]. | |||
* I would appreciate if all named parties could go to that page, and signify that you agree with mediation, by entering the word '''Agree''' in the appropriate place at the bottom of the page. | |||
* The "issues to mediate" are a starting point only, and may change as mediation progresses. | |||
* Please do not change the "issues to mediate" section, but you are free to add additional items in the "Additional issues to mediate" section | |||
* Please do not add any other comments on the mediation page, or the mediation may be rejected. | |||
* If other editors would like to join the mediation, you may do so. Just add your name to the List of Parties, and indicate your agreement at the bottom of the page. | |||
If there are any other questions, please feel free to post them at the mediation talkpage, or ask them here. Good luck! --]]] 01:08, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Oh yes, one other thing: ''This site (Misplaced Pages) complies with the HONcode standard for trustworthy health information.'' So now we know. Does that make it so? I don't think so.--] (]) 08:51, 31 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
===Comments on mediation request=== | |||
::::Tracey, MEDRS is applicable any time health claims are made, whether it's a drug or a supplement or a breathing technique. Barrett ''is'' highly identified with Quackwatch and I'm not persuaded by separating the two entities further in our treatment. Though Quackwatch receives support from many donors, the vast majority of the work has always been one man. That's neither a mark for or against Quackwatch, I just think it cautions against treating the organization like a separate corporation rather than a small, dedicated group group headed by a single, opinionated expert. ] <sup>]</sup> 14:09, 31 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
Red, it's just not helpful for you to phrase your comments as, "It's the other editors' fault." For example, the other side could just as easily come back and say, "It's all Red's fault, he keeps violating ]". But neither statement is going to help us reach a compromise. As for an RfC, we've already done that, for example I posted to ] in February, and we've gotten attention from editors at the COI Noticeboard. If you want to file another RfC though, no one is stopping you, go right ahead. I'd recommend a listing either at ] or ], list whatever you want. As for mediation, I'm not sure what you mean by a "closed mediation cabal." ] is an informal mediation process, but that's not what I'm suggesting -- I'm proposing full out formal mediation. The problem with MedCab is that it's really the luck of the draw as to what kind of mediator you get -- it's often just some random editor who popped in, who may not have any idea what mediation is about, and I don't think that would be a good idea for our situation. With formal mediation though, we get someone with more experience. As for whether it's open or closed, that's usually up to the participants. I have no preference on that. --]]] 02:41, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
{{od}} | |||
: I am not assigning blame I am merely pointing out that you and Matthew made no attempt to discuss the issues. An edit war should come as no surprise when one chooses to ignore reasonable comments and bypass discussion on the talk page. It's a rather obvious, basic step in reolving disputes and it is unfortunate that this was not pursued. I don't see how one can justify going straight to mediation when they have not even attempted to reply to comments made in good faith by other editors. If it is normal to skip disucssion and instead request mediation, then that might be what we will have to do, but it doesn't seem like proper procedure from what I know of ]. ] 02:53, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
I would suggest reading the followed by ("FDA will continue to identify and take appropriate enforcement actions against fraudulently marketed dietary supplement products that make unsubstantiated medical claims in their labeling."), and ("Under federal law, a dietary supplement may not claim to treat, cure or prevent a specific disease or class of diseases.")--] (]) 06:04, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: Red, I can't speak for Matthew, but this Juice Plus talkpage is currently at #2 on my list of "talkpages where Elonka has spent her time on Misplaced Pages." And I've participated in a ''lot'' of talkpages over the years. To say that I haven't engaged in discussion, is absurd. It's not that I haven't participated, it's just that I'm not agreeing with you as much as you'd like. ;) --]]] 03:01, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:]: What has this to do with this article? Are you suggesting that this product is a "fraudulently marketed dietary supplement product" that makes "unsubstantiated medical claims in its labeling" or that it "claims to treat, cure or prevent a specific disease or class of diseases"? Has the FDA taken action against the makers of Juice Plus? None of the links you provide would support such claims. Please explain. Thanks. --] (]) 08:55, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::I don’t want to bicker with you, but obviously the reference to not participating in the discussion refers specifically to your failure to reply to comments. You only responded by curtly claiming that your position was supported by a consensus without elaborating or answering to the detailed comments that were repeatedly posted. As a footnote, to your previous post, I don’t see how an RfC in February is relevant to the current issue about the AE section, which only arose last week. Two editors specifically asked that additional outside editors should be recruited prior to deletion of this longstanding content, but the request was ignored. Mediation is supposed to be invoked when all other methods have failed, but these other methods were not even attempted in this case. ] 03:11, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::You stated "But MEDRS isn't applicable here. This product is a supplement, not a drug." These quotes from the FDA shows that regarding medical claims '''in the eyes of the FDA it does not matter'''--if it makes a medical claim it falls under their jurisdiction even if what is involved is ''neither a food or a drug'' (as shown by ). | |||
:::: Red, if you want another RfC, file one. No one is stopping you. --]]] 03:14, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::: I just might file an RfC, but since the page is now locked, I'd really like to take advantage and have a breather from Juice Plus for a couple of days. ] 03:46, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::: We have a long weekend ahead of us and the page is locked for 5 days. How about we all take advantage and enjoy not having to talk about Juice Plus for a few days…consider it a holiday ceasefire. When we resume in a few days, we might even want to go back to the negotiating table and discuss the AE section in more detail. At the very least that would help us to frame the issues more clearly, which, if we can’t reach a compromise, would be helpful if we need to go for an RfC or mediation. ] 04:02, 25 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::The FDA has a very simple definition of a medical claim: "A statement on labeling that declares or implies that the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease." In addition to drugs this also covers and . Logically anything that would fall under the FDA's definition would fall under WP:MEDRS.--] (]) 10:41, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::] I, as a prominent member of the scientific community who has proven the efficacy of Juice Plus+, want to laud you on your efforts to ensure that our product is presented in a positive light. We have been watching your efforts and edits and you have delivered on all accounts. Please let us know if we can assist you in any way and keep up the fight! I am sure we will be able to get the criticism section changed as soon as well. We have been working on an entirely new edit which we will post when you remove the protection. I am sure you will like our version very well. Thank you very much for your stand against RIR and his attempts to discredit our fine product. ] 03:07, 27 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Thanks for the clarification. I'm no gambler, but I am fairly certain that if there were any health claims on the product labelling, this fact would have been mentioned somewhere in the article. Assuming therefore that this is not the case, I'm not convinced of the relevance of the links you provided. Of course supplements come under FDA control because they are classed as foods, but if no claims are made that "the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease" then surely MEDRS doesn't apply. --] (]) 12:46, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::: Well, thanks, but my goal isn't to present the product in a positive light, I just want the Misplaced Pages article to present a balanced view, with both positive and negative elements included in a fair way. I'm not here "against RIR", I think he's done a lot of great work on the article, and I actually think the current Criticism section looks pretty good - what changes would you like though? Also, might I ask which studies that you have been involved with, which proved the efficacy of JP? And lastly, do you have any photos of the product which could be used in the article? It would be nice if we could get an image with actual photographer approval, rather than having to rely on a Fair Use image off of a webpage. --]]] 03:41, 27 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::This product lived and died by the claim that it would improve health and wellness dramatically. I'm not an enemy of alternative medicine (I took Juice Plus in 2005), but the assertion that Juice Plus' nutritional evangelism didn't rise to the level of health or medical claims seems a real stretch to me. Even if Juice Plus ''didn't'' make such claims, the product was researched for its medical efficacy anyway, so MEDRS applies anywhere that took place, including any studies Juice Plus conducted, of which the article reviews several. Even the JPCRF's mission suggests "improved nutrition leads to healthier lifestyle and overall better health", which is a medical claim. Although in alt-med world, health and nutrition are not medicine, in medical-world, they are. You're confusing a distinction between nutrition and drugs that modern medicine--and hence our guidelines--simply does not make. Chemicals enter the bloodstream and are utilized or excreted. The results, good or bad, are medical. ] <sup>]</sup> 13:08, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Elonka, I have spent hours and hours going over the studies and tried to suggest improvements and guess what the end result has been: Zip, Zero, Zilch. Just discussions that go in circles and responses that inundate you with technical detail and obscure the true issues. It lead to exasperation and in the case of many editors, they give up. Please make sure this horrible cycle does not continue and follow through with the mediation request. We all know you are an impartial voice here and that is why your assistance is so badly needed and appreciated.] 07:28, 28 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::I'm not sure how to reply to this without 'someone' jumping in and accusing me of 'wikilawyering' or some such term, but here goes: We're talking about two different things here. The first point is about claims made by Juice Plus about the product, which, of course, would fall under the FDA's jurisdiction. Those are what are given above as reasons for MEDRS being invoked here, i.e. if the FDA regards it as making health claims, MEDRS is relevant. Surely the fact that a university somewhere performs a study, into e.g. bioavailability, doesn't automatically bring a product under the FDA's jurisdiction - it's a health claim that would do that (see above). The second point is about what is in the article. You say (in an edit summary) that the article is full of health claims; if by "health claims" you mean the reporting of the results of clinical studies, these are not claims but results. The distinction is important, since the results are not controlled by the company but are the objective assessments of those who conduct the studies, reviewed by the journals which publish them; claims (were there to be any) would come from the company. If explicit claims were made in the article which were not made by the company, then these would (long ago) have been deleted, I'm sure. There's a difference between "a statement on labeling that declares or implies that the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease" and a claim that a product will "improve health and wellness dramatically" (was such a claim made by the company?). The statement that "improved nutrition leads to healthier lifestyle and overall better health" is not about the product but is a truism about nutrition in general; is it a medical claim? Hardly. Even if it were, it 's about improved nutrition, not Juice Plus. Would apples fall under the FDA's drug rules (and therefore MEDRS) if someone were to claim (heaven forbid) that eating an apple a day would keep the doctor away? --] (]) 13:51, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::Citizen Don, please focus your comments on specific content issues rather than merely praising or denigrating the editors who are working on this article. Personal messages like this should be posted on user pages, not the talk page. ] 00:46, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::] applies to "biomedical information in articles". There is certainly an ample amount of that in the article. I can see how editors would be concerned about MEDRS in this case because a lot of the research discussed is from primary sources. I realize that primary sources in such cases can be problematic and that they must be presented cautiously, particularly in cases where the research is company-sponsored because such studies are often guilty of cherrypicking and overstatement of the significance of the results. For example, a company might publish a test tube study on isolated cells and then have a bold overstatement in the conclusions along the lines of "...and our results suggest that product x may be useful in stopping cancer progression". When I went through the JP research, I was careful to make sure that the data were represented accurately and that no such overstatements were included. Nonetheless, it's still problematic because it is primary research. We could instead simply rely on what third-party sources have said about the research -- that would be highly unflattering for JP because such commentary has been universally negative. Still, it's an option. I'm curious to hear what those who aren't hawking JP have to say about this. | |||
::::Elonka, I'll second Citizen Don's comment. Together, Citizen Don, TracyR and I will remain united and stand with you to ensure that there is a consensus on this page to promote a fair and balanced view of our product. We do not see the need for a criticism section and feel that this page grossly misrepresents the vast majority of scientific work which supports the credibility of JP+. If we don't change this quickly, many folks could be misinformed and remain ill without the nutritive value JP+ provides. I don't think anyone wants that on their conscience . . . ] 00:36, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::We strongly suspected that user ] is not ], who is a spokesperson and distributor for Juice Plus . We had some incidents with this user last year when they tried to add some unsubstantiated marketing claims (putting it kindly) to the article and we strongly suspected that the user is masquerading as ''the'' Dr. Sears. This user also left threats on my userpage . If they are not Dr. William Sears, then their username is in violation of ] . If this user is actually ''the'' Dr. Sears, then they have a COI and should not be contributing to the article or participating in deletion discussion as per ]. ] 01:35, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::: Red, I recommend that you re-read ]. Sears, whoever he is, is welcome to participate on the talkpage no matter what his background. The "deletion discussions" phrasing from ] is more directed at article deletions, and even there, those with a COI are still allowed to participate, they're just advised to do so cautiously. As for his username, there are many people named "Dr. Sears". Even ] has 3 or 4 sons who are also doctors. I do agree that if {{user|Dr sears}} has a financial relationship with the Juice Plus product, that he shouldn't be editing the ''article''. But talkpage comments are fine. --]]] 07:57, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::Look, who cares who this guy is -- he brings up a very valid point: Consensus depends on who is looking at the page at a given time. Elonka, I am a minor wikipedia player, but this makes no sense to me. Truth here is determined by whatever folks show up on the discussion page? Arguments don't matter -- just ''consensus''? We are critizing an editor since they include too much detail in their responses? Trying to delete their content because of a possible negative bias towards a product? What is going on here? Been out of the loop, but this borders on insane. Is Misplaced Pages moving into the marketing business where a team of corporate sponsors can show up, build ''consensus'' and say whatever they want to? ] 02:08, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::Obviously, I agree with Tbooher. There are serious conduct and COI issues at stake here. WP is not a majoritocracy. Consensus building involves going over details and not merely echoing “me too” on the call to delete content. As I have tried to point out, a consensus did not exist when this material was deleted. Had no one objected to the deletion of the content, then the deletion might be defended, but when other editors argue against deletion and restore the deleted content, as they have in this case, the issues have to be worked out on the talk page. At the time the material was first deleted, 2 editors, me included, had commented against deletion. , and 2 more have commented since. No attempt was made to address the comments on the talk page or to seek additional input form outside editors prior to deletion. Since this was long-standing content, those who favor deletion should have made a supporting case first, rather than deleting first an then attempting to build a weak concensus after the fact. ] 02:36, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::: At this time, it is clear that the ] is to ''not'' include the "Adverse Effects" section. As for consensus-building, you are correct that it's not a matter of a quantity of editors saying, "me too." Discussion is required. But at the same time, one or two editors disagreeing with the consensus, does not invalidate the consensus. In these types of situations, it is quite common for there to be a general consensus of opinion held by a majority of editors, with a minority of editors who strongly disagree with that consensus. What is important in that process, is that the concerns of the minority editors are listened to in a respectful manner, and that options are given careful consideration, with an eye towards finding a compromise position. Sometimes, however, it just won't be possible to please everyone, and the consensus will end up being something that a minority of editors still vehemently protest. In that case, it may be necessary to proceed to another step of Dispute Resolution. In this particular case about the Adverse Effects section, consensus looks pretty clear to me, but as a gesture of good faith, I and other editors as listed above are willing to take the issue to a neutral mediator. This seems the best option to me at this time, unless someone can come up with some other idea for a possible compromise. --]]] 07:57, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Elonka, there was no consensus when the AE section was first deleted, and there is no consensus for deletion now. As I have said before, repeatedly, consensus does not involve merely saying “me too” but rather providing solid rationale for proposed changes and participating in discussions with other editors whose opinions conflict with yours. To support a decision to delete this section, you would need to convince the editing community that every reference in the section does not meet with WP policy. So far, you have not even remotely done so. It is plainly evident that no consensus currently exists to support removal of the AE section; it does not even seem that a loose majority favor such action. Aside from me, 3 other editors have disagreed with your decision to arbitrarily delete this content; one of whom is an admin and felt the need to lock the page to prevent the content from being deleted. Of the editors who now seem to support deletion, none have provided a rationale and instead have merely echoed “me-too” in support of deletion. ] has yet to provide a single comment of substance to defend his repeated deletion of the AE section. ] has yet to comment on any of the references in the AE section so far in this discussion. In the thread which discusses your proposal to delete, ] commented on only one of the 5 references in the AE section. ] has not commented on any of the specific details underlying this issue, and there are possible COI issues with this user. No other editors have left comments on the talk page supporting deletion of the AE section. It is painfully obvious that no consensus was, or has been, established to delete this content. Since this content has been in place for roughly 3 months, it needs to be restored and an appropriate discussion initiated, with input from additional NPOV editors if needed. I hope that this clarifies the status of this issue. ] 01:17, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:RIR, who is this "we"? Are you admitting to being a role account? ] 08:24, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::Matthew: No, obviously “we” did not refer to a “role account”. It referred to me and the other editors that commented on user ], all of whom were cited in my previous post. This should have been obvious and did not warrant such an inflammatory comment. Please don’t try to generate controversy where none exists, as it doesn’t help us to improve the article or achieve a resolution . ] 00:41, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::As for medical "claims", Juice Plus has a long history of making them. The company has disseminated such claims about JP prevention and treating cancer via their key spokespersons (e.g. Jim Sears, Susan Silberstein) and even the chair at Sloan-Kettering (Cassileth) commented that "aggressively promoted to cancer patients based on claims of antioxidant effects". Then there's also the issue about the claim that the products are "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables". That misleading claim has been the cause of considerable consternation, as indicated by the Better Business Bureau,, CSPI and Australia's TGA (and yet suprisingly the company continues to use it). ] (]) 15:47, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:I would like to make it very clear to all that I dissociate myself from an earlier contribution from ], in which he stated that "Together, Citizen Don, TracyR and I will remain united and stand with you to ensure that there is a consensus on this page to promote a fair and balanced view of our product." He has no right to speak for me, nor am I acting in concert with him or anyone else. My objective here is to ''remove bias'' (positive ''and'' negative) from this article. Given its current (negative) state I can understand that he/she might consider me an ally in presenting the product in a positive light, but that is not my aim. I would be just as keen to remove unjustified positive bias. ] 09:46, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Some more interesting (but incorrect) assertions, e.g. (1) that the company publishes the results of studies. This is so obviously incorrect that it is a shame that it needs to be stated explicitly: the studies are published by the journals which accept them for publication, not by Juice Plus. The same applies (2) to the statement about cherry-picking, of course: the results are published, whether the results are positive or not. This is stated in the article in an edit reinstated by ] today, so there's no excuse for not knowing this fact (the reason it was ignored was probably that it contradicted his cherry-picking assertion). Another statement is (3) that primary sources are problematic: not so. There are WP guidelines indicating how to use them (already mentioned above). No problem there either. Another error (4) is to assert that Sears et al are company spokespersons; of course you know that they are not employed by the company. However they do recommend and do make speeches in support of the products, presumably because they think that the products are useful. Now (5) about that claim that Juice Plus is "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables": is this misleading? If so, in what way? It's no good to say "], so I'll say that it is misleading". If it ''is'' misleading (and indeed "the cause of considerable consternation" - wow!) to make this claim, then ''something else'' must be the next best thing instead. If so, do the world a favour, ]: tell us what is? --] (]) 17:43, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::That was a non-rebuttal and did not pertain to the comment about MEDRS. As for primary sources, they can indeed by problematic as outlined in ] and ]. As for the banal indictment about "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables" being an "I don't like it" argument on my part, well that's just silly. I cited three reliable third party sources that criticized JP specifically as a result of that claim. If there is any fingerpointing to be done, it can be ponited at the BBB, CSPI, and Australia's TGA; but it will be a waste of time. ] (]) 19:32, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::OK, the sequence has been established: (1) you throw in loads of irrelevant, unsubstantiated and/or incorrect statements (2) I and/or others point out some of your errors and (3) you say that it's all irrelevant because it wasn't about MEDRS anyway. Brilliant, you may think, but why spout all that irrelevant rubbish in the first place? Stick to the subject and progress may eventually be made. But I'm not holding my breath - I've experienced this before. I'll just wait for you to overstep the mark (again) and get banned for 6 months (again). Aah, the very thought stimulates endorphine excretion! ---] (]) 21:23, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I had wondered why you were pursuing ] while maintaining ]—you have just revealed your plan. However there are more people watching this article than Rhode Island Red and your POV is contrary to consensus. Attempts to promote or whitewash products on Misplaced Pages will not succeed. ] (]) 23:02, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::More irrelevant POV comment. Amazing! But by all means keep on watching if it does things for you. --] (]) 23:28, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
TraceyR I advise you to immediately tone down the bombast and personal attacks. I don’t plan to tolerate a resurgence of this behavior from you yet again. You have been violating ] and POV pushing on this article for years and it’s been tolerated for far too long. Incidentally, I was never banned; I was blocked, as you well know, for a matter related to inadvertently outing one of your fellow Juice Plus distributors, who had likewise terrorized this article (and made repeated personal attacks against me) in violation of WP:COI for years. I won’t make the mistake a second time. If you continue along this line of conduct, I will report the matter privately to WP admin. I have a right to edit in peace without your constant badgering and harassment. ] (]) 01:59, 2 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Greetings Rhode Island Red, Doc James, et al., From what I'm reading throughout this entire discourse, it doesn't appear you're any more qualified to be editing this article than TraceyR is. I realize it's difficult to ''not'' form an opinion about JP, but you do seem to lack the skills to write about it objectively. You obviously dislike the product on a personal level, and it shows quite clearly in the article (you mention OJ Simpson but not Bear Grylls--that doesn't seem like a minor slip-up). Would you want Charles Manson as presiding judge over a murder case? Likewise, one who has a personal vendetta against JP is not capable of writing a neutral article about it. | |||
::Bringing this back around to the original point of this section, this article is indeed unbalanced. No matter how much you sling the ] excuse, it's apparent you just don't want to present a balanced view. There's enough information out there, even presented on this talk page, that you could. | |||
:TracyR, agreed and apologies about my wording. I merely intended to state that we are united to ensuring the removal of bias. JP+, from the beginning has been a scientifically verified product. Science by definition does not have bias. When you stand for the goodness of fruits and vegetables and the goodness of the scientific process, you stand for JP+. Naturally you don't want to dissociate yourself from that. ] 03:25, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::For the rest of us who are not so passionate either way about the product, please re-write this article with a balanced view. | |||
::No problem. I just wanted to make my position clear. Re bias and science: since science is conducted by humans, human failings are bound to creep in. In theory there should be no bias; in practice it is unavoidable. Although not a scientist myself, I do some work preparing papers for publication in the field of nuclear physics - ''even there'' emotions can run high and get in the way of objective analysis! It is obvious from these talk pages that as soon as emotional reactions are provoked (and Juice Plus does seem to polarise reactions), objectivity flies out of the window. Hence this mediation exercise. ] 07:39, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::] (]) 06:28, 18 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
==Merge== | |||
:::I have mixed feelings about the mediation request. First of all, I think the issues that were outlined are far too broad. Our current conflict stems from the deletion of the adverse events section. It seems that it would be more productive to deal with such pressing and tangible issues rather than vaguer issues like what constitutes a consensus (which incidentally is spelled out quite clearly in ]. Secondly, several editors who have participated in the talk page, with respect to some of the issues outlined, have been omitted from the participant list. Why? It is looking like a stacked deck at the moment and the current participants do not reflect a representative cross section of the POVs expressed. The most important objective at this point should be to get as many well-informed outside opinions that we can; I don’t see that mediation will provide such input. Third, some of the steps that were outlined in the conflict resolution process seem like misrepresentations. I fail to see what the COI report about Julia Havey has to do with any of the current issues. Most importantly, mediation is being requested before other steps outlined in WP policies have been attempted; namely (1) adequate discussion on the talk page, and (2) informal mediation/RfC. I would like to see the current request withdrawn and a more specific request made regarding only the adverse events section for now (and with additional editors who commented included on the participant list). And better than mediation at this point, an RfC or informal mediaition clearly seems like the next logical step. If you all wish to pursue mediation, then perhaps we should try the adverse events section as a test case and see how it works, then we can consider the secondary issues. I don’t want to seem like I am not interested in resolving the current conflict, because I am; I just want to see it done right so that everyone’s time is put to best use. ] 00:14, 5 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
I propose this article and the ] article should be merged, probably into this article since JuicePlus seems to be the more notable name and the one the company promotes itself under these days. Makes little sense to have both --] (]) 04:03, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::: The mediation has been rejected, which I find quite disappointing. The reason it was rejected, was because not all parties agreed to mediation. Meaning Rhode Island Red. So, Red, the ball is now in your court. If you would like to pursue some other form of dispute resolution, please do so. I have no preference whether this be an RfC or some other form of mediation. You choose. --]]] 20:10, 6 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::If Red does not want to join us in our attempt to improve the article, that's fine but I don't think Red's decision should inhibit our efforts. There is a serious problem with this article. Everyone who posts here regularly recognizes this. Why should we put the ball in the court of the one person who can't see the problem? This is the reason why this poorly written article (remember people actually read this article for knowledge) is allowed to languish month after month. I think this failed mediation and the reason for it's failure is indicative of just what has been going on. As such, I would like to see an escalation, perhaps involving the Arbitration Committee.] 03:03, 7 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Citizen Don, I share your frustration. This article must change and we need to '''completely start from scratch'''. However, I am not as optimistic as you are with "everyone who posts here regularly". I think there are many who are not with us, such as EdJohnston, Tbbooher, and sometimes even Elonka shows confusion and misunderstanding to the benefits of this product. There is clearly no consensus on this talk page that there is a negative bias to this article -- and that is the problem. We need to bring in some more of us so we can get the consensus here and finally move forward with this article. ] 03:27, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Citizen Don, I appreciate your frustration, but I'm afraid that I must point out that you haven't articulated in your post just what changes that you want to see. I would recommend that you focus on one thing about the article that you would most like to see changed, and start a thread with your suggestions, so that we can discuss it. --]]] 06:12, 7 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::: Elonka, I'll come up with some ideas this weekend. ] 00:50, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I've attempted to focus on independent issues time and time again, Elonka. Obvious changes get diced up in discusssion with one disagreeing editor to the point where you are left with nothing. The failure of the mediation is a perfect example of this. I consider every mention of critics and controvery in this article to be baseless propaganda perpetuated by people with selfish reasons. They may be people who sell competing products or people like Stephan Barrett who has conceded his ties to the AMA, Federal Trade Commission (FTC) and Food & Drug Administration(FDA) in court. Yet there are complete paragraphs in this article that are taken from Barrett's biased work. Juice Plus is extremely successful and a great product. This article should be fun, not a boring point/counterpoint. Other articles have criticism sections while this entire article has become a criticism section. I know that's kind of broad. Not sure what topic I would start for that.] 03:25, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::I'll second this. Here is the first set of constructive comments I have seen here. Juice Plus _is_ a great product and making the article '''fun''' is a great way to focus everyone towards consensus. This page needs to let people know the truth in a fun way. Naturally, everyone who tries to discredit a product that saves lives and improves health is not just baseless, but also shows anti-social tendencies. It is impossible for me to understand what these individuals have to gain to discredit this product. (Even though I have to admit that ties to the AMA are not a bad thing Don :).) It just makes no sense why these people hate our product _and_ insist on making the article so spiteful and boring. ] 03:43, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::::: Well, the key on Misplaced Pages is ] via ]. Some of the critical sources in this article are clearly reputable, such as ''].'' In my mind, it's one of the best sources in the article, as it's clearly a "general audience" reliable secondary source. If you have some of those which provide positive information, bring 'em on. What have you got? --]]] 03:36, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::: (reply to Dr sears) Please, for best results, try to keep your comments focused on the article, and not on the editors who are working on it. When you say things like "anti-social tendencies," that can be regarded as a ], which is against Misplaced Pages policy. Please just comment on specific things that you would like to change in the article. --]]] 03:58, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
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== Use of + == | ||
Misplaced Pages's policy on ] says that we should use high-quality references: "''Articles should rely on reliable, third-party published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy''". But, I am concerned that some of the references in this article do not meet that standard, and I would like to talk about possibly removing them. For example, a couple of the studies that are cited appear to be of particularly poor quality, such that they are criticized by locations such as the Sloane-Kettering Medical Center, or the Australian magazine, ''The Skeptic.'' As such, I think that we should use great caution when mentioning any results of those studies, and make it clear which information in the article is coming from ''reliable'' studies and which is not. Now, if a study is unreliable, but is still cited in other secondary sources, I think it's worth mentioning the study in the article, since it's still a ''notable'' study -- but we should move its results off to a separate section. Or to put this in another way: Just because a bunch of high school kids got together and made something that ''looked'' like a study and had a bunch of names on it, doesn't mean that that study is still a reliable source. We should ensure that we're only using the real deal here. What do other editors think? And if we do this, which studies should we tag as "unreliable"? --]]] 08:25, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
Some mentions of Juice Plus include the + after the name and others don't. If they're the same product they should be the same. Which one is correct? ] <sup>]</sup> 01:21, 31 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:"Reliable" could be defined as at least 'peer-reviewed', 'randomised' and 'placebo-controlled' (with 'cross-over' an added bonus). That would mean accepting as reliable i.a. Samman (J Nutr, 2003), Plotnick (J Am Coll Cardiol, 2003), Kiefer (J Am Coll Nutr, 2004) and Nantz (J Nutr, 2006). This would exclude some of the early studies, including the small Wise 'bio-availability' study and several others. | |||
:I just had a brief look at the and the "+" is used consistently. It appears to be part of the registered name (see the browser header), so ideally the article should have the "+" too. --] (]) 14:42, 31 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:At the other end of the spectrum, WP explicitly excludes blogs, sites withdrawn by the publisher etc., which are easily categorised as unreliable. As you might imagine, I would also tend to include anything from S.Barrett/MLMWatch in the latter category, but it might be hard to achieve consensus on that one ;-) | |||
::From ]: "Avoid using special characters that are not pronounced, are included purely for decoration, or simply substitute for English words (e.g., ♥ used for "love"). In the article about a trademark, it is acceptable to use decorative characters the first time the trademark appears, but thereafter, an alternative that follows the standard rules of punctuation should be used". ] (]) 15:08, 31 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
== Studies "funded" - to what extent? == | |||
:There is a large grey area in between, including even reputable sources which criticise non-existent claims of studies or company statements (e.g. along the lines of "Vineyard Blend cannot form part of clinical treatment of cardiovascular disease" or "powder in a capsule cannot replace fruits and vegetables"). There's some work needed in this area of the article. ] 18:30, 29 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
The article creates the impression that the peer-reviewed studies were paid for in full by NSA, the implication being that this is why the results were favorable. This might be deemed a slur on the reputation of the scientists involved, so ought care to be taken with the wording to avoid legal problems for WP? It would be useful to get information about the ''degree'' to which the studies were funded by NSA and whether they were ''independent'' studies, i.e. whether the company exerted any sort of pressure on the scientists. --] (]) 21:26, 5 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: As compelling as the arguments of these critical sources may be, they are merely opinions (albeit valid ones). It should not be our place to exclude the discussion of published research studies on the basis that these sources have criticized the studies, but rather to include those criticisms alongside the discussion of the research.This is exactly what is done in the current version of the article. It would be intellectually/scientifically dishonest to not mention studies whose design is less than ideal when we can just point out the design weaknesses when discussing the studies; again, this is done in the current version of the article. It would be highly arbitrary to set our own criteria for inclusion (e.g. excluding mention of any study that was not randomized, blinded, placebo-controlled). Only two of the studies in the article have been directly criticized (based on design issues) by secondary sources (Stanton and MSK); those studies were Wise et al. and Inserra et al. The caveats about the Wise study are already mentioned in the article. As to ] comments, I am at a bit of a loss. The article does not include any references to blog sites nor does it contain the text "Vineyard Blend cannot form part of clinical treatment of cardiovascular disease" or "powder in a capsule cannot replace fruits and vegetables". It is highly recommended that particiants in this discussion focus their comments on the references and text that the article does contain. ] 01:31, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:What do the sources say? If the Misplaced Pages article agrees with the sources then there is probably little legal recource (per ]). Of course if the article performs some editorialising, then then is ]. From my reading and looking at a couple (not all) of the provided sources, I would say that you cannot get much simplier than: "Of the published peer-reviewed studies on Juice Plus products, the majority were funded and/or authored by the manufacturer, Natural Alternatives International (NAI); or the main distributor, NSA.; two were funded by individual Juice Plus distributors; and one was conducted independently.". However perhaps the term "funded" could be amended to "fully or partly funded"? | |||
::: There is some separation between good and bad studies in the article, yes, but I think that there could be more. For example, beta-carotene is linked to three studies (currently 9, 10, and 11). Are all three of those of equal reliability? --]]] 01:42, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:Also on an aside, why does that section have a tag on it? Reading through the section it appears it's only issue is that it's overlinked. ] (]) 07:42, 6 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::No, only 2 out of the 3 studies (Samman et al. and Kiefer et al.) were randomized, controlled, double-blind trials. But in this case, the more poorly designed study’s results are in agreement with the other 2 studies, so inserting a qualifying statement about design issues wouldn’t be of any value. It might if the third study was the sole source cited in support of a claim, but not when it agrees with two other better quality studies. Do you have concerns about any other sections with respect to the “separation between good and bad articles” or was that the only one? ] 04:51, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::Thanks for the response. Yes, my concern is that the impression is created that NSA gets the results it pays for. Something along the lines you suggest would mitigate against readers getting that impression. It certainly seems very unlikely that any scientists whose professional ingerity has been thus smeared would stand much chance of legal redress, but that makes it all the ''more important'' for WP to deal fairly with them. There is a recently published study which contains a statement specifically denying that NSA had any opportunity to influence the results (perhaps they had read this article and wanted to clarify the issue). Perhaps there are others such statements in other studies. The fact that NSA refers to the studies as "independent" indicates that no influence is brought to bear. I'll dig out the recent study statement and post it here some time. --] (]) 11:44, 6 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: Several reliable articles which need greater emphasis in the article can be found at: http://www.juiceplus.com/nsa/pages/ResearchShows.soa. Please include as soon as possible to remove bias from this page. ] 03:30, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Stephanie Roll et al.: Reduction of common cold symptoms by encapsulated juice powder concentrate of fruits and vegetables: a randomised, double-blind, placebo-controlled trial. In: Br J Nutr. 2010 Aug 23: 1-5. DOI:10.1017/S000711451000317X | |||
:::], please don't be at a loss; just read carefully what I wrote. I wasn't claiming that those texts were in the article. My point was that "reputable sources" (which ''are'' quoted in the article) "criticise non-existent claims" along the lines of the texts given; I mentioned ''blogs'' because a strong defence was made some time back for including a (purely negative) blog, apparently because it contained references to or the text of most or all studies into Juice Plus; I mentioned ''withdrawn sites'' because the "Adverse effects" section currently under dispute still refers to the SNAEMS page, although this has been explicitly withdrawn by its publisher (the reference has to point to a web archive site because of this withdrawal). When this was pointed out here, your response was that "Since SNAEMS has now stopped collecting reports, it is likely that adverse events associated with the use of Juice Plus have been under-reported". I leave others to drawn their own conclusions. ] 12:02, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::I find most of your arguments to be quite vague. First, which are the references from reputable sources that you think commented on “non-existent” claims and on what basis do you feel that those references do not meet with WP policy for inclusion? Second, what is the point in mentioning references to blog sites now when the article doesn’t contain such references? Don’t we have enough on our plate without resurrecting dead issues that have been settled long ago? Third, you are of the opinion that the SNAEMS reference does not meet with WP policy because it has been officially withdrawn. I disagree. A simple RfC would have provided us with some valuable outside opinions that might have helped settle the issue. Lastly, to reach a resolution, it is important that we focus on very specific current issues and that we discuss those issues in relation to WP policy. ] 15:18, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::: It might be useful to setup separate talkpage sections on each questionable source, so we can debate them separately. Any prefrence which one we start with? --]]] 20:40, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Mittel kann Ausgaben für Medikamente langfristig senken / Remedy can reduce expenditures on medications in the long term. | |||
::::]: There really need be no debate about the SNAEMS reference. WP policy is clear on this point(see ): under the heading '''What kinds of sources are generally regarded as unreliable?''' it states "Some sources are generally unacceptable for use as references in Misplaced Pages: | |||
:::::*An '''obsolete source''' is one that is out-of-date, or has been officially withdrawn or deprecated by its author(s) or publisher. | |||
::::You may disagree with this, but that appears to be the ruling. ] 21:36, 31 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::"Die Neutralität der Studie wurde dadurch gewährleistet, dass dem Hersteller des Präparats als Sponsor der Studie keine Studiendaten übermittelt wurden und dass dieser auch nicht an der Interpretation der Studienergebnisse beteiligt war." | |||
I pretty sure this question of source reliability is going to be central in the upcoming mediation. I would like to point out (as many others have in the past) the unreliability of Stephen Barrett as a source. A quick look at the article about him and it's talkpage gives you a glimpse of just how controversial this man is. The extremly tenuous connection between Juice Plus and USAI was created by him and the conspiracy like implications are dutifully detailed in the criticism section. He is also cited a couple of other times in this article. Mr. Barrett has made it his mission to disparage things like acupuncture and alternative medicine. He has been disgraced on many occasion in a court of law. Why does this angry man riding on his disgraced high horse get more focus than well designed studies that dispel his now dated claims of quackery?] 05:34, 4 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
: I agree that that's an item worth talking about in mediation. However, I am concerned that not all parties have agreed to the mediation yet. If we don't get all the signatures there within the next day or so, the mediation is probably going to be rejected. :/ --]]] 09:59, 4 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::Making this article useful for ALL readers means the we need a variety of opinions. I would like to ask Rhode Island Red to please join up in our attempt to improve this article. Elonka, are others welcome to join besides you, TraceyR, RIR and myself? I see a few others that post on this talkpage like JuliaHavey, Matthew, EdJohnston and Tbbooher. They may have something to say too.] 02:51, 5 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::: The "issues to mediate" section on the RfM are only there as a starting point. We are free to choose other issues to discuss in the actual mediation. As for who the participants are, anyone who wishes is welcome to join the mediation now, or even comment later. However, the ''key'' people have to be willing to mediate, otherwise it is rejected. Rhode Island Red, you are definitely one of the key individuals in this discussion, so your participation is necessary. I am also completely open to choosing other issues to discuss, than what we have listed in the "Issues" section. You are free to add something new in the "Additional issues" section, or we can even introduce new items after the mediation starts. It's going to be fairly free-form. The main purpose is just that we get the main parties into a discussion, with a neutral mediator to help guide things. I say it's worth a shot... What have we got to lose? :) --]]] 03:15, 5 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::"The neutrality of the study was ensured by the fact that as a sponsor of the study, no study data were transmitted to the manufacturer of the preparation and they were also not involved in the interpretation of the study results." | |||
==Criticism section== | |||
An attempt was made to remove certain sections of the article, which included the ''Consumer Reports'' information, and the info about Dr. Wise's association with an earlier company that was cited for fraud. In my opinion, these sections are adequately referenced, relevant, and appropriate for the article, so I have reverted the change, but I would like to check consensus here at talk. What do other editors think? Here is a diff of my reverted changes: --]]] 21:55, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:There is no question that your revert was totally justified. Unilateral removal of referenced content without adequate (or any, in this case) discussion on the talk page is considered blanking, a form of vandalism. This particular act of blanking is especially ill-advised given the current disagreements/edit wars and the fact that the page was only unlocked today after a 5-day lock period. As I mentioned before, there also serious issues about this user’s potential COI (they are essentially claiming to be ''the'' Dr. Sears, a Juice Plus spokesperson/distributor), and/or username violation (potentially masquerading as Dr. William Sears of Juice Plus fame), not to mention past threats levied by this user against other editors of the Juice Plus article. I would suggest that if similar incidents are repeated by this user, we should file a user conduct RfC or take other appropriate remedial action. This kind of behavior should not be overly indulged. Thanks for upholding policy in this case. ] 23:42, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:: Red, thanks... It's nice to see that we agree on things every so often. :) But, could you please stop referring to good faith edits as ]? This can be regarded as a type of ]. When we use the word "vandalism" on Misplaced Pages, it's usually used to refer to really blatant things, like blanking an entire page and replacing it with the picture of someone's genitals. Simple disagreements (even if they are COI disagreements) are not vandalism. Instead, they're what we call a content dispute. A User Conduct RfC on {{user|Dr sears}} is also probably premature at this point, especially considering that he is not a particularly active editor (less than 10 edits in 2007). Plus such a thing would probably be compromised by ] and ] issues of the other participants. If we're getting into some active edit wars, then it might be worth considering, but for now, I recommend gentle scholarly discourse, with a neutral mediator. :) --]]] 01:05, 31 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Sorry to disagree with you on this but I have also read ] and it is seems quite clear that content blanking of this type qualifies as vandalism; ] states “Misplaced Pages vandalism may fall into one or more of the following categorizations: Blanking - Removing all or significant parts of pages, or replacing entire established pages with one's own version without first gaining consensus.” Furthermore, WP:NPA does not state that a vandalism warning is a personal attack. It would not have been out of line to have left the user in question a vandalism warning. I appreciate your concerns, but the world (and WP) needs police as well as diplomats. ] 13:59, 31 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::: Dr sears' edits were not vandalism, though a good case could be made that they were ] edits or ]. These are unfortunate behaviors, but they are not vandalism, because they appear to have been made in ], and not as a deliberate attempt to weaken the article. So again, please stop accusing other editors of vandalism, as it is a ]. It is also my ''strong'' recommendation that you (and everyone on this page) work very hard to be as ] as possible. --]]] 19:57, 31 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::It would be interesting to know whether the authors of other studies into Juice Plus had taken such care to ensure that their results were treated fairly and their reputations not besmirched. Can anyone help here?--] (]) 12:06, 6 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Study funding information in itself is neutral. Funding does not imply that the grantor directly influenced the results; such information is simply reported as an SOP. As an interesting aside, the article by Canham discusses how NSA pulled its name off a study that it funded becuase the results were unfavorable: "Juice Plus+ decided to remove its name from the research after its anti-oxidant supplement, in the form of a gummy bear, had no effect on healthy children. The company approached the University of Utah's Division of Foods and Nutrition with the idea for the study and $30,000 to pay for the research. It hoped the supplement would reduce the level of oxidative stress in children, but the results showed otherwise." ] (]) 15:19, 6 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::I believe that this detail (Canham) has already been added to the article. What is the point in bringing it up here again? | |||
==Rating the studies== | |||
:::::The information about the Charité study is not mentioned yet, however. --] (]) 21:51, 6 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
I'm still pondering how to best present information that specifies the difference between "good" and "bad" sources in this article. I was originally thinking of splitting the information out into different sections, but I think Rhode Island Red was (mostly) correct that the information is already pretty well tagged. However, I still think we can do better. To try and get a handle on the nomenclature here, I wanted to first define some terms. It seems that the studies fall into two categories: | |||
* (a) '''Controlled studies''': Studies that are randomized, double-blind, placebo-controlled. | |||
* (b) '''Non-controlled''': Studies that are missing one of the above elements. | |||
Other study classifications: | |||
* (a) '''Independent''' | |||
* (b) '''Funded by the manufacturer''' | |||
And one other possible classification: | |||
* (a) '''Written by respected scientists''' | |||
* (b) '''Written by scientists with past ties to a fraudulent company (such as ]) | |||
Tracey - can you post your proposed changes to how you would like the section to appear here, so that editors can comment? ] (]) 22:20, 6 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
Would everyone agree that these are the primary classifications? Or are there others? Also, would it be fair to say that there's an easy combination there? For example, is it true that we have some studies that are a-a-a, and the others are b-b-b? Or do we have some that are a-b-a, or some other classification? Hope that makes sense, --]]] 17:20, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:Investigators are required to give Information about affiliations, and grants from sponsors have to be mentioned (but not the amount). The article wording must therefore make it clear that the sponsor's funding need not cover the total cost. How about "Of the published peer-reviewed studies on Juice Plus products, the majority were funded to some extent by grants from the manufacturer ... or the main distributor ...". To say "in part or in full" would imply that there is at least one source stating that a sponsor bore the full cost of a study. We don't know that. | |||
:How about '''Pilot''' studies, for which it is not unusual (a) to dispense with the controls and (b) have a smaller population - a subset of '''Non-controlled''' but without the stigma normally associated with the lack of controls? The first study (main author Wise) would fall into this category. | |||
:The mention of authorship needs to make it clear that John Wise was the lead author of one (or two?) of the early pilot studies performed by NAI itself; he is mentioned as co-author on approx. 50% of the more recent studies, which were all done by universities etc. elsewhere. | |||
:'''Funded by the manufacturer''' might be thought to imply that the results are less reliable. It is probably unusual for any studies '''not''' to be funded, at least in part, by a the manufacturer - that's the way things work, certainly at first. | |||
:One way of reducing the ugly over-citation would be to have a table of the studies which would include this sort of information. A source for such a table can be found .--] (]) 10:49, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:In addition to '''Independent''' and '''Funded by the manufacturer''' there could be '''Performed by the manufacturer''' e.g. in its own laboratory. This is not the case with Juice Plus (at least I'm unaware of such a study) but e.g. GNLD has published a couple of studies which its own staff have performed. | |||
::There's a list of NAI's "Sponsored Clinical Research Published in Peer-Reviewed Scientific Journals and Presented at Scientific Conferences" . --] (]) 11:26, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:A different but related point: I'm not sure of the significance of the contributions made by each of the authors named for a given study. Is it normal for the main author to be named first? If so, is it valid to describe all studies in which Wise is named as a co-author as 'authored by Wise'. This could be a ploy to discredit the studies so described by associating them (indirectly and incorrectly) with USAI. Perhaps 'co-authored by' would be more accurate for such studies.] 18:16, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Ok, so you've IDed what you think are the problems - now, what do you want the pertinent section actually changed to. I've noticed that there is very little discussion on actually editing the article on this talkpage. So I'm not interested in discussing any of the "issues", I'm only interested in seeing what ''you'' propose to actually ''change'' the article to. Until then, there is very little discussion to actually be entered into. ] (]) 11:47, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: On the funding issue, I would personally put more reliance on a study that was funded by a government grant, than by the manufacturer. Even if the study is controlled, there's still a subtle implication that when the manufacturer funds it, there's pressure to present findings that the manufacturer wants, otherwise the manufacturer isn't going to fund more studies there. --]]] 21:25, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::The NAI document cited above is innacurate and unreliable. I looked up two Juice Plus studies (Bloomer et al 2006; Nantz et al 2006) from the list of studies which NAI says they sponsored and in fact the articles themselves list the funding support as coming from NSA, not NAI (and in the case of Nantz's study, NAI spelled her name wrong -- i.e., Nance). So in other words, there are is a serious problem with that source. I would deem it to be essentialy useless. ] (]) 14:56, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::But we're not talking about a drug here. Surely it would be very unusual for a government grant to be awarded to study a nutritional supplement. I think that the failure to make this distinction is behind this aspect of the criticism of the Juice Plus studies. ''Who else'' is going to fund such studies? Somehow this needs to be pointed out in the article, which seems to ignore this distinction. | |||
:::In addition, ss far as I'm aware there are very few, if any, other makers of supplements which have 'risked' subjecting their products to studies by independent, reputable institutions. Shouldn't this speak ''for'' rather than against the company/product? ] 22:18, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::: I hear your point, and admit that I really don't know that much about the subject. Could you maybe point to an article that talks about sources of funding for these kinds of things? If so, we could use it as a source. If not, well, I can't find one either, so I'm willing to drop that question of "Who has funded the study," unless someone else can provide proof that it's an issue. Anyone? --]]] 22:42, 8 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::I am not sure what the exact aim is of this discussion of rating the studies. In what way would such ratings apply to the article and what information of value would it provide that is not already mentioned? | |||
== Section "Conflicts of interest in studies" == | |||
:::::Whether or not a study is controlled adequately is most relevant when a poorly designed study is being quoted alone in support of a finding. When the results of a poorly designed study agree with the results of other better designed studies, then the point that one of studies was poorly designed is somewhat moot. This seems to be handled sufficiently well in the present version, unless someone can point out an instance where the information was absent and where the absence is a detriment to the article. | |||
Which type of "conflict of interest" is supposed to be highlighted here - the fact that J.Wise was employed by NAI and is named as a co-author of several studies? If so, what is the relevance of the paragraph about USAI to "Conflicts of interest in studies"? --] (]) 22:02, 6 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::The article already specifies the studies on which John Wise was an author. I don’t see that any additional clarification would be needed in that regard. The article used to contain a paragraph that described which studies were funded by the manufacturer or conducted by Juice Plus distributors and which studies were conducted independently. This paragraph has now been replaced at the beginning of the research section. Company-funding of studies is an obvious issue, but more so when a company funded study claims very positive results. It is unlikely to be an issue when such studies show negative results (i.e. unlikely for company’s bias to result in claims of underperformance). Company-funded studies that are poorly designed would objectively be recognized as prone to bias. Just because something is a pilot study doesn’t mean it has to be a poorly designed study. Pilot studies typically just include fewer subjects, but there are well-designed pilot studies and there are poorly designed pilot studies. Wise’s pilot study happened to be a poorly designed pilot study. ] 04:30, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:Again, can you propose the changes you would like to see? ] (]) 22:21, 6 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
== Adverse Effects (cont.) == | |||
::That's easy: just remove the section altogether. The whole USAI paragraph is irrelevant to this article and the information about John Wise in no way notable enough to warrant a section of its own. This information could be included elsewhere in the article. --] (]) 10:23, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
I have spent the past week carefully reviewing the history of the discussion on the Adverse Events section and the pertinent WP policies regarding its recent deletion. Three conclusions are abundantly clear: | |||
#As defined by ], no consensus was reached to delete the AE section (in fact, the topic did not even receive adequate discussion on the talk page). A majority of editors did not seem to support deletion, several were strongly opposed, and the issue was never even put to a poll. Even it had, WP:CON states: “Formal decision making based on vote counting is not how Misplaced Pages works (see Misplaced Pages is not a majoritarian democracy) and simple vote-counting should never be the key part of the interpretation of a debate. When polling is used, it should be seen as a process of 'testing' for consensus, rather than reaching consensus.” | |||
#Removal of the content constitutes disruption according to Misplaced Pages’s definitions of tendentious editing which defines one of the characteristics of a problem editor as follows: “You delete the cited additions of others with the complaint that they did not discuss their edits first: There is no rule on Misplaced Pages that someone has to get permission from you before they put cited information in an article. If a rule like that would exist, it would clearly violate WP:BOLD. There is guidance from ArbCom that removal of statements that are pertinent, sourced reliably, and written in a neutral style constitutes disruption. Instead of removing cited work, you should be questioning uncited information.” | |||
#Subsequent dispute resolution did not follow the proper sequence of steps outlined in ], which states that posting the question on a subject-specific project/policy page, an RfC, or informal mediation should have been the next actions taken, rather than the request for formal mediation made on May 30. | |||
:::Nah not a complete whitewash, but I agree with reducing it down to Juice Plus related bits. ie/ | |||
Because of these very clear WP position statements, it is justified to restore the deleted adverse events section, which had been in place for several months without comment. I have previously outlined the history behind this section and the recent edit war that emerged for anyone who cares to review it. | |||
:::''NSAs Juice Plus website cites various research articles in support of the company's marketing claims about the biological effects of Juice Plus, maintaining that these “studies were conducted by independent researchers” at various universities. Several of the studies were authored by ] and Morin. Both these authors have been criticised by consumer health advocate and alternative medicine critic ] of MLM Watch .'' | |||
:::Incidently it's not out of the ordinary in Misplaced Pages for information tangentially related to the subject to be included in the subject's article because there isn't a "home" for it yet. ] (]) 10:33, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
Despite the obvious justification for maintaining the adverse event section in the article, I have made a few new edits to the section to proactively address some of the points that were raised previously. One of the points raised was that the section would benefit form addition of a secondary source that has commented on adverse events. Such a source (Memorial Sloan Kettering Clinic) does exist, as I pointed out in previous discussions, so this reference has been incorporated in the revised text. Secondly, I added a reference to the third study to have reported adverse events; i.e. gastrointestinal distress of sufficient severity to warrant early dropout from the study by some patients. Lastly, I have indicated that the studies conducted to date were not double-blind, placebo-controlled, randomized studies, since several editors have expressed interest in seeing inclusion of such information. The fact that they were poorly designed does not have much impact on reporting side effects because presumably any bias that might exist would tend to under-report rather than over-report AEs. | |||
::::I suggest that the correct term for Wise and Morin is "co-authored" (see recent entry here); Wise was lead author on ''one study'' only, published in 1996. ''...Two early studies were co-authored by ], Morin and others , two other studies by Wise ...'' As for Barrett, let's not get into that one again. He's a self-publishing <del>self-publicist</del> retired psychiatrist, for heaven's sake, with a bee in his bonnet about all things MLM and 'natural'. He's certainly not neutral! | |||
I have restored the section in two stages so other editors can see exactly which material has been newly added. Discussion can resume, of course, but the material should not be arbitrarily deleted. ] 03:35, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::It is normal for a manufacturer (e.g. a pharmaceutical company) to conduct pilot studies into new products. To highlight this with a section title as being a "conflict of interest" in unusual. | |||
: Red, I'm sorry, but this amount of wikilawyering is unacceptable. There is no consensus for the "Adverse Effects" section. Every editor on this page is against it, except for you. We discussed it extensively, we asked for comments from other editors, and then we even tried to file a formal mediation, which you refused to join, causing the mediation to be rejected.] You've claimed that you wanted to file another RfC or informal mediation. But then instead of doing either of those, you've gone right back to putting the disputed information back into the article. Please stop. If you want another RfC or informal mediation, file it, don't just go back to edit-warring. --]]] 07:23, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::It's not about whitewashing but article neutrality (i.e. colourless rather than white). The mention of USAI is just "blackwash" in this article. It (USAI) should be mentioned in the article about John Wise, of course, which this article links to anyway. USAI has its own article too, so the USAI/Wise stuff has a good home. --] (]) 11:21, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Elonka, it is inappropriate to refer to my pointing out relevant WP policy as “wikilawyering”. WP policies exist for a reason and I am merely asking that people follow such policies. You have repeatedly stated that I am the only one who opposes deletion of this section, but this is contradicted by the facts, and I have repeatedly cited the comments of other editors who disagreed with you, hoping that you would recognize this and stop stating that you have a consensus where none exists. Your request for formal mediation was an unnecessary escalation that bypassed the recommended procedures for dispute resolution, which should have been an RfC, informal mediation, or posting a question on a topic-specific project page as outlined by WP policy. I would have had no objection to an RfC about the AE section, but the RfC should proceed after restoration of he AE section since there was no justification for its deletion in the first place. You seem unwilling to participate in reasonable discussion about this content and it is unfortunate that have chosen to escalate this issue further by filing a user conduct RfC instead of merely responding to the issues that I raised in my previous post. WP policy is very clear on this issue and there is no doubt, based on these policies, that the AE section should not have been deleted. Your claim that a consensus is needed to include this information goes against WP policy and quite clearly constitutes tendentious editing on your part, as indicated in point #2 of my previous post (“There is no rule on Misplaced Pages that someone has to get permission from you before they put cited information in an article”). ] 15:14, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::Please post what you want the article changed too rather than going into things that you brought up but then don't want to go into. BTW, you might want to redact your statement above - BLP applies. ] (]) 11:26, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Elonka, it is most unfortuante that you have chosen to arbitrarily delete cited content again. You have repeatedly stated that a consensus existed to remove the adverse event section. As I have repeatedly pointed out, at least 4 editors (including me) disagreed with the removal of the content. , one of whom is an admin and felt the need to lock the page to prevent the content from being deleted. . No attempt was made to unofficially poll the editors who had commented, so how can you reasonably claim that a consensus supports deletion? Please outline what you consider to be the consensus supporting removal of the AE section. ] 18:29, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::The argument about whether Wise/Morin were co-authors or lead authors is irrelevant in the context of a discussion about company-influence in the research and COI. In that context, where these authors appear in the author list is not important; it's only important that a company executive (and insider stockholder in the case of Wise) was an author at all. And just for the record, Wise was an author on 6 of the JP studies, not two as stated above. The article only listed 4 of them, but I just updated it to show all 6. ] (]) 15:21, 7 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::: RIR: ''You'' (not Elonka) must gain consensus to include, the onus is on those seeking to include '''not''' remove. Also, where in hell did you get the idea Wikihermit is an administrator (I'm cracking up here with laughter!). There is a clear consensus (supported by policy and guidelines) to remove the content, not include. ] 18:51, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::Matthew, consensus or permission is never needed to include referenced information, and the information in question had been in place for more than 3 months without any new comments. Consensus would be needed to delete it, not to include it. If you know of any WP policy that states otherwise, please cite it. If you think a consensus was reached for deletion, then kindly provide some evidence; outline all of those editors who opposed deletion and all those who supported it and count the numbers. ] 19:59, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
== Poorly Written == | |||
:::::: Rhode Island Red, to say that you have three editors supporting you is absurd. Your "support" is as follows: | |||
::::::* Wikihermit, a "drive-by" editor who has not participated in this discussion. By your own diff it proves that he said he didn't care if the information was included or not, he had just made a revert because he saw the information was cited, and other than that he's staying out of it and leaving it to the page editors and the mediation council to work out. His recommendation was to proceed to mediation, which you refused. | |||
::::::* Tbooher, who made a frustrated comment about consensus (which frustration I share at this talkpage), but said nothing in the discussion about the Adverse Effects section His comment wasn't even on the Adverse Effects thread, it was about the mediation request instead. For you to include his edit as a "proof of consensus" is really grasping at straws. | |||
::::::* A single comment by what is obviously an anonymous ] account ({{user|85.71.60.166 }}) | |||
:::::: You also commented that the page was "protected to keep the information from being deleted," but that's a clear distortion of the situation. You cited the protection out-of-context, and with the wrong diff by a non-admin. The page ''was'' protected by Administrator {{user|BrendelSignature}} after Wikihermit's "drive-by" request. BrendelSignature then within an hour put the page at the "agreed-upon version for mediation" which did ''not'' include the Adverse Effects section. And, as has been pointed out, you caused the mediation to be rejected anyway, by refusing to participate. | |||
::::::To repeat: Proof of consensus to not include the "Adverse Effects" comes from editors such as me, from TraceyR, from Matthew, and from Citizen Don, as can be easily checked in the ]. Plus we've got the Juice Plus distributors on this talkpage who are opposed to Rhode Island Red's edits, though I'll agree that because they have a clear COI, their comments should not be given as much weight. However, Rhode's incivility towards them, and his active attempts to tell them that they're not even allowed to participate on the talkpage, have not been helpful. Rhode Island Red, you are exhibiting a classic example of ], violating ], and resisting the input of other editors. There is now an active ] on your behavior. I recommend that you put your energy into posting your own summary of events there, rather than continuing to wiki-lawyer and edit war here. --]]] 20:14, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
(de-indent) Wikihermit "drove by" as he was trolling me at the time (he was having a little tiff). ] 20:19, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Elonka, the so-called consensus you outlined is exactly the reason why we are edit warring. No consensus exists. In support of deletion you have cited 4 editors: (1) yourself (2) Tracey R (3) Matthew (4) Citizen Don. The 4 editors I cited were not mentioned as proof of consensus against inclusion but to show that enough dissenting opinions were presented so that claim of consensus in support of deletion cannot be justifiably made. I have cited those who expressed opinions opposing deletion as (1) myself (2) ] (3) ] and (4) ]. That looks likes an even 4:4 split to me. You do not even have a majority of general opinion in favor of deletion, let alone a straw poll result or a reasonable consensus. You denigrated the opinion of 85.71.60.166 as that of an SPA, so then it would be only fair to also discount ] opinion since he is also clearly an SPA, not to mention a self-confessed product advocate who thinks Juice Plus saves lives (hardly an NPOV position). He also failed to outline the reasons justifying deletion and merely provided only me-too responses, which do not constitute the basis for any kind of consensus. You also discounted the opinion of ], a longtime contributor to this article, even though he was quite clearly against your current actions. He stated: | |||
As an avid WP reader, I read through this article today and was very disappointed with how it's written, and that no WP writers have done anything about it. The writer is clearly biased based on these observations: | |||
:::::::''“Elonka, I am a minor wikipedia player, but this makes no sense to me. Truth here is determined by whatever folks show up on the discussion page? Arguments don't matter -- just consensus? We are criticizing an editor since they include too much detail in their responses? Trying to delete their content because of a possible negative bias towards a product? What is going on here? Been out of the loop, but this borders on insane. Is Misplaced Pages moving into the marketing business where a team of corporate sponsors can show up, build consensus and say whatever they want to? Tbbooher 02:08, 29 May 2007 (UTC)"'' | |||
1) Comments on the studies of each section opens with a statement of doubt. However, the product has plenty of well-documented and neutral studies available which were not highlighted. | |||
:::::::You also discounted the opinion of ], yet his opinions seemed pretty clear too: | |||
2) The whole feel of the article is aimed at swaying the reader to form a negative opinion. For an encyclopedia, that's a huge no-no. Take a look at the article on Adolf Hitler. While few, if any, consider the man to be helpful to the human race, the article is written quite neutrally. This article on Juice Plus, however, appears to be written by someone who is skeptical of the product, rather than simply presenting the facts. | |||
:::::::''“Reverted to revision 133172183 by Rhode Island Red; Per WP:NOT#DEMOCRACY. You can't revert the edit. Also, WP:NOT#CENSORED. You can't remove cited information from an article.”'' | |||
3) I feel like I've been subtly-gossiped to. How did this article get through QC? | |||
:::::::''“I reverted the article because the information was cited. I would rather have information that is cited left up on the article page then no information at all.”'' | |||
4) OJ Simpson reference is quite negative. Yet no mentioned of Bear Grylls. | |||
:::::::The reason you presented for discounting Wikihermit’s comments was that he is “a "drive-by" editor who has not participated in this discussion”. So by that same logic, what does that make of Matthew’s opinion? ] is also a “drive-by” editor who did not contribute in past discussions nor did he contribute anything of substance to the present discussion other than a me-too response to the deletion of the AE section. Matthew first showed up here and deleted the content in question several times without even providing a comment on the talk page, and he did so after having been a previous contributor to Elonka’s WP biography page biography. This seems even more damning than Matthew’s accusations that Wikkermit was a troll acting out of malice because of a personal dispute. It seems like Matthew is really the troll. | |||
:::::::Elonka, when your first deleted the Adverse effects section no other editors had expressed their approval for such action on the talk page and at least one had disagreed, yet you deleted it anyway claiming that you were supported by a consensus (which clearly did not exist). It seems that you approached this issue with your own pre-formed conclusion that the material should be deleted, and then attempted to cobble together any support while ignoring the dissenting opinions of other editors, all the while continuing to delete the content and claiming a consensus had been reached. It’s unfortunate to see that the issue has now escalated when a simple, reasonable discussion of the individual references and some requests for outside opinions could have sufficed to resolve it. As for the RfC, it shouldn’t be too difficult to show what a ridiculous sham it is and to redirect attention to where it truly belongs. ] 22:59, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::: Red, referring to other editors as trolls is ''not'' helping matters. I recommend that you focus your attention on the User Conduct RfC, rather than continuing to wiki-lawyer here. --]]] 00:27, 10 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::::: Your one-sided comments aren't helping either. Why do you excuse the use of the term "troll" when Matthew uses it but feel the need to comment on it when I use it. Why not focus on the real issues instead of sermonizing. ] 00:49, 10 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::: Okay, you've got a point. Matthew, it wasn't helpful for you to use the word "troll" either, and it's worse from you, because you should know better. Now, can ''everyone'' please work harder to be ] here, please? And Red, here's my heartfelt advice. Please put together a statement in your defense, and post it in the "Response" section of the RfC. I also strongly recommend that you keep it very brief, because the longer that it is, the less likely that people will actually read it. I am telling you this not in an attempt to muzzle you, but with genuine hard-won experience. I also strongly recommend that you approach the RfC with an attitude of ''listening'' and that you show a genuine attempt to learn from this experience. An indication that you are willing to change your behavior, is probably your best option at this point. --]]] 01:03, 10 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
This article needs to be completely re-written by someone who is not emotional either way about the product. It's distastefully written and lacks mature authoring. | |||
==User conduct RfC== | |||
I have started an RfC on Rhode Island Red's behavior, which can be seen at ]. Anyone who has been involved in the attempt to resolve this dispute, may certify the RfC by adding their name in the section that says, "Users certifying the basis for this dispute." If no one else besides me certifies it within 48 hours, the RfC will be closed. If you wish, you may also add a separate statement of your own. If you have questions about the User Conduct RfC process, please let me know, or post on the RfC talkpage, thanks. You can also review ]. --]]] 10:24, 9 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
I am not a writer, so I appeal to someone who is: please re-write this article, and write it encyclopedically. I would be glad to offer my assistance in information gathering. | |||
] (]) 03:04, 13 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Better than if written as an infomercial as there is less chance of harm. There is no good research on this product is the issue. Thus it is not possible to display it in a positive light. ] (] · ] · ]) 03:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Hi Doc James, I'm afraid you're wrong. First, "Positive" is not better than "negative". It's just as irresponsible, as it's not fact-based, and therefore not encyclopedic. The article should be deleted if no one is going to write it correctly. Second, unbiased evidence of "anti-product" research is severely lacking. As we've seen in our research labs, if one sets out to prove the sky is purple, they'll somehow be able to prove it. The JuicePlus product has been reviewed positively in prestigious medical and nutrition journals. But the negative research does not appear to have been performed by any organization who is trustworthy to present the facts. For most of these organizations, the goal is to debunk the product, so of course their findings must match their goal in order to get their money (they're typically hired by a competitor). | |||
::::Quite frankly, I'm not interested in someone's opinion on the product...good or bad. If the article needs to be shrunk down to 2 paragraphs, then so be it. But let's aim to provide an opinion-free article that is consistent with the goals of Misplaced Pages. | |||
::::] (]) 04:54, 13 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::I have to ask just what non fact-based information is in this article? Also I might add that ] per ] limits just how we can use such sources. Heck, one of my problems with the ] biography is that two articles that show a possible change in attitude by Weston Price are primary sources (''Journal American Medical Association'' and Paul B. Hoeber, Inc; Medical Book Department of Harper & Brothers) with (so far) no secondary sources for interpretation. Like it or not there are major limits on how you can use primary sources in wikipedia. | |||
:::::There are practical reasons for this. For example the conclusions of K. Linde, N. Clausius, G. Ramirez, et al., "Are the Clinical Effects of Homoeopathy Placebo Effects? A Meta-analysis of Placebo-Controlled Trials," ''Lancet'', September 20, 1997, 350:834-843. regarding Homoeopathy was NOT supported by ''later'' studies (]) and the quality of the 1997 study was questioned in Linde, K, et al. Impact of study quality on outcome in placebo-controlled trials of homeopathy. J Clin Epidemiol. 1999 Jul;52(7):631-6; Ernst E, et al. Meta -analysis of homoeopathy trials. ''Lancet''. 1998 Jan 31;351(9099):366) and shown to be seriously flawed in the August 27, 2005 issue of ''Lancet''. | |||
:::::] is another example as even at the height of the tooth and tonsil extraction binge where were serious questions regarding the quality of the supportive studies.--] (]) 07:10, 13 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::Hi BruceGrubb--that's a good (and constructive) point. However, for this article, the author clearly hand-selected facts to support his/her own opinion. While this article doesn't have overtly-stated opinions, the writer did purposely include negative research while purposely excluding the positive research performed by well-known and trusted organizations (]). Also, as I mentioned previously, the celebrity endorsement section is a joke. The end result is an expression of the writer's opinion by manipulating factual information. | |||
::::::I'm not suggesting that the negative portions of the article be removed simply because they're negative. I am suggesting that the article be balanced and unbiased. There's plenty of research to support both positive and negative positions. For those who are familiar with both sides of the argument, this article is borderline inflammatory and is ''not'' neutral. | |||
::::::Let me put it this way. Imagine removing all mention of the ] from ]'s article, and only mentioning what wonderful changes he brought about to Germany. No opinions, just facts. Yet, the reader would be left with the impression that Hitler was a great fellow. You see? Stated opinions aren't required in order to get your opinion across. That is the problem with this article. | |||
::::::] (]) 05:40, 18 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
{{od}} | |||
] aside this has to be the most ridiculous thing I have read in a long time as you are comparing apples to oranges. A better example would be the full scale migraine that is the ] where despite the article acknowledging the fact there is no one definition for the term much of the counter argument presented is based on the most extreme versions of the concept while more moderate versions like that of ] get lost in the shuffle. Right now product research section is so full of primary material that I doubt that many laymen can even understand it.--] (]) 07:11, 18 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:Bruce Grubb is missing Jubican's point here, which is that being selective in what is mentioned and what is omitted can produce a bias in ''any'' article. What is ridiculous about that? | |||
:Bruce Grubb also thinks that the primary material in the article is incomprehensible to the layman. Is he suggesting that it be removed? How would this improve the article? --] (]) 09:53, 18 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::TraceyR seems to have missed Bruce's point. Bruce said that comparing the Juice Plus article with Hitler and the Holocaust was ridiculous (i.e. he appropriately referenced ], and I fully agree. Such invocations are not constructive. ] (]) 19:43, 18 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::So someone else is missing Jubican's point! Godwin's Law is so gloriously, ridiculously irrelevant, a ], a ], indeed a tacit admission that Bruce Grubb and, of course Rhode Island Red, cannot rebuff Jubican's point. But then there's none so blind as he who ''will'' not see. --] (]) 22:38, 18 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::@Jubican, TracyForget the rhetoric... We don't just remove sourced information that meets MEDRS. If you have other sources to balance it, or proposals to make the phrasing more even-handed (but in line with the references) go ahead and mention them. But we're not going to stub a well developed article because the conclusion of the studies is not favorable. Also, accusing the negative studies of setting out to prove the product ineffective is a quite bold claim that I doubt can be reliably sourced. So, what specific suggestions do you have? | |||
::::I agree that we should not start sections with a 'doubt' but rather with an overview. Do you understand, on the other point, that primary studies are not acceptable as support. We're really looking for systematic reviews. We might be able to mention that 'JuicePlus' cites published primary research' but we probably won't do more than provide a link in the references to where JuicePlus does so. Otherwise it becomes a highly speculative and unencyclopedic game about citing primaries. | |||
::::@Doc James, 'doing less harm' is an admirable but not encyclopedic goal, in my opinion. Risk aversion is a kind of bias that we should not practice to here so long as we otherwise follow policy...else we slant too strongly towards the mainstream and don't fairly present alternative and fringe views in full. ]<sup> ]|]</sup> 23:04, 18 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::The ] article is a prime example of the problem you can have regarding MEDRS with primary sources. Sometime studies are so new that there just are not the type of secondary sources required by MEDRS and other times the follow up are so obscure they might as well not exist. The ] article has the later problem as there is a primary source papers that seems to indicate that he later changed his mind regarding ] ("I have been unable to find an approach to the problem through the study of affected individuals and diseased tissues" and that "the evidence seemed to indicate clearly that the forces that were at work were not to be found in the diseased tissues") but so far no secondary source supporting that reading of the primary material has been found.--] (]) 02:10, 19 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::Bruce, yes you've covered this territory well ;). I think where we encounter a gap between primaries and MEDRS we should consider using a summary-style to let readers know what types of sources are out there and what claims are made within them. Without citing specific results we can at least give the lay of the land regarding that research. Maybe that's an option here, to summarize the primary research that has been done, without advancing any new points. ]<sup> ]|]</sup> 02:24, 19 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Hi, I would like to draw your attention to the ] article. The first paragraph is quite clear on how to achieve neutrality, specifically, "''representing fairly, proportionately, and as far as possible without bias''." On this discussion page alone, many have complained about the bias, which for some reason is not causing the authors to check their own motives. But in particular, I want to point out the second item on the series: ''proportionately''. | |||
:::::::There's a very good reason for this. It obviously took a lot of work to find and reference the unfavorable studies. Yet, the same people who located these studies are not / have not put the same energy into locating favorable studies that are suitable for this article. Now, per the 3 core principles of Misplaced Pages, the article should be proportionate in it's entirety. Some editors have admitted this article is disproportionate in one form or another (Doc James did so in his initial reply in this section). So by an editor's own admission this article is in violation of NPOV--the same editor who previously removed the NPOV warning. In order to achieve proportion, there must be balanced sources. That means either favorable sources must be added, or the unfavorable should be removed. For instance, I've mentioned ] 3 times now, yet no one has acted on it. If you were to put the ] hero in this article as an endorser, it would certainly become even more clear to the average reader that there's something wrong with this article (is that why you don't add it?). | |||
:::::::Editors should be responsible to remove themselves if they cannot be neutral. Like many people, I visit Misplaced Pages all the time, and load myself up with all kinds of good information. However, this article is strikingly biased, and if you all allow this kind of "Seattle Times" article-writing to creep into Misplaced Pages, the integrity of the entire system will begin to fall. I can just hear, ''"Well, they did it on the JuicePlus article, why can't I do it here!"''. | |||
:::::::Again, I ask that you folks just stick to the spirit of Misplaced Pages. I'm not a scholar, but I have enough sense to know that what I'm reading is not written by people who are neutral. If you can't fix that part, please be decent and responsible and remove yourselves. Nothing personal, just please fix. | |||
:::::::] (]) 05:30, 19 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
{{outdent}} Many may also wish to look at ]. ] (] · ] · ]) 05:42, 19 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:@Jubican. It's great that you're reading policy. The only thing you're missing is ''you''. If you have sources for Bear Grylls, post them. If you have a draft of a section including his endorsement, propose it here. If you are comfortable adding it to the article with a proper reference, go for it. We'll continue to work on phrasing content neutrally; part of that relies on other editors to provide the raw material. Cheers, ]<sup> ]|]</sup> 05:54, 19 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::The "Editors should be responsible to remove themselves if they cannot be neutral" comment IMHO shows a total misunderstanding of just what is meant by ]. The requirement is NOT the ''editors'' are totally neutral but that an ''article's subject be presented'' in as much a NPOV as is possible within the guidelines of Misplaced Pages. ] directly states "Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is the best such source for that context" as shown by the examples above things may not as cut and dried as that particular source paints them. | |||
::Primary sources are generally written for experts ''in that field'' which is why ] restates "All Misplaced Pages articles should be based on reliable, published ''secondary'' sources. Reliable ''primary'' sources may occasionally be used with care as an adjunct to the secondary literature, but there remains potential for misuse." (sic). In this case ] fulfills that requirement in any reasonable manner any we have yet to see anything of similar quality on the other side so the article is going to be slanted.--] (]) 06:42, 19 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
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== Edit request from Uglysquid, 6 August 2011 == | |||
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Please update the ingredient lists as they are not accurate. The ingredients listed on the bottles (recently purchased) I have in front of me are: | |||
Garden Blend: Vegetable juice powder and pulp from carrot, parsley, beet, kale, broccoli, cabbage, spinach and tomato; gelatin, glucomannan, cellulose, calcium ascorbate, calcium carbonate, Lactobacillus acidophilus, d-alpha tocopherol, beta carotene, natural enzyme blend, sugarbeet fiber, garlic powder, oat bran, rice bran, mixed tocopherols Dunaliella salina, folic acid. | |||
Orchard Blend: Fruit juice powder and pulp from apple, orange, pineapple, cranberry, peach, acerola cherry, and papaya; gelatin, calcium ascorbate, citrus pectin, beet root powder, citrus bioflavoniods (sic), glucomannan, Lactobacillus acidophilus, natural enzyme blend, d-alpha tocopherol, beta carotene, date fiber, prune fiber, Dunaliella salina, folic acid. | |||
I don't have a more publicly available source for the information, but the currently posted ingredient list has no citation, either. | |||
Thanks. | |||
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] (]) 20:59, 6 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:I've removed the ingredients and nutritional info altogether, as they are not at all encyclopedic, and, as you say, they are unsourced --] ] 18:49, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:(1) What could be more fundamental to explaining Juice Plus than the basic ocmposition of the product? This information has stood uncontested for years after being reviewed by multiple editors; no one even raised concerns about ingredient info being unencyclopedic. (2) If you are worried aboust sourcing, then simply add a citation needed tag; don't blank content. ] (]) 21:25, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Removal of that information is ], but a citation needed tag would be better. I do think that a discussion of ingredients would be encyclopedic content, but it needs to be sourced to a reliable secondary source - to establish weight (what is in front of an editor on a bottle does not qualify, btw). ] (]) 21:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::(ec)I've already commented on your talk page for your incredibly inappropriate labelling of my edit as vandalism, and I'll reply further here. Misplaced Pages is not a directory, we do not list things such as a full set of ingredients. The fact that nobody has raised concerns before is irrelevant, and per ] I am well within reason to remove unsourced content such as this--] ] 21:36, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Discussion of the ingredients perhaps, but not a full list, which is a ludicrous violation of ]--] ] 21:36, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::I diasgree with your assertion about notability of the information, and merely citing WP:NOT doesn't make your case. As I alluded to previously, a reader should be able to see what's in the product -- the information is fundamental -- it doesn't detract; it adds to to one's understanding. As to the issue of sourcing, that's another matter entirely. An appropriate response would have been to add a citation needed tag. I've seen the brochures and I've see the bottle labels myself so I know that the information is accurate. I'll dig up a source. No need to be so dramatic. ] (]) 22:01, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::If we were to follow that logic, we would list the ingredients of every product there is an article for on wikipedia, you'll notice that is not the case. WP:NOT is a a key policy and the key point being made is that Misplaced Pages is not an indiscriminate collection. This is supposed to be an encyclopedia, the information you're so in favour of preserving belongs on the brochures and the labels you keep bringing up, not here--] ] 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::Invoking the ] fallacy doesn't make your argument any more compelling. ] (]) 22:32, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::There's nothing in WP:NOT that would expressly preclude inclusion of this information. You are being overly broad in your interpretation IMO. ] (]) 22:34, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I'd say its more you're choosing to interpret it overly narrowly due to whatever vested interest it is that you have with the product. You have yet to give any kind of convincing reason as to why this content is in fact encyclopedic rather than a meaningless list, nor have you been able to produce the many sources you appear claim exist--] ] 22:37, 7 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::: Vested interest? Better stow that garbage ASAP. Haven't produced sources yet? I'm eating dinner on a Sunday. Are you in some kind of rush. The references will be forthcoming. In the meantime, chew on this one. You can simply add a citation tag in the meantime. If you have concerns about whether or not the information is encylopedic, post an RFC and get a second opinion....easy enough right? ] (]) 01:57, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::I'd call it a vested interest since you added the content in the first place, and going by your talk page history and this page you have a real issue with ]ership on this page. And fine, guess it will have to be an RFC, goody. I'll sort it out in the morning, although if in the meantime you feel like removing it yourself instead of wasting time drawing this out, It would be much appreciated--] ] 02:09, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::(Quoting Jac16888) -- '''''"If we were to follow that logic, we would list the ingredients of every product there is an article for on wikipedia, you'll notice that is not the case."''''' | |||
:::::::::::Really??? What you're implying is that in the the past few hours since we've been having this discussion, you somehow managed to confirm that there isn't a single article on any product in all of WP in which the ingredients are listed? ROFL. The ''first'' article I checked on a hunch --] -- contains an extensive list of ingredients. Second article checked -- same story -- ]. Maybe you can take a break from shooting salvos out of your nether-regions and apologize. Ah, what's the point...don't bother; just eat your crow and move on. ] (]) 03:15, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::That response is very rude - I'm sure that it contravenes plenty of WP rules. Apologies are certainly due, but not from Jac16888. A constructive response would be for someone to post an image of the current bottles and labels. That way there would be both a recent image ''and'' a list of the ingrediaents. BTW, just citing that a couple of articles ''have'' a list of ingredients does not prove that ''every'' article has a such a list. To confirm ]'s assertion it is merely necessary to show that ''one'' other article has no list of ingredients. Logic 101. ---] (]) 09:49, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
{{od}} ]'s report on Garden Blend ingredients agrees with the RS ConsumerLab source. Unfortunately, ConsumerLab did not test the Orchard Blend and thus doesn't have the ingredients for that product. I am assuming ]'s report is correct on Orchard Blend, but we still wouldn't be allowed to use that as an ingredient list. <span style="border:1px solid black;">''' ] '''</span> <small><sup>] | ]</sup></small> 15:30, 18 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
== Full list of ingredients and nutritional information == | |||
Short and sweet, Having come across this article I noticed the hackjob infobox, containing a full list of "supplement information" for 2 of the products, i.e. full ingredient list, RDI information etc. Considering this to be against a violation of ] I removed the lists with a clear edit summary only to be reverted as vandalism . My attempt at a talk page resolution has gotten nowhere so here we are. To sum up, the article has a full list of ingredients straight off the label, and I think it should be removed as a clear violation of ]--] ] 11:28, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
: I think you are both right, in different ways. This is far too much info for an Infobox, although very cleverly written. The current standardized Infobox is ]. Note this does not list ingrediants, but does list the nutritional values. The ingrediants should move to a section in the article, rather than an Infobox. However, instead of listing all of the ingrediants out straight from the label (and hence some ] issues), I would only list ingrediants that are particularly sourced as unusual or unique. On a side note, I am very curious why the manufacturer doesn't list the nutritional facts on their website - that would be an easily accessible RS. The Consumer Lab source currently used is fine, although I will tag it with a <nowiki>{{subscription required}}</nowiki> tag. <span style="border:1px solid black;">''' ] '''</span> <small><sup>] | ]</sup></small> 12:03, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::In this case I think that it is ''relevant'' to list the ingredient fruits and vegetables. To list 'nutritional facts' is fine for ordinary multivitamin tablets, which all have a recipe combining a limited number of specific vitamins, minerals etc., and the manufacturer knows just how much of each it adds to the mix. For a blend of fruit or vegetable juice concentrate in powder form it makes more sense to list the fruits and vegetables contained in the supplement. There could well be tens or even hundreds of thousands of phytochemicals in there, but none in sufficient quantity to report in the 'facts' table. That could also be why the manufacturer doesn't list the nutritional facts on its website.--] (]) 12:45, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::That is a reasonable explanation about why the manufacturer doesn't list the nutrition facts. Is it also possible that the nutrition facts could change from batch to batch produced due to the variances in the source fruits and vegetables? It also would be nice to find an updated source for RDI/ingediants than 2006. Even though we can't use ] as a source, we have to AGF that his transcription of the bottle he holds in his hand is accurate. It also seems likely that there could be a product reformulation in the past 5 years since ConsumerLab.com released their findings. If a new RS that matches ]'s report can be found easily, then this is a simple fix. Otherwise, some sort of tag marking that source as outdated may be appropriate. <span style="border:1px solid black;">''' ] '''</span> <small><sup>] | ]</sup></small> 12:52, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Ok, so we've heard from a wikistalker and a Juice Plus distributor; input from uninvolved parties would be more compelling. ] (]) 15:33, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::]: You really can't just lash out at everyone who doesn't share your apparent deep-seated loathing (negative POV) of Juice Plus, being coarse and just downright unpleasant. Either be civil or stop editing this article. Your behaviour here is unwarranted, unpleasant and needs to stop, unless you want to be blocked again. --] (]) 21:47, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
*'''Remove ingredients''' - The Infobox as it stands now (including ingredients and nutritional facts) is a violation of ]. The infobox is way too promotional, and reads like and looks like advertising. I looked thru dozens of WP articles on comparable products, and I found no InfoBox remotely like it. Editor Leef5 above mentions ], and perhaps that template could be used. However, even that template is presently used primarily for raw foods (eggs, apples, etc). There are a few instances where that template is used for processed food, such as ], but those are very rare. I suggest that, as a compromise, the current infobox be removed and replaced with ]. The ingredients, if they must be mentioned, can be in the body of the article, but as an editor points out above, that information is ephemeral and could quickly become out of date as the formulation changes. --] (]) 21:38, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::In what way is it like advertising? There's no comment, no sales-speak, no advertising copy, just a list of the contents. --] (]) 21:47, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::An encyclopedia article should not give the appearance of promoting or endorsing products. It is misleading to have a colorful display at the top of the article that looks nearly exactly like a product label or product advertisement. The WP community, as evidenced by the ''lack'' of similar displays in comparable articles, has decided that such displays are unacceptable. Read ]. If you could produce 20 or 30 other WP articles that have similar InfoBoxes, you might have an argument. If the ingredients information is important (and it may be), I have no objection to including it in the body of the article. --] (]) 21:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
*'''Remove from infobox''' Agreed about the infobox, after further consideration. Discussion about ingredients should be in the article proper, not listed in the infobox. It does look like an advertisement as is. ] (]) 22:53, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:I'm not arguing for the retention of the image: if it makes the article look like an advert (but that's a subjective judgement), then take it out. I would just point out that, since this product isn't to be found in the shops, having a picture in the article is not going to increase sales, i.e. it isn't fufilling the purpose of an advertisement here; it is just an illustration. If WP rules that it is nevertheless 'like an advert', then it has to go. Putting the list of contents in the article body would, in my opinion, reduce the usefulness of the article (the reader would have to search for the contents information, rather that finding it summarised in the Infobox), but again, if that's what WP requires, so be it. FWIW, I think that WP has become too bureaucratic in such things. Didn't Jimbo say something like that recently? ;-) --] (]) 23:11, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::I believe the image is appropriate since this is a product page as long as the image is non-free fair use, as I believe it is notated as. <span style="border:1px solid black;">''' ] '''</span> <small><sup>] | ]</sup></small> 23:49, 8 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::I agree that the image and the ] template would be acceptable in the InfoBox, provided they do not look too much like an advertisement or an actual product label. That is the key point: it cannot look like a promotion of the product. --] (]) 03:10, 9 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::I'm not having any luck finding an (updated) RS with the label/nutrition facts info. Hopefully another editor can dig something up. <span style="border:1px solid black;">''' ] '''</span> <small><sup>] | ]</sup></small> 15:22, 9 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::Once upon a time, the ingredients were listed in the body text. They got moved into an infobox becuase it seemed like a more convenient location (and I still think the article is better with the details in the infobox vs body text). I don't buy the argument that listing the ingredients in this particular manner makes the article appear promotional. I really don't see it. ] (]) 16:39, 9 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::RhodeIslandRed: WP has thousands of articles on food products. We can get some sense of community-wide consensus by seeing how the other articles look. Can you cite some other food articles that have ingredients listed in their InfoBox? My point is: this particular article is not the best place to establish a new approach to food InfoBoxes. Better would be to go to the Talk page of ] and start a discussion there on a uniform approach to food product InfoBoxes. But we cannot give preferential treatment to JuicePlus and let its InfoBox look nearly identical to its own product label. --] (]) 17:01, 9 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::On this point I agree with the previous statement by RhodeIslandRed. The lists the fruit and vegetables used. This is surely a reliable source for this infobox data. The 'nutritional facts' table presents a difficulty: the information may well differ from country to country, since many countries specify their own RDAs, leading to ''different'' percentage values for the ''same quantity'' of a given substance. Which country's percentage values would be valid for English-language WP - the USA's? Canada's? Australia's? the UK's? South Africa's, etc.? If no reliable source can be found for the data in the 'facts' table, then they can (should?) be omitted until a RS can be found. I'm not sure about the "preferential treatment" - could you explain what advantage Juice Plus gains from having its contents listed in the infobox? Surely that's the logical place for them? | |||
:::::::The current image was lifted from a German website (click on the image for the details). This same website has since replaced this image by a newer one, with German product names. Whether the current image is therefore legal on WP I can't say; whether it is valid as an illustration on ''English-language'' WP I also don't know - the US, UK etc bottles may be different now.--] (]) 17:06, 9 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Tracey: Why do you say the InfoBox is the "logical place" for the ingredients? To the contrary, the consensus of the WP community, as evidenced by thoursands of other food product articles is to put the ingredients, if anywhere, in the body of the article. Making the InfoBox look like a product label could be construed as promotional. --] (]) 17:08, 9 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::With respect to terminology, this is a dietary supplement; not a food product per se. I haven't looked to see if other supplement articles use similar infoboxes, but if they don't, I would not say that the alternative formatting was by design. Putting it in an infobox just makes for a nice clean design and puts key information (what could be more key than the actual ingredinets) in a convenient and prominent location. As for the compoisition information on the company's website (re:TraceyR's comment), that list is woefully insufficient -- it's almost like the manufacturer doesn't want consumers to know what's really in the product. ] (]) 17:15, 9 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Surely the infobox is there to provide headline information about the subject of the article. If the subject is a fruit and vegetable juice concentrate, the reader is entitled to expect to find that information summarised there. As RhodeIslandRed says, "what could be more key than the actual ingredients" - i.e. in this case the various fruits and vegetables used? What then is "woefully insufficient" about "the composition information on the company's website"? There are regulations in most developed countries about what ''must'' be on a label, what ''can'' be on a label and what ''cannot'' be on a label. Is RhodeIslandRed really suggesting that the company is hiding something that should be there by law? If so, what? --] (]) 20:23, 9 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::The law only requires that the company list the product's ingredients accurately on the product label. The information provided on the company website is not up to those standards -- it is superficial and does not match the bottle label. In contrast, the list given by Consumer Reports (a reliable secondary independent source) was complete and shows the exact same ingredients as on the bottle label. They were also listed in the same order as on the bottle label, and as you may or may not know, the law mandates that ingredients on the label must be listed in order of amount (highest to lowest); note that the list you are suggesting from the comany's website is alphabetical and gives no clue about relative amounts. The company website also fails to list many of the ingredients that are listed on the bottle lable -- many of which are fortifiers and additives (extra vitamins, etc.). It's clearly not a complete list of ingredients -- it is inadequate. It is also misleading because it implies that the product contains substances that are constituents of the native fruits/vegetales but may not be constituents of the processed fruit/vegetable powders that are actually used in Juice Plus. That's been a major point of contention in the critiques of Juice Plus written by independent experts/secondary sources. It's easy to see why a Juice Plus distributor would try to argue that the actual ingredients should be hidden from public view and replaced with misleading, superficial, marketing-friendly list that suggests the product contains things that it doesn't contain. One list is reliable and reflects reality; the other is a machination of the Juice Plus marketing spin-doctors. ] (]) 03:05, 10 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
* '''Keep ingredients''' Uninvolved here through ] - I think listing the ingredients as they are listed on the label or ConsumerLab or Consumer Reports makes sense for a product like this. Seems plenty encyclopedic, altho if there's controversy about whether these ingredients are actually inside it may be best to remove the ingredients. ] | (] - ]) 04:05, 10 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::The controversy is in the imagination of an editor with a negative history here, but even he cannot deny that the label conforms to the legal requirements. In his opinion, the information on the company's website is "woefully insufficient", but that's all it is - his opinion, no doubt coloured by his known POV. AFAIK there is no requirement for a product website to provide such information. For those who wish to examine the (rather complicated) FDA requirements for food labels, see the appropriate FDA website . Regulations in other countries will differ. I don't agree that putting content information in the infobox should be considered as product promotion.--] (]) 15:13, 10 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::FDA regulations??? You're making this overly complicated. The simple fact is that the company website does not provide an accurate/complete ingredient list. Consumer lab and the bottle labels do however provide an accurate/complete list of ingredients. No need to go chasing windmills. ] (]) 15:40, 10 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::(Quoting TraceyR) -- '''“''The controversy is in the imagination of an editor with a negative history here, but even he cannot deny that the label conforms to the legal requirements.”''''' | |||
::::Oh good grief! What an absurdly inappropriate comment. First of all, the controversy is far from "imaginary" and you know it. The controversy is well documented by RS -– this is patently obvious to anyone who has even skimmed through the article. | |||
:::::“''The company says that it adds extra vitamins C and E, beta-carotene, and folate to Juice Plus+ to “achieve uniform levels,” but it won’t say how much. (The extra C and E and folate aren’t listed on the label as added ingredients, as required by law.)”'' | |||
:::::''"In December 2007, the Center for Science in the Public Interest (CSPI) filed a complaint with the U.S. Food and Drug Administration (FDA) to “halt the marketing of NSA's Juice Plus Orchard Blend and Garden Blend capsules because the products appear to be adulterated and misbranded”. CSPI said it was “concerned that the products' claim, ‘the next best thing to fruits and vegetables,’ may lead consumers to believe the pills are closer to real fruits and vegetables than is likely to be the case." According to CSPI, the labels say the capsules contain high levels of vitamins A and C and folate naturally, but “do not disclose that these vitamins and minerals are added to the capsules during processing and are nutrients only characteristic of the original fruit and vegetable sources.”'' | |||
:::::''“Our major criticism relates to the fact that the fruit and vegetable capsules used in this study, according to the manufacturer, were enriched with pure ß-carotene, ascorbic acid, vitamin E and folic acid, which was not stated in the article. The only significant changes due to the intervention were an increase in ß-carotene, ascorbic acid, vitamin E and folic acid. The supplemented micronutrients explain much of the reported effects and leave the question open as to whether the fruit and vegetable supplement itself induced any significant effects. Knowing that the capsules contained added micronutrients.”'' | |||
::::Secondly, hypocrite, look in the mirror and then re-read ] (the policy that you have been ignoring all this time). Juice Plus distributors should tread lightly here; you certainly shouldn’t be throwing out red herrings about other people’s conduct (i.e., the mudslinging campaign embodied by the comment about “negative history”), particularly when it has no bearing on the issue at hand. ] (]) 16:30, 10 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::]: The few comments that you have cited do not make a controversy: the product has been on the market for over 15 years, and yet all you can come up with are ''three'' comments? As you know well, the CSPI's opinion was not upheld, because the slogan "the next best thing to fruit and vegetables" remains in use by the manufacturer. Some controversy! I'm sorry (but really not surprised) that you find it impossible to remain civil - at the slightest sign of a comment which does not conform to your strongly-held opinions, you lash out with personal attacks and coarse remarks - as above, in the comment directed at ]: "Maybe you can take a break from shooting salvos out of your nether-regions and apologize. Ah, what's the point...don't bother; just eat your crow and move on". If you wish to continue editing this article, please restrain yourself; it does your arguments no good to act in this way. No mud-slinging by others is necessary when you do it to yourself. --] (]) 20:46, 10 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::What an asstonishing act of denial! The Juice Plus distributor buries her head in the sand and proclaims ] once again. WPs ] -- the one’s you have been chronically ignoring -- exist to prevent exactly this type of self-serving nonsense and obstruction. If you have nothing better to add than to repeat the same lame off-topic gripe about civility, then it’s clearly time to move on. ] (]) | |||
:::::::(Quoting TraceyR) – '''''“…all you can come up with are three comments? As you know well, the CSPI's opinion was not upheld, because the slogan "the next best thing to fruit and vegetables" remains in use by the manufacturer.”''''' | |||
:::::::''Only'' 3 comments?!? How many does it take to get the point across? And “upheld” by whom exactly? If the company is still using the “next best thing” slogan, it’s because they’ve simply ignored the criticism from multiple high profile sources. It’s not evidence that CSPIs “opinion was not upheld”. That’s a fabrication/unwarranted assumption/] on your part. It would be accurate to say that CSPI's warning apparently went unheeded. Like CSPI, two other reputable sources -- the Better Business Bureau's National Advertising Division] and the government of Australia (]) -- hammered the product/company precisely because of the “next best thing” slogan: | |||
::::::::''“According to Consumer Reports, in 2005, National Safety Associates used advertising featuring Dr. William Sears (a distributor of Juice Plus products), which implied that Juice Plus Gummies are low in sugar and a nutritional alternative to fruits and vegetables. This claim resulted in consumer complaints to the Better Business Bureau's National Advertising Division (NAD). The BBB issued a complaint that NSA's claims were misleading, and as a result, NSA promised to modify its ads and stop calling Gummies “the next best thing to fruits and vegetables”. However, the Juice Plus homepage continued to advertize the products as “the next best thing to fruits and vegetables”.”'' | |||
::::::::''“In November 2007, the Complaints Resolution Panel for the Therapeutic Goods Administration Advertising Code Council ruled that statements on NSA’s Juice Plus website were in breach of Australia’s Therapeutic Goods Advertising Code. According to the panel, the “clear message” in the ads was that Juice Plus tablets/capsules are “equivalent to fruits and vegetables” and that “consuming Juice Plus tablets would help Australians to consume the ‘recommended 5–7 servings’ of fruits and vegetables”. NSA was sanctioned by the Council to withdraw any representations that the products “are equivalent to fruits and vegetables or that their consumption can aid in meeting dietary recommendations relating to fruits and vegetables.””'' | |||
:::::::Reputable sources have damned the “next best thing” slogan so many times that the criticism represents an overwhelming consensus POV. This underscores why an accurate ingredient list (as opposed to the misleading type of list provided on the manufacturer's website) needs to be as an integral feature of the article. ] (]) 00:55, 11 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::]: Please stay on topic. This section is about the list of ingredients in the infobox, not about "the next best thing" slogan etc. If you want to discuss that ''again'', don't try to hijack this thread - start another if you insist. And please note: you cannot sweep the warnings from uninvolved editors about your rudeness, personal attacks etc under the carpet: your behaviour (and the subsequent warnings about it) remain a matter of public record and sooner or later will have serious consequencs for you unless you start to conform to WP standards. --] (]) 11:08, 11 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::I see where you’re coming from now. It’s on-topic if you say something that's spectacularly untrue about the “next best thing” slogan or the controversy being “my imagination”, but it’s off-topic and “hijacking” the thread when I correct you? It’s not a personal attack or off-topic when you make a vague accusation about my “negative history”, but it’s somehow a personal attack when I call you a hypocrite for making false statements and point out that you are ignoring ]? What you seem to be saying is that the rules don’t apply to you; just other editors. Again, I’m choking on the hypocrisy. As a non-admin editor, you're in no position to be making threats about "serious consequences" either. How about we all play by the sames rules (including ]) and get back to the topic at hand? ] (]) 15:35, 11 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::] I'm not going to bother to respond to these dramatic, intemperate and illogical responses. Just be aware ''that silence on my part should not be interpreted as a ] or a tacit admission of'' whatever you conjure up in your imagination. Take the good advice you have been given on your ] and put things in perspective. After all, this is, as you put it , "in the grand scheme, a trivial and insignificant small-fry product whose market share would barely be a blip on the radar". As such, it is surely not worthy of so much of your time. --] (]) 22:40, 11 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
* '''Delete''' the infobox as it stands now and replace it with {{tl|Nutritional value}} per ], in this case it is not a product catalog. This is not a standard procedure in ] articles, and it shouldn't be included here. --<span style="font-family:lucida sans, sans-serif;">] <small>(] • ])</small></span> 04:53, 11 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
* '''Replaced''' the custom infobox with the {{tl|Nutritional value}} template using an up-to-date reliable source (ConsumerLab - 15 June 2011). It should be noted that ConsumerLab only tested Garden Blend, and not Orchard Blend. This is the ingrediant list that ConsumerLabs has at the same source I listed should we wish to include this in the article text as discussed above: | |||
<blockquote>Other Ingredients: Vegetable juice powder and pulp from carrot, parsley, beet, kale, broccoli, cabbage, spinach, and tomato; gelatin, glucomannan, cellulose, calcium ascorbate, calcium carbonate, ''Lactobacillus acidophilus'', d-alpha tocopherol, beta carotene, natural enzyme blend, sugar beet fiber, garlic powder, oat bran, rice bran, mixed tocopherols, ''Dunaliella salina'', folic acid. ''This product contains no artificial colors, flavors or preservatives and contains no added starch. Kosher.''</blockquote> | |||
:I also put 0 for any vitamin/mineral not detected by ConsumerLab. This makes the table look a little long/messy however. Can we assume that if that particular vitamin/mineral isn't listed in the infobox that it doesn't have any? That would de-clutter the box. <span style="border:1px solid black;">''' ] '''</span> <small><sup>] | ]</sup></small> 15:15, 18 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
::I was just going to comment, the new infobox looks a lot better and that yes, there is no point in including all the things that it doesn't contain with a zero, just take them out--] ] 15:21, 18 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Done- and agreed it does look better. <span style="border:1px solid black;">''' ] '''</span> <small><sup>] | ]</sup></small> 15:26, 18 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
== ConsumerLab test results - new Reception section == | |||
I also added ConsumerLab's test results of Garden Blend. I wasn't sure exactly where to put that material, as the current section did not seem to fit. I created a new section titled "Reception". I've found that to be a useful section in other articles to discuss how well the article subject has been received to the public. It is possible we may be able to move other tidbits from the article into this section as appropriate. <span style="border:1px solid black;">''' ] '''</span> <small><sup>] | ]</sup></small> 15:18, 18 August 2011 (UTC) | |||
==Primary research articles== | |||
Per ] we should not be using primary research articles. As this articles uses them extensively have tagged it until this is resolved.] (] · ] · ]) 04:35, 15 October 2011 (UTC) | |||
:would you mind tagging the appropriate section instead of the top of the article. As I see it, this would apply only to the research section. ] (]) 17:20, 15 October 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Hmmm. I couldn't find a relevant section tag. ] (]) 21:08, 15 October 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Doc James: Why is ] relevant for a nutritional supplement? Surely this is a food, not a medicine. --] (]) 22:59, 15 October 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Health claims need high quality evidence. We are a little more stringent than the FDA here. --] (] · ] · ]) 23:27, 15 October 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::Agreed, any health claims, food or medicine related, apply to MEDRS. ] (]) 16:54, 18 October 2011 (UTC) | |||
{{out}} If this cant be resolved, and it hasn't for over 4 months, this section needs to be removed.--] (]) 22:58, 25 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
:Which section? Which health claims? Claims by whom? Who is the 'we' who are "more stringent than the FDA"? Misplaced Pages is an encyclopedia, not some government agency. If a study finds that a product has effect "A", that doesn't constitute a ''claim'' that it has this effect. --] (]) 23:29, 25 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::Any claims of health/nutritional effects ARE health/medical claims, and should be sourced to secondary sources. ] (]) 23:38, 25 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
:::Yes I will remove all the primary sources if this is the consensus.] (] · ] · ]) 07:25, 26 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::::You've got quite the job ahead of you, because it looks like quite the mix. Good luck! -- ] (]) 08:57, 26 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::::: ]: that's not a response to the comment that the results of studies are not claims. Would it be correct to remove all references to studies as primary sources which are not related to health claims?--] (]) 19:53, 26 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::::::Any health related information should to be referenced to secondary studies, per ], "claims" or not. ] (]) 21:35, 26 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
:::::::So what health related information are we talking about in this article? --] (]) 16:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::::::::''Any'' health related information, ''in any article'', falls under ]. So, the answer to your question would be, "All of it." ] (]) 18:27, 27 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
{{out}}Yobol: Do you really mean that ''no'' primary source can be cited in ''any'' article which is ''in any way'' related to ''any aspect'' of health, be it physical, mental or social? This seems IMHO to be a very - er - ''fundamentalist'' interpretation of ]. The section on "biomedical journals", for example, states that "peer reviewed medical journals are a natural choice as a source for up-to-date medical information in Misplaced Pages articles. They contain a mixture of primary and secondary sources as well as less technical material such as biographies. Although almost all such material will count as a reliable source for at least some purposes, not all the material is equally useful, and some, such as a letter from a non-expert, should be avoided."? I'm not sure how this part of the article could lead to this opinion. Perhaps you could explain where the "no primary source" dogma comes from. Thanks. --] (]) 22:00, 27 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
:No, that's not what I mean. I mean that health information should be sourced to secondary sources, because that is what ] ] say, and that is how we determine how much ] to give primary studies. There is no "no primary source" dogma, as MEDRS clearly says primary sources are allowed, in limited circumstances. This, however, is not a such a circumstance, as there are plenty of secondary sources to discuss the health effects here. In this instance, since secondary sources are available, we can then assume that primary studies which are not discussed in secondary sources do not deserve ] here because no one else in the scientific community has decided it's important enough to talk about. The situation here, where discussion of primary sources vastly outweighs secondary sources, screams of ] and ] problems. ] (]) 01:24, 28 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::But in this case there are at least two secondary sources (review articles): Lamprecht et al ("Obst- und Gemüsesaftkonzentrate zur Nahrungsergänzung" i.e. "Fruit and vegetable juice concentrates for nutritional supplementation" in the Schweizer Zeitschrift für Ernährungsmedizin i.e. Swiss Journal for Nutritional Medicine, 2008, 6(5):47-52, which is not readily accessible for non-German speakers) and Esfahani et al ("Health effects of mixed fruit and vegetable concentrates: a systematic review of the clinical interventions." J Am Coll Nutr Oct 2011, 30(5):285-94). For some reason these have not found their way into this article. The fact that they exist but have not been included here could also be deemed to suggest an ] problem in this article. Truly neutral editing would lead to their inclusion; the fact that they have not been cited in the article implies the lack of true neutrality (perhaps even a fundamental weakness in the WP model). How do such secondary sources find their way into an article? --] (]) 09:11, 28 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
:::], with the caveat that this is the Juice Plus page, so any reviews must discuss the product, not juices in general.] (]) 12:45, 28 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::::Tricky, since the English source isn't available without a subscription. I could cite the German source - would that be acceptable?--] (]) 07:36, 29 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
:::::The Swiss source does not appear to be ]-indexed, a red flag for reliability among medical journals. Not being able to read German or have access to said article I can't comment further on its reliability. ] (]) 13:15, 29 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::::::The Lamprecht review, aside from being in German, was conducted by paid consultants to the manufacturer (NSA) of Juice Plus. First, please don't proffer articles from clearly non-NPOV sources as though they were independent reviews. Secondly, Juice Plus distributors (past or present) should disclose their COI or refrain from participating in discussions like these. ] (]) 16:07, 29 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
:::::::]: Both review papers have been published in peer-reviewed journals, so both are valid secondary sources as far as WP 's rules go (with the caveat about the possible MEDLINE index issue, which Yobol mentions). No doubt the affiliations of the authors (past or present) were disclosed when the Lamprecht paper was submitted. The reviewers and editorial board considered it to be sound science and of sufficient quality to deserve publication. You may ], but that is irrelevant; in any case, your long-standing and persistently negative POV on this article is a matter of record and has attracted warnings from several admins down the years. If studying a product and finding it scientifically sound is enough to disqualify an author's work from mention, then having such a negative POV about it should certainly disqualify you. --] (]) 20:11, 29 February 2012 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Putting the articles aside for the time being, as well as your silly POV accusation, you have a COI issue that you are hiding. You need to come clean or face the consequences. ] (]) 00:30, 1 March 2012 (UTC) | |||
::::::::: Please tone down the personal attacks and try to ], please. We've been over this numerous times already - ] <sup>]</sup> 00:55, 1 March 2012 (UTC) | |||
Thank you everyone who has pointed out how biased and clearly one sided the Juice Plus information is. I have never seen WP be so biased. They ususally just state the actual non biased facts but clearly whoever wrote this article went to great lengths to make sure the article was not balanced. Had the person actually done real homework on this product they might have realized that most of the 28 studies that have been done aren't something that JP could buy their way into nor does it mean because JP used their own money to help fund the studies that they had someone on the "inside" misleading or falsifying the test results. JP does not anywhere on their site claim to be able to cure any disease. Had the person actually went the JP website they would have seen how often the doctors and other supporters of JP say that JP isn't a replacement for fruits and veggies. Time after time they state that you need to eat a wide variety of both. If you are going to try to discredit a company please at least do a little bit of research first and present both sides and let the viewer/reader come to their own conclusion not the one you want them to come to. | |||
KK Stoltz <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 05:03, 19 March 2013 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
== Article not balanced == | |||
I read this article because I take Juice Plus and I have MS and I was looking for what nutrients some of the fruits and vegetables contained, so that I can supplement with things that are not found in whole food, like Vitamin D3, or B12 for example. I was appalled at the very negative stance of what should be a description or definition of Juice Plus, but instead was a mud slinging attempt to get people off the product? So, I did my own research. I read where some of your findings or excerpts came from and they were taken a bit out of context, not representing the entire article. Seems only the negative or at best questionable findings were mentioned here, even though much positive research was also given and is out there. In fact even the Memorial Kettering Cancer Center's comments caution that their page is their opinion and not to be taken as medical advice. They cite the positive outcomes of JP trials, and have no negative only unsubstantiated or that it might impact treatment comments. That is presumebly because in cancer, you are trying to kill cancer cells and they don't know if good nutrition would make that ineffective. In reality, cancer comes from mis- qued cells and under functioning killer cells, which could only be helped with a nutritious diet. We are talking about a food product here, not a laborotory drug. No one would tell a cancer patient to turn away fruits and veggies and eat a fatty diet? It is almost as if your writer wants us to believe that JP controlled outcomes and research done at University of Arizona, and Brigham Young University to name a few? What? I know Drs who are aware of the proven benefits of JP and its effects on health, dental health etc. | |||
Now for what should have been said, I do not think anyone is saying or believes that this dietary supplement ( per Misplaced Pages " a Dietary Supplement is intendend to provide nutrients that may otherwise not be consumed in sufficient quantities") is a replacement for the actual food. It is a dietary supplement, which by your own definition is to provide additional nutrients to what is already consumed or for those who do not get enough of them. Most people do not eat 5-7 servings of soil rich fresh fruits and veggies each day, so they take vitamins. While this is perfectly fine, it is better to get the nutrients naturally from the actual food, and then to supplement where they are lacking with more food. Let me say it again, this is a supplement ( in addition to) not a replacement for real food nutrition. It is a extra serving or two more than you would get otherwise. The focus on your article comes from the idea that this product was intended to replace the foods it represents or be equal to. Not so, it is a dietary supplement and your writer should consult your own definition of what that really means. | |||
This article should be revised immediately as it has made me question and trust your interpretations on other subjects. It should be neutral, not biased and what does OJ have to do with the definition of JP. I could care less what he claimed or represented at one time...it is here say, and JP is not trial! <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 14:56, 15 August 2013 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:Your edit prompted me to search around for any new material, but I didn't find anything significant - except that we weren't using some material from Quackwatch (now added). If you judge some material is missing from the article, what sources are there we're not using? if you feel bad information is contained (because of poor sourcing) then what it that? ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 15:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Edit request on 31 August 2013 == | |||
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DELETE X="critics have argued that there is no scientific proof that Juice Plus offers significant health benefits and that deceptive claims are used in the product's marketing information" | |||
because there are 30 scientific studies about Juice Plus health benefits on humans. Theu are reported on www.pubmed.gov | |||
This articles about Juice Plus on wikipedia, is completely wrong and has conflicts of interest. The Scientific Study about benefit of Juice Plus are used in the text to proof the inutility of the product. See www.pubmed.gov | |||
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] (]) 12:47, 31 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
:But critics ''have'' argued these things, and this is sourced in the article body. Since the lede must summarize the body (and include criticism) it is right to have this content here; it should not be deleted. ] <sup>]|]|]</sup> 12:54, 31 August 2013 (UTC) | |||
== Juice Plus aliens are taking over == | |||
The Juice Plus Aliens are here and it is too late to stop them, although the almighty FSM may bestow upon us his blessing and eradicate them from this planet <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 00:26, 16 May 2014 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
== Review Articles on Juice+ == | |||
I did a few searches on medline and google-scholar for any kind of '''review''' articles on Juice+ and came up empty. Can anyone point me towards any such English language literature? I am not interested in primary studies or popular press articles. ] (]) 05:24, 2 December 2014 (UTC) | |||
:Scanning the discussions above, I find only two review articles mentioned: Lamprecht et al ("Obst- und Gemüsesaftkonzentrate zur Nahrungsergänzung" i.e. "Fruit and vegetable juice concentrates for nutritional supplementation" in the Schweizer Zeitschrift für Ernährungsmedizin i.e. Swiss Journal for Nutritional Medicine, 2008, 6(5):47-52 and Esfahani et al ("Health effects of mixed fruit and vegetable concentrates: a systematic review of the clinical interventions." J Am Coll Nutr Oct 2011, 30(5):285-94). If the German article has not been translated, then it does little good. The second article is behind a paywall and describes the effects of "concentrates". While a powdered product might be called a concentrate, this is not clear from the available abstract. My point is since there are, apparently, no secondary scientific reviews, the notability of this product seems suspect.] (]) 03:27, 1 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
A search on "Health effects of mixed fruit and vegetable concentrates pdf" produced this Hope this helps. <small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 18:44, 4 January 2015 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:Thanks for the review. I am not sure what to do about it, though. The conclusion seems to be that the blood levels of the vitamins A, C, E, and folate increased when subjects took capsules that were spiked with these vitamins. I guess it relates to the bioavailability issues. The quality of the review is poor, as it is simply a summary of all of the primary studies that the authors identified, without any screening on their part. No efforts were made to do any kind of meta-analysis. As usual, CSA contributed to the cause. ] (]) 03:32, 10 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
==Antioxidant activity== | |||
Today, ] reverted my deletion of the statements: | |||
One study, which measured in vitro antioxidant activity, found that 1 g of Juice Plus Orchard Blend/Garden Blend powder (500 mg of each combined) had the corresponding antioxidant capacity to approximately 10 g (fresh weight) of fruit or vegetable, amounting to 30 g (roughly one-third of a serving) per four capsules{{doi|10.1016/0308-8146(95)00223-5}} Tests of antioxidant activity of polyphenols (such as those in Juice Plus capsules) in vitro likely show higher results than the negligible antioxidant activity in vivo following oral ingestion and digestion. {{doi|10.1016/j.freeradbiomed.2004.01.001}} and | |||
Four points why I feel this information is both inaccurate and invalid: | |||
# to consensus science and regulatory organizations like the FDA, antioxidant activity in foods or supplements pertains only to adequate content of vitamins A, C and/or E. | |||
# the references for the first sentence and first of two for the second sentence apply to "methanolic extracts" and so infer polyphenol/flavonoid content (i.e., not physiological antioxidants as the A-C-E vitamins are). To the uninformed Misplaced Pages user, mention of antioxidant activity by polyphenols (in vitro) falsely implies antioxidant activity in vivo. | |||
# the second sentence reads like speculation so, to me, is editorial ] | |||
# the last reference used is from a ] source (Optimal Life Chiropractic), not ], and should be deleted outright. | |||
Although I feel certain of my conclusions, these changes are not essential because the section overall minimizes the antioxidant value of Juice Plus. I will defer further editorial discretion to ]. --] (]) 00:17, 20 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
:On point 4, my bad. I didn't notice that was a bad chiro reference. I just scrapped it. As for point 3, I think the line was added by another editor as a qualifier to indicate that in vitro antioxidant activity of the extract would overestimate in vivo activity. I think that might be OK as far as ] goes, as long as the lone reference that's cited actually backs up the statement. It might, but I don't have the full-text version. We could add a verify tag to the sentence or scrap it entirely, but I'm a bit reluctant to do that not having checked the reference. | |||
:The first sentence/reference indicates that the supplement's antioxidant activity is very low relative to real fruits and vegetables (whereas some of the advertising implies antioxidant equivalence to 17 servings of fruit/veg), and in that sense, it seems like an important detail. However, you raise a good point that it should at least be qualified to indicate that these were methanolic extracts, assuming I'm understanding you correctly on that point. I didn't quite get your meaning about the FDA, vitamins A/C/E, and polyphenol/flavonoid content, but I'm all ears if you want to discuss it in more detail. Thanks. ] (]) 01:35, 20 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
::For the ]'s (and ]'s) position on dietary antioxidants only being the A-C-E vitamins, these are succinct discussions, and this is the FDA's current position on product labeling for antioxidants. | |||
::--] (]) 02:25, 20 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::Great, thanks Zefr. So I think what's required is a stronger and perhaps more detailed disclaimer about in vitro activity not being representative of in vivo activity. As for the polyphenol aspect, is there some reason why you would expect that the methanolic extracts only contain polyphenol and not vitamin antioxidants such A/C/E. A and E are both fat soluble so I would imagine that they would be present in methanolic extracts. Of course, it's also apparent that A/C/E are additives in the product and not endogenous components of the F/V extracts, which is an important consideration. Thanks for mulling this over with me. I'm open to your suggestions. Best, ] (]) 15:25, 20 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::Rhode Island Red: because a methanol extraction involves pressure, heat and alcohol, it is unlikely that any vitamins survive this process. Although artificial vitamins can be manufactured into the final product (as it appears JuicePlus does from the significant contents of vitamins A-C-E on the article nutrition panel), no label claim or promotional statement can be made for the vitamin(s) as antioxidants, nor can polyphenols be mentioned (because they are not nutrients), according to FDA labeling rules. | |||
::::Reviewing the section on antioxidant activity, I believe there is too much unimportant detail and speculation per ] and ], and we would be fine keeping only the first paragraph, with the rest deleted. --] (]) 17:44, 20 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::As far as I know, every extraction procedure involves exposure to some kind of non-physiological condition (heat, solvents, etc.). Is there something uniquely destructive about this particular procedure? Is there any evidence that antioxidant vitamins would not be active following the methanol extraction method used by Chambers or is that speculation? If tha were the case, the Chamber study would likely have underestimated antioxidant activity. | |||
:::::I don't see how FDA labeling laws pertain to this. I would be resistant to including details from the Chambers study if they concluded something counter-intuitive or if they asserted that the JP extracts had extraordinarily high antioxidant activity, but they in fact report the opposite (i.e., low activity relative to fruits and vegetables). Like I said before, addition of a suitable qualifying statement (i.e., that in vitro tests tend to overestimate activity and are not applicable to in vivo activity) seems to me the best way to go. ] (]) 20:10, 20 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
===Draft suggestion=== | |||
I recommend eliminating the current third and fourth paragraphs while retaining the first and second paragraphs, with an additional source to the second to read like this: | |||
One study found that 1 g of Juice Plus Orchard Blend/Garden Blend powder (500 mg of each combined) had the corresponding in vitro antioxidant capacity to approximately 10 g (fresh weight) of fruit or vegetable, amounting to 30 g (roughly one-third of a serving) per four capsules. In vitro tests of antioxidant activity of polyphenols (such as those in Juice Plus capsules) likely show higher results than the negligible antioxidant activity in vivo following oral ingestion. metabolism and digestion.{{pmid|17157175}} | |||
A succinct lay news release from Oregon State University in 2007 may be useful to add as a reference for this last sentence. | |||
--] (]) 16:25, 21 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
:The proposal for the revised second paragraph on antioxidant activity works for me. But why would the third paragraph (about a study demonstrating lack of antioxidant activity of Gummies) and fourth paragraph (promotional claims about cancer and the response by MSKCC) be deleted? Those paragraphs have been part of the article for years so it's not clear to me why that's now on the chopping block. ] (]) 17:07, 21 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
::I feel the point of insignificant antioxidant activity is made adequately by the first two paragraphs as proposed; the additional paragraphs belabor the discussion. Also, see my comments from 20 Sept, 17.44 above. --] (]) 17:48, 21 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::The first two paragraphs refer to the fruit/veg capsules. The third paragraph deals with a different product entirely (children's Gummies, not the fruit/veg capsules), and the last paragraph deals with antioxidant activity as it pertains specifically to product claims about cancer, and contains relevant commentary from an expert source at Memorial Sloan Kettering Cancer Center -- highly notable. So it seems to me that it would be rather arbitrary to delete the last two paragraphs. ] (]) 18:45, 21 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
Respectfully, '''Disagree''', but have nothing to add to my comments above. Leaving this discussion now. --] (]) 21:29, 21 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
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== Merger proposal == | |||
{{Discussion top|result='''Merge''' ] (]) 21:21, 17 March 2018 (UTC)}} | |||
Noticed that there is a parallel stub of an article on ], the parent company that makes Juice Plus. The company is not notable in its own right and the NSA article should be merged with the JP article. ] (]) 19:22, 2 March 2016 (UTC) | |||
:Agreed.] (]) 20:18, 1 April 2016 (UTC) | |||
::Agreed. --] (]) 10:10, 2 April 2016 (UTC) | |||
:* Agreed, '''merge'''. ] (]) 04:18, 26 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
:Disagreed. I know '''NSA''' but never heard of '''Juice Plus'''. ] (]) 20:52, 13 October 2016 (UTC) | |||
::Closing, given no consensus for the merge, and uncontested opposition (as per ]). ] (]) 21:04, 18 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
::Re-opening, following request from {{user|Rhode Island Red}}. ] (]) 00:29, 20 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::Weak '''oppose''' on the grounds that NSA had a notable history before their transition to a nutrition-focused company in the 1990s. I was tempted to suggest a merge in the reverse direction, but the Juice Plus brand name seems to have more of a web presence, and they seem to be using the "Juice Plus+ Company" name, even though it doesn't seem that the company has formally changed its name. The NSA name does still seem to be in use, for example hitting the title of a 2016 indexed on PMC. ] (]) 00:40, 20 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::::As background, Juice Plus is not a company name and never was. It is a trademark name for a product. The company that markets it is and always has been National Safety Associates. ] (]) 01:15, 21 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
::::I'm curious as to what was significantly notable about NSA's history prior to Juice Plus. There is a total of one non-JP related reference in the NSA article (#2, with no online link) that refers to the company getting in legal trouble with their water filter sales. The remaining dozen or so references cited in the NSA article all relate to Juice Plus. The company has marketed a single product -- Juice Plus -- for the vast majority of its existence. Strip out JP from NSAs story and we'd be left with a single unlinked reference. Sorry, but I just don't see the rationale for opposition to merging. BTW, thanks for relisting the merger proposal. ] (]) 00:59, 20 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::::{{ping|Rhode Island Red}} As you know, ]. So, the question is as to whether 20 years of selling water filters, air filters, fire-protection equipment; with a further decade of these businesses tailing off, is sufficiently distinct from the Juice Plus line. I'd argue that it is. There is interesting material for expansion, including the companies structure as alleged ],<ref>{{cite web|title=MLM Law - COE v. NATIONAL SAFETY ASSOCIATES, INC. 134 F.R.D. 235 (1991)- Attorney Specializing in Multilevel Marketing and Direct Selling Reese, Poyfair, Richards|url=https://www.mlmlaw.com/library/cases/mlm/feddistrict/ilcoe2.htm|website=www.mlmlaw.com|accessdate=20 January 2018}}</ref> or illegal ], activities that relate to the sale of water filters.<ref>{{cite web|title=MLM Legal|url=http://www.mlmlegal.com/legal-cases/Baldwin_v_National_Safety.php|website=www.mlmlegal.com}}</ref> So, the corporate structure is also of intrinsic interest. ] (]) 11:58, 20 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:The issue is that, based on the sources so far presented, NSAs notability seems to be predicated pretty much solely on JP. What I'm asking for is evidence, in the form of reliable sources, that would support your opposition on the basis that the company is notable for something else. If those sources don't exist, then that would support merging into JP. BTW, the 2 sources you linked to above would not meet ]. ] (]) 19:48, 20 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
::I agree the legal documents don't reach WP:RS, but non-routine newspaper coverage does,<ref>{{cite news|last1=Grady|first1=Bill|last2=Goozner|first2=Merrill|last3=O`Brien|first3=John|title=Case Could Drain A Marketing Pool|url=http://articles.chicagotribune.com/1991-02-19/business/9101160302_1_ponzi-scheme-pyramid-scheme-national-safety-associates|accessdate=20 January 2018|work=Chicago Tribune|date=19 February 1991|language=en}}</ref> as does a book chapter (for example).<ref>{{cite book|last1=Walsh|first1=James|title=You Can't Cheat an Honest Man: How Ponzi Schemes and Pyramid Frauds Work and Why They're More Common Than Ever|date=2009|publisher=Silver Lake Publishing|page=186-7|url=https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=7xSVQEobDdMC}}</ref> ] (]) 20:40, 20 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::The single news article you linked to above referring to NSA pre-JP would not be considered in judging the company's notability as per ]; i.e., the news article (and the book you linked to) refer to a single litigation event. As for the book, I'd take a pretty firm stance that it's also not ] in this context -- or probably any context. So I still don't see convincing evidence that the company is notable for anything more than JP; at least not enough to justify a separate page. If NSA were truly notable as a company, it would have received significant coverage in trade/business/financial articles, etc. There's probably a hundred sources that discuss JP/NSA together and maybe 1 or 2 that refer to NSA for anything else. It would be easy to roll that into the JP article. Otherwise it still strikes me as a needless fork. Have a look at ] and ]. I would argue that they make a pretty airtight case for the current merger proposal. ] (]) 01:11, 21 January 2018 (UTC)]] | |||
::::It is true that it easier to find sources for recent events rather than those from 30-40 years ago, when the company was founded, but that does create an ]. The 1991 episode doesn't appear to be isolated, as there were similar concerns in 1993, which relates to structures established in '86, as already discussed in the article. So the ponzi/pyramid issues does seem meet the test of multiple independent sources required in ]. The ] argument argument is a good point, but the company's notability doesn't rely on the allegedly illegal activity; rather, it contributes to the case, in addition to the wider range of products and as a case study in ]. The company seem to have drifted from there to the use of ], but those franchises seems to small that I wonder what the difference is! Overall, I wouldn't object to a merge; it just wouldn't be my recommendation as it seems there is scope for expansion of the NSA article independent of its most important modern product line. ] (]) 03:01, 21 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:::::Again, this boils down to there only being one or so articles that discuss the company outside the context of JP, demonstrating that the company’s notability is predicated, essentially, on JP solely. This does not seem to be a case of ] as almost all of the articles on NSA relating to JP have spanned more than 2 decades and none are recent (it’s also possible to search news archive for older material but nothing has been offered up in that regard). Everything in the NSA article that does not pertain to JP could be rolled into the JP article in a single paragraph under a sub-heading for NSA. BTW, the company does not engage in franchising. They operate as an MLM, which is distinctly different. I appreciate you rolling back your objection to the merge proposal. I think that’s clearly the right way to go. ] (]) 16:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
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== Rosemary Stanton == | |||
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:Done, thanks. ] (]) 09:13, 12 March 2016 (UTC) | |||
== Statement in the lead == | |||
], the statement in the lead that I replaced, "according to Quackwatch it is a 'colossal waste of money'", although I agree with it, I cringe when I read it as it does not sound encyclopedic at all, ''especially in the lead''. "...as being excessively priced relative to its potential benefits" sounds a lot more neutral to me. If you don't like this change, how would you suggest we change this to make it neutral in POV and tone? ] (]) 17:38, 16 July 2016 (UTC) | |||
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== Franchising == | |||
{{ping|Rhode Island Red}} Starting a new section, as this is distinct from our discussion elsewhere. Regarding Juice Plus sales, they seem to be , but perhaps only for their overseas business? It's interesting that in order to start a franchise your application has to go through a ' Juice Plus+ contact' and you also have a 'Sponsor'; I wonder what renumeration they receive, and hence how close it is to corporate structures in the 80s and 90s? Perhaps I'm now too cynical! Anyway, as far as article content is concerned, is the issuing of franchises something that should be covered in the article? ] (]) 22:09, 21 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
:Interesting. Looks like it is specific to Great Britain, and what they are calling a "franchise" is nothing more than an MLM distributorship. Seems rather misleading. Don't see where there's anything relevant to mine for the article though. ] (]) 14:31, 22 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
::Perhaps not worth adding unless there was a published opinion that pitching as a "franchise" is more socially acceptable than advertising as an MLM distributorship. ] (]) 17:05, 22 January 2018 (UTC) | |||
== Semi-protected edit request on 19 September 2018 == | |||
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'''Please remove''' "Juice Plus+ is a branded line of dietary supplements containing concentrated fruit and vegetable juice extracts fortified with added vitamins and nutrients. It is produced by Natural Alternatives International of San Marcos, California, for National Safety Associates (NSA; Collierville, Tennessee). Introduced in 1993, the supplements are distributed by NSA via multi-level marketing.<br>" | |||
'''Replace with''' "Juice Plus+ is a branded line of whole foods containing 30 different fruits and vegetables grown in North America with no added sugars or preservatives with NSF certification. It is produced by The Juice Plus Company Global Office in Colliervielle, Tennessee (formerly NSA). Introduced in 1993 the products are sold through local distributors in over 20 different countries around the world. While defined as a multi-level marketing company Juice Plus does not ask any employee to hold product, take payment or be on the product themselves in order to sell it to others." | |||
'''Please remove''' "Studies of Juice Plus' effects have generated conflicting and controversial results. Although Juice Plus claims its products' efficacy is backed by research, critics have argued that there is no scientific proof that Juice Plus offers significant health benefits and that deceptive claims are used in the product's marketing information. Many marketing claims made about Juice Plus products are false or misleading" | |||
'''Replace with''' "Juice Plus is the most thoroughly researched brand name product in the world. Studies have proven Juice Plus does contain certain benefits, it is only on actually reading the studies located on their website from start to finish do you get the whole story behind the research done. Juice Plus is clinically proven to improve skin circulation (please link https://www.karger.com/Article/Abstract/330521), combat oxidative stress (please link https://www.cambridge.org/core/journals/british-journal-of-nutrition/article/supplementation-with-a-juice-powder-concentrate-and-exercise-decrease-oxidation-and-inflammation-and-improve-the-microcirculation-in-obese-women-randomised-controlled-trial-data/451DF71104D867B79B1AB87E6326943A) and a host of other positive changes. All of these studies are available for public viewing on their website in entirety for skeptics and believers alike to peruse." ] (]) 18:13, 19 September 2018 (UTC) | |||
:Th edits you have suggested are blatant ]. Misplaced Pages is not a forum for product promotion and the likelihood of whitewashing the article as suggested is nil. ] (]) 19:47, 19 September 2018 (UTC) | |||
== Outdated Information == | |||
A lot of this information seems pretty outdated, considering the current website/company offerings. Is there updated advertising/research/etc? ] (]) 23:53, 14 October 2022 (UTC) | |||
== Semi-protected edit request on 9 February 2023 == | |||
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1. Request to add the following content due to research mention of combined total studies from recent and previous years: | |||
"About 41 leading hospitals and universities across the globe have conducted Juice Plus clinical studies." | |||
before the following paragraph in the research section: | |||
''National Safety Associates, the owner of Juice Plus, claim that it is "the next best thing to eating fruits and vegetables", containing the "nutritional essence of 17 different fruits, vegetables, and grains" with key phytonutrients and that the product is absorbed by the body, reduces oxidative stress, promotes cardiovascular wellness, supports a healthy immune system, and helps protect DNA.'' | |||
2. Request to add the following content due to clinical study that suggests an increase in omega-3 index for Juice Plus consumers: | |||
"Furthermore, studies have found that individuals taking Juice Plus along with a healthy diet can show an increase in red blood cells’ omega-3 index. " | |||
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''National Safety Associates, the owner of Juice Plus, claim that it is "the next best thing to eating fruits and vegetables", containing the "nutritional essence of 17 different fruits, vegetables, and grains" with key phytonutrients and that the product is absorbed by the body, reduces oxidative stress, promotes cardiovascular wellness, supports a healthy immune system, and helps protect DNA.'' ] (]) 20:04, 9 February 2023 (UTC) | |||
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Balance??
I've heard a lot of great things about this product, backed by some very prestegious institutions, yet none of that appears in this article. It appears to be very one sided and biased. Can we at least see a balanced report of this product? Including, for example, studies like that conducted at the Medical University of Vienna, (http://www.jacn.org/cgi/content/full/23/3/205) which concluded that supplementation with mixed fruit and vegetable juice concentrates effectively increased plasma levels of important antioxidant nutrients and folate? Most of this article seems like it's straight from the "opinion" section of a periodical than based in fact. Jala7777 (talk) 22:46, 2 May 2011 (UTC)jala7777
- We use review articles not primary research typically. --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:03, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
- On the contrary, a research article directly assessing the product is a gold standard type of source, cited correctly. --Icerat (talk) 01:29, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Please see WP:MEDRS review articles are required to support the benefits of a treatment. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 01:31, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Don't see the problem (well, apart from the fact that it contradicts policy at one point!) it says "edits that rely on primary sources should only describe the conclusions of the source, and should describe these findings clearly so the edit can be checked by editors with no specialist knowledge". As long as it's straightforward and no WP:SYNTH a primary source is perfectly acceptable. --Icerat (talk) 01:36, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- You could ask for a second option over at WT:MED. The study in question discusses no hard end points that people care about. Thus no health claims can be made using it. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 01:41, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- As Jala7777 stated it, there was no health claim, merely a claim about increased plasma levels. Not our job to decide if "people care about" it. --Icerat (talk) 02:02, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- You could ask for a second option over at WT:MED. The study in question discusses no hard end points that people care about. Thus no health claims can be made using it. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 01:41, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Don't see the problem (well, apart from the fact that it contradicts policy at one point!) it says "edits that rely on primary sources should only describe the conclusions of the source, and should describe these findings clearly so the edit can be checked by editors with no specialist knowledge". As long as it's straightforward and no WP:SYNTH a primary source is perfectly acceptable. --Icerat (talk) 01:36, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- We use review articles not primary research typically. --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:03, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
It appears there's been some serious POV editing problems on this article. I've been reading for example the "Memorial Sloan-Kettering" reference and it is used numerous times in the article to support critical statements of JP, but never once used to support positive claims, which the source has a number of. That's some serious cherry picking going on. --Icerat (talk) 04:26, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Primary studies are generally not notable ( so yes we do care ). The reason why the statements are critical of JP is that the source is critical.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 04:29, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Notability of a source is not an issue on WP, whether they are WP:RS and WP:V is the primary concern. Your second statement avoids the point. Yes, the source reports on critical studies of JuicePlus, and it's used in the article to support critical comments. That's fine. The thing is the source also reports on supportive studies of JuicePlus. It is never once used in the article as a source for supportive studies. There's no basis I can see for that and it's clearly not WP:NPOV editing to do so. --Icerat (talk) 04:38, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Primary studies are generally not notable ( so yes we do care ). The reason why the statements are critical of JP is that the source is critical.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 04:29, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
mlm watch is a subdivision of quackwatch which is a non profit corporation. Thus it is not self published but published by a corporation. The site also states "This site complies with the HONcode standard for trustworthy healt information." Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 01:32, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Exactly Jmh. Shot info (talk) 06:52, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Misplaced Pages:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_89#Princeton_University.27s_website_and_Diabetes.2C_Obesity_and_Metabolism_journal shows the issues that rise with WP:MEDRS; it simply has a higher bar then WP:RS does.--BruceGrubb (talk) 07:37, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- But MEDRS isn't applicable here. This product is a supplement, not a drug. The fact that clinical trials are performed on a supplement doesn't make it into a drug. If studies suggest that it has positive effects on some aspects of health, e.g. circulation, such results don't make it into a drug. Forget MEDRS, it's irrelevant.
- As for Quackwatch, even Barrett slips into the first person when explaining who runs and funds Quackwatch:
- Misplaced Pages:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_89#Princeton_University.27s_website_and_Diabetes.2C_Obesity_and_Metabolism_journal shows the issues that rise with WP:MEDRS; it simply has a higher bar then WP:RS does.--BruceGrubb (talk) 07:37, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I have no financial tie to any commercial or industrial organization.
- My viewpoints are not for hire. Even if they were, none of my imaginary funders would actually have a reason to hire me.
- Standard medicine and "alternative medicine" do not actually compete for patient dollars. Well-designed studies have shown that most "alternative" methods are used in addition to—rather than instead of—standard methods.
- The total cost of operating our many Web sites is approximately $7,000 per year. If donations fall below what is needed, the rest comes out of my pocket.
- So it has no paid employees and Barrett pays for it out of his own pocket if donations dry up. Seems like a one-man-band, doesn't it. Maybe he has tax advantages from incorporating it, but it remains his project and it is obvious that he publishes it.
- Oh yes, one other thing: This site (Misplaced Pages) complies with the HONcode standard for trustworthy health information. So now we know. Does that make it so? I don't think so.--TraceyR (talk) 08:51, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Tracey, MEDRS is applicable any time health claims are made, whether it's a drug or a supplement or a breathing technique. Barrett is highly identified with Quackwatch and I'm not persuaded by separating the two entities further in our treatment. Though Quackwatch receives support from many donors, the vast majority of the work has always been one man. That's neither a mark for or against Quackwatch, I just think it cautions against treating the organization like a separate corporation rather than a small, dedicated group group headed by a single, opinionated expert. Ocaasi 14:09, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Oh yes, one other thing: This site (Misplaced Pages) complies with the HONcode standard for trustworthy health information. So now we know. Does that make it so? I don't think so.--TraceyR (talk) 08:51, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
I would suggest reading the FDA's Overview of Dietary Supplements followed by Center for Food Safety and Applied Nutrition 2003 ("FDA will continue to identify and take appropriate enforcement actions against fraudulently marketed dietary supplement products that make unsubstantiated medical claims in their labeling."), and Criminal Investigations, November 22, 2010: Co-conspirators Sentenced in $11.9 Million Dietary Supplement Fraud Scheme ("Under federal law, a dietary supplement may not claim to treat, cure or prevent a specific disease or class of diseases.")--BruceGrubb (talk) 06:04, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- BruceGrubb: What has this to do with this article? Are you suggesting that this product is a "fraudulently marketed dietary supplement product" that makes "unsubstantiated medical claims in its labeling" or that it "claims to treat, cure or prevent a specific disease or class of diseases"? Has the FDA taken action against the makers of Juice Plus? None of the links you provide would support such claims. Please explain. Thanks. --TraceyR (talk) 08:55, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- You stated "But MEDRS isn't applicable here. This product is a supplement, not a drug." These quotes from the FDA shows that regarding medical claims in the eyes of the FDA it does not matter--if it makes a medical claim it falls under their jurisdiction even if what is involved is neither a food or a drug (as shown by Medical Claims on Labeling and Promotional Materials of Infant Mattresses and Infant Positioners Distributed in the United States).
- The FDA has a very simple definition of a medical claim: "A statement on labeling that declares or implies that the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease." In addition to drugs this also covers medical devices and supplements. Logically anything that would fall under the FDA's definition would fall under WP:MEDRS.--BruceGrubb (talk) 10:41, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the clarification. I'm no gambler, but I am fairly certain that if there were any health claims on the product labelling, this fact would have been mentioned somewhere in the article. Assuming therefore that this is not the case, I'm not convinced of the relevance of the links you provided. Of course supplements come under FDA control because they are classed as foods, but if no claims are made that "the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease" then surely MEDRS doesn't apply. --TraceyR (talk) 12:46, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- This product lived and died by the claim that it would improve health and wellness dramatically. I'm not an enemy of alternative medicine (I took Juice Plus in 2005), but the assertion that Juice Plus' nutritional evangelism didn't rise to the level of health or medical claims seems a real stretch to me. Even if Juice Plus didn't make such claims, the product was researched for its medical efficacy anyway, so MEDRS applies anywhere that took place, including any studies Juice Plus conducted, of which the article reviews several. Even the JPCRF's mission suggests "improved nutrition leads to healthier lifestyle and overall better health", which is a medical claim. Although in alt-med world, health and nutrition are not medicine, in medical-world, they are. You're confusing a distinction between nutrition and drugs that modern medicine--and hence our guidelines--simply does not make. Chemicals enter the bloodstream and are utilized or excreted. The results, good or bad, are medical. Ocaasi 13:08, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not sure how to reply to this without 'someone' jumping in and accusing me of 'wikilawyering' or some such term, but here goes: We're talking about two different things here. The first point is about claims made by Juice Plus about the product, which, of course, would fall under the FDA's jurisdiction. Those are what are given above as reasons for MEDRS being invoked here, i.e. if the FDA regards it as making health claims, MEDRS is relevant. Surely the fact that a university somewhere performs a study, into e.g. bioavailability, doesn't automatically bring a product under the FDA's jurisdiction - it's a health claim that would do that (see above). The second point is about what is in the article. You say (in an edit summary) that the article is full of health claims; if by "health claims" you mean the reporting of the results of clinical studies, these are not claims but results. The distinction is important, since the results are not controlled by the company but are the objective assessments of those who conduct the studies, reviewed by the journals which publish them; claims (were there to be any) would come from the company. If explicit claims were made in the article which were not made by the company, then these would (long ago) have been deleted, I'm sure. There's a difference between "a statement on labeling that declares or implies that the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease" and a claim that a product will "improve health and wellness dramatically" (was such a claim made by the company?). The statement that "improved nutrition leads to healthier lifestyle and overall better health" is not about the product but is a truism about nutrition in general; is it a medical claim? Hardly. Even if it were, it 's about improved nutrition, not Juice Plus. Would apples fall under the FDA's drug rules (and therefore MEDRS) if someone were to claim (heaven forbid) that eating an apple a day would keep the doctor away? --TraceyR (talk) 13:51, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- WP:MEDRS applies to "biomedical information in articles". There is certainly an ample amount of that in the article. I can see how editors would be concerned about MEDRS in this case because a lot of the research discussed is from primary sources. I realize that primary sources in such cases can be problematic and that they must be presented cautiously, particularly in cases where the research is company-sponsored because such studies are often guilty of cherrypicking and overstatement of the significance of the results. For example, a company might publish a test tube study on isolated cells and then have a bold overstatement in the conclusions along the lines of "...and our results suggest that product x may be useful in stopping cancer progression". When I went through the JP research, I was careful to make sure that the data were represented accurately and that no such overstatements were included. Nonetheless, it's still problematic because it is primary research. We could instead simply rely on what third-party sources have said about the research -- that would be highly unflattering for JP because such commentary has been universally negative. Still, it's an option. I'm curious to hear what those who aren't hawking JP have to say about this.
- I'm not sure how to reply to this without 'someone' jumping in and accusing me of 'wikilawyering' or some such term, but here goes: We're talking about two different things here. The first point is about claims made by Juice Plus about the product, which, of course, would fall under the FDA's jurisdiction. Those are what are given above as reasons for MEDRS being invoked here, i.e. if the FDA regards it as making health claims, MEDRS is relevant. Surely the fact that a university somewhere performs a study, into e.g. bioavailability, doesn't automatically bring a product under the FDA's jurisdiction - it's a health claim that would do that (see above). The second point is about what is in the article. You say (in an edit summary) that the article is full of health claims; if by "health claims" you mean the reporting of the results of clinical studies, these are not claims but results. The distinction is important, since the results are not controlled by the company but are the objective assessments of those who conduct the studies, reviewed by the journals which publish them; claims (were there to be any) would come from the company. If explicit claims were made in the article which were not made by the company, then these would (long ago) have been deleted, I'm sure. There's a difference between "a statement on labeling that declares or implies that the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease" and a claim that a product will "improve health and wellness dramatically" (was such a claim made by the company?). The statement that "improved nutrition leads to healthier lifestyle and overall better health" is not about the product but is a truism about nutrition in general; is it a medical claim? Hardly. Even if it were, it 's about improved nutrition, not Juice Plus. Would apples fall under the FDA's drug rules (and therefore MEDRS) if someone were to claim (heaven forbid) that eating an apple a day would keep the doctor away? --TraceyR (talk) 13:51, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- This product lived and died by the claim that it would improve health and wellness dramatically. I'm not an enemy of alternative medicine (I took Juice Plus in 2005), but the assertion that Juice Plus' nutritional evangelism didn't rise to the level of health or medical claims seems a real stretch to me. Even if Juice Plus didn't make such claims, the product was researched for its medical efficacy anyway, so MEDRS applies anywhere that took place, including any studies Juice Plus conducted, of which the article reviews several. Even the JPCRF's mission suggests "improved nutrition leads to healthier lifestyle and overall better health", which is a medical claim. Although in alt-med world, health and nutrition are not medicine, in medical-world, they are. You're confusing a distinction between nutrition and drugs that modern medicine--and hence our guidelines--simply does not make. Chemicals enter the bloodstream and are utilized or excreted. The results, good or bad, are medical. Ocaasi 13:08, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the clarification. I'm no gambler, but I am fairly certain that if there were any health claims on the product labelling, this fact would have been mentioned somewhere in the article. Assuming therefore that this is not the case, I'm not convinced of the relevance of the links you provided. Of course supplements come under FDA control because they are classed as foods, but if no claims are made that "the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease" then surely MEDRS doesn't apply. --TraceyR (talk) 12:46, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- The FDA has a very simple definition of a medical claim: "A statement on labeling that declares or implies that the product will heal, lessen, manage, or prevent disease." In addition to drugs this also covers medical devices and supplements. Logically anything that would fall under the FDA's definition would fall under WP:MEDRS.--BruceGrubb (talk) 10:41, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- As for medical "claims", Juice Plus has a long history of making them. The company has disseminated such claims about JP prevention and treating cancer via their key spokespersons (e.g. Jim Sears, Susan Silberstein) and even the chair at Sloan-Kettering (Cassileth) commented that "aggressively promoted to cancer patients based on claims of antioxidant effects". Then there's also the issue about the claim that the products are "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables". That misleading claim has been the cause of considerable consternation, as indicated by the Better Business Bureau,, CSPI and Australia's TGA (and yet suprisingly the company continues to use it). Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:47, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Some more interesting (but incorrect) assertions, e.g. (1) that the company publishes the results of studies. This is so obviously incorrect that it is a shame that it needs to be stated explicitly: the studies are published by the journals which accept them for publication, not by Juice Plus. The same applies (2) to the statement about cherry-picking, of course: the results are published, whether the results are positive or not. This is stated in the article in an edit reinstated by Rhode Island Red today, so there's no excuse for not knowing this fact (the reason it was ignored was probably that it contradicted his cherry-picking assertion). Another statement is (3) that primary sources are problematic: not so. There are WP guidelines indicating how to use them (already mentioned above). No problem there either. Another error (4) is to assert that Sears et al are company spokespersons; of course you know that they are not employed by the company. However they do recommend and do make speeches in support of the products, presumably because they think that the products are useful. Now (5) about that claim that Juice Plus is "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables": is this misleading? If so, in what way? It's no good to say "I don't like it, so I'll say that it is misleading". If it is misleading (and indeed "the cause of considerable consternation" - wow!) to make this claim, then something else must be the next best thing instead. If so, do the world a favour, Rhode Island Red: tell us what is? --TraceyR (talk) 17:43, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- That was a non-rebuttal and did not pertain to the comment about MEDRS. As for primary sources, they can indeed by problematic as outlined in WP:RS and WP:MEDRS. As for the banal indictment about "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables" being an "I don't like it" argument on my part, well that's just silly. I cited three reliable third party sources that criticized JP specifically as a result of that claim. If there is any fingerpointing to be done, it can be ponited at the BBB, CSPI, and Australia's TGA; but it will be a waste of time. Rhode Island Red (talk) 19:32, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- OK, the sequence has been established: (1) you throw in loads of irrelevant, unsubstantiated and/or incorrect statements (2) I and/or others point out some of your errors and (3) you say that it's all irrelevant because it wasn't about MEDRS anyway. Brilliant, you may think, but why spout all that irrelevant rubbish in the first place? Stick to the subject and progress may eventually be made. But I'm not holding my breath - I've experienced this before. I'll just wait for you to overstep the mark (again) and get banned for 6 months (again). Aah, the very thought stimulates endorphine excretion! ---TraceyR (talk) 21:23, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- I had wondered why you were pursuing WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT while maintaining WP:CPUSH—you have just revealed your plan. However there are more people watching this article than Rhode Island Red and your POV is contrary to consensus. Attempts to promote or whitewash products on Misplaced Pages will not succeed. Johnuniq (talk) 23:02, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- More irrelevant POV comment. Amazing! But by all means keep on watching if it does things for you. --TraceyR (talk) 23:28, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- I had wondered why you were pursuing WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT while maintaining WP:CPUSH—you have just revealed your plan. However there are more people watching this article than Rhode Island Red and your POV is contrary to consensus. Attempts to promote or whitewash products on Misplaced Pages will not succeed. Johnuniq (talk) 23:02, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- OK, the sequence has been established: (1) you throw in loads of irrelevant, unsubstantiated and/or incorrect statements (2) I and/or others point out some of your errors and (3) you say that it's all irrelevant because it wasn't about MEDRS anyway. Brilliant, you may think, but why spout all that irrelevant rubbish in the first place? Stick to the subject and progress may eventually be made. But I'm not holding my breath - I've experienced this before. I'll just wait for you to overstep the mark (again) and get banned for 6 months (again). Aah, the very thought stimulates endorphine excretion! ---TraceyR (talk) 21:23, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- That was a non-rebuttal and did not pertain to the comment about MEDRS. As for primary sources, they can indeed by problematic as outlined in WP:RS and WP:MEDRS. As for the banal indictment about "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables" being an "I don't like it" argument on my part, well that's just silly. I cited three reliable third party sources that criticized JP specifically as a result of that claim. If there is any fingerpointing to be done, it can be ponited at the BBB, CSPI, and Australia's TGA; but it will be a waste of time. Rhode Island Red (talk) 19:32, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Some more interesting (but incorrect) assertions, e.g. (1) that the company publishes the results of studies. This is so obviously incorrect that it is a shame that it needs to be stated explicitly: the studies are published by the journals which accept them for publication, not by Juice Plus. The same applies (2) to the statement about cherry-picking, of course: the results are published, whether the results are positive or not. This is stated in the article in an edit reinstated by Rhode Island Red today, so there's no excuse for not knowing this fact (the reason it was ignored was probably that it contradicted his cherry-picking assertion). Another statement is (3) that primary sources are problematic: not so. There are WP guidelines indicating how to use them (already mentioned above). No problem there either. Another error (4) is to assert that Sears et al are company spokespersons; of course you know that they are not employed by the company. However they do recommend and do make speeches in support of the products, presumably because they think that the products are useful. Now (5) about that claim that Juice Plus is "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables": is this misleading? If so, in what way? It's no good to say "I don't like it, so I'll say that it is misleading". If it is misleading (and indeed "the cause of considerable consternation" - wow!) to make this claim, then something else must be the next best thing instead. If so, do the world a favour, Rhode Island Red: tell us what is? --TraceyR (talk) 17:43, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- As for medical "claims", Juice Plus has a long history of making them. The company has disseminated such claims about JP prevention and treating cancer via their key spokespersons (e.g. Jim Sears, Susan Silberstein) and even the chair at Sloan-Kettering (Cassileth) commented that "aggressively promoted to cancer patients based on claims of antioxidant effects". Then there's also the issue about the claim that the products are "the next best thing to fruits and vegetables". That misleading claim has been the cause of considerable consternation, as indicated by the Better Business Bureau,, CSPI and Australia's TGA (and yet suprisingly the company continues to use it). Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:47, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
TraceyR I advise you to immediately tone down the bombast and personal attacks. I don’t plan to tolerate a resurgence of this behavior from you yet again. You have been violating WP:COI and POV pushing on this article for years and it’s been tolerated for far too long. Incidentally, I was never banned; I was blocked, as you well know, for a matter related to inadvertently outing one of your fellow Juice Plus distributors, who had likewise terrorized this article (and made repeated personal attacks against me) in violation of WP:COI for years. I won’t make the mistake a second time. If you continue along this line of conduct, I will report the matter privately to WP admin. I have a right to edit in peace without your constant badgering and harassment. Rhode Island Red (talk) 01:59, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Greetings Rhode Island Red, Doc James, et al., From what I'm reading throughout this entire discourse, it doesn't appear you're any more qualified to be editing this article than TraceyR is. I realize it's difficult to not form an opinion about JP, but you do seem to lack the skills to write about it objectively. You obviously dislike the product on a personal level, and it shows quite clearly in the article (you mention OJ Simpson but not Bear Grylls--that doesn't seem like a minor slip-up). Would you want Charles Manson as presiding judge over a murder case? Likewise, one who has a personal vendetta against JP is not capable of writing a neutral article about it.
- Bringing this back around to the original point of this section, this article is indeed unbalanced. No matter how much you sling the WP:MEDRS excuse, it's apparent you just don't want to present a balanced view. There's enough information out there, even presented on this talk page, that you could.
- For the rest of us who are not so passionate either way about the product, please re-write this article with a balanced view.
- Jubican (talk) 06:28, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
Merge
I propose this article and the National Safety Associates article should be merged, probably into this article since JuicePlus seems to be the more notable name and the one the company promotes itself under these days. Makes little sense to have both --Icerat (talk) 04:03, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
Use of +
Some mentions of Juice Plus include the + after the name and others don't. If they're the same product they should be the same. Which one is correct? Ocaasi 01:21, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I just had a brief look at the home page and the "+" is used consistently. It appears to be part of the registered name (see the browser header), so ideally the article should have the "+" too. --TraceyR (talk) 14:42, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- From WP:MOSTM: "Avoid using special characters that are not pronounced, are included purely for decoration, or simply substitute for English words (e.g., ♥ used for "love"). In the article about a trademark, it is acceptable to use decorative characters the first time the trademark appears, but thereafter, an alternative that follows the standard rules of punctuation should be used". Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:08, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
Studies "funded" - to what extent?
The article creates the impression that the peer-reviewed studies were paid for in full by NSA, the implication being that this is why the results were favorable. This might be deemed a slur on the reputation of the scientists involved, so ought care to be taken with the wording to avoid legal problems for WP? It would be useful to get information about the degree to which the studies were funded by NSA and whether they were independent studies, i.e. whether the company exerted any sort of pressure on the scientists. --TraceyR (talk) 21:26, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
- What do the sources say? If the Misplaced Pages article agrees with the sources then there is probably little legal recource (per Barrett v. Rosenthal). Of course if the article performs some editorialising, then then is original research. From my reading and looking at a couple (not all) of the provided sources, I would say that you cannot get much simplier than: "Of the published peer-reviewed studies on Juice Plus products, the majority were funded and/or authored by the manufacturer, Natural Alternatives International (NAI); or the main distributor, NSA.; two were funded by individual Juice Plus distributors; and one was conducted independently.". However perhaps the term "funded" could be amended to "fully or partly funded"?
- Also on an aside, why does that section have a tag on it? Reading through the section it appears it's only issue is that it's overlinked. Shot info (talk) 07:42, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the response. Yes, my concern is that the impression is created that NSA gets the results it pays for. Something along the lines you suggest would mitigate against readers getting that impression. It certainly seems very unlikely that any scientists whose professional ingerity has been thus smeared would stand much chance of legal redress, but that makes it all the more important for WP to deal fairly with them. There is a recently published study which contains a statement specifically denying that NSA had any opportunity to influence the results (perhaps they had read this article and wanted to clarify the issue). Perhaps there are others such statements in other studies. The fact that NSA refers to the studies as "independent" indicates that no influence is brought to bear. I'll dig out the recent study statement and post it here some time. --TraceyR (talk) 11:44, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- Stephanie Roll et al.: Reduction of common cold symptoms by encapsulated juice powder concentrate of fruits and vegetables: a randomised, double-blind, placebo-controlled trial. In: Br J Nutr. 2010 Aug 23: 1-5. DOI:10.1017/S000711451000317X
- Mittel kann Ausgaben für Medikamente langfristig senken / Remedy can reduce expenditures on medications in the long term.
- "Die Neutralität der Studie wurde dadurch gewährleistet, dass dem Hersteller des Präparats als Sponsor der Studie keine Studiendaten übermittelt wurden und dass dieser auch nicht an der Interpretation der Studienergebnisse beteiligt war." Charité University Clinic, Berlin
- "The neutrality of the study was ensured by the fact that as a sponsor of the study, no study data were transmitted to the manufacturer of the preparation and they were also not involved in the interpretation of the study results." Cambridge University Press Office
- It would be interesting to know whether the authors of other studies into Juice Plus had taken such care to ensure that their results were treated fairly and their reputations not besmirched. Can anyone help here?--TraceyR (talk) 12:06, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- Study funding information in itself is neutral. Funding does not imply that the grantor directly influenced the results; such information is simply reported as an SOP. As an interesting aside, the article by Canham discusses how NSA pulled its name off a study that it funded becuase the results were unfavorable: "Juice Plus+ decided to remove its name from the research after its anti-oxidant supplement, in the form of a gummy bear, had no effect on healthy children. The company approached the University of Utah's Division of Foods and Nutrition with the idea for the study and $30,000 to pay for the research. It hoped the supplement would reduce the level of oxidative stress in children, but the results showed otherwise." Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:19, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- It would be interesting to know whether the authors of other studies into Juice Plus had taken such care to ensure that their results were treated fairly and their reputations not besmirched. Can anyone help here?--TraceyR (talk) 12:06, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- I believe that this detail (Canham) has already been added to the article. What is the point in bringing it up here again?
- The information about the Charité study is not mentioned yet, however. --TraceyR (talk) 21:51, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
Tracey - can you post your proposed changes to how you would like the section to appear here, so that editors can comment? Shot info (talk) 22:20, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- Investigators are required to give Information about affiliations, and grants from sponsors have to be mentioned (but not the amount). The article wording must therefore make it clear that the sponsor's funding need not cover the total cost. How about "Of the published peer-reviewed studies on Juice Plus products, the majority were funded to some extent by grants from the manufacturer ... or the main distributor ...". To say "in part or in full" would imply that there is at least one source stating that a sponsor bore the full cost of a study. We don't know that.
- The mention of authorship needs to make it clear that John Wise was the lead author of one (or two?) of the early pilot studies performed by NAI itself; he is mentioned as co-author on approx. 50% of the more recent studies, which were all done by universities etc. elsewhere.
- One way of reducing the ugly over-citation would be to have a table of the studies which would include this sort of information. A source for such a table can be found here.--TraceyR (talk) 10:49, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- There's a list of NAI's "Sponsored Clinical Research Published in Peer-Reviewed Scientific Journals and Presented at Scientific Conferences" here. --TraceyR (talk) 11:26, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- Ok, so you've IDed what you think are the problems - now, what do you want the pertinent section actually changed to. I've noticed that there is very little discussion on actually editing the article on this talkpage. So I'm not interested in discussing any of the "issues", I'm only interested in seeing what you propose to actually change the article to. Until then, there is very little discussion to actually be entered into. Shot info (talk) 11:47, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- The NAI document cited above is innacurate and unreliable. I looked up two Juice Plus studies (Bloomer et al 2006; Nantz et al 2006) from the list of studies which NAI says they sponsored and in fact the articles themselves list the funding support as coming from NSA, not NAI (and in the case of Nantz's study, NAI spelled her name wrong -- i.e., Nance). So in other words, there are is a serious problem with that source. I would deem it to be essentialy useless. Rhode Island Red (talk) 14:56, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- Ok, so you've IDed what you think are the problems - now, what do you want the pertinent section actually changed to. I've noticed that there is very little discussion on actually editing the article on this talkpage. So I'm not interested in discussing any of the "issues", I'm only interested in seeing what you propose to actually change the article to. Until then, there is very little discussion to actually be entered into. Shot info (talk) 11:47, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- There's a list of NAI's "Sponsored Clinical Research Published in Peer-Reviewed Scientific Journals and Presented at Scientific Conferences" here. --TraceyR (talk) 11:26, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Section "Conflicts of interest in studies"
Which type of "conflict of interest" is supposed to be highlighted here - the fact that J.Wise was employed by NAI and is named as a co-author of several studies? If so, what is the relevance of the paragraph about USAI to "Conflicts of interest in studies"? --TraceyR (talk) 22:02, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- Again, can you propose the changes you would like to see? Shot info (talk) 22:21, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
- That's easy: just remove the section altogether. The whole USAI paragraph is irrelevant to this article and the information about John Wise in no way notable enough to warrant a section of its own. This information could be included elsewhere in the article. --TraceyR (talk) 10:23, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- Nah not a complete whitewash, but I agree with reducing it down to Juice Plus related bits. ie/
- NSAs Juice Plus website cites various research articles in support of the company's marketing claims about the biological effects of Juice Plus, maintaining that these “studies were conducted by independent researchers” at various universities. Several of the studies were authored by John A. Wise and Morin. Both these authors have been criticised by consumer health advocate and alternative medicine critic Stephen Barrett of MLM Watch .
- Incidently it's not out of the ordinary in Misplaced Pages for information tangentially related to the subject to be included in the subject's article because there isn't a "home" for it yet. Shot info (talk) 10:33, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- I suggest that the correct term for Wise and Morin is "co-authored" (see recent entry here); Wise was lead author on one study only, published in 1996. ...Two early studies were co-authored by John A. Wise, Morin and others , two other studies by Wise ... As for Barrett, let's not get into that one again. He's a self-publishing
self-publicistretired psychiatrist, for heaven's sake, with a bee in his bonnet about all things MLM and 'natural'. He's certainly not neutral! - It is normal for a manufacturer (e.g. a pharmaceutical company) to conduct pilot studies into new products. To highlight this with a section title as being a "conflict of interest" in unusual.
- It's not about whitewashing but article neutrality (i.e. colourless rather than white). The mention of USAI is just "blackwash" in this article. It (USAI) should be mentioned in the article about John Wise, of course, which this article links to anyway. USAI has its own article too, so the USAI/Wise stuff has a good home. --TraceyR (talk) 11:21, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- Please post what you want the article changed too rather than going into things that you brought up but then don't want to go into. BTW, you might want to redact your statement above - BLP applies. Shot info (talk) 11:26, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- The argument about whether Wise/Morin were co-authors or lead authors is irrelevant in the context of a discussion about company-influence in the research and COI. In that context, where these authors appear in the author list is not important; it's only important that a company executive (and insider stockholder in the case of Wise) was an author at all. And just for the record, Wise was an author on 6 of the JP studies, not two as stated above. The article only listed 4 of them, but I just updated it to show all 6. Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:21, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- Please post what you want the article changed too rather than going into things that you brought up but then don't want to go into. BTW, you might want to redact your statement above - BLP applies. Shot info (talk) 11:26, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
- I suggest that the correct term for Wise and Morin is "co-authored" (see recent entry here); Wise was lead author on one study only, published in 1996. ...Two early studies were co-authored by John A. Wise, Morin and others , two other studies by Wise ... As for Barrett, let's not get into that one again. He's a self-publishing
Poorly Written
As an avid WP reader, I read through this article today and was very disappointed with how it's written, and that no WP writers have done anything about it. The writer is clearly biased based on these observations:
1) Comments on the studies of each section opens with a statement of doubt. However, the product has plenty of well-documented and neutral studies available which were not highlighted.
2) The whole feel of the article is aimed at swaying the reader to form a negative opinion. For an encyclopedia, that's a huge no-no. Take a look at the article on Adolf Hitler. While few, if any, consider the man to be helpful to the human race, the article is written quite neutrally. This article on Juice Plus, however, appears to be written by someone who is skeptical of the product, rather than simply presenting the facts.
3) I feel like I've been subtly-gossiped to. How did this article get through QC?
4) OJ Simpson reference is quite negative. Yet no mentioned of Bear Grylls.
This article needs to be completely re-written by someone who is not emotional either way about the product. It's distastefully written and lacks mature authoring.
I am not a writer, so I appeal to someone who is: please re-write this article, and write it encyclopedically. I would be glad to offer my assistance in information gathering.
Jubican (talk) 03:04, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Better than if written as an infomercial as there is less chance of harm. There is no good research on this product is the issue. Thus it is not possible to display it in a positive light. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Hi Doc James, I'm afraid you're wrong. First, "Positive" is not better than "negative". It's just as irresponsible, as it's not fact-based, and therefore not encyclopedic. The article should be deleted if no one is going to write it correctly. Second, unbiased evidence of "anti-product" research is severely lacking. As we've seen in our research labs, if one sets out to prove the sky is purple, they'll somehow be able to prove it. The JuicePlus product has been reviewed positively in prestigious medical and nutrition journals. But the negative research does not appear to have been performed by any organization who is trustworthy to present the facts. For most of these organizations, the goal is to debunk the product, so of course their findings must match their goal in order to get their money (they're typically hired by a competitor).
- Quite frankly, I'm not interested in someone's opinion on the product...good or bad. If the article needs to be shrunk down to 2 paragraphs, then so be it. But let's aim to provide an opinion-free article that is consistent with the goals of Misplaced Pages.
- Jubican (talk) 04:54, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- I have to ask just what non fact-based information is in this article? Also I might add that WP:PRIMARY per Misplaced Pages:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_89#Princeton_University.27s_website_and_Diabetes.2C_Obesity_and_Metabolism_journal limits just how we can use such sources. Heck, one of my problems with the Weston Price biography is that two articles that show a possible change in attitude by Weston Price are primary sources (Journal American Medical Association and Paul B. Hoeber, Inc; Medical Book Department of Harper & Brothers) with (so far) no secondary sources for interpretation. Like it or not there are major limits on how you can use primary sources in wikipedia.
- There are practical reasons for this. For example the conclusions of K. Linde, N. Clausius, G. Ramirez, et al., "Are the Clinical Effects of Homoeopathy Placebo Effects? A Meta-analysis of Placebo-Controlled Trials," Lancet, September 20, 1997, 350:834-843. regarding Homoeopathy was NOT supported by later studies () and the quality of the 1997 study was questioned in Linde, K, et al. Impact of study quality on outcome in placebo-controlled trials of homeopathy. J Clin Epidemiol. 1999 Jul;52(7):631-6; Ernst E, et al. Meta -analysis of homoeopathy trials. Lancet. 1998 Jan 31;351(9099):366) and shown to be seriously flawed in the August 27, 2005 issue of Lancet.
- Focal infection theory is another example as even at the height of the tooth and tonsil extraction binge where were serious questions regarding the quality of the supportive studies.--BruceGrubb (talk) 07:10, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Hi BruceGrubb--that's a good (and constructive) point. However, for this article, the author clearly hand-selected facts to support his/her own opinion. While this article doesn't have overtly-stated opinions, the writer did purposely include negative research while purposely excluding the positive research performed by well-known and trusted organizations (). Also, as I mentioned previously, the celebrity endorsement section is a joke. The end result is an expression of the writer's opinion by manipulating factual information.
- I'm not suggesting that the negative portions of the article be removed simply because they're negative. I am suggesting that the article be balanced and unbiased. There's plenty of research to support both positive and negative positions. For those who are familiar with both sides of the argument, this article is borderline inflammatory and is not neutral.
- Let me put it this way. Imagine removing all mention of the Holocaust from Adolf Hitler's article, and only mentioning what wonderful changes he brought about to Germany. No opinions, just facts. Yet, the reader would be left with the impression that Hitler was a great fellow. You see? Stated opinions aren't required in order to get your opinion across. That is the problem with this article.
- Jubican (talk) 05:40, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
Godwin's law aside this has to be the most ridiculous thing I have read in a long time as you are comparing apples to oranges. A better example would be the full scale migraine that is the Jesus myth theory where despite the article acknowledging the fact there is no one definition for the term much of the counter argument presented is based on the most extreme versions of the concept while more moderate versions like that of John Remsburg get lost in the shuffle. Right now product research section is so full of primary material that I doubt that many laymen can even understand it.--BruceGrubb (talk) 07:11, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Bruce Grubb is missing Jubican's point here, which is that being selective in what is mentioned and what is omitted can produce a bias in any article. What is ridiculous about that?
- Bruce Grubb also thinks that the primary material in the article is incomprehensible to the layman. Is he suggesting that it be removed? How would this improve the article? --TraceyR (talk) 09:53, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- TraceyR seems to have missed Bruce's point. Bruce said that comparing the Juice Plus article with Hitler and the Holocaust was ridiculous (i.e. he appropriately referenced Godwin's Law, and I fully agree. Such invocations are not constructive. Rhode Island Red (talk) 19:43, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- So someone else is missing Jubican's point! Godwin's Law is so gloriously, ridiculously irrelevant, a Red herring, a Straw man, indeed a tacit admission that Bruce Grubb and, of course Rhode Island Red, cannot rebuff Jubican's point. But then there's none so blind as he who will not see. --TraceyR (talk) 22:38, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- @Jubican, TracyForget the rhetoric... We don't just remove sourced information that meets MEDRS. If you have other sources to balance it, or proposals to make the phrasing more even-handed (but in line with the references) go ahead and mention them. But we're not going to stub a well developed article because the conclusion of the studies is not favorable. Also, accusing the negative studies of setting out to prove the product ineffective is a quite bold claim that I doubt can be reliably sourced. So, what specific suggestions do you have?
- So someone else is missing Jubican's point! Godwin's Law is so gloriously, ridiculously irrelevant, a Red herring, a Straw man, indeed a tacit admission that Bruce Grubb and, of course Rhode Island Red, cannot rebuff Jubican's point. But then there's none so blind as he who will not see. --TraceyR (talk) 22:38, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree that we should not start sections with a 'doubt' but rather with an overview. Do you understand, on the other point, that primary studies are not acceptable as support. We're really looking for systematic reviews. We might be able to mention that 'JuicePlus' cites published primary research' but we probably won't do more than provide a link in the references to where JuicePlus does so. Otherwise it becomes a highly speculative and unencyclopedic game about citing primaries.
- @Doc James, 'doing less harm' is an admirable but not encyclopedic goal, in my opinion. Risk aversion is a kind of bias that we should not practice to here so long as we otherwise follow policy...else we slant too strongly towards the mainstream and don't fairly present alternative and fringe views in full. Ocaasi 23:04, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- The Health effects of high-fructose corn syrup article is a prime example of the problem you can have regarding MEDRS with primary sources. Sometime studies are so new that there just are not the type of secondary sources required by MEDRS and other times the follow up are so obscure they might as well not exist. The Weston Price article has the later problem as there is a primary source papers that seems to indicate that he later changed his mind regarding focal infection theory ("I have been unable to find an approach to the problem through the study of affected individuals and diseased tissues" and that "the evidence seemed to indicate clearly that the forces that were at work were not to be found in the diseased tissues") but so far no secondary source supporting that reading of the primary material has been found.--BruceGrubb (talk) 02:10, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- Bruce, yes you've covered this territory well ;). I think where we encounter a gap between primaries and MEDRS we should consider using a summary-style to let readers know what types of sources are out there and what claims are made within them. Without citing specific results we can at least give the lay of the land regarding that research. Maybe that's an option here, to summarize the primary research that has been done, without advancing any new points. Ocaasi 02:24, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- Hi, I would like to draw your attention to the Misplaced Pages:Neutral_point_of_view article. The first paragraph is quite clear on how to achieve neutrality, specifically, "representing fairly, proportionately, and as far as possible without bias." On this discussion page alone, many have complained about the bias, which for some reason is not causing the authors to check their own motives. But in particular, I want to point out the second item on the series: proportionately.
- There's a very good reason for this. It obviously took a lot of work to find and reference the unfavorable studies. Yet, the same people who located these studies are not / have not put the same energy into locating favorable studies that are suitable for this article. Now, per the 3 core principles of Misplaced Pages, the article should be proportionate in it's entirety. Some editors have admitted this article is disproportionate in one form or another (Doc James did so in his initial reply in this section). So by an editor's own admission this article is in violation of NPOV--the same editor who previously removed the NPOV warning. In order to achieve proportion, there must be balanced sources. That means either favorable sources must be added, or the unfavorable should be removed. For instance, I've mentioned Bear Grylls 3 times now, yet no one has acted on it. If you were to put the Man vs. Wild hero in this article as an endorser, it would certainly become even more clear to the average reader that there's something wrong with this article (is that why you don't add it?).
- Editors should be responsible to remove themselves if they cannot be neutral. Like many people, I visit Misplaced Pages all the time, and load myself up with all kinds of good information. However, this article is strikingly biased, and if you all allow this kind of "Seattle Times" article-writing to creep into Misplaced Pages, the integrity of the entire system will begin to fall. I can just hear, "Well, they did it on the JuicePlus article, why can't I do it here!".
- Again, I ask that you folks just stick to the spirit of Misplaced Pages. I'm not a scholar, but I have enough sense to know that what I'm reading is not written by people who are neutral. If you can't fix that part, please be decent and responsible and remove yourselves. Nothing personal, just please fix.
- Jubican (talk) 05:30, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
Many may also wish to look at WP:COI. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 05:42, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- @Jubican. It's great that you're reading policy. The only thing you're missing is you. If you have sources for Bear Grylls, post them. If you have a draft of a section including his endorsement, propose it here. If you are comfortable adding it to the article with a proper reference, go for it. We'll continue to work on phrasing content neutrally; part of that relies on other editors to provide the raw material. Cheers, Ocaasi 05:54, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- The "Editors should be responsible to remove themselves if they cannot be neutral" comment IMHO shows a total misunderstanding of just what is meant by WP:NPOV. The requirement is NOT the editors are totally neutral but that an article's subject be presented in as much a NPOV as is possible within the guidelines of Misplaced Pages. WP:RS directly states "Each source must be carefully weighed to judge whether it is reliable for the statement being made and is the best such source for that context" as shown by the examples above things may not as cut and dried as that particular source paints them.
- Primary sources are generally written for experts in that field which is why WP:MEDRS restates "All Misplaced Pages articles should be based on reliable, published secondary sources. Reliable primary sources may occasionally be used with care as an adjunct to the secondary literature, but there remains potential for misuse." (sic). In this case Stephen Barrett fulfills that requirement in any reasonable manner any we have yet to see anything of similar quality on the other side so the article is going to be slanted.--BruceGrubb (talk) 06:42, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
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Please update the ingredient lists as they are not accurate. The ingredients listed on the bottles (recently purchased) I have in front of me are:
Garden Blend: Vegetable juice powder and pulp from carrot, parsley, beet, kale, broccoli, cabbage, spinach and tomato; gelatin, glucomannan, cellulose, calcium ascorbate, calcium carbonate, Lactobacillus acidophilus, d-alpha tocopherol, beta carotene, natural enzyme blend, sugarbeet fiber, garlic powder, oat bran, rice bran, mixed tocopherols Dunaliella salina, folic acid.
Orchard Blend: Fruit juice powder and pulp from apple, orange, pineapple, cranberry, peach, acerola cherry, and papaya; gelatin, calcium ascorbate, citrus pectin, beet root powder, citrus bioflavoniods (sic), glucomannan, Lactobacillus acidophilus, natural enzyme blend, d-alpha tocopherol, beta carotene, date fiber, prune fiber, Dunaliella salina, folic acid.
I don't have a more publicly available source for the information, but the currently posted ingredient list has no citation, either.
Thanks.
Uglysquid (talk) 20:59, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
- I've removed the ingredients and nutritional info altogether, as they are not at all encyclopedic, and, as you say, they are unsourced --Jac16888 18:49, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- (1) What could be more fundamental to explaining Juice Plus than the basic ocmposition of the product? This information has stood uncontested for years after being reviewed by multiple editors; no one even raised concerns about ingredient info being unencyclopedic. (2) If you are worried aboust sourcing, then simply add a citation needed tag; don't blank content. Rhode Island Red (talk) 21:25, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- Removal of that information is not vandalism, but a citation needed tag would be better. I do think that a discussion of ingredients would be encyclopedic content, but it needs to be sourced to a reliable secondary source - to establish weight (what is in front of an editor on a bottle does not qualify, btw). Yobol (talk) 21:31, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- (ec)I've already commented on your talk page for your incredibly inappropriate labelling of my edit as vandalism, and I'll reply further here. Misplaced Pages is not a directory, we do not list things such as a full set of ingredients. The fact that nobody has raised concerns before is irrelevant, and per WP:BURDEN I am well within reason to remove unsourced content such as this--Jac16888 21:36, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- Discussion of the ingredients perhaps, but not a full list, which is a ludicrous violation of WP:NOT#DIR--Jac16888 21:36, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- I diasgree with your assertion about notability of the information, and merely citing WP:NOT doesn't make your case. As I alluded to previously, a reader should be able to see what's in the product -- the information is fundamental -- it doesn't detract; it adds to to one's understanding. As to the issue of sourcing, that's another matter entirely. An appropriate response would have been to add a citation needed tag. I've seen the brochures and I've see the bottle labels myself so I know that the information is accurate. I'll dig up a source. No need to be so dramatic. Rhode Island Red (talk) 22:01, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- If we were to follow that logic, we would list the ingredients of every product there is an article for on wikipedia, you'll notice that is not the case. WP:NOT is a a key policy and the key point being made is that Misplaced Pages is not an indiscriminate collection. This is supposed to be an encyclopedia, the information you're so in favour of preserving belongs on the brochures and the labels you keep bringing up, not here--Jac16888 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- Invoking the slippery slope fallacy doesn't make your argument any more compelling. Rhode Island Red (talk) 22:32, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- There's nothing in WP:NOT that would expressly preclude inclusion of this information. You are being overly broad in your interpretation IMO. Rhode Island Red (talk) 22:34, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- I'd say its more you're choosing to interpret it overly narrowly due to whatever vested interest it is that you have with the product. You have yet to give any kind of convincing reason as to why this content is in fact encyclopedic rather than a meaningless list, nor have you been able to produce the many sources you appear claim exist--Jac16888 22:37, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- Vested interest? Better stow that garbage ASAP. Haven't produced sources yet? I'm eating dinner on a Sunday. Are you in some kind of rush. The references will be forthcoming. In the meantime, chew on this one. You can simply add a citation tag in the meantime. If you have concerns about whether or not the information is encylopedic, post an RFC and get a second opinion....easy enough right? Rhode Island Red (talk) 01:57, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I'd call it a vested interest since you added the content in the first place, and going by your talk page history and this page you have a real issue with WP:OWNership on this page. And fine, guess it will have to be an RFC, goody. I'll sort it out in the morning, although if in the meantime you feel like removing it yourself instead of wasting time drawing this out, It would be much appreciated--Jac16888 02:09, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- (Quoting Jac16888) -- "If we were to follow that logic, we would list the ingredients of every product there is an article for on wikipedia, you'll notice that is not the case."
- Really??? What you're implying is that in the the past few hours since we've been having this discussion, you somehow managed to confirm that there isn't a single article on any product in all of WP in which the ingredients are listed? ROFL. The first article I checked on a hunch --Extenze -- contains an extensive list of ingredients. Second article checked -- same story -- Airborne_(dietary_supplement). Maybe you can take a break from shooting salvos out of your nether-regions and apologize. Ah, what's the point...don't bother; just eat your crow and move on. Rhode Island Red (talk) 03:15, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- That response is very rude - I'm sure that it contravenes plenty of WP rules. Apologies are certainly due, but not from Jac16888. A constructive response would be for someone to post an image of the current bottles and labels. That way there would be both a recent image and a list of the ingrediaents. BTW, just citing that a couple of articles have a list of ingredients does not prove that every article has a such a list. To confirm Jac16888's assertion it is merely necessary to show that one other article has no list of ingredients. Logic 101. ---TraceyR (talk) 09:49, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I'd call it a vested interest since you added the content in the first place, and going by your talk page history and this page you have a real issue with WP:OWNership on this page. And fine, guess it will have to be an RFC, goody. I'll sort it out in the morning, although if in the meantime you feel like removing it yourself instead of wasting time drawing this out, It would be much appreciated--Jac16888 02:09, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- Vested interest? Better stow that garbage ASAP. Haven't produced sources yet? I'm eating dinner on a Sunday. Are you in some kind of rush. The references will be forthcoming. In the meantime, chew on this one. You can simply add a citation tag in the meantime. If you have concerns about whether or not the information is encylopedic, post an RFC and get a second opinion....easy enough right? Rhode Island Red (talk) 01:57, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I'd say its more you're choosing to interpret it overly narrowly due to whatever vested interest it is that you have with the product. You have yet to give any kind of convincing reason as to why this content is in fact encyclopedic rather than a meaningless list, nor have you been able to produce the many sources you appear claim exist--Jac16888 22:37, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- There's nothing in WP:NOT that would expressly preclude inclusion of this information. You are being overly broad in your interpretation IMO. Rhode Island Red (talk) 22:34, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- Invoking the slippery slope fallacy doesn't make your argument any more compelling. Rhode Island Red (talk) 22:32, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- If we were to follow that logic, we would list the ingredients of every product there is an article for on wikipedia, you'll notice that is not the case. WP:NOT is a a key policy and the key point being made is that Misplaced Pages is not an indiscriminate collection. This is supposed to be an encyclopedia, the information you're so in favour of preserving belongs on the brochures and the labels you keep bringing up, not here--Jac16888 22:15, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- I diasgree with your assertion about notability of the information, and merely citing WP:NOT doesn't make your case. As I alluded to previously, a reader should be able to see what's in the product -- the information is fundamental -- it doesn't detract; it adds to to one's understanding. As to the issue of sourcing, that's another matter entirely. An appropriate response would have been to add a citation needed tag. I've seen the brochures and I've see the bottle labels myself so I know that the information is accurate. I'll dig up a source. No need to be so dramatic. Rhode Island Red (talk) 22:01, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
- Discussion of the ingredients perhaps, but not a full list, which is a ludicrous violation of WP:NOT#DIR--Jac16888 21:36, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
Uglysquid's report on Garden Blend ingredients agrees with the RS ConsumerLab source. Unfortunately, ConsumerLab did not test the Orchard Blend and thus doesn't have the ingredients for that product. I am assuming Uglysquid's report is correct on Orchard Blend, but we still wouldn't be allowed to use that as an ingredient list. Leef5 15:30, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
Full list of ingredients and nutritional information
Short and sweet, Having come across this article I noticed the hackjob infobox, containing a full list of "supplement information" for 2 of the products, i.e. full ingredient list, RDI information etc. Considering this to be against a violation of Misplaced Pages is not an indiscriminate collection of information I removed the lists with a clear edit summary only to be reverted as vandalism . My attempt at a talk page resolution has gotten nowhere so here we are. To sum up, the article has a full list of ingredients straight off the label, and I think it should be removed as a clear violation of WP:NOT--Jac16888 11:28, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I think you are both right, in different ways. This is far too much info for an Infobox, although very cleverly written. The current standardized Infobox is Template:Nutritional value. Note this does not list ingrediants, but does list the nutritional values. The ingrediants should move to a section in the article, rather than an Infobox. However, instead of listing all of the ingrediants out straight from the label (and hence some WP:NOT issues), I would only list ingrediants that are particularly sourced as unusual or unique. On a side note, I am very curious why the manufacturer doesn't list the nutritional facts on their website - that would be an easily accessible RS. The Consumer Lab source currently used is fine, although I will tag it with a {{subscription required}} tag. Leef5 12:03, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- In this case I think that it is relevant to list the ingredient fruits and vegetables. To list 'nutritional facts' is fine for ordinary multivitamin tablets, which all have a recipe combining a limited number of specific vitamins, minerals etc., and the manufacturer knows just how much of each it adds to the mix. For a blend of fruit or vegetable juice concentrate in powder form it makes more sense to list the fruits and vegetables contained in the supplement. There could well be tens or even hundreds of thousands of phytochemicals in there, but none in sufficient quantity to report in the 'facts' table. That could also be why the manufacturer doesn't list the nutritional facts on its website.--TraceyR (talk) 12:45, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- That is a reasonable explanation about why the manufacturer doesn't list the nutrition facts. Is it also possible that the nutrition facts could change from batch to batch produced due to the variances in the source fruits and vegetables? It also would be nice to find an updated source for RDI/ingediants than 2006. Even though we can't use Uglysquid as a source, we have to AGF that his transcription of the bottle he holds in his hand is accurate. It also seems likely that there could be a product reformulation in the past 5 years since ConsumerLab.com released their findings. If a new RS that matches Uglysquid's report can be found easily, then this is a simple fix. Otherwise, some sort of tag marking that source as outdated may be appropriate. Leef5 12:52, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- Ok, so we've heard from a wikistalker and a Juice Plus distributor; input from uninvolved parties would be more compelling. Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:33, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- Rhode Island Red: You really can't just lash out at everyone who doesn't share your apparent deep-seated loathing (negative POV) of Juice Plus, being coarse and just downright unpleasant. Either be civil or stop editing this article. Your behaviour here is unwarranted, unpleasant and needs to stop, unless you want to be blocked again. --TraceyR (talk) 21:47, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- Ok, so we've heard from a wikistalker and a Juice Plus distributor; input from uninvolved parties would be more compelling. Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:33, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- That is a reasonable explanation about why the manufacturer doesn't list the nutrition facts. Is it also possible that the nutrition facts could change from batch to batch produced due to the variances in the source fruits and vegetables? It also would be nice to find an updated source for RDI/ingediants than 2006. Even though we can't use Uglysquid as a source, we have to AGF that his transcription of the bottle he holds in his hand is accurate. It also seems likely that there could be a product reformulation in the past 5 years since ConsumerLab.com released their findings. If a new RS that matches Uglysquid's report can be found easily, then this is a simple fix. Otherwise, some sort of tag marking that source as outdated may be appropriate. Leef5 12:52, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- In this case I think that it is relevant to list the ingredient fruits and vegetables. To list 'nutritional facts' is fine for ordinary multivitamin tablets, which all have a recipe combining a limited number of specific vitamins, minerals etc., and the manufacturer knows just how much of each it adds to the mix. For a blend of fruit or vegetable juice concentrate in powder form it makes more sense to list the fruits and vegetables contained in the supplement. There could well be tens or even hundreds of thousands of phytochemicals in there, but none in sufficient quantity to report in the 'facts' table. That could also be why the manufacturer doesn't list the nutritional facts on its website.--TraceyR (talk) 12:45, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- Remove ingredients - The Infobox as it stands now (including ingredients and nutritional facts) is a violation of WP:NOTADVERTISING. The infobox is way too promotional, and reads like and looks like advertising. I looked thru dozens of WP articles on comparable products, and I found no InfoBox remotely like it. Editor Leef5 above mentions Template:Nutritional value, and perhaps that template could be used. However, even that template is presently used primarily for raw foods (eggs, apples, etc). There are a few instances where that template is used for processed food, such as Pizza Pockets, but those are very rare. I suggest that, as a compromise, the current infobox be removed and replaced with Template:Nutritional value. The ingredients, if they must be mentioned, can be in the body of the article, but as an editor points out above, that information is ephemeral and could quickly become out of date as the formulation changes. --Noleander (talk) 21:38, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- In what way is it like advertising? There's no comment, no sales-speak, no advertising copy, just a list of the contents. --TraceyR (talk) 21:47, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- An encyclopedia article should not give the appearance of promoting or endorsing products. It is misleading to have a colorful display at the top of the article that looks nearly exactly like a product label or product advertisement. The WP community, as evidenced by the lack of similar displays in comparable articles, has decided that such displays are unacceptable. Read WP:NOTADVERTISING. If you could produce 20 or 30 other WP articles that have similar InfoBoxes, you might have an argument. If the ingredients information is important (and it may be), I have no objection to including it in the body of the article. --Noleander (talk) 21:59, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- In what way is it like advertising? There's no comment, no sales-speak, no advertising copy, just a list of the contents. --TraceyR (talk) 21:47, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- Remove from infobox Agreed about the infobox, after further consideration. Discussion about ingredients should be in the article proper, not listed in the infobox. It does look like an advertisement as is. Yobol (talk) 22:53, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not arguing for the retention of the image: if it makes the article look like an advert (but that's a subjective judgement), then take it out. I would just point out that, since this product isn't to be found in the shops, having a picture in the article is not going to increase sales, i.e. it isn't fufilling the purpose of an advertisement here; it is just an illustration. If WP rules that it is nevertheless 'like an advert', then it has to go. Putting the list of contents in the article body would, in my opinion, reduce the usefulness of the article (the reader would have to search for the contents information, rather that finding it summarised in the Infobox), but again, if that's what WP requires, so be it. FWIW, I think that WP has become too bureaucratic in such things. Didn't Jimbo say something like that recently? ;-) --TraceyR (talk) 23:11, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I believe the image is appropriate since this is a product page as long as the image is non-free fair use, as I believe it is notated as. Leef5 23:49, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I agree that the image and the Template:Nutritional value template would be acceptable in the InfoBox, provided they do not look too much like an advertisement or an actual product label. That is the key point: it cannot look like a promotion of the product. --Noleander (talk) 03:10, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not having any luck finding an (updated) RS with the label/nutrition facts info. Hopefully another editor can dig something up. Leef5 15:22, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- Once upon a time, the ingredients were listed in the body text. They got moved into an infobox becuase it seemed like a more convenient location (and I still think the article is better with the details in the infobox vs body text). I don't buy the argument that listing the ingredients in this particular manner makes the article appear promotional. I really don't see it. Rhode Island Red (talk) 16:39, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- RhodeIslandRed: WP has thousands of articles on food products. We can get some sense of community-wide consensus by seeing how the other articles look. Can you cite some other food articles that have ingredients listed in their InfoBox? My point is: this particular article is not the best place to establish a new approach to food InfoBoxes. Better would be to go to the Talk page of Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Food and drink and start a discussion there on a uniform approach to food product InfoBoxes. But we cannot give preferential treatment to JuicePlus and let its InfoBox look nearly identical to its own product label. --Noleander (talk) 17:01, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- On this point I agree with the previous statement by RhodeIslandRed. The Juice Plus website lists the fruit and vegetables used. This is surely a reliable source for this infobox data. The 'nutritional facts' table presents a difficulty: the information may well differ from country to country, since many countries specify their own RDAs, leading to different percentage values for the same quantity of a given substance. Which country's percentage values would be valid for English-language WP - the USA's? Canada's? Australia's? the UK's? South Africa's, etc.? If no reliable source can be found for the data in the 'facts' table, then they can (should?) be omitted until a RS can be found. I'm not sure about the "preferential treatment" - could you explain what advantage Juice Plus gains from having its contents listed in the infobox? Surely that's the logical place for them?
- The current image was lifted from a German website (click on the image for the details). This same website has since replaced this image by a newer one, with German product names. Whether the current image is therefore legal on WP I can't say; whether it is valid as an illustration on English-language WP I also don't know - the US, UK etc bottles may be different now.--TraceyR (talk) 17:06, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- Tracey: Why do you say the InfoBox is the "logical place" for the ingredients? To the contrary, the consensus of the WP community, as evidenced by thoursands of other food product articles is to put the ingredients, if anywhere, in the body of the article. Making the InfoBox look like a product label could be construed as promotional. --Noleander (talk) 17:08, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- With respect to terminology, this is a dietary supplement; not a food product per se. I haven't looked to see if other supplement articles use similar infoboxes, but if they don't, I would not say that the alternative formatting was by design. Putting it in an infobox just makes for a nice clean design and puts key information (what could be more key than the actual ingredinets) in a convenient and prominent location. As for the compoisition information on the company's website (re:TraceyR's comment), that list is woefully insufficient -- it's almost like the manufacturer doesn't want consumers to know what's really in the product. Rhode Island Red (talk) 17:15, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- Surely the infobox is there to provide headline information about the subject of the article. If the subject is a fruit and vegetable juice concentrate, the reader is entitled to expect to find that information summarised there. As RhodeIslandRed says, "what could be more key than the actual ingredients" - i.e. in this case the various fruits and vegetables used? What then is "woefully insufficient" about "the composition information on the company's website"? There are regulations in most developed countries about what must be on a label, what can be on a label and what cannot be on a label. Is RhodeIslandRed really suggesting that the company is hiding something that should be there by law? If so, what? --TraceyR (talk) 20:23, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- The law only requires that the company list the product's ingredients accurately on the product label. The information provided on the company website is not up to those standards -- it is superficial and does not match the bottle label. In contrast, the list given by Consumer Reports (a reliable secondary independent source) was complete and shows the exact same ingredients as on the bottle label. They were also listed in the same order as on the bottle label, and as you may or may not know, the law mandates that ingredients on the label must be listed in order of amount (highest to lowest); note that the list you are suggesting from the comany's website is alphabetical and gives no clue about relative amounts. The company website also fails to list many of the ingredients that are listed on the bottle lable -- many of which are fortifiers and additives (extra vitamins, etc.). It's clearly not a complete list of ingredients -- it is inadequate. It is also misleading because it implies that the product contains substances that are constituents of the native fruits/vegetales but may not be constituents of the processed fruit/vegetable powders that are actually used in Juice Plus. That's been a major point of contention in the critiques of Juice Plus written by independent experts/secondary sources. It's easy to see why a Juice Plus distributor would try to argue that the actual ingredients should be hidden from public view and replaced with misleading, superficial, marketing-friendly list that suggests the product contains things that it doesn't contain. One list is reliable and reflects reality; the other is a machination of the Juice Plus marketing spin-doctors. Rhode Island Red (talk) 03:05, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
- Surely the infobox is there to provide headline information about the subject of the article. If the subject is a fruit and vegetable juice concentrate, the reader is entitled to expect to find that information summarised there. As RhodeIslandRed says, "what could be more key than the actual ingredients" - i.e. in this case the various fruits and vegetables used? What then is "woefully insufficient" about "the composition information on the company's website"? There are regulations in most developed countries about what must be on a label, what can be on a label and what cannot be on a label. Is RhodeIslandRed really suggesting that the company is hiding something that should be there by law? If so, what? --TraceyR (talk) 20:23, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- With respect to terminology, this is a dietary supplement; not a food product per se. I haven't looked to see if other supplement articles use similar infoboxes, but if they don't, I would not say that the alternative formatting was by design. Putting it in an infobox just makes for a nice clean design and puts key information (what could be more key than the actual ingredinets) in a convenient and prominent location. As for the compoisition information on the company's website (re:TraceyR's comment), that list is woefully insufficient -- it's almost like the manufacturer doesn't want consumers to know what's really in the product. Rhode Island Red (talk) 17:15, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- Tracey: Why do you say the InfoBox is the "logical place" for the ingredients? To the contrary, the consensus of the WP community, as evidenced by thoursands of other food product articles is to put the ingredients, if anywhere, in the body of the article. Making the InfoBox look like a product label could be construed as promotional. --Noleander (talk) 17:08, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- RhodeIslandRed: WP has thousands of articles on food products. We can get some sense of community-wide consensus by seeing how the other articles look. Can you cite some other food articles that have ingredients listed in their InfoBox? My point is: this particular article is not the best place to establish a new approach to food InfoBoxes. Better would be to go to the Talk page of Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Food and drink and start a discussion there on a uniform approach to food product InfoBoxes. But we cannot give preferential treatment to JuicePlus and let its InfoBox look nearly identical to its own product label. --Noleander (talk) 17:01, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- Once upon a time, the ingredients were listed in the body text. They got moved into an infobox becuase it seemed like a more convenient location (and I still think the article is better with the details in the infobox vs body text). I don't buy the argument that listing the ingredients in this particular manner makes the article appear promotional. I really don't see it. Rhode Island Red (talk) 16:39, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not having any luck finding an (updated) RS with the label/nutrition facts info. Hopefully another editor can dig something up. Leef5 15:22, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- I agree that the image and the Template:Nutritional value template would be acceptable in the InfoBox, provided they do not look too much like an advertisement or an actual product label. That is the key point: it cannot look like a promotion of the product. --Noleander (talk) 03:10, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- I believe the image is appropriate since this is a product page as long as the image is non-free fair use, as I believe it is notated as. Leef5 23:49, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- Keep ingredients Uninvolved here through Misplaced Pages:Feedback request service - I think listing the ingredients as they are listed on the label or ConsumerLab or Consumer Reports makes sense for a product like this. Seems plenty encyclopedic, altho if there's controversy about whether these ingredients are actually inside it may be best to remove the ingredients. II | (t - c) 04:05, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
- The controversy is in the imagination of an editor with a negative history here, but even he cannot deny that the label conforms to the legal requirements. In his opinion, the information on the company's website is "woefully insufficient", but that's all it is - his opinion, no doubt coloured by his known POV. AFAIK there is no requirement for a product website to provide such information. For those who wish to examine the (rather complicated) FDA requirements for food labels, see the appropriate FDA website here. Regulations in other countries will differ. I don't agree that putting content information in the infobox should be considered as product promotion.--TraceyR (talk) 15:13, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
- FDA regulations??? You're making this overly complicated. The simple fact is that the company website does not provide an accurate/complete ingredient list. Consumer lab and the bottle labels do however provide an accurate/complete list of ingredients. No need to go chasing windmills. Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:40, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
- The controversy is in the imagination of an editor with a negative history here, but even he cannot deny that the label conforms to the legal requirements. In his opinion, the information on the company's website is "woefully insufficient", but that's all it is - his opinion, no doubt coloured by his known POV. AFAIK there is no requirement for a product website to provide such information. For those who wish to examine the (rather complicated) FDA requirements for food labels, see the appropriate FDA website here. Regulations in other countries will differ. I don't agree that putting content information in the infobox should be considered as product promotion.--TraceyR (talk) 15:13, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
- Oh good grief! What an absurdly inappropriate comment. First of all, the controversy is far from "imaginary" and you know it. The controversy is well documented by RS -– this is patently obvious to anyone who has even skimmed through the article.
- "In December 2007, the Center for Science in the Public Interest (CSPI) filed a complaint with the U.S. Food and Drug Administration (FDA) to “halt the marketing of NSA's Juice Plus Orchard Blend and Garden Blend capsules because the products appear to be adulterated and misbranded”. CSPI said it was “concerned that the products' claim, ‘the next best thing to fruits and vegetables,’ may lead consumers to believe the pills are closer to real fruits and vegetables than is likely to be the case." According to CSPI, the labels say the capsules contain high levels of vitamins A and C and folate naturally, but “do not disclose that these vitamins and minerals are added to the capsules during processing and are nutrients only characteristic of the original fruit and vegetable sources.”
- “Our major criticism relates to the fact that the fruit and vegetable capsules used in this study, according to the manufacturer, were enriched with pure ß-carotene, ascorbic acid, vitamin E and folic acid, which was not stated in the article. The only significant changes due to the intervention were an increase in ß-carotene, ascorbic acid, vitamin E and folic acid. The supplemented micronutrients explain much of the reported effects and leave the question open as to whether the fruit and vegetable supplement itself induced any significant effects. Knowing that the capsules contained added micronutrients.”
- Secondly, hypocrite, look in the mirror and then re-read WP:COI (the policy that you have been ignoring all this time). Juice Plus distributors should tread lightly here; you certainly shouldn’t be throwing out red herrings about other people’s conduct (i.e., the mudslinging campaign embodied by the comment about “negative history”), particularly when it has no bearing on the issue at hand. Rhode Island Red (talk) 16:30, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
- Rhode Island Red: The few comments that you have cited do not make a controversy: the product has been on the market for over 15 years, and yet all you can come up with are three comments? As you know well, the CSPI's opinion was not upheld, because the slogan "the next best thing to fruit and vegetables" remains in use by the manufacturer. Some controversy! I'm sorry (but really not surprised) that you find it impossible to remain civil - at the slightest sign of a comment which does not conform to your strongly-held opinions, you lash out with personal attacks and coarse remarks - as above, in the comment directed at Jac16888: "Maybe you can take a break from shooting salvos out of your nether-regions and apologize. Ah, what's the point...don't bother; just eat your crow and move on". If you wish to continue editing this article, please restrain yourself; it does your arguments no good to act in this way. No mud-slinging by others is necessary when you do it to yourself. --TraceyR (talk) 20:46, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
- What an asstonishing act of denial! The Juice Plus distributor buries her head in the sand and proclaims “I didn't hear that” once again. WPs COI rules -- the one’s you have been chronically ignoring -- exist to prevent exactly this type of self-serving nonsense and obstruction. If you have nothing better to add than to repeat the same lame off-topic gripe about civility, then it’s clearly time to move on. Rhode Island Red (talk)
- Rhode Island Red: The few comments that you have cited do not make a controversy: the product has been on the market for over 15 years, and yet all you can come up with are three comments? As you know well, the CSPI's opinion was not upheld, because the slogan "the next best thing to fruit and vegetables" remains in use by the manufacturer. Some controversy! I'm sorry (but really not surprised) that you find it impossible to remain civil - at the slightest sign of a comment which does not conform to your strongly-held opinions, you lash out with personal attacks and coarse remarks - as above, in the comment directed at Jac16888: "Maybe you can take a break from shooting salvos out of your nether-regions and apologize. Ah, what's the point...don't bother; just eat your crow and move on". If you wish to continue editing this article, please restrain yourself; it does your arguments no good to act in this way. No mud-slinging by others is necessary when you do it to yourself. --TraceyR (talk) 20:46, 10 August 2011 (UTC)
- Only 3 comments?!? How many does it take to get the point across? And “upheld” by whom exactly? If the company is still using the “next best thing” slogan, it’s because they’ve simply ignored the criticism from multiple high profile sources. It’s not evidence that CSPIs “opinion was not upheld”. That’s a fabrication/unwarranted assumption/original research on your part. It would be accurate to say that CSPI's warning apparently went unheeded. Like CSPI, two other reputable sources -- the Better Business Bureau's National Advertising Division] and the government of Australia (Therapeutic Goods Administration) -- hammered the product/company precisely because of the “next best thing” slogan:
- “According to Consumer Reports, in 2005, National Safety Associates used advertising featuring Dr. William Sears (a distributor of Juice Plus products), which implied that Juice Plus Gummies are low in sugar and a nutritional alternative to fruits and vegetables. This claim resulted in consumer complaints to the Better Business Bureau's National Advertising Division (NAD). The BBB issued a complaint that NSA's claims were misleading, and as a result, NSA promised to modify its ads and stop calling Gummies “the next best thing to fruits and vegetables”. However, the Juice Plus homepage continued to advertize the products as “the next best thing to fruits and vegetables”.”
- “In November 2007, the Complaints Resolution Panel for the Therapeutic Goods Administration Advertising Code Council ruled that statements on NSA’s Juice Plus website were in breach of Australia’s Therapeutic Goods Advertising Code. According to the panel, the “clear message” in the ads was that Juice Plus tablets/capsules are “equivalent to fruits and vegetables” and that “consuming Juice Plus tablets would help Australians to consume the ‘recommended 5–7 servings’ of fruits and vegetables”. NSA was sanctioned by the Council to withdraw any representations that the products “are equivalent to fruits and vegetables or that their consumption can aid in meeting dietary recommendations relating to fruits and vegetables.””
- Reputable sources have damned the “next best thing” slogan so many times that the criticism represents an overwhelming consensus POV. This underscores why an accurate ingredient list (as opposed to the misleading type of list provided on the manufacturer's website) needs to be as an integral feature of the article. Rhode Island Red (talk) 00:55, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- Rhode Island Red: Please stay on topic. This section is about the list of ingredients in the infobox, not about "the next best thing" slogan etc. If you want to discuss that again, don't try to hijack this thread - start another if you insist. And please note: you cannot sweep the warnings from uninvolved editors about your rudeness, personal attacks etc under the carpet: your behaviour (and the subsequent warnings about it) remain a matter of public record and sooner or later will have serious consequencs for you unless you start to conform to WP standards. --TraceyR (talk) 11:08, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- I see where you’re coming from now. It’s on-topic if you say something that's spectacularly untrue about the “next best thing” slogan or the controversy being “my imagination”, but it’s off-topic and “hijacking” the thread when I correct you? It’s not a personal attack or off-topic when you make a vague accusation about my “negative history”, but it’s somehow a personal attack when I call you a hypocrite for making false statements and point out that you are ignoring WP:COI? What you seem to be saying is that the rules don’t apply to you; just other editors. Again, I’m choking on the hypocrisy. As a non-admin editor, you're in no position to be making threats about "serious consequences" either. How about we all play by the sames rules (including WP:COI) and get back to the topic at hand? Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:35, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- Rhode Island Red I'm not going to bother to respond to these dramatic, intemperate and illogical responses. Just be aware that silence on my part should not be interpreted as a nolo contendre or a tacit admission of whatever you conjure up in your imagination. Take the good advice you have been given on your talk page and put things in perspective. After all, this is, as you put it in your RFC, "in the grand scheme, a trivial and insignificant small-fry product whose market share would barely be a blip on the radar". As such, it is surely not worthy of so much of your time. --TraceyR (talk) 22:40, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- I see where you’re coming from now. It’s on-topic if you say something that's spectacularly untrue about the “next best thing” slogan or the controversy being “my imagination”, but it’s off-topic and “hijacking” the thread when I correct you? It’s not a personal attack or off-topic when you make a vague accusation about my “negative history”, but it’s somehow a personal attack when I call you a hypocrite for making false statements and point out that you are ignoring WP:COI? What you seem to be saying is that the rules don’t apply to you; just other editors. Again, I’m choking on the hypocrisy. As a non-admin editor, you're in no position to be making threats about "serious consequences" either. How about we all play by the sames rules (including WP:COI) and get back to the topic at hand? Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:35, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- Rhode Island Red: Please stay on topic. This section is about the list of ingredients in the infobox, not about "the next best thing" slogan etc. If you want to discuss that again, don't try to hijack this thread - start another if you insist. And please note: you cannot sweep the warnings from uninvolved editors about your rudeness, personal attacks etc under the carpet: your behaviour (and the subsequent warnings about it) remain a matter of public record and sooner or later will have serious consequencs for you unless you start to conform to WP standards. --TraceyR (talk) 11:08, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- Delete the infobox as it stands now and replace it with {{Nutritional value}} per WP:Not, in this case it is not a product catalog. This is not a standard procedure in food and drink articles, and it shouldn't be included here. --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 04:53, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
- Replaced the custom infobox with the {{Nutritional value}} template using an up-to-date reliable source (ConsumerLab - 15 June 2011). It should be noted that ConsumerLab only tested Garden Blend, and not Orchard Blend. This is the ingrediant list that ConsumerLabs has at the same source I listed should we wish to include this in the article text as discussed above:
Other Ingredients: Vegetable juice powder and pulp from carrot, parsley, beet, kale, broccoli, cabbage, spinach, and tomato; gelatin, glucomannan, cellulose, calcium ascorbate, calcium carbonate, Lactobacillus acidophilus, d-alpha tocopherol, beta carotene, natural enzyme blend, sugar beet fiber, garlic powder, oat bran, rice bran, mixed tocopherols, Dunaliella salina, folic acid. This product contains no artificial colors, flavors or preservatives and contains no added starch. Kosher.
- I also put 0 for any vitamin/mineral not detected by ConsumerLab. This makes the table look a little long/messy however. Can we assume that if that particular vitamin/mineral isn't listed in the infobox that it doesn't have any? That would de-clutter the box. Leef5 15:15, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
- I was just going to comment, the new infobox looks a lot better and that yes, there is no point in including all the things that it doesn't contain with a zero, just take them out--Jac16888 15:21, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
- Done- and agreed it does look better. Leef5 15:26, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
- I was just going to comment, the new infobox looks a lot better and that yes, there is no point in including all the things that it doesn't contain with a zero, just take them out--Jac16888 15:21, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
ConsumerLab test results - new Reception section
I also added ConsumerLab's test results of Garden Blend. I wasn't sure exactly where to put that material, as the current section did not seem to fit. I created a new section titled "Reception". I've found that to be a useful section in other articles to discuss how well the article subject has been received to the public. It is possible we may be able to move other tidbits from the article into this section as appropriate. Leef5 15:18, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
Primary research articles
Per WP:MEDRS we should not be using primary research articles. As this articles uses them extensively have tagged it until this is resolved.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 04:35, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- would you mind tagging the appropriate section instead of the top of the article. As I see it, this would apply only to the research section. Rhode Island Red (talk) 17:20, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Hmmm. I couldn't find a relevant section tag. Rhode Island Red (talk) 21:08, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Doc James: Why is WP:MEDRS relevant for a nutritional supplement? Surely this is a food, not a medicine. --TraceyR (talk) 22:59, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Health claims need high quality evidence. We are a little more stringent than the FDA here. --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 23:27, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Agreed, any health claims, food or medicine related, apply to MEDRS. Yobol (talk) 16:54, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
- Health claims need high quality evidence. We are a little more stringent than the FDA here. --Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 23:27, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Doc James: Why is WP:MEDRS relevant for a nutritional supplement? Surely this is a food, not a medicine. --TraceyR (talk) 22:59, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Hmmm. I couldn't find a relevant section tag. Rhode Island Red (talk) 21:08, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
If this cant be resolved, and it hasn't for over 4 months, this section needs to be removed.--RadioFan (talk) 22:58, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
- Which section? Which health claims? Claims by whom? Who is the 'we' who are "more stringent than the FDA"? Misplaced Pages is an encyclopedia, not some government agency. If a study finds that a product has effect "A", that doesn't constitute a claim that it has this effect. --TraceyR (talk) 23:29, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
- Any claims of health/nutritional effects ARE health/medical claims, and should be sourced to secondary sources. Yobol (talk) 23:38, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
- Yes I will remove all the primary sources if this is the consensus.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 07:25, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- You've got quite the job ahead of you, because it looks like quite the mix. Good luck! -- Brangifer (talk) 08:57, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- Yobol: that's not a response to the comment that the results of studies are not claims. Would it be correct to remove all references to studies as primary sources which are not related to health claims?--TraceyR (talk) 19:53, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- Any health related information should to be referenced to secondary studies, per WP:MEDRS, "claims" or not. Yobol (talk) 21:35, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- So what health related information are we talking about in this article? --TraceyR (talk) 16:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
- Any health related information, in any article, falls under WP:MEDRS. So, the answer to your question would be, "All of it." Yobol (talk) 18:27, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
- So what health related information are we talking about in this article? --TraceyR (talk) 16:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
- Any health related information should to be referenced to secondary studies, per WP:MEDRS, "claims" or not. Yobol (talk) 21:35, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- Yobol: that's not a response to the comment that the results of studies are not claims. Would it be correct to remove all references to studies as primary sources which are not related to health claims?--TraceyR (talk) 19:53, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- You've got quite the job ahead of you, because it looks like quite the mix. Good luck! -- Brangifer (talk) 08:57, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- Yes I will remove all the primary sources if this is the consensus.Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 07:25, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- Any claims of health/nutritional effects ARE health/medical claims, and should be sourced to secondary sources. Yobol (talk) 23:38, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
Yobol: Do you really mean that no primary source can be cited in any article which is in any way related to any aspect of health, be it physical, mental or social? This seems IMHO to be a very - er - fundamentalist interpretation of WP:MEDRS. The section on "biomedical journals", for example, states that "peer reviewed medical journals are a natural choice as a source for up-to-date medical information in Misplaced Pages articles. They contain a mixture of primary and secondary sources as well as less technical material such as biographies. Although almost all such material will count as a reliable source for at least some purposes, not all the material is equally useful, and some, such as a letter from a non-expert, should be avoided."? I'm not sure how this part of the article could lead to this opinion. Perhaps you could explain where the "no primary source" dogma comes from. Thanks. --TraceyR (talk) 22:00, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
- No, that's not what I mean. I mean that health information should be sourced to secondary sources, because that is what our guidelines and policies say, and that is how we determine how much WP:WEIGHT to give primary studies. There is no "no primary source" dogma, as MEDRS clearly says primary sources are allowed, in limited circumstances. This, however, is not a such a circumstance, as there are plenty of secondary sources to discuss the health effects here. In this instance, since secondary sources are available, we can then assume that primary studies which are not discussed in secondary sources do not deserve WP:WEIGHT here because no one else in the scientific community has decided it's important enough to talk about. The situation here, where discussion of primary sources vastly outweighs secondary sources, screams of WP:NPOV and WP:MEDRS problems. Yobol (talk) 01:24, 28 February 2012 (UTC)
- But in this case there are at least two secondary sources (review articles): Lamprecht et al ("Obst- und Gemüsesaftkonzentrate zur Nahrungsergänzung" i.e. "Fruit and vegetable juice concentrates for nutritional supplementation" in the Schweizer Zeitschrift für Ernährungsmedizin i.e. Swiss Journal for Nutritional Medicine, 2008, 6(5):47-52, which is not readily accessible for non-German speakers) and Esfahani et al ("Health effects of mixed fruit and vegetable concentrates: a systematic review of the clinical interventions." J Am Coll Nutr Oct 2011, 30(5):285-94). For some reason these have not found their way into this article. The fact that they exist but have not been included here could also be deemed to suggest an WP:NPOV problem in this article. Truly neutral editing would lead to their inclusion; the fact that they have not been cited in the article implies the lack of true neutrality (perhaps even a fundamental weakness in the WP model). How do such secondary sources find their way into an article? --TraceyR (talk) 09:11, 28 February 2012 (UTC)
- WP:SOFIXIT, with the caveat that this is the Juice Plus page, so any reviews must discuss the product, not juices in general.Yobol (talk) 12:45, 28 February 2012 (UTC)
- Tricky, since the English source isn't available without a subscription. I could cite the German source - would that be acceptable?--TraceyR (talk) 07:36, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
- The Swiss source does not appear to be MEDLINE-indexed, a red flag for reliability among medical journals. Not being able to read German or have access to said article I can't comment further on its reliability. Yobol (talk) 13:15, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
- The Lamprecht review, aside from being in German, was conducted by paid consultants to the manufacturer (NSA) of Juice Plus. First, please don't proffer articles from clearly non-NPOV sources as though they were independent reviews. Secondly, Juice Plus distributors (past or present) should disclose their COI or refrain from participating in discussions like these. Rhode Island Red (talk) 16:07, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
- Rhode Island Red: Both review papers have been published in peer-reviewed journals, so both are valid secondary sources as far as WP 's rules go (with the caveat about the possible MEDLINE index issue, which Yobol mentions). No doubt the affiliations of the authors (past or present) were disclosed when the Lamprecht paper was submitted. The reviewers and editorial board considered it to be sound science and of sufficient quality to deserve publication. You may not like it, but that is irrelevant; in any case, your long-standing and persistently negative POV on this article is a matter of record and has attracted warnings from several admins down the years. If studying a product and finding it scientifically sound is enough to disqualify an author's work from mention, then having such a negative POV about it should certainly disqualify you. --TraceyR (talk) 20:11, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
- Putting the articles aside for the time being, as well as your silly POV accusation, you have a COI issue that you are hiding. You need to come clean or face the consequences. Rhode Island Red (talk) 00:30, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- Please tone down the personal attacks and try to AGF, please. We've been over this numerous times already - Alison 00:55, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- Putting the articles aside for the time being, as well as your silly POV accusation, you have a COI issue that you are hiding. You need to come clean or face the consequences. Rhode Island Red (talk) 00:30, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
- Rhode Island Red: Both review papers have been published in peer-reviewed journals, so both are valid secondary sources as far as WP 's rules go (with the caveat about the possible MEDLINE index issue, which Yobol mentions). No doubt the affiliations of the authors (past or present) were disclosed when the Lamprecht paper was submitted. The reviewers and editorial board considered it to be sound science and of sufficient quality to deserve publication. You may not like it, but that is irrelevant; in any case, your long-standing and persistently negative POV on this article is a matter of record and has attracted warnings from several admins down the years. If studying a product and finding it scientifically sound is enough to disqualify an author's work from mention, then having such a negative POV about it should certainly disqualify you. --TraceyR (talk) 20:11, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
- The Lamprecht review, aside from being in German, was conducted by paid consultants to the manufacturer (NSA) of Juice Plus. First, please don't proffer articles from clearly non-NPOV sources as though they were independent reviews. Secondly, Juice Plus distributors (past or present) should disclose their COI or refrain from participating in discussions like these. Rhode Island Red (talk) 16:07, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
- The Swiss source does not appear to be MEDLINE-indexed, a red flag for reliability among medical journals. Not being able to read German or have access to said article I can't comment further on its reliability. Yobol (talk) 13:15, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
- Tricky, since the English source isn't available without a subscription. I could cite the German source - would that be acceptable?--TraceyR (talk) 07:36, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
- WP:SOFIXIT, with the caveat that this is the Juice Plus page, so any reviews must discuss the product, not juices in general.Yobol (talk) 12:45, 28 February 2012 (UTC)
- But in this case there are at least two secondary sources (review articles): Lamprecht et al ("Obst- und Gemüsesaftkonzentrate zur Nahrungsergänzung" i.e. "Fruit and vegetable juice concentrates for nutritional supplementation" in the Schweizer Zeitschrift für Ernährungsmedizin i.e. Swiss Journal for Nutritional Medicine, 2008, 6(5):47-52, which is not readily accessible for non-German speakers) and Esfahani et al ("Health effects of mixed fruit and vegetable concentrates: a systematic review of the clinical interventions." J Am Coll Nutr Oct 2011, 30(5):285-94). For some reason these have not found their way into this article. The fact that they exist but have not been included here could also be deemed to suggest an WP:NPOV problem in this article. Truly neutral editing would lead to their inclusion; the fact that they have not been cited in the article implies the lack of true neutrality (perhaps even a fundamental weakness in the WP model). How do such secondary sources find their way into an article? --TraceyR (talk) 09:11, 28 February 2012 (UTC)
Thank you everyone who has pointed out how biased and clearly one sided the Juice Plus information is. I have never seen WP be so biased. They ususally just state the actual non biased facts but clearly whoever wrote this article went to great lengths to make sure the article was not balanced. Had the person actually done real homework on this product they might have realized that most of the 28 studies that have been done aren't something that JP could buy their way into nor does it mean because JP used their own money to help fund the studies that they had someone on the "inside" misleading or falsifying the test results. JP does not anywhere on their site claim to be able to cure any disease. Had the person actually went the JP website they would have seen how often the doctors and other supporters of JP say that JP isn't a replacement for fruits and veggies. Time after time they state that you need to eat a wide variety of both. If you are going to try to discredit a company please at least do a little bit of research first and present both sides and let the viewer/reader come to their own conclusion not the one you want them to come to. KK Stoltz — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.166.139.125 (talk) 05:03, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
Article not balanced
I read this article because I take Juice Plus and I have MS and I was looking for what nutrients some of the fruits and vegetables contained, so that I can supplement with things that are not found in whole food, like Vitamin D3, or B12 for example. I was appalled at the very negative stance of what should be a description or definition of Juice Plus, but instead was a mud slinging attempt to get people off the product? So, I did my own research. I read where some of your findings or excerpts came from and they were taken a bit out of context, not representing the entire article. Seems only the negative or at best questionable findings were mentioned here, even though much positive research was also given and is out there. In fact even the Memorial Kettering Cancer Center's comments caution that their page is their opinion and not to be taken as medical advice. They cite the positive outcomes of JP trials, and have no negative only unsubstantiated or that it might impact treatment comments. That is presumebly because in cancer, you are trying to kill cancer cells and they don't know if good nutrition would make that ineffective. In reality, cancer comes from mis- qued cells and under functioning killer cells, which could only be helped with a nutritious diet. We are talking about a food product here, not a laborotory drug. No one would tell a cancer patient to turn away fruits and veggies and eat a fatty diet? It is almost as if your writer wants us to believe that JP controlled outcomes and research done at University of Arizona, and Brigham Young University to name a few? What? I know Drs who are aware of the proven benefits of JP and its effects on health, dental health etc.
Now for what should have been said, I do not think anyone is saying or believes that this dietary supplement ( per Misplaced Pages " a Dietary Supplement is intendend to provide nutrients that may otherwise not be consumed in sufficient quantities") is a replacement for the actual food. It is a dietary supplement, which by your own definition is to provide additional nutrients to what is already consumed or for those who do not get enough of them. Most people do not eat 5-7 servings of soil rich fresh fruits and veggies each day, so they take vitamins. While this is perfectly fine, it is better to get the nutrients naturally from the actual food, and then to supplement where they are lacking with more food. Let me say it again, this is a supplement ( in addition to) not a replacement for real food nutrition. It is a extra serving or two more than you would get otherwise. The focus on your article comes from the idea that this product was intended to replace the foods it represents or be equal to. Not so, it is a dietary supplement and your writer should consult your own definition of what that really means.
This article should be revised immediately as it has made me question and trust your interpretations on other subjects. It should be neutral, not biased and what does OJ have to do with the definition of JP. I could care less what he claimed or represented at one time...it is here say, and JP is not trial! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aud88 (talk • contribs) 14:56, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
- Your edit prompted me to search around for any new material, but I didn't find anything significant - except that we weren't using some material from Quackwatch (now added). If you judge some material is missing from the article, what sources are there we're not using? if you feel bad information is contained (because of poor sourcing) then what it that? Alexbrn 15:09, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
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DELETE X="critics have argued that there is no scientific proof that Juice Plus offers significant health benefits and that deceptive claims are used in the product's marketing information" because there are 30 scientific studies about Juice Plus health benefits on humans. Theu are reported on www.pubmed.gov This articles about Juice Plus on wikipedia, is completely wrong and has conflicts of interest. The Scientific Study about benefit of Juice Plus are used in the text to proof the inutility of the product. See www.pubmed.gov
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- But critics have argued these things, and this is sourced in the article body. Since the lede must summarize the body (and include criticism) it is right to have this content here; it should not be deleted. Alexbrn 12:54, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
Juice Plus aliens are taking over
The Juice Plus Aliens are here and it is too late to stop them, although the almighty FSM may bestow upon us his blessing and eradicate them from this planet — Preceding unsigned comment added by 78.147.218.201 (talk) 00:26, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
Review Articles on Juice+
I did a few searches on medline and google-scholar for any kind of review articles on Juice+ and came up empty. Can anyone point me towards any such English language literature? I am not interested in primary studies or popular press articles. Desoto10 (talk) 05:24, 2 December 2014 (UTC)
- Scanning the discussions above, I find only two review articles mentioned: Lamprecht et al ("Obst- und Gemüsesaftkonzentrate zur Nahrungsergänzung" i.e. "Fruit and vegetable juice concentrates for nutritional supplementation" in the Schweizer Zeitschrift für Ernährungsmedizin i.e. Swiss Journal for Nutritional Medicine, 2008, 6(5):47-52 and Esfahani et al ("Health effects of mixed fruit and vegetable concentrates: a systematic review of the clinical interventions." J Am Coll Nutr Oct 2011, 30(5):285-94). If the German article has not been translated, then it does little good. The second article is behind a paywall and describes the effects of "concentrates". While a powdered product might be called a concentrate, this is not clear from the available abstract. My point is since there are, apparently, no secondary scientific reviews, the notability of this product seems suspect.Desoto10 (talk) 03:27, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
A search on "Health effects of mixed fruit and vegetable concentrates pdf" produced this result Hope this helps. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.224.37.126 (talk) 18:44, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I am not sure what to do about it, though. The conclusion seems to be that the blood levels of the vitamins A, C, E, and folate increased when subjects took capsules that were spiked with these vitamins. I guess it relates to the bioavailability issues. The quality of the review is poor, as it is simply a summary of all of the primary studies that the authors identified, without any screening on their part. No efforts were made to do any kind of meta-analysis. As usual, CSA contributed to the cause. Desoto10 (talk) 03:32, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
Antioxidant activity
Today, Rhode Island Red reverted my deletion of the statements:
One study, which measured in vitro antioxidant activity, found that 1 g of Juice Plus Orchard Blend/Garden Blend powder (500 mg of each combined) had the corresponding antioxidant capacity to approximately 10 g (fresh weight) of fruit or vegetable, amounting to 30 g (roughly one-third of a serving) per four capsulesdoi:10.1016/0308-8146(95)00223-5 Tests of antioxidant activity of polyphenols (such as those in Juice Plus capsules) in vitro likely show higher results than the negligible antioxidant activity in vivo following oral ingestion and digestion. doi:10.1016/j.freeradbiomed.2004.01.001 and
Four points why I feel this information is both inaccurate and invalid:
- to consensus science and regulatory organizations like the FDA, antioxidant activity in foods or supplements pertains only to adequate content of vitamins A, C and/or E.
- the references for the first sentence and first of two for the second sentence apply to "methanolic extracts" and so infer polyphenol/flavonoid content (i.e., not physiological antioxidants as the A-C-E vitamins are). To the uninformed Misplaced Pages user, mention of antioxidant activity by polyphenols (in vitro) falsely implies antioxidant activity in vivo.
- the second sentence reads like speculation so, to me, is editorial WP:OR
- the last reference used is from a pseudoscience source (Optimal Life Chiropractic), not WP:SCIRS, and should be deleted outright.
Although I feel certain of my conclusions, these changes are not essential because the section overall minimizes the antioxidant value of Juice Plus. I will defer further editorial discretion to Rhode Island Red. --Zefr (talk) 00:17, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
- On point 4, my bad. I didn't notice that was a bad chiro reference. I just scrapped it. As for point 3, I think the line was added by another editor as a qualifier to indicate that in vitro antioxidant activity of the extract would overestimate in vivo activity. I think that might be OK as far as WP:OR goes, as long as the lone reference that's cited actually backs up the statement. It might, but I don't have the full-text version. We could add a verify tag to the sentence or scrap it entirely, but I'm a bit reluctant to do that not having checked the reference.
- The first sentence/reference indicates that the supplement's antioxidant activity is very low relative to real fruits and vegetables (whereas some of the advertising implies antioxidant equivalence to 17 servings of fruit/veg), and in that sense, it seems like an important detail. However, you raise a good point that it should at least be qualified to indicate that these were methanolic extracts, assuming I'm understanding you correctly on that point. I didn't quite get your meaning about the FDA, vitamins A/C/E, and polyphenol/flavonoid content, but I'm all ears if you want to discuss it in more detail. Thanks. Rhode Island Red (talk) 01:35, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
- For the FDA's (and EFSA's) position on dietary antioxidants only being the A-C-E vitamins, these are succinct discussions, and this is the FDA's current position on product labeling for antioxidants.
- --Zefr (talk) 02:25, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
- Great, thanks Zefr. So I think what's required is a stronger and perhaps more detailed disclaimer about in vitro activity not being representative of in vivo activity. As for the polyphenol aspect, is there some reason why you would expect that the methanolic extracts only contain polyphenol and not vitamin antioxidants such A/C/E. A and E are both fat soluble so I would imagine that they would be present in methanolic extracts. Of course, it's also apparent that A/C/E are additives in the product and not endogenous components of the F/V extracts, which is an important consideration. Thanks for mulling this over with me. I'm open to your suggestions. Best, Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:25, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
- Rhode Island Red: because a methanol extraction involves pressure, heat and alcohol, it is unlikely that any vitamins survive this process. Although artificial vitamins can be manufactured into the final product (as it appears JuicePlus does from the significant contents of vitamins A-C-E on the article nutrition panel), no label claim or promotional statement can be made for the vitamin(s) as antioxidants, nor can polyphenols be mentioned (because they are not nutrients), according to FDA labeling rules.
- Reviewing the section on antioxidant activity, I believe there is too much unimportant detail and speculation per WP:NOTJOURNAL and WP:OR, and we would be fine keeping only the first paragraph, with the rest deleted. --Zefr (talk) 17:44, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
- As far as I know, every extraction procedure involves exposure to some kind of non-physiological condition (heat, solvents, etc.). Is there something uniquely destructive about this particular procedure? Is there any evidence that antioxidant vitamins would not be active following the methanol extraction method used by Chambers or is that speculation? If tha were the case, the Chamber study would likely have underestimated antioxidant activity.
- I don't see how FDA labeling laws pertain to this. I would be resistant to including details from the Chambers study if they concluded something counter-intuitive or if they asserted that the JP extracts had extraordinarily high antioxidant activity, but they in fact report the opposite (i.e., low activity relative to fruits and vegetables). Like I said before, addition of a suitable qualifying statement (i.e., that in vitro tests tend to overestimate activity and are not applicable to in vivo activity) seems to me the best way to go. Rhode Island Red (talk) 20:10, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
- Great, thanks Zefr. So I think what's required is a stronger and perhaps more detailed disclaimer about in vitro activity not being representative of in vivo activity. As for the polyphenol aspect, is there some reason why you would expect that the methanolic extracts only contain polyphenol and not vitamin antioxidants such A/C/E. A and E are both fat soluble so I would imagine that they would be present in methanolic extracts. Of course, it's also apparent that A/C/E are additives in the product and not endogenous components of the F/V extracts, which is an important consideration. Thanks for mulling this over with me. I'm open to your suggestions. Best, Rhode Island Red (talk) 15:25, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
Draft suggestion
I recommend eliminating the current third and fourth paragraphs while retaining the first and second paragraphs, with an additional source to the second to read like this:
One study found that 1 g of Juice Plus Orchard Blend/Garden Blend powder (500 mg of each combined) had the corresponding in vitro antioxidant capacity to approximately 10 g (fresh weight) of fruit or vegetable, amounting to 30 g (roughly one-third of a serving) per four capsules. In vitro tests of antioxidant activity of polyphenols (such as those in Juice Plus capsules) likely show higher results than the negligible antioxidant activity in vivo following oral ingestion. metabolism and digestion.PMID 17157175
A succinct lay news release from Oregon State University in 2007 may be useful to add as a reference for this last sentence.
--Zefr (talk) 16:25, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
- The proposal for the revised second paragraph on antioxidant activity works for me. But why would the third paragraph (about a study demonstrating lack of antioxidant activity of Gummies) and fourth paragraph (promotional claims about cancer and the response by MSKCC) be deleted? Those paragraphs have been part of the article for years so it's not clear to me why that's now on the chopping block. Rhode Island Red (talk) 17:07, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
- I feel the point of insignificant antioxidant activity is made adequately by the first two paragraphs as proposed; the additional paragraphs belabor the discussion. Also, see my comments from 20 Sept, 17.44 above. --Zefr (talk) 17:48, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
- The first two paragraphs refer to the fruit/veg capsules. The third paragraph deals with a different product entirely (children's Gummies, not the fruit/veg capsules), and the last paragraph deals with antioxidant activity as it pertains specifically to product claims about cancer, and contains relevant commentary from an expert source at Memorial Sloan Kettering Cancer Center -- highly notable. So it seems to me that it would be rather arbitrary to delete the last two paragraphs. Rhode Island Red (talk) 18:45, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
- I feel the point of insignificant antioxidant activity is made adequately by the first two paragraphs as proposed; the additional paragraphs belabor the discussion. Also, see my comments from 20 Sept, 17.44 above. --Zefr (talk) 17:48, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
Respectfully, Disagree, but have nothing to add to my comments above. Leaving this discussion now. --Zefr (talk) 21:29, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
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- Merge Klbrain (talk) 21:21, 17 March 2018 (UTC)
Noticed that there is a parallel stub of an article on National Safety Associates, the parent company that makes Juice Plus. The company is not notable in its own right and the NSA article should be merged with the JP article. Rhode Island Red (talk) 19:22, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed.Kerdooskis (talk) 20:18, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed. --Icerat (talk) 10:10, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed, merge. Pianoman320 (talk) 04:18, 26 July 2016 (UTC)
- Disagreed. I know NSA but never heard of Juice Plus. MemBrain (talk) 20:52, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
- Closing, given no consensus for the merge, and uncontested opposition (as per WP:SILENCE). Klbrain (talk) 21:04, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
- Re-opening, following request from Rhode Island Red (talk · contribs). Klbrain (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- Weak oppose on the grounds that NSA had a notable history before their transition to a nutrition-focused company in the 1990s. I was tempted to suggest a merge in the reverse direction, but the Juice Plus brand name seems to have more of a web presence, and they seem to be using the "Juice Plus+ Company" name, even though it doesn't seem that the company has formally changed its name. The NSA name does still seem to be in use, for example hitting the title of a 2016 peer-reviewed protocol publication indexed on PMC. Klbrain (talk) 00:40, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- As background, Juice Plus is not a company name and never was. It is a trademark name for a product. The company that markets it is and always has been National Safety Associates. Rhode Island Red (talk) 01:15, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- I'm curious as to what was significantly notable about NSA's history prior to Juice Plus. There is a total of one non-JP related reference in the NSA article (#2, with no online link) that refers to the company getting in legal trouble with their water filter sales. The remaining dozen or so references cited in the NSA article all relate to Juice Plus. The company has marketed a single product -- Juice Plus -- for the vast majority of its existence. Strip out JP from NSAs story and we'd be left with a single unlinked reference. Sorry, but I just don't see the rationale for opposition to merging. BTW, thanks for relisting the merger proposal. Rhode Island Red (talk) 00:59, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Rhode Island Red: As you know, notability is based on the existence of suitable sources, not on the state of sourcing in an article. So, the question is as to whether 20 years of selling water filters, air filters, fire-protection equipment; with a further decade of these businesses tailing off, is sufficiently distinct from the Juice Plus line. I'd argue that it is. There is interesting material for expansion, including the companies structure as alleged ponzi scheme, or illegal pyramid scheme, activities that relate to the sale of water filters. So, the corporate structure is also of intrinsic interest. Klbrain (talk) 11:58, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- Weak oppose on the grounds that NSA had a notable history before their transition to a nutrition-focused company in the 1990s. I was tempted to suggest a merge in the reverse direction, but the Juice Plus brand name seems to have more of a web presence, and they seem to be using the "Juice Plus+ Company" name, even though it doesn't seem that the company has formally changed its name. The NSA name does still seem to be in use, for example hitting the title of a 2016 peer-reviewed protocol publication indexed on PMC. Klbrain (talk) 00:40, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- The issue is that, based on the sources so far presented, NSAs notability seems to be predicated pretty much solely on JP. What I'm asking for is evidence, in the form of reliable sources, that would support your opposition on the basis that the company is notable for something else. If those sources don't exist, then that would support merging into JP. BTW, the 2 sources you linked to above would not meet WP:RS. Rhode Island Red (talk) 19:48, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- I agree the legal documents don't reach WP:RS, but non-routine newspaper coverage does, as does a book chapter (for example). Klbrain (talk) 20:40, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- The single news article you linked to above referring to NSA pre-JP would not be considered in judging the company's notability as per WP:ILLCON; i.e., the news article (and the book you linked to) refer to a single litigation event. As for the book, I'd take a pretty firm stance that it's also not WP:RS in this context -- or probably any context. So I still don't see convincing evidence that the company is notable for anything more than JP; at least not enough to justify a separate page. If NSA were truly notable as a company, it would have received significant coverage in trade/business/financial articles, etc. There's probably a hundred sources that discuss JP/NSA together and maybe 1 or 2 that refer to NSA for anything else. It would be easy to roll that into the JP article. Otherwise it still strikes me as a needless fork. Have a look at WP:CORPDEPTH and WP:ILLCON. I would argue that they make a pretty airtight case for the current merger proposal. Rhode Island Red (talk) 01:11, 21 January 2018 (UTC)]]
- It is true that it easier to find sources for recent events rather than those from 30-40 years ago, when the company was founded, but that does create an article imbalance due to recentism. The 1991 episode doesn't appear to be isolated, as there were similar concerns in 1993, which relates to structures established in '86, as already discussed in the article. So the ponzi/pyramid issues does seem meet the test of multiple independent sources required in WP:CORPDEPTH. The WP:ILLCON argument argument is a good point, but the company's notability doesn't rely on the allegedly illegal activity; rather, it contributes to the case, in addition to the wider range of products and as a case study in multi-level marketing. The company seem to have drifted from there to the use of franchising, but those franchises seems to small that I wonder what the difference is! Overall, I wouldn't object to a merge; it just wouldn't be my recommendation as it seems there is scope for expansion of the NSA article independent of its most important modern product line. Klbrain (talk) 03:01, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- Again, this boils down to there only being one or so articles that discuss the company outside the context of JP, demonstrating that the company’s notability is predicated, essentially, on JP solely. This does not seem to be a case of WP:RECENTISM as almost all of the articles on NSA relating to JP have spanned more than 2 decades and none are recent (it’s also possible to search news archive for older material but nothing has been offered up in that regard). Everything in the NSA article that does not pertain to JP could be rolled into the JP article in a single paragraph under a sub-heading for NSA. BTW, the company does not engage in franchising. They operate as an MLM, which is distinctly different. I appreciate you rolling back your objection to the merge proposal. I think that’s clearly the right way to go. Rhode Island Red (talk) 16:21, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- It is true that it easier to find sources for recent events rather than those from 30-40 years ago, when the company was founded, but that does create an article imbalance due to recentism. The 1991 episode doesn't appear to be isolated, as there were similar concerns in 1993, which relates to structures established in '86, as already discussed in the article. So the ponzi/pyramid issues does seem meet the test of multiple independent sources required in WP:CORPDEPTH. The WP:ILLCON argument argument is a good point, but the company's notability doesn't rely on the allegedly illegal activity; rather, it contributes to the case, in addition to the wider range of products and as a case study in multi-level marketing. The company seem to have drifted from there to the use of franchising, but those franchises seems to small that I wonder what the difference is! Overall, I wouldn't object to a merge; it just wouldn't be my recommendation as it seems there is scope for expansion of the NSA article independent of its most important modern product line. Klbrain (talk) 03:01, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- The single news article you linked to above referring to NSA pre-JP would not be considered in judging the company's notability as per WP:ILLCON; i.e., the news article (and the book you linked to) refer to a single litigation event. As for the book, I'd take a pretty firm stance that it's also not WP:RS in this context -- or probably any context. So I still don't see convincing evidence that the company is notable for anything more than JP; at least not enough to justify a separate page. If NSA were truly notable as a company, it would have received significant coverage in trade/business/financial articles, etc. There's probably a hundred sources that discuss JP/NSA together and maybe 1 or 2 that refer to NSA for anything else. It would be easy to roll that into the JP article. Otherwise it still strikes me as a needless fork. Have a look at WP:CORPDEPTH and WP:ILLCON. I would argue that they make a pretty airtight case for the current merger proposal. Rhode Island Red (talk) 01:11, 21 January 2018 (UTC)]]
- I agree the legal documents don't reach WP:RS, but non-routine newspaper coverage does, as does a book chapter (for example). Klbrain (talk) 20:40, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
References
- "MLM Law - COE v. NATIONAL SAFETY ASSOCIATES, INC. 134 F.R.D. 235 (1991)- Attorney Specializing in Multilevel Marketing and Direct Selling Reese, Poyfair, Richards". www.mlmlaw.com. Retrieved 20 January 2018.
- "MLM Legal". www.mlmlegal.com.
- Grady, Bill; Goozner, Merrill; O`Brien, John (19 February 1991). "Case Could Drain A Marketing Pool". Chicago Tribune. Retrieved 20 January 2018.
- Walsh, James (2009). You Can't Cheat an Honest Man: How Ponzi Schemes and Pyramid Frauds Work and Why They're More Common Than Ever. Silver Lake Publishing. p. 186-7.
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- Done, thanks. Johnuniq (talk) 09:13, 12 March 2016 (UTC)
Statement in the lead
Rhode Island Red, the statement in the lead that I replaced, "according to Quackwatch it is a 'colossal waste of money'", although I agree with it, I cringe when I read it as it does not sound encyclopedic at all, especially in the lead. "...as being excessively priced relative to its potential benefits" sounds a lot more neutral to me. If you don't like this change, how would you suggest we change this to make it neutral in POV and tone? Air.light (talk) 17:38, 16 July 2016 (UTC)
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Franchising
@Rhode Island Red: Starting a new section, as this is distinct from our discussion elsewhere. Regarding Juice Plus sales, they seem to be advertising franchises, but perhaps only for their overseas business? It's interesting that in order to start a franchise your application has to go through a ' Juice Plus+ contact' and you also have a 'Sponsor'; I wonder what renumeration they receive, and hence how close it is to corporate structures in the 80s and 90s? Perhaps I'm now too cynical! Anyway, as far as article content is concerned, is the issuing of franchises something that should be covered in the article? Klbrain (talk) 22:09, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- Interesting. Looks like it is specific to Great Britain, and what they are calling a "franchise" is nothing more than an MLM distributorship. Seems rather misleading. Don't see where there's anything relevant to mine for the article though. Rhode Island Red (talk) 14:31, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
- Perhaps not worth adding unless there was a published opinion that pitching as a "franchise" is more socially acceptable than advertising as an MLM distributorship. Klbrain (talk) 17:05, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 19 September 2018
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Please remove "Juice Plus+ is a branded line of dietary supplements containing concentrated fruit and vegetable juice extracts fortified with added vitamins and nutrients. It is produced by Natural Alternatives International of San Marcos, California, for National Safety Associates (NSA; Collierville, Tennessee). Introduced in 1993, the supplements are distributed by NSA via multi-level marketing.
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Replace with "Juice Plus+ is a branded line of whole foods containing 30 different fruits and vegetables grown in North America with no added sugars or preservatives with NSF certification. It is produced by The Juice Plus Company Global Office in Colliervielle, Tennessee (formerly NSA). Introduced in 1993 the products are sold through local distributors in over 20 different countries around the world. While defined as a multi-level marketing company Juice Plus does not ask any employee to hold product, take payment or be on the product themselves in order to sell it to others."
Please remove "Studies of Juice Plus' effects have generated conflicting and controversial results. Although Juice Plus claims its products' efficacy is backed by research, critics have argued that there is no scientific proof that Juice Plus offers significant health benefits and that deceptive claims are used in the product's marketing information. Many marketing claims made about Juice Plus products are false or misleading"
Replace with "Juice Plus is the most thoroughly researched brand name product in the world. Studies have proven Juice Plus does contain certain benefits, it is only on actually reading the studies located on their website from start to finish do you get the whole story behind the research done. Juice Plus is clinically proven to improve skin circulation (please link https://www.karger.com/Article/Abstract/330521), combat oxidative stress (please link https://www.cambridge.org/core/journals/british-journal-of-nutrition/article/supplementation-with-a-juice-powder-concentrate-and-exercise-decrease-oxidation-and-inflammation-and-improve-the-microcirculation-in-obese-women-randomised-controlled-trial-data/451DF71104D867B79B1AB87E6326943A) and a host of other positive changes. All of these studies are available for public viewing on their website in entirety for skeptics and believers alike to peruse." TDoll (talk) 18:13, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
- Th edits you have suggested are blatant WP:PROMO. Misplaced Pages is not a forum for product promotion and the likelihood of whitewashing the article as suggested is nil. Rhode Island Red (talk) 19:47, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
Outdated Information
A lot of this information seems pretty outdated, considering the current website/company offerings. Is there updated advertising/research/etc? 2603:6080:3CF0:7B0:65D6:F7C4:D79:8442 (talk) 23:53, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
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1. Request to add the following content due to research mention of combined total studies from recent and previous years: "About 41 leading hospitals and universities across the globe have conducted Juice Plus clinical studies." before the following paragraph in the research section: National Safety Associates, the owner of Juice Plus, claim that it is "the next best thing to eating fruits and vegetables", containing the "nutritional essence of 17 different fruits, vegetables, and grains" with key phytonutrients and that the product is absorbed by the body, reduces oxidative stress, promotes cardiovascular wellness, supports a healthy immune system, and helps protect DNA.
2. Request to add the following content due to clinical study that suggests an increase in omega-3 index for Juice Plus consumers: "Furthermore, studies have found that individuals taking Juice Plus along with a healthy diet can show an increase in red blood cells’ omega-3 index. " after the following paragraph in the research section: National Safety Associates, the owner of Juice Plus, claim that it is "the next best thing to eating fruits and vegetables", containing the "nutritional essence of 17 different fruits, vegetables, and grains" with key phytonutrients and that the product is absorbed by the body, reduces oxidative stress, promotes cardiovascular wellness, supports a healthy immune system, and helps protect DNA. Jennyb23 (talk) 20:04, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
- Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Both of these sources are directly linked to the company that makes Juice Plus, and thus not reliable per WP:REPUTABLE GiovanniSidwell (talk) 23:29, 1 March 2023 (UTC)
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