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| == To deal with in a dispute mediation: Israeli/Palestinian casualties leading up to the events == | |||
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| Source for balancing the background to the operation with fair reference to Israeli and Palestinian civilian casualties leading up to the bombings in Israel and the Operation following. | |||
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| ::The UN report on Jenin notes: | |||
| {{Calm talk}} | |||
| <blockquote> | |||
| Talk about your thoughts about the wikipedia article "Battle of Jenin". | |||
| 18. From the beginning of March until 7 May, Israel endured approximately 16 bombings, the large majority of which were suicide attacks. More than 100 persons were killed and scores more wounded. Throughout this period, the Government of Israel, and the international community, reiterated previous calls on the Palestinian Authority to take steps to stop terrorist attacks and to arrest the perpetrators of such attacks.</blockquote> | |||
| ==Cassus Belli== | |||
| <blockquote> | |||
| Why is is that we have a cassus belli entry on this article, we dont have cassus belli for other attacks by Palestinians - and isn't really general practice elsewhere (I'm sure if Bin Laden edited the S11 article he'd add a Cassus Belli entry. This legitimizes the attack by suggesting the actions where justified and is clearly P.O.V. We should either add Cassus Belli everywhere or not use it at all - it can't simply be used selectively whenever an editor decides something was justified. | |||
| 19. During this same period, IDF conducted two waves of military incursions primarily in the West Bank, and air strikes against both the West Bank and the Gaza Strip. The first wave began on 27 February 2002 and ended on approximately 14 March. Those incursions, which Israel stated were in pursuit of Palestinians who had carried out attacks against Israelis, involved the use of ground troops, attack helicopters, tanks and F-16 fighter jets in civilian areas, including refugee camps, causing significant loss of life among civilians.</blockquote> | |||
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| The text implies (or at least "it may be inferred from") that the PA suggested the 3,000 death toll. Is this true -- if so, say it, if not, say who did say "3,000"... -- ] | |||
| 20. Over the course of two days, 8 and 9 March, 18 Israelis were killed in two separate Palestinian attacks and 48 Palestinians were killed in the Israeli raids that followed.</blockquote> | |||
| <blockquote> | |||
| 21. Israeli military retaliation for terrorist attacks was often carried out against Palestinian Authority security forces and installations. This had the effect of severely weakening the Authority's capacity to take effective action against militant groups that launched attacks on Israelis. Militant groups stepped into this growing vacuum and increased their attacks on Israeli civilians. In many cases, the perpetrators of these attacks left messages to the effect that their acts were explicitly in revenge for earlier Israeli acts of retaliation, thus perpetuating and intensifying the cycle of violence, retaliation and revenge.</blockquote> | |||
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| 22. It was against this backdrop that the most extensive Israeli military incursions in a decade, Operation Defensive Shield, were carried out. The proximate cause of the operation was a terrorist attack committed on 27 March in the Israeli city of Netanya...</blockquote> | |||
| '''2. Intro - Calling the events a battle while allowing reference to perceptions of a massacre.''' (the arguments around this issue are listed in prior discussions above) | |||
| :Beats me. I was just answering a question on a talk page, by copying a couple of factoids from the ] article. My impression was that some anti-Israeli political group was trying to get Israel in trouble with the UN, by claiming ] or ]. | |||
| ] (]) 22:38, 23 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Hi LamaLoLeshLa. I think Elonka has in mind brief pts, like #1 above, without going into the accompanying evidence. ] | ] 23:02, 23 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::: Correct. Also, I'm noticing that there are several places in the article where tags have been placed, requesting sources or whatnot. Some of these tags have been on the article for a long time, so I recommend some cleanup. Specifically: Any statement that has been {{tl|fact}} tagged for over 30 days, should just be deleted. Also, rather than placing a "weasel" template at the top of the page, I recommend either changing text that is of concern, or using {{tl|weasel-inline}} templates at the specific locations of the words that are problematic. And again, anything that isn't addressed within a reasonable amount of time, let's just delete out of the article. Thanks, --]]] 23:11, 23 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Hi again. It might also help if bullet #1 more specific. As I recall, the archives will show much discussion of Palestinian casualty numbers and a table of sources. Does #1 reflect a dispute above about Israeli civilians and, if so, what reference are editors seeking in the article? Thanks. ] | ] 10:23, 24 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::] - I think LamaLoLeshLa is attempting to point us to another very significant factor, well covered in the RS but not included in the points I've identified above. Viz, that all the time Israel was calling on the PA to control terrorists, it was destroying Arafat's security apparatus. Recent (anonymous) confessions by IDF soldiers collected demonstrate that Israel also set about the mass killing of Palestinian policemen on an exclusively ethnic basis. This is not OR on my part, the UN specifically links cause and effect with "''This had the effect of severely weakening the Authority's capacity to take effective action against militant groups that launched attacks on Israelis"''. Perhaps your good sense can decide if this is such a significant factor that it has to be prominently included alongside all mention of suicide and other terrorism. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 11:44, 24 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I think this article neds to focus on the Battle of Jenin, not a whole range of factiors which might be impossible to reflect in one article. We can focus on each side's statements of their reasons for acting, withoput trying to describe the entire conflict here. --] (]) 13:31, 24 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::To clarify, there was some talkpage controversy at a while ago regarding the fact that some people wanted to include detailed information on Israeli casualties leading up to the operation while omitting Palestinian casualties leading up to the operation. The same goes for this set of events. I agree with you Sm that we shouldn't go into too much detail. The truth is, at present, there is very detailed info here on Palestinian assaults on Israel as background to the Jenin incursions. There is nothing about the Israeli assaults on the West Bank as background to the Jenin incursions. Bo0th are relevant, as the violence went both ways, almost constantly in overlap during 2002 - there was no clea start and ending, cause and effect.] (]) 19:06, 24 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::If you want to describe the so-called Israeli provocations which you feel serve as some sort of rationale for terrorist bombings and attacks, the place to do so is in the articles pertaining to palestinian actions. There is no reason to explain past Israeli actions in an article which itself focuses on an israeli action in Jenin. To do that would be to dilute the ''Palestinian'' side, since this article should focus on their concerns and grievances in regards to this attack. --] (]) 19:23, 24 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :Kind of like the "World Conference on Racism" in September 2001 which only found one country (suprise! Israel) as racist -- although it permits Arabs to be citizens and permits non-Jews to practice their religion. Other countries, such as the non-democratic Arab bloc which persecute non-Islamic people, got no criticism. --] | |||
| ::::::We have it on excellent authority that Israel's actions had the effect of making it (much?) more difficult for the PA to control militancy. If you think that this information is surplus to the requirements of this article (and I'm entirely prepared to meet you halfway on this as on the other factors), then the obvious solution is to leave out mention of group actions by Palestinians. They can and should be treated as criminal and individual/gang in nature, not as "political". ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 18:40, 27 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ==precursors== | |||
| :::::I did not say that Israeli offensives served as rationale for Palestinian attacks. Nor do I think there is any rationale for killing civilians. Violence begets violence, the circle - who knows where it begins? That is what I said. Please try to avoid putting words in people's mouths. Thanks ] (]) 19:35, 24 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I have added a precursors section as nothing happens in a vacuum | |||
| ] 20:21, 11 October 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ==Battle== | |||
| I plan to work on this section a bit. Try to make it read a bit better and clearer. I will justify my changes here. ] 20:21, 11 October 2005 (UTC) I worked it over quite a bit, presenting the Israel and consensus point of view, while not editing out the Palestinian position. I added some footnotes. Please check out my sources before you edit. ] 00:16, 14 October 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :Thanks for putting the time in to sort out tedious text, good job! I did a few edits to 1-2 where I thought was a bit too OR, and also retrieved some sourced material that you had removed (although in paraphrase and shortened). You left in the part about 'war crimes' but took out the context, so I re-added it. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 13:33, 14 October 2005 (UTC) | |||
| == To deal with in a dispute mediation, take 2: Working towards resolution == | |||
| ::Done a bit of my own. -- ] 23:19, 14 October 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :''(Well, I see there's an effort to reorganize. It's generally better to leave threads intact once there are comments. Also, please sign your posts or refactoring. Anyway, here's my comment on this item, copied from above:) Hi again. It might also help if bullet #1 more specific. As I recall, the archives will show much discussion of Palestinian casualty numbers and a table of sources. Does #1 reflect a dispute above about Israeli civilians and, if so, what reference are editors seeking in the article? Thanks.'' ] | ] 23:56, 24 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| == identifying civilian from combatant == | |||
| ::There was indeed a "table of sources" (it was loaded into WP as a template, whether rightly or wrongly I don't know) including many "estimates of total casualties". Israeli estimates were up to 381% wrong according to their own official account - no similar calculation can be carried out on the Palestinian figure, since an official death-toll has never been released. (The UN figure covers a wider area and a longer period but is within 1% of early Palestinian estimates). | |||
| this article is biased. Wherever the word Israel appears, language is curbed and the circumstances are glossed over. Wherever independent sources appear the claims are quickly rebuked. what a joke /lame. | |||
| ::Unfortunately the template in question was deleted as being in the wrong place, nobody seems to know what's the right place. Perhaps you have a suggestion, because it makes interesting reading, and is far more significant than the Hasbara section on "Allegations of a massacre". ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 18:59, 27 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ==No re-factoring== | |||
| Editors unfamiliar with the processes of the project have sometimes made discussions much more difficult with four obvious mistakes and breaches of process. | |||
| #Failure to indent their contributions. | |||
| #Insertion of comments into the middle of listings of others in a disruptive fashion. | |||
| #Denial on grounds of perceived "truth" of information firmly based on RS reports. | |||
| #Moving the comments of others. | |||
| For myself, any of these practices may be a breach of AGF requiring adjudication by the mediator. The same for personalising the discussion - if you have real allegations of cheating then make them carefully and in detail in a new section or another well-signposted page. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ==Mediation Issues, please comment on the most important== | |||
| Please add in main points with relevant sources (not just rhetoric), below.] (]) 00:12, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I am copying PR's suggestions from above, down here, slightly edited. Please sign all additions as it will be assumed that the rest are PR's suggestions. (PR, if you mind this copy-pasting, feel free to delete. Or, if you'd like to sign your suggestions, that could make things more navigable, too)] (]) 00:12, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| <span style="color:blue;">Background and aftermath:</span> | |||
| I have removed a section from this text that claims that Palestinian civilian deaths can be imputed to the difficulty in "identifying civilian from combatant". This is POV and frankly does not tally with events as reported. | |||
| :1) <s>Fair and balanced reference to Israeli and Palestinian civilian casualties leading up to the bombings in Israel and the Operation following. ] (]) 02:02, 25 July 2008 (UTC)</s> ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :2) The action in Jenin refugee camp went on for months, curfews were still being applied (and people killed in and and out of curfew) for a long time. (The UN notes two further incursions by August, some observers imply that Israel was continuously present for months afterwards). Iain Hook (chief of the reconstruction project) shot dead while inside the UN compound by Israeli forces, on 22nd Nov 2002 and an ] shot and badly injured in the thigh at almost exactly the same time. 13 other UN workers said to have been shot dead that year. PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| :::Some mention of the aftermath needed - ex-Israeli academic tells us there was a popular television music-show concert staged in the middle of the bull-dozed section after the incident. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| <span style="color:blue;">Inclusion/framing of statements made by Sharon & his advisor:</span> | |||
| :1) Sharon was widely reported to have told representatives of the world's media on 5th March that a month before the incursions (and before the surge of suicide bombings that is already mentioned in the article). This statement by Sharon was linked even by the otherwise pro-Israel directly to the military action that followed: ''"He went on to do just that, unleashing a broader military offensive than anything seen so far in the past 17 months of fighting."'' (Colin Powell was another who criticized Sharon for what he said). PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| :::This may be the single easiest and least controversial inclusion to make. Although we're not going to say it, the individual in question has been harshly criticised (even by the US and Israel) for attacking civilians over a period of almost 50 years. The words themselves are widely reported as if we're supposed to draw conclusions from them - and of course the RS's did exactly that. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :2) Sharons advisor told the UN special envoy, Terje Roed-Larsen that he to tell us what is right or wrong". PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| <span style="color:blue;">Individual incidents within the entire operation:</span> | |||
| :1) reported that Israel was putting refrigerated trailers into the camp, many report they were seen there and quoted Army spokesman Brig. Gen. Ron Kitrey telling us the bodies would be buried at a special cemetery in the Jordan Valley. An told us there were 200 of these bodies to be disposed of - but an application to the stopped it. PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| :::This is just insinuation and hearsay. etc etc --] (]) 15:38, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :2) Clips from by one of the bulldozer drivers to an Israeli newspaper provided a different perspective on the way that some parts of this operation were carried out. PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| :::See my reply above. --] (]) 15:38, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :3) A single (small but) actual "up-against-the-wall-massacre" reported in careful detail, with the two perpetrators identified, and the . PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| :::Allegations are already dealt with repeatedly in article. --] (]) 15:38, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :4) Allegations that the Israelis mined the refugee camp before they left. PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| :5) Account of the third group that made a visit and presented a "Jenin Investigation", still finding complete bodies 3 months later. (We don't have a source and can't say what this might do to the death toll). PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| :6) A new section on the overpowering smell in the camp once it was re-opened, as reported by almost every one of the international observers - eg the : ''The smell of decomposing bodies hung over at least six heaps of rubble today, and weeks of excavation may be needed before an accurate death toll can be made.'' PR, 23 July 2008 | |||
| :::A section on the smell.' This does not seem like an encyclopedic or credible approach to this highly important topic. To answer your point, concerns about the smell and any other allegations are already dealt with by inclusion of numerous sources like Amnesty intl, the UN, BBC and many other credible groups taking various positions on factual evidence. --] (]) 15:40, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| The many cases documented in the reports compiled by Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch confirm that many of the civilians were killed | |||
| <span style="color:blue;">Massacre discussion:</span> | |||
| a) in situations where their role as non-combatant was beyond any reasonable doubt | |||
| :1) Leave to a later date. Meaning of the word, use by both Israeli and Palestinian sources, western media use of and western sources unhappiness with word. "Jenin Massacre" widely used in English, use in other languages. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I disagree with all of this, as massive ] and ]. --] (]) 13:42, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| The proposal of commentary and providing undue weight to such topics is rejected by me. All of the above is opposed. I also concur with Steve's assessment of this attempt to break OR and SOAP. ] (]) 14:19, 28 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :I am waiting for some kind of substantive discussion, or addition of further points, beyond: "I disagree." This surprises no one. What we are trying? to do is to resolve our disagreements, not reiterate that we disagree, with the full understanding that it will probably be a long, but hopefully not unpleasant, process.] (]) 21:45, 29 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Sorry, that's about all I have to say for now. thanks. --] (]) 15:13, 30 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::'''Question:''' Have you looked into the material yourself to see if it holds water? What is it you are trying to accomplish with the article exactly? <b>]'']''</b> 13:05, 30 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Some of our fellow editors might prefer we examine such issues later. After all, discovering such factual errors after going into the mediation process would perhaps cast some slight shadow of doubt over all 10 points raised. However, it would not have this effect on the "Kurdi Bear" interview, since . (As did another). After 14 months we could finally move forwards. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 20:28, 31 July 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::PalestineRemembered, | |||
| ::::# Please review past discussions and make note of why these subjects were previously rejected by members of the community. It might be good to try to address these concerns. | |||
| ::::# Feel free to answer my question as well, it was not meant only for LamaLoLeshLa. | |||
| ::::With respect, <b>]'']''</b> 07:17, 1 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::It's a very good idea of yours to look at past discussions - since they contain gems like this: ''"Jaakobou, you open up sections like the one on "war crimes," invite all to participate, and then when it's thoroughly established that there were no findings of Palestinian "war crimes," and strong "prima facie evidence of Israeli war crimes," you simply ignore what emerged from your own discussion, and go back to edit-warring. Then you open up a discussion on "Pallywood," and when faced with critiques you cannot answer - such as a detailed demonstration of the obscurity of both the "film" ''Pallywood'' (in actuality a Youtube video) and the conspiracy theory the film helped to disseminate through the right-wing pro-Israel blogosphere - you abandon the discussion and ignore it."'' What I don't find is any evidence that the subjects listed above were "rejected by members of the community". | |||
| :::::Over and above such sterile exchanges, there is much that is valuable, including statements from many sources and contributors (including yourself) that (I feel sure) will validate each of the 9 points remaining above. | |||
| :::::And I'll be pleased to answer the same question you posed to ] - I'm here to build an online encyclopedia in a collaborative venture with people interested and determined to do the same thing. Now I've answered your question, will you answer mine? ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 16:06, 1 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::'''Answer''': What I am trying to accomplish is an article in which, as I mentioned earlier, we represent the debate around the events at Jenin, that we represent the Israeli official narrative and the Palestinian offical narrative, and the international official narrative, and point out the discrepancies between them, rather than trying to give one or another source a monopoly on establishing the facts of the matter. What I want to see is an article that does not just present this as a battle, but presents this as a flashpoint in worldwide awareness of the scale of Operation Defensive Shield, as well as flashpoint in the discussion within the Arab world. In order to represent the extent of the flurry of discussion around this horrible series of events, and the impact on Israeli-Palestinian relations at the time, we need to see the points raised by PR mentioned in some way or another. For instance, the smell following the events at Jenin is still referred to within Palestinian circles, has entered the Palestinian narrative, and should be represented thus, not omitted. I do not say this in order to argue for or against the accuracy or inaccuracy of the reports of the lingering odor of dead bodies, in itself, but to argue for inclusion of the allegations of 'the smell' and the debate for and against the legitimacy of the reports.] (]) 23:22, 1 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Hi LamaLoLeshLa, glad to see you explain your approach. It's admirable but I'm not sure entirely suitable. I have my doubts when you say "point out the discrepancies between them" -- which sounds like ] and when you want to present it not as a battle but as a flashpoint -- which sounds like a strong editorial POV. Regarding the flashpoint, though, I agree that the reactions to the battle are notable, but I believe they are covered in the article (though improvements most welcome). Thanks muchly. ] | ] 03:15, 3 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Re: "pointing out discrepancies": What I mean by this is that the reader of the article should come away understanding that this is a narrative rife with discrepancies on both sides, and that this is part of the story.] (]) 05:22, 26 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::LamaLoLeshLa, | |||
| See the cases listed in Amnesty International's report on Jenin: ] | |||
| :::'''Points above:''' There are a few problems with the above points and I avoided responding to them since (a) a few others already have, and (b) I'm trying to avoid anything that will give rise to my old disputes/complaints against PalestineRemembered. In fact, I probably shouldn't have asked him to look up the history since he used it as an excuse to copy-paste an old uncivil comment ("gem") towards me. | |||
| :::'''Moving the article where you want to:''' If you are interested in adding a mention to the Palestinian discussion on the smell at the scene, you need to establish this as a notable issue (for an encyclopedia) with reliable sources. If you provide high quality sources such as BBC, CNN and similar who discuss the smell at the scene or better yet, an array of ''highly regarded'' (clarify: not barely known) Arabic sources, then there could be room for that material to have a niche in the page. It depends, as far as I am in concern, on establishing it as a valid point with proper sourcing. Which are the sources supporting this Palestinian narrative as a very notable issue? (suggest you start a new section here on the talk page and lets examine what the sources say) | |||
| :::Cordially, <b>]'']''</b> 11:59, 2 August 2008 (UTC) clarify 12:02, 2 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Briefly, I do not have the time to get into this at the moment, but I wanted to be clear - I don't believe it would need to be 'very notable', notable suffices. As far as Arabic sources - I am certain that Arabic sources deal with this matter, however, I do not read Arabic, alas. ] (]) 16:55, 2 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
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| :* That there is a ] on the image's description page for the use in this article. | |||
| I quote from Amnesty International's report on Jenin: | |||
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| "In several cases the IDF caused the deaths of Palestinians by demolishing homes while residents were still inside. IDF soldiers frequently failed to give adequate warnings before demolishing houses, refused to allow family and neighbours to warn residents, failed to offer help themselves or to call rescue units or ambulances and sometimes shot at those who tried to help." ] | |||
| == Peres and Haaretz == | |||
| ] | |||
| :''Regarding the following diff: '' | |||
| :Problem is that the way you've changed it assumes that the "at least 22" bit is a fact - which is disputed. -- ] 13:25, 12 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
| A) There's a few issues with this paragraph. For starters, some undo claims about the respectability of Haaretz - it is no more respected than all the other sources in the article and they don't have "respectability" mentions. Secondly, there's too much copy-pasting, leading to a ]. And thirdly, the text should be made into a short explanation of what Haaretz reported rather than a couple long quotes. Please rewrite the paragraph before reinsertion. | |||
| : I read some of the report, and found this diclaimer: | |||
| :: "IDF figures give 52 Palestinians killed and say that only 14 were not fighters (i.e every Palestinian male between 15 and 55 was counted as a fighter). '''Amnesty International has not studied each case'''; '''according to Palestinian statistics''' and Human Rights Watch about 22 of those killed were fighters. According to an UNRWA survey taken in the Jenin refugee camp after the IDF left the camp in April, only one person is currently reported as missing. See Israel, the Occupied West Bank and Gaza Strip, and Palestinian Authority Territories : Jenin IDF Military Operations, Human Rights Watch Report. | |||
| : Since they data relies on secondary sources, it is disputed. The situation is that now almost everyone agrees on about 52 death toll but there are still disputs over the amounts of civilian killed, and how many were indeed killed by the IDF and bot by their fellows militants' booby traps. ] 13:33, 12 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
| B) Best I'm aware, the paper retracted this article - i.e. printed out a retraction. Anyone else aware of this issue? | |||
| :The same quote doesn't say that HRW didn't study each case though...? Actually why does the article say that 7 civilians were killed according to the IDF, when actually it was 14? -- ] 13:47, 12 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Cheers, <b>]'']''</b> 06:28, 14 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :: The text is based on a press report or citation, but since many links turned dead it will take time to find it. I'll do it soon. ] 17:18, 12 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :I'd never seen the original of this before. Perhaps now it's confirmed that Foreign Minister Shimon Peres used the word "massacre" (and in the general sense too, not the limited "up-against-the-wall" fashion) we can remove the entire blogosphere "Was there a massacre?" discussion and re-instate "also known as 'Jenin Massacre'". (Google tells us that the latter is more than twice as popular as the name we're currently using anyway, making it ridiculous not to have it mentioned). | |||
| :And we can now say for certainty that the death toll amongst Palestinians was at least twice what Israel later tried to claim that it was. That would save us using the embarrassing, never-confirmed Washington Times figure for number of deaths, referenced only to Rense.com, PapillonsPalace and assorted blogs. | |||
| :Shall I update the list of not yet in the article? ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 10:17, 14 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I think this quote is definitely notable, and should be included, although perhaps rewritten (unless, of course, a retraction is found). However, I don't think it means that the incident is now known as a massacre. Peres is not a neutral, third-party source here. He is a savvy politician, and may very well have been trying to undermine Sharon. IMO, we should call it a massacre only if and when there's a consensus among historians that this is what the incident was. -- ] (]) 11:08, 14 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::The quote seems to be somewhat "private", but Haaretz's report is indeed notable - retraction or not. Still, the COPYVIO by PalestineRemembered is a problem and should be amended. As a side note it's pertinent to add that as soon as the camp was opened, Haaretz quickly and reliably reported that there was no massacre in Jenin during or after the fighting. <b>]'']''</b> 14:18, 14 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::I've found Haaretz's . At least unlike several other news outlets they corrected this error the following day. Not bad. <b>]'']''</b> 16:28, 15 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :: Well, I found earlier estimation in Time's article <blockquote> Then came the counting of casualties — and arguments about the count. Throughout the operation, Palestinian officials had said that as many as 800 had been killed. As is the case in the Middle East, the figure was inflated to fit local beliefs of Israeli depravity and Palestinian victimization: last week an Iranian waiter in Rome told an Israeli visitor of 16,000 people slaughtered in Jenin. The reality was different, though body counts and estimates of civilian casualties vary. Charles Kapes, the deputy chief of the U.N. office in the camp, says 54 dead have been pulled from the wreckage and 49 Palestinians are missing, of whom 18 are residents of the camp. Human Rights Watch says 52 were killed, of whom only 27 were thought to be armed Palestinians. The Israelis say they found 46 dead in the rubble, including a pile of five bodies that had been booby-trapped. Of these 46, say the Israelis, all but three were "fighters," men ages 18 to 40. The Jenin Hospital, meanwhile, says 52 camp residents died, including five women and four children under the age of 15. Of the 43 dead men, eight were 55 or older and therefore probably not involved in the fighting. No matter whose figures one accepts, "there was no massacre," concludes Amnesty's Holley. </blockquote> So what we realy learned here that it agreed the only 52-54 Palestinian were killed, the inner body count and classification of the dead is still hotly disputed. ] 21:37, 12 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::::That's not a retraction, it's simply a different article from different sources on a topic only vaguely related. The papers own reporters refer to "international reaction as soon as the world learns the details" the wire service says "feared Palestinian officials would distort". When were Palestinian officials ever quoted, other than with abuse over "high" death toll estimates, or (allegedly) by cult-owned newspapers with ridiculously low death-toll estimates? | |||
| ::::I have a second question for you, the answer to which is long overdue - when can we put all the other well referenced material on this incident into the article - or is that to be permanently rejected on the non-policy objections displayed ? ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 10:45, 16 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::PalestineRemembered, I've been trying to improve our correspondence but it is a bit difficult when already discussed arguments are repeated -- such as the 'google test' and the 'cult-owned' samples. I'm also having difficulty understanding why you'd call the two Haaretz articles "only vaguely related" and I'm thinking it would be best if you run this content by your mentor first before reinserting it again into the article. | |||
| == Massacre = Hoax == | |||
| :::::With respect, <b>]'']''</b> 10:44, 17 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Jaakobou, stop removing RELIABLE SOURCES which contain important information about what happened in Jenin. Feel free to include the second Ha'aretz story, but is FALSE to call it a retraction. Peres does not deny that he was/is "very worried about the expected international reaction as soon as the world learns the details of the tough battle in the Jenin refugee camps, where more than 100 Palestinians have already been killed in fighting with IDF forces." Peres IS correct here, since there was a STRONG INTERNATIONAL REACTION. Also, in the second story, he does not deny his original (and probably accurate) description, when he privately said what happened in Jenin is "a massacre." What happened is that Peres CHANGED HIS MIND about how he is now referring to Jenin. This is very important evidence that there was a massacre, and is known politically as "damage control." The IDF repeatedly made statements which were probably accurate, then revised those statements to hide the fact that there was probably a massacre. Sharon has been associated with massacres of civilians throughout his career. Your repeated: 1) deletion of evidence of an Israeli massacre, 2) altering the published conclusions of the UN and human rights organizations when you delete the words "AT LEAST" when referring to the number of Palestinian dead, and 3) using CAMERA as if it were RS, when, in fact, it is a Zionist propaganda source is WP:NPOV. And stop your false accusations against PalestineRemembered WP:CIV. You should apologize to him. I've seen you do this before, and I imagine you are now going to make false accusations about sock puppets. I AM NOT PalestineRemembered, I never have communicated with PalestineRemembered, and unless you have conclusive proof, STOP your uncivil habit of making repeated reckless derogatory speculations.] (]) 19:53, 17 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I have to say, I believe that when used in referece to Jenin, the term "massacre" is a gross exaggeration, but I feel calling it a "hoax" is also completely inappropriate. A hoax is something that is completely false, basely and quite POV. In my opinion it would be a hoax is the IDF never entered Jenin. I don't know if some people are in denial but people genuinely died in this conflict. | |||
| :::::I have a book by Haaretz correspondents Avi Issacharoff and Amos Harel (the one who wrote the article in question) called in English "The Seventh War", published in 2004. (translated into French as "La septième guerre d'Israël". It's about the Second Intifada and discusses the battle and the massacre allegations. Can I use it? -- ] (]) 10:37, 18 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::You'd be welcome - except the "massacre allegations" are Israel's Public Relations - a device for denial. | |||
| ::::::After 6 days in which to cover up the evidence (and mine the camp), Israel finally allowed very restricted access. On that first day (16th April) two US papers (Newsday, Washington Post) casually told us that they could see "no evidence of a massacre", apparently forgetting that absence of evidence is not evidence of absence. | |||
| ::::::But other sources were brutal indeed, saying things like "The smell of decomposing bodies hung over at least six heaps of rubble today" (New York Times) and "A monstrous war crime that Israel has tried to cover up for a fortnight" (Independent) and "The refugees I had interviewed ... were not lying. If anything, they underestimated the carnage and the horror." (Guardian) and "permeated with the stench of rotting corpses and cordite" (different Independent story) and ""Rarely in more than a decade of war reporting ... such disrespect for human life" (Times) | |||
| ::::::On that day, even the Israeli Supreme Court was being told "IDF leaving dead to rot in Jenin". | |||
| ::::::If, after all that, you still think there is something relevant, it could go in a separate section - remember that it's unverifiable in English, so please provide a proper page or so of translation containing any clips you want to use (but I'll not raise any objection to you doing the translation yourself). ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 18:09, 18 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Fair enough. I guess it's a question of how much weight is to be given to media impressions. After all, I'm sure there were some heaps of rubble and nasty smells during, say, the ], but that article doesn't detail all that, certainly not as evidence of the death toll. Anyway, considering the sensitivity of the subject, I'll wat a while for further input. -- ] (]) 18:24, 18 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::Please don't stop! I'd be very interested to learn what these journalists made of the denialist propaganda spin put on this affair. Probably see a dramatically different angle on . However, it's near enough an irrelevant side-show to the actual story. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 22:05, 18 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ===Removal of sources=== | |||
| Hi, I still have no strong opinion on the content of this article one way or the other, but I am concerned by edits like this, which appear to be removing reliably sourced information. Is there consensus for this, or what exactly is the concern? Are the sources unreliable in some way? Is the information from those sources not being properly interpreted? It would seem to me that if the citations are good, then it would be better to keep the citations in place, and just edit the information ''from'' those citations, rather than deleting everything at once. --]]] 17:11, 18 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :Hi, Elonka. I'm rather new to this article. As you probably know, this isn't an easy place to work. Jaakobou has reverted a couple of times and has given his reasons. He seems to come by only once a day or so, and meanwhile I'm trying to get a consensus per ]. The discussion has not been too constructive so far. I have made a suggestion and am waiting for a reply. The sources are reliable, but are somewhat contradictory, due to the nature of the incident and the media coverage of it. It may be possible to edit "from" the citations, but that might stretch ] - I think it's better to rely on later, more conclusive accounts, rather than synthesize real-time news reports. -- ] (]) 17:39, 18 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I don't wish to make a case against PR on a content talk page, but the content issue can be, I hope, fairly easily followed from the top of the section -- ]. A major point of concern right now is that old issues are being brought up again in a ] attempt to change the final reports of the event. For example, the final Palestinian report (April '''30''') said 56 casualties and now, based on a (later corrected) report from April '''9''' - there's a push to persuade us to inflate the death toll and rename the article "Jenin massacre". (See also ]) | |||
| If no-one replies within 3 days or so I'll remove the category reference (which is what I'm writing this because of). Please reply with your views on this. -- ] 03:50, 19 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::I'm still trying to figure out the best way to handle this clash of versions, but being that the initial April 9 report was retracted the following day, it cannot be posted as is without further thought and discussion. Personally, I feel PR is in breach of several ] but as I don't wish to enhance on our past disputes, I suggested he address the issues to his assigned mentor. | |||
| ::Let me know if there's anything else that needs clarification. <b>]'']''</b> 19:18, 18 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::1) It is not true that the April 9 report was retracted the following day, and Jaakobou does not provide a source for his assertion, since there is none. 2) The source of the assertion that "the final Palestinian report (April '''30''') said 56 casualties" is from the Washington Times, which is in not a reliable source (it is owned by the ], which is controlled by the convicted ]) and the best evidence is that NO OTHER AMERICAN NEWSPAPER RAN THE STORY. NOT ONE! Doing an internet search for a match reveals all of the other citations for this claim are either from Zionist blogs, or THE GOVERNMENT OF ISRAEL. 3) the false accusation that I am PR is being repeated. There is no evidence that I am PR, but that is the way of ]; you don't need any evidence to make a false accusation. 4) One example of ] tactics is working to delete inconvenient reliably sourced facts which are unfavorable to Israel. I see that an attempt is being made to delete the hasbara page, which details the dishonest and underhanded tactics the Zionists use, which again, is the removing of information that they do not like. Do we want a POV majority vote here, or the truth? Because right now, the truth loses. Also check out the unethical attempt by ] to secretly infiltrate Misplaced Pages. They got caught.] (]) 01:21, 19 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::The disruptive reverts and other conduct at this article is highly reminiscent of the situation at the linked article ], where one editor (including an admin) for over 18 months. (The inclusions being so bitterly fought over there were ], so should not have lasted a minute). Look at the TalkPage there too, note the extensive time-wasting and non-policy arguments used to buttress the tendacious editing. | |||
| ::::Similarily in this case we have highly relevant elements () being excluded by arguments that don't even pretend to be policy. | |||
| ::::However, I would warn the IP editor that, while frustrating good editing has long been a well-established (but mysteriously tolerated) art, there is an increasingly powerful movement to make CIVIL the only enforceable policy of the project. As a result, Reliable Sources policy has been pretty nearly replaced by IDONTLIKEIT policy in 100s of articles relating to the I-P conflict. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 12:17, 19 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Well, a quick Google search has found two sources, which support the retraction theory. one is by the Haaretz correspondent in London, and one is by the director of the Palestinian American Research Center in Ramallah. I suggest we add the Haaretz reports with this evidence of retraction, as per Elonka's suggestion. Comments? --] (]) 06:31, 20 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::1) is NOT a retraction. Another newspaper, The Guardian, cannot retract something which appeared in Ha'aretz. Only Ha'aretz can retract something which appeared in Ha'aretz. The fact that there is no link from Ha'aretz making a retraction is proof that the information was NOT retracted. 2) does NOT support the contention that there even was a retraction. The relevent section says, "That atrocities which in scope and scale extend well beyond those committed elsewhere in the West Bank have taken place in Jenin is beyond question. On April 9, in fact, Ha’aretz quoted Peres as characterizing Israeli conduct toward the residents of Jenin refugee camp as 'a massacre'—albeit in the context of the Nobel Laureate’s concern over international reaction, rather than the massacre itself—while in the same article military officers were quoted as stating that 'when the world sees the pictures of what we have done there, it will do us immense damage.' The following day, Ha’aretz reported that the Israeli Foreign Ministry had established a PR committee to deal with the consequences, another indication that the world best prepare for the worst." Setting up a public relations committee is NOT a retraction. Since there continues to be NO evidence that Ha'aretz retracted its story, I am returning the original Ha'aretz story on the Battle of Jenin page.] (]) 10:41, 20 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Not sure I agree. I think the Haaretz correspondent is reliable enough to say the statement was retracted. The quote I was referring to in the second link is this :"Indeed, a statement several days earlier by military spokesperson Ron Kitri that “hundreds” had been killed in Jenin almost immediately was retracted by his superiors, who elaborated that “hundreds” referred to both dead and wounded, and that the actual death toll was in the dozens and almost exclusively limited to armed Palestinians." I used this source because I don't think it's likely that the author works for the "Hasbara". -- ] (]) 10:52, 20 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I haven't been following this article for a while, but would like to add my 2 cents on this particular dispute (about April 9 'event'). I'm really not sure how many people here actually read the Haaretz article, but on careful inspection, it's clear that the (badly-written, I might add) version puts an unnecessary spin on this article, which is fairly ordinary. There are the following problems with this version: | |||
| :I agree, putting this in the category ''Hoax'' is a totally disproportionate and misjudged classification. I can't see any possible reasoned argument supporting the Hoax classification, please change ASAP. --] 04:06, 19 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| * The section in the Misplaced Pages article (''Fluctuations in reported deaths'') is about reported deaths, not about reactions. Anything Peres supposedly said, if it's notable and verifiable, should go into a 'Reactions' section. | |||
| * The Haaretz article says that Peres "In private, Peres is referring to the battle as a 'massacre.'" Not sure how the Haaretz writers should know what Peres says in private, but this is clearly not the main idea behind the article (despite the provocative title), and the claim is exceptional, so it requires an ], and not a shoddy passage in an Haaretz article. For claims like this, if true, it's dodgy at best and inconceivable at worst, that there is only a single source with a brief mention. | |||
| * The current Misplaced Pages prose meshes together Peres's alleged comment with comments by IDF soldiers, a passage that is taken verbatim from the Haaretz article. This is highly confusing to the reader, and implies that Peres actually said those things about justification. Furthermore, it is not clear how 'IDF officers'{{who}} (might not represent even a tenth of all IDF officers in the battle - Haaretz doesn't elaborate) are notable in this case. The official IDF position is the responsibility of the IDF Spokesperson. | |||
| In light of all of the above problems, I can't see how the Haaretz source alone is sufficient to make the claims in the article, or why they should even be made in the context of fluctuating casualty reports. -- ] <sup>(])</sup> 12:34, 20 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :I'm guessing that the person who put it in this category feels that the many massacre accusations were a hoax, which they apparently were. Yes, people died in this conflict, which is only to be expected in a pitched battle between armed combatants; comparable numbers of soldiers on each side were killed. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 02:17, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :These points are valid. Right now, I don't want to aggravate the edit war. I'll try and work on a draft for the article, using the book I mentioned above, but it'll take some time. Anyway, I've also found Haaretz article, a speech by its then-editor, Hanoch Marmari, in which he says there was no massacre, and that some of his correspondents "might have been obsessive in their determination to unearth a massacre in a refugee camp". -- ] (]) 12:59, 20 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I'm looking forwards to hearing about the contents of this book, but it's about presentation, not the event itself as we're trying to document. There is of course nothing to indicate in the that anything about Perez's language was "retracted". ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 07:20, 21 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ==ArbCom restrictions== | |||
| :: I strongly oppose to removing this category. Since the accusation of alleged "massacre" and "mass atrocities" was so widely circulated, even in the Western media, and is still being used in anti-Israel propaganda, and since there is a long history of anti-Semitic ]s, this is not just a mere hoax, but one designed to bring old hatred back alive. Words can kill, and a serious encyclopedia is the right place to reassert NPOV. | |||
| Hi all, as a reminder, this article falls within the scope of the ] arbitration case. As such, in January 2008 the ] authorized uninvolved administrators to place additional restrictions as needed: "''Any uninvolved administrator may, on his or her own discretion, impose sanctions on any editor working in the area of conflict if, despite being warned, that editor repeatedly or seriously fails to adhere to the purpose of Misplaced Pages, any expected standards of behavior, or any normal editorial process. The sanctions imposed may include blocks of up to one year in length; bans from editing any page or set of pages within the area of conflict; bans on any editing related to the topic or its closely related topics; restrictions on reverts or other specified behaviors; or any other measures which the imposing administrator believes are reasonably necessary to ensure the smooth functioning of the project.''" | |||
| ::* Israel's actions in Jenin were "every bit as repellent" as Osama bin Laden's attack on New York on September 11, (Guardian, lead editorial, April 17 2002) | |||
| ::* "We are talking here of massacre, and a cover-up, of genocide," (a leading columnist for the Evening Standard, London's main evening newspaper, April 15.) | |||
| ::* "Rarely in more than a decade of war reporting from Bosnia, Chechnya, Sierra Leone, Kosovo, have I seen such deliberate destruction, such disrespect for human life," (Janine di Giovanni, the London Times, April 16.) ]←]←] 07:16, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| I recommend that everyone read the section under ], such as, "''Editors are reminded that when editing in subject areas of bitter and long-standing real-world conflict, it is all the more important to comply with Misplaced Pages policies such as assuming good faith of all editors including those on the other side of the real-world dispute, writing with a neutral point of view, remaining civil and avoiding personal attacks, utilizing reliable sources for contentious or disputed assertions, and resorting to dispute resolution where necessary. Misplaced Pages cannot solve the dispute between the Israeli and Palestinian people or any other real-world ethnic conflict. What Misplaced Pages can do is aspire to provide neutral, encyclopedic coverage about the areas of dispute and the peoples involved in it, which may lead to a broader understanding of the issues and the positions of all parties to the conflict. The contributions of all good-faith editors on these articles who contribute with this goal in mind are appreciated.''" | |||
| :: Well, I have to go here with Humus Sapiens. The Jenin massacre was a ] (a false allegation with deliberate intention to decive world opinion, as it was proved by the photoes of the fake funeral). Moreover, this fraud had deadly results for the Jews of ], who suffered from a violent wave of antisemitic which was spawned because of the biased report of this allegation in the European press. The "massacre" in Jenin is regarded by many as something similiar to the Protocols of Elders of Zions (a known antisemitic fraud, used as a pretext to 100 year of persecution against Jews and which is still count as a true document in Arab countries and Palestinian society (see ] for example). ] 08:11, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| There are currently no additional restrictions on the editing of this ] article, but as an uninvolved administrator, I've been watching this article for awhile, and the recent edit-warring is of concern. If disruption continues or escalates, further restrictions may be placed on the article, or on the editors who are working on it. This does ''not'' mean that anyone needs to worry that they're a hair's breadth away from being blocked. Any blocks or bans are multiple steps down the road. For example, before an editor can be sanctioned under the ruling of the ArbCom case, there is a requirement that they must be warned via a specific message on their talkpage, along with instructions on what they can do to avoid restrictions. And though I can't speak for all administrators, my own style is to give multiple warnings, and I usally only impose bans or blocks when an editor keeps ignoring all other cautions. So we're ''not'' at that point yet. I am starting this thread though, to advise people that it's a possibility down the line. Also, other administrators have different styles than I do -- some are much quicker with the "ban hammer", as they say. | |||
| ::: "''The Jenin massacre was a ] (a false allegation with deliberate intention to decive world opinion, as it was proved by the photoes of the fake funeral)''" i'm not arguing this point, the point that i am trying to address is the ], which both Israeli's and Palestinian's agree was a real event, classifying it under a hoax is therefore wrong. If events surrounding the battle can be proven to be as Hoaxes you may consider setting up a separate page, but to classify the '''Battle_of_Jenin_2002''' as a hoax is misleading. Using the same argument you are trying to use, you could classify ] as a hoax because of some of the misleading 'propaganda' surrounding the event, or even more extreme you could classify WW2 as a hoax because of some of the misleading propaganda delivered by both sides.--] 23:05, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| So, please be careful, please stay calm, please avoid edit warring, and please try hard to find a compromise which keeps the article in adherence with Misplaced Pages policies. Our ultimate goal here is a high quality article, which well serves our readers, and reflects positively on Misplaced Pages and the editors who worked on it. Thanks, and let me know if you have any questions, --]]] 17:22, 21 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Ah, I see your point; you're saying that the Battle of Jenin was not a hoax, even if the Jenin Massacre was. Is that correct? ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 23:11, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :There are huge problems at this article, with the most absurd non-policy arguments being made to keep out what the RS say and said about it. I'm not entirely sure how to treat the most recent finding, that an Israeli Cabinet Minister was calling the incident "a massacre" long before outside observers were talking about war-crimes - but it must be obvious to all that the report renders the current "No massacre" theme of the article either completely pointless - or blatant, full-bore Hasbara. | |||
| :I've previously pointed out the 10 or more well-attested details that almost certainly belong in the article - what we need here is administrative action against editors refusing to abide by policy, raising IDONTLIKEIT objections, inserting laughably POV edits and disruptively removing excellent material. | |||
| :Incidentally, the only reason I'm currently able to protest what has been going on here is that my hands are clean as regards edit-warring - <s>I backed off</s> I completely stopped editing the article and am waiting for administrative action to clear the road-blocks preventing us writing a good article. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 20:30, 21 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Dear PalestineRemembered, | |||
| :The difference is that a hoax is something that is intended to deceive. The world population generally agree it didn't happen, but saying its a hoax assumes it was used to fool people. My belief is that this was not the intention - people were genuinely worried at the scale of death and massacres going on. A false claim would harm any movement (hence why the Palestinian authorities came out with a more accurate estimate before any independent report did). I still feel calling it a hoax is a POV judgment making this a one sided argument within a neutral encyclopaedia. -- ] 17:08, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::In my previous note I mentioned a suggested solution for the dissonance between your statements and the ones made by fellow editors, myself included. If you believe the community is ignoring your valuable input on baseless/political grounds, it would be best if you approach your assigned mentor and discuss this with him. If Ryan is still your mentor, this would also help you regain his trust as well as give you a chance to re-examine your arguments at a less involved environment. When you avoid your mentorship and repeatedly exclaim exasperation towards the project and your fellow editors it is not going to magically solve the problem and, in fact, it only serves to increase sentiments of antagonism towards you. '''Content-wise''', you believe there was a massacre at the camp and wish that we write this down into the article as well as change the title. What other sources do you have to support the 'Jenin massacre' perspective other than the Peres quote from April 9 - which Haaretz published a ] version of, an , the following day? | |||
| ::Cordially, <b>]'']''</b> 03:17, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I think there's some good advice in the comments made above. Staying calm and civil, avoiding edit warring, and touching base with mentors (where applicable) is always a good plan. I hope sanctions don't prove necessary here and that consensus can be reached through analysis of the relevant sources. <strong style="font-variant:small-caps">] ]</strong> 03:38, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Actually I notice that Fatah say only 56 died on April 30th, whereas western media were reporting "probably not massacre" from 25th or so. Anyway point is look at - this is not similar to any of them. -- ] 17:55, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :Even when consensus has been reached (in the I'm thinking of, one disruptive editor against eight others, including an admin, continuously for 19 months) the policy-trashing insertions will continue even after and . The problems at just that one article were only stopped by a under ArbCom enforcement. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 13:48, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ===Note on user Blindjustice and IP 68.37.255.64=== | |||
| :The primary claim of those who consider it to be a hoax is that Arab spokespeople and leadership wilfully intended to deceive the world into believing thousands (later hundreds) of innocent Arab civilians had been massacred. The record tends to indicate that this is the case. I recall reading an article by Middle East correspondent Stewart Bell during the incident itself. He went looking for proof of the massacre, and was told by local Palestinians that a large refrigerated truck a ways off was filled with dead bodies. I guess they didn't expect him to actually check; when he did, he found it was filled with apples. There has been a lot of posturing and playacting going on for the Western press, with a willful intent to deceive. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 19:34, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ] has been blocked under the provisions of this arbcom restriction, as well as per our policy on disruptive editing, for using a logged out IP address ] to disruptively sockpuppet on this article. The shenanigans on this article won't be tolerated any longer. ]] ] 01:46, 25 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :: Another cases of deliberate frauds by Palestinian were the noteable fake funeral, caught by IDF UAV. The drone captured on video a staged in funeral in which the mourner accidently dropped the coffin and the "body" ran away. Another case is that of a Jewish-French television crew that pretended to be pro-Palestinian and ignorant of Arabic, and while it pretend to cooperate with the Palestinian sharade, it documented how the Palestinian activists briefed the interviewed people what to say and made up stories for them. ] 20:15, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :There has been massive disruption at this article - but I can see none of it from this editor. I find 17 edits from him, all of them either good or at least "arguably sound". They are . Meanwhile, there is a huge amount of other material that is definitely sound which has been edit-warred out, to the severe detriment of this article. Statements are still being made (such as the alleged retraction of an Israeli article on "Peres calling it a massacre") that appear totally unjustifiable. Attempts are being made to discredit sources normally considered to be second only to the Red Cross, while absurd "information" from blogs (about unverifiable articles in newspapers owned by cults) is edit-warred in. | |||
| :Were we (or ] given any opportunity to challenge any allegations made against this editor? Judging by his UserPage, this action was carried out with no discussion whatsoever. I certainly didn't know any accusations were being made, and there is nothing on this page to indicate any suspicion. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 10:03, 1 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| == Draft proposal == | |||
| :Hmmm OK I see you guys feel quite strongly about this but point out that this is a little one-sided debate. I take it that most people here are Israelis? I'll arrange a RFC in a bit to get a wider range of views. -- ] 20:35, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Alright, sports fans. I have created a draft in my sandbox for this article, ]. Here are the major changes: | |||
| :: I am not an Israeli, but why should it even matter? I do feel strongly about this because I happen to know a little bit from ] and other ]s: creating such hoaxes is one stage in the process of dehumanization of an opponent. BTW, I'll have to disagree with your position: '' - this is not similar to any of them.'' - please see ], ], ], etc. ]←]←] 23:14, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| *Content - mostly about the battle itself, based on Harel and Isacharoff's book. It is also used for establishing commanders and casualties. | |||
| :::Sure. I understand this is a sensitive issue, but you're moving your own personal feelings into a NPOV encyclopaedia article. The reason why saying it is a hoax is not right is because the examples above are baseless: | |||
| *Cleanup - removal of a lot of info that is about Operation Defensive Shield and/or the Second Intifada in general, but not this particular battle. I have also removed many "2nd degree criticisms". I don't think the allegations section should include all the people who don't think there was a massacre. Finally, I have formatted the refs and cropped the link farm at the bottom. In general, I have refrained from "cherry picking" quotes from reports. I only channeled them through secondary sources. The reports themselves are available as external links. | |||
| :::*] - I presume it refers to accusaionts where it didn't happen. Well if it didn't happen its baseless | |||
| *Copyedit - I tried to arrange the article so as to separate the casualties reports, the massacre allegations and the various reports. I think it flows better this way. | |||
| :::*] - written by someone who wasn't to do with Zionism in anyway | |||
| *This draft may still have some problems, such as typos and syntax errors. I have removed the tags because of the bots, but of course it's possible to use it and keep the tags. | |||
| :::*] - Again, baseless | |||
| :::The difference is that in Jenin, people did die, and the fact that Israel didn't allow people to disprove it propogated it further. People have said it is possible summary executions were possible. I hope this clarifies. -- ] 23:37, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Anyway, comments would be appreciated. Cheers, -- ] (]) 18:26, 22 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::: I'm trying to stay NPOV and would appreciate the same. Why did Zionism came into this picture is a logical jump I can't comprehend. Again, the question here is not whether "people did die", but rather was there a "massacre" or "genocide" or something "horrific beyond belief" (as the UN special envoy Roed-Larsen qualified it ). This case clearly demonstrated that the intl media and agencies - including the UN - were a little too eager to jump to conclusions vilifying Jews and Israel. IMHO, NPOV would be to stand up against that, not condone it. I offer a compromise: mark ] a hoax and this article a ]. ]←]←] 00:42, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :I like your changes, mostly because they make the article cleaner and easier to read, which has long since been lost as a goal in disputed articles. However, the lead section is IMO lacking, and the current one is better (although still not perfect). I don't wish to address the entire article point by point at the moment, in order not to get into minor unimportant content disputes, but will help with the article if need be in the future. -- ] <sup>(])</sup> 17:01, 23 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Is it the paragraph on the passover massacre? My rationale was that it belongs in the article on the operation, but I could just put it back. -- ] (]) 17:32, 23 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::A couple points about the lead: | |||
| :::a) A bit too much input on the Israeli troops for the lead. If we go in that direction there should also be text about the militancy. I'm thinking it would be best to remove/shorten it. | |||
| :::b) Intro image seems more appropriate for inside the article where it currently is. | |||
| :::Haven't really taken the time to review more of your effort; I tend to think that edits are better made in sections than as a whole though I ] myself also. | |||
| :::Cheers, <b>]'']''</b> 17:40, 23 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I've removed this paragraph. Tweaking the images should probably be done in mainspace, since the bots won't let them show on userspace. Let me know when you have further reviewed it. -- ] (]) 17:59, 23 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::I will start by admitting that I have not yet had a chance to take a look. However removal of "2nd degree criticisms" leaves only official army PR, so I can't imagine that your draft will be NPOV. It seems like people who believe in retaining and adding non-army source information (or what you refer to as "2nd degree criticisms") have been repelled from this page because of all the incivility issues. I know I have. But I'll be back to review the above.] (]) 04:41, 24 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Actually, by "2nd degree criticisms" I meant criticisms of the UN/HRW/Amnesty reports, i.e., "criticisms of criticisms". I tried to avoid using "official army PR" as facts. Can you be more specific? -- ] (]) 04:56, 24 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::'''General note:''' Secondary sources would be the final reports of the likes of BBC, CNN, Haaretz, JPost etc. Amnesti and other HR groups are simply echoing Palestinian claims and are far worse (blood-libel massacre blunders) as "the army's PR". In retrospect, it might be good to start looking up written sources on this issue (books). <b>]'']''</b> 19:14, 24 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::You must be very skeptical when you read about human-rights violations in Saddam's Iraq, Sierra Leone, Rwanda, or the Balkans then. Half the stuff we know about those things came from such dubious, discredited, partisan sources as Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch - you must be wondering if any of this stuff even happened! Well at least you have the dependable ADL to inform you there was no Armenian genocide. Or at least there was no Armenian genocide until last year when suddenly Abe Foxman announced: "Upon reflection, the consequences of those actions were indeed tantamount to genocide". Of course, the ADL doesn't get tangled up with historical data, or established facts, or the documentary record, or old-fashioned notions of maintaining political and financial independence, or sending experts to investigate and prepare reports on-site, or anything of the sort. Rather, Foxman sits and "reflects" in the relative solitude of conference calls with Israeli government figures, who then coordinate their own reflections and announcements in consultation with the Turkish president, who until that moment had veto power over historical truth for the ADL under Foxman, who in turn has veto power over historical truth in articles in WP. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 20:29, 24 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::Jaakobou. You have just re-invented the term "secondary source" arbitrarily to suit a political- and ethnic-based conspiracy theory that you seem to have personally contrived. This is no basis for editing a Misplaced Pages article. Kindly take your bizarre and unsupported claims about HRW and "Amnesti" methodology somewhere else. <]/]]> 02:31, 25 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::Without having any consideration to anything else, Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch '''are''' a partisan source, and have been highly criticized for their accuracy and "spin" by sources like ], the ], NGO Monitor, ], Discover the Networks, ], The Conflict Analysis Resource Center, etc. ]] ] 03:47, 25 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::::HRW is on the front line fighting human rights abuses in despotic Arab countries, including Iran and Saudi Arabia, where religious minorities, homosexuals, and women often find themselves subject to the worst kinds of abuses. That they treat Israel and the United States exactly the same in this regard is a testament to their reliability. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 07:53, 25 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::::How they treat Israel and the US similarly or differently is significantly less important as far as Misplaced Pages policies are concerned, than the fact that they've been highly criticized for their accuracy and spin by numerous highly-regarded sources. Interestingly enough, one of the more common criticisms is that both HRW and AI both grossly underreport, or fail to report human rights abuses in Syria and Iran, while reporting abuses of questionable veracity and value in Israel and the US. It may well be that they treat the US and Israel equally. But that's not the complaint: that they treat Israel and other countries disparately, something that is documented in the media. ]] ] 09:15, 25 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::::::You have made a variety of unsupported claims, and the fact that you would refer to "the New York Sun, NGO Monitor, Alan Dershowitz, Discover the Networks " in the context of '''opposing''' partisan spin makes me frankly question your seriousness here. There is a variety of low-level partisan dross which ''attempt to paint'' HRW and Amnesty as biased anti-American sources, sure. But, besides the fact "you're biased and anti-" is the absolutely ''standard'' reply to human rights criticism, these charges are quite easily shown to be outright lies. | |||
| :::::::::::::<SMALL>One of the arguments of those who are critical of Human Rights Watch's reporting on the Middle East is that the organization devotes too much attention to alleged abuses by Israelis. A corollary is that it pays insufficient attention to violations of human rights by Israel's antagonists in the region. Yet a glance at the back pages of the "World Report" published annually by Human Rights Watch where it lists all its publications suggests that these criticisms are not well founded. Typically, Human Rights Watch publishes more than a hundred reports each year. In all, it issued more than 350 reports in 2003, 2004, and 2005 on the seventy or so countries that it monitors. Of these, just five dealt with Israel and the Palestinian occupied territories while another sixty reports dealt with various Arab countries and Iran. The largest number of reports concerned abuses in Iraq, Sudan, and Egypt, but reports were also published on Iran, Saudi Arabia, Syria, Algeria, Tunisia, Morocco, and Jordan.</SMALL> | |||
| :::::::::::::Or, you could simply read their websites. Currently, for example, the front page of HRW's "Middle East and North Africa" section has ''five'' articles about Saudi violations, four about Iran, three about Libya, and one each about Algeria, Syria, and Tunisia. And nothing about Israel. Is this ''really'' what you would expect from an organization which grossly under-reports abuses of Arab countries while constantly bashing Israel? Be serious, man. <]/]]> 01:58, 26 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::::::How are my claims unsupported? I said that these organizations have been highly criticized, and provided the names of the organizations who have proffered those criticisms. Whether you like the sources or not is irrelevant (I note that you only mentioned "some" of the sources as "opposing partisan", which while your claim of partisanship is certainly disputable, the other sources are clearly not so (unless the Economist and the University of London suddenly became "spin sources")). And please don't accuse me of not being serious. If you can't discuss civilly, without resorting to slights, you shouldn't discuss things at all.]] ] 09:32, 26 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::::::::We are entitled to expect compliance with the principles of the project from an administrator. I'm not sure what serious criticisms of HRW there have been from responsible sources, but your mention of NGOM and Dershowitz in this context is worrying. The only serious criticism of HRW I've seen is that from Jonathan Cook (a Briton living in Israel), which strongly suggests that HRW (at least sometimes) falls over backwards giving Israel the maximum benefit of the doubt. | |||
| :::::::::::::::Incidentally, the discussion at the RS/N looks very much like overwhelming consensus, with nothing but a partisan trying to disrupt the work of the project with seriously frivolous objections. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 19:08, 29 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ===Regarding the Reliability of Human Rights Watch and Amnesty International=== | |||
| Both organizations have been discussed at the RS/N. Please refer to ]. Of note especially is the end of the discussion, where consensus is established rather emphatically that both organizations are indeed eminently reliable for information regarding human rights violations. The rest of the discussion consists mainly of two editors (myself included) trying to argue with a third that "accusations of bias" do not amount to unreliability.] (]) 17:22, 29 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Exactly. Bias has nothing ''directly'' to do with reliability as a source. ]] ] 17:52, 29 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Yes but "accusations of bias" do not equate to proof of bias either. These organizations are accused of bias by pretty much every country they report on (surprise surprise) -- in the Middle East that includes pretty much every country. Also please note that you highlighted criticism of "accuracy" above, which would effect reliability were it true. The RS/N discussion would suggest a consensus there that there is no accuracy issue with these organizations, certainly not one subject to any national bias.] (]) 17:55, 29 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I'm not sure the limited discussion on RS/N quite qualifies as consensus, but differentiating between accusations of bias and proof of bias is an academic task, because there's no clear line where such accusations become proof, and it will be disputed by partisans in any event, so there's not much point in the distinction in the first place. ]] ] 18:09, 29 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Well consensus during one RS/N discussion isn't ''the'' last word on the subject matter. When I used "consensus" I was simply referring to that discussion. Perhaps you should start another discussion at the RS/N or at the NPOV/N or another location where uninvolved editors will respond. Regarding proof vs. accusation -- there is a fairly big distinction between partisan sources accusing some entity of bias and non-partisan sources making similar claims. There is also a fairly big distinction between accusations supported with a fair amount of evidence and those not so supported. The sources you name are mostly of the partisan variety, and of course we do not know the exact claims being made or the context of these claims since you have only enumerated critical sources. Are we talking investigative reportage? Editorializing? etc. I suggest, especially given the previous consensus at the RS/N that you start another discussion there if you wish to re-examine the issue in a forum that isn't as prone to partisanship as an entry talk page.] (]) 18:20, 29 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Should you take this advice I will gladly stay out of the discussion as well.] (]) 18:22, 29 September 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Err, I'm not an "involved editor." I have not edited the article. My only substantive edit to the talk page was a tangent related to the reliability of a source. So Please keep that in mind. Similarly, the statement that the sources I name are "mostly" of the partisan variety is simply not correct, when confronted with sources like The Economist, University of London, and major US newspaper. Some of the other support may have accusations itself of bias a specific direction, but none are explicitly partisan sources, and it's all disputable anyway. But as I said before, it's a tangent, and a deep argument has nothing really to do with the article itself, and in order to remain an uninvolved editor, I'm not intending to pursue it further. ]] ] 02:48, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Well you and I are both "involved" on the talk page in question -- right here, right now -- whether or not we have any other edits to this entry or talk page. All I meant by uninvolved was someone not a party to the original conversation we are having ''or'' to editing this entry. I'm not sure ] ''was'' ever a "major US newspaper". But from the sources you enumerate as certainly non-partisan context is extremely important. You claim that none of the other sources are "explicitly partisan" in this area. Eh hem. Here is the first line of the lead of ]: ''NGO Monitor is an Israeli non-governmental organization with the stated aim of stopping "certain self-declared 'humanitarian NGOs'" from promoting agendas which are perceived as anti-Israel.'' I'm not sure you can get more partisan on this subject matter than that. ] is one of ]'s projects. Horowitz is also clearly "explicitly partisan" on this subject matter, and the same goes for ] who has a history of public commentary that is completely pro-Israeli. HRW and AI may in fact have a bias ... against human rights abuses. They have no nationalistic, ethnic or religious bias however, and that is what you, are alleging through these sources. Some of these sources themselves have a very clear nationalistic bias, which is in the public record and which by denying or attempting to downplay you make a very odd impression of your own understanding of the issues at stake.] (]) 12:27, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| It's very sad to me that on WP these two orgs are considered reliable sources of info and CAMERA is not. When it comes to HRW and AI, I find the work done at NGO Monitor to be solid: | |||
| :Please see the proposed RFC below. Comment/change as you see fit. I'll add it to the RFC list in a week or so, so we have some time to edit it. -- ] 23:25, 20 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| info. from NGO Monitor on HRW: | |||
| ::How about a different approach; separate this article into two, one about the Battle of Jenin, and one about the Jenin Massacre. The Battle of Jenin can be a factual description of the events, timelines, military actions, people killed, etc. The Jenin Massacre can outline the accusations of massacre, their various sources, and the subsequent disproofs/retractions. Thoughts? ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 01:15, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| * Website: | |||
| :::That would be a good idea. The article seems to get worse over time. Last time I checked there were more balanced views, but now the IDF POV seems to dominate. There are quite a few foul propaganda methods employed meant to associate Palestinians with dirty tricks - such as this "fake funeral" sentence (therefore everything they say must be false! Yes?). How is that relevant in "Jenin battle" context? If I was a Palestinian, then this would be another nakba denial or massacre denial if you like. Btw. even Shimon Peres called Jenin refugee camp events "a massacre" (<s>Ha'aretz censored the article and therefore it can't be found on their site</s>) . What we see here is pure revisionism of the worst kind. One can read contemporary articles from e.g. Ha'aretz and see that it was common knowledge that hundreds of people were killed and some were buried under rubble (and were subsequently unaccounted for). If everything was OK then one must ask why Israeli forces didn't let neither Palestinian humanitarian organizations nor UN and media in right after hostilities ended. Also it is should be not rocket science to understand that it was "battle" only to Israelis and Palestinian militants, for other civilians involved it was not a "battle", but a humanitarian/financial/etc problem. Therefore there should be separate article dealing with the facts about dead, wounded, homeless, etc and without military POV. If it was "massacre" or not is their to decide not ours. ] 11:50, 1 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
| * Founded 1988 (originally Helsinki Watch, founded in 1978); claimed an annual budget of over $50 million in 2005. | |||
| ::::This article is rife with POV, and outright falsehoods eg the UN did not accept the figure for the number of dead that Israel crowed over. What the UN said was: "In Jenin camp, by the time of the IDF's withdrawal and the lifting of the curfew on 18 April, at least 52 Palestinians, of whom up to half may have been civilians, and 23 Israeli soldiers were dead. Allegations by Palestinian Authority officials in mid-April that 500 or more persons were killed in Jenin camp were not substantiated by the evidence that subsequently emerged". Other observers noted | |||
| * Based in New York, headed by Kenneth Roth. | |||
| :::::....... People saw tanks and bulldozers run over bodies repeatedly in the process of bulldozing homes and moving around, sifting bodies into pieces and scattering them in the rubble. This has made it difficult to identify exactly how many have been killed. ...... members of Jenin Inquiry viewed many such partially decomposed bodies and severed, decomposing body parts in homes and in the streets of the camp. ...... bodies were still being recovered from under the rubble as late as early August. On 4 August, the bodies of one young boy and two adult males were discovered when an outer edge of the piles of rubble were sifted through. Four days later, another body was found compacted into the floor of his home. Public discourse about the number of dead has not taken such additional discoveries into account. | |||
| * 1997 Nobel Peace Prize for Campaign to Ban Landmines. | |||
| ::::Remember just how much money is available to defend Israel (the US gives them $3 billion a year, with many other soft loans etc), and what the stakes are. We're talking about a $trillion or more of real estate that is grave danger of going back to its rightful owners at some time in the future (not too long, judging by the fright that Hezbollah handed out). There is no money whatsoever in criticising Israel - and I can't be bothered to get into a bad-tempered fight to improve this article. | |||
| * CLAIM: "The hallmark and pride of Human Rights Watch is the even-handedness and accuracy of our reporting. To maintain our independence, we do not accept financial support from any government or government-funded agency." | |||
| ::::] 21:49, 3 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
| * In contrast, detailed NGO Monitor analyses demonstrate the | |||
| * HRW was an active participant in the 2001 Durban conference, and continues to against Israel. | |||
| info. from NGO Monitor on Amnesty International: | |||
| :Errm, actually that could work. I quite like it as an idea. -- ] 03:26, 21 Mar 2005 (UTC) | |||
| * Website: www.amnesty.org | |||
| ::OK got rid of the RFC bit. Just started the ] stub. As i get more free time I'll add bits to it | |||
| * Founded in 1961 by British lawyer, Peter Benenson. | |||
| * Amnesty describes itself as a "worldwide movement of people who campaign for internationally recognized human rights for all." | |||
| * Amnesty International claims to be "Independent of any government, political ideology, economic interest or religion… it does not support or oppose any government or political system." | |||
| * During the Second Lebanon War in 2006, Amnesty unjustifiably accused Israel of “war crimes” and “deliberate attacks on civilians,” and relied on Lebanese “eyewitnesses” to allege that Hezbollah did not operate in population centers. | |||
| * In 2007, Amnesty continued to disproportionately single out Israel for condemnation, focusing solely on the conflict with the Palestinians, misrepresenting the complexity of the conflict and ignoring more severe human rights violations in the region. | |||
| * Amnesty International distorts international law – misusing terms like “collective punishment,” “occupying power” and “disproportionate” – in its condemnations of Israel’s Gaza policy. | |||
| * In the fiscal year ending March 31, 2007, AI reported an operating budget of approximately £30 million. In prior years, this sum represented "approximately one quarter of the estimated income likely to be raised during the year by the movement´s national sections." The majority of the funds come from individual donors, and Amnesty International does not accept donations from governments or political parties. | |||
| It is my hope that anyone who is truly trying to be objective will look into the detailed reports found there. --] (]) 03:34, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Hey, the link to the source saying that the massacre is not a hoax is broken. Somebody should fix it. {{unsigned|69.218.236.221}} | |||
| ::As to why CAMERA is not considered reliable you may wish to familiarize yourself with this: ]. Of course there are more substantive issues that transcend that little fiasco but after that happened I'm not sure Misplaced Pages can or will ever consider them as credible. ] is quite possibly the most partisan organization within the context of this discussion. They are basically an organization with the political goal of discrediting human rights organizations that come out with statements critical of Israel.] (]) 12:32, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::I'm very familiar with the case and I don't think CAMERA did anything wrong to try to get volunteers involved with WP to help in the extreme bias against Israel readily found here because of these very issues. There sanctions against those involved were completely unfair while the folks working with the Electronic Intifida seem to have gotten off with no problems. Typical "wiki justice." --] (]) 01:09, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| : Thanks. There is plenty of links in this very Talk section (above). ←] <sup>]</sup> 00:52, 29 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :::I think we don't need to go very far with the credibility issues. The problem with the Jenin 2002 incident is that non of these human rights organizations took measures to validate claims which were later found to be bogus blood-libels. This is really not about general reliability but about reliability towards the discussed event - which is clearly lacking. <b>]'']''</b> 14:08, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| == What DID the IDF say, and who said it first? == | |||
| ::::Good point, Jaakobou. I do think it's important to consider that HWR and AI have only helped to fuel a lot of the blood-libels. It would be helpful if more WP editors could pay more attention to legitimate sources like CAMERA, HonestReporting, and NGO Monitor when looking at these issues rather than slanted left-wing sources which only help fuel misinformation on complex situation in the Middle East for their own biased political reasons. I have found so much of these RS material is from the extreme fringe left. I would hope that more editors at least make an attempt for neutrality, but those who are honestly after it seem very few and far between (maybe b/c of the CAMERA case where WP sanction people for trying to get involved?) Pathetic. Trust me, there's quite a lot of evidence of organized pro-Palestinian campaigns behind the scenes as well. --] (]) 01:09, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I'm well aware that many of the websites put up in the last week have been emotive and twisting (ie sites that mention the radio report without the clarification). Looking for reports on the web from the slightly more reputable sites finds: | |||
| :::::Can I assume that an editor who suggests that avowedly partisan and nationalist campaign groups like CAMERA, HonestReporting and NGO Monitor are "legitimate sources" but implies that mainstream human rights groups, and presumably certain mainstream media sources as well, are the "extreme fringe left" is having a little joke? Neutrality does not mean "agrees with my political viewpoint" you know. --] (]) 08:31, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| * 4th April | |||
| :I moved General Ron Kitrey's "apparently hundreds" quote here, based on Robert Fisk's assertion in his <i>The Great War for Civilization</i> that Kitrey '"said early in the battle that there were "apparently hundreds" of dead' (pg 497), PalestineCampaign.org's citation of a Reuter's 12th of April report (to which I changed the footnote to from the equally biased Newsmax.com), and the Pravda article found at http://english.pravda.ru/main/2002/04/12/27588.html. Yes, all of these sources are biased towards the Palestinians, but I find it difficult to believe that they are colluding in a conspiracy about the date of this quote. I also changed "the IDF quickly clarify" to "the IDF later say" as the timeline change makes it unclear as to how "quickly" the clarification came. ] 04:29, 13 February 2006 (UTC) | |||
| ::Rojo, lots of problems with this: First, both of your articles are datelined April 12, and the Pravda article says that the quote was from "today" - so there is no justificaiton for moving the date that I can see, in fact, these are confirmations of them. Second, the Pravda article makes it clear that the correction was quick, and the UPI article says "The army quickly issued a "clarification" ". Third, you are calling United Press International (the Newsmax source given) "equally biased" to Pravda and the Palestine Campaign, and using those as sources!? That hardly seems to make sense, the UPI is considered reputable, Pravda is certainly not, and a pro-Palesitnian advocacy group is no one's idea of neutral. --] 04:43, 13 February 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :::Goodoldpolonius. Yeah, I have to apologize to you and the community. My head was doing a brain fart on the date because of the difference between European and American dating systems (I kept reading it as April the 4th.). Stupid and not diligent, sorry. I've got an email into Fisk as to what he meant by "early in the battle." We'll see if he responds. I'm not going to apologize as to your third point. The UPI, under the influence of owner Sun Myung Moon, has clearly become a political organ of the right. It is certainly no more reputable a source then the Reuters report cited by Palestine Campaign. That said, I did totally screw up the date change, which was the entire reason for my involvement with this entry, and I therefore do owe and apology.] 05:09, 13 February 2006 (UTC) | |||
| == Original introduction == | |||
| :::: I wouldn't trust Fisk as NPOV source, either. ←] <sup>]</sup> 05:15, 13 February 2006 (UTC) | |||
| The current introduction is, to say the least, quite biased. Almost any news report or summary of the battle in Jenin first goes on to discuss Palestinian claims of a massacre. That was the most significant, most publicized, and most stressed part of this event. | |||
| ::::: Fisk is certainly not neutral, but he is diligent. Which contrasts mightily with the equally not-neutral (but more accepted because they kowtow to power) and less diligent reporters of the Associated Press and similar. I know when Fisk is giving an opinion and when Fisk is giving a fact. ] 05:26, 13 February 2006 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::Thanks for your graciousness on the date, but I still have to disagree with your approach to sources. One does not counter a perceived bias in a mainstream source by replacing it with an obviously biased source in the other direction, especially when you don't have a factual disagreement with the first source. The tone of the Pravda article alone ("The things that Israeli Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey said, were shocking.") should be enough to indicate a problem, let alone the newspapers reputation for reporting, and to include a pro-Palestinian NGO is equally dubious. If you are going to quote a news source with a clear anti-Israel leaning, why not at least do something half-way respectable, like the on the subject? --] 05:28, 13 February 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::Reuters ] 05:30, 13 February 2006 (UTC) | |||
| For starters, my edit is entirely sourced, so one must have good reasons to remove those sources. The introduction that another user keeps reverting to is flawed in other ways besides what I just mentioned above. It says that subsequent "Israeli investigations" did not find evidence of a massacre. This is VERY misleading. ALL investigations did not find any evidence of a massacre. It further ''only'' mentions criticism of Israel from human rights groups, when both the UN and these interest groups criticized Palestinian militants for a number of things during the battle, including endangering Palestinian civilian life. That is not a fair representation, not to mention very inaccurate. To include all points and give an accurate representation of the reception of the battle and a basic representation of these investigations. --] (]) 18:27, 2 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ---- | |||
| :Thank you for your comments. Here's my reply: | |||
| :On April 4, Secretary-General of the Palestinian Authority, Ahmed Abdel Rahman, complained in an interview on Palestinian television about “…world silence over the massacres being perpetrated against the Palestinian people.” (BBC Worldwide Monitoring) | |||
| *Misplaced Pages is not a newspaper. The history book I used, for one, does not start with the claims of massacre. IMO, the article should start with established facts, and only later move on to (ultimately unsubstantiated) claims. The lead does mention - in summary, of course - those claims. | |||
| *Just because it's sourced doesn't mean it should go in the lead, which should be a concise summary of the article. | |||
| *As for the "Israeli investigations", I don't mind dropping the word "Israeli". | |||
| *The lead doesn't mention criticism, only the aforementioned allegations of massacre. | |||
| Cheers. -- ] (]) 18:38, 2 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Using one source, one history book, should not drop all other sources from contributing to the lead. I only included plain facts in the introduction, this was in fact, based on an introduction that was used for this article for a long time. The current introduction seems very biased for the reasons I pointed out about. The media controversy and claims of a massacre were the most stressed and yet it is barely mentioned here at all. The closing statement in the introduction: "Subsequent Israeli investigations found no evidence to substantiate these charges; however, international human rights organizations such as Human Rights Watch and Amnesty International alleged that war crimes had occurred." To "substantiate" these charges? Please tell me exactly what "history book' is this? To correctly reflect reality we would say that Palestinian claims of massacre were never corroborated and that several investigations found no evidence of a massacre at all. That sentence is filled with ]. | |||
| * 6th April | |||
| ::Secondly, it only mentions criticism of Israel (from special interest groups/NGOs) in this case, when these same NGOs had a fair share of criticism of Palestinians in Jenin. If you add a short blurb about allegations raised against Israel from these groups, then give an accurate reflection of the report and add a blurb about alleged Palestinian misconduct. Much of the information here in the introduction is selective at best. --] (]) 23:45, 2 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :On April 6, Nabil Sha'ath delivered a speech at a meeting of the Arab League, in which he charged that “a ?massacre’ was underway in the Palestinian refugee camp of Jenin.” (Deutsche Presse-Agentur) He also “compared Israeli actions in the West Bank towns of Jenin and Nablus to the 1982 massacres of hundreds of Palestinans…” (The Associated Press) | |||
| :::If you prefer "corroborated" to "substantiate", that's fine. I'm not sure I understand your point about the criticism of the Palestinians. First you say that the allegations of massacre are the most important aspect of the incident, and then you say that the criticism of the Palestinians should be given as much weight as the allegations of massacre. As I said, the lead summarizes the article, which has a section on the allegations of massacre. The NGOs' accusations are brought within the general context of all of the reports and investigations. HRW and AI's reports are not by themselves are not important enough (and, according to some - see above - not reliable enough) to be given that much weight. Therefore, they are not in the article, and not in the lead. Which words in that sentence are weasel words? Also, this particular sentence is not mine, but a residue from the previous version.<br> | |||
| :::I'd like to take this opportunity to elaborate on my rationale for rewriting the article. I felt it had too much of what I would call "allegations of no-massacre". IMO, the article should describe what happened, not what didn't happen. If the description of the battle doesn't include a massacre, then that should be enough. No need to "spell it out" for the readers. That makes the article look partisan. -- ] (]) 06:34, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Agree with Nudve. The lead is not supposed to document rumors, but facts. ''']''' (]) 07:18, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::There is the issue that a big chunk of the battle's claim to notability came from the blood libels. I think there is room to mention it's claim to notability in the lead. <b>]'']''</b> 14:11, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| * 7th April | |||
| ::::::Firstly, I think the battle would certainly have been notable even without the allegations of massacre. Secondly, about half the lead is pretty much dedicated to them. -- ] (]) 15:25, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :On April 7, Abdel Rahman told NBC’s Tim Russert, “The victims so far has been over 250 Palestinians killed, many of them are children and women.” | |||
| :Saeb Erekat is quoted by Washington Post as having said “This is not fighting between armies, but a massacre in Jenin camp." | |||
| Who here is documenting "rumors"? It is a '''fact''' that rumors were made up. That is mentioned in nearly every report, investigation, news story, or what have you on the battle in Jenin. When I said allegations of a massacre are important, I didnt say it is the ''only'' thing important, as you may suggest. The AI and HRW reports in the lead are in the version you are asking for; I dont know why youre acting as if I am fighting to put them in when they are there. What I am saying (and I was very clear about this), is that IF you add a blurb in the lead about allegations of Israeli military misconduct from these organizations (as you currently have it), then give a fair representation of these reports from the same investigations and add a blurb about allegations of Palestinian misconduct during the battle in Jenin. It is a matter of accuracy and proper reflection of the source.. And again, this one "history book", which I question, should not cancel out the contributions from so many other reputable Internet sources. --] (]) 22:04, 3 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| * 9th April | |||
| :Fine. I've just copyedited it and formatted the refs. -- ] (]) 07:04, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :"They estimate that more than 100 people have been killed by Israeli fire since the army ringed the camp on Wednesday" | |||
| :"The number of Palestinians killed in Jenin is unclear. Israeli sources say it could be 150, but the Palestinians say it's higher." | |||
| == Neutrality and balance in lead and elsewhere == | |||
| * 10th April | |||
| :"As many as 100 people have been killed in the camp since the start of the invasion", most likely a Palestinian source. | |||
| :Palestinians "reportedly suffered as many as 100 dead", most likely a Palestinian source. | |||
| :"Israel says 150 Palestinians died in Jenin but Palestinians say the number is far higher" - | |||
| :On April 10, Sha'ath claimed, “We have 300 martyrs in Jenin in the last few days.” (Agence France Presse) | |||
| :Saeb Erekat made four statements of "more than 500", "could reach 500", "more than 500" again, "They are burying more than 300 Palestinian in Jenin refugee camp alone" | |||
| I've popped in and out of this article in the past (as pretty much a neutral and objective editor, even if I've not always been seen that way by some) and checked back on it just now. I'm sorry, but the problems in the lead are worse now than they were. As currently written it presents a seriously one-sided view of events here. For example - | |||
| * 11th April | |||
| :Quite emotive pro-Palestinian columnist in the Guardian, UK: "Hundreds are reported killed, including many civilians", most likely a Palestinian source. | |||
| * The second paragraph is devoted purely to prior Israeli casualties and explaining the Israeli justification for the assault in considerable detail. This a) has nothing to do with the battle itself of course and is almost certainly undue weight in the lead, and b) ignores the fact that there are two sides in this conflict, each of whom was inflicting considerable damage on each other before the attacks on the West Bank. | |||
| * 12th April | |||
| :Palestinian Information Minister, Yasser Abed Rabbo, accuses Israel of digging mass graves for 900 Palestinians in the camp, - reasonably common knowledge | |||
| :Saeb Erekat "hundreds dead" | |||
| :United Press International quoted the Secretary-General of the Palestinian Authority, Ahmed Abdel Rahman, as saying " thousands of Palestinians were either killed and buried in massive graves or smashed under houses destroyed in Jenin and Nablus." | |||
| :IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey mistakenly says hundreds killed when meant "hundreds of casualties" | |||
| * The third paragraph also is based almost entirely on Israeli claims, eg about the number of militants/fighters killed, about the IDF's efforts to avoid civilian casualties. Even those claims not sourced to the Israeli side appear to be there to highlight negative claims about Palestinian conduct (eg re booby traps). This totally downplays the fact that civilians were killed as a result of direct IDF actions, with some allegedly buried with their houses, others shot in the street etc. That doesn't need to be flagged up as "evil IDF murderers", but equally it shouldn't be brushed over. | |||
| * 15th April | |||
| :IDF put palestinian dead at 45 (common knowledge?) | |||
| * The fourth paragraph talks pretty simplistically about "uncorroborated" Palestinian allegations of deliberate massacres, war crimes and extensive civilian casualties. In reality, Israeli officials were also talking about 100s of people possibly having been killed at the time, and journalists were barred from the camp leading to confusion and also suspicion in the media that the IDF "had something to hide". While it did become clear eventually that there had been no deliberate, widespread massacre in the camp, equally civilians were killed, much of the camp was flattened and individual cases of alleged war crimes were documented (as above). None of this is recorded in the lead as it is. | |||
| * 16th April | |||
| :Unqualifiable report of two IDF spokesmen saying: "Early yesterday an IDF spokesman said the figure was likely to be 'several hundred' dead Palestinians and 23 dead Israelis. Another spokesman put the estimate at a precise 250 Palestinians dead but by last night the IDF count of dead Palestinians had been wound back significantly to 45." | |||
| * The fifth paragraph purports to be a round up of later assessments, and again comes out as "move along, nothing to see here .. those Palestinians made it all up". As ever, the reality is more complex than that, both as to why the original massacre claims gained currency and as to what actually happened in the camp. In addition of course there is a still a body of opinion around the world - it doesn't matter whether you or I think they are right or wrong - that regards an attack on a residential area which kills around twenty civilians as a "massacre". | |||
| Sites that mention the AFP report about IDF source claiming 250 killed: | |||
| *http://www.khaleejtimes.co.ae/ktarchive/140402/middleeast.htm - twice | |||
| <did not have time to complete list - found 1 other site but lost the link - the site was dedicated to pro-arab cause though> | |||
| Could not find ANYTHING of the sort on new.bbc.co.uk, guardian.co.uk. Google yielded the above. | |||
| Sources for all of the above points are already scattered throughout the main parts of the article, and nothing of what I've said is really disputed as far as I'm aware - it's simply about marshalling and summarising the existing known info in order to get a balanced lead. I'm tempted to tag the page for neutrality, but I'll lay off doing that. And can people stop using the phrase "blood libel" on talk pages? I don't see how it helps anything. Thanks. --] (]) 08:22, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Sorry meant to do a more complete list but should be enough. Have to go now. You guys decide who said what first from that but I wouldn't weigh it all on Ron Kitrey. was the most useful | |||
| :Would you support a revert to version? -- ] (]) 08:46, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::It's definitely a better version in my view, as it covers the issue quite broadly (as a lead should, rather than going into intense detail that is better dealt with further down) and doesn't seem to make one-sided judgements about the background to the attack, the assault itself or the disputes that developed over what had occurred in the camp. I'd quibble with one or two of the points in it, but wouldn't everyone? For example, it duplicates the point about the stream of suicide bombers reportedly coming from Jenin, and probably does need a quick note on the final assessment of casualties and consequences, eg - | |||
| Hope it all helps. Sorry about relying on guardian.co.uk -- ] 16:16, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::''The Battle of Jenin took place from April 3 to April 11, 2002 in the refugee camp of Jenin, in the West Bank. It was fought between the Israel Defense Forces (IDF) and Palestinian forces as part of Operation Defensive Shield, during the Second Intifada.'' | |||
| I think your list sum up the issue very well. ] 20:30, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::''As part of the operation, which involved invasions of cities and towns all over the West Bank, Israel targeted Jenin's refugee camp, after it determined that the city had "served as a launch site for numerous terrorist attacks against both Israeli civilians and Israeli towns and villages in the area", <s>including the dispatch of 28 suicide bombers since the start of the Second Intifada.''</s> | |||
| ::''The IDF denied entry to journalists and human rights organizations, leading to a rapid cycle of rumors that a massacre had occurred. Jenin remained sealed for days after the invasion. Stories of civilians being buried alive in their homes as they were demolished, and of smoldering buildings covering crushed bodies, spread throughout the Arab world. Various casualty figures circulated, reaching into the mid-hundreds. Palestinian sources described the events as "the Jenin massacre", and international media and human rights organizations expressed concerns that a massacre had taken place.'' | |||
| :Yeah I think basically we can say that | |||
| :*IDF predicted 150 dead at around 9th with the estimate reducing to probably less than 100 on 11th/12th then finally at 45 on the 15th from an actual body count. | |||
| :*There wasn't any real official palestinian number but: Saeb Erekat first spoke of a massacre on the 7th, and on the same day Abdel Rahman said 250 killed many of them men and women. By the 10th, Saeb Erekat claimed 500 dead, and 12th Yasser Abed Rabbo, a Palestinian minister, claimed 900 were dead. 12th again Secretary-General of the Palestinian Authority, Ahmed Abdel Rahman, claimed "thousands" dead. This was the same day as IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey made his report with the mistake "hundreds killed" when he meant to say "hundreds of casualties". | |||
| :*Independent reports actually seemed to stay constant at around "up to 100 killed". | |||
| ::''Subsequent <s>Israeli</s> investigations found no evidence to substantiate <s>these charges</s> claims that a widespread, deliberate massacre had taken place. '''However large areas of the camp were destroyed and of the xx Palestinians killed in the attack, up to yy were thought to be civilians. zz IDF soldiers were killed.''' International human rights organizations such as Human Rights Watch and Amnesty International alleged that war crimes had occurred '''and criticised the conduct of both sides'''.'' | |||
| :Scary what a bit of ignorance in the media can do. Anyway, unless someone points to something I've missed, we can say the the reports of "hundreds dead" did not originate from the IDF. -- ] 20:48, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::I don't want to get over-involved here again, but those are my brief thoughts FWIW. --] (]) 09:52, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::OK I'll admit that the format of my edit is a little edgy, but it includes every source anyone could really want, and cannot be argued with. Reverting can end now hopefully -- ] 00:36, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::Actually on reflection, I think I am being a little overgenerous in aiming for balance by suggesting that HRW & AI criticised both sides, based on my memories of them having raised the whole houses-rigged-to-explode issue. In fact the main thrust of both reports, having just checked the HRW & AI websites and run over the headline coverage of the reports in the mainstream media at the time, was overwhelmingly that they were accusing the IDF of having committed war crimes and causing the deaths of civilians. --] (]) 10:45, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Small comment about "up to" and HRW and AI reliability for the lead. I think we're already giving undue credence to the unverified claims and we should add the initial claims of "thousands massacred" next to these assertions so that their true credence in regards to Jenin would be clear. Either that or we go by my original suggestion of leaving their "Human Rights" propaganda issue out for the body of the article. <b>]'']''</b> 10:54, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::"''IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey ''mistakenly'' says hundreds killed when meant "hundreds of casualties"''" : It's just an opinion. Maybe Ron Kitrey is good enough in english and he wanted to say "hundreds killed". The medias listening to Ron Kitrey cannot imagine he doesn't know what means "killed". | |||
| ::::So while other editors are discussing and agreeing specific edits in detail, you chip in briefly to say you are merely making a general "comment" .. and then suddenly dive in regardless and make without any discussion or agreement? Not good practice I'd have thought. Problems with what you've done - | |||
| :::--] 00:53, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :::::1) You've erased any mention of civilian casualties | |||
| :::::2) You've confused the issues by suggesting that because there was no (widespread, deliberate) massacre, that human rights groups are wrong in "holding on" to allegations about war crimes. That's just a logical non-sequiter, the points are totally different. Just because it turned out that 100s of civilians weren't killed, as was feared and suggested by many sources including Israeli ones, it doesn't mean that none were. I know that is the narrative favoured in some quarters, but it can't have prominence here. | |||
| :::::3) You've mangled the English (for example - rumours cannot "purport" a massacre, or indeed anything else) | |||
| :::::4) You've removed the undisputed fact that the IDF barred entry to the camp, so it now simply says the "camp remained sealed" as if it were due to an act of God | |||
| :::::5) You've inserted a reference into the lead which is not needed, and in any event appears to be a single example of particulary OTT comment from one Palestinian official, from which you've then created the most exaggerated text you can. This is undue weight of course, by any definition. Most Palestinian officials were talking about 100s not 1000s, and even then were frequently using this figure to refer to casualties of "Defensive Shield" in its entirety. | |||
| :::::6) You've also left it as suggesting that only (mendacious) Palestinians and (biased) human rights organisations were giving casualty stats that turned out to be wrong, or using the word massacre in some capacity (note as well I'm not sure even how many of these specifically used the phrase "the Jenin massacre"). You know full well of course that Israeli sources were also using similar figures and language. It was also a time of intense confusion - hence why the previous wording was, correctly, much looser while also being more accurate. | |||
| ::::I'm bored of listing them now. --] (]) 15:23, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| (outdent)<br> | |||
| ::From my understanding of the situation, Ron Kitrey has probably never seen Jenin. He sits behind a desk all day at some Israeli office for media relations and every now and then gets handed somethin to say to the press. He is told what the IDF want him to say and thats what he says (hence the title IDF spokesman - he speaks for the IDF). If the IDF quickly say he made a mistake, then his report was a mistake. His opinion doesn't matter, because he's representing the IDF opinion. Maybe he misread what was handed to him in the first place. Does this really matter? -- ] 01:21, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Replies to the raised concerns:<br> | |||
| 1) We don't know the number of civilian casualties. Writing the highest possible number is propaganda. I'm willing to add a note that the number of civilians is between X-Y as per 52-56 casualties.<br> | |||
| 2) I did not say they were wrong, that is your own assumption. A quote reasonable assumption considering that they hadn't fact-checked any of the claims and many of the reported claims were found to be baloney.<br> | |||
| 3) I'm open to suggestions where English is the problem. I never claimed to be an authority on the matter.<Br> | |||
| 4) What is wrong with "camp remained sealed"? I think it's a clear issue but I'm open to external opinion by uninvolved users to this issue.<br> | |||
| 5) There are obviously more sources repeating the 'thousands' claim, but mostly they are people repeating the Palestinian claim rather than a head official making it. Thousands is thousands and no one suggested high numbers regarding Nablus. His claims were about Jenin just as Erekat's Live-on-CNN promise of '''more than''' 500 "massacred" - ''in Jenin''. Please also note that the mentioned line does not say thousands 'in Jenin' but is written in a more generic tone as the Palestinian speaker used.<br> | |||
| 6) Gideon Levy is a "Israeli source" - and a couple misquotes on Haaretz were later retracted. Was there any Israeli using the term thousands or was it the Israelis saying that Palestinians are falsly trying to portray the situation as a massacre - I believe it's the latter. To further clarify, I'm quite certain that Israeli officials did no describe the event as a massacre in the international media (current phrasing of article).<br> | |||
| Hope I answered all your concerns. <b>]'']''</b> 16:10, 4 October 2008 (UTC) clarify 16:12, 4 October 2008 (UTC) further clarify. 16:16, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :This is the precise reason why I chose not to go into detail in the lead in the first place. It worked fine until Shamir1 rewrote the lead unilaterally. I eventually went along with his changes because it seemed at the time like consensus was with him. Now that this is no longer the case, perhaps we can agree on the "minimalist" lead? -- ] (]) 18:52, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I don't know of any sources claiming there were thousands killed. The said it was 497 in total, and it was widely believed that an Israeli shot dead the head of reconstruction, in Nov 2002, along with 13 other UN workers and serious injury to the ]. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 19:49, 4 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::"Secretary-General of Palestinian Authority Cabinet Ahmed Abdel Rahman said, "They took hundreds of bodies to northern Israeli to hide their massacre they committed against our people. "This massacre is not less than the massacres committed against the Palestinian people in the refugee camps of Sabra and Shatila in Lebanon." He said thousands of Palestinians were either killed and buried in massive graveyards or smashed under houses destroyed in Jenin and Nablus." | |||
| :::"Palestinian minister Saeb Erekat said Israelis killed three thousand Palestinians, then lowered the number to five hundred." Donna Rosenthal. ''The Israelis: Ordinary People in an Extraordinary Land'', Free Press, 2003, p. 69. ]<sup>]</sup> 07:11, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::: leads me to believe it's no longer possible to discuss the reliability of sources (even mention of will lead to an immediate block!). | |||
| :::::So editors will have to judge for themselves whether the project should rely on sources that say ''Nazism ... still maintains a lethal grip on the minds and souls of many Arabs, particularly the ruling classes. As Israelis know all too well, Nazism was exported to and took root in the Arab world"''. | |||
| :::::Meanwhile, of course, we have lots and lots of excellent material on this event from even the most acceptable sources, and they cannot be used either in case we document this event accurately. Sadly, more and more of the media record is being cleansed from the archives as every kind of human rights observer and reporter and editor is smeared, sometimes with the openly avowed intention of breaking them personally. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 09:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC)\ | |||
| ::::::1) Newsmax is a news-source aggregator. The opinion piece you note is just one opinion piece from another source, and using search engines to cherry-pick what you imagine to be extremist is disingenuous at best. The source for the quote regarding Ahmed Abdel Rahman is a ] story, which is a reliable source. They made these claims of thousands killed. Accept it and move on. | |||
| ::::::2) Stop your ridiculous ]. I mean it. Stop now. When you comment, comment ''only'' and ''specifically'' on suggested article text changes, and bring material related ''only'' and ''specifically'' to that change alone. If you don't stop disrupting article Talk: pages, I am going to start taking more serious action. ]<sup>]</sup> 15:13, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::There were one or two instances of people talking about a death toll in the 1000s, but these were not the main claims (and as I've said it was not always clear whether they were talking about the whole range of attacks, or simply Jenin. Indeed the Rahman quote cited above is noted as including Nablus). As I have also pointed out many times - I remember the coverage from the time very well - it was a time of real confusion and chaos, as battlegrounds usually are, and no-one really knew what was going on. The IDF had closed the camp to the outside world, there were rumours floating around as well as official and semi-official briefings ''from both sides'' talking about 100s being killed. Palestinian spokesmen seemed to have a real fear of another Sabra and Shatila, whether that was justified or not. Anyway, the problem in respect of the article is that the more (as it turned out) inaccurate claims from Palestinians are being highlighted with undue weight in a bid, it would seem, to suggest that the reality of what happened was rather trivial by comparison. Some edits are trying to build a narrative that says "Palestinians and human rights groups deliberately exaggerated what was going on, those reports turned out to be wrong, ergo nothing bad happened in the camp at all and anyone who suggests it did is clinging to a refuted version of events". As ever the real world of events is more complicated and nuanced than that - hence the lead needs to record the basic facts (eg the incursions, the initial confusion about casualties, the final casualty count including the real concerns about civilian deaths) but also be fairly broad and minimalist in what it says, which is where myself & Nudve at least came to an agreement. Quite apart from all the above, leads should of course be concise and clear anyway. I'll remove the POV tag, but personally I'd like to see the lead go back more or less to the recently agreed version prior to . --] (]) 08:18, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Secretary-General of Palestinian Authority Cabinet Ahmed Abdel Rahman and Palestinian minister and spokesman ] are not just random inconsequential voices. ]<sup>]</sup> 15:13, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Regardless if the claims were deliberate of not, the lead is writing this as rumors without ascribing intentions - i.e. "Various casualty figures circulated" does not ascribe intentionality and it is explained that the camp was closed (please also see my reply to point no.5 above). The rumors, a ''mixture'' of true concern, elevation of martyrdom (read: experience dramatization), and a bit of a deplorable war-time tactic; are not being explored for their reasoning within the lead paragraph and we even justify them by adding the note that the camp was sealed (as if that's any type of justification for starting out a baseless global blood-libel). What is written is that the rumors were being reported/echoed/circulated as official claims by Palestinian officials as well as Human Rights activists in the international media. This is a very mild and neutral description of the events. <b>]'']''</b> 11:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| (move left) | |||
| First of all, those articles are behind a paywall, so I can't really evaluate their importance. Anyway, I'm not sure I share your concerns. There really was a fog of war in Jenin, and I doubt that the IDF spokesman was motivated by the ''mixture'' you mentioned above. It's a bit unfair to suggest that all the newspapers cited were involved in a global blood-libel. The allegations are already described as such, and stressing out the fact that they were unsubstantiated may give the reader a feeling that the article is slanted. -- ] (]) 12:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :The version of the lead suggested by Nickhh at 09:52, 4 October 2008 above looks good to me. I would replaced "after it determined" with "after it deemed", as I've just done in the article; or with "after it decided based on investigation" or "after it stated", etc.; since "after it determined" seems to me to imply that what they stated was necessarily true, and I don't think the term "terrorist" is NPOV, so Misplaced Pages can't assert the Israeli quote. | |||
| :Since apparently there is a POV according to which there may be large numbers of civilian casualties buried under the bulldozed ruins, I would change "of the xx Palestinians killed in the attack" in Nickhh's version to "of the 52–56 Palestinians estimated killed in the attack". I would change "up to yy were thought to be civilians" to "about 5–26 of whom were estimated to be civilians". source (<nowiki><ref name="israelinsider"></nowiki>) says that 23 IDF soldiers were killed, so I would change "zz IDF soldiers were killed" to "23 IDF soldiers were reported killed." <span style="color:Orangered; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 13:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Comment by Jaakobou: | |||
| :::It matters in a way. Two possibilities : IDF thought first, had enough information to think that hundred of Palestinians were killed, and after the IDF realized (maybe asking officers and soldiers) that it was not possible, so they explained Kitrey meant "hundreds of casualties", but it's not necessary true that he meant that. (Israel estimates 150 dead on the April 10). | |||
| ::'''Status of discussion:''' I don't mean to be offensive, but I'm getting the feeling that misinformation has crept into this discussion while the new text hasn't been read with an external, uninvolved perspective. | |||
| :::The other possibility is what you propose : Kitrey made a mistake reading a paper. | |||
| ::'''Clarifying the issues:''' The 'fog of war' ''is already mentioned'' alongside the claims of "thousands massacred". I don't know what IDF spokesman is supposedly quoted here - but ''no IDF spokesperson'' went ahead on international media with an official statement alleging a massacre of thousands in Jenin. | |||
| :::I think there is no reason to choose between the first or the second possibility. --] 21:36, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::'''Request of a second review:''' Please review the current version and make your points in accordance to cite-able material and the written text. Please avoid adding personal interpretations of the text which are not written in it. e.g. there is no assertion to a global blood-libel in the text. | |||
| ::'''Other versions:''' Coppertwig, I'd appreciate some explanation to the advantage in the version suggested by Nickhh. I note to you that he's made a few erroneous suggestions regarding the text and his personal interpretations of it and I've countered these misconceptions by clarifying the text and linking to 3 relevant sources. | |||
| ::With respect, <b>]'']''</b> 14:14, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::The IDF spokesman in question is Ron Kitri, as is mentioned in the article. He indeed said hundreds, not thousands. The "global blood-libel" was quoted from your previous post on this talk page, not the article. -- ] (]) 14:42, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::He said "hundreds" of casualties, meaning both killed and wounded, as was quickly clarified by the IDF. ]<sup>]</sup> 15:13, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::It seems he did say that hundreds were apparently killed, and yes, his statement was retracted. Again, I'm not trying to support the allegations. I'm just saying that at that time, one did not have to be a blood-libeler to suspect that the death toll was much higher than it actually was, that's all. -- ] (]) 15:26, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::He was speaking in a foreign language, he accidentally used the word "killed" for "casualty", and in English, "casualty" means killed or wounded, but is popularly thought of as meaning "killed". The statement was very quickly clarified, as opposed to the grossly inflated Palestinian claims, which were abandoned only with great reluctance, and even then not abandoned at all by many, including some regular commenters on this Talk: page. ]<sup>]</sup> 15:36, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::It seems he did say "200 killed" in Hebrew, and then retracted. Again, I'm not saying there were hundreds killed, and it's quite possible that some Palestinians deliberately inflated the numbers. I was just saying that the lead shouldn't suggest that all inflated estimates were/are malicious. -- ] (]) 15:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::You make a good point, but I doubt Kitri's statement, and quick retraction, had any impact on the worldwide condemnation, demonstrations, etc. that targeted Israel. You can be sure that it was the Palestinian statements, combined with a general prejudice against Israel, that were responsible for that. ]<sup>]</sup> 16:15, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::I'm puzzled, I thought it was statements like this from Time Magazine that did it: Even the US, Colin Powell criticised him for it. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 17:32, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::No, you're not "puzzled", you're just soapboxing again. It's unlikely that an article in Time magazine, printed weeks before the events in Jenin, and discussing total deaths of just over 100 on the Palestinian side, and around 50 on the Israeli side, would cause people to imagine a massacre of hundreds or thousands had happened in Jenin. Please stop wasting everyone's time. ]<sup>]</sup> 20:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| (Edit conflict & reset indent). Agreed - I don't see anyone here maintaining that 100s or even 1000s of people were killed in Jenin, so I have no idea what you are talking about Jayjg. The point being made is that people on all sides did at one point or another - for whatever reason, and in whatever context - talk about elevated figures, which fed into a cycle of rumours. One or two Palestinians (yes I know Erekat & Rahman are signigicant figures) on occasion appeared to have gone as high as 1000s - although to make the point again, they appear to have been talking about more than just Jenin. This should not be twisted in the article to a suggested narrative of a deliberate, one-sided bid to defame the IDF and the Israeli nation. Equally the fact that most of these claims turned out to be inaccurate in terms of numbers, does not mean that the article should hint that any mainstream 3rd party reaction (eg from AI, HRW) that nonetheless criticised IDF conduct can be discounted. These are separate points. --] (]) 16:02, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :You make some valid points, but there can be no question that the death tolls in Jenin, as well as the nature of the IDF activities, were deliberately distorted, by Palestinians from the top ranks to the man in the street, for purely propaganda purposes. I recall reading a contemporary account by Middle East correspondent Stewart Bell, who was actually in Jenin at the time. He was told by local residents that the IDF had murdered hundreds of Palestinians. When asked where the bodies were, he was told they were being kept in a refrigerated truck, at the top of a hill some distance away. Not content to take their word, he insisted on going to the truck and opening it. It was filled with apples. The propaganda war carried out in the name of Jenin is an important part of the entire Battle, and should not be ignored, downgraded, or whitewashed. ]<sup>]</sup> 16:15, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Can you explain why Israeli spokesmen, with access to the camp, were saying in the camp? ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 16:45, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Can you explain why you state an unnamed "Israeli spokesman" had "access to the camp"? ]<sup>]</sup> 20:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::The article he quotes does not even attribute the 250 to an "Israeli spokesman", but rather to unnamed 'military sources' - which could be Palestinian for all we know. ] (]) 21:20, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ===Arbitrary break=== | |||
| Please quote to me where the text assigns malice to the estimations. I'm not aware that the text does this. <b>]'']''</b> 16:31, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :It doesn't. I was referring to post. I have no objection to the current version if nobody else does. -- ] (]) 16:42, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| (ec) Thank you for your comments, Jaakobou. I've taken a closer look, comparing the current version with Nickhh's proposal. | |||
| :Again does it really matter? "hundreds" is quite a vague number. The original reason for this quote being included was that Ron Kitrey was to blame for the overblown numbers. I've shown you that numbers of up to 900 were suggested long before, so Ron Kitrey was not (solely) to blame. Could you be any more pedantic? I'm sorry for being short but what do you want me to say? Israel DID kill 52 Palestinians with dubious reason and possible (probable?) breaches of human rights, but "hundreds" of them were not killed. There was wanton killing. There were no mass graves. I'm pretty sympathetic for the Palestinian people (note distinction from militants) but you really cannot pin the blame on them for this. -- ] 22:39, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| The first two paragraphs are the same in both versions (except for "deemed"). | |||
| "''The original reason for this quote being included was that Ron Kitrey was to blame for the overblown numbers.''" -> No, I just wanted the article to be a little bit more precise and complete on a confused context about the figures. --] 23:01, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| I agree that simply stating that the camp "remained sealed" fails to attribute this action to a particular party; on the other hand, Nickhh's version seems to me to give undue prominence to "The IDF denied entry" by placing it at the beginning of a paragraph; and asserting that it's the cause of the rumours seems to be ] or at least probably non-NPOV. Also, "reaching into the mid-hundreds" gives the reader more information. I therefore suggest the following for the 3rd paragraph: | |||
| :No thats what '''''I''''' changed it to, to make sure the quote wasn't used out of context: | |||
| :''During the fighting, a rapid cycle of rumors purported that a massacre of as many as thousands of Palestinians had occurred.<ref>, ], April 12, 2002<br>- Secretary-General of Palestinian Authority Cabinet Ahmed Abdel Rahman said, "They (Israeli solders) took hundreds of bodies to northern Israeli to hide their massacre they committed against our people.<br>"This massacre is not less than the massacres committed against the Palestinian people in the refugee camps of Sabra and Shatila in Lebanon."<br>He said thousands of Palestinians were either killed and buried in massive graveyards or smashed under houses destroyed in Jenin and Nablus.</ref> While the IDF denied entry to journalists and human rights organizations during the invasion, stories of civilians being buried alive in their homes as they were demolished, and of smoldering buildings covering crushed bodies, spread throughout the ]. Various casualty figures circulated, <s>reaching into the mid-hundreds</s><sup>(] (]) 22:59, 12 October 2008 (UTC))</sup>, as Palestinian sources, as well as human rights organizations, described the events as "the Jenin massacre" in the international media.'' | |||
| :'''Comment by Jaakobou regarding 2nd para suggestion:''' | |||
| :*], Its first use which, quite POVly, ignored the clarification. It also said it wast the '''''first''''' use of an inflated death toll - quite wrong] | |||
| :* If we're changing the number mid paragraph, then it makes little to no sense to the reader and the rumored numbers (not what the media was willing to report) were higher than "mid". | |||
| :* Israelis were going as high as between 100 and 200 (Kitrey was misquoted). and mostly focused on saying that the Palestinians are lying. I tend to believe that the 'no less than 500 massacred in Jenin' statements by Erekat on CNN as well as the Israeli "they are lying" responses are undue for the lead. | |||
| :With respect, <b>]'']''</b> 17:21, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Re the last paragraph: To me, the first two sentences give the impression that no deaths occurred. "in the clashes" claims that all deaths were by people fighting, which is not universally accepted. "held on to allegations" seems to me to imply that the allegations are false. "52–56 Palestinians were killed" asserts too much certainty, ignoring Derrick Pounder's POV. I therefore suggest for the last paragraph: | |||
| :*20:21, 2 Jun 2005, ], After approaching a revert war I change the text within the paragraph to put it as a possible cause for the media hysteria. Only did a few minutes research but since the original user provided one example I assumed there was only one example of an inflated number. I knew that Palestinian exaggerations came before so made that clean. | |||
| :<s>Subsequent investigations found no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place.</s><sup>(14:38, 9 October 2008 (UTC))</sup> Overall, 52-56 Palestinians were estimated killed — 5 to approximately 26 of whom estimated as civilians — while 23 IDF soldiers were reported killed as well, and a large area in the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting. Human rights organizations alleged that ]s had been committed in the fighting and criticized the conduct of both sides. | |||
| In reply to Jayjg: it would be interesting to see reliable sources for such statements. <span style="color:Purple; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 16:47, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :*07:20, 3 Jun 2005, ], You enter the conversation and change the chronology to make it appear that the Ron Kitrey's comments were announced before any exaggerated estimates. I'll assume good faith here and it was just a mistake | |||
| :I don't like the separation between 5 and 26. Also, I believe that Human Rights organizations did not verify any of their statements not while the aforementioned Derrick Pounder was alleging a massacre not after wards - it's basically a repetition of the war crime claims made while they were claiming a massacre only that now they added some allegations that the Palestinians made some violations as well. I appreciate your efforts here, but I'm not a fan of these changes. <b>]'']''</b> 17:27, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :*00:27, 4 Jun 2005, ], After entering a revert war insisting that the Israeli comment was before all, then changed to most comments of a massacre (you did 4 reverts so should have been banned for a day as punishment), you include a second quote about 250 from not a news site, but a pro-Palestinian "fan site". | |||
| ::Re "mid-hundreds": good point, it already says "thousands" earlier in the paragraph – I hadn't noticed that – so the "mid-hundreds" bit can be left out. | |||
| :Are you happy yet? Because of your insistance on following your own ignorance on the matter I had to spend over an hour researching the topic and finally providing the dates, and announcements of anything relevant to the body count above. I don't normally flame new wikipedians and I wouldn't have if you hadn't have insisted on your petty points in order to make israel look bad. You've been unable to take a NPOV and solely attempted to promote pro-Palestinian points (even though some are long dead or did you not hear that only 52 people died in Jenin?) typical of someone who is unable to take both sides of an argument. -- ] 23:44, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::How about "approximately 5–26"? I think it's misleading to just say "26", since the source is vague about this number. | |||
| ::I'm not sure what point you're trying to make. Are you disputing whether Pounder's POV is worth taking into account? Well, Pounder is mentioned later in the article, so if the lead asserts that a certain number were killed, it's contradicting a POV reported later in the article, making the article self-contradictory or implying that Pounder's POV is necessarily wrong, which seems to me to violate NPOV. Do you see any problem with inserting the word "estimated"? I've given a reason to put it in (i.e. NPOV); I'm not aware of any reason to leave it out. It doesn't seem to me to be doing any harm. If you have problems with other parts of the changes I suggested, please specify them too. | |||
| ::By the way, I don't know what the usual practice is on this page, but I prefer not to have comments interspersed within other comments; and if you do, it may help to use the {{tl|interrupted}} template. <span style="color:Purple; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 17:42, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::I've taken up on the "approximately" suggestion - it was a fair suggestion. I'll be back for further discussions tomorrow or maybe later today. Cheers, <b>]'']''</b> 18:02, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Derek Pounder (forensic expert, the only one known to have visited, examined 2 bodies) said to the BBC: I'm not aware that he retracted any of this, perhaps you can point me to the right places. | |||
| ::::David Holley (military expert with Amnesty) said to the BBC: ''"it just appears there was no wholesale killing"''. Then he says: Then he says: ''"some very credible witnesses have come forward who have told stories of how they have seen executions. They have seen snipers cutting people down in the streets with clear views of civilians trying to get away from the fighting. These are individual killings that need to be investigated."'' If we need to quote him saying "no massacre" (and I think he's the only independent visitor who said that) then we should balance it by quoting the other things he said, rather than giving undue weight to the words "no massacre", which are perhaps a minor element of what he said.. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 18:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::PalestineRemembered, | |||
| "''You enter the conversation and change the chronology to make it appear that the Ron Kitrey's comments were announced before any exaggerated estimates''" | |||
| :::::I want to thank you for making my point for me about the credibility of the Human Rights organizations in regards to the Jenin allegations against Israel. | |||
| :Not "''before any''", don't exagerate, I wrote "''before most''". The only link which was in the article was , with the date of April 16,2002. This date made me make a mistake on the chronology, that's true, I recognize it. But your resume gives all the blame on me ! :-( | |||
| :::::Cheers, <b>]'']''</b> 18:45, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Except for the fact the accusations and propaganda were all about "wholesale killings" and "massacres". Remember? On the scale of Sabra and Shatila? As for Holley's "credible witnesses", were these the same ones that claimed a truck full of apples and supplies was actually a truck full of dead bodies? ]<sup>]</sup> 20:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I just would like to notice that Chanting Fox simply deleted the Ron Kitrey's declaration, and MathKnight did the same . | |||
| ::::::Hmm, this seems to have spiralled a little off point into bickering about what's the supposed "truth" rather than focusing on attribution, reliable sourcing and verifiability, and also, more disturbingly, into apparent slurs against any cited witness who happens to be Palestinian. As for the article - the lead as it stands needs, if nothing else, a bit of copyediting. Plus I'm still a little unhappy personally with the substantive changes that Jaakobou made a while back, as per my post higher up. Having said that, I neither want to sit here and carp on the talk page, nor revert those changes and end up in a spat over minor edits, so I'm dropping out. I'm assuming others will tweak the wording, hopefully for the better. --] (]) 22:46, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| The Ron Kitrey's declaration was deleted in every article where it has been inserted, which is, for me, but maybe I'm wrong, a kind of vandalism. (, by MathKnight, , : declaration deleted twice by Jayjg) | |||
| :::::::Well, honestly Nick, what do you think of someone who brings, as evidence, a "forensic expert" who found only two bodies, but was quite sure "there are large numbers of civilian dead underneath these bulldozed and bombed ruins that we see", and, in fact, believes him to be correct, despite the fact that the bodies of those alleged civilians have never been found in the six years since Jenin? These kinds of comments move beyond the realm of ridiculous and squarely into that of self-parody. If I didn't know better, I would think he was playing us all for fools for even bothering to respond. ]<sup>]</sup> 23:04, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::: was that of Wadah Shalabi, an unarmed man shot in the back in a narrow alleyway after he'd come out and given himself up. Major-General Giora Eiland, Head of the IDF Plans and Policy Directorate, confirms this incident. Israel was given the first names of two of the soldiers who carried out this double killing (a third man miraculously survived by feigning death for an hour). There has been no investigation - the UN team was blocked from Israel. | |||
| ::::::::Pounder travelled from the UK and was at the the Israeli High Court on the 14th trying to get access for medical organizations. He was finally able to reach the hospital on the 17th, by which time, all the bodies again according to Amnesty. | |||
| ::::::::There were a number of specific items found in the RS which were introduced for "mediation", above. Perhaps we could have administrator assistance to counter some of the objections raised - it is - especially not when the sources are the Telegraph, FOX news and Haaretz. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 17:02, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::PR, what does any of that have to do with the still undiscovered "large numbers of civilian dead underneath these bulldozed and bombed ruins that we see"? Nothing, of course. Stop ]. ]<sup>]</sup> 00:12, 8 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::PalestineRememebred, | |||
| :::::::::I can't find the part of the Amnesti report that says Wadah Shalabi was shot "after he'd come out and given himself up". I did notice a mention of a suicide bomb belt however. Can you please clarify this part of your note? | |||
| :::::::::With respect, <b>]'']''</b> 18:11, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Wait a second: the says "at least 52 Palestinians, of whom up to half may have been civilians". We need to get the idea of "at least" into the article: otherwise we're misrepresenting the source. And I think we need to stop saying 26. "Up to half" of "at least 52" is not necessarily 26. It's going to be hard to word it concisely. Here's another try at the last paragraph: | |||
| When you wrote "''the only IDF report with such a large body''" "''and came after inflated Palestinian reports of a massacre.''", it wasn't a correct presentation, as your complete chonology shows after. So maybe my reverts were not correct (I continue with my first mistake), but the version I reverted 3 or 4 times also were not... I don't think I commited a crime when reverting ; and, for my opinion, to delete relevent facts, as it happens for Ron Kitrey's declaration, is more problematic on Misplaced Pages. | |||
| :Subsequent investigations found no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place. Official estimates of overall Palestinian deaths were variously 56 and "at least 52" — of whom up to approximately half may have been civilians — while 23 IDF soldiers were reported killed as well, and a large area in the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting. Human rights organizations alleged that ]s had been committed in the fighting and criticized the conduct of both sides. | |||
| <span style="color:Red; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 01:34, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :Heyo Coppertwig, | |||
| And about "fan-site" , when you wrote "''from not a news site, but a pro-Palestinian "fan site"''", please notice that I used the same site that was in the paragraph before (13 May 2005 version , part "Allegations of a Massacre", 3rd paragraph, I couldn't guess it was a fan-site). | |||
| :I'm sorry for the idiom and I'm sure this is not intentional, but it feels like when given a finger, you reach for the whole arm (allow me to exlain...). "Up to" is based on the 'most credible' witnesses who were mostly busy fabricating stories of dead bodies under the rubble or in Army food supply containers and claiming fighters were unarmed civilians (please review the references from above for some examples). Still, I've agreed to a pro-Palestinian presentation of the civillian toll without any criticism to the bogus accounts and I cannot understand on why you refuse to accept this good will gesture and push further for total elimination of the actual civilian casualty tolls. Please clarify your position and why you now suggest we should be writing ''more than'' 26 civilian casualties. <b>]'']''</b> 01:55, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Hi. I just wanted to state my opposition to some of the recent changes. I believe that some of these attempts at restoring "neutrality" have gone in excess of neutrality into overt bias in favor of the opposite side. While this article can and should present Israeli and Palestinian narratives of the event in question, it is important that this article distinguish between externally verified fact and unverified one-sided narratives. Moreover, while the article may discuss these unverified narratives, it should not give them undue weight; rumors promulgated by one-side or the other should certainly not be given more prominence in the article than the actual externally verified events which took place. ← <span style="font-family: serif;"><b>]</b></span><sup> (])</sup> 07:21, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| About my "''own ignorance on the matter''", please be less categoric, I've lived in Palestinian cities and some friends of my friends were injured during Jenin operation, some of them lost a leg or more (there are not included in the ''only'' 52 people killed). I can make mistake about facts, but I try to be honnest and not to hide anything. | |||
| :Can you be more specific? What undue weight was given to the rumors in the previous lead? Also, a long discussion was held yesterday, and a relative consensus was pretty much agreed on. I respect your objection, but it's not nice to simply revert so far back just because you disagree. Also, you have removed some good later edits and a copyvio tag (which I hope Coppertwig will be willing to retract now, although he has not posted since I changed the text). I don't want to get into an edit war, but I would appreciate some cooperation. Thanks. -- ] (]) 16:59, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :Heyo Nudve, | |||
| "''You've been unable to take a NPOV and solely attempted to promote pro-Palestinian points (even though some are long dead or did you not hear that only 52 people died in Jenin?) typical of someone who is unable to take both sides of an argument.''" | |||
| :I personally thought we were making some progress until Coppertwig clarified to me that he's unhappy with a slightly pro-Palestinian version and he wants the article written to the Palestinian narrative. It's a shame that some progress has been reverted - I do agree that some major clear-cut issues were removed but I saw some good in the clean version as well. I'm hoping we can get the discussion back on track, but that this time editors will not try to push the "allegations as truth" perspective since it's already been established that this is not only false for the massacre claims but under serious contention for everything else as well. <b>]'']''</b> 18:18, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| : :-( Your conclusion is unfair. The article at the beginning didn't mention anything of the confused context of figures. I wanted to provide a more NPoV adding a fact I read on the net about IDF rumors. Bu it has been deleted many times. Many people in April 2002 gave false figures, based only on rumors, but there were no mention at all of the false figures given by the Israeli side.--] 09:17, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::Jaakobou, as I already said, I support a "minimalist" lead, since going into detail is bound raise allegations of bias. I could go with either your version or Nickhh's. I also agree with your recent objection to Coppertwig's suggestion to emphasize the "at least" part. However, as I said to Michael Safyan above, I don't like the current - Shamir1's - lead. -- ] (]) 18:37, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| In response to the request for details... the problem with is that it minimizes the rationale for Israeli operations in Jenin while going into major detail (and providing a very sensationalist presentation) of the massacre rumors. If that much detail of the massacre rumors are going to be provided, then a similar amount of detail about the Israeli rationale for Defensive Shield should also be provided. Furthermore, this sensationalist presentation of the rumors leaves the reader wondering how we know that they are rumors and not truths, since the newer version simply says that the claims are unsubstantiated whereas the older version cites the various agencies and individuals who have stated that a massacre did not take place. Additionally, the change completely elides any information about the ], which was "the straw that broke the camel's back", so-to-speak, and which was a major motivation -- if not the key motivation -- for the IDF entering Jenin. Also: it is dismissive of the Israeli footage showing a faked funeral, it emphasizes Palestinian suffering and Israeli war crimes while having elided any mention of the ], it emphasizes Palestinian rejection of the UN report and continuing claims that a massacre took place while removing almost all of the material refuting the claim that a massacre took place. There are other problems (e.g. it uses the nonsensical phrase "risking civilians"), but those are the main ones. ← <span style="font-family: serif;"><b>]</b></span><sup> (])</sup> 23:11, 6 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| : I reverted your addition because they were factually disacurate, to say the least. The way you wrote it clearly implied that the Palestinian allegations massacre came '''only''' after the IDF made such "allegation", which is simply not true, and thus removed. It was explained in the edit summary serveral times. ] 10:35, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :First of all, the Passover massacre has its own article. Second, it is important as a rationale for launching Operation Defensive Shield in general, not for this particular battle. Excessive information about it here would be undue, and stating it in the lead would sound "apologetic", when there's no reason for apologetics. Just like not every battle in the ] should detail the ]. IMO, the fact that the Palestinian leadership rejected the UN report and stuck to the claims of massacre is very notable. Again, the article says, as fact, that there was no massacre, and that the allegations are just allegations, which is why I think adding "refutations" on top of them would be "pushing it". I don't think the article is dismissive of the footage of a fake funeral, but you can rewrite that paragraph if you want. Ditto for specific phrases like "risking civilians" (which was itself a rephrase because Coppertwig suspected copyvio). Anyway, the main issue, as can be seen from this discussion is the lead, and I really don't think there's consensus for the current one. Cheers. -- ] (]) 07:08, 7 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :I'm thinking there is room to add a little more detail into the minimalist version for the reasoning to attack (add the 28 suicide bombers bit and the nickname of the city) and to reduce the rumors section a little as well with a touch more volume to the "no massacre" bit. I remind everyone that this is supposed to be a hint for the article and not the entire detailing of the article. That said, there is no way that the rumors should be told as truthful. I thought we had a reasonable version, though personally, I felt the 'civilians' bonus is what got us into trouble to begin with. Should I make a rewrite suggestion or are there objections to my compromise suggestion? <b>]'']''</b> 08:14, 7 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Sorry, I just got frustrated when you refused to let the issue die. Next time, before there is a revert war, please just use the talk page. Using "removal of correct facts is vandalism" does not give people the right to continue revert wars. -- ] 11:52, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::I'll repeat as well that while the background is of course relevant to a point, there is indeed a real risk of overloading it. No other WP article does or should go into huge detail in a lead about this sort of thing. In my view the lead itself doesn't need to say much more than "during the second intifada", in the same way - to continue Nudve's point - that the assault on is said to have taken place simply "during the Second World War". People can link to the second intifada article, and of course more detail can go in a background section in the main part here (and I would add should not merely focus on Israeli casualties, but that's another debate). As for the massacre point - it is I think relevant that very high figures and fears of a Sabra/Shatila were being floated. This was a significant feature of the media coverage at the time, although there is a key separate dispute about the extent to which these claims were some kind of blood libel as opposed to the result for the most part of general confusion; and also I think we still need to bear in mind the distinction between a deliberate, widescale massacre (which did not happen) and an assault on a populated area which nonetheless kills several civilians, some in questionable circumstances (which ''is'' what happened). All in all that's why I favoured a lead which, broadly and concisely, says - a) an assault took place during a period of widespread violence and as part of a wider operation; b) there were fears at the time of a serious massacre and a death toll in the 100s (as suggested at one point or another by ALL sides, and given momentum by the closure of the camp), most of which proved incorrect; c) nonetheless once the fog had cleared the evidence suggests that some pretty bad things happened, even if not on the scale originally feared. I know I said I'd drop out, but I hope I'm merely restating my position rather than carping. --] (]) 08:54, 7 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ==NPoV== | |||
| :::Sure, I'd love to see Jaakobou's suggestion. -- ] (]) 09:16, 7 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I have a few obligations but will get around to a rewrite suggestion in a few days. <b>]'']''</b> 08:46, 8 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I apologize for a sentence in my proposed draft above, which I am striking out. I had copied the sentence from the article and included it without critical analysis. The ''Palestinian report submitted to the Secretary-General attached to the''<sup>(22:59, 12 October 2008 (UTC))</sup> says ''"In addition, it is probable that a massacre and a crime against humanity might have been committed in the Jenin refugee camp ..."'' There may be other errors in my proposed draft. <span style="color:Green; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 14:38, 9 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::], you really need to start reading more carefully. The sentence you quote above is '''NOT''' part of the UN report, but rather the '''claims''' of the Palestinian delegation to the UN, attached to the UN report and is clearly labeled as such in the document you are citing, under the heading "Palestinian report submitted to the Secretary-General". The UN report itself says the opposite. ] (]) 17:12, 9 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| "''This appears to be the only IDF report with such a large body count and came after inflated Palestinian reports of a massacre.''" : This is not at all a NPoV. | |||
| :Thankyou for doing that, the UN report mentions "massacre" as a given a number of times. Are you aware there's another clear (indeed ridiculous) error in there? The UN report does not say 52-56 dead, it says ''"55. Press reports ... and subsequent interviews ... suggest that an average of five Palestinians per day died in the first three days of the incursion and that there was a sharp increase in deaths on 6 April. 56. Fifty-two Palestinian deaths had been confirmed by the hospital in Jenin by the end of May 2002. IDF also place the death toll at approximately 52. A senior Palestinian Authority official alleged in mid-April that some 500 were killed, a figure that has not been substantiated in the light of the evidence that has emerged."'' Similarly, the EU assumes that the 55 bodies are not the final death toll, since there are bodies under the rubble. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 15:36, 9 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::PR, I'm sure you've read the , since you've quoted from it several times. This report, written in November 2002, more than 6 months after the event, states very clearly that <blockquote>'After the IDF temporarily withdrew from Jenin refugee camp on 17 April, UNRWA set up teams to use the census lists to account for all the Palestinians (some 14,000) believed to be resident of the camp on 3 April 2002. '''Within five weeks all but one of the residents was accounted for.''' '</blockquote>. So, if AI says 54 were killed, and all but 1 camp resident is accounted for, whose bodies are supposedly still under the rubble, 6 years afterward? ] (]) 17:06, 9 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::When the blizzard of accusations about soap-boxing (aimed just at edits bringing documented information, not speculating on anything) has died down a bit, I'll get back to you on this one. But I won't be able to tell you why Amnesty write "''According to hospital lists reviewed by Amnesty International there were 54 Palestinian deaths"'', when we know, from the same source, that "''not a single corpse was brought into the hospital from 5 until 15 April"'' (and only 10 wounded made it through the blockade in the same period, with similar very small numbers to the Al-Shifa and Al-Razi hospital). | |||
| :::What we can say with certainty is that the conclusions of the report could be written into the article with far less difficulty: "''In Jenin and Nablus the IDF carried out actions which ... are war crimes."'' | |||
| :::Or we could sample the conclusions of some of the many observers - even the very few who said "No massacre" leave us in no doubt there were many, many more bodies. is one in the UK Telegraph "''in a reconstruction of the campaign, Philip Jacobson on the West Bank finds that this was no indiscriminate massacre ... The sickening stench of decomposing corpses that hangs over the camp signals that while the final death toll may never be precisely established, there will be more, perhaps many more, names to add to the civilian casualty list."'' ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 20:40, 9 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::No, please get back to me on this '''NOW''', and stop dodging and soapboxing: if AI says 54 were killed, and all but 1 camp resident is accounted for, whose bodies are supposedly still under the rubble, 6 years afterward? ] (]) 21:08, 9 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::I'm puzzled by this apparent demand that I accept every word of the Amnesty report as true, and I'm sure it's some form of personal failing on my part that I have difficulty with this. But I'll grant you the Amnesty people have a high degree of integrity and most of their report is indeed accurate. The Amnesty report's biggest weakness is probably where it's re-publishing the work of some other body, and in those cases we avoid error by going to the source. The BBC makes just this mistake later, telling us that the UN report says "No Massacre", when it clearly does not. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 23:02, 9 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::I see, you'd rather only accept as true those words which support your POV, but disregard the rest, is that it? Once again: if AI says 54 were killed, and all but 1 camp resident is accounted for, whose bodies are supposedly still under the rubble, 6 years afterward? Will an answer to this be forthcoming anytime soon? ] (]) 23:07, 9 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::I'll accept what Amnesty say for themselves, I'll accept what UNWRA say for themselves. Well, I'll accept what UNWRA say when their staff are no longer - or indeed shot dead, like Iain Hook, head of reconstruction and some 13 other UN workers in 2002 alone. | |||
| :::::::Until that time, we'll just have to write this article to accurately reflect how most journalists and experienced international observers actually reported it, won't we? That's only what policy says we should be doing. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 18:51, 10 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::What Amnesty say for themselves is that 54 were killed, and all but one resident of the camp were accounted for by November 02. So, going by what experienced international observers actually report, we can safely state in the article that AT MOST, 55 Palestinians were killed in Jenin, and dispense with the persistent insinuations, that you and other POV-Pushers are attempting to include, that there is some unknown number of civilians still buried beneath the rubble. Let's move on. ] (]) 20:49, 10 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::Why don't we edit the article as if it were part of the Great Soviet Encyclopedia? Then we could cherry-pick sources for the 1% that fits what we want it to say, and ignore the 99% that says something different (and that none of the readers would want to hear anyway). ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 21:04, 10 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::This indeed seems to be what you are after - seeing as you constantly cherry-pick some nearly random AI quote (when it suits your POV), and yet insist that this very clear statement from AI regarding the number of people killed be ignored. But, no, we are not going to edit the article as if it were part of the Great Soviet Encyclopedia, and we are not going to cherry-pick sources for the 1% that fits what we want it to say. AI says, very clearly, that 54 were killed, and all but one resident of the camp were accounted for by November 02. So, we can safely state in the article that AT MOST, 55 Palestinians were killed in Jenin, and dispense with the persistent insinuations, that you and other POV-Pushers are attempting to include, that there is some unknown number of civilians still buried beneath the rubble. ] (]) 21:13, 10 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::::Amnesties report is called . Just one tiny part of it matches the Hasbara version of this story, and it's a quote from people with guns held to their heads, who've never told us the same thing ourselves. Let's write the article according to the people who are able to speak freely - here's an Israeli who took part: ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 17:04, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::::We will write this article according to what reliable sources say. We will not ignore information that runs contrary to the POV you wish to push. You are advised, once again, to stop claiming that there are still an unknown number of bodies under the rubble, when reliable sources have said the opposite. There is a limit to the amount of ] that the community will tolerate, before it sees such soapboxing as ]. You are pushing that limit. ] (]) 18:28, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| The possiblity that there are as yet undiscovered dead is something of a red herring PR - the final death toll is, six years after the events, pretty definitive according to any reliable source. Higher tolls were feared both during the fighting and in the immediate aftermath, but those fears proved unfounded. The point is though that this certainly does not mean a) those fears were unjustified or motivated by malice at the time when they were expressed; or b) that all the 50-plus who ''were'' killed were necessarily nasty terrorists who deserved it and were shot in a fair fight. It is even legitimate - whether you or I agree with that subjective description or not - to describe the smaller death toll as constituting a massacre, if a high proportion of those killed were in fact civilians. Hence why I'm opposed to text in the article which definitively says, without qualification, that "there was no massacre", based simply on the reports which pointed out (correctly) that the death toll was much lower than initially thought. "No widespread massacre" or "no massacre in the hundreds", fine - but not simply "no massacre". There are plenty of WP articles whose ''actual title'' is "The XXX Massacre" where a relatively small number of people were killed. And NoCal, I don't see lots of "POV pushers" attempting to have a "still buried under the rubble" thesis included. --] (]) 11:42, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :There was no massacre and it would be nice if the disinformation advocacy stops. Simply put, secondary sources agree on that it was a baseless blood-libel (reasoning explained here:) regardless of the number of casualties during what the media now describes as a ''battle''. Allow me to quote the BBC for you: "". I have no objection, however, to Saeb Erekat being noted in the body of the article for his criticism of the UN report though. In fact, I believe we should have a "Palestinian reaction " section. <b>]'']''</b> 12:38, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Can you explain why did you deleted "''The same day, an Israeli military source told AFP some 250 Palestinians were killed.''" ? (so it's not the only IDF report). | |||
| ::What "disinformation advocacy"? I am merely pointing out - without necessarily endorsing the claim - the fact that some do view what happened as a massacre, despite the ultimately reduced death toll. The fact that a sub-editor posted a that said "no massacre" on a news organisation's website does not settle the matter, or mean that any source or organisation saying something different is therefore wrong (I have no idea what the other links are meant to be showing me). On top of that, the actual text of that BBC story does not actually come to that specific and explicit conclusion, nor does the actual UN report which it is referring to. And for the 50th time, deciding what constitutes a "massacre" involves a ''subjective judgement'' based on some combination of the numbers involved, who they were, how they were killed, in what context etc. People will differ in their interpretations of this. You simply are not getting this point, and instead insisting that one interpretation is "right" and the other "wrong" as if it were a simple matter of deductive logic, based on your view and backed up by a cherry-picking of sources that happen to appear to agree with that view. Added to all that you are now making a far more contentious claim than anything I've ever raised, ie that secondary sources "agree" that it was a "baseless blood libel". Any sentence in the lead or elsewhere which simply asserts "there was no massacre", without any qualification or any reference to a different interpretation, is misleading as to what the broader range of opinions and sources actually say. Whether you like that fact or not. --] (]) 14:38, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| "''and came after inflated Palestinian reports of a massacre''" : It's just a PoV. There were Palestinian allegations BEFORE and AFTER the 12th. Why do you choose "before" ? | |||
| :::Nickhh, | |||
| --] 00:29, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :::Your assertions were not conditioned to a "some" and you repeat the suggestion that the "massacre" claim is a viable possibility when it's been thoroughly rejected. Basically you want Misplaced Pages to assert the text in a manner that suggests a massacre could have occurred when there is no one saying this, best I'm aware, other than Saeb Erekat. Do you have any reliable sources to support your extraordinary claim? | |||
| :::Cordially, <b>]'']''</b> 23:23, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::My assertions have ''always'' been limited to "some". Nor have I ever said there ''was'' a massacre - indeed my whole point has always been that you can't be definitive about such a term, and, more importantly, most potential sources aren't either. Arguably the whole debate is a slightly academic distraction anyway. But you asked for sources that, with some distance from the actual events and once the final death toll was clear, do not simply use your preferred, simple "no massacre" text. So here's a quick sample - | |||
| :The point was that the western media mass hysteria could have been caused by his mistake. Point was that it wasn't the first report of an inflated estimate. Besides I've diced that whole section up now -- ] 01:17, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :::::1) Left wing/partisan sources (yes, not necessarily reliable as sources for fact, but we are talking about interpretation and opinion here, not facts. In addition these are the basic mirror image to the right wing forums and op-eds where the "massacre hoax/myth" line prevails. I am quoting them here to prove something about the spread of opinion on a talk page, not to suggest that all of them would be suitable as references in a WP article itself) | |||
| ::::: - "Some of the best-known massacres in history involved similar numbers of people killed, or even fewer, than the number that Human Rights Watch attributed to Jenin" | |||
| ::::: - "you don't have to spend much time reading the Human Rights Watch report on the events at Jenin to figure out a massacre, as the word is understood colloquially, did happen" | |||
| ::::: - "Israel has only itself to blame for it being labelled a massacre" | |||
| ::::: - "in the dictionary, massacre is defined as "savage and indiscriminate killing" clearly an apt description of what took place. Some of the most well-known, historic massacres had fewer or similar numbers killed" | |||
| :::::2) Palestinian officials: | |||
| ==Mistakenly, clarify== | |||
| ::::: - "a massacre in Jenin's refugee camp clearly happened... and crimes against humanity also took place .. How many civilians must be killed to speak of a massacre?" | |||
| ::::: - "how many people do you need to kill in order to call it a massacre? Israel calls the killing of 27 people a massacre, and they are right. I call the killing of 20 Palestinians a massacre also. And I am right…The problem is not the number. I am talking here about the methods." | |||
| :::::3) Mainstream media: | |||
| I'm sorry, Tomhab, not to close the issue, but Jayjg insists to write "''Ron Kitrey mistakenly says hundreds killed''" with the argument : "of course it was a mistake since hundreds weren't killed." | |||
| ::::: - "Was there a massacre in Jenin? Well, yes there was. The Macquarie Dictionary and the OED define a massacre as the unnecessary indiscriminate killing or slaughter of human beings. The UN's report, flawed though it is by being forced to rely on second-hand and often deeply partisan accounts, claims that 75 human beings died, 23 Israeli soldiers and 52 Palestinians, half of them civilians. Were the deaths necessary or discriminate? Not by any measure" | |||
| ::::: - "there was no ''wanton'' massacre in Jenin, no ''deliberate slaughter'' of Palestinians by Israeli soldiers" | |||
| ::::Despite some of the headlines and the Israeli reaction that spun it that way, the itself does not in fact use the simple phrase "there was no massacre". Nor does the November 2002 - which does however talk about "unlawful killings". The does say they found "no evidence to sustain claims of massacres or large-scale extrajudicial executions by the IDF in Jenin refugee camp", but again this is a qualified statement, and is then immediately further qualified by the remark that "many of the civilian deaths documented by Human Rights Watch amounted to unlawful or willful killings by the IDF". The simple point is that no single independent primary source actually says "there was no massacre", and the secondary sources - both WP:RS and others - take a mixed view. Jaakobou, you may not agree with what a lot of these sources say and think, but please don't pretend that those views and opinions don't exist out there in the world beyond your head. And - eventually to the point after yet another long essay - don't insist on inserting definitive assertions into pages here based on that denialism. --] (]) 14:28, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Ok, so it means that I can write: "Saeb Erekat ''mistakenly'' make mention of a massacre" ''since there was no massacre'' | |||
| :I (also) apologize for the error in my message of 14:38, 9 October 2008, and I thank NoCal100 for pointing it out; I've inserted some words in italics into that message which I hope suffice to correct it. | |||
| or "Saeb Erekat ''mistakenly'' estimates 500 or more dead" ''since 500 weren't killed''..... | |||
| :], thank you for your reply of 01:55, 6 October 2008. I would appreciate it if you would tell me where "most credible witnesses" is quoted from, and which parts of which references contain the information you wish to draw my attention to. Re agreeing to pro-Palestinian presentation of the death toll: I'm new to editing this article, so I'm not aware of past compromises. Clearly, a lot of work has gone into the article and I congratulate those who participated for producing an article that supplies a lot of information in a concise and well-organized way. '''The article should present all points of view''', including pro-Palestinian and pro-Israeli, without asserting or implying that those points of view are correct. I'm sorry but before I can appreciate any compromises that may have taken place, I would have to see the arguments (based on reliable sources and Misplaced Pages policy) for the positions from which compromises were made. Also, I'm sorry but I may not have fully absorbed all the comments in this discussion; feel free to give me pointers to individual comments in this thread or from previous discussions that might have bearing on what we're discussing. You said, ''"I cannot understand on why you refuse to accept this good will gesture"'': I'm trying to make the article what I would see as NPOV, so I'm not likely to appreciate any offer to make the article into what I would see as pro-Palestinian (though the pro-Palestinian POV and all other significant POVs need to be described in the article). I wasn't aware of any good-will gesture having been made, I'm sorry (and I'm still not clear on what it was,) and I didn't refuse to accept it. I simply offered a draft version of the lead for discussion. I'm sorry for not fully incorporating all progress from the preceding discussion in my draft; I didn't have time to absorb everything. | |||
| :Jaakobou, you said, ''"and push further for total elimination of the actual civilian casualty tolls."'' I'm not doing that. I don't know what tolls you mean. You're welcome to suggest changes to the draft lead I posted. I don't think there's any such thing as "actual" tolls; all we have is tolls reported by various sources, sources which may vary in reliability and about whose reliability opinions may vary. | |||
| :Jaakobou, you said ''"Please clarify your position and why you now suggest we should be writing more than 26 civilian casualties."'' To clarify: I did not suggest that we should be writing more than 26 civilian casualties; my suggested draft version is given in paragraphs in italics above. Please feel free to ask me other specific questions about my position. | |||
| :Jaakobou, you said, ''"I personally thought we were making some progress until Coppertwig clarified to me that he's unhappy with a slightly pro-Palestinian version and he wants the article written to the Palestinian narrative."'' I did not clarify that to you and that is not my position. When representing what I've said, if in doubt, quoting entire sentences of mine word-for-word will usually avoid misunderstandings. What I've actually said can be seen in my own posts above. | |||
| :], you said, "So, going by what experienced international observers actually report, we can safely state in the article that AT MOST, 55 Palestinians were killed in Jenin..." I disagree; I think that would be original research: or is there a source stating that at most 55 Palestinians were killed? It would also violate NPOV. If there is such a source, we can present that as one of a number of points of view. Again, we must present all significant points of view: the Misplaced Pages article should not assert one position as being true. | |||
| :NoCal100, you said, "You are advised, once again, to stop claiming that there are still an unknown number of bodies under the rubble, when reliable sources have said the opposite." In the message by ] of 17:04, 11 October 2008 (UTC) which you were apparently responding to, I don't see any such claim. Instead, I see comments about the level of reliability of various sources, and two quotes. Discussing the level of reliability of various sources is a normal and necessary part of article talk page discussions. We should not be claiming or trying to convince each other that there are or are not bodies beneath the rubble or that there was or was not a massacre, and as far as I can see PR was not doing that in that comment. Instead, we should be discussing reliability of sources, what the sources say, how the statements by various sources can be presented with ], etc.; PR's comment seems to me to fall in that category. | |||
| :I agree with ] that we should not say simply "no massacre"; I would add that we also should not say that there was a massacre, and we <s>probably</s><sup>(14:04, 13 October 2008 (UTC))</sup> shouldn't say that there may have been a massacre. I agree that "massacre" is a subjective term and could possibly be applied to a situation where about 50 people were killed, therefore a source that states that there were about 50 people killed cannot necessarily be interpreted as stating that there was no massacre. We can report established facts in terms with more specific definitions than "massacre"; we can also quote various sources saying various things using the words "massacre" or "no massacre". We must present a variety of points of view, not assert that one interpretation is true. <span style="color:Purple; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 22:59, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::We have a highly credible source that says, 6 months after the fact, that a total of 54 bodies were identified, and that all but one resident of the camp has been accounted for. So, no, it is neither original research nor a violation of NPOV to rephrase this as "55 killed, at most". I'm not opposed, however, to stating this exactly as AI has reported it, and attributing it to AI. I was not responding directly to PR's message of 17:04, 11 October 2008, but rather to his "body of work" on this page, which is full of insinuations that the total body count is still today, 6 years after the fact, in some doubt, and that it might be in the hundreds. (See for example his message of 23 July 2008: "a "Jenin Investigation", still finding complete bodies 3 months later. (We don't have a source and can't say what this might do to the death toll).", or 14 September "we can now say for certainty that the death toll amongst Palestinians was at least twice what Israel later tried to claim that it") ] (]) 17:51, 13 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| == Copyright violation == | |||
| For every reader, "mistakenly" supposes that Ron Kitrey ''misundertood'' what IDF explain to him, it's just the interpretation given by IDF, but it's not neutral to suppose it true.--] 15:59, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| I consider the current version of the "Report" section to be a copyright violation. It contains many sentences taken word-for-word from the source, without quotation marks; so many that I think even if we were to put them in quotation marks it would still be a copyright violation. | |||
| : Unless you are saying there was some conspirecy, given the quick clarification, it is very reasonable to believe that Kitrey made a mistake in his statement (i.e. slipped in his tongue) rather than he "told the true" and was "covered up" by IDF statement. Moreover, since he is IDF spokesman, he was the one responsible for issuing the clarification. This was not the case with Saeb Erekat. ] 16:38, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| I'm not trying to suppress any information. The most important parts of the source can be summarized, paraphrased, even quoted to some extent. And the reader is of course free to look at the source itself if they want to get the full story. | |||
| ::I have to repeat what I said above : | |||
| ::In the chronology of the article, we can find three items about israeli declarations : | |||
| ::On April 10, Israel estimates 150 dead | |||
| ::On April 12, Ron Kitrey mistakenly (or not) says hundreds killed | |||
| ::On April 14, the estimation progressivley came down (from 250 and 188) to a final figure of 45 | |||
| Maybe we can find some other sources to flesh out the section without quoting too much from any one source. | |||
| ::So for me it's not very clear if IDF first thought on the 12th that hundred of Palestinians were killed and realized only after this figures was not possible, or if Kitrey misunderstood something. I never talk about "conspirecy", but everybody knows that boths sides in a conflict (which is also mediatic) sometimes say things a little bit different from the truth. If we always believe IDF only on their declarations and adopt their interpretation, it's useless to talk about neutrality here. That's why I propose to only report the facts : Kitrey says ''this'', and IDF quickly explain he meant ''this''. --] 17:48, 6 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| I paraphrased, reworked and shortened the section to a version which in my opinion is not a copyright violation. However, my edit was . | |||
| ::: You failed to address the issue of quick clarification. Unless you are assuming some weird conspirecy theory I think "clarification" is suitly reasonable. ] 19:15, 7 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Please discuss. We need to arrive at a version that is not a copyright violation. | |||
| ::::A little lie, if it is, is not always a ''conpirecy''. I think '''you''' want to see everywhere conspirecies. --] 22:33, 7 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| I'm listing this at the ] noticeboard, and I've blanked the section and displayed a copyright template. Please leave the section blanked until an admin handles it (normally in about a week). Meanwhile, we can discuss and negotiate a new version of the section (without actually displaying it). The text is still there, it's just not visible due to the template, so it can still be edited. <span style="color:Red; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 19:08, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :OK I've had enough of this argument. What it comes down to is that this is Marcoo's speculation. The website provided says "clarification", so thats what we're using as its source. We CANNOT and WILL NOT include anything else until a link can be found that says the second statement was anything other than a clarification. If one is found, MathKnight (nor anyone else) can possibly argue with Marcoo - thats all that can be said about it. | |||
| :I've done some rewriting to this section. Tell me what you think. -- ] (]) 19:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Sorry I didn't have time to look at it yet. However, I may have told you the wrong procedure: maybe the copyrighted text is supposed to stay under the blanking template, and new text developed elsewhere e.g. ]. See instructions on the template itself and at ]. <span style="color:Green; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 12:39, 7 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Yeah, the procedure isn't very clear. I'm not sure whether a report can be retracted or not. I really with you had asked me before doing that. Now it's going to take at least a week before an admin looks at it, and the section may not be touched until then. This really sucks. -- ] (]) 13:05, 7 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ===Temporary page=== | |||
| :Misplaced Pages can only report what others have said about the topic, not what editors think may have happened(its called original research, which wikipedia does not like). Thats the end of the topic - there is nothing more that can be said. -- ] 02:13, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| I have reviewed the temporary page and addressed a few phrases of minor ongoing concern. I have suggested that ] copy that material to the article, overwriting the copyright problem, as he or she is the only substantial contributor other than my few words and I am waiving my right to attribution to my contribution there. I believe that the changes made eliminate copyright concerns as relate to . Thanks. --] <sup>]</sup> 22:11, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| == POV and lead, ongoing == | |||
| ::Don't exagerate everything please ! And I'm bored to be accused to think about conspiracy when I just want to say that IDF's point of view is not above everything. I've never ask to include any original research. My proposition was "IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey says hundreds killed, IDF quickly explain he meant hundreds of casualties" | |||
| ::Where is the original research in my proposition ? | |||
| ::What's wrong with my proposition ? | |||
| ::And more, the website provided wrote "clarification" '''but between two '"'''', see here : "''The army quickly issued a "clarification" saying that Kitrey meant to say "casualties - those killed or wounded" rather than just the number of those killed.''". It's presented as IDF's word. That's why my proposition is more neutral. If we can't agree on this, we could make a request for a mediation. --] 12:17, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Due to the fact that no progress has been made with this, and the lead has simply been stuck since being reverted to an old one-sided version, I am re-adding the POV tag. I was hoping other editors would at least start to sort this out - I am quite sure if I try to make any changes, they will be reverted. The discussion about this was started in the section above, but to run through some of the specific problems again - | |||
| :What's wrong is you're trying to re-word the source to say what you think it should have said. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 16:25, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :Para 1 - broadly OK, although it should probably say the battle "took place ''after an IDF incursion'' into Jenin refugee camp". They weren't invited in, after all. | |||
| ::??? | |||
| ::You didn't tell me where is the original research in my proposition, because there's not. You're unable to tell exactly what's wrong with any word of my proposition, any meaning, the only thing you say is an interpretation about my proposition, which doesn't exists in it. | |||
| ::If I wanted to re-word something, if I was obsessed by a conspiracy, if I wanted to say that IDF lied when telling that Kitrey meant something else, I would have proposed "Ron Kitrey was told to talk about hundreds killed, but later IDF realize that the figure was over-estimated and decide to save themselves by insinuating that he meant hundreds of casualties". If we want to stay on the facts : Ron Kitrey said X, and IDF explain Y. What is more neutral ? Really, I don't understand your point of view. --] 20:52, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :Para 2 - the lead does not need a whole paragraph about the attacks in Israel that preceded it. This detail can be covered in a background section (which should also include attacks against Palestinians) and through a simple wikilink to the Second Intifada article in the lead itself, as there is currently | |||
| :Please re-read Tomhab's comments. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 21:15, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :Para 3 - more or less says "most of those killed were militants, and any that weren't were probably killed by their own side's boby-traps, and of course the IDF tries not to kill civilians". I don't think this brief account could be more one-sided | |||
| ::I've just re-read them, and I've already answered to Tomhab's comments. If we report what others have said about a topic, we have to present a fact as a fact, and an interpretation/PoV as an interpretation/PoV. Here, if we stay on the facts, we could write : "Ron Kitrey said X, and IDF explain Y". If we want to present a PoV, we could write : "Ron Kitrey said X and IDF explain later he mistakenly said this". But Misplaced Pages is not IDF, isn't it ? --] 22:26, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :Para 4 - looking through the shoddy grammar, it seems to be suggesting that Palestinians "persistently" accused the IDF of genocide (source please?), ''deliberately'' made up death tolls (that's what "inflated" means) etc etc, and that these evil lies made people turn against Israel. There is no mention of the IDF closing the camp (which helped feed into the rumour cycle) or announcing death tolls in the 100s themselves. The relevance of these facts is covered in the UN report and in various journalists' reports, all of which are already cited in the article. Again this is jaw-droppingly one-sided. It also can be covered much more concisely, rather than listing every single accusation about Palestinian accusations, as it were. | |||
| :Para 5 - we repeat about four times that "there was no massacre", just in case we weren't clear about this interpretation of what happened. Following on from the para above, this has the effect of ramming home the claim above - that the Palestinians, lefty human rights groups and anti-Israel journalists were all in on a plot to make up a whole bunch of lies, but have now been caught out. There is too much detail and repetition for a lead here, and also the claim that the UN said there was "no massacre ", sourced to a BBC report is simple misrepresentation. I don't see why all the UN, human rights and media reports can't be summarised in the simple - and uncontroversially accurate - phrase "various investigations found that there had been no deliberate massacre of large numbers of Palestinians". The qualification of the word massacre is however crucial. | |||
| :OK - just read through this entire talk section and I'm not sure, but this might be what Marcoo is after (but wasn't explicit in his first comment). Changing: | |||
| Still carping, but with good reason. --] (]) 15:10, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :''IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey '''mistakenly''' says hundreds killed, but IDF quickly clarify he meant hundreds of casualties (killed or injured).'' | |||
| ::That was long. In a nutshell: Can we now revert to the previous lead? -- ] (]) 15:41, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Sorry! I could have saved 10 minutes of my life doing something more productive as well of course. Anyway, as noted about week ago I'm fine (or as OK as I'm ever likely to be with any exact wording) with the lead you and I discussed back then. I recommend we use that, and then others can of course tweak it or add bits and pieces, so long as - hopefully - they don't just try to rebuild this one in its entirety. --] (]) 16:45, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :to | |||
| ::::Good :) -- ] (]) 16:55, 11 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Oh well, I see someone is already trying precisely to the old bloated narrative .... --] (]) 14:31, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :''IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey says hundreds killed, but IDF quickly clarify he '''made a mistake and''' meant hundreds of casualties (killed or injured).'' | |||
| ::::::Are you suggesting that a note about the casus beli for Operation Defensive Shield is undue? Personally, I figured it is a basic note that explains to the reader what sparked the operation so I'm not really following why you're calling it an ''"old bloated narrative"''. <b>]'']''</b> 16:12, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :If thats right it looks reasonable. To me Marcoo's first comment implied removing the entire second half of the clarification as irrelevant hence the confusion. -- ] 23:21, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Yes I am suggesting precisely that, especially to the level of detail you are insisting on. I have explained why on several occasions, and at great length, above. --] (]) 16:20, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I will be OK with : "IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey says hundreds killed, but IDF quickly explain he made a mistake and meant hundreds of casualties (killed or injured)." | |||
| :::::::Let's try and get consensus before making changes. Jaakobou, a few days ago you suggested writing a draft, do you still intend to do that? -- ] (]) 16:53, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I've just made a couple (not huge). Please can they not just be reverted? I know not everyone will be 100% happy, but some of them involve fairly uncontroversial improvements to the language and grammar. The material Jaakobou added is still there, I just moved it down from the lead.--] (]) 17:15, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::For my level of english, "clarify" means "to make understandable", so if we use the verb clarify, it means that we'd suppose true the fact that he made a mistake. That's why I proposed before "explain", which doesn't presume if the explanation is the good one or not. | |||
| :I'm going to keep most of your edits, but modify a few. As currently written, the lead suggest that perhaps a "small" massacre did occur, which is not supported by th evidence. It also unduly calls out the IDF for alleged unlawful killings, without similarly calling out Palestinian forces for allegedly mingling with civilians or using children to carry booby traps. I'm also changing the "Large" part of the camp, because that is a subjective quantifier, and replacing it with the actual percentage. ] (]) 18:33, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::--] 23:49, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::There are credible allegations of at least one small massacre in the RS - so if we're going to mention massacre (which isn't really necessary anyway, except to the degree the incident is mostly known as "The Jenin Massacre") then we cannot use the Hasbara version of the story by which there wasn't one. To do so would be blatant cherry-picking. | |||
| ::More significantly the criticisms from investigations (to a lesser extent the UN as well) related to the incident itself is overwhelmingly of the IDF (in particular, blocking access to humanitarian assistance, but a number of other things, many of them really serious). Criticism of "the Palestinians" is mostly of the militants amongst them, since, as the UN report says ''"Israeli military retaliation .... had the effect of severely weakening the Authority's capacity to take effective action against militant"''. Implying that both parties are equally criticized would be extremely POV (the nearest thing to "equal criticism" I can find is #32 in the UN report). ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 19:47, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::'''Comment by Jaakobou:''' | |||
| :::I prefer Tomhab's version; governments and organizations issue "clarifications" all the time. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 16:28, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :::# PalestineRemembered. There are no "credible allegations" for either a small scale massacre or a large scale massacre. "Eye-witnesses" in Jenin were noted by various media for being untruthful and I request that you stop ommitting information that you are already aware of to pursue an unproven point. It is disruptive. | |||
| :::# Nickhh. Best I'm aware, military operations generally have the casus beli written within their lead. I don't know what you refer to when you say you've explained why this is an ''"old bloated narrative"'' but perhaps I've missed this explanation somehow among the other issues. Can you please repeat the reasoning on why we should censor the casus beli so that we can open this up for community discourse? (]) | |||
| :::# A couple recent edits have been in violation of ] as they misrepresented sources and equated between two opposing POVs to give credibility where there is non. , has (for starters) used the word ], removed the "massacre" description and ] between the Palestinain massacre charges and the Israeli "not massacre" rebuttals. It also ] the suggestion that a non deliberate, non large scale massacre could have occurred when it barely even qualifies as a ] perspective amoung mainstream media or other. Please make note of these policies and do not repeat the violations. | |||
| :::# Nudve. My suggested version was which was mildly amended to that is acceptable to me. I'd appreciate collaborative opinions/suggestions/criticism about it (no advocacy of fringe views please). | |||
| :::Cordially, <b>]'']''</b> 22:29, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::First of all, as I said, I'm fine with the current version, so I'm glad you reverted. The Passover massacre was the casus belli for Operation Defensive Shield, not for this particular battle. To continue an earlier example, the Americans did not target Iwo Jima because of Pearl Harbor but because they were at war with Japan and considered Iwo Jima tactically important. "Refreshing the reader's memory" on something the Palestinians did before Defensive Shield began on this article only serves to create a narrative that makes Israel the good guys, so I think it should be avoided. -- ] (]) 06:19, 13 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Heyo Nudve, | |||
| ::::Seconded as ''quickly explain'' sounds odd --] 16:39, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::The American–Japanese battle at Iwo Jima occurred close to the end of WW2, a war which lasted for 6 years and had a plethora of smaller battles, campaigns and maneuvers. The "Battle of Jenin" was a 10 day skirmish during a 10 day operation and the purpose of the battle was to catch the people who were sending suicide bombers. This is not "Refreshing the reader's memory" of something which occurred months or years earlier, but rather what occurred a mere 3 days earlier - a suicide bombing. No one wrote down "the good guys went after evil people" but instead, what was written was "". This is not a pushy/fringe narrative. | |||
| ::::::Cordially, <b>]'']''</b> 15:19, 13 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Well it would have been better perhaps if Jaakobou had followed NoCal and just made any small changes again on top of the changes I had made, rather than just rolling them all back in one go and absurdly accusing me of tendentious editing and promoting fringe views (the definition of which appears to be anything that disagrees with the analysis to be found in ] and ], or ] if we dare to head off to the extreme radical left). As I said, several of them were pretty basic ones to improve the flow of the language and the grammar. Others in may view added more balance, although I appreciate not everyone will accept that. On the specific "massacre or no massacre" point, in response to NoCal & Jaakobou I would point out that I made a pretty extensive , with links, in a section above here. Plenty of reliable (and not so reliable) sources make definitive assertions one way or the other. Equally plenty of sources (eg the UN, Amnesty) are not so unequivocal, and in fact do not even address the issue directly. Ultimately therefore it is simple misrepresentation to push one view or the other into this article as a definitive statement, just because it's the view you happen to take. Using slightly more open language along the lines of "there was no widespread/wanton/deliberate massacre" is a) accurate across all viewpoints; & b) does not by implication suggest that there was therefore a massacre of some sort. | |||
| :::::I don't accept "clarify", because it's a way to suppose true the fact that he made a mistake. So it's only a PoV. If there is no solution, I will ask for a mediation, but I don't consider Jayjg's position as impartial. --] 21:47, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :::::I have no baggage here or stake in this issue, and for example have no personal view about whether this was a "massacre" or not. In fact I think the debate around the word is pretty unhelpful in most cases. I am just coming at it as an outsider who nonetheless happens to be pretty well read on the subject and is trying to agree some text which accords with a more worldwide, broader view of what happened and how it has been reported and written up. Sometimes trying to insert spurious balance for the sake of it is a silly game, eg "Mussolini helped drag Europe into a catastrophic war which caused the deaths of millions .. however he brought back national pride to Italy and made the trains run on time etc etc" - however there are real issues in this case, which to be honest for a long time have been trampled down on this page in favour of a one-sided narrative. Not everything is in this world is black and white. --] (]) 08:34, 13 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::ps: on some specific points Jaakobou ... | |||
| ::::::My position? There are three people so far here who consider the wording fine, only you disapprove. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 21:50, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :::::'''Casus Belli''': the lead of course should say that the assault took place during the Second Intifada, and that Jenin was targeted after the IDF said suicide attacks were being launched from the city. I have always said this. Any edits I have made have always retained this information. The simple point is that the lead doesn't need to repeat the same point, in great detail, across two or three sentences. | |||
| :::::'''Initial massacre claims''': I did not remove the first reference to it (eg the phrase "rumours developed that a massacre of hundreds or even thousands .. might have occurred" is there in the first sentence), again I just removed ''duplication'' further on in that paragraph. Go back at look at the diffs, and please read things more carefully in future before making sweeping accusations. | |||
| :::::"'''NPOV'''": in fact I do equate the official Israeli interpretation that there was no massacre with official Palestinian claims that there was one, even with the lower death tolls. I'd be interested to hear on what basis you think they are not equivalent (the Barak defence not included) | |||
| :::::"'''Fringe'''": I have pointed you to links showing that views which do not follow the simplistic "no massacre" view are no more fringe than those pushing that interpretation. | |||
| :::::'''English language''': rumours cannot "purport" anything; organisations rarely "hold on to" allegations (and if they do, it is being suggested they are doing it in vain); also the "while"s and "however"s are all over the place. --] (]) 09:15, 13 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| '''Comments''' by Ynhockey: | |||
| :::::::If it's your position as an admin (so as a possible mediator), I persist to say that your position is not impartial at all. You're three so you're right ? New rule on Misplaced Pages ? For me the respect of NPoV is more important than how many are on each side. It should be the same for a mediator, not considering how many support a proposition. --] 22:18, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| * Originally I wanted to just follow the goings-on of the article itself, but recently so many quick edits and reverts happenned that it's becoming nearly-impossible. Therefore, I'll relate only to the current version of the article vs. the version I remember from way back, and comments on the talk page so far. | |||
| * ''Casus belli'': It appears that all sides agree that information about the reasoning for this operation should indeed be in the lead section. So why isn't it there? We can argue later about the necessity of citing the Passover Massacre in particular, but some info needs to be inserted ASAP. | |||
| * Jenin Refugee Camp: I noticed that all information about the Jenin Refugee Camp has been removed from the article. Was this intentional, or part of the comprehensive rewrite? I think this information is very important, especially because the camp doesn't have its own article. It needs to be outlined what the Jenin refugee camp is (essentially a poor neighborhood of Jenin), who was in charge of it (UNRWA/PA), and why it was targeted specifically (the last point seems to exist in the current version). | |||
| * I will comment on the other points raised here once I have carefully analyzed the evidence, sources, and the actual prose of the article. | |||
| -- ] <sup>(])</sup> 13:23, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::It's my position as an editor. And now there are four people who think the word is fine, against one who does not. This is called "consensus" on Misplaced Pages, and it's not a new rule at all. What you think is a NPOV issue is simply not, according to the consensus. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 19:24, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :Thanks for the comments. Let's see: | |||
| ::::::::Hi Marcoo, Please don't take offense at what i'm about to say, but you seem to be having a problem properly grasping the meaning of the english in this statement. From my position as having British English as a first language, this is not POV in the slightest. If English is not your first language are you sure you can make statements querying the validity of phrases that you are not fully familiar with? Even with your interpretation of the word clarify, if you go back to the article this was taken from it quotes IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey as saying "there were '''apparently''' hundreds of people killed in the Jenin refugee camp.". Note the use of apparently, this shows a level of uncertainty and would therefore need clarification, and thus making clear. Again, please don't take this as an attack. | |||
| :*The second paragraph of the lead says: ''Israel targeted Jenin's refugee camp, after it deemed that the city had "served as a launch site for numerous terrorist attacks against both Israeli civilians and Israeli towns and villages in the area"''. I think that covers it. The source lists the suicide bombers that came from Jenin, but doesn't mention the Passover massacre. For this reason, as well as the ones I mentioned above, I think it doesn't belong in the lead. | |||
| :*It was part of the rewrite. I think this stuff belongs in the ] article. Why is it very important here? | |||
| : -- ] (]) 14:16, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::*The text indeed exists, but it is not clear from the paragraph what the situation really was at the time. Instead, it is written as a fringe claim (especially with the use of quotation marks around the Israeli statement). It also uses wording from the first paragraph ("as part of"), so at the very least a re-wording is warranted. The paragraph is also too short for WP:LEAD, so for GA/FA it would need to be merged into another paragraph, further burying the ''casus belli'', probably the most important part of the lead after the definition, in irrelevant info. I suggest expanding the paragraph, but most importantly, defining the ''casus belli'' clearly, without any quotation marks or side-implications, at the start of the second paragraph. I'll write a draft if you wish, although an example of how I think the lead should work can be seen in my recent rewrite of the IDF article lead. | |||
| :::::::::As everybody knows, english is not my first language. Ok. But when I go on Merriam-Webster online dictionary, I read for "clarify" that one of the meanings is "to make understandable". So it appears that this word have the exact same meanings in French. So from what I understand, if we write : "''IDF quickly clarify he made a mistake''", it means that we suppose true the fact that he made a mistake. Am I right ot not ? So I ask for a verb which doesnt suppose if it is true or not. And notice that in the link, the article used two "'''"'''" for the word "clarification", they is a reason. If "quickly explain" is "too odd", you can propose something else, after all, you know english better than me.--] 08:01, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::*Some points are more important than others, but at this time specifically, we have to take into account that the Jenin article is sub-par and doesn't provide the reader with the info that this article should convey in regards to the refugee camp. In case the Jenin article is expanded however (and I believe the refugee camp also deserves its own article), there are still some points which need to be stated here—as a summary of the relevant points from the refugee camp article. For one, there needs to be mention of the fact that it is/was a PA-administrated camp, clarifying who the "Palestinian forces" were in the lead. Also it's worth mentioning that the UNRWA also ran the camp, which is directly relevant to the battle (UNRWA's involvement should be talked about somewhere in the article, if it hasn't been mentioned already). And finally, as I said before, why the camp was attacked specifically (rather than other parts of Jenin) also needs to be clarified in the article body (other than the simplistic "Israel deemed it a terrorist hotbed"). Of course, the latter requires the best of sources, which I hope someone else will be able to find. | |||
| ::Finally, it's good to see that an editor generally uninvolved in conflict articles such as yourself also contributes to the article! Cheers, ] <sup>(])</sup> 15:02, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::A slight rewording is always possible, and I would like to see your draft. I think we pretty much have consensus on a relatively short lead, to avoid a narrative, so keep that in mind. About the camp: There could be some information added. I'll see what I can find. -- ] (]) 15:28, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Update: added background paragraph. -- ] (]) 16:25, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ===Draft by Ynhockey=== | |||
| :::::::::"''Note the use of apparently, this shows a level of uncertainty and would therefore need clarification, and thus making clear.''" -> It's not the point here. IDF didn't clarify the word "apparently", they said that Ron Kitrey meant "casualties" when he said "killed people". '''It's not the same thing at all''' (that's maybe why the article put "clarification" between two """). Using two """, the article from Newsmax is more NPoV than your proposition. --] 08:15, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Below is my proposed draft (sans sources). I mainly focused on structure and language, and giving due weight in the lead to each section of the article (per WP:LEAD). | |||
| The '''Battle of Jenin''' took place between April 3 and April 11, 2002 in the ] in the ]. It was fought between the ] (IDF) and ] militants{{ref|1}} during the ], as part of the ]i ] launched four days earlier. | |||
| ::::::::::I feel it is the word '''mistakenly''' giving you real problems. would a statement such as | |||
| The Israeli government decided to target the refugee camp after intelligence indicated that it served as a launch site for numerous terrorist attacks against Jewish localities in the area and Israeli civilians in general, including .{{ref|2}} The attack commenced after the city of ] had been captured, while Palestinians dug in in the refugee camp, seeing the Israeli soldiers advance on foot. After an Israeli detachment walked into an ambush, the force changed tactics and subdued the camp with armored vehicles, and the Palestinian forces surrendered on April 11. 23 Israeli soldiers were killed in the battle. | |||
| ::::::::::''IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey tells Israeli Army Radio that there are apparently hundreds killed, the IDF quickly ]] this position, stating that there were hundreds of casualties (killed or injured).'' | |||
| Because many buildings in the camp were bulldozed, and the area was closed by the IDF following the battle, a rapid cycled of rumors began circulating that a massacre of as many as thousands of Palestinians had taken place, supported by statements from the ] and human rights organizations. Subsequent investigations found no evidence of a massacre, and the total Palestinian death toll was determined to be between 52 and 56, including 5-26 civilians. Even so, human rights organizations held on to the allegations of ]s. | |||
| ::::::::::clear this up? Clarifies is still a perfectly good alternative. Feedback please --] 12:03, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| '''Notes''': | |||
| :::::::::::As I explained since the beginning, the problem doesn't come only from "mistakenly", it also come from "clarify". I repeat : using two quotes """ for the word "clarify", the article from Newsmax is more NPoV than your proposition. I ask for a '''neutral''' verb (which doesn't suppose if Ron Kitrey made a mistake or not) : "to say", "to explain", "to tell", whatever you want. I think it's not too much to ask for... :-( --] 12:26, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| * {{note|1}} 'Palestinian forces', like in the current version, should be used if sources can be provided that the Palestinian side in the battle was officially operating under the PNA, because 'Palestinian forces' generally refers to the PNA police. | |||
| * {{note|2}} If the government decided that it was a launch pad for attacks, there must be examples of some attacks. This isn't bloat, as Nickhh claims, but necessary to understand how the refugee camp was different from other Palestinian towns in terms of militant activity. Terrorist acts not linked with Jenin probably shouldn't be included, no matter how terrible. | |||
| ====Comments by Nudve==== | |||
| ::::::::::::so ''IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey tells Israeli Army Radio that there are apparently hundreds killed, the IDF quickly corrects this position, stating that there were hundreds of casualties (killed or injured).'' is ok with you, though please understand in my eyes it is the same as clarifies? --] 14:56, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| A few issues with this draft: | |||
| *Using the word "terrorist" unattributed right in the lead is going to be a problem. | |||
| :saying that they clarrified is not POV - look back at the source - it directly implicates that the second statement from the IDF was related to the first. Quoting Marcoo '''which doesn't suppose if Ron Kitrey made a mistake or not''' - if you look at the source the second statement is released solely to explain Ron Kitrey DID make a mistake! To imply otherwise is not just POV, its wrong. I suggest the best move you could do is put a double quote (") around clarify, to make it clear that it was their wording, not wikipedia. -- ] 18:18, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| *"" is ]. The debate here is on how much weight should those attacks get in the lead. | |||
| *"Even so" is ], and the absence of a massacre does not necessarily negate the possibility of war crimes. | |||
| *This is not an issue with the draft, but now that I think of it, the lead should say something about the UN commission, since it is given significant weight in the article. | |||
| -- ] (]) 19:01, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Reply: | |||
| ::* The particular word is not important, it can be removed. ''... it served as a launch pad for numerous attacks again ...'' | |||
| ::* In case the note I left was not clear, what I meant to say is that we should list several notable attacks that specifically emerged from Jenin—without giving any details for them. The general term 'Black March' (מרץ השחור) can also be mentioned if there's a source linking it to Jenin. This seems to me as an acceptable middle-ground compromise between the position that no attacks should be mentioned (Nickhh) and the position that there should be a detailed examination of several attacks (Jaakobou). Perhaps I read the arguments wrong. | |||
| ::* How about: ''... the total Palestinian death toll was determined to be 52–56, including 5–26 civilians, although human rights organizations held on to the allegations of war crimes.'' ? | |||
| ::* I agree. IMO it should go into the last paragraph which is reasonably short for an expantion, and already talks about "subsequent investigation", which would include the UN commission. | |||
| ::-- ] <sup>(])</sup> 20:25, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::I suppose that's better. However, it might not be relevant anymore, since the entire article's neutrality and reliability are now in question (see below). Earlier, you said: "I will comment on the other points raised here once I have carefully analyzed the evidence, sources, and the actual prose of the article". I'd be happy if you did that and joined the discussion. Cheers, -- ] (]) 08:13, 15 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I don't wish to discourage someone who (I think) has done rather a lot of good work. However, the objections I've made are substantive (and not exhaustive). There is an template which avoids the problem of whether there is an on-going editing disagreement or not. | |||
| ::::How would you feel about me writing-up the UN report? If it leans in either "direction", it's probably towards Israel (judging by who complained, crude though that is as a measure!). It's certainly the nearest thing we have to an account written by people who are both "uninvolved specialists" and "professionals". It got extensive publicity when it came out in August and more or less capped off most discussion. I have taken advice on what I have planned and can only see editing-type corrections to what I've done. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 09:04, 15 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ===Still problems=== | |||
| :::Possibly, but it is what the source uses... -- ] 19:40, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| The errors in punctuation, grammar and language which I tried to sort out as part of are still in the lead, since of course my changes were subject to blanket reversion, despite my pointing out what I had done. As it happens, unsurprisingly I didn't see what was wrong with the minor content changes either, which were intended to create a bit more balance - none of them were hugely significant and none of them said anything that isn't already known and sourced. Anyway, I thought I'd point it out since no-one has even attempted to deal with the grammar and phrasing problems since, which I could make a cynical comment about (but I won't, I'll merely hint at it. As I just have). --] (]) 15:56, 24 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::And since it's neutral and accurate, we can use it to; no need to make it look like we don't believe them, which is exactly what it will look like. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 20:38, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :here's a suggestion: Instead of making cynical comments, or complaining that no one has fixed punctuation and grammar issues, why don't ''you'' fix those punctuation and grammar issues, without trying to mix in various changes related to "balance" or other content? ] (]) 18:39, 24 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::Please don't try to patronise me again or start another fight, it's very tedious. I'm not under any obligation to edit this or any other article, and certainly not just because you've told me to. Especially when my first attempt to deal with the problem was simply reverted straightaway in its entirety. Why should I bother again? If other editors want it to read as it does currently, that's up to them, if that's where their priorities are. It's perfectly legitimate for me to simply flag up the issue on a talk page and leave it at that. --] (]) 13:35, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| I'm OK with Tomhab's proposition. Ok with : "IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey tells Israeli Army Radio that there are apparently hundreds killed, the IDF quickly "clarify" he meant hundreds of casualties (killed or injured)." | |||
| :::Your first attempt involved making numerous content changes which I (and other editors) found to be POV, along with fixing the punctuation and grammar issues of which you complain now. I made a simple suggestion that would address your complaint - simply fix the punctuation and grammar issues, without getting into the content issues. You are free to ignore that suggestion, but then don't be surprised if your alleged concerns are viewed rather skeptically. 14:32, 25 October 2008 (UTC) <small><span class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) </span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
| (even if I'd have prefered to use a neutral verb like 'explain' instead of using a verb between two double quotes ; it would have been more simple !). --] 01:23, 11 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Thanks, but funnily enough the possibility that I could do the copyediting all over again, without the '''N'''POV changes I also made in the first instance, had occurred to me before you suggested it above. --] (]) 14:45, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| == 200 square metres == | |||
| :::::I'm sure it occurred to you. Yet instead of making those edits, you chose to make a lengthy post here about the fact that they need to be made, and followed it up with 2 additional responses to my posts. I'd imagine it would take far less time to restore the previous copyedits to the main article, thereby improving the encyclopedia, than it took you to type these three complaints and responses, which is why I say that these alleged concerns of yours can be viewed with considerable skepticism - you do not appear to be genuinely interested in fixing the punctuation or the grammar (or you have have done so, rather than complain about it), but rather seem to be agitating for someone to reinsert the other elements of your edit which was reverted. ] (]) 14:57, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| One should look at the pictures and then try to imagine 200 square metres. It is about 15x15 metres. Maybe the writer meant 200x200 metres, which seems a bit more plausible area of 40 000 square metres. I added the link to Jenin pictures (this.is/jenin) for clarification. Believe me or your own eyes, the destroyed area is not 15 by 15 metres. | |||
| And one can call this article NPOV? I didn't expect to read IDF press releases from Misplaced Pages. --] 11:29, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Please stop impugning my motives, it amounts to a personal attack, something I know you are concerned about on WP. I'm not agitating for anything, nor is my reluctance to make any more changes anything to do with the amount of time it would take. And I'm only responding to your comments here because, as previously, you dive in to make inaccurate and off-topic attacks on me, which I then feel obliged to rebut. I'm going to stop doing that now. I've pointed out the problem with the phrasing, which is all I intended to do. --] (]) 15:14, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::We have worked very hard to make this article NPOV. Take a look at http://www.mfa.gov.il/MFA/MFAArchive/2000_2009/2002/4/Aerial%20Photographs%20of%20Jenin (included in the links at the bottom). It shows a series of aerial photographs of the devastation. Whilst your point that 200m2 is very different from 200x200, saying that the 40 000m2 of area was destroyed isn't right. The article meant that 200x200m was the areas of greatest fighting. <s>The article never makes any mention of the total area of devastation.</s> | |||
| :::::::I'm sure you've read ], which tells us that we are not obliged to assume good faith when there is evidence to the contrary. I believe there is ample evidence to the contrary in this case, as spelled out above. You may easily prove me wrong on this by simply making the punctuation and grammar edits that supposedly bother you so much. ] (]) 15:19, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::Sorry - I just noticed - I was wrong :) -- ] 12:59, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::I'm seeing people re-introducing errors of punctuation, grammar and language into an article after they've been corrected - it's difficult to call that anything but vandalism. | |||
| ::::::::I'm then seeing personal attacks on the person (previously people) trying to improve this article. This article still awaits administrative taken against editors who will clearly not abide by policy. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 16:42, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| (outdent) I made all the changes to the lead that I noticed in Nickhh's edit of October 12 that seemed to me to be pretty much just grammatical changes. Some changes could be considered either primarily grammatical or primarily adjusting the meaning. | |||
| Re some parts of Nickhh's edit that I didn't implement at this moment: | |||
| ::If you have any other points which you feel are POV, please let us know. -- ] 12:54, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Rather than changing "after it deemed" to "claiming", I suggest changing it to the neutral "stating". As I've stated previously, I support changing ''"while Jenin remained sealed"'' to something that mentions who did the sealing. (See my comment of 16:47, 5 October 2008.) Again for reasons I've expressed previously, (22:59, 12 October 2008) I prefer ''"no evidence to substantiate claims that a large scale or deliberate massacre had taken place"'' rather than ''"no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place."'' | |||
| ''"Human rights organizations reported cases"'' sounds more neutral than ''"human rights organizations held on to allegations"''. I think Nickhh's addition ''"and of unlawful killings by the IDF"'' is unnecessary and may veer away from NPOV. I don't think we should mention the number 26 unless we have a source specifically mentioning that number. (OR).<span style="color:Orange; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 16:16, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :As I wrote before, I object to the phrase ''"no evidence to substantiate claims that a large scale or deliberate massacre had taken place"'', because this implies that there is evidence for a "small scale" massacre, which is simply not the case. ] (]) 17:03, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::How about ''"no evidence to substantiate claims that hundreds had been killed"'' or ''"no evidence to substantiate claims that large numbers of people had been killed"'' or ''"no evidence to substantiate claims that more than 50-odd people had been killed"''? (suggested as a substitute for the current phrasing) <span style="color:Purple; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 17:15, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::This is better than your previous suggestion, but I still prefer the current phrasing in the lead, for two reasons: (1) the previous paragraph in the lead twice refers to allegations of a "massacre" , so when those turn out to be unsubstantiated, we should say so. (2) We have a couple of reliable sources that explicitly say "no massacre", so there's no reason not to use the same terminology. ] (]) 17:58, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::The reason not to assert "no massacre" is that it isn't NPOV, since it's reported by some sources but we have at least one source (the Palestinian appendix to the UN report) which contradicts it. However, we can assert something along the lines that "sources X and Y reported that there was no massacre" or "sources X and Y reported that they found no evidence of a massacre". Perhaps you could suggest specific wording for a sentence along those lines? <span style="color:Purple; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 18:09, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Here's my suggestion. Instead of the current ''While a large area in the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting, subsequent investigations found no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place.'', how about: ''"About 10% of the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting. According to a ] report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources continue to maintain that a massacre had taken place".'' ] (]) 18:16, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::That sounds good to me. However, do we have a source to verify that the Palestinian sources "continue" to maintain that a massacre had taken place? How recently did they say that? It may be better (and will not go out of date) to say ''"official Palestinian sources have stated that there was probably a massacre."'' (based on the appendix to the UN report, which states ''"In addition, it is probable that a massacre and a crime against humanity might have been committed in the Jenin refugee camp..."'') If we have another source we may be able to word it differently. <span style="color:Red; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 19:01, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::We can drop the "continue". ] (]) 19:04, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::The second part sounds OK. But now I'm wondering about "as a result of the fighting"; that makes it sound as if the destruction was accidental and caused by both sides. The source says ''"by a dozen armoured Israeli bulldozers."'' I suggest, ''"About 10% of the camp was destroyed by Israeli bulldozers. According to a ] report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources maintain that a massacre had taken place".'' <span style="color:Purple; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 19:14, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::Is there a source that says the destruction was caused exclusively by bulldozers? I don't think so. At least part of the destruction is attributed to Palestinian booby traps. ] (]) 21:11, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::The entire "massacre yes or no" business is a PR invention of one party. It bears no relevance to the actual reporting of the event - which concerned (<small>in this order, I think</small>): '''1)''' mass destruction '''2)''' obstruction of humanitarian relief '''3)''' obstruction of investigation and '''4)''' various specifics particularly "human shields" (the last being a criticism, by the UN only, of both parties). | |||
| :::::::::Reporting the event mostly didn't even mention "massacre". The owner (landlord?) of the camp was the Commissioner of the UNRWA, who said (in translation): ''“This is pure hell. It is no exaggeration to call it a massacre. I have previously refrained from using the word massacre, but now, when I have seen it, I cannot call it otherwise.”'' But nobody can tell us that his statement is "true" or "false" - we should simply report what this important player said about it. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 19:28, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::I particularly ] with your last sentence, PR. <span style="color:Orange; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 21:48, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| Two points - | |||
| ::::Found a first hand source that puts the destroyed area at 100x200 - good enough for me. -- ] 13:09, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| *Language/copyediting - edit has reinserted the clunky "rumors purported" phrasing. Constant reversion of this sort of thing is kind of why I didn't actually try to change it again myself, and it appears that decision has been vindicated. You'd have thought we could at least avoid edit-warring and disputes over simple English language issues - there's plenty else to disagree about after all. At worst it suggests that some editors are more interested in point-scoring and and blind reverting rather than improving content here, even at the most basic level. | |||
| *"Massacre" - actually I'd happily have the phrasing "there was no large scale massacre", rather than having it as "no evidence", which kind of suggests that some might still be found. It is an uncontroversial fact that 100s of people were not deliberately killed. However the "large scale" or "widespread" qualifier is crucial, since plenty of sources do still assert there was a massacre of some sort, even with the final, lower death toll (I listed some a while ago, including from Palestinian officials and the mainstream media ). Some sources do say simply "no massacre", but there is no agreement or unanimity here, and it's therefore misleading to use that phrasing in the lead. The lead has to reflect the fact that many sources do maintain there was a massacre, albeit not one with 100s of victims, rather than take sides either way. --] (]) 11:27, 26 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I disagree with the statement ''"It is an uncontroversial fact that 100s of people were not deliberately killed."'' That seems to me to contradict Pounder's POV. We can perhaps give weight (prominence) to the idea that 100s were not killed, but we can't assert it as if it's ''"a piece of information about which there is no serious dispute"'' (]).<span style="color:Green; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 13:38, 26 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::I disagree. Today, 6 years after the event, and after an AI report said all but one of the camp's residents were accounted for, it is a fact that 100s were not killed. It is true that some people (e.g. Pounder, or certain members of the PA) are so prejudiced that they refuse to acknowledge the facts even when those stare them in the face, but that does not change the facts. I think the formulation you and I agreed on prior to Nickhh's recent comments is fine. ] (]) 14:44, 26 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I'm not sure if we had quite agreed on both sentences. How about this version: ''"About 10% of the camp was destroyed. According to a ] report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources maintain that a massacre had taken place."'' This leaves out the bulldozers. Another alternative for the first sentence is ''"About 10% of the camp was destroyed during the incident."'' "Flattened" might be more informative than "destroyed". <span style="color:Red; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 14:53, 26 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Either one of these is fine with me. ] (]) 15:30, 26 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Note/clarification: Pounder's comments were from around 18th April, based on an early visit to the camp. Nor in the BBC did he appear to talk about hundreds dead, he merely suggests that there "could be large numbers of civilian dead" under the ruins. I'm certainly not aware of Pounder or any significant source suggesting now that more than 50-60 people were killed, or whether that would be due to prejudice if they were saying that. Where the "massacre/no massacre" dispute arises is over how to ''describe or interpret'' what happened, with that number as given. There are legitimate sources that continue to use the description "massacre", on account of the civilians killed. This needs to be recorded, and without it being couched in terms to suggest they are in denial of some sort (I kind of read the above proposal as doing that, even if not intentionally). The later sources I linked to up above do all use the massacre description, while explicitly acknowledging the lower death toll. Even the HRW report is more nuanced than in the suggested para above, with the full sentence reading - "Human Rights Watch found no evidence to sustain claims of massacres or large-scale extrajudicial executions by the IDF in Jenin refugee camp. However, many of the civilian deaths documented by Human Rights Watch amounted to unlawful or willful killings by the IDF". --] (]) 12:36, 27 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Sorry, but this does not add up, most sources say that the area was as big as several football fields. British correspondents from "The Independent" who visited it described the area as 400x500 metres. Btw. I did not say it _is_ 40 000m2, I said that 200x200 metres is a bit more plausible than 15x15 metres. Now you are saying that it is an area of 20 000m2, but I doubt that. And I am not talking about the whole article written from Israeli POV. From the NPOV it was a by any means a large scale destruction of a internationally recognized refugee camp. The military significance is _only one aspect_ in the disaster that hit people (about 15 000) living in Jenin refugee camp. Trying to show it in the light of military conflict and mostly dispute about body counts is shown already in the title - Battle of Jenin. It would be more helpful, maybe, to view it in the humanitarian/occupation context.--] 15:40, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| The neutrality of this article is most certainly contested. There is a heavy pro-Israel bias which has gotten worse. The list Israeli war crimes documented by Amnesty International has been cut from a list of 9 to a list of 2. The alleged citation from the Washington Times is not from the Washington Times web site. Does the policy of allowing citations from blogs which cite alleged news articles only apply to stories which are pro-Israel? When I did that, my edit was reverted and the explaination was that if the web site of the original story is not available, then it cannot be used. Just what is the policy here? ] (]) 14:37, 20 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| Well, one way to POV an article is to insert a series of highly edited and selected quotes in order to make a political point. Let's not do that again, please. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 15:43, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :I've added some info from ] on the Amnesty report. Highbeam, which hosts the Washington Times article, is not a blog. I believe it is a reliable database. If you insist, we can look for other hosts or ask at ]. -- ] (]) 15:25, 20 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| == 54 dead not 53 == | |||
| :Well, the quote from US envoy (among others) was absolutely relevant, because it shows the humanitarian dimension to this "battle". I cannot see why did you remove them instead of adding something. Did you find any of the quotes to be false or something? They were not "highly edited". I spent about an hour to search as complete versions of the quotes as possible. And of course you are welcome to make them more complete. Maybe I should add Yassir Arafat's Jeningrad quote also? --] 16:05, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| the time article number 2 http://www.time.com/time/2002/jenin/story.html says 54 Palestinians died, not 53, so I corrected it. | |||
| ] (]) 18:38, 13 October 2008 (UTC)russell j @ 10/13/08 2:63 pm | |||
| :Why does the article already cite this one Time Magazine article twelve times? | |||
| :Is it because the piece uses convoluted language ''"compelled Palestinian civilians to take the dangerous job of leading the approach to the buildings"'' instead of ''"used Palestinians as human shields"'' - and uses direct Israeli POV ''"the Palestinian defenders retreated to ... where their defenses were strongest"'' and ''"It was time to hit harder"''? | |||
| :Is it because the piece differs substantially from the contemporaneous reports of every European journalist on the scene? And differs greatly from the reports of every investigation by independent human rights groups? ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> | |||
| ::We cite this article because TIME magazine is a reliable source, and this specific article is directly related to the topic of this article. In other words, we are doing this because we are editing this article according to Misplaced Pages policies. ] (]) 17:09, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::We're plainly not writing this article to regular WP policy, since we've applied massive ] to a single source that uses the POV language of one party. There's a great deal of other RS available, all of it fairly startling, but none of it is written in a POV fashion as if the reporter were on board with a "Palestinian perspective". While I'm about it, I don't much care for the way you're suddenly appearing at articles (such as ], ], ], ]) to confront or revert my edits, in many cases in articles you've previously had nothing to do with. This smacks of the same thing I'm seeing on this page, a decidedly uncollegiate attitude to what should be regular TalkPage discussion. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 20:04, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::You asked why TIME is being used, and I explained the relevant wikipedia policy to you. Now stop soapboxing and start editing to this policy. I don't believe I've edited ], and I was editing ] before you, so perhaps it is you who is following me around. ] (]) 21:17, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ==so which ones are pertinent to Jenin?== | |||
| ::Part of the problem with this particular battle is that the varied views as time goes by. If you knew the number of dead as in the 500+ range then its a lot more tragic than someone thats around 50. | |||
| Hamas was attributed attacks from September 9, 2001 (a suicide attack in Nahariya), March 19, 2002 (a shooting attack in Hamam Al Maliach), and March 31, 2002 (a suicide attack in Haifa that left, 15 casualties). | |||
| Palestinian Islamic Jihad was attributed attacks from July 16, 2001 (a suicide attack at the Binyamina Railway Station), October 28, 2001 (a shooting attack in Hadera), November 29, 2001 (a suicide attack near Pardes Hanna), January 25, 2002 (a suicide attack at the old central bus station in Tel Aviv—in cooperation with Fatah), January 5, 2002 (a suicide attack in Afula), March 20, 2002 (a suicide attack in Wadi Ara), April 10, 2002 (a suicide attack at the Yagur junction). | |||
| ::The media frenzy on the battle is by far the most signifant (and interesting) part of it all hence why a lot of the article is dedicated to it. I have to agree with Jayjg that the quotes do not help make the article NPOV. If you feel like something is POV, then unPOV it, don't just try and counter it by making it more POV the other way. -- ] 16:33, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| Fatah was attributed attacks from February 1, 2001 (a shooting of an Israeli civilian visiting Jenin), April 28, 2001 (a shooting at near Umm al-Fahm), June 28, 2001 (a shooting near Ganim), September 11, 2001 (a shooting at "Bezeq" workers near Shaked and detonation of a charge at an IDF force in the area), March 9, 2001 (a shooting near Yabed), October 4, 2001 (a shooting in Afula), October 27, 2001 (Infiltration to Me Ammi and laying of an explosives charge), November 27, 2001 (a joint PIJ and Fatah suicide attack in Afula), February 8, 2002 (a joint PIJ and Fatah suicide attack aimed at Tel Aviv, intercepted), March 12, 2002 (a shooting on the road to Katsir), March 21, 2002 (a suicide attack in Jerusalem), March 30, 2002 (a suicide attack in Tel Aviv). | |||
| Tomhab's comments are spot-on. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 17:21, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| all to go unless you can find the 6 or 23 for Jenin....so far you haven't shown that these belong in an article about Jenin unless of course you are thinking of adding in all the IDF and settler activity in the area?....Otherwise you are just trying for demonisation.....] (]) 20:54, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :Exactly, thats what I said also. If you felt that my addition was POV then you should have unPOV'd it. But you deleted instead. The article fails to mention international outcry that followed. That included US president who twice asked for withdrawal and numerous other diplomats/politicians. This is relevant information. The dispute about body counts is more like obfuscation. As I understand, this article is currently not about what happened in Jenin refugee camp for about two weeks starting from april 3. 2002, but about media frenzy surrounding these events. --] 20:45, 1 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| all of these are Israeli MFA claims, which is not made clear in the body of the text....] (]) 21:10, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| How can you agree be saying exactly what Tomhab says when he disagrees with you? As for the quotes, they were inherently POV; their choice, editing, etc. They added no value to the article, only POV. The solution was not to add more biased quotes saying other things, but to remove them entirely. ]<sup><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></sup> 00:31, 2 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| :It's not a "demonisation" issue since the activities were linked to the Israeli assault on the Jenin infrastructure for these activities. <b>]'']''</b> 21:11, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I wrote this but it failed to submit after the database was locked up | |||
| Israeli MFA has been known to be rather inaccurate in its dealings with the rest of the world on many occasions....it needs to be made clear that this is a Israeli government claim and not necessarily fact...] (]) 21:35, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::As far as I can see, there is around a quarter to each of: | |||
| ::*The battle | |||
| ::*The media frenzy of a massacre | |||
| ::*The human rights reports | |||
| ::*External links | |||
| ::The reason for the disproportion of information is thus. The article missed out the media section and vague comments about allegations of a massacre were spread throughout. Because of the difficultly deciphering what actually happened (who said what, when and what actually happened), there was a lot of "vandalism" from over-zealous persons who fell on one side of the Israel/Palestine argument. 95% of the arguments were nonsense based on people's badly formed opinions based on misinformation. | |||
| sorry jaakobou I did not see the IDF spokesperson mainly as all the first 3 sections have the same info in a POV demonisation repetition and quite frankly I stopped paying much attention to what was written...the structural layout of the article has ensured a pro Israel POV....There is no chronological order and information is repeated. The section for massacre theorists is at the bottom yet the massacre theorists are placed front and centre. The IDF failures which led to the massacre allegations isn't even noted in the lead with the allegations.....] (]) 22:12, 25 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::You can see above a nice big conversation with Marco about one particular incident. Anyway, I did several hours research collecting as many reports on the 'massacre' as possible and put them on the talk page, but it wasn't enough. So it went onto the main page to finally shut people up. | |||
| == NPOV Tag == | |||
| ::It is interesting in my opinion, so not worth deleting, but it is also disproportionally sized compared to other sections. | |||
| The documentation at {{tl|NPOV}} says ''"Do not use this template unless there is an ongoing dispute."'' | |||
| ::The article is well researched with the context of each quote considered, so adding something like "This is horrific beyond belief", "It is totally destroyed, it looks like an earthquake has hit it", a "blot that will forever live on the history of the state of Israel" which isn't sourced, dated, and certainly no context (which is the most interesting part) put in is very hard to include. -- ] 01:03, 2 August 2005 (UTC) | |||
| It's my understanding that a POV tag is normally supposed to contain a link to a particular section of the talk page, which should list particular problems with the article, so that when those items have been adequately addressed then the tag can be removed. I would appreciate it if that is done here: PR, would you please specify what the issue or issues are that the tag is intended to refer to. To specify the section of the talk page, use <code><nowiki>{{POV|talk page section name}}</nowiki></code>. (The NPOV template is a redirect to the POV template.) <span style="color:Orangered; font-size:1.5em;">☺</span> ] (]) 21:27, 13 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :I don't know where to start - but an obvious place is the sudden inclusion (just since ) of 30 references to a foreign language book "''# Harel, Amos; Avi Isacharoff (2004). The Seventh War. Tel-Aviv: Yedioth Aharonoth Books and Chemed Books, 431. {{ISBN|9655117677}}. (Hebrew)"'' What's the point of having encylopedia policies such as verifiability if we're going to do that? It's clear that they're highly POV ''"Harel and Isacharoff wrote that the IDF's misconduct with the media, including Kitri's statement, contributed to the allegations of massacre"''. Every genuine source points the finger at the IDF for keeping medical assistance out of the camp for 10 days as the single most serious problem. | |||
| :On top of the trampling of a core policy ] of the project, we have the usual culprits, in spades: | |||
| :1) '''Trivial material from non-RS sources inserted''' (eg the first three entries to the reference list are #1 = Harel and Isacharoff (mentioned above, completely unverifiable), #2 Time Magazine (12 cites), #3 Israel Ministry of Foreign Affairs). A much lauded reference to "56 dead" comes from - even if it's genuine, it's still 2nd-hand from a source that, like the UNRWA quoted by Amnesty, is speaking with a gun held to his head. | |||
| :2) '''Blatant POV cherry-picking''' eg the only substantive mention of helicopters we have is: "''On April 4, The Observer reported that Palestinians have called the incident a 'massacre', alleging that ... helicopters fired indiscriminately on a civilian area"''. What does this same source actually say? . Many other sources call the shooting "like rain" - what's so difficult? | |||
| :3) '''So many major elements from the RS left out that "most of the article is missing"'''. I have a list of <s>16</s> 13 distinct elements that I think probably need including if the article is to give a representative view of the incident as reported in the RS. But I've been prevented from getting a single one in, I can't even list them for consideration without a barrage of non-policy objections - the Telegraph, Fox News and an Israeli newspaper dismissed with . ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 19:12, 14 October 2008 (UTC) rewritten by PalestineRemembered on . <small><b>]'']''</b> 10:33, 8 November 2008 (UTC)</small> | |||
| ::A few replies: | |||
| ::Regarding the book. It would indeed be preferable if it was available in English, but ] allows foreign language sources in such cases. You could question the book's reliability, of course. However, we did welcome Amos Harel as a correspondent for Haaretz, including favorite. I don't know about "genuine" sources, but Harel and Isacharoff do say that. I simply preferred to cite other sources for this fact, again per WP:NONENG. | |||
| ::1) I've seen Time Magazine cited many times on Misplaced Pages. Was it ever deemed unreliable?<span style="color:blue;"> PR - see below.</span> The Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs is only used once to quote an Israeli claim.<span style="color:blue;"> PR - then it should not be in the lead.</span> I'll be willing to negotiate the "56" if no other source can be found. Is acceptable? <span style="color:blue;"> PR - it's still a newspaper owned by the Moonies, by a reporter who (I'm told) was accused of fabricating Arabic quotations by Canada's national broadcaster.</span> | |||
| ::2) Read the source again. I've cited it quite meticulously in the context of the massacre claims. "Like rain" is a metaphor. We don't use those per ].<span style="color:blue;"> PR - the use of the helicopters was widespread, likely very deadly and widely remarked - we mention them as an "allegation" by Palestinians.</span> | |||
| ::3) Most of the issues "dismissed" in the diff you gave, particularly the burial of the bodies, are detailed in the article.<span style="color:blue;">PR - I don't see Sharon, I don't see his advisor, I don't see the UN special envoy or the 12 days, I see slighting remarks about the Red Cross, I don't see the bulldozer driver or the bomb-disposal or the killing of UN staff or a whole lot of other things.</span> -- ] (]) 19:46, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::First of all let me say that the article has improved considerably. The layout is better, the readability is better - and it's even closer to NPOV than it's been all the time I've known it. If a lot of it was your work, then I commend you - I'll even support locking it down now before damage is done to it. But only a cursory examination tells me there are substantial POV issues remaining and it should remain tagged. | |||
| :::I can see the temptation to use sources that English-language editors cannot check, but this practice cannot give confidence to other editors, nor to readers. It's not as if there isn't lots and lots of material from regular accessible sources. And policy asks for RS translations - here we are, using a non-English source more than any other, with no translation whatsoever. Verifiability is a core policy, not to be cast aside lightly. | |||
| :::Time Magazine is 2nd in our reference list (ie we're using it for references in the lead). Now, Time Magazine actually published a very hard-hitting article on the run-up to Jenin - not just quoting the well-known it said that Sharon's words were linked directly to the military action that followed ''"He went on to do just that, unleashing a broader military offensive than anything seen so far in the past 17 months of fighting."''. Oh, but that Time article has been repeatedly edit-warred out of our article .... I wonder why. Even the famous Sharon quote without the commentary is missing! Instead of this main-stream article, the one we've referenced is an insulting white-wash - starts "''The street is a new one, carved by a huge bulldozer out of what was once a narrow alley"'' - is it too much to ask we think of the victims before before we use anything so insensitive? | |||
| :::Moreover, Time Magazines claim to have carried out an investigation is worthless - so what's it doing ahead of real investigations from the UN, HRW and Amnesty? Amnesty is quoted (relatively well) but is not referenced once in the text. HRW is not referenced once it the text, it gets only ''"The report said there was no massacre, but did accuse the IDF of committing war crimes"'', which has been filtered through the BBC and most certainly doesn't give a flavour of what they actually say. The UN report isn't directly referenced either! No mention of the Jordanian, Qatar and EU contributions, that cannot be right. If you want input from me, I'd offer to write the UN report section. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 21:45, 14 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::About Sharon's quote: I don't know who "edit-warred" it out and why, but I think it's undue, just like the Passover massacre. As I said, it belongs in Operation Defensive Shield, not here. The destruction is detailed in the article, but this is ] and we are not here to "think of the victims" of anything. | |||
| ::::The reliability of the NGOs has been questioned on this page recently. A serious discussion on their reliability probably belongs elsewhere. However, they are definitely not information sources the way newspapers and books are. As I said in my draft proposal above, I preferred to treat them as primary sources and filter them through mainstream secondary sources, such as the BBC. If no mainstream source thought it right to mention the Jordanian, Qatar and EU contributions, for example, then maybe it's not that historically notable. The BBC's filter may be imperfect, but I still think its preferable to our ] of it. Besides, we've already seen where this road leads: One user adds his favorite quote from the report, then another one adds his for "balance", and pretty soon the entire section is a quote farm. I think it's better to leave the reports as external links so that the readers can read them and decide for themselves which parts are important and whether it is pro-Israeli, pro-Palestinian, or whatever. Anyway, that's my opinion, and perhaps we should wait for other users' opinions on this. -- ] (]) 11:15, 15 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Re NGOs. A lot of the criticism and questioning of genuinely non-partisan organisations is unfounded and seems to be politically motivated (and please, if it's coming from ] or even worse individual WP editors can be pretty much brushed aside). Reports by Amnesty and HRW etc are professional, properly researched papers, which the groups involved will have put a lot of work into and will have checked over pretty thoroughly before being published. Having said that, I accept that they are arguably primary sources and as per ] we should for the most part rely on reliable secondary sources for interpretation of what they say; also that we run the risk of quote-farming otherwise. However - | |||
| ==Numbers etc== | |||
| :::::*One could see the site investigations, witness statements and submissions that go into these reports as being the relevant primary sources, with the finished, published reports acting as a genuine secondary source. | |||
| Ramallite, the first figures given by Palestinian spokesman Saeb Erekat, according to journalist Tom Gross, were 3,000 Palestinian dead. As for the causes of the British misreporting, it can't have been because of an Israeli exclusion zone, because they were reporting from inside the camp. Phil Reeves of the Independent, for example, wrote at least one of his notorious stories from inside a damaged house where he had spent the night. ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 21:25, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :::::*Either way, policy does permit reference to primary sources for straightforward facts or text. | |||
| :The second paragraph is the least of my concerns - I had some changes in the 1st and 3rd also ... ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 21:38, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :::::*The above is doubly safe if done with a clear "according to Amnesty/HRW etc" attribution | |||
| :::::*When using secondary sources, we have to remember that they will differ among themselves and we would have to look at a broad range of them (sorry, but this goes back to the simplistic "it was determined that there was no massacre" line that I have remarked on endlessly above - finding a BBC headline that happens to interpret one of the reports as saying "no massacre" does not mean the issue is settled once and for all, as there are other reliable secondary sources that interpret it differently) | |||
| :::::*Using the media generally as the main secondary source for interpretation of those reports (as opposed to verifiable facts per se) also carries risks, as media outlets of course often have a considerable partisan bias. | |||
| :::::*Also prioritising secondary media sources - as PR points out - leads to the slightly odd result that a self-styled "investigation" by a Time magazine journalist could be seen as ranking above a more formal investigation by a specialist organisation. | |||
| :::::Anyway that's my latest piece of waffle. --] (]) 11:58, 15 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ==POV sectional issues== | |||
| ::I didn't see any changes in the third paragraph. As for the first, the only change I saw is that you want to dispute it was a counter-terrorist operation (or rather, you want to dispute stating it as a fact), but I don't know of anyone who says otherwise. The State Dept, for example, refers to it as counter-terrorist, and no one disputes that the Israelis had targeted the people who organize suicide attacks. ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 21:50, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| POV starts from the introduction, It must be the only article that describes the reactions to a massacre allegations before even saying there was a incident.....The section on the Israeli reasons for going in is named yet the information about those reasons is interspersed throughout the article....that or start a section on why there were bombs being set off in Israel something on the lines of ...''"Israeli Oppression causes Backlash"''...] (]) 10:05, 26 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::The US State Department is hardly an objective source regarding Palestine, to put it mildly. ] | ] 21:57, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| ::That is almost funny. That headliner is the rationale for virtually every attack on Israel and Israelis by Palestinians, as well as Israeli attacks on Palestinians. Why did the Intifada start? "''"Israeli Oppression causes Backlash"'' Why was there a suicide bombing? ''"Israeli Oppression causes Backlash"'' Why was there a Battle of Jenin? ''"Israeli Oppression causes Backlash"'' AK et al would be happy if Wiki were one big article that says ''"Israeli Oppression causes Backlash"''-- ''that is all Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.''' Right? ] (]) 04:54, 27 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::::It counts as a reputable source for Misplaced Pages. But regardless, who seriously disputes that it was a counter-terrorist operation? ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 22:05, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :One of the problems that would be easiest to fix is the trivial summary we have of the UN report. It's the "official report", compiled after agreement and promises of cooperation from all parties, and it includes the considered responses of the EU, the PA and Jordan (along with mention of material from Qatar). ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 10:53, 26 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| :::::I've restored Ramallite's edit while we discuss it, because I hadn't actually intended to delete it. ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 22:14, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| == Fact checking == | |||
| <s>:The third paragraph had the perceived bias of "killed" (Palestinian civilians) versus "lost their lives" (Israeli soldiers). As for the first paragraph, are you saying that Palestinians (regardless of how one feels about them) share the POV that it was a counter-terrorist operation? It shouldn't be necessary to pull out countless Palestinian references that called it 'aggression' (again regardless of if one thinks they are right or not - this is about neutrality). Regardless of whether the State Dept is biased or not, their saying something doesn't automatically make it neutral. We are not using DOS as a source here, that would be a tangent sentence that we are not going into. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 22:24, 10 March 2006 (UTC)<s> | |||
| :Would you two stop for a second so I can save my stuff?? GASP! This is my third attempt. If you look closely at my edit, I don't think the first paragraph is actually reducing the notion of "counter-terrorist". I was careful not to use the word "claim" (i.e. that the IDF 'claims' it was counter-terrorist) because it's more solid than that. Is my wording really that problematic? Slim, if you are sure that there were journalists in there during the block, who were saying that there are hundreds or thousands of bodies and secret mass graves, then I withdraw my opposition to your second paragraph, although I do contend that part of the reason it drew attention was because of the media blackout (irrespective of the reports coming out). ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 22:24, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| In the '''Background''' section I came upon this sentence: ''"Several hundred armed men from the Al-Aqsa Martyrs Brigades, Tanzim, Palestinian Islamic Jihad, and Hamas had been using the Jenin refugee camp as a base, known as "the martyrs' capital", and of the 100 suicide bombers who had launched terrorist attacks since the Second Intifada began in October 28, 2000 attacks had been launched from there."'' Note 6 says 28 'martyrs' came from Jenin. The way this was written it sounds like 100 suicide bombers launched 2000 attacks, all from Jenin. So the reference is pretty well screwed up, and no source is given at all for the 2000 attacks. Will whoever wrote this, please clarify or I will place a {{fact}} label here in a couple days if someone else doesn't beat me to it. ] (]) 05:07, 27 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::First, yes, there were British journalists reporting from inside the camp. Indeed, that was Phil Reeves' excuse afterwards: that he had written his story from inside a damaged house in the camp where he had spent the night, trying to write by candlelight, highly personalized account etc. | |||
| ok, I get it now. I can fix it. ] (]) 16:09, 27 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
| ::I didn't get your point about perceived bias between being killed and losing lives. I used a different phrase only to avoid repetition. I don't see how there's a POV difference. | |||
| == D9 Operator Moshe Nissim Interview == | |||
| ::As for "aggressive" versus "counter-terrorist," the two are not mutually exclusive. It would be a pretty ineffectual counter-terrorist operation if it weren't aggressive. ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 22:35, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| ::::It was called "an aggression" not "aggressive", you misread the above. The Palestinians media carried the headlines about "Udwaan Isra'ili" (Israeli aggression) for months during and after the operation. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 22:58, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| There is a ] translation based on Hebrew original of the Newspaper ] with D9 operator Moshe Nissim over Jenin Battle. The interview with Moshe Nissim is made by Tsadok Yeheskeli, published in Israeli Newspaper Yediot Aharonot on 31 May 2002 and translated by word by word. The original Hebrew is | |||
| :::Why have you added "also"? Now it sounds as though "oh, by the way, some Israelis died too." The two sentences shouldn't be linked by "also." ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 22:38, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I was concerned about Palestinians are merely "killed" vs Israelis "lose lives". There is a perceived distinction between the two when talking about a battle, such phrasing does in fact suggest one side is more righteous. But I understand the repetition concern. Can you suggest a compromise? ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 22:58, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :::::I honestly can't see any difference. Which side sounds as though it's more righteous, and in what way? ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 23:02, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :::::And how did the word "also" help? ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 23:02, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| <blockquote> | |||
| :::: "Lost their lives" generally (though not always) is more emotive language than "killed". I contend that "lost their lives" is used more often to generate sympathy, whereas 'killed' is not necessarily as often so. The 'also' was my attempt to equate "killed" with "loss of life" to sort of level the field between the two, not to suggest an "oh by the way" POV. So again, I would appreciate compromise language if you can suggest any. Of course, if there is no difference between the two, we could just switch the two phrases' locations? Compromise language (for either) would be things like "fatally wounded", "lost", "fatally ambushed", etc. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against sympathizing with the Israeli side, but doing so at the expense of the Palestinian side is not neutral in my mind. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 23:24, 10 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| "What is documented in this portion, though shocking, is on record in the Israeli Newspaper ]'s, May 31, 2002 by Tsadok Yeheskeli. The link will take you to the English translation of the original Hebrew article. We also cleaned it up to make it easier to read. That version can be accessed . The sentiments are not made up. They were expressed by D-9 bulldozer operator Moshe (Kurdi Bear) Nissim elaborating on his participation in the Jenin Massacre earlier that year)." | |||
| <ref></ref></blockquote> | |||
| <blockquote> | |||
| :::::Okay, I've gone for the repetition instead of possible POV problems, and it now says "killed" for both. ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 01:31, 11 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| "It is the first absolutely sincere Israeli eyewitness testimony on what actually happened in the Jenin Refugee Camp, by one of the soldiers who did it. He is quite proud of his mission. Apart from the shocking revelations, this is also a startling human document. After publication - and in spite of it - the unit to which the man belongs received from the army command an official citation for outstanding service."<ref></ref> and | |||
| <ref></ref> | |||
| </blockquote> | |||
| Is there anyone can read Hebrew that can help checking the translations integrity. ] (]) 19:04, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| #Counter-terrorism implies that the Palestinians were terrorists - disputed by what... around 1 billion people worldwide? | |||
| #"Lost their lives" is unacceptable whilst Palestinians were merely "killed". If you still consider them the same as no different you won't mind me making it "Palestinians lost their lives" and "Israelis died" then? | |||
| #The fact the media were barred from the scene is significant - they felt they were being barred from viewing the massacres that the Palestinians were talking about | |||
| #Not really related, but only 23 Israelis died - people keep inserting the figure 33 (which is either wrong or unsourced). -- ] 01:26, 11 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :You can run it through Google Translate and compare. By the way, Gush Shalom is not a reliable source (except to describe itself), nor is it a particularly significant POV. ] (]) 21:44, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :I think all your points have been dealt with already, except for the media exclusion, but there were, in fact, journalists reporting from inside the camp. See above. In any event, what difference does it make whether you're a reporter inside the camp, inside Israel, or on the other end of a telephone? The journalists who got it wrong reported what largely anonymous sources told them with no evidence whatsoever to back it up. Where they were when they wrote their copy isn't the issue. ] <sup><font color="Purple">]</font></sup> 01:35, 11 March 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :I haven't read the whole thing, but the key points are correct translations except the first one, which actually says "I entered Jenin like crazy/mad", etc. However, as Jalapenos do exist noted, Gush Shalom is not a reliable sources, and would almost always constitute as WP:FRINGE (not unlike Arutz Sheva for example). We can't be sure if this was really published in Yediot Aharonot, but even if it was, the newspaper's weekend edition prints several insets full of personal stories like this, which should not be cited unless there's something extremely significant there, like an important quote by an important politician or something. -- ] <sup>(])</sup> 22:56, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::Using PR terms from one side such as "counter-terrorist operations" is surely perceived by readers as POV. You may argue otherwise, but the perception remains. Or can we start categorizing suicide bombings as "counter-occupation operations"? | |||
| '''Note:''' While your source calls it in that title, there was no massacre in Jenin; Only a blood libel which ended up being rejected by the absolute majority of mainstream sources. <b>]'']''</b> 23:33, 27 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| == One-sided == | |||
| This article is biased toward ]. ] 22:36, 5 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
| : Yeah, right. If facts contradict theory, so much worse for the facts. ←] <sup>]</sup> 23:07, 5 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :please give some basis for that accusation and we can work to resolve any problems you may have.] 00:13, 6 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
| blood libel is a "false story spread in order to create hatred for a certain group of people" well massacre definition depends where you stand, if you enter a refugee camp destroy dozens of shatters where the people you exiled from their own home and land trying to live, then kill civillians by use of excessive and indiscriminate force by fighting among them, some people Israeli people can call it massacre and claiming it otherwise will not bring back the dead people. A Jewish peace organisations definition might differ from what you refer mainstream which is highly under Israel influence anyway. | |||
| == HRW report and BBC link == | |||
| <blockquote> | |||
| I've removed the BBC link from the HRW report section, as it was an obvious attempt to discredit the HRW report via ]. The link provided was not a response to the report; indeed, it came out before the HRW report, and did not mention it. You can't use your own arguments to try to refute various sources, you have to come up with a reliable source which itself tries to refute them. Again, please read ]. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 20:34, 25 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
| "The D-9s rumbled farther into the heart of the camp, flattening an area 200 yds. square; Human Rights Watch reports that 140 buildings were leveled, and more than 200 were severely damaged. ... Throughout the operation, Palestinian officials had said that as many as 800 had been killed. ... Charles Kapes, the deputy chief of the U.N. office in the camp, says 54 dead have been pulled from the wreckage and 49 Palestinians are missing, of whom 18 are residents of the camp. Human Rights Watch says 52 were killed, of whom only 27 were thought to be armed Palestinians. The Israelis say they found 46 dead in the rubble, including a pile of five bodies that had been booby-trapped. Of these 46, say the Israelis, all but three were "fighters," men ages 18 to 40. The Jenin Hospital, meanwhile, says 52 camp residents died, including five women and four children under the age of 15. Of the 43 dead men, eight were 55 or older and therefore probably not involved in the fighting. '''No matter whose figures one accepts, "there was no massacre," concludes Amnesty's Holley.'''" | |||
| </blockquote> | |||
| Right there was no massacre while you took a fight in the center of a refugee camp, so that is mainstream definition. ] (]) 09:17, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :It provides the background of the circumstances surrounding the HRW report's findings, and puts them into perspective. Looks like it's me vs. a few disciplined users attempting to whitewash facts through suppresion and intimidation, or dare I say censorship? It's all in context, so the obscure OR accusation is unfounded. ] 23:25, 29 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :Please do everyone a favour, and draw people's attention to the still bemoaning the fact that the "''The myth of the massacre endures to this day''" 2 years after the incident. earlier high-lighted some of the bitter out-rage and teeth-gnashing of the pro-Israeli blogosphere because eg ''"None has since retracted the mendacious claims nor tried to find out how they were misled."'' - (Haaretz, 17th July 2002 - 3 months later). | |||
| :Note, I don't personally much care for the word "massacre", but there's no question that "Jenin Massacre" is what the event is known as all around the world. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 11:06, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| Link collections ] (]) 09:28, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| About the ] might not be reliable issue, they might not be reliable but they provide the Hebrew original with translation, therefore if the Hebrew original fits their translation, we can further search Yediot Aharonot archives from their page, to the date they provided. I don't know Hebrew so I cannot research on the matter. And yes there is important things in the article to be mentioned, for example he claims with only a couple of hours training he operated a D9 which is a deadly machine under the hand of untrained operators. He got medal award from Israel army after the publication of the interview, these are notable things to mention. By the way Moshe is full of hatred in any way which is also brings another question how an army arm him instead mentally traiting him. ] (]) 09:28, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::How does it provide background regarding the HRW report? The HRW report came after the article and the quote in question. You're trying to insert OR in the article via this quote. ] 23:55, 29 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :The interview was cited by several sources other than Gush Shalom. The question here is reliability and weight. I tend to agree with Ynhockey that Gush Shalom is probably not the best source. Perhaps it should be mentioned, but not cited ''in toto''. -- ] (]) 10:31, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::What this interview shows most clearly is that there WAS NO MASSACRE. It actually sheds more light on this guy's psyche than anything else. He comes across as a simple fellow, totally uneducated, with an idiosyncratic way of describing things, an inferiority complex, and a very strong craving for attention. He is being milked by the media, and is more than happy to share his "insights" to prove he is "worth something." He may be interesting as a case study for sociologists, but I would be very careful about treating his words as historical truth. Actually, he would make a good character in the Israeli film industry's next self-hating movie.--] (]) 11:07, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Your posting must have edit-conflicted with the clear evidence a few lines further up that even (in fact, especially) the teeth-gnashing pro-Israel blogosphere bemoans the fact that their "No Massacre" insistence never gained any traction. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 11:22, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::] - thank you for confirming that Gush Shalom is not seriously suspected of either inciting hatred nor falsification in this case (or indeed, any other). | |||
| ::But I must challenge you over the significance of a participant admitting to reckless disregard for the safety of Palestinians, with deaths amongst them a virtual certainty. This can only throw serious doubt on all the repeated claims from the IDF that it attempted to protect civilians. Since, in addition, there are detailed and widespread claims of war-crimes from neutral sources, this puts a whole new perspective on this incident. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 11:22, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::Well testimonies always should be taken precautously, yet if IDF makes a pyscho into a D9 operator, it is their crime not ours. The interview is notable somehow, therefore should be mentioned more or less, we can always place credibility warning. But I will try to locate exact article link from original newspaper. ] (]) 11:44, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I suppose it does have some notability. I'll see how I can add this. -- ] (]) 13:29, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::. I suppose it could still be tweaked, but I believe this is pretty much due weight. -- ] (]) 13:49, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::"Puts them into perspective" = ]. Please read the policy; it is not "obscure", but rather one of Misplaced Pages's 3 fundamental content policies. The only person connecting this article to the HRW report is you. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 16:13, 30 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
| == Sources and Citation for Moshe Nissim Interview == | |||
| :I'd agree that the link isn't that useful (I wouldn't really say it was original research, just not that useful), but one thing which I note about that section is that the article says the HRW report focused "mainly on the actions of the IDF", yet we have 2 quotes saying about how Palestinians endangering life, but none about the IDF endangering life. | |||
| :If someone is keen to balance it up a bit, it might be an idea to find the quote that suggests Israelis used human shields? | |||
| :Having said that its not all that bad. -- ] 10:24, 1 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :: Is there any reason to believe the Israelis actually used human shields? ] 17:57, 1 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :::All observers told of it, here's the UN report (Israel refused to let their team go in, apparently terrified that war-crime allegations would be made against individual soldiers, on top of anything else). | |||
| :::01/08/2002 - Press Release - SG2077 - REPORT OF SECRETARY-GENERAL ON RECENT EVENTS IN JENIN, OTHER PALESTINIAN CITIES | |||
| ::::....... Human shields: There were numerous reports of the IDF compelling Palestinian civilians to accompany them during house searches, check suspicious subjects, stand in the line of fire, and in other ways protect soldiers from danger. Witnesses claim that this was done in the Jenin camp and other Palestinian cities. The Government of Israel has denied that its military personnel systematically engaged in this practice, but on 5 May issued "an unequivocal order ... that forces in the field are absolutely forbidden to use civilians as a means of 'living shield'". ....... | |||
| :::(Note that this report didn't actually agree that only 70 or so Palestinians were killed in Jenin. There were that number in Nablus, which was far less attacked). | |||
| ::::......... Death toll: Four hundred ninety-seven Palestinians were killed and 1,447 wounded in the course of the IDF reoccupation of Palestinian areas from 1 March through 7 May 2002 and in the immediate aftermath. Most accounts estimate that between 70 and 80 Palestinians, including approximately 50 civilians, were killed in Nablus. The IDF lost four soldiers there. | |||
| ::: ] 19:01, 3 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
| :Yes, all sorts of reports. Here's what it says about the "Battle of Jenin": "By the time of the IDF withdrawal and the lifting of the curfew on 18 April, at least 52 Palestinians, of whom up to half may have been civilians, and 23 Israeli soldiers were dead." ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 19:09, 3 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
| Most of the sources on internet for the interview based on ] therefore I am searching other sources. | |||
| == Media reports vs. IDF claims == | |||
| '''Sources Using of as a reference''' | |||
| The section ''Inflated body counts'' shows (on April 14) references to reports by the BBC and Australian newpapers that give inflated body counts of 250 and 188. The referenced articles indicate that these numbers come from the IDF, but do not indicate the exact source (like done on April 12, "''IDF spokesman Brigadier-General Ron Kitrey reports ...''") It is true that IDF reports were inaccurate at the beginning; I guess that they relied on Palestinian estimates, not being able to return to the battlefield and assess the situation themselves. Now I need some help... I think that this perspective should somehow be incorporated into the article, but I don't know the right way to do it. Any suggestions? --] 17:09, 16 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
| * | |||
| ::part of the point of it all is that no-one really knew (or at least publically admitted) that only 50 or so palestinians died, IDF, media or Palestinians. If you leave in the Palestinians' estimates, and say the media said "250 palestinians dead" then it looks like the media were biased and solely relied on either faulty reports. But lets face it, if the IDF and PLO both claim 250+ figures then the over inflation makes mroe sense.... --] 01:16, 17 September 2006 (UTC) | |||
| * | |||
| * | |||
| == Allegations of a massacre == | |||
| After "Rumors of massacres in Jenin swirled through Palestinian communities which were then echoed in the world press for several weeks," the phrase: "pitting world public opinion against Israel" is biased and not properly sourced. The source is from a pro-Israeli group. | |||
| * ''"Tsadok Yehezkeli, “I Made Them a Stadium in the Middle of the Camp,” Yediot Aharonot, 31 May 2002, translated from Hebrew by Gush Shalom, available from http://www.gush-shalom.org/archives/kurdi_eng.html; Internet, accessed April 8, 2005."'' | |||
| Also, this sentence contains Weasel Words: | |||
| * Durham University Department of Geography | |||
| "There are various journalists who believe that the Jenin Massacre tale is an example of a wider systematic use of lies by Arab propganda throughout the years, such as allegations of massacres during the 1948 war." | |||
| * | |||
| And its reference to a pro-Israeli propoganda site is very biased: "...is an example of a wider systematic use of lies by Arab propganda throughout the years, such as allegations of massacres during the 1948 war."{{unsigned|68.155.165.220}} | |||
| *Quoted in the Book Derek Gregory's The Colonial Present: Afghanistan, Palestine, and Iraq pgs. 114 and 115 | |||
| *Quoted in from the Book Israel/Palestine: How to End the War of 1948, 2nd ed. (Open Media) (Paperback) by Tanya Reinhart professor of linguistics and cultural studies at Tel Aviv University and at the University of Utrecht | |||
| In fact, one could easily say: | |||
| * Pakistan Newspaper | |||
| "There are various journalists who believe that this Misplaced Pages tale is an example of a wider systematic use of lies by Israeli propganda throughout the years, such as allegations of terrorism."{{unsigned|72.152.240.79}} | |||
| '''Reference to Moshe Nissim interview''' | |||
| ==Jewish blood incident== | |||
| Only one partisan source for this incident seems suspicious. When the Urban Legends website ] discussed this incident, they just said that they were reporting that this story had appeared in one newspaper, they were making no claims that it was accurate. ] 12:18, 6 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
| * | |||
| *The Snopes story is here.. Snopes sort of vouches for the piece, stating that the news story was printed, that author specifically identified his sources, and that the Israeli accounts of Jenin have generally been shown to be accurate, but that they can't specifically confirm this account beyond that. IMHO, the underlying question is whether the Jewish Journal (LA) is a ] or not. If so, the incident is fair game, if not, not. Based on the Jewish Journal's self-description, I would say that it is a sufficiently reliable source to make the encyclopedia. WP frequently cites similar "free weeklies," and the JJ claims to be an award winning LA free weekly. ] 14:07, 6 November 2006 (UTC) | |||
| '''Medal of Honour Moshe Nissim Receive After Publication of the Interview''' | |||
| == Intro == | |||
| * | |||
| ''']''' 15:32, 26 January 2007: | |||
| The reasons of ] are Israeli reasons, not Israeli-Palestinian reasons. The Israelis called it an operation to "crush the terrorist infrastructure"; the Palestinians called it "the Israeli assault". I don't think it's particularly NPOV to describe the Israeli reasoning as fact. This is not to belittle the reasons for ODS, but to make clear that the Palestinians did not see it the same way the Israelis did. It's a neutral phrasing issue.... | |||
| * | |||
| ''']''' 21:20, 28 January 2007: | |||
| '''this is ridiculous, israel went on an operation due to an onslaught of suicide attacks and you want to say that those attacks can't be mentioned in the intro... pure POV vandalism on your part.''' ] 19:36, 28 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :You must not understand English very well. I didn't say you can't mention the Israeli POV, I said it's not neutral to present it as a matter-of-fact. Park3r understood the difference. Do you? ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 00:45, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| * | |||
| :: I understand the difference between point of view and between baseless accusations of point of view... until you can prove that those people making the attacks who the militant group claimed was their responsibility did not come from the city israel claims they came from, your "alleged" vandalism, shows "personal reaserch" which is not allowed on wikipedia. ] 08:17, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| * | |||
| Actually, ], since it was the Israeli forces "on the move" then their reasons are much more germane. The Palestinians do '''not''' need to have a justification for staying and defending their territory, while the Israelis '''do''' need a justification for invading. For that reason, it seems to me that it '''is''' required to present the one side's reasons much more than the other's. | |||
| * | |||
| Consider a less emotionally charged incident, the ]. The ] section there goes extensively into ]'s reasons and justifications, without any mention at all of ]' reasons for investing and defending the fort. The attacker's reasons need to be explained, the defender's don't. This is '''not PoV''', it is simply common sense! --] <sup>]</sup> 13:22, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::If the notion that "Palestinians were defending their territory" were allowed in here, I would be much less inclined to object to the language that is being pushed now. Not to mention the ] being introduced that the Palestinians reaction was "inconsistent" or whatever. Is there an actual source that describes the Palestinian reaction as "inconsistent"???? ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 13:28, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| '''Partly Translations of the Interview by Other Parties''' | |||
| ::: ''']''', I don't see a problem with a mentioning that Paletinian perception is that they are defending their territory (if you can find a proper link), however, removing the precursors to the israeli operation is far from useful ettiquette for this article.. and you've recieved 2 warnings. i suggest you revert the information back to avoid a deservingly third warning. ] 13:48, 30 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| * OR OR his book "An Israeli in Palestine: Resisting Dispossession, Redeeming Israel (Paperback) by Jeff Halper (Author)" | |||
| :I don't know what warnings you are referring to. '''First''', you are ignoring what I said about NPOV, each side has its story and you cannot present one side's narrative as fact. '''SECOND''': You have no source for this notion that Palestinian reaction was ''inconsistent'', that is nonsense. You have references attached to that statement, but they do not support what you say about "inconsistent". I have made several attempts to modify this intro to suit your needs, but you just blindly revert every time. This version is not consistent with ] and ] and will have to be reverted. How about you try to address some concerns instead of blindly reverting? ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 14:37, 30 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
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| ::I seem to be having a monologue here. Jaakobou, how can you say to me "i thought you were the one reverting rather than working with others" when I am the one trying to work with you as shown and you just revert? I will still revert to my version. Second, source does in no way support the claim that "''Palestinians reaction was inconsistent as some denied that those responsible for the attacks on Israel were in Jenin and claimed a Massacre was being commited by Israel, while others gave the city the nickname of "City of Martyrs" for the large number of Palestinan Suicide Bombers emerging from it''" - that's rubbish. Third, you didn't answer my question: Are you User MouseWarrior? ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 04:59, 31 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::This is getting very annoying. Now we have "MouseWarrior", "Paul T. Evans" and Jaakobou all reverting this article.] 10:39, 31 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I've asked Jaakobou if he is also MouseWarrior. Here and on his ]. He has not responded to that particular question, yet. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 14:55, 31 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
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| === rest of the talk === | |||
| '''Jenin''' | |||
| Also, there were no "mixed" Palestinian reactions to the Jenin massacre, it produced blanket condemnation by Palestinians. I took out that sentence because that unsourced sentiment was not shown to be related to the contents of this article. If Jenin was actually called "city of martyrs", it was because of those killed there, not for suicide bombers launched from there. No? ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 15:32, 26 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
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| : you insist on showing both bias (OMG! the palestinans saw an israeli offensive as an assault??! no way!) and lack of knowledge on this issue (''"there were no mixed reactions"''). your initial vandalism in removing anything which might shed light into why israel would "assault" on the poor defenseless "city of martyrs" is exactly the bullshit that encyclopedia's should avoid.. if you don't know the material then butt out and don't destroy the hard work of others who actually do know the material. ] 16:23, 26 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| I will add the sources I can find, you can help too, if you can search in Hebrew. ] (]) 14:22, 28 January 2009 (UTC) | |||
| == References == | |||
| :: Also, "showing both bias" as you say is Misplaced Pages ]. Don't assume to know the extent of knowledge of others. And when you talk about 'hard work' on this page, look at the history. In all, be civil, air your concerns properly, and do not be rude, provocative, and/or disrespectful of me or of WP policies. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 16:54, 26 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| {{reflist}} | |||
| :I do believe that some context needs to be added to the intro. Israel ''was'' reacting to suicide bombings (or at least claimed to be, a claim that I would tend to believe in this case). | |||
| == Recent additions == | |||
| :However, the addition of details that are covered in the Defensive Shield article is pointless, makes the intro too long (and the Passover Massacre is already linked to in the infobox). The "City of Martyr's" thing should be removed, unless someone can provide a source. | |||
| I'm referring to . The 2009 conflict, as Nocal100 agreed, is irrelevant. I'm not the ones who added Cremonesi's quote in the first place, and I'm willing to discuss adjusting it. | |||
| :On another topic, why are the civilian casualties not being covered in any depth? Surely there is some information about the 22 civilian casualties from reputable sources? ] 16:09, 28 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Amnesty's accusations of "human shields" are already mentioned in the Massacre allegations section (which could perhaps be renamed). Nobody says this is how "the Israelis dealt with this problem". This is a violation of ]. If at all, this belongs in the Battle section. | |||
| :::: you can find examples on how Israel knows where the suicide attacks are coming from here: | |||
| # . | |||
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| # Jenin was was dubbed "city of martyrs" by Palestinain for 28 succesful suicide assains in the span of 2.5 years Israel totaled it as 34% of all suicide massacre assasinations within' the second intifada. ] 19:54, 28 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| # ] 21:10, 28 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| The quotations from the Haaretz article don't discuss massacre allegations, which makes them completely ] in this section. We have already agreed to cut down on the massive quote farm this article had become. | |||
| :::::All Israeli government sources, which is fine, but it should be evident that it's one side's POV and not necessarily undisputed fact. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 00:45, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| I'm going to revert it, and I ask that consensus be reached before this is introduced. Thanks, ] (]) 08:00, 13 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Actually, no, ]. The third link is to the British newspaper "''The Observer''", which is hardly a pro-Israeli source. Please be factual in your comments, and avoid misleading generalizations. Misstatements is how the whole "massacre" epithet was applied to this incident. --] <sup>]</sup> 13:36, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Well don't I feel like an idiot for mistaking one British source for Israeli? Anyway if you read my statement above you'll notice that my pointing to the sources as being Israeli was '''not''' to discount them, because I said "which is fine". I think it is misleading of you to portray my comment as discounting Israeli media - and if you were not accusing me of this then I apologize in advance. Are you disagreeing that one side's narrative should not be introduced here as fact? THAT is the essence of what I'm writing, not pointing out what source is Israeli, and what is British, Bahraini, or Bhutanese. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 13:40, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Retractions == | |||
| :Well if something along the lines of "Israel alleged that suicide bombers were originating from this camp" needs to be included, that's fine. There's nothing wrong with that. But that wasn't the content before. As for the 22 civilian casualties (just the dead, not including the wounded), I have no idea why it's not covered, except to emphasize that the number was 22 and not in the hundreds as feared earlier, and thus couldn't be called a massacre. Apparently a 'massacre' is a number somewhere above 23. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 16:24, 28 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| An Israeli officer made an errorneous statement during an interview on Israeli radio and his statement was clarified/retracted later that same day. In another incident, Peres was misquoted by Haaretz (on the 9th) who took notice to publish his true opinion the following day. The Foreign news source (The Guardian) is an expanded op-ed that talks in general on how they think the myth became to be. They confused the information given in regards to the Haaretz related error and merged it with the real clarification (mentioned as a retraction) of the IDF officer. Cheers, <b>]'']''</b> 10:27, 14 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :: Israel lost 23 soldiers in the battle. Essentially, Israeli soldiers lost their lives in order to keep the collateral deaths of Palestinian civilians to a minimum. this -> - '''did not happen'''. ] 19:45, 28 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :First of all, the Guardian article was written by Sharon Sadeh, who is "London correspondent of the Israeli liberal newspaper Ha'aretz", not exactly a foreign source. Sadeh refers to a statement made by Peres (published by Reuters) regarding massacre allegations. Which statement do you think Sadeh is referring to? -- ] (]) 10:43, 14 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::What we need is a properly balanced section with competing commentaries. Ther is a significant critical commentary/narrative, put forth by The Weekly Standard, the Anti-Defamation League, CAMERA, and others and it goes as follows: Palestinians exaggerated and fabricated, as part of a general pattern of deceiving the international media, and the media bought in hook line and sinker into the idea of a "Jenin massacre," which subsequent investigations disproved. The second significant narrative, from mainstream media and international human-rights organizations, is as follows: because Jenin was under 24-hour curfew and sealed from journalists, international observers, and even medical aid for the duration of a devastating siege, rumors arose of massacres and body counts in the hundreds; when those people got in they mostly described the scene as even worse than they'd imagined and made multiple accusations of war-crimes. ] (]) 15:46, 14 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::There's already some attempt at this but you're free to try and contribute further to the article. <b>]'']''</b> 15:51, 14 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I'm not sure exactly what you are suggesting. The human-rights organizations are cited, as are reliable sources that disagree. I don't think promoting CAMERA's narrative is a good idea. -- ] (]) 18:07, 14 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::Heyo Nudve, | |||
| ::Even if Sadeh is an Haaretz affiliate (taking your word on it), they are still writing a month later for a foreign paper, an op-ed about how they think the massacre myth came to be. The paragraph we're talking about here is a shallow combination of two events, and clearly, an Haaretz representative wouldn't point the finger at themselves when on the 9th they published a "private" thing and on the 10th they "retracted" with a completely opposite and official version. Haaretz editor has pointed fingers towards his staff (as well as other journalists) so there was an error at The Guardian with the writer suggesting the official version was retracted which did not happen. <b>]'']''</b> 16:04, 14 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::First, don't take my word on it. It's written at the bottom of the article. I'm not sure I follow the rest of the argument: Are you saying that the "Statement" that was retracted was the "private reference", which says something different from the one Sadeh is describing, or that it was retracted by Haaretz and not by Peres? -- ] (]) 18:07, 14 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I'm saying that, considering we have the official statement which is a "retraction" of the first Haaretz claim, that it would be a truely exceptional double tracking from Peres to change statements to complete opposites twice within such a shot time span. The Guardian op-ed clearly has an error here and unless we have an Haaretz retraction of the the official statement or something that validates this truely exceptional (read: impossible) double back tracking, then this paragraph from a foreign news source cannot be taken as fact. Op-ed's do make errors, and this is a pretty obvious one. <b>]'']''</b> 00:04, 15 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::::So the official statement is the retraction of the "private" statement? Could be. source, of questionable reliability, seems to support this. one is more reliable, but not quite helpful. Have you found anything else? -- ] (]) 06:26, 15 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| Comment: Opinion editorials should not be used as sources anyway, other than possibly to quote the author of the editorial. In some cases, they may be used after 'according to ...' or '... claims that ...', but definitely not for ]. -- ] <sup>(])</sup> 09:57, 15 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::First one is clearly a propaganda piece, but the second one is good enough to show the error of the one I removed. Chalk another one for the 'Jenin massacre syndrome'. <b>]'']''</b> 10:28, 15 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::The Barghouti article at Zmag is presumably refering to a different incident, wherein Peres was more explicit. When last I looked, the allegation that "In private, Peres is referring to the battle as a 'massacre'" which appeared in Haaretz had never even been refuted, let alone retracted. This later doesn't suggest that the earlier Haaretz article had mis-reported what Peres was saying in private (in most people's minds, it would confirm it!), or say there'd been a retraction. | |||
| :::This is an article about Palestine and Israel. Why are you bringing up Muslims/Serbs/etc here? Wrong article for that, it's irrelevant. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 00:45, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::However, given the huge amount of highly relevant other information that's been edit-warred from this article, and given the imprecise and abused nature of the word "massacre", I can't see it belongs anywhere other than as an "also known as Jenin Massacre" in the lead. That being the title by which it is, rightly or wrongly, known around the world. ]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 11:07, 15 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Well, if we can't use Sadeh's article, then I suppose the current revision is OK. -- ] (]) 13:31, 15 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::It seemed clear to me that comparisons with other, contemporary "massacres" is a very appropriate point to bring up in a discussion of the appropriateness of the term "massacre". Especially so where the referenced article, in the Christian Science Monitor, was contrasting the Arab, and especially Egyptian, reaction to and perception of the two "battles". --] <sup>]</sup> 13:29, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::What is a "massacre"? What is the magic number that qualifies a killing from being officially designated a massacre? ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 13:54, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Just for the record, and I'm not taking sides here, the ] which is linked to from this article as the cause, had 30 civilian casualties and ''is'' called a massacre. Of course they were not "collateral damage", but targets of the suicide bombing. Interesting how this article seems to have become about the media controversy over the term "massacre", and less about the battle itself.] 15:15, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::I don't want to take sides either ;) But I will say that using phrases like "collateral damage" insinuates that civilians were not intentionally targeted (I'm not referring to your usage above, Park3r). Rightly or wrongly, that opinion is not shared by the Palestinian victims, according to Palestinian media/publications. I agree with Park3r that this article seems to have turned into a terminology war. That is not the intent of this article. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 15:21, 29 January 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::I don't think the intro is the only problematic part of this lengthy apologia, but certainly bald statements about Palestinian inconsistency, for example, don't help. ] | ] 00:15, 1 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::The "Boston massacre" was 5 killed. While they were technically "innocent victims", they had chosen to be on the street demonstrating. Unlike the refugees in Jenin, 100s of whom died in their houses (not that you'd guess that from reading this article). See for the nearest thing to a determined attempt by international observers to document this event. ] 17:47, 19 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::: Passover Battle? // ] 10:48, 7 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Intro Part 2 == | |||
| Folks, | |||
| I've tried to work in some of the previous concerns. These have been reverted by some without any explanation and without addressing the reasons why the other version won't work because or NPOV and ]. Shamir1 added that Human Rights Watch reported that Palestinian militants had "endangered the lives of Palestinian civilians". According to the source, this is absolutely correct. But the source also says that HRW "has so far found no evidence that Palestinian gunmen forced Palestinian civilians to serve as human shields during the attack." This is contradictory to what the article said before (prior to Shamir1's addition), so I removed it. ] <sup><small><font color="DarkBlue">]</font></small></sup> 03:03, 1 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::i do believe that the population was not forced to do anything there - see the CNN transcripts : | |||
| ::::"And all of them, almost all of them, told us stories of mass graves, of bodies being loaded into trucks and driven away. Of bodies being left in the sewers and bulldozed." | |||
| ::doesn't sound to me like they were all, almost all, forced to spread libel. ] 21:57, 17 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == precursors to the battle == | |||
| ''i removed this problematic use of information from the article:'' | |||
| During the same period , hundreds of Palestinians were killed in the occupied territories by israeli soldiers. The UN estimated that 497 Palestinians were killed and 1,447 wounded during the IDF reoccupation of Palestinian areas between 1 March through 7 May and in the immediate aftermath. An estimated 70-80 Palestinians, including approximately 50 civilians, were killed in Nablus. | |||
| ''end'' | |||
| i'm concerned both with how this nitpicks at the detail of the article and creating bias by adding up to the death toll including the fights but mostly by how it is inserted into the precursors to the battle while it is definately not centered on events of before the battle. ] 21:51, 17 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ----------- | |||
| Why is this information problematic at all? It is also in other articles about the intifada, and is backed by a official source. I dont wan´t to be biased, but as it is now the part " precursor to the battle" talks only about violence against Israelis. There is no single word to let the uniformed know that violence in this time frame, as in all this whole conflict, has always been used by both sides. If the sentence above is not to the liking of forum members ok, but I think a way to balance this especific part of the article has to be found. ( Rathed - 18 April 2007 ) | |||
| # nice to see you've just joined wikipedia. | |||
| # you should re-read my 2 concerns. | |||
| # if you wish to present a generic death toll across the land, you should work on the ] article rather than the battle on jenin. | |||
| -- ] 17:51, 18 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
| # Many thanks :) Actualy, been contributing for a long time, mostly on military articles. | |||
| # I did read your concerns. Like I said , I am trying to be balanced, exactly the oposity to biased. The overall palestianian death toll is the period certainly is not "centered" on the episody at hand, but how the israely casualities differ on this? And we do find space for them...If we are going to mention israeli deaths that ocurred before the battle , and outside Jenin, we should at least mention that palestianas deaths also ocurred in the same period. As I said, to give the uniformed reader a fair view. | |||
| # You did not answered any of the points I made regarding the article being unbalaced as it is now. | |||
| Best regards ( Rathed , 18 april) | |||
| ::(1) you can add a pre-battle notes if you find something that focuses on pre-battle notes. I don't see how your post emphasized '''precursors''' to the battle of jenin. (2) considering that this article covers a blatant libel attempt that failed (see the CNN trasncripts about the mass graves rumors), i don't see how the article is imbalanced. ] 21:30, 19 April 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Jenin battle wasn't even a massacre == | |||
| The battle in the jenin refugee camp wasn't a massacre. A massacre is when someone comes intentionally killing innocent civilians. What Israel did in Jenin was trying to dismantle terrorist activity. israel iontended to minimize civilian casulties. The terrorists hid themselves and their weapons in a refugee camp so they can get Israel to kill refugees so they can get sympathy form the world amd more Palestinians to hate Israel. if Israel wanted to kill the civilians or anted to bomb the terrorists without caring about the civilians then Israel would have just bombed it. I am not saying that bombing the refugee camp would have been the right descision for Israel to make but Israel risk the lives of their soldiers to minimize civilian casulties in Jenin. Jenin was a battle not a massacre. The world condemns Israel when she defends herself. The Purity of Arms, is in the IDF charter and it calls on Israel to minimize its civilian casulties. We should listen to more guys like Walid Shoebat-Dendoi Monday Apiril 23, 2007 10:06 PM | |||
| :We have "strong evidence" from many sources, amounting to "undisputable proof" that innocent civilians were deliberately killed. | |||
| :Most graphic of all (and nobody can call it "Palestinian propaganda") may be the "Kurdi Bear" testimony published in Yediot Aharonot, Israel's most widely circulated tabloid paper, on May 31, 2002. Moshe Nissim, nicknamed "Kurdi Bear", D-9 operator ''"I had no mercy for anybody. I would erase anyone with the D-9 ... They were warned by loudspeaker to get out of the house before I come, but I gave no one a chance. I didn't wait. I didn't give one blow, and wait for them to come out. I would just ram the house with full power, to bring it down as fast as possible. ... Many people where inside houses we started to demolish. They would come out of the houses we where working on. I didn't see, with my own eyes, people dying under the blade of the D-9. and I didn't see house falling down on live people. But if there were any, I wouldn't care at all. ... I am sure people died inside these houses."'' ] 09:05, 13 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == BBC wrongly quotes the UN report == | |||
| The BBC (and presumably other media sources) appear to be quite wrong about what is in the UN report "Report of the Secretary-General prepared pursuant to General Assembly resolution ES-10/10" at . | |||
| The BBC report quotes the UN as saying "the UN said the overall number of Palestinians killed was 52". | |||
| However, examining the report itself we find "By the time of the IDF withdrawal and the lifting of the curfew on 18 April, at least 52 Palestinians ........ were dead" and "Fifty-two Palestinian deaths had been confirmed by the hospital in Jenin by the end of May 2002. IDF also place the death toll at approximately 52". | |||
| There is a further problem, since the BBC report is titled "UN says no massacre in Jenin", and I can see nothing of the sort in the report. The UN report refers to "the battle" 6 times and "battle-field" twice, it also refers to "massacre" 7 times. | |||
| I would propose that the BBC has failed to reach ] in this particular case, and that quotes from the report should take precedence (in fact, the BBC version should not appear). This would not be un-encyclopaedic, since the BBC's own investigation of its coverage of the area in 2006 showed bias in favour of Israel . ] 16:12, 2 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == "commentary translation" == | |||
| moved here from my talk page (jaakobou) | |||
| Please self-revert at . | |||
| The original of this article in Hebrew is at of the Yediot Aharonot article on May 31, 2002. Gush-shalom provide a translation at . While Gush Shalom is a campaigning web-site, it is not a blog, and would normally be considered a ] in its own right. It is certainly an RS for translation purposes. ] 08:33, 6 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :the hebrew version ''might be'' an accurate copy of the ynet article, however, the english one is full of defamation and one sided "the truth!!!" style bloggish narratives that are not by any means accurate or encyclopedic. if you want, we can include some gush shalom refrence to the ynet article, but you must find the ynet article, and you must find a gush shalom article that doesn't plagerize(sp?) from ynet. you should also find a way to write things without copy-pasting. ] 09:00, 6 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::I fail to understand the objection - unless you wish us to understand that prominent Hebrew-speaking and writing journalists (Tsadok Yeheskeli in ] and ] in ]) cannot be trusted. Tsadok Yeheskeli's reporting is good enough for Nizkor and these Israelis - why is it not good enough for Misplaced Pages? | |||
| ::Furthermore, if we're going to re-write WP policy and insert a new section called "Find the original", then we'll note the 2-day old revert in this very same article , where the original words of a UN report were removed, and a faulty version by the BBC was inserted in preference. We'd also have to re-write policy on non-English sources (currently depreciated). Perhaps the new policy should be called ]. ] 09:11, 7 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Another exciting new WP policy in action for the first time "can't use source (gush-shalom) that is politically motivated" according to diff . ] 11:58, 7 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Well said. ] 12:17, 7 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::(1) i don't see avneri's name on the "translation" (+blog) gush shalom page. | |||
| ::::(2) ], you have the nasty habbit of not contributing anything on talk pages and then reverting.<sup></sup> ] 12:47, 7 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::(3) ], the political motivation is not the problem, it's the article not being a translation but it's being a blog that plagarizes ynet... why don't you just find the sourse article without the extention blog around it?? ] 12:52, 7 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::*(1) Uri Avneri's name is not on the "translation" page, because (although this Hebrew speaking and writing journalist founded Gush Shalom some 14 years ago) the organisation now includes many 100s of Israelis and cannot be labelled as "self-published" or "a blog". Gush Shalom is entirely adequate to verify the existence of this article (repeated in 100s of places across the web) and reliably translate it. At this stage, if you believe "Kurdi Bear" said something different, the onus is on you to prove that there's some kind of falsehood been perpetrated. (If you do this, of course, then you'll wish to reconsider the revert you made of this article 4th May, replacing the words of the UN report with a BBC quote which is clearly wrong). | |||
| :::::*(2) A breach of ] which I'm sure you'll want to withdraw. Equally, I'm sure ] will graciously accept your contrition. | |||
| :::::*(3) You told us that "political motivation" was the problem, and reverted on that basis. If you did this wrongly, then feel free to self-revert (but on this occasion, I'll save you the effort by doing so myself). What say you we do a deal, and edit only to existing WP policies, not the new ones I know you're so keen to introduce? ] 14:20, 7 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::(1) Uri Avneri, is considered an extremist leftist (and some give him even worse titles), the people of gush shalom, are not considered WP:RS best i'm aware of it... maybe if it were an official statement or release. meanning that there's no signature on the blog entry (+plagarism). and at this stage i believe that the "kurdi bear" statment should be linked the way it was written and not the way some gush-shalom blogger added his own pre-text to it. | |||
| ::::::(2) actually no, i havn't breached WP:AGF with abu ali considering our history and the way he reverted the article. | |||
| ::::::(3) i think you misunderstood, and please don't "save me the effort" in the future. just find the YNET original and we'll get this conflict over with. ] 15:24, 7 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::The time may be approaching to insist on the editing of this article being done to WP policy, not to innovative new policies that have not been accepted, and are never going to be accepted. | |||
| :::::::In particular, nobody (including ], who would most certainly sue if their story had been mis-represented) seriously disputes the content of the "Kurdi Bear" article. | |||
| :::::::Furthermore, describing living people as "extremist" (unless they're convicted of it, which Avnery has not been) is breach of yet another WP policy, risking a damaging legal case against the Misplaced Pages Foundation. You might choose to make that correction yourself, since it appears you take angry objection ''"you speaking for me is... disturbing. try not to repeat it."'' to my making such corrections for you. ] 11:06, 13 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::there's so many things wrong with your paragraph.... in the future don't assume in my name and revert pages on my behalf. ] 11:26, 13 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::Congratulations, it would appear you've accepted the validity of the "Kurdi Bear" interview after all. It's unfortunate you thought it so important to revert the work of others, removing good referenced information, before checking and discovering the validity of it for yourself. Perhaps all parties have learnt something and the work of writing and improving the encyclopaedia can be re-started with less time wasted. I have had to correct what you added, since referenced sources must be in English, a basic WP policy I'm sure you understand and appreciate now I've explained it to you. ] 11:58, 13 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::''']''', please avoid condecending attitudes on your "replies", i've looked into the information and found some validation to the artcile and it's proper source, something gush-shalom has left out. regardless of this, their "translation+blog" page is unnaceptable POV pushing because it does not address the text properly and adds so much out of context information in a way that does not uphold WP:RS. sadly, we are forced to trust their hebrew version of the article since a second version could not be found, while i did find some mentions of this article on blogs, however, the english version is unnaceptable for a self-respecting encyclopedia. using WP:RS is a basic wikipedia policy which i'm sure you undersatnd must be followed when writing into articles. ] 16:24, 13 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == new film about the fight == | |||
| http://www.haaretz.co.il/hasite/pages/ShArtPE.jhtml?itemNo=286481 - i'm sorry i'm only posting an interesting source rather than inserting into the article.. pehaps i'll find time for it later. ] 09:19, 13 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :We have been round this at some length already - this is the English Misplaced Pages, and is not properly served by foreign-language references. That is WP policy, and your other proposed modifications to it have not yet been accepted either. | |||
| :Furthermore, you earlier implied that even Hebrew-speaking and writing journalists such as Tsadok Yeheskeli in ] and ] in ] cannot be trusted when it comes to translation. Insertion of this fresh foreign-language material, in contravention of policy, and given your previous attitude to translation, might be mistaken for disruption. ] 11:22, 13 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::you'll excuse me if i disregee with how you misinterpret the policy... and please, don't talk to me about disruption when you insist on adding wierd POV links such as which held within' it the insertion of from the media outlet which made the most (intentional?) errors in reporting this incident. ] 16:29, 13 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ==Bottom Line== | |||
| The bottom line about Jenin is: More Israeli soldiers died than Palestinian civilians. This is unique and unparalleled in the history of warfare. Erudil 15:51, 19 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ==widspread hatered== | |||
| i really dont understand the removal of this information, not only is there a valid link from the proper timestamp as reference, but this information is also common knowledge so there's really no need to dispute this even if there were no refrence... but there is. ] 06:28, 28 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| : The problem is the CNN transcripts do not even come close to supporting the claims you have just put back in the article. Let's look at them one at a time: | |||
| === The === | |||
| : '''The :''' You have used this as reference for the article text ''The battle attracted widespread international attention due to persistent Palestinian claims of ], ], and inflated reports on body counts''. I replaced that sentence, using the exact same transcript as reference, to read: ''The Israeli Defense Forces prevented journalists from entering the camp during the operation, and initially Palestinian sources reported 500 dead''. | |||
| : Please read the transcript and note that: | |||
| :* It says nothing about why the battle was drawing attention at the time. In fact it has hard to imagine that a major Israeli military operation in a densely populated urban area would not draw major attention, regardless of what allegations the Palestinians were making. | |||
| :* The transcript does not say any Palestinian claims are "persistent". It simply talks about what was being said at that moment. | |||
| :* The word "genocide" never appears. | |||
| :* It is true that Palestinian sources were reporting a death toll of 500 while the operation was going on. I have preserved that information in the article text. However, nothing in the transcript proves that the Palestinians deliberately "inflated" the total. Around the same time official Israeli sources were saying that "several hundred" had died . Were the Israeli numbers also "inflated"? How can you prove that one was and the other wasn't? My version, which simply states what was said on CNN that night, is much more neutral and encyclopedic in tone. | |||
| :* On the other hand, the CNN transcript does state, quite clearly, that journalists were banned from the camp during the Israeli operation. (Ben Wedeman states: "In fact, we have no access whatsoever to the refugee camp....the question that we would like to know and that we would like to direct to Israeli officials is why aren't we being allowed in that camp?") You have deleted this important information. ] 02:18, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::The ref is used to explain the inflated body count and the "rumor show", you can use it again later in the article to show that the press was not allowed to go in the camp during the fighting, the ommission was not intentional. p.s. the word genocide (and/or it's derivatives) appeared on other refs, i saw no need to muliply the usage of them.... why are you fighting these statements if you know it really happened.. or maybe you havn't watched/read any news during that period? ] 05:47, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::: What, specifically, is the reference were Palestinians charge "genocide"? This would not be "repeating" references, because the CNN transcript - the ONLY reference you used - clearly does not mention the word. If you did not mean to delete the information about the IDF preventing journalists from entering the camp, put it back. I will temporarily refrain from reverting to give you a chance to do so. ] 10:51, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| === The === | |||
| : '''The :''' This is your sole evidence for the assertion that ''These allegations were aired widely in the Arab world, inciting extreme antipathy toward Israel''. But it is not evidence at all, because the transcript does not even mention Jenin! I am removing this reference altogether, because it is not relevant to this article, and removing the assertion that references it because it is unsourced. It is not up to me to disprove an unsourced assertion. The ] policy states clearly that "Editors adding or restoring material that has been challenged or is likely to be challenged, or quotations, must provide a reliable published source, or the material may be removed." | |||
| : I find the assertion doubtful on its face. There are all kinds of reasons for Arab anitpathy towards Israel. If you want to put this material in the article, you will need to find evidence from reliable sources that Arab antipathy is specifically due to Palestinian allegations of massacres during the Jenin incursion, and not for any other reason. It is not up to me to look for articles that refute this view. | |||
| : I really shouldn't have to explain all this. Anyone can see that The April 11 transcript does not contain the word "genocide". Anyone can see that the April 12 transcript does not mention Jenin. Please look for sources that specifically mention the 2002 Israeli operation in Jenin, and stick to what those sources say and not what you think is "common knowledge". ] 02:18, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::first off, the word palestine and it's derivatives are mentioned quite a lot so it's not very far fetched from jenin, which is a small place. secondly, the article mentions it's an observation on a "telethon underway trying to raise money, they say, for the martyrs in the Middle East", jenin, being dubbed "city of martyrs" by the local "resistance" movement is something i believe is even refrenced in the article, which is impressive considering this is somewhat of a local lingo. thirdly, this trasncript came on the same day that a "martyr" (a.k.a. ) woman detonated herself in the heart of jerusaelm, this "martyr" came from '''''jenin''''' according to palestinian sources... which connects the whole story again. fourthly, i don't even understand why you mention "reliable published source" in connection to this refrence. | |||
| ::last note: the information is well sourced and well accurate with reality and simple searches for the background of this historical event, wikipedia offcourse allows you to challenge material, but considering that it sat on the article for quite a few months without being challenged for "semantics" and considering how this shouldn't even be argued, i expect this debate done on the talk page and not by reverts. ] 06:04, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::: I can't believe you are fighting this. The article clear does not mention Jenin. To assume that because the speakers referred to "martyrs" that they were specifically talking about Jenin is ] on your part. This is not an argument about semantics. The CNN transcript does not mention Jenin, so cannot be used, and that's that. Please find a source for your "incitement" claim. If it was so easy to find a source by a simple search, you could have found one faster than you typed this response to me. ] 10:59, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Jenin comes to Lebanon == | |||
| i figure we should consider adding information about media bias from - "Jenin comes to Lebanon" - into the battle of jenin article. i might get around to it sometime in the future. ] 06:45, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| : This is an editorial, not a regular news article. If you use it for this page, it can only be used to describe a point of view, not a statement of fact. ] 11:01, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::yes i know, thank you for mentioning that anyways. ] 12:52, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Jeningrad == | == Jeningrad == | ||
| Heyo Nudve,<br> | |||
| It's used too ;) --] 07:40, 30 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Actually, the 'Jeningrad' term was used as one of the attempts to portray Israel as killing hundreds of thousands. 800,000 Russians died during the 900-day siege of Leningrad; 1.3 million died in Stalingrad.<br> | |||
| Warm regards, <b>]'']''</b> 10:12, 17 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| == international attention - article conflict == | |||
| :Maybe. What are you suggesting? -- ] (]) 12:14, 17 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::I need to think about it a little. Meantime, do you mind restoring the invisible note I've added at the end of the paragraph? | |||
| I am reverting this edit because: | |||
| ::Warm regards, <b>]'']''</b> 17:37, 17 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| # Journalists were banned by the IDF before any of the other events in the paragraph, so it should be mentioned first. There is no reason to more this simple statement of fact to the middle of the paragraph, nor to link it to another sentence with an "and yet" clause. | |||
| :::OK, I . -- ] (]) 05:47, 18 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| # You have changed the title of the Sydney Morning Herald article. Please don't do that. If an article is listed as a reference, it must be listed with the title it actually has, not the title you think it should have. | |||
| ] 02:36, 5 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :''']''', | |||
| :# the journalists were banned from being in the camp during the fighting and yet they reported based on rumors... there's more than "room" for placing it in the proper location on the paragraph which deals with style of repot. | |||
| :# The title addition comes to ''help the readers find the proper citation'' to the article so it would be easier to read the correct source. it's a more than welcome change regardless of the reference which is, in this case, problematic to the Palestinian cause. | |||
| :# Please stop this incessant revert war over the materials - it is very much validated and researched. if there is something which bothers you specifically, you can raise it for debate (or find a countering source) and recieve a myriad of examples which could be inserted into the article. ] 07:29, 5 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Malam Report (Hebrew) == | |||
| I found this very interesting source, i thing we should add info from this to the article.. maybe i'll find time to do this soon, but i can't do it today. | |||
| main article: | |||
| Attachments main: | |||
| sample attachment: | |||
| ] 16:43, 6 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == gush shalom source == | |||
| assuming that the hebrew reprinting is indeed 1-to-1 with the original 7 days news paper, we cannot allow a POV "translation" blogsource. using this refrence would be as NPOV as using littlegreenfootball to reference reports about lebanon. if you can come up with an accurate authoritative source english translation that '''''doesn't add personal unsigned POV B.S.''''' it would probably be used. until then, the only encyclopedic supposedly reliable source is the hebrew one. the 1st rule of wikipedia is ]. ] 20:26, 1 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :We have been all round this before, starting with above. We can, and must, use English language sources, otherwise the encyclopaedia ceases to have verifiability, a core policy. Gush-shalom have translated the article, and they're not an organisation not a blog. Your only remaining argument is that Israelis are liars, and I don't think we need to go down that road. ] 21:25, 1 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::That's completely untrue. English language sources are ''preferable'' to non-English language sources, especially when equal quality English language sources can be found, but one can certainly use non-English language sources. Please review ]. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 01:59, 2 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::What the policy actually says is that ''"In principle, readers should have the opportunity to verify for themselves what the original material actually said, that it was published by a credible source, and that it was translated correctly."'' It's vandalism to take out the English reference. And replace a relatively well-written paragraph with a POV mess as has happened here (though it's not you who did it). Language such as ''"presumably in order to continue the operation without risking more Israeli deaths"'' has no place in the project. Calling 'Kurdi Bear' ''problematic'', and then harping on about what was on his mind as he demolished houses with people in them is ludicrous - we should be using words from the actual source. Letting a ''problematic volunteer'' use army equipment in this fashion has all the makings of another scandal, we don't need to go there. ] 09:27, 2 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::''']'''. | |||
| :::# as i stated, and you keep ignoring - the problem is that Gush-Shalom, a known POV organization, did not just translate the article, but added unsigned POV which renders their article ] | |||
| :::# '''can you read Hebrew??''' because the article clearly describes Nissim as problematic and he further admits to this description and even notes ''"Kurdi always does what's in his head (what he feels like doing)"'': | |||
| <blockquote>{{rtl-para|he|טלפונים מהחבר'ה: 'כורדי', הם אמרו לי, 'מגייסים אותנו, אבל אותך לא'. "האמת היא שהבנתי את המפקדים שלי. תשמע, 18 שנה אני עושה מילואים, וכלום לא עשיתי שם. רק להפריע. בסדיר נכנסתי בלי סוף למעצר, כי סירבתי להיות חשמלאי רכב. גם ביחידה שלי, של הדחפורים, הייתי אמור להיות חשמלאי. אבל בפועל לא עשיתי כלום. רק ברדק. הייתי בא, ישר פותח שולחן קלפים, מביא בקבוק. כשאיזה קצין העיז לשלוח אותי לשמירה, הייתי שולח אותו קודם. כורדי תמיד עשה מה בראש שלו. כשרציתי ללכת למשחק של בית"ר או הביתה, אף אחד לא יכול היה לעצור אותי. אני מניע את האוטו ונוסע.}}</blockquote> | |||
| ::::I really don't understand how you would like this guy to be described, and I further object to the way you portray the explanation of the interview as vandalism without the capability of reading it yourself. ] 13:23, 2 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::We know Kurdi Bear was problematical, bordering on clinical psychosis and (he claims) drug-fuelled. We know he was completely untrained. We know he was given free reign to operate army equipment in circumstances where some/many people were likely to be killed by his actions - and he tells us this almost certainly happened. One almost wonders whether the IDF cares. | |||
| :::::However, all of that is of less significance than the words of the interview. | |||
| :::::As to your claim that Israelis lie to us, I'm perfectly happy to believe you. But Misplaced Pages is about verifiability, not truth - we have a translation that the readers of the English Misplaced Pages can check. It's definitely not a blog, and it's the only source that is acceptable for us to use. ] 18:27, 2 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ''']''', this back and forth is becoming frustrating because you simply ignore what i am saying and are repeating your narrative misinterpretation of the referencing rules. please, try to read read again about ] and make note of the "Self-published material may be acceptable when produced by a well-known, professional researcher in a relevant field." statement, and try to remember that the analysis added alongside the translation does not fit the "well known, professional" requirement. i would love to add a translation of the article, however, the translation must be made professionally, and not via POV blogger. ] 00:15, 3 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :This back and forth is more than frustrating, because the removal of English language references, and putting badly written POV material back into the article is vandalism. Gush-Shalom has 100s of members and a world-wide reputation, it's ludicrous to call it a blog. Thousands turned out for it's "6 days of protest" last month alone. Unless, as I said, you wish to imply that Israelis lie to us .... really? | |||
| :And it's not the first time this has happened to this very section of this article - the inclusion of this excellent material (the only eye-witness material we have) was repeatedly obstructed. | |||
| :There is a lot more work needs doing on this article, such as the inclusion of material that is provably quoting the UN report wrongly. That urgent improvement was also reverted. Anyone watching this would be excused for thinking this article is suffering a determined attempt to deny an atrocity. ] 09:28, 3 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::], (1) can you name the "well known, professional" who added his commentary to the translation? (2) could you please avoid the '']''? ] 14:53, 3 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::It would be of great value to the project if you familiarised yourself with the various policies. Some of them are a bit technical and difficult to take on board all at once, but there is no mention of "well known, professional" anywhere within ], and nowhere else that I'm aware of - and that's because there is no reason for there to be such a mention. There's a policy called ], another core policy you seem to have real trouble with. I've lost track of how many new policies you've tried to introduce into this article alone (at one point, you were proposing the opposite of what you'd been doing just 2 days earlier). It is indeed very tiresome to be going backwards and forwards, particularily over an article with such major faults eg sources which wrongly quote from the documents they're supposedly based on. | |||
| :::Incidentally, the only breach I can see going on here is ''"Ill-considered accusations of impropriety of one kind or another (cite as WP:ICA)"''. The only reference to libel is this one ''"Calling someone a liar, or accusing him/her of slander or libel. Even if true, such remarks tend to aggravate rather than resolve a dispute."''. ] 16:20, 3 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::''']''', you can find "well known, professional" ''''''''''. please lose the ''"Some of them are a bit technical and difficult"'' attitude and the ]. ] 16:55, 3 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Needs more work == | |||
| There are several problematical parts in this article, including unsubstantiated statements right in the section I'm trying to improve (but in the interests of cooperation, I've not taken the completely unsourced material out). There are other problems too, such as the BBC quoting the UN report wrongly. | |||
| But in the meantime, there are editors apparently claiming that Israelis systematically lie to us and cannot be trusted to translate newspaper articles correctly. No alternative translation has been offered, so given we have an excellent source for the English one we've got, please can we use it? ] 17:37, 4 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :The problem, is that even if it is an accurate translation, it is being included in a way that makes the quotes say something other than what they are, and that is not acceptable (for example, only the bold was inluded, but the full quote says something quite different "'''When I was told to bring down a house, I took the opportunity to bring down some more houses'''; ''not because I wanted to - but because when you are asked to demolish a house, some other houses usually obscure it, so there is no other way. I would have to do it even if I didn't want to. They just stood in the way''." He then goes on to discuss the boobytraps in the buildings that necessitated this. I hope that you read through it before again inserting it. <font style="color:#22AA00;">''']'''</font><font style="color:#888888;"><sup>]</sup></font> 18:52, 4 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::You've introduced a third possible objection - does that mean the previous two are dropped? | |||
| ::And this objection looks like nonsense too - some parts of that interview simply describe the way he had to work under the conditions, they're interesting but irrelevant. I've pulled out the sections where he makes it clear that he took no precautions to allow people to escape, and, although he didn't see it happen, he believes that people were killed by his actions. Israel claims to have taken precautions not to kill civilians - but it then handed 60 ton bulldozers to the totally unqualified (+ problematic + +) who used them with reckless abandon. All of that belongs in the article, with the English references. ] 19:32, 4 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| This article is awful, indeed an embarrassment to Misplaced Pages. The unsourced assertions (e.g., "explosive charges in their schoolbags"), distortions of source material (including the UN report), flagrant POV like "Palestinian propaganda victory" in the summary box, the timeline that is not a timeline of the actual fighting at all but of the press coverage, the boldface epithets that pepper the lead: all this needs to be fixed. | |||
| Next to this, the Kurdi Bear dispute is minor, and I wouldn't want it to prevent improvement of the article. A revert war like what is going on now is just as bad as an article freeze, in my opinion, as any change to other parts of the article is likely to be tossed with the reverts. PalestineRemembered's critics have a point about relying on a translation provided by Gush Shalom. However, the alternative they have proposed, simply trusting Jaakobou to read the Hebrew for us and rely on his summary, is also bad. Jaakobou has proven that he cannot be trusted, as he has misused even Engligh-language sources in this article. As I have pointed out earlier in this talk page, he has put the word "genocide" in this article even though the source does not use the word, put in a highly inflammatory sentence about "incitement" based on a source that does not even mention Jenin, and even altered titles of news reports in citations. Unfortunately all these distortions are still in the article! | |||
| I think the best way to treat the Kurdi Bear material is to put it in its own paragraph, tell the reader that the translation is provided by Gush Shalom, a radical peace group, and then provide a few representative quotations. I don't think PalestineRemembered has misrepresented it, though he does make an important omission regarding boobytraps, which were explicitly mentioned by Kurdi Bear. I also doubt the Gush Shalom translation is really erroneous. Jaakobou has hinted that it is but he has never pointed out which passages are mistranslated and what the errors are. Furthermore, lengthy excerpts of the Gush Shalom translation have been published in ]'s book, ''Israel/Palestine: How to End the War of 1948'' (Seven Stories Press, 2002). Reinhart was a columnist for Yediot Aharonot as well as a professional linguist and it is unlikely she would give so much space in her book to an erroneous translation. Let's put an appropriate POV caveat on the source, quote it directly and move on. There is plenty of material from completely undisputed reliable sources that can be used to improve this article. ] 23:04, 4 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :there is no point in addressing the accuracy or inaccuracy of the gush shalom translation, as long as they insist that the page is not a translation page but rather a "bloggish battle assement" and unverifiable POV pushing. i disagree with the assessment that we should include this, as we could do the same with israeli right wing websites and mention that it is written by extremist right wingers... while we're at it, we can add the reports about the battle made by al-manar and mention it is an extremist shia militia run media... even better, let's use the iranian cartoon made on the battle, that would surely be a reliable source... all we need is to mention that it's an iranian report. | |||
| :btw, i agree that the children's schoolbags claim should be cited... i made a quick search for something but havn't found anything yet... i did find a number of sources who mentioned the 15000 explosives claim by kol ysrael and i've also found '''''''''', which is supposed to be the Alharam Weekly (cairo) issue 582, 18-24 April 2002. | |||
| :you can see a partial translation here '''''''''', and you can copy paste segments of the article ''''''''''. | |||
| :in the article there's quite an impressive testimony about "redoubling efforts in the preparation and processing exponentially" ... "some of the crews arrive at work day and night without rest, everyone tirelessly to accomplish the tasks entrusted to him what is required of him in his area of specialization." ... "As for the explosive materials necessary for the preparation of packages of different kinds, have focused our efforts in the preparation of a strong and huge quantities compared to the time factor and potential. This article urbanization of subgroups where articles were '''''purchased nearly three tons''''' of each article and the crew competent in this aspect, which was the hero on the head Mahmoud Tawalbeh" ... '''''"After the preparation and processing of this article the same crew worked on the preparation of the bombs sizes and different shapes''''', which manufactured large-sized packages of ad hoc mechanisms and armored vehicles, was also prepared packages of various sizes and the ad hoc against individuals. This is in addition to manufacture and prepare more than one thousand small packages that were hit by hand"... a few mistranslations but overall, google does a nice job. ] 08:32, 5 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| btw, according to a hebrew article about this source, the source also says that everyone including the children knew where explosives were being hidden. ] 08:37, 5 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| First of all, we can use al-Manar as a source in certain circumstances, when it is properly labeled and identified as POV, and is used in an area where the viewpoint of Hezbollah is notable. If there was a transcript of an al-Manar broadcast in 2002 that claimed 50,000 people died in Jenin you would be rushing to put it in this very article in order to prove the duplicity of Israel's enemies. You're ignoring two factors that make using the Gush Shalom translation different from a random political website, which is that Gush Shalom is itself a notable group (as PalestineRemebered has pointed out), and the authenticity of the Gush Shalom translation has been endorsed by Tanya Reinhart, a notable figure and a regular columnist in the Hebrew-language newspaper in which the original article appeared. The rest of your post I can't make sense of, you seem to be saying you found a source for the "explosive charges in schoolbags" claim but don't seem to grasp that to be used, ''such a source must explicitly mention explosive charges in schoolbags''. None of your sources mention schoolbags. And nobody should be copying and pasting Google translations into this or any other Misplaced Pages article. ] 02:07, 6 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :No. al-manar, a TV station banned in Europe for incitement of racism is not a ]. The only place it might be used is in an article about al-Manar itself. ] 02:15, 6 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::You are wrong, Isarig. Here are two Misplaced Pages articles that are not at all about al-Manar, but nonetheless use material from al-Manar to illustrate a POV: ], and ]. The posture of many Misplaced Pages editors seems to be: We can't use sources from radical Arab groups, ''except when useful to prove what wicked anti-Semites they are''. ] 02:34, 6 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::No, I am 100% correct, and you need to read more carefully. In the 2 articles you referenced, Al-Manar is not used as a source for anything - it is mentioned as a station that ran antisemitic conspiracy theories. It is not forbidden to comment on Al-manar- but we can not use it as a source. Do you understand the difference? ] 02:59, 6 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I think it should be clear, since I only wrote about using al-Manar as a source in "certain circumstances, when it is properly labeled and identified as POV, and is used in an area where the viewpoint of Hezbollah is notable", that I am not arguing that al-Manar be used as a source for any thing other than what the views of al-Manar are, and then only in cases where the views of al-Manar (or its sponsor, Hezbollah) are notable. I regret the blunt tone of "Isarig, you are wrong": I simply wanted to make the point that the views of al-Manar are notable enough to be mentioned outside the al-Manar article itself. To get back to this article, I still think it would be acceptable to describe the contents of an al-Manar broadcast about the battle of Jenin, so long as it is attributed to that organization, and the reader is informed of its political orientation. ] 04:14, 7 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ], this is '''''not''''' a but a generic '''''bloggish''''' "translation+personal thoughts" '''''POV piece''''' about the palestinian-israeli conflict. ] 11:24, 7 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| : The Gush Shalom page that you object to consists of two things: An English translation of the 7 Days article, and a few additional paragraphs which express the POV of Gush Shalom. | |||
| :# There is reason to believe the translation itself is accurate, as it has been endorsed by a prominent Israeli linguist. Anyway, you have never told us where you believe there are inaccuracies in the translation. | |||
| :# As to the POV part, Gush Shalom is a significant organization. Significant enough, that their views are considered worth reporting on by the . We can certainly put in this article, for example, the statement that "The Israeli peace group Gush Shalom called Kurdi Bear's testimony 'sickening'." ] 02:18, 12 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| gush shalom are a noisy bunch who are allowed to express their opinions and having friends at a few high places they can also get quoted.. does not make their statements more accurate than those of ahmed tibi or avigdor liberman. regardless, their unprofessional handling of the translation is the reason i cannot accept such a blatant backdoor introduction of POV... and the wiki protocols explain this. (pun intended) <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 02:32, 12 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Source inadequate to support statement == | |||
| "Rumors of massacres in Jenin swirled through Palestinian communities which were then echoed in the world press for several weeks, pitting world public opinion against Israel. 27" | |||
| Ref 27 is a publication by the Anti-Defamation League (ADL). According to the ADL, "a massacre of hundreds of Palestinians by Israel was widely alleged, reported and condemned". | |||
| The word "massacre" appears 27 times in the document. Although quotations from the international press are sprinkled throughout this document, '''the ADL doesn't produce a single quotation of ANY media outlet using the word''' except in scare quotes or preceded by some variation on the word "alleged". | |||
| In other words, we have only the ADL's word to rely on here. Is the Anti-Defamation League of the B'Nai Brith, a deeply partisan organization dedicated to advancing Israeli militarism under the cloak of anti-racism, a reliable source on this matter? | |||
| What the article should say is something like "Rumors of massacres in Jenin swirled through Palestinian communities, and the existence of these rumors was reported by international media outlets who could not confirm or deny them. Israeli authorities prevented the international press from entering the refugee camp for two weeks, which delayed the ability of the world community to assess the damage. After it became clear that no systematic massacre had taken place, supporters of Israel's actions condemned the international media for reporting on these rumors and allegations. According to The Independent, "Israel’s host of government spokesmen and its media have seized on such claims to mount an argument tantamount to saying that, as there is no proof of a massacre, there is no case to answer at all." | |||
| ] 19:53, 12 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :The standard on WP is verifiability, no truth. I appreciate the effort you put into researching the validity of the ADL's claims, but this original research can't be part of the article. ] 21:47, 12 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::So now reading the sources given to support a claim is "original research"? The ADL is too partisan to be a reliable source on its own. So I read the source material, looking to see if perhaps the ADL citation could be converted into citations of more trustworthy sources. Finding none, I believe that the cited information should be removed altogether, unless a better (ie, non-partisan) source can found. Failing that, the claim should at least be attributed within the text -- "According to the Anti-Defamation League, an American Zionist organization, rumors of massacres..." ] 21:56, 12 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::The Anti-Defamation League is an American Human Rights organization, not an American Zionist organization. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 17:49, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::The ADL is both. However, their claims that world media were unfair to the Israeli military is clearly Zionist advocacy, not human rights advocacy. ] 19:03, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Reading the source is not original research. Reading the source and concluding that ''"the ADL doesn't produce a single quotation of ANY media outlet using the word"'' and subsequently that the article should say that "international media outlets ... could not confirm or deny" is. ] 22:14, 12 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Well, the statement about "could not confirm or deny" was not based solely on the ADL link. But you're right, it is something of a synthesis of sources, so it shouldn't be included. The phrase "who could not confirm or deny them" shouldn't be included, just the other language. ] 18:01, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| We should handle the Anti-Defamation League the same as Amnesty International, Human Rights Watch, and other organizations. That is, their views and conclusions should be presented, but not treated as undisputed fact. ] 10:44, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| * lists lots of sources. . This is an interesting headline from '']'': Also, this '']'' article says: The ] reports Martin Sieff did an interesting 3 part report for UPI about the hysteria, titled "Why Europeans Bought the Myth", worth reading. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 17:49, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::As far sa I can tell, absolutely NONE of the media organizations you cite actually claimed there was a massacre. They only claimed that "reports", "rumours" or "allegations" of a massacre existed. So I think it's totally consistent with the language that I've proposed. ] 18:01, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::You're far to focussed on the word "massacre"; the ADL doesn't say the sources used the specific term "massacre", but when they're reporting hundreds of civilians killed, bodies being buried in mass graves, etc., they are clearly talking about a massacre. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 18:04, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Also, the world press didn't report on "the existence of these rumors"; rather, they repeated them. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 18:06, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Jayjg, every link you gave me featured Palestinian allegations reported as: allegations! The current wording implies that international press credulously passed on rumours as if they were true, when in fact, they simply '''reported that these rumours existed'''. This is a major difference. Even the sources you provide take pains to downplay the credibility of the rumour, noting that it could not be verified, that burying victims in Jenin would not serve to hide a "massacre" at all, etc etc. ] 18:59, 13 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::So what exactly is your point? The European press was filled with these stories - i.e. they echoed them, and they didn't, in fact, call the "rumors" as your edit claims. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 02:47, 16 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::I'm not sure how my edit implies that the world press specifically used the word "rumours". They were in fact called "rumours", "allegations", or sometimes "reports". Furthermore, can you tell me what "sourced information" your last edit restored, and what "original research" was deleted? ] 03:05, 16 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::I used direct quotes from the sources, rather than various unsourced POV statements. The different is quite easy to see. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 03:09, 16 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::A direct quote from the Independent was removed, leaving the only source as the Anti-Defamation League, a highly partisan group with zero credibility on this issue. And an unsourced statement, tagged as unsourced, but which supported Israeli POV, was restored. Oops! I'll correct this apparent error. ] 12:53, 16 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::There was no citation for the Independent quote, and its placement appeared to be ]. Please review ], which doesn't say at all what you seem to think it does. ]<sup><small><font color="DarkGreen">]</font></small></sup> 22:34, 16 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::::So, if I properly cited the Independent quote, you would be fine with it? And please explain how its inclusion is "original research". I've noticed in the past that some people use "original research" to mean "anything I don't like". ] 16:39, 19 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == big jenin lie == | |||
| i'm not 100% certain this must be in bold, but it certainly feels like it considering it's one of the predominant terms used to describe this event - is fairly indicative. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 21:55, 14 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| : But the relevant search would be "Big Jenin Lie", which returns 236 results, most of which seem to pull back to a single Weekly Standard editorial. It wouldn't seem that "Big Jenin Lie" is one of the predominant terms used to describe this event, after all. It's fine to have a line mentioning that some Western commentators called the media furore the "Big Jenin Lie", but pretty silly to have it listed in bold as if it's a significant name of the event. ] 22:27, 14 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: actually, the most used is "the big lie" while referring to jenin, however, as you stated, "the big jenin lie" does not appear on many sources but it's still easily interchangeable between "the big lie" and makes it difficult to narrow down when "the big lie" is about jenin and when it isn't... perhaps it should be changed into "the big (jenin) lie", what do you think? | |||
| ::'''note:''' the third link in the 13,000 find is "Jenin: The Big Lie" which is yet another interchangeable possibility. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 08:29, 15 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::I'm not sure I understand what you're getting at. The specific phrase "Big Jenin Lie" is bolded, as if that phrase is a common name used to refer to the Battle of Jenin. This formatting is reserved for names used to refer to an event. It makes sense to mention that some Western commentators accused Palestinians of propagating a "Big Lie" for propaganda purposes, but not to put the name in boldface as if it's commonly used as a name of the event. ] 12:38, 15 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Boldface is for commonly used alternative names for the subject of the article, such as '''Tamil Tigers''' for '''Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam'''. It is not supposed to be used for every epitaph anyone has ever used in relation to the subject. I can find zillions of web pages that use '''Shrub''' or '''Worst President Ever''' to refer to the current U.S. president but nonetheless those terms should not listed in boldface in the lead of the ] article, and they aren't. Elelend was right to unbold "Big Jenin Lie". "Jeningrad" should just be removed; the fact that Arafat once used it doesn't justify giving it such prominence. ] 12:46, 15 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| you have a point, i'll give this naming issue a go later today to try and fix it to a version that will hopefully be agreed upon. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 14:12, 16 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ==="Jeningrad"=== | |||
| should we somehow insert the information about the term jeningrad and why it was used by very few people to describe the events? <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 00:50, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == massacre 30-50 == | |||
| we deem the netanya bombing as masscre, because it is the indiscriminate killing of 30 people sitting at a dinner table while the perpetrator had the racist intention of killing as many jews as possible and the brainwashed mindset of thinking that this will get him into heaven. the jenin battle is not deemed a massacre, because it was fighting between two armed forces, one of which was victorious, yet with many casualties (that are not registered as massacred either). | |||
| p.s. i agree that it was a palestinian propaganda victory, considering they got their "500 killed!" message out in prime time and the "ok, maybe it was 50" message was barely noticable due to the lack of media interest in letting the public know they were wrong/lying/spreading libel. to top things off, many arabs/muslims still use the term "jenin massacre" which shows this was successful propaganda. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 08:12, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: Fine. I know I'm stupid for even trying to make even the smallest amendments to articles on Israeli-Palestinian issues when there's a whole gang of editors who'll jump in and revert them (I assume you are also referring to this gang when you talk about the "we" who "deem" things). Good to know as well that we can describe it as a Palestinian propaganda victory on the basis that you personally "agree" that it was one. Terrible of course as well that the Palestinian authorities didn't know at first how many people had been killed and overstated the death toll (as in fact is common in situations of this sort, see September 11th). I do understand your point about motive - but I'm always reminded of a comment I saw at the time along the lines of "if a bunch of soldiers came into my town, flattened all the houses around me and killed 50 of my neghbours, I'd call that a massacre".--] 08:27, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :The infobox is hardly the place to discuss naming, but in this case the '50 neighbours' were mostly armed combatants killed in battle, while the 30 in Netanya were civilians killed by a suicide bomber with the stated aim of killing civilians. I'll grant you that there isn't currently an explicit source for the outcome listed, but I believe that can be easily remedied, and a {{tl|cn}} tag would be far more reasonable in such a situation. <font style="color:#22AA00;">''']'''</font><font style="color:#888888;"><sup>]</sup></font> 09:02, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: Of course it's easily remedied. All one of you needs to do is go through back issues of the New Republic or the Jerusalem Post, find a comment to this effect by one of their writers, and there you are - OR and personal opinion suddenly becomes reliably sourced Misplaced Pages fact.--] 09:20, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: One final thought from me on this point - regardless of the accuracy of the phrase, do you have any idea how offensive it is to describe the deaths of 50 people as being a "propaganda victory" for those people? Probably not I guess --] 09:52, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::(1) disagreement on the "propaganda victory" is something i don't mind and we surely can discuss this and work on some references. (2) i explained why the generic wikipedian who works on this article (and the general public) deems the netanya bombing a massacre while the 50 fighters (most of them fighters) who died at the jenin camp are not deemed as massacred. (3) your explanation about your "50 neighbours" fits the netanya bombing, not the situation at the camp that just launched '''28 successful suicide bombings''' and managed to place explosives everywhere including kitchen cupboards and under cushions of couches! - and according to one of the captured they were waiting in anticipation on such a battle their whole lives. to be honest, I found your comparison insulting but apparently you only care for dead militants, comparing them to your neighbors, and not for people who are unsuspectingly targeted while they eat their holiday meals. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 13:54, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::The Palestinians killed in the camp were not all militants. Even Israel acknowledges that some innocent civilians were killed, even though they say it was by mistake. ] 14:20, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::read my note again, notice the "'''most''' of them fighters". <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:40, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Please do not post untrue and offensive accusations about other editors on article talk pages. It's rude and it's irrelevant. I have responded to what you have said on your user talk page, although I'm not sure your comments deserve a reply. --] 14:12, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :please don't compare terrorist militants to your neighbors and act as though people who are unsuspectingly targeted, while they eat their holiday meals, are not massacred just because "only" 30 people wound up dead; and we won't have this problem. i was the one insulted - and suddenly you get insulted in return when i note this insult to you?! <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:40, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: your posts also say "50 fighters" and that I compared my neighbours to militants (twice, now), the implication of the latter being that only "militants" were killed. That is not the case - civilians were killed too, and if I lived in Jenin they would have indeed been my neighbours. Hence the comparison. And where did I "act as though" people were not massacred at Netanya, or use the word "only" alongside the number killed? I simply queried why one event was called a massacre and one was not. We wouldn't have this problem if you didn't attribute opinions to me that I don't hold, or suggest I made statements that I never made --] 16:50, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::you just selectively quoted my text. just try not to compare the martyr's capital populace (militants and human shields in a bomb filled batteground) with people who celebrate passover, as though they are on the same innocence level. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:59, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::: I did not selectively quote your text. I quoted part of your text, and acknowledged, by my use of the words "your posts also say ..", that another part of it did say something different, ie that the victims weren't all fighters. However now you seem to be arguing anyway that the civilians who were killed in Jenin are on a different level of innocence from other victims of violence. I think you need to be very careful about what you are suggesting with that comment --] 17:24, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::: "Human shields"? Sir, the only documented evidence of human shields in Jenin relates to Israeli forces ordering Palestinians to walk in front of them, open potentially booby-trapped doors for them, etc. Jenin was "bomb-filled" in order to make its capture s as difficult and costly as possible for the invader. It was a "battleground" because Israel invaded it. You're talking as if Jenin was some kind of giant bomb factory where civilians flocked to become human shields, and not a densely populated town where some militant groups made bombs. Nicknh is right, this article is still littered with anti-Palestinian bias, and adopts the completely false accusation that the media were grossly unfair to Israel and reported a massacre that didn't exist. In fact, the media simply passed on what fragmentary reports they receieved, for a while, and then ignored the massive human rights violations by Israel in favour of this bogus question of "massacre". ] 13:43, 24 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == proposed tidy up to intro == | |||
| On a more constructive note, I'd like to make some changes to the intro. In particular some of the cited sources and the interpretation of them needs to go. However I'd like to suggest them here first, to avoid the usual revert war | |||
| ''1. These allegations were aired widely in the Arab world, inciting extreme antipathy toward Israel.''. This may be true, however a) the cited reference doesn't provide evidence for either of these points and doesn't mention Jenin at all; and b) I think it's fair to say there's quite a lot of antipathy towards Israel in the Arab world anyway - it's not solely dependent on what did or didn't happen in Jenin. | |||
| ''2. Due to this activity, critics in the West name the events as the "Big Jenin Lie".''. All these sources show is that a couple of US opinion pieces had the phrase as a headline. Having this in the intro slightly overstates the significance of the criticism and the phrase - it's better off just staying in the media reaction section. | |||
| ''3. Many Arabs and Palestinians still use the term "Jenin Massacre" (ar:مجزرة جنين) regardless of the results of the investigations.''. Sorry but second part here just strikes me as being a bit unnecessary, and being little more than a "but they're wrong of course" POV insert. If the phrase is still widely used (are there sources that suggest that?) then it should be noted as a standalone fact, to reflect the fact that some people in the region do use different words to describe what happened. There's also a slight contradiction as well with the recently-changed first sentence, which says "previously dubbed as .." --] 16:34, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| # (a) this report is taken out of a CNN day dedicated to the Jenin fighting. (b) true, however, this was yet another factor to strengthen these racist feelings which are found for the most part on misinformation and lies. regardless, a "hate telethon" for the "massacre" is certainly something worth mentioning. | |||
| # you made an interesting point, however, if you ], you'll find that there's quite a lot of people who used this and similar phrasings, hence it was notable enough. | |||
| # i agree that we should add a citation to this, however, it was not added on a whim. | |||
| :-- <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:51, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::: Hmm. I kind of read all this as meaning you want it to stay as it is, but you will add one source to tighten it up. Maybe other editors will have a view (as they did when the Jenin Lie issue came up previously, in the section you referred me to). Oh and as usual you immediately reverted the one change I did make, where I had clarified that Israeli sources also initially referred to 100s of casualties. Working with the existing text did make it come out a bit clunky, but you were wrong to say in your revert summary that my wording suggests Israel admitted to a massacre - it says, as it did before, that some media began ''reporting'' a massacre .. but changed the following section so it said that those reports were based on the Israeli & Palestinians accounts.--] 17:07, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::That Israeli estimates were originally higher is noted, but your edit changes the meaning to say that Israeli reports claimed there was a massacre. <font style="color:#22AA00;">''']'''</font><font style="color:#888888;"><sup>]</sup></font> 17:59, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::: As I explained above, my edit didn't say that if read carefully. But equally, as I admitted, it ended up being somewhat confusing. I'll add it to my list of things that I think need changing and see if anyone else has any views about how it should best be written up. Currently the intro suggests that the only reason for the high casualty figures (and use of the word massacre) is because the Palestinians tried to hoax the world and slander Israel, and that the western & Arab media fell for it. As ever the reality is a little more complicated than that - yes the Palestinian spokespeople and witnesses made exaggerated claims about the numbers killed, but I imagine that's as much because, at senior official level, they simply didn't know what was going on in the camp in the first days of the assault. The IDF, who probably had a better idea, were also talking about 100s of casualties. The media were therefore faced with both sides at times offering similar estimates (albeit each of them describing the situation in very different terms) - and as they were barred from sending reporters into the camp themselves, that was all they had to go on and report. In the early stages of events like this, there is always genuine confusion and contradictory or incorrect reporting about the detail of what is happening. --] 18:22, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::], the reason i changed your phrasing was because international reports were based on the reports of the palestinians, not on a cross-check between israeli and palestinian reports. if a couple of israeli sources echoed the "palestinian narrative" (citation is needed), the source still remains palestinian and not israeli. the way you originally phrased it, allowed for the misinterpretation that the international media followed israeli reports - which is wholly inaccurate and misleading. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 22:07, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::What you'] 22:15, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::: Everyone: don't forget all the (pro-)Palestinian claims about the supposed secret burials in mass graves or what-not. --] 23:48, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Um, they're still there. In the intro. As for whether Israeli actions and comments affected the reporting, ''even one of the sources cited'', one of the CNN reports, includes an individual reporter querying whether the IDF has something to hide, and whether that's why they're not letting journalists into the camp. I watched a lot of media reporting at the time and this was in fact a common reaction - the Palestinians say 100s of civilians are being killed, some IDF spokespeople appear to be confirming a large number of deaths and they're not letting people in to see what's happening. That all helped feed the reporting frenzy. You might want to blame it all on deliberate Palestinian misinformation, but that's not even what the sources 10-13 cited here say. My edits clarified all this, without inserting any judgemental emphasis. --] 09:32, 23 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == More inadequate references == | |||
| The claim that Jenin was called "the martyrs' capital" is supported by "The Intelligence and Terrorism Information Center opened in 2001. It is part of the Israel Intelligence Heritage & Commemoration Center (IICC) , an NGO dedicated to the memory of the fallen of the Israeli Intelligence Community and it is located near Gelilot , north of Tel Aviv. It is headed by (Col. Ret.) Dr. Reuven Erlich ." | |||
| Please acknowledge that NGO's closely, and openly, linked to one side of the combat are not reliable sources on their enemies. This is equivalent to citing a Hamas-linked NGO for information on an Israeli city. If Jenin was, indeed, called "the martyts' capital", and this was, indeed, a reference to suicide bombings, then there ought to be more reliable sources which can back up the claim. In any case, this claim does NOT belong in the very first sentence of the article; that is a clear attempt to push the Israeli line that the refugee camp was somehow the essential keystone of the suicide bombing campaign and therefore a legitimate target. ] 22:10, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :it is simply the current reference to a known fact/nickname, there are links with a scans of documents written in arabic and references - try inspecting them please. this is a fairly ] for referencing a known fact that has been noted on several other sources also.. '''i don't mind more citations being added''', however, there's no reason to feel the given source is unreliable in this matter. secondly, while there is no room to expand on this in the intro, i think it certainly merits a mention. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 23:16, 22 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: So provide these other sources that make it a known fact. ] 00:13, 23 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::unless you have reason to believe this reference is a fraud, the duty of coming up with more references lies with you. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 00:41, 23 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Um, no, statements which are not properly attributed to reliable sources may be remvoed at any time. No question of "duty" or "fraud" enters in to it. Read the relevant WP policies. ] 00:57, 23 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::the text is referenced to a ] source. did you inspect the scanned documents? <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 01:32, 23 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::I take it you do not have a source both RS and verifiable by "any reader" of the encyclopedia. The reference should come out (especially from the lead!) ] 08:57, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::actually, this issue was fixed allready (see martyrs' capital on talk). <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:15, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == Incorrect edit summary 24th July == | |||
| Jaakobou you claimed you had tidied up some unreferenced claims & a few incorrect phrasings. This untrue for two reasons - in fact you more or less simply reverted several edits by good-faith editors to a previous version you approved of; also you actually removed sourced material and re-introduced OR and editorial speculation that does not belong in an introductory paragraph. To be more specific - | |||
| 1) You re-inserted the statement that Palestinians had claimed "genocide" was taking place, which has a footnote referring to a CNN report/transcript. I had removed the word for the simple reason that it is not mentioned once in that article. Even if you can find a source for that, it'll have to be quite a bit better than one individual merely using the word once in a live TV interview if it's going to get into the introduction (which I have no doubt you can find, given the type of language people can use when discussing massive military invasions of densely populated towns). | |||
| 2) You reverted the quote from the allegedly authentic Fatah document so that it says Jenin is called the martyrs capital "by Palestinians". I can't see that in the source: quite aside from any - wholly valid - debate about its reliability, the document itself just says "is termed". It doesn't say by whom, and yet again you are also trying to suggest one (alleged) quote can be presumed to be the view of a siginificant part of a population. | |||
| 3) You re-inserted the word "vastly" to describe the extent to which Palestinian officials inflated the body count figures. This is a far too value-loaded phrase for an introduction, and is unnecessary. I'd even rather not use the word inflated. | |||
| 4) You reverted changes that had tried to make clear journalists were NOT simply relying on the wrong figures given by Palestinian officials and witnesses when they reported on what was happening. However, as I have pointed out before, even the currently cited sources say that it was a combination of factors that led them to talk about a higher death toll. For example if you actually read the two CNN pieces cited from 11th & 12th April at notes 10 & 11, you will see the following - Ben Wedeman says "we have no way of confirming ", because journalists are not being allowed in the camp(ie he is not simply taking the claims at face value); he also says "international relief sources are saying possibly as much as 200 " and that because the IDF is barring access "the feeling is, is that they are hiding something .. that there's something they don't want the world to see". | |||
| 5) On the same point, The Telegraph piece cited as footnote 13 says Israeli sources put the death toll at 200. The Sydney Morning Herald article cites two different Israeli quotes, one talking about "100s" of dead, another 250 dead. Other media sources also quoted similar Israeli estimates. However you removed the words from the introduction that had flagged this point up. | |||
| I am sorry but it seems you have no interest in making the introduction a balanced piece of writing that sets out the very broad facts, with reference to the sources being cited in it. Instead you seem to want to highlight every point that makes the IDF look noble and victimised, while minimising any real reference to what did happen in the camp, and also highlighting every point that appears to make (to you at least, presumably) the Palestinians appear as vicious and mendacious people who probably deserved what they got. Some of your comments on this talk page corroborate that (ie talking about the different "levels of innocence" for Palestinian civilians as compared to that of Israeli civilian victims). Added to that you insert a false description of what you are actually doing in your edit summary. Whether I can be bothered to change any of this back is another matter. It all gets very tiresome. --] 20:49, 24 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| : You have now reverted again, claiming in your - as usual - fictional edit summary that you have included a proper reference for the genocide claim, and alleging that I vandalised the article | |||
| :1. The Telegraph piece, like the CNN piece also make no mention of "genocide". Can you actually read? | |||
| :2. You presumably saw the VERY long post above in which I clearly explained what I did. Even if you do not agree with the reasoning (which is absurd, given that that most of my comments relate to whether certain words or events are mentioned in the references or not), my revert was clearly not vandalism. --] 12:47, 25 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| : (forgot to log in for the above post due to lack of time - when i have more will consider how to pursue the blatant abuse being perpetrated here --] 12:51, 25 July 2007 (UTC)) | |||
| # if you keep your objections short and to the point, i might be able to actually address them properly. | |||
| # some of your objections are argumentative beyond response as though you insist of "proove it!" polemics once a statment has been proven well enough. | |||
| # feel free to start a separate subsection here on talk for each objection and i will answer them as best as possible. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 15:14, 25 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: My objections were to the point - I numbered them, explained clearly what the issues were, and yet you did not respond to any of them, you just reverted the article. It is still open to you to respond to them one-by-one. There are quite a few of them because there are so many problems with the current wording of the introduction. First time round my objections were not short, unfortunately, because it seems to be a struggle to explain to you the concept of "this source does not use the word you say it does .. therefore I have removed it from the main text". If I point out that a source simply doesn't say what you say it does, or says something that you choose to ignore, of course you have to "prove" that my specific changes are wrong before reverting them, rather than making a vague assertion that everything you say is "well proven". And don't forget we are not talking about complex interpretation of these sources, it is a simple point of checking whether certain words and phrases are in them or not. I find this process rather easy. You clearly prefer to rely on filibustering on a talk page. --] 15:54, 25 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| i'll address the first one: plasetinians made numerous versions of genocide claims, some used the word genocide, and most just used boundless exaggerations that amount to genocide, it you are displeased with the references, note it with the {{cn}} tag, not by reverting information which is both factual and also fairly well cited. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:49, 25 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :If I'd put in a cn tag, you'd presumably just have done what you did previously anyway, and added another reference which also doesn't use the word. And I think you should be able to work out that including the claim in the article because some Palestinians used "boundless exaggerations that amount to genocide" is what we call Original Research round here. For the tenth time, the information about the genocide claims may or may not be "factual" - it is certainly not currently "fairly well cited" in this article. | |||
| : In turn, and by your own reasoning, you should not remove the part of the text that talks about the impact of the IDF barring entry to the camp, or the IDF's own initial casualty assessments - you should tag them cn. Except of course they ARE ALREADY included in the directly cited references, and also noted further down in the article itself. I quoted some of the relevant parts above. Do you want another one just to make it clear? "The greatest impediment to establishing the truth of what happened in Jenin is the Israeli insistence, on safety grounds, on keeping the camp closed" from the Sydney Morning Herald piece. --] 17:37, 25 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: A final clarification before I give up and leave you to perfect your Likudipedia. The media sources cited refer, several times each to a) Palestinian claims of 100s dead, allegations of a massacre (although not specifically genocide) etc; b) Israeli statements about 100s killed; c) the IDF's sealing off of the camp. "My" version of the intro references all three, with much more weight still being given to the Palestinian quotes, and use of the word ''sub''sequently rather than consequently, in order to avoid inferring direct causation (as I'm sure you'd prefer on both counts - although my own POV is that all three factors contributed to the massacre claims gaining some currency). Your preferred version removed any references to Israeli statements or actions. If you don't see the gaps and lack of neutrality in that, I'm afraid I'm a little lost. I am not trying to make this "pro-Palestinian" instead of "pro-Israeli", since that is not where I am coming from - I am just trying to present what the cited sources say --] 18:06, 25 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::thank you for that redundant personal attack on how i phrase myself (on the talk page) to describe a phenomenon of exaggerations and lies that included claims of mass graves, bodies being repeatedly mangled by tanks, and more than 3000 dead by some "eye witnesses". <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 20:35, 25 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == genocide == | |||
| i figure, since people are perhaps naive to the claims made in the global media, that we should start digging up a few of the references for the word genocide that's reverted out so many times even though it was used on many occasions, sometimes with the word itself and sometimes bluntly implied with "figuratively descriptive eye witnessing". | |||
| i present this source as a starting point: | |||
| http://www.honestreporting.com/articles/45884734/reports/Jeningrad_What_the_British_Media_Said.asp | |||
| feel free to explain why you consider the use of the word genocide in this paragraph not usable. | |||
| <blockquote>The battle attracted widespread international attention due to Palestinian claims of ] and ] and also due to vastly inflated reports on body counts by Palestinian officials.</blockquote> | |||
| --<b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 20:54, 25 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: I am trying to stay away but it gets very hard. I certainly won't bother trying to edit some accuracy or balance into the introduction any more, let alone the rest of the piece. Whether there were significant contemporaneous Palestinian claims of genocide or not is the least of the problems with this article, and there are far more important issues over what happened in Jenin (like the verified killings of civilians and the physical destruction of large parts of the camp); however I can't let your latest bit of research pass without comment - the only reference to "genocide" claims in the above link is a second-hand one to an AN Wilson column in the Evening Standard. Here is a link to the original piece - http://www.thisislondon.co.uk/news/article-446185-details/A+demo+we+can%27t+afford+to+ignore/article.do | |||
| ::Please note - 1) He is not a Palestinian, hence it does not justify an assertion of "Palestinian claims"; 2) he is clearly referring to the combined effect of the overall IDF operation at the time in the West Bank & Gaza, presumably including - but not limited to - the assault on Jenin. Feel free to say he's talking nonsense, but it doesn't support the statement that you want to put in this introduction. I even started to do some more of your work for you, and did a Google search for "Jenin genocide" .. I didn't spend too long trawling through the results, but it actually bought up zero sources showing Palestinians - ANY Palestinians - claiming at the time that what happened in Jenin was genocide, let alone any that showed that they had done so in a wicked bid to defame the IDF. It did, however, bring up quite a few US or Israeli sources alleging that the Palestinians had alleged genocide, but without offering any actual examples. That is a very different thing. --] 20:45, 26 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::please note, you disregarded the 3000 deaths first claimed combined with the mass graves claim which lead to a single concept - genocide. i'm not saying we have enough sitations at this moment, i'm saying the word is most fitting and we simply should work for finding the sources for it because i wouldn't be pushing this issue had i felt it was not a major part of the way israel was presented in the international media. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 21:19, 26 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :Contentious claims must not be cited with "starting points"; they must be fully cited or not <s>cited</s> included at all. What we have is a rightist commentary site alleging a quote from a British newspaper that "we are talking of ... genocide", it's completely inadequate for the charges you mean it to support. At most, it could support the charge that "pro-Israel websites quoted a British Weekly Standard columnist discussing genocide in the context of Jenin", but that kind of statement is pretty much useless. You should find the original Weekly Standard piece, or not include this information at all. And in any case, whether a Weekly Standard columnist used the word genocide is not the same as whether Palestinians made claims of genocide. ] 22:14, 26 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: In addition Jaakabou you seem to misunderstand what the point of an encyclopedia is - the idea is not that editors flag up their highly personal and speculative interpretations of events, and then declare an intent to trawl around for sources, any sources, that will even vaguely back them up. Nor did I disregard the "3,000 deaths" claim. As I keep saying, I know several Palestinian witnesses and officials made what turned out to be incorrect claims about the death toll. These claims remain in the introduction, and I have never suggested they should be removed. What is in dispute beyond that is a) why they made those claims (confusion? ignorance? panic? a bid to slander the Israelis with some kind of vicious blood libel?); and b) whether any of them specifically made the highly-loaded claim of genocide | |||
| :: ps Eleland, the piece is in the Evening Standard, the main London regional newspaper, in a column by a writer who usually covers a broad range of social & cultural topics, and is not particularly known as a "heavyweight" political columnist. The link to the original is above. Of course, not only does it not provide any evidence for Palestinian claims of genocide, but it is hardly evidence either for any suggestion that genocide claims took over the UK press (there are ten national newspapers here ] 07:47, 27 July 2007 (UTC)] - as I said, this is one opinion piece in one regional newspaper) --] 07:44, 27 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| agreed, i will take a deeper look into sources/origins of this issue before/if i make another suggestion to insert the term genocide again. i will start a new subsection on talk about the other issues soon. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 10:49, 27 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| They always cry about genocide and compare 6 million deaths (which they deny btw) to their "we lost the war and you're evil" casualties which don't even amount to 20K, maybe you and a couple others got confused. i don't think you can add genocide here. ] 11:05, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :i will give it a deeper look and won't force the issue if it does seem like it's only an exaggeration by the british media. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:49, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == martyrs' capital == | |||
| i first became aware of the number of succesful suicide attacks from jenin and the term "martyrs' capital" while watching a '''''pro-'''''palestinian documentry on the israeli channel 8, in this documentry, it was deemed that palestinians in general called the place "martyrs' capital" and not only fatah members. currently we only have a citation from a fatah source and therefore it's written as "called ... by fatah", which is minimizing what we are supposed to report on only to the citation provided. i believe we should perhaps find a second source so we can expand this to "called... by palestinians", which is a more complete/accurate phrasing. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 10:56, 27 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :It's not more accurate of course unless those sources actually exist. And "martyr" of course is a phrase used to describe anyone killed in the fighting - it may well be that many Palestinians do indeed refer to Jenin as the "Martyrs' Capital", quite possibly not because of the numbers of alleged suicide bombers that came from there before the battle, but because of the numbers killed by the IDF incursion. Which would put quite a different meaning on it --] 11:29, 27 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::the term was not mentioned to allege "suicide bombers" but rather noted right after some text about the militants operating at the camp in recent years, to note the high stature of the city among the palestinian "resistance jihad" movement... take a look at . <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 15:44, 27 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::is there any objection to reinserting this material under "called... by palestinians" with a note that more refrences should be used along with the fatah one? <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 10:56, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::nevermind, i found a source: http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/middle_east/3015814.stm <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 10:58, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::: Here we go again - you freely admit you want to "find a second source so we can expand .. to a more accurate phrasing". As ever, you know what you want to say and then trawl for something, anything to back it up. And has it not also occurred to you that maybe the magic new source that you have found is actually, in effect, the same source as the one you are already subtly misrepresenting? That is, this BBC journalist is just relying on the disputed IDF-supplied document for his (very brief) comment? That is the way the modern media works you know, with stories and claims going round in circles from one outlet to the next (see the pre-Iraq WMD reporting farce for an obvious example of this). This reference doesn't offer any genuine independent verification for the claim that "the Palestinians" refer to Jenin this way, let alone what they mean by it --] 14:38, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::: I don't believe Jaakobou's motives are relevant, or at issue. While you may well be correct about BBC getting the information from the same partisan sources, making this call on our own is original research. In the absence of sources which specifically dispute the martyrs' capital claim, a BBC citation is enough. This being said, mentioning the "martyrs' capital" information so prominently early on seems a little POV for me. I'm going to rephrase it slightly. ] 19:38, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::no offense, but your change in this matter made the paragraph broken. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 14:29, 29 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| == IDF reporting 250 == | |||
| i request a citation for this text that the IDF at some point reported 250 killed in the jenin attack... otherwise, it seems incorrect. | |||
| the current text: | |||
| ::"The IDF barred journalists from entering the camp during the fighting on safety grounds and at one point reported casualties as high as 250, yet many journalists''...." | |||
| -- <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 11:10, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :It's cited in the body text to an Australian newspaper . ] 11:43, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::seems like a "3rd person" report that doesn't quite meet WP verifiability standards. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 13:16, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::The source, a major Australian newspaper, clearly and unambiguously states that an IDF spokesperson reported 250 dead. Your objections are unfounded and, frankly, nonsensical (all newspaper stories are written in "3rd person" and this has no bearing on verifiability.) ] 15:32, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::: And why do you insist on inserting text that is not justified by the cited sources, yet query text that is? Is it simply because what it says doesn't accord with your POV. I think most of the contemporaneous media sources cited claim IDF casualty estimates in the 100s - this is presumably because the journalists asked the IDF for their estimates, and various spokespeople gave them those estimates, either in individual or official briefings, or in media interviews. Those figures were wrong, as were the Palestinian claims. The other depressing thing about all this is that, going back up the talk page, it seems another editor had very similar debates with you back in May/June this year, for example about the inclusion of the word genocide in the intro, and other examples of your general misuse/misreading of sources and references. --] 14:48, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::(1) i don't think that an australia news source should vouch for IDF spokepersons. (2) i have a pretty strong recollections of the events in question and i see documentaries relating every week on our channel 8. (3) please refrain from POV accusations as they testify to your own POV also. | |||
| ::::i request you come up with proper citations on this one. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 23:03, 28 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::These objections are nonsensical. Furthermore, they seem to hinge on whether you personally like the claim at issue. You sourced the "martyrs' capital" claim to the BBC (after a laborious explanation of why Israeli propaganda websites are not WP:RS). If a British TV station reporting claims about what Palestinians say (without specific attribution) is perfectly reliable, is not an Australian newspaper reporting claims about what Israelis say (with attribution) also reliable? Whether you remember seeing it on a Channel 8 (whatever that is) documentary that you think was "pro-Palestinian", or whether you have ''a pretty strong recollection'', is completely irrelevant. Provide sources for your claims or stop making them. | |||
| :::::On a personal note, you would do best to leave this issue to one of Misplaced Pages's many ''competent'' Israeli hasbara-pushers. Your broken English, and your manifest ignorance of Misplaced Pages policy, make you look really silly. ] 03:21, 29 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::(1) ], i think you should take a good hard look at ], ] and ]. | |||
| :::::::(2) please note that when a reasonable explanation to an objection is given. | |||
| :::::::(3) please address this issue properly - either we find a reliable reference to give this this alleged spokesperson some credibility or the hearsay statement should be removed. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 14:21, 29 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::Misplaced Pages is about verifiability, not truth - the Australian article gives us an estimate of 250 dead from an IDF source, and that is perfectly adequate to be included. However this article is not written to the WP standard of verifiability, since English-language sources of the Kurdi Bear interview were removed - I believe you can explain how this happened. And this article is laced with other inaccuracies, including a BBC report ("52 dead") which clearly conflicts with the source they're quoting ("at least 52 dead"). Perhaps it would be better if you edited the Hebrew WP rather than the English one, since it's clear you're having some difficulty with the language in use here. ] 22:26, 31 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Just to clarify the point - one way governments feed a lot of information to the public is via anonymous briefings to the media (either officially via a press office, whose staff in the UK at least do not give out their names, or unofficially in off-the-record briefings by other staff). This happens either because the journalist has contacted a press office for a comment, or because the government is trying to pro-actively push a point out. That journalist, and other media, may then report what they have been told. That is the way the system works, and it happens in addition to more direct and public methods such as government press conferences, officially released statements etc. We cannot just exclude any information that comes out this way on the basis that it is "3rd hand" - it is still attributed by the journalist to the government collectively, and is certainly not hearsay. What matters is whether the media organisation in question is considered to be a reliable or professional one (which of course is a separate point from whether it is considered biased or not). Any mainstream media outlet saying "the IDF said last night that ..." should be a reliable source for the content of that IDF statement. --] 07:53, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::that assessment may become valid once we get a couple hebrew sources (or some valid english ones) that repeat this information. we cannot base this information on a single 3rd party source from another country who's giving this information almost indirectly to it's own article. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 09:01, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::And yet, we can, when the information is something you want known ("martyrs' capital"). Here is Ha'aretz approvingly quoting an Arab-Israeli filmmaker on the IDF estimate of 250, without printing any kind of correction or retraction. Here and is a soul-searching "why does the world hate us" editorial of an IDF Captain published by The National Review Online ("Worse still, the IDF was releasing what turned out to be erroneous, highly inflated estimates of Palestinian casualties ... While our office was saying around 150 Palestinians were killed, I heard very senior generals say up to 200, and the press quoted defense officials with numbers ranging as high as 250. These estimates made the Palestinian claims of 500 dead seem reasonable.") | |||
| :::Do you realize that you are, concurrently, arguing that a single report in a free Jewish-community weekly in San Fransisco be treated as received wisdom without even attributing the claim to its sources, arguing that a single background line on the BBC is enough to label an entire city as the suicide bombers' capital, and arguing that a single 3rd party source from another country isn't adequate to report on Israel? How can you sustain this apparent contradiction? Do you even recognize that the contradiction exists? ] 12:21, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ] I've never heard about an IDF official stating we killed 250 people, a rumors on a semi-paragraph in Australia is not a good source. ] 10:56, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :These aren't "rumors on a semi-paragraph", but a report in a major Australian daily. Their correspondent was undoubtedly in Israel which obviates any question of Australia somehow being too far away to report on Israel. Explain why they are not a good source. ] 12:21, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::that sounds like a lot of OR to support this statement and i really don't understand why you ask for an explanation when one has been given. just find some proper source for it so we can get rid of this discussion or get rid of this rumor. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:47, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ==Explaining my revert== | |||
| (i) The claims made by Dr. Zangen and the IDF officials are contentious, and should not be presented as undisputed fact, (ii) we should provide information on the ''actual'' damage done to the Jenin camp, as well as the subsequently refuted claims of a massacre. ] 08:26, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::<s>agreed</s> on this one, i don't mind the phrasing "said" anymore. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 09:04, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :actually, i changed my mind - this is not a civilian being interviewed, but an actual report by an official medic on the scene. the word reported is far more valid than "said". <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 09:17, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ]: I agree with Jaakobu | |||
| **I don't particularly care if the wording is resolved as "said" or "reported". I'm more concerned about presenting IDF claims as uncontested fact, as the current wording still does. ] 21:32, 30 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Ok Nudve. I've decided to bring up a few sources and see if you have any suggestions:<br> | |||
| :: Part (ii) is the more serious point. It is equivocation bordering on fraud to describe the devastation to Jenin as a "Palestinian claim" rather than an objective fact. The camp was bombarded heavily by tanks and helicopters, and subsequently some 10% of its area was deliberately razed to the ground by Israeli bulldozers. These are not merely allegations, but widely reported facts. The bulldozing, indeed, was proudly confirmed by official Israeli sources, who were eager to point out that they'd "merely" flattened a tenth of the camp, not the entire camp. Can we address this serious problem? ] 01:22, 31 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
| '''Post-Event reactions by Israelis/Jews, Palestinians, Media members:''' | |||
| * - you've come under some widespread criticism here in the United States... Perhaps 500 Palestinians murdered... you suggested." (Erekat also comments) | |||
| * (), , - Israeli and Jewish criticism articles. | |||
| * - Criticism at Erekat (e.v. Erekat spoke with CNN from Jericho, massacre claims were regarding Jenin). | |||
| * - "the whole notion of a fact-finding group was born out of a fundamental lie, that Israel had committed a massacre in Jenin. Originally you had Palestinian spokesmen like Saeb Erakat stating on CNN that upwards of 500 Palestinians were killed in Jenin. We now know that the figure is even around a 10th of that. And that's now verified not only by Israeli sources, but also by Palestinian sources. So the entire motivation for conducting this operation basically doesn't exist any longer." | |||
| * | |||
| * | |||
| * | |||
| * , , - Erekat rejected the UN report. | |||
| * | |||
| That's what I got for now... still missing some sources where Palestinians describe the events as a great victory. Just recently (a month ago) Zacharia Zbeidi was on TV repeating the same 'victory' perspective so I'm hoping to find a few soon.<br>Cheers, <b>]'']''</b> 06:59, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :I'm not sure I understand what you are trying to do here with those sources. The massacre allegations are already well represented in the article and the lead. What you asked for in the invisible comment was a mention that the battle is also perceived as a heroic, Stalingrad-like stand, and this is what "Jeningrad" is about. Am I missing something here? -- ] (]) 07:48, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::What's missing in the lead is a mini-paragrah about notable post-battle reactions - Israeli/Jewish anger over the way it were reported, global media reaction to Palestinians, and the two opposing perspectives taken by the Palestinians (i.e. (A) 'it was a massacre' and (B) 'great/heroic victory'). I thought my comment clarified this but maybe I mis-worded it. Anyways, I'm thinking us two have opposing perspectives on what happened in stalingrad and the intentions of Arafat when he used the term 'Jeningrad'... I don't think he was talking heroics at the time. <b>]'']''</b> 08:10, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::It is equivocation bordering on fraud to describe the devastation to Jenin as the result of the IDF "deliberate bulldozing" leaving out that everything was deliberately rigged with explosives, in order to kill as many IDF soldiers as possible. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 15:40, 2 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::If you think the "notable post-battle reactions" are that important, you can add them, or suggest them here first. About Jeningrad: The two sources used in the article are and . -- ] (]) 08:25, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I think it is time this article was edited to WP policy. The devastation was carried out by the IDF - actually, much of it by an untrained "problematical" volunteer whom they let free on IDF equipment. Kurdi Bear told us exactly how he did it, with reckless disregard for the safety of civilians, and believing he killed people in the rubble. It's also high time the "verifiable" reference was put back so that "all readers" can verify what he said. ] 09:30, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Addendum: I just found NY Times article. Maybe it should be used in the article. -- ] (]) 08:39, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| == "Massacre allegations" == | |||
| :::::], statements like - ''The devastation was carried out by the IDF'', would be OR. WP policy is not to base articles on such OR, if you read the actual article, you'll notice there's nothing there about IDF being the sole body responsible. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:20, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Does some bright spark want to explain to me why the reports of Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch, one of which didn't even discuss "massacres" and the other used the word "massacre" just once, to say there was no evidence for deliberate massacres, should be in a section called "Massacre allegations?" It has the definite effect of obscuring and downplaying the very serious evidence these reports found for "grave breaches" of international humanitarian law by Israel. Seems to be intentional. <]/]]> 20:49, 21 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| == The BBC reports... in the fighting == | |||
| :Dear Eleland, | |||
| Two problems with this line. Firstly, the destruction was an objective fact rather than a "report". Everyone involves agrees that about 1/10 of the camp was bulldozed to the ground. Israel proudly reported this to the world! Their spokesmen went on TV to tell us about it! | |||
| :There might be a couple things in your comment that perhaps you would like to rephrase. I'd suggest you start by reviewing the sources you mention and looking up the word 'militant' as well as re-reading the mission statement of the ]. | |||
| :Warm regards, <b>]'']''</b> 06:27, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::One option could be renaming the section: "Allegations of massacre and of war crimes". Any thoughts? -- ] (]) 07:02, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::Dearest Jaakobou, | |||
| :::Please avoid using talk pages for irrelevant and vaguely threatening statements of this kind. | |||
| :::Your Humble and Obedient Servant, | |||
| :::<]/]]> 09:29, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::But seriously, I'd suggest that we have a section "Investigations" which would summarize the Amnesty, HRW, UN, and B'Tselem reports, followed by a section called "Massacre" controversy which would gather the semantic arguments about "massacres." Again, none of these reports was written to deal with "massacres," and at least one of the investigators, HRW, took the trouble to specifically discount the relevance of the word "massacre" to their investigation. Also, we ought to remove unsourced and prejudicial claims like "The battle attracted widespread international attention due to Palestinian allegations that a massacre had been committed" - that's demonstrably false, there was intense international focus on Jenin before the word "massacre" had become an issue, and there continued to be intense focus after the charges of systematic house-to-house "massacres" were largely debunked. And, for that matter, the "massacre" allegations came famously from Israeli gov't minister Shimon Peres (hastily retracted,) and a lot of confused reports about hundreds of casualties, refrigerator trucks to whisk away bodies, etc, came from the IDF Spokesperson's Office. <]/]]> 09:29, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::There seems to be a number of errors within your comment. I'd appreciate a reference to your statement that, "there was intense international focus on Jenin before the word "massacre" had become an issue". | |||
| ::::p.s. massacre claims came since the earliest days of the fighting (Sample: ''"On April 4, The Observer reported that Palestinians called the incident a 'massacre'"''), the Haaretz error came on the 9th and was corrected on the 10th. Please avoid the rehashing of mis-information. | |||
| ::::Warm regards, <b>]'']''</b> 12:10, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| == Recent anon. contribution == | |||
| Secondly, the houses were indeed "systematically razed to the ground" not "destroyed in the fighting". Destroyed in the fighting is, frankly, a lie. Most of the bulldozing was done ''after'' the fighting . The current wording falsely implies some kind of "crossfire" or "collateral damage", and misrepresents what the sources actually say. | |||
| ] 03:03, 3 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :i reverted because information from the intro was removed, and the "facts phrasing" was based on inappropriate references. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 06:36, 3 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :btw, i saw images of the destruction, and to me "the facts" looked much closer to 3% destruction of the camp and not 10%. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 06:38, 3 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :i guess if you mix my own bias and the BBC bias, you get the proper number (6 percent), as i just added to the article. havn't removed the BBC, they are still a large news body, bias and all. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 08:42, 3 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: I provided two sources, the BBC and the UN report, for the fact that tanks and helicopters shelled the camp. These are manifestly reliable published sources. Yes, I know that many people, yourself included, believe that the BBC and the UN are out to get Israel. This is irrelevant. Unless reliable, published sources not constituting a tiny minority dispute the fact that tanks and helicopters shelled the camp, this fact should not be removed or changed to a "claim". | |||
| :: On the percentages: GlobalSecurity.org may not be a reliable published source by our standards. I don't know. In any case, the percentage they gave referred to the "stadium", the large demolished area in the centre of the camp. The 10 percent figure given by the BBC, the EU report on Palestine, and the "pro-Israeli" group CAMERA, includes other areas of demolition. | |||
| ::"Mixing" one's own bias and the perceived bias of reliable published sources is not a recognized procedure on Misplaced Pages. Vague references to half-remembered television programs you saw personally are not useful in resolving content disputes. Please accept this. ] 20:01, 3 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| I've noticed and it fitted how I rememebred the source. Checing it word for word, I see a couple gaps in the text so I'm thinking the editor missed one or two '...' with his quotation of the source. Anyways, the input seems acurrate and just needs a little fixup. | |||
| ::::], please don't make claims about me beyond what i state, if you have better sources than BBC, feel free to share with us. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 07:37, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Historical notes: To be frank, a while back I've discussed this source considerably with PalestineRememebered and rejected its use duo to the non factual opinon layden additions to this translation by an unknown member of ], which are an extremist left-wing activisim group. I have made out a text version which was acceptable to me basing it on the Hebrew version of Gush-Shalom, which at least (assuming it was correct) did not include the opinions of an unknown activist. | |||
| :::You might be interested to read the English-language version of the "Kurdi Bear" interview, it's . That reference was deleted and replaced by the Hebrew version of the same thing (and all the wrong clips from it put into ). We were told that verifiability (supposedly one of the core principles of the encyclopaedia) now only meant that "all readers" were expected to understand Hebrew. | |||
| :::You might also note that both the UN and HRW state that "at least 52" were killed, not "52 in total". The UN weren't allowed in atall - but one group of International observers discovered that ''"bodies were still being recovered from under the rubble as late as early August"'', over 3 months later. ] 20:29, 3 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Here's my old text... | |||
| ::::], you should consider linking not only to the problematic sources, but also to all the talks relating it. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 07:37, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| <blockquote>]'s "7 Days" editorial released a personal interview with Moshe Nissim (nicknamed "Kurdi Bear", Hebrew: "דובי כורדי"), a problematic army ] soldier who insisted on becoming a D-9 driver, as stating that regardless of the speaker calls, he personally gave no one a chance and demolished the homes as quickly as possible while thinking about all the ] hidden in the camp and the Israeli soldiers being in a death trap situation. Nissim added his disregard for the possibility that he could be killed and that despite not witnessing any deaths, he did not care and he believes that people died inside the houses.<ref> {{In lang|he}}</ref></blockquote> | |||
| :::::No, it is time this article was edited to WP policy, whereby we reference or quote what was actually reported. It's a bit late to tell us you have problems with the observations of International volunteers, when you've previously told me you reject what Israeli observers say. The IDF told the UN that they would not be allowed to visit Jenin unless Israeli soldiers were indemnified for war-crimes (UN and HRW reports say that these were committed). It's the IDF that is rendered a totally unreliable source for everything about this incident, because they prevented investigation, and told us why they were doing so. ] 09:38, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Whether this is important enough to be included, I'm uncertain. It's just a first-person account/story from a mentally unstable army reserve. No one correoberates their story and it's just as 'true' as those made by various Palestinian eye-witnesses such as the store-keeper who 'saw' dead bodies in an army truck that when the reporter checked, the truck had vegetables and food for the soldiers... no bodies. | |||
| ::::::# why "No"? quite a lot of words have been made about this. | |||
| ::::::# please don't use wiki as a ] blog; anyone can come up with their "figurative speech" version and write them on the talk pages claiming WP is no good. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:24, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Warm regards, <b>]'']''</b> 07:59, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ==Propangada== | |||
| :I was trying to avoid giving Nissim's interview undue weight, for the reasons you mentioned. Its main claim to notability comes not from its credibility, but from the fact that it was much talked-about, and several secondary sources, including the book I cited, decided to reproduce it. -- ] (]) 08:29, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| For those editors who are unaware of it, propaganda generally frowned upon by Misplaced Pages, even if it consists of true statements. Both sides in any conflict commit atrocities, even the Palestinians and the Israelis, imagine that. On Misplaced Pages, however, history is ''not'' written by the winners. Pro-Israeli editors; innocent civilians tend to die in battles, and nothing can be gained from whitewashing that fact. Pro-Palestinian editors; it is not necessary to wring every last drop of propaganda value from the deaths of your innocent civilians. <sub>unsigned by IP 129.252.87.183</sub> | |||
| :innocence is easy to claim when you do guerrilla warfare using civilian support to provide human shields, try watching "death in gaza" sometime (it's slightly anti-israeli film because israelis don't explain their perspective, but in general a fair film). <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 06:42, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::That's right, erode your own soul by devaluing your enemy. All people are more or less innocent. You've tied yourself in a knot over this, a pathetic dry patch of land that an old book says God gave to you. ] 09:04, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Israel was founded to be "A Light unto the Nations", this from Ha'aretz. ] 16:39, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| : |
::The gush-shalom English page (and it's personal opinions) should be removed, for starters. I'd apprecaite it if you re-mention all the sources that mention this story so I can give it's notability extra consideration. <b>]'']''</b> 11:57, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | ||
| :::Most English sources seem to rely on Gush Shalom's translation, so it might be useful. Mentioning all the sources would be difficult, but is a Google search for "Kurdi Bear", so you can take your pick. -- ] (]) 13:12, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::Is it civil to vandalise my TalkPage, as you've now done at least three times? ] 20:10, 4 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::The majority of those are either blogs or unrelated to the Jenin issue. There doesn't seem to be any notable report other than the Yediot Akhronot '7 Days' weekly (which can't be reproduced online) -- unless you consider 'Pakistan Dawn' or the 'Khaleej Times' to be reliable and notable sources for reproducing Israeli reports without messing it up completely. The google search has, for now, gotten me more convliced that this story should be left out. <b>]'']''</b> 13:39, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| == kurdi bear and other issues == | |||
| :::::I know they are not reliable. That's why I looked for a book that is. The fact that it was quoted by many does show some notability. Personally, I don't have any strong sentiment toward this quote, and did not add it in my first draft. I only included it after the discussion earlier on this talk page. -- ] (]) 13:58, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Sorry if I missed this input somewhere, but which book was it? <b>]'']''</b> 15:34, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::This one: {{Cite book | |||
| | edition = | |||
| | publisher = Beacon Press | |||
| | isbn = 0807069078 | |||
| | last = Winslow | |||
| | first = Philip C. | |||
| | title = Victory for Us Is to See You Suffer: In the West Bank with the Palestinians and the Israelis | |||
| | date = 2008-09-01 | |||
| }} I found it on Google Books. -- ] (]) 15:47, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::If my checkup is accurate, it's a memoir by an unkonwn UN relief worker which doesn't exactly make a strong case for notability. Heck, an article on electronicintifada would be just as notable as this guy's book mention of the Yediot article. | |||
| i question the validity of , in particular the blanketting of information from the kurdi bear paragraph and the diminishing of the title of the referenced link. considering my history with editor, i am no longer assuming good faith and unless a good explanation is given for this censorship, i am considering this edit as ] vandalism. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 17:11, 5 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::p.s. the title of that book is borderline antisemitic, portraying self-defense that uses checkpoints instead of cannons as "sadism". | |||
| ::::::With respect, <b>]'']''</b> 17:15, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::: is a Google Books search. If you insist that all those sources do not confer notability, and nobody disagrees, go ahead and remove it. -- ] (]) 17:26, 22 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::Jaakobou, please keep your paranoia to yourself. "Borderline antisemitic?" It's not even clear who "us" is in the title; I read it as referring to both sides, mutually. | |||
| ::::::::Oh, actually, according to a review, "intolerance such that as in the title quote, an Israeli relates a conversation with a Palestinian friend, during the height of a bout of very destructive fighting the Palestinian reports they are just happy at this point not to be the only people suffering here." Just the kind of thing you love to add to articles about Palestinians, although when you suspect that Israelis might be getting the same treatment, it's suddenly antisemitic. Please. <]/]]> 13:46, 23 February 2009 (UTC) | |||
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To deal with in a dispute mediation: Israeli/Palestinian casualties leading up to the events
Source for balancing the background to the operation with fair reference to Israeli and Palestinian civilian casualties leading up to the bombings in Israel and the Operation following.
- The UN report on Jenin notes:
18. From the beginning of March until 7 May, Israel endured approximately 16 bombings, the large majority of which were suicide attacks. More than 100 persons were killed and scores more wounded. Throughout this period, the Government of Israel, and the international community, reiterated previous calls on the Palestinian Authority to take steps to stop terrorist attacks and to arrest the perpetrators of such attacks.
19. During this same period, IDF conducted two waves of military incursions primarily in the West Bank, and air strikes against both the West Bank and the Gaza Strip. The first wave began on 27 February 2002 and ended on approximately 14 March. Those incursions, which Israel stated were in pursuit of Palestinians who had carried out attacks against Israelis, involved the use of ground troops, attack helicopters, tanks and F-16 fighter jets in civilian areas, including refugee camps, causing significant loss of life among civilians.
20. Over the course of two days, 8 and 9 March, 18 Israelis were killed in two separate Palestinian attacks and 48 Palestinians were killed in the Israeli raids that followed.
21. Israeli military retaliation for terrorist attacks was often carried out against Palestinian Authority security forces and installations. This had the effect of severely weakening the Authority's capacity to take effective action against militant groups that launched attacks on Israelis. Militant groups stepped into this growing vacuum and increased their attacks on Israeli civilians. In many cases, the perpetrators of these attacks left messages to the effect that their acts were explicitly in revenge for earlier Israeli acts of retaliation, thus perpetuating and intensifying the cycle of violence, retaliation and revenge.
22. It was against this backdrop that the most extensive Israeli military incursions in a decade, Operation Defensive Shield, were carried out. The proximate cause of the operation was a terrorist attack committed on 27 March in the Israeli city of Netanya...
2. Intro - Calling the events a battle while allowing reference to perceptions of a massacre. (the arguments around this issue are listed in prior discussions above) LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 22:38, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Hi LamaLoLeshLa. I think Elonka has in mind brief pts, like #1 above, without going into the accompanying evidence. HG | Talk 23:02, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Correct. Also, I'm noticing that there are several places in the article where tags have been placed, requesting sources or whatnot. Some of these tags have been on the article for a long time, so I recommend some cleanup. Specifically: Any statement that has been {{fact}} tagged for over 30 days, should just be deleted. Also, rather than placing a "weasel" template at the top of the page, I recommend either changing text that is of concern, or using {{weasel-inline}} templates at the specific locations of the words that are problematic. And again, anything that isn't addressed within a reasonable amount of time, let's just delete out of the article. Thanks, --Elonka 23:11, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- Hi again. It might also help if bullet #1 more specific. As I recall, the archives will show much discussion of Palestinian casualty numbers and a table of sources. Does #1 reflect a dispute above about Israeli civilians and, if so, what reference are editors seeking in the article? Thanks. HG | Talk 10:23, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- User talk:HG - I think LamaLoLeshLa is attempting to point us to another very significant factor, well covered in the RS but not included in the points I've identified above. Viz, that all the time Israel was calling on the PA to control terrorists, it was destroying Arafat's security apparatus. Recent (anonymous) confessions by IDF soldiers collected here demonstrate that Israel also set about the mass killing of Palestinian policemen on an exclusively ethnic basis. This is not OR on my part, the UN specifically links cause and effect with "This had the effect of severely weakening the Authority's capacity to take effective action against militant groups that launched attacks on Israelis". Perhaps your good sense can decide if this is such a significant factor that it has to be prominently included alongside all mention of suicide and other terrorism. PR 11:44, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- I think this article neds to focus on the Battle of Jenin, not a whole range of factiors which might be impossible to reflect in one article. We can focus on each side's statements of their reasons for acting, withoput trying to describe the entire conflict here. --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 13:31, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- To clarify, there was some talkpage controversy at Operation Defensive Shield a while ago regarding the fact that some people wanted to include detailed information on Israeli casualties leading up to the operation while omitting Palestinian casualties leading up to the operation. The same goes for this set of events. I agree with you Sm that we shouldn't go into too much detail. The truth is, at present, there is very detailed info here on Palestinian assaults on Israel as background to the Jenin incursions. There is nothing about the Israeli assaults on the West Bank as background to the Jenin incursions. Bo0th are relevant, as the violence went both ways, almost constantly in overlap during 2002 - there was no clea start and ending, cause and effect.LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 19:06, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- User talk:HG - I think LamaLoLeshLa is attempting to point us to another very significant factor, well covered in the RS but not included in the points I've identified above. Viz, that all the time Israel was calling on the PA to control terrorists, it was destroying Arafat's security apparatus. Recent (anonymous) confessions by IDF soldiers collected here demonstrate that Israel also set about the mass killing of Palestinian policemen on an exclusively ethnic basis. This is not OR on my part, the UN specifically links cause and effect with "This had the effect of severely weakening the Authority's capacity to take effective action against militant groups that launched attacks on Israelis". Perhaps your good sense can decide if this is such a significant factor that it has to be prominently included alongside all mention of suicide and other terrorism. PR 11:44, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- Hi LamaLoLeshLa. I think Elonka has in mind brief pts, like #1 above, without going into the accompanying evidence. HG | Talk 23:02, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
- If you want to describe the so-called Israeli provocations which you feel serve as some sort of rationale for terrorist bombings and attacks, the place to do so is in the articles pertaining to palestinian actions. There is no reason to explain past Israeli actions in an article which itself focuses on an israeli action in Jenin. To do that would be to dilute the Palestinian side, since this article should focus on their concerns and grievances in regards to this attack. --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 19:23, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- We have it on excellent authority that Israel's actions had the effect of making it (much?) more difficult for the PA to control militancy. If you think that this information is surplus to the requirements of this article (and I'm entirely prepared to meet you halfway on this as on the other factors), then the obvious solution is to leave out mention of group actions by Palestinians. They can and should be treated as criminal and individual/gang in nature, not as "political". PR 18:40, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- I did not say that Israeli offensives served as rationale for Palestinian attacks. Nor do I think there is any rationale for killing civilians. Violence begets violence, the circle - who knows where it begins? That is what I said. Please try to avoid putting words in people's mouths. Thanks LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 19:35, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- If you want to describe the so-called Israeli provocations which you feel serve as some sort of rationale for terrorist bombings and attacks, the place to do so is in the articles pertaining to palestinian actions. There is no reason to explain past Israeli actions in an article which itself focuses on an israeli action in Jenin. To do that would be to dilute the Palestinian side, since this article should focus on their concerns and grievances in regards to this attack. --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 19:23, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
To deal with in a dispute mediation, take 2: Working towards resolution
- (Well, I see there's an effort to reorganize. It's generally better to leave threads intact once there are comments. Also, please sign your posts or refactoring. Anyway, here's my comment on this item, copied from above:) Hi again. It might also help if bullet #1 more specific. As I recall, the archives will show much discussion of Palestinian casualty numbers and a table of sources. Does #1 reflect a dispute above about Israeli civilians and, if so, what reference are editors seeking in the article? Thanks. HG | Talk 23:56, 24 July 2008 (UTC)
- There was indeed a "table of sources" (it was loaded into WP as a template, whether rightly or wrongly I don't know) including many "estimates of total casualties". Israeli estimates were up to 381% wrong according to their own official account - no similar calculation can be carried out on the Palestinian figure, since an official death-toll has never been released. (The UN figure covers a wider area and a longer period but is within 1% of early Palestinian estimates).
- Unfortunately the template in question was deleted as being in the wrong place, nobody seems to know what's the right place. Perhaps you have a suggestion, because it makes interesting reading, and is far more significant than the Hasbara section on "Allegations of a massacre". PR 18:59, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
No re-factoring
Editors unfamiliar with the processes of the project have sometimes made discussions much more difficult with four obvious mistakes and breaches of process.
- Failure to indent their contributions.
- Insertion of comments into the middle of listings of others in a disruptive fashion.
- Denial on grounds of perceived "truth" of information firmly based on RS reports.
- Moving the comments of others.
For myself, any of these practices may be a breach of AGF requiring adjudication by the mediator. The same for personalising the discussion - if you have real allegations of cheating then make them carefully and in detail in a new section or another well-signposted page. PR 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
Mediation Issues, please comment on the most important
Please add in main points with relevant sources (not just rhetoric), below.LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 00:12, 28 July 2008 (UTC) I am copying PR's suggestions from above, down here, slightly edited. Please sign all additions as it will be assumed that the rest are PR's suggestions. (PR, if you mind this copy-pasting, feel free to delete. Or, if you'd like to sign your suggestions, that could make things more navigable, too)LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 00:12, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
Background and aftermath:
- 1)
Fair and balanced reference to Israeli and Palestinian civilian casualties leading up to the bombings in Israel and the Operation following. LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 02:02, 25 July 2008 (UTC)PR 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC) - 2) The action in Jenin refugee camp went on for months, curfews were still being applied (and people killed in and and out of curfew) for a long time. (The UN notes two further incursions by August, some observers imply that Israel was continuously present for months afterwards). Iain Hook (chief of the reconstruction project) shot dead while inside the UN compound by Israeli forces, on 22nd Nov 2002 and an Irish woman shot and badly injured in the thigh at almost exactly the same time. 13 other UN workers said to have been shot dead that year. PR, 23 July 2008
- Some mention of the aftermath needed - ex-Israeli academic Ilan Pappe tells us there was a popular television music-show concert staged in the middle of the bull-dozed section after the incident. PR 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
Inclusion/framing of statements made by Sharon & his advisor:
- 1) Sharon was widely reported to have told representatives of the world's media on 5th March that "Palestinians must be hit ... must cause them losses, victims a month before the incursions (and before the surge of suicide bombings that is already mentioned in the article). This statement by Sharon was linked even by the otherwise pro-Israel Time Magazine directly to the military action that followed: "He went on to do just that, unleashing a broader military offensive than anything seen so far in the past 17 months of fighting." (Colin Powell was another who criticized Sharon for what he said). PR, 23 July 2008
- This may be the single easiest and least controversial inclusion to make. Although we're not going to say it, the individual in question has been harshly criticised (even by the US and Israel) for attacking civilians over a period of almost 50 years. The words themselves are widely reported as if we're supposed to draw conclusions from them - and of course the RS's did exactly that. PR 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- 2) Sharons advisor told the UN special envoy, Terje Roed-Larsen that he "has no business whatsoever" to tell us what is right or wrong". PR, 23 July 2008
Individual incidents within the entire operation:
- 1) The
BBCTelegraph reported that Israel was putting refrigerated trailers into the camp, many report they were seen there and FOX News quoted Army spokesman Brig. Gen. Ron Kitrey telling us the bodies would be buried at a special cemetery in the Jordan Valley. An Israeli newspaper told us there were 200 of these bodies to be disposed of - but an application to the Israeli Supreme Court stopped it. PR, 23 July 2008- This is just insinuation and hearsay. etc etc --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 15:38, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- 2) Clips from an interview given by one of the bulldozer drivers to an Israeli newspaper provided a different perspective on the way that some parts of this operation were carried out. PR, 23 July 2008
- See my reply above. --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 15:38, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- 3) A single (small but) actual "up-against-the-wall-massacre" reported in careful detail, with the two perpetrators identified, Amnesty and the Independent newspaper. PR, 23 July 2008
- Allegations are already dealt with repeatedly in article. --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 15:38, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- 4) Allegations included in the UN report that the Israelis mined the refugee camp before they left. PR, 23 July 2008
- 5) Account of the third "international observer/human rights" group that made a visit and presented a "Jenin Investigation", still finding complete bodies 3 months later. (We don't have a source and can't say what this might do to the death toll). PR, 23 July 2008
- 6) A new section on the overpowering smell in the camp once it was re-opened, as reported by almost every one of the international observers - eg the New York Times: The smell of decomposing bodies hung over at least six heaps of rubble today, and weeks of excavation may be needed before an accurate death toll can be made. PR, 23 July 2008
- A section on the smell.' This does not seem like an encyclopedic or credible approach to this highly important topic. To answer your point, concerns about the smell and any other allegations are already dealt with by inclusion of numerous sources like Amnesty intl, the UN, BBC and many other credible groups taking various positions on factual evidence. --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 15:40, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
Massacre discussion:
- 1) Leave to a later date. Meaning of the word, use by both Israeli and Palestinian sources, western media use of and western sources unhappiness with word. "Jenin Massacre" widely used in English, use in other languages. PR 12:32, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- I disagree with all of this, as massive WP:SOAP and WP:OR. --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 13:42, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
The proposal of commentary and providing undue weight to such topics is rejected by me. All of the above is opposed. I also concur with Steve's assessment of this attempt to break OR and SOAP. Kyaa the Catlord (talk) 14:19, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- I am waiting for some kind of substantive discussion, or addition of further points, beyond: "I disagree." This surprises no one. What we are trying? to do is to resolve our disagreements, not reiterate that we disagree, with the full understanding that it will probably be a long, but hopefully not unpleasant, process.LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 21:45, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, that's about all I have to say for now. thanks. --Steve, Sm8900 (talk) 15:13, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
- Question: Have you looked into the material yourself to see if it holds water? What is it you are trying to accomplish with the article exactly? Jaakobou 13:05, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
- Some of our fellow editors might prefer we examine such issues later. After all, discovering such factual errors after going into the mediation process would perhaps cast some slight shadow of doubt over all 10 points raised. However, it would not have this effect on the "Kurdi Bear" interview, since you confirmed it's genuine. (As did another). After 14 months we could finally move forwards. PR 20:28, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
- PalestineRemembered,
- Please review past discussions and make note of why these subjects were previously rejected by members of the community. It might be good to try to address these concerns.
- Feel free to answer my question as well, it was not meant only for LamaLoLeshLa.
- With respect, Jaakobou 07:17, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
- It's a very good idea of yours to look at past discussions - since they contain gems like this: "Jaakobou, you open up sections like the one on "war crimes," invite all to participate, and then when it's thoroughly established that there were no findings of Palestinian "war crimes," and strong "prima facie evidence of Israeli war crimes," you simply ignore what emerged from your own discussion, and go back to edit-warring. Then you open up a discussion on "Pallywood," and when faced with critiques you cannot answer - such as a detailed demonstration of the obscurity of both the "film" Pallywood (in actuality a Youtube video) and the conspiracy theory the film helped to disseminate through the right-wing pro-Israel blogosphere - you abandon the discussion and ignore it." What I don't find is any evidence that the subjects listed above were "rejected by members of the community".
- Over and above such sterile exchanges, there is much that is valuable, including statements from many sources and contributors (including yourself) that (I feel sure) will validate each of the 9 points remaining above.
- And I'll be pleased to answer the same question you posed to User:LamaLoLeshLa - I'm here to build an online encyclopedia in a collaborative venture with people interested and determined to do the same thing. Now I've answered your question, will you answer mine? PR 16:06, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
- PalestineRemembered,
- Some of our fellow editors might prefer we examine such issues later. After all, discovering such factual errors after going into the mediation process would perhaps cast some slight shadow of doubt over all 10 points raised. However, it would not have this effect on the "Kurdi Bear" interview, since you confirmed it's genuine. (As did another). After 14 months we could finally move forwards. PR 20:28, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
- Answer: What I am trying to accomplish is an article in which, as I mentioned earlier, we represent the debate around the events at Jenin, that we represent the Israeli official narrative and the Palestinian offical narrative, and the international official narrative, and point out the discrepancies between them, rather than trying to give one or another source a monopoly on establishing the facts of the matter. What I want to see is an article that does not just present this as a battle, but presents this as a flashpoint in worldwide awareness of the scale of Operation Defensive Shield, as well as flashpoint in the discussion within the Arab world. In order to represent the extent of the flurry of discussion around this horrible series of events, and the impact on Israeli-Palestinian relations at the time, we need to see the points raised by PR mentioned in some way or another. For instance, the smell following the events at Jenin is still referred to within Palestinian circles, has entered the Palestinian narrative, and should be represented thus, not omitted. I do not say this in order to argue for or against the accuracy or inaccuracy of the reports of the lingering odor of dead bodies, in itself, but to argue for inclusion of the allegations of 'the smell' and the debate for and against the legitimacy of the reports.LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 23:22, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
- Hi LamaLoLeshLa, glad to see you explain your approach. It's admirable but I'm not sure entirely suitable. I have my doubts when you say "point out the discrepancies between them" -- which sounds like original research and when you want to present it not as a battle but as a flashpoint -- which sounds like a strong editorial POV. Regarding the flashpoint, though, I agree that the reactions to the battle are notable, but I believe they are covered in the article (though improvements most welcome). Thanks muchly. HG | Talk 03:15, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
- Re: "pointing out discrepancies": What I mean by this is that the reader of the article should come away understanding that this is a narrative rife with discrepancies on both sides, and that this is part of the story.LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 05:22, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Hi LamaLoLeshLa, glad to see you explain your approach. It's admirable but I'm not sure entirely suitable. I have my doubts when you say "point out the discrepancies between them" -- which sounds like original research and when you want to present it not as a battle but as a flashpoint -- which sounds like a strong editorial POV. Regarding the flashpoint, though, I agree that the reactions to the battle are notable, but I believe they are covered in the article (though improvements most welcome). Thanks muchly. HG | Talk 03:15, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
- LamaLoLeshLa,
- Points above: There are a few problems with the above points and I avoided responding to them since (a) a few others already have, and (b) I'm trying to avoid anything that will give rise to my old disputes/complaints against PalestineRemembered. In fact, I probably shouldn't have asked him to look up the history since he used it as an excuse to copy-paste an old uncivil comment ("gem") towards me.
- Moving the article where you want to: If you are interested in adding a mention to the Palestinian discussion on the smell at the scene, you need to establish this as a notable issue (for an encyclopedia) with reliable sources. If you provide high quality sources such as BBC, CNN and similar who discuss the smell at the scene or better yet, an array of highly regarded (clarify: not barely known) Arabic sources, then there could be room for that material to have a niche in the page. It depends, as far as I am in concern, on establishing it as a valid point with proper sourcing. Which are the sources supporting this Palestinian narrative as a very notable issue? (suggest you start a new section here on the talk page and lets examine what the sources say)
- Cordially, Jaakobou 11:59, 2 August 2008 (UTC) clarify 12:02, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
- Briefly, I do not have the time to get into this at the moment, but I wanted to be clear - I don't believe it would need to be 'very notable', notable suffices. As far as Arabic sources - I am certain that Arabic sources deal with this matter, however, I do not read Arabic, alas. LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 16:55, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
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Peres and Haaretz
A) There's a few issues with this paragraph. For starters, some undo claims about the respectability of Haaretz - it is no more respected than all the other sources in the article and they don't have "respectability" mentions. Secondly, there's too much copy-pasting, leading to a WP:COPYVIO. And thirdly, the text should be made into a short explanation of what Haaretz reported rather than a couple long quotes. Please rewrite the paragraph before reinsertion.
B) Best I'm aware, the paper retracted this article - i.e. printed out a retraction. Anyone else aware of this issue?
Cheers, Jaakobou 06:28, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
- I'd never seen the original of this Haaretz article before. Perhaps now it's confirmed that Foreign Minister Shimon Peres used the word "massacre" (and in the general sense too, not the limited "up-against-the-wall" fashion) we can remove the entire blogosphere "Was there a massacre?" discussion and re-instate "also known as 'Jenin Massacre'". (Google tells us that the latter is more than twice as popular as the name we're currently using anyway, making it ridiculous not to have it mentioned).
- And we can now say for certainty that the death toll amongst Palestinians was at least twice what Israel later tried to claim that it was. That would save us using the embarrassing, never-confirmed Washington Times figure for number of deaths, referenced only to "Abductions – Life in the Vivarium" Rense.com, "Back to the Moslem Terrorist's Page" PapillonsPalace and assorted blogs.
- Shall I update the list of well-referenced, significant reports not yet in the article? PR 10:17, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
- I think this quote is definitely notable, and should be included, although perhaps rewritten (unless, of course, a retraction is found). However, I don't think it means that the incident is now known as a massacre. Peres is not a neutral, third-party source here. He is a savvy politician, and may very well have been trying to undermine Sharon. IMO, we should call it a massacre only if and when there's a consensus among historians that this is what the incident was. -- Nudve (talk) 11:08, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
- The quote seems to be somewhat "private", but Haaretz's report is indeed notable - retraction or not. Still, the COPYVIO by PalestineRemembered is a problem and should be amended. As a side note it's pertinent to add that as soon as the camp was opened, Haaretz quickly and reliably reported that there was no massacre in Jenin during or after the fighting. Jaakobou 14:18, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
- I think this quote is definitely notable, and should be included, although perhaps rewritten (unless, of course, a retraction is found). However, I don't think it means that the incident is now known as a massacre. Peres is not a neutral, third-party source here. He is a savvy politician, and may very well have been trying to undermine Sharon. IMO, we should call it a massacre only if and when there's a consensus among historians that this is what the incident was. -- Nudve (talk) 11:08, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've found Haaretz's retraction. At least unlike several other news outlets they corrected this error the following day. Not bad. Jaakobou 16:28, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
- That's not a retraction, it's simply a different article from different sources on a topic only vaguely related. The papers own reporters refer to "international reaction as soon as the world learns the details" the wire service says "feared Palestinian officials would distort". When were Palestinian officials ever quoted, other than with abuse over "high" death toll estimates, or (allegedly) by cult-owned newspapers with ridiculously low death-toll estimates?
- I have a second question for you, the answer to which is long overdue - when can we put all the other well referenced material on this incident into the article - or is that to be permanently rejected on the non-policy objections displayed here? PR 10:45, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've found Haaretz's retraction. At least unlike several other news outlets they corrected this error the following day. Not bad. Jaakobou 16:28, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
- PalestineRemembered, I've been trying to improve our correspondence but it is a bit difficult when already discussed arguments are repeated -- such as the 'google test' and the 'cult-owned' samples. I'm also having difficulty understanding why you'd call the two Haaretz articles "only vaguely related" and I'm thinking it would be best if you run this content by your mentor first before reinserting it again into the article.
- With respect, Jaakobou 10:44, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
- Jaakobou, stop removing RELIABLE SOURCES which contain important information about what happened in Jenin. Feel free to include the second Ha'aretz story, but is FALSE to call it a retraction. Peres does not deny that he was/is "very worried about the expected international reaction as soon as the world learns the details of the tough battle in the Jenin refugee camps, where more than 100 Palestinians have already been killed in fighting with IDF forces." Peres IS correct here, since there was a STRONG INTERNATIONAL REACTION. Also, in the second story, he does not deny his original (and probably accurate) description, when he privately said what happened in Jenin is "a massacre." What happened is that Peres CHANGED HIS MIND about how he is now referring to Jenin. This is very important evidence that there was a massacre, and is known politically as "damage control." The IDF repeatedly made statements which were probably accurate, then revised those statements to hide the fact that there was probably a massacre. Sharon has been associated with massacres of civilians throughout his career. Your repeated: 1) deletion of evidence of an Israeli massacre, 2) altering the published conclusions of the UN and human rights organizations when you delete the words "AT LEAST" when referring to the number of Palestinian dead, and 3) using CAMERA as if it were RS, when, in fact, it is a Zionist propaganda source is WP:NPOV. And stop your false accusations against PalestineRemembered WP:CIV. You should apologize to him. I've seen you do this before, and I imagine you are now going to make false accusations about sock puppets. I AM NOT PalestineRemembered, I never have communicated with PalestineRemembered, and unless you have conclusive proof, STOP your uncivil habit of making repeated reckless derogatory speculations.68.37.255.64 (talk) 19:53, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
- I have a book by Haaretz correspondents Avi Issacharoff and Amos Harel (the one who wrote the article in question) called in English "The Seventh War", published in 2004. (translated into French as "La septième guerre d'Israël". It's about the Second Intifada and discusses the battle and the massacre allegations. Can I use it? -- Nudve (talk) 10:37, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- You'd be welcome - except the "massacre allegations" are Israel's Public Relations - a device for denial.
- After 6 days in which to cover up the evidence (and mine the camp), Israel finally allowed very restricted access. On that first day (16th April) two US papers (Newsday, Washington Post) casually told us that they could see "no evidence of a massacre", apparently forgetting that absence of evidence is not evidence of absence.
- But other sources were brutal indeed, saying things like "The smell of decomposing bodies hung over at least six heaps of rubble today" (New York Times) and "A monstrous war crime that Israel has tried to cover up for a fortnight" (Independent) and "The refugees I had interviewed ... were not lying. If anything, they underestimated the carnage and the horror." (Guardian) and "permeated with the stench of rotting corpses and cordite" (different Independent story) and ""Rarely in more than a decade of war reporting ... such disrespect for human life" (Times)
- On that day, even the Israeli Supreme Court was being told "IDF leaving dead to rot in Jenin".
- If, after all that, you still think there is something relevant, it could go in a separate section - remember that it's unverifiable in English, so please provide a proper page or so of translation containing any clips you want to use (but I'll not raise any objection to you doing the translation yourself). PR 18:09, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Fair enough. I guess it's a question of how much weight is to be given to media impressions. After all, I'm sure there were some heaps of rubble and nasty smells during, say, the Battle of Stalingrad, but that article doesn't detail all that, certainly not as evidence of the death toll. Anyway, considering the sensitivity of the subject, I'll wat a while for further input. -- Nudve (talk) 18:24, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Please don't stop! I'd be very interested to learn what these journalists made of the denialist propaganda spin put on this affair. Probably see a dramatically different angle on "The Battle of Jenin: A Case Study in Israel's Communications Strategy". However, it's near enough an irrelevant side-show to the actual story. PR 22:05, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Fair enough. I guess it's a question of how much weight is to be given to media impressions. After all, I'm sure there were some heaps of rubble and nasty smells during, say, the Battle of Stalingrad, but that article doesn't detail all that, certainly not as evidence of the death toll. Anyway, considering the sensitivity of the subject, I'll wat a while for further input. -- Nudve (talk) 18:24, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
Removal of sources
Hi, I still have no strong opinion on the content of this article one way or the other, but I am concerned by edits like this, which appear to be removing reliably sourced information. Is there consensus for this, or what exactly is the concern? Are the sources unreliable in some way? Is the information from those sources not being properly interpreted? It would seem to me that if the citations are good, then it would be better to keep the citations in place, and just edit the information from those citations, rather than deleting everything at once. --Elonka 17:11, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- Hi, Elonka. I'm rather new to this article. As you probably know, this isn't an easy place to work. Jaakobou has reverted a couple of times and has given his reasons. He seems to come by only once a day or so, and meanwhile I'm trying to get a consensus per WP:BRD. The discussion has not been too constructive so far. I have made a suggestion and am waiting for a reply. The sources are reliable, but are somewhat contradictory, due to the nature of the incident and the media coverage of it. It may be possible to edit "from" the citations, but that might stretch WP:NOTNEWS - I think it's better to rely on later, more conclusive accounts, rather than synthesize real-time news reports. -- Nudve (talk) 17:39, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- I don't wish to make a case against PR on a content talk page, but the content issue can be, I hope, fairly easily followed from the top of the section -- Talk:Battle_of_Jenin#Peres_and_Haaretz. A major point of concern right now is that old issues are being brought up again in a WP:FRINGE attempt to change the final reports of the event. For example, the final Palestinian report (April 30) said 56 casualties and now, based on a (later corrected) report from April 9 - there's a push to persuade us to inflate the death toll and rename the article "Jenin massacre". (See also Hated Google Test)
- I'm still trying to figure out the best way to handle this clash of versions, but being that the initial April 9 report was retracted the following day, it cannot be posted as is without further thought and discussion. Personally, I feel PR is in breach of several Arbcom descisions but as I don't wish to enhance on our past disputes, I suggested he address the issues to his assigned mentor.
- Let me know if there's anything else that needs clarification. Jaakobou 19:18, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- 1) It is not true that the April 9 report was retracted the following day, and Jaakobou does not provide a source for his assertion, since there is none. 2) The source of the assertion that "the final Palestinian report (April 30) said 56 casualties" is from the Washington Times, which is in not a reliable source (it is owned by the Unification Church, which is controlled by the convicted Sun Myung Moon) and the best evidence is that NO OTHER AMERICAN NEWSPAPER RAN THE STORY. NOT ONE! Doing an internet search for a match reveals all of the other citations for this claim are either from Zionist blogs, or THE GOVERNMENT OF ISRAEL. 3) the false accusation that I am PR is being repeated. There is no evidence that I am PR, but that is the way of hasbara; you don't need any evidence to make a false accusation. 4) One example of hasbara tactics is working to delete inconvenient reliably sourced facts which are unfavorable to Israel. I see that an attempt is being made to delete the hasbara page, which details the dishonest and underhanded tactics the Zionists use, which again, is the removing of information that they do not like. Do we want a POV majority vote here, or the truth? Because right now, the truth loses. Also check out the unethical attempt by CAMERA to secretly infiltrate Misplaced Pages. They got caught.68.37.255.64 (talk) 01:21, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- The disruptive reverts and other conduct at this article is highly reminiscent of the situation at the linked article Saeb Erekat, where one editor defied the consensus of 8 other editors (including an admin) for over 18 months. (The inclusions being so bitterly fought over there were WP:BLP, so should not have lasted a minute). Look at the TalkPage there too, note the extensive time-wasting and non-policy arguments used to buttress the tendacious editing.
- Similarily in this case we have highly relevant elements (I count at least 10) being excluded by arguments that don't even pretend to be policy.
- However, I would warn the IP editor that, while frustrating good editing has long been a well-established (but mysteriously tolerated) art, there is an increasingly powerful movement to make CIVIL the only enforceable policy of the project. As a result, Reliable Sources policy has been pretty nearly replaced by IDONTLIKEIT policy in 100s of articles relating to the I-P conflict. PR 12:17, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- Well, a quick Google search has found two sources, which support the retraction theory. This one is by the Haaretz correspondent in London, and this one is by the director of the Palestinian American Research Center in Ramallah. I suggest we add the Haaretz reports with this evidence of retraction, as per Elonka's suggestion. Comments? --Nudve (talk) 06:31, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- 1) This is NOT a retraction. Another newspaper, The Guardian, cannot retract something which appeared in Ha'aretz. Only Ha'aretz can retract something which appeared in Ha'aretz. The fact that there is no link from Ha'aretz making a retraction is proof that the information was NOT retracted. 2) This does NOT support the contention that there even was a retraction. The relevent section says, "That atrocities which in scope and scale extend well beyond those committed elsewhere in the West Bank have taken place in Jenin is beyond question. On April 9, in fact, Ha’aretz quoted Peres as characterizing Israeli conduct toward the residents of Jenin refugee camp as 'a massacre'—albeit in the context of the Nobel Laureate’s concern over international reaction, rather than the massacre itself—while in the same article military officers were quoted as stating that 'when the world sees the pictures of what we have done there, it will do us immense damage.' The following day, Ha’aretz reported that the Israeli Foreign Ministry had established a PR committee to deal with the consequences, another indication that the world best prepare for the worst." Setting up a public relations committee is NOT a retraction. Since there continues to be NO evidence that Ha'aretz retracted its story, I am returning the original Ha'aretz story on the Battle of Jenin page.68.37.255.64 (talk) 10:41, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Not sure I agree. I think the Haaretz correspondent is reliable enough to say the statement was retracted. The quote I was referring to in the second link is this :"Indeed, a statement several days earlier by military spokesperson Ron Kitri that “hundreds” had been killed in Jenin almost immediately was retracted by his superiors, who elaborated that “hundreds” referred to both dead and wounded, and that the actual death toll was in the dozens and almost exclusively limited to armed Palestinians." I used this source because I don't think it's likely that the author works for the "Hasbara". -- Nudve (talk) 10:52, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- 1) This is NOT a retraction. Another newspaper, The Guardian, cannot retract something which appeared in Ha'aretz. Only Ha'aretz can retract something which appeared in Ha'aretz. The fact that there is no link from Ha'aretz making a retraction is proof that the information was NOT retracted. 2) This does NOT support the contention that there even was a retraction. The relevent section says, "That atrocities which in scope and scale extend well beyond those committed elsewhere in the West Bank have taken place in Jenin is beyond question. On April 9, in fact, Ha’aretz quoted Peres as characterizing Israeli conduct toward the residents of Jenin refugee camp as 'a massacre'—albeit in the context of the Nobel Laureate’s concern over international reaction, rather than the massacre itself—while in the same article military officers were quoted as stating that 'when the world sees the pictures of what we have done there, it will do us immense damage.' The following day, Ha’aretz reported that the Israeli Foreign Ministry had established a PR committee to deal with the consequences, another indication that the world best prepare for the worst." Setting up a public relations committee is NOT a retraction. Since there continues to be NO evidence that Ha'aretz retracted its story, I am returning the original Ha'aretz story on the Battle of Jenin page.68.37.255.64 (talk) 10:41, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- 1) It is not true that the April 9 report was retracted the following day, and Jaakobou does not provide a source for his assertion, since there is none. 2) The source of the assertion that "the final Palestinian report (April 30) said 56 casualties" is from the Washington Times, which is in not a reliable source (it is owned by the Unification Church, which is controlled by the convicted Sun Myung Moon) and the best evidence is that NO OTHER AMERICAN NEWSPAPER RAN THE STORY. NOT ONE! Doing an internet search for a match reveals all of the other citations for this claim are either from Zionist blogs, or THE GOVERNMENT OF ISRAEL. 3) the false accusation that I am PR is being repeated. There is no evidence that I am PR, but that is the way of hasbara; you don't need any evidence to make a false accusation. 4) One example of hasbara tactics is working to delete inconvenient reliably sourced facts which are unfavorable to Israel. I see that an attempt is being made to delete the hasbara page, which details the dishonest and underhanded tactics the Zionists use, which again, is the removing of information that they do not like. Do we want a POV majority vote here, or the truth? Because right now, the truth loses. Also check out the unethical attempt by CAMERA to secretly infiltrate Misplaced Pages. They got caught.68.37.255.64 (talk) 01:21, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
I haven't been following this article for a while, but would like to add my 2 cents on this particular dispute (about April 9 'event'). I'm really not sure how many people here actually read the Haaretz article, but on careful inspection, it's clear that the current (badly-written, I might add) version puts an unnecessary spin on this article, which is fairly ordinary. There are the following problems with this version:
- The section in the Misplaced Pages article (Fluctuations in reported deaths) is about reported deaths, not about reactions. Anything Peres supposedly said, if it's notable and verifiable, should go into a 'Reactions' section.
- The Haaretz article says that Peres "In private, Peres is referring to the battle as a 'massacre.'" Not sure how the Haaretz writers should know what Peres says in private, but this is clearly not the main idea behind the article (despite the provocative title), and the claim is exceptional, so it requires an exceptional source, and not a shoddy passage in an Haaretz article. For claims like this, if true, it's dodgy at best and inconceivable at worst, that there is only a single source with a brief mention.
- The current Misplaced Pages prose meshes together Peres's alleged comment with comments by IDF soldiers, a passage that is taken verbatim from the Haaretz article. This is highly confusing to the reader, and implies that Peres actually said those things about justification. Furthermore, it is not clear how 'IDF officers' (might not represent even a tenth of all IDF officers in the battle - Haaretz doesn't elaborate) are notable in this case. The official IDF position is the responsibility of the IDF Spokesperson.
In light of all of the above problems, I can't see how the Haaretz source alone is sufficient to make the claims in the article, or why they should even be made in the context of fluctuating casualty reports. -- Ynhockey 12:34, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- These points are valid. Right now, I don't want to aggravate the edit war. I'll try and work on a draft for the article, using the book I mentioned above, but it'll take some time. Anyway, I've also found this Haaretz article, a speech by its then-editor, Hanoch Marmari, in which he says there was no massacre, and that some of his correspondents "might have been obsessive in their determination to unearth a massacre in a refugee camp". -- Nudve (talk) 12:59, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- I'm looking forwards to hearing about the contents of this book, but it's about presentation, not the event itself as we're trying to document. There is of course nothing to indicate in the Israeli newspapers report that anything about Perez's language was "retracted". PR 07:20, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
ArbCom restrictions
Hi all, as a reminder, this article falls within the scope of the Palestine-Israel articles arbitration case. As such, in January 2008 the arbitration committee authorized uninvolved administrators to place additional restrictions as needed: "Any uninvolved administrator may, on his or her own discretion, impose sanctions on any editor working in the area of conflict if, despite being warned, that editor repeatedly or seriously fails to adhere to the purpose of Misplaced Pages, any expected standards of behavior, or any normal editorial process. The sanctions imposed may include blocks of up to one year in length; bans from editing any page or set of pages within the area of conflict; bans on any editing related to the topic or its closely related topics; restrictions on reverts or other specified behaviors; or any other measures which the imposing administrator believes are reasonably necessary to ensure the smooth functioning of the project."
I recommend that everyone read the section under Misplaced Pages:Requests for arbitration/Palestine-Israel articles#Remedies, such as, "Editors are reminded that when editing in subject areas of bitter and long-standing real-world conflict, it is all the more important to comply with Misplaced Pages policies such as assuming good faith of all editors including those on the other side of the real-world dispute, writing with a neutral point of view, remaining civil and avoiding personal attacks, utilizing reliable sources for contentious or disputed assertions, and resorting to dispute resolution where necessary. Misplaced Pages cannot solve the dispute between the Israeli and Palestinian people or any other real-world ethnic conflict. What Misplaced Pages can do is aspire to provide neutral, encyclopedic coverage about the areas of dispute and the peoples involved in it, which may lead to a broader understanding of the issues and the positions of all parties to the conflict. The contributions of all good-faith editors on these articles who contribute with this goal in mind are appreciated."
There are currently no additional restrictions on the editing of this Battle of Jenin article, but as an uninvolved administrator, I've been watching this article for awhile, and the recent edit-warring is of concern. If disruption continues or escalates, further restrictions may be placed on the article, or on the editors who are working on it. This does not mean that anyone needs to worry that they're a hair's breadth away from being blocked. Any blocks or bans are multiple steps down the road. For example, before an editor can be sanctioned under the ruling of the ArbCom case, there is a requirement that they must be warned via a specific message on their talkpage, along with instructions on what they can do to avoid restrictions. And though I can't speak for all administrators, my own style is to give multiple warnings, and I usally only impose bans or blocks when an editor keeps ignoring all other cautions. So we're not at that point yet. I am starting this thread though, to advise people that it's a possibility down the line. Also, other administrators have different styles than I do -- some are much quicker with the "ban hammer", as they say.
So, please be careful, please stay calm, please avoid edit warring, and please try hard to find a compromise which keeps the article in adherence with Misplaced Pages policies. Our ultimate goal here is a high quality article, which well serves our readers, and reflects positively on Misplaced Pages and the editors who worked on it. Thanks, and let me know if you have any questions, --Elonka 17:22, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- There are huge problems at this article, with the most absurd non-policy arguments being made to keep out what the RS say and said about it. I'm not entirely sure how to treat the most recent finding, that an Israeli Cabinet Minister was calling the incident "a massacre" long before outside observers were talking about war-crimes - but it must be obvious to all that the report renders the current "No massacre" theme of the article either completely pointless - or blatant, full-bore Hasbara.
- I've previously pointed out the 10 or more well-attested details that almost certainly belong in the article - what we need here is administrative action against editors refusing to abide by policy, raising IDONTLIKEIT objections, inserting laughably POV edits and disruptively removing excellent material.
- Incidentally, the only reason I'm currently able to protest what has been going on here is that my hands are clean as regards edit-warring -
I backed offI completely stopped editing the article and am waiting for administrative action to clear the road-blocks preventing us writing a good article. PR 20:30, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Dear PalestineRemembered,
- In my previous note I mentioned a suggested solution for the dissonance between your statements and the ones made by fellow editors, myself included. If you believe the community is ignoring your valuable input on baseless/political grounds, it would be best if you approach your assigned mentor and discuss this with him. If Ryan is still your mentor, this would also help you regain his trust as well as give you a chance to re-examine your arguments at a less involved environment. When you avoid your mentorship and repeatedly exclaim exasperation towards the project and your fellow editors it is not going to magically solve the problem and, in fact, it only serves to increase sentiments of antagonism towards you. Content-wise, you believe there was a massacre at the camp and wish that we write this down into the article as well as change the title. What other sources do you have to support the 'Jenin massacre' perspective other than the private Peres quote from April 9 - which Haaretz published a 180degrees version of, an official public statement, the following day?
- Cordially, Jaakobou 03:17, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
I think there's some good advice in the comments made above. Staying calm and civil, avoiding edit warring, and touching base with mentors (where applicable) is always a good plan. I hope sanctions don't prove necessary here and that consensus can be reached through analysis of the relevant sources. WJBscribe (talk) 03:38, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Even when consensus has been reached (in the particular case I'm thinking of, one disruptive editor against eight others, including an admin, continuously for 19 months) the policy-trashing insertions will continue even after an ANI and an ArbCom. The problems at just that one article were only stopped by a further one week block under ArbCom enforcement. PR 13:48, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
Note on user Blindjustice and IP 68.37.255.64
User:Blindjustice has been blocked under the provisions of this arbcom restriction, as well as per our policy on disruptive editing, for using a logged out IP address User talk:68.37.255.64 to disruptively sockpuppet on this article. The shenanigans on this article won't be tolerated any longer. ⇒SWATJester 01:46, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- There has been massive disruption at this article - but I can see none of it from this editor. I find 17 edits from him, all of them either good or at least "arguably sound". They are . Meanwhile, there is a huge amount of other material that is definitely sound which has been edit-warred out, to the severe detriment of this article. Statements are still being made (such as the alleged retraction of an Israeli article on "Peres calling it a massacre") that appear totally unjustifiable. Attempts are being made to discredit sources normally considered to be second only to the Red Cross, while absurd "information" from blogs (about unverifiable articles in newspapers owned by cults) is edit-warred in.
- Were we (or User:Blindjustice given any opportunity to challenge any allegations made against this editor? Judging by his UserPage, this action was carried out with no discussion whatsoever. I certainly didn't know any accusations were being made, and there is nothing on this page to indicate any suspicion. PR 10:03, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
Draft proposal
Alright, sports fans. I have created a draft in my sandbox for this article, here. Here are the major changes:
- Content - mostly about the battle itself, based on Harel and Isacharoff's book. It is also used for establishing commanders and casualties.
- Cleanup - removal of a lot of info that is about Operation Defensive Shield and/or the Second Intifada in general, but not this particular battle. I have also removed many "2nd degree criticisms". I don't think the allegations section should include all the people who don't think there was a massacre. Finally, I have formatted the refs and cropped the link farm at the bottom. In general, I have refrained from "cherry picking" quotes from reports. I only channeled them through secondary sources. The reports themselves are available as external links.
- Copyedit - I tried to arrange the article so as to separate the casualties reports, the massacre allegations and the various reports. I think it flows better this way.
- This draft may still have some problems, such as typos and syntax errors. I have removed the tags because of the bots, but of course it's possible to use it and keep the tags.
Anyway, comments would be appreciated. Cheers, -- Nudve (talk) 18:26, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- I like your changes, mostly because they make the article cleaner and easier to read, which has long since been lost as a goal in disputed articles. However, the lead section is IMO lacking, and the current one is better (although still not perfect). I don't wish to address the entire article point by point at the moment, in order not to get into minor unimportant content disputes, but will help with the article if need be in the future. -- Ynhockey 17:01, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Is it the paragraph on the passover massacre? My rationale was that it belongs in the article on the operation, but I could just put it back. -- Nudve (talk) 17:32, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- A couple points about the lead:
- a) A bit too much input on the Israeli troops for the lead. If we go in that direction there should also be text about the militancy. I'm thinking it would be best to remove/shorten it.
- b) Intro image seems more appropriate for inside the article where it currently is.
- Haven't really taken the time to review more of your effort; I tend to think that edits are better made in sections than as a whole though I was working on a version of the page myself also.
- Cheers, Jaakobou 17:40, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've removed this paragraph. Tweaking the images should probably be done in mainspace, since the bots won't let them show on userspace. Let me know when you have further reviewed it. -- Nudve (talk) 17:59, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- I will start by admitting that I have not yet had a chance to take a look. However removal of "2nd degree criticisms" leaves only official army PR, so I can't imagine that your draft will be NPOV. It seems like people who believe in retaining and adding non-army source information (or what you refer to as "2nd degree criticisms") have been repelled from this page because of all the incivility issues. I know I have. But I'll be back to review the above.LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 04:41, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, by "2nd degree criticisms" I meant criticisms of the UN/HRW/Amnesty reports, i.e., "criticisms of criticisms". I tried to avoid using "official army PR" as facts. Can you be more specific? -- Nudve (talk) 04:56, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- General note: Secondary sources would be the final reports of the likes of BBC, CNN, Haaretz, JPost etc. Amnesti and other HR groups are simply echoing Palestinian claims and are far worse (blood-libel massacre blunders) as "the army's PR". In retrospect, it might be good to start looking up written sources on this issue (books). Jaakobou 19:14, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- You must be very skeptical when you read about human-rights violations in Saddam's Iraq, Sierra Leone, Rwanda, or the Balkans then. Half the stuff we know about those things came from such dubious, discredited, partisan sources as Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch - you must be wondering if any of this stuff even happened! Well at least you have the dependable ADL to inform you there was no Armenian genocide. Or at least there was no Armenian genocide until last year when suddenly Abe Foxman announced: "Upon reflection, the consequences of those actions were indeed tantamount to genocide". Of course, the ADL doesn't get tangled up with historical data, or established facts, or the documentary record, or old-fashioned notions of maintaining political and financial independence, or sending experts to investigate and prepare reports on-site, or anything of the sort. Rather, Foxman sits and "reflects" in the relative solitude of conference calls with Israeli government figures, who then coordinate their own reflections and announcements in consultation with the Turkish president, who until that moment had veto power over historical truth for the ADL under Foxman, who in turn has veto power over historical truth in articles in WP. PR 20:29, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Jaakobou. You have just re-invented the term "secondary source" arbitrarily to suit a political- and ethnic-based conspiracy theory that you seem to have personally contrived. This is no basis for editing a Misplaced Pages article. Kindly take your bizarre and unsupported claims about HRW and "Amnesti" methodology somewhere else. <eleland/talkedits> 02:31, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Without having any consideration to anything else, Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch are a partisan source, and have been highly criticized for their accuracy and "spin" by sources like The Economist, the New York Sun, NGO Monitor, Alan Dershowitz, Discover the Networks, University of London, The Conflict Analysis Resource Center, etc. ⇒SWATJester 03:47, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- HRW is on the front line fighting human rights abuses in despotic Arab countries, including Iran and Saudi Arabia, where religious minorities, homosexuals, and women often find themselves subject to the worst kinds of abuses. That they treat Israel and the United States exactly the same in this regard is a testament to their reliability. PR 07:53, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- How they treat Israel and the US similarly or differently is significantly less important as far as Misplaced Pages policies are concerned, than the fact that they've been highly criticized for their accuracy and spin by numerous highly-regarded sources. Interestingly enough, one of the more common criticisms is that both HRW and AI both grossly underreport, or fail to report human rights abuses in Syria and Iran, while reporting abuses of questionable veracity and value in Israel and the US. It may well be that they treat the US and Israel equally. But that's not the complaint: that they treat Israel and other countries disparately, something that is documented in the media. ⇒SWATJester 09:15, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- You have made a variety of unsupported claims, and the fact that you would refer to "the New York Sun, NGO Monitor, Alan Dershowitz, Discover the Networks " in the context of opposing partisan spin makes me frankly question your seriousness here. There is a variety of low-level partisan dross which attempt to paint HRW and Amnesty as biased anti-American sources, sure. But, besides the fact "you're biased and anti-" is the absolutely standard reply to human rights criticism, these charges are quite easily shown to be outright lies.
- One of the arguments of those who are critical of Human Rights Watch's reporting on the Middle East is that the organization devotes too much attention to alleged abuses by Israelis. A corollary is that it pays insufficient attention to violations of human rights by Israel's antagonists in the region. Yet a glance at the back pages of the "World Report" published annually by Human Rights Watch where it lists all its publications suggests that these criticisms are not well founded. Typically, Human Rights Watch publishes more than a hundred reports each year. In all, it issued more than 350 reports in 2003, 2004, and 2005 on the seventy or so countries that it monitors. Of these, just five dealt with Israel and the Palestinian occupied territories while another sixty reports dealt with various Arab countries and Iran. The largest number of reports concerned abuses in Iraq, Sudan, and Egypt, but reports were also published on Iran, Saudi Arabia, Syria, Algeria, Tunisia, Morocco, and Jordan.
- Or, you could simply read their websites. Currently, for example, the front page of HRW's "Middle East and North Africa" section has five articles about Saudi violations, four about Iran, three about Libya, and one each about Algeria, Syria, and Tunisia. And nothing about Israel. Is this really what you would expect from an organization which grossly under-reports abuses of Arab countries while constantly bashing Israel? Be serious, man. <eleland/talkedits> 01:58, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- How are my claims unsupported? I said that these organizations have been highly criticized, and provided the names of the organizations who have proffered those criticisms. Whether you like the sources or not is irrelevant (I note that you only mentioned "some" of the sources as "opposing partisan", which while your claim of partisanship is certainly disputable, the other sources are clearly not so (unless the Economist and the University of London suddenly became "spin sources")). And please don't accuse me of not being serious. If you can't discuss civilly, without resorting to slights, you shouldn't discuss things at all.⇒SWATJester 09:32, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- We are entitled to expect compliance with the principles of the project from an administrator. I'm not sure what serious criticisms of HRW there have been from responsible sources, but your mention of NGOM and Dershowitz in this context is worrying. The only serious criticism of HRW I've seen is that from Jonathan Cook (a Briton living in Israel), which strongly suggests that HRW (at least sometimes) falls over backwards giving Israel the maximum benefit of the doubt.
- Incidentally, the discussion at the RS/N looks very much like overwhelming consensus, with nothing but a partisan trying to disrupt the work of the project with seriously frivolous objections. PR 19:08, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- How are my claims unsupported? I said that these organizations have been highly criticized, and provided the names of the organizations who have proffered those criticisms. Whether you like the sources or not is irrelevant (I note that you only mentioned "some" of the sources as "opposing partisan", which while your claim of partisanship is certainly disputable, the other sources are clearly not so (unless the Economist and the University of London suddenly became "spin sources")). And please don't accuse me of not being serious. If you can't discuss civilly, without resorting to slights, you shouldn't discuss things at all.⇒SWATJester 09:32, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- How they treat Israel and the US similarly or differently is significantly less important as far as Misplaced Pages policies are concerned, than the fact that they've been highly criticized for their accuracy and spin by numerous highly-regarded sources. Interestingly enough, one of the more common criticisms is that both HRW and AI both grossly underreport, or fail to report human rights abuses in Syria and Iran, while reporting abuses of questionable veracity and value in Israel and the US. It may well be that they treat the US and Israel equally. But that's not the complaint: that they treat Israel and other countries disparately, something that is documented in the media. ⇒SWATJester 09:15, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- HRW is on the front line fighting human rights abuses in despotic Arab countries, including Iran and Saudi Arabia, where religious minorities, homosexuals, and women often find themselves subject to the worst kinds of abuses. That they treat Israel and the United States exactly the same in this regard is a testament to their reliability. PR 07:53, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Without having any consideration to anything else, Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch are a partisan source, and have been highly criticized for their accuracy and "spin" by sources like The Economist, the New York Sun, NGO Monitor, Alan Dershowitz, Discover the Networks, University of London, The Conflict Analysis Resource Center, etc. ⇒SWATJester 03:47, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Jaakobou. You have just re-invented the term "secondary source" arbitrarily to suit a political- and ethnic-based conspiracy theory that you seem to have personally contrived. This is no basis for editing a Misplaced Pages article. Kindly take your bizarre and unsupported claims about HRW and "Amnesti" methodology somewhere else. <eleland/talkedits> 02:31, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- You must be very skeptical when you read about human-rights violations in Saddam's Iraq, Sierra Leone, Rwanda, or the Balkans then. Half the stuff we know about those things came from such dubious, discredited, partisan sources as Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch - you must be wondering if any of this stuff even happened! Well at least you have the dependable ADL to inform you there was no Armenian genocide. Or at least there was no Armenian genocide until last year when suddenly Abe Foxman announced: "Upon reflection, the consequences of those actions were indeed tantamount to genocide". Of course, the ADL doesn't get tangled up with historical data, or established facts, or the documentary record, or old-fashioned notions of maintaining political and financial independence, or sending experts to investigate and prepare reports on-site, or anything of the sort. Rather, Foxman sits and "reflects" in the relative solitude of conference calls with Israeli government figures, who then coordinate their own reflections and announcements in consultation with the Turkish president, who until that moment had veto power over historical truth for the ADL under Foxman, who in turn has veto power over historical truth in articles in WP. PR 20:29, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- General note: Secondary sources would be the final reports of the likes of BBC, CNN, Haaretz, JPost etc. Amnesti and other HR groups are simply echoing Palestinian claims and are far worse (blood-libel massacre blunders) as "the army's PR". In retrospect, it might be good to start looking up written sources on this issue (books). Jaakobou 19:14, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, by "2nd degree criticisms" I meant criticisms of the UN/HRW/Amnesty reports, i.e., "criticisms of criticisms". I tried to avoid using "official army PR" as facts. Can you be more specific? -- Nudve (talk) 04:56, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- I will start by admitting that I have not yet had a chance to take a look. However removal of "2nd degree criticisms" leaves only official army PR, so I can't imagine that your draft will be NPOV. It seems like people who believe in retaining and adding non-army source information (or what you refer to as "2nd degree criticisms") have been repelled from this page because of all the incivility issues. I know I have. But I'll be back to review the above.LamaLoLeshLa (talk) 04:41, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've removed this paragraph. Tweaking the images should probably be done in mainspace, since the bots won't let them show on userspace. Let me know when you have further reviewed it. -- Nudve (talk) 17:59, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Is it the paragraph on the passover massacre? My rationale was that it belongs in the article on the operation, but I could just put it back. -- Nudve (talk) 17:32, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
Regarding the Reliability of Human Rights Watch and Amnesty International
Both organizations have been discussed at the RS/N. Please refer to Misplaced Pages:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_15#Human_Rights_Watch. Of note especially is the end of the discussion, where consensus is established rather emphatically that both organizations are indeed eminently reliable for information regarding human rights violations. The rest of the discussion consists mainly of two editors (myself included) trying to argue with a third that "accusations of bias" do not amount to unreliability.PelleSmith (talk) 17:22, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Exactly. Bias has nothing directly to do with reliability as a source. ⇒SWATJester 17:52, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yes but "accusations of bias" do not equate to proof of bias either. These organizations are accused of bias by pretty much every country they report on (surprise surprise) -- in the Middle East that includes pretty much every country. Also please note that you highlighted criticism of "accuracy" above, which would effect reliability were it true. The RS/N discussion would suggest a consensus there that there is no accuracy issue with these organizations, certainly not one subject to any national bias.PelleSmith (talk) 17:55, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure the limited discussion on RS/N quite qualifies as consensus, but differentiating between accusations of bias and proof of bias is an academic task, because there's no clear line where such accusations become proof, and it will be disputed by partisans in any event, so there's not much point in the distinction in the first place. ⇒SWATJester 18:09, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Well consensus during one RS/N discussion isn't the last word on the subject matter. When I used "consensus" I was simply referring to that discussion. Perhaps you should start another discussion at the RS/N or at the NPOV/N or another location where uninvolved editors will respond. Regarding proof vs. accusation -- there is a fairly big distinction between partisan sources accusing some entity of bias and non-partisan sources making similar claims. There is also a fairly big distinction between accusations supported with a fair amount of evidence and those not so supported. The sources you name are mostly of the partisan variety, and of course we do not know the exact claims being made or the context of these claims since you have only enumerated critical sources. Are we talking investigative reportage? Editorializing? etc. I suggest, especially given the previous consensus at the RS/N that you start another discussion there if you wish to re-examine the issue in a forum that isn't as prone to partisanship as an entry talk page.PelleSmith (talk) 18:20, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Should you take this advice I will gladly stay out of the discussion as well.PelleSmith (talk) 18:22, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Err, I'm not an "involved editor." I have not edited the article. My only substantive edit to the talk page was a tangent related to the reliability of a source. So Please keep that in mind. Similarly, the statement that the sources I name are "mostly" of the partisan variety is simply not correct, when confronted with sources like The Economist, University of London, and major US newspaper. Some of the other support may have accusations itself of bias a specific direction, but none are explicitly partisan sources, and it's all disputable anyway. But as I said before, it's a tangent, and a deep argument has nothing really to do with the article itself, and in order to remain an uninvolved editor, I'm not intending to pursue it further. ⇒SWATJester 02:48, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- Well you and I are both "involved" on the talk page in question -- right here, right now -- whether or not we have any other edits to this entry or talk page. All I meant by uninvolved was someone not a party to the original conversation we are having or to editing this entry. I'm not sure The New York Sun was ever a "major US newspaper". But from the sources you enumerate as certainly non-partisan context is extremely important. You claim that none of the other sources are "explicitly partisan" in this area. Eh hem. Here is the first line of the lead of NGO Monitor: NGO Monitor is an Israeli non-governmental organization with the stated aim of stopping "certain self-declared 'humanitarian NGOs'" from promoting agendas which are perceived as anti-Israel. I'm not sure you can get more partisan on this subject matter than that. Discover the Networks is one of David Horowitz's projects. Horowitz is also clearly "explicitly partisan" on this subject matter, and the same goes for Alan Dershowitz who has a history of public commentary that is completely pro-Israeli. HRW and AI may in fact have a bias ... against human rights abuses. They have no nationalistic, ethnic or religious bias however, and that is what you, are alleging through these sources. Some of these sources themselves have a very clear nationalistic bias, which is in the public record and which by denying or attempting to downplay you make a very odd impression of your own understanding of the issues at stake.PelleSmith (talk) 12:27, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- Err, I'm not an "involved editor." I have not edited the article. My only substantive edit to the talk page was a tangent related to the reliability of a source. So Please keep that in mind. Similarly, the statement that the sources I name are "mostly" of the partisan variety is simply not correct, when confronted with sources like The Economist, University of London, and major US newspaper. Some of the other support may have accusations itself of bias a specific direction, but none are explicitly partisan sources, and it's all disputable anyway. But as I said before, it's a tangent, and a deep argument has nothing really to do with the article itself, and in order to remain an uninvolved editor, I'm not intending to pursue it further. ⇒SWATJester 02:48, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure the limited discussion on RS/N quite qualifies as consensus, but differentiating between accusations of bias and proof of bias is an academic task, because there's no clear line where such accusations become proof, and it will be disputed by partisans in any event, so there's not much point in the distinction in the first place. ⇒SWATJester 18:09, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yes but "accusations of bias" do not equate to proof of bias either. These organizations are accused of bias by pretty much every country they report on (surprise surprise) -- in the Middle East that includes pretty much every country. Also please note that you highlighted criticism of "accuracy" above, which would effect reliability were it true. The RS/N discussion would suggest a consensus there that there is no accuracy issue with these organizations, certainly not one subject to any national bias.PelleSmith (talk) 17:55, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
- Exactly. Bias has nothing directly to do with reliability as a source. ⇒SWATJester 17:52, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
It's very sad to me that on WP these two orgs are considered reliable sources of info and CAMERA is not. When it comes to HRW and AI, I find the work done at NGO Monitor to be solid:
Here's info. from NGO Monitor on HRW:
- Website: www.hrw.org
- Founded 1988 (originally Helsinki Watch, founded in 1978); claimed an annual budget of over $50 million in 2005.
- Based in New York, headed by Kenneth Roth.
- 1997 Nobel Peace Prize for Campaign to Ban Landmines.
- CLAIM: "The hallmark and pride of Human Rights Watch is the even-handedness and accuracy of our reporting. To maintain our independence, we do not accept financial support from any government or government-funded agency."
- In contrast, detailed NGO Monitor analyses demonstrate the disproportionate condemnations of Israeli security policy.
- HRW was an active participant in the 2001 Durban conference, and continues to campaign in favor of boycotts and other measures against Israel.
Here's info. from NGO Monitor on Amnesty International:
- Website: www.amnesty.org
- Founded in 1961 by British lawyer, Peter Benenson.
- Amnesty describes itself as a "worldwide movement of people who campaign for internationally recognized human rights for all."
- Amnesty International claims to be "Independent of any government, political ideology, economic interest or religion… it does not support or oppose any government or political system."
- During the Second Lebanon War in 2006, Amnesty unjustifiably accused Israel of “war crimes” and “deliberate attacks on civilians,” and relied on Lebanese “eyewitnesses” to allege that Hezbollah did not operate in population centers.
- In 2007, Amnesty continued to disproportionately single out Israel for condemnation, focusing solely on the conflict with the Palestinians, misrepresenting the complexity of the conflict and ignoring more severe human rights violations in the region.
- Amnesty International distorts international law – misusing terms like “collective punishment,” “occupying power” and “disproportionate” – in its condemnations of Israel’s Gaza policy.
- In the fiscal year ending March 31, 2007, AI reported an operating budget of approximately £30 million. In prior years, this sum represented "approximately one quarter of the estimated income likely to be raised during the year by the movement´s national sections." The majority of the funds come from individual donors, and Amnesty International does not accept donations from governments or political parties.
It is my hope that anyone who is truly trying to be objective will look into the detailed reports found there. --Einsteindonut (talk) 03:34, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- As to why CAMERA is not considered reliable you may wish to familiarize yourself with this: Committee_for_Accuracy_in_Middle_East_Reporting_in_America#Misplaced Pages. Of course there are more substantive issues that transcend that little fiasco but after that happened I'm not sure Misplaced Pages can or will ever consider them as credible. NGO Monitor is quite possibly the most partisan organization within the context of this discussion. They are basically an organization with the political goal of discrediting human rights organizations that come out with statements critical of Israel.PelleSmith (talk) 12:32, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm very familiar with the case and I don't think CAMERA did anything wrong to try to get volunteers involved with WP to help in the extreme bias against Israel readily found here because of these very issues. There sanctions against those involved were completely unfair while the folks working with the Electronic Intifida seem to have gotten off with no problems. Typical "wiki justice." --Einsteindonut (talk) 01:09, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- I think we don't need to go very far with the credibility issues. The problem with the Jenin 2002 incident is that non of these human rights organizations took measures to validate claims which were later found to be bogus blood-libels. This is really not about general reliability but about reliability towards the discussed event - which is clearly lacking. Jaakobou 14:08, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- Good point, Jaakobou. I do think it's important to consider that HWR and AI have only helped to fuel a lot of the blood-libels. It would be helpful if more WP editors could pay more attention to legitimate sources like CAMERA, HonestReporting, and NGO Monitor when looking at these issues rather than slanted left-wing sources which only help fuel misinformation on complex situation in the Middle East for their own biased political reasons. I have found so much of these RS material is from the extreme fringe left. I would hope that more editors at least make an attempt for neutrality, but those who are honestly after it seem very few and far between (maybe b/c of the CAMERA case where WP sanction people for trying to get involved?) Pathetic. Trust me, there's quite a lot of evidence of organized pro-Palestinian campaigns behind the scenes as well. --Einsteindonut (talk) 01:09, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- Can I assume that an editor who suggests that avowedly partisan and nationalist campaign groups like CAMERA, HonestReporting and NGO Monitor are "legitimate sources" but implies that mainstream human rights groups, and presumably certain mainstream media sources as well, are the "extreme fringe left" is having a little joke? Neutrality does not mean "agrees with my political viewpoint" you know. --Nickhh (talk) 08:31, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
Original introduction
The current introduction is, to say the least, quite biased. Almost any news report or summary of the battle in Jenin first goes on to discuss Palestinian claims of a massacre. That was the most significant, most publicized, and most stressed part of this event.
For starters, my edit is entirely sourced, so one must have good reasons to remove those sources. The introduction that another user keeps reverting to is flawed in other ways besides what I just mentioned above. It says that subsequent "Israeli investigations" did not find evidence of a massacre. This is VERY misleading. ALL investigations did not find any evidence of a massacre. It further only mentions criticism of Israel from human rights groups, when both the UN and these interest groups criticized Palestinian militants for a number of things during the battle, including endangering Palestinian civilian life. That is not a fair representation, not to mention very inaccurate. To include all points and give an accurate representation of the reception of the battle and a basic representation of these investigations. --Shamir1 (talk) 18:27, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you for your comments. Here's my reply:
- Misplaced Pages is not a newspaper. The history book I used, for one, does not start with the claims of massacre. IMO, the article should start with established facts, and only later move on to (ultimately unsubstantiated) claims. The lead does mention - in summary, of course - those claims.
- Just because it's sourced doesn't mean it should go in the lead, which should be a concise summary of the article.
- As for the "Israeli investigations", I don't mind dropping the word "Israeli".
- The lead doesn't mention criticism, only the aforementioned allegations of massacre.
Cheers. -- Nudve (talk) 18:38, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
- Using one source, one history book, should not drop all other sources from contributing to the lead. I only included plain facts in the introduction, this was in fact, based on an introduction that was used for this article for a long time. The current introduction seems very biased for the reasons I pointed out about. The media controversy and claims of a massacre were the most stressed and yet it is barely mentioned here at all. The closing statement in the introduction: "Subsequent Israeli investigations found no evidence to substantiate these charges; however, international human rights organizations such as Human Rights Watch and Amnesty International alleged that war crimes had occurred." To "substantiate" these charges? Please tell me exactly what "history book' is this? To correctly reflect reality we would say that Palestinian claims of massacre were never corroborated and that several investigations found no evidence of a massacre at all. That sentence is filled with weasel words.
- Secondly, it only mentions criticism of Israel (from special interest groups/NGOs) in this case, when these same NGOs had a fair share of criticism of Palestinians in Jenin. If you add a short blurb about allegations raised against Israel from these groups, then give an accurate reflection of the report and add a blurb about alleged Palestinian misconduct. Much of the information here in the introduction is selective at best. --Shamir1 (talk) 23:45, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
- If you prefer "corroborated" to "substantiate", that's fine. I'm not sure I understand your point about the criticism of the Palestinians. First you say that the allegations of massacre are the most important aspect of the incident, and then you say that the criticism of the Palestinians should be given as much weight as the allegations of massacre. As I said, the lead summarizes the article, which has a section on the allegations of massacre. The NGOs' accusations are brought within the general context of all of the reports and investigations. HRW and AI's reports are not by themselves are not important enough (and, according to some - see above - not reliable enough) to be given that much weight. Therefore, they are not in the article, and not in the lead. Which words in that sentence are weasel words? Also, this particular sentence is not mine, but a residue from the previous version.
- I'd like to take this opportunity to elaborate on my rationale for rewriting the article. I felt it had too much of what I would call "allegations of no-massacre". IMO, the article should describe what happened, not what didn't happen. If the description of the battle doesn't include a massacre, then that should be enough. No need to "spell it out" for the readers. That makes the article look partisan. -- Nudve (talk) 06:34, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- Agree with Nudve. The lead is not supposed to document rumors, but facts. Otolemur crassicaudatus (talk) 07:18, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- If you prefer "corroborated" to "substantiate", that's fine. I'm not sure I understand your point about the criticism of the Palestinians. First you say that the allegations of massacre are the most important aspect of the incident, and then you say that the criticism of the Palestinians should be given as much weight as the allegations of massacre. As I said, the lead summarizes the article, which has a section on the allegations of massacre. The NGOs' accusations are brought within the general context of all of the reports and investigations. HRW and AI's reports are not by themselves are not important enough (and, according to some - see above - not reliable enough) to be given that much weight. Therefore, they are not in the article, and not in the lead. Which words in that sentence are weasel words? Also, this particular sentence is not mine, but a residue from the previous version.
- There is the issue that a big chunk of the battle's claim to notability came from the blood libels. I think there is room to mention it's claim to notability in the lead. Jaakobou 14:11, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- Firstly, I think the battle would certainly have been notable even without the allegations of massacre. Secondly, about half the lead is pretty much dedicated to them. -- Nudve (talk) 15:25, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- There is the issue that a big chunk of the battle's claim to notability came from the blood libels. I think there is room to mention it's claim to notability in the lead. Jaakobou 14:11, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
Who here is documenting "rumors"? It is a fact that rumors were made up. That is mentioned in nearly every report, investigation, news story, or what have you on the battle in Jenin. When I said allegations of a massacre are important, I didnt say it is the only thing important, as you may suggest. The AI and HRW reports in the lead are in the version you are asking for; I dont know why youre acting as if I am fighting to put them in when they are there. What I am saying (and I was very clear about this), is that IF you add a blurb in the lead about allegations of Israeli military misconduct from these organizations (as you currently have it), then give a fair representation of these reports from the same investigations and add a blurb about allegations of Palestinian misconduct during the battle in Jenin. It is a matter of accuracy and proper reflection of the source.. And again, this one "history book", which I question, should not cancel out the contributions from so many other reputable Internet sources. --Shamir1 (talk) 22:04, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
- Fine. I've just copyedited it and formatted the refs. -- Nudve (talk) 07:04, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
Neutrality and balance in lead and elsewhere
I've popped in and out of this article in the past (as pretty much a neutral and objective editor, even if I've not always been seen that way by some) and checked back on it just now. I'm sorry, but the problems in the lead are worse now than they were. As currently written it presents a seriously one-sided view of events here. For example -
- The second paragraph is devoted purely to prior Israeli casualties and explaining the Israeli justification for the assault in considerable detail. This a) has nothing to do with the battle itself of course and is almost certainly undue weight in the lead, and b) ignores the fact that there are two sides in this conflict, each of whom was inflicting considerable damage on each other before the attacks on the West Bank.
- The third paragraph also is based almost entirely on Israeli claims, eg about the number of militants/fighters killed, about the IDF's efforts to avoid civilian casualties. Even those claims not sourced to the Israeli side appear to be there to highlight negative claims about Palestinian conduct (eg re booby traps). This totally downplays the fact that civilians were killed as a result of direct IDF actions, with some allegedly buried with their houses, others shot in the street etc. That doesn't need to be flagged up as "evil IDF murderers", but equally it shouldn't be brushed over.
- The fourth paragraph talks pretty simplistically about "uncorroborated" Palestinian allegations of deliberate massacres, war crimes and extensive civilian casualties. In reality, Israeli officials were also talking about 100s of people possibly having been killed at the time, and journalists were barred from the camp leading to confusion and also suspicion in the media that the IDF "had something to hide". While it did become clear eventually that there had been no deliberate, widespread massacre in the camp, equally civilians were killed, much of the camp was flattened and individual cases of alleged war crimes were documented (as above). None of this is recorded in the lead as it is.
- The fifth paragraph purports to be a round up of later assessments, and again comes out as "move along, nothing to see here .. those Palestinians made it all up". As ever, the reality is more complex than that, both as to why the original massacre claims gained currency and as to what actually happened in the camp. In addition of course there is a still a body of opinion around the world - it doesn't matter whether you or I think they are right or wrong - that regards an attack on a residential area which kills around twenty civilians as a "massacre".
Sources for all of the above points are already scattered throughout the main parts of the article, and nothing of what I've said is really disputed as far as I'm aware - it's simply about marshalling and summarising the existing known info in order to get a balanced lead. I'm tempted to tag the page for neutrality, but I'll lay off doing that. And can people stop using the phrase "blood libel" on talk pages? I don't see how it helps anything. Thanks. --Nickhh (talk) 08:22, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- Would you support a revert to this version? -- Nudve (talk) 08:46, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- It's definitely a better version in my view, as it covers the issue quite broadly (as a lead should, rather than going into intense detail that is better dealt with further down) and doesn't seem to make one-sided judgements about the background to the attack, the assault itself or the disputes that developed over what had occurred in the camp. I'd quibble with one or two of the points in it, but wouldn't everyone? For example, it duplicates the point about the stream of suicide bombers reportedly coming from Jenin, and probably does need a quick note on the final assessment of casualties and consequences, eg -
- The Battle of Jenin took place from April 3 to April 11, 2002 in the refugee camp of Jenin, in the West Bank. It was fought between the Israel Defense Forces (IDF) and Palestinian forces as part of Operation Defensive Shield, during the Second Intifada.
- As part of the operation, which involved invasions of cities and towns all over the West Bank, Israel targeted Jenin's refugee camp, after it determined that the city had "served as a launch site for numerous terrorist attacks against both Israeli civilians and Israeli towns and villages in the area",
including the dispatch of 28 suicide bombers since the start of the Second Intifada.
- As part of the operation, which involved invasions of cities and towns all over the West Bank, Israel targeted Jenin's refugee camp, after it determined that the city had "served as a launch site for numerous terrorist attacks against both Israeli civilians and Israeli towns and villages in the area",
- The IDF denied entry to journalists and human rights organizations, leading to a rapid cycle of rumors that a massacre had occurred. Jenin remained sealed for days after the invasion. Stories of civilians being buried alive in their homes as they were demolished, and of smoldering buildings covering crushed bodies, spread throughout the Arab world. Various casualty figures circulated, reaching into the mid-hundreds. Palestinian sources described the events as "the Jenin massacre", and international media and human rights organizations expressed concerns that a massacre had taken place.
- Subsequent
Israeliinvestigations found no evidence to substantiatethese chargesclaims that a widespread, deliberate massacre had taken place. However large areas of the camp were destroyed and of the xx Palestinians killed in the attack, up to yy were thought to be civilians. zz IDF soldiers were killed. International human rights organizations such as Human Rights Watch and Amnesty International alleged that war crimes had occurred and criticised the conduct of both sides.
- Subsequent
- I don't want to get over-involved here again, but those are my brief thoughts FWIW. --Nickhh (talk) 09:52, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- Actually on reflection, I think I am being a little overgenerous in aiming for balance by suggesting that HRW & AI criticised both sides, based on my memories of them having raised the whole houses-rigged-to-explode issue. In fact the main thrust of both reports, having just checked the HRW & AI websites and run over the headline coverage of the reports in the mainstream media at the time, was overwhelmingly that they were accusing the IDF of having committed war crimes and causing the deaths of civilians. --Nickhh (talk) 10:45, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- Small comment about "up to" and HRW and AI reliability for the lead. I think we're already giving undue credence to the unverified claims and we should add the initial claims of "thousands massacred" next to these assertions so that their true credence in regards to Jenin would be clear. Either that or we go by my original suggestion of leaving their "Human Rights" propaganda issue out for the body of the article. Jaakobou 10:54, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- So while other editors are discussing and agreeing specific edits in detail, you chip in briefly to say you are merely making a general "comment" .. and then suddenly dive in regardless and make major changes without any discussion or agreement? Not good practice I'd have thought. Problems with what you've done -
- 1) You've erased any mention of civilian casualties
- 2) You've confused the issues by suggesting that because there was no (widespread, deliberate) massacre, that human rights groups are wrong in "holding on" to allegations about war crimes. That's just a logical non-sequiter, the points are totally different. Just because it turned out that 100s of civilians weren't killed, as was feared and suggested by many sources including Israeli ones, it doesn't mean that none were. I know that is the narrative favoured in some quarters, but it can't have prominence here.
- 3) You've mangled the English (for example - rumours cannot "purport" a massacre, or indeed anything else)
- 4) You've removed the undisputed fact that the IDF barred entry to the camp, so it now simply says the "camp remained sealed" as if it were due to an act of God
- 5) You've inserted a reference into the lead which is not needed, and in any event appears to be a single example of particulary OTT comment from one Palestinian official, from which you've then created the most exaggerated text you can. This is undue weight of course, by any definition. Most Palestinian officials were talking about 100s not 1000s, and even then were frequently using this figure to refer to casualties of "Defensive Shield" in its entirety.
- 6) You've also left it as suggesting that only (mendacious) Palestinians and (biased) human rights organisations were giving casualty stats that turned out to be wrong, or using the word massacre in some capacity (note as well I'm not sure even how many of these specifically used the phrase "the Jenin massacre"). You know full well of course that Israeli sources were also using similar figures and language. It was also a time of intense confusion - hence why the previous wording was, correctly, much looser while also being more accurate.
- I'm bored of listing them now. --Nickhh (talk) 15:23, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- So while other editors are discussing and agreeing specific edits in detail, you chip in briefly to say you are merely making a general "comment" .. and then suddenly dive in regardless and make major changes without any discussion or agreement? Not good practice I'd have thought. Problems with what you've done -
(outdent)
Replies to the raised concerns:
1) We don't know the number of civilian casualties. Writing the highest possible number is propaganda. I'm willing to add a note that the number of civilians is between X-Y as per 52-56 casualties.
2) I did not say they were wrong, that is your own assumption. A quote reasonable assumption considering that they hadn't fact-checked any of the claims and many of the reported claims were found to be baloney.
3) I'm open to suggestions where English is the problem. I never claimed to be an authority on the matter.
4) What is wrong with "camp remained sealed"? I think it's a clear issue but I'm open to external opinion by uninvolved users to this issue.
5) There are obviously more sources repeating the 'thousands' claim, but mostly they are people repeating the Palestinian claim rather than a head official making it. Thousands is thousands and no one suggested high numbers regarding Nablus. His claims were about Jenin just as Erekat's Live-on-CNN promise of more than 500 "massacred" - in Jenin. Please also note that the mentioned line does not say thousands 'in Jenin' but is written in a more generic tone as the Palestinian speaker used.
6) Gideon Levy is a "Israeli source" - and a couple misquotes on Haaretz were later retracted. Was there any Israeli using the term thousands or was it the Israelis saying that Palestinians are falsly trying to portray the situation as a massacre - I believe sources show it's the latter. To further clarify, I'm quite certain that Israeli officials did no describe the event as a massacre in the international media (current phrasing of article).
Hope I answered all your concerns. Jaakobou 16:10, 4 October 2008 (UTC) clarify 16:12, 4 October 2008 (UTC) further clarify. 16:16, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- This is the precise reason why I chose not to go into detail in the lead in the first place. It worked fine until Shamir1 rewrote the lead unilaterally. I eventually went along with his changes because it seemed at the time like consensus was with him. Now that this is no longer the case, perhaps we can agree on the "minimalist" lead? -- Nudve (talk) 18:52, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- I don't know of any sources claiming there were thousands killed. The UN report said it was 497 in total, and it was widely believed that an Israeli shot dead the head of reconstruction, Iain Hook in Nov 2002, along with 13 other UN workers and serious injury to the Irish woman. PR 19:49, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- "Secretary-General of Palestinian Authority Cabinet Ahmed Abdel Rahman said, "They took hundreds of bodies to northern Israeli to hide their massacre they committed against our people. "This massacre is not less than the massacres committed against the Palestinian people in the refugee camps of Sabra and Shatila in Lebanon." He said thousands of Palestinians were either killed and buried in massive graveyards or smashed under houses destroyed in Jenin and Nablus."
- "Palestinian minister Saeb Erekat said Israelis killed three thousand Palestinians, then lowered the number to five hundred." Donna Rosenthal. The Israelis: Ordinary People in an Extraordinary Land, Free Press, 2003, p. 69. Jayjg 07:11, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- This leads me to believe it's no longer possible to discuss the reliability of sources (even mention of a conviction for denial will lead to an immediate block!).
- So editors will have to judge for themselves whether the project should rely on sources that say "The Nazism of Abu Mazen" Nazism ... still maintains a lethal grip on the minds and souls of many Arabs, particularly the ruling classes. As Israelis know all too well, Nazism was exported to and took root in the Arab world".
- Meanwhile, of course, we have lots and lots of excellent material on this event from even the most acceptable sources, and they cannot be used either in case we document this event accurately. Sadly, more and more of the media record is being cleansed from the archives as every kind of human rights observer and reporter and editor is smeared, sometimes with the openly avowed intention of breaking them personally. PR 09:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC)\
- 1) Newsmax is a news-source aggregator. The opinion piece you note is just one opinion piece from another source, and using search engines to cherry-pick what you imagine to be extremist is disingenuous at best. The source for the quote regarding Ahmed Abdel Rahman is a United Press International story, which is a reliable source. They made these claims of thousands killed. Accept it and move on.
- 2) Stop your ridiculous soap-boxing. I mean it. Stop now. When you comment, comment only and specifically on suggested article text changes, and bring material related only and specifically to that change alone. If you don't stop disrupting article Talk: pages, I am going to start taking more serious action. Jayjg 15:13, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- There were one or two instances of people talking about a death toll in the 1000s, but these were not the main claims (and as I've said it was not always clear whether they were talking about the whole range of attacks, or simply Jenin. Indeed the Rahman quote cited above is noted as including Nablus). As I have also pointed out many times - I remember the coverage from the time very well - it was a time of real confusion and chaos, as battlegrounds usually are, and no-one really knew what was going on. The IDF had closed the camp to the outside world, there were rumours floating around as well as official and semi-official briefings from both sides talking about 100s being killed. Palestinian spokesmen seemed to have a real fear of another Sabra and Shatila, whether that was justified or not. Anyway, the problem in respect of the article is that the more (as it turned out) inaccurate claims from Palestinians are being highlighted with undue weight in a bid, it would seem, to suggest that the reality of what happened was rather trivial by comparison. Some edits are trying to build a narrative that says "Palestinians and human rights groups deliberately exaggerated what was going on, those reports turned out to be wrong, ergo nothing bad happened in the camp at all and anyone who suggests it did is clinging to a refuted version of events". As ever the real world of events is more complicated and nuanced than that - hence the lead needs to record the basic facts (eg the incursions, the initial confusion about casualties, the final casualty count including the real concerns about civilian deaths) but also be fairly broad and minimalist in what it says, which is where myself & Nudve at least came to an agreement. Quite apart from all the above, leads should of course be concise and clear anyway. I'll remove the POV tag, but personally I'd like to see the lead go back more or less to the recently agreed version prior to these changes. --Nickhh (talk) 08:18, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Secretary-General of Palestinian Authority Cabinet Ahmed Abdel Rahman and Palestinian minister and spokesman Saeb Erekat are not just random inconsequential voices. Jayjg 15:13, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Regardless if the claims were deliberate of not, the lead is writing this as rumors without ascribing intentions - i.e. "Various casualty figures circulated" does not ascribe intentionality and it is explained that the camp was closed (please also see my reply to point no.5 above). The rumors, a mixture of true concern, elevation of martyrdom (read: experience dramatization), and a bit of a deplorable war-time tactic; are not being explored for their reasoning within the lead paragraph and we even justify them by adding the note that the camp was sealed (as if that's any type of justification for starting out a baseless global blood-libel). What is written is that the rumors were being reported/echoed/circulated as official claims by Palestinian officials as well as Human Rights activists in the international media. This is a very mild and neutral description of the events. Jaakobou 11:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I don't know of any sources claiming there were thousands killed. The UN report said it was 497 in total, and it was widely believed that an Israeli shot dead the head of reconstruction, Iain Hook in Nov 2002, along with 13 other UN workers and serious injury to the Irish woman. PR 19:49, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
(move left) First of all, those articles are behind a paywall, so I can't really evaluate their importance. Anyway, I'm not sure I share your concerns. There really was a fog of war in Jenin, and I doubt that the IDF spokesman was motivated by the mixture you mentioned above. It's a bit unfair to suggest that all the newspapers cited were involved in a global blood-libel. The allegations are already described as such, and stressing out the fact that they were unsubstantiated may give the reader a feeling that the article is slanted. -- Nudve (talk) 12:51, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- The version of the lead suggested by Nickhh at 09:52, 4 October 2008 above looks good to me. I would replaced "after it determined" with "after it deemed", as I've just done in the article; or with "after it decided based on investigation" or "after it stated", etc.; since "after it determined" seems to me to imply that what they stated was necessarily true, and I don't think the term "terrorist" is NPOV, so Misplaced Pages can't assert the Israeli quote.
- Since apparently there is a POV according to which there may be large numbers of civilian casualties buried under the bulldozed ruins, I would change "of the xx Palestinians killed in the attack" in Nickhh's version to "of the 52–56 Palestinians estimated killed in the attack". I would change "up to yy were thought to be civilians" to "about 5–26 of whom were estimated to be civilians". This source (<ref name="israelinsider">) says that 23 IDF soldiers were killed, so I would change "zz IDF soldiers were killed" to "23 IDF soldiers were reported killed." ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 13:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Comment by Jaakobou:
- Status of discussion: I don't mean to be offensive, but I'm getting the feeling that misinformation has crept into this discussion while the new text hasn't been read with an external, uninvolved perspective.
- Clarifying the issues: The 'fog of war' is already mentioned alongside the claims of "thousands massacred". I don't know what IDF spokesman is supposedly quoted here - but no IDF spokesperson went ahead on international media with an official statement alleging a massacre of thousands in Jenin.
- Request of a second review: Please review the current version and make your points in accordance to cite-able material and the written text. Please avoid adding personal interpretations of the text which are not written in it. e.g. there is no assertion to a global blood-libel in the text.
- Other versions: Coppertwig, I'd appreciate some explanation to the advantage in the version suggested by Nickhh. I note to you that he's made a few erroneous suggestions regarding the text and his personal interpretations of it and I've countered these misconceptions by clarifying the text and linking to 3 relevant sources.
- With respect, Jaakobou 14:14, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- The IDF spokesman in question is Ron Kitri, as is mentioned in the article. He indeed said hundreds, not thousands. The "global blood-libel" was quoted from your previous post on this talk page, not the article. -- Nudve (talk) 14:42, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- He said "hundreds" of casualties, meaning both killed and wounded, as was quickly clarified by the IDF. Jayjg 15:13, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- It seems he did say that hundreds were apparently killed, and yes, his statement was retracted. Again, I'm not trying to support the allegations. I'm just saying that at that time, one did not have to be a blood-libeler to suspect that the death toll was much higher than it actually was, that's all. -- Nudve (talk) 15:26, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- He was speaking in a foreign language, he accidentally used the word "killed" for "casualty", and in English, "casualty" means killed or wounded, but is popularly thought of as meaning "killed". The statement was very quickly clarified, as opposed to the grossly inflated Palestinian claims, which were abandoned only with great reluctance, and even then not abandoned at all by many, including some regular commenters on this Talk: page. Jayjg 15:36, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- It seems he did say "200 killed" in Hebrew, and then retracted. Again, I'm not saying there were hundreds killed, and it's quite possible that some Palestinians deliberately inflated the numbers. I was just saying that the lead shouldn't suggest that all inflated estimates were/are malicious. -- Nudve (talk) 15:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- You make a good point, but I doubt Kitri's statement, and quick retraction, had any impact on the worldwide condemnation, demonstrations, etc. that targeted Israel. You can be sure that it was the Palestinian statements, combined with a general prejudice against Israel, that were responsible for that. Jayjg 16:15, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm puzzled, I thought it was statements like this from Time Magazine that did it: "The bumptious Prime Minister of Israel outdid himself ... used language that was unusually bald. "The Palestinians must be hit, and it must be very painful," he said. "We must cause them losses, victims, so that they feel a heavy price." He went on to do just that, unleashing a broader military offensive than anything seen so far in the past 17 months of fighting." Even the US, Colin Powell criticised him for it. PR 17:32, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- No, you're not "puzzled", you're just soapboxing again. It's unlikely that an article in Time magazine, printed weeks before the events in Jenin, and discussing total deaths of just over 100 on the Palestinian side, and around 50 on the Israeli side, would cause people to imagine a massacre of hundreds or thousands had happened in Jenin. Please stop wasting everyone's time. Jayjg 20:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm puzzled, I thought it was statements like this from Time Magazine that did it: "The bumptious Prime Minister of Israel outdid himself ... used language that was unusually bald. "The Palestinians must be hit, and it must be very painful," he said. "We must cause them losses, victims, so that they feel a heavy price." He went on to do just that, unleashing a broader military offensive than anything seen so far in the past 17 months of fighting." Even the US, Colin Powell criticised him for it. PR 17:32, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- You make a good point, but I doubt Kitri's statement, and quick retraction, had any impact on the worldwide condemnation, demonstrations, etc. that targeted Israel. You can be sure that it was the Palestinian statements, combined with a general prejudice against Israel, that were responsible for that. Jayjg 16:15, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- It seems he did say "200 killed" in Hebrew, and then retracted. Again, I'm not saying there were hundreds killed, and it's quite possible that some Palestinians deliberately inflated the numbers. I was just saying that the lead shouldn't suggest that all inflated estimates were/are malicious. -- Nudve (talk) 15:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- He was speaking in a foreign language, he accidentally used the word "killed" for "casualty", and in English, "casualty" means killed or wounded, but is popularly thought of as meaning "killed". The statement was very quickly clarified, as opposed to the grossly inflated Palestinian claims, which were abandoned only with great reluctance, and even then not abandoned at all by many, including some regular commenters on this Talk: page. Jayjg 15:36, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- It seems he did say that hundreds were apparently killed, and yes, his statement was retracted. Again, I'm not trying to support the allegations. I'm just saying that at that time, one did not have to be a blood-libeler to suspect that the death toll was much higher than it actually was, that's all. -- Nudve (talk) 15:26, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- He said "hundreds" of casualties, meaning both killed and wounded, as was quickly clarified by the IDF. Jayjg 15:13, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- The IDF spokesman in question is Ron Kitri, as is mentioned in the article. He indeed said hundreds, not thousands. The "global blood-libel" was quoted from your previous post on this talk page, not the article. -- Nudve (talk) 14:42, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
(Edit conflict & reset indent). Agreed - I don't see anyone here maintaining that 100s or even 1000s of people were killed in Jenin, so I have no idea what you are talking about Jayjg. The point being made is that people on all sides did at one point or another - for whatever reason, and in whatever context - talk about elevated figures, which fed into a cycle of rumours. One or two Palestinians (yes I know Erekat & Rahman are signigicant figures) on occasion appeared to have gone as high as 1000s - although to make the point again, they appear to have been talking about more than just Jenin. This should not be twisted in the article to a suggested narrative of a deliberate, one-sided bid to defame the IDF and the Israeli nation. Equally the fact that most of these claims turned out to be inaccurate in terms of numbers, does not mean that the article should hint that any mainstream 3rd party reaction (eg from AI, HRW) that nonetheless criticised IDF conduct can be discounted. These are separate points. --Nickhh (talk) 16:02, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- You make some valid points, but there can be no question that the death tolls in Jenin, as well as the nature of the IDF activities, were deliberately distorted, by Palestinians from the top ranks to the man in the street, for purely propaganda purposes. I recall reading a contemporary account by Middle East correspondent Stewart Bell, who was actually in Jenin at the time. He was told by local residents that the IDF had murdered hundreds of Palestinians. When asked where the bodies were, he was told they were being kept in a refrigerated truck, at the top of a hill some distance away. Not content to take their word, he insisted on going to the truck and opening it. It was filled with apples. The propaganda war carried out in the name of Jenin is an important part of the entire Battle, and should not be ignored, downgraded, or whitewashed. Jayjg 16:15, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Can you explain why Israeli spokesmen, with access to the camp, were saying there were 250 dead in the camp? PR 16:45, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Can you explain why you state an unnamed "Israeli spokesman" had "access to the camp"? Jayjg 20:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- The article he quotes does not even attribute the 250 to an "Israeli spokesman", but rather to unnamed 'military sources' - which could be Palestinian for all we know. NoCal100 (talk) 21:20, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Can you explain why you state an unnamed "Israeli spokesman" had "access to the camp"? Jayjg 20:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Can you explain why Israeli spokesmen, with access to the camp, were saying there were 250 dead in the camp? PR 16:45, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Arbitrary break
Please quote to me where the text assigns malice to the estimations. I'm not aware that the text does this. Jaakobou 16:31, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- It doesn't. I was referring to this post. I have no objection to the current version if nobody else does. -- Nudve (talk) 16:42, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
(ec) Thank you for your comments, Jaakobou. I've taken a closer look, comparing the current version with Nickhh's proposal.
The first two paragraphs are the same in both versions (except for "deemed").
I agree that simply stating that the camp "remained sealed" fails to attribute this action to a particular party; on the other hand, Nickhh's version seems to me to give undue prominence to "The IDF denied entry" by placing it at the beginning of a paragraph; and asserting that it's the cause of the rumours seems to be OR or at least probably non-NPOV. Also, "reaching into the mid-hundreds" gives the reader more information. I therefore suggest the following for the 3rd paragraph:
- During the fighting, a rapid cycle of rumors purported that a massacre of as many as thousands of Palestinians had occurred. While the IDF denied entry to journalists and human rights organizations during the invasion, stories of civilians being buried alive in their homes as they were demolished, and of smoldering buildings covering crushed bodies, spread throughout the Arab world. Various casualty figures circulated,
reaching into the mid-hundreds, as Palestinian sources, as well as human rights organizations, described the events as "the Jenin massacre" in the international media.
- Comment by Jaakobou regarding 2nd para suggestion:
- If we're changing the number mid paragraph, then it makes little to no sense to the reader and the rumored numbers (not what the media was willing to report) were higher than "mid".
- Israelis were going as high as between 100 and 200 (Kitrey was misquoted). and mostly focused on saying that the Palestinians are lying. I tend to believe that the 'no less than 500 massacred in Jenin' statements by Erekat on CNN as well as the Israeli "they are lying" responses are undue for the lead.
- With respect, Jaakobou 17:21, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Re the last paragraph: To me, the first two sentences give the impression that no deaths occurred. "in the clashes" claims that all deaths were by people fighting, which is not universally accepted. "held on to allegations" seems to me to imply that the allegations are false. "52–56 Palestinians were killed" asserts too much certainty, ignoring Derrick Pounder's POV. I therefore suggest for the last paragraph:
Subsequent investigations found no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place.Overall, 52-56 Palestinians were estimated killed — 5 to approximately 26 of whom estimated as civilians — while 23 IDF soldiers were reported killed as well, and a large area in the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting. Human rights organizations alleged that war crimes had been committed in the fighting and criticized the conduct of both sides.
In reply to Jayjg: it would be interesting to see reliable sources for such statements. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 16:47, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I don't like the separation between 5 and 26. Also, I believe that Human Rights organizations did not verify any of their statements not while the aforementioned Derrick Pounder was alleging a massacre not after wards - it's basically a repetition of the war crime claims made while they were claiming a massacre only that now they added some allegations that the Palestinians made some violations as well. I appreciate your efforts here, but I'm not a fan of these changes. Jaakobou 17:27, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Re "mid-hundreds": good point, it already says "thousands" earlier in the paragraph – I hadn't noticed that – so the "mid-hundreds" bit can be left out.
- How about "approximately 5–26"? I think it's misleading to just say "26", since the source is vague about this number.
- I'm not sure what point you're trying to make. Are you disputing whether Pounder's POV is worth taking into account? Well, Pounder is mentioned later in the article, so if the lead asserts that a certain number were killed, it's contradicting a POV reported later in the article, making the article self-contradictory or implying that Pounder's POV is necessarily wrong, which seems to me to violate NPOV. Do you see any problem with inserting the word "estimated"? I've given a reason to put it in (i.e. NPOV); I'm not aware of any reason to leave it out. It doesn't seem to me to be doing any harm. If you have problems with other parts of the changes I suggested, please specify them too.
- By the way, I don't know what the usual practice is on this page, but I prefer not to have comments interspersed within other comments; and if you do, it may help to use the {{interrupted}} template. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 17:42, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I've taken up on the "approximately" suggestion - it was a fair suggestion. I'll be back for further discussions tomorrow or maybe later today. Cheers, Jaakobou 18:02, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Derek Pounder (forensic expert, the only one known to have visited, examined 2 bodies) said to the BBC: "I must say that the evidence before us at the moment doesn't lead us to believe that the allegations are anything other than truthful and that therefore there are large numbers of civilian dead underneath these bulldozed and bombed ruins that we see." I'm not aware that he retracted any of this, perhaps you can point me to the right places.
- David Holley (military expert with Amnesty) said to the BBC: "it just appears there was no wholesale killing". Then he says: "That is a fact, that is a war crime. You cannot stop medical services from administering to the wounded. These are facts we have at the moment that cannot be disputed and need to be investigated." Then he says: "some very credible witnesses have come forward who have told stories of how they have seen executions. They have seen snipers cutting people down in the streets with clear views of civilians trying to get away from the fighting. These are individual killings that need to be investigated." If we need to quote him saying "no massacre" (and I think he's the only independent visitor who said that) then we should balance it by quoting the other things he said, rather than giving undue weight to the words "no massacre", which are perhaps a minor element of what he said.. PR 18:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I've taken up on the "approximately" suggestion - it was a fair suggestion. I'll be back for further discussions tomorrow or maybe later today. Cheers, Jaakobou 18:02, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- PalestineRemembered,
- I want to thank you for making my point for me about the credibility of the Human Rights organizations in regards to the Jenin allegations against Israel.
- Cheers, Jaakobou 18:45, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Except for the fact the accusations and propaganda were all about "wholesale killings" and "massacres". Remember? On the scale of Sabra and Shatila? As for Holley's "credible witnesses", were these the same ones that claimed a truck full of apples and supplies was actually a truck full of dead bodies? Jayjg 20:49, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Hmm, this seems to have spiralled a little off point into bickering about what's the supposed "truth" rather than focusing on attribution, reliable sourcing and verifiability, and also, more disturbingly, into apparent slurs against any cited witness who happens to be Palestinian. As for the article - the lead as it stands needs, if nothing else, a bit of copyediting. Plus I'm still a little unhappy personally with the substantive changes that Jaakobou made a while back, as per my post higher up. Having said that, I neither want to sit here and carp on the talk page, nor revert those changes and end up in a spat over minor edits, so I'm dropping out. I'm assuming others will tweak the wording, hopefully for the better. --Nickhh (talk) 22:46, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Well, honestly Nick, what do you think of someone who brings, as evidence, a "forensic expert" who found only two bodies, but was quite sure "there are large numbers of civilian dead underneath these bulldozed and bombed ruins that we see", and, in fact, believes him to be correct, despite the fact that the bodies of those alleged civilians have never been found in the six years since Jenin? These kinds of comments move beyond the realm of ridiculous and squarely into that of self-parody. If I didn't know better, I would think he was playing us all for fools for even bothering to respond. Jayjg 23:04, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- One of the autopsies carried out by Professor Pounder was that of Wadah Shalabi, an unarmed man shot in the back in a narrow alleyway after he'd come out and given himself up. Major-General Giora Eiland, Head of the IDF Plans and Policy Directorate, confirms this incident. Israel was given the first names of two of the soldiers who carried out this double killing (a third man miraculously survived by feigning death for an hour). There has been no investigation - the UN team was blocked from Israel.
- Pounder travelled from the UK and was at the the Israeli High Court on the 14th trying to get access for medical organizations. He was finally able to reach the hospital on the 17th, by which time, all the bodies "lay in piles of earth in the hospital grounds, but Professor Pounder was not allowed to enter to carry out forensic examinations" again according to Amnesty.
- There were a number of specific items found in the RS which were introduced for "mediation", above. Perhaps we could have administrator assistance to counter some of the objections raised - it is difficult to credit that "This is just insinuation and hearsay" is an objection based on policy - especially not when the sources are the Telegraph, FOX news and Haaretz. PR 17:02, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
- PR, what does any of that have to do with the still undiscovered "large numbers of civilian dead underneath these bulldozed and bombed ruins that we see"? Nothing, of course. Stop ]. Jayjg 00:12, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
- PalestineRememebred,
- I can't find the part of the Amnesti report that says Wadah Shalabi was shot "after he'd come out and given himself up". I did notice a mention of a suicide bomb belt however. Can you please clarify this part of your note?
- With respect, Jaakobou 18:11, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
- Well, honestly Nick, what do you think of someone who brings, as evidence, a "forensic expert" who found only two bodies, but was quite sure "there are large numbers of civilian dead underneath these bulldozed and bombed ruins that we see", and, in fact, believes him to be correct, despite the fact that the bodies of those alleged civilians have never been found in the six years since Jenin? These kinds of comments move beyond the realm of ridiculous and squarely into that of self-parody. If I didn't know better, I would think he was playing us all for fools for even bothering to respond. Jayjg 23:04, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Hmm, this seems to have spiralled a little off point into bickering about what's the supposed "truth" rather than focusing on attribution, reliable sourcing and verifiability, and also, more disturbingly, into apparent slurs against any cited witness who happens to be Palestinian. As for the article - the lead as it stands needs, if nothing else, a bit of copyediting. Plus I'm still a little unhappy personally with the substantive changes that Jaakobou made a while back, as per my post higher up. Having said that, I neither want to sit here and carp on the talk page, nor revert those changes and end up in a spat over minor edits, so I'm dropping out. I'm assuming others will tweak the wording, hopefully for the better. --Nickhh (talk) 22:46, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Wait a second: the UN report says "at least 52 Palestinians, of whom up to half may have been civilians". We need to get the idea of "at least" into the article: otherwise we're misrepresenting the source. And I think we need to stop saying 26. "Up to half" of "at least 52" is not necessarily 26. It's going to be hard to word it concisely. Here's another try at the last paragraph:
- Subsequent investigations found no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place. Official estimates of overall Palestinian deaths were variously 56 and "at least 52" — of whom up to approximately half may have been civilians — while 23 IDF soldiers were reported killed as well, and a large area in the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting. Human rights organizations alleged that war crimes had been committed in the fighting and criticized the conduct of both sides.
☺ Coppertwig (talk) 01:34, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
- Heyo Coppertwig,
- I'm sorry for the idiom and I'm sure this is not intentional, but it feels like when given a finger, you reach for the whole arm (allow me to exlain...). "Up to" is based on the 'most credible' witnesses who were mostly busy fabricating stories of dead bodies under the rubble or in Army food supply containers and claiming fighters were unarmed civilians (please review the references from above for some examples). Still, I've agreed to a pro-Palestinian presentation of the civillian toll without any criticism to the bogus accounts and I cannot understand on why you refuse to accept this good will gesture and push further for total elimination of the actual civilian casualty tolls. Please clarify your position and why you now suggest we should be writing more than 26 civilian casualties. Jaakobou 01:55, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
Hi. I just wanted to state my opposition to some of the recent changes. I believe that some of these attempts at restoring "neutrality" have gone in excess of neutrality into overt bias in favor of the opposite side. While this article can and should present Israeli and Palestinian narratives of the event in question, it is important that this article distinguish between externally verified fact and unverified one-sided narratives. Moreover, while the article may discuss these unverified narratives, it should not give them undue weight; rumors promulgated by one-side or the other should certainly not be given more prominence in the article than the actual externally verified events which took place. ← Michael Safyan 07:21, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
- Can you be more specific? What undue weight was given to the rumors in the previous lead? Also, a long discussion was held yesterday, and a relative consensus was pretty much agreed on. I respect your objection, but it's not nice to simply revert so far back just because you disagree. Also, you have removed some good later edits and a copyvio tag (which I hope Coppertwig will be willing to retract now, although he has not posted since I changed the text). I don't want to get into an edit war, but I would appreciate some cooperation. Thanks. -- Nudve (talk) 16:59, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
- Heyo Nudve,
- I personally thought we were making some progress until Coppertwig clarified to me that he's unhappy with a slightly pro-Palestinian version and he wants the article written to the Palestinian narrative. It's a shame that some progress has been reverted - I do agree that some major clear-cut issues were removed but I saw some good in the clean version as well. I'm hoping we can get the discussion back on track, but that this time editors will not try to push the "allegations as truth" perspective since it's already been established that this is not only false for the massacre claims but under serious contention for everything else as well. Jaakobou 18:18, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
- Jaakobou, as I already said, I support a "minimalist" lead, since going into detail is bound raise allegations of bias. I could go with either your version or Nickhh's. I also agree with your recent objection to Coppertwig's suggestion to emphasize the "at least" part. However, as I said to Michael Safyan above, I don't like the current - Shamir1's - lead. -- Nudve (talk) 18:37, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
In response to the request for details... the problem with this diff is that it minimizes the rationale for Israeli operations in Jenin while going into major detail (and providing a very sensationalist presentation) of the massacre rumors. If that much detail of the massacre rumors are going to be provided, then a similar amount of detail about the Israeli rationale for Defensive Shield should also be provided. Furthermore, this sensationalist presentation of the rumors leaves the reader wondering how we know that they are rumors and not truths, since the newer version simply says that the claims are unsubstantiated whereas the older version cites the various agencies and individuals who have stated that a massacre did not take place. Additionally, the change completely elides any information about the Passover massacre, which was "the straw that broke the camel's back", so-to-speak, and which was a major motivation -- if not the key motivation -- for the IDF entering Jenin. Also: it is dismissive of the Israeli footage showing a faked funeral, it emphasizes Palestinian suffering and Israeli war crimes while having elided any mention of the Passover massacre, it emphasizes Palestinian rejection of the UN report and continuing claims that a massacre took place while removing almost all of the material refuting the claim that a massacre took place. There are other problems (e.g. it uses the nonsensical phrase "risking civilians"), but those are the main ones. ← Michael Safyan 23:11, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
- First of all, the Passover massacre has its own article. Second, it is important as a rationale for launching Operation Defensive Shield in general, not for this particular battle. Excessive information about it here would be undue, and stating it in the lead would sound "apologetic", when there's no reason for apologetics. Just like not every battle in the Pacific War should detail the Attack on Pearl Harbor. IMO, the fact that the Palestinian leadership rejected the UN report and stuck to the claims of massacre is very notable. Again, the article says, as fact, that there was no massacre, and that the allegations are just allegations, which is why I think adding "refutations" on top of them would be "pushing it". I don't think the article is dismissive of the footage of a fake funeral, but you can rewrite that paragraph if you want. Ditto for specific phrases like "risking civilians" (which was itself a rephrase because Coppertwig suspected copyvio). Anyway, the main issue, as can be seen from this discussion is the lead, and I really don't think there's consensus for the current one. Cheers. -- Nudve (talk) 07:08, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm thinking there is room to add a little more detail into the minimalist version for the reasoning to attack (add the 28 suicide bombers bit and the nickname of the city) and to reduce the rumors section a little as well with a touch more volume to the "no massacre" bit. I remind everyone that this is supposed to be a hint for the article and not the entire detailing of the article. That said, there is no way that the rumors should be told as truthful. I thought we had a reasonable version, though personally, I felt the 'civilians' bonus is what got us into trouble to begin with. Should I make a rewrite suggestion or are there objections to my compromise suggestion? Jaakobou 08:14, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'll repeat as well that while the background is of course relevant to a point, there is indeed a real risk of overloading it. No other WP article does or should go into huge detail in a lead about this sort of thing. In my view the lead itself doesn't need to say much more than "during the second intifada", in the same way - to continue Nudve's point - that the assault on Iwo Jima is said to have taken place simply "during the Second World War". People can link to the second intifada article, and of course more detail can go in a background section in the main part here (and I would add should not merely focus on Israeli casualties, but that's another debate). As for the massacre point - it is I think relevant that very high figures and fears of a Sabra/Shatila were being floated. This was a significant feature of the media coverage at the time, although there is a key separate dispute about the extent to which these claims were some kind of blood libel as opposed to the result for the most part of general confusion; and also I think we still need to bear in mind the distinction between a deliberate, widescale massacre (which did not happen) and an assault on a populated area which nonetheless kills several civilians, some in questionable circumstances (which is what happened). All in all that's why I favoured a lead which, broadly and concisely, says - a) an assault took place during a period of widespread violence and as part of a wider operation; b) there were fears at the time of a serious massacre and a death toll in the 100s (as suggested at one point or another by ALL sides, and given momentum by the closure of the camp), most of which proved incorrect; c) nonetheless once the fog had cleared the evidence suggests that some pretty bad things happened, even if not on the scale originally feared. I know I said I'd drop out, but I hope I'm merely restating my position rather than carping. --Nickhh (talk) 08:54, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- Sure, I'd love to see Jaakobou's suggestion. -- Nudve (talk) 09:16, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- I have a few obligations but will get around to a rewrite suggestion in a few days. Jaakobou 08:46, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
- Sure, I'd love to see Jaakobou's suggestion. -- Nudve (talk) 09:16, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'll repeat as well that while the background is of course relevant to a point, there is indeed a real risk of overloading it. No other WP article does or should go into huge detail in a lead about this sort of thing. In my view the lead itself doesn't need to say much more than "during the second intifada", in the same way - to continue Nudve's point - that the assault on Iwo Jima is said to have taken place simply "during the Second World War". People can link to the second intifada article, and of course more detail can go in a background section in the main part here (and I would add should not merely focus on Israeli casualties, but that's another debate). As for the massacre point - it is I think relevant that very high figures and fears of a Sabra/Shatila were being floated. This was a significant feature of the media coverage at the time, although there is a key separate dispute about the extent to which these claims were some kind of blood libel as opposed to the result for the most part of general confusion; and also I think we still need to bear in mind the distinction between a deliberate, widescale massacre (which did not happen) and an assault on a populated area which nonetheless kills several civilians, some in questionable circumstances (which is what happened). All in all that's why I favoured a lead which, broadly and concisely, says - a) an assault took place during a period of widespread violence and as part of a wider operation; b) there were fears at the time of a serious massacre and a death toll in the 100s (as suggested at one point or another by ALL sides, and given momentum by the closure of the camp), most of which proved incorrect; c) nonetheless once the fog had cleared the evidence suggests that some pretty bad things happened, even if not on the scale originally feared. I know I said I'd drop out, but I hope I'm merely restating my position rather than carping. --Nickhh (talk) 08:54, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
I apologize for a sentence in my proposed draft above, which I am striking out. I had copied the sentence from the article and included it without critical analysis. The Palestinian report submitted to the Secretary-General attached to the UN report says "In addition, it is probable that a massacre and a crime against humanity might have been committed in the Jenin refugee camp ..." There may be other errors in my proposed draft. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 14:38, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- Coppertwig, you really need to start reading more carefully. The sentence you quote above is NOT part of the UN report, but rather the claims of the Palestinian delegation to the UN, attached to the UN report and is clearly labeled as such in the document you are citing, under the heading "Palestinian report submitted to the Secretary-General". The UN report itself says the opposite. NoCal100 (talk) 17:12, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thankyou for doing that, the UN report mentions "massacre" as a given a number of times. Are you aware there's another clear (indeed ridiculous) error in there? The UN report does not say 52-56 dead, it says "55. Press reports ... and subsequent interviews ... suggest that an average of five Palestinians per day died in the first three days of the incursion and that there was a sharp increase in deaths on 6 April. 56. Fifty-two Palestinian deaths had been confirmed by the hospital in Jenin by the end of May 2002. IDF also place the death toll at approximately 52. A senior Palestinian Authority official alleged in mid-April that some 500 were killed, a figure that has not been substantiated in the light of the evidence that has emerged." Similarly, the EU assumes that the 55 bodies are not the final death toll, since there are bodies under the rubble. PR 15:36, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- PR, I'm sure you've read the Amnesty International report, since you've quoted from it several times. This report, written in November 2002, more than 6 months after the event, states very clearly that
. So, if AI says 54 were killed, and all but 1 camp resident is accounted for, whose bodies are supposedly still under the rubble, 6 years afterward? NoCal100 (talk) 17:06, 9 October 2008 (UTC)'After the IDF temporarily withdrew from Jenin refugee camp on 17 April, UNRWA set up teams to use the census lists to account for all the Palestinians (some 14,000) believed to be resident of the camp on 3 April 2002. Within five weeks all but one of the residents was accounted for. '
- When the blizzard of accusations about soap-boxing (aimed just at edits bringing documented information, not speculating on anything) has died down a bit, I'll get back to you on this one. But I won't be able to tell you why Amnesty write "According to hospital lists reviewed by Amnesty International there were 54 Palestinian deaths", when we know, from the same source, that "not a single corpse was brought into the hospital from 5 until 15 April" (and only 10 wounded made it through the blockade in the same period, with similar very small numbers to the Al-Shifa and Al-Razi hospital).
- What we can say with certainty is that the conclusions of the report could be written into the article with far less difficulty: "In Jenin and Nablus the IDF carried out actions which ... are war crimes."
- Or we could sample the conclusions of some of the many observers - even the very few who said "No massacre" leave us in no doubt there were many, many more bodies. 'Bad things did happen - we had no choice' is one in the UK Telegraph "in a reconstruction of the campaign, Philip Jacobson on the West Bank finds that this was no indiscriminate massacre ... The sickening stench of decomposing corpses that hangs over the camp signals that while the final death toll may never be precisely established, there will be more, perhaps many more, names to add to the civilian casualty list." PR 20:40, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- No, please get back to me on this NOW, and stop dodging and soapboxing: if AI says 54 were killed, and all but 1 camp resident is accounted for, whose bodies are supposedly still under the rubble, 6 years afterward? NoCal100 (talk) 21:08, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm puzzled by this apparent demand that I accept every word of the Amnesty report as true, and I'm sure it's some form of personal failing on my part that I have difficulty with this. But I'll grant you the Amnesty people have a high degree of integrity and most of their report is indeed accurate. The Amnesty report's biggest weakness is probably where it's re-publishing the work of some other body, and in those cases we avoid error by going to the source. The BBC makes just this mistake later, telling us that the UN report says "No Massacre", when it clearly does not. PR 23:02, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- I see, you'd rather only accept as true those words which support your POV, but disregard the rest, is that it? Once again: if AI says 54 were killed, and all but 1 camp resident is accounted for, whose bodies are supposedly still under the rubble, 6 years afterward? Will an answer to this be forthcoming anytime soon? NoCal100 (talk) 23:07, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'll accept what Amnesty say for themselves, I'll accept what UNWRA say for themselves. Well, I'll accept what UNWRA say when their staff are no longer shot at, threatened and detained - or indeed shot dead, like Iain Hook, head of reconstruction and some 13 other UN workers in 2002 alone.
- Until that time, we'll just have to write this article to accurately reflect how most journalists and experienced international observers actually reported it, won't we? That's only what policy says we should be doing. PR 18:51, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
- What Amnesty say for themselves is that 54 were killed, and all but one resident of the camp were accounted for by November 02. So, going by what experienced international observers actually report, we can safely state in the article that AT MOST, 55 Palestinians were killed in Jenin, and dispense with the persistent insinuations, that you and other POV-Pushers are attempting to include, that there is some unknown number of civilians still buried beneath the rubble. Let's move on. NoCal100 (talk) 20:49, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
- Why don't we edit the article as if it were part of the Great Soviet Encyclopedia? Then we could cherry-pick sources for the 1% that fits what we want it to say, and ignore the 99% that says something different (and that none of the readers would want to hear anyway). PR 21:04, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
- This indeed seems to be what you are after - seeing as you constantly cherry-pick some nearly random AI quote (when it suits your POV), and yet insist that this very clear statement from AI regarding the number of people killed be ignored. But, no, we are not going to edit the article as if it were part of the Great Soviet Encyclopedia, and we are not going to cherry-pick sources for the 1% that fits what we want it to say. AI says, very clearly, that 54 were killed, and all but one resident of the camp were accounted for by November 02. So, we can safely state in the article that AT MOST, 55 Palestinians were killed in Jenin, and dispense with the persistent insinuations, that you and other POV-Pushers are attempting to include, that there is some unknown number of civilians still buried beneath the rubble. NoCal100 (talk) 21:13, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
- Amnesties report is called "Shielded from scrutiny: IDF violations in Jenin and Nablus". Just one tiny part of it matches the Hasbara version of this story, and it's a quote from people with guns held to their heads, who've never told us the same thing ourselves. Let's write the article according to the people who are able to speak freely - here's an Israeli who took part: "Many people were inside houses we started to demolish. They would come out of the houses we where working on. I didn't see, with my own eyes, people dying under the blade of the D-9. and I didn't see house falling down on live people. But if there were any, I wouldn't care at all. ... I am sure people died inside these houses." PR 17:04, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- We will write this article according to what reliable sources say. We will not ignore information that runs contrary to the POV you wish to push. You are advised, once again, to stop claiming that there are still an unknown number of bodies under the rubble, when reliable sources have said the opposite. There is a limit to the amount of sopaboxing that the community will tolerate, before it sees such soapboxing as disruptive. You are pushing that limit. NoCal100 (talk) 18:28, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- Amnesties report is called "Shielded from scrutiny: IDF violations in Jenin and Nablus". Just one tiny part of it matches the Hasbara version of this story, and it's a quote from people with guns held to their heads, who've never told us the same thing ourselves. Let's write the article according to the people who are able to speak freely - here's an Israeli who took part: "Many people were inside houses we started to demolish. They would come out of the houses we where working on. I didn't see, with my own eyes, people dying under the blade of the D-9. and I didn't see house falling down on live people. But if there were any, I wouldn't care at all. ... I am sure people died inside these houses." PR 17:04, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- This indeed seems to be what you are after - seeing as you constantly cherry-pick some nearly random AI quote (when it suits your POV), and yet insist that this very clear statement from AI regarding the number of people killed be ignored. But, no, we are not going to edit the article as if it were part of the Great Soviet Encyclopedia, and we are not going to cherry-pick sources for the 1% that fits what we want it to say. AI says, very clearly, that 54 were killed, and all but one resident of the camp were accounted for by November 02. So, we can safely state in the article that AT MOST, 55 Palestinians were killed in Jenin, and dispense with the persistent insinuations, that you and other POV-Pushers are attempting to include, that there is some unknown number of civilians still buried beneath the rubble. NoCal100 (talk) 21:13, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
- Why don't we edit the article as if it were part of the Great Soviet Encyclopedia? Then we could cherry-pick sources for the 1% that fits what we want it to say, and ignore the 99% that says something different (and that none of the readers would want to hear anyway). PR 21:04, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
- What Amnesty say for themselves is that 54 were killed, and all but one resident of the camp were accounted for by November 02. So, going by what experienced international observers actually report, we can safely state in the article that AT MOST, 55 Palestinians were killed in Jenin, and dispense with the persistent insinuations, that you and other POV-Pushers are attempting to include, that there is some unknown number of civilians still buried beneath the rubble. Let's move on. NoCal100 (talk) 20:49, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
- I see, you'd rather only accept as true those words which support your POV, but disregard the rest, is that it? Once again: if AI says 54 were killed, and all but 1 camp resident is accounted for, whose bodies are supposedly still under the rubble, 6 years afterward? Will an answer to this be forthcoming anytime soon? NoCal100 (talk) 23:07, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm puzzled by this apparent demand that I accept every word of the Amnesty report as true, and I'm sure it's some form of personal failing on my part that I have difficulty with this. But I'll grant you the Amnesty people have a high degree of integrity and most of their report is indeed accurate. The Amnesty report's biggest weakness is probably where it's re-publishing the work of some other body, and in those cases we avoid error by going to the source. The BBC makes just this mistake later, telling us that the UN report says "No Massacre", when it clearly does not. PR 23:02, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- No, please get back to me on this NOW, and stop dodging and soapboxing: if AI says 54 were killed, and all but 1 camp resident is accounted for, whose bodies are supposedly still under the rubble, 6 years afterward? NoCal100 (talk) 21:08, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
- PR, I'm sure you've read the Amnesty International report, since you've quoted from it several times. This report, written in November 2002, more than 6 months after the event, states very clearly that
The possiblity that there are as yet undiscovered dead is something of a red herring PR - the final death toll is, six years after the events, pretty definitive according to any reliable source. Higher tolls were feared both during the fighting and in the immediate aftermath, but those fears proved unfounded. The point is though that this certainly does not mean a) those fears were unjustified or motivated by malice at the time when they were expressed; or b) that all the 50-plus who were killed were necessarily nasty terrorists who deserved it and were shot in a fair fight. It is even legitimate - whether you or I agree with that subjective description or not - to describe the smaller death toll as constituting a massacre, if a high proportion of those killed were in fact civilians. Hence why I'm opposed to text in the article which definitively says, without qualification, that "there was no massacre", based simply on the reports which pointed out (correctly) that the death toll was much lower than initially thought. "No widespread massacre" or "no massacre in the hundreds", fine - but not simply "no massacre". There are plenty of WP articles whose actual title is "The XXX Massacre" where a relatively small number of people were killed. And NoCal, I don't see lots of "POV pushers" attempting to have a "still buried under the rubble" thesis included. --Nickhh (talk) 11:42, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- There was no massacre and it would be nice if the disinformation advocacy stops. Simply put, secondary sources agree on that it was a baseless blood-libel (reasoning explained here:) regardless of the number of casualties during what the media now describes as a battle. Allow me to quote the BBC for you: "UN says no massacre in Jenin". I have no objection, however, to Saeb Erekat being noted in the body of the article for his criticism of the UN report though. In fact, I believe we should have a "Palestinian reaction " section. Jaakobou 12:38, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- What "disinformation advocacy"? I am merely pointing out - without necessarily endorsing the claim - the fact that some do view what happened as a massacre, despite the ultimately reduced death toll. The fact that a sub-editor posted a headline that said "no massacre" on a news organisation's website does not settle the matter, or mean that any source or organisation saying something different is therefore wrong (I have no idea what the other links are meant to be showing me). On top of that, the actual text of that BBC story does not actually come to that specific and explicit conclusion, nor does the actual UN report which it is referring to. And for the 50th time, deciding what constitutes a "massacre" involves a subjective judgement based on some combination of the numbers involved, who they were, how they were killed, in what context etc. People will differ in their interpretations of this. You simply are not getting this point, and instead insisting that one interpretation is "right" and the other "wrong" as if it were a simple matter of deductive logic, based on your view and backed up by a cherry-picking of sources that happen to appear to agree with that view. Added to all that you are now making a far more contentious claim than anything I've ever raised, ie that secondary sources "agree" that it was a "baseless blood libel". Any sentence in the lead or elsewhere which simply asserts "there was no massacre", without any qualification or any reference to a different interpretation, is misleading as to what the broader range of opinions and sources actually say. Whether you like that fact or not. --Nickhh (talk) 14:38, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- Nickhh,
- Your assertions were not conditioned to a "some" and you repeat the suggestion that the "massacre" claim is a viable possibility when it's been thoroughly rejected. Basically you want Misplaced Pages to assert the text in a manner that suggests a massacre could have occurred when there is no one saying this, best I'm aware, other than Saeb Erekat. Do you have any reliable sources to support your extraordinary claim?
- Cordially, Jaakobou 23:23, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- My assertions have always been limited to "some". Nor have I ever said there was a massacre - indeed my whole point has always been that you can't be definitive about such a term, and, more importantly, most potential sources aren't either. Arguably the whole debate is a slightly academic distraction anyway. But you asked for sources that, with some distance from the actual events and once the final death toll was clear, do not simply use your preferred, simple "no massacre" text. So here's a quick sample -
- 1) Left wing/partisan sources (yes, not necessarily reliable as sources for fact, but we are talking about interpretation and opinion here, not facts. In addition these are the basic mirror image to the right wing forums and op-eds where the "massacre hoax/myth" line prevails. I am quoting them here to prove something about the spread of opinion on a talk page, not to suggest that all of them would be suitable as references in a WP article itself)
- Workers World - "Some of the best-known massacres in history involved similar numbers of people killed, or even fewer, than the number that Human Rights Watch attributed to Jenin"
- A Counterpuch contributor - "you don't have to spend much time reading the Human Rights Watch report on the events at Jenin to figure out a massacre, as the word is understood colloquially, did happen"
- The Council for Arab-British Understanding - "Israel has only itself to blame for it being labelled a massacre"
- ANSWER Coalition - "in the dictionary, massacre is defined as "savage and indiscriminate killing" clearly an apt description of what took place. Some of the most well-known, historic massacres had fewer or similar numbers killed"
- 2) Palestinian officials:
- Saeb Erekat - "a massacre in Jenin's refugee camp clearly happened... and crimes against humanity also took place .. How many civilians must be killed to speak of a massacre?"
- Ahmed Abdel Rahman - "how many people do you need to kill in order to call it a massacre? Israel calls the killing of 27 people a massacre, and they are right. I call the killing of 20 Palestinians a massacre also. And I am right…The problem is not the number. I am talking here about the methods."
- 3) Mainstream media:
- Australia's ABC - "Was there a massacre in Jenin? Well, yes there was. The Macquarie Dictionary and the OED define a massacre as the unnecessary indiscriminate killing or slaughter of human beings. The UN's report, flawed though it is by being forced to rely on second-hand and often deeply partisan accounts, claims that 75 human beings died, 23 Israeli soldiers and 52 Palestinians, half of them civilians. Were the deaths necessary or discriminate? Not by any measure"
- TIME - "there was no wanton massacre in Jenin, no deliberate slaughter of Palestinians by Israeli soldiers"
- Despite some of the headlines and the Israeli reaction that spun it that way, the UN report itself does not in fact use the simple phrase "there was no massacre". Nor does the November 2002 Amnesty report - which does however talk about "unlawful killings". The HRW report does say they found "no evidence to sustain claims of massacres or large-scale extrajudicial executions by the IDF in Jenin refugee camp", but again this is a qualified statement, and is then immediately further qualified by the remark that "many of the civilian deaths documented by Human Rights Watch amounted to unlawful or willful killings by the IDF". The simple point is that no single independent primary source actually says "there was no massacre", and the secondary sources - both WP:RS and others - take a mixed view. Jaakobou, you may not agree with what a lot of these sources say and think, but please don't pretend that those views and opinions don't exist out there in the world beyond your head. And - eventually to the point after yet another long essay - don't insist on inserting definitive assertions into pages here based on that denialism. --Nickhh (talk) 14:28, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- I (also) apologize for the error in my message of 14:38, 9 October 2008, and I thank NoCal100 for pointing it out; I've inserted some words in italics into that message which I hope suffice to correct it.
- Jaakobou, thank you for your reply of 01:55, 6 October 2008. I would appreciate it if you would tell me where "most credible witnesses" is quoted from, and which parts of which references contain the information you wish to draw my attention to. Re agreeing to pro-Palestinian presentation of the death toll: I'm new to editing this article, so I'm not aware of past compromises. Clearly, a lot of work has gone into the article and I congratulate those who participated for producing an article that supplies a lot of information in a concise and well-organized way. The article should present all points of view, including pro-Palestinian and pro-Israeli, without asserting or implying that those points of view are correct. I'm sorry but before I can appreciate any compromises that may have taken place, I would have to see the arguments (based on reliable sources and Misplaced Pages policy) for the positions from which compromises were made. Also, I'm sorry but I may not have fully absorbed all the comments in this discussion; feel free to give me pointers to individual comments in this thread or from previous discussions that might have bearing on what we're discussing. You said, "I cannot understand on why you refuse to accept this good will gesture": I'm trying to make the article what I would see as NPOV, so I'm not likely to appreciate any offer to make the article into what I would see as pro-Palestinian (though the pro-Palestinian POV and all other significant POVs need to be described in the article). I wasn't aware of any good-will gesture having been made, I'm sorry (and I'm still not clear on what it was,) and I didn't refuse to accept it. I simply offered a draft version of the lead for discussion. I'm sorry for not fully incorporating all progress from the preceding discussion in my draft; I didn't have time to absorb everything.
- Jaakobou, you said, "and push further for total elimination of the actual civilian casualty tolls." I'm not doing that. I don't know what tolls you mean. You're welcome to suggest changes to the draft lead I posted. I don't think there's any such thing as "actual" tolls; all we have is tolls reported by various sources, sources which may vary in reliability and about whose reliability opinions may vary.
- Jaakobou, you said "Please clarify your position and why you now suggest we should be writing more than 26 civilian casualties." To clarify: I did not suggest that we should be writing more than 26 civilian casualties; my suggested draft version is given in paragraphs in italics above. Please feel free to ask me other specific questions about my position.
- Jaakobou, you said, "I personally thought we were making some progress until Coppertwig clarified to me that he's unhappy with a slightly pro-Palestinian version and he wants the article written to the Palestinian narrative." I did not clarify that to you and that is not my position. When representing what I've said, if in doubt, quoting entire sentences of mine word-for-word will usually avoid misunderstandings. What I've actually said can be seen in my own posts above.
- NoCal100, you said, "So, going by what experienced international observers actually report, we can safely state in the article that AT MOST, 55 Palestinians were killed in Jenin..." I disagree; I think that would be original research: or is there a source stating that at most 55 Palestinians were killed? It would also violate NPOV. If there is such a source, we can present that as one of a number of points of view. Again, we must present all significant points of view: the Misplaced Pages article should not assert one position as being true.
- NoCal100, you said, "You are advised, once again, to stop claiming that there are still an unknown number of bodies under the rubble, when reliable sources have said the opposite." In the message by PR of 17:04, 11 October 2008 (UTC) which you were apparently responding to, I don't see any such claim. Instead, I see comments about the level of reliability of various sources, and two quotes. Discussing the level of reliability of various sources is a normal and necessary part of article talk page discussions. We should not be claiming or trying to convince each other that there are or are not bodies beneath the rubble or that there was or was not a massacre, and as far as I can see PR was not doing that in that comment. Instead, we should be discussing reliability of sources, what the sources say, how the statements by various sources can be presented with due weight, etc.; PR's comment seems to me to fall in that category.
- I agree with Nickhh that we should not say simply "no massacre"; I would add that we also should not say that there was a massacre, and we
probablyshouldn't say that there may have been a massacre. I agree that "massacre" is a subjective term and could possibly be applied to a situation where about 50 people were killed, therefore a source that states that there were about 50 people killed cannot necessarily be interpreted as stating that there was no massacre. We can report established facts in terms with more specific definitions than "massacre"; we can also quote various sources saying various things using the words "massacre" or "no massacre". We must present a variety of points of view, not assert that one interpretation is true. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 22:59, 12 October 2008 (UTC)- We have a highly credible source that says, 6 months after the fact, that a total of 54 bodies were identified, and that all but one resident of the camp has been accounted for. So, no, it is neither original research nor a violation of NPOV to rephrase this as "55 killed, at most". I'm not opposed, however, to stating this exactly as AI has reported it, and attributing it to AI. I was not responding directly to PR's message of 17:04, 11 October 2008, but rather to his "body of work" on this page, which is full of insinuations that the total body count is still today, 6 years after the fact, in some doubt, and that it might be in the hundreds. (See for example his message of 23 July 2008: "a "Jenin Investigation", still finding complete bodies 3 months later. (We don't have a source and can't say what this might do to the death toll).", or 14 September "we can now say for certainty that the death toll amongst Palestinians was at least twice what Israel later tried to claim that it") NoCal100 (talk) 17:51, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
Copyright violation
I consider the current version of the "Report" section to be a copyright violation. It contains many sentences taken word-for-word from the source, without quotation marks; so many that I think even if we were to put them in quotation marks it would still be a copyright violation.
I'm not trying to suppress any information. The most important parts of the source can be summarized, paraphrased, even quoted to some extent. And the reader is of course free to look at the source itself if they want to get the full story.
Maybe we can find some other sources to flesh out the section without quoting too much from any one source.
I paraphrased, reworked and shortened the section to a version which in my opinion is not a copyright violation. However, my edit was reverted.
Please discuss. We need to arrive at a version that is not a copyright violation.
I'm listing this at the WP:Copyright problems noticeboard, and I've blanked the section and displayed a copyright template. Please leave the section blanked until an admin handles it (normally in about a week). Meanwhile, we can discuss and negotiate a new version of the section (without actually displaying it). The text is still there, it's just not visible due to the template, so it can still be edited. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 19:08, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- I've done some rewriting to this section. Tell me what you think. -- Nudve (talk) 19:37, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry I didn't have time to look at it yet. However, I may have told you the wrong procedure: maybe the copyrighted text is supposed to stay under the blanking template, and new text developed elsewhere e.g. Talk:Battle of Jenin/Temp. See instructions on the template itself and at WP:CP. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 12:39, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, the procedure isn't very clear. I'm not sure whether a report can be retracted or not. I really with you had asked me before doing that. Now it's going to take at least a week before an admin looks at it, and the section may not be touched until then. This really sucks. -- Nudve (talk) 13:05, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry I didn't have time to look at it yet. However, I may have told you the wrong procedure: maybe the copyrighted text is supposed to stay under the blanking template, and new text developed elsewhere e.g. Talk:Battle of Jenin/Temp. See instructions on the template itself and at WP:CP. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 12:39, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
Temporary page
I have reviewed the temporary page and addressed a few phrases of minor ongoing concern. I have suggested that Nudve copy that material to the article, overwriting the copyright problem, as he or she is the only substantial contributor other than my few words and I am waiving my right to attribution to my contribution there. I believe that the changes made eliminate copyright concerns as relate to the identified source. Thanks. --Moonriddengirl 22:11, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
POV and lead, ongoing
Due to the fact that no progress has been made with this, and the lead has simply been stuck since being reverted to an old one-sided version, I am re-adding the POV tag. I was hoping other editors would at least start to sort this out - I am quite sure if I try to make any changes, they will be reverted. The discussion about this was started in the section above, but to run through some of the specific problems again -
- Para 1 - broadly OK, although it should probably say the battle "took place after an IDF incursion into Jenin refugee camp". They weren't invited in, after all.
- Para 2 - the lead does not need a whole paragraph about the attacks in Israel that preceded it. This detail can be covered in a background section (which should also include attacks against Palestinians) and through a simple wikilink to the Second Intifada article in the lead itself, as there is currently
- Para 3 - more or less says "most of those killed were militants, and any that weren't were probably killed by their own side's boby-traps, and of course the IDF tries not to kill civilians". I don't think this brief account could be more one-sided
- Para 4 - looking through the shoddy grammar, it seems to be suggesting that Palestinians "persistently" accused the IDF of genocide (source please?), deliberately made up death tolls (that's what "inflated" means) etc etc, and that these evil lies made people turn against Israel. There is no mention of the IDF closing the camp (which helped feed into the rumour cycle) or announcing death tolls in the 100s themselves. The relevance of these facts is covered in the UN report and in various journalists' reports, all of which are already cited in the article. Again this is jaw-droppingly one-sided. It also can be covered much more concisely, rather than listing every single accusation about Palestinian accusations, as it were.
- Para 5 - we repeat about four times that "there was no massacre", just in case we weren't clear about this interpretation of what happened. Following on from the para above, this has the effect of ramming home the claim above - that the Palestinians, lefty human rights groups and anti-Israel journalists were all in on a plot to make up a whole bunch of lies, but have now been caught out. There is too much detail and repetition for a lead here, and also the claim that the UN said there was "no massacre ", sourced to a BBC report is simple misrepresentation. I don't see why all the UN, human rights and media reports can't be summarised in the simple - and uncontroversially accurate - phrase "various investigations found that there had been no deliberate massacre of large numbers of Palestinians". The qualification of the word massacre is however crucial.
Still carping, but with good reason. --Nickhh (talk) 15:10, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- That was long. In a nutshell: Can we now revert to the previous lead? -- Nudve (talk) 15:41, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry! I could have saved 10 minutes of my life doing something more productive as well of course. Anyway, as noted about week ago I'm fine (or as OK as I'm ever likely to be with any exact wording) with the lead you and I discussed back then. I recommend we use that, and then others can of course tweak it or add bits and pieces, so long as - hopefully - they don't just try to rebuild this one in its entirety. --Nickhh (talk) 16:45, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- Good :) -- Nudve (talk) 16:55, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry! I could have saved 10 minutes of my life doing something more productive as well of course. Anyway, as noted about week ago I'm fine (or as OK as I'm ever likely to be with any exact wording) with the lead you and I discussed back then. I recommend we use that, and then others can of course tweak it or add bits and pieces, so long as - hopefully - they don't just try to rebuild this one in its entirety. --Nickhh (talk) 16:45, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- Oh well, I see someone is already trying precisely to rebuild the old bloated narrative .... --Nickhh (talk) 14:31, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Are you suggesting that a note about the casus beli for Operation Defensive Shield is undue? Personally, I figured it is a basic note that explains to the reader what sparked the operation so I'm not really following why you're calling it an "old bloated narrative". Jaakobou 16:12, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Yes I am suggesting precisely that, especially to the level of detail you are insisting on. I have explained why on several occasions, and at great length, above. --Nickhh (talk) 16:20, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Let's try and get consensus before making changes. Jaakobou, a few days ago you suggested writing a draft, do you still intend to do that? -- Nudve (talk) 16:53, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
I've just made a couple (not huge). Please can they not just be reverted? I know not everyone will be 100% happy, but some of them involve fairly uncontroversial improvements to the language and grammar. The material Jaakobou added is still there, I just moved it down from the lead.--Nickhh (talk) 17:15, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm going to keep most of your edits, but modify a few. As currently written, the lead suggest that perhaps a "small" massacre did occur, which is not supported by th evidence. It also unduly calls out the IDF for alleged unlawful killings, without similarly calling out Palestinian forces for allegedly mingling with civilians or using children to carry booby traps. I'm also changing the "Large" part of the camp, because that is a subjective quantifier, and replacing it with the actual percentage. NoCal100 (talk) 18:33, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- There are credible allegations of at least one small massacre in the RS - so if we're going to mention massacre (which isn't really necessary anyway, except to the degree the incident is mostly known as "The Jenin Massacre") then we cannot use the Hasbara version of the story by which there wasn't one. To do so would be blatant cherry-picking.
- More significantly the criticisms from investigations (to a lesser extent the UN as well) related to the incident itself is overwhelmingly of the IDF (in particular, blocking access to humanitarian assistance, but a number of other things, many of them really serious). Criticism of "the Palestinians" is mostly of the militants amongst them, since, as the UN report says "Israeli military retaliation .... had the effect of severely weakening the Authority's capacity to take effective action against militant". Implying that both parties are equally criticized would be extremely POV (the nearest thing to "equal criticism" I can find is #32 in the UN report). PR 19:47, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Comment by Jaakobou:
- PalestineRemembered. There are no "credible allegations" for either a small scale massacre or a large scale massacre. "Eye-witnesses" in Jenin were noted by various media for being untruthful and I request that you stop ommitting information that you are already aware of to pursue an unproven point. It is disruptive.
- Nickhh. Best I'm aware, military operations generally have the casus beli written within their lead. I don't know what you refer to when you say you've explained why this is an "old bloated narrative" but perhaps I've missed this explanation somehow among the other issues. Can you please repeat the reasoning on why we should censor the casus beli so that we can open this up for community discourse? (WP:DR)
- A couple recent edits have been in violation of WP:TE as they misrepresented sources and equated between two opposing POVs to give credibility where there is non. This edit, has (for starters) used the word 'claimed' instead of 'deemed', removed the "massacre" description and equated between the Palestinain massacre charges and the Israeli "not massacre" rebuttals. It also promoted the suggestion that a non deliberate, non large scale massacre could have occurred when it barely even qualifies as a fringe perspective amoung mainstream media or other. Please make note of these policies and do not repeat the violations.
- Nudve. My suggested version was this recent edit which was mildly amended to this version that is acceptable to me. I'd appreciate collaborative opinions/suggestions/criticism about it (no advocacy of fringe views please).
- Cordially, Jaakobou 22:29, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- First of all, as I said, I'm fine with the current version, so I'm glad you reverted. The Passover massacre was the casus belli for Operation Defensive Shield, not for this particular battle. To continue an earlier example, the Americans did not target Iwo Jima because of Pearl Harbor but because they were at war with Japan and considered Iwo Jima tactically important. "Refreshing the reader's memory" on something the Palestinians did before Defensive Shield began on this article only serves to create a narrative that makes Israel the good guys, so I think it should be avoided. -- Nudve (talk) 06:19, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- Comment by Jaakobou:
- Heyo Nudve,
- The American–Japanese battle at Iwo Jima occurred close to the end of WW2, a war which lasted for 6 years and had a plethora of smaller battles, campaigns and maneuvers. The "Battle of Jenin" was a 10 day skirmish during a 10 day operation and the purpose of the battle was to catch the people who were sending suicide bombers. This is not "Refreshing the reader's memory" of something which occurred months or years earlier, but rather what occurred a mere 3 days earlier - a suicide bombing. No one wrote down "the good guys went after evil people" but instead, what was written was "Israel declared a counter-terrorist offensive, dubbed Operation Defensive Shield, after the attacks culminated with the killing of 30 Israelis". This is not a pushy/fringe narrative.
- Cordially, Jaakobou 15:19, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- Well it would have been better perhaps if Jaakobou had followed NoCal and just made any small changes again on top of the changes I had made, rather than just rolling them all back in one go and absurdly accusing me of tendentious editing and promoting fringe views (the definition of which appears to be anything that disagrees with the analysis to be found in CAMERA and Little Green Footballs, or The Jerusalem Post if we dare to head off to the extreme radical left). As I said, several of them were pretty basic ones to improve the flow of the language and the grammar. Others in may view added more balance, although I appreciate not everyone will accept that. On the specific "massacre or no massacre" point, in response to NoCal & Jaakobou I would point out that I made a pretty extensive post, with links, in a section above here. Plenty of reliable (and not so reliable) sources make definitive assertions one way or the other. Equally plenty of sources (eg the UN, Amnesty) are not so unequivocal, and in fact do not even address the issue directly. Ultimately therefore it is simple misrepresentation to push one view or the other into this article as a definitive statement, just because it's the view you happen to take. Using slightly more open language along the lines of "there was no widespread/wanton/deliberate massacre" is a) accurate across all viewpoints; & b) does not by implication suggest that there was therefore a massacre of some sort.
- I have no baggage here or stake in this issue, and for example have no personal view about whether this was a "massacre" or not. In fact I think the debate around the word is pretty unhelpful in most cases. I am just coming at it as an outsider who nonetheless happens to be pretty well read on the subject and is trying to agree some text which accords with a more worldwide, broader view of what happened and how it has been reported and written up. Sometimes trying to insert spurious balance for the sake of it is a silly game, eg "Mussolini helped drag Europe into a catastrophic war which caused the deaths of millions .. however he brought back national pride to Italy and made the trains run on time etc etc" - however there are real issues in this case, which to be honest for a long time have been trampled down on this page in favour of a one-sided narrative. Not everything is in this world is black and white. --Nickhh (talk) 08:34, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- ps: on some specific points Jaakobou ...
- Casus Belli: the lead of course should say that the assault took place during the Second Intifada, and that Jenin was targeted after the IDF said suicide attacks were being launched from the city. I have always said this. Any edits I have made have always retained this information. The simple point is that the lead doesn't need to repeat the same point, in great detail, across two or three sentences.
- Initial massacre claims: I did not remove the first reference to it (eg the phrase "rumours developed that a massacre of hundreds or even thousands .. might have occurred" is there in the first sentence), again I just removed duplication further on in that paragraph. Go back at look at the diffs, and please read things more carefully in future before making sweeping accusations.
- "NPOV": in fact I do equate the official Israeli interpretation that there was no massacre with official Palestinian claims that there was one, even with the lower death tolls. I'd be interested to hear on what basis you think they are not equivalent (the Barak defence not included)
- "Fringe": I have pointed you to links showing that views which do not follow the simplistic "no massacre" view are no more fringe than those pushing that interpretation.
- English language: rumours cannot "purport" anything; organisations rarely "hold on to" allegations (and if they do, it is being suggested they are doing it in vain); also the "while"s and "however"s are all over the place. --Nickhh (talk) 09:15, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments by Ynhockey:
- Originally I wanted to just follow the goings-on of the article itself, but recently so many quick edits and reverts happenned that it's becoming nearly-impossible. Therefore, I'll relate only to the current version of the article vs. the version I remember from way back, and comments on the talk page so far.
- Casus belli: It appears that all sides agree that information about the reasoning for this operation should indeed be in the lead section. So why isn't it there? We can argue later about the necessity of citing the Passover Massacre in particular, but some info needs to be inserted ASAP.
- Jenin Refugee Camp: I noticed that all information about the Jenin Refugee Camp has been removed from the article. Was this intentional, or part of the comprehensive rewrite? I think this information is very important, especially because the camp doesn't have its own article. It needs to be outlined what the Jenin refugee camp is (essentially a poor neighborhood of Jenin), who was in charge of it (UNRWA/PA), and why it was targeted specifically (the last point seems to exist in the current version).
- I will comment on the other points raised here once I have carefully analyzed the evidence, sources, and the actual prose of the article.
-- Ynhockey 13:23, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the comments. Let's see:
- The second paragraph of the lead says: Israel targeted Jenin's refugee camp, after it deemed that the city had "served as a launch site for numerous terrorist attacks against both Israeli civilians and Israeli towns and villages in the area". I think that covers it. The source lists the suicide bombers that came from Jenin, but doesn't mention the Passover massacre. For this reason, as well as the ones I mentioned above, I think it doesn't belong in the lead.
- It was part of the rewrite. I think this stuff belongs in the Jenin article. Why is it very important here?
- -- Nudve (talk) 14:16, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- The text indeed exists, but it is not clear from the paragraph what the situation really was at the time. Instead, it is written as a fringe claim (especially with the use of quotation marks around the Israeli statement). It also uses wording from the first paragraph ("as part of"), so at the very least a re-wording is warranted. The paragraph is also too short for WP:LEAD, so for GA/FA it would need to be merged into another paragraph, further burying the casus belli, probably the most important part of the lead after the definition, in irrelevant info. I suggest expanding the paragraph, but most importantly, defining the casus belli clearly, without any quotation marks or side-implications, at the start of the second paragraph. I'll write a draft if you wish, although an example of how I think the lead should work can be seen in my recent rewrite of the IDF article lead.
- Some points are more important than others, but at this time specifically, we have to take into account that the Jenin article is sub-par and doesn't provide the reader with the info that this article should convey in regards to the refugee camp. In case the Jenin article is expanded however (and I believe the refugee camp also deserves its own article), there are still some points which need to be stated here—as a summary of the relevant points from the refugee camp article. For one, there needs to be mention of the fact that it is/was a PA-administrated camp, clarifying who the "Palestinian forces" were in the lead. Also it's worth mentioning that the UNRWA also ran the camp, which is directly relevant to the battle (UNRWA's involvement should be talked about somewhere in the article, if it hasn't been mentioned already). And finally, as I said before, why the camp was attacked specifically (rather than other parts of Jenin) also needs to be clarified in the article body (other than the simplistic "Israel deemed it a terrorist hotbed"). Of course, the latter requires the best of sources, which I hope someone else will be able to find.
- Finally, it's good to see that an editor generally uninvolved in conflict articles such as yourself also contributes to the article! Cheers, Ynhockey 15:02, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- A slight rewording is always possible, and I would like to see your draft. I think we pretty much have consensus on a relatively short lead, to avoid a narrative, so keep that in mind. About the camp: There could be some information added. I'll see what I can find. -- Nudve (talk) 15:28, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- Update: added background paragraph. -- Nudve (talk) 16:25, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
Draft by Ynhockey
Below is my proposed draft (sans sources). I mainly focused on structure and language, and giving due weight in the lead to each section of the article (per WP:LEAD).
The Battle of Jenin took place between April 3 and April 11, 2002 in the Jenin Refugee Camp in the West Bank. It was fought between the Israel Defense Forces (IDF) and Palestinian militants during the Second Intifada, as part of the Israeli Operation Defensive Shield launched four days earlier.
The Israeli government decided to target the refugee camp after intelligence indicated that it served as a launch site for numerous terrorist attacks against Jewish localities in the area and Israeli civilians in general, including . The attack commenced after the city of Jenin had been captured, while Palestinians dug in in the refugee camp, seeing the Israeli soldiers advance on foot. After an Israeli detachment walked into an ambush, the force changed tactics and subdued the camp with armored vehicles, and the Palestinian forces surrendered on April 11. 23 Israeli soldiers were killed in the battle.
Because many buildings in the camp were bulldozed, and the area was closed by the IDF following the battle, a rapid cycled of rumors began circulating that a massacre of as many as thousands of Palestinians had taken place, supported by statements from the Palestinian Authority and human rights organizations. Subsequent investigations found no evidence of a massacre, and the total Palestinian death toll was determined to be between 52 and 56, including 5-26 civilians. Even so, human rights organizations held on to the allegations of war crimes.
Notes:
- 'Palestinian forces', like in the current version, should be used if sources can be provided that the Palestinian side in the battle was officially operating under the PNA, because 'Palestinian forces' generally refers to the PNA police.
- If the government decided that it was a launch pad for attacks, there must be examples of some attacks. This isn't bloat, as Nickhh claims, but necessary to understand how the refugee camp was different from other Palestinian towns in terms of militant activity. Terrorist acts not linked with Jenin probably shouldn't be included, no matter how terrible.
Comments by Nudve
A few issues with this draft:
- Using the word "terrorist" unattributed right in the lead is going to be a problem.
- "" is yada yada. The debate here is on how much weight should those attacks get in the lead.
- "Even so" is weaselly, and the absence of a massacre does not necessarily negate the possibility of war crimes.
- This is not an issue with the draft, but now that I think of it, the lead should say something about the UN commission, since it is given significant weight in the article.
-- Nudve (talk) 19:01, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- Reply:
- The particular word is not important, it can be removed. ... it served as a launch pad for numerous attacks again ...
- In case the note I left was not clear, what I meant to say is that we should list several notable attacks that specifically emerged from Jenin—without giving any details for them. The general term 'Black March' (מרץ השחור) can also be mentioned if there's a source linking it to Jenin. This seems to me as an acceptable middle-ground compromise between the position that no attacks should be mentioned (Nickhh) and the position that there should be a detailed examination of several attacks (Jaakobou). Perhaps I read the arguments wrong.
- How about: ... the total Palestinian death toll was determined to be 52–56, including 5–26 civilians, although human rights organizations held on to the allegations of war crimes. ?
- I agree. IMO it should go into the last paragraph which is reasonably short for an expantion, and already talks about "subsequent investigation", which would include the UN commission.
- -- Ynhockey 20:25, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- I suppose that's better. However, it might not be relevant anymore, since the entire article's neutrality and reliability are now in question (see below). Earlier, you said: "I will comment on the other points raised here once I have carefully analyzed the evidence, sources, and the actual prose of the article". I'd be happy if you did that and joined the discussion. Cheers, -- Nudve (talk) 08:13, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
- I don't wish to discourage someone who (I think) has done rather a lot of good work. However, the objections I've made are substantive (and not exhaustive). There is an "Unbalanced" template which avoids the problem of whether there is an on-going editing disagreement or not.
- How would you feel about me writing-up the UN report? If it leans in either "direction", it's probably towards Israel (judging by who complained, crude though that is as a measure!). It's certainly the nearest thing we have to an account written by people who are both "uninvolved specialists" and "professionals". It got extensive publicity when it came out in August and more or less capped off most discussion. I have taken advice on what I have planned and can only see editing-type corrections to what I've done. PR 09:04, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
- I suppose that's better. However, it might not be relevant anymore, since the entire article's neutrality and reliability are now in question (see below). Earlier, you said: "I will comment on the other points raised here once I have carefully analyzed the evidence, sources, and the actual prose of the article". I'd be happy if you did that and joined the discussion. Cheers, -- Nudve (talk) 08:13, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
- Reply:
Still problems
The errors in punctuation, grammar and language which I tried to sort out as part of this edit are still in the lead, since of course my changes were subject to blanket reversion, despite my politely pointing out what I had done. As it happens, unsurprisingly I didn't see what was wrong with the minor content changes either, which were intended to create a bit more balance - none of them were hugely significant and none of them said anything that isn't already known and sourced. Anyway, I thought I'd point it out since no-one has even attempted to deal with the grammar and phrasing problems since, which I could make a cynical comment about (but I won't, I'll merely hint at it. As I just have). --Nickhh (talk) 15:56, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
- here's a suggestion: Instead of making cynical comments, or complaining that no one has fixed punctuation and grammar issues, why don't you fix those punctuation and grammar issues, without trying to mix in various changes related to "balance" or other content? NoCal100 (talk) 18:39, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
- Please don't try to patronise me again or start another fight, it's very tedious. I'm not under any obligation to edit this or any other article, and certainly not just because you've told me to. Especially when my first attempt to deal with the problem was simply reverted straightaway in its entirety. Why should I bother again? If other editors want it to read as it does currently, that's up to them, if that's where their priorities are. It's perfectly legitimate for me to simply flag up the issue on a talk page and leave it at that. --Nickhh (talk) 13:35, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- Your first attempt involved making numerous content changes which I (and other editors) found to be POV, along with fixing the punctuation and grammar issues of which you complain now. I made a simple suggestion that would address your complaint - simply fix the punctuation and grammar issues, without getting into the content issues. You are free to ignore that suggestion, but then don't be surprised if your alleged concerns are viewed rather skeptically. 14:32, 25 October 2008 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by NoCal100 (talk • contribs)
- Please don't try to patronise me again or start another fight, it's very tedious. I'm not under any obligation to edit this or any other article, and certainly not just because you've told me to. Especially when my first attempt to deal with the problem was simply reverted straightaway in its entirety. Why should I bother again? If other editors want it to read as it does currently, that's up to them, if that's where their priorities are. It's perfectly legitimate for me to simply flag up the issue on a talk page and leave it at that. --Nickhh (talk) 13:35, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks, but funnily enough the possibility that I could do the copyediting all over again, without the NPOV changes I also made in the first instance, had occurred to me before you suggested it above. --Nickhh (talk) 14:45, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm sure it occurred to you. Yet instead of making those edits, you chose to make a lengthy post here about the fact that they need to be made, and followed it up with 2 additional responses to my posts. I'd imagine it would take far less time to restore the previous copyedits to the main article, thereby improving the encyclopedia, than it took you to type these three complaints and responses, which is why I say that these alleged concerns of yours can be viewed with considerable skepticism - you do not appear to be genuinely interested in fixing the punctuation or the grammar (or you have have done so, rather than complain about it), but rather seem to be agitating for someone to reinsert the other elements of your edit which was reverted. NoCal100 (talk) 14:57, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks, but funnily enough the possibility that I could do the copyediting all over again, without the NPOV changes I also made in the first instance, had occurred to me before you suggested it above. --Nickhh (talk) 14:45, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- Please stop impugning my motives, it amounts to a personal attack, something I know you are concerned about on WP. I'm not agitating for anything, nor is my reluctance to make any more changes anything to do with the amount of time it would take. And I'm only responding to your comments here because, as previously, you dive in to make inaccurate and off-topic attacks on me, which I then feel obliged to rebut. I'm going to stop doing that now. I've pointed out the problem with the phrasing, which is all I intended to do. --Nickhh (talk) 15:14, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm sure you've read WP:AGF, which tells us that we are not obliged to assume good faith when there is evidence to the contrary. I believe there is ample evidence to the contrary in this case, as spelled out above. You may easily prove me wrong on this by simply making the punctuation and grammar edits that supposedly bother you so much. NoCal100 (talk) 15:19, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm seeing people re-introducing errors of punctuation, grammar and language into an article after they've been corrected - it's difficult to call that anything but vandalism.
- I'm then seeing personal attacks on the person (previously people) trying to improve this article. This article still awaits administrative taken against editors who will clearly not abide by policy. PR 16:42, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm sure you've read WP:AGF, which tells us that we are not obliged to assume good faith when there is evidence to the contrary. I believe there is ample evidence to the contrary in this case, as spelled out above. You may easily prove me wrong on this by simply making the punctuation and grammar edits that supposedly bother you so much. NoCal100 (talk) 15:19, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- Please stop impugning my motives, it amounts to a personal attack, something I know you are concerned about on WP. I'm not agitating for anything, nor is my reluctance to make any more changes anything to do with the amount of time it would take. And I'm only responding to your comments here because, as previously, you dive in to make inaccurate and off-topic attacks on me, which I then feel obliged to rebut. I'm going to stop doing that now. I've pointed out the problem with the phrasing, which is all I intended to do. --Nickhh (talk) 15:14, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
(outdent) I made all the changes to the lead that I noticed in Nickhh's edit of October 12 that seemed to me to be pretty much just grammatical changes. Some changes could be considered either primarily grammatical or primarily adjusting the meaning.
Re some parts of Nickhh's edit that I didn't implement at this moment: Rather than changing "after it deemed" to "claiming", I suggest changing it to the neutral "stating". As I've stated previously, I support changing "while Jenin remained sealed" to something that mentions who did the sealing. (See my comment of 16:47, 5 October 2008.) Again for reasons I've expressed previously, (22:59, 12 October 2008) I prefer "no evidence to substantiate claims that a large scale or deliberate massacre had taken place" rather than "no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place." "Human rights organizations reported cases" sounds more neutral than "human rights organizations held on to allegations". I think Nickhh's addition "and of unlawful killings by the IDF" is unnecessary and may veer away from NPOV. I don't think we should mention the number 26 unless we have a source specifically mentioning that number. (OR).☺ Coppertwig (talk) 16:16, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- As I wrote before, I object to the phrase "no evidence to substantiate claims that a large scale or deliberate massacre had taken place", because this implies that there is evidence for a "small scale" massacre, which is simply not the case. NoCal100 (talk) 17:03, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- How about "no evidence to substantiate claims that hundreds had been killed" or "no evidence to substantiate claims that large numbers of people had been killed" or "no evidence to substantiate claims that more than 50-odd people had been killed"? (suggested as a substitute for the current phrasing) ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 17:15, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- This is better than your previous suggestion, but I still prefer the current phrasing in the lead, for two reasons: (1) the previous paragraph in the lead twice refers to allegations of a "massacre" , so when those turn out to be unsubstantiated, we should say so. (2) We have a couple of reliable sources that explicitly say "no massacre", so there's no reason not to use the same terminology. NoCal100 (talk) 17:58, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- The reason not to assert "no massacre" is that it isn't NPOV, since it's reported by some sources but we have at least one source (the Palestinian appendix to the UN report) which contradicts it. However, we can assert something along the lines that "sources X and Y reported that there was no massacre" or "sources X and Y reported that they found no evidence of a massacre". Perhaps you could suggest specific wording for a sentence along those lines? ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 18:09, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- Here's my suggestion. Instead of the current While a large area in the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting, subsequent investigations found no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place., how about: "About 10% of the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting. According to a Human Rights Watch report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources continue to maintain that a massacre had taken place". NoCal100 (talk) 18:16, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- That sounds good to me. However, do we have a source to verify that the Palestinian sources "continue" to maintain that a massacre had taken place? How recently did they say that? It may be better (and will not go out of date) to say "official Palestinian sources have stated that there was probably a massacre." (based on the appendix to the UN report, which states "In addition, it is probable that a massacre and a crime against humanity might have been committed in the Jenin refugee camp...") If we have another source we may be able to word it differently. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 19:01, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- We can drop the "continue". NoCal100 (talk) 19:04, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- The second part sounds OK. But now I'm wondering about "as a result of the fighting"; that makes it sound as if the destruction was accidental and caused by both sides. The source says "by a dozen armoured Israeli bulldozers." I suggest, "About 10% of the camp was destroyed by Israeli bulldozers. According to a Human Rights Watch report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources maintain that a massacre had taken place". ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 19:14, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- Is there a source that says the destruction was caused exclusively by bulldozers? I don't think so. At least part of the destruction is attributed to Palestinian booby traps. NoCal100 (talk) 21:11, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- The entire "massacre yes or no" business is a PR invention of one party. It bears no relevance to the actual reporting of the event - which concerned (in this order, I think): 1) mass destruction 2) obstruction of humanitarian relief 3) obstruction of investigation and 4) various specifics particularly "human shields" (the last being a criticism, by the UN only, of both parties).
- Reporting the event mostly didn't even mention "massacre". The owner (landlord?) of the camp was the Commissioner of the UNRWA, who said (in translation): “This is pure hell. It is no exaggeration to call it a massacre. I have previously refrained from using the word massacre, but now, when I have seen it, I cannot call it otherwise.” But nobody can tell us that his statement is "true" or "false" - we should simply report what this important player said about it. PR 19:28, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- I particularly agree with your last sentence, PR. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 21:48, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- The second part sounds OK. But now I'm wondering about "as a result of the fighting"; that makes it sound as if the destruction was accidental and caused by both sides. The source says "by a dozen armoured Israeli bulldozers." I suggest, "About 10% of the camp was destroyed by Israeli bulldozers. According to a Human Rights Watch report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources maintain that a massacre had taken place". ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 19:14, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- We can drop the "continue". NoCal100 (talk) 19:04, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- That sounds good to me. However, do we have a source to verify that the Palestinian sources "continue" to maintain that a massacre had taken place? How recently did they say that? It may be better (and will not go out of date) to say "official Palestinian sources have stated that there was probably a massacre." (based on the appendix to the UN report, which states "In addition, it is probable that a massacre and a crime against humanity might have been committed in the Jenin refugee camp...") If we have another source we may be able to word it differently. ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 19:01, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- Here's my suggestion. Instead of the current While a large area in the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting, subsequent investigations found no evidence to substantiate claims that a massacre had taken place., how about: "About 10% of the camp was destroyed as a result of the fighting. According to a Human Rights Watch report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources continue to maintain that a massacre had taken place". NoCal100 (talk) 18:16, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- The reason not to assert "no massacre" is that it isn't NPOV, since it's reported by some sources but we have at least one source (the Palestinian appendix to the UN report) which contradicts it. However, we can assert something along the lines that "sources X and Y reported that there was no massacre" or "sources X and Y reported that they found no evidence of a massacre". Perhaps you could suggest specific wording for a sentence along those lines? ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 18:09, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- This is better than your previous suggestion, but I still prefer the current phrasing in the lead, for two reasons: (1) the previous paragraph in the lead twice refers to allegations of a "massacre" , so when those turn out to be unsubstantiated, we should say so. (2) We have a couple of reliable sources that explicitly say "no massacre", so there's no reason not to use the same terminology. NoCal100 (talk) 17:58, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- How about "no evidence to substantiate claims that hundreds had been killed" or "no evidence to substantiate claims that large numbers of people had been killed" or "no evidence to substantiate claims that more than 50-odd people had been killed"? (suggested as a substitute for the current phrasing) ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 17:15, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
Two points -
- Language/copyediting - this edit has reinserted the clunky "rumors purported" phrasing. Constant reversion of this sort of thing is kind of why I didn't actually try to change it again myself, and it appears that decision has been vindicated. You'd have thought we could at least avoid edit-warring and disputes over simple English language issues - there's plenty else to disagree about after all. At worst it suggests that some editors are more interested in point-scoring and and blind reverting rather than improving content here, even at the most basic level.
- "Massacre" - actually I'd happily have the phrasing "there was no large scale massacre", rather than having it as "no evidence", which kind of suggests that some might still be found. It is an uncontroversial fact that 100s of people were not deliberately killed. However the "large scale" or "widespread" qualifier is crucial, since plenty of sources do still assert there was a massacre of some sort, even with the final, lower death toll (I listed some a while ago, including from Palestinian officials and the mainstream media here). Some sources do say simply "no massacre", but there is no agreement or unanimity here, and it's therefore misleading to use that phrasing in the lead. The lead has to reflect the fact that many sources do maintain there was a massacre, albeit not one with 100s of victims, rather than take sides either way. --Nickhh (talk) 11:27, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- I disagree with the statement "It is an uncontroversial fact that 100s of people were not deliberately killed." That seems to me to contradict Pounder's POV. We can perhaps give weight (prominence) to the idea that 100s were not killed, but we can't assert it as if it's "a piece of information about which there is no serious dispute" (NPOV).☺ Coppertwig (talk) 13:38, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- I disagree. Today, 6 years after the event, and after an AI report said all but one of the camp's residents were accounted for, it is a fact that 100s were not killed. It is true that some people (e.g. Pounder, or certain members of the PA) are so prejudiced that they refuse to acknowledge the facts even when those stare them in the face, but that does not change the facts. I think the formulation you and I agreed on prior to Nickhh's recent comments is fine. NoCal100 (talk) 14:44, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure if we had quite agreed on both sentences. How about this version: "About 10% of the camp was destroyed. According to a Human Rights Watch report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources maintain that a massacre had taken place." This leaves out the bulldozers. Another alternative for the first sentence is "About 10% of the camp was destroyed during the incident." "Flattened" might be more informative than "destroyed". ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 14:53, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- Either one of these is fine with me. NoCal100 (talk) 15:30, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- I'm not sure if we had quite agreed on both sentences. How about this version: "About 10% of the camp was destroyed. According to a Human Rights Watch report, there is no evidence of a massacre, but official Palestinian sources maintain that a massacre had taken place." This leaves out the bulldozers. Another alternative for the first sentence is "About 10% of the camp was destroyed during the incident." "Flattened" might be more informative than "destroyed". ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 14:53, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- I disagree. Today, 6 years after the event, and after an AI report said all but one of the camp's residents were accounted for, it is a fact that 100s were not killed. It is true that some people (e.g. Pounder, or certain members of the PA) are so prejudiced that they refuse to acknowledge the facts even when those stare them in the face, but that does not change the facts. I think the formulation you and I agreed on prior to Nickhh's recent comments is fine. NoCal100 (talk) 14:44, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- I disagree with the statement "It is an uncontroversial fact that 100s of people were not deliberately killed." That seems to me to contradict Pounder's POV. We can perhaps give weight (prominence) to the idea that 100s were not killed, but we can't assert it as if it's "a piece of information about which there is no serious dispute" (NPOV).☺ Coppertwig (talk) 13:38, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- Note/clarification: Pounder's comments were from around 18th April, based on an early visit to the camp. Nor in the BBC report did he appear to talk about hundreds dead, he merely suggests that there "could be large numbers of civilian dead" under the ruins. I'm certainly not aware of Pounder or any significant source suggesting now that more than 50-60 people were killed, or whether that would be due to prejudice if they were saying that. Where the "massacre/no massacre" dispute arises is over how to describe or interpret what happened, with that number as given. There are legitimate sources that continue to use the description "massacre", on account of the civilians killed. This needs to be recorded, and without it being couched in terms to suggest they are in denial of some sort (I kind of read the above proposal as doing that, even if not intentionally). The later sources I linked to up above do all use the massacre description, while explicitly acknowledging the lower death toll. Even the HRW report is more nuanced than in the suggested para above, with the full sentence reading - "Human Rights Watch found no evidence to sustain claims of massacres or large-scale extrajudicial executions by the IDF in Jenin refugee camp. However, many of the civilian deaths documented by Human Rights Watch amounted to unlawful or willful killings by the IDF". --Nickhh (talk) 12:36, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
The neutrality of this article is most certainly contested. There is a heavy pro-Israel bias which has gotten worse. The list Israeli war crimes documented by Amnesty International has been cut from a list of 9 to a list of 2. The alleged citation from the Washington Times is not from the Washington Times web site. Does the policy of allowing citations from blogs which cite alleged news articles only apply to stories which are pro-Israel? When I did that, my edit was reverted and the explaination was that if the web site of the original story is not available, then it cannot be used. Just what is the policy here? Blindjustice (talk) 14:37, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- I've added some info from secondary sources on the Amnesty report. Highbeam, which hosts the Washington Times article, is not a blog. I believe it is a reliable database. If you insist, we can look for other hosts or ask at WP:RSN. -- Nudve (talk) 15:25, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
54 dead not 53
the time article number 2 http://www.time.com/time/2002/jenin/story.html says 54 Palestinians died, not 53, so I corrected it. 192.246.224.74 (talk) 18:38, 13 October 2008 (UTC)russell j @ 10/13/08 2:63 pm
- Why does the article already cite this one Time Magazine article twelve times?
- Is it because the piece uses convoluted language "compelled Palestinian civilians to take the dangerous job of leading the approach to the buildings" instead of "used Palestinians as human shields" - and uses direct Israeli POV "the Palestinian defenders retreated to ... where their defenses were strongest" and "It was time to hit harder"?
- Is it because the piece differs substantially from the contemporaneous reports of every European journalist on the scene? And differs greatly from the reports of every investigation by independent human rights groups? PR
- We cite this article because TIME magazine is a reliable source, and this specific article is directly related to the topic of this article. In other words, we are doing this because we are editing this article according to Misplaced Pages policies. NoCal100 (talk) 17:09, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- We're plainly not writing this article to regular WP policy, since we've applied massive WP:UNDUE to a single source that uses the POV language of one party. There's a great deal of other RS available, all of it fairly startling, but none of it is written in a POV fashion as if the reporter were on board with a "Palestinian perspective". While I'm about it, I don't much care for the way you're suddenly appearing at articles (such as Shuafat, Mohammed Omer, Western Wall, USS Liberty incident) to confront or revert my edits, in many cases in articles you've previously had nothing to do with. This smacks of the same thing I'm seeing on this page, a decidedly uncollegiate attitude to what should be regular TalkPage discussion. PR 20:04, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- You asked why TIME is being used, and I explained the relevant wikipedia policy to you. Now stop soapboxing and start editing to this policy. I don't believe I've edited USS Liberty incident, and I was editing Western Wall before you, so perhaps it is you who is following me around. NoCal100 (talk) 21:17, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- We're plainly not writing this article to regular WP policy, since we've applied massive WP:UNDUE to a single source that uses the POV language of one party. There's a great deal of other RS available, all of it fairly startling, but none of it is written in a POV fashion as if the reporter were on board with a "Palestinian perspective". While I'm about it, I don't much care for the way you're suddenly appearing at articles (such as Shuafat, Mohammed Omer, Western Wall, USS Liberty incident) to confront or revert my edits, in many cases in articles you've previously had nothing to do with. This smacks of the same thing I'm seeing on this page, a decidedly uncollegiate attitude to what should be regular TalkPage discussion. PR 20:04, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- We cite this article because TIME magazine is a reliable source, and this specific article is directly related to the topic of this article. In other words, we are doing this because we are editing this article according to Misplaced Pages policies. NoCal100 (talk) 17:09, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
so which ones are pertinent to Jenin?
Hamas was attributed attacks from September 9, 2001 (a suicide attack in Nahariya), March 19, 2002 (a shooting attack in Hamam Al Maliach), and March 31, 2002 (a suicide attack in Haifa that left, 15 casualties).
Palestinian Islamic Jihad was attributed attacks from July 16, 2001 (a suicide attack at the Binyamina Railway Station), October 28, 2001 (a shooting attack in Hadera), November 29, 2001 (a suicide attack near Pardes Hanna), January 25, 2002 (a suicide attack at the old central bus station in Tel Aviv—in cooperation with Fatah), January 5, 2002 (a suicide attack in Afula), March 20, 2002 (a suicide attack in Wadi Ara), April 10, 2002 (a suicide attack at the Yagur junction).
Fatah was attributed attacks from February 1, 2001 (a shooting of an Israeli civilian visiting Jenin), April 28, 2001 (a shooting at near Umm al-Fahm), June 28, 2001 (a shooting near Ganim), September 11, 2001 (a shooting at "Bezeq" workers near Shaked and detonation of a charge at an IDF force in the area), March 9, 2001 (a shooting near Yabed), October 4, 2001 (a shooting in Afula), October 27, 2001 (Infiltration to Me Ammi and laying of an explosives charge), November 27, 2001 (a joint PIJ and Fatah suicide attack in Afula), February 8, 2002 (a joint PIJ and Fatah suicide attack aimed at Tel Aviv, intercepted), March 12, 2002 (a shooting on the road to Katsir), March 21, 2002 (a suicide attack in Jerusalem), March 30, 2002 (a suicide attack in Tel Aviv).
all to go unless you can find the 6 or 23 for Jenin....so far you haven't shown that these belong in an article about Jenin unless of course you are thinking of adding in all the IDF and settler activity in the area?....Otherwise you are just trying for demonisation.....Ashley kennedy3 (talk) 20:54, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
all of these are Israeli MFA claims, which is not made clear in the body of the text....Ashley kennedy3 (talk) 21:10, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
- It's not a "demonisation" issue since the activities were linked to the Israeli assault on the Jenin infrastructure for these activities. Jaakobou 21:11, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
Israeli MFA has been known to be rather inaccurate in its dealings with the rest of the world on many occasions....it needs to be made clear that this is a Israeli government claim and not necessarily fact...Ashley kennedy3 (talk) 21:35, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
sorry jaakobou I did not see the IDF spokesperson mainly as all the first 3 sections have the same info in a POV demonisation repetition and quite frankly I stopped paying much attention to what was written...the structural layout of the article has ensured a pro Israel POV....There is no chronological order and information is repeated. The section for massacre theorists is at the bottom yet the massacre theorists are placed front and centre. The IDF failures which led to the massacre allegations isn't even noted in the lead with the allegations.....Ashley kennedy3 (talk) 22:12, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
NPOV Tag
The documentation at {{NPOV}} says "Do not use this template unless there is an ongoing dispute."
It's my understanding that a POV tag is normally supposed to contain a link to a particular section of the talk page, which should list particular problems with the article, so that when those items have been adequately addressed then the tag can be removed. I would appreciate it if that is done here: PR, would you please specify what the issue or issues are that the tag is intended to refer to. To specify the section of the talk page, use {{POV|talk page section name}}. (The NPOV template is a redirect to the POV template.) ☺ Coppertwig (talk) 21:27, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
- I don't know where to start - but an obvious place is the sudden inclusion (just since 30th Sept, 14 days ago) of 30 references to a foreign language book "# Harel, Amos; Avi Isacharoff (2004). The Seventh War. Tel-Aviv: Yedioth Aharonoth Books and Chemed Books, 431. ISBN 9655117677. (Hebrew)" What's the point of having encylopedia policies such as verifiability if we're going to do that? It's clear that they're highly POV "Harel and Isacharoff wrote that the IDF's misconduct with the media, including Kitri's statement, contributed to the allegations of massacre". Every genuine source points the finger at the IDF for keeping medical assistance out of the camp for 10 days as the single most serious problem.
- On top of the trampling of a core policy verifiability of the project, we have the usual culprits, in spades:
- 1) Trivial material from non-RS sources inserted (eg the first three entries to the reference list are #1 = Harel and Isacharoff (mentioned above, completely unverifiable), #2 Time Magazine (12 cites), #3 Israel Ministry of Foreign Affairs). A much lauded reference to "56 dead" comes from "Back to the Moslem Terrorist's Page" - even if it's genuine, it's still 2nd-hand from a source that, like the UNRWA quoted by Amnesty, is speaking with a gun held to his head.
- 2) Blatant POV cherry-picking eg the only substantive mention of helicopters we have is: "On April 4, The Observer reported that Palestinians have called the incident a 'massacre', alleging that ... helicopters fired indiscriminately on a civilian area". What does this same source actually say? "helicopters that swarmed angrily above the city's roofs, firing indiscriminately into the city's crowded refugee camp". Many other sources call the shooting "like rain" - what's so difficult?
- 3) So many major elements from the RS left out that "most of the article is missing". I have a list of
1613 distinct elements that I think probably need including if the article is to give a representative view of the incident as reported in the RS. But I've been prevented from getting a single one in, I can't even list them for consideration without a barrage of non-policy objections - the Telegraph, Fox News and an Israeli newspaper dismissed with "This is just insinuation and hearsay. etc etc". PR 19:12, 14 October 2008 (UTC) rewritten by PalestineRemembered on 10:13, 8 November 2008. Jaakobou 10:33, 8 November 2008 (UTC)- A few replies:
- Regarding the book. It would indeed be preferable if it was available in English, but WP:NONENG allows foreign language sources in such cases. You could question the book's reliability, of course. However, we did welcome Amos Harel as a correspondent for Haaretz, including this favorite. I don't know about "genuine" sources, but Harel and Isacharoff do say that. I simply preferred to cite other sources for this fact, again per WP:NONENG.
- 1) I've seen Time Magazine cited many times on Misplaced Pages. Was it ever deemed unreliable? PR - see below. The Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs is only used once to quote an Israeli claim. PR - then it should not be in the lead. I'll be willing to negotiate the "56" if no other source can be found. Is this acceptable? PR - it's still a newspaper owned by the Moonies, by a reporter who (I'm told) was accused of fabricating Arabic quotations by Canada's national broadcaster.
- 2) Read the source again. I've cited it quite meticulously in the context of the massacre claims. "Like rain" is a metaphor. We don't use those per WP:NPOV. PR - the use of the helicopters was widespread, likely very deadly and widely remarked - we mention them as an "allegation" by Palestinians.
- 3) Most of the issues "dismissed" in the diff you gave, particularly the burial of the bodies, are detailed in the article.PR - I don't see Sharon, I don't see his advisor, I don't see the UN special envoy or the 12 days, I see slighting remarks about the Red Cross, I don't see the bulldozer driver or the bomb-disposal or the killing of UN staff or a whole lot of other things. -- Nudve (talk) 19:46, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- First of all let me say that the article has improved considerably. The layout is better, the readability is better - and it's even closer to NPOV than it's been all the time I've known it. If a lot of it was your work, then I commend you - I'll even support locking it down now before damage is done to it. But only a cursory examination tells me there are substantial POV issues remaining and it should remain tagged.
- I can see the temptation to use sources that English-language editors cannot check, but this practice cannot give confidence to other editors, nor to readers. It's not as if there isn't lots and lots of material from regular accessible sources. And policy asks for RS translations - here we are, using a non-English source more than any other, with no translation whatsoever. Verifiability is a core policy, not to be cast aside lightly.
- Time Magazine is 2nd in our reference list (ie we're using it for references in the lead). Now, Time Magazine actually published a very hard-hitting article on the run-up to Jenin - not just quoting the well-known "Palestinians must be hit ... must cause them losses, victims it said that Sharon's words were linked directly to the military action that followed "He went on to do just that, unleashing a broader military offensive than anything seen so far in the past 17 months of fighting.". Oh, but that Time article has been repeatedly edit-warred out of our article .... I wonder why. Even the famous Sharon quote without the commentary is missing! Instead of this main-stream article, the one we've referenced is an insulting white-wash - starts "The street is a new one, carved by a huge bulldozer out of what was once a narrow alley" - is it too much to ask we think of the victims before before we use anything so insensitive?
- Moreover, Time Magazines claim to have carried out an investigation is worthless - so what's it doing ahead of real investigations from the UN, HRW and Amnesty? Amnesty is quoted (relatively well) but is not referenced once in the text. HRW is not referenced once it the text, it gets only "The report said there was no massacre, but did accuse the IDF of committing war crimes", which has been filtered through the BBC and most certainly doesn't give a flavour of what they actually say. The UN report isn't directly referenced either! No mention of the Jordanian, Qatar and EU contributions, that cannot be right. If you want input from me, I'd offer to write the UN report section. PR 21:45, 14 October 2008 (UTC)
- About Sharon's quote: I don't know who "edit-warred" it out and why, but I think it's undue, just like the Passover massacre. As I said, it belongs in Operation Defensive Shield, not here. The destruction is detailed in the article, but this is not a memorial site and we are not here to "think of the victims" of anything.
- The reliability of the NGOs has been questioned on this page recently. A serious discussion on their reliability probably belongs elsewhere. However, they are definitely not information sources the way newspapers and books are. As I said in my draft proposal above, I preferred to treat them as primary sources and filter them through mainstream secondary sources, such as the BBC. If no mainstream source thought it right to mention the Jordanian, Qatar and EU contributions, for example, then maybe it's not that historically notable. The BBC's filter may be imperfect, but I still think its preferable to our synthesis of it. Besides, we've already seen where this road leads: One user adds his favorite quote from the report, then another one adds his for "balance", and pretty soon the entire section is a quote farm. I think it's better to leave the reports as external links so that the readers can read them and decide for themselves which parts are important and whether it is pro-Israeli, pro-Palestinian, or whatever. Anyway, that's my opinion, and perhaps we should wait for other users' opinions on this. -- Nudve (talk) 11:15, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
- Re NGOs. A lot of the criticism and questioning of genuinely non-partisan organisations is unfounded and seems to be politically motivated (and please, if it's coming from NGO Monitor or even worse individual WP editors can be pretty much brushed aside). Reports by Amnesty and HRW etc are professional, properly researched papers, which the groups involved will have put a lot of work into and will have checked over pretty thoroughly before being published. Having said that, I accept that they are arguably primary sources and as per policy we should for the most part rely on reliable secondary sources for interpretation of what they say; also that we run the risk of quote-farming otherwise. However -
- One could see the site investigations, witness statements and submissions that go into these reports as being the relevant primary sources, with the finished, published reports acting as a genuine secondary source.
- Either way, policy does permit reference to primary sources for straightforward facts or text.
- The above is doubly safe if done with a clear "according to Amnesty/HRW etc" attribution
- When using secondary sources, we have to remember that they will differ among themselves and we would have to look at a broad range of them (sorry, but this goes back to the simplistic "it was determined that there was no massacre" line that I have remarked on endlessly above - finding a BBC headline that happens to interpret one of the reports as saying "no massacre" does not mean the issue is settled once and for all, as there are other reliable secondary sources that interpret it differently)
- Using the media generally as the main secondary source for interpretation of those reports (as opposed to verifiable facts per se) also carries risks, as media outlets of course often have a considerable partisan bias.
- Also prioritising secondary media sources - as PR points out - leads to the slightly odd result that a self-styled "investigation" by a Time magazine journalist could be seen as ranking above a more formal investigation by a specialist organisation.
- Anyway that's my latest piece of waffle. --Nickhh (talk) 11:58, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
- Re NGOs. A lot of the criticism and questioning of genuinely non-partisan organisations is unfounded and seems to be politically motivated (and please, if it's coming from NGO Monitor or even worse individual WP editors can be pretty much brushed aside). Reports by Amnesty and HRW etc are professional, properly researched papers, which the groups involved will have put a lot of work into and will have checked over pretty thoroughly before being published. Having said that, I accept that they are arguably primary sources and as per policy we should for the most part rely on reliable secondary sources for interpretation of what they say; also that we run the risk of quote-farming otherwise. However -
POV sectional issues
POV starts from the introduction, It must be the only article that describes the reactions to a massacre allegations before even saying there was a incident.....The section on the Israeli reasons for going in is named yet the information about those reasons is interspersed throughout the article....that or start a section on why there were bombs being set off in Israel something on the lines of ..."Israeli Oppression causes Backlash"...Ashley kennedy3 (talk) 10:05, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
- That is almost funny. That headliner is the rationale for virtually every attack on Israel and Israelis by Palestinians, as well as Israeli attacks on Palestinians. Why did the Intifada start? ""Israeli Oppression causes Backlash" Why was there a suicide bombing? "Israeli Oppression causes Backlash" Why was there a Battle of Jenin? "Israeli Oppression causes Backlash" AK et al would be happy if Wiki were one big article that says "Israeli Oppression causes Backlash"-- that is all Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.' Right? Tundrabuggy (talk) 04:54, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
- One of the problems that would be easiest to fix is the trivial summary we have of the UN report. It's the "official report", compiled after agreement and promises of cooperation from all parties, and it includes the considered responses of the EU, the PA and Jordan (along with mention of material from Qatar). PR 10:53, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
Fact checking
In the Background section I came upon this sentence: "Several hundred armed men from the Al-Aqsa Martyrs Brigades, Tanzim, Palestinian Islamic Jihad, and Hamas had been using the Jenin refugee camp as a base, known as "the martyrs' capital", and of the 100 suicide bombers who had launched terrorist attacks since the Second Intifada began in October 28, 2000 attacks had been launched from there." Note 6 says 28 'martyrs' came from Jenin. The way this was written it sounds like 100 suicide bombers launched 2000 attacks, all from Jenin. So the reference is pretty well screwed up, and no source is given at all for the 2000 attacks. Will whoever wrote this, please clarify or I will place a label here in a couple days if someone else doesn't beat me to it. Tundrabuggy (talk) 05:07, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
ok, I get it now. I can fix it. Tundrabuggy (talk) 16:09, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
D9 Operator Moshe Nissim Interview
There is a Gush Shalom translation based on Hebrew original of the Newspaper Yediot Aharonot with D9 operator Moshe Nissim over Jenin Battle. The interview with Moshe Nissim is made by Tsadok Yeheskeli, published in Israeli Newspaper Yediot Aharonot on 31 May 2002 and translated by Gush-Shalom word by word. The original Hebrew is here
"What is documented in this portion, though shocking, is on record in the Israeli Newspaper Yediot Aharonot's, May 31, 2002 articleJenin, A Soldiers Story by Tsadok Yeheskeli. The link will take you to the English translation of the original Hebrew article. We also cleaned it up to make it easier to read. That version can be accessed HERE. The sentiments are not made up. They were expressed by D-9 bulldozer operator Moshe (Kurdi Bear) Nissim elaborating on his participation in the Jenin Massacre earlier that year)."
"It is the first absolutely sincere Israeli eyewitness testimony on what actually happened in the Jenin Refugee Camp, by one of the soldiers who did it. He is quite proud of his mission. Apart from the shocking revelations, this is also a startling human document. After publication - and in spite of it - the unit to which the man belongs received from the army command an official citation for outstanding service." and
Is there anyone can read Hebrew that can help checking the translations integrity. Kasaalan (talk) 19:04, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
- You can run it through Google Translate and compare. By the way, Gush Shalom is not a reliable source (except to describe itself), nor is it a particularly significant POV. Jalapenos do exist (talk) 21:44, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
- I haven't read the whole thing, but the key points are correct translations except the first one, which actually says "I entered Jenin like crazy/mad", etc. However, as Jalapenos do exist noted, Gush Shalom is not a reliable sources, and would almost always constitute as WP:FRINGE (not unlike Arutz Sheva for example). We can't be sure if this was really published in Yediot Aharonot, but even if it was, the newspaper's weekend edition prints several insets full of personal stories like this, which should not be cited unless there's something extremely significant there, like an important quote by an important politician or something. -- Ynhockey 22:56, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
Note: While your source calls it in that title, there was no massacre in Jenin; Only a blood libel which ended up being rejected by the absolute majority of mainstream sources. Jaakobou 23:33, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
blood libel is a "false story spread in order to create hatred for a certain group of people" well massacre definition depends where you stand, if you enter a refugee camp destroy dozens of shatters where the people you exiled from their own home and land trying to live, then kill civillians by use of excessive and indiscriminate force by fighting among them, some people Israeli people can call it massacre and claiming it otherwise will not bring back the dead people. A Jewish peace organisations definition might differ from what you refer mainstream which is highly under Israel influence anyway.
"The D-9s rumbled farther into the heart of the camp, flattening an area 200 yds. square; Human Rights Watch reports that 140 buildings were leveled, and more than 200 were severely damaged. ... Throughout the operation, Palestinian officials had said that as many as 800 had been killed. ... Charles Kapes, the deputy chief of the U.N. office in the camp, says 54 dead have been pulled from the wreckage and 49 Palestinians are missing, of whom 18 are residents of the camp. Human Rights Watch says 52 were killed, of whom only 27 were thought to be armed Palestinians. The Israelis say they found 46 dead in the rubble, including a pile of five bodies that had been booby-trapped. Of these 46, say the Israelis, all but three were "fighters," men ages 18 to 40. The Jenin Hospital, meanwhile, says 52 camp residents died, including five women and four children under the age of 15. Of the 43 dead men, eight were 55 or older and therefore probably not involved in the fighting. No matter whose figures one accepts, "there was no massacre," concludes Amnesty's Holley."Time Jenin
Right there was no massacre while you took a fight in the center of a refugee camp, so that is mainstream definition. Kasaalan (talk) 09:17, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- Please do everyone a favour, and draw people's attention to the pro-Israel group, AISH still bemoaning the fact that the "The myth of the massacre endures to this day" 2 years after the incident. This TalkPage discussion earlier high-lighted some of the bitter out-rage and teeth-gnashing of the pro-Israeli blogosphere because eg "None has since retracted the mendacious claims nor tried to find out how they were misled." - (Haaretz, 17th July 2002 - 3 months later).
- Note, I don't personally much care for the word "massacre", but there's no question that "Jenin Massacre" is what the event is known as all around the world. PR 11:06, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
Link collections The Jenin Massacre of April 2002 Battle of Jenin 2002 (battle) - History Research Guide Kasaalan (talk) 09:28, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
About the Gush Shalom might not be reliable issue, they might not be reliable but they provide the Hebrew original with translation, therefore if the Hebrew original fits their translation, we can further search Yediot Aharonot archives from their page, to the date they provided. I don't know Hebrew so I cannot research on the matter. And yes there is important things in the article to be mentioned, for example he claims with only a couple of hours training he operated a D9 which is a deadly machine under the hand of untrained operators. He got medal award from Israel army after the publication of the interview, these are notable things to mention. By the way Moshe is full of hatred in any way which is also brings another question how an army arm him instead mentally traiting him. Kasaalan (talk) 09:28, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- The interview was cited by several sources other than Gush Shalom. The question here is reliability and weight. I tend to agree with Ynhockey that Gush Shalom is probably not the best source. Perhaps it should be mentioned, but not cited in toto. -- Nudve (talk) 10:31, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- What this interview shows most clearly is that there WAS NO MASSACRE. It actually sheds more light on this guy's psyche than anything else. He comes across as a simple fellow, totally uneducated, with an idiosyncratic way of describing things, an inferiority complex, and a very strong craving for attention. He is being milked by the media, and is more than happy to share his "insights" to prove he is "worth something." He may be interesting as a case study for sociologists, but I would be very careful about treating his words as historical truth. Actually, he would make a good character in the Israeli film industry's next self-hating movie.--Gilabrand (talk) 11:07, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- Your posting must have edit-conflicted with the clear evidence a few lines further up that even (in fact, especially) the teeth-gnashing pro-Israel blogosphere bemoans the fact that their "No Massacre" insistence never gained any traction. PR 11:22, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- What this interview shows most clearly is that there WAS NO MASSACRE. It actually sheds more light on this guy's psyche than anything else. He comes across as a simple fellow, totally uneducated, with an idiosyncratic way of describing things, an inferiority complex, and a very strong craving for attention. He is being milked by the media, and is more than happy to share his "insights" to prove he is "worth something." He may be interesting as a case study for sociologists, but I would be very careful about treating his words as historical truth. Actually, he would make a good character in the Israeli film industry's next self-hating movie.--Gilabrand (talk) 11:07, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- @Nudve - thank you for confirming that Gush Shalom is not seriously suspected of either inciting hatred nor falsification in this case (or indeed, any other).
- But I must challenge you over the significance of a participant admitting to reckless disregard for the safety of Palestinians, with deaths amongst them a virtual certainty. This can only throw serious doubt on all the repeated claims from the IDF that it attempted to protect civilians. Since, in addition, there are detailed and widespread claims of war-crimes from neutral sources, this puts a whole new perspective on this incident. PR 11:22, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- Well testimonies always should be taken precautously, yet if IDF makes a pyscho into a D9 operator, it is their crime not ours. The interview is notable somehow, therefore should be mentioned more or less, we can always place credibility warning. But I will try to locate exact article link from original newspaper. Kasaalan (talk) 11:44, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- I suppose it does have some notability. I'll see how I can add this. -- Nudve (talk) 13:29, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- Done. I suppose it could still be tweaked, but I believe this is pretty much due weight. -- Nudve (talk) 13:49, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- Well testimonies always should be taken precautously, yet if IDF makes a pyscho into a D9 operator, it is their crime not ours. The interview is notable somehow, therefore should be mentioned more or less, we can always place credibility warning. But I will try to locate exact article link from original newspaper. Kasaalan (talk) 11:44, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
Sources and Citation for Moshe Nissim Interview
Most of the sources on internet for the interview based on therefore I am searching other sources.
Sources Using Gush Shalom English translation of Gush Shalom Hebrew Text as a reference
- CENTRAL CONNECTICUT STATE UNIVERSITY BLINDED BY TERROR UNITED STATES POLICY TOWARDS THE USE OF TERROR IN THE ISRAELI - PALESTINIAN CONFLICT THESIS by Steven B. Kramer "Tsadok Yehezkeli, “I Made Them a Stadium in the Middle of the Camp,” Yediot Aharonot, 31 May 2002, translated from Hebrew by Gush Shalom, available from http://www.gush-shalom.org/archives/kurdi_eng.html; Internet, accessed April 8, 2005."
- Lessons in Urbicide Stephen Graham Durham University Department of Geography
- Quoted in the Book Derek Gregory's The Colonial Present: Afghanistan, Palestine, and Iraq pgs. 114 and 115 forum not reliable source
- Quoted in Surin, Kenneth, 1948- "The Night Can Sweat with Terror As Before": Afterthoughts The South Atlantic Quarterly - Volume 102, Number 4, Fall 2003, pp. 895-913 Duke University Press from the Book Israel/Palestine: How to End the War of 1948, 2nd ed. (Open Media) (Paperback) by Tanya Reinhart professor of linguistics and cultural studies at Tel Aviv University and at the University of Utrecht
- How they bulldozed Jenin By Asma Rashid Pakistan Newspaper
Reference to Moshe Nissim interview
Medal of Honour Moshe Nissim Receive After Publication of the Interview
Partly Translations of the Interview by Other Parties
- Israel’s Policy of Displacement: PA Interviews Jeff Halper the coordinator of the Israeli Committee Against House Demolitions (ICAHD) OR Israel’s Policy of Displacement: Political Affairs Interviews Jeff Halper OR his book "An Israeli in Palestine: Resisting Dispossession, Redeeming Israel (Paperback) by Jeff Halper (Author)"
Jenin
I will add the sources I can find, you can help too, if you can search in Hebrew. Kasaalan (talk) 14:22, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
References
- Palestinians: Thousands in mass graves, United Press International, April 12, 2002
- Secretary-General of Palestinian Authority Cabinet Ahmed Abdel Rahman said, "They (Israeli solders) took hundreds of bodies to northern Israeli to hide their massacre they committed against our people.
"This massacre is not less than the massacres committed against the Palestinian people in the refugee camps of Sabra and Shatila in Lebanon."
He said thousands of Palestinians were either killed and buried in massive graveyards or smashed under houses destroyed in Jenin and Nablus. - In The CrossHearts The Persecution of an American Musician by Laura Dawn Lewis
- Jenin: A Soldier's Triumph in his own Words
- I made them a stadium in the middle of the camp The original translation By Yediot Aharnonot into English is available with Gush Shalom Comments
Recent additions
I'm referring to this. The 2009 conflict, as Nocal100 agreed, is irrelevant. I'm not the ones who added Cremonesi's quote in the first place, and I'm willing to discuss adjusting it.
Amnesty's accusations of "human shields" are already mentioned in the Massacre allegations section (which could perhaps be renamed). Nobody says this is how "the Israelis dealt with this problem". This is a violation of WP:SYNTH. If at all, this belongs in the Battle section.
The quotations from the Haaretz article don't discuss massacre allegations, which makes them completely WP:UNDUE in this section. We have already agreed to cut down on the massive quote farm this article had become.
I'm going to revert it, and I ask that consensus be reached before this is introduced. Thanks, Nudve (talk) 08:00, 13 February 2009 (UTC)
Retractions
An Israeli officer made an errorneous statement during an interview on Israeli radio and his statement was clarified/retracted later that same day. In another incident, Peres was misquoted by Haaretz (on the 9th) who took notice to publish his true opinion the following day. The Foreign news source (The Guardian) is an expanded op-ed that talks in general on how they think the myth became to be. They confused the information given in regards to the Haaretz related error and merged it with the real clarification (mentioned as a retraction) of the IDF officer. Cheers, Jaakobou 10:27, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- First of all, the Guardian article was written by Sharon Sadeh, who is "London correspondent of the Israeli liberal newspaper Ha'aretz", not exactly a foreign source. Sadeh refers to a statement made by Peres (published by Reuters) regarding massacre allegations. Which statement do you think Sadeh is referring to? -- Nudve (talk) 10:43, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- What we need is a properly balanced section with competing commentaries. Ther is a significant critical commentary/narrative, put forth by The Weekly Standard, the Anti-Defamation League, CAMERA, and others and it goes as follows: Palestinians exaggerated and fabricated, as part of a general pattern of deceiving the international media, and the media bought in hook line and sinker into the idea of a "Jenin massacre," which subsequent investigations disproved. The second significant narrative, from mainstream media and international human-rights organizations, is as follows: because Jenin was under 24-hour curfew and sealed from journalists, international observers, and even medical aid for the duration of a devastating siege, rumors arose of massacres and body counts in the hundreds; when those people got in they mostly described the scene as even worse than they'd imagined and made multiple accusations of war-crimes. 80.40.225.228 (talk) 15:46, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- There's already some attempt at this but you're free to try and contribute further to the article. Jaakobou 15:51, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure exactly what you are suggesting. The human-rights organizations are cited, as are reliable sources that disagree. I don't think promoting CAMERA's narrative is a good idea. -- Nudve (talk) 18:07, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- There's already some attempt at this but you're free to try and contribute further to the article. Jaakobou 15:51, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- Heyo Nudve,
- Even if Sadeh is an Haaretz affiliate (taking your word on it), they are still writing a month later for a foreign paper, an op-ed about how they think the massacre myth came to be. The paragraph we're talking about here is a shallow combination of two events, and clearly, an Haaretz representative wouldn't point the finger at themselves when on the 9th they published a "private" thing and on the 10th they "retracted" with a completely opposite and official version. Haaretz editor has pointed fingers towards his staff (as well as other journalists) so there was an error at The Guardian with the writer suggesting the official version was retracted which did not happen. Jaakobou 16:04, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- First, don't take my word on it. It's written at the bottom of the article. I'm not sure I follow the rest of the argument: Are you saying that the "Statement" that was retracted was the "private reference", which says something different from the one Sadeh is describing, or that it was retracted by Haaretz and not by Peres? -- Nudve (talk) 18:07, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- I'm saying that, considering we have the official statement which is a "retraction" of the first Haaretz claim, that it would be a truely exceptional double tracking from Peres to change statements to complete opposites twice within such a shot time span. The Guardian op-ed clearly has an error here and unless we have an Haaretz retraction of the the official statement or something that validates this truely exceptional (read: impossible) double back tracking, then this paragraph from a foreign news source cannot be taken as fact. Op-ed's do make errors, and this is a pretty obvious one. Jaakobou 00:04, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- So the official statement is the retraction of the "private" statement? Could be. This source, of questionable reliability, seems to support this. This one is more reliable, but not quite helpful. Have you found anything else? -- Nudve (talk) 06:26, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- I'm saying that, considering we have the official statement which is a "retraction" of the first Haaretz claim, that it would be a truely exceptional double tracking from Peres to change statements to complete opposites twice within such a shot time span. The Guardian op-ed clearly has an error here and unless we have an Haaretz retraction of the the official statement or something that validates this truely exceptional (read: impossible) double back tracking, then this paragraph from a foreign news source cannot be taken as fact. Op-ed's do make errors, and this is a pretty obvious one. Jaakobou 00:04, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- First, don't take my word on it. It's written at the bottom of the article. I'm not sure I follow the rest of the argument: Are you saying that the "Statement" that was retracted was the "private reference", which says something different from the one Sadeh is describing, or that it was retracted by Haaretz and not by Peres? -- Nudve (talk) 18:07, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
- What we need is a properly balanced section with competing commentaries. Ther is a significant critical commentary/narrative, put forth by The Weekly Standard, the Anti-Defamation League, CAMERA, and others and it goes as follows: Palestinians exaggerated and fabricated, as part of a general pattern of deceiving the international media, and the media bought in hook line and sinker into the idea of a "Jenin massacre," which subsequent investigations disproved. The second significant narrative, from mainstream media and international human-rights organizations, is as follows: because Jenin was under 24-hour curfew and sealed from journalists, international observers, and even medical aid for the duration of a devastating siege, rumors arose of massacres and body counts in the hundreds; when those people got in they mostly described the scene as even worse than they'd imagined and made multiple accusations of war-crimes. 80.40.225.228 (talk) 15:46, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
Comment: Opinion editorials should not be used as sources anyway, other than possibly to quote the author of the editorial. In some cases, they may be used after 'according to ...' or '... claims that ...', but definitely not for exceptional claims. -- Ynhockey 09:57, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- First one is clearly a propaganda piece, but the second one is good enough to show the error of the one I removed. Chalk another one for the 'Jenin massacre syndrome'. Jaakobou 10:28, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- The Barghouti article at Zmag is presumably refering to a different incident, wherein Peres was more explicit. When last I looked, the allegation that "In private, Peres is referring to the battle as a 'massacre'" which appeared in Haaretz had never even been refuted, let alone retracted. This later article in Haaretz doesn't suggest that the earlier Haaretz article had mis-reported what Peres was saying in private (in most people's minds, it would confirm it!), or say there'd been a retraction.
- However, given the huge amount of highly relevant other information that's been edit-warred from this article, and given the imprecise and abused nature of the word "massacre", I can't see it belongs anywhere other than as an "also known as Jenin Massacre" in the lead. That being the title by which it is, rightly or wrongly, known around the world. PR 11:07, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
- Well, if we can't use Sadeh's article, then I suppose the current revision is OK. -- Nudve (talk) 13:31, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
Jeningrad
Heyo Nudve,
Actually, the 'Jeningrad' term was used as one of the attempts to portray Israel as killing hundreds of thousands. 800,000 Russians died during the 900-day siege of Leningrad; 1.3 million died in Stalingrad.
Warm regards, Jaakobou 10:12, 17 February 2009 (UTC)
- Maybe. What are you suggesting? -- Nudve (talk) 12:14, 17 February 2009 (UTC)
- I need to think about it a little. Meantime, do you mind restoring the invisible note I've added at the end of the paragraph?
- Warm regards, Jaakobou 17:37, 17 February 2009 (UTC)
- OK, I self-reverted. -- Nudve (talk) 05:47, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
Ok Nudve. I've decided to bring up a few sources and see if you have any suggestions:
Post-Event reactions by Israelis/Jews, Palestinians, Media members:
- CNN Transcript - you've come under some widespread criticism here in the United States... Perhaps 500 Palestinians murdered... you suggested." (Erekat also comments)
- Jerusalem Post hosted on take-a-pen.org (source), jcpa article, Camera article - Israeli and Jewish criticism articles.
- CNN Transcript - Criticism at Erekat (e.v. Erekat spoke with CNN from Jericho, massacre claims were regarding Jenin).
- CNN Transcript - "the whole notion of a fact-finding group was born out of a fundamental lie, that Israel had committed a massacre in Jenin. Originally you had Palestinian spokesmen like Saeb Erakat stating on CNN that upwards of 500 Palestinians were killed in Jenin. We now know that the figure is even around a 10th of that. And that's now verified not only by Israeli sources, but also by Palestinian sources. So the entire motivation for conducting this operation basically doesn't exist any longer."
- "Palestinian negotiator Saeb Erekat rejected the UN report, saying an "Israeli massacre in Jenin's refugee camp clearly happened... and crimes against humanity also took place"."
- "Charges of war crimes committed by Israel were made, while Palestinian authorities made unsubstantiated claims of a wide-scale massacre."
- "yesterday I was in Jenin, and it is perfectly clear that the allegations of massacre in Jenin have caused anti- semitism because it's Israel, the Jewish state and the Jews. It's equally clear from having been there, talked to the UNHRA (ph) U.N. people that the allegations are totally untrue and without foundation."
- , , - Erekat rejected the UN report.
- 'Jenin massacre syndrome'
That's what I got for now... still missing some sources where Palestinians describe the events as a great victory. Just recently (a month ago) Zacharia Zbeidi was on TV repeating the same 'victory' perspective so I'm hoping to find a few soon.
Cheers, Jaakobou 06:59, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure I understand what you are trying to do here with those sources. The massacre allegations are already well represented in the article and the lead. What you asked for in the invisible comment was a mention that the battle is also perceived as a heroic, Stalingrad-like stand, and this is what "Jeningrad" is about. Am I missing something here? -- Nudve (talk) 07:48, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- What's missing in the lead is a mini-paragrah about notable post-battle reactions - Israeli/Jewish anger over the way it were reported, global media reaction to Palestinians, and the two opposing perspectives taken by the Palestinians (i.e. (A) 'it was a massacre' and (B) 'great/heroic victory'). I thought my comment clarified this but maybe I mis-worded it. Anyways, I'm thinking us two have opposing perspectives on what happened in stalingrad and the intentions of Arafat when he used the term 'Jeningrad'... I don't think he was talking heroics at the time. Jaakobou 08:10, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- If you think the "notable post-battle reactions" are that important, you can add them, or suggest them here first. About Jeningrad: The two sources used in the article are this and this. -- Nudve (talk) 08:25, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- Addendum: I just found this NY Times article. Maybe it should be used in the article. -- Nudve (talk) 08:39, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- What's missing in the lead is a mini-paragrah about notable post-battle reactions - Israeli/Jewish anger over the way it were reported, global media reaction to Palestinians, and the two opposing perspectives taken by the Palestinians (i.e. (A) 'it was a massacre' and (B) 'great/heroic victory'). I thought my comment clarified this but maybe I mis-worded it. Anyways, I'm thinking us two have opposing perspectives on what happened in stalingrad and the intentions of Arafat when he used the term 'Jeningrad'... I don't think he was talking heroics at the time. Jaakobou 08:10, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
"Massacre allegations"
Does some bright spark want to explain to me why the reports of Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch, one of which didn't even discuss "massacres" and the other used the word "massacre" just once, to say there was no evidence for deliberate massacres, should be in a section called "Massacre allegations?" It has the definite effect of obscuring and downplaying the very serious evidence these reports found for "grave breaches" of international humanitarian law by Israel. Seems to be intentional. <eleland/talkedits> 20:49, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
- Dear Eleland,
- There might be a couple things in your comment that perhaps you would like to rephrase. I'd suggest you start by reviewing the sources you mention and looking up the word 'militant' as well as re-reading the mission statement of the WP:IPCOLL.
- Warm regards, Jaakobou 06:27, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- One option could be renaming the section: "Allegations of massacre and of war crimes". Any thoughts? -- Nudve (talk) 07:02, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- Dearest Jaakobou,
- Please avoid using talk pages for irrelevant and vaguely threatening statements of this kind.
- Your Humble and Obedient Servant,
- <eleland/talkedits> 09:29, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- But seriously, I'd suggest that we have a section "Investigations" which would summarize the Amnesty, HRW, UN, and B'Tselem reports, followed by a section called "Massacre" controversy which would gather the semantic arguments about "massacres." Again, none of these reports was written to deal with "massacres," and at least one of the investigators, HRW, took the trouble to specifically discount the relevance of the word "massacre" to their investigation. Also, we ought to remove unsourced and prejudicial claims like "The battle attracted widespread international attention due to Palestinian allegations that a massacre had been committed" - that's demonstrably false, there was intense international focus on Jenin before the word "massacre" had become an issue, and there continued to be intense focus after the charges of systematic house-to-house "massacres" were largely debunked. And, for that matter, the "massacre" allegations came famously from Israeli gov't minister Shimon Peres (hastily retracted,) and a lot of confused reports about hundreds of casualties, refrigerator trucks to whisk away bodies, etc, came from the IDF Spokesperson's Office. <eleland/talkedits> 09:29, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- There seems to be a number of errors within your comment. I'd appreciate a reference to your statement that, "there was intense international focus on Jenin before the word "massacre" had become an issue".
- p.s. massacre claims came since the earliest days of the fighting (Sample: "On April 4, The Observer reported that Palestinians called the incident a 'massacre'"), the Haaretz error came on the 9th and was corrected on the 10th. Please avoid the rehashing of mis-information.
- Warm regards, Jaakobou 12:10, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- One option could be renaming the section: "Allegations of massacre and of war crimes". Any thoughts? -- Nudve (talk) 07:02, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
Recent anon. contribution
I've noticed this edit and it fitted how I rememebred the source. Checing it word for word, I see a couple gaps in the text so I'm thinking the editor missed one or two '...' with his quotation of the source. Anyways, the input seems acurrate and just needs a little fixup.
Historical notes: To be frank, a while back I've discussed this source considerably with PalestineRememebered and rejected its use duo to the non factual opinon layden additions to this translation by an unknown member of Gush Shalom, which are an extremist left-wing activisim group. I have made out a text version which was acceptable to me basing it on the Hebrew version of Gush-Shalom, which at least (assuming it was correct) did not include the opinions of an unknown activist.
Here's my old text...
Yediot Aharonot's "7 Days" editorial released a personal interview with Moshe Nissim (nicknamed "Kurdi Bear", Hebrew: "דובי כורדי"), a problematic army reserve soldier who insisted on becoming a D-9 driver, as stating that regardless of the speaker calls, he personally gave no one a chance and demolished the homes as quickly as possible while thinking about all the explosives hidden in the camp and the Israeli soldiers being in a death trap situation. Nissim added his disregard for the possibility that he could be killed and that despite not witnessing any deaths, he did not care and he believes that people died inside the houses.
Whether this is important enough to be included, I'm uncertain. It's just a first-person account/story from a mentally unstable army reserve. No one correoberates their story and it's just as 'true' as those made by various Palestinian eye-witnesses such as the store-keeper who 'saw' dead bodies in an army truck that when the reporter checked, the truck had vegetables and food for the soldiers... no bodies.
Warm regards, Jaakobou 07:59, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- I was trying to avoid giving Nissim's interview undue weight, for the reasons you mentioned. Its main claim to notability comes not from its credibility, but from the fact that it was much talked-about, and several secondary sources, including the book I cited, decided to reproduce it. -- Nudve (talk) 08:29, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- The gush-shalom English page (and it's personal opinions) should be removed, for starters. I'd apprecaite it if you re-mention all the sources that mention this story so I can give it's notability extra consideration. Jaakobou 11:57, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- Most English sources seem to rely on Gush Shalom's translation, so it might be useful. Mentioning all the sources would be difficult, but here is a Google search for "Kurdi Bear", so you can take your pick. -- Nudve (talk) 13:12, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- The gush-shalom English page (and it's personal opinions) should be removed, for starters. I'd apprecaite it if you re-mention all the sources that mention this story so I can give it's notability extra consideration. Jaakobou 11:57, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- The majority of those are either blogs or unrelated to the Jenin issue. There doesn't seem to be any notable report other than the Yediot Akhronot '7 Days' weekly (which can't be reproduced online) -- unless you consider 'Pakistan Dawn' or the 'Khaleej Times' to be reliable and notable sources for reproducing Israeli reports without messing it up completely. The google search has, for now, gotten me more convliced that this story should be left out. Jaakobou 13:39, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- I know they are not reliable. That's why I looked for a book that is. The fact that it was quoted by many does show some notability. Personally, I don't have any strong sentiment toward this quote, and did not add it in my first draft. I only included it after the discussion earlier on this talk page. -- Nudve (talk) 13:58, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry if I missed this input somewhere, but which book was it? Jaakobou 15:34, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- This one: Winslow, Philip C. (2008-09-01). Victory for Us Is to See You Suffer: In the West Bank with the Palestinians and the Israelis. Beacon Press. ISBN 0807069078. I found it on Google Books. -- Nudve (talk) 15:47, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry if I missed this input somewhere, but which book was it? Jaakobou 15:34, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- I know they are not reliable. That's why I looked for a book that is. The fact that it was quoted by many does show some notability. Personally, I don't have any strong sentiment toward this quote, and did not add it in my first draft. I only included it after the discussion earlier on this talk page. -- Nudve (talk) 13:58, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- The majority of those are either blogs or unrelated to the Jenin issue. There doesn't seem to be any notable report other than the Yediot Akhronot '7 Days' weekly (which can't be reproduced online) -- unless you consider 'Pakistan Dawn' or the 'Khaleej Times' to be reliable and notable sources for reproducing Israeli reports without messing it up completely. The google search has, for now, gotten me more convliced that this story should be left out. Jaakobou 13:39, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- If my checkup is accurate, it's a memoir by an unkonwn UN relief worker which doesn't exactly make a strong case for notability. Heck, an article on electronicintifada would be just as notable as this guy's book mention of the Yediot article.
- p.s. the title of that book is borderline antisemitic, portraying self-defense that uses checkpoints instead of cannons as "sadism".
- With respect, Jaakobou 17:15, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- Here is a Google Books search. If you insist that all those sources do not confer notability, and nobody disagrees, go ahead and remove it. -- Nudve (talk) 17:26, 22 February 2009 (UTC)
- Jaakobou, please keep your paranoia to yourself. "Borderline antisemitic?" It's not even clear who "us" is in the title; I read it as referring to both sides, mutually.
- Oh, actually, according to a review, "intolerance such that as in the title quote, an Israeli relates a conversation with a Palestinian friend, during the height of a bout of very destructive fighting the Palestinian reports they are just happy at this point not to be the only people suffering here." Just the kind of thing you love to add to articles about Palestinians, although when you suspect that Israelis might be getting the same treatment, it's suddenly antisemitic. Please. <eleland/talkedits> 13:46, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
- Here is a Google Books search. If you insist that all those sources do not confer notability, and nobody disagrees, go ahead and remove it. -- Nudve (talk) 17:26, 22 February 2009 (UTC)