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*<s>The section titles are not written with an encyclopedic tone</s> *<s>The section titles are not written with an encyclopedic tone</s>
*the sections themselves are extremely long. It seems like they could be reorganized so that instead of a chronology of the band, each section focused on one element of the band and how it changed throught the band's history. *the sections themselves are extremely long. It seems like they could be reorganized so that instead of a chronology of the band, each section focused on one element of the band and how it changed throught the band's history.
*<s>Lead should be a summary of the articles content, and is rather brief considering the length of the article and the 40+ years the band have existed</s> *<s>Lead should be a summary of the articles content, and is rather brief considering the length of the article and the 50+ years the band have existed</s>
*Fannish tone. *Fannish tone.
*After cleanup, improve to good article status. *After cleanup, improve to good article status.
*unlike many articles for major musical artists, this page has no section about legacy or influence.

Latest revision as of 07:27, 26 April 2013

  • the entire article needs to be sectionalized (try more headings and subheadings); it doesn't look or read like a summary.
  • all images need sources and fair use rationales.
  • The section titles are not written with an encyclopedic tone
  • the sections themselves are extremely long. It seems like they could be reorganized so that instead of a chronology of the band, each section focused on one element of the band and how it changed throught the band's history.
  • Lead should be a summary of the articles content, and is rather brief considering the length of the article and the 50+ years the band have existed
  • Fannish tone.
  • After cleanup, improve to good article status.
  • unlike many articles for major musical artists, this page has no section about legacy or influence.