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== Proposal to include an Indigenous name for Australia. == | |||
'''Archived discussions:''' | |||
* ], ], ], ] | |||
<small>Previously titled: Place holder of information for future edit: Aboriginal Names for Australia </small> | |||
I would like to propose the inclusion of an Indigenous Australian name in the introductory summary and also hopefully a section within the main article. | |||
==Templates== | |||
If we are to keep the tradition of ], a strong proposal is outlined later in the post. However, an endonym would be the strongest symbolically. All the strongest endonyms for Australia in the various languages are defined as "ground; land" and they are: | |||
For crying out loud, instead of continual reverts, could we discuss these blasted templates? There does seem to be a real issue with "template creep", and given that editors of other articles such as ] have given them a speedy farewell, we might want to talk about them. ] ] 23:48, 9 Apr 2005 (UTC) | |||
* Biik: referenced in 34,900 academic articles thus biggest candidate. (Melbourne nation) | |||
:I support '''keep'''ing the templates referring to Commonwealth realms and nations. If not here, then perhaps at ] (realms) and ] (Commonwealth nations), but I'd like to leave them here, as sort of cross references. They're more relevant to the main Australia article than half the external links. The Continents template doesn't really belong here as this is a country article, not a continent article. --] 05:26, 10 Apr 2005 (UTC) | |||
** Kurrek: 713 academic articles (rural Victoria). | |||
* Barna: referenced almost equally at 34,600. However, upon review, it seems to have grown to become a reference specifically to the Nation of Western Australia, i.e. Perth coast until the western state boarder, the size of NSW). | |||
::But I don't think we can create a separate ] article. We just need to expand the continental content, as it were. ] ] 06:33, 10 Apr 2005 (UTC) | |||
:::Currently the Commonwealth template is on ], which seems like a fair compromise. - ] 22:44, May 10, 2005 (UTC) | |||
* Uthuru: Strongest symbolic candidate as it is the word associated with the central inland nation around ]. But I can only find tabloid and social media references of this name, so far none in academia. | |||
==IPA notice== | |||
Does not the IPA notice in the ] section fragment the pronounciation paragraph? It does so in my browser. moved it here, but when I moved it lower again, to prevent the fragmentation, I was accussed of making a bad edit. I do think that the notice should precede the IPA langauge, but I have been unable to position it there without the fragmentation occuring. Could somebody perhaps fix it?--] 05:05, 11 Apr 2005 (UTC) | |||
== What the hell? == | |||
<big><u>Torres Strait Islands Nations as the Primary Candidate for Exonym source:</u></big> | |||
What happened to the page?!? *angry* | |||
Keo Deudai: (Out Back — Back Mainland) | |||
==This should be a featured Article== | |||
* First Primary Candidate | |||
I'm going to try an get this article up to featured status, please leave any suggestins here, and if you wrote sections of the article could you tell me where you got the information so I can compile a reference list. Thanks --] 01:51, 4 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
** Origin: Miriam language of The Torres Strait Islands | |||
** Meaning: Back Mainland, beyond the regions of the TSI'der people | |||
** Academic Recognition: Consensus Established. ~900 academic publications inclusive of variations (google scholar). Examples: | |||
*** (Page 28), Sharp, Nonie., "Stars of Tagai: The Torres Strait Islanders", Aboriginal Studies Press, 1993. (ISBN: 9780855752385) | |||
*** (Page 123, Document page 3) Shnukal, Anna. "From monolingualism to multilingualism in Australia’s Torres Strait island communities" ''International Journal of the Sociology of Language'', vol. 1995, no. 113, 1995, pp. 121-136. https://doi.org/10.1515/ijsl.1995.113.121 | |||
*** John Doolah: Lecturer in Indigenous Education @ Melbourne University | |||
**** Doolah, John., "The Stories Behind the Torres Strait Islander Migration Myth: the journey of the sap/bethey." (2021). http://hdl.handle.net/1959.13/1432705 | |||
***** Explicit study of Keo Deudai | |||
***** Keo Deudai / Kie Daudie (latter phonetically preferred): Greater backmainland beyond (inclusively) TSI ancestral territory | |||
***** Zenadth Kes: Primary inhabited TSI ancestral Territory (Keo Deudai: backmainland, secondary TSI ancestral backmainland, Kie Daudie: backmainland beyond TSI ancestral territory) | |||
**** Doolah, J., 2015. Decolonising the migration and urbanisation of Torres Strait Islanders (Ailan pipel) from the Torres Straits to mainland Australia between the 1960s and 1970s. | |||
***** Kie Daudie: exclusively used | |||
***** Page xvii, document page 17 | Page 47, document page 70 | |||
Context & follow up candidate for Keo Deudai: | |||
:The government section is a bit lacking.--] 16:08, 5 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
* Daudai | |||
:: I think its pretty good, it shouldn't really cover anything beyond the basic structure of the government, the recently featured ] article had the same breakdown. I have added more info on politics and governance to the politics and states sections. Two things that do need to go into the article are ] and the ] and I don't know where to add them, they don't really relate to the structure of the government and they aren't really political. Any ideas?--] 05:59, 9 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
Daudai (Daudie, Deudai/Deudie), is the primary word used among the Torres Strait Islands (TSI / TSI'der ) people and neighbouring nations which means '''Mainland (ancestral)''', denoting the lands themselves. While Zenadth Kes is the territory/region inclusive of waters and lands. Then Papua New Guinea (PNG) is the Op Deudai — Face (front) mainland while Cape York (tip of Australian mainland) and beyond is Keo Daudai — back mainland, inclusive of the TSI ancestral territory of the mainland. Kie Daudie is sometimes used in reference to the mainland beyond the TSI ancestral nation, exclusively. | |||
::Transportation and communication also need a mention, look at the roasting ] got recently--] 06:08, 9 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
Keo Deudai (back mainland) and its variations is the primary variation used in publications to refer to Australia as a whole. The primary driver of variation is the micro-dialects and accents in competition with outside observers (whom lack phonetic-linguistic expertise) attempting to document local history using the english phonetic alphabet where linguistic accuracy is not the primary focus. Additionally, the micro-dialects/accents themselves are also still in revitalisation from the colonial genocide inflicted upon in the past whom are still yet to receive reparations. | |||
*Moved the info on NZ to ]--] 06:29, 9 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:The Government section is good; I just don't like the dot point method. And I'm a bit confused with the Politics section. In most country articles, Politics is used to talk about government in general, whereas we have a separate government section. So if our Politics section is used to talk exclusively about Parliament, why then must Government only be an outline? Shouldn't it be more detailed? | |||
:In the Australian topics table, at the bottom of the page, foreign relations is included under history, but I don't think that's the right place to put it. Do you mean to write about it, or simply include a link to it as a Main article? Either way, there isn't really a corresponding section - the closest are Government and Politics. | |||
:If discussion of military is required for featured articles, a military section could be created, like in the South Africa article. | |||
:I don't know how deep we will be able to delve into transport for Australia, given it's more state-based (and in fact, state concern). I suppose we could have minor discussion on major infrastructure, like inter-state/trans-continental railways, national highways and capital city airports. Perhaps even some unique features like road-trains? Still, I doubt its necessity. | |||
:As for communication, I've never seen it written about before in a country article - not even in South Africa. That's something that could go into Economy possibly, but I don't think it needs a separate section. Actually, transport could also be included in economy. | |||
:It seems that people expect country articles to have to same layout as the CIA World Factbook, and I decidedly disagree - the factbook is hardly something to aspire to. | |||
:Anyways, thank you for the great work you've been doing. I'm sure the article will become a feature with your efforts. --] 07:04, 9 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
::What do you think about the military section in ] article? I think something as simple as that could possibly be included. Actually, what do you think of the layout of the France article as a whole? Also, I have added information on Australia's maritime territory to ] that could be included under geography, as in the France article.--] 11:13, 13 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
Second Primary Candidate: | |||
I merged and pruned the government and politics sections, any opinions?--] 05:30, 16 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
* Ladaigal: (phonetically easier and more inclusive, supported by John Doolah) | |||
** Meaning: Aboriginal people, non-TSI. | |||
** Use: Often used in myth telling of the TSI journey from PNG | |||
*** Ladaigal Country: is the more accurate expression of aboriginal land, Ladaigal alone is and can be used interchangeably between aboriginal people and aboriginal land. | |||
** https://ia801603.us.archive.org/13/items/reportsofcambrid03hadd/reportsofcambrid03hadd.pdf | |||
*** Cambridge Anthropological Expedition to Torres Straits (1898) and Hodes, Jeremy. Index to the Reports of the Cambridge Anthropological Expedition to Torres Straits and Haddon, Alfred C. (Alfred Cort), 1855-1940 and Ray, Sidney Herbert, 1858-1939. Linguistics. Reports of the Cambridge Anthropological Expedition to Torres Straits University Press Cambridge 1901 | |||
*** CATALOGUE PERSISTENT IDENTIFIER: https://nla.gov.au/nla.cat-vn458355 | |||
:just make sure that any of the material you deleted from these sections is either already included in one of the "main articles" either ] or ] as appropriate so that good material doesn't get lost. ] 02:20, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:Could whoever said that the Queen is generally considered to be the head of state please find a source for this statement? This may have been true once, but as many Australians feel that the Governor-General is the head of state, a belief that the Queen is the head of state can hardly be considered general. ] 22:11, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
::Not this, again :/--] 00:37, 18 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:::You don't mind if we have everything shipshape and sourced and accurate, surely? ] 00:38, 18 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
==Infobox== | |||
Are the statistics provided in the infobox in US dollars or Australian? Either way, they are incorrect. I'll fix it, but I just need to know what currency is used.--] 16:15, 13 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
... to be continued ] (]) 04:04, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
: Not sure. This is an Australian article, so should be in AUD (can put in USD for comparison if neccessary). --] 07:53, 14 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:@] Hello there. This isn't the place to put notes or draft content. Please use your sandbox for this. If you have a specific proposal to improve this article please start a discussion here. | |||
== Australia or its commonwealth == | |||
:Thanks ] (]) 06:30, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Hi, that was the intention, to propose the inclusion of an Indigenous Australian name in the introductory summary and also hopefully a section within the main article. I'll take your advice onboard and re-edited the topic name to "Proposal to include an Indigenous name for Australia." ] (]) 07:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::There's no indigenous name for Australia and it's not our place to invent one. <span style=white-space:nowrap;>] <span style="background-color:mistyrose;padding:2px 5px;border-radius:5px;font-family:Arial black">]</span></span> 09:27, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I just provided evidence that there is one, I hope we can arrive to a consensus as to which one is more appropriate. ] (]) 10:14, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:@] sounds interesting, however any of those choices would be us assigning a name when no one name exists. ] (]) 10:06, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Thank you for your interest! I agree, a consensus needs to be achieved from available resources. ] (]) 10:16, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::You misunderstand how this works. It is not up to editors to assign an Indigenous name to Australia out of a field of candidates proposed by an editor; Misplaced Pages is supposed to follow established practice. If a single Indigenous name for Australia ever emerges it will gain wide currency in official publications, the media and everyday use. We won't have to choose one; it will choose itself. Until this happens Australia will remain the only name for Australia in the English language Misplaced Pages. ] (]) 11:19, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::But two names already have recognition is 35,000 publications each? ] (]) 12:12, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::The one you say is in 35,000 publications is just the "Melbourne nation", not even the whole of Australia. Aemilius is quite right, it is not up to us to weigh the options and choose a name- a name will only be suitable for this article when it is in common knowledge and use. ] (]) 12:18, 22 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Frontier wars paragraph == | |||
Wouldn't it be usefull to keep the continent/island and the political structure separate? The first is far more "eternal" than the last. Only plate tectonics can "destroy" the first and it has existed for how many millions of years? On the other hand the commonwealth exists apparently since 1 January 1901. Perhaps the best solution is to change the def in the intro and redistibute its contents under the correct heading, namely politics. -] 14:26, 16 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
I made a change to the ] sentence on the Frontier Wars in order to change the more passive word "Indigenous people died" to "Indigenous people were killed" and similarly change the passive "others were dispossessed" with the active "settlers dispossessed others" as I believe the active is clearer and reads better without changing the underlying meaning of the sentence. After this, there have been further changes by @] and @] that I think deserve discussion. | |||
:I disagree entirely. Australia the country and Australia the continent are one in the same. The natural features of the continent are discussed within the diverging articles of ecology and geography. Most of the continent articles focus upon the polities situated within their bounds, and for Australia, the polity encompasses it in its entirety. The article as it presently exists, is most correct.--] 15:02, 16 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
While I supported the change to split the sentence to read "Those who survived were dispossessed by colonists of their traditional lands", I disagree with the more substantial change to "As settlement expanded, frontier conflicts claimed thousands of lives, predominantly those of Indigenous people." This sentence is much less clear than the previously stable version, "As settlement expanded, thousands of Indigenous people died in frontier conflicts". This sentence suggests causation between settlement expansion to people dying in frontier conflicts. The suggested sentence however, suggests that settlement expansion created the abstract notion of "frontier conflicts" which was the cause of deaths. This is less clear because the phrase "frontier conflicts" is simply an abstract way of describing the process of settlement expansion and resulting fighting. It's clearer to simply describe the process and define it as "frontier conflict" as opposed to giving agency to an abstract concept, rather than the participants. Instead of using a metaphor and winding our way to the issue, it is much clearer to simply state that people were killed. ] (]) 13:18, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
==Bold main articles== | |||
I think bolding the links to main articles is really ugly, and unnecessary since the ''Main article:Blah'' is on a separate line to the blocks of text, and its not done on featured artciles, anyone mind if I reformat them?--] 04:38, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:Whilst I don't think it makes them appear "ugly" (actually, I think the opposite), I don't mind if it's reverted. I changed it because that seemed the standard for a growing number of articles, including features.--] 04:58, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:@] My main interest was to also acknowledge the deaths of settlers in the frontier conflicts, given that they were a formative – and deadly – experience for Australians of both backgrounds; I sought to do this whilst also acknowledging that the larger share of deaths were Aboriginal Australians. I don't hold any contention beyond this. Cheers, ] (]) 13:41, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:what about using <nowiki>{{main|Geography of Australia}}</nowiki>, that would keep them standardised? ] 06:16, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
::I agree with Willthorpe. I might avoid mention of casualties altogether. "Thousands" isn't a very helpful indicator of the scale of things. I'd rather an educated estimate as to total deaths rather than just "thousands". One approach sans casualties: "As settlement expanded, frontier conflicts intensified, further displacing Indigenous people from their traditional lands." - ] (]) 21:28, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Sounds good --] 07:00, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
::The sourcing of the relevant section is dated (Bain Atwood 2003.) This is the most researched area of Australian History in the past 20 years and we can do better than this. Henry Reynolds, who is one of the most respected historians in the field, has recently published a second edition of Forgotten War (2022) and concluded that at least 30,000 Indigenous people were killed in fontier conflicts compared with 2,500 settlers. So I think we would be justified in stating "As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers died in ] while settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." Or words to that effect. | |||
::The sourcing of the entire article is poor and I doubt that the article would retain its featured article status if it were reviewed today. I would be happy to work with other interested editors to progressively improve the sourcing. ] (]) 21:31, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I support this wording, with the replacement of "died" with "were killed" to keep the active voice. ] (]) 02:13, 31 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I have replaced the dated source with the Reynolds source. I have slightly changed the wording to "settlers took possession of most of the traditional land of the surviving Indigenous groups.. etc". ] (]) 03:05, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::"Took possession" is euphemistic and kind. ] (]) 03:16, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::I agree. It's also using two words when the one word "dispossessed" would suffice. ] (]) 06:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Or "stole". ] (]) 07:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I changed it because the wording didn't make sense: "Settlers dispossessed most of the traditional lands of the surviving Indigenous groups" is wrong. You can't dispossess land. You can either say: "Settlers dispossessed the surviving Indigenous groups of their traditional land" or "Settlers took possession of most of the traditional land of the surviving Indigenous groups" or "settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." I prefer the latter because it is the most concise. I suggested this above but I assumed @] objected to it given their changes. As for "stole"; this in an encyclopaedic article, not a political tract. ] (]) 08:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::@]@] Any suggestions? ] (]) 09:11, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::If your issue were actually with the incorrect use of the word "dispossess", you would have changed the sentence to {{tq|Settlers dispossessed the surviving Indigenous groups of their traditional land}}—something you yourself suggested here. Yet this is not the change you actually made. Your claim that {{tq|this in an encyclopaedic article, not a political tract}} reveals your true intentions, for your edit is entirely political in nature; you just believe your own politics are neutral, much as fish doubt the existence of water. ] (]) 05:18, 5 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::My issue was indeed with the incorrect usage and with the dated information. Have you actually read the discussion? I am happy to change the sentence to "Settlers dispossessed the surviving Indigenous groups of their traditional land" and see if we can get a consensus for this. ] (]) 06:31, 5 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Were whole groups killed? As in there are extinct groups? <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 16:36, 6 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::Yes. Many. ] (]) 21:48, 6 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::Was a rhetorical question. There is no evidence that any Indigenous groups in Australia are extinct. No guess work pls. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 22:08, 6 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::@], I think you should have a read of ]. The population was reduced from potentially 15,000 down to just *47 individuals in the entire island*. Given there were "more than 60 clans" (quoting elsewhere in the article), even if somehow all 47 individuals were 1 from each clan, that's at least 13 Indigenous groups made extinct. ] (]) 05:35, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::::Best not use the wrong terms genocide vs extinction very different things...best be up to date {{cite web | last=Dumas | first=Daisy | title=Unesco removes ‘hurtful’ document claiming Tasmanian Aboriginal people ‘extinct’ | website=the Guardian | date=Aug 28, 2023 | url=https://www.theguardian.com/australia-news/2023/aug/28/unesco-removes-hurtful-document-claiming-tasmanian-aboriginal-people-extinct | access-date=Nov 7, 2024}} <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 05:47, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::Were the Jews exterminated? No. Was the Holocaust a genocide? Yes. ] (]) 23:15, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::The wording you suggested is the one I included in the article. ] (]) 23:14, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I agree with @Safes007, using active voice helps clarify context and removes ambiguity in matters concerning fact. Whether pleasant or not, death and its causes must be respected, not downplayed and obfuscated. ] (]) 07:52, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
==Wording== | |||
Is it a duplication to say displacement and also ethnic cleansing? My understanding is that the policies of ethnic cleansing (a horrid euphemism) in Australia, with regards the the Indigenous peoples, were to do with displacement (with, some argue, the occassional incidence of genocide). How should that sentence be handled?--] 05:35, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:A number of articles describe the Tasmanian situation as ethnic cleansing, ethnic cleansing covers forcable removal and genocide, and I think is appropriate. --] 05:40, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
Suggesting a change as the half paragraph is odd to read and does not fully explain the sources about populations decline. Plus "tens of thousand of Indigenous people"? what does this mean? it that alot? is it 10% of the population or 60%......lets just say alot and let the linked article deal with stats. | |||
::I've changed it to this | |||
:::''mainly to infectious disease, ], and government policies that by todays understanding constitute ]''--] 06:00, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
Replace... | |||
I'm not denying it, I just wanted it described objectively without duplication of terms. My point was whether "displacement" and "ethnic cleansing" were too similar. I think the rewording works nicely.--] 07:12, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
{{ quotation |The indigenous population declined for 150 years following European settlement, mainly due to infectious disease. British colonial authorities did not sign any treaties with Aboriginal groups. As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in frontier conflicts. Settlers took possession of most of the traditional lands of the surviving Indigenous groups.}} | |||
With someone like..... | |||
{{ Quotation |As a consequence of European colonization, the Indigenous population declined immensely.This is mainly attributed to the transfer of European diseases and, to a lesser extent, conflicts with the colonial authorities, The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars. These wars, lasting more than 100 years, were characterized by widespread killing on both sides along with the displacement of Indegenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land.}} | |||
<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 07:10, 5 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:That's good. ] (]) 06:10, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::It's not good, it's unsourced original research, factually wrong and much worse than what we already have. | |||
::"As a consequence of European colonization, the Indigenous population declined immensely." What does "immensely" mean? How can you possibly criticise "tens of thousands" as too vague (even though it is reliably sourced) but propose that we replace it with "immensely"? Can you cite a single reliable source that uses this term? And did Europe colonise Australia or did Britain? | |||
::"This is mainly attributed to the transfer of European diseases and, to a lesser extent, conflicts with the colonial authorities." Attributed by who? What is a European disease? Can you cite any medical studies which classify disease as "European"? What are "conflicts with colonial authorites"? Disputes over tax returns? | |||
::"The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars." This is plain wrong. In fact the sources cited make it clear that treaties were probably impractical because Aboriginal groups did not have "chiefs" who could negotiate treaties and enforce them on their group. Moreover, Aboriginal culture did not have the concept of alienating land by agreement. And even more importantly, the history of the US shows, treaties would have been ignored by the colonists and they would have taken all the land they wanted anyway. | |||
::I won't go on. I agree that the current paragraph is most unsatisfactory. In particular, the second sentence isn't connected to the first and the third one to form a coherent paragraph. But I lost that battle in the previous discussion. I think @] and @] you need to read the sources cited carefully and have another look at the previous discussions on this issue. And some good general histories of Australia. I can recommend the Cambridge History of Australia, Macintyre, 2020 edition. ] (]) 09:13, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Yes understanding of the basics is needed {{cite web | title=Indigenous and European Contact in Australia | website=Britannica Kids | url=https://kids.britannica.com/students/article/Indigenous-and-European-Contact-in-Australia/631556 }} <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 13:40, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Somewhat more concise: "As a result of European colonisation, the Indigenous population declined significantly, primarily due to introduced diseases. The expansion of settlements without any formal treaties led to ] characterised by widespread killing on both sides, along with the displacement of surviving Indigenous peoples from their traditional lands." - ] (]) 09:11, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Much better written but see my comments above. ] (]) 09:14, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Hello, @]. There's an overwhelming consensus among modern historians that Australia's actions against Aboriginals were genocidal. | |||
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:::Beyond this, as others here have mentioned, the founder of settler-colonial studies, ], specifically cited Australia as the prototypical example of a genocidal settler society. | |||
:::Genocide is also mentioned in other British settler colony articles, including the ], ], etc. Perhaps the last major historian to deny that genocide occurred is the conservative ] and his works are no longer deeply influential on the subject of Australia's relations with its native people. Requesting that your edit is self-reverted. There's a pretty clear consensus that these edits are due. (I count 6v1 on this page.) Your edits are coming across as an attempt to whitewash unsavory aspects of Australian history. The claim that a majority of deaths were of "unintentional disease" are also refuted by ] in the forementioned ''Cambridge World History of Genocide''. ] (]) 23:46, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Not sure how I got pinged...but whatever. As I stated on your user page Tree...Must understand reconciliation in Australia is not at the point of acknowledgment yet in the general public eye. It's not about whitewashing.... but what society has recognized. The stewards of this article find it a hard topic to tackle so ignore it. That said they're society is moving forward on the idea. An RfC where to take place it would be included as the general Misplaced Pages community can see its merits and the overwhelming academic support for the idea.<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 23:55, 7 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::As I said on your Talk page, the debate has moved past Windschuttle a long time ago but there is still academic debate on whether there was genocidal intent, particularly by colonial authorities, and whether the actions of individual settlers amounted to genocide. If you haven't read Henry Reynolds' The Forgotten War (2022 edition) I can highly recommend it as a more nuanced assessment. And, as I suggested, if you want to propose one or two specific factual sentences with reliable citations for discussion on the Talk page then I think you might be able to find a consensus for them. For example, I wouldn't be adverse to a sentence in the frontier expansion section such as "many historians conclude that acts of genocide by settlers were committed during the frontier conflicts, although the question of genocidal intent is still debated." Nor would I oppose a sentence in the discussion of the Stolen generations along the lines of "the HRC called the forced removal of Indigenous children an act of genocide" or words to that effect. But rather than trying to ram home your preferred wording despite objections from other editors, I think the best way forward is to seek consensus for one or two sepcific sentences in the relevant parts of the article. One of my concerns with your current wording is that it is written in stilted English and needs to be better integrated into the article. I prefer my wording but let's wait and see what others think. ] (]) 00:15, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Again, there's similar scholars who deny that genocide occurred in Canada or the United States, yet those respective articles do not "equalize" their opinions between those who say "yes" and those who say "no". That's not how ] works. It works by the ] of sources. Every major Australian history association, museum, and the national government recognizes the events as genocide. If we're using this standard then no event in history (outside of the Holocaust) could be classified as genocide. ] (]) 00:28, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::As I have said, it's all a matter of how we word things. And policy is that a seriously contested view in academic sources should not be treated as fact and opposing views should be given due weight: ]. If you have specific objections to my proposed wording please state them and put your proposed changes up here for discussion. And give others chance to express their views. By the way, on second thoughts it might be easier to achieve a consensus if we separate the genocide discussion from the discussion on frontier conflict. if you agree, would you mind moving the discussion to the genocide heading? Thanks ] (]) 01:23, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
==No mention of "genocide" in the article== | |||
=="Most of the estimated 20.3 million Australians descend from 18th and 19th century immigrants....== | |||
I'm disappointed but not surprised that genocide is not mentioned in this article. Patrick Wolfe described Australia as an archetypical, settler-colonial state that was founded upon genocide. Yet this is mentioned nowhere in the article! | |||
... most from Britain] and Ireland to begin with, but from other sources in later years" in the Demographics section seems both inaccurate and blantantly contradictory. The 19th century was over in 1899 (and 1788 was only 12 years before the end of the 18th!) At the end of the 19th century, the "later years" of non-Anglo-Irish immigration had not yet begun, and the population was still well over 90% Anglo-Irish. Moreover, is it really true to say that "most" Australians are descended from immigrants who came to Australia before 1899?? My understanding is that even many of the Anglo-surnamed Australians can trace their heritage to British immigrants who came in waves after 1900 (not to mention the non-Anglos). I'm not Australian so I'm reluctant to change in case I'm missing something, but please respond or correct. It just seems wrong. ] 05:42, May 17, 2005 (UTC) | |||
https://australian.museum/learn/first-nations/genocide-in-australia/ <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 00:06, 4 November 2024 (UTC)</small> | |||
You're right, not many Australias are related to the convicts. I changed the offending sentence to ''Most of the estimated 20.3 million Australians descend from 19th and 20th century immigrants'', and I'll see what else I can do to improve the section--] 05:52, 17 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:I second the use of the term "genocide" when describing the intentional massacre and displacement of aboriginal Australians. | |||
==Referencing== | |||
:The only push back I would anticipate to this motion is that racists will label the use of the term genocide without citing a source that uses the term genocide, as a violation of Synthesis / Original Research. ] (]) 07:57, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
I'm using the Innote hidden reference template, refs are inline, but commented out, and then listed in the refernce list. If you've got references to add, plase do so in that format. Thanks. | |||
ALso I put the page on peer review today --] 09:29, 19 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
==RFC: Should the article state that Indigenous Australians were victims of genocide?== | |||
==Etymology== | |||
Is the "Origin and history of the name" section close enough to an etymology for it to be titled so? It does show from where Australia derived, but also gives a brief history. If no body is opposed, I like to retitle the section Etymology - with any necessary changes. Thoughts?--] 12:00, 19 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
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:The Etymology section was recently, and significantly expanded by ]. In the revised section, it is claimed that ] first discovered and named Australia. However, this claim is contradicted in the explorers own article. That article states that Quirós discovered the ] (]), not Australia, but named an island he thought might be ] "La Austrialia del Espiritu Santo" (not La Australia as was written). The article also states that the claim that Quirós named and discovered Australia is essentially ] propaganda, pushed by some Australian Catholics in the 19<sup>th</sup> Century. | |||
There is an (including on the talk page above) on whether Australia's actions against Aboriginals and Torres Strait Islanders can be described in the article as genocidal or simply the product of disease and mutual conflicts. A consensus could not be reached so I am asking for non-involved editors to comment. ] (]) 00:24, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I have asked ] to provide his sources so that his changes may be substantiated. Even so, I do not expect that they are factual. It may well be that Flinders was influenced by Quirós's "La Austrialia", but so far, all sources state he named Australia - and let's not forget the influence of "Terra Australis" itself. | |||
===Content proposals=== | |||
'''Option #1:''' | |||
<blockquote>These early acts of ] began the ], which aimed at eradicating the cultures, religions, languages, and people of both ].<ref name=":0">{{Cite journal |last=Wolfe |first=Patrick |date=December 2006 |title=Settler colonialism and the elimination of the native |url=http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/14623520601056240 |journal=Journal of Genocide Research |language=en |volume=8 |issue=4 |pages=387–409 |doi=10.1080/14623520601056240 |issn=1462-3528}}</ref><ref name=":1">{{Cite web |last=Sentance |first=Nathan |date=December 7, 2022 |title=Genocide in Australia |url=https://australian.museum/learn/first-nations/genocide-in-australia/ |access-date=2024-11-07 |website=] |language=en}}</ref> As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in ] while settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land.<ref>{{Cite book |last=Reynolds |first=Henry |title=Forgotten War |publisher=NewSouth |year=2022 |isbn=9781742237596 |edition=2nd |location=Sydney |pages=103-104, 134, 241-242, 182-192}}</ref> Survivors of the exterminations were frequently ] to ],<ref>{{Citation |last=Maddison |first=Sarah |title=Missionary Genocide: Moral Illegitimacy and the Churches in Australia |date=2014 |work=Indigenous Australia and the Unfinished Business of Theology |pages=31–46 |url=http://dx.doi.org/10.1057/9781137426673_4 |access-date=2024-11-07 |place=New York |publisher=Palgrave Macmillan US |isbn=978-1-349-49089-9}}</ref> confined to ],<ref name=":0" /> and were not provided with any legally recognized form of ],<ref name=":0" /> as British-descended colonizers did not sign any treaties with ].<ref name="Flood 2019 p.">{{cite book | last=Flood | first=J. | title=The Original Australians: The story of the Aboriginal People | publisher=Allen & Unwin | year=2019 | isbn=978-1-76087-142-0 |edition=2nd |location=Crows Nest NSW |pages=42, 111, 147–59, 300 |author-link=Josephine Flood}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |author=Rule of Law Education Centre |title=European Settlement and Terra Nullius |url=https://www.ruleoflaw.org.au/education/australian-colonies/terra-nullius/ |access-date=26 January 2024 |archive-date=26 January 2024 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240126110348/https://www.ruleoflaw.org.au/education/australian-colonies/terra-nullius/ |url-status=live }}</ref> | |||
:The following is the etymology before Al-Andalus changes: | |||
</blockquote> | |||
'''Option #2:''' | |||
::''The name '''Australia''' derives from ] ''australis'' meaning ''southern'', and dates back to ] legends of an "unknown southern land" (that is ''terra australis incognita''). The explorer ] named the land '']'', which was later abbreviated to the current form. Previously, when the Dutch explored the area they named it ''Nova Hollandicus'' or ].'' | |||
<blockquote>The indigenous population declined for 150 years following European settlement, mainly due to infectious disease.<ref>{{Cite encyclopedia |title=Smallpox Through History |url=http://encarta.msn.com/media_701508643/Smallpox_Through_History.html |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20040618142015/http://encarta.msn.com/media_701508643/Smallpox_Through_History.html |archive-date=18 June 2004 |work= |url-status=dead}}</ref><ref name="Flood 2019 p."/> British colonial authorities did not sign any treaties with ].<ref name="Flood 2019 p.">{{cite book | last=Flood | first=J. | title=The Original Australians: The story of the Aboriginal People | publisher=Allen & Unwin | year=2019 | isbn=978-1-76087-142-0 |edition=2nd |location=Crows Nest NSW |pages=42, 111, 147–59, 300 |author-link=Josephine Flood}}</ref><ref>{{cite web |author=Rule of Law Education Centre |title=European Settlement and Terra Nullius |url=https://www.ruleoflaw.org.au/education/australian-colonies/terra-nullius/ |access-date=26 January 2024 |archive-date=26 January 2024 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240126110348/https://www.ruleoflaw.org.au/education/australian-colonies/terra-nullius/ |url-status=live }}</ref> As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in ] while settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land.<ref>{{Cite book |last=Reynolds |first=Henry |title=Forgotten War |publisher=NewSouth |year=2022 |isbn=9781742237596 |edition=2nd |location=Sydney |pages=103-104, 134, 241-242, 182-192}}</ref> | |||
::''Flinders later renamed the land Australia in a chart compiled in ] whilst he was held prisoner by the ] in ]. When he returned to England and published his works in ] he was forced to change the name to ''Terra Australis'' by the British Admiralty. ] of ] became aware of Flinders' preference for the name Australia and used it in his dispatches to ]. In ] the British Admiralty finally accepted that the continent should be known officially as '''Australia'''.'' | |||
</blockquote> | |||
'''Option #3''': | |||
:Perhaps some of Al-Andalus's changes might be incorporated within the orginal etymology. I will not seek to change the section before Al-Andulus himself or others respond.--] 07:26, 24 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
<blockquote>As a ], the Indigenous population declined by 90%.{{efn|Sources differ on whether it was "as much as" or "at least" 90%.}}<ref name="w098">{{cite | last=Morris | first=Gavin | title=Edge of sacred - Exploring the life stories of the Nauiyu community. An investigation into trauma and the traditional healing practices of a remote Aboriginal community. | publisher=] | year=2019 | doi=10.25913/5ebb25ee03fe6 | doi-access=free | page=10 |quote=While the precise number of massacres remains a matter of contention, several researchers assert that by the turn of the 20th Century, the European settlement of Australia resulted in the catastrophic collapse on the Indigenous population with at least a 90% mortality rate (Awofeso, 2011; Harris, 2003).}}</ref><ref>https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC6735010/</ref><ref>https://kids.britannica.com/students/article/Indigenous-and-European-Contact-in-Australia/631556</ref> This is mainly attributed to the transfer of diseases and, to a lesser extent, land loss and conflicts with the settlers.<ref name="o837">{{cite journal | last=Jalata | first=Asafa | title=The Impacts of English Colonial Terrorism and Genocide on Indigenous/Black Australians | journal=Sage Open | publisher=SAGE Publications | volume=3 | issue=3 | date=1 July 2013 | issn=2158-2440 | doi=10.1177/2158244013499143 |quote=(Kiernan, 2007). Bultin (1993) suggested three major reasons for the societal destruction: disease episodes, the withdrawal of resources, and killing. European diseases that exposed the population lacking immunological defenses to destruction included smallpox, venereal disease (e.g., gonorrhea), influenza, measles, pneumonia, and tuberculosis. The English settlers and their descendants expropriated native land and removed the indigenous people by cutting them from their food resources, and engaged in genocidal massacres.....The English settlers used several mechanisms of terrorism and genocide against indigenous Australians, and justified them with a racist discourse. These mechanisms included shooting, burning, disease, rape, ethnocide, or cultural destruction. According to A. Dirk Moses (2004), terrorism and genocide or “indigenocide” involved five elements:}}</ref> The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the ].<ref name="h137">{{cite journal | last=Attwood | first=Bain | title=Denial in a Settler Society: the Australian Case | journal=History Workshop Journal | publisher=Oxford University Press | issue=84 | year=2017 | issn=13633554 | jstor=48554763 | pages=24–43 | url=https://www.jstor.org/stable/48554763 | access-date=2024-11-08|quote=As I have noted, they simply took the land without any negotiation, let alone any treaties; and they used naked force to secure their possession but were unable or unwilling to acknowledge publicly that this was so, for reasons that were moral, psychological and legal.}}</ref><ref>{{cite web | title=Why doesn't Australia have an indigenous treaty? | publisher=BBC News | date=May 24, 2017 | url=https://www.bbc.com/news/world-australia-40024622 | access-date=Nov 8, 2024|quote=The absence of a treaty was cited by Mr Arthur as a crucial and aggravating factor in relations with the first inhabitants of the island, the scene of some of the worst treatment inflicted on Aborigines by British colonists. }}</ref> These wars, lasting more than 100 years, were characterized by widespread killing on both sides and the displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land.<ref name="x637">{{cite web | title=Colonial Frontier Massacres in Australia, 1788-1930| website=Centre For 21st Century Humanities - University of Newcastle| date=16 March 2022 | url=https://c21ch.newcastle.edu.au/colonialmassacres/introduction.php | access-date=8 November 2024 |quote=frontier massacres of Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander people spread steadily across southern Australia from 1794 to 1860 with notable peaks in the 1820s in Tasmania and the 1840s in NSW, Victoria, South Australia and Western Australia. From the 1860s when the frontier shifted to Northern Australia, massacre peaks took place in Queensland in the 1860s to 1870s and 1880 to 1930 in the Northern Territory and the Kimberley region in Western Australia. The number of Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander people killed in a frontier massacre increased from 1860, with the average number killed in each incident increasing from 23 to 32.}}</ref> The conflicts have variously been described as ].<ref name="o837"/> | |||
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] (]) 00:24, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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*The ] article asserts that some writers (unnamed) say that he coined the word Australia, for the islands he thought would exist (Australia del Espiritu Santo). Flinders gave the name to Australia, whether or not he was influenced by Quirós is hard to say and probably doesn't need to be debated in this artilce, I think the text should be switched back.--] 08:03, 24 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
* '''Option 2'''. Option 1 gets the timeline wrong, the lack of treaties existed from the start. It is unclear what the "early acts of settler colonialism" refers to, but if it refers to the initial settlement, this was not aimed at eradicating the cultures etc. of any particular group. The initial settlement also certainly didn't affect the Torres Strait Islanders, who live very far away from the early settlements. The RfC opening statement is also quite poor, the "Australia's actions" were a mixture of a number of different actors, and both Aboriginal groups and Torres Strait Islanders are part of Australia. ] (]) 00:32, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:What exactly is your objection to option 3? ] (]) 23:16, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::I don't think I raised a specific objection, but the conflation of treaties with settlements should probably be avoided. A lot of the conflict emerged from individual actors, rather than being something organised. The shift from "settlements expanded" to "expansion of settlements" and the addition of treaties makes it sound like government-directed action when it was often wasn't. ] (]) 23:22, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::The actual ''substantive'' difference between 2 and 1/3 is that the former does not use the g word while the 1/3 do. It would be more honest if you just tell us what your actual objection is. All other objections you list are easily and probably uncontroversially fixable, and given the title of the RFC is {{tq|Should the article state that Indigenous Australians were victims of genocide?}} it is eminently obvious what it is we are really talking about here. It helps no one to hide your actual beliefs like this. ] (]) 23:26, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::What are you talking about? When I made my comment there was no option 3. I never objected to it, as I said before. ] (]) 23:35, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::There is an option 3 now. Why do you prefer option 2? ] (]) 23:40, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::::My initial thoughts are above, but there's not a discussion to be had if someone else is telling me what my non-existent objection is. ] (]) 23:43, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::::::Are you saying you don't have an objection to 3, and are thus changing your vote to it? ] (]) 23:53, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:{{tq|"Australia's actions" were a mixture of a number of different actors}} is an irrelevant truism. The Holocaust was also a mixture of a number of different actors, ranging from ] to the ] to even Jewish ] collaborators. ] (]) 23:24, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::This is a misunderstanding of the frontier wars, which is a historiographical term that encompasses a couple hundred years of different events, not a single program like the Holocaust. ] (]) 23:38, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::Is there a component of the definition of genocide that says it can only last X years long? ] (]) 23:54, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::{{tqq|The Holocaust was also a mixture of a number of different actors}} {{mdash}} "]". I don't think the same thing can be said about Australia. ] (]) 01:27, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::: <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 01:31, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::It doesn't need to be said about Australia. Numerous other events commonly characterized as genocides by scholars don't rise to this level, including the ], ] and the ]. Taking the first as an example, the main and official goal of the ] was "merely" a relocation program; you won't find a single source claiming its perpetrators gave the orders to exterminate all Armenians wherever they may be. There is a term for certain Turkish nationalists who point to this as evidence against it being a genocide: Armenian genocide deniers. In the Herero and Namaqua genocide, the goal was to punish the indigenous people for a rebellion which resulted in the killing of some German colonizers. Our own Misplaced Pages article on the subject stated {{tq|No written order by Wilhelm II ordering or authorising genocide has survived}}. Still genocide, and again we have a term for people who claim otherwise. Regardless, certain specific groups, if not all indigeneous Australians in general, were absolutely the target of specific orders for extermination, the most notorious (but far from only) examples coming from the Black War. The Holocaust is one of the few events in history where a genocide did rise to this level, but its particular characteristics are not, must not be, the litmus test for a genocide. ] (]) 07:07, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*<s>'''Option 1''': There is a historical consensus that genocide occurred in the context of Australian history. The ] , the ] does as well, and so does the recently published (2023) . ''Genocide Perspectives V: A Global Crime, Australian Voices'' (2017), which was published by the ] Press, states that (on p.62) that ''"the academic consensus now acknowledges that genocide is an apt descriptor for the Australian aboriginal experience."'' The government of Australia also labels its own historic actions as genocidal. There will always be historians who deny X or Y is genocidal. (Outside of the Holocaust.) The question is whether a large majority classify it as such per ] and ]. The bar here is indisputably met. ] (]) 00:50, 8 November 2024 (UTC)</s> | |||
* '''Option 2''': I would prefer to keep the current wording and see if we can build a consensus towards wording on the genocide issue. This issue was still under discussion on the Talk page. The failure of one editor to get their preferred version accepted within a couple of hours of first trying to include it in the article does not equal a failure to gain consensus. I proposed alternative wording to try to meet this editor half way yet this editor chose not to engage in consensus building among interested editors which is usually the first step before you go to a RfC. This is a complex issue and there are dozens of reliable academic sources which discuss this in a more nuanced and accurate way. I am sure that if we had given this discussion the time it deserves we could have come uo with something much better than the two proposed options. ] (]) 01:37, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Okay, will do. I would still like a response from Al-Andulus all the same.--] 08:12, 24 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
* '''Option 3''' the option I created... As I believe it reflects best the sources and gives a quick juvenile introduction to the topic as you would see at {{cite web | title=Indigenous and European Contact in Australia | website=Britannica Kids | url=https://kids.britannica.com/students/article/Indigenous-and-European-Contact-in-Australia/631556}} ....with the addition of adult words like genocide.<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 02:35, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
==Images== | |||
There are three images with unclear copyright information, | |||
*The Govenor General, it's an offical photo released by his office, and released officailly for reproduction, I see no reason why this can't be tagged as PD | |||
*The climate map, is listed as fair use, but I'd feel more comfortable if someone made a PD or GFDL version of this map | |||
*Dame Joan, is a cropped version from her record company, since the company logo has been cut off the fair use claim is weak and I'm going to list it was a copyvio. | |||
Does anyone have a suggestion for an image that can replace Dame Joan? --] 04:43, 25 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
*Port Arthur lacks copyright info too--] 01:06, 26 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
: The Port Arthur image is more visually appealing, but conveys much less information of a useful sort than the population graph it seems to have replaced. I'd rather see the graph go back in instead. | |||
: Secondly, if the PA image stays, is the caption correct? ''Most'' settlers were convicts? I don't know the actual numbers, but I suspect that even in the early years convicts were less than half of the total. Consider guards, administrators, early free settlers, traders, whalemen and sealers ... add them all up and the "most" might not be true. It shouldn't be too hard to look this one up and check. | |||
:Thirdly, shouldn't we have some representative landscape here on the main Australia page? That's what Australia is all about, after all. The Ularu image doesn't really count, as it just shows the Rock, and doesn't convey any real sense of the Australian landscape. I sugggest a scene from outback NSW, or something of that sort. (If desired, and if we don't have one already, I'm sure I would have something suitable I could release under the GFDL.) ] 01:36, 26 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
::I completely agree about the landscape, there's not much on the commons and I don't know what I'd choose as a representative scene. Mabye we shoudl also include a cityscape. I'll switch the graph back into the article now.--] 02:07, 26 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
: Good. I'd think that it ought to be representative of the broad geographical bulk of the continent - i.e., inland, semi-arid, fairly flat. Obviously, we can't hope to include all the landscape types in one shot, but I'll have a look to see if I have something that can convey the general picture: the mulga country out ] way, or something similar. ] 02:59, 26 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
* I'm leaning toward the ''intent'' of '''Option 1''' but not the current wording. I cannot see how, in 2024, we can acknowledge the impact of coloniaism and at the same time continue using dated linguistic constructions like {{!xt|Aboriginals}}. I don't currently have the spoons to work on the wording, just registering my half-!vote at this stage. ''']''' <small>(''she/her'' · ] · ] · ] · ])</small> 07:10, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Infobox position == | |||
* '''Option 3'''. The option suggested by Moxy is as comprehensive as you can get in a singular paragraph and it links to articles dedicated to its mentioned subjects, while also retaining a neutral tone. Option 2 is fine, but it fails to effectively summarize the full extent of the conflicts and their impact on the Indigenous peoples and settlers. | |||
Would it be better for the infobox to start at the top of the article rather than down a page? ] 06:08, May 25, 2005 (UTC) | |||
:I would like to address Option 1 separate from the other options presented. As a fourth generation Australian, I am personally sick of the rhetoric that OntologicalTree is trying to have accepted. Where shall I begin? | |||
:*It places undue emphasis on the settlers and British colonization The entire paragraph is thick with the negative connotations so common in degradation of foreign colonization and this era of historical hindsight apologetics. Easily fails ] and ]. | |||
:*It misleads readers by implying that the events of the ] occurred directly after or during the frontier conflicts, thereby presenting an incorrect timeline cobbled together with ]. For those unfamiliar with Australian history, the Stolen Generations is widely acknowledged to have begun in the early 1900s, whereas the frontier conflicts started in 1788. | |||
:*It creates the implication that there was little to zero attempt by the British and their descendants to create treaties with the Indigenous peoples. The British did falsely claim ''terra nullius'' by legally declaring the Indigenous peoples as "fauna" so they could invalidate Britain's first requirement for occupation, which was that if there was an existing population, Indigenous or otherwise, land should only be obtained through negotiation. However, the problem is that prior to settlement, the Indigenous peoples of Australia had zero form of officially recognized government or judicial system amongst themselves because of the nomadic and kinship-centric nature of their tribes. Additionally, the Indigenous peoples didn't speak English and operated on a significantly different culture to the rest of the civilised world at the time. No centralized governing body means the British had no legal entity to formalize an agreement with, and the cultural differences and physical distance between the various groups and territories of Indigenous peoples meant that even if the British were to create a blanket legal structure for them, they had no guarantee that the terms of such would be satisfactory or even followed by the various groups. | |||
Yeah, I had a lot to say about Option 1. To put it simply, I vote for Option 3 and I find Option 1 unsuitable. ] (]) 07:30, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:@] The creation of "treaties", the vast majority of which were never honored, is a means by which genocide is legitimated, that is, it is further proof a genocide did occur. ] (]) 23:18, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I understand that treaties are meaningless unless all signing parties intend to honour them, I am simply providing some extra historical information to show the difficulties the British would've faced when trying to create treaties. | |||
::The British were wrong with what they did to the Aboriginal peoples of Australia. I certainly don't approve of what happened back then, and I will openly admit that I am not proud of the racism that Australia was built on. I agree that they committed a large number of atrocities and that there is much work to be done to repair the damage done. However, we formally said sorry in 2008 as a nation, and what came out of it? We haven't really given much help to the Aboriginals, and we haven't stopped saying sorry ever since. Option 1 has a clear agenda to push, and I am sick of this same blame-centric rhetoric that I have to listen to every week being pushed at every opportunity. | |||
::Yeah, you could call me out on a ] if you really wanted to, and you may be justified in doing so. I am not stupid enough to let my passion for this topic cloud my judgement though. Instead, I will use my passion to contribute positively and constructively to the discussion and to the article whilst retaining Misplaced Pages's policies at the core of my edits. If anything comes out of this RfC, at least I will have contributed to the discussion with some useful information. ] (]) 23:53, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Even if I cared what possible difficulties the genocidaires would have had with honoring treaties they never intended to honor in the first place, what does that have to do with the price of tea in China? You are regurgitating irrelevant facts (if they even are facts) that have no bearing on the point of this RFC. | |||
:::{{quote|The British were wrong with what they did to the Aboriginal peoples of Australia.}} | |||
:::The point of this discussion is not to make you feel better about having the Correct Opinions about history. The point of Misplaced Pages is to call a spade a spade, relying on the reliable sources. | |||
:::{{quote|Option 1 has a clear agenda to push, and I am sick of this same blame-centric rhetoric that I have to listen to every week being pushed at every opportunity.}} | |||
:::You are taking out your political grievances on a Misplaced Pages page. Please refer to ], ], ]. We have no interest in the current status of Australian politics, or the guilt some Australians may or may not be feeling. We are here to write an encyclopedia based on what the reliable sources say. If the reliable sources blame Australia for anything, anything at all, we report it. If the reliable sources decided Australia was a nation of devil-worshipping child sacrificers, we would have no choice but to report this, no matter how much it hurt your national ego. Please leave your grievances out of this discussion. You may feel this is a shortcoming of Misplaced Pages, and in another time and place I may even agree with you, but I long ago learned this just isn't the website for that. ] (]) 00:04, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::Nah, I actually agree with you there. "If the reliable sources decided Australia was a nation of devil-worshipping child sacrificers", then I wouldn't be against adding that to Misplaced Pages at all, because that's what's been found by reliable sources to be the situation. I also agree that the British settlers committed genocide against the Indigenous peoples here. I voted for Option 3 because it provided a sufficiently concise but clear summary of the various reasons for Indigenous population decline whilst also not shying away from the active role of the British in it. Option 2 was more two-dimensional, and Option 1 presented a false timeline by implying the events characteristic of the Stolen Generations were instead perpetrated during the frontier conflicts that occurred almost a century before. ] (]) 00:42, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I am ok with Option 3, though I prefer 1, and to be clear, Option 1 says nothing about the Stolen Generations. The closest thing to is the sentence {{tq|Survivors of the exterminations were frequently forced to convert to Christianity, confined to Aboriginal reserves, and were not provided with any legally recognized form of cultural rights}}. The word "survivors" all but implies that this sequence of events happened after the Frontier Wars. Additionally the Frontier Wars ended in 1934, while the Stolen Generations are generally dated as beginning in 1905. That's almost two and a half generations of overlap irrespective of the wording. ] (]) 06:53, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Also, your use of a phrase like "negative connotations so common in degradation of foreign colonization and this era of historical hindsight apologetics" strongly suggested you need to (re)visit ]. We write Misplaced Pages in the 21st century, and the hindsight argument completely false flat anyways when you remember that, as I can entirely assure you, peoples have always resisted their own annihilation regardless of what year it might be. ] (]) 23:44, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Could you please explain what possible relevance the fact that the indigeneous Australians didn't have a form of government {{tq|officially recognized}} by the very people who attempted to annihilate them, or the fact that they did not speak the language of said genocidaires before ever having met them? What exactly is the "civilized world"? Is it civilized to commit genocide across multiple continents? Please try to answer these questions while doing your absolute best not to sound like you are channeling the spirit of Cecil Rhodes. ] (]) 23:53, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Blend of options 2 and 3'''. For brevity's sake I prefer 2. While 3 is more comprehensive, it's quite repetitive. - ] (]) 07:44, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:The ''substantive'' difference between 2 and 3 is not brevity but the use of the g-word, which is the central point of this RFC, as expressed in its title. bould your proposed blend include this word in 2? ] (]) 23:55, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Option 2''' is broadly correct, providing a historical consensus-based summation and linking to the frontier wars article where the subject can be broached with appropriate sensitivity. ] (]) 09:49, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
==Recent changes== | |||
*:Actually, there is a general historical consensus that white Australian settler colonialism constitutes {{tq|terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples}}. Not every scholars agrees on every one of these terms, perhaps, but that is the point of wording the sentence this way. ] (]) 23:21, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
I've done a bit of cutting and removing flowery text to shorten the article, I won't take offence if you think something should go back. I also moved the topics list to a template ] (it was 2kb long). History, Politics and and Population and migration could still be shortened with a view to get to 40kb. --] 08:33, 25 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
*::@] To state that ''colonialism constituted terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide'' is broad and imprecise, and not supported by consensus. There may be, and I presume is, broad consensus that actions ''during'' colonisation constituted one or several of those, that there were genocidal acts committed for instance. Much of the process of colonisation may aptly be described as ], and the ] is particularly singled out by many historians who argue it was genocidal. The sentence would be improved if it stated: ''The conflicts have contentiously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples.'' @]'s proposed statement ''...which many historians argue included acts of genocide by settlers'' is also fair. ] (]) 04:15, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::Fortunately, not one of the proposed options states that {{tq|colonialism constituted terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide}}. Please remember that on Misplaced Pages, ] IN reading comprehension is strictly required. As I stated in my own vote, however, I am ok with 3, even though I prefer 1, and do not think your criticism here susntantively applies to 1, properly read. I ''do'' disagree that {{tq|Much of the process of colonisation may aptly be described as cultural genocide}}. No, much of the process of colonization constituted at a minimum ethnic cleansing, while another large portion constituted actual genocide, not "cultural" genocide. ] (]) 06:28, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::Also, you have conveniently excused the first portion of the quote, which, in full, is {tq|The conflicts have variously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples}}. This is not only about as clear as can be, it ''directly'' speaks to the actual consensus. What do you think the word "variously" means here, and who do you think the unstated holders of these views are? | |||
*:::{{quote|The conflicts have contentiously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples.}} | |||
*:::Contention on Misplaced Pages is not contention among scholars. The wording you are opposing has been amply cited, both in the original RFC and elsewhere on this thread. You, on the other hand, have provided no references to speak of. ] (]) 07:16, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Option 1''' followed by '''3'''. Most of the people voting against these options above have summarily disregarded the actual ''purpose'' of this RFC, which is, as the title gratiously informs us, is to determine if {{tq|the article state that Indigenous Australians were victims of genocide}}. Answers that fail to actually answer this question directly and make points as to the merits/demerits of this point should be summarily disregarded by the RFC closer as effectively irrelevant. Quibbles about the wording, succinctness, etc. are entirely not germane to the point at hand, and the best possible faith interpretation of multiple people not even bothering to mention the g-word in their votes is that they are simply unable to grasp basic reading comprehension; regrettably, at Misplaced Pages, ] is required. The more likely answer, unfortunately, is that they are intentionally clutching pearls about word choice to avoid calling a spade a spade. Remember: any quibbles about word choice, succinctness, etc. can be easily handled outside of this RFC. Alternatively, such pearl-clutchers could have happily suggested alternate wordings that do use the g-word within their votes. {{noping|ClaudineChionh}} is the only user who apparently had the sense to do this, while nevertheless voting for 1. Were the only quibbles about succinctness etc., for example, I would be shocked if there had even been an RFC proposed to begin with. Future commentators, please do not bother replying if you do not wish to address the matter at its root. Having said all this: the historians are clear on this: the acts of Australian settler colonists, in various times and places, frequently amounted to genocide or, in other times and places, terrorism, ethnocide, and ethnic cleansing. ] (]) 23:40, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Option 2''' - The two other options fail to <del>mention</del> <ins>indicate</ins> ], which is the required '']'' of ]. The common meaning of genocide applies to examples like the ], ], and ]. The lead is supposed to summarize the body of the article; therefore, if option 2 or 3 are chosen for the body, it would be undue weight to include mention of genocide in the lead. Choosing option 1, 2, or 3 comes down to whether a broad or narrow definition of genocide is going to be used. At present, option 1 and 3 only provide one source to support the position that the British settlement policy in regards to Australia was an act of genocide. One source is not enough to decide if the word genocide should be used in this article. A survey of reliable sources needs to be provided to determine what the academic/reliable source consensus is on whether the settlement of Australia was an act of genocide. --] (]) 06:47, 10 November 2024 (UTC)<ins>; edited 10:56, 10 November 2024 (UTC)</ins> | |||
*:There is no prerogative for these specific sentences to mention the exact words "genocidal intent"; by calling them genocides, it implies genocidal intent, since there aren't "accidental" genocides. If you haven't actually done the survey you suggest others do, why do you feel so confident voting on a matter you are have professes your own ignorance own? Remember, ]. Also, could you tell me what is the required number of sources you require to change your vote? Because I am happy to provide them. ] (]) 07:19, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::@] please check your talk page. I have left a message there. I know mobile Misplaced Pages has buggy notifications (]), so I'm leaving this here in the hopes that you see this. ] (]) 07:25, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::This is the Australia country article. It provides a broad overview of different aspects of the country/continent with one section providing an overview of the history of Australia. This discussion of whether to include the word ] in the history section should first take place in the ] article. At the moment, there is no mention in that article about genocide. All material that is added to an article needs to be supported by a reliable source and included in neutral point of view fashion which does not give undue weight to any material. The reference that has been provided does not support the inclusion of the word genocide in this article. The reference is not even a systematic review of the topic. Misplaced Pages is not a place to right great wrongs, rather articles summarize the topic as presented in reliable sources. This article which is a feature article has done an excellent job of presenting a broad overview of the topic. -- ] (]) 10:23, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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:* '''Option 3''' per the above discussion, options 1 and 2 fail to represent the academic debate and therefore fail ]. Despite this, {{tq|These wars, lasting more than 100 years, were characterized by widespread killing on both sides and the displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land}} needs to be changed, widespread killing on both sides implies equal casualties which there were not, 2,500 vs. upwards of 30,000. | |||
:] (]) 14:41, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::It does not necessarily suggest the casualty count was equal. There was a significant toll wrought on both settlers and Indigenous Australians, though something noting the relative numbers that died of each would be acceptable. ] (]) 12:16, 14 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Maybe: | |||
:::{{tq|characterised by widespread killing of Indigenous peoples and to a lesser extent settlers, and the displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land.}} ] (]) 14:11, 14 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I think we need to give some indication of the extent of killings on both sides. @] Out of interest, do you havee specific concerns with the compromise wording I proposed?, viz: "As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in ] '''which many historians argue included acts of genocide by settlers'''. Settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." ] (]) 23:27, 14 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::That’s good ] (]) 07:01, 15 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::] Not sure where to put this as the RfC has become convoluted, but I don't think the addendum would need to be attributed to historians as an argument. I do wonder as well if there is a way to integrate it into the sentence rather than appending it, "...frontier conflicts led to tens of thousands of Indigenous people being killed, some in acts of genocide, as well as thousands of settlers..." or similar. ] (]) 15:11, 15 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Option 2''' sticks to the salient details without getting super long like the other two. No need to force the g-word in. ] (]) 06:50, 21 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Option 3'''. {{sbb}} {{TQ|The option suggested by Moxy is as comprehensive as you can get in a singular paragraph and it links to articles dedicated to its mentioned subjects, while also retaining a neutral tone}}. It is the most complete account, is readable and gives proper weight to the competing ''(and complementary)'' narratives regarding genocide/intentionality.] (]) 08:53, 24 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Option 3'''. It is ] to attempt to report as fact that a genocide occurred on this article when our own article (linked in option 1) makes clear that it is heavily debated and was not what most people think of when they think of genocide. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez | ] | ] 06:26, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Option 3''' gives equal weight to both sides of the argument. However, if I'm understanding this correctly, we shouldn't be discussing this RfC if another one on the same topic is already ongoing. Patience is necessary for WP. ] (]) 14:25, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:{{@| Penguino35}} another RFC on same topic were? <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 16:06, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Comment''': Option 3 is getting some support so I would like to elaborate my concerns about this option. The statement "''As a ], the Indigenous population declined by 90%''" is too precise and is not based on the consensus of Australian historians and demographers. The cited sources are not the best available and seem to have been selected simply to support the 90% figure. The official estimates of Indigenous population published by the independent Australian statistician give a population decline to 1901 of about 70% to 90%.<ref>{{Cite web |last=Australin Bureau of Statistics |date=2002 |title=1301.0 - Year Book Australia, 2002 |url=https://www.abs.gov.au/ausstats/abs@.nsf/94713ad445ff1425ca25682000192af2/bfc28642d31c215cca256b350010b3f4!OpenDocument |access-date=27 November 2024 |website=Australin Bureau of Statistics}}</ref> We should not be endorsing false precision. Henry Reynolds, who is one of the most distinguished experts on the frontier wars states: "Any assessment of the extent of violence must depend on circumstantial evidence. There is the further problem that we rarely know the size of the Indigenous populations at the time of the arrival of the first settlers."<ref>{{Cite book |last=Reynolds |first=Henry |title=Forgotten War |publisher=NewSouth |year=2022 |isbn=9781742237596 |edition=2nd |location=Sydney |pages=28}}</ref> :"''This is mainly attributed to the transfer of diseases and, to a lesser extent, land loss and conflicts with the settlers''." The quotation from the cited source doesn't support the contention that disease was the major reason for depopulation. There are many better sources that do so such as Flood (2019)."<ref name="Flood 2019 p.">{{cite book |last=Flood |first=J. |author-link=Josephine Flood |title=The Original Australians: The story of the Aboriginal People |publisher=Allen & Unwin |year=2019 |isbn=978-1-76087-142-0 |edition=2nd |location=Crows Nest NSW |pages=34 |quote=“The major cause was the deadly impact of new diseases on people with no prior immunity.}}</ref> Also "introduced diseases" is better than "the transfer of diseases". | |||
: ''"The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the ]."'' Selective use of sources. Some, such as Flood (2019, pp.22-23, 111-113) argue that treaties would have made little difference. There still would have been frontier violence and dispossession just like there was in north America where there were treaties. | |||
:hi nixie, I think all of your trims/edits are fine, I would only ask that any text you trim be relocated to the relevant ''Main article'' (or other sub-article) so that good content isn't lost (or buried in the diff history). I have reclaimed a paragraph and moved into the ], for example. ] 11:43, 25 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
: ''"These wars, lasting more than 100 years, were characterized by widespread killing on both sides and the displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land."'' | |||
::Thanks, I had kind of assumed that the stuff from this article would already be in the longer articles. I'll be more careful--] 12:47, 25 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
: The cited source, or at least the quoted extract, does not support this statement. The source is about massacres which is one aspect of the frontier conflict and it states that the victims of massacres were overwhelmingly Indigenous. I can't see anything about "widespread killing on both sides" or "displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land." The statement about frontier violence in Option 2 is more accurate and reflects the source cited. | |||
:::in a perfect world, editors would ensure that if they add to the summaries here that they would realise that those changes should be mirrored in the relevant ''Main article'', unfortunately it is most often not so. ] 13:05, 25 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:''"The conflicts have variously been described as ]."'' | |||
==''Main article''s== | |||
in light of the above, I suspect all the main (or "sub")-articles, geography of..., economy of... could do with an overhaul and porting of any new text (especially any added or improved text) and any new references added that have been added in the ] article. I started on ]. ] 15:35, 25 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
: The citation (Jalata, 2013) isn't from a high quality source and isn't a reliable summary of recent scholarship on the issue. As far as I can see, it is only this author who is calling the conflict terrorism. Scholars have used a far wider range of terms to characterise the conflict but the most common would be "a frontier war", "a guerrilla war", "genocide", "genocidal massacres", "ethnocide" and "cultural genocide". Henry Renolds states, "Frontier conflicts have been variously described as a continuing social disturbance, a crime wave and a sporadic form of warfare." (Op Cit. p 47). The Jalata source is very dubious. The title and quoted extract talks about the "English colonisation" of Australia which is a schoolboy error. Australia was colonised by Great Britain (later the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland). The colonists were overwhelmingly English, Scottish, Welsh and Irish. This isn't simply clumsy wording, it indicates that the author doesn't know the basics of British and Australian history and it is the sort of error which would have been picked up with proper peer review. The article is full of similar mistakes and basic misunderstandings. I also note that SAGE OPEN has been subject to numerous fake article from . I can't see any evidence that this article is by an expert in the field and was properly peer reviewed. | |||
==Missing things== | |||
Some things that need a mention: | |||
*<s>World Heritage sites, Ramsar, National Parks<s> | |||
*Cuisine | |||
*<s>Short explanation of the ESI<s> to difficult to explain with brevity<s> | |||
--] 01:38, 28 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
: In summary, this is a high profile featured artice. We should be using the most reliable sources available from renowned scholars and ensuring that any statements are firmly based on these sources, reflect the consensus of experts in the field, and are not open to challenge. ] The wording and citations in Option 3 need major revisions to meet this standard. ] (]) 02:43, 27 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
==Constitutional Conventions== | |||
*'''Option 2/status quo''' all the other options have issues such as an incorrect timeline and citing Kids Britannica (seriously). I have no issue with including that what occurred to the Aboriginal population has been characterised by some scholars/is debated by scholars as a genocide, but I don't see strong evidence terms like terrorism are consistently applied. ] (]) 00:43, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Option 2/status quo''' Good night are we pushing a POV or what here? SAGE OPEN as a source is laughable as would be any advocacy publication. There is not widespread consensus that this was genocide or terrorism. ] (]) 06:19, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Option 2/status quo''' There are problems with all three but that's par for the course with this article. Genocide requires official policy and while a few colonial officers certainly had that in mind, others were either strongly against elimination of the original residents or indifferent. Native peoples were almost invariably the losers in the process of European colonialism simply by not possessing societal structures or technology geared to compete. Disease, dispossession, and death by a thousand cuts. We could lay much of the evil at the feet of the various religious groups who were not out to eliminate Indigenous Australians, merely to convert them. Can we really call such well-meaning but ill-advised efforts as "genocide" in the same breath as the Holocaust? --] (]) 09:41, 5 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:Textbook example of reasoning that is decades old {{cite journal | last=Dirk Moses | first=A. |authorlink=A. Dirk Moses| title=Genocide and Holocaust Consciousness in Australia | journal=History Compass | volume=1 | issue=1 | date=2003 | issn=1478-0542 | doi=10.1111/1478-0542.028 }} <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 04:49, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::Pish! Reason is unaffected by time. It just is. Tell Plato or Einstein that the ages have left them floundering. Don't present your fashionable opinion, give us the facts! --] (]) 19:31, 20 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:::] vs random Wiki editor<small> {{cite journal | last=Kiernan | first=Ben | title=Cover-up and Denial of Genocide: Australia, the USA, East Timor, and the Aborigines | journal=Critical Asian Studies - Genocide Studies- Yale University | volume=34 | issue=2 | date=2002 | issn=1467-2715 | doi=10.1080/14672710220146197 | pages=163–192}}</small> <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::::I don't think you appreciate the point. Do you really think that logic and reason can somehow be trumped by opinion? Plato made the point that no matter how strongly held, an opinion has no substance and there is no point discussing it as if it had some intellectual weight. --] (]) 23:01, 20 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*'''Option 1 followed by Option 3''' These represent the sources best. The genocide should be mentioned. ] (]) 03:02, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
=== Discussion === | |||
The Parliamentary Library has produced an excellent on the Governor-General's reserve powers. It is '''not''' convention that the Governor-General only acts on Ministerial advice, for example. It is the nature of the reserve powers that they are exercised without advice. The case of Prime Minister George Reid in the second Parliament is before us - nobody, least of all Reid, disputed the power of the Governor-General to refuse Reid's advice to call an election or to appoint a new Prime Minister (Deakin), both actions taken against or without advice. | |||
I have added a 3rd choice as the first 2 do not really reflect the souces in my view. Ping thoses already here {{ping|OntologicalTree}}, {{ping|Chipmunkdavis }}, {{ping| Aemilius Adolphin|}} <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 01:56, 8 November 2024 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Xsign --> | |||
:I am attracted to @]'s idea of a blend of Option 2 and 3. For example we might change Option 2 to: "The indigenous population declined for 150 years following European settlement, mainly due to infectious disease. British colonial authorities did not sign any treaties with ]. As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in ] '''which many historians argue included acts of genocide by settlers'''. Settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." | |||
Bryan Palmer's Australian Politics provides another view of the reserve powers and lists examples of their use - eight times in all since Federation. Constitutional conventions cover more than just the limited circumstance of the Governor-General acting on advice. For example, it is a convention that Australia has a Prime Minister, even though that office is nowhere mentioned in the Constitution. Australia has been without a Prime Minister for a short time on a number of occasions following the death of an incumbent, and this could be construed as a breach of the conventions. ] 21:03, 29 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:One of the difficulties I have is that the lack of treaties should be mentioned because it was unusual in British colonisation, but we should avoid the implication that treaties were a realistic option and would have avoided conflict and acts of genocide. One only need look at what happened in North America and New Zealand (where there were treaties) to see that the idea is very naive. More importantly, I am not aware of any expert in the field who supports such a simplistic notion. Another problem I have is that this is a very high level article on Australia and whatever we say needs to be concise and not worded in a way which is simplistic and misleading. Details and nuances can be followed up in linked articles. A third issue is that I don't think we need to squeeze everything into one paragraph and one section of the article. For example, the section on ] states: "From 1886, Australian colonial governments began ] from their families and communities, justified on the grounds of child protection and ] policies. We could add: "The Human Rights Commission later described this as genocidal." with an appropriate citation. ] (]) 10:01, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*Please keep in mind that this article is just a summary, please don't add too much here that should be discussed in the government article. --] 23:36, 29 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
::The lack of treaties is quite unusual! If you look up at my vote for the options, I provide some extra context as to the difficulties. There is something else I didn't mention though, and that is the motives of Captain Cook himself. Australia had already been probed by the French and Dutch, and the British desperately needed a new place to dump their prisoners after America said "no, screw you" to them. Australia was too good to pass up and time was of the essence for claiming it as a prospective settlement. As such, the leading theory is that Captain Cook intentionally classified the Indigenous peoples as "fauna" so they could subvert standard British protocol. Here's a source! ] (]) 10:17, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:No problem. My edit is more concise and more accurate than what was there previously. Did you want a cite for reserve powers/conventions placed in the article? ] 00:01, 30 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
:::The lack of treaties is unusual, but I agree with Aemilius Adolphin that this shouldn't be presented as a core reason for death and displacement. Even without treaties, there were attempts by officials at various to reduce conflict; they were often ignored. Option 3 is much better than Option 1, but it is not clear what the core issue that needs to be solved is. ] (]) 10:29, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::That's probably a good idea, if you look at the article in edit mode you should be able to work out how the footnote system works. --] 00:13, 30 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
::::Yeah, the lack of treaties isn't really relevant to this paragraph, I just wanted to add my own knowledge to the conversation for those who didn't know. As for the core issue in question, I honestly don't know what was "wrong" with the original paragraph, but this is a good opportunity regardless to revise it. ] (]) 10:37, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::Heh! I'll do my best with my limited faculties. ] 00:59, 30 May 2005 (UTC) | |||
::::The core issue is that a couple of editors wanted the article to explicitly state that "Aboriginal Australians were the victims of Genocide" but didn't have the patience to seek consensus on appropriate wording. ] (]) 10:57, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::: A ittle basic research should be done by all...{{cite book | last=Nettelbeck | first=Amanda | last2=Ryan | first2=Lyndall | title=The Cambridge World History of Violence | chapter=Frontier Violence in the Nineteenth-Century British Empire | publisher=Cambridge University Press | date=March 31, 2020 | doi=10.1017/9781316585023.012 | page=227–245|quote=the failure of treaties to secure lasting peace led ultimately to military campaigns that were openly acknowledged as warfare.}} <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 13:47, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::If we did not have the patience for this, we would not be participating in this RFC. If others had substantive arguments as to why the historians and scholars disagree on this point, they already would have preferred them in lieu of handwringing about word choice and long-winded apologia imperial applogia. ] (]) 00:15, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Sorry, but your claim that {{tq|The indigenous population declined for 150 years following European settlement, mainly due to infectious disease}} is not in line with the latest historical sources. The virgin soil hypothesis has largely been replaced by the view that while disease played a role in the initial decinations, it was brutal settler policies that prevented the population from rebounding as they otherwise would have. The Black Plague wiped out as much or more of Europe as any of the virgin soil epidemics of Australia and the Americas, and yet the French, Italians, and English have gone nowhere. If you are going to attempt to cite historical consensus, at least be up to date on the matter. ] (]) 00:08, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{ping|Brusquedandelion}} pls review ] <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 00:08, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Independence/Statute of Westminster == | |||
:::I have generally not reiterated my own viewpoints in different places, only made different viewpoints in multiple places. The fact that multiple people tried to bludgeon this discourse by handwringing about word count rather than getting to the crux of the issue merits being pointed out. ] (]) 00:12, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I agree with Moxy. Please stop bludgeoning the process. Please stop insinuating that other editors have sinister hidden motives for voting the way they do. ]. Please stop suggesting that other editors shouldn't participate unless they vote the way you want them to. We don't want a toxic environment that's inimical to consensus building. ] (]) 02:12, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::I have assumed good faith in stating that my first inclination is to believe the voters handwringing about word choice etc. are simply not capable of reading comprehension, or perhaps how RFCs work. I floated a second possibility, that they simply do not want to use the g-word, but this isn't anything "nefarious". Theirs would certainly be an opinion. Not one backed by reliable sources, but it is an opinion. If you can suggest a better faith interpretation of someone flippantly ignoring the actual crux of the matter at hand to instead clutch pearls about word count, something that is eminently fixable, than a simple lack of understanding as to what this RFC is actually about, I am all ears and will happily strike my prior comments on this issue from the record. And may I remind you, one of the handwringers have straight up admitted to having a conflict of interest on this subject, due to nationalist sentiments and grievance politics. Odd that it is me you are dressing down, and not them, when their comments are against the spirit of letter of at least half a dozen Misplaced Pages policies. | |||
:::::Consensus building requires that people actually talk about the topic at hand. I cannot think of anything more inmicable to this process than people bringing up essentially unrelated issues, thereby muddying the waters, even if it is, as I will assume out of good faith, entirely unintentionally. And I would like to remind everyone that an RFC is also not just a vote for 3 options, but that it has a broad mandate to effect a fairly flexible solution, meaning it is entirely possible for the closer to determine the consensus is to keep the essential aspects of 1 or 3 in a differently worded paragraph. | |||
:::::Frankly, if you don't see how it is a problem to the integrity of the consensus that very few of the comments even acknowledge the g-word in an RFC literally titled {{tq|Should the article state that Indigenous Australians were victims of genocide?}}—well, what are we even doing here? ] (]) 06:42, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Option 3 says "... the Indigenous population declined of up to 90%.<ref name="w098">{{cite journal | last=Harris | first=John | title=Hiding the bodies: the myth of the humane colonisation of Aboriginal Australia | journal=Aboriginal History Journal | publisher=ANU Press | volume=27 | year=2011 | issn=0314-8769 | doi=10.22459/ah.27.2011.07 | doi-access=free | page=22|quote=While the precise number of massacres remains a matter of contention, several researchers assert that by the turn of the 20 th Century, the European settlement of Australia resulted in the catastrophic collapse on the Indigenous population with at least a 90% mortality rate (Awofeso, 2011;Harris, 2003)}}</ref>", which is grammatically incorrect. I was going to see if I could fix it (without changing the intended meaning), but when I checked the reference I could not find the quote "... with at least a 90% mortality rate". I did find that quote in . {{ping|Moxy}} as the editor who the option, reference and quote, could you please fix this discrepancy. ] (]) 12:23, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Should the date of the Statute of Westminster in the Independence section in the infobox be the date it was adopted by the Commonwealth Parliament, rather than the date the British Parliament made it available to us, seeing as it didn't apply to Australia till it was accepted? (according to the Misplaced Pages article on it). If so, should it be the date it was adopted, or the date it was backdated too? ] 12:57, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
:Feel free to fix it.... are you looking for another source? or <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 20:52, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
It should clearly be 1942.] 05:55, 16 July 2005 (UTC) | |||
::{{tqq|Feel free to fix it....}} {{mdash}} Done. ] (]) 02:56, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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===Invalid RfC === | |||
== "nominally" in religion paragraph == | |||
Hello all | |||
I keep on changing this but I am not attached to any alternative wording. Basically, I truly believe that saying 75% or so Australians are "nominally" Christian seems like an unreasonably loaded way of describing demographics and seems to imply something about these Australians which is not supported by any facts elsewhere in this article. | |||
Someone seems to have added a new option to this RfC after people have already voted on the original two options. @] Would you mind withdrawing this RfC in order to give other interested editors sufficient time to propose other options? I also suggest that if you just let others have their say on the Talk page we should be able to come up with consensus wording which avoids the need for a RfC altogether. ] (]) 01:56, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:There is a serious point to be made here; lots of Australians may describe themselve as Christian but a much smaller portion of those are active, or even occasional, attenders of church. To give some indication , according a survey. I'll add a sentence to this effect. --] 08:57, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
:] normal evolution process of an RFC sometimes. Editors that were already here have been informed of a new selection as discussed above early in the process. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 02:14, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
==Additions to history section by Anon== | |||
::Normally a RfC is only initiated when there is a failure to reach a consensus after a genuine attempt. Do you really think interested editors were given sufficient time to discuss and reach a compromise on any of these proposed options? Or to come up with their own? ] (]) 02:21, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
This article has been edited as a summary for clarity, please make additions about the discovery of Australia to the ], as they are not necessary in this article. --] 04:10, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
:::Most RFC happen because multiple good faith attempts with reliable sources have been made to change the text to no avail and people feel the reasoning is not substantiated. It's simply a way of getting those uninvolved involved. This is not a scary process.... nor should it be blocked. In giant RFCs there may be multiple suggestions of change. This is a fluid process not static. I would suggest we see the sources for each paragraph though. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 02:30, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I don't find it scary, I find it shambolic, unnecessary and designed to reduce discussion to three badly drafted options. And your suggestion that I am trying to shut down the argument is plain wrong. I am trying to give editors time to come up with alternative, better worded, options which better reflect recent scholarship. By the way is the Bain Attwood article you cite available through wikilibrary? I can't access it so can't verify that you are accurately summarising it. ] (]) 02:36, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::You can access it through your Alma mater <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 02:42, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Thank you. I have read it. You use this article as a source for your statement, "The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars." But Attwood doesn't say this. The closest I can find is: "As I have noted, they simply took the land without any negotiation, let alone any treaties; and they used naked force to secure their possession but were unable or unwilling to acknowledge publicly that this was so, for reasons that were moral, psychological and legal." He doesn't say the lack of treaties caused the violent conflict or the frontier wars. It was the spread of settlement and aboriginal resistance to this that caused the conflict. Indeed treaties are usually signed after a period of violent conflict. The article isn't about this at all, it is about the ways the British tried to justify colonisation and present-day denialism of dispossession. ] (]) 03:20, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Always think it's best to summarize then plagiarize. To me it's pretty clear they did not negotiate they just took the land by force.... thus the Indigenous population fought back and there were wars .... related to the source in way of ]. They're unwilling to talk to them let alone negotiate treaties just forcibly removed. I can provide multitude of sources ... as others have above..and assuming you can as well. But this one explains very well in the context of justification. That said the genocide article needs a section about . <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 03:25, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
I think none of the three is ideal, with reasons given by others. I am not sure any genocide should be attributed to the lack of a treaty/agreement. Any such agreement might have helped but it could just as easily have been ignored. I cannot see a direct link between 'agreement' and 'no genocide'. Better phrasing in the article might help though. ] (]) 06:47, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:{{cite web | title=Why doesn't Australia have an indigenous treaty? | website=BBC News | date=May 24, 2017 | url=https://www.bbc.com/news/world-australia-40024622 | access-date=Nov 8, 2024|quote=The absence of a treaty was cited by Mr Arthur as a crucial and aggravating factor in relations with the first inhabitants of the island, the scene of some of the worst treatment inflicted on Aborigines by British colonists. }} <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 08:14, 8 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:{{replyto|OntologicalTree}} Please provide a ] for ]. The statement as it stands (from the {{tlx|rfc}} tag to the next timestamp) is ''far'' too long (at over 9,600 bytes) for {{user|Legobot}} to handle, and so it is not being shown correctly at ]. --] 🌹 (]) 22:14, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::{{fixed}} <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 22:20, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::@]I don't think you fixed it, you made it worse. It believe what @] (not you) has to do is concisely and accurately state the nature of the request and then put the three three options after the time stamp. I would suggest wording such as "There is a dispute over whether the article should state that British colonisation of Australia involved genocide against Aboriginal Australians and Torres Strait Islanders. Which of the three proposed options should be included in the article?" @] Am I correct? I didn't initiate the RfC and I'm not sure about the technical requirements. ] (]) 23:06, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::My assumption is length was the concern... as that was elaborated on... so simply made a header so it wouldn't be so big. But what you proposed in wording sounds reasonable to me....pretty much the same meaning..... Do we mention genocide or not? Do we follow sources and elaborate on multiple points or not? I would have no complaints if you changed it..... as there's no change in meaning. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 23:12, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::If you follow the link to the RfC notification you will find that it is blank. I'm not sure but I think the initiator of the RfC has to fix it. The whole thing is a shambles and the RfC should not have been submitted before other editors had a chance to propose better worded options. ] (]) 23:20, 9 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::Legobot will amended the RfC listings the next time that it runs.... It was simply too big. With the new subheader only the first paragraph will appear now. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 00:11, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::{{replyto|Moxy}} {{diff|Talk:Australia|prev|1256427995|this edit}} didn't fix anything, in fact it made it worse by (a) increasing the size of the RfC statement and (b) introducing complex formatting. The only thing that Legobot recognises as the end of an RfC statement is a valid timestamp, as stated at ] (in several slightly different ways). | |||
:::::::{{replyto|Aemilius Adolphin}} It doesn't matter who amends the RfC statement, Legobot runs once an hour and if any RfC statement has been edited (by anybody) since the last run, the new version is copied to the RfC listings (per ]). Unless it is too long or too complex, in which case you either get a partial copy, or nothing at all apart from a link, as with this one. --] 🌹 (]) 00:41, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Okay so move his signature to the end of the paragraph? {{done}} <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 00:47, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::We'll find out at the next Legobot run, in about five minutes time. Put ] on your watchlist now, see if this RfC gets listed there. --] 🌹 (]) 00:55, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Perfect it seems to be working thank you for your help. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 01:07, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Thanks for fixing this up Moxy, and for all your work to get this RfC into a better shape. ] (]) 02:02, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::No problem.... this is an interesting RFC..... Seeing everyone's different point of view or approach to this is interesting. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 02:09, 10 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== "]" listed at ] == | |||
:There's no history involved in possible Portugese voyages, lost caravels and so on. It may well have happened, but as no records remain, it cannot be history. Archaeology, perhaps, if anybody ever finds the ship. Worth a mention somewhere, because it's eminently plausible (and there's that tantalising mystery of the "Mahogany Ship"), but not in this article. ] 05:12, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
] | |||
The redirect <span class="plainlinks"></span> has been listed at ] to determine whether its use and function meets the ]. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at '''{{slink|Misplaced Pages:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 November 26#Australia.}}''' until a consensus is reached. <!-- Template:RFDNote --> '''] <sub>] ]</sub>''' 14:08, 26 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Hatnote spam == | |||
::I agree with Pete. ] 08:04, 9 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
Readers shouldn't have to read a paragraph of information before they actually get to article information.... Scrolling accessibility nightmare. The goal of these is not to direct readers to every possible article before they're even aware of the topic of this article. = ]. As our data shows readers are only going to scroll a few times.... As of now there's a giant paragraph of hatnotes and a giant infobox mobile readers got to get through before they get to actual prose text of the second paragraph. Do we really need a new note for a redirect made today that the articles done fine without for two decades (]) or for other countries names that is obvious when you read the first hatnote where you are and what this page is about.<span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 04:29, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==References== | |||
: There is already an article ] and dab pages ] and ]. I'm not sure that the new redirect (]) is actually necessary? ] (]) 06:13, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Sounds like it should redirect to ]. ] (]) 07:03, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::{{done}}. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 15:35, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::You know what, good idea mate, I’ll put Australia’s Misplaced Pages page link in the page Land Down Under (I might also add New Zealand) ] (]) 21:53, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::OK Mate. I added links to Australia and New Zealand in the page “Land Down Under”. Also keep in mind that I am from Australia ] (]) 21:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== The Royal Anthem == | |||
I recently made some changes to the article, re-adding a reference and information on the republic referendum. In re-adding the reference, I think I may have messed up the existing ones when amending the numbering. Could somebody check if this is so and let me know whether I need to revert my changes.--] ]] 12:19, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
:Yep, they're all messed up, one problem with this ref system is that numbering needs to be manually changed and some of the refs are used more than once. I'll revert and add the referendum ref to the history section and adjust the notes (I'm getting good at it)--] 12:35, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
::Thanks nixie. I really should have reviewed ] before fiddling around and buggering it up. --] ]] 14:09, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
I understand there is a note with regard to the royal anthem however I don't see any issue with adding the royal anthem below the Australian national anthem. I also believe this also aligns better with wiki pages such as Canada. I'd like to make this change however I understand not everyone agrees so I will leave it here for discussion. ] (]) 18:31, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==Aboriginal population== | |||
:We rarely hear it played unless the monarch is present. I don't have strong feelings about it - it is an official anthem after all - but Australia has steadily become less monarchistic over the years, both as a community and as a nation. Giving it any prominence at all is probably undue. Nowadays the Governor-General and that's a huge change from when I was a lad. --] (]) 20:31, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
The article shows an increase of about 300% in 24 years. Obviously this can't have come from immigration, and I haven't done the maths, but I think that the birthrate needed to sustain this sort of increase is pretty much beyond any human population. The large and anomalous increase is mostly because Aboriginal Australians now feel far more comfortable about declaring their Aboriginality on census forms - a very positive sign IMHO, which says a lot about changing community perceptions. Reductions in infant mortality and increases in longevity also account for a portion of the increase. I think that the article should mention this because otherwise someone's going to say "hey, they must breed like rabbits!" and that's not the case. I've added a hypenated word to help explain this, but it's really a subject that deserves more detail, which may be inappropriate in this "overview" article. ] 07:25, 18 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
:I think the current footnote in the infobox is sufficient. As I said last time, Advance Australia Fair is the only official national anthem. God Save the King is only played at official functions (along with the national anthem) when a member of the royal family is present. At official events, sporting events, schools, ceremonies etc. Advance Australia Fair would be played thousands of times more often than God Save the King. Giving it equal prominence in the info box would be false balance ]. And the info box is only meant to summarise key facts.]. ] (]) 21:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
: The current footnote is quite sufficient on this - a featured article page. Actually the Canada page would be improved by following the practice shown here on the Australia page, not vice versa.] (]) 23:42, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Aboriginal hunter/gatherers... == | |||
:It's a matter of weight. While the anthem is official, it is not common, and it is not a key fact about the country for readers. ] (]) 01:57, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Agree .....think its undue for many places including Canada. <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 02:14, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
WRT Skyring's last edit, there's to suggest that in some places near rivers Aboriginal people farmed fish. --] 07:30, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
:I agree with what you all are saying however as it's been stated it is an "official anthem" and I don't see how we or anyone can decide what people should and shouldn't see. If it is an official anthem as stated on here Misplaced Pages and on the Australian Government's website and whether some people want it to be included or not is just someone's opinion or how they view the current situation or how they perceive it to be. What we should be doing is stating the facts with proper references and let those who read it decide if they want to do anything more with it. It would also show up as one line that being with regard to the info box and it is below the national anthem. ] (]) 04:44, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:From my understanding they also had pretty extensive trade routes--] 07:42, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
::Deciding what people should and shouldn't see (on this article) is one of our roles as editors. Inclusion is just as much an editorial decision as exclusion. We don't, for example, include the ] as the official floral emblem. ] (]) 05:17, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Sure, but trade routes and fish traps don't make for agriculture. The only indigenous Australians to be farmers were the TSI folk, who had plots of land marked out by stones and passed down through family lines, which was the incontrovertible evidence of ownership needed for Mabo. Perhas we can say "Most indigenous Australians were hunter-gatherers..." Actually, I'd really like some specific mention of the way that TSI folk cultivated their land and grew crops, because it's important to understanding Mabo, and why it was such an injustice to say that these people didn't own the land they'd farmed for centuries. ] 07:52, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
:::Most commonwealth countries could careless about the fact the position has a anthem.....simply not a debate - not part of society - never even learn about it....but Australia it is a bit different. They still debate who is the head of state for a ceremonial position and if the royal anthem should be used at all <span style="font-weight:bold;color:darkblue">]</span>🍁 06:02, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
: I think we are talking about more than a simple fish trap here. We are talking extensive construction - i.e., fish farming. Certainly that was the case in South-west Victoria, and I believe that there was similar activity up along the Murray. ] 08:01, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
::Interesting article, and thanks for the link. However it's still fish traps rather than fish farming. Eels are oceanic creatures for most of their existence. You can't farm eels, you can only catch them as they migrate up or down the rivers. Digging out channels between ponds would make it easier to catch them as they moved along the channels. | |||
::The existence of circular foundations for huts is actually more interesting. You don't build substantial housing unless you plan to stay there for more than a few nights. I think that saying there was enough of an industry in catching and smoking eels to sustain a village of hundreds of houses, making for a permanent community of up to a thousand individuals, is a bit of a stretch, however. Presumably they also caught other wildlife from the wetlands and perhaps traded with more distant tribes. A thousand people eat a lot of tucker. | |||
::But even if you have an aquaculture industry, exporting smoked eels across Australia, which sounds reasonably plausible, just what percentage of the Aboriginal population would have been engaged in such pursuits? And if it was a viable lifestyle, why didn't it persist until historic times? | |||
::Anyway, I think the wording of "Most indigenous Australians were hunter-gatherers..." works better than the "primarily hunter-gatherers" phrase because the former includes TSI people as well as the eel-smokers and doesn't give the impression that all Aboriginal Australians were sometimes farmers, which is definitely not the case. | |||
::Comments? Or am I making a meal out of a word or two, as I tend to do? ] 08:50, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
I've added a sentence distinguishing the TSI from the mainland native people, since they are completely distinct. --] 09:08, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
Yes. I've had a bit of a tweak, but maybe it can be improved still more. It's perhaps a bit of a quibble to note that the TSI folk also lived on the mainland - they were gradually expanding southwards at the time of European settlement. However, that's probably best left to a specific article - this one is getting a bit longish and I'm thinking it doesn't need more material so much as arranging what we have better, eliminating redundancies if any can be identified. ] 09:25, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
:Eels are not usually oceanic, Pete. The eel species in question is the ]. Like most others, it spends by far the greater part of its lifecycle in a home range area, typically a lake or a stretch of river. It makes just two migrations: in the first it travels from its oceanic hatching ground far off in the tropical South Pacific and winds up in a river close to the one where its parents lived. (How? Nobody knows.) At this time it's about the size of a bootlace only shorter, and not practical as a food fish (although some people in Europe eat elvers - it's a shocking waste of natural resources, but there you go). | |||
:The second migration occurs only after 15-odd years of growth in a lake or river: the mature eel travels downstream to spawn. Eels of a size worth eating, in other words, migrate once and once only: a one-way trip to the sea, then north to the Solomon Islands where they spawn and die. Catching ] on the way upsteam to spawn would make sense, but salmon work the opposite way around to eels; salmon are oceanic fish that just happen to breed in rivers, where eels are freshwater fish that just happen to breed at sea. | |||
:Back to the topic now: my view is subject to persuasion, but it seems obvious to me that we are ''never'' going to come up with a formulation simple enough to use in this context, and yet accurate enough to stand criticsm. It might be better to resolve this point on a page where there is room to deal with it properly. ] or ] both seem suitable. ] 09:42, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
===Racism=== | |||
*While were at it, someone has objected to the article being featured on the basis that it doesn't discuss racism in Australia. I was thinking of adding something after this sentence ''In the 2001 census the five largest groups of Australians born overseas were from the United Kingdom, New Zealand, Italy, Vietnam and China'' from the demographic section. But I can't think of what to add, since the whole Hanson episode there has definately been a push for mulitcultural Australia but I'm lost for a way to describe it.--] 09:27, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
My feeling is that there is very little racism remaining in normal life, compared to a decade ago. It's just not that much of a problem that I can see. Lebanese gangs in Sydney, but I suspect a lot of that is talkback beat up. ] 10:40, 20 Jun 2005 (UTC) | |||
== Why "Commonwealth" instead of "Dominion?" == | |||
Based upon comparing the governments of the ] and the ], I don't really understand the differences. The idea of a ] seems to compare directly with that of a ], so if the ] is the Queen of Australia, how can one style Australia a Commonwealth? Would it not be a Dominion as is the case for Canada? And would not the ] likewise be ]? I honestly don't understand the differences between each of these and if someone could explain them to me, it would be greatly appreciated. ] 2 July 2005 03:19 (UTC) | |||
:no. australia is not a dominion of the united kingdom. the queen of australia is a different person than the queen of the united kingdom in law. However, it realy doesnt make much difference what you call a place. But you should have complained 106 years ago when they made Australia. ] 2 July 2005 03:59 (UTC) | |||
: A different way of answering the question... The King of Great Britain and Ireland was the King of Australia at the time of its creation (the constitution refers to a Queen, Queen Victoria, but she died in between the Commonwealth of Australia Constitution Act (UK) receiving the royal assent and coming into force). In the leadup to federation, there had been some debates about being a republic, but those who had a say were generally in favor of remaining a British colony. I don't really know why 'Commonwealth' was chosen over any other term. Although it was originally a calque of Republic, it hasn't always been used with the same meaning as Republic has nowadays. The Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth was an elective monarchy. Australia is a federation; the Commonwealth of Nations is an organisation of states (I spose Australia's definition as a federation opened the doors for it to be used for an organisation of what were originally all monarchies). ''Edit: in America 'Commonwealth' is used to mean, for whatever reason, something along the lines of colony/territory, but I understand that's a twentieth-century development and not part of the justification for Australia's name.'' I don't know the justification for Australia's title, though. (Australia was of course still a dominion during its early history; now the correct term is a commonwealth Realm.) | |||
:*The States of Australia are so named because our federation was modelled on the United States; other similarities include the names of our federal parliament (the House of Representatives and the Senate) and that residual powers are granted to the States (whereas in Canada they go to the Federal government). | |||
:*Canada, on the other hand, was formed in opposition to the US. There are also various (theoretical/legal) differences between the Australian States and the Canadian Provinces, such as their head of state (the Canadian Provinces' practical heads of state are the Lieutenant Governors, representatives of the Governor General, representative of the Queen, appointed by the Governor-General on the advice of the Prime Minister; the Australian States' pracitcal heads of state are the Governors, representatives of the Queen, appointed by the Queen on the advice of the Premiers). | |||
:*Finally, while the US States which were earlier British colonies as well as the Canadian Provinces were both styled 'province' before their federations (e.g. the Province of New York), the Australian States were called 'colony' (the Colony of Victoria). Evidently they needed to be renamed, and why choose the Canadian 'Province' when the American 'State' was the model? | |||
:*It should also be noted that 'province' has had some currency in the Australasian colonies/Australian states + New Zealand. New Zealand had subdivisions called provinces, and Victoria's legislative council (upper house) electorates have been called provinces until the next redistribution. | |||
: I hope that gives you some insight into why they're called 'states' and not 'provinces'. | |||
:] 2 July 2005 10:23 (UTC) | |||
== '''Several''' territories? == | |||
There are only '''two''' territiories who elect representatives into Senate. | |||
What are the other territories? Can we just say ''six states and two territiries''?{{unsigned|Alex Bakharev|07:36, 12 July 2005}} | |||
== Racial discrimination??? == | |||
I think statement that modern Australia has '''Racial Discirimination''' is an extreme POV. | |||
'''Perceived racial discriminations''' are much better.{{unsigned|Alex Bakharev|15:53, 12 July 2005}} | |||
Fine, but I took the comment about refugees out, wihtout some serious comparative context the comment is of little consequence.--] 06:37, 12 July 2005 (UTC) | |||
Agree ] 07:24, 12 July 2005 (UTC) | |||
== The opening two paragraphs == | |||
Although many people regard 'Commonwealth of Australia' as an obsolescent term—an undesirable hangover from colonial days—it looks as though we'll have to put up with it as is, emblazoned TWICE across the top of the article, and several times in the rest of the text. One or more contributors clearly feel strongly about highlighting this term. While it IS embedded in the constitution, if we restricted ourselves to constitutional terminology, we'd have to give up words such as 'cabinet' and 'prime minister'. In addition, 'Commonwealth Realm' is, frankly, an arcane term that won't mean much to most readers; I don't understand why some contributors are doggedly insistent on retaining it. These terms create the wrong impression right at the start, in my view. | |||
Aside from that, I'm concerned that the second paragraph of a substantial article on Australia mentions Boigu Island and crossing of the waterway between PNG and Australia; these matters would be better located much further down in the text, to leave the opening as 'broad brush-strokes'. Why not tack the first sentence—'Australia's neighbouring countries include Indonesia, East Timor, and Papua New Guinea to the north, Solomon Islands and Vanuatu to the north-east, and New Zealand to the south-east'—onto the end of the opening para, and relocate the rest? | |||
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== Demography, economy == | |||
I think the explanation of the economy is weak, or at least incomplete. I've added something about the tax system, but more is required to characterise the Australian economy, particularly in relation to other OECD countries. | |||
Demography needs beefing up with respect to education. | |||
I wonder whether we could remove the bit about AusLan (sign language), which is well and truly being superseded by other methods, including the Cochlear implant. Many hearing-impaired people claim that sign languages are retained through sentimentality. | |||
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Proposal to include an Indigenous name for Australia.
Previously titled: Place holder of information for future edit: Aboriginal Names for Australia
I would like to propose the inclusion of an Indigenous Australian name in the introductory summary and also hopefully a section within the main article.
If we are to keep the tradition of exonyms, a strong proposal is outlined later in the post. However, an endonym would be the strongest symbolically. All the strongest endonyms for Australia in the various languages are defined as "ground; land" and they are:
- Biik: referenced in 34,900 academic articles thus biggest candidate. (Melbourne nation)
- Kurrek: 713 academic articles (rural Victoria).
- Barna: referenced almost equally at 34,600. However, upon review, it seems to have grown to become a reference specifically to the Nation of Western Australia, i.e. Perth coast until the western state boarder, the size of NSW).
- Uthuru: Strongest symbolic candidate as it is the word associated with the central inland nation around Uluru. But I can only find tabloid and social media references of this name, so far none in academia.
Torres Strait Islands Nations as the Primary Candidate for Exonym source:
Keo Deudai: (Out Back — Back Mainland)
- First Primary Candidate
- Origin: Miriam language of The Torres Strait Islands
- Meaning: Back Mainland, beyond the regions of the TSI'der people
- Academic Recognition: Consensus Established. ~900 academic publications inclusive of variations (google scholar). Examples:
- (Page 28), Sharp, Nonie., "Stars of Tagai: The Torres Strait Islanders", Aboriginal Studies Press, 1993. (ISBN: 9780855752385)
- (Page 123, Document page 3) Shnukal, Anna. "From monolingualism to multilingualism in Australia’s Torres Strait island communities" International Journal of the Sociology of Language, vol. 1995, no. 113, 1995, pp. 121-136. https://doi.org/10.1515/ijsl.1995.113.121
- John Doolah: Lecturer in Indigenous Education @ Melbourne University
- Doolah, John., "The Stories Behind the Torres Strait Islander Migration Myth: the journey of the sap/bethey." (2021). http://hdl.handle.net/1959.13/1432705
- Explicit study of Keo Deudai
- Keo Deudai / Kie Daudie (latter phonetically preferred): Greater backmainland beyond (inclusively) TSI ancestral territory
- Zenadth Kes: Primary inhabited TSI ancestral Territory (Keo Deudai: backmainland, secondary TSI ancestral backmainland, Kie Daudie: backmainland beyond TSI ancestral territory)
- Doolah, J., 2015. Decolonising the migration and urbanisation of Torres Strait Islanders (Ailan pipel) from the Torres Straits to mainland Australia between the 1960s and 1970s.
- Kie Daudie: exclusively used
- Page xvii, document page 17 | Page 47, document page 70
- Doolah, John., "The Stories Behind the Torres Strait Islander Migration Myth: the journey of the sap/bethey." (2021). http://hdl.handle.net/1959.13/1432705
Context & follow up candidate for Keo Deudai:
- Daudai
Daudai (Daudie, Deudai/Deudie), is the primary word used among the Torres Strait Islands (TSI / TSI'der ) people and neighbouring nations which means Mainland (ancestral), denoting the lands themselves. While Zenadth Kes is the territory/region inclusive of waters and lands. Then Papua New Guinea (PNG) is the Op Deudai — Face (front) mainland while Cape York (tip of Australian mainland) and beyond is Keo Daudai — back mainland, inclusive of the TSI ancestral territory of the mainland. Kie Daudie is sometimes used in reference to the mainland beyond the TSI ancestral nation, exclusively.
Keo Deudai (back mainland) and its variations is the primary variation used in publications to refer to Australia as a whole. The primary driver of variation is the micro-dialects and accents in competition with outside observers (whom lack phonetic-linguistic expertise) attempting to document local history using the english phonetic alphabet where linguistic accuracy is not the primary focus. Additionally, the micro-dialects/accents themselves are also still in revitalisation from the colonial genocide inflicted upon in the past whom are still yet to receive reparations.
Second Primary Candidate:
- Ladaigal: (phonetically easier and more inclusive, supported by John Doolah)
- Meaning: Aboriginal people, non-TSI.
- Use: Often used in myth telling of the TSI journey from PNG
- Ladaigal Country: is the more accurate expression of aboriginal land, Ladaigal alone is and can be used interchangeably between aboriginal people and aboriginal land.
- https://ia801603.us.archive.org/13/items/reportsofcambrid03hadd/reportsofcambrid03hadd.pdf
- Cambridge Anthropological Expedition to Torres Straits (1898) and Hodes, Jeremy. Index to the Reports of the Cambridge Anthropological Expedition to Torres Straits and Haddon, Alfred C. (Alfred Cort), 1855-1940 and Ray, Sidney Herbert, 1858-1939. Linguistics. Reports of the Cambridge Anthropological Expedition to Torres Straits University Press Cambridge 1901
- CATALOGUE PERSISTENT IDENTIFIER: https://nla.gov.au/nla.cat-vn458355
... to be continued Bro The Man (talk) 04:04, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Bro The Man Hello there. This isn't the place to put notes or draft content. Please use your sandbox for this. If you have a specific proposal to improve this article please start a discussion here.
- Thanks Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 06:30, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, that was the intention, to propose the inclusion of an Indigenous Australian name in the introductory summary and also hopefully a section within the main article. I'll take your advice onboard and re-edited the topic name to "Proposal to include an Indigenous name for Australia." Bro The Man (talk) 07:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- There's no indigenous name for Australia and it's not our place to invent one. I T B F 📢 09:27, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I just provided evidence that there is one, I hope we can arrive to a consensus as to which one is more appropriate. Bro The Man (talk) 10:14, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- There's no indigenous name for Australia and it's not our place to invent one. I T B F 📢 09:27, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, that was the intention, to propose the inclusion of an Indigenous Australian name in the introductory summary and also hopefully a section within the main article. I'll take your advice onboard and re-edited the topic name to "Proposal to include an Indigenous name for Australia." Bro The Man (talk) 07:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Bro The Man sounds interesting, however any of those choices would be us assigning a name when no one name exists. GraziePrego (talk) 10:06, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your interest! I agree, a consensus needs to be achieved from available resources. Bro The Man (talk) 10:16, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- You misunderstand how this works. It is not up to editors to assign an Indigenous name to Australia out of a field of candidates proposed by an editor; Misplaced Pages is supposed to follow established practice. If a single Indigenous name for Australia ever emerges it will gain wide currency in official publications, the media and everyday use. We won't have to choose one; it will choose itself. Until this happens Australia will remain the only name for Australia in the English language Misplaced Pages. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 11:19, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- But two names already have recognition is 35,000 publications each? Bro The Man (talk) 12:12, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- The one you say is in 35,000 publications is just the "Melbourne nation", not even the whole of Australia. Aemilius is quite right, it is not up to us to weigh the options and choose a name- a name will only be suitable for this article when it is in common knowledge and use. GraziePrego (talk) 12:18, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- But two names already have recognition is 35,000 publications each? Bro The Man (talk) 12:12, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- You misunderstand how this works. It is not up to editors to assign an Indigenous name to Australia out of a field of candidates proposed by an editor; Misplaced Pages is supposed to follow established practice. If a single Indigenous name for Australia ever emerges it will gain wide currency in official publications, the media and everyday use. We won't have to choose one; it will choose itself. Until this happens Australia will remain the only name for Australia in the English language Misplaced Pages. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 11:19, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your interest! I agree, a consensus needs to be achieved from available resources. Bro The Man (talk) 10:16, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
Frontier wars paragraph
I made a change to the previously discussed sentence on the Frontier Wars in order to change the more passive word "Indigenous people died" to "Indigenous people were killed" and similarly change the passive "others were dispossessed" with the active "settlers dispossessed others" as I believe the active is clearer and reads better without changing the underlying meaning of the sentence. After this, there have been further changes by @pastelilac and @Willthorpe that I think deserve discussion.
While I supported the change to split the sentence to read "Those who survived were dispossessed by colonists of their traditional lands", I disagree with the more substantial change to "As settlement expanded, frontier conflicts claimed thousands of lives, predominantly those of Indigenous people." This sentence is much less clear than the previously stable version, "As settlement expanded, thousands of Indigenous people died in frontier conflicts". This sentence suggests causation between settlement expansion to people dying in frontier conflicts. The suggested sentence however, suggests that settlement expansion created the abstract notion of "frontier conflicts" which was the cause of deaths. This is less clear because the phrase "frontier conflicts" is simply an abstract way of describing the process of settlement expansion and resulting fighting. It's clearer to simply describe the process and define it as "frontier conflict" as opposed to giving agency to an abstract concept, rather than the participants. Instead of using a metaphor and winding our way to the issue, it is much clearer to simply state that people were killed. Safes007 (talk) 13:18, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Safes007 My main interest was to also acknowledge the deaths of settlers in the frontier conflicts, given that they were a formative – and deadly – experience for Australians of both backgrounds; I sought to do this whilst also acknowledging that the larger share of deaths were Aboriginal Australians. I don't hold any contention beyond this. Cheers, Will Thorpe (talk) 13:41, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with Willthorpe. I might avoid mention of casualties altogether. "Thousands" isn't a very helpful indicator of the scale of things. I'd rather an educated estimate as to total deaths rather than just "thousands". One approach sans casualties: "As settlement expanded, frontier conflicts intensified, further displacing Indigenous people from their traditional lands." - PastelLilac (talk) 21:28, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
- The sourcing of the relevant section is dated (Bain Atwood 2003.) This is the most researched area of Australian History in the past 20 years and we can do better than this. Henry Reynolds, who is one of the most respected historians in the field, has recently published a second edition of Forgotten War (2022) and concluded that at least 30,000 Indigenous people were killed in fontier conflicts compared with 2,500 settlers. So I think we would be justified in stating "As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers died in frontier conflicts while settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." Or words to that effect.
- The sourcing of the entire article is poor and I doubt that the article would retain its featured article status if it were reviewed today. I would be happy to work with other interested editors to progressively improve the sourcing. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 21:31, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
- I support this wording, with the replacement of "died" with "were killed" to keep the active voice. Safes007 (talk) 02:13, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- I have replaced the dated source with the Reynolds source. I have slightly changed the wording to "settlers took possession of most of the traditional land of the surviving Indigenous groups.. etc". Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 03:05, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- "Took possession" is euphemistic and kind. HiLo48 (talk) 03:16, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- I agree. It's also using two words when the one word "dispossessed" would suffice. Safes007 (talk) 06:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- Or "stole". HiLo48 (talk) 07:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- I changed it because the wording didn't make sense: "Settlers dispossessed most of the traditional lands of the surviving Indigenous groups" is wrong. You can't dispossess land. You can either say: "Settlers dispossessed the surviving Indigenous groups of their traditional land" or "Settlers took possession of most of the traditional land of the surviving Indigenous groups" or "settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." I prefer the latter because it is the most concise. I suggested this above but I assumed @Safes007 objected to it given their changes. As for "stole"; this in an encyclopaedic article, not a political tract. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 08:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- @PastelLilac@Willthorpe Any suggestions? Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 09:11, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- If your issue were actually with the incorrect use of the word "dispossess", you would have changed the sentence to
Settlers dispossessed the surviving Indigenous groups of their traditional land
—something you yourself suggested here. Yet this is not the change you actually made. Your claim thatthis in an encyclopaedic article, not a political tract
reveals your true intentions, for your edit is entirely political in nature; you just believe your own politics are neutral, much as fish doubt the existence of water. Brusquedandelion (talk) 05:18, 5 November 2024 (UTC)- My issue was indeed with the incorrect usage and with the dated information. Have you actually read the discussion? I am happy to change the sentence to "Settlers dispossessed the surviving Indigenous groups of their traditional land" and see if we can get a consensus for this. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 06:31, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
- Were whole groups killed? As in there are extinct groups? Moxy🍁 16:36, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes. Many. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 21:48, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- Was a rhetorical question. There is no evidence that any Indigenous groups in Australia are extinct. No guess work pls. Moxy🍁 22:08, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Moxy, I think you should have a read of Aboriginal Tasmanians. The population was reduced from potentially 15,000 down to just *47 individuals in the entire island*. Given there were "more than 60 clans" (quoting elsewhere in the article), even if somehow all 47 individuals were 1 from each clan, that's at least 13 Indigenous groups made extinct. GraziePrego (talk) 05:35, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Best not use the wrong terms genocide vs extinction very different things...best be up to date Dumas, Daisy (Aug 28, 2023). "Unesco removes 'hurtful' document claiming Tasmanian Aboriginal people 'extinct'". the Guardian. Retrieved Nov 7, 2024. Moxy🍁 05:47, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Moxy, I think you should have a read of Aboriginal Tasmanians. The population was reduced from potentially 15,000 down to just *47 individuals in the entire island*. Given there were "more than 60 clans" (quoting elsewhere in the article), even if somehow all 47 individuals were 1 from each clan, that's at least 13 Indigenous groups made extinct. GraziePrego (talk) 05:35, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Was a rhetorical question. There is no evidence that any Indigenous groups in Australia are extinct. No guess work pls. Moxy🍁 22:08, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- Were the Jews exterminated? No. Was the Holocaust a genocide? Yes. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:15, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes. Many. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 21:48, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- The wording you suggested is the one I included in the article. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:14, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Were whole groups killed? As in there are extinct groups? Moxy🍁 16:36, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- My issue was indeed with the incorrect usage and with the dated information. Have you actually read the discussion? I am happy to change the sentence to "Settlers dispossessed the surviving Indigenous groups of their traditional land" and see if we can get a consensus for this. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 06:31, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
- I changed it because the wording didn't make sense: "Settlers dispossessed most of the traditional lands of the surviving Indigenous groups" is wrong. You can't dispossess land. You can either say: "Settlers dispossessed the surviving Indigenous groups of their traditional land" or "Settlers took possession of most of the traditional land of the surviving Indigenous groups" or "settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." I prefer the latter because it is the most concise. I suggested this above but I assumed @Safes007 objected to it given their changes. As for "stole"; this in an encyclopaedic article, not a political tract. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 08:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- Or "stole". HiLo48 (talk) 07:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- I agree. It's also using two words when the one word "dispossessed" would suffice. Safes007 (talk) 06:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- "Took possession" is euphemistic and kind. HiLo48 (talk) 03:16, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- I have replaced the dated source with the Reynolds source. I have slightly changed the wording to "settlers took possession of most of the traditional land of the surviving Indigenous groups.. etc". Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 03:05, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- I support this wording, with the replacement of "died" with "were killed" to keep the active voice. Safes007 (talk) 02:13, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with @Safes007, using active voice helps clarify context and removes ambiguity in matters concerning fact. Whether pleasant or not, death and its causes must be respected, not downplayed and obfuscated. Bro The Man (talk) 07:52, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
Suggesting a change as the half paragraph is odd to read and does not fully explain the sources about populations decline. Plus "tens of thousand of Indigenous people"? what does this mean? it that alot? is it 10% of the population or 60%......lets just say alot and let the linked article deal with stats.
Replace...
The indigenous population declined for 150 years following European settlement, mainly due to infectious disease. British colonial authorities did not sign any treaties with Aboriginal groups. As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in frontier conflicts. Settlers took possession of most of the traditional lands of the surviving Indigenous groups.
With someone like.....
As a consequence of European colonization, the Indigenous population declined immensely.This is mainly attributed to the transfer of European diseases and, to a lesser extent, conflicts with the colonial authorities, The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars. These wars, lasting more than 100 years, were characterized by widespread killing on both sides along with the displacement of Indegenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land.
Moxy🍁 07:10, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
- That's good. HiLo48 (talk) 06:10, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- It's not good, it's unsourced original research, factually wrong and much worse than what we already have.
- "As a consequence of European colonization, the Indigenous population declined immensely." What does "immensely" mean? How can you possibly criticise "tens of thousands" as too vague (even though it is reliably sourced) but propose that we replace it with "immensely"? Can you cite a single reliable source that uses this term? And did Europe colonise Australia or did Britain?
- "This is mainly attributed to the transfer of European diseases and, to a lesser extent, conflicts with the colonial authorities." Attributed by who? What is a European disease? Can you cite any medical studies which classify disease as "European"? What are "conflicts with colonial authorites"? Disputes over tax returns?
- "The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars." This is plain wrong. In fact the sources cited make it clear that treaties were probably impractical because Aboriginal groups did not have "chiefs" who could negotiate treaties and enforce them on their group. Moreover, Aboriginal culture did not have the concept of alienating land by agreement. And even more importantly, the history of the US shows, treaties would have been ignored by the colonists and they would have taken all the land they wanted anyway.
- I won't go on. I agree that the current paragraph is most unsatisfactory. In particular, the second sentence isn't connected to the first and the third one to form a coherent paragraph. But I lost that battle in the previous discussion. I think @Moxy and @HiLo48 you need to read the sources cited carefully and have another look at the previous discussions on this issue. And some good general histories of Australia. I can recommend the Cambridge History of Australia, Macintyre, 2020 edition. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 09:13, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yes understanding of the basics is needed "Indigenous and European Contact in Australia". Britannica Kids. Moxy🍁 13:40, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Somewhat more concise: "As a result of European colonisation, the Indigenous population declined significantly, primarily due to introduced diseases. The expansion of settlements without any formal treaties led to frontier conflicts characterised by widespread killing on both sides, along with the displacement of surviving Indigenous peoples from their traditional lands." - PastelLilac (talk) 09:11, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Much better written but see my comments above. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 09:14, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Aemilius Adolphin. There's an overwhelming consensus among modern historians that Australia's actions against Aboriginals were genocidal.
- Beyond this, as others here have mentioned, the founder of settler-colonial studies, Patrick Wolfe, specifically cited Australia as the prototypical example of a genocidal settler society.
- Genocide is also mentioned in other British settler colony articles, including the United States, Canada, etc. Perhaps the last major historian to deny that genocide occurred is the conservative Keith Windschuttle and his works are no longer deeply influential on the subject of Australia's relations with its native people. Requesting that your edit is self-reverted. There's a pretty clear consensus that these edits are due. (I count 6v1 on this page.) Your edits are coming across as an attempt to whitewash unsavory aspects of Australian history. The claim that a majority of deaths were of "unintentional disease" are also refuted by Ned Blackhawk in the forementioned Cambridge World History of Genocide. OntologicalTree (talk) 23:46, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- Not sure how I got pinged...but whatever. As I stated on your user page Tree...Must understand reconciliation in Australia is not at the point of acknowledgment yet in the general public eye. It's not about whitewashing.... but what society has recognized. READ ME The stewards of this article find it a hard topic to tackle so ignore it. That said they're society is moving forward on the idea. An RfC where to take place it would be included as the general Misplaced Pages community can see its merits and the overwhelming academic support for the idea.Moxy🍁 23:55, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
- As I said on your Talk page, the debate has moved past Windschuttle a long time ago but there is still academic debate on whether there was genocidal intent, particularly by colonial authorities, and whether the actions of individual settlers amounted to genocide. If you haven't read Henry Reynolds' The Forgotten War (2022 edition) I can highly recommend it as a more nuanced assessment. And, as I suggested, if you want to propose one or two specific factual sentences with reliable citations for discussion on the Talk page then I think you might be able to find a consensus for them. For example, I wouldn't be adverse to a sentence in the frontier expansion section such as "many historians conclude that acts of genocide by settlers were committed during the frontier conflicts, although the question of genocidal intent is still debated." Nor would I oppose a sentence in the discussion of the Stolen generations along the lines of "the HRC called the forced removal of Indigenous children an act of genocide" or words to that effect. But rather than trying to ram home your preferred wording despite objections from other editors, I think the best way forward is to seek consensus for one or two sepcific sentences in the relevant parts of the article. One of my concerns with your current wording is that it is written in stilted English and needs to be better integrated into the article. I prefer my wording but let's wait and see what others think. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 00:15, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Again, there's similar scholars who deny that genocide occurred in Canada or the United States, yet those respective articles do not "equalize" their opinions between those who say "yes" and those who say "no". That's not how WP:NPOV works. It works by the WP:WEIGHT of sources. Every major Australian history association, museum, and the national government recognizes the events as genocide. If we're using this standard then no event in history (outside of the Holocaust) could be classified as genocide. OntologicalTree (talk) 00:28, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- As I have said, it's all a matter of how we word things. And policy is that a seriously contested view in academic sources should not be treated as fact and opposing views should be given due weight: WP:VOICE. If you have specific objections to my proposed wording please state them and put your proposed changes up here for discussion. And give others chance to express their views. By the way, on second thoughts it might be easier to achieve a consensus if we separate the genocide discussion from the discussion on frontier conflict. if you agree, would you mind moving the discussion to the genocide heading? Thanks Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 01:23, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Again, there's similar scholars who deny that genocide occurred in Canada or the United States, yet those respective articles do not "equalize" their opinions between those who say "yes" and those who say "no". That's not how WP:NPOV works. It works by the WP:WEIGHT of sources. Every major Australian history association, museum, and the national government recognizes the events as genocide. If we're using this standard then no event in history (outside of the Holocaust) could be classified as genocide. OntologicalTree (talk) 00:28, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Much better written but see my comments above. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 09:14, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
No mention of "genocide" in the article
I'm disappointed but not surprised that genocide is not mentioned in this article. Patrick Wolfe described Australia as an archetypical, settler-colonial state that was founded upon genocide. Yet this is mentioned nowhere in the article!
https://australian.museum/learn/first-nations/genocide-in-australia/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by DerApfelZeit (talk • contribs) 00:06, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
- I second the use of the term "genocide" when describing the intentional massacre and displacement of aboriginal Australians.
- The only push back I would anticipate to this motion is that racists will label the use of the term genocide without citing a source that uses the term genocide, as a violation of Synthesis / Original Research. Bro The Man (talk) 07:57, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
RFC: Should the article state that Indigenous Australians were victims of genocide?
There is an ongoing editoral dispute (including on the talk page above) on whether Australia's actions against Aboriginals and Torres Strait Islanders can be described in the article as genocidal or simply the product of disease and mutual conflicts. A consensus could not be reached so I am asking for non-involved editors to comment. OntologicalTree (talk) 00:24, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
Content proposals
Option #1:
These early acts of settler colonialism began the genocide of Indigenous Australians, which aimed at eradicating the cultures, religions, languages, and people of both Aboriginals and Torres Strait Islanders. As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in frontier conflicts while settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land. Survivors of the exterminations were frequently forced to convert to Christianity, confined to Aboriginal reserves, and were not provided with any legally recognized form of cultural rights, as British-descended colonizers did not sign any treaties with Aboriginal groups.
Option #2:
The indigenous population declined for 150 years following European settlement, mainly due to infectious disease. British colonial authorities did not sign any treaties with Aboriginal groups. As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in frontier conflicts while settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land.
Option #3:
As a consequence of colonization, the Indigenous population declined by 90%. This is mainly attributed to the transfer of diseases and, to a lesser extent, land loss and conflicts with the settlers. The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars. These wars, lasting more than 100 years, were characterized by widespread killing on both sides and the displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land. The conflicts have variously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples.
OntologicalTree (talk) 00:24, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
Notes
- Sources differ on whether it was "as much as" or "at least" 90%.
References
- ^ Wolfe, Patrick (December 2006). "Settler colonialism and the elimination of the native". Journal of Genocide Research. 8 (4): 387–409. doi:10.1080/14623520601056240. ISSN 1462-3528.
- Sentance, Nathan (December 7, 2022). "Genocide in Australia". The Australian Museum. Retrieved 2024-11-07.
- Reynolds, Henry (2022). Forgotten War (2nd ed.). Sydney: NewSouth. pp. 103–104, 134, 241–242, 182–192. ISBN 9781742237596.
- Maddison, Sarah (2014), "Missionary Genocide: Moral Illegitimacy and the Churches in Australia", Indigenous Australia and the Unfinished Business of Theology, New York: Palgrave Macmillan US, pp. 31–46, ISBN 978-1-349-49089-9, retrieved 2024-11-07
- ^ Flood, J. (2019). The Original Australians: The story of the Aboriginal People (2nd ed.). Crows Nest NSW: Allen & Unwin. pp. 42, 111, 147–59, 300. ISBN 978-1-76087-142-0.
- Rule of Law Education Centre. "European Settlement and Terra Nullius". Archived from the original on 26 January 2024. Retrieved 26 January 2024.
- Smallpox Through History. Archived from the original on 18 June 2004.
- Rule of Law Education Centre. "European Settlement and Terra Nullius". Archived from the original on 26 January 2024. Retrieved 26 January 2024.
- Reynolds, Henry (2022). Forgotten War (2nd ed.). Sydney: NewSouth. pp. 103–104, 134, 241–242, 182–192. ISBN 9781742237596.
- Morris, Gavin (2019), Edge of sacred - Exploring the life stories of the Nauiyu community. An investigation into trauma and the traditional healing practices of a remote Aboriginal community., Charles Darwin University, p. 10, doi:10.25913/5ebb25ee03fe6,
While the precise number of massacres remains a matter of contention, several researchers assert that by the turn of the 20th Century, the European settlement of Australia resulted in the catastrophic collapse on the Indigenous population with at least a 90% mortality rate (Awofeso, 2011; Harris, 2003).
- https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC6735010/
- https://kids.britannica.com/students/article/Indigenous-and-European-Contact-in-Australia/631556
- ^ Jalata, Asafa (1 July 2013). "The Impacts of English Colonial Terrorism and Genocide on Indigenous/Black Australians". Sage Open. 3 (3). SAGE Publications. doi:10.1177/2158244013499143. ISSN 2158-2440.
(Kiernan, 2007). Bultin (1993) suggested three major reasons for the societal destruction: disease episodes, the withdrawal of resources, and killing. European diseases that exposed the population lacking immunological defenses to destruction included smallpox, venereal disease (e.g., gonorrhea), influenza, measles, pneumonia, and tuberculosis. The English settlers and their descendants expropriated native land and removed the indigenous people by cutting them from their food resources, and engaged in genocidal massacres.....The English settlers used several mechanisms of terrorism and genocide against indigenous Australians, and justified them with a racist discourse. These mechanisms included shooting, burning, disease, rape, ethnocide, or cultural destruction. According to A. Dirk Moses (2004), terrorism and genocide or "indigenocide" involved five elements:
- Attwood, Bain (2017). "Denial in a Settler Society: the Australian Case". History Workshop Journal (84). Oxford University Press: 24–43. ISSN 1363-3554. JSTOR 48554763. Retrieved 2024-11-08.
As I have noted, they simply took the land without any negotiation, let alone any treaties; and they used naked force to secure their possession but were unable or unwilling to acknowledge publicly that this was so, for reasons that were moral, psychological and legal.
- "Why doesn't Australia have an indigenous treaty?". BBC News. May 24, 2017. Retrieved Nov 8, 2024.
The absence of a treaty was cited by Mr Arthur as a crucial and aggravating factor in relations with the first inhabitants of the island, the scene of some of the worst treatment inflicted on Aborigines by British colonists.
- "Colonial Frontier Massacres in Australia, 1788-1930". Centre For 21st Century Humanities - University of Newcastle. 16 March 2022. Retrieved 8 November 2024.
frontier massacres of Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander people spread steadily across southern Australia from 1794 to 1860 with notable peaks in the 1820s in Tasmania and the 1840s in NSW, Victoria, South Australia and Western Australia. From the 1860s when the frontier shifted to Northern Australia, massacre peaks took place in Queensland in the 1860s to 1870s and 1880 to 1930 in the Northern Territory and the Kimberley region in Western Australia. The number of Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander people killed in a frontier massacre increased from 1860, with the average number killed in each incident increasing from 23 to 32.
Survey
- Option 2. Option 1 gets the timeline wrong, the lack of treaties existed from the start. It is unclear what the "early acts of settler colonialism" refers to, but if it refers to the initial settlement, this was not aimed at eradicating the cultures etc. of any particular group. The initial settlement also certainly didn't affect the Torres Strait Islanders, who live very far away from the early settlements. The RfC opening statement is also quite poor, the "Australia's actions" were a mixture of a number of different actors, and both Aboriginal groups and Torres Strait Islanders are part of Australia. CMD (talk) 00:32, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- What exactly is your objection to option 3? Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:16, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- I don't think I raised a specific objection, but the conflation of treaties with settlements should probably be avoided. A lot of the conflict emerged from individual actors, rather than being something organised. The shift from "settlements expanded" to "expansion of settlements" and the addition of treaties makes it sound like government-directed action when it was often wasn't. CMD (talk) 23:22, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- The actual substantive difference between 2 and 1/3 is that the former does not use the g word while the 1/3 do. It would be more honest if you just tell us what your actual objection is. All other objections you list are easily and probably uncontroversially fixable, and given the title of the RFC is
Should the article state that Indigenous Australians were victims of genocide?
it is eminently obvious what it is we are really talking about here. It helps no one to hide your actual beliefs like this. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:26, 9 November 2024 (UTC)- What are you talking about? When I made my comment there was no option 3. I never objected to it, as I said before. CMD (talk) 23:35, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- There is an option 3 now. Why do you prefer option 2? Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:40, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- My initial thoughts are above, but there's not a discussion to be had if someone else is telling me what my non-existent objection is. CMD (talk) 23:43, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Are you saying you don't have an objection to 3, and are thus changing your vote to it? Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:53, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- My initial thoughts are above, but there's not a discussion to be had if someone else is telling me what my non-existent objection is. CMD (talk) 23:43, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- There is an option 3 now. Why do you prefer option 2? Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:40, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- What are you talking about? When I made my comment there was no option 3. I never objected to it, as I said before. CMD (talk) 23:35, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- The actual substantive difference between 2 and 1/3 is that the former does not use the g word while the 1/3 do. It would be more honest if you just tell us what your actual objection is. All other objections you list are easily and probably uncontroversially fixable, and given the title of the RFC is
- I don't think I raised a specific objection, but the conflation of treaties with settlements should probably be avoided. A lot of the conflict emerged from individual actors, rather than being something organised. The shift from "settlements expanded" to "expansion of settlements" and the addition of treaties makes it sound like government-directed action when it was often wasn't. CMD (talk) 23:22, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
"Australia's actions" were a mixture of a number of different actors
is an irrelevant truism. The Holocaust was also a mixture of a number of different actors, ranging from Latvian collaborators to the Ustaše to even Jewish Kapo collaborators. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:24, 9 November 2024 (UTC)- This is a misunderstanding of the frontier wars, which is a historiographical term that encompasses a couple hundred years of different events, not a single program like the Holocaust. CMD (talk) 23:38, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Is there a component of the definition of genocide that says it can only last X years long? Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:54, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
The Holocaust was also a mixture of a number of different actors
— "Most historians agree that Hitler issued an explicit order to kill all Jews across Europe". I don't think the same thing can be said about Australia. Mitch Ames (talk) 01:27, 10 November 2024 (UTC)- Context source Moxy🍁 01:31, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- It doesn't need to be said about Australia. Numerous other events commonly characterized as genocides by scholars don't rise to this level, including the Armenian genocide, Herero and Nama genocide and the California genocide. Taking the first as an example, the main and official goal of the Armenian genocide was "merely" a relocation program; you won't find a single source claiming its perpetrators gave the orders to exterminate all Armenians wherever they may be. There is a term for certain Turkish nationalists who point to this as evidence against it being a genocide: Armenian genocide deniers. In the Herero and Namaqua genocide, the goal was to punish the indigenous people for a rebellion which resulted in the killing of some German colonizers. Our own Misplaced Pages article on the subject stated
No written order by Wilhelm II ordering or authorising genocide has survived
. Still genocide, and again we have a term for people who claim otherwise. Regardless, certain specific groups, if not all indigeneous Australians in general, were absolutely the target of specific orders for extermination, the most notorious (but far from only) examples coming from the Black War. The Holocaust is one of the few events in history where a genocide did rise to this level, but its particular characteristics are not, must not be, the litmus test for a genocide. Brusquedandelion (talk) 07:07, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- This is a misunderstanding of the frontier wars, which is a historiographical term that encompasses a couple hundred years of different events, not a single program like the Holocaust. CMD (talk) 23:38, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- What exactly is your objection to option 3? Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:16, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
Option 1: There is a historical consensus that genocide occurred in the context of Australian history. The Australian Museum lists it as such, the Bringing Them Home Report does as well, and so does the recently published (2023) The Cambridge World History of Genocide. Genocide Perspectives V: A Global Crime, Australian Voices (2017), which was published by the University of Sydney Press, states that (on p.62) that "the academic consensus now acknowledges that genocide is an apt descriptor for the Australian aboriginal experience." The government of Australia also labels its own historic actions as genocidal. There will always be historians who deny X or Y is genocidal. (Outside of the Holocaust.) The question is whether a large majority classify it as such per WP: NPOV and WP:DUE. The bar here is indisputably met. OntologicalTree (talk) 00:50, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Option 2: I would prefer to keep the current wording and see if we can build a consensus towards wording on the genocide issue. This issue was still under discussion on the Talk page. The failure of one editor to get their preferred version accepted within a couple of hours of first trying to include it in the article does not equal a failure to gain consensus. I proposed alternative wording to try to meet this editor half way yet this editor chose not to engage in consensus building among interested editors which is usually the first step before you go to a RfC. This is a complex issue and there are dozens of reliable academic sources which discuss this in a more nuanced and accurate way. I am sure that if we had given this discussion the time it deserves we could have come uo with something much better than the two proposed options. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 01:37, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Option 3 the option I created... As I believe it reflects best the sources and gives a quick juvenile introduction to the topic as you would see at "Indigenous and European Contact in Australia". Britannica Kids. ....with the addition of adult words like genocide.Moxy🍁 02:35, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- I'm leaning toward the intent of Option 1 but not the current wording. I cannot see how, in 2024, we can acknowledge the impact of coloniaism and at the same time continue using dated linguistic constructions like Aboriginals. I don't currently have the spoons to work on the wording, just registering my half-!vote at this stage. ClaudineChionh (she/her · talk · contribs · email · global) 07:10, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Option 3. The option suggested by Moxy is as comprehensive as you can get in a singular paragraph and it links to articles dedicated to its mentioned subjects, while also retaining a neutral tone. Option 2 is fine, but it fails to effectively summarize the full extent of the conflicts and their impact on the Indigenous peoples and settlers.
- I would like to address Option 1 separate from the other options presented. As a fourth generation Australian, I am personally sick of the rhetoric that OntologicalTree is trying to have accepted. Where shall I begin?
- It places undue emphasis on the settlers and British colonization The entire paragraph is thick with the negative connotations so common in degradation of foreign colonization and this era of historical hindsight apologetics. Easily fails WP:NPOV and WP:WEIGHT.
- It misleads readers by implying that the events of the Stolen Generations occurred directly after or during the frontier conflicts, thereby presenting an incorrect timeline cobbled together with WP:SYNTH. For those unfamiliar with Australian history, the Stolen Generations is widely acknowledged to have begun in the early 1900s, whereas the frontier conflicts started in 1788.
- It creates the implication that there was little to zero attempt by the British and their descendants to create treaties with the Indigenous peoples. The British did falsely claim terra nullius by legally declaring the Indigenous peoples as "fauna" so they could invalidate Britain's first requirement for occupation, which was that if there was an existing population, Indigenous or otherwise, land should only be obtained through negotiation. However, the problem is that prior to settlement, the Indigenous peoples of Australia had zero form of officially recognized government or judicial system amongst themselves because of the nomadic and kinship-centric nature of their tribes. Additionally, the Indigenous peoples didn't speak English and operated on a significantly different culture to the rest of the civilised world at the time. No centralized governing body means the British had no legal entity to formalize an agreement with, and the cultural differences and physical distance between the various groups and territories of Indigenous peoples meant that even if the British were to create a blanket legal structure for them, they had no guarantee that the terms of such would be satisfactory or even followed by the various groups.
Yeah, I had a lot to say about Option 1. To put it simply, I vote for Option 3 and I find Option 1 unsuitable. Sirocco745 (talk) 07:30, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Sirocco745 The creation of "treaties", the vast majority of which were never honored, is a means by which genocide is legitimated, that is, it is further proof a genocide did occur. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:18, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- I understand that treaties are meaningless unless all signing parties intend to honour them, I am simply providing some extra historical information to show the difficulties the British would've faced when trying to create treaties.
- The British were wrong with what they did to the Aboriginal peoples of Australia. I certainly don't approve of what happened back then, and I will openly admit that I am not proud of the racism that Australia was built on. I agree that they committed a large number of atrocities and that there is much work to be done to repair the damage done. However, we formally said sorry in 2008 as a nation, and what came out of it? We haven't really given much help to the Aboriginals, and we haven't stopped saying sorry ever since. Option 1 has a clear agenda to push, and I am sick of this same blame-centric rhetoric that I have to listen to every week being pushed at every opportunity.
- Yeah, you could call me out on a WP:COI if you really wanted to, and you may be justified in doing so. I am not stupid enough to let my passion for this topic cloud my judgement though. Instead, I will use my passion to contribute positively and constructively to the discussion and to the article whilst retaining Misplaced Pages's policies at the core of my edits. If anything comes out of this RfC, at least I will have contributed to the discussion with some useful information. Sirocco745 (talk) 23:53, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Even if I cared what possible difficulties the genocidaires would have had with honoring treaties they never intended to honor in the first place, what does that have to do with the price of tea in China? You are regurgitating irrelevant facts (if they even are facts) that have no bearing on the point of this RFC.
The British were wrong with what they did to the Aboriginal peoples of Australia.
- The point of this discussion is not to make you feel better about having the Correct Opinions about history. The point of Misplaced Pages is to call a spade a spade, relying on the reliable sources.
Option 1 has a clear agenda to push, and I am sick of this same blame-centric rhetoric that I have to listen to every week being pushed at every opportunity.
- You are taking out your political grievances on a Misplaced Pages page. Please refer to WP:NOTAFORUM, WP:RIGHTGREATWRONGS, WP:NOTHERE. We have no interest in the current status of Australian politics, or the guilt some Australians may or may not be feeling. We are here to write an encyclopedia based on what the reliable sources say. If the reliable sources blame Australia for anything, anything at all, we report it. If the reliable sources decided Australia was a nation of devil-worshipping child sacrificers, we would have no choice but to report this, no matter how much it hurt your national ego. Please leave your grievances out of this discussion. You may feel this is a shortcoming of Misplaced Pages, and in another time and place I may even agree with you, but I long ago learned this just isn't the website for that. Brusquedandelion (talk) 00:04, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Nah, I actually agree with you there. "If the reliable sources decided Australia was a nation of devil-worshipping child sacrificers", then I wouldn't be against adding that to Misplaced Pages at all, because that's what's been found by reliable sources to be the situation. I also agree that the British settlers committed genocide against the Indigenous peoples here. I voted for Option 3 because it provided a sufficiently concise but clear summary of the various reasons for Indigenous population decline whilst also not shying away from the active role of the British in it. Option 2 was more two-dimensional, and Option 1 presented a false timeline by implying the events characteristic of the Stolen Generations were instead perpetrated during the frontier conflicts that occurred almost a century before. Sirocco745 (talk) 00:42, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- I am ok with Option 3, though I prefer 1, and to be clear, Option 1 says nothing about the Stolen Generations. The closest thing to is the sentence
Survivors of the exterminations were frequently forced to convert to Christianity, confined to Aboriginal reserves, and were not provided with any legally recognized form of cultural rights
. The word "survivors" all but implies that this sequence of events happened after the Frontier Wars. Additionally the Frontier Wars ended in 1934, while the Stolen Generations are generally dated as beginning in 1905. That's almost two and a half generations of overlap irrespective of the wording. Brusquedandelion (talk) 06:53, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- I am ok with Option 3, though I prefer 1, and to be clear, Option 1 says nothing about the Stolen Generations. The closest thing to is the sentence
- Nah, I actually agree with you there. "If the reliable sources decided Australia was a nation of devil-worshipping child sacrificers", then I wouldn't be against adding that to Misplaced Pages at all, because that's what's been found by reliable sources to be the situation. I also agree that the British settlers committed genocide against the Indigenous peoples here. I voted for Option 3 because it provided a sufficiently concise but clear summary of the various reasons for Indigenous population decline whilst also not shying away from the active role of the British in it. Option 2 was more two-dimensional, and Option 1 presented a false timeline by implying the events characteristic of the Stolen Generations were instead perpetrated during the frontier conflicts that occurred almost a century before. Sirocco745 (talk) 00:42, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Also, your use of a phrase like "negative connotations so common in degradation of foreign colonization and this era of historical hindsight apologetics" strongly suggested you need to (re)visit WP:FALSEBALANCE. We write Misplaced Pages in the 21st century, and the hindsight argument completely false flat anyways when you remember that, as I can entirely assure you, peoples have always resisted their own annihilation regardless of what year it might be. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:44, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Could you please explain what possible relevance the fact that the indigeneous Australians didn't have a form of government
officially recognized
by the very people who attempted to annihilate them, or the fact that they did not speak the language of said genocidaires before ever having met them? What exactly is the "civilized world"? Is it civilized to commit genocide across multiple continents? Please try to answer these questions while doing your absolute best not to sound like you are channeling the spirit of Cecil Rhodes. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:53, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Blend of options 2 and 3. For brevity's sake I prefer 2. While 3 is more comprehensive, it's quite repetitive. - PastelLilac (talk) 07:44, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- The substantive difference between 2 and 3 is not brevity but the use of the g-word, which is the central point of this RFC, as expressed in its title. bould your proposed blend include this word in 2? Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:55, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Option 2 is broadly correct, providing a historical consensus-based summation and linking to the frontier wars article where the subject can be broached with appropriate sensitivity. Will Thorpe (talk) 09:49, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, there is a general historical consensus that white Australian settler colonialism constitutes
terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples
. Not every scholars agrees on every one of these terms, perhaps, but that is the point of wording the sentence this way. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:21, 9 November 2024 (UTC)- @Brusquedandelion To state that colonialism constituted terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide is broad and imprecise, and not supported by consensus. There may be, and I presume is, broad consensus that actions during colonisation constituted one or several of those, that there were genocidal acts committed for instance. Much of the process of colonisation may aptly be described as cultural genocide, and the Black War is particularly singled out by many historians who argue it was genocidal. The sentence would be improved if it stated: The conflicts have contentiously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples. @Aemilius Adolphin's proposed statement ...which many historians argue included acts of genocide by settlers is also fair. Will Thorpe (talk) 04:15, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Fortunately, not one of the proposed options states that
colonialism constituted terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide
. Please remember that on Misplaced Pages, WP:COMPETENCY IN reading comprehension is strictly required. As I stated in my own vote, however, I am ok with 3, even though I prefer 1, and do not think your criticism here susntantively applies to 1, properly read. I do disagree thatMuch of the process of colonisation may aptly be described as cultural genocide
. No, much of the process of colonization constituted at a minimum ethnic cleansing, while another large portion constituted actual genocide, not "cultural" genocide. Brusquedandelion (talk) 06:28, 10 November 2024 (UTC) - Also, you have conveniently excused the first portion of the quote, which, in full, is {tq|The conflicts have variously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples}}. This is not only about as clear as can be, it directly speaks to the actual consensus. What do you think the word "variously" means here, and who do you think the unstated holders of these views are?
The conflicts have contentiously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples.
- Contention on Misplaced Pages is not contention among scholars. The wording you are opposing has been amply cited, both in the original RFC and elsewhere on this thread. You, on the other hand, have provided no references to speak of. Brusquedandelion (talk) 07:16, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Fortunately, not one of the proposed options states that
- @Brusquedandelion To state that colonialism constituted terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide is broad and imprecise, and not supported by consensus. There may be, and I presume is, broad consensus that actions during colonisation constituted one or several of those, that there were genocidal acts committed for instance. Much of the process of colonisation may aptly be described as cultural genocide, and the Black War is particularly singled out by many historians who argue it was genocidal. The sentence would be improved if it stated: The conflicts have contentiously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples. @Aemilius Adolphin's proposed statement ...which many historians argue included acts of genocide by settlers is also fair. Will Thorpe (talk) 04:15, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, there is a general historical consensus that white Australian settler colonialism constitutes
- Option 1 followed by 3. Most of the people voting against these options above have summarily disregarded the actual purpose of this RFC, which is, as the title gratiously informs us, is to determine if
the article state that Indigenous Australians were victims of genocide
. Answers that fail to actually answer this question directly and make points as to the merits/demerits of this point should be summarily disregarded by the RFC closer as effectively irrelevant. Quibbles about the wording, succinctness, etc. are entirely not germane to the point at hand, and the best possible faith interpretation of multiple people not even bothering to mention the g-word in their votes is that they are simply unable to grasp basic reading comprehension; regrettably, at Misplaced Pages, WP:COMPETENCE is required. The more likely answer, unfortunately, is that they are intentionally clutching pearls about word choice to avoid calling a spade a spade. Remember: any quibbles about word choice, succinctness, etc. can be easily handled outside of this RFC. Alternatively, such pearl-clutchers could have happily suggested alternate wordings that do use the g-word within their votes. ClaudineChionh is the only user who apparently had the sense to do this, while nevertheless voting for 1. Were the only quibbles about succinctness etc., for example, I would be shocked if there had even been an RFC proposed to begin with. Future commentators, please do not bother replying if you do not wish to address the matter at its root. Having said all this: the historians are clear on this: the acts of Australian settler colonists, in various times and places, frequently amounted to genocide or, in other times and places, terrorism, ethnocide, and ethnic cleansing. Brusquedandelion (talk) 23:40, 9 November 2024 (UTC) - Option 2 - The two other options fail to
mentionindicate genocidal intent, which is the required mens rea of genocide. The common meaning of genocide applies to examples like the Holocaust, Armenian genocide, and Rwandan genocide. The lead is supposed to summarize the body of the article; therefore, if option 2 or 3 are chosen for the body, it would be undue weight to include mention of genocide in the lead. Choosing option 1, 2, or 3 comes down to whether a broad or narrow definition of genocide is going to be used. At present, option 1 and 3 only provide one source to support the position that the British settlement policy in regards to Australia was an act of genocide. One source is not enough to decide if the word genocide should be used in this article. A survey of reliable sources needs to be provided to determine what the academic/reliable source consensus is on whether the settlement of Australia was an act of genocide. --Guest2625 (talk) 06:47, 10 November 2024 (UTC); edited 10:56, 10 November 2024 (UTC)- There is no prerogative for these specific sentences to mention the exact words "genocidal intent"; by calling them genocides, it implies genocidal intent, since there aren't "accidental" genocides. If you haven't actually done the survey you suggest others do, why do you feel so confident voting on a matter you are have professes your own ignorance own? Remember, WP:COMPETENCE IS REQUIRED. Also, could you tell me what is the required number of sources you require to change your vote? Because I am happy to provide them. Brusquedandelion (talk) 07:19, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Brusquedandelion please check your talk page. I have left a message there. I know mobile Misplaced Pages has buggy notifications (WP:TCHY), so I'm leaving this here in the hopes that you see this. Sirocco745 (talk) 07:25, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- This is the Australia country article. It provides a broad overview of different aspects of the country/continent with one section providing an overview of the history of Australia. This discussion of whether to include the word genocide in the history section should first take place in the History of Australia article. At the moment, there is no mention in that article about genocide. All material that is added to an article needs to be supported by a reliable source and included in neutral point of view fashion which does not give undue weight to any material. The reference that has been provided does not support the inclusion of the word genocide in this article. The reference is not even a systematic review of the topic. Misplaced Pages is not a place to right great wrongs, rather articles summarize the topic as presented in reliable sources. This article which is a feature article has done an excellent job of presenting a broad overview of the topic. -- Guest2625 (talk) 10:23, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- There is no prerogative for these specific sentences to mention the exact words "genocidal intent"; by calling them genocides, it implies genocidal intent, since there aren't "accidental" genocides. If you haven't actually done the survey you suggest others do, why do you feel so confident voting on a matter you are have professes your own ignorance own? Remember, WP:COMPETENCE IS REQUIRED. Also, could you tell me what is the required number of sources you require to change your vote? Because I am happy to provide them. Brusquedandelion (talk) 07:19, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
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- Option 3 per the above discussion, options 1 and 2 fail to represent the academic debate and therefore fail WP:NPOV. Despite this,
These wars, lasting more than 100 years, were characterized by widespread killing on both sides and the displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land
needs to be changed, widespread killing on both sides implies equal casualties which there were not, 2,500 vs. upwards of 30,000.
- Option 3 per the above discussion, options 1 and 2 fail to represent the academic debate and therefore fail WP:NPOV. Despite this,
- Kowal2701 (talk) 14:41, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- It does not necessarily suggest the casualty count was equal. There was a significant toll wrought on both settlers and Indigenous Australians, though something noting the relative numbers that died of each would be acceptable. Will Thorpe (talk) 12:16, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe:
characterised by widespread killing of Indigenous peoples and to a lesser extent settlers, and the displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land.
Kowal2701 (talk) 14:11, 14 November 2024 (UTC)- I think we need to give some indication of the extent of killings on both sides. @Kowal2701 Out of interest, do you havee specific concerns with the compromise wording I proposed?, viz: "As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in frontier conflicts which many historians argue included acts of genocide by settlers. Settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:27, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- That’s good Kowal2701 (talk) 07:01, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
- User:Aemilius Adolphin Not sure where to put this as the RfC has become convoluted, but I don't think the addendum would need to be attributed to historians as an argument. I do wonder as well if there is a way to integrate it into the sentence rather than appending it, "...frontier conflicts led to tens of thousands of Indigenous people being killed, some in acts of genocide, as well as thousands of settlers..." or similar. CMD (talk) 15:11, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
- That’s good Kowal2701 (talk) 07:01, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think we need to give some indication of the extent of killings on both sides. @Kowal2701 Out of interest, do you havee specific concerns with the compromise wording I proposed?, viz: "As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in frontier conflicts which many historians argue included acts of genocide by settlers. Settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land." Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:27, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- It does not necessarily suggest the casualty count was equal. There was a significant toll wrought on both settlers and Indigenous Australians, though something noting the relative numbers that died of each would be acceptable. Will Thorpe (talk) 12:16, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- Option 2 sticks to the salient details without getting super long like the other two. No need to force the g-word in. Avgeekamfot (talk) 06:50, 21 November 2024 (UTC)
- Option 3. (Summoned by bot)
The option suggested by Moxy is as comprehensive as you can get in a singular paragraph and it links to articles dedicated to its mentioned subjects, while also retaining a neutral tone
. It is the most complete account, is readable and gives proper weight to the competing (and complementary) narratives regarding genocide/intentionality.Pincrete (talk) 08:53, 24 November 2024 (UTC) - Option 3. It is not neutral to attempt to report as fact that a genocide occurred on this article when our own article (linked in option 1) makes clear that it is heavily debated and was not what most people think of when they think of genocide. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez | me | talk to me! 06:26, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Option 3 gives equal weight to both sides of the argument. However, if I'm understanding this correctly, we shouldn't be discussing this RfC if another one on the same topic is already ongoing. Patience is necessary for WP. Penguino35 (talk) 14:25, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Penguino35 another RFC on same topic were? Moxy🍁 16:06, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Option 3 is getting some support so I would like to elaborate my concerns about this option. The statement "As a consequence of colonization, the Indigenous population declined by 90%" is too precise and is not based on the consensus of Australian historians and demographers. The cited sources are not the best available and seem to have been selected simply to support the 90% figure. The official estimates of Indigenous population published by the independent Australian statistician give a population decline to 1901 of about 70% to 90%. We should not be endorsing false precision. Henry Reynolds, who is one of the most distinguished experts on the frontier wars states: "Any assessment of the extent of violence must depend on circumstantial evidence. There is the further problem that we rarely know the size of the Indigenous populations at the time of the arrival of the first settlers." :"This is mainly attributed to the transfer of diseases and, to a lesser extent, land loss and conflicts with the settlers." The quotation from the cited source doesn't support the contention that disease was the major reason for depopulation. There are many better sources that do so such as Flood (2019)." Also "introduced diseases" is better than "the transfer of diseases".
- "The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars." Selective use of sources. Some, such as Flood (2019, pp.22-23, 111-113) argue that treaties would have made little difference. There still would have been frontier violence and dispossession just like there was in north America where there were treaties.
- "These wars, lasting more than 100 years, were characterized by widespread killing on both sides and the displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land."
- The cited source, or at least the quoted extract, does not support this statement. The source is about massacres which is one aspect of the frontier conflict and it states that the victims of massacres were overwhelmingly Indigenous. I can't see anything about "widespread killing on both sides" or "displacement of Indigenous peoples as settlers sought to assert control over the land." The statement about frontier violence in Option 2 is more accurate and reflects the source cited.
- "The conflicts have variously been described as terrorism, ethnocide, and genocide, against the Indigenous peoples."
- The citation (Jalata, 2013) isn't from a high quality source and isn't a reliable summary of recent scholarship on the issue. As far as I can see, it is only this author who is calling the conflict terrorism. Scholars have used a far wider range of terms to characterise the conflict but the most common would be "a frontier war", "a guerrilla war", "genocide", "genocidal massacres", "ethnocide" and "cultural genocide". Henry Renolds states, "Frontier conflicts have been variously described as a continuing social disturbance, a crime wave and a sporadic form of warfare." (Op Cit. p 47). The Jalata source is very dubious. The title and quoted extract talks about the "English colonisation" of Australia which is a schoolboy error. Australia was colonised by Great Britain (later the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland). The colonists were overwhelmingly English, Scottish, Welsh and Irish. This isn't simply clumsy wording, it indicates that the author doesn't know the basics of British and Australian history and it is the sort of error which would have been picked up with proper peer review. The article is full of similar mistakes and basic misunderstandings. I also note that SAGE OPEN has been subject to numerous fake article from essay farms. I can't see any evidence that this article is by an expert in the field and was properly peer reviewed.
- In summary, this is a high profile featured artice. We should be using the most reliable sources available from renowned scholars and ensuring that any statements are firmly based on these sources, reflect the consensus of experts in the field, and are not open to challenge. WP:SOURCE The wording and citations in Option 3 need major revisions to meet this standard. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:43, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
- Option 2/status quo all the other options have issues such as an incorrect timeline and citing Kids Britannica (seriously). I have no issue with including that what occurred to the Aboriginal population has been characterised by some scholars/is debated by scholars as a genocide, but I don't see strong evidence terms like terrorism are consistently applied. Traumnovelle (talk) 00:43, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- Option 2/status quo Good night are we pushing a POV or what here? SAGE OPEN as a source is laughable as would be any advocacy publication. There is not widespread consensus that this was genocide or terrorism. Buffs (talk) 06:19, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- Option 2/status quo There are problems with all three but that's par for the course with this article. Genocide requires official policy and while a few colonial officers certainly had that in mind, others were either strongly against elimination of the original residents or indifferent. Native peoples were almost invariably the losers in the process of European colonialism simply by not possessing societal structures or technology geared to compete. Disease, dispossession, and death by a thousand cuts. We could lay much of the evil at the feet of the various religious groups who were not out to eliminate Indigenous Australians, merely to convert them. Can we really call such well-meaning but ill-advised efforts as "genocide" in the same breath as the Holocaust? --Pete (talk) 09:41, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
- Textbook example of reasoning that is decades old Dirk Moses, A. (2003). "Genocide and Holocaust Consciousness in Australia". History Compass. 1 (1). doi:10.1111/1478-0542.028. ISSN 1478-0542. Moxy🍁 04:49, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Pish! Reason is unaffected by time. It just is. Tell Plato or Einstein that the ages have left them floundering. Don't present your fashionable opinion, give us the facts! --Pete (talk) 19:31, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ben Kiernan vs random Wiki editor Kiernan, Ben (2002). "Cover-up and Denial of Genocide: Australia, the USA, East Timor, and the Aborigines". Critical Asian Studies - Genocide Studies- Yale University. 34 (2): 163–192. doi:10.1080/14672710220146197. ISSN 1467-2715. Moxy🍁 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't think you appreciate the point. Do you really think that logic and reason can somehow be trumped by opinion? Plato made the point that no matter how strongly held, an opinion has no substance and there is no point discussing it as if it had some intellectual weight. --Pete (talk) 23:01, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ben Kiernan vs random Wiki editor Kiernan, Ben (2002). "Cover-up and Denial of Genocide: Australia, the USA, East Timor, and the Aborigines". Critical Asian Studies - Genocide Studies- Yale University. 34 (2): 163–192. doi:10.1080/14672710220146197. ISSN 1467-2715. Moxy🍁 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- Pish! Reason is unaffected by time. It just is. Tell Plato or Einstein that the ages have left them floundering. Don't present your fashionable opinion, give us the facts! --Pete (talk) 19:31, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- Textbook example of reasoning that is decades old Dirk Moses, A. (2003). "Genocide and Holocaust Consciousness in Australia". History Compass. 1 (1). doi:10.1111/1478-0542.028. ISSN 1478-0542. Moxy🍁 04:49, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Option 1 followed by Option 3 These represent the sources best. The genocide should be mentioned. Symphony Regalia (talk) 03:02, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
Discussion
I have added a 3rd choice as the first 2 do not really reflect the souces in my view. Ping thoses already here @OntologicalTree:, @Chipmunkdavis:, @Aemilius Adolphin: — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moxy (talk • contribs) 01:56, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- I am attracted to @PastelLilac's idea of a blend of Option 2 and 3. For example we might change Option 2 to: "The indigenous population declined for 150 years following European settlement, mainly due to infectious disease. British colonial authorities did not sign any treaties with Aboriginal groups. As settlement expanded, tens of thousands of Indigenous people and thousands of settlers were killed in frontier conflicts which many historians argue included acts of genocide by settlers. Settlers dispossessed surviving Indigenous peoples of most of their land."
- One of the difficulties I have is that the lack of treaties should be mentioned because it was unusual in British colonisation, but we should avoid the implication that treaties were a realistic option and would have avoided conflict and acts of genocide. One only need look at what happened in North America and New Zealand (where there were treaties) to see that the idea is very naive. More importantly, I am not aware of any expert in the field who supports such a simplistic notion. Another problem I have is that this is a very high level article on Australia and whatever we say needs to be concise and not worded in a way which is simplistic and misleading. Details and nuances can be followed up in linked articles. A third issue is that I don't think we need to squeeze everything into one paragraph and one section of the article. For example, the section on Colonial Expansion states: "From 1886, Australian colonial governments began removing many Aboriginal children from their families and communities, justified on the grounds of child protection and forced assimilation policies. We could add: "The Human Rights Commission later described this as genocidal." with an appropriate citation. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 10:01, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- The lack of treaties is quite unusual! If you look up at my vote for the options, I provide some extra context as to the difficulties. There is something else I didn't mention though, and that is the motives of Captain Cook himself. Australia had already been probed by the French and Dutch, and the British desperately needed a new place to dump their prisoners after America said "no, screw you" to them. Australia was too good to pass up and time was of the essence for claiming it as a prospective settlement. As such, the leading theory is that Captain Cook intentionally classified the Indigenous peoples as "fauna" so they could subvert standard British protocol. Here's a source! Sirocco745 (talk) 10:17, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- The lack of treaties is unusual, but I agree with Aemilius Adolphin that this shouldn't be presented as a core reason for death and displacement. Even without treaties, there were attempts by officials at various to reduce conflict; they were often ignored. Option 3 is much better than Option 1, but it is not clear what the core issue that needs to be solved is. CMD (talk) 10:29, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, the lack of treaties isn't really relevant to this paragraph, I just wanted to add my own knowledge to the conversation for those who didn't know. As for the core issue in question, I honestly don't know what was "wrong" with the original paragraph, but this is a good opportunity regardless to revise it. Sirocco745 (talk) 10:37, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- The core issue is that a couple of editors wanted the article to explicitly state that "Aboriginal Australians were the victims of Genocide" but didn't have the patience to seek consensus on appropriate wording. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 10:57, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- A ittle basic research should be done by all...Nettelbeck, Amanda; Ryan, Lyndall (March 31, 2020). "Frontier Violence in the Nineteenth-Century British Empire". The Cambridge World History of Violence. Cambridge University Press. p. 227–245. doi:10.1017/9781316585023.012.
the failure of treaties to secure lasting peace led ultimately to military campaigns that were openly acknowledged as warfare.
Moxy🍁 13:47, 8 November 2024 (UTC) - If we did not have the patience for this, we would not be participating in this RFC. If others had substantive arguments as to why the historians and scholars disagree on this point, they already would have preferred them in lieu of handwringing about word choice and long-winded apologia imperial applogia. Brusquedandelion (talk) 00:15, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- A ittle basic research should be done by all...Nettelbeck, Amanda; Ryan, Lyndall (March 31, 2020). "Frontier Violence in the Nineteenth-Century British Empire". The Cambridge World History of Violence. Cambridge University Press. p. 227–245. doi:10.1017/9781316585023.012.
- The lack of treaties is unusual, but I agree with Aemilius Adolphin that this shouldn't be presented as a core reason for death and displacement. Even without treaties, there were attempts by officials at various to reduce conflict; they were often ignored. Option 3 is much better than Option 1, but it is not clear what the core issue that needs to be solved is. CMD (talk) 10:29, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, but your claim that
The indigenous population declined for 150 years following European settlement, mainly due to infectious disease
is not in line with the latest historical sources. The virgin soil hypothesis has largely been replaced by the view that while disease played a role in the initial decinations, it was brutal settler policies that prevented the population from rebounding as they otherwise would have. The Black Plague wiped out as much or more of Europe as any of the virgin soil epidemics of Australia and the Americas, and yet the French, Italians, and English have gone nowhere. If you are going to attempt to cite historical consensus, at least be up to date on the matter. Brusquedandelion (talk) 00:08, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- The lack of treaties is quite unusual! If you look up at my vote for the options, I provide some extra context as to the difficulties. There is something else I didn't mention though, and that is the motives of Captain Cook himself. Australia had already been probed by the French and Dutch, and the British desperately needed a new place to dump their prisoners after America said "no, screw you" to them. Australia was too good to pass up and time was of the essence for claiming it as a prospective settlement. As such, the leading theory is that Captain Cook intentionally classified the Indigenous peoples as "fauna" so they could subvert standard British protocol. Here's a source! Sirocco745 (talk) 10:17, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Brusquedandelion: pls review Misplaced Pages:Don't bludgeon the process Moxy🍁 00:08, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- I have generally not reiterated my own viewpoints in different places, only made different viewpoints in multiple places. The fact that multiple people tried to bludgeon this discourse by handwringing about word count rather than getting to the crux of the issue merits being pointed out. Brusquedandelion (talk) 00:12, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with Moxy. Please stop bludgeoning the process. Please stop insinuating that other editors have sinister hidden motives for voting the way they do. Assume good faith. Please stop suggesting that other editors shouldn't participate unless they vote the way you want them to. We don't want a toxic environment that's inimical to consensus building. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:12, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- I have assumed good faith in stating that my first inclination is to believe the voters handwringing about word choice etc. are simply not capable of reading comprehension, or perhaps how RFCs work. I floated a second possibility, that they simply do not want to use the g-word, but this isn't anything "nefarious". Theirs would certainly be an opinion. Not one backed by reliable sources, but it is an opinion. If you can suggest a better faith interpretation of someone flippantly ignoring the actual crux of the matter at hand to instead clutch pearls about word count, something that is eminently fixable, than a simple lack of understanding as to what this RFC is actually about, I am all ears and will happily strike my prior comments on this issue from the record. And may I remind you, one of the handwringers have straight up admitted to having a conflict of interest on this subject, due to nationalist sentiments and grievance politics. Odd that it is me you are dressing down, and not them, when their comments are against the spirit of letter of at least half a dozen Misplaced Pages policies.
- Consensus building requires that people actually talk about the topic at hand. I cannot think of anything more inmicable to this process than people bringing up essentially unrelated issues, thereby muddying the waters, even if it is, as I will assume out of good faith, entirely unintentionally. And I would like to remind everyone that an RFC is also not just a vote for 3 options, but that it has a broad mandate to effect a fairly flexible solution, meaning it is entirely possible for the closer to determine the consensus is to keep the essential aspects of 1 or 3 in a differently worded paragraph.
- Frankly, if you don't see how it is a problem to the integrity of the consensus that very few of the comments even acknowledge the g-word in an RFC literally titled
Should the article state that Indigenous Australians were victims of genocide?
—well, what are we even doing here? Brusquedandelion (talk) 06:42, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with Moxy. Please stop bludgeoning the process. Please stop insinuating that other editors have sinister hidden motives for voting the way they do. Assume good faith. Please stop suggesting that other editors shouldn't participate unless they vote the way you want them to. We don't want a toxic environment that's inimical to consensus building. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:12, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- I have generally not reiterated my own viewpoints in different places, only made different viewpoints in multiple places. The fact that multiple people tried to bludgeon this discourse by handwringing about word count rather than getting to the crux of the issue merits being pointed out. Brusquedandelion (talk) 00:12, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Brusquedandelion: pls review Misplaced Pages:Don't bludgeon the process Moxy🍁 00:08, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
Option 3 currently says "... the Indigenous population declined of up to 90%.", which is grammatically incorrect. I was going to see if I could fix it (without changing the intended meaning), but when I checked the reference Hiding the bodies I could not find the quote "... with at least a 90% mortality rate". I did find that quote in Edge of sacred - Exploring the life stories of the Nauiyu community. @Moxy: as the editor who added the option, reference and quote, could you please fix this discrepancy. Mitch Ames (talk) 12:23, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Feel free to fix it.... are you looking for another source? juvenile publication for simplicity or PMC source Moxy🍁 20:52, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
Feel free to fix it....
— Done. Mitch Ames (talk) 02:56, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
References
- Australin Bureau of Statistics (2002). "1301.0 - Year Book Australia, 2002". Australin Bureau of Statistics. Retrieved 27 November 2024.
- Reynolds, Henry (2022). Forgotten War (2nd ed.). Sydney: NewSouth. p. 28. ISBN 9781742237596.
- Flood, J. (2019). The Original Australians: The story of the Aboriginal People (2nd ed.). Crows Nest NSW: Allen & Unwin. p. 34. ISBN 978-1-76087-142-0.
"The major cause was the deadly impact of new diseases on people with no prior immunity.
- Harris, John (2011). "Hiding the bodies: the myth of the humane colonisation of Aboriginal Australia". Aboriginal History Journal. 27. ANU Press: 22. doi:10.22459/ah.27.2011.07. ISSN 0314-8769.
While the precise number of massacres remains a matter of contention, several researchers assert that by the turn of the 20 th Century, the European settlement of Australia resulted in the catastrophic collapse on the Indigenous population with at least a 90% mortality rate (Awofeso, 2011;Harris, 2003)
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Hello all
Someone seems to have added a new option to this RfC after people have already voted on the original two options. @OntologicalTree Would you mind withdrawing this RfC in order to give other interested editors sufficient time to propose other options? I also suggest that if you just let others have their say on the Talk page we should be able to come up with consensus wording which avoids the need for a RfC altogether. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 01:56, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Zero need for withdrawal normal evolution process of an RFC sometimes. Editors that were already here have been informed of a new selection as discussed above early in the process. Moxy🍁 02:14, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Normally a RfC is only initiated when there is a failure to reach a consensus after a genuine attempt. Do you really think interested editors were given sufficient time to discuss and reach a compromise on any of these proposed options? Or to come up with their own? Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:21, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Most RFC happen because multiple good faith attempts with reliable sources have been made to change the text to no avail and people feel the reasoning is not substantiated. It's simply a way of getting those uninvolved involved. This is not a scary process.... nor should it be blocked. In giant RFCs there may be multiple suggestions of change. This is a fluid process not static. I would suggest we see the sources for each paragraph though. Moxy🍁 02:30, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- I don't find it scary, I find it shambolic, unnecessary and designed to reduce discussion to three badly drafted options. And your suggestion that I am trying to shut down the argument is plain wrong. I am trying to give editors time to come up with alternative, better worded, options which better reflect recent scholarship. By the way is the Bain Attwood article you cite available through wikilibrary? I can't access it so can't verify that you are accurately summarising it. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:36, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- You can access it through your Alma mater here Moxy🍁 02:42, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I have read it. You use this article as a source for your statement, "The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars." But Attwood doesn't say this. The closest I can find is: "As I have noted, they simply took the land without any negotiation, let alone any treaties; and they used naked force to secure their possession but were unable or unwilling to acknowledge publicly that this was so, for reasons that were moral, psychological and legal." He doesn't say the lack of treaties caused the violent conflict or the frontier wars. It was the spread of settlement and aboriginal resistance to this that caused the conflict. Indeed treaties are usually signed after a period of violent conflict. The article isn't about this at all, it is about the ways the British tried to justify colonisation and present-day denialism of dispossession. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 03:20, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Always think it's best to summarize then plagiarize. To me it's pretty clear they did not negotiate they just took the land by force.... thus the Indigenous population fought back and there were wars .... related to the source in way of Terra nullius#Australia. They're unwilling to talk to them let alone negotiate treaties just forcibly removed. I can provide multitude of sources ... as others have above..and assuming you can as well. But this one explains very well in the context of justification. That said the genocide article needs a section about denialism. Moxy🍁 03:25, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I have read it. You use this article as a source for your statement, "The expansion of settlements without any negotiated treaties led to violent conflicts known as the Australian frontier wars." But Attwood doesn't say this. The closest I can find is: "As I have noted, they simply took the land without any negotiation, let alone any treaties; and they used naked force to secure their possession but were unable or unwilling to acknowledge publicly that this was so, for reasons that were moral, psychological and legal." He doesn't say the lack of treaties caused the violent conflict or the frontier wars. It was the spread of settlement and aboriginal resistance to this that caused the conflict. Indeed treaties are usually signed after a period of violent conflict. The article isn't about this at all, it is about the ways the British tried to justify colonisation and present-day denialism of dispossession. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 03:20, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- You can access it through your Alma mater here Moxy🍁 02:42, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- I don't find it scary, I find it shambolic, unnecessary and designed to reduce discussion to three badly drafted options. And your suggestion that I am trying to shut down the argument is plain wrong. I am trying to give editors time to come up with alternative, better worded, options which better reflect recent scholarship. By the way is the Bain Attwood article you cite available through wikilibrary? I can't access it so can't verify that you are accurately summarising it. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:36, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Most RFC happen because multiple good faith attempts with reliable sources have been made to change the text to no avail and people feel the reasoning is not substantiated. It's simply a way of getting those uninvolved involved. This is not a scary process.... nor should it be blocked. In giant RFCs there may be multiple suggestions of change. This is a fluid process not static. I would suggest we see the sources for each paragraph though. Moxy🍁 02:30, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Normally a RfC is only initiated when there is a failure to reach a consensus after a genuine attempt. Do you really think interested editors were given sufficient time to discuss and reach a compromise on any of these proposed options? Or to come up with their own? Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:21, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
I think none of the three is ideal, with reasons given by others. I am not sure any genocide should be attributed to the lack of a treaty/agreement. Any such agreement might have helped but it could just as easily have been ignored. I cannot see a direct link between 'agreement' and 'no genocide'. Better phrasing in the article might help though. Roger 8 Roger (talk) 06:47, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- "Why doesn't Australia have an indigenous treaty?". BBC News. May 24, 2017. Retrieved Nov 8, 2024.
The absence of a treaty was cited by Mr Arthur as a crucial and aggravating factor in relations with the first inhabitants of the island, the scene of some of the worst treatment inflicted on Aborigines by British colonists.
Moxy🍁 08:14, 8 November 2024 (UTC) - @OntologicalTree: Please provide a brief and neutral statement for the RfC. The statement as it stands (from the
{{rfc}}
tag to the next timestamp) is far too long (at over 9,600 bytes) for Legobot (talk · contribs) to handle, and so it is not being shown correctly at Misplaced Pages:Requests for comment/History and geography. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 22:14, 9 November 2024 (UTC)- Fixed Moxy🍁 22:20, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- @MoxyI don't think you fixed it, you made it worse. It believe what @OntologicalTree (not you) has to do is concisely and accurately state the nature of the request and then put the three three options after the time stamp. I would suggest wording such as "There is a dispute over whether the article should state that British colonisation of Australia involved genocide against Aboriginal Australians and Torres Strait Islanders. Which of the three proposed options should be included in the article?" @Redrose64 Am I correct? I didn't initiate the RfC and I'm not sure about the technical requirements. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:06, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- My assumption is length was the concern... as that was elaborated on... so simply made a header so it wouldn't be so big. But what you proposed in wording sounds reasonable to me....pretty much the same meaning..... Do we mention genocide or not? Do we follow sources and elaborate on multiple points or not? I would have no complaints if you changed it..... as there's no change in meaning. Moxy🍁 23:12, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- If you follow the link to the RfC notification you will find that it is blank. I'm not sure but I think the initiator of the RfC has to fix it. The whole thing is a shambles and the RfC should not have been submitted before other editors had a chance to propose better worded options. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:20, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Legobot will amended the RfC listings the next time that it runs.... It was simply too big. With the new subheader only the first paragraph will appear now. Moxy🍁 00:11, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Moxy: this edit didn't fix anything, in fact it made it worse by (a) increasing the size of the RfC statement and (b) introducing complex formatting. The only thing that Legobot recognises as the end of an RfC statement is a valid timestamp, as stated at WP:RFCBRIEF (in several slightly different ways).
- @Aemilius Adolphin: It doesn't matter who amends the RfC statement, Legobot runs once an hour and if any RfC statement has been edited (by anybody) since the last run, the new version is copied to the RfC listings (per WP:RFC#Modifying an RfC). Unless it is too long or too complex, in which case you either get a partial copy, or nothing at all apart from a link, as with this one. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 00:41, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Okay so move his signature to the end of the paragraph? Done Moxy🍁 00:47, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- We'll find out at the next Legobot run, in about five minutes time. Put Misplaced Pages:Requests for comment/History and geography on your watchlist now, see if this RfC gets listed there. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 00:55, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Perfect it seems to be working thank you for your help. Moxy🍁 01:07, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for fixing this up Moxy, and for all your work to get this RfC into a better shape. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:02, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- No problem.... this is an interesting RFC..... Seeing everyone's different point of view or approach to this is interesting. Moxy🍁 02:09, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for fixing this up Moxy, and for all your work to get this RfC into a better shape. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 02:02, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Perfect it seems to be working thank you for your help. Moxy🍁 01:07, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- We'll find out at the next Legobot run, in about five minutes time. Put Misplaced Pages:Requests for comment/History and geography on your watchlist now, see if this RfC gets listed there. --Redrose64 🌹 (talk) 00:55, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Okay so move his signature to the end of the paragraph? Done Moxy🍁 00:47, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- Legobot will amended the RfC listings the next time that it runs.... It was simply too big. With the new subheader only the first paragraph will appear now. Moxy🍁 00:11, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
- If you follow the link to the RfC notification you will find that it is blank. I'm not sure but I think the initiator of the RfC has to fix it. The whole thing is a shambles and the RfC should not have been submitted before other editors had a chance to propose better worded options. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:20, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- My assumption is length was the concern... as that was elaborated on... so simply made a header so it wouldn't be so big. But what you proposed in wording sounds reasonable to me....pretty much the same meaning..... Do we mention genocide or not? Do we follow sources and elaborate on multiple points or not? I would have no complaints if you changed it..... as there's no change in meaning. Moxy🍁 23:12, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- @MoxyI don't think you fixed it, you made it worse. It believe what @OntologicalTree (not you) has to do is concisely and accurately state the nature of the request and then put the three three options after the time stamp. I would suggest wording such as "There is a dispute over whether the article should state that British colonisation of Australia involved genocide against Aboriginal Australians and Torres Strait Islanders. Which of the three proposed options should be included in the article?" @Redrose64 Am I correct? I didn't initiate the RfC and I'm not sure about the technical requirements. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 23:06, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed Moxy🍁 22:20, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
"Australia." listed at Redirects for discussion
The redirect Australia. has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at Misplaced Pages:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 November 26 § Australia. until a consensus is reached. cogsan (nag me) (stalk me) 14:08, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
Hatnote spam
Readers shouldn't have to read a paragraph of information before they actually get to article information.... Scrolling accessibility nightmare. The goal of these is not to direct readers to every possible article before they're even aware of the topic of this article. = WP:1HAT. As our data shows readers are only going to scroll a few times.... As of now there's a giant paragraph of hatnotes and a giant infobox mobile readers got to get through before they get to actual prose text of the second paragraph. Do we really need a new note for a redirect made today that the articles done fine without for two decades (The land down under) or for other countries names that is obvious when you read the first hatnote where you are and what this page is about.Moxy🍁 04:29, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- There is already an article Down Under and dab pages Down Under (disambiguation) and Land Down Under. I'm not sure that the new redirect (The land down under) is actually necessary? JennyOz (talk) 06:13, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sounds like it should redirect to Land Down Under. CMD (talk) 07:03, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Moxy🍁 15:35, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- You know what, good idea mate, I’ll put Australia’s Misplaced Pages page link in the page Land Down Under (I might also add New Zealand) Servite et contribuere (talk) 21:53, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- OK Mate. I added links to Australia and New Zealand in the page “Land Down Under”. Also keep in mind that I am from Australia Servite et contribuere (talk) 21:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Moxy🍁 15:35, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sounds like it should redirect to Land Down Under. CMD (talk) 07:03, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
The Royal Anthem
I understand there is a note with regard to the royal anthem however I don't see any issue with adding the royal anthem below the Australian national anthem. I also believe this also aligns better with wiki pages such as Canada. I'd like to make this change however I understand not everyone agrees so I will leave it here for discussion. Sparrowman980 (talk) 18:31, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- We rarely hear it played unless the monarch is present. I don't have strong feelings about it - it is an official anthem after all - but Australia has steadily become less monarchistic over the years, both as a community and as a nation. Giving it any prominence at all is probably undue. Nowadays the Governor-General calls themself the head of state and that's a huge change from when I was a lad. --Pete (talk) 20:31, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- I think the current footnote in the infobox is sufficient. As I said last time, Advance Australia Fair is the only official national anthem. God Save the King is only played at official functions (along with the national anthem) when a member of the royal family is present. At official events, sporting events, schools, ceremonies etc. Advance Australia Fair would be played thousands of times more often than God Save the King. Giving it equal prominence in the info box would be false balance WP:BALANCE. And the info box is only meant to summarise key facts.WP:INFOBOXPURPOSE. Aemilius Adolphin (talk) 21:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- The current footnote is quite sufficient on this - a featured article page. Actually the Canada page would be improved by following the practice shown here on the Australia page, not vice versa.Nickm57 (talk) 23:42, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- It's a matter of weight. While the anthem is official, it is not common, and it is not a key fact about the country for readers. CMD (talk) 01:57, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Agree .....think its undue for many places including Canada. Moxy🍁 02:14, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with what you all are saying however as it's been stated it is an "official anthem" and I don't see how we or anyone can decide what people should and shouldn't see. If it is an official anthem as stated on here Misplaced Pages and on the Australian Government's website and whether some people want it to be included or not is just someone's opinion or how they view the current situation or how they perceive it to be. What we should be doing is stating the facts with proper references and let those who read it decide if they want to do anything more with it. It would also show up as one line that being with regard to the info box and it is below the national anthem. Sparrowman980 (talk) 04:44, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Deciding what people should and shouldn't see (on this article) is one of our roles as editors. Inclusion is just as much an editorial decision as exclusion. We don't, for example, include the golden wattle as the official floral emblem. CMD (talk) 05:17, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Most commonwealth countries could careless about the fact the position has a anthem.....simply not a debate - not part of society - never even learn about it....but Australia it is a bit different. They still debate who is the head of state for a ceremonial position and if the royal anthem should be used at all Moxy🍁 06:02, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Deciding what people should and shouldn't see (on this article) is one of our roles as editors. Inclusion is just as much an editorial decision as exclusion. We don't, for example, include the golden wattle as the official floral emblem. CMD (talk) 05:17, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
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