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== Hinduism and Sikhism Sections == | |||
The Hinduism and Sikhism sections have been appalingly edited, using, in the case of Hinduism, out-of-context references to abortion, and making no mention of the views of contemporary Hindus. Hinduism is a dynamic and changing religion, and the views of contemporary Hindus are of significant concern, as there is no set guidance for morality within the religion itself. | |||
Could someone please archive this page, and close the sections now known to be authorered by a disruptive sockpuppet? Thanks to everyone with a level head, and especially our third opinion, Binksternet.--] (]) 15:07, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
Also, the section about Sikhism was lifted VERBATIM from http://www.bbc.co.uk/religion/religions/sikhism/sikhethics/abortion.shtml | |||
:Done. Cheers! ] (]) 15:45, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
The section indicated that abortion is prohibited according to Page 74 of the Sri Guru Granth Sahib, as that page discusses the beginning of life as being at conception. However, Page 74 makes absolutely no mention of it (http://www.sikhs.org/english/eg6.htm#p74). | |||
== 'Mother' vs 'pregnant woman' == | |||
] 22:08, 12 May 2007 (UTC) | |||
I noticed that a lot of our sources use the word 'mother' when talking about a pregnant woman in relation to the subject of abortion, especially the religious sources. I think we need to stay true to the source when quoting it, and not switch terminology. If the source says 'pregnant woman' or 'woman', then use that terminology. If the source says 'mother', use that. This should save us the trouble of trying to decide what is politically correct, as a recently-banned editor was saying. ] (]) 18:11, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
== Religious groups supporting abortion rights == | |||
:That should work. In general, if it's a first-time pregnancy, the expression you typically hear is "She is / I am ''going to be'' a mother." ] <sup>'']''</sup> ] 18:57, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::Sure, we ought to track the sources, and we shouldn't pick out the sources that like the terminology we prefer. One typically hears stuff like "Abortion is sometimes needed to save the life of the mother."] (]) 19:04, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::Yep, that's true. So go with what the source says, and we're covered. ] <sup>'']''</sup> ] 19:19, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::Here's another wrinkle: What if she's 13. Is that a "woman"? ] <sup>'']''</sup> ] 19:19, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::Sounds like a fair compromise to me. About that 13 year old - God only knows. - ] (]) 19:28, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::The term 'woman' has sometimes been used to include minor females who are showing womanly traits. Being pregnant qualifies. ] (]) 19:33, 29 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
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What if the source uses "unborn baby", "murder" etc.? It isn't as simple as just deferring to what the source uses. |→ ]<sup>₪</sup>] 11:57, 30 April 2009 (]) | |||
:If, for example, a source referring to an abortion in the USA is calling it "murder", then it's probably not qualified as a source here other than being cited as a given church's opinion on the matter. "Murder" is a legal term, and if an abortion was performed legally, then by definition it is NOT "murder", even if anti-abortionists think it is. ] <sup>'']''</sup> ] 13:24, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
I have replaced the text deleted by RookZero and added citations as s/he suggested. Unfortunately I cannot figure out how to make the citations show up in the reference/notes section. Any help will be appreciated. TIA. | |||
It's interesting to look through all of the abortion related articles for which terms they use. The more scientifically oriented ones only use mother when describing a woman with a child. Any religious sections tend to use 'mother' more liberally. I don't know if this mainly reflects the type of editors for each article or the predominant use in the different fields. 'Mother' is generally used fairly sparingly throughout the articles, again this probably reflects the type of editor as opposed to a conscious consensus. |→ ]<sup>₪</sup>] 12:10, 30 April 2009 (]) | |||
I reverted last edit by RookZero -- (a) The religious organizations here '''clearly''' do not support abortion per se -- they support abortion '''rights'''. Also, the text ''the availability of modern, medically supervised abortion'' has been agreed to in previous discussion on this page. | |||
:I think 'mother' should only be used in specific circumstances. Having looked through all of WPs abortion related articles they read well and the meaning is clear where 'woman' is used, or if necessary at the start of a paragraph 'pregnant woman'. Obviously when quoting sections of sources whatever they use should stand. On definitions: | |||
:If its cited, then I won't delete the list. THe wording "legal abortion," that is, support for abortion to be legal, shows their position without violating NPOV (] 18:47, 31 May 2007 (UTC)) | |||
::The most common definition of mother: ''A female parent; especially, one of the human race; a woman who has borne a child.'' | |||
:::Collection of dictionary links to , and . Of these I did not find one that would suggest being pregnant makes a woman a mother. | |||
:Now clearly mother is used in other circumstances, in conversation one might refer to a pregnant woman as a mother, but only where you are sure she is planning to become one (or I hope so if you have any tact!). I will look through the article, and sources if possible, and think on it a bit more. |→ ]<sup>₪</sup>] 12:34, 30 April 2009 (]) | |||
::I'm an editor who usually works on military history articles where very strict standards are applied to articles. I don't suggest using 'mother' in place of 'woman' because I'm friendly to religion, and I don't suggest it lightly. I think the article should, consciously, choose to reflect the sources. For instance, the source I just added which reverted your change of 'mother' to 'woman' under the Muslim section, is a . Editorial discussion in that book refers to 'pregnant woman', but phrases such as "life of the mother" and "health of the mother" appear when Islamic ideas are discussed. You'll see "The mother cannot be sacrificed for the child" and "the mother is the origin of the fetus" if you click on that link. I think it quite appropriate that wiki articles reflect in tone and style their sources. ] (]) 14:58, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
== Disputable tag on Judaism section == | |||
:::Thinking about it, the authors of many of these sources will themselves be from cultures where the default is to bear the child unless the woman is in grave danger; this will lead them to use terminology that to others may seem biased. It is fine to use sources as the basis for the decision, but to always bear in mind that wikipedia articles have to retain a neutral point of view whereas many of the sources do not. I will look for a discussion on this point, as a source that suggests the neutral ground for wording such things would be ideal, though it probably doesn't exist. |→ ]<sup>₪</sup>] 15:17, 30 April 2009 (]) | |||
The first statement says "Jewish tradition holds life (including the life of a fetus) as sacred, and does not permit abortion on demand". Yes it holds life as sacred but the status of the fetus as life is an incredibly gray area in Judaism, with many contradictory laws. Ohalot 7:6, which is cited later in the section says that the fetus can be torn limb from limb from the mother and I read elsewhere that the fetus has the same status as any other appendage of the woman. We know from the Torah in Parashat Mishpatim that an unintentional killing of the fetus is, at most, a monetary issue (as opposed to unintentionally killing the mother which can result in capital punishment), but the tradition takes various positions on the status of elective abortions and I would like to see citations backing up a statement like Judaism "does not permit abortion on demand". --]] 00:46, 6 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:Agreed. Feel free to revise my revisions! ] | ] 04:08, 26 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::One thing to consider is the overall usage within the article. If it sometimes says "mother" and sometimes says "pregnant woman", generally in reference to the way a source says it, that would tend to defuse the bias allegation that Spotfixer/TIIP was harping on. If it's all of one or the other, deliberately, it tends to look "politically correct" (toward one side or the other) and tends to evoke neutrality complaints. ] <sup>'']''</sup> ] 15:21, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::Just so y'all are aware, similar issues have come up a lot over the years. For example, there's the conception vs. fertilization controversy, and the womb vs. uterus controversy.] (]) 15:49, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::Now you know why I don't edit these articles. "womb" vs. "uterus"? Where I come from, they're the same thing, just a colloquial term vs. a medical term. Good grief. ] <sup>'']''</sup> ] 15:57, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Yeah, it's pretty silly for anyone to try to have an article only use one or the other of those terms. But there does get to be a legitimate concern about terms like "unborn", and even more of a concern about terms like "baby" (I haven't taken any position on those two yet).] (]) 16:03, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I think the core problem is that in casual conversation with a pregant woman / mother-to-be, these terms are used interchangeably with no issues. It's on the "abortion on demand" issue that the two sides have tried to co-opt particular terms for their versions of what I call left-wing and right-wing "political correctness". These pages are basically a mine field. ] <sup>'']''</sup> ] 16:07, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Yep, often I wonder why I discuss these articles, but I keep on coming back. Some kind of masochism it seems... Well surmised by the way. |→ ]<sup>₪</sup>] 23:01, 30 April 2009 (]) | |||
(outdent)Hey, just wanted to point out that "life of the mother" isn't just a colloquialism, it is used in medicine and has been encoded in law. Frankly, I prefer the term "mother" unless the term "pregnant woman" seems to fit better in the sentence but I'll take what we have now for the sake of compromise, and of course, all this is up for discussion. - ] (]) 03:49, 1 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
:This is pretty simple, really. If I get pregnant, I become a pregnant woman. If nine months pass and I have a live birth, I become a mother. If I have an abortion or the pregnancy otherwise ends before then, I do not become a mother. Of course, if I had already been a mother to begin with, I would remain one. | |||
Jewish text and tradition have consistently said that until the baby has come out of the womb, the mother can, and should, have an abortion if there life is in danger. | |||
:Yes, sometimes people call pregnant women "mothers", but this isn't accurate or neutral. I've been very careful to leave this usage alone when it's in a direct quote, but otherwise, I've fixed it wherever I've seen it. ] (]) 00:29, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
== religioustolerance.org == | |||
::Accurate? It is quite accurate to call a pregnant woman a mother if you are a religious scholar. Read some scholarly religious works and you'll see. ] (]) 00:53, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
Some sourced content was removed because of ''religioustolerance.org is not considered a reliable source''. I'm familiar with ], but that guideline was never supported by consensus. If there is a specific reason why this information is wrong, or that it should be removed, I'd like to hear that, but removing content based solely on its source seems too simplistic.-] 19:34, 25 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:Ah, the proposal was rejected. I stand corrected then. The content should be restored. ] 15:30, 26 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::As I said, when literally quoting a religious tract, I've left the word "mother" in place. However, it's not neutral and its accuracy is clearly controversial. Nobody disputes that a woman who is pregnant is a pregnant woman, so this term is perfectly safe to use. On the other hand, medical practice is to avoid using it except where the woman has had a live birth. Here's one citation: http://www.find-health-articles.com/rec_pub_12696783-words-matter-nomenclature-communication-perinatal-medicine.htm ] (]) 01:05, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
::No problem. I've modified it to reflect the source.-] 15:50, 26 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::And here's the full article, in case you don't have access as a student: http://books.google.com/books?id=8pSjRf_GSd0C&pg=PA158&lpg=PA158&dq=Words+matter++Nomenclature+and+communication+in+perinatal&source=bl&ots=3Hg41vdg-E&sig=ADfvzSjdXvWDtaTi_7w99gNs0H8&hl=en&ei=6sXXSqL-OJDclAfl1LmhAQ&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=6&ved=0CC0Q6AEwBQ ] (]) 01:09, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::ReligiousTolerance.org is operated by the ], who state that their goal is to research and write neutral, informative articles on a variety of topics, rather like Misplaced Pages. I don't necessarily see an issue with citing them, so long as they have done their homework, and cited ]. -] (]) 15:54, 26 June 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::To make this more fair, I'm not going to expect you to read the whole thing just to understand my point. Instead, I'll quote a relevant sample: | |||
== Changes to the lead == | |||
::::"The terms 'fetus' and 'pregnant woman' are grammatically more correct than 'baby' and 'mother'. The latter names are used by some (including antiabortionists) euphemistically with a more sinister motivation — namely, to blur reality. Antiabortionists also use 'baby' and 'mother' as 'linguistic fig leaves' to suggest that abortion is wrong: while the motivation of doctors using these terms is likely to differ from antiabortionists, it may be misinterpreted by patients." | |||
:::Please feel free to read the whole thing so you can be sure that I'm not quoting out of context, but I think this is an overwhelmingly powerful argument both for accuracy and neutrality. If for some reason a local majority disagrees with me, I will gladly take this to the next level. ] (]) 01:23, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::Is the article using that reference, the ''Textbook of perinatal medicine'', for information about religious thought relative to abortion? No, we are using secondary sources which discuss religious thought. I think it perfectly appropriate to follow the source material in each case. ] (]) 01:28, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
While there may be some significant concerns regarding the lead, I believe the most recent changes are, not to be blunt, but simply poorly written. It should generally be avoided to refer to the article itself such as "this article" (the changes introduce this twice). The use of "It is worth noting, however" is simply unnecessary and does nothing except make the lead more verbose. Does anyone want to copy edit the recent changes? or maybe revert back to the old version until we can get a better written new version?-] </sup>]] 15:47, 26 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::I'm sorry, but I think you might be confused about the context. We're discussing this terminology issue here because it's one of the articles affected and it was suggested by ], but the dispute has spanned many pages, most of which are about abortion but have nothing to do with religion. Even though this page is about religion, it's also bound by the same basic requirements for neutrality, so this medical textbook is entirely relevant. If this confuses you, we can move this discussion to ], a more neutral venue. ] (]) 01:46, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
:I agree. I have gone ahead and modified it, hopefully addressing these issues. ] 16:55, 26 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
Again, many laws and most news reports use the term "life of the mother". This term is by no means bound to religious sources. - ] (]) 03:20, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
:That's great, and when we quote these laws, I'm careful to leave the original text alone. However, Misplaced Pages is neither a religious text nor a lawbook, and unlike either, it is obligated to be neutral. I have to say that, in the end, your argument just doesn't hold up. ] (]) 03:41, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
::I tried re-writing the lead again. Here are some problems with the prior version: | |||
::Right, so we shouldn't use the term the sources use, we shouldn't use the term religious use and we shouldn't use the term the law uses but we should use the term you use? Why? - ] (]) 03:51, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
::"Many religions have adopted specific stances" -- "adopted" implies some sort of active decision; some religious traditions don't quite work that way. In addition, not all religious views of abortion are "specific." | |||
::"regarding the morality of abortion" -- not all religious views of abortion purport to be about the "morality" of abortion; in some religious traditions, the permissibility of abortion is more a matter of religious law than religious "morality." | |||
::"Religious perspectives on this subject span a rather large spectrum." -- a spectrum can broad or wide, but not "large."] 02:07, 27 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::How about "espouse specific stances." Of course, we'd also have to account for the non-specific stances. ] 05:09, 27 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::Correct. As I already explained, we're held to a higher standard. | |||
:OK, the latest version is acceptable. ] 20:03, 27 July 2007 (UTC) | |||
:::If it helps, I'll give you an example from journalism class. When OJ was on trial, the media was obligated to report that a police officer had used a ]. The term was offensive, of course, but it's not like they could have just pretended that he'd said "African-American" or any other neutral phrase. However, they didn't use that word any more than they had to, and then only in the context of what the cop said. And they never ever casually referred to OJ by that term. | |||
:::In the same way, we are obligated to use "mother" when quoting some priest or politician putting their dishonest little spin on things, but we're not allowed to do as they do, because we're better than them. Aren't we? ] (]) 04:26, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::I guess when OJ comes to trial I won't say mean things? These terms has legal meanings, medical meanings, religious meanings, some often deviate from the technical to account for this, ] springs to mind and I'm sure many other examples can be dragged forward if necessary. Yes, these words can be politically and emotionally charged and you want us to use the ones you favor without any substantive reason to deviate from from law/religion/medicine/reporting. - ] (]) 04:54, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::I have not been able to come up with any understanding of your response that refutes the need for ]. Please stop harming Misplaced Pages. ] (]) 05:52, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::Well then, I'll try to be more clear - this is not an issue of POV. "Life of the mother" is used by the law, by religion, by medicine, by the news and in common use - so we use it. - ] (]) 05:57, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::It is common for both religious scholars and laypersons to refer to a woman as a mother if she is planning on having a baby or if she has already conceived. uses the word 'mother' in discussing ''dead'' women who might have their eggs fertilized posthumously. The term mother is used very widely before, during and after pregnancy to refer to the woman involved. ] (]) 15:27, 16 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
== Order of religions == | |||
:::::::Sorry I wasn't able to respond earlier, but there was a minor mix-up that prevented me from doing so. | |||
:::::::Briefly, I don't see how repeating a refuted argument changes the consensus. What terms a source uses is only relevant when they are directly quoted. Otherwise, we are obligated to follow ], and the citation I gave above confirms that "mother" is POV when applied to a pregnant woman. I hope you understand why your opinion cannot prevail in this matter, and not take it personally. ] (]) 23:11, 14 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Consensus is reached per article, not per general subject. Sometimes, a wiki-wide consensus can be reached regarding all articles that fall under the purview of a Wikiproject. In a case like this article which is connected to several Wikiprojects, a consensus must happen at the article itself. Let me tally the !votes here and see where we are so far: | |||
::::::::*'''Mother''': ], ], ], ] | |||
::::::::*'''Pregnant woman''': ] | |||
::::::::*'''Undecided''': ] | |||
::::::::Without a formal RfC, just going by this one discussion thread, it looks like the "mothers" have it. ] (]) 01:41, 15 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
(un-indent) | |||
Hi. I can see that the religions are ordered alphabetically. Not that there's anything wrong with that. Still, it might be better to use an analytical sequence. For instance, we could have a section on Abrahamic religions and another on Dharmic faiths. Plus, this might highlight where we need more balance and coverage. In addition, within Abrahamic religions, there would be a benefit in coordinating the writing of the sections, because some of the texts (eg Exodus) and concepts/reasoning overlap. What do folks think? | |||
If you want to take this to an RfC, then by all means do so. However, I do wish to remind you that ] does not change from article to article, nor is it meaningful to select an article where a particular viewpoint predominates and treat this as a genuine consensus. This is ], but if it were, it would only matter if everyone got to participate. | |||
Incidentally, I've added the the Judaism section. Let me know when the time might be right to spin-off ], which I'd like to do eventually. Thanks! ] | ] 23:03, 24 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
I will also add that no amount of !VOTES can form a consensus powerful enough to override the pillars of Misplaced Pages, such as ]. I've shown by unrefuted argument and unimpeached ] that calling a woman a "mother" when she becomes pregnant is unacceptable. ] (]) 02:57, 15 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:Thank you, HG, for giving this article some much-needed attention! I think that you've done a very good job expanding the section on Judaism. | |||
:I don't agree. A woman who is carrying a zygote or greater in her uterus is commonly called a mother by herself, her family, her friends and her society. Both religious and lay people all over the world casually use the word "mother" to describe a pregnant woman. What's the evil you see? What's the non-neutral point of view? Where is ] trespassed? You are coming at this from a black-white either-or perspective where pro-lifers are pitted in a death grip against pro-choicers. To me, this stance you hold is the non-neutral one! You have found a medico-political source that says the word "mother" has become a tool of pro-lifers who wish to skew opinion their way, and thus it should not be used by anyone who is neutral, and yet people of all stripes continue to say "mother" when they are conversing about pregnancy. | |||
:I generally order items in an article either alphabetically or chronologically. I do see a logical basis for dividing material in this article along the Abrahamic/Dharmic line. I can see this structure posing an issue, however, if a section on a religion with a different origin altogether were added. I suppose any religion which fits in neither the Abrahamic nor Dharmic category would most likely fall into the Taoic or Pagan/Neopagan categories. This is essentially the framework in place at ]. | |||
:You might be surprised to find that I count myself a pro-choicer who uses the word "mother" to describe a pregnant woman just as casually as the other billions of people on earth who do the same. I don't see why I should let pro-lifers and reactionary medical staff skew or restrict the time-honored and established usage. ] (]) 05:51, 15 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:Regarding the creation of religion-specific sub-articles, if the ] of the article Abortion and Evangelical Christians has set any precedent, I think it's that denomination-specific sub-articles might be a step too far in that direction. I do think that creating a series of spin-off articles for each religious movement would help to refine the focus of this article, though, as detailed coverage of topics only relevant to a particular faith could be migrated (the practice of ''mizuko kuyo'' and the Vatican's position on pro-choice politicians are two examples which come to my mind). I think the "]" article series could again serve as our guide. | |||
::Rather than repeat myself, I will point you to the article I mentioned earlier and recommend that you read . ] (]) 06:16, 15 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::That's one person writing a prescriptive text which aims to change word choice among medical personnel. Its mere presence proves my point: people commonly use the word "mother". If they didn't, the author would not have seen fit to write against it. ] (]) 15:19, 15 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::I'm not sure if you read the same article I did. The point wasn't that you should ''never'' use "mother", but that you should recognize that applying it to anyone other than woman who has given birth to children saddles it with connotative baggage. This baggage may well be acceptable in the case of a woman who decides she wants to get pregnant and have children. It's just an innocent truncation of "mother-to-be" to "mother". However, applying it to women with unwanted pregnancies is a different matter entirely, and it's precisely what we're dealing with when talking about abortion. | |||
::::Fundamentally, your argument is not so much wrong as irrelevant. It doesn't even matter that people "commonly" misuse "mother". People commonly do all sorts of things that are entirely unacceptable on Misplaced Pages, and this doesn't sway us as all. What matters is whether calling a woman who has an abortion a "mother" is at all reasonable for articles here, and it's simply not. The bias is so obvious that it's even commented on in ]. To use terms from the pro-life framing of the issue as if they were in some way neutral violates ], and nothing you said has changed this conclusion. ] (]) 15:33, 15 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::The small mention of mother at ] is poorly written and incomplete. Yes, pro-lifers use the term, but ''everybody'' does. Your recent addition to that article of the prescriptive word-use instructions for medical personnel still does not have any relevance on this page. | |||
:::::I have two dictionaries on my shelf: one is Webster's New Collegiate from 1979 and the other is Oxford Illustrated from 1985. In both, the word "mother" has many uses, far more than just a woman who has given birth. The first definition in Webster's is simple: "a female parent." We turn to "parent" to find that it means "one who begets or brings forth offspring." "Beget"? Now we have the word "mother" meaning "a female who begets or brings forth offspring." To me, that opens up the possibilities. As well, "mother" can be defined in more general terms as the "source, origin." Clearly, the word "mother" can include a woman who has provided ova for fertilization. The word is not limited to its primary meaning of a woman who has given birth to a child. ] (]) 16:08, 15 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::Even if it were true -- and it's not -- just because "everybody does it" doesn't mean that we get to break ] by doing it, too. What people ''actually'' do is use the word "mother" only when they know that the woman ''intends'' to carry the pregnancy to term and therefore become a mother. Aside from thoughtless people, the exceptions are pro-life advocates, who use it in a dishonest way (just as the Term Controversy paragraph explained) to exert pressure. | |||
:The basic hierarchy proposed below would be Religion family -> Religion -> School or denomination. The inclusion of religions not currently covered by this article in the section tree is not intended to suggest that it would be necessary for us to fill in ''all'' of these gaps. It's just intended to show what the general layout of sections would be. -] (<small>]</small>) 03:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
::::::Careful and honest speakers recognize that intentions don't guarantee results, so they speak of "prospective mothers" and "mothers to be", knowing that pregnancies can end all by themselves. When talking about egg donors, they usually just say "egg donor", and if they use "mother" at all, it's likewise with a qualifier, such as "biological mother". | |||
===Proposed section tree=== | |||
*Abrahamic religions | |||
**Bahá'í | |||
**Christianity | |||
***Denomination 1 | |||
***Denomination 2 | |||
***''Et al.'' | |||
**Islam | |||
**Judaism | |||
***Denomination 1 | |||
***Denomination 2 | |||
***''Et al.'' | |||
*Dharmic religions | |||
**Buddhism | |||
***School 1 | |||
***School 2 | |||
***''Et al.'' | |||
**Hinduism | |||
**Sikhism | |||
*Neopagan religions | |||
**Ásatrú | |||
**Wicca | |||
*Taoic religions | |||
**Confucianism | |||
**Shinto | |||
**Taoism | |||
::::::The bottom line is that, if I become pregnant and decide to get an abortion, I am at no point a mother, and characterizing me as one would be deeply manipulative and offensive; I'd report you for ] in a heartbeat. No matter how finely we analyze this, we find no basis for violating ]. If you disagree, then by all means file an RfC or whatever. ] (]) 15:49, 16 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:Hi, Severa. Thanks for your kind comments. Smart suggestion to look at the ] model. They do have the Abrahamics in the conventional chronological order, not sure about Dharmics (with Jainism after Sikhs). I'm surprised that Catholicism doesn't have its own main article, but maybe that's reflects the randomness of editors and their interests. Certainly, if some folks come along to help out, the Jewish view is complex and diverse enough that it would benefit from a separate piece. Hmmm, if I want collaborators, it might be best to spin-off the piece soon -- or at least tag this as a WP:Judaism project. Will you implement your outline above? You might as well be bold ]. Adieu, ] | ] 04:07, 26 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
It is odd, but as ''the'' reliable source to be followed has one contributor making the case that "mother" should only be used of a woman in relation to a child already born, but half a dozen (or more) contributors to the ''same volume'' happily use phrases like "the pregnant mother and her fetus". So is only the one contribution to that volume a ], or can the others also be taken to show standard usage? --] (]) 02:14, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::I just discovered that there is a host of ] for Christianity in the "Religion and homosexuality" series. I get the impression that the LGBT Studies project is much more organized than WikiProject Abortion (we've really only got two or three active members at the moment). I'd certainly like to implement the above outline, as well as the proposal for a spin-off series, but, frankly, I don't think I have the ambition to take it on single-handedly. I'd prefer to call in a few experts in each subject to lend a hand in putting everything together. I suppose if I wanted to get the ball rolling I could ask around at each of the religion-specific WikiProjects, or perhaps even at the LGBT Studies project, as the people who assembled a series of articles on how one heavily-debated topic is approached by various religions are likely to have information relevant to religious views of another heavily-debated topic. I think, in any case, we should probably start by expanding/spinning off the sections we already have (Buddhism, Christianity, Hinduism, Islam, Judaism, & Sikhism). -] (<small>]</small>) 07:39, 30 October 2007 (UTC) | |||
:It's a good thing that, like Misplaced Pages, medical journals aren't decided by counting heads. For a more in-depth response, please read my reply . ] (]) 04:53, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::Indeed not by counting heads, but by following the style imposed by the editors - who in this instance included an essay about the language to be used when speaking in diagnostic situations to (or in front of) a pregnant woman, but chose not to universalize the recommendations of that essay to the volume they were themselves editing. Since wikipedia is not (or certainly should not) be used in a diagnostic setting, the criteria do not seem to apply, any more than they apply to the chapters of a medical textbook. I quite understand your point, but since the one source you've given for it doesn't bear it out, all it is so far is your personal opinion (which is not quite the same as a ]). --] (]) 09:50, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::I have to admit that I find it awkward to respond to you simultaneously here and on my talk page, and I'm sure that editors interested in this topic would likewise find it awkward. It would be simplest if we centralized our discussion instead of repeating it. The logical place to discuss terminology on articles regarding abortion is ], so let's move there. | |||
:::As for the argument above, it's refuted on my talk page. ] (]) 16:53, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::I’m sorry to have confused you by using more than one line at a time. On your talkpage (with a very neat praeteritio) that my views about this linguistic issue are inspired by “a religious commitment to oppose abortion”, which does seem to indicate that addressing you in two locations has made it hard for you to focus on the issue actually being discussed. I apologise. To keep it simple, shall we just continue here? What you in effect seem to be saying is that in a textbook which prodigally uses such phrases as “rights of the mother”, “health of the mother”, “mother and fetus”, all the contributors are wrong to do so, because they are not following the advice of another contributor who says that talk of “mothers” should be avoided in diagnostic contexts. But they are not writing in a diagnostic context, and nor are we. You are ready to dismiss all these experts (nota bene, contributors to the textbook that you yourself cite) as careless and dishonest in their use of language, and to say that "we" are better than "them", but this is not the sort of attitude to sources that seems to me to lie at the heart of our project.--] (]) 18:12, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::It's less of a praeteritio, and more of a "hey, I didn't bring it up in the first place but you were unwise to do so yourself". As for the rest, I believe I address it on ], where I've consolidated this discussion. Please go there. ] (]) 18:19, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::Your herring is a very pretty red, but all I've brought up is the linguistic usage of the source you introduced to the discussion, taking your advice to read it in full and in context. Why this sudden shyness when your source is treated with the thoroughness that you surely think it deserves? --] (]) 18:31, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::::Your continued input is valued, but would be appreciated in ], not here. Please join me there. ] (]) 18:34, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Why thank you, it's simply charming of you to say so. As a matter of fact, I'd already contributed to the discussion there, and I very much look forward to continuing this conversation in a reasoned and relevant manner. --] (]) 18:43, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
Contributors may have noticed some conflicting edits in abortion-related articles regarding what to call women who get pregnant. There's an open discussion ] that could probably benefit from more eyes. --] (]) 22:52, 21 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
== ...most religions generally opposing... == | |||
==Neutrality and links== | |||
I came to check the neutrality. I removed a number of links under "Religious Organizations that oppose abortion". None of them were religius orgs. I question the inclusions of the geocities "Pagans For Life" page. What do others think? Also, the intro cites an ABC poll stating "50%" of those who oppose abortion. The source says "52%" approve and 43% think it should be illegal. I'm going to change the stats to reflect the source and continue through the article. ] (]) 03:42, 30 November 2007 (UTC) | |||
The opening paragraph contains the statement "The variety in opinion on the issue is reflected with most religions generally opposing abortion under most circumstances" but I don't see the same statement, or a paraphrasing of it, in the reference by The Pew Forum: http://pewforum.org/docs/?DocID=351 | |||
==Entire "Christianity" section is unsourced== | |||
The several paragraphs directly under "Christianity" are unsourced. I'm going to try to source some of it, but the parts I can't, I move we quickly delete them.--] (]) 23:12, 15 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
Of course I can read the linked article and conclude for myself the same thing as is written in the lede, but having the reference support this sentence without the reference making any such kind of generalization is what we call synthesis. Take a look at ] for more information about policy. ] (]) 03:12, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:Sounds good. Maybe we could fact tag them for a few days, see if others can find sources. Otherwise, I'm OK with it. If there are any disagreements, the material can be sourced and reintroduced. ] (]) 12:44, 20 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::You're right, it does look like synthesis. Perhaps the following new ref will support the statement: | |||
== Judaism section revisions == | |||
::Steen, Edwin et al. , page 174 (Courier Dover Publications 1988). | |||
Hi. ] had concerns with some of the Judaism section. Here's a . Here's some of my thinking on this. | |||
* (a) Subheading refers to the Bible not the Jewish "Tradition" because this subunit deals more narrowly w/the Biblical verses and "tradition" would also cover the later subunits on rabbinic literature. | |||
*(b) This text had been deleted as weasel wording: "there is no unambiguous position on abortion. On the one hand, the Bible is understood to exalt the preservation of human life as a paramount value. Homicide is denounced and forbidden, except in cases of rescue and self-defense (see '']''). On the other hand, the Biblical texts say little about the status or treatment of the embryo or fetus. " The notion of ambiguity in the Biblical text is quite common in Judaism; more importantly, this view is not mine but rather from the major (Jewish) scholars on the subject, eg Feldman. These scholars note the tensions between forbidding killing and the valorizing life, while not necessarily focusing on or including the fetus. The specific propositions here are also supported by (Jewish) scholarly analysis of the Bible, including the relevance of self-defense (which plays a major role in rabbinic interpretations, as noted in subsequent sections of the article). | |||
* (c) Another disputed text here is this: Do we say "Talmudic texts say little about the status..." or 'Biblical text...." Two reasons to say Biblical. First, as noted above, this is a subunit about the Bible. Second, it is only the Bible that says little, the Talmud actually says much more. | |||
Thanks. I look forward to feedback. ] | ] 22:09, 16 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::] (]) 03:55, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
Thanks H.G.: | |||
**(a) Perhaps a more accurate phrase would be the "Torah and Talmud." What are your thoughts? | |||
**(b) The section you site above was not entirely deleted because of "weasel wording," though some sections seem to be editorializing, lack of sources and lack of a global view. | |||
**(c) The "Torah" in most contexts is the entire "Jewish Bible" (http://www.jewfaq.org/torah.htm) (http://en.wikipedia.org/Tanakh#Oral_Torah) | |||
--] (]) 23:33, 16 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Oh, glad to see your response. I hadn't seen it (while the database was down just now). (a) I already reverted on adding Talmud; as explained in my edit summary, the Talmud (contra Bible) does say alot about fetus etc. (b) well, the sources are there but ] because I didn't expect much of a challenge on this, it's pretty well accepted. Not sure what you mean by lack of a global view. Explain pls? (c) Sure, we can use Torah, though I think it would be less familiar to most readers of this article. Thanks very much for doing this via conversation. Pls come back at me with more concerns, etc., as you have them. thanks. ] | ] 23:59, 16 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Good going! ] (]) 04:10, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
Sorry to just throw out the wiki phrases "editorializing, lack of sources and lack of a global view". Here are links with regards to those issues: , , --] (]) 01:14, 17 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks, though I'm somewhat familiar with these matters. I've responded above on sources and editorializing. In what particular way does the text reflect systematic bias? (In Judaism articles, there's sometimes a tendency to ignore the varieties of Judaism, but here we have not only the major modern movements but also Philo/Hellenistic.) Thanks. ] | ] 01:52, 17 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::The citation for this is a book from 1988 written about sexuality, not religion. And it doesn't look like a very scholarly book at all. Definitely not authoritative enough on religion to back up a broad claim like that.] (]) 21:53, 13 July 2009 (UTC) | |||
==Order== | |||
The organization of religions seems odd with Christianity 2nd (kind of POV-y). I propose that we order them chronologically - Hinduism, Judaism, Buddhism, Christianity, Islam, etc. ] (]) 12:50, 20 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::I disagree. I think the work is scholarly enough. But more importantly, it gives warrant to what is evidence throughout the rest of the article. It is a matter of historical fact that most religions have traditionally disapprobated upon abortion.] (]) 16:34, 14 July 2009 (UTC) | |||
Okay, I was bold,a nd went ahead and did it - any issues? ] (]) 13:13, 20 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
Bleh, now we're stuck with a lede which contradicts the article, and creates an unreferenced sense of "variety" synthesis. Better a truthful synthesis than a untruthful contradictory one!--] (]) 19:18, 27 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
:The previous order wasn't POV. It was alphabetical. I have a slight preference for the old order, but this matter doesn't seem that important to me, so unless there aren't any other objections, and your desire to re-arrange is that strong, I don't mind the change. -] </sup>]] 15:14, 21 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I think it's far better to keep alphabetical. Otherwise, we'll waste time with origins/timing disputes, esp if we pick up more religions. My 2 cents. ] | ] 19:39, 21 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Thanks for the input! Both chronological and alphabetical are equally defensible and expandable, though chrono makes more sense (to me) in that it follows logically - seems weird to talk about Christianity before Judaism (you're right it's not POV - just seems arbitrary in the face of a chrono development). This way you can follow the development of ideological positions, each section becomes an intro to the next, giving a nice historical perspective. I also think the chrono is more self-evident. I don't think there's very much dispute as to what order the religions developed, particular dates, maybe, but that's not an issue here. I have a strong preference for this but I don't want to make an issue out of it. Thoughts? ] (]) 21:01, 21 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Bowen reference, 2003 == | |||
I agree that alphabetical is better. Chronological order creates problems - there are disputes about the ages of both the Hindu and Judaic religions. It's clear under each denomination that it is laid out in historical order. It's not confusing to have the denominations in alpha order.--] (]) 23:24, 1 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I took out a reference to Bowen, 2003 under the Muslim section. I don't know what book this is! It's not listed anywhere else in the article. I used instead a reference to Brockopp, google books URL and ISBN. ] (]) 14:42, 30 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:We don't have to assert exactly how old they are, there's like 4,000 years between ] and the covenant of Abraham. I don't think there's too much confusion as to which one came first. :) How is the chronological order made clear under each section if the sections are in alpha order? Also, please note that if there was consensus, Andrew c said he didn't mind, HG opposed and I supported - that seems to indicate the consensus was for moving to chrono, which I did and they accepted it. Would you mind discussing your points for alpha order? -] (]) 06:43, 2 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Bible passages used as reference == | |||
== State the foundational principles, not the political polls. == | |||
I took out Canonlawyer79's of the Other Christian section, where he or she inserted a long list of Bible passages to illustrate that the Bible, indeed, included information about abortion. I hold that Bible passages which don't mention abortion and don't have anything about when the fetus is considered a human life, aren't worthy to be used as references here. Too much is open to interpretation; too much a matter of faith. I reverted mostly to the version prior, but with some copyediting. ] (]) 04:24, 5 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
I believe that if possible the foundations of these religions should be stated, rather than the present popular/political opinion. This can be done by researching the core values or holy books pertaining to these religions. Although you cannot find any direct results of searching through the bible, the Qur'an, or Talmud for the word abortion, each has much to say about life, innocence and purpose. In the section regarding Sikhism, this has been done by stating a underlying principle found in the Gurū Granth Sāhib. Buddhism has it’s foundations and those foundations have opinions in regard to life and the purpose of life. Hinduism sounds like it would be difficult to find their scriptural opinion, due to the fact that there are so many. It is insulting to these religions to do polls from people who claim to be from them and not the foundations of the religions themselves regarding life, innocence and purpose or in other words the matter of abortion. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 10:05, 1 March 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:I agree that linking directly to Bible passages is improper and that the interpretation of such passages might vary considerably between Christian sects. However, it might be worth noting that some Christians understand the Bible as speaking against abortion. Some also see Exodus 21:22-25 as potentially allowing abortion. outlines the scriptural case against abortion and contains many of the Bible passages that were referenced previously by Canonlawyer79. Does anyone think it would be worth including a statement like "some Christians interpret the Bible to prohibit abortion."? ] (]) 13:23, 5 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
::That is absolutely valid. If a sect believes a passage says something related to abortion, using a published version of their statement is perfectly fine. The only thing I didn't like was having the Bible passages having no instance of the concept 'abortion' hang out there uninterpreted. ] (]) 15:42, 5 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
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==Indirect abortion== | ||
The article says that the Catholic Church accepts indirect abortion, i.e. in order to save the life of the mother during an ectopic pregnancy. While this is technically accurate, the article should perhaps note that several Catholic leaders have criticized the abusive use of indirect abortion for cases that may not actually be letal to the mother. Church leaders have also denounced the confusion between indirect abortion and therapeutic abortion, since they do not accept the notion that abortions can be therapeutic. See the article ] for more details. ] (]) 22:31, 8 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
== Catholicism and abortion == | |||
The ] contains a specific reference to abortion. I think it should be added somewhere in the Christian section. ] (]) 01:34, 24 November 2008 (UTC) | |||
The Catholic Church doesn't morally accept any abortion for any reason even if the life of the mother is "saved". | |||
==Nuns and abortions== | |||
This is somewhat controversial, but the article should maybe mention those rare cases of nuns supporting abortion or actually having an abortion, for instance in places like Bosnia, Southern Africa or in advocacy groups in industrialized countries ] (]) 01:33, 5 March 2009 (UTC) | |||
Read this: | |||
==Pro-life Muslims== | |||
I found some information here at the Society for the Protection for Unborn Children about some Muslims who are pro-life. There is a notable anti-abortion minority within Islam, it is maybe not very large, but it is fairly significant anyways. ] (]) 02:32, 21 March 2009 (UTC) | |||
From: | |||
==Satanism and abortion== | |||
Fundamental Dignity at Every Stage of Life: An Argument Against Abortion Rights Featuring the Rev. J. Daniel Mindling | |||
It would be interesting if we could write about the relationship between Satanism and abortion. I would suppose that many Satanists are ''pro-choice'', since they might view abortion as a ritual offering to the devil. ] (]) 07:18, 16 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:Wow, that sure sounds like a recipe for violating neutrality, as it's based on a Christian boogeyman view of Satanism that's out of touch with reality and would serve largely to reinforce groundless biases. So feel free to try, but don't be shocked when your changes get rejected. ] (]) 12:39, 16 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:There is an interview with Peter Gilmore on ], but you may be disappointed when you read it (and read about the difference between Satanists and devil worshipers).-] </sup>]] 13:38, 16 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:Go find some neutral and reliable sources. You may also want to read the ] article, which has a number of interesting things to say on the subject of Satanists.--] (]) 14:04, 16 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
Featuring: | |||
==Witchcraft and abortion== | |||
The Rev. J. Daniel Mindling, Professor of Moral Theology, Mount St. Mary's Seminary | |||
Another interesting issue is the historical link that is sometimes made between witchcraft and abortion, the notion that medieval witches were among the early promoters of birth control practices such as contraception and abortion. There is an interesting article here written by canonist Pete Vere that presents information on this topic and argues in favour of such a link. ] (]) 23:37, 21 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
To explore the case against abortion rights, the Pew Forum turns to the Rev. J. Daniel Mindling, a professor of moral philosophy and academic dean at Mount St. Mary's Seminary in Emmetsburg, Md. In addition to his academic duties, Mindling serves as a consultant to the Secretariat for Pro-Life Activities at the U.S. ''Catholic'' Conference of Bishops. | |||
Interviewer: | |||
== Mother == | |||
David Masci, Senior Research Fellow, Pew Forum on Religion & Public Life | |||
'''Let me shift gears on you and ask: Is there ever a case in which terminating a pregnancy is justified? If a woman is going to die without an abortion, is there a valid reason to perform the procedure?''' | |||
Ok, Shrandit, this is your big chance to make your case for calling a woman a mother just because she's pregnant. If you don't make a strong case and gain a consensus, I will report you for edit-warring and POV-pushing. ] (]) 04:00, 24 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:Well then...the phrase "life of the mother" is an accepted term in use. A quick google search found by the well respected centrist Pew Research Center, in the text of bill put forth in South Dakota and a pro-abortion group quotes the term in Irish law . The word "mother" and the term "life of the mother" is widely used when debateing the morality of abortion across the spectrum of standpoint, a few bring mentions are and . The term was also used by , and by . The term is even being used by . If you believe it to be necessary I can take the time to find more and even better examples. | |||
:I think the term "pro-choice" is a text book example of issue framing. Organizations like planned parenthood have spent millions of dollars to brand that word as something I firmly believe it is not. But much as I lament that, they have accomplished their goal. I think the term "pro-choice" is ultimately disingenuous and deceptive but I cannot honestly deny its usage and if a politician describes them self as "pro-choice" that is how they are described on this encyclopedia. - ] (]) 13:12, 24 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
St. Paul is pretty clear: we shouldn't do evil that good would come of it. The dignity of the unborn child is not lost because the mother's life is at risk. The dignity of the unborn child isn't lost because the mother would prefer not to have this child. The dignity of the unborn child isn't something that the mother bestows on the child and that the mother is free to take away at will. | |||
::I would also like to point out that with , it was actually ] who made the change from "mother," which had been in the article for a considerable period of time, to "woman." That seems to me to be a POV edit, considering the term's accepted usage. ] (]) 22:37, 24 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::Misplaced Pages is obligated to be neutral, whereas the rest of the world is not. A woman who is pregnant is simply a woman who is pregnant. If she had given birth in the past then she is coincidentally a mother. Otherwise, she is not. ] (]) 02:23, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::Question- What do you call the person who impregnated the woman? The only term I've heard is father. By analogy, the woman is the mother. Secondly, what makes you say mother is not a neutral term? As Shrandit mentioned above, the pro-choice Barack Obama uses the term mother. Different sources will use different terms, but that does not make one term preferred over the other. The term mother establishes a relationship between the woman and the fetus. This makes the term mother more descriptive. Words should be used to describe something as accurately as possible.] (]) 02:40, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::Word. "Life of the mother" is a neutral phrase in use by folks as liberal as President Obama. - ] (]) 04:56, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
'''But if a mother dies because she hasn't received an abortion, her fetus may die as well. So some would argue that it would be better to abort the fetus and save the mother's life as opposed to losing both of them.''' | |||
(undent)I agree with Schrandit. The phrase "life of the mother" is a well-known colloquialism that remains accepted terminology, even among pro choice advocates. The ''Roe v. Wade'' decision that legalized abortion uses the word "mother" 43 times with reference to a pregnant woman, and that's just in the majority opinion. | |||
Let's use the word "murder" just because of its shock value. This person is going to die unless we murder this other person? Would it be okay, then, to murder? Would it be okay for me to murder to save one life or two lives or three? How many lives would it take before it would be okay for me to murder? I think we are not free to change the moral quality of the act and say, "Well, I guess it's not murder then because something good may come of it." Murder is always wrong. --] (]) 22:53, 9 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
Additionally, dictionaries and other reference books often use the word "mother" prenatally, e.g.: | |||
:Thank you Rcatholic. This is exactly what the of the article says. To quote the article "The Roman Catholic Church believes that life begins at conception and, as such, opposes abortion under all circumstances." However, it think is important that information about the ] be included in the article, so that people unfamiliar with the subject understand it. I don't think the Catholic Church's position on abortion could be more clearly and concisely put than it is now. -] (]) 23:12, 9 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
<br>'''' (defining placenta as a "temporary organ joining the mother and fetus"); | |||
<br>'''' (placenta permits "metabolic interchage between fetus and mother", and also defining quickening as "signs of fetal life felt by the mother"); | |||
<br>'''' ("nutrients and oxygen in the mother's blood pass across the placenta to the fetus"); | |||
<br>'''', Department of Medical Oncology, University of Newcastle Upon Tyne ("movement of foetus in the womb perceived by the mother"); | |||
<br>'''' (defining quickening as "signs of life felt by the mother as a result of fetal movements"); | |||
<br>'''', Princeton University ("mother first feels the movements of the fetus"); | |||
<br>'''' ("motion of a fetus in the uterus felt by the mother"). | |||
::If your going to talk about "double-effect," you also need to mention that abortion is considered an intrinsic evil. In other words, according to the CC, direct abortion is ALWAYS morally wrong--regardless of intention. Also, isn't it kind of stupid to say that the CC "believes that life begins at conception" since it is a scientific fact that life begins at conception? Better to say, "human life" begins at conception, but even this is misleading. If a an organism has human DNA, what else can it be but a human life? What really needs to be stated is that the CC believes that human personhood begins at conception. ] (]) 15:56, 9 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
The idea that perfectly normal English words should be banned from this article because they've somehow become contaminated by being used on one side or the other of a political controversy seems misguided to me. | |||
:::Your terminology hits the point on the head, LCP, but most people (strangely) do not use it when discussing this matter. Most pro-choicers I've spoken with will openly deny that life begins at conception, even if what they REALLY MEAN is to deny that personhood begins at conception. -] (]) 16:15, 9 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::I just took out the third paragraph in the Catholic section as its detail was more appropriate to the article ]. I also removed mention of the 5th commandment (the one against murder) because the catechism reference doesn't directly connect the commandment with abortion. Having the two concepts brought together here was in violation of ]. The source says abortion is a grave offense and morally evil; those words are retained in the section here. The third paragraph made the Catholic section too large, especially in light of having a link to the main article. Similarly-sized sections for Hinduism and Islam are the way they are because there is no link to a main article. ] (]) 17:25, 9 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
Susan Faludi, in her book "The Undeclared War Against American Women" (1991) : "The antiabortion iconography in the last decade featured the fetus but never the mother." Note that the very pro-choice Faludi uses the term , whereas removing it from this article would give the deliberate impression that motherhood does not begin until birth or later.] (]) 20:24, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::The pregnant woman is ''allowed'' to round up because it is her choice that will make it become true. In fact, motherhood does not begin at fertilization, else we'd consider many, many more women to be mothers, particularly since the majority of fertilizations do not produce babies. ] (]) 20:54, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::Cites?] (]) 20:59, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::For which? ] (]) 21:00, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::For what you said at 20:54.] (]) 21:01, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::I thought this was common knowledge. ] (]) 21:05, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::: does not mention the word "mother" or any variant of it. merely says that miscarriage does not end the chance of motherhood in the future. Neither seems to support the argument you were making at 20:54.] (]) 21:11, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::::I linked these to support the biological fact that most fertilizations do not lead to live births. Please stick to the topic. ] (]) 21:15, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::::And, incidently, that quote does support my logic. If miscarriage does not end the chance of motherhood in the future, it means that merely having a fertilized egg which self-aborted (or failed to implant in the first place) does not suffice for motherhood. ] (]) 21:17, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::Maybe I read it wrong but site number 1 said that 50-60% of ''first'' pregnancies end in miscarriage and site number 2 said 1 in 5 pregnancies end in miscarriage. - ] (]) 21:19, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::Yes, you should do a more careful reading of these two articles, then read some more until you understand the issue. For example, http://miscarriage.about.com/od/onetimemiscarriages/p/chemicalpreg.htm cites a 70% figure, but most just say "more than half". ] (]) 21:29, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::TruthIIPower, I'm aware that most fertilizations do not lead to live births. You said much more than that at 20:54. You said that a "pregnant woman is allowed to round up" and "motherhood does not begin at fertilization". Do you have cites for those assertions, per ]? Also, losing a baby due to ] or a variety of other causes does not necessarily end the chance of motherhood in the future; that fact does not imply that motherhood did not occur in the past.] (]) 21:22, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::Good edits for the most part. Two things. First, I'm not so sure inclusion of the 5th commandment is WP:SYNTH since the section of the Catechism that contains abortion begins with the 5th commandment, implying that everything in that section pertains to the 5th commandment. Second, I think some mention of Catholic Social teaching (the third paragraph deleted) needs to be included since it is unique and an integral part of Catholic Teaching on abortion. Other religions say make statements about the morality of abortion; as far as I know, only Catholicism states directly that the state has a positive role in protecting the unborn. I wouldn't object to a shorter version. Thoughts?] (]) 21:21, 9 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
(unindent)Ferrylodge, please read what I wrote. Even the quote YOU CHOSE supports my contention. ] (]) 21:31, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::Ah, I see the 5th commandment section. The whole page is about the 5th.... Regarding the the church's position on the state, perhaps a single sentence can be introduced to the first paragraph stating the uniqueness of their stance. ] (]) 14:42, 10 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
::The quote I chose at 21:22 was quoting '''''you'''''. You are not a ]. I'm simply asking if you can cite a ] to back up your statements that I quoted: "pregnant woman is allowed to round up....motherhood does not begin at fertilization". I've not only been reading what you write, but also following the links that you provide.] (]) 21:34, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
== External Links == | |||
:::The second cite I gave said "A miscarriage is a natural occurrence in most cases and is in no way a end sentence for the chances of motherhood." and this is what you paraphrased. I explained how this tacitly recognizes that motherhood requires more than pregnancy. What part of this remains unclear to you? ] (]) 21:51, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
Per ], I think the big lists of orgs that support or oppose abortion should go. The list is too long, the propensity for attempting to 'balance' the numbers is too strong, many of the organizations are not particularly notable, and they do not add significant neutral material to the article. The BBC link presents a good survey of the topic and is appropriate. Any objections to removing the 'for/against' list entirely? --] (]) 21:18, 17 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
:I'm all for deleting the for and against sections in their entirety, though it will be tragic to lose the juxtaposition of "Christians for Life" followed immediately by "Pagans for Life". | |||
::::Reliable sources often discuss women who have had children wanting another chance at motherhood. Just because a woman has had a child in the past does not mean she cannot have a chance of motherhood in the future. Anyway, I would hesitate to consider your source reliable, especially given that it incorrectly says "a end" instead of "an end".] (]) 22:19, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
:... ;^) ... ] (]) 21:42, 17 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
::Yeah, Misplaced Pages is not a link directory. These links don't discuss the topic of Religion and abortion, so much as they, in a manner, illustrate specific POV aspects. It is clearly a magnet for more similar links, and it already contains non-notable organizations. I'd say remove all links that do not discuss, in an encyclopedic or at least in depth fashion, the topic of religion and abortion (and not just one specific religion and abortion). -] </sup>]] 00:44, 18 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::I'm going to try this again. Consider that pro-choice advocates have been known to use the term "anti-choice" to refer to pro-lifers. While a strong argument can be made in favor of this usage and it is quite common, it is not sufficiently neutral for our needs. ] (]) 22:25, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::::Agreed. See ]: "When naming or writing an article about specific groups or their members always use the terminology which those individuals or organizations themselves use." That applies to self-identification, not to everything else under discussion.] (]) 22:29, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
=="Human sex and sexuality" book == | |||
:::::::Indeed, political terms like "assault weapons" are acceptable when in common usage. Our "Pro-choice" President uses the term "mother". What higher form of cultural acceptance is there? - ] (]) 22:32, 25 April 2009 (UTC) | |||
This book has one sentence that is not sourced and is not explained, that claims most religions are against abortion. If we are going to make that claim, we need a much better source.--] (]) 23:04, 19 August 2009 (UTC) | |||
==Mother v. Pregnant Woman, the saga continues== | |||
If you have time, please take a look at ] discussion regarding the debate on the talk page for Wikiproject Abortion. - ] (]) 18:48, 23 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
:Not me. I came here answering a request for a ], not because the issue of abortion is high on my list of interests. My only connection to the abortion pages on WP is this one with its 3O request and any page in which ] is wrongly portrayed as holding an abortion-related opinion that could be carried forward with full relevance and applied to the modern world, e.g. ]. I don't need to add the abortion wikiproject's pages to my already-too-busy editing schedule. I think that the word "mother" reflects pro-lifer bias and carries emotion-laden propaganda baggage only if it is allowed by other people to be taken away from them and so recast in nuance. I would rather see all sides of the issue continue to use the word in its historically sloppy and imprecise manner. This way, it has many meanings and implications, including that of a female who begets a child (Webster's New Collegiate Dictionary, 1979). ] (]) 23:44, 27 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
::Thank you for sharing your view. While I can't compel you to join us on the project page, it really is the place to go if you want your voice to be heard. ] (]) 23:56, 27 November 2009 (UTC) | |||
== Word choices and references == | |||
A minor edit war has developed in the last week between IronAngelAlice and two editors, Binksternet and Boromir123. The conflict, as I see it, is not so deep-rooted that we cannot work it out equably. It appears to be a matter of wording, mainly, with little change of references. Here are the versions, with IronAngelAlice's paragraphs in navy blue, and the former text in green: | |||
===Christianity=== | |||
<font color="Navy" face="Times New Roman">The intersection of Christianity and abortion has a long and complex history though there is no mention of abortion in the Christian Bible. At different times, early Christians held different beliefs about abortion, and most contemporary Christian denominations have nuanced positions, thoughts and teachings about abortion. More generally, some Christian denominations can be considered pro-life while others may be considered pro-choice. Additionally, there are sizable minorities in all denominations that disagree with their denomination's stance on abortion.</font> | |||
<font color="green" face="Times New Roman">There is no direct mention in the Christian Bible about abortion. Christian thought on the matter had its beginnings in Judaism, after which both strict and lenient views on abortion were voiced over next two millennia. Many Christian denominations currently have nuanced positions, thoughts and teachings concerning abortion, especially in extenuating circumstances. | |||
The Catholic Church and Orthodox Church oppose abortion in every situation, but permit acts which indirectly result in the death of the fetus in the case where the mother's life is threatened. The Catholic Church regards the moment of conception as the start of life and therefore regards all types of abortion as equivalent to murder. Most Southern Baptists agree with the Catholic Church's teaching about abortion. More generally, some Christian traditions can be considered pro-life while others may be considered pro-choice.</font> | |||
;Refs: | |||
* by Odd Magne Bakke | |||
* | |||
* by Kristin Luker, University of California Press | |||
* Pew Forum | |||
* USA Today | |||
*http://www.serborth.org/01222009.html | |||
*http://www.goarch.org/ourfaith/ourfaith7101 | |||
*http://www.catholic.com/library/Abortion.asp | |||
*, ''Allocution to Large Families, Nov. 26, 1951'', ] | |||
====Comments on Christianity section==== | |||
*I like IronAngelAlice's bit about "sizable minorities" that disagree. I am on the fence regarding the need for two paragraphs, the second one providing information about Catholic and Baptist thought. It looks to me like we should either expand this paragraph to include more Protestant views, or trim it back. ] (]) 00:10, 31 March 2010 (UTC) | |||
**I also think the revised version relies too heavily on Catholic, Orthodox and Southern Baptist interpretations. While these interpretations are important, they are not the only interpretations.--] (]) 21:04, 31 March 2010 (UTC) | |||
::I like your sizable minorities edit as well Iron Angel. I do think a sentence mentioning Catholic and Orthodox church views is important. At the same time, mentioning the pro choice position of the Methodist, Lutheran, and other protestant demoninations would be fair. | |||
===Hinduism=== | |||
<font color="Navy" face="Times New Roman">Hindus hold varying stances on abortion. Some Hindu theologians believe personhood begins at 3 months and develops through to 5 months of gestation, possibly implying permitting abortion up to the third month and considering any abortion past the third month to be destruction of the soul's current incarnate body. Other Hindus have suggested that abortion, especially the abortion pill, is a major step towards women's empowerment. Hindus generally tend to support abortion in cases where the mother's life is at risk or when the fetus has a severe developmental abnormality. Hindu scholars and women's rights advocates have supported bans on Sex-selective Abortions. Some Hindus have argued that contraception such as emergency contraceptives are a major step towards women's empowerment and the prevention of abortions.</font> | |||
<font color="green" face="Times New Roman">Individual Hindus hold varying stances on abortion; however, according to the BBC, traditional Hindu texts and teachings condemn elective abortions. Hindus generally tend to support abortion in cases where the mother's life is at risk or when the fetus has a severe developmental abnormality. Hindu scholars and women's rights advocates have supported bans on Sex-selective Abortions. A minority of Hindu theologians believe personhood begins at 3 months and therefore considering any abortion past the third month to be destruction of the soul's current incarnate body. Some Hindus have argued that contraception such as emergency contraceptives are a major step towards women's empowerment and the prevention of abortions.</font> | |||
;Refs | |||
*http://www.bbc.co.uk/religion/religions/hinduism/texts/texts.shtml | |||
*http://www.eubios.info/EJ144/ej144j.htm | |||
*Chapter 1: Dilemmas of Life and Death: Hindu Ethics in a North American Context | Date: 1995 | Author: Crawford, S. Cromwell | |||
*http://www.thehindu.com/2009/07/30/stories/2009073060530400.htm | |||
*http://www.thehindu.com/2009/04/01/stories/2009040150350300.htm | |||
*http://www.hinduonnet.com/2003/03/09/stories/2003030907001000.htm | |||
====Comments on Hindu section==== | |||
*Aside from the grammar and format problems in both versions, the entry from IronAngelAlice has to its advantage the revelation of the abortion pill, though it founders on repetition of empowerment. Both versions have some theologians saying personhood begins at three months, but what about those who believe differently? In contrast to 'some' theologians, the remainder would be the majority. ] (]) 00:10, 31 March 2010 (UTC) | |||
*Hindu texts are explicit in their denouncement of abortion but in reality abortion is widespread as a means to ensure male progeny in India. "The Hindu" however is a secular, non religious newspaper that has no religious connotation. | |||
===Islam=== | |||
<font color="Navy" face="Times New Roman">Although there are different opinions among Islamic scholars about when life begins and when abortion is permissible, most agree that the termination of a pregnancy after four months - the point at which, in Islam, a fetus is thought to become a living soul - is not permissible. Many Islamic thinkers contend that in cases prior to four months of gestation, abortion should be permissible only in instances in which the mother's life is in danger or in cases of rape. | |||
Among Muslims, abortion is Haram or forbidden in most cases but is acceptable depending on the circumstances around the pregnancy. In the case where the mother's life is threatened by the pregnancy, Muslim jurists agree that abortion is allowed based on the principle that "the greater evil should be warded off by the lesser evil ." In these cases the physician is considered a better judge than the scholar.</font> | |||
<font color="green" face="Times New Roman">Among Muslims, abortion is Haram or forbidden in most cases but is acceptable depending on the circumstances around the pregnancy. In the case where the mother's life is threatened by the pregnancy, Muslim jurists agree that abortion is allowed based on the principle that "the greater evil should be warded off by the lesser evil ." In these cases the physician is considered a better judge than the scholar. Additionally, many jurists consider an abortion within the first 120 days of the pregnancy permissible based on a number of reasons. | |||
Although there are different opinions among Islamic scholars about when life begins and when abortion is permissible, most agree that the termination of a pregnancy after four months – the point at which, in Islam, a fetus is thought to become a living soul – is not permissible. Many Islamic thinkers contend that in cases prior to four months of gestation, abortion should be permissible only in instances in which the mother's life is in danger or in cases of rape.</font> | |||
;Refs | |||
*http://www.bbc.co.uk/religion/religions/islam/islamethics/abortion_1.shtml | |||
* | |||
====Comments on Islam section==== | |||
Poor quality refs, swapped paragraphs with slight word changes. This whole section could use a shot in the arm. ] (]) 00:10, 31 March 2010 (UTC) | |||
**Again, I think the version I have been reverting to is more neutral. There is no single (only) belief among Muslims about abortion. To say otherwise is disingenuous. --] (]) 21:08, 31 March 2010 (UTC) | |||
::Perhaps, but I think most sources state that Islam is anti-abortion. I have no problem with including both sides but notice that most Muslim nations forbid abortion except for life, rape, etc (not saying however that abortions don't occur in such countries!). | |||
== Christianity Section == | |||
It is quite clear from the references that not all scholars believe all early Christians believed that abortion is a sin. So to say early Christians "declared" abortion a sin is not in the least bit accurate. I changed the paragraph accordingly, using references of course. It also seems to me that '''''leading''''' the second paragraph with a list all the denominations that are pro-life is a bit much.. Therefore, I changed that paragraph as well, using references. ] (]) 07:52, 30 September 2011 (UTC) | |||
:It is certainly true that not ''all'' scholars believe that ''all'' early Christians considered abortion a sin. And there is no doubt that not ''all'' scholars believe that ''all'' early Christians considered that abortion, even early abortion, was not a sin. With regard to denominations, surely a mention of relative weight is decidedly appropriate when discussing Christianity and abortion. | |||
:Where previously proponents of one point of view were presented as "finding" and "noting", while proponents of another were presented as merely "claiming", I have made the verbs uniform. ] (]) 18:49, 2 October 2011 (UTC) | |||
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Could someone please archive this page, and close the sections now known to be authorered by a disruptive sockpuppet? Thanks to everyone with a level head, and especially our third opinion, Binksternet.--Tznkai (talk) 15:07, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Done. Cheers! Binksternet (talk) 15:45, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
'Mother' vs 'pregnant woman'
I noticed that a lot of our sources use the word 'mother' when talking about a pregnant woman in relation to the subject of abortion, especially the religious sources. I think we need to stay true to the source when quoting it, and not switch terminology. If the source says 'pregnant woman' or 'woman', then use that terminology. If the source says 'mother', use that. This should save us the trouble of trying to decide what is politically correct, as a recently-banned editor was saying. Binksternet (talk) 18:11, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- That should work. In general, if it's a first-time pregnancy, the expression you typically hear is "She is / I am going to be a mother." Baseball Bugs carrots 18:57, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Sure, we ought to track the sources, and we shouldn't pick out the sources that like the terminology we prefer. One typically hears stuff like "Abortion is sometimes needed to save the life of the mother."Ferrylodge (talk) 19:04, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Yep, that's true. So go with what the source says, and we're covered. Baseball Bugs carrots 19:19, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Here's another wrinkle: What if she's 13. Is that a "woman"? Baseball Bugs carrots 19:19, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Sounds like a fair compromise to me. About that 13 year old - God only knows. - Schrandit (talk) 19:28, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- The term 'woman' has sometimes been used to include minor females who are showing womanly traits. Being pregnant qualifies. Binksternet (talk) 19:33, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Sounds like a fair compromise to me. About that 13 year old - God only knows. - Schrandit (talk) 19:28, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Here's another wrinkle: What if she's 13. Is that a "woman"? Baseball Bugs carrots 19:19, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Yep, that's true. So go with what the source says, and we're covered. Baseball Bugs carrots 19:19, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Sure, we ought to track the sources, and we shouldn't pick out the sources that like the terminology we prefer. One typically hears stuff like "Abortion is sometimes needed to save the life of the mother."Ferrylodge (talk) 19:04, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
<-- What if the source uses "unborn baby", "murder" etc.? It isn't as simple as just deferring to what the source uses. |→ Spaully† 11:57, 30 April 2009 (GMT)
- If, for example, a source referring to an abortion in the USA is calling it "murder", then it's probably not qualified as a source here other than being cited as a given church's opinion on the matter. "Murder" is a legal term, and if an abortion was performed legally, then by definition it is NOT "murder", even if anti-abortionists think it is. Baseball Bugs carrots 13:24, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
It's interesting to look through all of the abortion related articles for which terms they use. The more scientifically oriented ones only use mother when describing a woman with a child. Any religious sections tend to use 'mother' more liberally. I don't know if this mainly reflects the type of editors for each article or the predominant use in the different fields. 'Mother' is generally used fairly sparingly throughout the articles, again this probably reflects the type of editor as opposed to a conscious consensus. |→ Spaully† 12:10, 30 April 2009 (GMT)
- I think 'mother' should only be used in specific circumstances. Having looked through all of WPs abortion related articles they read well and the meaning is clear where 'woman' is used, or if necessary at the start of a paragraph 'pregnant woman'. Obviously when quoting sections of sources whatever they use should stand. On definitions:
- Now clearly mother is used in other circumstances, in conversation one might refer to a pregnant woman as a mother, but only where you are sure she is planning to become one (or I hope so if you have any tact!). I will look through the article, and sources if possible, and think on it a bit more. |→ Spaully† 12:34, 30 April 2009 (GMT)
- I'm an editor who usually works on military history articles where very strict standards are applied to articles. I don't suggest using 'mother' in place of 'woman' because I'm friendly to religion, and I don't suggest it lightly. I think the article should, consciously, choose to reflect the sources. For instance, the source I just added which reverted your change of 'mother' to 'woman' under the Muslim section, is a book about Islamic thought regarding death. Editorial discussion in that book refers to 'pregnant woman', but phrases such as "life of the mother" and "health of the mother" appear when Islamic ideas are discussed. You'll see "The mother cannot be sacrificed for the child" and "the mother is the origin of the fetus" if you click on that link. I think it quite appropriate that wiki articles reflect in tone and style their sources. Binksternet (talk) 14:58, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thinking about it, the authors of many of these sources will themselves be from cultures where the default is to bear the child unless the woman is in grave danger; this will lead them to use terminology that to others may seem biased. It is fine to use sources as the basis for the decision, but to always bear in mind that wikipedia articles have to retain a neutral point of view whereas many of the sources do not. I will look for a discussion on this point, as a source that suggests the neutral ground for wording such things would be ideal, though it probably doesn't exist. |→ Spaully† 15:17, 30 April 2009 (GMT)
- One thing to consider is the overall usage within the article. If it sometimes says "mother" and sometimes says "pregnant woman", generally in reference to the way a source says it, that would tend to defuse the bias allegation that Spotfixer/TIIP was harping on. If it's all of one or the other, deliberately, it tends to look "politically correct" (toward one side or the other) and tends to evoke neutrality complaints. Baseball Bugs carrots 15:21, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Just so y'all are aware, similar issues have come up a lot over the years. For example, there's the conception vs. fertilization controversy, and the womb vs. uterus controversy.Ferrylodge (talk) 15:49, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Now you know why I don't edit these articles. "womb" vs. "uterus"? Where I come from, they're the same thing, just a colloquial term vs. a medical term. Good grief. Baseball Bugs carrots 15:57, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, it's pretty silly for anyone to try to have an article only use one or the other of those terms. But there does get to be a legitimate concern about terms like "unborn", and even more of a concern about terms like "baby" (I haven't taken any position on those two yet).Ferrylodge (talk) 16:03, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- I think the core problem is that in casual conversation with a pregant woman / mother-to-be, these terms are used interchangeably with no issues. It's on the "abortion on demand" issue that the two sides have tried to co-opt particular terms for their versions of what I call left-wing and right-wing "political correctness". These pages are basically a mine field. Baseball Bugs carrots 16:07, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, it's pretty silly for anyone to try to have an article only use one or the other of those terms. But there does get to be a legitimate concern about terms like "unborn", and even more of a concern about terms like "baby" (I haven't taken any position on those two yet).Ferrylodge (talk) 16:03, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Now you know why I don't edit these articles. "womb" vs. "uterus"? Where I come from, they're the same thing, just a colloquial term vs. a medical term. Good grief. Baseball Bugs carrots 15:57, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Just so y'all are aware, similar issues have come up a lot over the years. For example, there's the conception vs. fertilization controversy, and the womb vs. uterus controversy.Ferrylodge (talk) 15:49, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- One thing to consider is the overall usage within the article. If it sometimes says "mother" and sometimes says "pregnant woman", generally in reference to the way a source says it, that would tend to defuse the bias allegation that Spotfixer/TIIP was harping on. If it's all of one or the other, deliberately, it tends to look "politically correct" (toward one side or the other) and tends to evoke neutrality complaints. Baseball Bugs carrots 15:21, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
(outdent)Hey, just wanted to point out that "life of the mother" isn't just a colloquialism, it is used in medicine and has been encoded in law. Frankly, I prefer the term "mother" unless the term "pregnant woman" seems to fit better in the sentence but I'll take what we have now for the sake of compromise, and of course, all this is up for discussion. - Schrandit (talk) 03:49, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
- This is pretty simple, really. If I get pregnant, I become a pregnant woman. If nine months pass and I have a live birth, I become a mother. If I have an abortion or the pregnancy otherwise ends before then, I do not become a mother. Of course, if I had already been a mother to begin with, I would remain one.
- Yes, sometimes people call pregnant women "mothers", but this isn't accurate or neutral. I've been very careful to leave this usage alone when it's in a direct quote, but otherwise, I've fixed it wherever I've seen it. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 00:29, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- Accurate? It is quite accurate to call a pregnant woman a mother if you are a religious scholar. Read some scholarly religious works and you'll see. Binksternet (talk) 00:53, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- As I said, when literally quoting a religious tract, I've left the word "mother" in place. However, it's not neutral and its accuracy is clearly controversial. Nobody disputes that a woman who is pregnant is a pregnant woman, so this term is perfectly safe to use. On the other hand, medical practice is to avoid using it except where the woman has had a live birth. Here's one citation: http://www.find-health-articles.com/rec_pub_12696783-words-matter-nomenclature-communication-perinatal-medicine.htm 69.121.221.174 (talk) 01:05, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- And here's the full article, in case you don't have access as a student: http://books.google.com/books?id=8pSjRf_GSd0C&pg=PA158&lpg=PA158&dq=Words+matter++Nomenclature+and+communication+in+perinatal&source=bl&ots=3Hg41vdg-E&sig=ADfvzSjdXvWDtaTi_7w99gNs0H8&hl=en&ei=6sXXSqL-OJDclAfl1LmhAQ&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=6&ved=0CC0Q6AEwBQ 69.121.221.174 (talk) 01:09, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- To make this more fair, I'm not going to expect you to read the whole thing just to understand my point. Instead, I'll quote a relevant sample:
- "The terms 'fetus' and 'pregnant woman' are grammatically more correct than 'baby' and 'mother'. The latter names are used by some (including antiabortionists) euphemistically with a more sinister motivation — namely, to blur reality. Antiabortionists also use 'baby' and 'mother' as 'linguistic fig leaves' to suggest that abortion is wrong: while the motivation of doctors using these terms is likely to differ from antiabortionists, it may be misinterpreted by patients."
- Please feel free to read the whole thing so you can be sure that I'm not quoting out of context, but I think this is an overwhelmingly powerful argument both for accuracy and neutrality. If for some reason a local majority disagrees with me, I will gladly take this to the next level. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 01:23, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- To make this more fair, I'm not going to expect you to read the whole thing just to understand my point. Instead, I'll quote a relevant sample:
- Is the article using that reference, the Textbook of perinatal medicine, for information about religious thought relative to abortion? No, we are using secondary sources which discuss religious thought. I think it perfectly appropriate to follow the source material in each case. Binksternet (talk) 01:28, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, but I think you might be confused about the context. We're discussing this terminology issue here because it's one of the articles affected and it was suggested by User:Kevinkor2, but the dispute has spanned many pages, most of which are about abortion but have nothing to do with religion. Even though this page is about religion, it's also bound by the same basic requirements for neutrality, so this medical textbook is entirely relevant. If this confuses you, we can move this discussion to Talk:Abortion, a more neutral venue. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 01:46, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
Again, many laws and most news reports use the term "life of the mother". This term is by no means bound to religious sources. - Schrandit (talk) 03:20, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- That's great, and when we quote these laws, I'm careful to leave the original text alone. However, Misplaced Pages is neither a religious text nor a lawbook, and unlike either, it is obligated to be neutral. I have to say that, in the end, your argument just doesn't hold up. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 03:41, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- Right, so we shouldn't use the term the sources use, we shouldn't use the term religious use and we shouldn't use the term the law uses but we should use the term you use? Why? - Schrandit (talk) 03:51, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- Correct. As I already explained, we're held to a higher standard.
- If it helps, I'll give you an example from journalism class. When OJ was on trial, the media was obligated to report that a police officer had used a particular racial epitaph. The term was offensive, of course, but it's not like they could have just pretended that he'd said "African-American" or any other neutral phrase. However, they didn't use that word any more than they had to, and then only in the context of what the cop said. And they never ever casually referred to OJ by that term.
- In the same way, we are obligated to use "mother" when quoting some priest or politician putting their dishonest little spin on things, but we're not allowed to do as they do, because we're better than them. Aren't we? 69.121.221.174 (talk) 04:26, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- I guess when OJ comes to trial I won't say mean things? These terms has legal meanings, medical meanings, religious meanings, some often deviate from the technical to account for this, Assault weapon springs to mind and I'm sure many other examples can be dragged forward if necessary. Yes, these words can be politically and emotionally charged and you want us to use the ones you favor without any substantive reason to deviate from from law/religion/medicine/reporting. - Schrandit (talk) 04:54, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- I have not been able to come up with any understanding of your response that refutes the need for WP:NPOV. Please stop harming Misplaced Pages. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 05:52, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- Well then, I'll try to be more clear - this is not an issue of POV. "Life of the mother" is used by the law, by religion, by medicine, by the news and in common use - so we use it. - Schrandit (talk) 05:57, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- I have not been able to come up with any understanding of your response that refutes the need for WP:NPOV. Please stop harming Misplaced Pages. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 05:52, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- I guess when OJ comes to trial I won't say mean things? These terms has legal meanings, medical meanings, religious meanings, some often deviate from the technical to account for this, Assault weapon springs to mind and I'm sure many other examples can be dragged forward if necessary. Yes, these words can be politically and emotionally charged and you want us to use the ones you favor without any substantive reason to deviate from from law/religion/medicine/reporting. - Schrandit (talk) 04:54, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- It is common for both religious scholars and laypersons to refer to a woman as a mother if she is planning on having a baby or if she has already conceived. This law firm uses the word 'mother' in discussing dead women who might have their eggs fertilized posthumously. The term mother is used very widely before, during and after pregnancy to refer to the woman involved. Binksternet (talk) 15:27, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry I wasn't able to respond earlier, but there was a minor mix-up that prevented me from doing so.
- Briefly, I don't see how repeating a refuted argument changes the consensus. What terms a source uses is only relevant when they are directly quoted. Otherwise, we are obligated to follow WP:NPOV, and the citation I gave above confirms that "mother" is POV when applied to a pregnant woman. I hope you understand why your opinion cannot prevail in this matter, and not take it personally. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 23:11, 14 November 2009 (UTC)
- Consensus is reached per article, not per general subject. Sometimes, a wiki-wide consensus can be reached regarding all articles that fall under the purview of a Wikiproject. In a case like this article which is connected to several Wikiprojects, a consensus must happen at the article itself. Let me tally the !votes here and see where we are so far:
- Mother: Binksternet, Baseball Bugs, Ferrylodge, Schrandit
- Pregnant woman: 69.121.221.174
- Undecided: Spaully
- Without a formal RfC, just going by this one discussion thread, it looks like the "mothers" have it. Binksternet (talk) 01:41, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- Consensus is reached per article, not per general subject. Sometimes, a wiki-wide consensus can be reached regarding all articles that fall under the purview of a Wikiproject. In a case like this article which is connected to several Wikiprojects, a consensus must happen at the article itself. Let me tally the !votes here and see where we are so far:
- It is common for both religious scholars and laypersons to refer to a woman as a mother if she is planning on having a baby or if she has already conceived. This law firm uses the word 'mother' in discussing dead women who might have their eggs fertilized posthumously. The term mother is used very widely before, during and after pregnancy to refer to the woman involved. Binksternet (talk) 15:27, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
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If you want to take this to an RfC, then by all means do so. However, I do wish to remind you that WP:NPOV does not change from article to article, nor is it meaningful to select an article where a particular viewpoint predominates and treat this as a genuine consensus. This is not a vote, but if it were, it would only matter if everyone got to participate.
I will also add that no amount of !VOTES can form a consensus powerful enough to override the pillars of Misplaced Pages, such as WP:NPOV. I've shown by unrefuted argument and unimpeached WP:RS that calling a woman a "mother" when she becomes pregnant is unacceptable. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 02:57, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- I don't agree. A woman who is carrying a zygote or greater in her uterus is commonly called a mother by herself, her family, her friends and her society. Both religious and lay people all over the world casually use the word "mother" to describe a pregnant woman. What's the evil you see? What's the non-neutral point of view? Where is WP:NPOV trespassed? You are coming at this from a black-white either-or perspective where pro-lifers are pitted in a death grip against pro-choicers. To me, this stance you hold is the non-neutral one! You have found a medico-political source that says the word "mother" has become a tool of pro-lifers who wish to skew opinion their way, and thus it should not be used by anyone who is neutral, and yet people of all stripes continue to say "mother" when they are conversing about pregnancy.
- You might be surprised to find that I count myself a pro-choicer who uses the word "mother" to describe a pregnant woman just as casually as the other billions of people on earth who do the same. I don't see why I should let pro-lifers and reactionary medical staff skew or restrict the time-honored and established usage. Binksternet (talk) 05:51, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- Rather than repeat myself, I will point you to the article I mentioned earlier and recommend that you read it. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 06:16, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- That's one person writing a prescriptive text which aims to change word choice among medical personnel. Its mere presence proves my point: people commonly use the word "mother". If they didn't, the author would not have seen fit to write against it. Binksternet (talk) 15:19, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure if you read the same article I did. The point wasn't that you should never use "mother", but that you should recognize that applying it to anyone other than woman who has given birth to children saddles it with connotative baggage. This baggage may well be acceptable in the case of a woman who decides she wants to get pregnant and have children. It's just an innocent truncation of "mother-to-be" to "mother". However, applying it to women with unwanted pregnancies is a different matter entirely, and it's precisely what we're dealing with when talking about abortion.
- Fundamentally, your argument is not so much wrong as irrelevant. It doesn't even matter that people "commonly" misuse "mother". People commonly do all sorts of things that are entirely unacceptable on Misplaced Pages, and this doesn't sway us as all. What matters is whether calling a woman who has an abortion a "mother" is at all reasonable for articles here, and it's simply not. The bias is so obvious that it's even commented on in Pro-life#Term_controversy. To use terms from the pro-life framing of the issue as if they were in some way neutral violates WP:NPOV, and nothing you said has changed this conclusion. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 15:33, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- The small mention of mother at Pro-life#Term_controversy is poorly written and incomplete. Yes, pro-lifers use the term, but everybody does. Your recent addition to that article of the prescriptive word-use instructions for medical personnel still does not have any relevance on this page.
- I have two dictionaries on my shelf: one is Webster's New Collegiate from 1979 and the other is Oxford Illustrated from 1985. In both, the word "mother" has many uses, far more than just a woman who has given birth. The first definition in Webster's is simple: "a female parent." We turn to "parent" to find that it means "one who begets or brings forth offspring." "Beget"? Now we have the word "mother" meaning "a female who begets or brings forth offspring." To me, that opens up the possibilities. As well, "mother" can be defined in more general terms as the "source, origin." Clearly, the word "mother" can include a woman who has provided ova for fertilization. The word is not limited to its primary meaning of a woman who has given birth to a child. Binksternet (talk) 16:08, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- That's one person writing a prescriptive text which aims to change word choice among medical personnel. Its mere presence proves my point: people commonly use the word "mother". If they didn't, the author would not have seen fit to write against it. Binksternet (talk) 15:19, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- Rather than repeat myself, I will point you to the article I mentioned earlier and recommend that you read it. 69.121.221.174 (talk) 06:16, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- Even if it were true -- and it's not -- just because "everybody does it" doesn't mean that we get to break WP:NPOV by doing it, too. What people actually do is use the word "mother" only when they know that the woman intends to carry the pregnancy to term and therefore become a mother. Aside from thoughtless people, the exceptions are pro-life advocates, who use it in a dishonest way (just as the Term Controversy paragraph explained) to exert pressure.
- Careful and honest speakers recognize that intentions don't guarantee results, so they speak of "prospective mothers" and "mothers to be", knowing that pregnancies can end all by themselves. When talking about egg donors, they usually just say "egg donor", and if they use "mother" at all, it's likewise with a qualifier, such as "biological mother".
- The bottom line is that, if I become pregnant and decide to get an abortion, I am at no point a mother, and characterizing me as one would be deeply manipulative and offensive; I'd report you for WP:CIVIL in a heartbeat. No matter how finely we analyze this, we find no basis for violating WP:NPOV. If you disagree, then by all means file an RfC or whatever. CarolineWH (talk) 15:49, 16 November 2009 (UTC)
It is odd, but the work that is recommended to us as the reliable source to be followed has one contributor making the case that "mother" should only be used of a woman in relation to a child already born, but half a dozen (or more) contributors to the same volume happily use phrases like "the pregnant mother and her fetus". So is only the one contribution to that volume a reliable source, or can the others also be taken to show standard usage? --Paularblaster (talk) 02:14, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- It's a good thing that, like Misplaced Pages, medical journals aren't decided by counting heads. For a more in-depth response, please read my reply here. CarolineWH (talk) 04:53, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- Indeed not by counting heads, but by following the style imposed by the editors - who in this instance included an essay about the language to be used when speaking in diagnostic situations to (or in front of) a pregnant woman, but chose not to universalize the recommendations of that essay to the volume they were themselves editing. Since wikipedia is not (or certainly should not) be used in a diagnostic setting, the criteria do not seem to apply, any more than they apply to the chapters of a medical textbook. I quite understand your point, but since the one source you've given for it doesn't bear it out, all it is so far is your personal opinion (which is not quite the same as a neutral point of view). --Paularblaster (talk) 09:50, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- I have to admit that I find it awkward to respond to you simultaneously here and on my talk page, and I'm sure that editors interested in this topic would likewise find it awkward. It would be simplest if we centralized our discussion instead of repeating it. The logical place to discuss terminology on articles regarding abortion is Talk:Abortion, so let's move there.
- As for the argument above, it's refuted on my talk page. CarolineWH (talk) 16:53, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- I’m sorry to have confused you by using more than one line at a time. On your talkpage you surmise (with a very neat praeteritio) that my views about this linguistic issue are inspired by “a religious commitment to oppose abortion”, which does seem to indicate that addressing you in two locations has made it hard for you to focus on the issue actually being discussed. I apologise. To keep it simple, shall we just continue here? What you in effect seem to be saying is that in a textbook which prodigally uses such phrases as “rights of the mother”, “health of the mother”, “mother and fetus”, all the contributors are wrong to do so, because they are not following the advice of another contributor who says that talk of “mothers” should be avoided in diagnostic contexts. But they are not writing in a diagnostic context, and nor are we. You are ready to dismiss all these experts (nota bene, contributors to the textbook that you yourself cite) as careless and dishonest in their use of language, and to say that "we" are better than "them", but this is not the sort of attitude to sources that seems to me to lie at the heart of our project.--Paularblaster (talk) 18:12, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- It's less of a praeteritio, and more of a "hey, I didn't bring it up in the first place but you were unwise to do so yourself". As for the rest, I believe I address it on Talk:Abortion, where I've consolidated this discussion. Please go there. CarolineWH (talk) 18:19, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- Your herring is a very pretty red, but all I've brought up is the linguistic usage of the source you introduced to the discussion, taking your advice to read it in full and in context. Why this sudden shyness when your source is treated with the thoroughness that you surely think it deserves? --Paularblaster (talk) 18:31, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- Your continued input is valued, but would be appreciated in Talk:Abortion, not here. Please join me there. CarolineWH (talk) 18:34, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- Why thank you, it's simply charming of you to say so. As a matter of fact, I'd already contributed to the discussion there, and I very much look forward to continuing this conversation in a reasoned and relevant manner. --Paularblaster (talk) 18:43, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- Your continued input is valued, but would be appreciated in Talk:Abortion, not here. Please join me there. CarolineWH (talk) 18:34, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- Your herring is a very pretty red, but all I've brought up is the linguistic usage of the source you introduced to the discussion, taking your advice to read it in full and in context. Why this sudden shyness when your source is treated with the thoroughness that you surely think it deserves? --Paularblaster (talk) 18:31, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- It's less of a praeteritio, and more of a "hey, I didn't bring it up in the first place but you were unwise to do so yourself". As for the rest, I believe I address it on Talk:Abortion, where I've consolidated this discussion. Please go there. CarolineWH (talk) 18:19, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- I’m sorry to have confused you by using more than one line at a time. On your talkpage you surmise (with a very neat praeteritio) that my views about this linguistic issue are inspired by “a religious commitment to oppose abortion”, which does seem to indicate that addressing you in two locations has made it hard for you to focus on the issue actually being discussed. I apologise. To keep it simple, shall we just continue here? What you in effect seem to be saying is that in a textbook which prodigally uses such phrases as “rights of the mother”, “health of the mother”, “mother and fetus”, all the contributors are wrong to do so, because they are not following the advice of another contributor who says that talk of “mothers” should be avoided in diagnostic contexts. But they are not writing in a diagnostic context, and nor are we. You are ready to dismiss all these experts (nota bene, contributors to the textbook that you yourself cite) as careless and dishonest in their use of language, and to say that "we" are better than "them", but this is not the sort of attitude to sources that seems to me to lie at the heart of our project.--Paularblaster (talk) 18:12, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
- Indeed not by counting heads, but by following the style imposed by the editors - who in this instance included an essay about the language to be used when speaking in diagnostic situations to (or in front of) a pregnant woman, but chose not to universalize the recommendations of that essay to the volume they were themselves editing. Since wikipedia is not (or certainly should not) be used in a diagnostic setting, the criteria do not seem to apply, any more than they apply to the chapters of a medical textbook. I quite understand your point, but since the one source you've given for it doesn't bear it out, all it is so far is your personal opinion (which is not quite the same as a neutral point of view). --Paularblaster (talk) 09:50, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
Contributors may have noticed some conflicting edits in abortion-related articles regarding what to call women who get pregnant. There's an open discussion here that could probably benefit from more eyes. --Paularblaster (talk) 22:52, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
...most religions generally opposing...
The opening paragraph contains the statement "The variety in opinion on the issue is reflected with most religions generally opposing abortion under most circumstances" but I don't see the same statement, or a paraphrasing of it, in the reference by The Pew Forum: http://pewforum.org/docs/?DocID=351
Of course I can read the linked article and conclude for myself the same thing as is written in the lede, but having the reference support this sentence without the reference making any such kind of generalization is what we call synthesis. Take a look at WP:SYNTH for more information about policy. Binksternet (talk) 03:12, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- You're right, it does look like synthesis. Perhaps the following new ref will support the statement:
- Steen, Edwin et al. Human Sex and Sexuality, page 174 (Courier Dover Publications 1988).
- Good going! Binksternet (talk) 04:10, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- The citation for this is a book from 1988 written about sexuality, not religion. And it doesn't look like a very scholarly book at all. Definitely not authoritative enough on religion to back up a broad claim like that.Txh190 (talk) 21:53, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
- I disagree. I think the work is scholarly enough. But more importantly, it gives warrant to what is evidence throughout the rest of the article. It is a matter of historical fact that most religions have traditionally disapprobated upon abortion.LCP (talk) 16:34, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
Bleh, now we're stuck with a lede which contradicts the article, and creates an unreferenced sense of "variety" synthesis. Better a truthful synthesis than a untruthful contradictory one!--Tallard (talk) 19:18, 27 July 2013 (UTC)
Bowen reference, 2003
I took out a reference to Bowen, 2003 under the Muslim section. I don't know what book this is! It's not listed anywhere else in the article. I used instead a reference to Brockopp, google books URL and ISBN. Binksternet (talk) 14:42, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
Bible passages used as reference
I took out Canonlawyer79's drastic change of the Other Christian section, where he or she inserted a long list of Bible passages to illustrate that the Bible, indeed, included information about abortion. I hold that Bible passages which don't mention abortion and don't have anything about when the fetus is considered a human life, aren't worthy to be used as references here. Too much is open to interpretation; too much a matter of faith. I reverted mostly to the version prior, but with some copyediting. Binksternet (talk) 04:24, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
- I agree that linking directly to Bible passages is improper and that the interpretation of such passages might vary considerably between Christian sects. However, it might be worth noting that some Christians understand the Bible as speaking against abortion. Some also see Exodus 21:22-25 as potentially allowing abortion. This reference outlines the scriptural case against abortion and contains many of the Bible passages that were referenced previously by Canonlawyer79. Does anyone think it would be worth including a statement like "some Christians interpret the Bible to prohibit abortion."? Twinkie eater91 (talk) 13:23, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
- That is absolutely valid. If a sect believes a passage says something related to abortion, using a published version of their statement is perfectly fine. The only thing I didn't like was having the Bible passages having no instance of the concept 'abortion' hang out there uninterpreted. Binksternet (talk) 15:42, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
Indirect abortion
The article says that the Catholic Church accepts indirect abortion, i.e. in order to save the life of the mother during an ectopic pregnancy. While this is technically accurate, the article should perhaps note that several Catholic leaders have criticized the abusive use of indirect abortion for cases that may not actually be letal to the mother. Church leaders have also denounced the confusion between indirect abortion and therapeutic abortion, since they do not accept the notion that abortions can be therapeutic. See the article indirect abortion for more details. ADM (talk) 22:31, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
Catholicism and abortion
The Catholic Church doesn't morally accept any abortion for any reason even if the life of the mother is "saved".
Read this:
From: Fundamental Dignity at Every Stage of Life: An Argument Against Abortion Rights Featuring the Rev. J. Daniel Mindling
Featuring: The Rev. J. Daniel Mindling, Professor of Moral Theology, Mount St. Mary's Seminary To explore the case against abortion rights, the Pew Forum turns to the Rev. J. Daniel Mindling, a professor of moral philosophy and academic dean at Mount St. Mary's Seminary in Emmetsburg, Md. In addition to his academic duties, Mindling serves as a consultant to the Secretariat for Pro-Life Activities at the U.S. Catholic Conference of Bishops.
Interviewer: David Masci, Senior Research Fellow, Pew Forum on Religion & Public Life
Let me shift gears on you and ask: Is there ever a case in which terminating a pregnancy is justified? If a woman is going to die without an abortion, is there a valid reason to perform the procedure?
St. Paul is pretty clear: we shouldn't do evil that good would come of it. The dignity of the unborn child is not lost because the mother's life is at risk. The dignity of the unborn child isn't lost because the mother would prefer not to have this child. The dignity of the unborn child isn't something that the mother bestows on the child and that the mother is free to take away at will.
But if a mother dies because she hasn't received an abortion, her fetus may die as well. So some would argue that it would be better to abort the fetus and save the mother's life as opposed to losing both of them.
Let's use the word "murder" just because of its shock value. This person is going to die unless we murder this other person? Would it be okay, then, to murder? Would it be okay for me to murder to save one life or two lives or three? How many lives would it take before it would be okay for me to murder? I think we are not free to change the moral quality of the act and say, "Well, I guess it's not murder then because something good may come of it." Murder is always wrong. --Rcatholic (talk) 22:53, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you Rcatholic. This is exactly what the present version of the article says. To quote the article "The Roman Catholic Church believes that life begins at conception and, as such, opposes abortion under all circumstances." However, it think is important that information about the Principle of Double Effect be included in the article, so that people unfamiliar with the subject understand it. I don't think the Catholic Church's position on abortion could be more clearly and concisely put than it is now. -Twinkie eater91 (talk) 23:12, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
- If your going to talk about "double-effect," you also need to mention that abortion is considered an intrinsic evil. In other words, according to the CC, direct abortion is ALWAYS morally wrong--regardless of intention. Also, isn't it kind of stupid to say that the CC "believes that life begins at conception" since it is a scientific fact that life begins at conception? Better to say, "human life" begins at conception, but even this is misleading. If a an organism has human DNA, what else can it be but a human life? What really needs to be stated is that the CC believes that human personhood begins at conception. LCP (talk) 15:56, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
- Your terminology hits the point on the head, LCP, but most people (strangely) do not use it when discussing this matter. Most pro-choicers I've spoken with will openly deny that life begins at conception, even if what they REALLY MEAN is to deny that personhood begins at conception. -BaronGrackle (talk) 16:15, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
- If your going to talk about "double-effect," you also need to mention that abortion is considered an intrinsic evil. In other words, according to the CC, direct abortion is ALWAYS morally wrong--regardless of intention. Also, isn't it kind of stupid to say that the CC "believes that life begins at conception" since it is a scientific fact that life begins at conception? Better to say, "human life" begins at conception, but even this is misleading. If a an organism has human DNA, what else can it be but a human life? What really needs to be stated is that the CC believes that human personhood begins at conception. LCP (talk) 15:56, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
- I just took out the third paragraph in the Catholic section as its detail was more appropriate to the article Christianity and abortion. I also removed mention of the 5th commandment (the one against murder) because the catechism reference doesn't directly connect the commandment with abortion. Having the two concepts brought together here was in violation of WP:SYNTH. The source says abortion is a grave offense and morally evil; those words are retained in the section here. The third paragraph made the Catholic section too large, especially in light of having a link to the main article. Similarly-sized sections for Hinduism and Islam are the way they are because there is no link to a main article. Binksternet (talk) 17:25, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
- Good edits for the most part. Two things. First, I'm not so sure inclusion of the 5th commandment is WP:SYNTH since the section of the Catechism that contains abortion begins with the 5th commandment, implying that everything in that section pertains to the 5th commandment. Second, I think some mention of Catholic Social teaching (the third paragraph deleted) needs to be included since it is unique and an integral part of Catholic Teaching on abortion. Other religions say make statements about the morality of abortion; as far as I know, only Catholicism states directly that the state has a positive role in protecting the unborn. I wouldn't object to a shorter version. Thoughts?LCP (talk) 21:21, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
- Ah, I see the 5th commandment section. The whole page is about the 5th.... Regarding the the church's position on the state, perhaps a single sentence can be introduced to the first paragraph stating the uniqueness of their stance. Binksternet (talk) 14:42, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
- Good edits for the most part. Two things. First, I'm not so sure inclusion of the 5th commandment is WP:SYNTH since the section of the Catechism that contains abortion begins with the 5th commandment, implying that everything in that section pertains to the 5th commandment. Second, I think some mention of Catholic Social teaching (the third paragraph deleted) needs to be included since it is unique and an integral part of Catholic Teaching on abortion. Other religions say make statements about the morality of abortion; as far as I know, only Catholicism states directly that the state has a positive role in protecting the unborn. I wouldn't object to a shorter version. Thoughts?LCP (talk) 21:21, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
External Links
Per WP:EL, I think the big lists of orgs that support or oppose abortion should go. The list is too long, the propensity for attempting to 'balance' the numbers is too strong, many of the organizations are not particularly notable, and they do not add significant neutral material to the article. The BBC link presents a good survey of the topic and is appropriate. Any objections to removing the 'for/against' list entirely? --Clay Collier (talk) 21:18, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- I'm all for deleting the for and against sections in their entirety, though it will be tragic to lose the juxtaposition of "Christians for Life" followed immediately by "Pagans for Life".
- ... ;^) ... Binksternet (talk) 21:42, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, Misplaced Pages is not a link directory. These links don't discuss the topic of Religion and abortion, so much as they, in a manner, illustrate specific POV aspects. It is clearly a magnet for more similar links, and it already contains non-notable organizations. I'd say remove all links that do not discuss, in an encyclopedic or at least in depth fashion, the topic of religion and abortion (and not just one specific religion and abortion). -Andrew c 00:44, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
"Human sex and sexuality" book
This book has one sentence that is not sourced and is not explained, that claims most religions are against abortion. If we are going to make that claim, we need a much better source.--IronAngelAlice (talk) 23:04, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
Mother v. Pregnant Woman, the saga continues
If you have time, please take a look at this discussion regarding the debate on the talk page for Wikiproject Abortion. - Schrandit (talk) 18:48, 23 November 2009 (UTC)
- Not me. I came here answering a request for a Misplaced Pages:Third opinion, not because the issue of abortion is high on my list of interests. My only connection to the abortion pages on WP is this one with its 3O request and any page in which Susan B. Anthony is wrongly portrayed as holding an abortion-related opinion that could be carried forward with full relevance and applied to the modern world, e.g. Feminists For Life. I don't need to add the abortion wikiproject's pages to my already-too-busy editing schedule. I think that the word "mother" reflects pro-lifer bias and carries emotion-laden propaganda baggage only if it is allowed by other people to be taken away from them and so recast in nuance. I would rather see all sides of the issue continue to use the word in its historically sloppy and imprecise manner. This way, it has many meanings and implications, including that of a female who begets a child (Webster's New Collegiate Dictionary, 1979). Binksternet (talk) 23:44, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you for sharing your view. While I can't compel you to join us on the project page, it really is the place to go if you want your voice to be heard. CarolineWH (talk) 23:56, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
Word choices and references
A minor edit war has developed in the last week between IronAngelAlice and two editors, Binksternet and Boromir123. The conflict, as I see it, is not so deep-rooted that we cannot work it out equably. It appears to be a matter of wording, mainly, with little change of references. Here are the versions, with IronAngelAlice's paragraphs in navy blue, and the former text in green:
Christianity
The intersection of Christianity and abortion has a long and complex history though there is no mention of abortion in the Christian Bible. At different times, early Christians held different beliefs about abortion, and most contemporary Christian denominations have nuanced positions, thoughts and teachings about abortion. More generally, some Christian denominations can be considered pro-life while others may be considered pro-choice. Additionally, there are sizable minorities in all denominations that disagree with their denomination's stance on abortion.
There is no direct mention in the Christian Bible about abortion. Christian thought on the matter had its beginnings in Judaism, after which both strict and lenient views on abortion were voiced over next two millennia. Many Christian denominations currently have nuanced positions, thoughts and teachings concerning abortion, especially in extenuating circumstances.
The Catholic Church and Orthodox Church oppose abortion in every situation, but permit acts which indirectly result in the death of the fetus in the case where the mother's life is threatened. The Catholic Church regards the moment of conception as the start of life and therefore regards all types of abortion as equivalent to murder. Most Southern Baptists agree with the Catholic Church's teaching about abortion. More generally, some Christian traditions can be considered pro-life while others may be considered pro-choice.
- Refs
- When Children Became People: the birth of childhood in early Christianity by Odd Magne Bakke
- "Abortion and Catholic Thought: The Little-Told History"
- Abortion and the Politics of Motherhood by Kristin Luker, University of California Press
- "Religious Groups’ Official Positions on Abortion" Pew Forum
- "Where does God stand on abortion?" USA Today
- http://www.serborth.org/01222009.html
- http://www.goarch.org/ourfaith/ourfaith7101
- http://www.catholic.com/library/Abortion.asp
- The Catholic Teaching on Abortion, Allocution to Large Families, Nov. 26, 1951, Pope Pius XII
Comments on Christianity section
- I like IronAngelAlice's bit about "sizable minorities" that disagree. I am on the fence regarding the need for two paragraphs, the second one providing information about Catholic and Baptist thought. It looks to me like we should either expand this paragraph to include more Protestant views, or trim it back. Binksternet (talk) 00:10, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
- I also think the revised version relies too heavily on Catholic, Orthodox and Southern Baptist interpretations. While these interpretations are important, they are not the only interpretations.--IronAngelAlice (talk) 21:04, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
- I like your sizable minorities edit as well Iron Angel. I do think a sentence mentioning Catholic and Orthodox church views is important. At the same time, mentioning the pro choice position of the Methodist, Lutheran, and other protestant demoninations would be fair.
Hinduism
Hindus hold varying stances on abortion. Some Hindu theologians believe personhood begins at 3 months and develops through to 5 months of gestation, possibly implying permitting abortion up to the third month and considering any abortion past the third month to be destruction of the soul's current incarnate body. Other Hindus have suggested that abortion, especially the abortion pill, is a major step towards women's empowerment. Hindus generally tend to support abortion in cases where the mother's life is at risk or when the fetus has a severe developmental abnormality. Hindu scholars and women's rights advocates have supported bans on Sex-selective Abortions. Some Hindus have argued that contraception such as emergency contraceptives are a major step towards women's empowerment and the prevention of abortions.
Individual Hindus hold varying stances on abortion; however, according to the BBC, traditional Hindu texts and teachings condemn elective abortions. Hindus generally tend to support abortion in cases where the mother's life is at risk or when the fetus has a severe developmental abnormality. Hindu scholars and women's rights advocates have supported bans on Sex-selective Abortions. A minority of Hindu theologians believe personhood begins at 3 months and therefore considering any abortion past the third month to be destruction of the soul's current incarnate body. Some Hindus have argued that contraception such as emergency contraceptives are a major step towards women's empowerment and the prevention of abortions.
- Refs
- http://www.bbc.co.uk/religion/religions/hinduism/texts/texts.shtml
- http://www.eubios.info/EJ144/ej144j.htm
- Chapter 1: Dilemmas of Life and Death: Hindu Ethics in a North American Context | Date: 1995 | Author: Crawford, S. Cromwell
- http://www.thehindu.com/2009/07/30/stories/2009073060530400.htm
- http://www.thehindu.com/2009/04/01/stories/2009040150350300.htm
- http://www.hinduonnet.com/2003/03/09/stories/2003030907001000.htm
Comments on Hindu section
- Aside from the grammar and format problems in both versions, the entry from IronAngelAlice has to its advantage the revelation of the abortion pill, though it founders on repetition of empowerment. Both versions have some theologians saying personhood begins at three months, but what about those who believe differently? In contrast to 'some' theologians, the remainder would be the majority. Binksternet (talk) 00:10, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
- Hindu texts are explicit in their denouncement of abortion but in reality abortion is widespread as a means to ensure male progeny in India. "The Hindu" however is a secular, non religious newspaper that has no religious connotation.
Islam
Although there are different opinions among Islamic scholars about when life begins and when abortion is permissible, most agree that the termination of a pregnancy after four months - the point at which, in Islam, a fetus is thought to become a living soul - is not permissible. Many Islamic thinkers contend that in cases prior to four months of gestation, abortion should be permissible only in instances in which the mother's life is in danger or in cases of rape.
Among Muslims, abortion is Haram or forbidden in most cases but is acceptable depending on the circumstances around the pregnancy. In the case where the mother's life is threatened by the pregnancy, Muslim jurists agree that abortion is allowed based on the principle that "the greater evil should be warded off by the lesser evil ." In these cases the physician is considered a better judge than the scholar.
Among Muslims, abortion is Haram or forbidden in most cases but is acceptable depending on the circumstances around the pregnancy. In the case where the mother's life is threatened by the pregnancy, Muslim jurists agree that abortion is allowed based on the principle that "the greater evil should be warded off by the lesser evil ." In these cases the physician is considered a better judge than the scholar. Additionally, many jurists consider an abortion within the first 120 days of the pregnancy permissible based on a number of reasons.
Although there are different opinions among Islamic scholars about when life begins and when abortion is permissible, most agree that the termination of a pregnancy after four months – the point at which, in Islam, a fetus is thought to become a living soul – is not permissible. Many Islamic thinkers contend that in cases prior to four months of gestation, abortion should be permissible only in instances in which the mother's life is in danger or in cases of rape.
- Refs
- http://www.bbc.co.uk/religion/religions/islam/islamethics/abortion_1.shtml
- Family and Abortion in Islam on Patheos
Comments on Islam section
Poor quality refs, swapped paragraphs with slight word changes. This whole section could use a shot in the arm. Binksternet (talk) 00:10, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
- Again, I think the version I have been reverting to is more neutral. There is no single (only) belief among Muslims about abortion. To say otherwise is disingenuous. --IronAngelAlice (talk) 21:08, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
- Perhaps, but I think most sources state that Islam is anti-abortion. I have no problem with including both sides but notice that most Muslim nations forbid abortion except for life, rape, etc (not saying however that abortions don't occur in such countries!).
Christianity Section
It is quite clear from the references that not all scholars believe all early Christians believed that abortion is a sin. So to say early Christians "declared" abortion a sin is not in the least bit accurate. I changed the paragraph accordingly, using references of course. It also seems to me that leading the second paragraph with a list all the denominations that are pro-life is a bit much.. Therefore, I changed that paragraph as well, using references. IronAngelAlice (talk) 07:52, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
- It is certainly true that not all scholars believe that all early Christians considered abortion a sin. And there is no doubt that not all scholars believe that all early Christians considered that abortion, even early abortion, was not a sin. With regard to denominations, surely a mention of relative weight is decidedly appropriate when discussing Christianity and abortion.
- Where previously proponents of one point of view were presented as "finding" and "noting", while proponents of another were presented as merely "claiming", I have made the verbs uniform. Esoglou (talk) 18:49, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
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Would Roscelese please explain on what grounds she makes Misplaced Pages declare that the view expressed in Rachels, James. The Elements of Moral Philosophy. Boston: McGraw-Hill, 2003 is unquestionably the correct one. Esoglou (talk) 20:28, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
- If we have a reliable source for a view and no reliable sources for an opposing view, there is no need to hedge simply because a user personally believes something else. –Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 20:33, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
- In my simplicity, I thought it strange that, after the explicit mention of the existence of a different interpretation of Jeremiah 1:5, Misplaced Pages should, on the basis of a single source, declare it a fact that the other interpretation is just plain wrong. I myself would prefer the attitude of, say, Gensler, who records the existence of that other interpretation, but neither condemns it out of hand nor, for that matter, endorses it. But perhaps the Misplaced Pages editorship prefers Roscelese's attitude.
- Misplaced Pages is thus also made to declare that statements such as that of the Churchwide Assembly of the Evangelical Lutheran Church in America that Jeremiah 1:5 is not unrelated to abortion (though not ruling out abortion in all circumstances) lack all basis. But, again, perhaps that is what the Misplaced Pages community wants. Then it's their responsibility. Not mine. Esoglou (talk) 07:20, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
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