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== New source == | ||
* January, 2012 | |||
I've removed "Winerip" completely - every instance was as a duplication or in places where a scholarly publication should be used. There are lots of reliable books and articles to be used, the news paper is much more tenuous. Per ], if a claim is found here it is better attributed to the direct source rather than popular press. Could still be used for "social claims". ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 19:09, 5 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
http://psychologistswithnogod.com/ | |||
== Opening paragraphs == | |||
*{{cite news | url = http://www.nytimes.com/2007/09/23/nyregion/nyregionspecial2/23Rparenting.html?_r=1&ex=1191124800&en=96e6ea8c81331e11&ei=5070&emc=eta1&oref=slogin | title = When Ties to a Parent Are Cut by the Other | last = Winerip | first = ML | date = 2007-09-23 | publisher = ] | work = ] | accessdate = 2008-12-20}} | |||
The opening paragraphs need to provide a definition and balanced overview of PAS. The opening sentence is better now, but a number of problems remain: | |||
1) The overview is unbalanced, with two-thirds of it being about how PAS is not recognised, not accepted, rejected etc. A more balanced introduction would say a bit more about what PAS actually is, and a bit less about academic/legal debate/controversy; | |||
==Recent Edits== | |||
2) PAS is not best described as a "theory"; | |||
Unfortunately, I need to be brief, but I would like to express my opinions about some of the recent edits to this article. | |||
*It is good to see that some balance has been added to the Lead about the acceptance (or lack of it) of PAS in custody cases. Given the evidence in the body of the article, I don't think this yet goes far enough and the lead is not of NPOV in this matter. | |||
*On the same subject, I don't see any reason for the division into subsections for various countries. There is not enough information about the different countries to justify this at present. | |||
*I strongly disagree with the "demotion" of the origin of PAS as an explanation for the reported increase in child abuse allegations. This needs to be placed ''before'' the information about how PAS doesn't apply when child abuse hasn't taken place for logical purposes. | |||
*I also strongly object of the weasel word use of 'critics' to marginalize and devalue criticisms of the so-called syndrome. A survey suggests that the vast majority of recent academic sources (legal, psychological, medical) are critical of the "syndrome" in one way or the other. We must follow the mainstream view per NPOV, and present that view (along with the apparent minority view that the syndrome exists) with the appropriate weight. | |||
*The article is highly disjointed and needs a major rewrite. We must stick to the highest quality, most recent sources about this topic, and reflect those. | |||
*More later --] (]) 01:55, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
3) It's not up to legal scholars to criticize science for lacking scientific validity and reliability; that job should fall to scientists - so it may be OK to refer to legal reviews of the acceptance of PAS in the courtroom, for instance, but not to the views of legal scholars about PAS itself; | |||
It's black...It's white... may be lyrics from a Michael Jackson album, but a reception section with statements like these will only confuse readers. | |||
4) The standard of references needs some improvement. A citation of Gardner's original 1985 paper was missing (which I added), while reliance has been placed on one or two references (such as Hoult 2006) that are not reputable; | |||
Critics say it's black... Proponents say it's white... not only is clearer to the reader, but also keeps the article neutral through attribution. | |||
5) It's important to remember that, although this article should be academically accurate, its aim is to communicate with a broad audience, many of whom will never previously have heard of PAS. The opening paragraphs need therefore to do more to explain what PAS actually is, and to put it in context for the average reader (NOT for the reader that already has a position in a debate about it). | |||
Attribution is not "weasel", but allows the article to maintain a NPOV. | |||
Gardner himself stated that PAS is used as an exculpatory legal maneuver, and when he states this, he is a critic. Removing attribution for the critics but not for those who support the legal recognition of PAS would violate the NPOV policy. ] (]) 16:35, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Michael H 34 | |||
::Our readers are not stupid, and I think you can only say "we might confuse them" if we mean "they might arrive at the wrong conclusion". This is a ''theory'', ostensibly medical, legal and psychological. Theories get criticized, robustly, and splitting comments or sources into "critics" or "proponents" gives the idea that the criticisms are ideological and partisan rather than scientific and empirical. Which is another reason I object to the "critics" and "proponents" wording (in addition to being jerky, choppy, poor style and painful to read). Unlike say, the political Father's Rights Movement, this purports to be a scientific claim, meaning it opens itself to scientific critique. I think readers are at greater risk of disliking reading the painful prose of the article than they are of being "confused". They can't be confused by the facts, which are the APA, APA, AMA and DSM do not recognize PAS, and that many, many people have criticized PAS on scientific grounds. So long as the criticisms come from reliable sources, and particularly if they come from multiple reliable sources, we don't need a "critics/proponents" argument. Feminist criticisms should be attributed, because that is not evidence-based, and arguments coming solely from Garnder should probably be attributed. But not everything to magical, invisible, inexplicable "critics" who make valid points about PAS. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 16:45, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
The following is an example of what I think is a more balanced overview: | |||
== Jack-A-Roe == | |||
I have put a note on ], asking him if he's interested in contributing to the page. I chose JAR for a couple reasons - he is interested in issues related to child abuse, he understands the need for high-quality sources, he has a lot of experience working on heavily contested pages, and he frequently disagrees with me. I have no idea if he will comment or not but if he does I am sure it will improve the page. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 11:06, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
Parental alienation syndrome (PAS) is a term coined by child psychiatrist Richard Gardner, and introduced in his seminal 1985 paper, to describe a suite of distinctive behaviors consistently shown by children who have been psychologically manipulated into showing unwarranted fear, disrespect or hostility towards a parent and/or other family members - typically, by the other parent and during child custody disputes. | |||
== Poland == | |||
Someone added the following to the page. I assume the external links are meant to be references (otherwise I would remove it per ]) but it'll take a bit of time to tease out what the section actually means, and figure out if the references support it. They look to be blog posts from the URL, in which case they are not ]. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 13:10, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
Although common knowledge that a parent could turn a child against, or poison a child's mind against, another parent, particularly during family separation, Gardner proposed that the resultant behaviors of children, remarkably consistent across families, amounted to an actual and specific disorder in the child: parental alienation syndrome. Gardner identified a number of characteristic behaviors including a "campaign of denigration" in which a child actively contributes to a narrative of why s/he is rejecting a parent and/or other family members. | |||
<blockquote>] is a single country and one of the sparse countries in the world, where are keeping research on PAS. Polish forensic experts point out the first version of phenomena determined as PAS was inexact, but confirm occuring of that phenomena, in the same breath. They maintain the wider research on the problem are necessary. | |||
Polish scientist Maciej Wojewódka indicates unscientific reasons of PAS criticise as errors of its first version, faulty proposition of solution of the problem, judiciary corruption and subjective private interests. | |||
PAS itself has not been formally recognized as a mental disorder by key professional associations and internationally respected publications such as the WHO's International Statistical Classification of Diseases and Related Health Problems and the current, 2013 edition of the APA's Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders, the DSM-5. However, the DSM-5 does recognise other disorders and behaviors that describe aspects of PAS. In the absence of academic consensus about the validity of using the technical term "syndrome" in this context, and about other aspects of Gardner's original work, academic and clinical psychologists have, since the 1990s, increasingly referred to this phenomenon more broadly by using the truncated term parental alienation. This term has become increasingly used, initially in the USA and subsequently worldwide, in family court cases and the mainstream press. | |||
* http://kpor.pl/index.php?option=com_content&task=blogsection&id=6&Itemid=39 | |||
* http://kpor.pl/index.php?option=com_content&task=blogsection&id=5&Itemid=40</blockquote> | |||
:Without actual references, and references I can read, this should not be included in the page. A limited number of polish references could be used, ideally a review article or two, but we would need confirmation by a polish-speaking editor. These do look like blog entries, with no indication that Maciej Wojewódka is sufficiently well-known to have his blog stand on its own merits. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 13:13, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
::I've asked Polish-speaking admin if he would do us the favour of commenting or integrating based on the Polish sources. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 13:19, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 10:18, 12 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
:This is not a blog, but a site of some NGO (or to be correct, if it is a blog, it is the outlet of this NGO). Some of their articles are even referenced. I have no idea how reliable they are as I now next to nothing about this subject. I did some google research on Maciej Wojewódka, he doesn't seem to be an academic, nor does he seem to have a PhD title; he is mentioned as "mister Maciej Wojewódka from KPOR NGO". --<sub><span style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">]|]</span></sub> 16:20, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
: PAS is a theory, and it is a rejected theory. That should be explicit in any introduction to the subject. As much as some might want to advocate for the concept of PAS, it has now been consistently rejected by the courts and by psychological organizations, and is not under consideration for inclusion in the DSM. This is not only a situation where legal professionals and courts have come to reject PAS, as its lack of scientific validity has caused it to also be rejected by the psychological and psychiatric communities. It should not be pretended that the DSM provides support for the concept of PAS, as it does not. This article should reflect the history and ultimate rejection of PAS, not pretend that it remains a viable theory or is about to suddenly gain acceptance. It is not the case that the controversy is over the word "syndrome"; a consensus has in fact formed that rejects the concept of a syndrome. It is not the case that "parental alienation" is, or is used as, a synonym for the rejected concept of "parental alienation syndrome", and we should not introduce that type of inaccuracy into the article. ] (]) 16:20, 12 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
::Thanks, I'm comfortable with just leaving it out then. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 16:38, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
PAS is clearly a sensitive subject for many. So, we need to be alert to anyone with an extreme, partisan position editing a Misplaced Pages article or removing valid edits by others. I believe ] is correct in saying that current consensus "rejects the concept of a syndrome" but I do not find the rest of the para above to be an objective or accurate assessment. Following a request, I've posted my proposed revisions above. Please could any editors do us the courtesy of stating which words or phrases in the above, proposed revision they believe are wrong or misleading, and provide associated evidence/citations. I'll leave appropriate time for discussion before making any such changes. | |||
== Notes == | |||
The fact remains that the intro to this article is unbalanced, as detailed above. | |||
Michael H 34 | |||
:That could be considered a reliable source if published in a journal somewhere. If so, this could work as a ], provided it could be verified against the original. Presentations, even academic presentations are generally not reliable sources except for ] and other items that have little scholarly interest. This page has lots of references, many in scholarly books, so if Faulkner's piece is just a presentation it is of extremely limited use. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 15:33, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
Misplaced Pages should not be about people wanting to lobby for a position, but about objective facts and consensus (and, again, it's not for lawyers to determine the merits of a scientific or medical issue any more than it's the job of a scientist to interpret the law). | |||
== Attribution tags == | |||
It is misleading to characterise PAS as "a rejected theory" when it has spawned so extensive a literature and legacy; the fact that PAS has not been accepted as a syndrome by professional/psychological associations is independent of whether or not the broader concept (of parents psychologically manipulating children to reject other family members) is generally accepted. And it's not just consensus, but common knowledge that parents can and do poison children against other parents. The phenomenon is not in doubt - even if the labels for it are. | |||
I've added {{tl|who}} throughout the reception, for the "critics" and "proponents" statements. I do not think "critics" or "proponents" gives proper attribution, I think it's ]. Ergo, I would like to see how the use of "critics" and "proponents" can be resolved properly without giving a, what I consider absurd, list of the five people who published books or articles supporting this point, or three supporting this one. I think a better formulation would be "criticisms include" or something similar. When multiple reliable sources converge on a single interpretation and criticism, I think it can flatly be called a criticism without needing to label the people providing it as "critics", which implies they disagree because they dislike the theory or its author, rather than because they dislike the evidence. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 16:38, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
How useful Gardner's contribution will ultimately prove to have been to this particular subject remains moot, but his 1985 paper introducing the term PAS meets the definition of "seminal" insofar as it highlighted an issue, has been much cited and stimulated further work, and was responsible for introducing the term "parental alienation" that (whether or not one likes the term) is now increasingly used to refer to this phenomenon in legal proceedings (in many of which its existence is accepted), social science and the popular press. | |||
:Gardner himself stated that PAS is used as an exculpatory legal maneuver, and when he states this, he is a critic. Removing attribution for the critics but not for those who support the legal recognition of PAS would violate the NPOV policy. | |||
] (]) 04:15, 13 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
:The issue is not that PAS is a "sensitive issue". The issue is that we should not confuse advocacy for the concept of PAS, wishful thinking that it will suddenly become recognized despite its history of rejection by the mental health community and courts, or conflation of PAS with "parental alienation", with the type of objective information that belongs in a Misplaced Pages article. Referring back to Gardner's 1985 paper is useful to show the origin of the concept, but useless as evidence that it has present credibility. ] (]) 13:54, 13 February 2018 (UTC) | |||
The first paragraph had been edited over the past year to leave one incomplete sentence, as well as some other grammatical and factual issues. It also included a sentence/paragraph better suited to a later section of the article. I've made the adjustments to correct for this, in line with discussion above. ] (]) 12:18, 26 March 2019 (UTC) | |||
:Attribution is not "weasel", but allows the article to maintain a NPOV. ] (]) 16:43, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Michael H 34 | |||
::Please thread your posts. If Gardner is stating a fact, he's neither a critic nor a proponent. And naming Gardner specifically is a whole lot different than naming "critics". ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 16:47, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
Citations: Added Bala et al (2010) reference which refers to increasing prevalence of PA; Bernet et al reference removed where it doesn't support prior text. ] (]) 23:57, 27 March 2019 (UTC) | |||
:::"When multiple reliable sources converge on a single interpretation and criticism, I think it can flatly be called a criticism without needing to label the people providing it as "critics", which implies they disagree because they dislike the theory or its author, rather than because they dislike the evidence." | |||
With respect to ]'s recent text changes/reversions in the introductory paragraph, I’m providing the attached, detailed explanation. It would be good to see any contrary position argued here on the Talk page, with evidence, to reach consensus prior to any further such changes. | |||
:::There is a convergence of opinion? Bernet states that PAS is "universally accepted" by mental health experts. I call the "need to label" attribution, and it allows the article to maintain a NPOV. | |||
The reversions/changes in one sentence of the opening paragraph introduce numerous problems/errors: | |||
:::Critics state implies nothing about why the critic states the criticism. ] (]) 16:52, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Michael H 34 | |||
1. A grammatical error - needs a “has” before “been criticized”; | |||
::::Michael, do you have the Bernet article or are you just reading the abstract? Number one, it is totally inappropriate to cite from an abstract without checking the article for reasons detailed below; Number two, the abstract actually says that "''the phenomenon of PAD'' is ''almost'' universally accepted by mental health professionals." And indeed if you check the article proper, you will note that Bernet has his own formulation of PAS, that when he says "phenomenon of PAD" he means "the general idea" and well, I'll leave the "almost" to speak for itself. | |||
::::I agree with WLU that the "attribution" you often argue for it articles is not in keeping with the principles and practices of WP. You call them critics (for obvious reasons, I'm sorry to say); others call them law professors, psychologists etc. Which do you ''really'' think is of NPOV? This is why "Critics" is a ], and specifically commented about in terms of POV editing at the Featured Article Candidacy of the ], It is just not acceptable to marginalize mainstream opinions in this fashion.--] (]) 17:24, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
:::::Almost is key, as are the four references that state PAS has been extensively criticized (of which Bernet is one). When a single source says one thing, but multiple others disagree, we have to use editorial judgement to decide which to represent. Any source can be cherry-picked or ] for support of a single point, or a group of sources can be as well skewed or ignored to give undue weight. Unless there are a host of supporting sources lingering somewhere, the evidence speaks rather clearly that the mental health community most certainly does not universally agree that PAS is acceptable. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 17:36, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
2. Adding the words “syndrome” and “theory” in this sentence creates multiple inaccuracies and/or misleads; | |||
== Time to stop editing and start discussing == | |||
3. It is not for legal communities to decide (or accept) whether or not parental alienation is a syndrome; as discussed above and elsewhere, this is a question for the medical, psychological and/or psychiatric fraternity. Similarly, it is not for “legal scholars” to criticize the science relating to parental alienation (syndrome); this again is an issue for scientists and academics in this or related fields. Legal scholars can, of course, comment on the usage and/or acceptance of PAS in a legal context, though this is a very different discussion that should not be conflated with the discussion about the science by scientists; | |||
I strongly, strongly suggest that you both cease editing this article, and start discussing edits here on the talkpage. This is totally unproductive. If this goes on I will apply for page protection to force an end to the edit warring. --] (]) 16:55, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
4. At least one of the leading and most-extensively published academics on this subject matter has, in fact, accepted the term parental alienation syndrome and uses it in multiple publications to this day. (This substantial body of work should not be characterized, as does Arllaw, as "theoretical acceptance at the fringes".) So, we should not make blanket statements about whether or not it’s been accepted without a qualifier, such as ‘widely’ or ‘generally’, or without going into more detail (which is more appropriate later in the article). Similarly, it’s not wholly accurate to say that PAS has been criticized when it has also had support. Again, this would need the qualifier that it’s been criticized by “some” (not “all”). In a strictly neutral introduction, both sides of the argument would be put, with matching citations, but in the interests of a summary, this could perhaps be left until later in the piece; | |||
:I will try to restore a NPOV to the article at another time. ] (]) 17:13, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Michael H 34 | |||
::I'd say apply for page protection. It'll be ] no matter what. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 17:23, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
5. What has not been widely/generally accepted is that “parental alienation syndrome” is a medically/scientifically recognized/valid “syndrome”. There is a well-documented history of how long it takes some phenomena or beliefs to gain general acceptance and others to lose it. More importantly, there is good evidence that the broader phenomenon (aka “parental alienation”) is now increasingly accepted and recognized in the literature, and even within the legal and healthcare communities in some countries. The wording of this paragraph needs to make such nuanced distinctions - between the phenomenon and the terms used to describe it, for instance - as clear as possible; | |||
:::I'd certainly agree that the current version is horrible, so yes you are right about the wrong version!! I'll be going to the library on Friday and will pick up more recent books and papers on the subject. And unfortunately, Michael H, from what I've seen, I'm frankly unconvinced that your version of NPOV is actually NPOV when it comes down to looking at the highest quality, most reliable sources for this topic.--] (]) 17:37, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
::::I've requested page protection ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 17:47, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
6. With respect to the use of the word “theory”, I’ve argued elsewhere in some considerable detail why its usage in this context is not appropriate. I can add these explanations here on request; | |||
==Archiving== | |||
I've archived much of the page, leaving the discussions from the past couple days. Pull out old items if they are still relevant, or start a new discussion. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 17:38, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
7. I refer also to comments made by other editors, not least ] and ], on related pages concerning similar issues. | |||
== Reception == | |||
Thanks ] (]) 22:38, 2 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
The APA, AMA and DSM's failure to acknowledge PAS should be in the reception section, quite clearly in my mind. Acceptance, rejection or indifference is part of the reception of PAS far more than it is history, and must certianly be included in the page if it's referenced by so many sources (as well as making intuitive sense. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 17:44, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
], please could you establish a User page so we may communicate - as per Misplaced Pages policy guidelines - via your own Talk page about the multiple reversions of my text that you have made on multiple pages. I explain the rationale behind my edits in considerable and sometimes painstaking detail on Talk pages while you are making reversions generally without any discussion or attempt to reach consensus on these pages, which are there for precisely this reason. I appreciate your help with this. Thanks. ] (]) 12:58, 3 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
:Repetition should be avoided. I think that "no position" and "concerns about its application" is given more weight in the History section. ] (]) 18:14, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Michael H 34 | |||
:If you want to discuss an article, that's what the article discussion page is for. You have strong personal feelings about this subject, but recall that this is a collaborative project. ] (]) 17:18, 3 April 2019 (UTC) | |||
::Where is there repetition? The lead does not count. Right now the AMA is not mentioned anywhere except the lead, which is inappropriate. And I think you are clearly wrong in this. It is not historical that the APAs and AMA don't recognize it, it is current. And they would be the main deciding bodies for whether there is merit to officially recognizing PAS (particularly given the APiatricA publishes the DSM). These are the academic and governing bodies responsible for adjudicating on insurance claims, establishing expertise and accreditation, governing their professions and dealing with research. How is it ''not'' appropriate for their lack of recognition to be in the reception section? Repetition should be avoided is a nonsequiter since the claim is not currently repeated, and the lead never counts as repetition. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 18:23, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
: To be accurate, this sentence in the opening paragraph, | |||
:{{quote|Observed repeatedly in families involved in child custody litigation, these behaviors result from psychological manipulation or undue influence, typically by the other parent who may be attempting to prevent an ongoing relationship between a child and other family members after family separation or divorce}} | |||
:Should be revised along the lines of, | |||
:{{quote|Gardner believed that a set of behaviors that he observed in some families involved in child custody litigation could be used to diagnose psychological manipulation or undue influence of a child by a parent, typically by the other parent who may be attempting to prevent an ongoing relationship between a child and other family members after family separation or divorce.}} | |||
:] (]) 20:13, 1 August 2019 (UTC) | |||
:: No objection, then? ] (]) 12:06, 7 August 2019 (UTC) | |||
==WHO Recognition== | |||
In my view, no position should not be in the reception, but can be added to the overview. I will do it myself, but will seek your agreement first. The American Psychological Association is included in the lead and in the history (where it has higher weight than the reception). ] (]) 18:34, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Michael H 34 | |||
The WHO has an update to ICD-11. Are there any reliable sources to show that P.A.S. is included - as stated by ? ] (]) 16:14, 18 June 2019 (UTC) | |||
There appears to be ongoing controversy about this. As I understand it, PAS will not be listed as a syndrome in ICD-11, no matter what. The discussion is whether the index should contain PAS, which would lead to parent child relational problem. I am not sure how things work for ICD, but in DSM-5 PCRP is given a "V-code", meaning that it is not a diagnosis of a problem in any individual involved. | |||
== Reliability == | |||
==Treatment issues== | |||
Why is "''Jennifer Hoult states that Gardner's writings published in both peer reviewed journals and legal decisions, PAS lacks both validity and reliability''" attributed to three sources, only one of which is actually Hoult and the other two predate her by several years? ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 17:54, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
I am surprised that this article does not reference any of the treatments like Family Bridges and High Road that purport to treat PAS. The lack of evidentiary support for these treatments is an additional reason to query PAS and PA concepts. ] (]) 18:34, 31 July 2019 (UTC) | |||
:I fixed this. ] (]) 18:15, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Michael H 34 | |||
:There was some discussion of the controversy on ]'s page, but somebody quickly edited it out. Discussion perhaps belongs in the ] article, as I believe every proponent of that sort of treatment has abandoned the concept of PAS and, for that matter, that some are even moving away from the term "parental alienation". ] (]) 20:05, 1 August 2019 (UTC) | |||
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== Gardner? == | ||
I am looking reliable sources to support the claims '''"In 1985 child psychiatrist ] introduced the term ]"''' and '''"Gardner argued for parental alienation syndrome to be included in the ]'s '']'' (DSM)."''' | |||
"Commentators" is no better than "critics". The people making these criticisms are not Joe off the street, or Mike Hunt who owns a house. These are scholars and experts publishing in the appropriate journals and scholarly press. They could better be labelled "experts" or the criticisms simply called criticisms. ] <small>] ] Misplaced Pages's rules:</small>]/] 18:25, 6 May 2009 (UTC) | |||
I see where he coined the phrase https://web.archive.org/web/20031220023819/http://mensnewsdaily.com/archive/g/gardner/gardner100602.htm and it looks like`he sent a letter and asked others in something he called the "PAS Network" to send letters (canadiancrc.com/Parental_Alienation_Syndrome_Canada/letter2002.aspx -- can't post the URL, on the blacklist. add the http yourself to view) http://fact.on.ca/Info/pas/gardnr85.pdf but "Fathers Are Capable Too: Supporting a child's right to both parents" and "Men's News Daily" are obvious advocacy sites. Does anyone have any references that show any reliable sources reporting either his coining of the phrase or his lobbying to get it in the DSM? --] (]) 16:13, 24 September 2019 (UTC) | |||
:The reception section starts with "PAS has been extensively criticized by members of legal and mental health community" even though PAS as a phenomena is "universally accepted by members of the mental health community" according to Bernet in his article published in the American Journal of Family Therapy. ] (]) 18:41, 6 May 2009 (UTC) Michael H 34 | |||
: A partial answer: Gardner presented a paper entitled ''Recent trends in divorce and custody litigation'', which was published in the Academy Forum (published by the The American Academy of Psychodynamic Psychiatry and Psychoanalysis), Volume 29, Number 2, Summer, 1985, p. 3-7, in which he proposed PAS. A relatively recent article, ''Are children susceptible to manipulation? The best interest of childrenand their testimony'', http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.childyouth.2015.02.003 , corroborates that Gardner coined the term in 1985. ] (]) 19:45, 24 September 2019 (UTC) |
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Opening paragraphs
The opening paragraphs need to provide a definition and balanced overview of PAS. The opening sentence is better now, but a number of problems remain:
1) The overview is unbalanced, with two-thirds of it being about how PAS is not recognised, not accepted, rejected etc. A more balanced introduction would say a bit more about what PAS actually is, and a bit less about academic/legal debate/controversy;
2) PAS is not best described as a "theory";
3) It's not up to legal scholars to criticize science for lacking scientific validity and reliability; that job should fall to scientists - so it may be OK to refer to legal reviews of the acceptance of PAS in the courtroom, for instance, but not to the views of legal scholars about PAS itself;
4) The standard of references needs some improvement. A citation of Gardner's original 1985 paper was missing (which I added), while reliance has been placed on one or two references (such as Hoult 2006) that are not reputable;
5) It's important to remember that, although this article should be academically accurate, its aim is to communicate with a broad audience, many of whom will never previously have heard of PAS. The opening paragraphs need therefore to do more to explain what PAS actually is, and to put it in context for the average reader (NOT for the reader that already has a position in a debate about it).
The following is an example of what I think is a more balanced overview:
Parental alienation syndrome (PAS) is a term coined by child psychiatrist Richard Gardner, and introduced in his seminal 1985 paper, to describe a suite of distinctive behaviors consistently shown by children who have been psychologically manipulated into showing unwarranted fear, disrespect or hostility towards a parent and/or other family members - typically, by the other parent and during child custody disputes.
Although common knowledge that a parent could turn a child against, or poison a child's mind against, another parent, particularly during family separation, Gardner proposed that the resultant behaviors of children, remarkably consistent across families, amounted to an actual and specific disorder in the child: parental alienation syndrome. Gardner identified a number of characteristic behaviors including a "campaign of denigration" in which a child actively contributes to a narrative of why s/he is rejecting a parent and/or other family members.
PAS itself has not been formally recognized as a mental disorder by key professional associations and internationally respected publications such as the WHO's International Statistical Classification of Diseases and Related Health Problems and the current, 2013 edition of the APA's Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders, the DSM-5. However, the DSM-5 does recognise other disorders and behaviors that describe aspects of PAS. In the absence of academic consensus about the validity of using the technical term "syndrome" in this context, and about other aspects of Gardner's original work, academic and clinical psychologists have, since the 1990s, increasingly referred to this phenomenon more broadly by using the truncated term parental alienation. This term has become increasingly used, initially in the USA and subsequently worldwide, in family court cases and the mainstream press.
Skythrops (talk) 10:18, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
- PAS is a theory, and it is a rejected theory. That should be explicit in any introduction to the subject. As much as some might want to advocate for the concept of PAS, it has now been consistently rejected by the courts and by psychological organizations, and is not under consideration for inclusion in the DSM. This is not only a situation where legal professionals and courts have come to reject PAS, as its lack of scientific validity has caused it to also be rejected by the psychological and psychiatric communities. It should not be pretended that the DSM provides support for the concept of PAS, as it does not. This article should reflect the history and ultimate rejection of PAS, not pretend that it remains a viable theory or is about to suddenly gain acceptance. It is not the case that the controversy is over the word "syndrome"; a consensus has in fact formed that rejects the concept of a syndrome. It is not the case that "parental alienation" is, or is used as, a synonym for the rejected concept of "parental alienation syndrome", and we should not introduce that type of inaccuracy into the article. Arllaw (talk) 16:20, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
PAS is clearly a sensitive subject for many. So, we need to be alert to anyone with an extreme, partisan position editing a Misplaced Pages article or removing valid edits by others. I believe Arllaw is correct in saying that current consensus "rejects the concept of a syndrome" but I do not find the rest of the para above to be an objective or accurate assessment. Following a request, I've posted my proposed revisions above. Please could any editors do us the courtesy of stating which words or phrases in the above, proposed revision they believe are wrong or misleading, and provide associated evidence/citations. I'll leave appropriate time for discussion before making any such changes.
The fact remains that the intro to this article is unbalanced, as detailed above.
Misplaced Pages should not be about people wanting to lobby for a position, but about objective facts and consensus (and, again, it's not for lawyers to determine the merits of a scientific or medical issue any more than it's the job of a scientist to interpret the law).
It is misleading to characterise PAS as "a rejected theory" when it has spawned so extensive a literature and legacy; the fact that PAS has not been accepted as a syndrome by professional/psychological associations is independent of whether or not the broader concept (of parents psychologically manipulating children to reject other family members) is generally accepted. And it's not just consensus, but common knowledge that parents can and do poison children against other parents. The phenomenon is not in doubt - even if the labels for it are.
How useful Gardner's contribution will ultimately prove to have been to this particular subject remains moot, but his 1985 paper introducing the term PAS meets the definition of "seminal" insofar as it highlighted an issue, has been much cited and stimulated further work, and was responsible for introducing the term "parental alienation" that (whether or not one likes the term) is now increasingly used to refer to this phenomenon in legal proceedings (in many of which its existence is accepted), social science and the popular press. Skythrops (talk) 04:15, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
- The issue is not that PAS is a "sensitive issue". The issue is that we should not confuse advocacy for the concept of PAS, wishful thinking that it will suddenly become recognized despite its history of rejection by the mental health community and courts, or conflation of PAS with "parental alienation", with the type of objective information that belongs in a Misplaced Pages article. Referring back to Gardner's 1985 paper is useful to show the origin of the concept, but useless as evidence that it has present credibility. Arllaw (talk) 13:54, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
The first paragraph had been edited over the past year to leave one incomplete sentence, as well as some other grammatical and factual issues. It also included a sentence/paragraph better suited to a later section of the article. I've made the adjustments to correct for this, in line with discussion above. Skythrops (talk) 12:18, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
Citations: Added Bala et al (2010) reference which refers to increasing prevalence of PA; Bernet et al reference removed where it doesn't support prior text. Skythrops (talk) 23:57, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
With respect to Arllaw's recent text changes/reversions in the introductory paragraph, I’m providing the attached, detailed explanation. It would be good to see any contrary position argued here on the Talk page, with evidence, to reach consensus prior to any further such changes.
The reversions/changes in one sentence of the opening paragraph introduce numerous problems/errors:
1. A grammatical error - needs a “has” before “been criticized”;
2. Adding the words “syndrome” and “theory” in this sentence creates multiple inaccuracies and/or misleads;
3. It is not for legal communities to decide (or accept) whether or not parental alienation is a syndrome; as discussed above and elsewhere, this is a question for the medical, psychological and/or psychiatric fraternity. Similarly, it is not for “legal scholars” to criticize the science relating to parental alienation (syndrome); this again is an issue for scientists and academics in this or related fields. Legal scholars can, of course, comment on the usage and/or acceptance of PAS in a legal context, though this is a very different discussion that should not be conflated with the discussion about the science by scientists;
4. At least one of the leading and most-extensively published academics on this subject matter has, in fact, accepted the term parental alienation syndrome and uses it in multiple publications to this day. (This substantial body of work should not be characterized, as does Arllaw, as "theoretical acceptance at the fringes".) So, we should not make blanket statements about whether or not it’s been accepted without a qualifier, such as ‘widely’ or ‘generally’, or without going into more detail (which is more appropriate later in the article). Similarly, it’s not wholly accurate to say that PAS has been criticized when it has also had support. Again, this would need the qualifier that it’s been criticized by “some” (not “all”). In a strictly neutral introduction, both sides of the argument would be put, with matching citations, but in the interests of a summary, this could perhaps be left until later in the piece;
5. What has not been widely/generally accepted is that “parental alienation syndrome” is a medically/scientifically recognized/valid “syndrome”. There is a well-documented history of how long it takes some phenomena or beliefs to gain general acceptance and others to lose it. More importantly, there is good evidence that the broader phenomenon (aka “parental alienation”) is now increasingly accepted and recognized in the literature, and even within the legal and healthcare communities in some countries. The wording of this paragraph needs to make such nuanced distinctions - between the phenomenon and the terms used to describe it, for instance - as clear as possible;
6. With respect to the use of the word “theory”, I’ve argued elsewhere in some considerable detail why its usage in this context is not appropriate. I can add these explanations here on request;
7. I refer also to comments made by other editors, not least Martinogk and DrPax, on related pages concerning similar issues.
Thanks Skythrops (talk) 22:38, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
Arllaw, please could you establish a User page so we may communicate - as per Misplaced Pages policy guidelines - via your own Talk page about the multiple reversions of my text that you have made on multiple pages. I explain the rationale behind my edits in considerable and sometimes painstaking detail on Talk pages while you are making reversions generally without any discussion or attempt to reach consensus on these pages, which are there for precisely this reason. I appreciate your help with this. Thanks. Skythrops (talk) 12:58, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
- If you want to discuss an article, that's what the article discussion page is for. You have strong personal feelings about this subject, but recall that this is a collaborative project. Arllaw (talk) 17:18, 3 April 2019 (UTC)
- To be accurate, this sentence in the opening paragraph,
Observed repeatedly in families involved in child custody litigation, these behaviors result from psychological manipulation or undue influence, typically by the other parent who may be attempting to prevent an ongoing relationship between a child and other family members after family separation or divorce
- Should be revised along the lines of,
Gardner believed that a set of behaviors that he observed in some families involved in child custody litigation could be used to diagnose psychological manipulation or undue influence of a child by a parent, typically by the other parent who may be attempting to prevent an ongoing relationship between a child and other family members after family separation or divorce.
- Arllaw (talk) 20:13, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
- No objection, then? Arllaw (talk) 12:06, 7 August 2019 (UTC)
WHO Recognition
The WHO has announced an update to ICD-11. Are there any reliable sources to show that P.A.S. is included - as stated by this blog? Bogger (talk) 16:14, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
There appears to be ongoing controversy about this. As I understand it, PAS will not be listed as a syndrome in ICD-11, no matter what. The discussion is whether the index should contain PAS, which would lead to parent child relational problem. I am not sure how things work for ICD, but in DSM-5 PCRP is given a "V-code", meaning that it is not a diagnosis of a problem in any individual involved.
Treatment issues
I am surprised that this article does not reference any of the treatments like Family Bridges and High Road that purport to treat PAS. The lack of evidentiary support for these treatments is an additional reason to query PAS and PA concepts. JeanAMercer (talk) 18:34, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
- There was some discussion of the controversy on Richard Warshak's page, but somebody quickly edited it out. Discussion perhaps belongs in the parental alienation article, as I believe every proponent of that sort of treatment has abandoned the concept of PAS and, for that matter, that some are even moving away from the term "parental alienation". Arllaw (talk) 20:05, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
Gardner?
I am looking reliable sources to support the claims "In 1985 child psychiatrist Richard Gardner introduced the term parental alienation syndrome" and "Gardner argued for parental alienation syndrome to be included in the American Psychiatric Association's Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM)."
I see where he coined the phrase https://web.archive.org/web/20031220023819/http://mensnewsdaily.com/archive/g/gardner/gardner100602.htm and it looks like`he sent a letter and asked others in something he called the "PAS Network" to send letters (canadiancrc.com/Parental_Alienation_Syndrome_Canada/letter2002.aspx -- can't post the URL, on the blacklist. add the http yourself to view) http://fact.on.ca/Info/pas/gardnr85.pdf but "Fathers Are Capable Too: Supporting a child's right to both parents" and "Men's News Daily" are obvious advocacy sites. Does anyone have any references that show any reliable sources reporting either his coining of the phrase or his lobbying to get it in the DSM? --Guy Macon (talk) 16:13, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- A partial answer: Gardner presented a paper entitled Recent trends in divorce and custody litigation, which was published in the Academy Forum (published by the The American Academy of Psychodynamic Psychiatry and Psychoanalysis), Volume 29, Number 2, Summer, 1985, p. 3-7, in which he proposed PAS. A relatively recent article, Are children susceptible to manipulation? The best interest of childrenand their testimony, http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.childyouth.2015.02.003 , corroborates that Gardner coined the term in 1985. Arllaw (talk) 19:45, 24 September 2019 (UTC)