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== Better response? == | |||
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I have been wondering if we need a better response for these "''I have found a flea/factoid/report that overturns 10,000 elephants worth scientific work''". It would be easy enough to add something to the FAQ. Of course, these anonymous posters are not known to check the FAQ, but perhaps we could get some kind of snazzy image template (like {{duck}}) that catches attention and redirects to a specific FAQ question. - ] (]) 21:06, 9 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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::May I suggest you put that duck on the whole article because because I'm sceptical] (]) 12:46, 2 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
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:I agree. It's a common meme that needs it's own FAQ. I dunno about the duck. FAQs are good. They say: Sorry you missed it, but we've already heard that so many times here that we wrote a standard answer to it ages ago. --] (]) 21:33, 9 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::You could uncollapse the FAQ to make it more visible. Right now the code is <nowiki>{{FAQ|quickedit=no}}</nowiki>. Change it to <nowiki>{{FAQ|quickedit=no|collapsed=no}}</nowiki> to make it uncollapsed. On a different note, I don't think the FAQ is effective, because anons could easily disagree with it as out-of-date/inaccurate/ect. Perhaps the solution is to create a message holding a proposal to a higher standard. For example, require anons to "provide the original journal article" when a "study" is cited, which should cut-down on blogs and news sources. ] (]) 00:55, 10 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::: Hmm, goes beyond what I suggested, but I like it. Though would need some working out. If anyone is interested, perhaps this should go into its own section. - ] (]) 22:36, 11 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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It is the goal of Misplaced Pages to provide information to people who want information, not to change the minds of people who have already made up their mind. As long as we keep this article honest, we've done the best we can. Global warming "skeptics" are not going to change their minds no matter what evidence anyone provides. Remember the Bill Cosby record "What train?" ] (]) 11:47, 10 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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: Rick, I think you misunderstood my intent. I am not proposing anything to change anyone's mind, I was suggesting, first, that if this particular "meme" is adequately addressed in the FAQ then we wouldn't have to keep readdressing it here, on the talk page. And second, with that in place, then for all the yahoos that breeze right past the FAQ (visible, or not) we can just give them a templated response. - ] (]) 22:36, 11 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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:The goal of Misplaced Pages is to make a good encyclopedia rather than change people's views, but often changing their views can help in that goal. If it is to remain an "encyclopedia that anyone can edit" it must be done by consensus. We can't be expected to read every polemic that someone throws at us but we do need to engage with "deniers", and preferably in a respectful way as that is more likely to engender the kind behavior we would like to see from them. The FAQ is great, btw, (better than the article perhaps!) and un-hiding it seems a good plan to me.--] (]) 23:12, 11 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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:: I am general agreement with you here, and don't object to unhiding the FAQ. But some of these folks wont' read it no matter how many times we make them run over it. That's where I think we need an attention-getting tag that points them to a specific answer in the FAQ. - ] (]) 20:52, 14 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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:::Re:JJ, I've uncollapsed the FAQ. Feel free to revert if anyone disagrees. Now about the message. I recommend keeping the message in the standard talk-page box, {{tl|tmbox}}. There are a ] to make it "attention getting". If you need help setting it up, just tell me what you want. I don't mind, it's pretty easy to me.<p>I agree with Rick, but on a different note. Trying to change people's minds is fruitless. They've made up their mind, telling them they're wrong won't change that. I know this is a long read, but a friend recommended a to me last week. I think we can develop a different approach from this paper. --Tony ] (]) 02:05, 15 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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:::: So no one is suggesting we "make the horse drink". As to what kind of sign could be posted saying "this way to water", I think {{tl|tmbox}} wouldn't be so effective. Maybe something like "<b>Read the Fabulous FAQ</b> ". Or even "<font color="red">'''Duh!''' There is an answer in the '''FAQ''' at ...</font>". And of course, take a parameter for the FAQ answer. - ] (]) 20:06, 15 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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:(outdent) To link to Question 4 in the FAQ, enter "]". The "]" takes you to the FAQ page; the "#Q4" specifies which FAQ ''within'' the page.<p>I think the message should follow something along the lines, "Misplaced Pages is not a soapbox or forum. Proposals should provide: (1) a specific piece of text to add, modify, or remove; and (2) reliable sources that verify the proposal. If you are citing a 'study', please cite the actual study rather than the press release or a news article." Like you said, JJ, we're not making the horse drink, but showing it where to find water. Anons are going to write proposals, they can at least write something potentially constructive rather than soapbox. The point of the message is to help them find the resources to be able to write something potentially constructive. --Tony ] (]) 04:10, 16 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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== Carbon capture rates for CCS == | |||
::Nice, but way too much typing. :-) | |||
::We have a little bit of a fork here. I am looking for something that specifically refers people to an FAQ answer; Tony is talking more about explaining what people need to do to get consideration. Which I think is a good idea, but a different idea. Hmmm, perhaps that could be put into the FAQ? - ] (]) 21:55, 19 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::] and ] essentially covers how proposals are considered, no need to add it in. Let's talk about your proposal, how to refer people to the FAQ. I think people are aware there's an FAQ, but are reluctant to read it because it is too long. So the first step would be make it more concise:<ol><li>Remove ]. I don't think it's anymore relevant than than people who believe in that the ].</li><li>Merge ] and ]. The two seem to be about climate variability, just written in different words.</li><li>Merge ] and ]. Scibaby and soapboxing seems to go together.</li></ol>What do you think? --Tony ] (]) 00:19, 23 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Condensing the FAQ is a good idea. The FAQ bloats because questions get added in when certain talking points become frequent, but outdated points are rarely removed. ] (]) 00:40, 23 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::: I suspect that most of the drive-by-spitballers are not interested in the FAQ, and wouldn't want to bother; they just want to lob a spitball and run off. So I would say that the state of the FAQ, for better or worse, is really irrelevant. What I see as the basic problem (aside from the prevalence of yahoos) is that reiterating an already available answer is essentially a waste of our time and effort. And especially for spitballers we should be able to provide a reasonable answer ("RTFM!") at less cost than they expend in the posting. And a ''curt'' response offers less toeholds for an argument. - ] (]) 23:01, 24 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
Hi everyone. I have a few proposals regarding statements on ] in this article. Here's my first proposal. We have an unsourced sentence that says: | |||
== Media interest == | |||
: Where energy production or {{CO2}}-intensive ] continue to produce waste {{CO2}}, the gas can be captured and stored instead of released to the atmosphere. | |||
I propose changing it to: | |||
: Where energy production or {{CO2}}-intensive ] continue to produce waste {{CO2}}, technology can sometimes be used to capture and store most of the gas instead of releasing it to the atmosphere.<ref name=":2">{{Cite web |last1=Lebling |first1=Katie |last2=Gangotra |first2=Ankita |last3=Hausker |first3=Karl |last4=Byrum |first4=Zachary |date=2023-11-13 |title=7 Things to Know About Carbon Capture, Utilization and Sequestration |url=https://www.wri.org/insights/carbon-capture-technology |publisher=] |language=en}}</ref> | |||
As explained in the World Resources Institute source, "today’s carbon capture systems do not capture 100% of emissions. Most are designed to capture 90%, but reported capture rates are lower in some cases." Additionally, it is not economically or geologically feasible to deploy CCS at all or even most facilities. There are 2,400 coal power plants in the world and thus far we have managed to add CCS to four of them. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 21:41, 24 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{hat|reason=]boxing "not relevant to improving the article" (archived per ]}} | |||
For a while I've been watching the google newscount for "global warming" and "peak oil", and whilst peak oil has been rising from around 600 to around 4000 during the time I've been watching, global warming has been going down from around 20,000 (2007) down to 5000. Likewise, public interest in the subject has similarly been draining away. And today, I noticed that in the UK the newsmedia count for peak oil now exceeds that of global warming, and at the present rate I expect that to happen worldwide sometime in the next month or so. | |||
:Done. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 20:30, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
So, why isn't this plummeting public and media interest being reflected in the number of articles devoted to this subject? There are currently 65 articles under the category "global warming", (not counting those under "climate change") whilst there are only 43 under "peak oil". | |||
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And to be frank, this article is long winded, difficult to read and even the climatologists are now asking to use the kind of plain language that has been vigorously rejected here.. {{unsigned2|18:58, 5 May 2011|212.139.52.162}} | |||
:Not sure what you think this article should be about, my understanding is it's about the science of global warming, not transient media fads. Detailed improvements will of course be welcome. The article on plain language is interesting, I'm sure deniers will have a tizzy about not emphasising uncertainty as much as they'd like. . . ], ] 22:04, 5 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::The article should be about "global warming". By its very name this is the popular, political issue regarding the political implications of the claims of "Anthropogenic climate change" by climate "scientists". If it were called "the science of global warming", then sure it would be about the science, but no! It is named after the political campaign. Therefore it should largely focus on the history, the rise in support, the key events like Kyoto and Climategate, and the subsequent fall in public interest and widespread collapse in support for further legislation.] (]) 01:00, 6 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Not tonight dear. I have a headache. ] (]) 01:03, 6 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::First you say Global Warming is a political issue, then you claim that it should largely focus on the history... Your story seems to be changing. ] (]) 07:43, 6 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::Eh? Anyway, see ]. . . ], ] 07:53, 6 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::Now that it's all over anyway, can I let you lot into a little secret! We sceptics never needed to change this article! No Why should we? As I said above - no doubt as always in a way that was bound to ensure you wouldn't do what was suggested - the article is long boring, doesn't cover any of the interesting bits, is full of technical jargon and multiple and obvious mistakes and biases totally undermining its credibility like e.g. not even addressing the known pause in temperature. '''We couldn't have written a better propaganda piece for the sceptics'''. There is a saying in Judo that you work with the opponent to encourage them to move toward being thrown to the ground. Likewise, we only had to speak the truth - that the article was entirely biased, should include material from a wider range of source and not just the self-deluding climate "scientists" - and you lot were so wound up in your self-righteous belief in your myopic view that you just continued to make the article more and more biased on the evidence and totally failed to cover the subject most people understand as "global warming". To be frank almost every sceptic I know seems to have become a sceptic either directly or indirectly from reading or editing this article. What you failed to realise, is that healthy debate can only strengthen this article and make it better & more believable. Instead you lot created a one-party state propaganda article which no one except yourselves could believe. '''Thanks'''. | |||
== Carbon sequestration section == | |||
::::::Now, I assume from the answers, that you still don't want the help of us sceptics (now the majority), well I was beginning to worry that I might have to put my time and effort where my mouth was and actually do something to improve this article. So, thanks again, no need to waste my time here! ] (]) 08:53, 6 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
The ''Carbon sequestration'' section has contents that describe ] and ]. These three concepts are often confused. The vast majority of carbon sequestration happens through spontaneous, non-anthropogenic processes that have been going on for hundreds of millions of years and will continue if we just leave the forests alone. Most of the content in this section is about human activity that aims to increase the amount of carbon that is sequestered, i.e. ]. There is also some content on ], which technically involves sequestration but is usually deployed in processes that desequester more carbon than they sequester. | |||
{{unindent}} Please read ] and take this discussion to a blog where it belongs. <sup>]]</sup> 08:58, 6 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
I propose 1) Retitling this section as "Carbon dioxide removal" and 2) Moving the two sentences on CCS to the end of the first paragraph in the "Clean energy" section. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 20:11, 25 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
Somebody will have to put this to bed. It is an opinion piece. Say Goodnight, Gracie. ] (=] ) 00:42, 7 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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:Done. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 20:36, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Um == | |||
== Paper about our work & suggestions == | |||
Isn't this just a theory? ] (]) 16:36, 10 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:See the ]. ] (]) 16:49, 10 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Q9 caught my eye, while it's right to note that the "atmospheric lifetime of methane (about 10 years) is a lot shorter than that of {{CO2}}", should we not also be clear that it sorta converts to {{CO2}} thus continuing to have an effect? <sup></sup> . . ], ] 17:29, 10 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
A came out on the work we do here, analysing how our group dynamics and our interpretation of policies and guidelines resulted in the current article. | |||
== Merging of "UNFCCC" and "Politics" sections == | |||
The paper analyses whether we consider climate change as an event (vs process), and if we call it a crisis. It's somewhat critical of us doing neither sufficiently clearly. The paper doesn't give that many pointers how we could achieve this however. We've made progress over the last 6 years in changing the article to be more about climate change now, rather than climate change in the future, but I wonder if there is more to do here. (changing the crisis framing is a discussion I won't reopen). If there are no objections, I might send Steiert an email asking her to join us. In the meantime, I'm suggesting two changes in the lead | |||
I've had an idea of merging these two sections. I think the existing revision of the UNFCCC section is okay, but I'm not satisfied with the politics section (revision below as of 10 May): | |||
The current rise in ] is ] burning ] <s>since the ]</s> --> | |||
] has contributed to thawing ], ] and ] --> something in the present tense. I'd suggest leaving out polar amplification too. The quote doesn't fully capture this sentence anyway, and the source doesn't make the connection between polar amplification and these specific impacts. ] (]) 19:44, 30 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
''Developed and developing countries have made different arguments over who should bear the burden of economic costs for cutting emissions. Developing countries often concentrate on per capita emissions, that is, the total emissions of a country divided by its population. Per capita emissions in the industrialized countries are typically as much as ten times the average in developing countries. This is used to make the argument that the real problem of climate change is due to the profligate and unsustainable lifestyles of those living in rich countries.'' | |||
:Thanks for sharing this, interesting article. The study uses the May 2022 version of this article, I wonder what she'd think of the current version. | |||
''On the other hand, Banuri et al. point out that total carbon emissions, carrying capacity, efficient energy use and civil and political rights are very important issues. Land is not the same everywhere. Not only the quantity of fossil fuel use but also the quality of energy use is a key debate point. Efficient energy use supporting technological change might help reduce excess carbon dioxide in Earth's atmosphere. The use of fossil fuels for conspicuous consumption and excessive entertainment are issues that can conflict with civil and political rights. People in developed countries argue that history has proven the difficulty of implementing fair rationing programs in different countries because there is no global system of checks and balances or civil liberties.'' | |||
:As for the sentence, {{tq|The current rise in...}}, I believe we had added "since the ]" to clarify what is meant by current. ] (]) 17:50, 31 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
''The Kyoto Protocol, which came into force in 2005, sets legally binding emission limitations for most developed countries. Developing countries are not subject to limitations. This exemption led the U.S. and Australia to decide not to ratify the treaty, although Australia did finally ratify the treaty in December 2007. Debate continued at the Copenhagen climate summit and the Cancún climate summit.'' | |||
::Upon reflection, I'd like to keep {{tq|since the Industrial Revolution}}. One of the criticism in the article is that we are vague in terms of our tenses. When things happened, are happening, or will happen. ({{tq|Why is it so hard to arrive at a clear understanding of when climate change is happening and why do temporal constructions of this event vary so broadly}}) | |||
::{{tq|since the Industrial Revolution}} gives precision and clarity to that sentence. I think it accurately describes rough timescale of human-induced climate change. | |||
::Other overview sources might say things like {{tq|The industrial activities that our modern civilization depends upon have raised atmospheric carbon dioxide levels by nearly 50% since 1750}} | |||
::If you click ], it largely matches with above: {{tq|Beginning in Great Britain, the Industrial Revolution spread to continental Europe and the United States, from around 1760 to about 1820–1840.}} ] (]) 14:44, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::My thinking here is that "since the industrial revolution" may be a bit misleading, in the sense that most warming really happened in the last 50 years, rather than over such a long period of time. I'm also appreciating the simplicity of the POTD description below, and would like to move away from a ] in terms of number of links. ] (]) 17:13, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{od}}That's a very good point, but I think we should add that (in the last 50 years part) into the lead, instead of removing "since the ]" part. I know you value conciseness but I think this time precision beats conciseness. | |||
Again, the study was up to May 2022 version of this article. . I think the current version of the lead is much more precise, as we define since when the current climate change has been happening. | |||
Industrial activities (NASA source) started with industrial revolution. Of course it was limited in 18th century. In 19th century it was few countries (UK etc), with coal etc. With technology (oil etc) and more countries industrializing, warming increased in 20th century, which is your point. | |||
Also note that many cumulative emissions graphs go back to 1750 . I'll check few more sources tomorrow, including ] sources, to see how they cover it. ] (]) 17:38, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:The prose quality of the first paragraph was definitely better in that version at least. I don't think "adding to greenhouse gases" is correct English. If I can find time, I might suggest a new version of our opening in a separate discussion section. | |||
The first and second paragraphs do not specify exactly who has made these various arguments. The third paragraph overlaps with the earlier section on the UNFCCC. My suggestion is to remove the "UNFCCC" section and to replace the existing "Politics" section entirely. My suggested revision for the politics section is as follows: | |||
:My guess is that many sources don't talk about "industrial revolution" in their first paragraph, instead only use that when they go into the weeds of the topic. | |||
:* NASA describes it as happening from the mid-20th century in their first paras (https://science.nasa.gov/climate-change/what-is-climate-change/) | |||
:* Met Office describes it similar to us (https://www.metoffice.gov.uk/weather/climate-change/what-is-climate-change), from the mid-1850s we started polluting. | |||
:* WMO doesn't describe the time period, except by refering to a pre-industrial baseline (https://wmo.int/topics/climate-change) | |||
:] (]) 18:03, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{od}}{{ping|Femke}} here are some ] sources I found with database through . | |||
There are lots of results. Only some of them are below: | |||
''Most countries are Parties to the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change (UNFCCC). The ultimate objective of the Convention is to prevent "dangerous" human interference of the climate system. As is stated in the Convention, this requires that GHGs are stabilized in the atmosphere at a level where ecosystems can adapt naturally to climate change, food production is not threatened, and economic development can proceed in a sustainable fashion.'' | |||
The first two have detailed entries. I'd recommend you to check them: | |||
''The Framework Convention was agreed in 1992, but since then, global emissions have risen (US NRC). During negotiations, the G77 (a lobbying group in the United Nations representing 133 developing nations (Dessai, p4)) pushed for a mandate requiring developed countries to " the lead" in reducing their emissions (Grubb, pp.144-145). This was justified on the basis that: the developed world's emissions had contributed most to the stock of GHGs in the atmosphere; per-capita emissions (i.e., emissions per head of population) were still relatively low in developing countries; and the emissions of developing countries would grow to meet their development needs (Liverman, p.290). This mandate was sustained in the Kyoto Protocol to the Framework Convention (Liverman, p.290), which entered into legal effect in 2005 (UNFCCC).'' | |||
*Encyclopedia of Climate and Weather (2 ed.) {{doi|10.1093/acref/9780199765324.001.0001}}. Global Warming entry. Notes both pre-industrial increase and increase since 1970. | |||
''In ratifying the Kyoto Protocol, most developed countries accepted legally binding commitments to limit their emissions. These first-round commitments expire in 2012 (UNFCCC). US President George W. Bush rejected the treaty on the basis that "it exempts 80% of the world, including major population centers such as China and India, from compliance, and would cause serious harm to the US economy" (Dessai, p5).'' | |||
::{{tq2|The term global warming has become synonymous in the press with human-induced climate change. ... Carbon dioxide concentrations in the atmosphere have increased such that 2009 values of about 385 ppmv are over 36 percent higher than preindustrial values of 280 ppmv and over half that increase has occurred since 1970 (Figure 1).}} | |||
* Encyclopedia of Global Change {{doi|10.1093/acref/9780195108255.001.0001}}. | |||
::Climate Change entry: | |||
::{{tq2|An Overview<br/>... During the past two centuries, anthropogenic activity has resulted in large increases in the atmospheric greenhouse gas content, which has caused a detectable increase in global temperatures and are predicted to continue to increase for many decades before the climate system reaches a new equilibrium. ...}} | |||
::Global warming entry: | |||
::{{tq2|..Levels rose to 275 ppmv during the warm interglacial phases, and that level is also considered representative of the preindustrial era of the nineteenth century...}} | |||
The two below have shorter entries: | |||
''At the 15th UNFCCC Conference of the Parties, held in 2009 at Copenhagen, several UNFCCC Parties produced the Copenhagen Accord. Parties associated with the Accord (140 countries, as of November 2010 (UNEP, p9)) aim to limit the future increase in global mean temperature to below 2 °C. A preliminary assessment by the United Nations Environment Programme suggests a possible "emissions gap" between the voluntary pledges made in the Accord and the emissions cuts necessary to have a "likely" chance of limiting global warming to 2 deg C above the pre-industrial level (UNEP, pp10-11). To meet the 2 deg C objective, studies generally indicate the need for global emissions to peak before 2020, with substantial declines in emissions thereafter (UNEP, p14).'' | |||
*A Dictionary of Weather (3 ed.) {{doi|10.1093/acref/9780191988356.001.0001}}. Separate entries for global warming and climate change (climatic change). Not mentioned there. | |||
*A Dictionary of Human Geography {{doi|10.1093/acref/9780199599868.001.0001}}. Climate change entry. Not mentioned there, but source mentions Anthropocene. | |||
:By the way, there is an entire encyclopedia on climate change communication, The Oxford Encyclopedia of Climate Change Communication. | |||
I think we should mention something like pre-industrial in the first paragraph. But we can shift things around. For example, the last sentence in first paragraph cites IPCC AR6 WG1 Technical Summary 2021, p. 67. That page mentions: | |||
''The 16th Conference of the Parties (COP16) was held at Cancún in 2010. It produced an agreement, not a binding treaty, that the Parties should take urgent action to reduce greenhouse gas emissions to meet a goal of limiting global warming to 2 deg C above pre-industrial temperatures. It also recognized the need to consider strengthening the goal to a global average rise of 1.5 °C.'' | |||
{{tq2|'''Since 1750''', changes in the drivers of the climate system are dominated by the warming influence of increases in atmospheric GHG concentrations and a cooling influence from aerosols, both resulting from human activities}} | |||
p.4: | |||
{{tq2|Observed increases in well-mixed greenhouse gas (GHG) concentrations since around 1750 are unequivocally caused | |||
by human activities}} | |||
I'll make my proposal below in a new section ] (]) 19:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
'''References:''' | |||
== Article housekeeping == | |||
*Dessai | |||
*Grubb | |||
*Liverman | |||
*UNEP | |||
*UNFCCC | |||
*US NRC | |||
Thanks {{u|Femke}} for removing unused references and other tidying. I could pitch in to help with that kind of thing for an hour or two this week. What else needs to be done? ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 02:26, 31 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Just to let you know, I intend to clean up after myself, but got sidetracked. For the areas I edited, some of the citations aren't to chapters but to overall IPCC reports. I'll be fixing those. ] (]) 16:54, 31 October 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Thanks Bogazicili! | |||
::In terms of housekeeping, I try to do the following every one/two years: | |||
::* See if overcitation has slipped in, which is often a red flag for text-source integrity issues. One example is overcitation after "Smaller contributions come from ], organic carbon from combustion of fossil fuels and biofuels, and from anthropogenic dust", which has 6 sources. (I you could help here!) | |||
::* Check if jargon such as anthropogenic has slipped back in, and reword using plain English | |||
::* Reread the article, and check if there is text-source integrity for surprising statements | |||
::* Reread the article, and update numbers which need updating. | |||
::] (]) 17:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Not that big of an issue, but the source formatting is also slightly messy and inconsistent in places (e.g. Harvnb is used for most things but not all, some things are missing various fields, etc). ] (]) 19:17, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Wow, that's a lot of work that you've been doing regularly! I'll take on the overcitation thing. Will indicate here when I've finished checking. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 19:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I'll have much more time to work on this tomorrow (Sunday). I think I added most of the AR6 citations. I'll be fixing those tomorrow. And then I can also pitch in with the rest of the housekeeping. ] (]) 17:18, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I think I fixed the parts I had added. ] (]) 20:31, 5 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
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:I'm in favor, again. I tagged parts of the politics section some time ago but haven't got round to doing much positive with it. The old version is a blight. I can't even offer any criticism of your proposed revision, this time; I must be tired.--] (]) 22:43, 11 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
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== Suggestions for the first sentence == | |||
::Thanks for your support. ] (]) 19:31, 13 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::For clarification "degrees C" above (or °C) is ] for those who use ] (°F). ] (]) 09:43, 19 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
The first sentence is awkward, and I'd love to craft a new first sentence before we get to be on the main page. The "in common usage" is especially jarring, and may fall slightly foul of ]. I have two suggestions: | |||
== Help needed == | |||
# '''Climate change''' encompasses '''global warming'''—Earth’s ongoing temperature increase—and its wider effects on Earth's climate. | |||
# '''Current climate change''' is the ongoing rise in global average temperatures and the resulting effects on Earth's climate. | |||
It's a common thing that more text gets bolded than the title alone, to clarify immediately to the reader what the topic is where there is some need for disambiguation. I think this may release us from the need to be a bit pedantic in the introduction. ] (]) 19:26, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
I'm looking for a way to track interest in the Global warming story and it occurred to me that a good indicator would be the number of comments on this discussion page. But I see that an awful lot of stories have been "archived" and in any case there is a huge number of pages. So, my question is this: is there a way to get a direct dump of comments (I don't need the text just the date). Indeed, perhaps this is a feature that might be worth adding to all Misplaced Pages pages? ] (]) 08:58, 20 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
: The preamble "In common usage" distinguishes current CC from "Climate change in a broader sense" that's in the second sentence. The distinction is important since we should (must?) quickly define the article title, focus attention on what ''this'' article is about, and link to the other article (Climate variability and change). I remember the community grappling with how to achieve these goals; the current text was the result. "In common usage" isn't jarring, though some might call it a bit formal. "Current climate change" (suggestion 2) isn't a much-used term. —21:10 The current wording tells the reader immediately that common-use "CC" is not the academically correct use. Of Suggestion 1 and 2, though, I definitely prefer Suggestion 1. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 22:23, 2 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Does give you enough information? it's the history of this article in batches of 5000, with time stamps who etc, but not the content, save it into excel and you can play with it to your heart content. Cheers <sup>]]</sup> 09:44, 20 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: The distinction is not between "academic usage" and "common usage". Academics use the terms like everybody else in their papers. IPCC has it in their name, WMO classifies their reporting under climate change. The difference is between definitionally and non-definitionally. If you have a sentence with ''is'', you imply a definition, so we need to make clear in some way that we're talking about "Contemporary", "Present-day", "Current" climate change. What we can do as well is 2b: | |||
::Yes that is excellent! Thankyou.] (]) 10:56, 20 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: 2b. Current/present-day/contemporary '''Climate change''' ... | |||
:::If you have some programming experience, you can access (nearly) all of Misplaced Pages's data via its ]-based ]. It's described at ]. The API has support in several languages - I found ] a good match. --] (]) 11:03, 20 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 09:00, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:You can also use to look at daily page views for any wikipedia article back to december 2007. For instance, it's interesting that there wasn't a big spike in as one might expect given the hubub surrounding the CRU hack near the end of the month. ] (]) 19:04, 20 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:I prefer 'Contemporary' to 'Current', but I like the wording in Suggestion 1 more. My suggestion would be something like: | |||
== Inertia in the climate system and energy sector == | |||
::Contemporary '''climate change''' encompasses '''global warming'''—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on ]. | |||
{{Merge to|greenhouse effect|discuss=Talk:greenhouse effect#Merger proposal|date=June 2011}} | |||
:Also, if the first sentence changes, the next two will probably need tweaking too. ] (]) 12:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::I wonder what percentage of the population knows what "contemporary" means. I'd estimate less than 80/90%, hence my suggestions for slightly less elegant wording. Two difficult words close to each other (contemporary/encompasses), makes it more difficult to guess the word meaning for those unaware. ] (]) 12:23, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::In that case, I would propose: "Present-day '''climate change''' includes both '''global warming'''—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on ]." ] (]) 12:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I like that variation. Present-day may prevent some knee-jerk reactions of Wikipedians trained to remove the word '']'' from articles. ] (]) 12:58, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Pinging all those with recent talk page activity: {{ping|Clayoquot|Amakuru|Bogazicili|Chipmunkdavis|Sunrise|Alaexis}}. ] (]) 09:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
I've prepared a revision to the section on external forcing, concentrating on the sub-section on greenhouse gases: | |||
:I prefer the first one because it includes the other common term, global warming. Global warming also redirects to this page, as it should. ] (]) 14:28, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
''External forcing refers to processes external to the climate system (though not necessarily external to Earth) that influence climate. Climate responds to several types of external forcing, such as changes in atmospheric composition (e.g., the concentrations of heat-trapping greenhouse gases), changes in solar luminosity (i.e., the sun's output (IPCC FAQ 2.1 Natural changes)), volcanic eruptions, and variations in Earth's orbit around the Sun. Attribution of recent climate change focuses on the first three types of forcing. Orbital cycles vary slowly over tens of thousands of years and thus are too gradual to have caused the temperature changes observed in the past century. Any human-induced climate change will occur against the "background" of natural variations in climate (2001 ts).'' | |||
: I concede Femke's point (09:00) re academics/definitions. My concern is to explicitly convey that there are two definitions of CC. This distinction parallels the fact that today's CC is different from historical/generic CC. Detail: reviewing https://www.thesaurus.com/browse/contemporary, I'm OK with "current" or "present" or "present-day" or "recent" or "ongoing" or "newfangled" (well, maybe not "newfangled :-) :-). —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:03, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
'''''Greenhouse gases''''' | |||
::I think it's more elegant to do it implicitly (present-day climate change), rather than explicitly. We want people to read about the topic of climate change, rather than about the intricacies of how terms are used in the first paragraph. ] (]) 17:06, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::: By "explicitly" I didn't mean super-ultra-formally. I think the distinction of definitions is accomplished by the second sentence, "Climate change in a broader sense...". That's all I meant. I'm OK with most of the smaller-change proposal I've read in this discussion. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:11, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I have a slight preference for Sgubaldo's proposal. All of them sound fine to me though. ] (] <nowiki>|</nowiki> ]) 17:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Just to clarify, since there are multiple proposals. I'm ok with this latest one: "Present-day climate change includes both global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate." ] (]) 17:43, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:If no one objects, I'll wait until tomorrow to see if there's any more replies, and then I'll make the changes. ] (]) 19:12, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
::Changes made. ] (]) 12:43, 4 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== FYI: removed 'mainly' from lead == | |||
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I changed "The current rise in global average temperature is mainly driven by human activities, especially fossil fuel burning since the Industrial Revolution" to "The current rise in global average temperature is <s>mainly</s> driven by human activities, especially fossil fuel burning since the Industrial Revolution". The best guess is taht 100% of climate change is driven by human activities (per new source), so the old wording was misleading and the old source didn't talk about this. The word driven itself also doesn't require 100% causation (that would be is caused by), so even when the percentage of human-induced climate change deviates from observed climate change, this wording should remain correct. | |||
''The greenhouse effect is the process by which absorption and emission of infrared radiation by gases in the atmosphere warm a planet's lower atmosphere and surface. It was proposed by Joseph Fourier in 1824 and was first investigated quantitatively by Svante Arrhenius in 1896.'' | |||
I did this boldly, as the old text was not really supported and misleading. Hope that's okay. ] (]) 10:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
''Naturally occurring greenhouse gases have a mean warming effect of about 33 °C (59 °F). The major greenhouse gases are water vapor, which causes about 36–70 percent of the greenhouse effect; carbon dioxide (CO2), which causes 9–26 percent; methane (CH4), which causes 4–9 percent; and ozone (O3), which causes 3–7 percent. Clouds also affect the radiation balance, but they are composed of liquid water or ice and so have different effects on radiation from water vapor.'' | |||
* '''Agree'''. As Earth was on a very slight cooling trend for ~10,000 years, I remember reading that humans cause ''"more than"'' 100% of global warming, though it would be confusing to say that literally. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:07, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
''Human activity since the Industrial Revolution has increased the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, leading to increased radiative forcing (see below) from CO2, methane, tropospheric ozone, CFCs and nitrous oxide. The concentrations of CO2 and methane have increased by 36% and 148% respectively since 1750. These levels are much higher than at any time during the last 800,000 years, the period for which reliable data has been extracted from ice cores. Less direct geological evidence indicates that CO2 values higher than this were last seen about 20 million years ago. Fossil fuel burning has produced about three-quarters of the increase in CO2 from human activity over the past 20 years. The rest of this increase is caused mostly by changes in land-use, particularly deforestation.'' | |||
*:The idea of a ] some 8,000 years ago is a . Regional climate proxies say there was one, but globally it's a more complex picture, and models think there's been continuous warming / stable temperatures. | |||
*:The more than 100% since pre-industrial also isn't true anymore as I understand it, as the last couple of years have seen very rapid warming. The source I cited is also the one used by the IPCC, and they say the best guess is exactly 100% caused by humans with some uncertainty. ] (]) 17:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
*::{{ping|Femke}} do you still want to remove "since the Industrial Revolution" part? That can be reworded and moved to the last sentence. Proposal below. ] (]) 20:30, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
== The lead, first paragraph == | |||
''The increase in the concentration of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere can be calculated as a change in the radiative forcing of the climate (IPCC FAQ 2.1 Box 2.1). Radiative forcing is a measure of how various factors alter the energy balance of the Earth's atmosphere. A positive radiative forcing will tend to increase the energy of the Earth-atmosphere system, leading to a warming of the system. Between the start of the Industrial Revolution in 1750, and the year 2005, the increase in the atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide lead to a positive radiative forcing of about 1.66 watts per meter squared (SPM 2007).'' | |||
This is what the first paragraph of the lead would look like, after recent changes and suggestions in ] and ] and above section. | |||
Didn't include the sources in the article, and some of the new sources are above. For the "accelerating in the past 50 years", I will use . | |||
''Greenhouse gases remain in the atmosphere for different lengths of time (IPCC FAQ 10.3). For carbon dioxide, natural processes currently remove more than half of the CO2 emitted from the atmosphere within a century. Some fraction, however, remains in the atmosphere for many thousands of years.'' | |||
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''The governments of most countries in the world have agreed that the concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere should be stabilized at a safe level (see the politics section). To stabilize the atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide at a constant level, carbon dioxide emissions would need to be completely eliminated (IPCC FAQ 10.3). The present rate of emission of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere greatly exceeds its rate of removal by natural processes. This is analogous to a flow of water into a bathtub (Sterman and Sweeney, p221). So long as the tap runs water (analogous to the emission of carbon dioxide) into the tub faster than water escapes through the plughole (the natural removal of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere), then the level of water in the tub (analogous to the concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere) will continue to rise.'' | |||
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<s>In common usage, '''climate change''' describes '''global warming'''—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on ]. ] also includes previous long-term changes to Earth's climate.</s> Present-day '''climate change''' includes both '''global warming'''—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on ]. ] also includes previous long-term changes to Earth's climate. <s>The current</s> Present-day rise in ] is ], especially burning ]s. <s>especially ] burning since the ]</s> Fossil fuel use, ], and some ] and ] practices release ]es.<ref name="Our World in Data-2020">{{harvnb|Our World in Data, 18 September|2020}}</ref> These gases ] that the Earth ] after it warms from ], warming the lower atmosphere. <s>], the primary greenhouse gas driving global warming, ] and is at levels unseen for millions of years.</s> ] and accelerating in the past 50 years, greenhouse gas concentrations have been increasing. ], the primary greenhouse gas driving global warming, ] | |||
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] (]) 19:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I think the the new text is not great for flow. Most of the sentences are roughly the same lenght, with makes for slightly uncomfortable reading. I don't feel strongly about removing "industrial revolution", but I don't think moving it to later is that much of a change? ] (]) 21:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{Multiple image|direction=vertical|align=right|image1=GHG per capita 2005.png|image2=GHG by country 2005.png|width=220|caption1=] in 2005, including ].|caption2=Total greenhouse gas emissions in 2005, including land-use change.}} | |||
::I suggested the changes with this criticism in mind. {{tq|Why is it so hard to arrive at a clear understanding of when climate change is happening and why do temporal constructions of this event vary so broadly}} | |||
::Now we have two clear dates (since 1750 and accelerating in the past 50 years). ] (]) 22:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::@] "accelerating in the last 50 years" suggests to me the rate of warming is increasing across that time period. i think you mean that the last 50 years has exhibited a higher rate of warming that the precedding period. | |||
:::you may also like to add to that, during this 50 year period, attribution studies are able to clearly discern human driven change from natural forcing -- this relates to the time series figure on the page. ] (]) 13:14, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{talkref}} | |||
''Over the last three decades of the 20th century, economic and population growth were the main drivers of increases in greenhouse gas emissions. CO2 emissions are continuing to rise due to the burning of fossil fuels and land-use change.:71 Emissions can be attributed to different regions. The two figures opposite show annual greenhouse gas emissions for the year 2005, including land-use change. Attribution of emissions due to land-use change is a controversial issue Banuri, p.93; Liverman, p.289). For example, concentrating on more recent changes in land-use (as the figures opposite do) is likely to favour those regions that have deforested earlier, e.g., Europe.'' | |||
== Proposed replacement of graphic in "Impacts" section == | |||
'''''Future emissions''''' | |||
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''The future level of greenhouse gas emissions is highly uncertain (Fisher). One factor that will affect the future level of emissions are current and future investment decisions made in the energy sector (synth 2007; sachs, p112). Energy-sector investments, e.g., coal-fired power plants, have long lifetimes, and therefore also have long term impacts on greenhouse gas emissions.'' | |||
|image1= Soil moisture and climate change.svg |caption1= '''A. Existing graphic:''' The sixth IPCC Assessment Report projects changes in average soil moisture at 2.0 °C of warming, as measured in ]s from the 1850 to 1900 baseline. | |||
|image2= 2024 Climate change increasing Atlantic hurricane peak wind speeds.svg |caption2= '''B. Proposed replacement:''' Climate change's increase of water temperatures intensified peak wind speeds in all eleven 2024 Atlantic hurricanes. | |||
''Analysts have developed scenarios of how emissions might change in the future. Emissions in these scenarios vary according to different assumptions over future economic, social, technological, and natural developments (SRES). In 2000, the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) published a special report on emissions scenarios. This report contains a set of 40 emissions scenarios that cover a wide range of possible future emissions out to the end of the 21st century (morita). Six representative scenarios from the IPCC's report have been used to project what the future atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide might be. These scenarios suggest an atmospheric concentration of between 540 and 970 parts-per-million (ppm) in the year 2100 (Synth 2001). This compares to a pre-industrial concentration of 280 ppm, and in 2008, a concentration of about 385 ppm (US GCRP, p13).'' | |||
|image3= 1980- Atlantic region category 4 and 5 hurricanes - NYTimes and NOAA.svg |caption3= '''C. Second proposed replacement:''' Times series of Category 4 and 5 Atlantic hurricanes | |||
}} | |||
'''References:''' | |||
I've long questioned the value of the "soil moisture" graphic in the short, crowded, under-emphasized "Impacts" section. | |||
*2001 ts box 1 | |||
*Banuri PDF | |||
*Fisher | |||
*IPCC FAQ 10.3 | |||
*IPCC FAQ 2.1 | |||
*Liverman PDF | |||
*Morita | |||
*Sachs PDF | |||
*SPM 2007 Figure SPM 2 | |||
*SRES | |||
*Sterman and Sweeney PDF | |||
*Synth 2001 Question 3 | |||
*Synth 2007, following Table SPM 5 | |||
*US GCRP, PDF | |||
My main concern is that the flow-stock nature of climate change is not mentioned in the present revision of the article. Generally I am concerned that the existing article does not present information in a way that is easy enough to understand for the general reader. The flow-stock issue is crucial to understanding climate change - see the Sterman and Sweeney paper referenced above. I am also concerned that inertia in the energy system is not mentioned either. In my opinion, inertia is crucial to understanding policy issues related to climate change. | |||
Another issue is that of emissions due to land-use change. In the politics section, the existing revision of the article includes diagrams that show regional GHG emissions, which includes emissions from land-use change. Emissions from land-use change is a controversial subject, and this needs to be mentioned. I'd prefer a broader discussion of emissions to be included, e.g., historical emissions, but I'm aware of the fact that the article is already far too long. | |||
I've added a brief description of radiative forcing. I'd prefer an explanation of external forcing that is easier to understand. I know of the scales analogy used by . Perhaps a later revision could include this? | |||
I've removed this: | |||
''Fossil fuel reserves are sufficient to reach these levels and continue emissions past 2100 if coal, oil sands or methane clathrates are extensively exploited'' | |||
This is not supported by the cited source. Different SRES scenarios make different assumptions over the future availability of fossil fuels (. These are assumptions, but the sentence above gives the impression that the SRES projections are made with absolute certainty. ] (]) 16:28, 26 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
: Quite aside from the content, the citations ("2001 ts box", "Banuri PDF", "Fisher") are quite inadequate; they need to be in proper form. - ] (]) 16:40, 26 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Hello. I've used the citation style above purely for this talk page. If I go ahead with my suggested revision, I'll use the same citation style as the rest of the article. ] (]) 13:55, 27 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
: Haven't had a chance to give it a thorough read yet or compare with the existing text but "To stabilize the atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide at a constant level, carbon dioxide emissions would need to be completely eliminated." is wrong (even if the IPCC says it!) 'net' emissions need to be zero to stabilize the atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide at a constant level.--] (]) 22:45, 26 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::I assume that the IPCC FAQ is referring to net carbon dioxide emissions from human activities. This is how the IPCC dealt with the issue of emissions and stabilization in the Third Assessment Report (see and ). I agree that mentioning net emissions would be helpful. In my view it would require an explanation of what "net" actually means in this context, e.g.,: | |||
:::''The governments of most countries in the world have agreed that the concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere should be stabilized at a safe level (see the politics section). Stabilizing the concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere would need to account both for processes that remove GHGs from the atmosphere, as well as processes that add GHGs to the atmosphere, i.e., net GHG emissions. To stabilize the atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide at a constant level, net carbon dioxide emissions would need to be completely eliminated (IPCC FAQ 10.3).'' | |||
:::''The present net rate of emission of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere greatly exceeds its net rate of removal by natural processes. This is analogous to a flow of water into a bathtub (Sterman and Sweeney, p221). So long as the tap runs water (analogous to the emission of carbon dioxide) into the tub faster than water escapes through the plughole (the natural removal of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere), then the level of water in the tub (analogous to the concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere) will continue to rise.'' | |||
:::] (]) 14:24, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Why not forget the word 'net' (I agree it might be confusing in this context) and just replace "To stabilize the atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide at a constant level, carbon dioxide emissions would need to be completely eliminated." with "To stabilize the atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide at a constant level, carbon dioxide emissions would need to equal the rate of carbon dioxide removal from the atmosphere."?--] (]) 21:47, 28 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::In my opinion, breaking down the explanation into two sentences rather than one might make things easier to understand. I would prefer keeping the sentence about net emissions for this reason. I think that the revision could, however, be rewritten to make things clearer: | |||
:::::''The governments of most countries in the world have agreed that the concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere should be stabilized at a safe level (see the politics section). Stabilizing the concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere would need to account both for processes that remove GHGs from the atmosphere, as well as processes that add GHGs to the atmosphere, i.e., net GHG emissions.'' | |||
:::::''At present, human activities are adding emissions of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere far faster than they are being removed. This is analogous to a flow of water into a bathtub (Sterman and Sweeney, p221). So long as the tap runs water (analogous to the emission of carbon dioxide) into the tub faster than water escapes through the plughole (the natural removal of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere), then the level of water in the tub (analogous to the concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere) will continue to rise. To stabilize the atmospheric concentration of carbon dioxide at a constant level, emissions would essentially need to be completely eliminated. It is estimated that reducing carbon dioxide emissions 100% below their present level (i.e., complete elimination) would lead to a slow decrease in the atmospheric concentration of CO2 by 40 ppm over the 21st century.'' | |||
:::::I think it is necessary to mention that only an effective elimination of CO2 emissions would lead to stabilization. Not mentioning this might give readers the false impression that a less stringent level of emissions reduction would lead to stabilization. ] (]) 15:30, 30 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::I'd rather these changes be taken one at a time rather than in bulk, so they can be evaluated more easily. As a first specific remark, we should de-emphasize SRES since those scenarios are not being used for AR5. ] (]) 14:30, 27 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Agreed on the first point you raise. Although I think the issue of inertia is important, I think a higher priority is to point out the controversy surrounding emissions from land-use change. First of all, I think that the existing article's diagrams of regional emissions should be moved from the politics section to the greenhouse gases section. This would allow a brief explanation of these diagrams in the body of the article's text. I think it is more appropriate to explain these diagrams in the greenhouse gases section of the article rather than the politics section. The text that I've added is in bold: | |||
{{Multiple image|direction=vertical|align=right|image1=GHG per capita 2005.png|image2=GHG by country 2005.png|width=220|caption1=] in 2005, including ].|caption2=Total greenhouse gas emissions in 2005, including land-use change.}} | |||
:::'' Over the last three decades of the 20th century, economic and population growth were the main drivers of increases in greenhouse gas emissions. CO2 emissions are continuing to rise due to the burning of fossil fuels and land-use change.:71 '''Emissions can be attributed to different regions. The two figures opposite show annual greenhouse gas emissions for the year 2005, including land-use change. Attribution of emissions due to land-use change is a controversial issue (Banuri, p.93; Liverman, p.289). For example, concentrating on more recent changes in land-use (as the figures opposite do) is likely to favour those regions that have deforested earlier, e.g., Europe.''' | |||
:::''Emissions scenarios, estimates of changes in future emission levels '' | |||
:::'''References:''' | |||
:::*Banuri PDF | |||
:::*Liverman PDF | |||
:::I don't agree with you about the SRES scenarios. Temperature projections using six of the SRES scenarios are already referred to in the article. In my view, it therefore makes sense to use them also when referring to projections of the future atmospheric concentration of CO2. | |||
:::I'm uncertain as to which scenarios you'd use instead of the SRES ones. A very wide range of emissions scenarios have been published. I'm unclear on how you would objectively choose a representative set of these scenarios to mention in this article. At the time of the IPCC fourth assessment report, the SRES scenarios were still comparable in range to other baseline scenarios in the scientific literature . More recent assessments by the US Global Change Research Program () and US National Research Council () refer to the SRES scenarios, presumably because they are still thought to be relevant. The projected concentration of CO2 based on the International Energy Agency's reference scenario of World Energy Outlook 2009 () appears to lie within the range of the SRES projections. You mention the fact that the SRES scenarios are not being used in the IPCC fifth assessment report. I don't know how this is relevant to improving the article at present. The fifth assessment report has not been published yet, nor have the new scenarios that are being developed for it. ] (]) 18:21, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::Note my suggestion is to "de-emphasize" SRES, not omit it. The CMIP5 runs (which will be used for AR5) are using "representative concentration pathways" (RCPs) rather than SRES. Basically a RCP is a concentration pathway that produces a given radiative forcing by 2100, so RCP4.5 gives a forcing of 4.5 W/m2, RCP8.5 gives a forcing of 8.5 W/m2 and so on. Output from the first runs is beginning to hit the ESG and we will begin seeing papers very soon. ] (]) 19:11, 29 May 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::My mistake. What change do you think would be appropriate? ] (]) 00:06, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::::Simply include a mention of SRES in describing how simulations used in AR4 were set up, not a full paragraph with explanatory details. We have a whole article ] for anyone who wants to look further. ] (]) 03:13, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::I agree with Boris when he said "I'd rather these changes be taken one at a time rather than in bulk, so they can be evaluated more easily." More importantly, I'm somewhat opposed to expanding a whole section on greenhouse gas here, without first discussing a comprehensive approach to the info you want to add with the overlapping info found on an existing article about the ] and a separate overlapping one on ]ses. IMO all this info ought to be merged, with just the highlights here and a link to a ''single'' separate main article on the ins and outs of how the gasses do what they do. Collating all this info with a minimum of redundancy is a worthy task. Thanks for your interest. BTW, I share your desire to make internal/external forcing more clear. On a small point, there seems to be confusion about how to parse various impacts of the lithosphere. ]. ] (]) 21:59, 2 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::: Discussion about my proposed merger of ] and ] is here: ] ] (]) 10:16, 3 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
==Lede is bloating== | |||
While some of the recent edits have added helpful explanations, the lede has now grown too unwieldy and lacks flow. The lede would be more effective if the details be pared back or moved to later in the text, and the current seven choppy paragraphs condensed down to no more than four per ]. ] (]) 03:03, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: Thanks, Boris, you're right its bloated. I already made a couple moves out of the lede for stuff I thought would be non-controversial. Apologies if I erred. | |||
'''I PROPOSE''' moving the paragraphs starting "The uncertainty in IPCC's estimates" to the climate models section | |||
Also.... today I added pithy language from the most recent research about why this matters (the clear and present danger paragraph). In keeping with ] I think that is a good "hook", so '''I PROPOSE''' moving the following paragraph that describes some of the specific responses ''in general'' could move down to the intro paragraph in "Attributed and expected effects" | |||
Will that help? And as a new editor, how do I know when enough time has gone by for soliciting comment here before going ahead with those changes? Or if you just wanna do it, that'd be fine by me. ] (]) 03:53, 2 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::: Just posted my first effort at condensing. Article-improvement oriented comment welcome.] (]) 12:03, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:I propose reverting to revision. My 2 cents. -] (]) 16:49, 3 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: I want to assume you have good intentions and intend for the article to be improved by doing this. I note it would result in the deletion of numerous verifiable citations to very recent peer reviewed research on the subject. How will this improve the article, IYO? ] (]) 12:03, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::While some of the changes are improvements, my overall assessment is that the lede has become fragmented and wordy, and puts too much emphasis on small-minority perspectives that do not have broad scientific acceptance (e.g., Joe Romm). I can see an argument for taking it back to an earlier version and introducing changes at a more measured pace. ] (]) 17:22, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
== IPCC Models == | |||
NewsAndEventsGuy has added to the reasons for uncertainty in the IPCC predictions "(4) an assumption in the models that temperature will rise in a linear fashion when in fact the rate of global temperature rise is accelerating" . This is at odds with my understanding that the models used do not make any direct assumption about the shape of the temperature curve. I would have removed it but it appears to be supported by what seems a legitimate reference. --] (]) 00:04, 2 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:I removed it too, but he added it back. You are of course correct that the models make no assumption whatsoever about the relationship between CO2 and temperature, be it linear, logarithmic, serpentine or whatever. Trouble is, it would be hard to find a reference on such an obvious point. We could point to papers on model formulation that give the governing equations, etc. but we might not be able to find a reference that explicitly says "AOGCMs make no assumption about the shape of the temperature response." Thompson is an outstanding paleoclimatologist but he's not a modeler and the error he makes is of a fairly common sort. ] (]) 02:35, 2 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: Beat me, guys, I'm not a climate modeler either. It's my guess that Dr Thompson would be pleased to respond to an inquiry for clarification. Since I stuck it in there, I will be happy to drop him an email. If this falls off my radar, please post a reminder on my talk page in a month or so.] (]) 03:43, 2 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
: IanOfNorwich and Short Brigade Harvester Boris are both correct about models not making assumptions about the shape of the temperature response to forcings. I swear I've seen this exact point addressed at realclimate, but I can't find a good reference right now. There's a related comment in : | |||
{{cquote|For the case of the global mean temperature however, we have enough modelling experience to have confidence that, to first order, global mean surface temperatures at decadal and longer timescales are a reasonably linear function of the global mean radiative forcings. This result is built in to simple energy balance models, but is confirmed (more or less) by more complex ocean-atmosphere coupled models and our understanding of long term paleo-climate change.}} | |||
:But that's a bit too generic. On the other hand, explains in part how the models work, but is not explicit on this point. Neither is . Maybe it's best to cite ? Or just email Gavin Schmidt? - ] (]) 03:07, 3 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: Good idea, P. I did email Dr T, but for all I know he's on another expedition and not reading fan mail. I'll give it a week or so and then post something on RC or email Garvin as you suggest. ] (]) 10:12, 3 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::Are you happy if we remove it for the time being, NewsAndEventsGuy? The thing is this just can't be correct "an assumption in the models that temperature will rise in a linear fashion". If it were the temperature rise output from models referenced by the IPCC would have to output linear temperature responses choosing only a gradient, which they don't. The underlying point that models underestimate positive feedback 'may' be true but we're not really in a better position to judge than the climate modelers, without some very detailed research.--] (]) 10:45, 3 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::: Sure, that works. I wasted it already. If I come up with anything to revisit the topic I'll post it here, and call attention on TALK for you and Boris to mull over before going live. This subsection can get wasted in a few months if there's no changes. ] (]) 11:51, 3 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::Many of the forcings are not properly accounted for, and cloud models are very unsophisticated. None of this really captured here. ] (]) 04:46, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
== GAIA Theory and Climate Change == | |||
I was astonished after reading this article about Climate Change to see that no single reference is made to the GAIA theory of James Lovelock. As found some decades ago, the biosphere has a very powerful regulatory action on the climate. Hence, any serious climate mathematical model must include the important effects of the biosphere on the climate. Taking into account that these biological effects are very complex and difficult to model, the outcome of these climate models should have a high degree of uncertainty. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 00:59, 4 June 2011 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:: I give more attention to signed comments.] (]) 11:38, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::: Sorry, I guess its signed. See ] and ]; Not only the biosphere but the other four components of the climate system would be 100% perfectly represented in the perfect climate model. If you'd like to try drafting some text about uncertainty in the models, please do, and then your comment can be evaluated better. Include verifiable citations.] (]) 12:09, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
== uncertainty? == | |||
The existing graphic's content is not discussed in article text. Also, soil moisture's broader implication on the ''impacts'' affecting humans is speculative and indirect, perhaps even suggesting that things'll get better and better for sub-Saharan Africa. (Aside: I speak out against captions that merely repeat what's in the graphic's own legends/text.) | |||
Just visiting after a long absence. I'm pleased to see that language I helped get inserted and WMC battled hard to keep out, is still around in some form. | |||
Meanwhile, the ''impacts'' on humans of progressively more intense hurricanes is immediately and intuitively evident (see also ]). I realize Graphic B is not global and is only one year's hurricanes, but I think the graphic speaks to a more striking and immediate impact of climate change. | |||
:"The uncertainty in IPCC's estimates arises from (1) the use of models with differing sensitivity to greenhouse gas concentrations, the use of differing estimates of humanities' future greenhouse gas emissions, and (3) any additional emissions from climate feedbacks that were not included in the models IPCC used to prepare its report, i.e., greenhouse gas releases from permafrost." | |||
Please comment below, on your preference. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 23:19, 29 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Unfortunately, given the wikipedia cadre culture, this was the best that we could do. We enumerated what sources of uncertainty are included in the IPCC projections. Left unstated are the sources of uncertainty introduced by just about every diagnostic study, from Andrea Roesch's documentation of surface albedo bias as large as the CO2 forcing increase itself, Wentz's documentation that none of the climate models reproduce more than half of the observed increase in precipitation associated with the recent warming, and of course, we still don't know whether the net feedbacks to CO2 forcing are strongly positive as correlated in all the models, or actually negative corresponding to sensitivities less than 1 degree C. | |||
:While I'm open to replacing that graph, I'm not a fan of adding another US-focused one in its place. Is it possible to do something similar for tropical cyclones in general? ] (]) 08:21, 30 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
Has the culture changed here at all? Can we actually mention that the projection ranges were not adjusted for the problems documented in the diagnostic literature, some as large as the CO2 forcing itself, or must we continue to be satisfied with this simple enumeration of what was included? I.e., is there any point in climate science literate person sticking around?--] (]) 10:36, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:: It's Atlantic focused, not "US" focused per se. I've searched for CC-intensified (Pacific) typhoons but references applying ] to specific hurricanes/cyclones/typhoons are nearly non-existent. This chart was a rare discovery in how it makes CC's effects be concretely evident. If anyone finds similar references for the Pacific, let me know.. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:51, 30 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:The soil moisture graph ] three years ago. I think we could probably remove it (or move it?) but I am a bit concerned that we don't mention "soil moisture" content anywhere in the text (or is it mentioned under a different term?). I was going to suggest to move it to ] but I see it's already there. - I think my suggestion would be to remove it but to not replace it with another fairly complicated, wordy schematic (such as graph B.). Either remove it without replacement or replace it with something very visual (a photo?). In general, we do have a lot of graphs, schematics and images already in this article. Perhaps one less is actually a good thing. ] (]) 13:22, 30 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
:: I'll take credit for adding #3 in the pullquote above. Its not clear to me what your complaint is. Could you write a couple sentences of draft text with verifiable citations to help clarify your meaning? Thanks in advance. ] (]) 11:36, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Droughts are mentioned. ] (]) 21:29, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I'd rather have ] chosen for the replacement than the other file. I do not believe using an image for one season restricted in one basin would reflect climate change's general impact on tropical cyclones. I'm a bit cautious on replacing the existing image, but I want to see more people discussing before I issue my final verdict. <span style="font-family:Times New Roman;font-size:100%;color:#00008B;background-color:transparent;;CSS">]]</span> 18:21, 30 November 2024 (UTC) | |||
* '''Keep'''. Temperature, soil, precipitation are the 3 graphs in B. Future Climate Change, Risks, and Long-Term Responses in AR6 SYR SPM (page 14). We already have temperature in the article. ] (]) 21:25, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*:{{u|RCraig09}}, I'd recommend here for image B: ] ] (]) 21:32, 1 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===IPCC's AR6 Fig. TS-22 etc.=== | |||
:::The complaint, originally was, and still is, that the citing a range of projections in a scientific context, such as that attributed to the IPCC, gives the impression that the range brackets the uncertainty in the methods applied to produce that range. However, in this case, none of the uncertainty introduced by documented problems such as those with clouds and surface albedo, have been included or estimated for that range. I already mentioned diagnostic work by Roesch and Wentz, one could easily add the separate work by Camp and Tung and by Lean showing that the models underrepresent the signature of the solar cycle seen in the observations, or the work showing that models under represent the arctic melting, etc. | |||
:@] have you considered these figures? | |||
:::The way it was left previously, is that WMC and company stated that the range incorporated such uncertainty, but were unable to back it up. The quote above, at least for items 1 and 2, were the only sources of the range specifically supportable within the AR4 report. But the clique at the time, successfully resisted including not just a statement to the effect that the range doesn't include uncertainty from known errors in the models, but resisted attempts to actually cite and report diagnostic results.--] (]) 12:56, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:https://www.ipcc.ch/report/ar6/wg1/figures/technical-summary/figure-ts-22 ] (]) 13:21, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::With respect, please note that the Arbitration Committee has taken a dim view of ], including ] on other editors. With this in mind it is likely they would view your references to "cadres" and "cliques" in a poor light. Regards, ] (]) 13:58, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
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:: {{reply|DecFinney}} I think that Fig. TS-22 is far too complex and detailed for a layperson encyclopedia, especially in a high-level article such as this. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 15:10, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | ||
:::I wasnt imagining the whole thing. e.g. perhaps just the top right quarter. That seems like a really neat summary in lay terms of the kind of impacts different regions of the world could expect. It doesnt rely on the rest of the figure for understanding so I would assume its fine to crop it to make a new figure (but I am new-ish to wiki so am not sure of cropping policy). | |||
:::Such a figure seems much more relevant to any person in the world. Meanwhile figures based on the atlantic seem more like a token representation of impact (i.e. just one example) as well as introducing a regional bias and thereby limiting the interest for the wider global population. I appreciate you will not being trying to illustrate all impacts. Nevertheless, the figure I propose does do a pretty job of covering bases in the a concise manner. ] (]) 15:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::: {{reply|DecFinney}} I appreciate that Fig. TS-22(b) has a lot of information, a huge amount in fact: five values for each of 35 categories. Especially for a high-level article such as this, this micro-categorization would be overwhelming for lay readers. FYI: Generally there is no general prohibition on cropping as such (every edit involves selection of material from a larger-content publication), but I seem to recall that some organization, not sure if it's the IPCC, licensed things only if presented in their entirety. I wish I had a hurricane-intensification reference for both Atlantic and Pacific, but since the main point of Graphic "B" is ''climate change's intensification'' of hurricanes rather than hurricanes themselves, I think "B" is more than adequate for purpose. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 18:57, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::@] ok. the only multi-basin figure i can find that seems relevant to your aim is fig5 in https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/bams/101/3/bams-d-18-0194.1.xml | |||
:::::this shows the consistent projection of increased TC intensity (and rain rate) in every basin. ] (]) 07:34, 17 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::: {{reply|DecFinney}} Thanks for the research. I like the global extent of the AMS datasets but the error ranges are, like, totally_outtasight_dude! I'll have to consider the various drawings in the AMS reference... I lean toward something like Figs. 3b and 4b more than the global map. A major advantage of ] is that it's not a long-term prediction (it's about climate change ''attribution''), and concrete values are provided in the context of peak winds and hurricane categories. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 21:28, 17 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::@] i agree 3b and 4b are better multi-basin figs to consider. | |||
:::::::there is a part 1 to that paper which is about attribution. when i glanced at it, i didnt spot any suitable figures. https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/bams/100/10/bams-d-18-0189.1.xml | |||
:::::::attribution with TCs is still pretty statistically limited. i have to admit that fig1f probably justifies a focus on NAtlantic if you want to stick to an attribution based figure. | |||
:::::::thats my last input. thanks for the discussion. im happy with whatever you decide. ] (]) 09:08, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::: Many thanks. I haven't been able to conjure a ] to represent multi-basin attribution/changes that's more elegant than separate bar charts with distracting and divergent error bars scattered around a world map. I think that ] already captures predicted impacts quite well, and that an example of ] (Graphic "B", above) deserves space in this article. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:36, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Underemphasis on extreme event attribution=== | |||
::::With my respect too, your response was non-responsive. Please draft a couple sentences of text with verifiable citations to | |||
] | |||
::::clarify your meaning. Meanwhile, I am working on moving the IPCC uncertainty text from the LEDE to the section on models. See | |||
The preceding discussion brings out the point that ] is not even mentioned in this article. I think it's very important because, more and more, the intensification of specific current events are being presented to the public as being caused by global warming. This attribution is distinct from projections of future intensification such as that shown in ]. Though attribution science is not yet fully developed, and is statistical in nature, I think that something should be added to the "Impacts" section. Agreement? Suggestions? —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::discussion about the LEDE above. ] (]) 14:27, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::I see, once again we have to prove a negative, such as none of the diagnostic problems are incorporated in the range. Anything else is original research?--] (]) 02:33, 5 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::: No, I'm just saying I can't trust myself to infer what change you want me to take my free time to write up. So instead, | |||
:::::: I'm simply asking you to illustrate your complaint by drafting text. You seem to have plenty of time to repeat your | |||
:::::: complaint, after all. Wouldn't it be more productive proposing the specific text you'd like to see added? Assuming you | |||
:::::: want to improve the article, that is. ] (]) 02:32, 5 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:::::::We'll see how productive it is. I'm on a trip right now away from all the quotes from the diagnostic literature I want to get it. I'll propose some text when I get back. Thanx.--] (]) 02:35, 5 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:@] sounds reasonable to me. | |||
== global warming- the TRUTH! == | |||
:i think most good science comms would say that the chance of event is made more likely by climate change. it may go as far as to say it was basically impossible before, i.e. 1 in a million year event or something but the message can get a bit lost in that. of course one can odten say there's no precident in the records. | |||
{{hat|Collapsed per ]}} | |||
:im not sure about the plot. its not obvious to me exactly what the x axis means or what information helps determine it. what is the source of the figure? ] (]) 21:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
<big>Global Warming</big>. The myth of the century. Global Warming is the warming up of the Earth because of greenhouse gas/carbon emissions. Global warming does not actually exist though it has been 'made up'. Global Warming tells us of how the world has started to get hotter; they've shown us graphs on the recently changing temperatures, pictures of melting icecaps, and many discussions explaining it. The information they don't show us though is the other end of the graphs. They show us the recent 10, 20 or even 100 years of the graph, which has the slight temperature rise, but not before that, before these graphs it also showed the temperature rising, but also dropping, below freezing, creating ice ages. Throughout history the world we live in has gone through many different stages, from iceages to high temperatures, and back to an ice age and then the risen temperature. Right now we are in the rising temperature stage, and in about another 100 to 200 years we will probably be in another ice-age. NASA has done studies on other planets, including Mars, and these have shown the same temperature rises and decreases, these shows that Earth is not the only planet in this temperature cycle. | |||
:: {{reply|DecFinney}} Welcome to Misplaced Pages! Sources can usually be found on the Wikimedia Commons file description page (click through image itself), or in captions of charts placed in Misplaced Pages articles. Here the source is {{blue|{{cite web |last1=Lindsey |first1=Rebecca |title=Extreme event attribution: the climate versus weather blame game |url=https://www.climate.gov/news-features/understanding-climate/extreme-event-attribution-climate-versus-weather-blame-game |website=Climate.gov |publisher=National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240609120512/https://www.climate.gov/news-features/understanding-climate/extreme-event-attribution-climate-versus-weather-blame-game |archive-date=9 June 2024 |date=15 December 2016 |quote=Graphic adapted from Figure 4.7 in NAS 2016. |url-status=live}}.}} The x-axis means the degree to which models can accurately represent or predict real-world events. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 21:43, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:: This is not a forum. I think this section should be deleted. ] (]) 11:37, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
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== Mentioning SRM under "Reducing and recapturing emissions" == | |||
==Degree of consensus on warming and on causation== | |||
Hello! I am new to this talk page. I have been working on the ] and noticed that SRM is mentioned in the Climate Change article. '''I have some questions about how SRM is mentioned in this article.''' | |||
Should SRM really be mentioned under the heading "Reducing and recapturing emissions"? | |||
Is the degree of unanimity the same for "air temp is up" as for "we caused it"? Or is it true, as I seem to recall from polls of scientists, that there is more agreement about the observed temperature increase than about what caused it? | |||
Given that SRM would only ‘mask’ climate change instead of addressing the cause, greenhouse gas emissions. "SRM contrasts with climate change mitigation activities, such as emission reductions and carbon dioxide removal (CDR), as it introduces a ‘mask’ to the climate change problem by altering the Earth’s radiation budget, rather than attempting to address the root cause of the problem, which is the increase in greenhouse gases (GHGs) in the atmosphere" (). | |||
I seem to recall that only about 5% or 10% disagree with the 1.5 F (0.8 C) atmosphere temp increase, while 20% or more still have questions about the cause. | |||
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I suggest either deleting the two sentences on SRM altogether or clearly explaining to the readers that SRM is somewhat related but is not a mitigation option in the pure sense. ] (]) 12:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | ||
:Surprisingly, the found that 96.2% of active climate scientist support warming, and 97.4% think human activity is a significant contributing factor to changing mean global temperature. So the consensus amongst experts is very much the same (modulo statistical noise). --] (]) 19:40, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::Note to Ed, it's not that "we Wikipedians apparently have agreed" that there is a consensus, but that the National Academy of Sciences and other august bodies have agreed there is a consensus. ] (]) 19:45, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
:I agree with 1HumbleB's concerns (disclosure: we have worked together on the ] article; that's how I got interested in this). For comparison, in the article ] we have quite a good description of what SRM has to do with mitigation (or doesn't have to do with it). I have just moved that section further down in the article; it was under "definition" there until now which I don't think was ideal. It reads like this at the ] article: | |||
:::Stephan, sorry if I wasn't clear: I did not mean to profess lack of awareness that over 95% of climate scientists regard human activity to be '''significant''' and when I said that 20% or more still have questions about the cause I could have been clearer. The issue is not whether human activity has a measurable or "significant" impact on warming. Lindzen, et al., all agree. The issue is rather, as a UN agency reported, whether '''most''' of the warming is caused by human activity. | |||
:== Related approaches == | |||
:=== Relationship with solar radiation modification (SRM) === | |||
:While ] (SRM) could reduce surface temperatures, it temporarily masks climate change rather than addressing the root cause, which is greenhouse gases.<ref name="AR6 WGIII Ch 14">IPCC (2022) in , Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, United States]</ref>{{rp|14–56}} SRM would work by altering how much solar radiation the Earth absorbs.<ref name="AR6 WGIII Ch 14" />{{rp|14–56}} Examples include reducing the amount of sunlight reaching the surface, reducing the optical thickness and lifetime of clouds, and changing the ability of the surface to reflect radiation.<ref>{{Cite book |last=National Academies of Sciences |first=Engineering |url=https://nap.nationalacademies.org/catalog/25762/reflecting-sunlight-recommendations-for-solar-geoengineering-research-and-research-governance |title=Reflecting Sunlight: Recommendations for Solar Geoengineering Research and Research Governance |date=25 March 2021 |isbn=978-0-309-67605-2 |language=en |doi=10.17226/25762 |s2cid=234327299}}</ref> The ] describes SRM as a climate risk reduction strategy or supplementary option rather than a climate mitigation option.<ref name="AR6 WGIII Ch 14" /> | |||
:The terminology in this area is still evolving. Experts sometimes use the term ''geoengineering'' or ] in the scientific literature for both CDR or SRM, if the techniques are used at a global scale.<ref name="AR6 WGIII Ch 1">IPCC (2022) in , Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, United States</ref>{{rp|6–11}} IPCC reports no longer use the terms ''geoengineering'' or ''climate engineering''.<ref name="IPCC AR6 WGI Glossary">IPCC, 2021: . In . Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, USA, pp. 2215–2256, doi:10.1017/9781009157896.022.</ref> ] (]) 10:15, 7 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:: To simplify things: I'd like to propose to '''delete these two sentences''' (for the reasons given above): {{tq|] (SRM) is also a possible supplement to deep reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and legal concerns, and the risks are imperfectly understood.<ref>{{harvnb|IPCC SR15 Ch4|2018|pp=347–352}}</ref>}}. Especially the first out of these two sentences is problematic in my opinion. The phrasing reads as if there is a relationship between SRM and deep emission reductions; and it lacks nuance. Also, the topic of SRM opens a can of worms and would require more space than what can be given in this high level article. Therefore, I think it's better not to mention it here at all. Readers can easily find it in the ] article instead. ] (]) 21:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::So I went ahead and deleted the two sentences in question (as there was no disagreement voiced on the talk page). Subsequently, User:RCraig09 re-instated the two sentences with the edit summary comment: "The content was in the section, ]: and there was no implication that SRM is mitigation. You can distinguish mitigation from SRM if you think it's important." | |||
:::My response: this section is all about climate change mitigation. Directly under the section heading it says "'''Main''': Climate change mitigation". Therefore, why do we talk about SRM in this section, which is <u>not</u> about climate change mitigation? It is also <u>not</u> about "reducing and recapturing emissions". Rather, it's about ''masking the warming effects'', i.e. actively attempting to achieve global cooling. | |||
:::So I still think that those two sentences have no place here. If others say SRM must be mentioned in this section (why?), then the two sentences ought to be changed (as per my earlier comments) and it should be made clear that SRM is neither about mitigation nor about "reducing and recapturing emissions". Otherwise we'll just create confusion. ] (]) 13:03, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::I agree with @]'s points. The fact that the content was previously included under this heading and that there is NO implication that SRM is mitigation, IMO does not justify keeping it here. SRM is unrelated to climate change mitigation. It should not be listed under this heading because its inclusion implies a connection to reducing or recapturing emissions, which is not accurate. Even if we revise the sentences to clarify that SRM is neither mitigation nor about "reducing and recapturing emissions," it would still be misplaced under this heading. | |||
::::I suggest we delete the sentences all together. ] (]) 11:58, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::: Through its reduction of permafrost melt and other positive-feedback global warming processes, SRM has the ''indirect effect'' of "Reducing ...emissions" that is a section title. SRM thus helps impede the climate change that is the subject of this article. SRM therefore has a place in this article, and I'm certainly not opposed to editors pointing out the distinction between SRM and more direct mitigation techniques. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 17:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::::SRM does not "reduce emissions", so I don't know what you mean with "indirect effect of reducing emissions". For comparison, in the climate change mitigation article, SRM is mentioned at the end under "related approaches". I don't know if SRM is all that important that it needs to be included in this high level article (?). People can easily find it through the sub-articles. But if several editors think it ought to be mentioned then I would either mention it elsewhere in the article, or change the section heading or make it very explicit that SRM is not climate change mitigation and does not reduce emissions. - Does anyone else have an opinion about this? ] (]) 22:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::For now, I've changed the wording of the two sentences to this (the bolding is used to show the changes): {{tq|] (SRM) is '''under discussion as a possible supplement''' to reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and '''] concerns''', and its risks are '''not well understood'''.}} The old version was {{tq|] (SRM) is also a possible supplement to deep reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and legal concerns, and the risks are imperfectly understood.}}. (I am not sure if the wording "supplement" is sufficiently clear, and not overly optimistic.) ] (]) 22:17, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::::: At 17:07 I explained how SRM would inhibit permafrost melt—it would thus inhibit release of methane that was previously embedded in the permafrost. That is the indirect effect of SRM. Yes, it is a widely reported "related approach" that should be mentioned here. Re wording: closely follow source descriptions. —<span style="font-family:Times New Roman;color:dark blue;">] (])</span> 22:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Copernicus: 2024 above +1.5°C == | |||
:::Do my remarks make more sense now, in light of that clarification? --] (]) 20:25, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
::::I don't know what "a UN agency" reported. The most cited and respected opinion is probably that of the IPCC, which is not a UN agency. And the IPCC did not report that "most of the warming is caused by human activity", but rather, that "most of the observed increase in global average temperatures ''since the mid-20th century'' is ''very likely'' due to the observed increase in anthropogenic greenhouse gas concentrations" (emphasis mine), a much more differentiated view. --] (]) 22:02, 4 June 2011 (UTC) | |||
https://climate.copernicus.eu/2024-track-be-first-year-exceed-15oc-above-pre-industrial-average | |||
== Feedback, models, and "emergent properties" == | |||
As I understand it, IPCC 2007 used a simple model for A1FI that did not, to use some lay speak, "include" certain feedbacks. But other models used for other scenarios did "include" feedbacks. As a non-modeller, what I get from that is that some models are programmed with the ''assumption'' feedbacks can happen, and others are not. Since I'm not a modeller, I'm having some trouble with this sentence, | |||
Yes, I know | |||
:"Positive and negative feedbacks are not imposed as assumptions in the models, but are instead emergent properties that result from the interactions of basic dynamical and thermodynamic processes." | |||
* ]. | |||
* We'll have to wait another 10 years for the 20 year average. | |||
Still ] could mention 2024 as the first year above +1.5 C. ] (]) 12:38, 10 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
Its my guess other readers who know the models don't always "include" feedbacks might experience the same problem so I'm hoping some text will emerge from this discussion to help those other readers. Thanks in advance for comments. ] (]) 11:02, 5 June 2011 (UTC) |
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Carbon capture rates for CCS
Hi everyone. I have a few proposals regarding statements on carbon capture and storage in this article. Here's my first proposal. We have an unsourced sentence that says:
- Where energy production or CO2-intensive heavy industries continue to produce waste CO2, the gas can be captured and stored instead of released to the atmosphere.
I propose changing it to:
- Where energy production or CO2-intensive heavy industries continue to produce waste CO2, technology can sometimes be used to capture and store most of the gas instead of releasing it to the atmosphere.
As explained in the World Resources Institute source, "today’s carbon capture systems do not capture 100% of emissions. Most are designed to capture 90%, but reported capture rates are lower in some cases." Additionally, it is not economically or geologically feasible to deploy CCS at all or even most facilities. There are 2,400 coal power plants in the world and thus far we have managed to add CCS to four of them. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 21:41, 24 October 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 20:30, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
References
- Lebling, Katie; Gangotra, Ankita; Hausker, Karl; Byrum, Zachary (2023-11-13). "7 Things to Know About Carbon Capture, Utilization and Sequestration". World Resources Institute.
Carbon sequestration section
The Carbon sequestration section has contents that describe carbon dioxide removal and carbon capture and storage. These three concepts are often confused. The vast majority of carbon sequestration happens through spontaneous, non-anthropogenic processes that have been going on for hundreds of millions of years and will continue if we just leave the forests alone. Most of the content in this section is about human activity that aims to increase the amount of carbon that is sequestered, i.e. carbon dioxide removal. There is also some content on carbon capture and storage, which technically involves sequestration but is usually deployed in processes that desequester more carbon than they sequester.
I propose 1) Retitling this section as "Carbon dioxide removal" and 2) Moving the two sentences on CCS to the end of the first paragraph in the "Clean energy" section. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 20:11, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
- Done. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 20:36, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
Paper about our work & suggestions
A paper by Olivia Steiert came out on the work we do here, analysing how our group dynamics and our interpretation of policies and guidelines resulted in the current article.
The paper analyses whether we consider climate change as an event (vs process), and if we call it a crisis. It's somewhat critical of us doing neither sufficiently clearly. The paper doesn't give that many pointers how we could achieve this however. We've made progress over the last 6 years in changing the article to be more about climate change now, rather than climate change in the future, but I wonder if there is more to do here. (changing the crisis framing is a discussion I won't reopen). If there are no objections, I might send Steiert an email asking her to join us. In the meantime, I'm suggesting two changes in the lead
The current rise in global average temperature is primarily caused by humans burning fossil fuels since the Industrial Revolution -->
Amplified warming in the Arctic has contributed to thawing permafrost, retreat of glaciers and sea ice decline --> something in the present tense. I'd suggest leaving out polar amplification too. The quote doesn't fully capture this sentence anyway, and the source doesn't make the connection between polar amplification and these specific impacts. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:44, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for sharing this, interesting article. The study uses the May 2022 version of this article, I wonder what she'd think of the current version.
- As for the sentence,
The current rise in...
, I believe we had added "since the Industrial Revolution" to clarify what is meant by current. Bogazicili (talk) 17:50, 31 October 2024 (UTC)- Upon reflection, I'd like to keep
since the Industrial Revolution
. One of the criticism in the article is that we are vague in terms of our tenses. When things happened, are happening, or will happen. (Why is it so hard to arrive at a clear understanding of when climate change is happening and why do temporal constructions of this event vary so broadly
) since the Industrial Revolution
gives precision and clarity to that sentence. I think it accurately describes rough timescale of human-induced climate change.- Other overview sources might say things like
The industrial activities that our modern civilization depends upon have raised atmospheric carbon dioxide levels by nearly 50% since 1750
- If you click Industrial Revolution, it largely matches with above:
Beginning in Great Britain, the Industrial Revolution spread to continental Europe and the United States, from around 1760 to about 1820–1840.
Bogazicili (talk) 14:44, 1 November 2024 (UTC)- My thinking here is that "since the industrial revolution" may be a bit misleading, in the sense that most warming really happened in the last 50 years, rather than over such a long period of time. I'm also appreciating the simplicity of the POTD description below, and would like to move away from a WP:seaofblue in terms of number of links. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:13, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- Upon reflection, I'd like to keep
That's a very good point, but I think we should add that (in the last 50 years part) into the lead, instead of removing "since the Industrial Revolution" part. I know you value conciseness but I think this time precision beats conciseness.
Again, the study was up to May 2022 version of this article. This is the 31 May 2022 version of the article. I think the current version of the lead is much more precise, as we define since when the current climate change has been happening. Industrial activities (NASA source) started with industrial revolution. Of course it was limited in 18th century. In 19th century it was few countries (UK etc), with coal etc. With technology (oil etc) and more countries industrializing, warming increased in 20th century, which is your point.
Also note that many cumulative emissions graphs go back to 1750 Our World in Data. I'll check few more sources tomorrow, including WP:Tertiary sources, to see how they cover it. Bogazicili (talk) 17:38, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
- The prose quality of the first paragraph was definitely better in that version at least. I don't think "adding to greenhouse gases" is correct English. If I can find time, I might suggest a new version of our opening in a separate discussion section.
- My guess is that many sources don't talk about "industrial revolution" in their first paragraph, instead only use that when they go into the weeds of the topic.
- NASA describes it as happening from the mid-20th century in their first paras (https://science.nasa.gov/climate-change/what-is-climate-change/)
- Met Office describes it similar to us (https://www.metoffice.gov.uk/weather/climate-change/what-is-climate-change), from the mid-1850s we started polluting.
- WMO doesn't describe the time period, except by refering to a pre-industrial baseline (https://wmo.int/topics/climate-change)
- —Femke 🐦 (talk) 18:03, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
@Femke: here are some WP:Tertiary sources I found with Oxford Reference Online database through Misplaced Pages Library.
There are lots of results. Only some of them are below:
The first two have detailed entries. I'd recommend you to check them:
- Encyclopedia of Climate and Weather (2 ed.) doi:10.1093/acref/9780199765324.001.0001. Global Warming entry. Notes both pre-industrial increase and increase since 1970.
The term global warming has become synonymous in the press with human-induced climate change. ... Carbon dioxide concentrations in the atmosphere have increased such that 2009 values of about 385 ppmv are over 36 percent higher than preindustrial values of 280 ppmv and over half that increase has occurred since 1970 (Figure 1).
- Encyclopedia of Global Change doi:10.1093/acref/9780195108255.001.0001.
- Climate Change entry:
An Overview
... During the past two centuries, anthropogenic activity has resulted in large increases in the atmospheric greenhouse gas content, which has caused a detectable increase in global temperatures and are predicted to continue to increase for many decades before the climate system reaches a new equilibrium. ...- Global warming entry:
..Levels rose to 275 ppmv during the warm interglacial phases, and that level is also considered representative of the preindustrial era of the nineteenth century...
The two below have shorter entries:
- A Dictionary of Weather (3 ed.) doi:10.1093/acref/9780191988356.001.0001. Separate entries for global warming and climate change (climatic change). Not mentioned there.
- A Dictionary of Human Geography doi:10.1093/acref/9780199599868.001.0001. Climate change entry. Not mentioned there, but source mentions Anthropocene.
- By the way, there is an entire encyclopedia on climate change communication, The Oxford Encyclopedia of Climate Change Communication.
I think we should mention something like pre-industrial in the first paragraph. But we can shift things around. For example, the last sentence in first paragraph cites IPCC AR6 WG1 Technical Summary 2021, p. 67. That page mentions:
Since 1750, changes in the drivers of the climate system are dominated by the warming influence of increases in atmospheric GHG concentrations and a cooling influence from aerosols, both resulting from human activities
p.4:
Observed increases in well-mixed greenhouse gas (GHG) concentrations since around 1750 are unequivocally caused by human activities
I'll make my proposal below in a new section Bogazicili (talk) 19:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
Article housekeeping
Thanks Femke for removing unused references and other tidying. I could pitch in to help with that kind of thing for an hour or two this week. What else needs to be done? Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 02:26, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- Just to let you know, I intend to clean up after myself, but got sidetracked. For the areas I edited, some of the citations aren't to chapters but to overall IPCC reports. I'll be fixing those. Bogazicili (talk) 16:54, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Bogazicili!
- In terms of housekeeping, I try to do the following every one/two years:
- See if overcitation has slipped in, which is often a red flag for text-source integrity issues. One example is overcitation after "Smaller contributions come from black carbon, organic carbon from combustion of fossil fuels and biofuels, and from anthropogenic dust", which has 6 sources. (I you could help here!)
- Check if jargon such as anthropogenic has slipped back in, and reword using plain English
- Reread the article, and check if there is text-source integrity for surprising statements
- Reread the article, and update numbers which need updating.
- —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- Not that big of an issue, but the source formatting is also slightly messy and inconsistent in places (e.g. Harvnb is used for most things but not all, some things are missing various fields, etc). Sgubaldo (talk) 19:17, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- Wow, that's a lot of work that you've been doing regularly! I'll take on the overcitation thing. Will indicate here when I've finished checking. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 19:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
- I'll have much more time to work on this tomorrow (Sunday). I think I added most of the AR6 citations. I'll be fixing those tomorrow. And then I can also pitch in with the rest of the housekeeping. Bogazicili (talk) 17:18, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think I fixed the parts I had added. Bogazicili (talk) 20:31, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
- I'll have much more time to work on this tomorrow (Sunday). I think I added most of the AR6 citations. I'll be fixing those tomorrow. And then I can also pitch in with the rest of the housekeeping. Bogazicili (talk) 17:18, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
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Suggestions for the first sentence
The first sentence is awkward, and I'd love to craft a new first sentence before we get to be on the main page. The "in common usage" is especially jarring, and may fall slightly foul of WP:REFER. I have two suggestions:
- Climate change encompasses global warming—Earth’s ongoing temperature increase—and its wider effects on Earth's climate.
- Current climate change is the ongoing rise in global average temperatures and the resulting effects on Earth's climate.
It's a common thing that more text gets bolded than the title alone, to clarify immediately to the reader what the topic is where there is some need for disambiguation. I think this may release us from the need to be a bit pedantic in the introduction. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:26, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
- The preamble "In common usage" distinguishes current CC from "Climate change in a broader sense" that's in the second sentence. The distinction is important since we should (must?) quickly define the article title, focus attention on what this article is about, and link to the other article (Climate variability and change). I remember the community grappling with how to achieve these goals; the current text was the result. "In common usage" isn't jarring, though some might call it a bit formal. "Current climate change" (suggestion 2) isn't a much-used term. —21:10 The current wording tells the reader immediately that common-use "CC" is not the academically correct use. Of Suggestion 1 and 2, though, I definitely prefer Suggestion 1. —RCraig09 (talk) 22:23, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
- The distinction is not between "academic usage" and "common usage". Academics use the terms like everybody else in their papers. IPCC has it in their name, WMO classifies their reporting under climate change. The difference is between definitionally and non-definitionally. If you have a sentence with is, you imply a definition, so we need to make clear in some way that we're talking about "Contemporary", "Present-day", "Current" climate change. What we can do as well is 2b:
- 2b. Current/present-day/contemporary Climate change ...
—Femke 🐦 (talk) 09:00, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer 'Contemporary' to 'Current', but I like the wording in Suggestion 1 more. My suggestion would be something like:
- Contemporary climate change encompasses global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate.
- Also, if the first sentence changes, the next two will probably need tweaking too. Sgubaldo (talk) 12:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I wonder what percentage of the population knows what "contemporary" means. I'd estimate less than 80/90%, hence my suggestions for slightly less elegant wording. Two difficult words close to each other (contemporary/encompasses), makes it more difficult to guess the word meaning for those unaware. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 12:23, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- In that case, I would propose: "Present-day climate change includes both global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate." Sgubaldo (talk) 12:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I like that variation. Present-day may prevent some knee-jerk reactions of Wikipedians trained to remove the word MOS:Current from articles. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 12:58, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- In that case, I would propose: "Present-day climate change includes both global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate." Sgubaldo (talk) 12:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I wonder what percentage of the population knows what "contemporary" means. I'd estimate less than 80/90%, hence my suggestions for slightly less elegant wording. Two difficult words close to each other (contemporary/encompasses), makes it more difficult to guess the word meaning for those unaware. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 12:23, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
Pinging all those with recent talk page activity: @Clayoquot, Amakuru, Bogazicili, Chipmunkdavis, Sunrise, and Alaexis:. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 09:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer the first one because it includes the other common term, global warming. Global warming also redirects to this page, as it should. Bogazicili (talk) 14:28, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I concede Femke's point (09:00) re academics/definitions. My concern is to explicitly convey that there are two definitions of CC. This distinction parallels the fact that today's CC is different from historical/generic CC. Detail: reviewing https://www.thesaurus.com/browse/contemporary, I'm OK with "current" or "present" or "present-day" or "recent" or "ongoing" or "newfangled" (well, maybe not "newfangled :-) :-). —RCraig09 (talk) 17:03, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think it's more elegant to do it implicitly (present-day climate change), rather than explicitly. We want people to read about the topic of climate change, rather than about the intricacies of how terms are used in the first paragraph. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:06, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- By "explicitly" I didn't mean super-ultra-formally. I think the distinction of definitions is accomplished by the second sentence, "Climate change in a broader sense...". That's all I meant. I'm OK with most of the smaller-change proposal I've read in this discussion. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:11, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think it's more elegant to do it implicitly (present-day climate change), rather than explicitly. We want people to read about the topic of climate change, rather than about the intricacies of how terms are used in the first paragraph. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:06, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I have a slight preference for Sgubaldo's proposal. All of them sound fine to me though. Clayoquot (talk | contribs) 17:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- Just to clarify, since there are multiple proposals. I'm ok with this latest one: "Present-day climate change includes both global warming—the ongoing increase in global average temperature—and its wider effects on Earth's climate." Bogazicili (talk) 17:43, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- If no one objects, I'll wait until tomorrow to see if there's any more replies, and then I'll make the changes. Sgubaldo (talk) 19:12, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- Changes made. Sgubaldo (talk) 12:43, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
FYI: removed 'mainly' from lead
I changed "The current rise in global average temperature is mainly driven by human activities, especially fossil fuel burning since the Industrial Revolution" to "The current rise in global average temperature is mainly driven by human activities, especially fossil fuel burning since the Industrial Revolution". The best guess is taht 100% of climate change is driven by human activities (per new source), so the old wording was misleading and the old source didn't talk about this. The word driven itself also doesn't require 100% causation (that would be is caused by), so even when the percentage of human-induced climate change deviates from observed climate change, this wording should remain correct.
I did this boldly, as the old text was not really supported and misleading. Hope that's okay. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 10:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- Agree. As Earth was on a very slight cooling trend for ~10,000 years, I remember reading that humans cause "more than" 100% of global warming, though it would be confusing to say that literally. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:07, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- The idea of a Holocene Thermal Maximum some 8,000 years ago is a bit contested. Regional climate proxies say there was one, but globally it's a more complex picture, and models think there's been continuous warming / stable temperatures.
- The more than 100% since pre-industrial also isn't true anymore as I understand it, as the last couple of years have seen very rapid warming. The source I cited is also the one used by the IPCC, and they say the best guess is exactly 100% caused by humans with some uncertainty. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 17:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Femke: do you still want to remove "since the Industrial Revolution" part? That can be reworded and moved to the last sentence. Proposal below. Bogazicili (talk) 20:30, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
The lead, first paragraph
This is what the first paragraph of the lead would look like, after recent changes and suggestions in Talk:Climate_change#Suggestions for the first sentence and Talk:Climate_change#Paper about our work & suggestions and above section.
Didn't include the sources in the article, and some of the new sources are above. For the "accelerating in the past 50 years", I will use .
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Bogazicili (talk) 19:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think the the new text is not great for flow. Most of the sentences are roughly the same lenght, with makes for slightly uncomfortable reading. I don't feel strongly about removing "industrial revolution", but I don't think moving it to later is that much of a change? —Femke 🐦 (talk) 21:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- I suggested the changes with this criticism in mind.
Why is it so hard to arrive at a clear understanding of when climate change is happening and why do temporal constructions of this event vary so broadly
- Now we have two clear dates (since 1750 and accelerating in the past 50 years). Bogazicili (talk) 22:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Bogazicili "accelerating in the last 50 years" suggests to me the rate of warming is increasing across that time period. i think you mean that the last 50 years has exhibited a higher rate of warming that the precedding period.
- you may also like to add to that, during this 50 year period, attribution studies are able to clearly discern human driven change from natural forcing -- this relates to the time series figure on the page. DecFinney (talk) 13:14, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I suggested the changes with this criticism in mind.
References
- Our World in Data, 18 September 2020 harvnb error: no target: CITEREFOur_World_in_Data,_18_September2020 (help)
Proposed replacement of graphic in "Impacts" section
A. Existing graphic: The sixth IPCC Assessment Report projects changes in average soil moisture at 2.0 °C of warming, as measured in standard deviations from the 1850 to 1900 baseline.B. Proposed replacement: Climate change's increase of water temperatures intensified peak wind speeds in all eleven 2024 Atlantic hurricanes.C. Second proposed replacement: Times series of Category 4 and 5 Atlantic hurricanesI've long questioned the value of the "soil moisture" graphic in the short, crowded, under-emphasized "Impacts" section.
The existing graphic's content is not discussed in article text. Also, soil moisture's broader implication on the impacts affecting humans is speculative and indirect, perhaps even suggesting that things'll get better and better for sub-Saharan Africa. (Aside: I speak out against captions that merely repeat what's in the graphic's own legends/text.)
Meanwhile, the impacts on humans of progressively more intense hurricanes is immediately and intuitively evident (see also ). I realize Graphic B is not global and is only one year's hurricanes, but I think the graphic speaks to a more striking and immediate impact of climate change.
Please comment below, on your preference. —RCraig09 (talk) 23:19, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
- While I'm open to replacing that graph, I'm not a fan of adding another US-focused one in its place. Is it possible to do something similar for tropical cyclones in general? —Femke 🐦 (talk) 08:21, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- It's Atlantic focused, not "US" focused per se. I've searched for CC-intensified (Pacific) typhoons but references applying extreme event attribution to specific hurricanes/cyclones/typhoons are nearly non-existent. This chart was a rare discovery in how it makes CC's effects be concretely evident. If anyone finds similar references for the Pacific, let me know.. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:51, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- The soil moisture graph was added by User:Efbrazil three years ago. I think we could probably remove it (or move it?) but I am a bit concerned that we don't mention "soil moisture" content anywhere in the text (or is it mentioned under a different term?). I was going to suggest to move it to effects of climate change but I see it's already there. - I think my suggestion would be to remove it but to not replace it with another fairly complicated, wordy schematic (such as graph B.). Either remove it without replacement or replace it with something very visual (a photo?). In general, we do have a lot of graphs, schematics and images already in this article. Perhaps one less is actually a good thing. EMsmile (talk) 13:22, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- Droughts are mentioned. Bogazicili (talk) 21:29, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'd rather have this image chosen for the replacement than the other file. I do not believe using an image for one season restricted in one basin would reflect climate change's general impact on tropical cyclones. I'm a bit cautious on replacing the existing image, but I want to see more people discussing before I issue my final verdict. ZZ'S 18:21, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
- Keep. Temperature, soil, precipitation are the 3 graphs in B. Future Climate Change, Risks, and Long-Term Responses in AR6 SYR SPM (page 14). We already have temperature in the article. Bogazicili (talk) 21:25, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- RCraig09, I'd recommend here for image B: Effects_of_climate_change#Extreme_storms Bogazicili (talk) 21:32, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
IPCC's AR6 Fig. TS-22 etc.
- @RCraig09 have you considered these figures?
- https://www.ipcc.ch/report/ar6/wg1/figures/technical-summary/figure-ts-22 DecFinney (talk) 13:21, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: I think that Fig. TS-22 is far too complex and detailed for a layperson encyclopedia, especially in a high-level article such as this. —RCraig09 (talk) 15:10, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I wasnt imagining the whole thing. e.g. perhaps just the top right quarter. That seems like a really neat summary in lay terms of the kind of impacts different regions of the world could expect. It doesnt rely on the rest of the figure for understanding so I would assume its fine to crop it to make a new figure (but I am new-ish to wiki so am not sure of cropping policy).
- Such a figure seems much more relevant to any person in the world. Meanwhile figures based on the atlantic seem more like a token representation of impact (i.e. just one example) as well as introducing a regional bias and thereby limiting the interest for the wider global population. I appreciate you will not being trying to illustrate all impacts. Nevertheless, the figure I propose does do a pretty job of covering bases in the a concise manner. DecFinney (talk) 15:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: I appreciate that Fig. TS-22(b) has a lot of information, a huge amount in fact: five values for each of 35 categories. Especially for a high-level article such as this, this micro-categorization would be overwhelming for lay readers. FYI: Generally there is no general prohibition on cropping as such (every edit involves selection of material from a larger-content publication), but I seem to recall that some organization, not sure if it's the IPCC, licensed things only if presented in their entirety. I wish I had a hurricane-intensification reference for both Atlantic and Pacific, but since the main point of Graphic "B" is climate change's intensification of hurricanes rather than hurricanes themselves, I think "B" is more than adequate for purpose. —RCraig09 (talk) 18:57, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RCraig09 ok. the only multi-basin figure i can find that seems relevant to your aim is fig5 in https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/bams/101/3/bams-d-18-0194.1.xml
- this shows the consistent projection of increased TC intensity (and rain rate) in every basin. DecFinney (talk) 07:34, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Thanks for the research. I like the global extent of the AMS datasets but the error ranges are, like, totally_outtasight_dude! I'll have to consider the various drawings in the AMS reference... I lean toward something like Figs. 3b and 4b more than the global map. A major advantage of is that it's not a long-term prediction (it's about climate change attribution), and concrete values are provided in the context of peak winds and hurricane categories. —RCraig09 (talk) 21:28, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RCraig09 i agree 3b and 4b are better multi-basin figs to consider.
- there is a part 1 to that paper which is about attribution. when i glanced at it, i didnt spot any suitable figures. https://journals.ametsoc.org/view/journals/bams/100/10/bams-d-18-0189.1.xml
- attribution with TCs is still pretty statistically limited. i have to admit that fig1f probably justifies a focus on NAtlantic if you want to stick to an attribution based figure.
- thats my last input. thanks for the discussion. im happy with whatever you decide. DecFinney (talk) 09:08, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Many thanks. I haven't been able to conjure a graphical approach to represent multi-basin attribution/changes that's more elegant than separate bar charts with distracting and divergent error bars scattered around a world map. I think that already captures predicted impacts quite well, and that an example of Extreme event attribution (Graphic "B", above) deserves space in this article. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:36, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Thanks for the research. I like the global extent of the AMS datasets but the error ranges are, like, totally_outtasight_dude! I'll have to consider the various drawings in the AMS reference... I lean toward something like Figs. 3b and 4b more than the global map. A major advantage of is that it's not a long-term prediction (it's about climate change attribution), and concrete values are provided in the context of peak winds and hurricane categories. —RCraig09 (talk) 21:28, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: I appreciate that Fig. TS-22(b) has a lot of information, a huge amount in fact: five values for each of 35 categories. Especially for a high-level article such as this, this micro-categorization would be overwhelming for lay readers. FYI: Generally there is no general prohibition on cropping as such (every edit involves selection of material from a larger-content publication), but I seem to recall that some organization, not sure if it's the IPCC, licensed things only if presented in their entirety. I wish I had a hurricane-intensification reference for both Atlantic and Pacific, but since the main point of Graphic "B" is climate change's intensification of hurricanes rather than hurricanes themselves, I think "B" is more than adequate for purpose. —RCraig09 (talk) 18:57, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: I think that Fig. TS-22 is far too complex and detailed for a layperson encyclopedia, especially in a high-level article such as this. —RCraig09 (talk) 15:10, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Underemphasis on extreme event attribution
The preceding discussion brings out the point that Extreme event attribution is not even mentioned in this article. I think it's very important because, more and more, the intensification of specific current events are being presented to the public as being caused by global warming. This attribution is distinct from projections of future intensification such as that shown in . Though attribution science is not yet fully developed, and is statistical in nature, I think that something should be added to the "Impacts" section. Agreement? Suggestions? —RCraig09 (talk) 17:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RCraig09 sounds reasonable to me.
- i think most good science comms would say that the chance of event is made more likely by climate change. it may go as far as to say it was basically impossible before, i.e. 1 in a million year event or something but the message can get a bit lost in that. of course one can odten say there's no precident in the records.
- im not sure about the plot. its not obvious to me exactly what the x axis means or what information helps determine it. what is the source of the figure? DecFinney (talk) 21:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Welcome to Misplaced Pages! Sources can usually be found on the Wikimedia Commons file description page (click through image itself), or in captions of charts placed in Misplaced Pages articles. Here the source is Lindsey, Rebecca (15 December 2016). "Extreme event attribution: the climate versus weather blame game". Climate.gov. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA). Archived from the original on 9 June 2024.
Graphic adapted from Figure 4.7 in NAS 2016.
. The x-axis means the degree to which models can accurately represent or predict real-world events. —RCraig09 (talk) 21:43, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DecFinney: Welcome to Misplaced Pages! Sources can usually be found on the Wikimedia Commons file description page (click through image itself), or in captions of charts placed in Misplaced Pages articles. Here the source is Lindsey, Rebecca (15 December 2016). "Extreme event attribution: the climate versus weather blame game". Climate.gov. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA). Archived from the original on 9 June 2024.
Mentioning SRM under "Reducing and recapturing emissions"
Hello! I am new to this talk page. I have been working on the SRM article and noticed that SRM is mentioned in the Climate Change article. I have some questions about how SRM is mentioned in this article.
Should SRM really be mentioned under the heading "Reducing and recapturing emissions"?
Given that SRM would only ‘mask’ climate change instead of addressing the cause, greenhouse gas emissions. "SRM contrasts with climate change mitigation activities, such as emission reductions and carbon dioxide removal (CDR), as it introduces a ‘mask’ to the climate change problem by altering the Earth’s radiation budget, rather than attempting to address the root cause of the problem, which is the increase in greenhouse gases (GHGs) in the atmosphere" (IPCC_AR6_WGII_CCB-CWGB, p. 77).
I suggest either deleting the two sentences on SRM altogether or clearly explaining to the readers that SRM is somewhat related but is not a mitigation option in the pure sense. 1HumbleB (talk) 12:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with 1HumbleB's concerns (disclosure: we have worked together on the solar radiation modification article; that's how I got interested in this). For comparison, in the article climate change mitigation we have quite a good description of what SRM has to do with mitigation (or doesn't have to do with it). I have just moved that section further down in the article; it was under "definition" there until now which I don't think was ideal. It reads like this at the climate change mitigation article:
- == Related approaches ==
- === Relationship with solar radiation modification (SRM) ===
- While solar radiation modification (SRM) could reduce surface temperatures, it temporarily masks climate change rather than addressing the root cause, which is greenhouse gases. SRM would work by altering how much solar radiation the Earth absorbs. Examples include reducing the amount of sunlight reaching the surface, reducing the optical thickness and lifetime of clouds, and changing the ability of the surface to reflect radiation. The IPCC describes SRM as a climate risk reduction strategy or supplementary option rather than a climate mitigation option.
- The terminology in this area is still evolving. Experts sometimes use the term geoengineering or climate engineering in the scientific literature for both CDR or SRM, if the techniques are used at a global scale. IPCC reports no longer use the terms geoengineering or climate engineering. EMsmile (talk) 10:15, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- To simplify things: I'd like to propose to delete these two sentences (for the reasons given above):
Solar radiation modification (SRM) is also a possible supplement to deep reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and legal concerns, and the risks are imperfectly understood.
. Especially the first out of these two sentences is problematic in my opinion. The phrasing reads as if there is a relationship between SRM and deep emission reductions; and it lacks nuance. Also, the topic of SRM opens a can of worms and would require more space than what can be given in this high level article. Therefore, I think it's better not to mention it here at all. Readers can easily find it in the climate change mitigation article instead. EMsmile (talk) 21:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)- So I went ahead and deleted the two sentences in question (as there was no disagreement voiced on the talk page). Subsequently, User:RCraig09 re-instated the two sentences with the edit summary comment: "The content was in the section, →Reducing and recapturing emissions: and there was no implication that SRM is mitigation. You can distinguish mitigation from SRM if you think it's important."
- My response: this section is all about climate change mitigation. Directly under the section heading it says "Main: Climate change mitigation". Therefore, why do we talk about SRM in this section, which is not about climate change mitigation? It is also not about "reducing and recapturing emissions". Rather, it's about masking the warming effects, i.e. actively attempting to achieve global cooling.
- So I still think that those two sentences have no place here. If others say SRM must be mentioned in this section (why?), then the two sentences ought to be changed (as per my earlier comments) and it should be made clear that SRM is neither about mitigation nor about "reducing and recapturing emissions". Otherwise we'll just create confusion. EMsmile (talk) 13:03, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with @EMsmile's points. The fact that the content was previously included under this heading and that there is NO implication that SRM is mitigation, IMO does not justify keeping it here. SRM is unrelated to climate change mitigation. It should not be listed under this heading because its inclusion implies a connection to reducing or recapturing emissions, which is not accurate. Even if we revise the sentences to clarify that SRM is neither mitigation nor about "reducing and recapturing emissions," it would still be misplaced under this heading.
- I suggest we delete the sentences all together. 1HumbleB (talk) 11:58, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Through its reduction of permafrost melt and other positive-feedback global warming processes, SRM has the indirect effect of "Reducing ...emissions" that is a section title. SRM thus helps impede the climate change that is the subject of this article. SRM therefore has a place in this article, and I'm certainly not opposed to editors pointing out the distinction between SRM and more direct mitigation techniques. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- SRM does not "reduce emissions", so I don't know what you mean with "indirect effect of reducing emissions". For comparison, in the climate change mitigation article, SRM is mentioned at the end under "related approaches". I don't know if SRM is all that important that it needs to be included in this high level article (?). People can easily find it through the sub-articles. But if several editors think it ought to be mentioned then I would either mention it elsewhere in the article, or change the section heading or make it very explicit that SRM is not climate change mitigation and does not reduce emissions. - Does anyone else have an opinion about this? EMsmile (talk) 22:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- For now, I've changed the wording of the two sentences to this (the bolding is used to show the changes):
Solar radiation modification (SRM) is under discussion as a possible supplement to reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and global governance concerns, and its risks are not well understood.
The old version wasSolar radiation modification (SRM) is also a possible supplement to deep reductions in emissions. However, SRM raises significant ethical and legal concerns, and the risks are imperfectly understood.
. (I am not sure if the wording "supplement" is sufficiently clear, and not overly optimistic.) EMsmile (talk) 22:17, 19 December 2024 (UTC)- At 17:07 I explained how SRM would inhibit permafrost melt—it would thus inhibit release of methane that was previously embedded in the permafrost. That is the indirect effect of SRM. Yes, it is a widely reported "related approach" that should be mentioned here. Re wording: closely follow source descriptions. —RCraig09 (talk) 22:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- For now, I've changed the wording of the two sentences to this (the bolding is used to show the changes):
- SRM does not "reduce emissions", so I don't know what you mean with "indirect effect of reducing emissions". For comparison, in the climate change mitigation article, SRM is mentioned at the end under "related approaches". I don't know if SRM is all that important that it needs to be included in this high level article (?). People can easily find it through the sub-articles. But if several editors think it ought to be mentioned then I would either mention it elsewhere in the article, or change the section heading or make it very explicit that SRM is not climate change mitigation and does not reduce emissions. - Does anyone else have an opinion about this? EMsmile (talk) 22:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Through its reduction of permafrost melt and other positive-feedback global warming processes, SRM has the indirect effect of "Reducing ...emissions" that is a section title. SRM thus helps impede the climate change that is the subject of this article. SRM therefore has a place in this article, and I'm certainly not opposed to editors pointing out the distinction between SRM and more direct mitigation techniques. —RCraig09 (talk) 17:07, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- To simplify things: I'd like to propose to delete these two sentences (for the reasons given above):
References
- ^ IPCC (2022) Chapter 14: International cooperation in Climate Change 2022: Mitigation of Climate Change. Contribution of Working Group III to the Sixth Assessment Report of the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change, Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, United States]
- National Academies of Sciences, Engineering (25 March 2021). Reflecting Sunlight: Recommendations for Solar Geoengineering Research and Research Governance. doi:10.17226/25762. ISBN 978-0-309-67605-2. S2CID 234327299.
- IPCC (2022) Chapter 1: Introduction and Framing in Climate Change 2022: Mitigation of Climate Change. Contribution of Working Group III to the Sixth Assessment Report of the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change, Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, United States
- IPCC, 2021: Annex VII: Glossary . In Climate Change 2021: The Physical Science Basis. Contribution of Working Group I to the Sixth Assessment Report of the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change . Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, United Kingdom and New York, NY, USA, pp. 2215–2256, doi:10.1017/9781009157896.022.
- IPCC SR15 Ch4 2018, pp. 347–352 harvnb error: no target: CITEREFIPCC_SR15_Ch42018 (help)
Copernicus: 2024 above +1.5°C
https://climate.copernicus.eu/2024-track-be-first-year-exceed-15oc-above-pre-industrial-average
Yes, I know
- WP:NOTCRYSTAL.
- We'll have to wait another 10 years for the 20 year average.
Still Climate_change#Warming_since_the_Industrial_Revolution could mention 2024 as the first year above +1.5 C. Uwappa (talk) 12:38, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
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