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	Hello!I edited this talk page because i don't know what is wrong with the page i edited-]-so i would like someone to say something about it as soon as possible so i can fix it.I don't know why was that box placed on top of the article,but i would like to know what should i do to make it go away.--] 18:57, 28 March 2006 (UTC)
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	:Hi, the article was tagged with cleanup. From the article, it needs ], (making links), and needs spaces between punctuation. Let me know if you require assistance. :) ]]]<sup><small>]</small></sup> 19:01, 28 March 2006 (UTC)
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	::The few things that I see that needed cleaning up would be:
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	#A citation for what issue of the journal ''The Australian'' had an article about the man, including date of publication
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	#Clean up the punctuation and grammar of the "War crimes" section
	#The last paragraph said that Australians thought that something was "absurd". What Australians said this? Was this printed anywhere? Is there a quote that can be used like "Such and such leader of the Australian government stated in an interview that "X" was absurd"?
	::]\|] 23:13, 28 March 2006 (UTC)

	== Looks better - just a few more comments ==

	*Lead paragraph says he is currently a golf instructor. Last sentence says he is in prison. It is not clear what order these events are in. Needs clarifying.
	*There is still no reference to articles published in Australia.
	*Some copyediting is needed, but that is a lower priority than the other two comments.

	If you then feel that the "clean-up" tag can be removed, I suggest you contact the person who put the tag on the page (you can find this out by looking in the page history). The person you want is ]. He may be able to say if he agrees that the tag can be removed. Hope that helps. ] 23:14, 29 March 2006 (UTC)

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