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== Peter Proctor == | |||
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== Dragon Age: The Veilguard == | |||
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* {{User|Wikibenboy94}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
1) Disagreement on if ] is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows ]/] & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows ] advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included. | |||
There is a physician here that also has an article about his work, ]. He also sells hair loss products online at ''drproctor.com''. Over the past several weeks, I have been editing ] and ] and have come across several hidden ads for his website drproctor.com, which I have removed. From there, I have begun to look at his biographical article, and found unreferenced claims about being on medical faculty at Baylor and UTMB Galveston. I asked for information on the article talk page, to which a user "Nucleophilic" responded. He has had a large role in writing the Peter Proctor article, but denies being the physician. He provided references that showed papers published by Proctor that had the addresses of the institutions on them. They did not list his faculty status. I referenced the alumni directory, the largest database of Baylor faculty in existence, and his name was not listed. I am extremely careful with my edits, so I also called the chair of the Department of Ophthalmology, which was one of the departments where Nucleophilic claimed Proctor was on faculty. Dr. Jones was unavailable when I called, but his senior secretary also did not recognize the name. Nucleophilic has re-entered the faculty information multiple times on the article, despite my removing it, and despite not addressing my concerns on the talk page. I feel like this is a case of ]. The ''central issue'' is whether Proctor's mailing address listed on his publications qualifies him to be listed as faculty at the two institutions on his Misplaced Pages page. Because an individual can be listed on a paper for an address during medical school, residency, or fellowship, or even if volunteering in the lab for free, they do not satisfy ]. Especially for the page of a doctor selling online medications and practicing telemedicine, for which a website as large and influential as Misplaced Pages represents a major conflict of interest. | |||
2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus. | |||
3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose. | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
*Current discussion: ] | |||
I have tried the Misplaced Pages dispute resolution pyramid, but have been receiving veiled ''ad hominem'' attacks from Nucleophilic on the talk page. | |||
*Previous discussion: ] | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | ||
An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a ] until the dispute is resolved. | |||
Provide an outside opinion. I am extremely careful with my edits. Also, personally I have not had experience disputing someone that may or may not be the subject of the article I am revising. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by BMWF ==== | |||
I just want to make sure I am not missing something or breaking proper etiquette. | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94 ==== | ||
The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion: | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please limit to 2000 characters - longer statements may be deleted in their entirety or asked to be shortened. This is so a volunteer can review the dispute in a timely manner. Thanks.</div> | |||
1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to ], and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did. | |||
Wow. Actually, I had walked away from this issue, pretty much figuring it was not worth contending, one way or another. Basically, I was just going on what the subject's published papers report. According to ], these are the highest level of authority on wikipedia. This aside, intuitively contemporary papers seem the most reliable source for decades-old information. | |||
2. Including the ] player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much ''Dragon Age: Veilguard'' has sold. | |||
Can't say how reliable the much later sources cited by the complainaint are, since I have not seen them, nor did he provide a link, etc.. Or even (IIRC) a formal citation. In contrast, I provided links to material directly listing the subject's professional address as such. Similarly, claiming to have talked to this or that person is <I>prima facia</I> ] and not allowed. | |||
3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms". | |||
That said, I wonder where this editor gets the "veiled threat", etc. Editor seems a little sensitive over minor legitimate differences of opinion. Things like this usually get resolved on the talk pages, not immediately brought here. Unfortunately, everybody seems to be taking a wikibreak for the holidays. As for complaintant's editing of ]-- I do not understand his claims. Unfortunately, his manner of editing was hundreds of edits over a few days with few to no edit summaries or comments to the talk page. As well as throughly confusing me, this seems to be generating some concerns over there. Anyway, I suggest this matter be taken back to the talk page where it belongs. ] (]) 22:22, 3 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:There have been significant discussions on the Talk page, going back to at least 16 Dec 2012, and the issue is not yet resolved; so it is appropriate to solicit more input here at DRN. --] (]) 21:04, 4 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
4. The invoking of ] while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews". | |||
::Uh, there was one communication on Dec 16. But the real discussion did not start until Dec. 29, right over the holidays, when many editors take a break. This was followed almost immediately by chantoke transferring it here. Also, to descalate, I suggest "faculty" be changed to "faculty/staff" to reflect any uncertainty. As I noted, I was walking away from this matter until chantoke escalated it. ] (]) 07:18, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). ] (]) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::: No, incorrect. The discussion requesting his proper academic credentials has been at least since May of 2012, as in this request by editor . ] (]) 07:34, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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=== Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion === | ||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
Hello All, I am a volunteer for the Dispte Resolution project. I am placing a COI (Conflict of interest) investigation template on this page as that needs be sorted. Looks like the article has other issues such as a promotional tone and overall notability of the subject. A lot of careful work has to be done here -] (]) 04:59, 4 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:With due respect, you bear all the earmarks of a sock or meat puppet. You and chantoke have a similar edit history of editing pages of only local Indian interest, when there had been no such on the relevant page before or anything even close to it. What are the chances of this happening at random? Likewise, no prior edits on a subject, then suddenly show up in the middle of a dispute to "mediate". Perhaps you thought nobody would notice. Also see: ]. ] (]) 15:10, 4 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both {{reply to|Wikibenboy94|p=}} and I agree that there are no ] issues in the topline summary sentences removed by {{reply to|BMWF|p=}} in and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute. | |||
::As an editor of ], I concur with nucleophilic. It is not clear that Chantoke knows how wikipedia bio pages differ from regular articles. This article was also brought into mediation without giving any other editors a chance to provide input. Also, as nuclephilic notes on the article talk page, it mentions "hair loss" only once, and that in passing without mentioning the subject of the bio. If he is using this page to promote a business (or whatever), he is doing a very poor job of it. For now, I will pass over the issue of ] as an unnecessary complication. ] (]) 20:31, 4 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::The page is important because he sells medicine online. Reporting faculty positions at two prestigious institutions is something that would help sell product because it would enhance his reputation. ] (]) 08:03, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
Wikishagnik: I too am a volunteer here at DRN. I notice you just added your name to the list of DRN volunteers two days ago. Assuming good faith, we can conclude that you acting with the best interests of WP here. On the other hand, since your impartiality has been called into question, it may be best for the integrity of the DRN process if you <s>stepped aside</s> participate simply as a normal editor, and let one of the other 40+ volunteers serve as the primary mediator for this case. --] (]) 20:49, 4 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Acknowledged, will defer to your judgement but I am sticking to my point -] (]) 23:15, 4 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
'''Comment''' - From the topmost opening statement, I take it that the primary issue is what sources are available to justify including the person in the ]. Is that the only issue? or are there additional concerns about ] and sourcing? Focusing on the faculty category: all inclusions in categories must be supported by sources, per ]. For facts in the body of the article, footnotes are often used to provide the sources; but even for categories (which may not be mentioned in the article body) sources must also be provided if requested. I take it that the only source provided so far is an email address at the university ... which doesn't quite demonstrate that the person is a member of the faculty. Nucleophilic: are you aware of any source that says "proctor is a member of the UTMB faculty"? --] (]) 20:59, 4 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Response to comment by Noleander:''' The sentence that is being discussed is at (). It reads as follows: | |||
<blockquote>''"He has been on the faculty of ], Houston, and the University of Texas Medical Branch. He is engaged in drug research and development."''</blockquote> | |||
:: The three citations provided in support of this sentence by Nucleophilic at ] are first, second, and third . | |||
:: The references have several issues. | |||
::: With regard to the first, it lists his address as being at the Department of Opthalmology, but does not list his specific affiliation with the institution. According to his self-published resume at Doximity (https://www.doximity.com/pub/peter-proctor-md) he was a "Research Instructor" at Baylor at that time. | |||
:::I do not see where on the paper his specific affiliation is is indicated. | |||
::: For example, you may have your address listed in a lab if you work there as an independent researcher, or volunteer, which is also very possible considering Dr. Proctor has been reported in the article as an independent researcher. | |||
::: In the second link provided, he is not primary or last author, but third, which means he was not the primary researcher. Again, the address could have referred to him being a volunteer or independent researcher working with the lab. | |||
::: The third link at did not work. | |||
::: The references are limited as they were published by Dr. Proctor himself. | |||
:: Someone has stated that I do not seem to understand the concept of ]. It is true that I am a relative novitiate to biography articles so I will quote from the source to avoid my own potential misinterpretation. From ]: | |||
:::: "Exercise caution in using primary sources." | |||
:::: "Remove immediately any contentious material about a living person that is unsourced or poorly sourced; that is a conjectural interpretation of a source (see No original research); that relies on self-published sources, unless written by the subject of the BLP (see below); or that relies on sources that fail in some other way to meet Verifiability standards." | |||
::While those articles certainly qualify as reliable sources in reflecting the content of his research, they do not specifically list a faculty appointment. Doximity is a self-entry website, and also does not qualify. | |||
::I also looked in the Baylor Alumni Directory which can be found online for current faculty at or of which a physical copy can be ordered at , or by e-mailing Barbara Walker or Nyree Chanaba at alumni@bcm.edu. | |||
::Although the directory is very comprehensive, as an older clinical instructor, I acknowledge he could have been missed, although I do not believe this would be the norm as Baylor likely very actively seeks alumni donations. | |||
::Nucleophilic, looking at the article history, you appear to be its major author, so I would respectfully request you to supply something more reliable. I do not want to deny the good doctor his faculty history as he certainly is a figure in the history of redox research, and this should be fairly acknowledged if accurate. At the same time, the conflict of interest issues have been discussed above and on the talk page. | |||
::My opinion ultimately cannot be entirely objective, because there is not enough good evidence in one direction or the other. From ]: | |||
:::"The burden of evidence lies with the editor who adds or restores material, and is satisfied by providing a reliable source that '''directly''' supports the material." | |||
::In this situation, the burden of proof falls upon the person making the claim in the setting of an encyclopedia article, particularly with regards to ]. I would not include the sentences about him being on faculty until references are provided that directly reflect this, and are not authored by the subject. I would not close the door on it, but I think it would be unwise to include something like a faculty appointment out there for a physician practicing telemedicine, without more explicit confirmation. ] (]) 00:37, 5 January 2013 (UTC) ('''Ramwithaxe'''; changed to avoid confusion in this discussion) | |||
'''Comment''' For any concern about me being a sock puppet please refer me immediately to the ]. They will handle me accordingly. Coming back to the article, did you know that the explanation of the ''puzzling repeated failure in human trials of neuroprotective agents and antioxidants effective in animals by noting the uniquely high endogenous levels of the antioxidant neuroprotectant uric acid in humans'' is attributed to Dr Proctor - by Dr. Proctor himself? It is also interesting to note that him being a part of a group that is credited with the fantastic supposition regarding diabetes, inflammation, and fibrosis''an underlying common etiology involving electronically activated processes in such symptomology'' and is attributed to Dr Proctor - by Dr. Proctor himself - seven times to be exact. Did you know that according to the good doctor he has '' reported the conditional pro-oxidant properties of uric acid and further proposed that oxidative stress figures in the pathogenesis of hyperuricemic syndromes in general''? And the list goes on. My point being that apart from Dr. Proctor no-one knows about these fantastic contributions to humanity (and Nucleophilic of course). And Nucleophilic, BTW for being close to the subject you dont have to be a blood relative. In fact by virtue of our discussion so far, we are close. If I was to compose a Misplaced Pages article about you before today, an article would have said ''Nucleophilic is a scolarly contributor to Misplaced Pages'', but now I will be tempted to add ''... who jumps to conclusions about editors being sock puppets based on the ethnicity of subject of the articles they contribute to. As if such editors cannot understand basic concepts like MOS and templates that apply to all Misplaced Pages articles''. You see how NPOV can be compromied even with very little interaction? -] (]) 00:44, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:'''Response to Wikishagnik comment''': I concur. I am not a sockpuppet or meat puppet, which I believe refers to a duplicate account. I would be happy to submit my IP address or whatever other information you need to verify this. ] (]) 01:04, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: {{xt|''Veilguard'' was also subject to ] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "]". Some outlets noted that {{underline|while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative,}} the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on ], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove {{underline|offensive}} reviews}}. ] (]) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::For the moment, I'm going to continue to assume good faith. This matter has gone entirely too far for the issue involved. As I noted, I was walking away from it, when Chantoke filed this request for mediation, far too soon in the process, IMHO. Contrary to assurances, there was no real attempt to resolve the matter on the talk pages. Just a couple of exchanges and pow, here we are. Also, if he has any support for his accusations concerning me, let him present it. And no, I do not expect his and ]'s IP numbers will prove the same. | |||
::Likewise, no other editors were given the chance to give their input (it was over the holidays). Been here for six years and I have never seen anything like this. Stated simply, there were no edit wars, or anything else to justify this tendentous escalation. My suggestion is to take this back to the talk pages and let the process work it's way thru there. ] (]) 06:31, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Addendum: I just noticed that another article editor,], is now posting both here and on the talk page. ] (]) 06:46, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Please supply references, or concede that you do not have any. The issue has been on the talk page for several weeks. "Just a couple of exhanges and pow, here we are." and "Stated simply, there were no edit wars, or anything else to justify this tendentous escalation." Here is my first edit . Here is your edit removing my citation needed tags . This is me changing it back . This is you undoing my edit . This is me finally switching it back to how it appears currently . Literally we have gone back and forth 5 times, and we have been discussing this since December 16th. | |||
:::Other users on the talk page have also been discussing this with you since May of 2012 ] (]) 00:00, 6 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::There are no "accusations", please stop making this personal. I am only asking for quality references. If you can't provide any, and none are forthcoming, then by definition the process has already worked itself out and we can move on. ] (]) 00:00, 6 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Also, please stop ] by recruiting editors of the page that favored your opinion in the past, as you did a few hours ago and back in May of 2012 for . I have contacted all of the remaining past editors of the page as well, to make sure all opinions have a chance to be represented. Best, ] (]) 08:15, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
{{outdent}}Since you bring up the subject. It is not ] to notify past editors of a page who might have special knowledge. Rather than canvassing, I contacted one editor who might be able to clarify some of the issues. Unfortunately, he has yet to respond. | |||
However, it is ] to bring in a new editor to support your point, as seems to be the case with ], who had no connection with the article at all or anything remotely related to it and whose record of edits resembles your own. Seen editors banned for no worse. As I noted, what are the chances that two editors with a history of editing wikipedia pages of only local Indian interest would show up on a page at exactly the same time? The mind boggles. | |||
Finally, note my suggestion to replace "faculty" with "faculty/staff" just to resolve any ambiguities and to conclude this matter. ] (]) 16:19, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
*Addendum: though you claim to have notified "all of the remaining past editors of the page", this is not on their talk pages. Pehaps you can clarify this statement. ] (]) 17:07, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
::No, incorrect again. You contacted one editor, Djem3, after the debate had started, because he had agreed with you in a past talk page discussion. You diid not contact any of the other editors that had contributed to the talk page. Those are the editors that I contacted, not everyone who had ever edited the article. Neither is mandatory, but you were selectively canvassing. Where did you get the idea, other than your circumstantial evidence, leading to false accusation, that I was related to Wikishagnik? Not all Indians are related, and not all people interested in India know each other. You are walking on very thin ice there. ] (]) 22:49, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::*Straw. I tried unsucessfully to contact drjem3 because he knows about the subject than I do and might be able to answer some of the questions. Did this right out in the open too. As for your sock or meat puppetry-- don't insult our intelligence. What are the chances that two editors with the same rather specific posting interests (obscure local indian subjects) should show up on the same completely-unrelated article at the same time, particularly when one of them has never posted to anything similar before. Likely the probability is in the millions, if not billions, to one. So this is either collusion, or a Guiness book of records coincidence. Which one seems more likely? Nice try though. ] (]) 05:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::'''Comment:''' This dispute has gone on too long and I am losing sleep and developing a stomach ulcer from it. I would like to withdraw personally from dispute and defer to the opinion of the remaining DRN discussion participants regarding past faculty affiliations. Best, ] (]) 11:16, 6 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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*'''Comment''': Agree this has gone on too long. I concur with ]'s compromise proposal that "faculty" be replaced by "faculty or staff" or words to this effect. I have also removed the COI tag since it is not in contention here. ] (]) 19:31, 6 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
*:'''Comment''':Apparently too late, but just in case, I register my concurance with ] and ]. Tempest in a tea-pot. ] (]) 20:06, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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'''Comment: '''Now that we have established good faith all around and agreed upon socket puppetry actions required, if any, can we focus on the content of this article (])? Can we get rid of the entirely self referenced content and wait for the Doctor to achieve more in life for which he gets duly recognized, which in turn can be quoted here from ''independent'' and ''neutral'' third party sources? -] (]) 13:10, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:'''Smokefoot experience''' I have repeatedly expressed grave concerns about the articles on ], his thesis advisor ] (whose notability was also disputed and this article got off to a rocky start except for the efforts of Proctor), and many articles that cite their work. All of my efforts were thwarted by coordinated efforts of ], ], and Proctor himself. My concerns about the Peter Proctor article were expressed at http://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Talk:Peter_Proctor&oldid=495533611 under "#What is his current position and what are his awards" My view is that Proctor, Nucleophilic, and Drjem3 were propping up a reputation for Proctor, which lacks external support. He has no accolades, awards, editorships, lectures, appointments that in any way indicate even a modest level of external recognition. The article seemed problematic from the ] perspective. In the end, I concluded that the article ] was "lame" but lame biographies are an occassional artifact of Misplaced Pages. My greater concern was that these same editors have implicated Proctor and ] as being some sort of scientific pioneers and innovators. Misplaced Pages articles related to polyacetylene (Nobel Prize stuff a few years back) and molecular electronics, cite the work of McGinness and Proctor. These articles are guarded and groomed by these threesome. I have taught these topics in a university and have never heard of these people. They are not mentioned in any textbooks. At the same time, Proctor and Nucleophilic led a subtle effort to denigrate the achievements of people who are generally accepted as pioneers and innovators - such as the Nobel prize winners. I have edited a lot in Misplaced Pages - but my experience with Proctor and Nucleophilic and User:Drjem3 remains the absolute low point of otherwise satisfying work. I eventually removed everything related to ] from my watchlist because the articles were obviously the personal domains of this threesome. --] (]) 15:17, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
::'''Response to Wikishagnik comment:''' I agree, viewing the dispute resolution guidelines discussed at ] (), it is centrally important to not focus on the editors but the article. I agree with the recommendations given by Wikishagnik above. ] (]) 23:57, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
'''Comment''': I have encountered many problems with articles related to ], which I have discussed in detail at ]. I tend to share the views of Smokefoot on these matters. In my opinion, Proctor and McGinness get far more coverage on Misplaced Pages than they deserve. --] (]) 21:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
*'''Observation''' - In trying to summarize various discussions taking place above I note that a large part of the discussion centered on which discovery should be credited to whom and who was the first to find it etc. There was also a large discussion that centered on who deserved the Nobel Prize etc. All participants to this discussion are reminded about (]) and that specifically ''] of such ] are needed to demonstrate that material is verifiable, and not merely the editor's opinion''. Editors should have further stressed the need for NPOV by focusing on (]) wich specifically states that in an article ''Avoid stating seriously contested assertions as facts. If different reliable sources make conflicting assertions about a matter, treat these assertions as opinions rather than facts, and do not present them as direct statements.''. By ignoring Misplaced Pages Policy and engaging a debate on this topic editors turned this discussion into a debate and allowed it to spiral out of scope for article talk pages. Please remember that talk pages are meant to discuss the ''content'' of an article and not views of editors about the subject. Can we get some comments from ] at this point? -] (]) 01:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
'''Sources?''' - @Nucleophilic: you suggested using the term "faculty/staff" for the article. I didn't see the source which supported that ... could you again provide the source and a quote from the source which says "faculty/staff" or something similar? PS: To all: the DRN forum is limited to discussions of ''content'' only. Any discussions of behavior (e.g. canvassing, sockpuppetry, etc) are not permitted here. Thanks. --] (]) 16:00, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read ] and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. | |||
] (]) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). ] (]) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:'''Reply''':The sources are the addresses provided in the subject's published papers. E.g, and list his address as "Department of Ophthalmology, Baylor College of Medicine". Similarly, lists his address as UTMB Gslveston, Department of Pharmacology. BTW, according to pubmed, the subjects first papers were in 1970. e.g, this one , which also contains an address not listed in the bio. I posted this material on the relevant talk page in reply to an inquiry for sources. Exactly how they were to be incorporated was left for later. I also posted these links to the papers so they can be read directly. Doubtless, I can find more. In ] peer-reviewed published papers like these are at the top of the list. | |||
:True, as is custom in the sciences, these do not list the subject's exact position. BTW, "research instructor" is a faculty position at most institutions. Often, the first rung on the academic ladder. IIRC ] allows the use of material like this. In any case, I suggest "faculty or staff" to get around any ambiguity. I was preparing to back off on this issue (which seems trivial) subject to input of other editors when Chantoke brought it over here, compelling me to respond. A reading of the interchange will show that I was trying to reply to Chantoke's questions as well I could. ] (]) 23:11, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::Nucleophilic: I don't see anywhere in those sources that Proctor was faculty or staff. I think it would be a breach of ] or ] for the article to even imply that Proctor was on the faculty, which is a very significant position. Proctor has been working, according to the article, for decades in areas of high-profile research. If you cannot find ''one single source'' which says "Proctor is on the faculty/staff....", in plain words, that ''absence'' is very telling, and the info should be removed from the article. --] (]) 15:12, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
====Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)==== | |||
:::::Uh, In academia, if somebody is not "faculty", they are "staff". Least that has always been my experience. Do you assert that he was not working at these institutions in the face of what the papers say? If he was, he was one or the other. You-all do what you want, pending other information. Which was what was happening when this "dispute" was brought here. Sheesh. ] (]) 19:41, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that ] is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of ] applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in. | |||
::::::Sorry, but in WP we do not use "my experience" as a source. From your failure to supply sources, I take it there is no source which says "Proctor was on the faculty (or staff) of ...". Since there is no source that says that, the material cannot be in the article. If Proctor is notable enough for a WP article, there should be some sources discussing his career. The lack of sources is significant. --] (]) 20:24, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
'''Promotional?''' - Users Ben and Smokefoot (and others) above have suggested that a couple of editors have been engaging in improper promotion of ], which would be a violation of ] policy. If the promotional efforts are disruptive, the best forum for addressing those is at ], or if a single editor is the culprit, at ]. The DRN process focuses only on ''content'' issues (specific facts stated within articles) so this DRN case could be used to analyze individual sentences within an article. The ] guideline applies to entire articles, not specific sentences within articles; so if we assume that ] meets WP notability guidelines, then the article can/should exist and the next step is simply to assess the accuracy of material within the article. If the article is overly detailed, then specific sentences/sections should be proposed for deletion (even if sourced) if they are non-encyclopedic. Of particular concern is the assertion by user Smokefoot: ''"at the same time, Proctor and Nucleophilic led a subtle effort to denigrate the achievements of people who are generally accepted as pioneers and innovators - such as the Nobel prize winners"'' ... adding puffery into ] is one thing, but removing or distorting information in other articles is unacceptable. If anything like that has happened, talk page discussions, RfCs, and DRN cases can be used to remedy the situation. --] (]) 16:11, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined , I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed & ), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. ] (]) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
:For what it's worth, as an editor that works in the area of chemistry, I have also come across the Peter Proctor-related edits. My perception agrees with those of Smokefoot and Benjah-bmm27: there appears to be a determined effort to promote Peter Proctor here on Misplaced Pages to a degree that far outweighs his actual contributions to science, presenting a misleading narrative to the reader. ] (]) 16:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to ] and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to ]. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response. | |||
::Okay, thanks for your input. If there are any ''specific'' changes to ] article you think should be made, please describe them here (with a rationale). As for the bigger issue about violations of ], I'll leave it up to other editors to decide if they want to lodge complaints at ] or ] (again, ] is not the appropriate forum for promotional issues, because that is considered a behavior/conduct problem, and DRN is limited to ''content'' issues). --] (]) 16:51, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
Are there any other questions? ] (]) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
*FWIW, chantoke seems to have just changed his name to ]. Unfortunately, this makes it that much harder to keep up with his edits. ] (]) 21:45, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Nucleophilic: Could you reply to my question above about 4 posts above under '''Sources'''? Thanks. --] (]) 21:47, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::'''Done''' above. ] (]) 00:32, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::: ], you can check the contribs by going to Contributions under toolbox on the left. I guess you are confusing namespace change with sock puppetry and the former is allowed and does not change the stats of a user. -] (]) 04:00, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::Oh, I know the difference. It is just that ], now dubbed ], keeps doing things that make it difficult to track his posts. Deliberate? Beats me. Examples include hundreds of posts to single sites that fill up his edit list and using different names in his user links. It is true that the contribution list changes in accord with the name change, but other stuff stays with the old name. For an example or three, see this page. Now, he does a total namespace change. After a while, ya just lose track. ] (]) 05:24, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::::You do know that this is not the venue for conduct disputes right? Please stop making accusations about your perceptions in regard to what you think they are doing. Please address only the content dispute moving forward.--] (]) 05:56, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
'''Response:''' This dispute is ridiculous and has gone on too long. I would like to withdraw it and close the discussion. Please let me know if this is alright. Thanks. ] ]</font> 19:13, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Sure, you can withdraw at any time - participating in DRN is entirely voluntary. I think it would be best to leave the discussion open for a few more days to see if other uninvolved editors can provide additional insight (such as when ] and user Smokefoot provided input). Even after the DRN case is closed, relevant issues can still be discussed at the article talk page and other dispute resolution forums, such as ]. --] (]) 19:37, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:: Thank you. I would like to recuse myself from the discussion and will not be making further edits to the article. ] ]</font> 20:35, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. ] (]) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Talk:Campaign for_Nuclear_Disarmament == | |||
::I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. ] (]) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===First statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
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{{drn filing editor|Pelarmian|11:06, 4 January 2013 (UTC)}} | |||
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===Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about ], so that we can read a description of the review bombing. | |||
I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement. | |||
I don't understand what the ] issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the ] issue is. So please state more specifically what the ] issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a ] issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it. | |||
Please provide your rewritten sections. | |||
Are there any other questions? | |||
] (]) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Second statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
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''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' released for ], ], and ] on October 31, 2024. {{strikethrough|After release ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record.}} The game received generally positive reviews from critics, '''who praised its cast, representation of ] characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat'''. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the ] and Innovation in Accessibility at ]. | |||
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¶1 ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' received "generally favorable" reviews from critics {{strikethrough|for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions}} according to the ] website ].<ref name="MC XSXS Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://www.metacritic.com/game/dragon-age-the-veilguard/critic-reviews/?platform=xbox-series-x |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard (Xbox Series X Critic Reviews) |website=] |access-date=December 4, 2024}}</ref> ] determined that 68% of critics recommended the game.<ref name="OC Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://opencritic.com/game/17037/dragon-age-the-veilguard |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Reviews |website=] |access-date=November 12, 2024}}</ref> ''Veilguard'' was subject to ] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "]". '''{{underline|Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative}}''', the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on ], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove '''offensive reviews'''.<ref>{{Cite news |date=2024-11-05 |title=Metacritic responds after Dragon Age: The Veilguard review bombing |url=https://www.eurogamer.net/metacritic-responds-after-dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing |access-date=2024-11-06 |work=Eurogamer.net |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age The Veilguard is getting review bombed, and now Metacritic has something to say |url=https://www.pcgamesn.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard/metacritic-respond-review-bomb |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=PCGamesN |language=en-US}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Watson |first=Philip |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's Poor Review Bombing Leads To Metacritic Response |url=https://www.cgmagonline.com/news/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing/ |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=] |language=en-CA}}</ref> | |||
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¶2 Hayes Madsen of '']'' called ''Veilguard'' a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset".<ref name=":2">{{Cite magazine |last=Madsen |first=Hayes |date=2024-10-28 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Is a Return to Form for a Beloved RPG Franchise |url=https://www.rollingstone.com/culture/rs-gaming/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-1235144960/ |access-date=2024-10-29 |magazine=Rolling Stone |language=en-US}}</ref> Leana Hafer for '']'' similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character".<ref name=":1">{{Cite web |last=Hafer |first=Leana |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Review |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review |access-date=2024-10-29 |website=] |language=en}}</ref> Andy Bickerton of ] viewed the game as a "well-executed ]". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of ''Veilguard''{{'}}s near-decade of troubled production".<ref name=":11">{{Cite news |last=Bickerton |first=Andy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Tonally inconsistent 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' is still BioWare's best action game |url=https://www.npr.org/2024/10/28/nx-s1-5165587/dragon-age-veilguard-review-story-tone |access-date=November 29, 2024 |work=]}}</ref> Lauren Morton of ''PC Gamer'' thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than ] at moments".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev">{{cite web |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review/ |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=]}}</ref> | |||
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¶3 '''Critics were mixed on the game's story.''' Matt Purslow from ''IGN'' '''thought that''' ''Veilguard'' was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric.<ref>{{cite web|url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-is-at-war-with-itself|title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Is at War With Itself|first=Matt|last=Purslow|work=]|date=November 9, 2024|accessdate=November 10, 2024}}</ref> Malindy Hetfeld of '']'' '''criticized''' the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in ''Veilguard'', describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions".<ref name="Guardian review">{{cite web |last=Hetfeld |first=Malindy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review — a good RPG, but an underwhelming Dragon Age game |url=https://www.theguardian.com/games/2024/oct/28/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bioware-electronic-arts |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=]}}</ref> She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer opined that ''Veilguard'' has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas.<ref name=":1" /> Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey.<ref name=":2" /> Ash Parrish of '']'' appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice".<ref name="Verge full review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-11-28 |title=The hardest part of Dragon Age: The Veilguard is making a choice |url=https://www.theverge.com/24307786/dragon-age-the-veilguard-full-review |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref> Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative,<ref name="Verge early review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard starts slow but strong |url=https://www.theverge.com/24281631/dragon-age-the-veilguard-early-review-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":2" /><ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name="PCGUS Morton rev"/><ref name=":3">{{Cite web |last=Hashimoto |first=Kazuma |date=2024-10-28 |title=I Played 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' and Got Myself Stuck in a Gay Love Triangle |url=https://www.them.us/story/dragon-age-the-veilguard-lgbtq-romance-options-essay-lucanis-davrin |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Them |language=en-US}}</ref> with some finding major decisions "few and far between".<ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name=":2" /> | |||
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¶4 Madsen praised ''Veilguard'' for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot".<ref name=":2" /> Todd Harper of '']'' emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways".<ref name=":4">{{Cite web |last=Harper |first=Todd |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the friend group simulator we've been waiting for |url=https://www.polygon.com/review/470712/review-dragon-age-the-veilguard-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Kazuma Hashimoto of '']'' commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions.<ref name=":3"/> Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in ''Veilguard'', highlighting that unlike previous ''Dragon Age'' games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path.<ref name="Verge full review" /> Conversely, Oliver Brandt of '']'' viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other ''Dragon Age'' games.<ref name=":8">{{Cite web |last=Brandt |first=Oliver |date=2024-10-31 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the first triple-A game to handle gender identity the right way |url=https://www.si.com/videogames/features/dragon-age-the-veilguard-taash-gender-identity |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=] |language=en-US}}</ref> Harvey Randall of ''PC Gamer'' highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity.<ref name=":9" /> Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations,<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev" /> noting that "good people don't make great characters".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts.<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev">{{Cite news |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=2024-11-15 |title=The Veilguard is the first Dragon Age game where my companions don't care enough about anything to argue with me |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/the-veilguard-is-the-first-dragon-age-game-where-my-companions-dont-care-enough-about-anything-to-argue-with-me/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> | |||
¶5 '''''Veilguard'' generally received praise for its inclusive ] and representation of ] and ] characters.'''<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":14">{{Cite web |last=Mora |first=Alyssa |date=September 19, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Preview: BioWare Finally Nails The Character Creator I've Always Wanted |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-preview-bioware-finally-nails-the-character-creator-ive-always-wanted |access-date=November 30, 2024 |website=IGN |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":10">{{Cite web |last=Bea |first=Robin |date=2024-11-06 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Makes Me Feel Seen As a Trans Player, But Still Disappointed |url=https://www.inverse.com/gaming/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-characters |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Inverse |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":12">{{Cite web |last=Henley |first=Stacey |date=2024-11-06 |title=Why Dragon Age: The Veilguard Uses The Term 'Non-Binary' |url=https://www.thegamer.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard-non-binary-modern-immersion-breaking/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=TheGamer |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Puc |first=Samantha |date=2024-11-03 |title=This 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' companion's story ruined me in the best way |url=https://www.themarysue.com/this-dragon-age-the-veilguard-companions-story-ruined-me-in-the-best-way/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Mary Sue}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Marshall |first=Cass |date=2024-11-01 |title=How role-playing a trans or nonbinary Rook works in Dragon Age: The Veilguard |url=https://www.polygon.com/gaming/472513/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-nonbinary-identity-role-play |access-date=2024-11-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Alyssa Mora of ''IGN'' emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless".<ref name=":14" /> Both Robin Bea of '']'' and Brandt commended Taash's story arc,<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":10" /> with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", ''Vanguard'' "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary".<ref name=":8" /> Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in ''Veilguard'' in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a ] narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character".<ref name=":10" /> Stacey Henley of '']'' appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to ''Inquisition''{{'s}} ], though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking".<ref name=":12" /> Randall was more critical, noting how ''Veilguard'' "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context".<ref name=":9">{{Cite news |last=Randall |first=Harvey |date=2024-11-13 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's leap forward in trans inclusion comes from a heartfelt place, but its problems left me feeling frustrated, angry, and tired |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguards-leap-forward-in-trans-inclusion-comes-from-a-heartfelt-place-but-its-problems-left-me-feeling-frustrated-angry-and-tired/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> They found the lack of a fictional ] connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting".<ref name=":9" /> | |||
¶6 '''Critics enjoyed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat.''' Bickerton felt that ''Veilguard''{{'}}s strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish".<ref name=":11" /> He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players.<ref name=":11" /> Hetfeld viewed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars".<ref name="Verge full review" /> Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than ''Inquisition'' and the ''Mass Effect'' games.<ref name=":4" /> Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor",<ref name=":1" /> and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous".<ref name=":4" /> Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design".<ref name="Verge early review" /> Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points".<ref name=":11" /> Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of ''Veilguard''. She found it was better off for removing ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> | |||
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In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). ] (]) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. ] (]) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Third statement by moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place. | |||
Are there any questions? | |||
] (]) 04:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? ] (]) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Third statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
===Fourth statement by moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
Yes. Make the agreed-on changes. If they are reverted, follow my instructions above. ] (]) 04:54, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Fourth statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
{{Done}} per above instructions (). ] (]) 18:23, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Autism == | |||
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Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society. | |||
In the article about the Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament, BoundaryLayer wants to include a controversial claim that its symbol, the well known peace sign, was used by the Nazis. Following lengthy discussion with BoundaryLayer, I reported the existence of the claim, citing ''Time'' magazine and Ken Kolsbun's history of the peace sign. | |||
On Misplaced Pages, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all. | |||
BoundaryLayer says it's not enough to report the controversy, the claim must be included as a fact. A Third Opinion advised that the article should remain neutral about whether the Nazis used the symbol or not. BoundaryLayer ignored that advice and added an edit saying the symbol was similar to "the insignia of the 3rd panzer Division of WWII in usage from 1941 until the end of the war. A number of experts in symbolism have noted that the CND symbol is similar to the Algiz Tudesrune, originally a Nordic runic symbol, but in present day Germany and Austria it is often called the Todesrune, the rune of death, or the inverted life rune." | |||
Misplaced Pages has quite detailed guidelines for what to do ''within'' medicine, or ''outside'' of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about ''whether'' something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years. | |||
This is tendentious editing. It synthesises sources that don't actually say that the CND symbol is similar to a symbol used by the Nazis. "Experts in symbolism" is also a tendentious phrase. | |||
This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"? | |||
Third Opinion requested. | |||
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Advise whether or not the article should endorse this claim and whether the controversy is significant enough even to be reported, and, if so, in what terms it should be reported. | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
==== Opening comments by Boundarylayer ==== | |||
Hello, I haven't been ignoring the debate, I've simply not logged into Wiki in a few days. | |||
There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the ''route'' to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Misplaced Pages guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful. | |||
The dispute resolves over the fact that another user does, '''number one''', not wish for readers to know what ''ominious'' symbol the republican paper was referring to, '''and number two''', and most bizarrely, they do not wish for the opinions of experts in symbolism, nor the opinion of the former head of the CND herself, to be included in the article. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов ==== | |||
Linked below is the edit that was recently removed. None of the references provided are in dispute. '''I would be glad to discuss with the other user, or collaborate on an edit that they would feel appropriate''', however, sadly, this does not appears to be something they wish to do. | |||
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The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity. | |||
This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). | |||
https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Campaign_for_Nuclear_Disarmament&oldid=531168110#Organised_opposition_to_CND | |||
This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see ]. | |||
Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted. | |||
] (]) 06:33, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs. | |||
=== Talk:Campaign for_Nuclear_Disarmament discussion === | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please do not use this for discussing the dispute prior to a volunteer opening the thread for comments - continue discussing the issues on the article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations. | |||
Boundarylayer seems to be ignoring the discussion (see talk page of article), but I've left a comment on his talk page. ~~]]~~ → <small><span class="nowrap">]</span></small> 16:13, 5 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan ==== | |||
:Boundarylayer wants to insert into the CND article a statement saying that CND’s symbol was similar to “the insignia of the 3rd panzer Division of WWII” The claim is controversial and therefore needs particularly good references, which Boundarylayer does not provide. His edit synthesises sources to produce a statement that none of them makes and on the Talk page his lengthy justifications also contain synthesis and original research. | |||
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Yes, as ] says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here. | |||
:The source he cites for the “Algiz Tudesrune” is Carl J. Liungman’s ''Book of Symbols''. What Liungman actually says is that the CND sign “can be seen as composed of a Tyr rune, lengthened upward, or by the rune Y, turned upside down." He does not mention “the Algiz Tudesrune” and he does not mention the 3rd Panzer Division. (Liungman, by the way, has an amateur interest in semiotics, has not published in refereed journals and is not recognised as an "expert in symbolism" by anyone with academic credibility. His ''Book of Symbols'' appears to be vanity publishing.) | |||
There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:Boundarylayer cites ''Time'' magazine, which says of the peace sign, “some experts say it was a letter in an ancient Nordic alphabet,” but it does not mention “a Nordic runic symbol” and it does not mention the 3rd Panzer Division. | |||
:I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Misplaced Pages. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. ] (]) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Peggy Duff, the ex-general secretary of CND, is said to support this connection between CND and the Nazis, but in the citation given she does nothing of the kind. She does not say that the CND symbol was the “Algiz Tudesrune” or a “Nordic” runic symbol (she describes it merely as a “runic symbol”), she does not say that “in Germany and Austria it is called the Todesrune” and she does not say that it was “the insignia of the 3rd Panzer Division.” | |||
::I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what. | |||
::My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Misplaced Pages'). ] (]) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8 ==== | |||
:The controversial claims about the peace sign are already referred to in the article. This careless edit only adds Boundarylayer’s original research, which has nothing to do with the history of CND. ] (]) 09:20, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by TempusTacet ==== | |||
::Broadly speaking I think Pelarmian is right about this. --] ] 11:51, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing ==== | |||
'''WP:SYNTH violation?''' - The primary article for discussing the peace symbol should be (and is) ]. That article already contains a mention of the purported similarity to a Nazi symbol. The article that is the subject of this DRN case is about the CND. The CND article should discuss how the CND participated in creating that symbol, but details about the history of the symbol should ''only be in the CND article if the sources mention the CND.'' I'm looking at the quotes from the sources above given by Pelarmian but I don't see a source that mentions '''both''' the CND and the Nazis. Connecting two sources together to cause the word "Nazi" to appear in the CND article is a violation of the ] policy. So, my question is: Is there a reliable source that explicitly mentions ''both'' the CND and the nazis? Absent that, the Nazi material should be removed from the CND article (but the readers can still learn about it by clicking on the ] link). --] (]) 16:58, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{tl|MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). ] (]) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
== Talk:List of Young Justice Episodes#Edit-warring, User talk:LoveWaffle#Unacceptable == | |||
:@], let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the ] section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the ] process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use ] if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph. | |||
:(I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) ] (]) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion ==== | |||
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The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. ] (]) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by ] below, as well as ], and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the ''Zeroeth statements by editors'' section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section. | |||
:Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. ] (]) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller"> (Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. ] (]) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC) </div> | |||
==== Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo ==== | |||
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{{hat|Comment in your own section. ] (]) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
''Note: Editor is "]" and will not be participating.'' --] (]) 09:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{hab}} | |||
=== Autism discussion === | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)=== | |||
I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on ] and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include; | |||
*Be ]. Civility is required everywhere in Misplaced Pages, and is essential to resolving content disputes. | |||
*Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a ] is likely to ignore it. | |||
*Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community. | |||
*Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article. | |||
*Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved. | |||
In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the ] of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form). | |||
I don't yet know whether ] is the right forum to resolve disputes about ], but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. | |||
] (]) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)? | |||
:I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you. | |||
:Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied. | |||
:I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is (published in the ) and ], posted here and . You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. ] (]) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===First statement by possible moderator (Autism)=== | |||
I asked for specific statements of how the ] should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read ]. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of ] describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the ] should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by ], and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by ]. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the ] standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary ]. | |||
If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the ]. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the ], and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised ]. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues. | |||
I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as '''First statements by editors (Autism)''', because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic ] are met. | |||
After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the ], I will know better whether ] is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? ] (]) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks @]! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years. | |||
:@] has ] - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there? | |||
:I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Misplaced Pages guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... ] (]) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::@]@] I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample): | |||
:::::: " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. " | |||
::] (]) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===First statements by editors (Autism)=== | |||
==== 1. what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same ==== | |||
The overall framing of the lead is very much within the medical model of autism, taking for granted various things which are hotly contested in the wider world - particularly among autistic people, but also among researchers in this field. | |||
Let's take the opening paragraph. | |||
{{bq|Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or simply autism, is a ''neurodevelopmental disorder'' characterized by ''repetitive, restricted, and inflexible'' patterns of behavior, interests, and activities; ''deficits'' in social communication and social interaction; and the presence of high or low sensory sensitivity. A formal diagnosis requires that ''symptoms'' cause significant ''impairment'' in multiple functional domains, in addition to being atypical or excessive for the person's age and sociocultural context.}} | |||
I've highlighted the particularly contentious terms! Essentially, this paragraph takes the mainstream psychiatric perspective on all of these things for granted. | |||
Here's one alternative version, which I contributed to in 2022, with instances of more neutral terms highlighted: | |||
{{bq|The autism spectrum, often referred to as just autism or in the context of a professional diagnosis autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or autism spectrum condition (ASC), is a neurodevelopmental ''condition'' (or conditions) characterized by ''difficulties'' in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication, and the ''presence'' of repetitive behavior and restricted interests. Other common ''signs'' include unusual responses to sensory stimuli. }} | |||
Note that for the most part these terms convey the same information, without assuming a particular interpretation is the correct one. ''Condition'' is often thought to be a slightly less value-laden equivalent of ''disorder'',<ref>{{cite journal |doi=10.1177/1362361315588200 |url=https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/26134030/}}</ref> although arguably the difference is marginal. The hypothesis that autistic people have inherent ''deficits'' in social communication and interaction has been disproven quite convincingly (see ]); the ''difficulties'', however, certainly remain in many contexts, and are in practice all that diagnosticians can go by on this front. There are all sorts of issues with applying the term ''symptom'' to the ways that autism manifests, starting with the assumption that they're problems, as opposed to e.g. coping strategies or objectively neutral characteristics. | |||
I recently simply to accurately reflect views associated with neurodiversity, correcting text based on blatant misunderstandings; variations on these edits have now been reverted at least four times, including after they have been restored by other editors. These reversions have not been accompanied by sensible edit summaries, instead claiming for example that they are ideologically motivated, and that my references (an academic textbook and a peer-reviewed paper researching community views) are somehow inadequate. I am aware that these reversions are starting to suggest that ] may be a more appropriate venue for resolving these issues. | |||
The final paragraph of the lead is dubious, and largely reads like an advertisement for ] | |||
<small>Above entered by {{noping|Oolong}}</small> | |||
====Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. ==== | |||
''Classification'' goes into enormous technical detail, and seems to overlap heavily with both | |||
''diagnosis'' and ''signs and symptoms''. | |||
We need to cover common aspects of autistic experience somewhere (see ] for some of these; there are many more) and it is not clear if they can fit in the above section, although they may be at least as important, just because they are not adequately covered by the current editions of diagnostic manuals. | |||
''Possible causes'' should obviously be no more than 2-3 paragraphs at most, in line with summary style. Likewise ''epidemiology''. | |||
''Management'' is an awful framing; autism is a fundamental difference in a person, not an illness to be managed. I note that this heading is absent from the ] entry. Perhaps it would be constructive to replace this section with something around ''access'': access to healthcare, education, workplaces and so on. | |||
''Prognosis'' probably doesn't warrant a section at all: it's lifelong. If it's going to be there, it needs to be completely rewritten. | |||
''History'' and especially ''society and culture'' probably deserve to be significantly higher up in the article. | |||
<small>Above entered by {{noping|Oolong}}</small> | |||
Re your third question, I provided various links in my original submission - are those specific enough? | |||
===Second statement by moderator (Autism)=== | |||
My explanation about ] is my own interpretation, based on the principle to ]. Other editors may disagree, but it is the rule that will be in place while I am moderating this discussion. | |||
The unregistered editor is strongly advised to ] if they wish to take part in this mediation. Their IPv6 address has changed between the time that this discussion was created and the time of this post. It is both difficult to remember IPv6 addresses and difficult to communicate with shifting IPv6 (or IPv4) addresses. | |||
The requested rewrite has no references. It also includes a statement of opinion that is not a summary of existing knowledge and is therefore not encyclopedic. On the other hand, the first sentence of the proposed rewrite is, in my opinion, a good starting point for a rewrite of the ]. The later sentences about differences between different autistic persons are, in my opinion, a good idea to be included somewhere in the article, but not necessarily in the ]. | |||
In the above paragraph, I am taking a more active role in trying to lead this discussion than I usually take. If the participants agree with my taking an active role, I will write a new set of rules providing for a semi-active role by the moderator. If the participants would prefer that I be less active, I will step back somewhat, and will implement ]. | |||
Are there any other questions? | |||
] (]) 05:19, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:So I have issues with the proposed lede change, with interpreting the scientific consensus classification as a "medical model", among other issues. I'd like to clarify these per my involvement here, but I need time to formulate a reply. I saw an article stating that editors must reply within 48 hours but I cannot consistently do this with my time constraints. May I ask if this will be a significant issue and if it's a requirement can it not be so strict under the circumstances? Thanks. ] (]) 16:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::The provision about responding within 48 hours is in ], which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? ] (]) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::72 hours should be fine in general. I plan to respond quicker than that if I can of course, my only concern is that I occasionally am not free to reply within 72 hours as sometimes I won't be able to until the weekend. Apologies if this is causing some issues. I'm much more free now with Christmas over so I think it'll mainly become an issue if our discussions extend much into January. ] (]) 18:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:"The requested rewrite ... includes a statement of opinion." - Which part is a statement of opinion? I am not disputing your assessment; rather, I want to make sure I understand your point correctly. Thanks! - <span style="font-family: Papyrus; font-size: 14px;">] ]</span> <span style="font-family: Papyrus; font-size: 11px;"></span> 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Second statements by editors (Autism)=== | |||
== Sri Lankan Vellalar == | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources. | |||
This is basically a question over how similar a re-worded statement can be from its source without qualifying as a copyright violation. Particularly, this concerns brief plot synopses for upcoming episodes of the Cartoon Network animated series Young Justice announced via press release. I provided a re-worded version of the synopses for the episodes' entries on the List of Young Justice episodes. Jack Sebastian then removes them, calling them copyright violations, and replaces them with a re-worded version that, in my opinion, is significantly closer to the source material. Since I consider that a copyright violation, I restore the old version (mine) of the page. Jack Sebastian removes them again and...you see where this is going. | |||
Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules. | |||
Jack Sebastian and I have, in simplest terms, had it out with this dispute. In two different locations, even. However, as Jack Sebastian is now making personal attacks and doing everything in his ability to block me from contributing to the discussion, my hands are now tied. | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
As I said, Jack Sebastian has made personal attacks and is doing everything to keep me out of the discussion. To be honest, I don't know if I could continue the discussion without doing the same. I need the dispute to be resolved quickly before this escalates and at least one of us winds up blocked. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
==== Opening comments by Jack Sebastian ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please limit to 2000 characters - longer statements may be deleted in their entirety or asked to be shortened. This is so a volunteer can review the dispute in a timely manner. Thanks.</div> | |||
This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points. | |||
=== Talk:List of Young Justice Episodes#Edit-warring, User talk:LoveWaffle#Unacceptable discussion === | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy ==== | |||
== Juan Manuel de Rosas == | |||
First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed: | |||
- Terminology differences | |||
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{{drn filing editor|Lecen|20:20, 7 January 2013 (UTC)}} | |||
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- The inclusion of the mythology section | |||
'''Terminology Differences''' | |||
The root of the terminology issue stems from my , where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were ]. | |||
To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically: | |||
- {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}} refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the ]. | |||
- {{Langx|ta|வெள்ளாளர்|Veḷḷāḷar}} represents the caste name in contemporary usage. | |||
This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste ] often uses this term {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}}, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms. | |||
'''Inclusion of the Mythology Section''' | |||
The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well. | |||
The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste. | |||
'''Third-Party Opinion''' | |||
Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed ] or not ], the concerned user should raise the issue on ]. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated. | |||
I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article. | |||
=== Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion === | |||
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===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Sri Lankan Vellalar)=== | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator if the participants want moderated discussion and if this does not involve a question about the ]. Please read ] and the ]. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state, first, whether they agree to ] and that discussions of South Asian social groupings are subject to special rules. Each editor is then asked, second, what changes they want to make to the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Each editor is asked, third, whether there are issues about the ]. If I determine that there are issues about the ], or if an editor states that there are such issues, I will close this discussion until that question is resolved at ]. | |||
Are there any other questions? | |||
] (]) 05:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Zeroth statements by editors (Sri Lankan Vellalar)=== | |||
== Kamaria Ahir == | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} | |||
{{drn filing editor|Nlkyair012|20:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed as also pending in another forum, ]. ] does not accept a dispute that is also pending in another content or conduct forum, and RSN is a content forum. When there are two types of issues about one article, it is not practical to try to resolve them in two forums at the same time, because often issues overlap, and because the resolution in one forum might change what is being discussed in the other forum. Finish the discussion at ] and decide whether there are any remaining content issues that are consistent with what has been decided about ]. If there are any remaining content issues, resume discussion on the article talk page. If the subsequent discussion on the article talk page is lengthy and inconclusive, a new case request can be filed here. ] (]) 03:10, 25 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
* {{User|Cambalachero}} | |||
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The dispute revolves around the use of Raj-era sources, specifically K.S. Singh’s "Anthropological Survey of India," in the article on "Kamaria Ahir." One editor, Nlkyair012, is advocating for the removal of these sources, arguing that they are outdated and unreliable. However, these historical sources, particularly those from the British Raj, are still cited in reputable modern academic works as valuable historical references for caste dynamics and structures. The issue also includes the inclusion of living people's names without proper self-identification, which violates Misplaced Pages's Biographies of Living Persons policy (BLP). The goal of this dispute resolution is to determine whether the Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh’s work should be retained or replaced, and to ensure that the article adheres to Misplaced Pages's guidelines on neutrality and verifiability. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
The dispute can be resolved by carefully reviewing the reliability of Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh's work, considering modern academic citations that rely on these sources, and determining whether they meet Misplaced Pages's standards of verifiability. Additionally, we can remove any names of living people to comply with the BLP policy while maintaining the historical and sociological content that is well-sourced. Collaboration on improving the article is key, and I suggest that experts in anthropology or caste studies provide input on the appropriateness of these sources for this article. | |||
The current dispute is about the inclusion of Raj-era sources, particularly from the British colonial period, in the article "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Kamaria_Ahir)." I believe these sources are valuable for understanding the historical context of caste structures in India, despite their age. While I acknowledge that (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Age_matters) advises caution with older sources, it does not outright prohibit their use, especially when they provide unique historical insights that modern works may lack. Raj-era ethnographic works were written by government officials and are often cited in contemporary research for their firsthand observations, making them relevant in understanding caste dynamics. | |||
A central issue in this dispute is the use of K.S. Singh’s "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Anthropological_Survey_of_India)" (ASI), which I have cited in the article. The ASI, although created under government supervision, is a significant academic resource that continues to be referenced in Indian academia. While some may question its modern reliability, it remains an authoritative source, and dismissing it entirely without further scrutiny undermines its contribution to the topic. As per (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Scholarship), high-quality academic sources are essential, but older sources like K.S. Singh’s are still valid when used in conjunction with modern studies to provide a complete view of the topic. | |||
I also understand concerns related to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons), particularly regarding the inclusion of living people's names in caste articles. If specific names are a violation of (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BLP_categories), I agree they should be removed. However, this does not justify removing the entire article or historical context that is verifiable and supported by well-established sources. The article provides valuable historical and sociological context that should not be discarded simply due to concerns over individual names. | |||
The sources I have used are critical to the article’s depth and accuracy. While there are concerns over the accessibility and page numbers of some sources, I am willing to work to improve verifiability, such as by adding missing page numbers or citing additional resources. According to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Verifiability) and (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources), I aim to improve the article's citation standards, but my main goal is to maintain the article’s historical integrity while complying with Misplaced Pages’s standards for verifiability, neutrality, and reliability. | |||
(https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Ratnahastin) has raised concerns about the reliability and relevance of these sources, particularly due to their age. However, rather than removing content entirely, I propose that we retain these sources while improving the article’s clarity and citation standards. The article can be collaboratively improved to ensure it meets Misplaced Pages's guidelines while preserving the depth of the subject matter. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Ratnahastin ==== | |||
The OP does not really understand the purpose of WP:DR. The proper venue for this dispute was ]. - ] (]) 02:06, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I understand your concerns, but I’d appreciate if we could focus on constructive dialogue rather than dismissing my contributions as AI-generated or repetitive. I’ve put in considerable effort into researching and explaining my points here and on RSN, as you’ve acknowledged. | |||
:While RSN focuses strictly on source reliability, this discussion at DRN is broader—it’s about how content sourced from historical documents can be meaningfully incorporated into the article without violating Misplaced Pages’s guidelines like ] or ]. | |||
:I’d also like to emphasize that I’m not against incorporating modern tertiary sources. In fact, I’ve already proposed balancing the article with both historical and modern perspectives to ensure neutrality and depth. I am also willing to address verifiability concerns by adding specific page numbers or additional citations. | |||
:Accusing me of forum shopping is inaccurate—I brought the matter to RSN to address the reliability of specific sources, and to DRN to resolve content disputes that go beyond just reliability. These are distinct yet connected aspects of the same issue. | |||
:I hope we can focus on resolving the content dispute collaboratively rather than resorting to unproductive allegations. I look forward to hearing constructive feedback from DRN volunteers or other editors like @] and @], whom you’ve pinged. <span style="font-family:Georgia,serif; color:#FF4500; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold;">]</span> 05:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
=== Kamaria Ahir discussion === | |||
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*'''Volunteer Note''' - This appears to be an issue about the ]. Is this a question about the ]? If so, the proper forum is ], where the volunteers are more familiar with the source reliability guidelines than at ]. This case will be closed within 48 hours unless an issue is identified about article content that is not a source reliability question. ] (]) 04:18, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thank you for your note. I acknowledge that source reliability is a critical aspect of this dispute, and as you mentioned, I have already brought up this matter on the ] (RSN) ] to evaluate the specific sources in question. | |||
:However, this dispute at DRN extends beyond just the reliability of sources. It involves a broader disagreement over how content from historical sources should be incorporated into the article while balancing compliance with Misplaced Pages's policies like ], ], and ]. | |||
:Here at DRN, I am seeking resolution on whether the historical context provided by these sources can be retained while ensuring the article aligns with community standards. This involves determining whether to refine, supplement, or restructure the article, rather than removing entire sections or sources outright. | |||
:I appreciate your efforts and hope this clarifies why this discussion is taking place here in addition to RSN. If DRN volunteers feel this still doesn’t meet the scope of this forum, I’d appreciate guidance on next steps. <span style="font-family:Georgia,serif; color:#FF4500; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold;">]</span> 05:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Old Government House, Parramatta == | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} | |||
{{drn filing editor|Itchycoocoo|06:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|Closed for two reasons. First, the other editor hasn't replied. Second, it's unclear what the dispute even is; it appears to me that it is about large portion of the article being copied from a compatibly licensed source. As long as the appropriate attribution is given, it is legal. The guidelines that the filing editor has mentioned, which disallow copying large portions, are talking about copyrighted material where we don't have explicit permission to use them so we rely on ]. However, this isn't the case here, as the material is CC-BY licensed. I am not aware of any guideline that forbids articles from being primarily copied from a compatibly licensed source, instead, ] mentions: {{tqq|For sections or whole articles, add a section-wide or article-wide attribution template}}, so I believe there is no issue here. If there is any other issue, follow ]. Thanks. ] (]) 12:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
* {{pagelinks|Old Government House, Parramatta}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
* {{User|Itchycoocoo}} | |||
* {{User|The Drover's Wife}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article ] that extends to >90% of material from another website. | |||
For the past three years Cambalachero and I have clashed over certain aspects of Argentine history. The main issue right now is about ] who ruled Argentina from 1829 until 1852. I pointed out that he is regarded by historians a dictator and a ruthless one. Cambalachero, on the other hand, says that historians regard Rosas a democratically elected leader. | |||
This issue was discussed years ago in ] talk page and was recently discussed in Juan Manuel de Rosas own article. I requested a Third Opinion and ] volunteered to help. After a long debate he agreed with me that Rosas was a dictator, that historians generally agree that he was a dictator and that Cambalachero's view is ] and can not be taken as mainstream view regarding the matter. Nonetheless Cambalachero has refused to back down and that's why I came here. I need the help of other authors in dealing with this problem. | |||
The User who posted much of this material contends that "The material is CC-BY licensed, as stated in the edit summary and correctly attributed, which is, and has always been, usable on Misplaced Pages, and was added as part of a massive project by a number of Australian editors to import quality CC-BY content from a number of heritage sources." | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
*1) Long and futile discussion in ] talk page. | |||
*2) Long and futile discussion in ] talk page. | |||
*3) Requested third opinion from a neutral editor. | |||
I think that this material should be placed subject under WP:EL/ External Links, and follow the clearly defined rules of WP:COPYPASTE/ Copying text from other sources, WP:Plagiarism & WP:PARAPHRASE guidelines. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span> | |||
Cambalachero has argued that the article should say that Rosas was a dictator according to some historians but not to others. That Rosas killed thousands of innocent people according to some historians and none according to others. And so on and on. For obvious reasons, an article in Misplaced Pages can not be presented as two heads sharing a same body. As Noleander remarked: ""If the majority of mainstream, secondary sources hold a particular view, then that view can be stated in the encyclopedia's voice and need not be attributed. For example: evolution vs. creationism - those are two POVs, but the majority of scientists support evolution, therefore WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV does not apply and "evolution is true" can be (and is) stated in the encyclopedia's voice. WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV only applies when the sources are biased or the POV is held by sources that are in the minority" | |||
Ignoring the numerous uncivil issues appearing on the Talkpage, the view is using material like this is legalistically quite correct regarding use of non-copyright material, but in my opinion, it exceed any 'fair use' of material in which it is almost completely paraphrased and could even be considered as plagiarism. | |||
==== Opening comments by Cambalachero ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please limit to 2000 characters - longer statements may be deleted in their entirety or asked to be shortened. This is so a volunteer can review the dispute in a timely manner. Thanks.</div> | |||
First of all, Lecen misrepresents my words. I do not say that historians, as an unified body, say that Rosas was democratic. I pointed that there are many who said so, that the view of Rosas as a dictator is not universal, and that modern Argentine historians have already ended that dispute. Although the historians who did not condemn Rosas were known as "revisionists", the most respected Argentine historians and heads of academic institutions (all there in the talk) point that this "revisionism" has been incorporated into the standard academic knowledge of Argentina; thus, a ] took place and it is not revisonism anymore. Again, it is not me who says that, it is fully referenced (it may be long or boring to read, but the references are there). And respected tertiary sources pointing the current consensus over a topic are better than ]. As for English-speaking sources, John Lynch points himself that Rosas is completely forgotten in it, that nobody studies him; then discussing the current consensus among English-speaking sources is abstract and mostly pointless. To avoid ] we should consider the body of authors who ''do'' work heavily on this and related topics (Argentine Spanish-speaking historians). | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
In short: Lecen wants the article to say, in Misplaced Pages's voice, "Rosas was a dictator". I think instead that the article should point who considered Rosas a dictator, who did not, and which is the current state of the historiographical dispute (which is resolved). As it is done in the article ], the focus of a similar real-world controversy, and checked and edited by far more English-speaking editors: the word is present but always attributed, never in a "Cromwell was a dictator" way, even when we wouldn't lack sources to reference it. Besides, Misplaced Pages has a policy to ]. ] (]) 21:22, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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=== Juan Manuel de Rosas discussion === | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please do not use this for discussing the dispute prior to a volunteer opening the thread for comments - continue discussing the issues on the article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
'''Comment''' - Last week I tried to help resolve the dispute by offering a ] in ]. For that reason, I'll recuse myself from acting as a DRN volunteer here. FWIW, my opinion is that there are two schools of thought about Rosas: (1) That he was a dictator/tyrant; or (2) he was a nice guy, but was forced into his authoritarian role by circumstances. The article currently contains virtually no mention that many historians consider him a dictator, so some white-washing has been definitely been going on. At a minium, the article needs to state that "many historians consider him a dictator". The next issue is whether the article can state that "Rosas is a dictator" ''in the encyclopedia's voice''. User Lecen ] showing that mainstream historians ''do'' consider him a dictator, so using the encyclopedia's voice seems warranted. The other editors (MarshalN20 and Cambalachero) claim that the "he is not a dictator" viewpoint is equally well represented by historians (and thus that the encyclopedia's voice should not be used per ]) but when pressed for sources, they tend to obfuscate and stonewall (TLDR, etc). --] (]) 21:27, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Misplaced Pages pages? | |||
:You requested sources and they have been provided. If they are too long or boring for you to read them, step aside and let someone else do it, don't act as if they were not given. As for Lecen's "very strong" sources, check again: they are sources of ''other'' topics, making mere passing-by comments about Rosas. They do not adress the historiography aspect of Rosas, they don't have in-depth coverage, their content is trivial. Academics that talk about the historiography of Rosas should take priority over mere google searches for basic terms. ] (]) 21:53, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
::Sorry, but the sources you provided were inadequate, as explained in the Talk page discussion. Feel free to pick 3 or 4 of your best sources and re-quote them here in the DRN case. Be sure to clearly identify the historian & their credentials. --] (]) 22:02, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Noleander, you don't have to go very far. An entire chapter of Lyman L. Johnson's "Death, Dismemberment, And Memory: Body Politics In Latin America" is focused in Juan Manuel de Rosas' legacy in Argentina, from his downfall in 1852 until the present-day (). The author said: "If Juan Manuel de Rosas, Argentina's most '''brutal politician of the nineteenth century''', can be '''reinvented''' as a symbol of patriotic resistance to foreign oppression..." (page 13). The chapter reveals how Rosas was used by some politicians (mainly Juan Perón, who was also a dictator) as a tool for their own needs. Is every English speaking historian biased against Rosas? --] (]) 22:17, 7 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant. | |||
This claim about Perón has already been refuted at the talk page. I cited Fernando Devoto, titular teacher of theory and history of the historiography at the "Faculty of Philosophy and Words", and researcher at the Ravignani institute, author of the book "History of the Argentine historiography" (as you see, a much more specific book for the topic at hand). Perón did '''not''' promote revisionism in a political manner over the natural work of academic institutions. and you have scanned pages with all the details. As for the repatriation of Rosas’ body, Menem did not intend to start a "cult of Rosas", but rather make a symbolic end to the disputes that once divided the country. . Yes, it departs from the academic background (the fate of the body of a historical man is not part of his historiography), but it reconfirms that the dispute is over. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by The Drover's Wife ==== | |||
Horacio González, president of the ], had . He said about revisionism that "From being the second voice, never weak, of historical interpretations, it has become the first" (in other words, a paradigm shift). | |||
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Félix Luna was also a university teacher, Secretary of Culture of Buenos Aires, and received the Konex Award. In the book "With Rosas or against Rosas" he wrote "Now we begin to see Rosas as a regular character of our past: not as the unspeakable monster of Vicente Fidel Lopez, nor as the unique hero of the Irazusta, but as a ruler who lived hard times, bordered grave dangers with skill and imagination and left some positive things for the country, without prejudice to a black anecdotes also held in the balance." | |||
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=== Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House) === | |||
Luis Alberto Romero, leader historian of the CONICET, the University San Martín and the UBA, wrote . "Historical revisionism, a historiographical movement that defied that perspective, added original causes – a romantic idea of the people, a hostile perspective of Britain, reinvidicaton of Rosas and caudillos – but ultimately it was built over similar premises, and when it was traducted for the schools it was as a moderate and pacific version, complementary rather than alternative of the dominant one". In other words, revisionism has been incorporated into the standard view of history, and national education teachs that. | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read ] and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues. | |||
It is my understanding that {{u|The Drover's Wife}} wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask {{u|Itchycoocoo}} what changes do you want ] and why? ] (]) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
Isidoro Ruiz Moreno, director of the National Academy of History, wrote the book "Argentine Military campaigns". He pointed in the prologue that "It is not the task of the one who reconstructs them to defend or condemn them: just to point how did they acted in the events where they have been involved". | |||
:I don't really see what "dispute" exist here – this user hasn't even attempted to edit the article other than slapping a copyvio tag on it, and no one has tried to stop them from editing. I have even the user to ] and edit the article, which they haven't done. Itchycoocoo seems to believe the article is a copyright violation and/or plagiarism, despite three users (myself, The Drover's Wife, and Wizardman) explaining that ]. The editor is welcome to take their issue to a different noticeboard such as ] but they will get the same answer. Otherwise, again, they are free to make whatever edits they want to the article. <span style=white-space:nowrap;>] <span style="background-color:mistyrose;padding:2px 5px;border-radius:5px;font-family:Arial black">]</span></span> 02:36, 27 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
The quotes may be expanded if required, but I hope they are concise enough for the layman now. As you see they are not descriptions of Rosas ''himself'', so that we define ourselves how do historians see Rosas (a task borderline with original research), but descriptions of academics who have already done that job. I may also add that, more than a century after his death and with his political party extinct, Rosas appears ]. No despised dictator would have such honor, which is reserved for the most remarkable people of a country. He also has a ]. ] (]) 00:46, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:There are over a dozen sources ] which state plainly that "Rosas was a dictator" or something similar. To rebut that, I'd expect to see sources that say something like ''"Historians sometimes claim that Rosas was a dictator, but they are wrong because blah, blah ..".'' Let's look at your sources to see if they say that: | |||
::* Devoto - No. | |||
::* González - No. | |||
::* Luna - No. | |||
::* Romero - No. | |||
::* Moreno - No. | |||
:I asked you to provide your 3 or 4 best sources that asserted that Rosas was not a dictator, and you did not provide a single one. --] (]) 15:42, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
=== Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House) === | |||
'''Comment''' - As a Latin American historian, I completely agree with Cambalachero. As all history students should know, even those who have skimmed a history book every now and then, certain characters and events are highly controversial. Juan Manuel de Rosas is one of these characters, a person who during his lifetime was lauded by his supporters and despised by his opponents. This has translated into the historiographical study of the person, with academics taking opposing sides in the issue. I support the notion that the Misplaced Pages article should reflect the complexity of the issue without taking a specific side, the opposite of what is proposed by Lecen. | |||
*Note: What I also find strange is what exactly Lecen plans to do with having Rosas classified as a dictator? What does Lecen plan to do with what he considers the "minority view"? | |||
Lastly, I find Noleander's statement about me ("obfuscate and stonewall") quite insulting. Regards.--] | ] 04:17, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Once again, for the fifth time, I ask: Can you provide a few reliable sources that state something like: ''"Contrary to what some historians say, Rosas was not a dictator because blah blah .."?'' My "obfuscate and stonewall" comment is accurate, because the prior 4 times I've asked that same question, I've received lengthy replies that did not respond to the question. Most recently, immediately above in Cambalachero's reply (where he lists five sources that do not even mention the word "dictator"). --] (]) 15:42, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up. | |||
'''Compromise proposal''' (focusing only on the Rosas article for now) - What if we create a new section in the article that focuses on the dictator issue. We include the reliable sources that state he was or was not a dictator. For the short term, we attribute all the sources (that is, we do not use the encyclopedia's voice). Since this is not an article on historical revisionism, we avoid sources that are ''only'' discussing revisionism, and limit ourselves to sources that simply state whether or not Rosas was a dictator. --] (]) 15:49, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
I do accept '''Misplaced Pages DRN Rule B''', and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor. | |||
:We are running in circles here. According to ], tertiary sources (in this case, historians talking about the historians who talk about Rosas) are a better way to determine due weight and academic consensus than reading secondary sources (historians talking about Rosas) and trying to decide that ourselves. As for Lecen's list, I just made a review at the talk page, perhaps you'll see that the list is not so strong as it seemed on first sight. As for your proposal, there is already such a section in ], which is mentioned in the main article in summary style: "''There are divided opinions on the topic: Domingo Faustino Sarmiento compared Rosas with historical dictators, while José de San Martín considered that the situation in the country was so chaotic that a strong authority was needed to create order.'' Of course, it is limited to the controversy of the time being (anything else would easily go off-topic). The historiography of Rosas has a special section, once the proper biography is over. ] (]) 19:06, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
::No, we are not running in circles. (1) Despite being asked five times, you still have not provided ''any'' sources that rebut the numerous modern historians that claim Rosas was a dictator; (2) The sentence in the article you cite ''("There are divided opinions on the topic: Domingo Faustino Sarmiento ... while José de San Martín ... ")'' presents the opinions of two of Rosas contemporaries (politicians from the 19th century). The proposed compromise is suggesting adding material based on the analysis of modern, objective historians. --] (]) 19:33, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages. | |||
:::I agree that if a significant number of renowned historians state that Rosas was '''not''' a dictator, this information should be included in the article. Which are the sources that state this? A statement in WP must be sourced, so present those sources and if they are reliable then be done with the issue. Regards. ] (]) 20:41, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
I will be very happy to do such culling. | |||
::::The section "Criticism and historical perspective" is the place where any discussion on Rosas' government should and already takes place within the article. Based on this, Noleander's proposal does not make sense. | |||
::::I further disagree with Noleander's claim that no single source has been provided by Cambalachero. From my perspective, the following sources effectively support the position that the modern historiography aims to provide a balanced look of the individual: | |||
::::#'''Félix Luna''' (''With Rosas or against Rosas''): "Now we begin to see Rosas as a regular character of our past: '''not as the unspeakable monster of Vicente Fidel Lopez, nor as the unique hero of the Irazusta''', but as a ruler who lived hard times, bordered grave dangers with skill and imagination and left some positive things for the country, without prejudice to a black anecdotes also held in the balance." | |||
::::#'''Horacio González''': "He said about revisionism that 'From being the second voice, never weak, of historical interpretations, it has become the first'." (Quoting Cambalachero) | |||
::::#'''Luis Alberto Romero''': Revisionism (Rosas was not a dictator) is now complementary with the view that Rosas was a dictator (Paraphrasing the quote provided by Cambalachero). | |||
::::'''NOTE''': The term "revisionism" essentially means "Rosas was not a dictator" (for all those that don't get the point). Those who wrote in favor of Rosas, following his fall from power, were called "revisionists" and the title stuck with them even to this day. | |||
::::That none of these sources directly state "Rosas was not a dictator" does not mean that it is not what they mean. Anyone that does not know what "revisionism" means when it comes to Rosas is simply ignorant of the historiographical dispute. I think Cambalachero's mistake is to not have explained this to Noleander, but I hope my explanation clears things up. | |||
::::Regards.-- ] | ] 03:36, 9 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::::No, the Revisionism does '''not''' mean that "esssentially Rosas was not a dictator". You have clearly no knowledge of what is under discussion here. You are not helping at all. Not even Revisionists argue that Rosas was not a dictator. Noleander pretty much summarized quite well the problem: "there are two schools of thought about Rosas: (1) That he was a dictator/tyrant; or (2) he was a nice guy, but was forced into his authoritarian role by circumstances". A fine example can be found in a Revisionist work: "No hay duda de que puede reprochársele a Rosas su tendencia al autoritarismo. Nada justifica perseciones, degüelos o fusilamientos. Pero tienen razón sus defensores al argumentar que la historia oficial, se ha empeñado en cargar sobre sus espaldas toda la violencia de su época ... Según aquellos no se habría tratado de una tiranía sangrienta, sino de una autocracia paternalista... que las circunstancias nacionales e internacionales permitían." ('''English:''' There is no doubt that Rosas can be criticized for his tendency to authoritarianism. Nothing justifies persecutions, throat-cutting or execution by fire squad. But his supporters are correct when they argue that the official history is determined to place over his shoulders all the violence of his era ... According to them it was not a bloody tyranny, but a paternalistic autocracy ... which was what national and international circumstances allowed.) Source: page 20 of O'Donnell, Pacho. ''Juan Manuel de Rosas: El maldito de la historia oficial''. Buenos Aires: Grupo Editorial Norma, 2009. ISBN 978-987-545-555-9 Thus, MarshalN20, either you start reading a single book about Rosas or get out of here. --] (]) 11:58, 9 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Misplaced Pages pages. This is acknowledged. | |||
== Narcissism, Individualism == | |||
However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Misplaced Pages editors. e.g. According to ] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''" | |||
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{{drn filing editor|118.36.229.221|11:39, 8 January 2013 (UTC)}} | |||
I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article. | |||
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In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Misplaced Pages editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in ] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''" | |||
'''Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Misplaced Pages page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%?''' | |||
If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Misplaced Pages standards. However, looking at the other Misplaced Pages policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users. | |||
The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail. | |||
Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic. | |||
Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome. | |||
Thanks. | |||
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The content removed in this had been part of the article for over six years. It was initially removed by an editor citing ] and ]. Although I restored it, another editor subsequently removed it again. For context, ] is a former wife of the subject. After their marriage ended, she authored an autobiography titled ], published by ]. The author, the book, and the publisher are all notable, with HarperCollins being recognised as “one of the ‘Big Five’ English-language publishers,” as noted in its Misplaced Pages article. The removed content was also supported by five other secondary sources. Given the notability of the author, the book, and the publisher, as well as the reliable reporting, the content merits inclusion in the article. The removal occurred without consensus, despite the content being part of the article for years. The material only reported Reham Khan’s allegations, including claims that Imran Khan shared certain details with her. As Misplaced Pages editors, we are not arbiters of truth but rely on reliable sources. Additionally, ]. | |||
Link between ] and ] is in violation of ]. Attempt to remove the content has resulted in an ongoing edit war. Repeated requests have been made to discuss the content on the talk page, but other users have refused to engage me. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
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Repeatedly asked the other users to engage me on the talk page. Tried to seek advice at ]. Tried to tag the content instead of delete it, but Wiki-markup does not seem to allow tags on links. | |||
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Enforce ], and remove the content until sources are cited and a case has been made. | |||
I am seeking the restoration of the removed content, along with some expansion to include her allegations regarding Imran Khan’s drug use and same-sex tendencies, all of which are supported by her book and other secondary sources. | |||
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I'm hardly involved in this outside of concerns about edit warring. For context see ] and the previous ANI at . The only new comments were added within the last few hours, and the old discussion from December 29 was accompanied by the originator of this being blocked for edit warring. ] (]) 12:13, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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=== Narcissism, Individualism discussion === | |||
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== 2025 Bangladesh Premier League == | |||
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{{DRN archive top|Closed as not an issue for which DRN can be helpful. My advice is similar to that given by ] in declining your ] request. Third Opinion and DRN are both for good-faith disagreements between editors who discuss their disagreements. The problem here is an unregistered editor who reverts and does not discuss. My advice concerning unregistered editors (IP addresses) who do not discuss normally is to request ] at ], and this is such a case. After the article is semi-protected, you can make your edits, and the article will be read-only for the unregistered editor. This may be an unregistered mobile user who never uses talk pages because they don't know about talk pages and don't know that they have a talk page. This is a problem that we sometimes encounter with mobile users, both registered and unregistered. In any case, I suggest requesting ]. In your request, state that the IP editor reverts but does not discuss. ] (]) 04:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
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I’ve been trying to add factual, sourced information to the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League article, but my edits are being reverted without explanation by another editor who hasn’t engaged in discussion despite multiple attempts. I’d like neutral input to resolve whether this edit complies with Misplaced Pages’s policies. | |||
Dear Misplaced Pages-Editor, | |||
I’m trying to resolve an issue I’m having with the user Espiral in regards to the articles ] and ] (both related to the same point “etymology” of the given name Babak). Based on the work of the renowned Iranologist Richard Frye available on Encyclopædia Iranica, I’ve edited both articles adding the fact that the given name Babak is the modern Persian form of the name Pāpak (or Pābag), which derived from ]. The link to the article can be found here http://www.iranicaonline.org/articles/babak-3rd-cent-ruler | |||
I’ve therefore restructured the paragraph and removed the reference to “arabicised”. As per the Misplaced Pages article, ] refers to “a growing cultural influence on a non-Arab area that gradually changes into one that speaks Arabic and/or incorporates Arab culture and Arab identity.”, which doesn’t apply since Babak (in it’s current form) is a Persian given name only in use in Iran and Azerbaijan and isn’t in use in any Arab country. | |||
Since my changes keep being removed by the user Espiral, who doesn't accept the given sources and since we unfortunately couldn’t come to any agreement via my talk page ] I would highly appreciate your help to defuse the argument, in order to have objective content on both pages. Many thanks in advance. ] (]) 15:39, 8 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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I would appreciate input from neutral editors to determine whether my edit complies with Misplaced Pages's policies on verifiability, reliable sources, and relevance. A third-party perspective can help decide whether the reverted information should remain in the article or if adjustments are necessary to address any concerns. Additionally, guidance on how to handle the lack of engagement from the other editor would be helpful. | |||
With an unbiased approach on the matter and a detailed review of the given sources, I hope to clear the matter. | |||
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The editor 103.59.179.16 has reverted my edits to the article multiple times without providing an explanation for the reversions. Despite my attempts to engage in discussions on their user talk page and the article talk page, they have not responded. The disputed content includes factual information about the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League, which is supported by a reliable, verifiable source. The other editor has not presented any concerns regarding the reliability or relevance of the information, nor have they participated in the discussion to clarify their reasons for the reverts. | |||
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Dragon Age: The Veilguard
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Sariel Xilo on 20:06, 5 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- Sariel Xilo (talk · contribs)
- BMWF (talk · contribs)
- Wikibenboy94 (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
1) Disagreement on if WP:SYNTH is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows MOS:INTRO/Misplaced Pages:Summary style & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows WP:VG/REC advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included. 2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus. 3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
- Current discussion: Talk:Dragon Age: The Veilguard#Prose
- Previous discussion: Talk:Dragon Age: The Veilguard#Review bomb context
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a full lock until the dispute is resolved.
Summary of dispute by BMWF
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94
The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion:
1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to WP:SYNTH, and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did.
2. Including the Steam player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much Dragon Age: Veilguard has sold.
3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms".
4. The invoking of WP:SAID while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews".
5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). Wikibenboy94 (talk) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both @Wikibenboy94 and I agree that there are no WP:SYNTH issues in the topline summary sentences removed by @BMWF in this edit and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute.
In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: Veilguard was also subject to review bombing on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "woke". Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative, the user reviews of Veilguard on Steam, which requires users to play the game before leaving a review, have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove offensive reviews. Sariel Xilo (talk) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read DRN Rule A and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). Sariel Xilo (talk) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)
I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that User:Sariel Xilo is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of no harm, no foul applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)
I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined above, I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed in the lead in this edit & in the reception in this edit), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. Sariel Xilo (talk) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to DRN Rule A and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to DRN Rule A. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. Sariel Xilo (talk) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. Wikibenboy94 (talk) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
First statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about review bombing, so that we can read a description of the review bombing.
I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement.
I don't understand what the synthesis issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the synthesis issue is. So please state more specifically what the synthesis issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a synthesis issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it.
Please provide your rewritten sections.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
Second statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Proposed text:
- Lead
Dragon Age: The Veilguard released for PlayStation 5, Windows, and Xbox Series X/S on October 31, 2024. After release Dragon Age: The Veilguard topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record. The game received generally positive reviews from critics, who praised its cast, representation of sexual minority characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the Golden Joystick Awards and Innovation in Accessibility at The Game Awards.
- Reception
¶1 Dragon Age: The Veilguard received "generally favorable" reviews from critics for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions according to the review aggregator website Metacritic. OpenCritic determined that 68% of critics recommended the game. Veilguard was subject to review bombing on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "woke". Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative, the user reviews of Veilguard on Steam, which requires users to play the game before leaving a review, have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove offensive reviews.
Reception ¶2 is not under dispute but here for additional context if needed. |
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¶2 Hayes Madsen of Rolling Stone called Veilguard a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset". Leana Hafer for IGN similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character". Andy Bickerton of NPR viewed the game as a "well-executed action RPG". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of Veilguard's near-decade of troubled production". Lauren Morton of PC Gamer thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than RPG at moments". |
¶3 Critics were mixed on the game's story. Matt Purslow from IGN thought that Veilguard was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric. Malindy Hetfeld of The Guardian criticized the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in Veilguard, describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions". She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas. Hafer opined that Veilguard has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas. Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey. Ash Parrish of The Verge appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice". Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative, with some finding major decisions "few and far between".
The rest of the reception section for context on lead summary. While it uses similar summary style sentences as above (see bolded text), it is not under dispute. |
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¶4 Madsen praised Veilguard for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot". Todd Harper of Polygon emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways". Kazuma Hashimoto of Them commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions. Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character. Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in Veilguard, highlighting that unlike previous Dragon Age games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path. Conversely, Oliver Brandt of Sports Illustrated viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other Dragon Age games. Harvey Randall of PC Gamer highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity. Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations, noting that "good people don't make great characters". She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts. ¶5 Veilguard generally received praise for its inclusive character creator and representation of transgender and non-binary characters. Alyssa Mora of IGN emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless". Both Robin Bea of Inverse and Brandt commended Taash's story arc, with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", Vanguard "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary". Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in Veilguard in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a coming out narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character". Stacey Henley of TheGamer appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to Inquisition's Krem, though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking". Randall was more critical, noting how Veilguard "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context". They found the lack of a fictional etymology connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting". ¶6 Critics enjoyed Veilguard's graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat. Bickerton felt that Veilguard's strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish". He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players. Hetfeld viewed Veilguard's combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games. Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat. Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars". Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than Inquisition and the Mass Effect games. Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor", and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous". Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design". Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on Inquisition's "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points". Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of Veilguard. She found it was better off for removing Inquisition's "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings". References
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In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). Sariel Xilo (talk) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. Wikibenboy94 (talk) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Third statement by moderator (Dragon Age)
The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place.
Are there any questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 04:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? Sariel Xilo (talk) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Third statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Fourth statement by moderator (Dragon Age)
Yes. Make the agreed-on changes. If they are reverted, follow my instructions above. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:54, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Fourth statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Done per above instructions (see edit). Sariel Xilo (talk) 18:23, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Autism
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Oolong on 15:46, 20 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- Oolong (talk · contribs)
- Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk · contribs)
- Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talk · contribs)
- HarmonyA8 (talk · contribs)
- TempusTacet (talk · contribs)
- WhatamIdoing (talk · contribs)
- FactOrOpinion (talk · contribs)
- 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 (talk · contribs)
- GreenMeansGo (talk · contribs)
- Markworthen (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society.
On Misplaced Pages, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all.
Misplaced Pages has quite detailed guidelines for what to do within medicine, or outside of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about whether something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years.
This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways.
A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"?
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Autism Talk:Autism#Autism and disability Talk:Autism#Too little focus on anthropology and social dynamics; too intense focus on medical genetics. Talk:Autism#Extent of Scientific Consensus on Terminology & Reconciling Perspectives Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions] Related: Misplaced Pages:Dispute_resolution_noticeboard/Archive_228#Applied_behavior_analysis
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the route to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Misplaced Pages guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful.
Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity.
This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see list of quoted references.
Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted.
In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs.
While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations.
Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Yes, as User:Oolong says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here.
There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talk • contribs) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Misplaced Pages. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. 2A02:C7C:9B04:EA00:F104:371A:5F87:5238 (talk) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what.
- My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Misplaced Pages'). Oolong (talk) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by TempusTacet
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Oolong, let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the #First statements by editors (Autism) section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the Misplaced Pages:Edit requests process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use Template:Text diff if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph.
- (I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. FactOrOpinion (talk) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by Robert McClenon below, as well as DRN Rule A, and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the Zeroeth statements by editors section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section.
- Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. FactOrOpinion (talk) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0
(Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. 2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC)Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Comment in your own section. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it. |
Note: Editor is "done with the discussion" and will not be participating. --Oolong (talk) 09:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC) |
Autism discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)
I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on Autism and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include;
- Be civil. Civility is required everywhere in Misplaced Pages, and is essential to resolving content disputes.
- Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a wall of text is likely to ignore it.
- Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community.
- Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article.
- Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved.
In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form).
I don't yet know whether DRN is the right forum to resolve disputes about autism, but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)?
- I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you.
- Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied.
- I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is Autism and Scientism (published in the Middletown Centre for Autism Research Journal) and Autism, Misplaced Pages and Epistemic Injustice, posted here and published in Thinking Person's Guide to Autism. You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. Oolong (talk) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
First statement by possible moderator (Autism)
I asked for specific statements of how the lede section should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read Be Specific at DRN. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of reliability describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the lede section should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by reliable sources, and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by medically reliable sources. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the medically reliable standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary standard of reliable sourcing.
If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the lede section. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the lede section, and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised lede section. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues.
I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as First statements by editors (Autism), because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic talk page guidelines are met.
After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the lede section, I will know better whether DRN is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Robert McClenon! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years.
- @Димитрий Улянов Иванов has has said that he won't "have the time to consistently respond within 48 hours. Hopefully that is not a strict requirement" - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there?
- I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Misplaced Pages guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... Oolong (talk) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
- " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. "
- @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
- 2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
First statements by editors (Autism)
1. what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same
The overall framing of the lead is very much within the medical model of autism, taking for granted various things which are hotly contested in the wider world - particularly among autistic people, but also among researchers in this field.
Let's take the opening paragraph.
Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or simply autism, is a neurodevelopmental disorder characterized by repetitive, restricted, and inflexible patterns of behavior, interests, and activities; deficits in social communication and social interaction; and the presence of high or low sensory sensitivity. A formal diagnosis requires that symptoms cause significant impairment in multiple functional domains, in addition to being atypical or excessive for the person's age and sociocultural context.
I've highlighted the particularly contentious terms! Essentially, this paragraph takes the mainstream psychiatric perspective on all of these things for granted.
Here's one alternative version, which I contributed to in 2022, with instances of more neutral terms highlighted:
The autism spectrum, often referred to as just autism or in the context of a professional diagnosis autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or autism spectrum condition (ASC), is a neurodevelopmental condition (or conditions) characterized by difficulties in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication, and the presence of repetitive behavior and restricted interests. Other common signs include unusual responses to sensory stimuli.
Note that for the most part these terms convey the same information, without assuming a particular interpretation is the correct one. Condition is often thought to be a slightly less value-laden equivalent of disorder, although arguably the difference is marginal. The hypothesis that autistic people have inherent deficits in social communication and interaction has been disproven quite convincingly (see double empathy problem); the difficulties, however, certainly remain in many contexts, and are in practice all that diagnosticians can go by on this front. There are all sorts of issues with applying the term symptom to the ways that autism manifests, starting with the assumption that they're problems, as opposed to e.g. coping strategies or objectively neutral characteristics.
I recently edited the third paragraph simply to accurately reflect views associated with neurodiversity, correcting text based on blatant misunderstandings; variations on these edits have now been reverted at least four times, including after they have been restored by other editors. These reversions have not been accompanied by sensible edit summaries, instead claiming for example that they are ideologically motivated, and that my references (an academic textbook and a peer-reviewed paper researching community views) are somehow inadequate. I am aware that these reversions are starting to suggest that administrators' noticeboard for incidents may be a more appropriate venue for resolving these issues.
The final paragraph of the lead is dubious, and largely reads like an advertisement for applied behavior analysis
Above entered by Oolong
Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change.
Classification goes into enormous technical detail, and seems to overlap heavily with both diagnosis and signs and symptoms.
We need to cover common aspects of autistic experience somewhere (see Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions for some of these; there are many more) and it is not clear if they can fit in the above section, although they may be at least as important, just because they are not adequately covered by the current editions of diagnostic manuals.
Possible causes should obviously be no more than 2-3 paragraphs at most, in line with summary style. Likewise epidemiology.
Management is an awful framing; autism is a fundamental difference in a person, not an illness to be managed. I note that this heading is absent from the gender dysphoria entry. Perhaps it would be constructive to replace this section with something around access: access to healthcare, education, workplaces and so on.
Prognosis probably doesn't warrant a section at all: it's lifelong. If it's going to be there, it needs to be completely rewritten.
History and especially society and culture probably deserve to be significantly higher up in the article.
Above entered by Oolong
Re your third question, I provided various links in my original submission - are those specific enough?
Second statement by moderator (Autism)
My explanation about source reliability is my own interpretation, based on the principle to use common sense. Other editors may disagree, but it is the rule that will be in place while I am moderating this discussion.
The unregistered editor is strongly advised to register an account if they wish to take part in this mediation. Their IPv6 address has changed between the time that this discussion was created and the time of this post. It is both difficult to remember IPv6 addresses and difficult to communicate with shifting IPv6 (or IPv4) addresses.
The requested rewrite has no references. It also includes a statement of opinion that is not a summary of existing knowledge and is therefore not encyclopedic. On the other hand, the first sentence of the proposed rewrite is, in my opinion, a good starting point for a rewrite of the lede. The later sentences about differences between different autistic persons are, in my opinion, a good idea to be included somewhere in the article, but not necessarily in the lede paragraph.
In the above paragraph, I am taking a more active role in trying to lead this discussion than I usually take. If the participants agree with my taking an active role, I will write a new set of rules providing for a semi-active role by the moderator. If the participants would prefer that I be less active, I will step back somewhat, and will implement DRN Rule A.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:19, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- So I have issues with the proposed lede change, with interpreting the scientific consensus classification as a "medical model", among other issues. I'd like to clarify these per my involvement here, but I need time to formulate a reply. I saw an article stating that editors must reply within 48 hours but I cannot consistently do this with my time constraints. May I ask if this will be a significant issue and if it's a requirement can it not be so strict under the circumstances? Thanks. Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk) 16:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- The provision about responding within 48 hours is in DRN Rule A, which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- 72 hours should be fine in general. I plan to respond quicker than that if I can of course, my only concern is that I occasionally am not free to reply within 72 hours as sometimes I won't be able to until the weekend. Apologies if this is causing some issues. I'm much more free now with Christmas over so I think it'll mainly become an issue if our discussions extend much into January. Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk) 18:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- The provision about responding within 48 hours is in DRN Rule A, which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- "The requested rewrite ... includes a statement of opinion." - Which part is a statement of opinion? I am not disputing your assessment; rather, I want to make sure I understand your point correctly. Thanks! - Mark D Worthen PsyD (talk) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
Second statements by editors (Autism)
Sri Lankan Vellalar
– New discussion. Filed by Kautilyapundit on 05:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
Dispute overview
A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources.
Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts.
We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Sri_Lankan_Vellalar
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points.
Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy
First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed:
- Terminology differences
- The inclusion of the mythology section
Terminology Differences
The root of the terminology issue stems from my edit, where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were WP:FRINGE.
To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically:
- Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the Akananuru.
- Tamil: வெள்ளாளர், romanized: Veḷḷāḷar represents the caste name in contemporary usage. This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste Vellalar often uses this term Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms.
Inclusion of the Mythology Section
The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well.
The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste.
Third-Party Opinion
Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed WP:FRINGE or not WP:RS, the concerned user should raise the issue on WP:RSN. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated.
I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article.
Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Sri Lankan Vellalar)
I am ready to act as the moderator if the participants want moderated discussion and if this does not involve a question about the reliability of sources. Please read DRN Rule D and the general sanctions concerning South Asian social groups. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state, first, whether they agree to DRN Rule D and that discussions of South Asian social groupings are subject to special rules. Each editor is then asked, second, what changes they want to make to the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Each editor is asked, third, whether there are issues about the reliability of sources. If I determine that there are issues about the reliability of sources, or if an editor states that there are such issues, I will close this discussion until that question is resolved at the Reliable Source Noticeboard.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Sri Lankan Vellalar)
Kamaria Ahir
– General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by Nlkyair012 on 20:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC).Closed as also pending in another forum, the Reliable Source Noticeboard. DRN does not accept a dispute that is also pending in another content or conduct forum, and RSN is a content forum. When there are two types of issues about one article, it is not practical to try to resolve them in two forums at the same time, because often issues overlap, and because the resolution in one forum might change what is being discussed in the other forum. Finish the discussion at RSN and decide whether there are any remaining content issues that are consistent with what has been decided about reliability of sources. If there are any remaining content issues, resume discussion on the article talk page. If the subsequent discussion on the article talk page is lengthy and inconclusive, a new case request can be filed here. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:10, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Have you discussed this on a talk page? Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved
Dispute overview The dispute revolves around the use of Raj-era sources, specifically K.S. Singh’s "Anthropological Survey of India," in the article on "Kamaria Ahir." One editor, Nlkyair012, is advocating for the removal of these sources, arguing that they are outdated and unreliable. However, these historical sources, particularly those from the British Raj, are still cited in reputable modern academic works as valuable historical references for caste dynamics and structures. The issue also includes the inclusion of living people's names without proper self-identification, which violates Misplaced Pages's Biographies of Living Persons policy (BLP). The goal of this dispute resolution is to determine whether the Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh’s work should be retained or replaced, and to ensure that the article adheres to Misplaced Pages's guidelines on neutrality and verifiability. How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here? ] ]
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute? The dispute can be resolved by carefully reviewing the reliability of Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh's work, considering modern academic citations that rely on these sources, and determining whether they meet Misplaced Pages's standards of verifiability. Additionally, we can remove any names of living people to comply with the BLP policy while maintaining the historical and sociological content that is well-sourced. Collaboration on improving the article is key, and I suggest that experts in anthropology or caste studies provide input on the appropriateness of these sources for this article. The current dispute is about the inclusion of Raj-era sources, particularly from the British colonial period, in the article "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Kamaria_Ahir)." I believe these sources are valuable for understanding the historical context of caste structures in India, despite their age. While I acknowledge that (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Age_matters) advises caution with older sources, it does not outright prohibit their use, especially when they provide unique historical insights that modern works may lack. Raj-era ethnographic works were written by government officials and are often cited in contemporary research for their firsthand observations, making them relevant in understanding caste dynamics. A central issue in this dispute is the use of K.S. Singh’s "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Anthropological_Survey_of_India)" (ASI), which I have cited in the article. The ASI, although created under government supervision, is a significant academic resource that continues to be referenced in Indian academia. While some may question its modern reliability, it remains an authoritative source, and dismissing it entirely without further scrutiny undermines its contribution to the topic. As per (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Scholarship), high-quality academic sources are essential, but older sources like K.S. Singh’s are still valid when used in conjunction with modern studies to provide a complete view of the topic. I also understand concerns related to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons), particularly regarding the inclusion of living people's names in caste articles. If specific names are a violation of (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BLP_categories), I agree they should be removed. However, this does not justify removing the entire article or historical context that is verifiable and supported by well-established sources. The article provides valuable historical and sociological context that should not be discarded simply due to concerns over individual names. The sources I have used are critical to the article’s depth and accuracy. While there are concerns over the accessibility and page numbers of some sources, I am willing to work to improve verifiability, such as by adding missing page numbers or citing additional resources. According to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Verifiability) and (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources), I aim to improve the article's citation standards, but my main goal is to maintain the article’s historical integrity while complying with Misplaced Pages’s standards for verifiability, neutrality, and reliability. (https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Ratnahastin) has raised concerns about the reliability and relevance of these sources, particularly due to their age. However, rather than removing content entirely, I propose that we retain these sources while improving the article’s clarity and citation standards. The article can be collaboratively improved to ensure it meets Misplaced Pages's guidelines while preserving the depth of the subject matter. Summary of dispute by RatnahastinThe OP does not really understand the purpose of WP:DR. The proper venue for this dispute was WP:RSN. - Ratnahastin (talk) 02:06, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Kamaria Ahir discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
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Old Government House, Parramatta
– General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by Itchycoocoo on 06:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC).Closed for two reasons. First, the other editor hasn't replied. Second, it's unclear what the dispute even is; it appears to me that it is about large portion of the article being copied from a compatibly licensed source. As long as the appropriate attribution is given, it is legal. The guidelines that the filing editor has mentioned, which disallow copying large portions, are talking about copyrighted material where we don't have explicit permission to use them so we rely on fair use. However, this isn't the case here, as the material is CC-BY licensed. I am not aware of any guideline that forbids articles from being primarily copied from a compatibly licensed source, instead, Misplaced Pages:Plagiarism#Where_to_place_attribution mentions: For sections or whole articles, add a section-wide or article-wide attribution template, so I believe there is no issue here. If there is any other issue, follow WP:BRD. Thanks. Kovcszaln6 (talk) 12:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved
Dispute overview Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article Old Government House, Parramatta that extends to >90% of material from another website.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here? Talk:Old Government House, Parramatta#This is a mess How do you think we can help resolve the dispute? Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Misplaced Pages pages? Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant. Summary of dispute by The Drover's WifePlease keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Old Government House, Parramatta discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House)I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read Misplaced Pages:DRN Rule B and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues. It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask Itchycoocoo what changes do you want exactly and why? Kovcszaln6 (talk) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House)Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up. I do accept Misplaced Pages DRN Rule B, and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor. You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages. I will be very happy to do such culling. But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Misplaced Pages pages. This is acknowledged. However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Misplaced Pages editors. e.g. According to WP:Copypaste "With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism." I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article. In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Misplaced Pages editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in Close paraphrasing "With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism." Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Misplaced Pages page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%? If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Misplaced Pages standards. However, looking at the other Misplaced Pages policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users. The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail. Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic. Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome. Thanks. Itchycoocoo (talk) 06:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
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Imran Khan
– New discussion. Filed by SheriffIsInTown on 15:56, 26 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- SheriffIsInTown (talk · contribs)
- WikiEnthusiast1001 (talk · contribs)
- Veldsenk (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
The content removed in this diff had been part of the article for over six years. It was initially removed by an editor citing WP:BLPGOSSIP and WP:GRAPEVINE. Although I restored it, another editor subsequently removed it again. For context, Reham Khan is a former wife of the subject. After their marriage ended, she authored an autobiography titled Reham Khan (memoir), published by HarperCollins. The author, the book, and the publisher are all notable, with HarperCollins being recognised as “one of the ‘Big Five’ English-language publishers,” as noted in its Misplaced Pages article. The removed content was also supported by five other secondary sources. Given the notability of the author, the book, and the publisher, as well as the reliable reporting, the content merits inclusion in the article. The removal occurred without consensus, despite the content being part of the article for years. The material only reported Reham Khan’s allegations, including claims that Imran Khan shared certain details with her. As Misplaced Pages editors, we are not arbiters of truth but rely on reliable sources. Additionally, Misplaced Pages is not censored.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
I am seeking the restoration of the removed content, along with some expansion to include her allegations regarding Imran Khan’s drug use and same-sex tendencies, all of which are supported by her book and other secondary sources.
Summary of dispute by WikiEnthusiast1001
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by Veldsenk
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Imran Khan discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.2025 Bangladesh Premier League
– General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by UwU.Raihanur on 02:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC).Closed as not an issue for which DRN can be helpful. My advice is similar to that given by User:Doniago in declining your Third Opinion request. Third Opinion and DRN are both for good-faith disagreements between editors who discuss their disagreements. The problem here is an unregistered editor who reverts and does not discuss. My advice concerning unregistered editors (IP addresses) who do not discuss normally is to request semi-protection at Requests for Page Protection, and this is such a case. After the article is semi-protected, you can make your edits, and the article will be read-only for the unregistered editor. This may be an unregistered mobile user who never uses talk pages because they don't know about talk pages and don't know that they have a talk page. This is a problem that we sometimes encounter with mobile users, both registered and unregistered. In any case, I suggest requesting semi-protection. In your request, state that the IP editor reverts but does not discuss. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Have you discussed this on a talk page? Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved
Dispute overview I’ve been trying to add factual, sourced information to the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League article, but my edits are being reverted without explanation by another editor who hasn’t engaged in discussion despite multiple attempts. I’d like neutral input to resolve whether this edit complies with Misplaced Pages’s policies. How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here? I have tried to resolve the dispute by initiating discussions at the following locations: Talk:2025 Bangladesh Premier League User talk:103.59.179.16 Despite these efforts, the other editor has not engaged in meaningful dialogue. How do you think we can help resolve the dispute? I would appreciate input from neutral editors to determine whether my edit complies with Misplaced Pages's policies on verifiability, reliable sources, and relevance. A third-party perspective can help decide whether the reverted information should remain in the article or if adjustments are necessary to address any concerns. Additionally, guidance on how to handle the lack of engagement from the other editor would be helpful. Summary of dispute by 103.59.179.16Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.The editor 103.59.179.16 has reverted my edits to the article multiple times without providing an explanation for the reversions. Despite my attempts to engage in discussions on their user talk page and the article talk page, they have not responded. The disputed content includes factual information about the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League, which is supported by a reliable, verifiable source. The other editor has not presented any concerns regarding the reliability or relevance of the information, nor have they participated in the discussion to clarify their reasons for the reverts. 2025 Bangladesh Premier League discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
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