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== Sri Lankan elephant ==


*From ]: ''Only 7% of males bear tusks.(ref= Jayewardene, J. (1994) ''The elephant in Sri Lanka''. Wildlife Heritage Trust of Sri Lanka, Colombo) However, according to the elephant census conducted in 2011 by the Wildlife Conservation Department of Sri Lanka, only 2% of the total population are tuskers.''
== Image of elephant dung ==
*From ] ''Some males may also lack tusks... and are especially common among the Sri Lankan elephant population... (ref= Clutton-Brock, J. (1987). A Natural History of Domesticated Mammals. London: British Museum (Natural History). p. 208. {{ISBN|0-521-34697-5}}.)''
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How about this image for a use in the article? --] (]) 22:04, 6 November 2012 (UTC)
:Where? ] <span style="color: #999;">// ] // ] //</span> 19:33, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
::"Ecology and activities" ... :-) --] (]) 21:08, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
:::Call me old fashioned, but I think pictures of elephants are better for the article than pictures of their crap. ;) <small>(but seriously, that section already has two images, as does the section below it; adding a fifth image right there would do nothing but clutter the text)</small> ] <span style="color: #999;">// ] // ] //</span> 22:53, 14 November 2012 (UTC)


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*Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20110921045800/http://www.harpweek.com/09Cartoon/BrowseByDateCartoon.asp?Year=2003&Month=November&Date=7 to http://www.harpweek.com/09Cartoon/BrowseByDateCartoon.asp?Year=2003&Month=November&Date=7
*Why are the references listed under 'Notes' and not 'References'
*There are many Soshani references with no date e.g. Shoshani, pp. 152–54. How is the reader to know which of the Soshani publications to refer to?
*There are several references to Sukumar, e.g 118.^ Sukumar, pp. 59–64, but there is no complete reference for a Sukamar publication listed under 'Notes'.
*Several of the references list authors as 'et al.'. It is more ususal to name every author in the full reference.
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:You are confused, cites like Sukumar, p. 118 and Shoshani, pp. 152–54 are referring to the books listed under "General" subsection. In addition et al. is used alot, especailly is there are tons of authors. ] (]) 22:29, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
::You are correct - I am confused. That is because the article is confusing. The full book references should be in the same section as the other references. Furthermore, I agree 'et al.' is often used in the text but rarely in the reference list, otherwise, all the authors do not get the recognition they deserve. These references need changing. __] (]) 18:45, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
''You are correct - I am confused. That is because the article is confusing. The full book references should be in the same section as the other references.'' My method of citing these sources is quite common in other wiki articles. See ], ], ], ect. I meant that et al is used commonly for citations, not just here. ] (]) 22:20, 15 November 2012 (UTC)


== Should recognized "Tuskers" be included? ==
: This style of referencing is widely used in Misplaced Pages. LittleJerry has listed a few articles that use this format. (My personal preference is to have the main inline citations in a "References" section, with a "Bibliography" subsection for the main texts.) See ]. ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 23:53, 15 November 2012 (UTC)
Around the world there are a couple of individual elephants known (and respected) for the exceptional size of the tusks. In nature reserves specifically these individuals are extremely popular, and actively sought out for photographs.
Could/should these be listed in a new section? ] (]) 10:53, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
: '''Oppose'''. This page is not + should not become a guide for tusker 'hunters', be it tourists or photographers. – ] (]) 11:18, 3 January 2023 (UTC)


== Issues with "Evolution and extinct relatives" section ==
:::I asked for advice at ] on the matter of citing only the editor in multi-author books. There seems to be agreement that the original author of the chapter should be cited, not only the editor. This seems only fair - if you wrote a chapter for a book you would expect acknowledgement of your efforts and expertise, rather than this being attributed to the editor. The ] will help clarify the citations.__] (]) 19:37, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
::::<s>Okay, I'll fix it. ] (]) 22:17, 18 November 2012 (UTC)<s>
::::Fixed. The citation style is simliar to that done in ]. ] (]) 00:42, 19 November 2012 (UTC)
:::::I also got rid of the et als. I hope all the problems have been solved. ] (]) 01:50, 19 November 2012 (UTC)
martha!!!! <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 17:53, 22 November 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


I have some issues with this section:
== Merge ] into this ==
*'']'' and other members of the family ] are now generally not considered "gomphotheres" (as messy as that term is taxonomically).
*The estimate placing '']'' as the largest amimal of all time, it to put lightly, extremely speculative. As the paper itself notes, it's based on a single unlocated partial femur mentioned in an early 19th century publication as 20% larger than a measured femur. The paper itself notes that the estimate should be taken with a {{tq|grain of salt}}.
*Continues to refer to '']'' as ''Elephas recki'', which is inconsistent with the Misplaced Pages article on the animal, as well as recent scientific literaure on ''Palaeoloxodon''


Overall, the section seems somewhat poorly organised for a featured article (though I appreciate it's not the main focus by any means). I'll probably get around to improving it in the coming days. ] (]) 03:01, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
The terms are basically synonyms, and the articles cover the exact same ground. ] (]) 14:09, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
:'''Oppose''': This article is about the living species called elephants not every member of elephantidae which includes mammoths and ''Stegolophodon''. ] (]) 16:29, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
::I've removed the tag for now, since it isn't urgent, but elephant is usually used as a term for even the extinct species, so I disagree. We don't have separate articles for living ] and ] either, for example. But a merge can wait, no worries. ] (]) 16:56, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
:::Occisonally it is but only the mammoths. The majority of the time it refers to the living species. ] (]) 17:08, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
::::It seems that the elephantidae article is too inclusive, as it lists many genera outside it for some reason. So it may seem harder to integrate here than it is. A book about mammoths written by Adrian Lister specifically mentions "true elephants" (i.e. elephantidae) as referring to living elephants and mammoths collectively. I think it would be easy to absorb the little material there is in that article. ] (]) 17:17, 17 November 2012 (UTC)


:I missed this. {{u|Hemiauchenia}}, do you still plan on working on this? ] (]) 15:43, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
* '''Oppose'''. FunkMonk has a good argument but I am concerned that the "Elephant" article is already rather long, and "Elephantidae" is certainly not a stub. There is enough text in "Elephantidae" to justify its position as a stand-alone article, and it has the potential for further expansion. ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 10:12, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
:: I think I'm mostly finished with this section. Sorry for stepping on your toes a bit while reworking the section. ] (]) 22:49, 21 May 2023 (UTC)
::The other article is only long (or rather, has a long list) because it includes taxa that are not widely regarded to be part of elephantidae. Cut these out, and it's only a few. ] also terms elephantidae "elephants and mammoths". It would take about five minutes to redirect that article here, and add a couple of lines about the extinct species, if that hasn't been done already ] (]) 11:43, 3 December 2012 (UTC)
:::Good job! ] (]) 23:10, 21 May 2023 (UTC)
:::{{u|Hemiauchenia}}, does the 2021 article have a cladogram? ] (]) 00:20, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
:::: No, but there's a half-decent cladogram in , but it has a number of problems, most notably that ''Stegodon'' is recovered within modern elephants, which is not found in basically any other phylogenetic analysis and I think is likely to be erroneous, so I'm not sure it would be usable. ] (]) 00:26, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
::::: It might be okay if ] is collapsed to a single node. ] (]) 00:29, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
:::::: Actually, having thought about it more, I think the cladogram in figure 5 from is probably better. ] (]) 00:50, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
:::::::Doesn't the other paper broadly support this cladogram? ] (]) 01:05, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
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== Editing politeness ==
: Yeah, that cladogram looks good to me. ] (]) 01:08, 22 May 2023 (UTC)


::Do you think we should add a few more clades like Amebelodontidae? ] (]) 01:32, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
LittleJerry, you recently made multiple changes to the section on seismic communication in this article. Your revised version deleted relevant information and contained inaccuracies and typos. You left no edit summary so there was no indication of your motivation behind these changes, therefore I manually reverted to the previous version. Your subsequent immediate revert indicated the motivation was "(your verison contains close paraphasing and direct copying of the sources.)" Yes, I may have closely paraphrased, but this is permissible according to Wikepedia:Close paraphrasing if suitable in-line attrubition is given. I have done this. Similarly, with direct copying, this is attributed to the author from where I have taken the information although I felt it did not require quotes. I use the highest quality material when researching my edits and sometimes this means the statements of authors simply can not be improved upon. Please revert your changes and please use the Edit summary for each of your changes. __] (]) 18:09, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
::: Sure, I think adding Amebelodontidae would be a good idea. One current issue with the cladogram is is that "Gomphotheriidae" is widely agreed to be paraphyletic, so it might be worth representing them with two nodes (one closer to elephantids and stegodontids than the other node) with a combined label, as is done for example for the label of Maxiliopoda in the phylogeny section of the ] article. ] (]) 01:39, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
:Direct copying without qoutes still violates copyright. Your wording is not an example of "suitable in-line attrubition" because it is not being attrubited to a person (e. g. John Rawls says that, to reach fair decisions, parties must consider matters as if behind a veil of ignorance). In addition, your wording is way to technical and needs to be put in laymen's terms. Wording like "Elephants may also use seismic communication from signals generated through percussion on the substrate or acoustical waves that couple with the substrate" is not appropriate for an encyclopedia that's meant to be accessable to the general public. ] (]) 18:38, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
::::Okay well, I'm not good at making or changing cladograms. Maybe {{u|Chiswick Chap}} can help? ] (]) 01:45, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
::If you had these concerns you should have raised them with me on the Talk page rather than reckless editing in an almost complete absence of giving edit summaries (something you have been warned about several times on your User Talk page). It is your own single opinion what material is accessable to the general public - making a unilateral series of heavy editing without discussion indicates you may be in violation of thinking you own this article__] (]) 19:10, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
::::: I've managed to find another half-decent cladogram , doesn't include the amebelodontids unfortunately, but does include most of the other taxa, and avoids ] problems. ] (]) 01:59, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
:::I did, and I'm not the only one who feels that way. Axl pointed that out in the PR. ] (]) 19:28, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
::::::{{u|Hemiauchenia}}, do you think the evolution section could be trimmed some and have more details at the Proboscidea? Perhaps the first paragraph could give an overview of Proboscidea pre-Elephantimorph. The second paragraph could start with Elephantimorphs and lead into Elephantidae and then talk about extinction. ] (]) 23:14, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
:::: Guys, we are all trying to improve the article. I am sure that we can collaborate and do so. The references for the "Communication" subsection are of good quality, and we can use them to support statements in the article. Let's avoid accusations of ownership. Collaborative editing is one of Misplaced Pages's principles; we can all expect have our work edited by others. Thanks. ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 23:33, 28 November 2012 (UTC)
:::::::I think that the broad evolutionary history narrative in the first few paragraphs is as concise as it can reasonably be without losing coherence. I think the morphological evolution and dwarf elephant sections could be cut down though. ] (]) 03:46, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
:::::I'm sorry but this has not been a collaborative effort. It has been editors other than LittleJerry making good faith changes only to have these pounced upon and deleted or changed with no discussion and no edit summaries. This leads to much work for other editors to follow which edits LittleJerry has been making. I will be making no further contributions to this article until it is submitted for Featured Article status.__] (]) 16:06, 29 November 2012 (UTC)
::::::::I removed those. ] (]) 10:38, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
::::::::: No issue with those removals, I think they are much better placed in Proboscidea. ] (]) 20:22, 24 May 2023 (UTC)


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== Ongoing review ==


== Elephants vs Elephantidae ==
The peer review has now closed. However I still have comments to make. ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 12:15, 8 December 2012 (UTC)


I don’t understand why this article excludes extinct elephantids.
* <s>In "Elephants and humans", subsection "Attacks", several incidents are listed that all seem to have the same pattern: elephants go on a rampage, locals claim drunkenness, officials deny drunkenness. Perhaps these incidents could be combined into a single sentence that summarizes them? I don't think that it is helpful to list them individually. ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 12:15, 8 December 2012 (UTC)</s>
::Done. ] (]) 14:03, 8 December 2012 (UTC)


Pretty much every other article for a group of animals goes over some of its extinct and prehistoric members. I understand wanting to prioritize extant animals but you can do that without completely ignoring the taxon they belong to. ] (]) 18:54, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
* <s>From "Elephants and humans", subsection "Cultural depictions", paragraph 2: "''Similar beliefs existed among certain other African tribes, who believed that their chiefs would be reincarnated as elephants.''" Are these "other African tribes" named? ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 11:57, 12 December 2012 (UTC)</s>
::Nope, just the Igbo-Ukwu. ] (]) 16:45, 12 December 2012 (UTC)
::: Okay. ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 13:03, 16 December 2012 (UTC)


:It is handled at the family (]) and superfamily level (]) because in this case, that works out better. The family includes such species as the mammoths, which are not called elephants. - ] ] 00:32, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
* <s>From "Elephants and humans", subsection "Cultural depictions", paragraph 3: "''Elephants in fiction are typically surrogates for humans and their concern for the community and each other is depicted as something to which to aspire.''" Can you simplify this sentence please? Perhaps split it? ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 12:45, 14 December 2012 (UTC)</s>
::Better? ] (]) 14:44, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
::: Thanks. ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 13:03, 16 December 2012 (UTC)


== Semi-protected edit request on 31 May 2023 ==
Okay, I have finished reviewing the text. I have not checked the references. ] <font color="#3CB371">¤</font> <small></font>]]</small> 13:11, 16 December 2012 (UTC)


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::Thanks again. ] (]) 13:13, 16 December 2012 (UTC)
In the Internal systems section, change "It's apex has two pointed ends," to "Its apex has two pointed ends," ] (]) 13:18, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
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== Some inline citations are still incomplete ==
== Sri Lankan elephant ==
This article cites multiple works by J. Shoshani, but it still includes many inline citations that include ], without the title of the work that was cited. Should these citations include the titles in addition to the author's name? ] (]) 16:13, 12 August 2023 (UTC)


:No. The work is still clearly identifiable, though I would strongly prefer it include a year (this would prevent potential confusion with Shoshani 1998 and Shoshani 2005, even if they are cited using a different format). <nowiki>:</nowiki>3 ] (]]) 17:30, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
*From ]: ''Only 7% of males bear tusks.(ref= Jayewardene, J. (1994) ''The elephant in Sri Lanka''. Wildlife Heritage Trust of Sri Lanka, Colombo) However, according to the elephant census conducted in 2011 by the Wildlife Conservation Department of Sri Lanka, only 2% of the total population are tuskers.''

*From ] ''Some males may also lack tusks... and are especially common among the Sri Lankan elephant population... (ref= Clutton-Brock, J. (1987). A Natural History of Domesticated Mammals. London: British Museum (Natural History). p. 208. ISBN 0-521-34697-5.)''
== Semi-protected edit requestyes on 15 August 2023 ==
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== Use of ] violates GNU FDL license ==

The license to the original image is very restrictive. Currently, the article does not credit the author, which is required:
Attribution of this image to the author (Muhammad Mahdi Karim) is required in a prominent location near to the image.
This even led to a question being asked on about this issue.

I will be replacing the main image with ], which is CC-BY-SA-2.0. -- ] (]) 19:54, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

:{{u|Muhammad Mahdi Karim}}? ] (]) 00:40, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
::We certainly can '''ask''' if the author would multi-license their work.... — ] <sup>]</sup> 01:26, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
:::FAL added as well. Thanks for asking :-) --]] 10:33, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
:@] FYI, this image now has additional licensing, ]. — ] <sup>]</sup> 10:43, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
::::Thanks. Feel free to revert it if you prefer the original image. Either one is fine with me. -- ] (]) 13:35, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

== Temporal glands and mammary glands are not sex organs ==
Why are the temporal and mammary glands described in ] about sex organs? ] (]) 21:53, 11 January 2024 (UTC)

:They are related to sexual behavior. ] (]) 22:19, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
::But they are ]s, not ]s. 17:45, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
:::Changed title. ] (]) 15:31, 4 March 2024 (UTC)

== Semi-protected edit request on 6 May 2024 ==

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elephants come from africa and they have very specific lifestyles compared to other animals and wildlife ] (]) 21:01, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
elephants are a protected species and are from africa, they have a very specific life style compared to other animals and wildlife
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==My edits==
My edits ()
were reverted wholesale as unhelpful, unsourced and with barereflinks, which I don't believe is accurate.

I did remove this portion -- ''"This is due to them being largely immune to predators, which would otherwise kill off many of the individuals with significant parasite loads"'' as it makes no sense and should be reviewed and reworded, in my opinion. Yours. Thanks. ] (]) 04:52, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

:You have added unsourced content, and many of us regularly remove newly added unsourced content. The content you removed does make sense to me, and had a citation. If you think that the cited source does not support that statement, explain that here. You deleted that content and it has been restored, so the next step is to discuss on this talk page why you think that content does not belong in the article. ] 13:05, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

::: With all due respect, the diff I provided () re my two edits does not show any unsourced additions, IMO. Several new reflinks from reliable sources were added. I did some rewording for clarity, yes. And, ''"This is due to them being largely immune to predators, which would otherwise kill off many of the individuals with significant parasite loads"'' is quite confusing, regardless of citation. I respectfully submit that less arcane wording would make this portion more comprehensible to the majority of readers. Also, the plural ("rhinoceroses") of rhinoceros should be used. Yours, ] (]) 14:38, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
::::My apologies, I thought I saw unsourced content added, but I was wrong. I do have trouble following the changes you have made in some places, where I think it looks like you have moved content from in front of one citation to in front of another citation. I still think is best to discuss the changes you want to make on this talk page. ] 14:42, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

::: * ''"This is due to them being largely immune to predators, which would otherwise kill off many of the individuals with significant parasite loads"'' -- should be reworded -- difficult to understand for us non-zoologists as written
::: * "rhinoceroses" (plural) not "rhinoceros"
::: * ''"They appear to have self-awareness, and possibly show concern for dying and dead individuals of their kind"'' -- remove "possibly". They are very aware of death and usually show concern for fellow pachyderms: mothers carry dead calfs, "bury" dead mates with sticks, herds sometimes seek vengeance, attracted to bones of their own kind, etc (see ).
::: * ''"Gestation in elephants typically lasts between one and a half and two years"'' -- should be ''"African elephants have the longest gestation period in the animal kingdom, at 22 months. Asian female elephants carry pregnancy between 18 and 22 months"'' (see )

::::No. CNN and BBC are not reliable sources for facts like those mentioned above, especially in an ]. Pinging {{u|LittleJerry}} to deal with this. ] <sup>(])</sup> 18:20, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
<s>:::::CNN, BBC not reliable sources? ] (]) 19:38, 17 May 2024 (UTC)</s>

::::Fully agree : this page has been subject to a lengthy peer-review process + does certainly not need newspaper articles as references. – ] (]) 18:27, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

:: '''OK''': How about these sources (, ) for this change:
:::: * ''"They appear to have self-awareness, and possibly show concern for dying and dead individuals of their kind"'' -- '''''remove "possibly"'''''. (They are very aware of death and usually show concern for fellow pachyderms: mothers carry dead calfs, "bury" dead mates with sticks, herds sometimes seek vengeance, attracted to bones of their own kind, etc.) ] (]) 20:24, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
:::As the hidden message states "Please do not add any more examples to this section. This subject already has its own article". We have the ] article. You can add more to there. ] (]) 21:38, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
:::: '''NOT ADDING ANYTHING''' -- I only proposed (twice) removing the clearly incorrect adverb "possibly". ] (]) 00:12, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
:::::No need to get aggressive. It would be best to move on to less high-quality articles. ] <sup>(])</sup> 06:18, 18 May 2024 (UTC)


::::Also, you should be citing the original scientific articles instead of the press articles talking about them. The article is . ] (]) 21:50, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
== Edit request on 28 December 2012 ==
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== What kind ==
"Female same-sex behaviours have been documented only in captivity where they are known to mastrubate one other with their trunks."


What kind of elephant did Hanibal use when he was on his way to Rome? ] ] 20:26, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
Perhaps "masturbate" is more appropriate?


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  • From Sri Lankan elephant: Only 7% of males bear tusks.(ref= Jayewardene, J. (1994) The elephant in Sri Lanka. Wildlife Heritage Trust of Sri Lanka, Colombo) However, according to the elephant census conducted in 2011 by the Wildlife Conservation Department of Sri Lanka, only 2% of the total population are tuskers.
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Should recognized "Tuskers" be included?

Around the world there are a couple of individual elephants known (and respected) for the exceptional size of the tusks. In nature reserves specifically these individuals are extremely popular, and actively sought out for photographs. Could/should these be listed in a new section? Sakkie Coetzee (talk) 10:53, 3 January 2023 (UTC)

Oppose. This page is not + should not become a guide for tusker 'hunters', be it tourists or photographers. – BhagyaMani (talk) 11:18, 3 January 2023 (UTC)

Issues with "Evolution and extinct relatives" section

I have some issues with this section:

  • Platybelodon and other members of the family Amebelodontidae are now generally not considered "gomphotheres" (as messy as that term is taxonomically).
  • The estimate placing Palaeoloxodon namadicus as the largest amimal of all time, it to put lightly, extremely speculative. As the paper itself notes, it's based on a single unlocated partial femur mentioned in an early 19th century publication as 20% larger than a measured femur. The paper itself notes that the estimate should be taken with a grain of salt.
  • Continues to refer to Palaeoloxodon recki as Elephas recki, which is inconsistent with the Misplaced Pages article on the animal, as well as recent scientific literaure on Palaeoloxodon

Overall, the section seems somewhat poorly organised for a featured article (though I appreciate it's not the main focus by any means). I'll probably get around to improving it in the coming days. Hemiauchenia (talk) 03:01, 26 March 2023 (UTC)

I missed this. Hemiauchenia, do you still plan on working on this? LittleJerry (talk) 15:43, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
I think I'm mostly finished with this section. Sorry for stepping on your toes a bit while reworking the section. Hemiauchenia (talk) 22:49, 21 May 2023 (UTC)
Good job! LittleJerry (talk) 23:10, 21 May 2023 (UTC)
Hemiauchenia, does the 2021 article have a cladogram? LittleJerry (talk) 00:20, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
No, but there's a half-decent cladogram in this paper, but it has a number of problems, most notably that Stegodon is recovered within modern elephants, which is not found in basically any other phylogenetic analysis and I think is likely to be erroneous, so I'm not sure it would be usable. Hemiauchenia (talk) 00:26, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
It might be okay if Elephantoidea is collapsed to a single node. Hemiauchenia (talk) 00:29, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Actually, having thought about it more, I think the cladogram in figure 5 from this paper is probably better. Hemiauchenia (talk) 00:50, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Doesn't the other paper broadly support this cladogram? LittleJerry (talk) 01:05, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Proboscidea

early proboscideans, e.g. Moeritherium

Deinotheriidae

Elephantiformes

Mammutidae

Gomphotheriidae

Stegodontidae

Elephantidae

Loxodonta

Mammuthus

Elephas

Proboscidea phylogeny based on upper molars.
Yeah, that cladogram looks good to me. Hemiauchenia (talk) 01:08, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Do you think we should add a few more clades like Amebelodontidae? LittleJerry (talk) 01:32, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Sure, I think adding Amebelodontidae would be a good idea. One current issue with the cladogram is is that "Gomphotheriidae" is widely agreed to be paraphyletic, so it might be worth representing them with two nodes (one closer to elephantids and stegodontids than the other node) with a combined label, as is done for example for the label of Maxiliopoda in the phylogeny section of the Arthropoda article. Hemiauchenia (talk) 01:39, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Okay well, I'm not good at making or changing cladograms. Maybe Chiswick Chap can help? LittleJerry (talk) 01:45, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
I've managed to find another half-decent cladogram , doesn't include the amebelodontids unfortunately, but does include most of the other taxa, and avoids WP:SYNTH problems. Hemiauchenia (talk) 01:59, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
Hemiauchenia, do you think the evolution section could be trimmed some and have more details at the Proboscidea? Perhaps the first paragraph could give an overview of Proboscidea pre-Elephantimorph. The second paragraph could start with Elephantimorphs and lead into Elephantidae and then talk about extinction. LittleJerry (talk) 23:14, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
I think that the broad evolutionary history narrative in the first few paragraphs is as concise as it can reasonably be without losing coherence. I think the morphological evolution and dwarf elephant sections could be cut down though. Hemiauchenia (talk) 03:46, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
I removed those. LittleJerry (talk) 10:38, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
No issue with those removals, I think they are much better placed in Proboscidea. Hemiauchenia (talk) 20:22, 24 May 2023 (UTC)

References

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Elephants vs Elephantidae

I don’t understand why this article excludes extinct elephantids.

Pretty much every other article for a group of animals goes over some of its extinct and prehistoric members. I understand wanting to prioritize extant animals but you can do that without completely ignoring the taxon they belong to. Maxwatermelon (talk) 18:54, 17 May 2023 (UTC)

It is handled at the family (Elephantidae) and superfamily level (Elephantoidea) because in this case, that works out better. The family includes such species as the mammoths, which are not called elephants. - UtherSRG (talk) 00:32, 18 May 2023 (UTC)

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In the Internal systems section, change "It's apex has two pointed ends," to "Its apex has two pointed ends," MLL1973 (talk) 13:18, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

 Done Paper9oll (🔔📝) 13:53, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

Some inline citations are still incomplete

This article cites multiple works by J. Shoshani, but it still includes many inline citations that include only the author's name and a page number, without the title of the work that was cited. Should these citations include the titles in addition to the author's name? Jarble (talk) 16:13, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

No. The work is still clearly identifiable, though I would strongly prefer it include a year (this would prevent potential confusion with Shoshani 1998 and Shoshani 2005, even if they are cited using a different format). :3 F4U (they/it) 17:30, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

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2603:8001:D00:E3F2:8B:E8B3:26EF:5919 (talk) 16:06, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. UtherSRG (talk) 16:08, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

Use of File:African Bush Elephant.jpg violates GNU FDL license

The license to the original image is very restrictive. Currently, the article does not credit the author, which is required:

Attribution of this image to the author (Muhammad Mahdi Karim) is required in a prominent location near to the image.

This even led to a question being asked on Law Stack Exchange about this issue.

I will be replacing the main image with an equivalent one, which is CC-BY-SA-2.0. -- Hugo Spinelli (talk) 19:54, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

Muhammad Mahdi Karim? LittleJerry (talk) 00:40, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
We certainly can ask if the author would multi-license their work.... — xaosflux 01:26, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
FAL added as well. Thanks for asking :-) --Muhammad(talk) 10:33, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
@Hugo Spinelli FYI, this image now has additional licensing, compatible with CCBYSA4. — xaosflux 10:43, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
Thanks. Feel free to revert it if you prefer the original image. Either one is fine with me. -- Hugo Spinelli (talk) 13:35, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Temporal glands and mammary glands are not sex organs

Why are the temporal and mammary glands described in this section about sex organs? Jarble (talk) 21:53, 11 January 2024 (UTC)

They are related to sexual behavior. LittleJerry (talk) 22:19, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
But they are secondary sex characteristics, not sex organs. 17:45, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
Changed title. LittleJerry (talk) 15:31, 4 March 2024 (UTC)

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elephants come from africa and they have very specific lifestyles compared to other animals and wildlife Phoebe1322 (talk) 21:01, 6 May 2024 (UTC) elephants are a protected species and are from africa, they have a very specific life style compared to other animals and wildlife

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Cannolis (talk) 21:27, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

My edits

My edits () were reverted wholesale as unhelpful, unsourced and with barereflinks, which I don't believe is accurate.

I did remove this portion -- "This is due to them being largely immune to predators, which would otherwise kill off many of the individuals with significant parasite loads" as it makes no sense and should be reviewed and reworded, in my opinion. Yours. Thanks. Zenon.Lach (talk) 04:52, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

You have added unsourced content, and many of us regularly remove newly added unsourced content. The content you removed does make sense to me, and had a citation. If you think that the cited source does not support that statement, explain that here. You deleted that content and it has been restored, so the next step is to discuss on this talk page why you think that content does not belong in the article. Donald Albury 13:05, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
With all due respect, the diff I provided () re my two edits does not show any unsourced additions, IMO. Several new reflinks from reliable sources were added. I did some rewording for clarity, yes. And, "This is due to them being largely immune to predators, which would otherwise kill off many of the individuals with significant parasite loads" is quite confusing, regardless of citation. I respectfully submit that less arcane wording would make this portion more comprehensible to the majority of readers. Also, the plural ("rhinoceroses") of rhinoceros should be used. Yours, Zenon.Lach (talk) 14:38, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
My apologies, I thought I saw unsourced content added, but I was wrong. I do have trouble following the changes you have made in some places, where I think it looks like you have moved content from in front of one citation to in front of another citation. I still think is best to discuss the changes you want to make on this talk page. Donald Albury 14:42, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
* "This is due to them being largely immune to predators, which would otherwise kill off many of the individuals with significant parasite loads" -- should be reworded -- difficult to understand for us non-zoologists as written
* "rhinoceroses" (plural) not "rhinoceros"
* "They appear to have self-awareness, and possibly show concern for dying and dead individuals of their kind" -- remove "possibly". They are very aware of death and usually show concern for fellow pachyderms: mothers carry dead calfs, "bury" dead mates with sticks, herds sometimes seek vengeance, attracted to bones of their own kind, etc (see ).
* "Gestation in elephants typically lasts between one and a half and two years" -- should be "African elephants have the longest gestation period in the animal kingdom, at 22 months. Asian female elephants carry pregnancy between 18 and 22 months" (see )
No. CNN and BBC are not reliable sources for facts like those mentioned above, especially in an FA. Pinging LittleJerry to deal with this. Wolverine XI 18:20, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

:::::CNN, BBC not reliable sources? Zenon.Lach (talk) 19:38, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Fully agree : this page has been subject to a lengthy peer-review process + does certainly not need newspaper articles as references. – BhagyaMani (talk) 18:27, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
OK: How about these sources (, ) for this change:
* "They appear to have self-awareness, and possibly show concern for dying and dead individuals of their kind" -- remove "possibly". (They are very aware of death and usually show concern for fellow pachyderms: mothers carry dead calfs, "bury" dead mates with sticks, herds sometimes seek vengeance, attracted to bones of their own kind, etc.) Zenon.Lach (talk) 20:24, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
As the hidden message states "Please do not add any more examples to this section. This subject already has its own article". We have the Elephant cognition article. You can add more to there. LittleJerry (talk) 21:38, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
NOT ADDING ANYTHING -- I only proposed (twice) removing the clearly incorrect adverb "possibly". Zenon.Lach (talk) 00:12, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
No need to get aggressive. It would be best to move on to less high-quality articles. Wolverine XI 06:18, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
Also, you should be citing the original scientific articles instead of the press articles talking about them. The article is here. LittleJerry (talk) 21:50, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

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Someone has vandalized the introduction to this article and the information is unable to be restored due to the semi-protected status. Adamqp (talk) 15:07, 15 September 2024 (UTC) Adamqp (talk) 15:07, 15 September 2024 (UTC)

 Already done as per revision 1245856314. MadGuy7023 (talk) 15:28, 15 September 2024 (UTC)

What kind

What kind of elephant did Hanibal use when he was on his way to Rome? Peter Horn User talk 20:26, 3 January 2025 (UTC)

This page is for discussing improvements to the article. Questions such as yours are best asked at the reference desk. I will give you a clue. If you read through Hannibal, you will find a link to the subspecies of elephant that the Carthaginians used. Donald Albury 23:38, 3 January 2025 (UTC)
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