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== Talk:Race and genetics ==


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=Current disputes=

== Dragon Age: The Veilguard ==

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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span>
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span>
* {{pagelinks|Talk:Race and genetics}} * {{pagelinks|Dragon Age: The Veilguard}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span>
* {{User|BlackHades}} * {{User|Sariel Xilo}}
* {{User| Aprock}} * {{User|BMWF}}
* {{User| The Devil's Advocate}} * {{User|Wikibenboy94}}
* {{User| ArtifexMayhem}}
* {{User| 84.61.181.253}} (and other related dynamic IP addresses)
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span>


1) Disagreement on if ] is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows ]/] & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows ] advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included.
The article ] has a subsection entitled "Lewontin's argument and criticism." in which Lewontin's argument is that race has ‘virtually no genetic or taxonomic significance’. Followed by support and criticism from others. It included criticism by Edwards, followed by Dawkins in which he agreed with Edwards' views against Lewontin. The text in question being:
2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus.
3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose.


<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span>
] (2005) agreed with Edwards' view, summarizing the argument against Lewontin as being, "However small the racial partition of the total variation may be, if such racial characteristics as there are highly correlate with other racial characteristics, they are by definition informative, and therefore of taxonomic significance."


*Current discussion: ]
Aprock has removed Dawkins' criticism of Lewontin six times claiming cherry picking. This is despite the fact that in the cited source Dawkins repeatedly stated Lewontin is wrong. Aprock reasoned by quoting Dawkins that race is difficult to define, in between genetic variance between races is small, and that racial classification is informative about physical characteristics. None of which counters Dawkins' specific criticism of Lewontin.
*Previous discussion: ]


<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span>
The argument that in between genetic variance between races is small has been acknowledged by both Edwards and Dawkins, and was already clearly stated as such in the article. In regards to Aprock reasons related to physical characteristics, I tried to address this by adding Dawkins' example of why he disagreed with Lewontin using physical characteristics which Aprock still removed again.


An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a ] until the dispute is resolved.
Dawkins' criticism of Lewontin meets ] and is certainly highly relevant to a section entitled “Lewontin's argument and criticism.” I tried to work with Aprock in editing Dawkins' criticism of Lewontin but it seems Aprock is only interested in removal of the text regardless of what form it is in. When Aprock was given the opportunity to edit Dawkins' views on Lewontin the way he would personally want it he refuses.


==== Summary of dispute by BMWF ====
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span>
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div>


==== Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94 ====
Extensively discussed in talk for months.
The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion:


1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to ], and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did.
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span>


2. Including the ] player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much ''Dragon Age: Veilguard'' has sold.
Hopefully help Aprock understand why Dawkins' criticism of Lewontin is noteworthy in a section titled "Lewontin's argument and criticism." and work toward putting the reference back in the article.


3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms".
==== Opening comments by Aprock ====
There's not much to say. We have a clear case of cherry picking. Any sane reading of the chapter "The Grasshopper's Tale" from Dawkins' ''Ancestor's Tale'' clearly shows that Dawkins' views on race are that it is not a generically significant attribute. That Dawkins takes issue with a literal interpretation Lewontin's work is only significant when presented in the broader context of the chapter, a suggestion which has yet to be considered by BlackHades and various like minded editors. ] (]) 20:37, 27 May 2013 (UTC)


4. The invoking of ] while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews".
==== Opening comments by The Devil's Advocate ====
I have not participated much in this dispute, but I took the time to read through the chapter as Aprock suggested and I still have to disagree with his claims of "cherry-picking" and "misrepresentation" as I expected I would. Dawkins takes a rather nuanced position, questioning the significance of the criteria we use to distinguish organisms (in fact, the name of the chapter is a reference to how different species of grasshopper are distinguished based on what would seem to be an incredibly trivial difference), but he doesn't reject these classifications like Lewontin. His position is very much that race is a genetically significant attribute and should be used as a classification of people in a scientific context. Naturally, he does not assign it the same significance as early eugenicists and does not approve of it being used in a social or cultural context, but the subject of the article is "race and genetics" not "race and culture" where such a position would be relevant. His position is straightforward that Lewontin is mistaken in characterizing race as an attribute of "virtually" no genetic significance. Dawkins is a qualified academic on the subject human genetics and noting his evaluation of the dispute seems pertinent.--] <sub>] ]</sub> 22:07, 27 May 2013 (UTC)


5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). ] (]) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
==== Opening comments by ArtifexMayhem ====


=== Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion ===
The entire is just a ] for ] material. The proposed Dawkins addition is ] by omission {{mdash}} the pov being, as stated above, that "''...race is a genetically significant attribute and should be used as a classification of people in a scientific context''".
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div>


To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both {{reply to|Wikibenboy94|p=}} and I agree that there are no ] issues in the topline summary sentences removed by {{reply to|BMWF|p=}} in and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute.
As I previously on the Dawkins makes a few other points:
# No objective criterion exist that would allow us to determine if any two people are of the same race or not.
# No objective criterion exist that would allow us to determine how many races there are.
# Racial classification is informative about "''no more than the characteristics used by the observers when they agree: things like eye shape and hair curliness — nothing more unless we are given further reasons to believe it. For some reason it seems to be the superficial, external, trivial characteristics that are correlated with race — perhaps especially facial characteristics.''"
# The "''superficial differences that helped our ancestors to prefer insiders over outsiders have been enhanced out of all proportion to the real genetic differences between us''".
# Individuals are "''far more different from other members of their group than their groups are from each other''".


In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: {{xt|''Veilguard'' was also subject to ] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "]". Some outlets noted that {{underline|while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative,}} the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on ], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove {{underline|offensive}} reviews}}. ] (]) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Neither Edwards or Dawkins make the claim that race is a genetically significant attribute. {{mdash}} ] (]) 19:34, 29 May 2013 (UTC)


==== Opening comments by 84.61.181.253 ==== ===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)===
I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read ] and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change.
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please limit to 2000 characters - longer statements may be deleted in their entirety or asked to be shortened. This is so a volunteer can review the dispute in a timely manner. Thanks.</div>
] (]) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC)


:Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). ] (]) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
=== Talk:Race and genetics discussion ===
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please do not use this for discussing the dispute prior to a volunteer opening the thread for comments - continue discussing the issues on the article talk page if necessary.</div>


====Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)====
Hello. I am a dispute resolution volunteer here at the Misplaced Pages Dispute Resolution Noticeboard. This does not imply that I have any special authority or that my opinions should carry any extra weight; it just means that I have not been previously involved in this dispute and that I have some experience helping other people to resolve their disputes. Right now I am waiting for everyone to make their statements before opening this up for discussion. in the meantime, I encourage everyone involved to review our ] and ] pages. Thanks! --] (]) 00:41, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that ] is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of ] applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in.
] (]) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC)


===Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)===
:I am now opening this up for discussion. Sorry for the delay; I wanted to make sure I had time to give this my full attention.
I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined , I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed & ), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. ] (]) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
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::As stated by The Devil's Advocate, I strongly disagree on the argument of cherry picking. If you look through "The Grasshopper's Tale", Dawkins goes completely out of the way to criticize Lewontin. It's not like it's a single line that's being taking out of context. Dawkins goes into great detail to explain why Lewontin is wrong and Edwards is right repeatedly through several pages and cites specific examples. From pg 406-410 in "The Ancestor's Tale". Just like Edwards, Dawkins does agree with Lewontin in that there is more variation within racial groups than in between racial groups but Dawkins makes it very clear that Lewontin is wrong to suggest that this means race has "virtually no genetic or taxonomic significance".


===First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)===
::I'm more than willing and welcome the discussion on how best to summarize Dawkins criticism of Lewontin in accordance with ] but unfortunately we're unable to even have such a discussion because of the constant attempt and assertion that Dawkins doesn't belong in the article at all. Despite the fact that Dawkins goes into such painstaking detail and highlights specific examples through several pages to explain arguments by Lewontin and Edwards. Dawkins' argument and criticism of Lewontin should belong in a subsection entitled “Lewontin's argument and criticism”.
Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to ] and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to ]. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response.


Are there any other questions? ] (]) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
::I would also like to note that Dawkins position on Lewontin has existed in ] for years without dispute and currently exists in ] without dispute. I would certainly welcome the discussion on what the most appropriate way to summarize Dawkins position on Lewontin is. But to assert that Dawkins argument on Lewontin doesn't belong in the article at all? This seems so absurd. ] (]) 22:45, 1 June 2013 (UTC)


:I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. ] (]) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Passing by DRN volunteer here; after this came up the other day I skimread my way through The Grasshoppers Tail (Though I have read the chapter and book in its entirety previously). I mostly agree with Black Hades / The Devil's Advocate summary of the topic. Essentially Dawkin's point is that races are very similar, but also that race is an important indicator for specific traits (other than superficial exterior changes). Dawkins uses examples such as if you were to pick a running team from the fastest runners in the world, its going to almost definately be an all-african team. (Though other examples definately exist such as lactose intolerance, etc.). Just my 2c worth. I ''might'' offer some further comments on the topic at some point, but Guy Macon will be taking the lead here. -- ] (]) 00:41, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
::I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. ] (]) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC)


===First statements by editors (Dragon Age)===
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It's worth observing here that the article is ], not ]. To the extent that Dawkin's views merit inclusion here, it's his views on race and genetics which are relevant not his views on a literal interpretation of Lewontin's claims. That the later is being pushed into the article without consideration of the former is a classic example of the sort of misuse of sources that was rife in ]. ] (]) 01:00, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


:The subsection is entitled "Lewontin's argument and criticism". So anything in this subsection should be specifically related to that point. If you feel Dawkins' wider views on race and genetics should be included elsewhere in the article, that would be a completely separate topic of discussion. But as far as the subsection "Lewontin's argument and criticism", only statements specifically regarding Lewontin should be in this section which includes Dawkins. There's no reason to omit Dawkins here. ] (]) 02:24, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


===Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)===
::Characterizing Dawkins' wider views on race and genetics as "a completely separate topic of discussion" is a sufficient illustration of the cherry picking that's going on. There's not really much more to discuss. ] (]) 08:59, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about ], so that we can read a description of the review bombing.


I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement.
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I don't understand what the ] issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the ] issue is. So please state more specifically what the ] issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a ] issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it.
::::It's even more interesting than that; the majority of the trop long-distance runners come from three mountainous districts beside the Rift Valley: Nandi in Kenya, and Arsi and Shewa in Ethiopia. On the other hand, we do need to recognize that there have historically been attempts to use pseudoscience to "prove" the superiority of whichever race the "prover" belongs to. The movie "Django Unchained" has a classic example of a racist slave owner using ] as a pseudoscientific and self-serving justification for slavery. Obviously nobody here holds such a position, but we need to watch to make sure that such discredited ideas -- or the equally discredited idea that there are zero differences between groups of human beings -- haven't subtly influenced otherwise reliable sources.
::::Getting back to the issue at hand, let's examine the "cherry picking" claim. I always like to try to get each side to understand the other, For those who think there has been cherry picking, how do you explain the fact that multiple apparently rational editors think you are wrong? For those who think there has ''not'' been cherry picking, how do you explain the fact that multiple apparently rational editors think ''you'' are wrong? Try this: write up a paragraph saying "here is what I think the best reasons for believing the position that opposes mine are". Post it here without any criticism or rebuttal and wait until your opponent does the same. Then after you do that, repeat with "here are what I think are the best reasons for rejecting my position", once again without rebuttal. Then go back to the normal advocacy of your preferred position. Doing this can be a real eye-opener. --] (]) 03:55, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::I'd like to thank Nbound for taking the time to reread the chapter and offer his input. In regards to Guy Macon's suggestion, I would say the best reason for the position opposing mine seem to be that Dawkins' position can be misinterpreted by readers. Dawkins, along with Edwards, does agree with Lewontin that the variation within race is far greater than between races. Which is true and this is essentially universally accepted among scientists today. Humans as a species are certainly much more homogeneous than other species. The best reason for opposing the addition of Dawkins' statement appear to be the fear that this fact may get lost with readers if we highlight the small in between differences that exists. ] (]) 04:59, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
Just stumbled on this. I'm an uninvolved editor that is familiar with the text in question, and I have to agree with Aprock and Artifex. The quoted material, when taken out of context as it is here presented, does overstate Dawkins' position. The disagreement between Dawkins and Lewontin is over a very fine point. They largely agree with each other.
Furthermore, I, like Aprock, was a bit surprised to see this in the present article at all. The article is not about Lewontin.
Last of all, a point not yet mentioned though glaringly obvious, is that there is a big problem with parity of sources. Dawkins' non-peer-reviewed popular science book is being used to challange Lewontin's peer-reviewed scientific paper. I have grave reservations about that. For me, that's a sufficient reason not to mention Dawkins' rebuttal at all, regardless of his reputation. That clearly violates ], especially ] and ]. Criticism of peer-reviewed sources must absolutely come from peer-reviewed sources. ] (]) 13:23, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
:Your arguments appear to disagree with wikipedia policies. ] states <i>"Misplaced Pages articles should be based on reliable, published secondary sources and, to a lesser extent, on tertiary sources. Secondary or tertiary sources are needed to establish the topic's notability and to avoid novel interpretations of primary sources, though primary sources are permitted if used carefully. Material based purely on primary sources should be avoided. All interpretive claims, analyses, or synthetic claims about primary sources must be referenced to a secondary source, rather than to the original analysis of the primary-source material by Misplaced Pages editors...Misplaced Pages articles usually rely on material from reliable secondary sources"</i>


Please provide your rewritten sections.
:Dawkins is a reliable secondary source for the primary source of Lewontin. Misplaced Pages is suppose to focus on secondary sources over primary sources.
:In regards to ] and ], this seems to be an assertion that Dawkins and Edwards is the minority position which is not accurate. Support of Edwards' position is quite mainstream. From both peer reviewed sources and secondary sources. ] (]) 20:30, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


Are there any other questions?
::Please reread the chapter from which you are quoting. Dawkins clearly states: ''"Lewontin's view of race has become near-universal orthodoxy in scientific circles."'' (pg. 406) ] (]) 01:50, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
] (]) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Which view on race? In regards to Lewontin's argument that within race variation is higher than between race variation? Yes. That humans as a species are far more homogeneous than other species? Also yes. That race has virtually no genetic or taxonomic significance? Absolutely NOT. This specific point by Lewontin is heavily refuted in the scientific fields. Not just by Edwards and Dawkins. In fact there's an entire scientific field today based around how wrong Lewontin was on this point. Which is the scientific field of ].


===Second statements by editors (Dragon Age)===
:::"Ironically, the sequencing of the human genome has instead renewed and strengthened interest in biological differences between racial and ethnic populations, as genetic variants associated with disease susceptibility (Collins and McKusick 2001), environmental response (Olden and Guthrie 2001), and drug metabolism (Nebert and Menon 2001) are identified, and frequencies of these variants in different populations are reported."<i>--Foster, Morris W., and Richard R. Sharp. "Race, ethnicity, and genomics: social classifications as proxies of biological heterogeneity." Genome Research 12.6 (2002): 844-850.</i> ] (]) 03:58, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
Proposed text:
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''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' released for ], ], and ] on October 31, 2024. {{strikethrough|After release ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record.}} The game received generally positive reviews from critics, '''who praised its cast, representation of ] characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat'''. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the ] and Innovation in Accessibility at ].
;Reception
¶1 ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' received "generally favorable" reviews from critics {{strikethrough|for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions}} according to the ] website ].<ref name="MC XSXS Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://www.metacritic.com/game/dragon-age-the-veilguard/critic-reviews/?platform=xbox-series-x |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard (Xbox Series X Critic Reviews) |website=] |access-date=December 4, 2024}}</ref> ] determined that 68% of critics recommended the game.<ref name="OC Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://opencritic.com/game/17037/dragon-age-the-veilguard |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Reviews |website=] |access-date=November 12, 2024}}</ref> ''Veilguard'' was subject to ] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "]". '''{{underline|Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative}}''', the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on ], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove '''offensive reviews'''.<ref>{{Cite news |date=2024-11-05 |title=Metacritic responds after Dragon Age: The Veilguard review bombing |url=https://www.eurogamer.net/metacritic-responds-after-dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing |access-date=2024-11-06 |work=Eurogamer.net |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age The Veilguard is getting review bombed, and now Metacritic has something to say |url=https://www.pcgamesn.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard/metacritic-respond-review-bomb |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=PCGamesN |language=en-US}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Watson |first=Philip |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's Poor Review Bombing Leads To Metacritic Response |url=https://www.cgmagonline.com/news/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing/ |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=] |language=en-CA}}</ref>


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::::"Which view on race?" Again, you are free to read the book referenced. At this juncture, you appear to be saying that Dawkins is a fine source for content you agree with, but when it comes to content that you don't agree with you bring a handful of older sources. I assume you can see the inconsistency here. ] (]) 05:01, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
¶2 Hayes Madsen of '']'' called ''Veilguard'' a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset".<ref name=":2">{{Cite magazine |last=Madsen |first=Hayes |date=2024-10-28 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Is a Return to Form for a Beloved RPG Franchise |url=https://www.rollingstone.com/culture/rs-gaming/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-1235144960/ |access-date=2024-10-29 |magazine=Rolling Stone |language=en-US}}</ref> Leana Hafer for '']'' similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character".<ref name=":1">{{Cite web |last=Hafer |first=Leana |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Review |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review |access-date=2024-10-29 |website=] |language=en}}</ref> Andy Bickerton of ] viewed the game as a "well-executed ]". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of ''Veilguard''{{'}}s near-decade of troubled production".<ref name=":11">{{Cite news |last=Bickerton |first=Andy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Tonally inconsistent 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' is still BioWare's best action game |url=https://www.npr.org/2024/10/28/nx-s1-5165587/dragon-age-veilguard-review-story-tone |access-date=November 29, 2024 |work=]}}</ref> Lauren Morton of ''PC Gamer'' thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than ] at moments".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev">{{cite web |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review/ |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=]}}</ref>
:::::Still with the straw man arguments? First, I didn't even mention Lewontin in regards to scientific mainstream in the post you responded to. Who knows why you brought him up other than you. You appear to have extreme difficulty responding to my actual points as you continuously time and time again ignore my points and respond back to imaginary things I never ever stated instead. (e.g. I explain Edwards is mainstream and instead of responding back about Edwards, you talk about Lewontin instead).
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:::::Secondly, talk about cherry picking Dawkins. I don't think you can accuse anyone of cherry picking after this. Dawkins is not stating that Lewontin's ENTIRE view of race has become near-universal orthodoxy in scientific circles. Unless you want to make the ridiculous claim that Dawkins is admitting to being outside the scientific circles and accusing Edwards of being outside of it as well. Are you really making this claim? Most and nearly all of Lewontin's views on race is mainstream but Dawkins picks out the one point by Lewontin that isn't and explains why. By the way, claiming that I don't agree with Dawkins is another straw man argument. You are free to read the book referenced. ] (]) 06:50, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::Dawkins is quite clear in his book about what he refers to as Lewontin's view. Do the sources you list even mention Lewontin? You appear to be confusing yourself here. ] (]) 07:12, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
:::::::Yes Dawkins is quite clear and somehow you still don't seem to get it. ] (]) 07:46, 3 June 2013 (UTC)


¶3 '''Critics were mixed on the game's story.''' Matt Purslow from ''IGN'' '''thought that''' ''Veilguard'' was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric.<ref>{{cite web|url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-is-at-war-with-itself|title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Is at War With Itself|first=Matt|last=Purslow|work=]|date=November 9, 2024|accessdate=November 10, 2024}}</ref> Malindy Hetfeld of '']'' '''criticized''' the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in ''Veilguard'', describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions".<ref name="Guardian review">{{cite web |last=Hetfeld |first=Malindy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review — a good RPG, but an underwhelming Dragon Age game |url=https://www.theguardian.com/games/2024/oct/28/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bioware-electronic-arts |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=]}}</ref> She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer opined that ''Veilguard'' has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas.<ref name=":1" /> Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey.<ref name=":2" /> Ash Parrish of '']'' appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice".<ref name="Verge full review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-11-28 |title=The hardest part of Dragon Age: The Veilguard is making a choice |url=https://www.theverge.com/24307786/dragon-age-the-veilguard-full-review |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref> Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative,<ref name="Verge early review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard starts slow but strong |url=https://www.theverge.com/24281631/dragon-age-the-veilguard-early-review-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":2" /><ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name="PCGUS Morton rev"/><ref name=":3">{{Cite web |last=Hashimoto |first=Kazuma |date=2024-10-28 |title=I Played 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' and Got Myself Stuck in a Gay Love Triangle |url=https://www.them.us/story/dragon-age-the-veilguard-lgbtq-romance-options-essay-lucanis-davrin |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Them |language=en-US}}</ref> with some finding major decisions "few and far between".<ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name=":2" />
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Well, this is interesting. So far we have the following opinions:
¶4 Madsen praised ''Veilguard'' for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot".<ref name=":2" /> Todd Harper of '']'' emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways".<ref name=":4">{{Cite web |last=Harper |first=Todd |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the friend group simulator we've been waiting for |url=https://www.polygon.com/review/470712/review-dragon-age-the-veilguard-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Kazuma Hashimoto of '']'' commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions.<ref name=":3"/> Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in ''Veilguard'', highlighting that unlike previous ''Dragon Age'' games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path.<ref name="Verge full review" /> Conversely, Oliver Brandt of '']'' viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other ''Dragon Age'' games.<ref name=":8">{{Cite web |last=Brandt |first=Oliver |date=2024-10-31 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the first triple-A game to handle gender identity the right way |url=https://www.si.com/videogames/features/dragon-age-the-veilguard-taash-gender-identity |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=] |language=en-US}}</ref> Harvey Randall of ''PC Gamer'' highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity.<ref name=":9" /> Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations,<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev" /> noting that "good people don't make great characters".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts.<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev">{{Cite news |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=2024-11-15 |title=The Veilguard is the first Dragon Age game where my companions don't care enough about anything to argue with me |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/the-veilguard-is-the-first-dragon-age-game-where-my-companions-dont-care-enough-about-anything-to-argue-with-me/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref>


¶5 '''''Veilguard'' generally received praise for its inclusive ] and representation of ] and ] characters.'''<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":14">{{Cite web |last=Mora |first=Alyssa |date=September 19, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Preview: BioWare Finally Nails The Character Creator I've Always Wanted |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-preview-bioware-finally-nails-the-character-creator-ive-always-wanted |access-date=November 30, 2024 |website=IGN |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":10">{{Cite web |last=Bea |first=Robin |date=2024-11-06 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Makes Me Feel Seen As a Trans Player, But Still Disappointed |url=https://www.inverse.com/gaming/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-characters |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Inverse |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":12">{{Cite web |last=Henley |first=Stacey |date=2024-11-06 |title=Why Dragon Age: The Veilguard Uses The Term 'Non-Binary' |url=https://www.thegamer.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard-non-binary-modern-immersion-breaking/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=TheGamer |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Puc |first=Samantha |date=2024-11-03 |title=This 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' companion's story ruined me in the best way |url=https://www.themarysue.com/this-dragon-age-the-veilguard-companions-story-ruined-me-in-the-best-way/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Mary Sue}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Marshall |first=Cass |date=2024-11-01 |title=How role-playing a trans or nonbinary Rook works in Dragon Age: The Veilguard |url=https://www.polygon.com/gaming/472513/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-nonbinary-identity-role-play |access-date=2024-11-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Alyssa Mora of ''IGN'' emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless".<ref name=":14" /> Both Robin Bea of '']'' and Brandt commended Taash's story arc,<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":10" /> with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", ''Vanguard'' "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary".<ref name=":8" /> Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in ''Veilguard'' in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a ] narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character".<ref name=":10" /> Stacey Henley of '']'' appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to ''Inquisition''{{'s}} ], though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking".<ref name=":12" /> Randall was more critical, noting how ''Veilguard'' "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context".<ref name=":9">{{Cite news |last=Randall |first=Harvey |date=2024-11-13 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's leap forward in trans inclusion comes from a heartfelt place, but its problems left me feeling frustrated, angry, and tired |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguards-leap-forward-in-trans-inclusion-comes-from-a-heartfelt-place-but-its-problems-left-me-feeling-frustrated-angry-and-tired/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> They found the lack of a fictional ] connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting".<ref name=":9" />


¶6 '''Critics enjoyed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat.''' Bickerton felt that ''Veilguard''{{'}}s strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish".<ref name=":11" /> He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players.<ref name=":11" /> Hetfeld viewed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars".<ref name="Verge full review" /> Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than ''Inquisition'' and the ''Mass Effect'' games.<ref name=":4" /> Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor",<ref name=":1" /> and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous".<ref name=":4" /> Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design".<ref name="Verge early review" /> Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points".<ref name=":11" /> Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of ''Veilguard''. She found it was better off for removing ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" />
Keep Dawkins in:<br />
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In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). ] (]) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC)


I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. ] (]) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
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===Third statement by moderator (Dragon Age)===
The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place.


Are there any questions?
I am going to ask again that everyone try an experiment. For those who think there has been cherry picking, how do you explain the fact that multiple apparently rational editors think you are wrong? For those who think there has ''not'' been cherry picking, how do you explain the fact that multiple apparently rational editors think ''you'' are wrong?
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:Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? ] (]) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Please try this: write up a paragraph saying "here is what I think the best reasons for believing the position that opposes mine are". Post it here without any criticism or rebuttal and wait until your opponent does the same. Then after you do that, repeat with "here are what I think are the best reasons for rejecting my position", once again without rebuttal. Then go back to the normal advocacy of your preferred position. Doing this can be a real eye-opener, <s>plus, we all get to mock anyome who refuses to get with the program.</s> (Note to the humor impared: that was a joke). --] (]) 14:28, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


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:As it concerns the claims of cherry-picking I think the best example of cherry-picking is the opening statement by ArtifexMayhem. He is cherry-picking Dawkins to make Dawkins say what he wishes Dawkins had said. It is true that Dawkins says "no objective criterion exists that would enable us to decide whether two people should be considered part of the same race or not, nor to decide how many races there are", but here is the full context:


===Fourth statement by moderator (Dragon Age)===
:{{quote|Above the species level, a genus is just a group of species that are pretty similar to each other. '''No objective criterion exists to decide how similar they have to be, and the same is true of all the higher levels: family, order, class, phylum and the various ‘sub-’ or ‘super-’ names that intervene between them'''. Below the species level, ‘race’ and ‘subspecies’ are used more or less interchangeably and, again, no objective criterion exists that would enable us to decide whether two people should be considered part of the same race or not, nor to decide how many races there are.}}
Yes. Make the agreed-on changes. If they are reverted, follow my instructions above. ] (]) 04:54, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
:In other words, he says no objective criteria exist for any of the classifications other than species classifications, but he also says this about species:


===Fourth statements by editors (Dragon Age)===
:{{quote|Biologists normally classify animals that mate under artificial conditions but refuse to mate in the wild as separate species, as has happened with the grasshoppers. But unlike, say, lions and tigers, which can hybridise in zoos to make (sterile) ‘ligers’ and ‘tigrons’, those grasshoppers look identical. Apparently the only difference is in their songs. And it is this, and only this, that stops them crossbreeding and therefore leads us to recognise them as separate species.}}
{{Done}} per above instructions (). ] (]) 18:23, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
:He subsequently relates this to humans:


== Autism ==
:{{quote|If Chorthippus brunneus and C. biguttulus are separated as two distinct species of grasshoppers because they prefer not to interbreed although they physically could, might humans, at least in ancient times of tribal exclusivity, once have been separable in the same kind of way? Chorthippus brunneus and C. biguttulus, remember, in all detectable respects except their song, are identical, and when they are (easily) persuaded to hybridise their offspring are fully fertile.}}
:So he also casts serious doubt on the objective criteria used to distinguish species, suggesting that human populations could have been categorized as separate species at one point. To note his statement about there not being objective criteria to distinguish races as though it shows him saying race is not a genetically significant attribute is blatant cherry-picking. It does not end there as the quote about "superficial differences" is also cherry-picked from this quote:


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:{{quote|We are indeed a very uniform species if you count the totality of genes, or if you take a truly random sample of genes; '''but perhaps there are special reasons for a disproportionate amount of variation in those very genes that make it easy for us to notice variation''', and to distinguish our own kind from others. This would include the genes responsible for externally visible ‘labels’ like skin colour. Yet again, I want to suggest that this heightened discriminability has evolved by sexual selection, specifically in humans because we are such a culture-bound species. '''Because our mating decisions are so heavily influenced by cultural tradition, and because our cultures, and sometimes our religions, encourage us to discriminate against outsiders''', especially in choosing mates, those superficial differences that helped our ancestors to prefer insiders over outsiders have been enhanced out of all proportion to the real genetic differences between us.}}
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:He follows it up with this:
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span>
:{{quote|I want to consider two versions of this theory: a strong and a weak one. The truth could be any combination of the two. The strong theory suggests that skin colour, and other conspicuous genetic badges, evolved actively as discriminators in choosing mates. The weak theory, which can be thought of as leading into the strong version, places cultural differences, such as language and religion, in the same role as geographical separation in the incipient stages of speciation. Once cultural differences have achieved this initial separation, with the consequence that there is no gene flow to hold them together, the groups would subsequently evolve apart genetically, as if geographically separated.}}
:This hardly suggests a view of race as not being a genetically significant attribute.--] <sub>] ]</sub> 17:24, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
::The above is a spirited defense of the "yes, there is cherry picking" position, and is well worth discussing, but I cannot help wondering how you explain the fact that three out of six editors who have commented strongly disagree. (I am not picking on you in particular; I am asking everyone this). Clearly you are talking past each other. How can you reconcile your belief that you have the answer with the fact that other editors who appear to be just as intelligent as you think that ''they'' have the answer? Please consider answering the questions I asked above. I do have a fair amount of experience helping people to resolve disputes, and I am asking you and everyone else here to try something new. Repeating the same arguments that failed to resolve the dispute on the article talk page is unlikely to have a different outcome here. --] (]) 17:41, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span>
:::You seem to be confused. I was ''rebutting'' the claim of cherry-picking made by Artifex, Aprock, and Dominus. Artifex was, oddly enough, cherry-picking Dawkins to back up his claim that others were cherry-picking Dawkins.--] <sub>] ]</sub> 18:11, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
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Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society.
::::I am not confused at all. I specifically asked you to attempt to refute the the claim of no cherry-picking made by BlackHades, The Devil's Advocate, and Nbound, but instead you attempted to refute the claim of cherry-picking made by Aprock, ArtifexMayhem, and Dominus Vobisdu.


On Misplaced Pages, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all.
::::The whole point of the dispute resolution noticeboard is to try something different from what failed to work on the article talk page. What you have here is a neutral party who is trying to guide the discussion to a solution. Those editors who ignore the dispute resolution volunteers requests give the appearance of being one of the reasons why this was not settled on the article talk page. Those editors who make a good-faith effort to read, understand, and follow the requests made by the dispute resolution volunteer -- or at the very least explain why they think the request is stupid -- give the appearance of working towards a resolution of the dispute.


Misplaced Pages has quite detailed guidelines for what to do ''within'' medicine, or ''outside'' of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about ''whether'' something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years.
::::So, once again I ask (and will keep asking) how you explain the fact that three out of six editors who have commented strongly disagree with you. How can you reconcile your belief that you have the answer with the fact that other editors who appear to be just as intelligent as you think that ''they'' have the answer? It's a fair question; why the refusal to answer it?


This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways.
::::And once again I am asking you (and everyone else) to write up a paragraph saying "here is what I think the best reasons for believing the position that opposes mine are" and to post it here ''without any criticism or rebuttal'' of any kind. '''Clearly you are talking past each other. Please don't repeat that behavior with me.''' --] (]) 02:44, 3 June 2013 (UTC)


A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"?
:::::Guy, are you asking us to "write for the opposition"? <small>Sorry, but it's late here and my brain is having trouble parsing the syntax.</small> {{mdash}} ] (]) 04:27, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
::::::Yes that is what he's asking. Which I already did above. Guy says this is to understand the other side better which will help this come to a resolution. I thought it was a good idea but unfortunately no one else seemed willing to partake in it yet. ] (]) 04:36, 3 June 2013 (UTC)


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There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the ''route'' to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Misplaced Pages guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful.

==== Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов ====
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The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity.

This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders).
This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see ].

Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted.

In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs.

While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations.

==== Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan ====
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Yes, as ] says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here.

There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Misplaced Pages. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. ] (]) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
::I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what.
::My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Misplaced Pages'). ] (]) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

==== Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8 ====
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==== Summary of dispute by TempusTacet ====
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==== Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing ====
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I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{tl|MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). ] (]) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

:@], let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the ] section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the ] process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use ] if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph.
:(I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) ] (]) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC)

==== Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion ====
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The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. ] (]) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

:I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by ] below, as well as ], and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the ''Zeroeth statements by editors'' section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section.
:Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. ] (]) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

==== Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 ====
<div style="font-size:smaller"> (Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. ] (]) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC) </div>

==== Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo ====
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{{hat|Comment in your own section. ] (]) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC)}}
''Note: Editor is "]" and will not be participating.'' --] (]) 09:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
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=== Autism discussion ===
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===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)===
I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on ] and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include;
*Be ]. Civility is required everywhere in Misplaced Pages, and is essential to resolving content disputes.
*Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a ] is likely to ignore it.
*Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community.
*Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article.
*Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved.

In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the ] of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form).

I don't yet know whether ] is the right forum to resolve disputes about ], but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions.
] (]) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

:Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)?
:I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you.
:Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied.
:I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is (published in the ) and ], posted here and . You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. ] (]) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

===First statement by possible moderator (Autism)===
I asked for specific statements of how the ] should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read ]. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of ] describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the ] should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by ], and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by ]. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the ] standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary ].

If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the ]. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the ], and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised ]. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues.

I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as '''First statements by editors (Autism)''', because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic ] are met.

After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the ], I will know better whether ] is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? ] (]) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC)

:Thanks @]! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years.
:@] has ] - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there?
:I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Misplaced Pages guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... ] (]) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
::::@]@] I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
:::::: " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. "
::] (]) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

===First statements by editors (Autism)===
==== 1. what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same ====

The overall framing of the lead is very much within the medical model of autism, taking for granted various things which are hotly contested in the wider world - particularly among autistic people, but also among researchers in this field.

Let's take the opening paragraph.

{{bq|Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or simply autism, is a ''neurodevelopmental disorder'' characterized by ''repetitive, restricted, and inflexible'' patterns of behavior, interests, and activities; ''deficits'' in social communication and social interaction; and the presence of high or low sensory sensitivity. A formal diagnosis requires that ''symptoms'' cause significant ''impairment'' in multiple functional domains, in addition to being atypical or excessive for the person's age and sociocultural context.}}

I've highlighted the particularly contentious terms! Essentially, this paragraph takes the mainstream psychiatric perspective on all of these things for granted.

Here's one alternative version, which I contributed to in 2022, with instances of more neutral terms highlighted:

{{bq|The autism spectrum, often referred to as just autism or in the context of a professional diagnosis autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or autism spectrum condition (ASC), is a neurodevelopmental ''condition'' (or conditions) characterized by ''difficulties'' in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication, and the ''presence'' of repetitive behavior and restricted interests. Other common ''signs'' include unusual responses to sensory stimuli. }}

Note that for the most part these terms convey the same information, without assuming a particular interpretation is the correct one. ''Condition'' is often thought to be a slightly less value-laden equivalent of ''disorder'',<ref>{{cite journal |doi=10.1177/1362361315588200 |url=https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/26134030/}}</ref> although arguably the difference is marginal. The hypothesis that autistic people have inherent ''deficits'' in social communication and interaction has been disproven quite convincingly (see ]); the ''difficulties'', however, certainly remain in many contexts, and are in practice all that diagnosticians can go by on this front. There are all sorts of issues with applying the term ''symptom'' to the ways that autism manifests, starting with the assumption that they're problems, as opposed to e.g. coping strategies or objectively neutral characteristics.

I recently simply to accurately reflect views associated with neurodiversity, correcting text based on blatant misunderstandings; variations on these edits have now been reverted at least four times, including after they have been restored by other editors. These reversions have not been accompanied by sensible edit summaries, instead claiming for example that they are ideologically motivated, and that my references (an academic textbook and a peer-reviewed paper researching community views) are somehow inadequate. I am aware that these reversions are starting to suggest that ] may be a more appropriate venue for resolving these issues.

The final paragraph of the lead is dubious, and largely reads like an advertisement for ]

<small>Above entered by {{noping|Oolong}}</small>
====Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. ====

''Classification'' goes into enormous technical detail, and seems to overlap heavily with both
''diagnosis'' and ''signs and symptoms''.

We need to cover common aspects of autistic experience somewhere (see ] for some of these; there are many more) and it is not clear if they can fit in the above section, although they may be at least as important, just because they are not adequately covered by the current editions of diagnostic manuals.

''Possible causes'' should obviously be no more than 2-3 paragraphs at most, in line with summary style. Likewise ''epidemiology''.
''Management'' is an awful framing; autism is a fundamental difference in a person, not an illness to be managed. I note that this heading is absent from the ] entry. Perhaps it would be constructive to replace this section with something around ''access'': access to healthcare, education, workplaces and so on.

''Prognosis'' probably doesn't warrant a section at all: it's lifelong. If it's going to be there, it needs to be completely rewritten.

''History'' and especially ''society and culture'' probably deserve to be significantly higher up in the article.


Re your third question, I provided various links in my original submission - are those specific enough?

--] (]) 17:40, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

===Second statement by moderator (Autism)===
My explanation about ] is my own interpretation, based on the principle to ]. Other editors may disagree, but it is the rule that will be in place while I am moderating this discussion.

The unregistered editor is strongly advised to ] if they wish to take part in this mediation. Their IPv6 address has changed between the time that this discussion was created and the time of this post. It is both difficult to remember IPv6 addresses and difficult to communicate with shifting IPv6 (or IPv4) addresses.

The requested rewrite has no references. It also includes a statement of opinion that is not a summary of existing knowledge and is therefore not encyclopedic. On the other hand, the first sentence of the proposed rewrite is, in my opinion, a good starting point for a rewrite of the ]. The later sentences about differences between different autistic persons are, in my opinion, a good idea to be included somewhere in the article, but not necessarily in the ].

In the above paragraph, I am taking a more active role in trying to lead this discussion than I usually take. If the participants agree with my taking an active role, I will write a new set of rules providing for a semi-active role by the moderator. If the participants would prefer that I be less active, I will step back somewhat, and will implement ].

Are there any other questions?
] (]) 05:19, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

:So I have issues with the proposed lede change, with interpreting the scientific consensus classification as a "medical model", among other issues. I'd like to clarify these per my involvement here, but I need time to formulate a reply. I saw an article stating that editors must reply within 48 hours but I cannot consistently do this with my time constraints. May I ask if this will be a significant issue and if it's a requirement can it not be so strict under the circumstances? Thanks. ] (]) 16:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
:::The provision about responding within 48 hours is in ], which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? ] (]) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
::::72 hours should be fine in general. I plan to respond quicker than that if I can of course, my only concern is that I occasionally am not free to reply within 72 hours as sometimes I won't be able to until the weekend. Apologies if this is causing some issues. I'm much more free now with Christmas over so I think it'll mainly become an issue if our discussions extend much into January. ] (]) 18:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

:"The requested rewrite ... includes a statement of opinion." - Which part is a statement of opinion? I am not disputing your assessment; rather, I want to make sure I understand your point correctly. Thanks! - <span style="font-family: Papyrus; font-size: 14px;">] ]</span> <span style="font-family: Papyrus; font-size: 11px;"></span> 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

===Second statements by editors (Autism)===


===Third statement by moderator (Autism)===
Please read ]. This is the new set of rules for this mediation.

Please sign all of your posts. It is more important to sign your posts than to put them in the correct sections, although both are a good idea. If you forget to sign your post, the rest of us may not know who posted it.

In the proposed ] by the unregistered editor, the last sentence reads: {{tqb|Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments.}} That is true but not encyclopedic, because it does not summarize existing knowledge. It states a moral principle that governs development of the encyclopedia, and should also apply in the larger society. It is also not in a form that is ] because it is not attributed to anyone but in wikivoice.

I would still like a list from each editor of links to all the previous discussions about the issues that are being discussed here. I know that some of the discussions have been mentioned in various statements, but I would like each editor to provide a list, in one place, without commenting on the discussions, and without concerning about whether another editor is also listing the same discussions. I just want this for background material.

Are there any other questions at this time?
] (])

===Third statements by editors (Autism)===
I am making a rather late entry into this process and am not sure if putting this here is correct. There are a number of aspects that I would like to comment on. I think that anyone with any knowledge of autism will have noticed that autism is not merely, or even primarily, a medical condition, even though it is diagnosable by clinicians and has diagnostic criteria. It has sociological, disability, cultural and identity dimensions. I have had two brain-involving medical conditions, autism and stroke. I have an identity as an autistic person, but no identity as a stroke survivor. Both are medical conditions, diagnosable by clinicians, but only autism has the additional, extra-clinical, dimensions I have described. The Misplaced Pages article has suffered, in my opinion, from too great an emphasis on the medical aspects of autism, to the extent that some editors have excluded the other aspects of autism from prominent parts of the article, such as the lead, or treated them as though they were unsupported by reputable references, or were 'fringe' in nature. Furthermore, too literal use of pathologising phraseology, gleaned uncritically from diagnostic manuals, introduces wording to the article which is unnecessarily offensive to autistic people, when less offensive wording, while retaining the original meaning, could have been employed. Efforts to moderate the offensive wording have been repeatedly reverted.

I have noticed that deafness, a condition which, like autism has cultural, communication, disability and identity dimensions, is treated in a way within Misplaced Pages (]) that gives equal treatment to the purely medical and the sociological aspects. Though the deafness article is very much shorter than the one on autism, it struck me that the treatment of the subject might act as a useful paradigm. ] (]) 13:59, 28 December 2024 (UTC)

== Sri Lankan Vellalar ==

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A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources.
Aichik's edit () asserts that Knowles "copied liberally" from 3 European artists, citing a source for only 1 assertion. Not only do I think that this wording contravenes ], I see the information as wrongly placed in the "Public image" section. Here, relevant criticism of the BLP is made in line with her ''portrayal in the media''; whereas the three instances refer to criticism for the artist's music videos. Two instances are already discussed on Misplaced Pages (] and ]) in which a discussion of the instances is more informed and neutral. In both, the reports that she copied was made, but also the artist responded saying she viewed and was inspired by both pieces. The current "Public image" section asserts that other artists have copied Knowles, and although in part referring to public image, I think this should also be removed as it deviates from the purpose of the section; which is ultimately her public reception and not critique of her work.


Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts.
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span>


We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules.
Discussed on the talk page and through user talk pages.


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Advice and mediation.


<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span>
==== Opening comments by Aichik ====
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This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points.
==== Opening comments by 76.189.109.155 ====
First, I have absolutely no interest in this DR discussion, nor do I really understand why it was started. It looks like Aichik, who I don't even know, hasn't edited the article in several days (although I have no idea, nor do I care, what their past involvement in it has been). My only purpose in commenting in the article's , as I made clear there, was to give my thoughts on whether Aichik's sources were reliable or not, since they were being scrutinized. I see that Aichik participated in that discussion prior to my comments, and hasn't made any changes to the article since then. So, again, I'm confused as to why this DR was started, instead of just continuing the discussion on the article's talk page. As the DRN instructions above say, "Noticeboards should not be a substitute for talk pages. Editors are expected to have had extensive discussion on a talk page...to work out the issues before coming to DRN". As I said in my final comment at the talk page, "If there's disagreement, consensus will have to decide what belongs, and where." In any case, I don't care one bit about this content or placement issue. So with that, I'm out of this. Good luck. --] (]) 15:12, 28 May 2013 (UTC)


=== Beyonce Knowles discussion === ==== Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy ====
First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed:
Hello, I am Smileguy91, a dispute resolution volunteer. JennKR, please clarify 76.189.109.155's role in this situation. ]<sup>]</sup> 02:17, 31 May 2013 (UTC)
:Hello! A volunteer added him to this DRN request after seeing his input on the talk page where he clarified how blogs may be used as reliable sources. He then concluded that as this is a content issue, he wanted no part in the DRN discussion. —'']'' | ] 10:14, 31 May 2013 (UTC)


- Terminology differences
== Capoeira ==


- The inclusion of the mythology section
{{DR case status|open}} <!-- Bot Case ID (please don't modify): 728 -->
{{drn filing editor|Danilolabbate|00:46, 2 June 2013 (UTC)}}
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'''Terminology Differences'''

The root of the terminology issue stems from my , where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were ].

To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically:

- {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}} refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the ].

- {{Langx|ta|வெள்ளாளர்|Veḷḷāḷar}} represents the caste name in contemporary usage.
This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste ] often uses this term {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}}, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms.

'''Inclusion of the Mythology Section'''

The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well.

The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste.

'''Third-Party Opinion'''

Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed ] or not ], the concerned user should raise the issue on ]. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated.

I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article.

=== Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion ===
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===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Sri Lankan Vellalar)===
I am ready to act as the moderator if the participants want moderated discussion and if this does not involve a question about the ]. Please read ] and the ]. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state, first, whether they agree to ] and that discussions of South Asian social groupings are subject to special rules. Each editor is then asked, second, what changes they want to make to the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Each editor is asked, third, whether there are issues about the ]. If I determine that there are issues about the ], or if an editor states that there are such issues, I will close this discussion until that question is resolved at ].

Are there any other questions?
] (]) 05:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

===Zeroth statements by editors (Sri Lankan Vellalar)===

== Kamaria Ahir ==

{{DR case status|closed}}
{{drn filing editor|Nlkyair012|20:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)}}
{{DRN archive top|Closed as also pending in another forum, ]. ] does not accept a dispute that is also pending in another content or conduct forum, and RSN is a content forum. When there are two types of issues about one article, it is not practical to try to resolve them in two forums at the same time, because often issues overlap, and because the resolution in one forum might change what is being discussed in the other forum. Finish the discussion at ] and decide whether there are any remaining content issues that are consistent with what has been decided about ]. If there are any remaining content issues, resume discussion on the article talk page. If the subsequent discussion on the article talk page is lengthy and inconclusive, a new case request can be filed here. ] (]) 03:10, 25 December 2024 (UTC)}}
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span>
* {{pagelinks|Capoeira}} * {{pagelinks|Kamaria Ahir}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span>
* {{User|Danilolabbate}} * {{User|Ratnahastin}}
* {{User| unregistered member}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span>


The dispute revolves around the use of Raj-era sources, specifically K.S. Singh’s "Anthropological Survey of India," in the article on "Kamaria Ahir." One editor, Nlkyair012, is advocating for the removal of these sources, arguing that they are outdated and unreliable. However, these historical sources, particularly those from the British Raj, are still cited in reputable modern academic works as valuable historical references for caste dynamics and structures. The issue also includes the inclusion of living people's names without proper self-identification, which violates Misplaced Pages's Biographies of Living Persons policy (BLP). The goal of this dispute resolution is to determine whether the Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh’s work should be retained or replaced, and to ensure that the article adheres to Misplaced Pages's guidelines on neutrality and verifiability.
Unregistered member making wrong statement in the begining of the article, and backing it with an absolutely out-of-context reference.


<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span>


]
Tried using the article's talk, got no answer. Can't contact other user directly, as he's an unregistered user.


]
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span>


]
The most important thing, as the article talks about a somewhat polemic part of Brazilian culture, I believe it's edition should be limited to registered members only.


<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span>
Also, mediation in the "talk" section might help, although the other user failed to answer my last message.


The dispute can be resolved by carefully reviewing the reliability of Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh's work, considering modern academic citations that rely on these sources, and determining whether they meet Misplaced Pages's standards of verifiability. Additionally, we can remove any names of living people to comply with the BLP policy while maintaining the historical and sociological content that is well-sourced. Collaboration on improving the article is key, and I suggest that experts in anthropology or caste studies provide input on the appropriateness of these sources for this article.
==== Opening comments by unregistered member ====
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The current dispute is about the inclusion of Raj-era sources, particularly from the British colonial period, in the article "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Kamaria_Ahir)." I believe these sources are valuable for understanding the historical context of caste structures in India, despite their age. While I acknowledge that (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Age_matters) advises caution with older sources, it does not outright prohibit their use, especially when they provide unique historical insights that modern works may lack. Raj-era ethnographic works were written by government officials and are often cited in contemporary research for their firsthand observations, making them relevant in understanding caste dynamics.
=== Capoeira discussion ===


A central issue in this dispute is the use of K.S. Singh’s "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Anthropological_Survey_of_India)" (ASI), which I have cited in the article. The ASI, although created under government supervision, is a significant academic resource that continues to be referenced in Indian academia. While some may question its modern reliability, it remains an authoritative source, and dismissing it entirely without further scrutiny undermines its contribution to the topic. As per (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Scholarship), high-quality academic sources are essential, but older sources like K.S. Singh’s are still valid when used in conjunction with modern studies to provide a complete view of the topic.
Have you invited this member to the discussion via their talk page? The IP address should be added instead of "unregistered member" above aswell -- ] (]) 15:00, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


I also understand concerns related to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons), particularly regarding the inclusion of living people's names in caste articles. If specific names are a violation of (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BLP_categories), I agree they should be removed. However, this does not justify removing the entire article or historical context that is verifiable and supported by well-established sources. The article provides valuable historical and sociological context that should not be discarded simply due to concerns over individual names.
== Misplaced Pages:requests for adminship/Mattythewhite ==


The sources I have used are critical to the article’s depth and accuracy. While there are concerns over the accessibility and page numbers of some sources, I am willing to work to improve verifiability, such as by adding missing page numbers or citing additional resources. According to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Verifiability) and (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources), I aim to improve the article's citation standards, but my main goal is to maintain the article’s historical integrity while complying with Misplaced Pages’s standards for verifiability, neutrality, and reliability.
{{DR case status|closed}} <!-- Bot Case ID (please don't modify): 729 -->
{{drn filing editor|174.252.35.200|14:21, 2 June 2013 (UTC)}}
{{DRN archive top|reason=DRN request refers to an active RfA, also conduct is the main issue, which is largely out of our jurisdiction. The votes in question were highly suspect (Two brand new users opposing an RfA). -- ] (]) 14:46, 2 June 2013 (UTC)<br>
'''Note:''' Filing editor also now blocked. -- ] (])}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this?'''</span>


(https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Ratnahastin) has raised concerns about the reliability and relevance of these sources, particularly due to their age. However, rather than removing content entirely, I propose that we retain these sources while improving the article’s clarity and citation standards. The article can be collaboratively improved to ensure it meets Misplaced Pages's guidelines while preserving the depth of the subject matter.
Yes, I have discussed this issue in the edit summery.

==== Summary of dispute by Ratnahastin ====
The OP does not really understand the purpose of WP:DR. The proper venue for this dispute was ]. - ] (]) 02:06, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

:I understand your concerns, but I’d appreciate if we could focus on constructive dialogue rather than dismissing my contributions as AI-generated or repetitive. I’ve put in considerable effort into researching and explaining my points here and on RSN, as you’ve acknowledged.
:While RSN focuses strictly on source reliability, this discussion at DRN is broader—it’s about how content sourced from historical documents can be meaningfully incorporated into the article without violating Misplaced Pages’s guidelines like ] or ].
:I’d also like to emphasize that I’m not against incorporating modern tertiary sources. In fact, I’ve already proposed balancing the article with both historical and modern perspectives to ensure neutrality and depth. I am also willing to address verifiability concerns by adding specific page numbers or additional citations.
:Accusing me of forum shopping is inaccurate—I brought the matter to RSN to address the reliability of specific sources, and to DRN to resolve content disputes that go beyond just reliability. These are distinct yet connected aspects of the same issue.
:I hope we can focus on resolving the content dispute collaboratively rather than resorting to unproductive allegations. I look forward to hearing constructive feedback from DRN volunteers or other editors like @] and @], whom you’ve pinged. <span style="font-family:Georgia,serif; color:#FF4500; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold;">]</span> 05:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

=== Kamaria Ahir discussion ===
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*'''Volunteer Note''' - This appears to be an issue about the ]. Is this a question about the ]? If so, the proper forum is ], where the volunteers are more familiar with the source reliability guidelines than at ]. This case will be closed within 48 hours unless an issue is identified about article content that is not a source reliability question. ] (]) 04:18, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

:Thank you for your note. I acknowledge that source reliability is a critical aspect of this dispute, and as you mentioned, I have already brought up this matter on the ] (RSN) ] to evaluate the specific sources in question.
:However, this dispute at DRN extends beyond just the reliability of sources. It involves a broader disagreement over how content from historical sources should be incorporated into the article while balancing compliance with Misplaced Pages's policies like ], ], and ].
:Here at DRN, I am seeking resolution on whether the historical context provided by these sources can be retained while ensuring the article aligns with community standards. This involves determining whether to refine, supplement, or restructure the article, rather than removing entire sections or sources outright.
:I appreciate your efforts and hope this clarifies why this discussion is taking place here in addition to RSN. If DRN volunteers feel this still doesn’t meet the scope of this forum, I’d appreciate guidance on next steps. <span style="font-family:Georgia,serif; color:#FF4500; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold;">]</span> 05:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
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== Old Government House, Parramatta ==

{{DR case status|closed}}
{{drn filing editor|Itchycoocoo|06:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)}}
{{DRN archive top|Closed for two reasons. First, the other editor hasn't replied. Second, it's unclear what the dispute even is; it appears to me that it is about large portion of the article being copied from a compatibly licensed source. As long as the appropriate attribution is given, it is legal. The guidelines that the filing editor has mentioned, which disallow copying large portions, are talking about copyrighted material where we don't have explicit permission to use them so we rely on ]. However, this isn't the case here, as the material is CC-BY licensed. I am not aware of any guideline that forbids articles from being primarily copied from a compatibly licensed source, instead, ] mentions: {{tqq|For sections or whole articles, add a section-wide or article-wide attribution template}}, so I believe there is no issue here. If there is any other issue, follow ]. Thanks. ] (]) 12:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}}

<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span>

Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.


<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span>
* {{pagelinks|Misplaced Pages:requests for adminship/Mattythewhite 2}} * {{pagelinks|Old Government House, Parramatta}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span>
* {{User|Lukeno94}} * {{User|Itchycoocoo}}
* {{User| scstadm}} * {{User|The Drover's Wife}}
* {{User| TXDRDGR}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span>


Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article ] that extends to >90% of material from another website.
User is deliberately attempting to offset votes he does not agree with. Two by new users. Such activity runs afoul the principle of assuming good faith. The comments posted were not malicious in any way.


<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span>


The User who posted much of this material contends that "The material is CC-BY licensed, as stated in the edit summary and correctly attributed, which is, and has always been, usable on Misplaced Pages, and was added as part of a massive project by a number of Australian editors to import quality CC-BY content from a number of heritage sources."
Attempted to restore votes but Lukeno94 seems to be persistent


<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span>


I think that this material should be placed subject under WP:EL/ External Links, and follow the clearly defined rules of WP:COPYPASTE/ Copying text from other sources, WP:Plagiarism & WP:PARAPHRASE guidelines.
I believe all votes should remain unaltered until the discussion is closed. Lukeno94 is welcome to refute the comments he disagrees with but he has no right change them


==== Opening comments by Lukeno94 ====
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Well, I have no idea what the IP thinks they're doing here, but anyway. The above RfA has been the victim of two trolling SPAs (ie, the named accounts here, whom aren't me, but made their first edits to the RfA), and the votes were initially indented following a discussion on the main page, and the talk page, by ] - an admin - due to their nature, in this edit:. I filed an SPI against the two SPA accounts, which was closed without action; a CU proved they were unrelated, which is fair enough. The IP reverted this indenting here , which I reverted once I spotted it here. It was then followed by the IP attempting to discredit ''my'' vote, promptly restored by ]. The IP removed the indenting once more, which I reverted again, citing consensus, and then the IP brought this here. The IP is pretty clearly either trolling, or violating ], so this DRN should be closed, and the IP should be blocked. The IP has also claimed I have a ] in this edit, but hasn't explained why this is (it's bullshit regardless). ] ] 14:36, 2 June 2013 (UTC)


Ignoring the numerous uncivil issues appearing on the Talkpage, the view is using material like this is legalistically quite correct regarding use of non-copyright material, but in my opinion, it exceed any 'fair use' of material in which it is almost completely paraphrased and could even be considered as plagiarism.
==== Opening comments by scstadm ====
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span>
==== Opening comments by TXDRDGR ====
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]


<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span>
=== Misplaced Pages:requests for adminship/Mattythewhite discussion ===

Two ''brand new'' editors commenting on an RfA is highly odd. They were indented for a reason. Obviously having a DRN is inappropriate given the discussion in progress at the RfA and I will close this case (out of our jurisdiction, is mainly a conduct issue). I would suggest the admin noticeboard if there are any further issues. -- ] (]) 14:41, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Misplaced Pages pages?

Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant.

==== Summary of dispute by The Drover's Wife ====
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=== Old Government House, Parramatta discussion ===
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=== Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House) ===
I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read ] and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues.

It is my understanding that {{u|The Drover's Wife}} wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask {{u|Itchycoocoo}} what changes do you want ] and why? ] (]) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

:I don't really see what "dispute" exist here – this user hasn't even attempted to edit the article other than slapping a copyvio tag on it, and no one has tried to stop them from editing. I have even the user to ] and edit the article, which they haven't done. Itchycoocoo seems to believe the article is a copyright violation and/or plagiarism, despite three users (myself, The Drover's Wife, and Wizardman) explaining that ]. The editor is welcome to take their issue to a different noticeboard such as ] but they will get the same answer. Otherwise, again, they are free to make whatever edits they want to the article. <span style=white-space:nowrap;>] <span style="background-color:mistyrose;padding:2px 5px;border-radius:5px;font-family:Arial black">]</span></span> 02:36, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

=== Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House) ===

Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up.

I do accept '''Misplaced Pages DRN Rule B''', and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor.

You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages.

I will be very happy to do such culling.

But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Misplaced Pages pages. This is acknowledged.

However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Misplaced Pages editors. e.g. According to ] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''"

I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article.

In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Misplaced Pages editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in ] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''"

'''Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Misplaced Pages page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%?'''

If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Misplaced Pages standards. However, looking at the other Misplaced Pages policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users.

The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail.

Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic.

Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome.

Thanks.
] (]) 06:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
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== Imran Khan ==
== corporation, share, joint stock co and many others. ==

{{DR case status}}
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{{drn filing editor|SheriffIsInTown|15:56, 26 December 2024 (UTC)}}

<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span>

Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span>
* {{pagelinks|Imran Khan}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span>
* {{User|SheriffIsInTown}}
* {{User|WikiEnthusiast1001}}
* {{User|Veldsenk}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span>

The content removed in this had been part of the article for over six years. It was initially removed by an editor citing ] and ]. Although I restored it, another editor subsequently removed it again. For context, ] is a former wife of the subject. After their marriage ended, she authored an autobiography titled ], published by ]. The author, the book, and the publisher are all notable, with HarperCollins being recognised as “one of the ‘Big Five’ English-language publishers,” as noted in its Misplaced Pages article. The removed content was also supported by five other secondary sources. Given the notability of the author, the book, and the publisher, as well as the reliable reporting, the content merits inclusion in the article. The removal occurred without consensus, despite the content being part of the article for years. The material only reported Reham Khan’s allegations, including claims that Imran Khan shared certain details with her. As Misplaced Pages editors, we are not arbiters of truth but rely on reliable sources. Additionally, ].

<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span>

]

<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span>

I am seeking the restoration of the removed content, along with some expansion to include her allegations regarding Imran Khan’s drug use and same-sex tendencies, all of which are supported by her book and other secondary sources.

==== Summary of dispute by WikiEnthusiast1001 ====
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Violates several key Misplaced Pages policies especially ], which states '''"Misplaced Pages is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid: it is not Misplaced Pages's job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives."'''

While the book was published by a reputable publisher, ]'s credibility is highly questionable—she has been sued for libel and defamation by one of her former husband's aides. As a result, and publicly apologized. This clearly casts doubt on the reliability of her claims. Also, the book was released just 13 days before the 2018 Pakistani general election,<ref>{{cite web|url=https://www.thenews.com.pk/latest/340843|title=Reham Khan's book 'available in paperback in UK'|publisher=]|date=12 July 2018|quote=Reham's book, published online today, has triggered debate on social media with many saying that she is doing all this on the behest of Pakistan Muslim League Nawaz to tarnish the image of Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf Chairman Imran Khan just before the July 25 polls.}}</ref> suggesting a potential motive for bias.

The allegations have only been repeated by other sources after she brought them up, and no independent or credible evidence has ever corroborated them. This fails Misplaced Pages's reliable sources policy, which requires independently verifiable claims, not merely echoes of the original source. It also violates NPOV and undue weight policies by giving excessive prominence to a single, uncorroborated perspective. ] (]) 10:09, 28 December 2024 (UTC)

==== Summary of dispute by Veldsenk ====
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=== Imran Khan discussion ===
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== 2025 Bangladesh Premier League ==
{{DR case status|closed}} <!-- Bot Case ID (please don't modify): 730 -->
{{drn filing editor|Buddylovely|19:10, 2 June 2013 (UTC)}}
{{DRN archive top|reason= Filing editor has been banned indefinitely for socking. Also wished to be unbanned. Need to ask the banning admin or take it to a higher level if you do think you have been treated unfairly. Outside of our jurisdiction. ] (]) 00:26, 3 June 2013 (UTC)}}


{{DR case status|closed}}
{{drn filing editor|UwU.Raihanur|02:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}}
{{DRN archive top|Closed as not an issue for which DRN can be helpful. My advice is similar to that given by ] in declining your ] request. Third Opinion and DRN are both for good-faith disagreements between editors who discuss their disagreements. The problem here is an unregistered editor who reverts and does not discuss. My advice concerning unregistered editors (IP addresses) who do not discuss normally is to request ] at ], and this is such a case. After the article is semi-protected, you can make your edits, and the article will be read-only for the unregistered editor. This may be an unregistered mobile user who never uses talk pages because they don't know about talk pages and don't know that they have a talk page. This is a problem that we sometimes encounter with mobile users, both registered and unregistered. In any case, I suggest requesting ]. In your request, state that the IP editor reverts but does not discuss. ] (]) 04:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)}}
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span>
* {{pagelinks|corporation}} * {{pagelinks|2025 Bangladesh Premier League}}
* {{pagelinks| share}}
* {{pagelinks| joint stock co and many others.}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span>
* {{User|bbb23}} * {{User|UwU.Raihanur}}
* {{User| blue haired lady}} * {{User|103.59.179.16}}
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span>


I’ve been trying to add factual, sourced information to the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League article, but my edits are being reverted without explanation by another editor who hasn’t engaged in discussion despite multiple attempts. I’d like neutral input to resolve whether this edit complies with Misplaced Pages’s policies.
I have tried to argue my point about shareholder ownership on TALK under Corporation. This is the third time I've done this over the years as Admin archives the argument. I have listed numerous cites. No other editor has listed ANY cites. Yet somehow I lost the argument.
Blue Haired Lady and others disagreed so much with my edits that they ganged up and got admin to block me after 3 reverts on Joint Stock Co. I was unblocked later and won the dis. res. so I reverted once and was banned. It's ridiculous. Admin is ridiculous.


<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> <span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span>


I have tried to resolve the dispute by initiating discussions at the following locations:
Unban me so I can make the proper edits. The editors who fooled admin into banning me have again posted their incorrect information.


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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span>
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Despite these efforts, the other editor has not engaged in meaningful dialogue.


<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span>
Let's have it TALKED out on the Corporation TALK page.


I would appreciate input from neutral editors to determine whether my edit complies with Misplaced Pages's policies on verifiability, reliable sources, and relevance. A third-party perspective can help decide whether the reverted information should remain in the article or if adjustments are necessary to address any concerns. Additionally, guidance on how to handle the lack of engagement from the other editor would be helpful.
==== Opening comments by bbb23 ====
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please limit to 2000 characters - longer statements may be deleted in their entirety or asked to be shortened. This is so a volunteer can review the dispute in a timely manner. Thanks.</div>


==== Opening comments by blue haired lady ==== ==== Summary of dispute by 103.59.179.16 ====
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please limit to 2000 characters - longer statements may be deleted in their entirety or asked to be shortened. This is so a volunteer can review the dispute in a timely manner. Thanks.</div> <div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div>
The editor 103.59.179.16 has reverted my edits to the article multiple times without providing an explanation for the reversions. Despite my attempts to engage in discussions on their user talk page and the article talk page, they have not responded. The disputed content includes factual information about the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League, which is supported by a reliable, verifiable source. The other editor has not presented any concerns regarding the reliability or relevance of the information, nor have they participated in the discussion to clarify their reasons for the reverts.


=== corporation, share, joint stock co and many others. discussion === === 2025 Bangladesh Premier League discussion ===
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div>
:'''Note:''' We arent able to unban you. You need to ask the banning admin for that. Also, if you are banned for something, you dont go back and do it again.
:'''Note 2:''' Looked into this further and filing editor has been blocked for socking. No point keeping this open.
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    Current disputes

    Dragon Age: The Veilguard

    – Discussion in progress. Filed by Sariel Xilo on 20:06, 5 December 2024 (UTC).

    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

    Location of dispute

    Users involved

    Dispute overview

    1) Disagreement on if WP:SYNTH is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows MOS:INTRO/Misplaced Pages:Summary style & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows WP:VG/REC advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included. 2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus. 3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a full lock until the dispute is resolved.

    Summary of dispute by BMWF

    Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

    Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94

    The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion:

    1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to WP:SYNTH, and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did.

    2. Including the Steam player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much Dragon Age: Veilguard has sold.

    3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms".

    4. The invoking of WP:SAID while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews".

    5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). Wikibenboy94 (talk) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

    Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion

    Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.

    To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both @Wikibenboy94 and I agree that there are no WP:SYNTH issues in the topline summary sentences removed by @BMWF in this edit and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute.

    In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: Veilguard was also subject to review bombing on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "woke". Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative, the user reviews of Veilguard on Steam, which requires users to play the game before leaving a review, have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove offensive reviews. Sariel Xilo (talk) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)

    Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)

    I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read DRN Rule A and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC)

    Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). Sariel Xilo (talk) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)

    Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)

    I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that User:Sariel Xilo is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of no harm, no foul applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC)

    Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)

    I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined above, I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed in the lead in this edit & in the reception in this edit), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. Sariel Xilo (talk) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC)

    First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)

    Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to DRN Rule A and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to DRN Rule A. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response.

    Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC)

    I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. Sariel Xilo (talk) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
    I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. Wikibenboy94 (talk) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC)

    First statements by editors (Dragon Age)

    Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)

    It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about review bombing, so that we can read a description of the review bombing.

    I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement.

    I don't understand what the synthesis issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the synthesis issue is. So please state more specifically what the synthesis issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a synthesis issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it.

    Please provide your rewritten sections.

    Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC)

    Second statements by editors (Dragon Age)

    Proposed text:

    Lead

    Dragon Age: The Veilguard released for PlayStation 5, Windows, and Xbox Series X/S on October 31, 2024. After release Dragon Age: The Veilguard topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record. The game received generally positive reviews from critics, who praised its cast, representation of sexual minority characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the Golden Joystick Awards and Innovation in Accessibility at The Game Awards.

    Reception

    ¶1 Dragon Age: The Veilguard received "generally favorable" reviews from critics for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions according to the review aggregator website Metacritic. OpenCritic determined that 68% of critics recommended the game. Veilguard was subject to review bombing on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "woke". Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative, the user reviews of Veilguard on Steam, which requires users to play the game before leaving a review, have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove offensive reviews.

    Reception ¶2 is not under dispute but here for additional context if needed.

    ¶2 Hayes Madsen of Rolling Stone called Veilguard a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset". Leana Hafer for IGN similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character". Andy Bickerton of NPR viewed the game as a "well-executed action RPG". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of Veilguard's near-decade of troubled production". Lauren Morton of PC Gamer thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than RPG at moments".

    ¶3 Critics were mixed on the game's story. Matt Purslow from IGN thought that Veilguard was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric. Malindy Hetfeld of The Guardian criticized the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in Veilguard, describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions". She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas. Hafer opined that Veilguard has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas. Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey. Ash Parrish of The Verge appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice". Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative, with some finding major decisions "few and far between".

    The rest of the reception section for context on lead summary. While it uses similar summary style sentences as above (see bolded text), it is not under dispute.

    ¶4 Madsen praised Veilguard for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot". Todd Harper of Polygon emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways". Kazuma Hashimoto of Them commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions. Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character. Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in Veilguard, highlighting that unlike previous Dragon Age games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path. Conversely, Oliver Brandt of Sports Illustrated viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other Dragon Age games. Harvey Randall of PC Gamer highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity. Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations, noting that "good people don't make great characters". She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts.

    ¶5 Veilguard generally received praise for its inclusive character creator and representation of transgender and non-binary characters. Alyssa Mora of IGN emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless". Both Robin Bea of Inverse and Brandt commended Taash's story arc, with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", Vanguard "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary". Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in Veilguard in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a coming out narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character". Stacey Henley of TheGamer appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to Inquisition's Krem, though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking". Randall was more critical, noting how Veilguard "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context". They found the lack of a fictional etymology connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting".

    ¶6 Critics enjoyed Veilguard's graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat. Bickerton felt that Veilguard's strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish". He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players. Hetfeld viewed Veilguard's combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games. Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat. Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars". Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than Inquisition and the Mass Effect games. Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor", and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous". Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design". Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on Inquisition's "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points". Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of Veilguard. She found it was better off for removing Inquisition's "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings".

    References

    1. "Dragon Age: The Veilguard (Xbox Series X Critic Reviews)". Metacritic. Retrieved December 4, 2024.
    2. "Dragon Age: The Veilguard Reviews". OpenCritic. Retrieved November 12, 2024.
    3. "Metacritic responds after Dragon Age: The Veilguard review bombing". Eurogamer.net. 2024-11-05. Retrieved 2024-11-06.
    4. "Dragon Age The Veilguard is getting review bombed, and now Metacritic has something to say". PCGamesN. 2024-11-05. Retrieved 2024-11-06.
    5. Watson, Philip (2024-11-05). "Dragon Age: The Veilguard's Poor Review Bombing Leads To Metacritic Response". CGMagazine. Retrieved 2024-11-06.
    6. ^ Madsen, Hayes (2024-10-28). "'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Is a Return to Form for a Beloved RPG Franchise". Rolling Stone. Retrieved 2024-10-29.
    7. ^ Hafer, Leana (2024-10-28). "Dragon Age: The Veilguard Review". IGN. Retrieved 2024-10-29.
    8. ^ Bickerton, Andy (October 28, 2024). "Tonally inconsistent 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' is still BioWare's best action game". NPR. Retrieved November 29, 2024.
    9. ^ Morton, Lauren (October 28, 2024). "Dragon Age: The Veilguard review". PC Gamer. Retrieved October 28, 2024.
    10. Purslow, Matt (November 9, 2024). "Dragon Age: The Veilguard Is at War With Itself". IGN. Retrieved November 10, 2024.
    11. ^ Hetfeld, Malindy (October 28, 2024). "Dragon Age: The Veilguard review — a good RPG, but an underwhelming Dragon Age game". The Guardian. Retrieved October 28, 2024.
    12. ^ Parrish, Ash (2024-11-28). "The hardest part of Dragon Age: The Veilguard is making a choice". The Verge. Retrieved 2024-11-29.
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    16. ^ Brandt, Oliver (2024-10-31). "Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the first triple-A game to handle gender identity the right way". Sports Illustrated. Retrieved 2024-11-29.
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    In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). Sariel Xilo (talk) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC)

    I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. Wikibenboy94 (talk) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC)

    Third statement by moderator (Dragon Age)

    The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place.

    Are there any questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 04:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

    Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? Sariel Xilo (talk) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

    Third statements by editors (Dragon Age)

    Fourth statement by moderator (Dragon Age)

    Yes. Make the agreed-on changes. If they are reverted, follow my instructions above. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:54, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

    Fourth statements by editors (Dragon Age)

     Done per above instructions (see edit). Sariel Xilo (talk) 18:23, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

    Autism

    – Discussion in progress. Filed by Oolong on 15:46, 20 December 2024 (UTC).

    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

    Location of dispute

    Users involved

    Dispute overview

    Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society.

    On Misplaced Pages, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all.

    Misplaced Pages has quite detailed guidelines for what to do within medicine, or outside of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about whether something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years.

    This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways.

    A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"?

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    Talk:Autism Talk:Autism#Autism and disability Talk:Autism#Too little focus on anthropology and social dynamics; too intense focus on medical genetics. Talk:Autism#Extent of Scientific Consensus on Terminology & Reconciling Perspectives Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions] Related: Misplaced Pages:Dispute_resolution_noticeboard/Archive_228#Applied_behavior_analysis

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the route to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Misplaced Pages guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful.

    Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов

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    The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity.

    This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see list of quoted references.

    Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted.

    In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs.

    While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations.

    Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan

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    Yes, as User:Oolong says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here.

    There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talkcontribs) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)

    I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Misplaced Pages. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. 2A02:C7C:9B04:EA00:F104:371A:5F87:5238 (talk) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
    I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what.
    My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Misplaced Pages'). Oolong (talk) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

    Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8

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    Summary of dispute by TempusTacet

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    Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing

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    I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

    @Oolong, let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the #First statements by editors (Autism) section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the Misplaced Pages:Edit requests process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use Template:Text diff if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph.
    (I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC)

    Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion

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    The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. FactOrOpinion (talk) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

    I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by Robert McClenon below, as well as DRN Rule A, and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the Zeroeth statements by editors section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section.
    Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. FactOrOpinion (talk) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

    Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0

    (Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. 2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC)

    Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo

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    Comment in your own section. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
    The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.

    Note: Editor is "done with the discussion" and will not be participating. --Oolong (talk) 09:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)

    Autism discussion

    Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.


    Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)

    I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on Autism and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include;

    • Be civil. Civility is required everywhere in Misplaced Pages, and is essential to resolving content disputes.
    • Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a wall of text is likely to ignore it.
    • Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community.
    • Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article.
    • Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved.

    In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form).

    I don't yet know whether DRN is the right forum to resolve disputes about autism, but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

    Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)?
    I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you.
    Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied.
    I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is Autism and Scientism (published in the Middletown Centre for Autism Research Journal) and Autism, Misplaced Pages and Epistemic Injustice, posted here and published in Thinking Person's Guide to Autism. You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. Oolong (talk) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC)

    First statement by possible moderator (Autism)

    I asked for specific statements of how the lede section should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read Be Specific at DRN. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of reliability describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the lede section should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by reliable sources, and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by medically reliable sources. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the medically reliable standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary standard of reliable sourcing.

    If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the lede section. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the lede section, and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised lede section. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues.

    I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as First statements by editors (Autism), because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic talk page guidelines are met.

    After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the lede section, I will know better whether DRN is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC)

    Thanks @Robert McClenon! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years.
    @Димитрий Улянов Иванов has has said that he won't "have the time to consistently respond within 48 hours. Hopefully that is not a strict requirement" - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there?
    I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Misplaced Pages guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... Oolong (talk) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
    @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
    " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. "
    2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

    First statements by editors (Autism)

    1. what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same

    The overall framing of the lead is very much within the medical model of autism, taking for granted various things which are hotly contested in the wider world - particularly among autistic people, but also among researchers in this field.

    Let's take the opening paragraph.

    Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or simply autism, is a neurodevelopmental disorder characterized by repetitive, restricted, and inflexible patterns of behavior, interests, and activities; deficits in social communication and social interaction; and the presence of high or low sensory sensitivity. A formal diagnosis requires that symptoms cause significant impairment in multiple functional domains, in addition to being atypical or excessive for the person's age and sociocultural context.

    I've highlighted the particularly contentious terms! Essentially, this paragraph takes the mainstream psychiatric perspective on all of these things for granted.

    Here's one alternative version, which I contributed to in 2022, with instances of more neutral terms highlighted:

    The autism spectrum, often referred to as just autism or in the context of a professional diagnosis autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or autism spectrum condition (ASC), is a neurodevelopmental condition (or conditions) characterized by difficulties in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication, and the presence of repetitive behavior and restricted interests. Other common signs include unusual responses to sensory stimuli.

    Note that for the most part these terms convey the same information, without assuming a particular interpretation is the correct one. Condition is often thought to be a slightly less value-laden equivalent of disorder, although arguably the difference is marginal. The hypothesis that autistic people have inherent deficits in social communication and interaction has been disproven quite convincingly (see double empathy problem); the difficulties, however, certainly remain in many contexts, and are in practice all that diagnosticians can go by on this front. There are all sorts of issues with applying the term symptom to the ways that autism manifests, starting with the assumption that they're problems, as opposed to e.g. coping strategies or objectively neutral characteristics.

    I recently edited the third paragraph simply to accurately reflect views associated with neurodiversity, correcting text based on blatant misunderstandings; variations on these edits have now been reverted at least four times, including after they have been restored by other editors. These reversions have not been accompanied by sensible edit summaries, instead claiming for example that they are ideologically motivated, and that my references (an academic textbook and a peer-reviewed paper researching community views) are somehow inadequate. I am aware that these reversions are starting to suggest that administrators' noticeboard for incidents may be a more appropriate venue for resolving these issues.

    The final paragraph of the lead is dubious, and largely reads like an advertisement for applied behavior analysis

    Above entered by Oolong

    Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change.

    Classification goes into enormous technical detail, and seems to overlap heavily with both diagnosis and signs and symptoms.

    We need to cover common aspects of autistic experience somewhere (see Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions for some of these; there are many more) and it is not clear if they can fit in the above section, although they may be at least as important, just because they are not adequately covered by the current editions of diagnostic manuals.

    Possible causes should obviously be no more than 2-3 paragraphs at most, in line with summary style. Likewise epidemiology.

    Management is an awful framing; autism is a fundamental difference in a person, not an illness to be managed. I note that this heading is absent from the gender dysphoria entry. Perhaps it would be constructive to replace this section with something around access: access to healthcare, education, workplaces and so on.

    Prognosis probably doesn't warrant a section at all: it's lifelong. If it's going to be there, it needs to be completely rewritten.

    History and especially society and culture probably deserve to be significantly higher up in the article.


    Re your third question, I provided various links in my original submission - are those specific enough?

    --Oolong (talk) 17:40, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

    Second statement by moderator (Autism)

    My explanation about source reliability is my own interpretation, based on the principle to use common sense. Other editors may disagree, but it is the rule that will be in place while I am moderating this discussion.

    The unregistered editor is strongly advised to register an account if they wish to take part in this mediation. Their IPv6 address has changed between the time that this discussion was created and the time of this post. It is both difficult to remember IPv6 addresses and difficult to communicate with shifting IPv6 (or IPv4) addresses.

    The requested rewrite has no references. It also includes a statement of opinion that is not a summary of existing knowledge and is therefore not encyclopedic. On the other hand, the first sentence of the proposed rewrite is, in my opinion, a good starting point for a rewrite of the lede. The later sentences about differences between different autistic persons are, in my opinion, a good idea to be included somewhere in the article, but not necessarily in the lede paragraph.

    In the above paragraph, I am taking a more active role in trying to lead this discussion than I usually take. If the participants agree with my taking an active role, I will write a new set of rules providing for a semi-active role by the moderator. If the participants would prefer that I be less active, I will step back somewhat, and will implement DRN Rule A.

    Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:19, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

    So I have issues with the proposed lede change, with interpreting the scientific consensus classification as a "medical model", among other issues. I'd like to clarify these per my involvement here, but I need time to formulate a reply. I saw an article stating that editors must reply within 48 hours but I cannot consistently do this with my time constraints. May I ask if this will be a significant issue and if it's a requirement can it not be so strict under the circumstances? Thanks. Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk) 16:32, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
    The provision about responding within 48 hours is in DRN Rule A, which is a standard rule but is not always used, and I have not yet specified what rules we are using, so there isn't a 48-hour provision at this time. Will 72 hours work better? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
    72 hours should be fine in general. I plan to respond quicker than that if I can of course, my only concern is that I occasionally am not free to reply within 72 hours as sometimes I won't be able to until the weekend. Apologies if this is causing some issues. I'm much more free now with Christmas over so I think it'll mainly become an issue if our discussions extend much into January. Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk) 18:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
    "The requested rewrite ... includes a statement of opinion." - Which part is a statement of opinion? I am not disputing your assessment; rather, I want to make sure I understand your point correctly. Thanks! - Mark D Worthen PsyD (talk) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

    Second statements by editors (Autism)

    Third statement by moderator (Autism)

    Please read DRN Rule G. This is the new set of rules for this mediation.

    Please sign all of your posts. It is more important to sign your posts than to put them in the correct sections, although both are a good idea. If you forget to sign your post, the rest of us may not know who posted it.

    In the proposed lede by the unregistered editor, the last sentence reads:

    Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments.

    That is true but not encyclopedic, because it does not summarize existing knowledge. It states a moral principle that governs development of the encyclopedia, and should also apply in the larger society. It is also not in a form that is verifiable because it is not attributed to anyone but in wikivoice.

    I would still like a list from each editor of links to all the previous discussions about the issues that are being discussed here. I know that some of the discussions have been mentioned in various statements, but I would like each editor to provide a list, in one place, without commenting on the discussions, and without concerning about whether another editor is also listing the same discussions. I just want this for background material.

    Are there any other questions at this time? Robert McClenon (talk)

    Third statements by editors (Autism)

    I am making a rather late entry into this process and am not sure if putting this here is correct. There are a number of aspects that I would like to comment on. I think that anyone with any knowledge of autism will have noticed that autism is not merely, or even primarily, a medical condition, even though it is diagnosable by clinicians and has diagnostic criteria. It has sociological, disability, cultural and identity dimensions. I have had two brain-involving medical conditions, autism and stroke. I have an identity as an autistic person, but no identity as a stroke survivor. Both are medical conditions, diagnosable by clinicians, but only autism has the additional, extra-clinical, dimensions I have described. The Misplaced Pages article has suffered, in my opinion, from too great an emphasis on the medical aspects of autism, to the extent that some editors have excluded the other aspects of autism from prominent parts of the article, such as the lead, or treated them as though they were unsupported by reputable references, or were 'fringe' in nature. Furthermore, too literal use of pathologising phraseology, gleaned uncritically from diagnostic manuals, introduces wording to the article which is unnecessarily offensive to autistic people, when less offensive wording, while retaining the original meaning, could have been employed. Efforts to moderate the offensive wording have been repeatedly reverted.

    I have noticed that deafness, a condition which, like autism has cultural, communication, disability and identity dimensions, is treated in a way within Misplaced Pages (Deafness) that gives equal treatment to the purely medical and the sociological aspects. Though the deafness article is very much shorter than the one on autism, it struck me that the treatment of the subject might act as a useful paradigm. Urselius (talk) 13:59, 28 December 2024 (UTC)

    Sri Lankan Vellalar

    – New discussion. Filed by Kautilyapundit on 05:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC).

    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

    Location of dispute

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    Dispute overview

    A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources.

    Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts.

    We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    Talk:Sri_Lankan_Vellalar
    

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points.

    Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy

    First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed:

    - Terminology differences

    - The inclusion of the mythology section

    Terminology Differences

    The root of the terminology issue stems from my edit, where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were WP:FRINGE.

    To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically:

    - Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the Akananuru.

    - Tamil: வெள்ளாளர், romanized: Veḷḷāḷar represents the caste name in contemporary usage. This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste Vellalar often uses this term Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms.

    Inclusion of the Mythology Section

    The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well.

    The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste.

    Third-Party Opinion

    Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed WP:FRINGE or not WP:RS, the concerned user should raise the issue on WP:RSN. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated.

    I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article.

    Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion

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    Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Sri Lankan Vellalar)

    I am ready to act as the moderator if the participants want moderated discussion and if this does not involve a question about the reliability of sources. Please read DRN Rule D and the general sanctions concerning South Asian social groups. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article. I am asking each editor to state, first, whether they agree to DRN Rule D and that discussions of South Asian social groupings are subject to special rules. Each editor is then asked, second, what changes they want to make to the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Each editor is asked, third, whether there are issues about the reliability of sources. If I determine that there are issues about the reliability of sources, or if an editor states that there are such issues, I will close this discussion until that question is resolved at the Reliable Source Noticeboard.

    Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)

    Zeroth statements by editors (Sri Lankan Vellalar)

    Kamaria Ahir

    – General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by Nlkyair012 on 20:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC).
    Closed as also pending in another forum, the Reliable Source Noticeboard. DRN does not accept a dispute that is also pending in another content or conduct forum, and RSN is a content forum. When there are two types of issues about one article, it is not practical to try to resolve them in two forums at the same time, because often issues overlap, and because the resolution in one forum might change what is being discussed in the other forum. Finish the discussion at RSN and decide whether there are any remaining content issues that are consistent with what has been decided about reliability of sources. If there are any remaining content issues, resume discussion on the article talk page. If the subsequent discussion on the article talk page is lengthy and inconclusive, a new case request can be filed here. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:10, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
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    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

    Location of dispute

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    Dispute overview

    The dispute revolves around the use of Raj-era sources, specifically K.S. Singh’s "Anthropological Survey of India," in the article on "Kamaria Ahir." One editor, Nlkyair012, is advocating for the removal of these sources, arguing that they are outdated and unreliable. However, these historical sources, particularly those from the British Raj, are still cited in reputable modern academic works as valuable historical references for caste dynamics and structures. The issue also includes the inclusion of living people's names without proper self-identification, which violates Misplaced Pages's Biographies of Living Persons policy (BLP). The goal of this dispute resolution is to determine whether the Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh’s work should be retained or replaced, and to ensure that the article adheres to Misplaced Pages's guidelines on neutrality and verifiability.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

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    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    The dispute can be resolved by carefully reviewing the reliability of Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh's work, considering modern academic citations that rely on these sources, and determining whether they meet Misplaced Pages's standards of verifiability. Additionally, we can remove any names of living people to comply with the BLP policy while maintaining the historical and sociological content that is well-sourced. Collaboration on improving the article is key, and I suggest that experts in anthropology or caste studies provide input on the appropriateness of these sources for this article.

    The current dispute is about the inclusion of Raj-era sources, particularly from the British colonial period, in the article "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Kamaria_Ahir)." I believe these sources are valuable for understanding the historical context of caste structures in India, despite their age. While I acknowledge that (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Age_matters) advises caution with older sources, it does not outright prohibit their use, especially when they provide unique historical insights that modern works may lack. Raj-era ethnographic works were written by government officials and are often cited in contemporary research for their firsthand observations, making them relevant in understanding caste dynamics.

    A central issue in this dispute is the use of K.S. Singh’s "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Anthropological_Survey_of_India)" (ASI), which I have cited in the article. The ASI, although created under government supervision, is a significant academic resource that continues to be referenced in Indian academia. While some may question its modern reliability, it remains an authoritative source, and dismissing it entirely without further scrutiny undermines its contribution to the topic. As per (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Scholarship), high-quality academic sources are essential, but older sources like K.S. Singh’s are still valid when used in conjunction with modern studies to provide a complete view of the topic.

    I also understand concerns related to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons), particularly regarding the inclusion of living people's names in caste articles. If specific names are a violation of (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BLP_categories), I agree they should be removed. However, this does not justify removing the entire article or historical context that is verifiable and supported by well-established sources. The article provides valuable historical and sociological context that should not be discarded simply due to concerns over individual names.

    The sources I have used are critical to the article’s depth and accuracy. While there are concerns over the accessibility and page numbers of some sources, I am willing to work to improve verifiability, such as by adding missing page numbers or citing additional resources. According to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Verifiability) and (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources), I aim to improve the article's citation standards, but my main goal is to maintain the article’s historical integrity while complying with Misplaced Pages’s standards for verifiability, neutrality, and reliability.

    (https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Ratnahastin) has raised concerns about the reliability and relevance of these sources, particularly due to their age. However, rather than removing content entirely, I propose that we retain these sources while improving the article’s clarity and citation standards. The article can be collaboratively improved to ensure it meets Misplaced Pages's guidelines while preserving the depth of the subject matter.

    Summary of dispute by Ratnahastin

    The OP does not really understand the purpose of WP:DR. The proper venue for this dispute was WP:RSN. - Ratnahastin (talk) 02:06, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

    I understand your concerns, but I’d appreciate if we could focus on constructive dialogue rather than dismissing my contributions as AI-generated or repetitive. I’ve put in considerable effort into researching and explaining my points here and on RSN, as you’ve acknowledged.
    While RSN focuses strictly on source reliability, this discussion at DRN is broader—it’s about how content sourced from historical documents can be meaningfully incorporated into the article without violating Misplaced Pages’s guidelines like WP:BLP or WP:GSCASTE.
    I’d also like to emphasize that I’m not against incorporating modern tertiary sources. In fact, I’ve already proposed balancing the article with both historical and modern perspectives to ensure neutrality and depth. I am also willing to address verifiability concerns by adding specific page numbers or additional citations.
    Accusing me of forum shopping is inaccurate—I brought the matter to RSN to address the reliability of specific sources, and to DRN to resolve content disputes that go beyond just reliability. These are distinct yet connected aspects of the same issue.
    I hope we can focus on resolving the content dispute collaboratively rather than resorting to unproductive allegations. I look forward to hearing constructive feedback from DRN volunteers or other editors like @Fylingfotberserk and @Ekdalian, whom you’ve pinged. Nlkyair012 05:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

    Kamaria Ahir discussion

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    Thank you for your note. I acknowledge that source reliability is a critical aspect of this dispute, and as you mentioned, I have already brought up this matter on the Reliable Source Noticeboard (RSN) here to evaluate the specific sources in question.
    However, this dispute at DRN extends beyond just the reliability of sources. It involves a broader disagreement over how content from historical sources should be incorporated into the article while balancing compliance with Misplaced Pages's policies like WP:BLP, WP:NPOV, and WP:V.
    Here at DRN, I am seeking resolution on whether the historical context provided by these sources can be retained while ensuring the article aligns with community standards. This involves determining whether to refine, supplement, or restructure the article, rather than removing entire sections or sources outright.
    I appreciate your efforts and hope this clarifies why this discussion is taking place here in addition to RSN. If DRN volunteers feel this still doesn’t meet the scope of this forum, I’d appreciate guidance on next steps. Nlkyair012 05:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

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    Old Government House, Parramatta

    – General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by Itchycoocoo on 06:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC).
    Closed for two reasons. First, the other editor hasn't replied. Second, it's unclear what the dispute even is; it appears to me that it is about large portion of the article being copied from a compatibly licensed source. As long as the appropriate attribution is given, it is legal. The guidelines that the filing editor has mentioned, which disallow copying large portions, are talking about copyrighted material where we don't have explicit permission to use them so we rely on fair use. However, this isn't the case here, as the material is CC-BY licensed. I am not aware of any guideline that forbids articles from being primarily copied from a compatibly licensed source, instead, Misplaced Pages:Plagiarism#Where_to_place_attribution mentions: For sections or whole articles, add a section-wide or article-wide attribution template, so I believe there is no issue here. If there is any other issue, follow WP:BRD. Thanks. Kovcszaln6 (talk) 12:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
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    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

    Location of dispute

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    Dispute overview

    Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article Old Government House, Parramatta that extends to >90% of material from another website.


    The User who posted much of this material contends that "The material is CC-BY licensed, as stated in the edit summary and correctly attributed, which is, and has always been, usable on Misplaced Pages, and was added as part of a massive project by a number of Australian editors to import quality CC-BY content from a number of heritage sources."


    I think that this material should be placed subject under WP:EL/ External Links, and follow the clearly defined rules of WP:COPYPASTE/ Copying text from other sources, WP:Plagiarism & WP:PARAPHRASE guidelines.


    Ignoring the numerous uncivil issues appearing on the Talkpage, the view is using material like this is legalistically quite correct regarding use of non-copyright material, but in my opinion, it exceed any 'fair use' of material in which it is almost completely paraphrased and could even be considered as plagiarism.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    Talk:Old Government House, Parramatta#This is a mess

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Misplaced Pages pages?

    Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant.

    Summary of dispute by The Drover's Wife

    Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

    Old Government House, Parramatta discussion

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    Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House)

    I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read Misplaced Pages:DRN Rule B and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues.

    It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask Itchycoocoo what changes do you want exactly and why? Kovcszaln6 (talk) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)

    I don't really see what "dispute" exist here – this user hasn't even attempted to edit the article other than slapping a copyvio tag on it, and no one has tried to stop them from editing. I have even explicitly invited the user to be bold and edit the article, which they haven't done. Itchycoocoo seems to believe the article is a copyright violation and/or plagiarism, despite three users (myself, The Drover's Wife, and Wizardman) explaining that it is fine to add open-licence text to Misplaced Pages. The editor is welcome to take their issue to a different noticeboard such as Misplaced Pages:Copyright problems but they will get the same answer. Otherwise, again, they are free to make whatever edits they want to the article. I T B F 📢 02:36, 27 December 2024 (UTC)

    Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House)

    Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up.

    I do accept Misplaced Pages DRN Rule B, and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor.

    You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages.

    I will be very happy to do such culling.

    But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Misplaced Pages pages. This is acknowledged.

    However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Misplaced Pages editors. e.g. According to WP:Copypaste "With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism."

    I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article.

    In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Misplaced Pages editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in Close paraphrasing "With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism."

    Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Misplaced Pages page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%?

    If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Misplaced Pages standards. However, looking at the other Misplaced Pages policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users.

    The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail.

    Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic.

    Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome.

    Thanks. Itchycoocoo (talk) 06:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)


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    Imran Khan

    – New discussion. Filed by SheriffIsInTown on 15:56, 26 December 2024 (UTC).

    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

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    Dispute overview

    The content removed in this diff had been part of the article for over six years. It was initially removed by an editor citing WP:BLPGOSSIP and WP:GRAPEVINE. Although I restored it, another editor subsequently removed it again. For context, Reham Khan is a former wife of the subject. After their marriage ended, she authored an autobiography titled Reham Khan (memoir), published by HarperCollins. The author, the book, and the publisher are all notable, with HarperCollins being recognised as “one of the ‘Big Five’ English-language publishers,” as noted in its Misplaced Pages article. The removed content was also supported by five other secondary sources. Given the notability of the author, the book, and the publisher, as well as the reliable reporting, the content merits inclusion in the article. The removal occurred without consensus, despite the content being part of the article for years. The material only reported Reham Khan’s allegations, including claims that Imran Khan shared certain details with her. As Misplaced Pages editors, we are not arbiters of truth but rely on reliable sources. Additionally, Misplaced Pages is not censored.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    Talk:Imran Khan#Reham Khan

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    I am seeking the restoration of the removed content, along with some expansion to include her allegations regarding Imran Khan’s drug use and same-sex tendencies, all of which are supported by her book and other secondary sources.

    Summary of dispute by WikiEnthusiast1001

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    Violates several key Misplaced Pages policies especially Misplaced Pages:BLP, which states "Misplaced Pages is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid: it is not Misplaced Pages's job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives."

    While the book was published by a reputable publisher, Reham Khan's credibility is highly questionable—she has been sued for libel and defamation by one of her former husband's aides. As a result, she lost the case and publicly apologized. This clearly casts doubt on the reliability of her claims. Also, the book was released just 13 days before the 2018 Pakistani general election, suggesting a potential motive for bias.

    The allegations have only been repeated by other sources after she brought them up, and no independent or credible evidence has ever corroborated them. This fails Misplaced Pages's reliable sources policy, which requires independently verifiable claims, not merely echoes of the original source. It also violates NPOV and undue weight policies by giving excessive prominence to a single, uncorroborated perspective. WikiEnthusiast1001 (talk) 10:09, 28 December 2024 (UTC)

    Summary of dispute by Veldsenk

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    Imran Khan discussion

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    2025 Bangladesh Premier League

    – General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by UwU.Raihanur on 02:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC).
    Closed as not an issue for which DRN can be helpful. My advice is similar to that given by User:Doniago in declining your Third Opinion request. Third Opinion and DRN are both for good-faith disagreements between editors who discuss their disagreements. The problem here is an unregistered editor who reverts and does not discuss. My advice concerning unregistered editors (IP addresses) who do not discuss normally is to request semi-protection at Requests for Page Protection, and this is such a case. After the article is semi-protected, you can make your edits, and the article will be read-only for the unregistered editor. This may be an unregistered mobile user who never uses talk pages because they don't know about talk pages and don't know that they have a talk page. This is a problem that we sometimes encounter with mobile users, both registered and unregistered. In any case, I suggest requesting semi-protection. In your request, state that the IP editor reverts but does not discuss. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
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    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

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    Dispute overview

    I’ve been trying to add factual, sourced information to the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League article, but my edits are being reverted without explanation by another editor who hasn’t engaged in discussion despite multiple attempts. I’d like neutral input to resolve whether this edit complies with Misplaced Pages’s policies.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    I have tried to resolve the dispute by initiating discussions at the following locations:

    Talk:2025 Bangladesh Premier League User talk:103.59.179.16 Despite these efforts, the other editor has not engaged in meaningful dialogue.

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    I would appreciate input from neutral editors to determine whether my edit complies with Misplaced Pages's policies on verifiability, reliable sources, and relevance. A third-party perspective can help decide whether the reverted information should remain in the article or if adjustments are necessary to address any concerns. Additionally, guidance on how to handle the lack of engagement from the other editor would be helpful.

    Summary of dispute by 103.59.179.16

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    The editor 103.59.179.16 has reverted my edits to the article multiple times without providing an explanation for the reversions. Despite my attempts to engage in discussions on their user talk page and the article talk page, they have not responded. The disputed content includes factual information about the 2025 Bangladesh Premier League, which is supported by a reliable, verifiable source. The other editor has not presented any concerns regarding the reliability or relevance of the information, nor have they participated in the discussion to clarify their reasons for the reverts.

    2025 Bangladesh Premier League discussion

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    2. "Reham Khan's book 'available in paperback in UK'". The News (Pakistan). 12 July 2018. Reham's book, published online today, has triggered debate on social media with many saying that she is doing all this on the behest of Pakistan Muslim League Nawaz to tarnish the image of Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf Chairman Imran Khan just before the July 25 polls.
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