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1) Disagreement on if ] is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows ]/] & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows ] advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included. | |||
I (Dawud) wrote most of the "Orthodox Christianity in Taiwan" article. This history can be divided into a Japanese era (1895-1945), a White Russian-dominated era (1949-1970's), and a contemporary (post-2000) era in which several rival Orthodox jurisdictions have established missionary churches. Some editor, or combination of editors (I suspect several of being the same person, in view of the obscurity of the subject and the similarity of their edits), have then been erasing the half of the article that covers the post-2000 period--i.e., the period characterized by the most controversy--leaving only the beginning. The most plausible explanation is that the other editor(s) belong(s) to one of these churches (perhaps he is even a priest), and desires to keep embarassing or controversial material related to himself or his church off of Misplaced Pages. I am at a loss for how to prevent this person or persons from doing this. | |||
2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus. | |||
3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose. | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | ||
*Current discussion: ] | |||
I initiated a discussion on the talk page, and waited several weeks. Maproom responded, but in a perfunctory manner. | |||
*Previous discussion: ] | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | ||
An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a ] until the dispute is resolved. | |||
I don't know. I would appreciate advice on this point. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by |
==== Summary of dispute by BMWF ==== | ||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | <div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | ||
<p>I agree with user Maproom. The article is very disproportionate on the post 2000 era. In addition, the discussion of the alleged Greek drug dealer has nothing to do with the topic of Orthodox Christianity in Taiwan that the page is supposed to be about. On the contrary, it feels more like a personal attack to the priest (Fr Jonah). It is also worth mentioning that the reported drug dealer was acquitted of all of his charges by the Greek courts. Lastly, the link provided on the dealer's name, Christodoulos, links to the late archbishop of Athens, Greece, a completely different person than the alleged drug dealer. </p> | |||
<p>Another issue is the discussion along the topic of the excommunication of Fr. Kirill and his parishioner. The facts are not presented objectively there, since they do not give the whole account of the Metropolitan of Hong Kong. Unless the article were to present all of the arguments of the Metropolitan, it cannot be objective. More importantly, the whole discussion there seems like pursuing a real-world dispute. As user Maproom also mentioned, Misplaced Pages's articles purpose is to inform the readers, and not to pursue such real-world disputes.</p> | |||
<p>By the way, in response to Dawud's suspicion, I would like to say that I am *not* the same person as user Maproom. The fact that we might share some opinions does not make us the same person.</p> | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94 ==== | ||
The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion: | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to ], and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Maproom ==== | |||
The history of the Orthodox Church in Taiwan goes back over 100 years. At present most of the article is about a dispute, starting 10 years ago, between the leaders of the Greek and the Russian Orthodox churches there. I believe that this is disproportionate, and I said so on the talk page. I removed much of this material, but it has been restored. In particular, an account of the arrest of a Greek drug dealer, without any claim that he represents the Greek Orthodox church, appears to have very little relevance to the subject of the article. | |||
2. Including the ] player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much ''Dragon Age: Veilguard'' has sold. | |||
I am reminded of the article ], most of which is about an ongoing dispute over whether a McDonalds should be built in the town. In both cases, an article is being used to pursue a real-world dispute, rather than to inform readers. ] (]) 08:14, 6 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms". | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Ukexpat ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
4. The invoking of ] while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews". | |||
=== Orthodox Christianity in Taiwan discussion === | |||
Hello, I am ] and will try to mediate here if there is no objections. Having reviewed the section in dispute, I notice that it to a large degree involves living persons which means that ] applies. Good sourcing is extremely important for all coverage of living persons, especially if the material about the persons can be perceived as negative. We will only include conflicts etc. in articles if it has been covered in ''independent'' ], meaning that we will not cover conflicts if the sources are mainly ] etc. Do all parties agree with this? So question for ]: The paragraphs about the conflict involving Fr. Kirill seems to rely on only self-published sources and not sources from news organizations etc. Do you agree that this is the case? And: What is the relationship between Apostolos Vavylis and the Orthodox community in Taiwan that makes the story about him relevant for the article on the latter? Regards, ] (]) 15:28, 10 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). ] (]) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:On the question of proportionality, I would love to see additional material added on the earlier eras. Unfortunately, we are limited to what we have. Naturally there is more information about the post-2000 era. Given that, I would rather have more complete information about the post-2000 churches, even if it makes the section larger. After all, if the article cannot describe the situation of Orthodoxy in Taiwan today, then it is not good for very much. Also, given the presence of multiple Orthodox jurisidctions (i.e. OMHKSEA and Moscow), it may be that the details will inevitably be more complicated than in earlier, more unified eras. | |||
=== Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion === | |||
:One poster complained about the lack of detail given to the OCA church in Taizhong (Taichung), a church about which I know nothing. I would love to have this information myself (even an address). | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both {{reply to|Wikibenboy94|p=}} and I agree that there are no ] issues in the topline summary sentences removed by {{reply to|BMWF|p=}} in and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute. | |||
:The paragraph about the conflict between OMHKSEA and Fr. Kirill comes from OMHKSEA's official website. There were two such statements, one of them being the text of a formal notice of excommunication of Fr. Kirill and a parishioner, Seraphim William Davidson. To my knowledge, neither Fr. Kirill nor any other Russian authority has formally responded (and I do not expect them to do so in the future). The fact that Orthodoxy in Taiwan is presently divided between (at least) two distinct groups, one of which has excommunicated the other, is surely noteworthy (I guarantee you that the participants find it noteworthy), and the facts are sufficiently established by the links provided. | |||
In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: {{xt|''Veilguard'' was also subject to ] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "]". Some outlets noted that {{underline|while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative,}} the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on ], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove {{underline|offensive}} reviews}}. ] (]) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Apostolos Vavylis (or Vavilis) has a connection with Taiwan, in the sense that certain Taiwan "friends" (later revealed to be Fr. Jonah--he is named in that Greek-language academic article) helped him evade INTERPOL, e.g. by helping him acquire false identity documents. (He was finally caught traveling from Thailand to Italy.) Fr. Jonah was never charged, but Vavylis certainly was (AFAIK he is still in prison on various charges, including drug dealing and racketeering). Archbishop Christodoulos died shortly afterwards. Anyway, the upshot of all this is that Taiwan's then-only Orthodox priest was proven to have participated (albeit tangentially) in the biggest scandal in Orthodox Church in recent years. Surely this is noteworthy. If it is negative, well, then perhaps Fr. Jonah should have thought about that before getting involved with organized crime.] (]) 00:33, 11 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
::On the conflict between OMHKSEA and Fr. Kirill: The only sources here are from OMHKSEA and it involves claims about Fr. Kirill. This is not acceptable per ]: "Living persons may publish material about themselves, such as through press releases or personal websites. Such material may be used as a source ''only if'': it is not unduly self-serving; ''it does not involve claims about third parties''". So, I don't see how we can include this conflict based on one party's presentation of it. I have no doubt that this conflict is noteworthy for the Orthodox community itself, but that is not the standard for what is notable for inclusion in a Misplaced Pages article. For Misplaced Pages, notability depends on coverage in independent reliable sources, typically newspapers etc. If you think otherwise, I will suggest you bring this part of the dispute to the BLP noticeboard. About Fr. Jonah: I also here see BLP concerns. You say he is ''proven'' to have participated in the Vavylis scandal. But is this really proven when Fr Jonah has not been charged or convicted of anything? We have to be very careful about making edits that imply a Living Person has been involved in a crime or scandal and should only include it if it has been well covered in reliable sources.I cannot read the academic article that is in Greek. Can you translate what the document says about Fr. Jonah (the most relevant part). And who has written the paper? Regards, ] (]) 08:05, 11 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::Butting in here, there are no current guidelines regarding nations and religions, unfortunately. but in general the way I have seen other sources cover such topics is basically with the following construction: (1) history, (2) current organization and numbers, in this case probably structural organization, like (if applicable) the archbishops(s) and archeparchies or archdioceses, number of dioceses and parishes, and the approximate current number of members (3) local practices (national observations of specific holidays, for instance), (4) some discussion (which varies a lot) on the role the group plays in ecumenical matters in the country, (5) local practices (do Muslim women wear the ] and that sort of "local" color), (6) notable individuals (if any) from the church and religion, like theologians, saints, etc., (6) other things, including perhaps really prominent tourism/pilgrimage affairs, buildings, works of art (maybe), controversy and other things. I'm guessing in this case the Fr. Kirill matter would fall in the 6th field, but getting together some material like that I discuss above, maybe roughly following the model of the ''Worldmark Encyclopedia of Religious Practices'' and any other reference books which have articles relating to similar national organization of churches articles, might be at least a starting point. ] (]) 23:33, 13 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
::::The orthodox community in Taiwan is very small. Last estimate was 200 persons in 1965. If I am correct in my understanding, there is a split betweeen the Greek church(Fr Jonah) and the Russian church (Fr Kirill). So, an oversight over which churches/congregations that are operating today will of course be fine. This was partly done in the disputed section (now edited out), and some of the organisational stuff be edited in again; but in my opinion it should be cleaned for unsourced (or primary sourced) stuff related to conflicts and for trivia. | |||
:Pinging ] and ]. Do you have any comments to what has been said so far? Regards, ] (]) 20:41, 14 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
::I am happy with the way this is being handled. Thank you, ], for your efforts. ] (]) 21:25, 14 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
::I am also happy with the way this is being handled. Just to clarify: you are suggesting on removing the conflicted parts of the article, e.g. the Apostolos Vavylis issue and the discussion around the split? Thanks for your help ]! Regards, ] (]) 20:41, 15 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
:::I am suggesting removing ''most'' of the conflicted material. Below is my suggestion for the most that can reasonably be retained of it (it still gives what I consider undue weight to the events of the last 13#4 years). ] (]) 20:49, 15 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
====Global era (2000-present)==== | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
In 2000, a Greek hieromonk, Fr. Jonah (Mourtos) of Osiou Gregoriou monastery (Mount Athos), | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read ] and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. | |||
arrived, under the auspices of the recently-created Orthodox Metropolitanate of Hong Kong | |||
] (]) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
and Southeast Asia (OMHKSEA, f. 1996, and affiliated with the Ecumenical Patriarch), and | |||
with financial backing from the Kosmas Aitolos Missionary Society of Greece. A small regular | |||
congregation of perhaps 30 people formed as the Holy Trinity Orthodox Church (Taipei), a.k.a. | |||
the Orthodox Church in Taiwan. It originally met in hotels and borrowed Catholic | |||
church buildings, then in a rented storefront in Taipei's Tianmu district, before moving | |||
to a private apartment. The congregation has included Russians, East Europeans, and Chinese | |||
and Western converts. Liturgy is conducted in English, with parts translated into Chinese, | |||
Russian, and/or Greek. A satellite group, led by a lay reader, has been meeting in Taizhong. | |||
:Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). ] (]) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
In 2012, Archbishop Mark of Yegorievsk, head of the Russian church's Office for Institutions | |||
Abroad, "reactivated" the (1901) Christ the Savior parish, apparently in response to numerous | |||
requests from Russians living in Taiwan. The following year, the Church of the Elevation of | |||
the Cross, aka the Taiwan Orthodox Church, was formed as a metochion of the Moscow Patriarchate, | |||
with Russo-Canadian hieromonk Fr. Kirill (Shkarbul) as its first resident priest. It also meets | |||
in a private apartment. Liturgy is conducted in Russian, Chinese, and English. | |||
====Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)==== | |||
Bishop Nektarios (Tsilis) of Hong Kong (OMHKSEA) responded by excommunicating Fr. Kirill and one | |||
I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that ] is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of ] applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in. | |||
of his parishioners, both of whom had formerly attended the OMHKSEA mission church, on the charge | |||
] (]) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
of uncanonical behavior and "ethno-phyletism." At issue is whether the Moscow Patriarchate has | |||
the right to establish parishes outside of Russia, in what OMHKSEA considers to be territory under | |||
the jurisdiction of the Ecumenical Patriarch. | |||
===Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
In Taiping District, Taichung, there is said to be a house church belonging to the Orthodox Church | |||
I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined , I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed & ), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. ] (]) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
in America (OCA). If so, it would constitute a third Orthodox jurisdiction | |||
on the island. | |||
===First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to ] and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to ]. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response. | |||
Are there any other questions? ] (]) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::I'm generally happy with the above version. However, I'm not sure if the discussion around the excommunication of Fr. Kirill should be included; I'm saying this because of an earlier comment by ], where it was mentioned that including the OMHKSEA-Fr. Kirill conflict is not acceptable per ]. Regards, ] (]) 21:46, 15 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
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:I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. ] (]) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC) | ||
::I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. ] (]) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:::::Thanks so much for the suggestion. I think it would be best to leave out the third paragraph, although I understand why you might want to mention the territory dispute. But we should be careful about writing about conflicts that have not been covered in independent sources (newspapers etc), especially if it involves ] . In my personal opinion some of the information about where the meetings have taken place can also be shortened, but that's just my personal taste. I believe an underlying issue here is that the community is so small that not much are written about them in papers and so. And then there isn't so much for Misplaced Pages to include either. I wouldn't worry to much about undue weight, as long as the information is neutral; besides some of this deals with the contemporary situation, and it's normal that we focus more on the contempary than the history. Might be time to ping ] again to here his opinion of the above suggestion. Regards, ] (]) 17:04, 16 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
===First statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
::::::It seems that we have no argument about including basic information on the several Orthodox churches on the island. So that is welcome progress. | |||
::::::On the Fr. Jonah / Apostolos Vavilis connection, I am still waiting for my friend to translate the relevant passages of that article (written, I believe, by a law professor). Also, Fr. Jonah entered a written statement to the court which someone may yet succeed in getting ahold of. It seems, however, that the stance now being proposed is this information would be irrelevant to the article, even if documented by reliable sources. I am on the fence about this. I admit that the connection seems not to have affected the churches in question, or Taiwan, in any appreciable way. On the other hand, the Taiwan-Vavilis connection has been mentioned, in passing, in the international press (some in English), without naming Fr. Jonah directly. | |||
===Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)=== | |||
::::::On the inter-jurisdictional dispute, the fact that the dispute exists is to my mind demonstrated by the two announcements of it on the OMHKSEA website. (Misplaced Pages would not be affirming a website-based claim about a third party, i.e. that the Russians have behaved uncanonically, but reporting the testimony of OMKHSEA about their own actions.) The fact that the two churches are out of communion with one another is a crucial fact about Orthodoxy in Taiwan.] (]) 06:14, 18 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about ], so that we can read a description of the review bombing. | |||
:::::::I see the point that it is of interest that the two churches are Out of communion with each other, and as long as we focuses on churches rather than persons, the information is less sensitive. Whether we should include it may depend on how clear-cut vs. messy the situation is. I usually prefer to use primary sources only for basic information that is clear-cut and not needs much interpretation etc. But I am open to others perspective here. I don't think Fr Jonah's statement to the court can be used as a source for Misplaced Pages, per ]. Regards, 18:20, 19 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement. | |||
::::::::The nature of the disagreement seems clear-cut to me: OMHKSEA has announced that it objects to the establishment of the Moscow-affiliated church, on the grounds that this constitutes ethno-phyletism and is uncanonical (due to jurisdictional issues). I suppose it is not crucial to specify that Fr. Kirill was excommunicated by OMHKSEA. | |||
I don't understand what the ] issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the ] issue is. So please state more specifically what the ] issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a ] issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it. | |||
::::::::In that case, can we agree to include basic information about the two (or three) churches; to omit the paragraph about Fr. Jonah / Vavylis / the Greek scandal; and to abbreviate the section on the dispute?] (]) 12:13, 20 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
Please provide your rewritten sections. | |||
Hi, I'm a DRN volunteer. From what I can tell of the discussion in the last few interchanges, it appears that there's a solutiopn being formed without any assistance of a DRN volunteer. I'd like to suggest that this negotiation/concensus building happen back on the article's talk page and close down the discussion here. Pending significant objection, I intend to close this discussion in 72 hours. ] (]) 20:56, 21 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
Are there any other questions? | |||
::::Hi ], thanks for your message. I mainly agree with ]'s suggestion; however, I'm still skeptical as to whether the whole excommunication issue/dispute should be included at all. This is because if this part were to be included, then one would have to mention other things about Fr. Kirill and his parishioner that are mentioned in the OMHSHEA press release; but in that case we'd fall back to the whole argument about sensitive information regarding biographies on living persons (]). So I'd be inclined to suggest removing any discussion on this dispute. Regards, ] (]) 19:37, 23 October 2013 (UTC) <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) </span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
] (]) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
===Second statements by editors (Dragon Age)=== | |||
== Azerbaijanis in Armenia == | |||
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;Lead | |||
''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' released for ], ], and ] on October 31, 2024. {{strikethrough|After release ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record.}} The game received generally positive reviews from critics, '''who praised its cast, representation of ] characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat'''. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the ] and Innovation in Accessibility at ]. | |||
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¶1 ''Dragon Age: The Veilguard'' received "generally favorable" reviews from critics {{strikethrough|for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions}} according to the ] website ].<ref name="MC XSXS Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://www.metacritic.com/game/dragon-age-the-veilguard/critic-reviews/?platform=xbox-series-x |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard (Xbox Series X Critic Reviews) |website=] |access-date=December 4, 2024}}</ref> ] determined that 68% of critics recommended the game.<ref name="OC Reviews">{{cite web |url=https://opencritic.com/game/17037/dragon-age-the-veilguard |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Reviews |website=] |access-date=November 12, 2024}}</ref> ''Veilguard'' was subject to ] on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "]". '''{{underline|Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative}}''', the user reviews of ''Veilguard'' on ], '''which requires users to play the game before leaving a review''', have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove '''offensive reviews'''.<ref>{{Cite news |date=2024-11-05 |title=Metacritic responds after Dragon Age: The Veilguard review bombing |url=https://www.eurogamer.net/metacritic-responds-after-dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing |access-date=2024-11-06 |work=Eurogamer.net |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age The Veilguard is getting review bombed, and now Metacritic has something to say |url=https://www.pcgamesn.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard/metacritic-respond-review-bomb |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=PCGamesN |language=en-US}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Watson |first=Philip |date=2024-11-05 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's Poor Review Bombing Leads To Metacritic Response |url=https://www.cgmagonline.com/news/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bombing/ |access-date=2024-11-06 |website=] |language=en-CA}}</ref> | |||
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¶2 Hayes Madsen of '']'' called ''Veilguard'' a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset".<ref name=":2">{{Cite magazine |last=Madsen |first=Hayes |date=2024-10-28 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Is a Return to Form for a Beloved RPG Franchise |url=https://www.rollingstone.com/culture/rs-gaming/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-1235144960/ |access-date=2024-10-29 |magazine=Rolling Stone |language=en-US}}</ref> Leana Hafer for '']'' similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character".<ref name=":1">{{Cite web |last=Hafer |first=Leana |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Review |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review |access-date=2024-10-29 |website=] |language=en}}</ref> Andy Bickerton of ] viewed the game as a "well-executed ]". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of ''Veilguard''{{'}}s near-decade of troubled production".<ref name=":11">{{Cite news |last=Bickerton |first=Andy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Tonally inconsistent 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' is still BioWare's best action game |url=https://www.npr.org/2024/10/28/nx-s1-5165587/dragon-age-veilguard-review-story-tone |access-date=November 29, 2024 |work=]}}</ref> Lauren Morton of ''PC Gamer'' thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than ] at moments".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev">{{cite web |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review/ |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=]}}</ref> | |||
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¶3 '''Critics were mixed on the game's story.''' Matt Purslow from ''IGN'' '''thought that''' ''Veilguard'' was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric.<ref>{{cite web|url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-is-at-war-with-itself|title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Is at War With Itself|first=Matt|last=Purslow|work=]|date=November 9, 2024|accessdate=November 10, 2024}}</ref> Malindy Hetfeld of '']'' '''criticized''' the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in ''Veilguard'', describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions".<ref name="Guardian review">{{cite web |last=Hetfeld |first=Malindy |date=October 28, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard review — a good RPG, but an underwhelming Dragon Age game |url=https://www.theguardian.com/games/2024/oct/28/dragon-age-the-veilguard-review-bioware-electronic-arts |access-date=October 28, 2024 |website=]}}</ref> She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer opined that ''Veilguard'' has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas.<ref name=":1" /> Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey.<ref name=":2" /> Ash Parrish of '']'' appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice".<ref name="Verge full review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-11-28 |title=The hardest part of Dragon Age: The Veilguard is making a choice |url=https://www.theverge.com/24307786/dragon-age-the-veilguard-full-review |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref> Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative,<ref name="Verge early review">{{Cite web |last=Parrish |first=Ash |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard starts slow but strong |url=https://www.theverge.com/24281631/dragon-age-the-veilguard-early-review-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=The Verge |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":2" /><ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name="PCGUS Morton rev"/><ref name=":3">{{Cite web |last=Hashimoto |first=Kazuma |date=2024-10-28 |title=I Played 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' and Got Myself Stuck in a Gay Love Triangle |url=https://www.them.us/story/dragon-age-the-veilguard-lgbtq-romance-options-essay-lucanis-davrin |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Them |language=en-US}}</ref> with some finding major decisions "few and far between".<ref name="Guardian review" /><ref name=":2" /> | |||
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¶4 Madsen praised ''Veilguard'' for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot".<ref name=":2" /> Todd Harper of '']'' emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways".<ref name=":4">{{Cite web |last=Harper |first=Todd |date=2024-10-28 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the friend group simulator we've been waiting for |url=https://www.polygon.com/review/470712/review-dragon-age-the-veilguard-ps5-xbox-pc |access-date=2024-10-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Kazuma Hashimoto of '']'' commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions.<ref name=":3"/> Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in ''Veilguard'', highlighting that unlike previous ''Dragon Age'' games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path.<ref name="Verge full review" /> Conversely, Oliver Brandt of '']'' viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other ''Dragon Age'' games.<ref name=":8">{{Cite web |last=Brandt |first=Oliver |date=2024-10-31 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard is the first triple-A game to handle gender identity the right way |url=https://www.si.com/videogames/features/dragon-age-the-veilguard-taash-gender-identity |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=] |language=en-US}}</ref> Harvey Randall of ''PC Gamer'' highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity.<ref name=":9" /> Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations,<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev" /> noting that "good people don't make great characters".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts.<ref name="PCGUS Morton companions rev">{{Cite news |last=Morton |first=Lauren |date=2024-11-15 |title=The Veilguard is the first Dragon Age game where my companions don't care enough about anything to argue with me |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/the-veilguard-is-the-first-dragon-age-game-where-my-companions-dont-care-enough-about-anything-to-argue-with-me/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> | |||
¶5 '''''Veilguard'' generally received praise for its inclusive ] and representation of ] and ] characters.'''<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":14">{{Cite web |last=Mora |first=Alyssa |date=September 19, 2024 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard Preview: BioWare Finally Nails The Character Creator I've Always Wanted |url=https://www.ign.com/articles/dragon-age-the-veilguard-preview-bioware-finally-nails-the-character-creator-ive-always-wanted |access-date=November 30, 2024 |website=IGN |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":10">{{Cite web |last=Bea |first=Robin |date=2024-11-06 |title='Dragon Age: The Veilguard' Makes Me Feel Seen As a Trans Player, But Still Disappointed |url=https://www.inverse.com/gaming/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-characters |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=Inverse |language=en}}</ref><ref name=":12">{{Cite web |last=Henley |first=Stacey |date=2024-11-06 |title=Why Dragon Age: The Veilguard Uses The Term 'Non-Binary' |url=https://www.thegamer.com/dragon-age-the-veilguard-non-binary-modern-immersion-breaking/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=TheGamer |language=en}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Puc |first=Samantha |date=2024-11-03 |title=This 'Dragon Age: The Veilguard' companion's story ruined me in the best way |url=https://www.themarysue.com/this-dragon-age-the-veilguard-companions-story-ruined-me-in-the-best-way/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |website=The Mary Sue}}</ref><ref>{{Cite web |last=Marshall |first=Cass |date=2024-11-01 |title=How role-playing a trans or nonbinary Rook works in Dragon Age: The Veilguard |url=https://www.polygon.com/gaming/472513/dragon-age-veilguard-trans-nonbinary-identity-role-play |access-date=2024-11-30 |website=Polygon |language=en-US}}</ref> Alyssa Mora of ''IGN'' emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless".<ref name=":14" /> Both Robin Bea of '']'' and Brandt commended Taash's story arc,<ref name=":8" /><ref name=":10" /> with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", ''Vanguard'' "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary".<ref name=":8" /> Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in ''Veilguard'' in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a ] narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character".<ref name=":10" /> Stacey Henley of '']'' appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to ''Inquisition''{{'s}} ], though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking".<ref name=":12" /> Randall was more critical, noting how ''Veilguard'' "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context".<ref name=":9">{{Cite news |last=Randall |first=Harvey |date=2024-11-13 |title=Dragon Age: The Veilguard's leap forward in trans inclusion comes from a heartfelt place, but its problems left me feeling frustrated, angry, and tired |url=https://www.pcgamer.com/games/dragon-age/dragon-age-the-veilguards-leap-forward-in-trans-inclusion-comes-from-a-heartfelt-place-but-its-problems-left-me-feeling-frustrated-angry-and-tired/ |access-date=2024-11-29 |work=PC Gamer |language=en}}</ref> They found the lack of a fictional ] connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting".<ref name=":9" /> | |||
¶6 '''Critics enjoyed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat.''' Bickerton felt that ''Veilguard''{{'}}s strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish".<ref name=":11" /> He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players.<ref name=":11" /> Hetfeld viewed ''Veilguard''{{'}}s combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games.<ref name="Guardian review" /> Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat.<ref name=":1" /> Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars".<ref name="Verge full review" /> Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than ''Inquisition'' and the ''Mass Effect'' games.<ref name=":4" /> Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor",<ref name=":1" /> and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous".<ref name=":4" /> Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design".<ref name="Verge early review" /> Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points".<ref name=":11" /> Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of ''Veilguard''. She found it was better off for removing ''Inquisition''{{'}}s "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings".<ref name="PCGUS Morton rev" /> | |||
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In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). ] (]) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. ] (]) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place. | |||
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] (]) 04:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? ] (]) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Autism == | |||
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Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society. | |||
I am for adding two historical photos of Azerbaijanis, lived in the territory of the modern Armenia. ] and ]. The first one is the postcard of the Russian empire showing the photo of Azerbaijanis from Gyumri. The second one is the photo of noble Azeris from Erivan (nowadays Yerevan) published in two academic books. But user Hablabar is against these images. He thinks that they are forged photofiles (but still didn't show any reason). | |||
On Misplaced Pages, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all. | |||
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Misplaced Pages has quite detailed guidelines for what to do ''within'' medicine, or ''outside'' of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about ''whether'' something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years. | |||
We started the discussion on the talk page but reached the dead end. | |||
This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways. | |||
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A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"? | |||
Offering an outside opinion on the relevance of policies like ] and ] | |||
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There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the ''route'' to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Misplaced Pages guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов ==== | |||
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The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity. | |||
This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). | |||
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This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see ]. | |||
I dont know if a have rights for it but I'd like to add few words. The topic of AA relations is sensitive. We have two photoes of uncertain origin. Interfase gives a Livejournal account and an unknown Azeri author as sources. Both pictures are not listed at the Russian specialized catalogues, including the RusCards. Previously there were scandals of photoe's and document's forgery (f.e. related to ] and ). I'd prefer to wait for a more reliable source. ] (]) 05:47, 18 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted. | |||
=== Azerbaijanis in Armenia discussion === | |||
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'''DRN coordinator's note:''' Please see the Photo of Azerbaijanis in Gyumri dispute, above, involving this same image. — ] (]) 14:47, 16 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs. | |||
'''DRN volunteer's note:''' Interfase has recently become subject to a 1RR restriction under the Armenia-Azerbaijan 2 Arbitration case. ] (]) 16:08, 16 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
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While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations. | |||
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Yes, as ] says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here. | |||
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There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
:I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Misplaced Pages. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. ] (]) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
::I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what. | |||
* {{pagelinks|United Nations Partition Plan for Palestine}} | |||
::My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Misplaced Pages'). ] (]) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
* {{User|Ykantor}} | |||
* {{User| Trahelliven}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
Dear volunteer, please have a look at this issue.I have simplified the dispute to quotations deletion only, in order to attract a volunteer here. My Past DRNs has expired without solution, so I am eager to have a at least this one solved. The other disputant may reply with other problems as well, but I prefer one solved limited issue rather than a big issue with no solution. ] (]) 09:37, 18 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8 ==== | |||
] deleted | |||
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. Once he was asked for the reasons, with strange / bizarre reasons. e.g. | |||
* ''He deleted "Lapidot1994p52" since this RS is based on one of the sides only''. Well, this is not true, and even if hypothetically it was correct, the RS is allow to use such a document. | |||
* ''He deleted quotes because they partially support the article, and does not support it fully''. Even if this is correct, he could ask for better quotes but it is not a reason to delete quotes. | |||
* He delays the discussion by avoiding replying to some points, give partial explanation, try to retard the discussion by ''"We need to take this one step at a time."''. I feel like being in a war of attrition. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by TempusTacet ==== | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing ==== | |||
I have tried to explain myself and replied to his bizarre notes, but during each round he comes with a fresh story. | |||
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I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{tl|MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). ] (]) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span> | |||
:@], let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the ] section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the ] process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use ] if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph. | |||
by convincing either of us, that he is wrong. | |||
:(I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) ] (]) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion ==== | ||
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The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. ] (]) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by ] below, as well as ], and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the ''Zeroeth statements by editors'' section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section. | |||
Ytantor has made several edits to '''Reports of pressure against the Plan''' in the last few days. I shall therefore comment on the article as it now stands. | |||
:Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. ] (]) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:1 Similar to what in the opening sentence? | |||
:2 The phrase, '''The Arab states threatened that''' creates appalling grammar, syntax and structure. | |||
:3 When there is no indication of where or when, or the circumstances in which the various statements were made, it is impossible for anyone even to look for evidence to discredit them. If Muhammad Hussein Heykal made his remark when addressing the General Assembly, in his case, a reference to the transcript or to another UN document would help. '''According to xx or yy''' should be added. | |||
I shall now go through the other quotations. | |||
:4 and 6 The reference to Muhammad Hussein Heykal and the 1,000,000 Jews is duplicated. | |||
:5 Can Jack Brian Bloom be regarded as a Reliable Source. (Also see 3 above.) | |||
:7 The opening sentence by Malka Hillel Shulewitz? is just speculation. | |||
At least one quotation (8 -Rut Lapidot; Moshe Hirsch (1994). has not been reinstated. Can I take it that its deletion has been conceded? ] (]) 07:10, 17 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 ==== | |||
On reflection, I shall explain the reason for the deletion of the four (4) quotes. | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller"> (Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. ] (]) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC) </div> | |||
: ref group=qt name="morris2008p67"/> | |||
::The quote does not support the part referenced. | |||
:ref group=qt name="unispal.un.org"/> | |||
::The quotation refers to the rejection of a '''specific''' plan of partition: the article generalises to mean the rejection of '''any''' plan of partition. The quote talks about certain Arab leaders: the part referenced generalizes it to '''The Arabs'''. | |||
:ref group=qt name="Morris2008p50"/> | |||
::This quote does not give details of where or when, or the circumstances in which the remark was made. It is impossible to investigate whether the comment was or was not made. At the very least, it should be prefaced with '''According to Benny Morris,''' | |||
:ref group=qt name="Lapidot1994p52"/> | |||
::The quotation comes from a document described on page 49 of the Selected Documents as '''Memorandum on the Future of Jerusalem submitted to the U.N. General Assembly by the Delegation of Israel to the U.N., 15 November 1949'''. The Memorandum is hardly a Reliable Source. ] (]) 18:31, 17 October 2013 (UTC) ] (]) 20:18, 17 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
==== Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo ==== | |||
=== United Nations Partition Plan for Palestine discussion === | |||
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{{hat|Comment in your own section. ] (]) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
''Note: Editor is "]" and will not be participating.'' --] (]) 09:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
{{hab}} | |||
=== Autism discussion === | |||
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== Percy Flowers == | |||
===Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)=== | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} <!-- Bot Case ID (please don't modify): 926 --> | |||
I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on ] and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include; | |||
{{drn filing editor|Martylunsford|01:52, 19 October 2013 (UTC)}} | |||
*Be ]. Civility is required everywhere in Misplaced Pages, and is essential to resolving content disputes. | |||
{{DRN archive top|reason=No extensive talk page discussion as required by this noticeboard. If the other editor will not discuss, consider following the recommendations made ]. — ] (]) 21:15, 20 October 2013 (UTC)}} | |||
*Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a ] is likely to ignore it. | |||
*Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community. | |||
*Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article. | |||
*Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved. | |||
In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the ] of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form). | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
I don't yet know whether ] is the right forum to resolve disputes about ], but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
] (]) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)? | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
:I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you. | |||
* {{pagelinks|Percy Flowers}} | |||
:Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
:I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is (published in the ) and ], posted here and . You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. ] (]) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
* {{User|Martylunsford}} | |||
* {{User| thall0515}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
===First statement by possible moderator (Autism)=== | |||
User thall0515 appears to have a personal interest in the article about ]. The user keeps removing the very information which makes the subject of the article notable. That information might be considered derogatory by some people, but the derogatory information is factual and links to the sources of the information are provided. | |||
I asked for specific statements of how the ] should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read ]. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of ] describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the ] should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by ], and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by ]. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the ] standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary ]. | |||
If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the ]. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the ], and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised ]. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as '''First statements by editors (Autism)''', because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic ] are met. | |||
I left a comment in the edit summary of a prior revision asking them to discuss the revisions on the talk page, and I left a comment on the talk page. They have not responded. | |||
After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the ], I will know better whether ] is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? ] (]) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span> | |||
:Thanks @]! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years. | |||
I'm not sure how the process for dispute resolution works, so maybe you can just let me know if I'm starting the process properly. | |||
:@] has ] - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there? | |||
:I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Misplaced Pages guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... ] (]) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
::::@]@] I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample): | |||
:::::: " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. " | |||
::] (]) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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=== Percy Flowers discussion === | |||
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== Sri Lankan Vellalar == | |||
== Directed energy weapons, and the Talk page == | |||
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* {{User|Luigi Boy}} | ||
* {{User| Looie496}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources. | |||
The user Batvette is removing a lot of the info I have inserted and repeatedly refuses to go into detail as to why. | |||
Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts. | |||
1 or 2 other users have similarly removed information without having any proper discussion. The nature of the information is indicative of why they want it removed in my opinion, and it is unsurprising that there are one or two names(maybe the same person or not) doing the same thing. | |||
We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?'''</span> | |||
Continuous discussion on an ongoing basis continually inviting those participating to be specific as to why they think information should be removed or is not valid. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span> | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?'''</span> | |||
Really I think the other user(s) just need to be told that they have to go into detail and they can't just remove things without being civil and discussing finer points. There approach has been dismissive, discourteous and disrespectful. | |||
This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by (Radicalmix66-me) ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy ==== | |||
My issues are pretty much as outlined above and mentioned on the talk page. | |||
First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed: | |||
- Terminology differences | |||
The users will endlessly repeat inflammatory accusations and say anything bar actually focusing on the nitty gritty of what they believe to be innaccurate. | |||
- The inclusion of the mythology section | |||
My references are mostly the military themselves and those that are not are also reliable (That is not to say that what every military says is reliable! But they have given no reason to believe that the information provided by US/Uk military etc is not). | |||
'''Terminology Differences''' | |||
I am continuing constructive discussion on the talk page despite negative and highly repetitive attempts to derail valid pertinent contributions. | |||
The root of the terminology issue stems from my , where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were ]. | |||
I have guided this to focusing on the detail, although whether they join in or not we shall see. | |||
] (]) 19:23, 20 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically: | |||
- {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}} refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the ]. | |||
- {{Langx|ta|வெள்ளாளர்|Veḷḷāḷar}} represents the caste name in contemporary usage. | |||
Ok so the last edit by me was yesterday. Since I filed this complaint; the attacks on this article have aggressively expanded. The insulting and subjective language is used by almost all of those who have removed information. | |||
This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste ] often uses this term {{Langx|ta|வேளாளர்|Vēḷāḷar}}, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms. | |||
'''Inclusion of the Mythology Section''' | |||
I have tried to present facts (which indicate what meagre details have been released) about what is essentially an untold history of DEWs. | |||
The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well. | |||
Those who do not want that history to be told are acting extremely aggressively and in numbers. Much of the information they have removed was on the page for months through many edits. | |||
The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste. | |||
The talk page is out of hand so for the purposes of not making this matter isurmountably long, I am awaiting intervention before making further edits. | |||
] (]) 18:33, 21 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
'''Third-Party Opinion''' | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Batvette ==== | |||
Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed ] or not ], the concerned user should raise the issue on ]. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated. | |||
First off it's ridiculous to say I haven't offered reasoning why, I said so on the talk page repeatedly. The material he keeps reinserting is typical conspiracy theory stuff that has no basis in fact and cannot be verified by reliable sources. To wit, it is meant to imply that DEW is actively now being used as "Info Ops" in the US and UK against individuals, and is deployed on satellites in space. The references either don't come close to supporting that or one must take a bit of info from each and synthesize it to a further leap to imagine the claim. I provided a link to the ] describing how this tactic is forbidden. It says ''Sources '''must support the material clearly and directly:''' drawing inferences from multiple sources to advance a novel position is prohibited by the NOR policy'' and it takes about 5 seconds with each claim to see they are not clearly and directly supported. The only reason this content dispute even exists is because nobody has strongly enforced wiki policy yet.I will finally note that I concur with Looie's assessment, noting the paranoid attitude continues even here, with the comment about " nature of the information is indicative of why they want it removed " and implying one editor might be using several names. I broke off discussion when I was accused, by way of 4 years military service 30 years ago, of being a "vested interest". ] (]) 04:54, 20 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Looie496 ==== | |||
This is one of several WP articles that are occasionally subjected to tinfoil-hat style paranoid editing, and that's what's going on here. Let me note that I opened a section about this at ] before being notified of this post. ] (]) 23:08, 19 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
=== Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion === | |||
I haven't been involved at all but stumbled on this by accident. I left a helpful message on Radicalmix66's talk, which he disposed of this way , then accused me of being "one of the pseudonyms of the person/persons now suddenly replicating such activity" i.e. an SPA of the Master Controlling Evil One who is resisting his attempts to Warn Us Of What Is Really Going On. (He also doesn't seem to know what a war college is.) I will not be participating further in this DRN thread, but I will continue to revert addition of nonsense to the page, as time permits. ] (]) 19:52, 20 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
=== Directed energy weapons, and the Talk page discussion === | |||
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Ok, I've read the related discussions. I'm seeing one editor who is taking a fringe/conspiracy viewpoint regarding the subject and multiple editors (including ones who are very familiar with the appropriate policies/guidelines/best practices) opposing the inclusion. As Misplaced Pages works on the Consensus model (where consensus does not have to be uninimity) until the opposition can show sources that sway the consensus, the existing consensus remains in effect. Therefore I would like to suggest that there exists a consensus among editors that there the inclusion of the warred over content is not justified. As this is a consensus revolving around content and in relation to the inclusion of specific content, conduct aspersions and assertions have no justification. That being the case pending a significant content argument for why the content should be included, this thread will be closed in 72 hours with the above proposed solution. ] (]) 21:04, 21 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
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== Kamaria Ahir == | ||
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{{DRN archive top|Closed as also pending in another forum, ]. ] does not accept a dispute that is also pending in another content or conduct forum, and RSN is a content forum. When there are two types of issues about one article, it is not practical to try to resolve them in two forums at the same time, because often issues overlap, and because the resolution in one forum might change what is being discussed in the other forum. Finish the discussion at ] and decide whether there are any remaining content issues that are consistent with what has been decided about ]. If there are any remaining content issues, resume discussion on the article talk page. If the subsequent discussion on the article talk page is lengthy and inconclusive, a new case request can be filed here. ] (]) 03:10, 25 December 2024 (UTC)}} | |||
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The dispute revolves around the use of Raj-era sources, specifically K.S. Singh’s "Anthropological Survey of India," in the article on "Kamaria Ahir." One editor, Nlkyair012, is advocating for the removal of these sources, arguing that they are outdated and unreliable. However, these historical sources, particularly those from the British Raj, are still cited in reputable modern academic works as valuable historical references for caste dynamics and structures. The issue also includes the inclusion of living people's names without proper self-identification, which violates Misplaced Pages's Biographies of Living Persons policy (BLP). The goal of this dispute resolution is to determine whether the Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh’s work should be retained or replaced, and to ensure that the article adheres to Misplaced Pages's guidelines on neutrality and verifiability. | |||
There is a dispute about whether Chopin was Polish or Polish-French. The first compromise was reverted and sources not supporting the view that he was Polish removed. | |||
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Discussion on the talk page, sources found, compromise in the article saying it is disputed (which was reverted and sources removed). | |||
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Create a compromise, or find the generally accepted nationality | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by Toccata quarta ==== | |||
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The dispute can be resolved by carefully reviewing the reliability of Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh's work, considering modern academic citations that rely on these sources, and determining whether they meet Misplaced Pages's standards of verifiability. Additionally, we can remove any names of living people to comply with the BLP policy while maintaining the historical and sociological content that is well-sourced. Collaboration on improving the article is key, and I suggest that experts in anthropology or caste studies provide input on the appropriateness of these sources for this article. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by 178.222.192.243 ==== | |||
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The current dispute is about the inclusion of Raj-era sources, particularly from the British colonial period, in the article "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Kamaria_Ahir)." I believe these sources are valuable for understanding the historical context of caste structures in India, despite their age. While I acknowledge that (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Age_matters) advises caution with older sources, it does not outright prohibit their use, especially when they provide unique historical insights that modern works may lack. Raj-era ethnographic works were written by government officials and are often cited in contemporary research for their firsthand observations, making them relevant in understanding caste dynamics. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Nihil novi ==== | |||
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A central issue in this dispute is the use of K.S. Singh’s "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Anthropological_Survey_of_India)" (ASI), which I have cited in the article. The ASI, although created under government supervision, is a significant academic resource that continues to be referenced in Indian academia. While some may question its modern reliability, it remains an authoritative source, and dismissing it entirely without further scrutiny undermines its contribution to the topic. As per (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Scholarship), high-quality academic sources are essential, but older sources like K.S. Singh’s are still valid when used in conjunction with modern studies to provide a complete view of the topic. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Volunteer Marek ==== | |||
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I also understand concerns related to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons), particularly regarding the inclusion of living people's names in caste articles. If specific names are a violation of (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BLP_categories), I agree they should be removed. However, this does not justify removing the entire article or historical context that is verifiable and supported by well-established sources. The article provides valuable historical and sociological context that should not be discarded simply due to concerns over individual names. | |||
=== Frédéric Chopin discussion === | |||
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Please note: I have added {{ping|Volunteer Marek}} to this DRN as it is clear he should have been listed by the filing party as involved. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS;font-variant:small-caps;"><font color="Blue">]</font><font color="Green">]</font></span><sup>(]•])</sup> 08:25, 22 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
:Ok, I see this has been a bit of a back-and-forth for a while. Lets, for the sake of discussion, clear the slate and work from the ground up. There seems to be two camps: | |||
::1) That Chopin was born in Poland and is thusly Polish with Polish-French ancestory. He also aquired French citizenship through his father however he was still, in terms of national identiy, Polish. | |||
::2) That Chopin was born in Poland to Polish and French parents and is thusly Polish-French. The fact that he was also a French citizen confirms this. | |||
:Is that a fair assessment of the situation? If so, I'd ask proponents of either side to state and cite the case for their view in the areas below. Please try avoid commenting directly on the opposite views, discuss below if necessary. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS;font-variant:small-caps;"><font color="Blue">]</font><font color="Green">]</font></span><sup>(]•])</sup> 09:08, 22 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
::No, I don't think it is. Please see my comment under the "Polish-French" heading. ] (]) 18:29, 23 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
==== The case for Polish ==== | |||
The sources I have used are critical to the article’s depth and accuracy. While there are concerns over the accessibility and page numbers of some sources, I am willing to work to improve verifiability, such as by adding missing page numbers or citing additional resources. According to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Verifiability) and (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources), I aim to improve the article's citation standards, but my main goal is to maintain the article’s historical integrity while complying with Misplaced Pages’s standards for verifiability, neutrality, and reliability. | |||
(https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Ratnahastin) has raised concerns about the reliability and relevance of these sources, particularly due to their age. However, rather than removing content entirely, I propose that we retain these sources while improving the article’s clarity and citation standards. The article can be collaboratively improved to ensure it meets Misplaced Pages's guidelines while preserving the depth of the subject matter. | |||
==== The case for Polish-French ==== | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Ratnahastin ==== | |||
Per ] he should be described as Polish-French, because he spent much of his life in France and was a French citizen. ]<sup>]. ]</sup> 17:33, 22 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
The OP does not really understand the purpose of WP:DR. The proper venue for this dispute was ]. - ] (]) 02:06, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:I understand your concerns, but I’d appreciate if we could focus on constructive dialogue rather than dismissing my contributions as AI-generated or repetitive. I’ve put in considerable effort into researching and explaining my points here and on RSN, as you’ve acknowledged. | |||
:Such questions of nationality are seen very differently now from how they were seen in the 19th century, when most Europeans were "subjects" rather than "citizens". The fact that after some years in France Chopin was issued with a French passport is interesting, but it seems likely that he could have got a Russian or Polish one if he had wanted to. I don't think Chopin's birthplace is the real issue, either. He was born in 1810 in the ]. Was that Poland? In a sense it was, in a sense it wasn't. Chopin grew up (after 1815) in ], which was a largely Polish-speaking puppet state of the ]. In the lead of the article he is now described as "]", with a link to ]. That suggests he was ethnically Polish. In fact, he was ethnically ''half'' Polish, and half French. "Polish-French" seems to me correct from two points of view, that of ethnicity and that of his right to live in both countries. ] (]) 18:54, 23 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
:While RSN focuses strictly on source reliability, this discussion at DRN is broader—it’s about how content sourced from historical documents can be meaningfully incorporated into the article without violating Misplaced Pages’s guidelines like ] or ]. | |||
:I’d also like to emphasize that I’m not against incorporating modern tertiary sources. In fact, I’ve already proposed balancing the article with both historical and modern perspectives to ensure neutrality and depth. I am also willing to address verifiability concerns by adding specific page numbers or additional citations. | |||
:Accusing me of forum shopping is inaccurate—I brought the matter to RSN to address the reliability of specific sources, and to DRN to resolve content disputes that go beyond just reliability. These are distinct yet connected aspects of the same issue. | |||
:I hope we can focus on resolving the content dispute collaboratively rather than resorting to unproductive allegations. I look forward to hearing constructive feedback from DRN volunteers or other editors like @] and @], whom you’ve pinged. <span style="font-family:Georgia,serif; color:#FF4500; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold;">]</span> 05:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
=== Kamaria Ahir discussion === | |||
::''NB'', the article of the online '']'' has "Polish French". ] (]) 20:07, 23 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
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*'''Volunteer Note''' - This appears to be an issue about the ]. Is this a question about the ]? If so, the proper forum is ], where the volunteers are more familiar with the source reliability guidelines than at ]. This case will be closed within 48 hours unless an issue is identified about article content that is not a source reliability question. ] (]) 04:18, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
:Thank you for your note. I acknowledge that source reliability is a critical aspect of this dispute, and as you mentioned, I have already brought up this matter on the ] (RSN) ] to evaluate the specific sources in question. | |||
==== Continued discussion ==== | |||
:However, this dispute at DRN extends beyond just the reliability of sources. It involves a broader disagreement over how content from historical sources should be incorporated into the article while balancing compliance with Misplaced Pages's policies like ], ], and ]. | |||
:Here at DRN, I am seeking resolution on whether the historical context provided by these sources can be retained while ensuring the article aligns with community standards. This involves determining whether to refine, supplement, or restructure the article, rather than removing entire sections or sources outright. | |||
:I appreciate your efforts and hope this clarifies why this discussion is taking place here in addition to RSN. If DRN volunteers feel this still doesn’t meet the scope of this forum, I’d appreciate guidance on next steps. <span style="font-family:Georgia,serif; color:#FF4500; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold;">]</span> 05:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
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== Old Government House, Parramatta == | |||
== Harvey Milk and related articles == | |||
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Related content, some with elements of this discussion as well. Presumably these would need editing as well, and in some cases retitling. | |||
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* {{pagelinks|Daniel Nicoletta}} | |||
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* {{pagelinks|Harvey Milk Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Transgender Democratic Club}} | |||
* {{pagelinks|Harvey Milk Day}} | |||
* {{pagelinks|Harvey Milk High School}} | |||
* {{pagelinks|The Times of Harvey Milk}} | |||
* {{pagelinks|Milk (film)}} | |||
* {{pagelinks|Robert Arneson}} | |||
* {{pagelinks|Bill Kraus}} | |||
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<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | <span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | ||
Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article ] that extends to >90% of material from another website. | |||
A number of users are pushing the viewpoint that Harvey Milk was assassinated. He was certainly murdered, but I do not think the circumstances of his death warrant use of the assassination, which is pushing an agenda. Many other authors online also agree with this viewpoint. I would also argue that even if opinion is divided, the word killed is still the safer word to use as this term would still include assassination. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
The User who posted much of this material contends that "The material is CC-BY licensed, as stated in the edit summary and correctly attributed, which is, and has always been, usable on Misplaced Pages, and was added as part of a massive project by a number of Australian editors to import quality CC-BY content from a number of heritage sources." | |||
Discussion on the article talk pages and on user talk pages. Breaching of the 3RR occurred, so I have chosen to cease these options and instead open up discussion to the wider community. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span> | |||
I think that this material should be placed subject under WP:EL/ External Links, and follow the clearly defined rules of WP:COPYPASTE/ Copying text from other sources, WP:Plagiarism & WP:PARAPHRASE guidelines. | |||
Hopefully bring unbiased views to the table. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Varnent ==== | |||
Most of my thoughts in regards to ] claims have already been made on {{oldid|Talk:Harvey Milk|577202086|Talk:Harvey Milk}}. However, here is a recap from my perspective: | |||
* Rebroad was asked (by me) not to make this edit until consensus had been reach. I undid his attempts to make the edits while the discussion was still taking place. | |||
* The discussion has not gotten contentious or, in my opinion, elevated to a need for moderation. However, I would appreciate more people weighing in as the discussion has been limited thus far. | |||
* The only citation provided to support the change is . I have not been able to find any reliable sources indicating that assassination is an invalid term to use. | |||
* Others provided around a dozen citations from ] that support the existing language. | |||
* A case could certainly be made that the incident is most often referred to as an assassination (yes - sometimes interchangeably with murder). | |||
* Generally ] indicate that changes like this need better justification than "some think this is a bad wording" - something more to the effect of "here is proof that this is factually inaccurate" would be better. So far that has not been submitted - beyond a non-cited dictionary definition and film critic's essay. | |||
* Wiktionary's definition says "political motives" - not "gain or payment". I think you could logically argue that even if a broader Misplaced Pages definition of assassination did not apply - there is plenty of reason to believe that the assassinations were politically motivated. Implying that both Milk and Moscone were killed while working in a political role in a government building by a fellow politician over a political disagreement (White staying in office or not) seems to be ignoring the word "political" way too many times. | |||
* The definitions offered by , , , or do not match the one Rebroad provided. | |||
I will repeat my questions as well: | |||
* Can someone please cite your source for the change? "Many other authors online also agree with this viewpoint." Who? So far you have not provided enough evidence to help anyone make a decision on this change - beyond your own claims that not supporting this change "is pushing an agenda." Itself a pretty bold statement that lacks any further evidence. | |||
* Can Rebroad please cite the dictionary definition that this claim is working from? | |||
* Please help list exactly which articles you are proposing this change for. | |||
* What breach of ] was made? I count two reverts by me, one revert by ], all of them over about six days. 3RR is "more than three reverts on a single page—whether involving the same or different material—within a 24-hour period." That claim does not apply here. | |||
''Note:'' I have a stated interest in matters related to Harvey Milk. I believe my edits have been within policies, and not based on opinion, and have asked that any changes be made after consensus. If consensus is reached that a change should be made, I would obviously not revert the change. However, I do not believe a change of that scale should be made without discussion. --] (])<sup>(])</sup> 20:13, 21 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Ignoring the numerous uncivil issues appearing on the Talkpage, the view is using material like this is legalistically quite correct regarding use of non-copyright material, but in my opinion, it exceed any 'fair use' of material in which it is almost completely paraphrased and could even be considered as plagiarism. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Twp ==== | |||
Rebroad's basic point seems to be that Harvey Milk's murder shouldn't be called an assassination because Dan White killed Harvey Milk out of a personal grudge, rather than for political reasons. I just don't think the distinction between "assassination" and "murder" is really all that hard and fast. One of the most notorious assassination attempts ever in the U.S. -- the ] -- was also not politically motivated, but instead was driven by the gunman's psychotic belief that killing Reagan would impress ]. Yet we still refer to it as an "assassination attempt". Our own article on ] defines it as "the murder of a prominent person or political figure by a surprise attack, usually for payment or political reasons ... it is an act that may be done for financial gain, to avenge a grievance ..." So I think that referring to Harvey Milk's murder as an "assassination" is both consistent with our own guidelines and is the best reflection of the conventional wisdom on the matter. ] (]) 20:31, 21 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
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==== Summary of dispute by Dmol ==== | |||
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I do not agree with the change from "assassination" to "murder" for the following reasons. <p> | |||
The word assassination is used in the two main articles from the very beginning. (Harvey Milk 2006, and Moscone–Milk Assassinations 2008)<p> | |||
A consensus has long been established on this issue, with only 1 or 2 editors arguing against that consensus.<P> | |||
It is very easy to find references that describe the killing as assassination, which I also think is the correct term. In a quick search, I have found , , , , , all of which refer to an assassination.<p> | |||
That some websites, books, or even Misplaced Pages articles, refer to "killings" or "murders", does not take from the fact that "assasination" is in widespread use. As an aside, it is easy to find mention of President Kennedy being "murdered" also.<p> | |||
User Mwelch raised two very good points on the M-M A talk page, namely –<BR> | |||
:1/ But what specifically do you think disqualifies this from that term? The fact that they were co-workers? Why would that make a difference? Indira Gandhi was killed by two men who worked directly for her. So that means it was not an assassination? | |||
:2/As for the specific crime for which the person was (or in some cases, was not) convicted, that seems a rather inadequate criterion upon which to base the determination. John Hinckley was not convicted of anything, and his motive was even less political that were Dan White's. Nonetheless, Hinckley's shooting of Ronald Reagan is almost universally referred to as an attempted assassination. (End quote)<p> | |||
No user has found a reliable source to show that the term "assassination" is incorrect. It is all coming down to personal and subjective opinion, which has no place on Misplaced Pages. Thanks for the right of reply.--] (]) 08:08, 23 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
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=== Harvey Milk and related articles discussion === | |||
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Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Misplaced Pages pages? | |||
Hello. I am a dispute resolution volunteer here at the Misplaced Pages Dispute Resolution Noticeboard. This does not imply that I have any special authority or that my opinions should carry any extra weight; it just means that I have not been previously involved in this dispute and that I have some experience helping other people to resolve their disputes. Right now I am waiting for everyone to make their statements before opening this up for discussion. in the meantime, I encourage everyone involved to review our ] and ] pages. Thanks! --] (]) 18:30, 22 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant. | |||
:I'm also a DRN volunteer and I'd like to throw this out for consideration: The mission of DRN is to handle disputes, but no dispute exists if ] already exists and one or more editors are merely arguing against consensus. In this case, the assassination language has been in the ] article for many, many months. I've not gone back to see when it was first introduced or to see if it was introduced through a positive consensus or was just put in and no one objected, but either way it's clearly been there long enough to indicate silent consensus. We now have four editors — the three listed above plus ] — who feel that the assassination language is appropriate. In light of the long history of the term in the article, four editors who currently feel that the term is appropriate and back up their opinions with sources which refer to the event as an assassination looks an awful lot like a consensus to me. (And that point will be even stronger if the term was introduced pursuant to a consensus discussion, but I think that it's strong enough as it is.) I do not have any problem whatsoever with an editor arguing at the article talk page for a different term — consensus can change — but it has to ''change'' and unless there is a very clear-cut demonstration that the term plainly and beyond dispute violates Misplaced Pages policy I don't see that seeking ] is particularly appropriate in this case. The talk page and ] are the places to seek to change an existing consensus. (And even if there is a clear policy objection, someone will need to go back to see if the term was inserted as a ].) My suggestion would be to close or withdraw this DRN filing and to continue the discussion at the article talk page and to perhaps file a ] to draw more editors into the discussion, but I'll leave it up to my colleague ] to decide whether to close this request for that reason. | |||
:An RFC might also be an appropriate means, if done properly and proper notices are given, to raise the issue across the range of articles mentioned above. Since each Misplaced Pages article stands on its own, the term may be adopted by consensus in some articles and not in others and discussion must take place separately for and about each article; the ] policy says that editors involved at one article or wikiproject — such as DRN — cannot make "rules" which apply to other articles. | |||
:As a last note, if this does go forward, Protonk probably ought to be added as a party. | |||
:Regards (and a tip 'o the hat to my colleague, Guy), ] (]) 20:39, 22 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
Now that everyone has made their initial statements, I am opening this up for discussion. The way I like to work on resolving disputes (and of course how we want to work on resolving this dispute is open for discussion) is to focus on one issue at a time by asking questions. If it seems that I am only challenging one side, that's because I want to focus on one question. Wait a while and the other side will be in the hot seat. Also, feel free to continue discussing anything you want on the article talk page. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by The Drover's Wife ==== | |||
I am going to start with a couple of questions for Rebroad just to clarify the request being made here. | |||
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=== Old Government House, Parramatta discussion === | |||
First, you don't want the word assassinate. Must it be replaced with killed or is murdered or some other word acceptable? | |||
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=== Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House) === | |||
Second, there are two possible reasons for not wanting to not use assassinate, and I want to clarify which argument you are making. | |||
I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read ] and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues. | |||
It is my understanding that {{u|The Drover's Wife}} wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask {{u|Itchycoocoo}} what changes do you want ] and why? ] (]) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
You could argue that we can't use it. This would require you to provide citations to reliable sources supporting that. If the citations are overwhelming (quality counts as well as numbers) and most of the sources say that it is a killing or that it isn't an assassination -- or if they say the opposite -- I would expect you to all to follow the sources. | |||
=== Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House) === | |||
You could argue that the sources do not force us to use one term or the other, but rather that this is up to editorial judgement and that your choice of words is clearer, more accurate, etc. If you want to make this argument, you need to convince other editors and get a consensus for your version. Usually it is pretty clear what the consensus is, but if there is a serious question we can post an RfC. | |||
Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up. | |||
So please let us know which argument you are making, because each has a completely different counterargument and would lead me to ask different kinds of question. I would ask the rest of you to hold off a bit until we clarify the above points. Thanks! --] (]) 12:28, 23 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
I do accept '''Misplaced Pages DRN Rule B''', and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor. | |||
:Hi all. I'm not that attached the the outcome, but I do want the article to be "not misleading", and currently I believe it is. Most people upon hearing the word "assassination" imagine that it is a) planned, and b) involving more than 1 person, i.e. a conspiracy, and c) politically motivated. Milk's death was none of these. To argue that it was politically motivated because he was a politician and his killer was too is a very weak argument - and conflates correlation with causation. I even spoke to several staff (including the manager) of the Harvey Milk Diner in San Diego yesterday to ask if they felt "assassination" was the correct term, and they felt it was not. I suggest that rather than refer to other articles that incorrect use the term, it may be prudent to ask members of the public what their understanding of the term is. It does seem that the word assassination has been incorrect used for other murders and attempted murders. Overall, if we're going to start using the word assassination for everyone involved in politics who is killed or attempted to be killed, then it will eventually render the word to mean little more than "a politician who was killed". If that's what we want the word to mean, then I suggest we keep the article as it is. I do however advise against this, and suggest we use the word as it's currently 1) understood, and 2) defined by dictionaries. Thanks, --] (]) 21:36, 23 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages. | |||
::Thanks for the clarification. OK, let me address those who disagree with Rebroad on this; first of all, we can drop all talk about what the sources say unless the source actually says that assassination can not be used or another term must be used. That's because this is not a "hey folks, the sources say X so the article has to say X no matter what your opinion is" argument. Instead, this is a question of editorial judgement and thus Rebroad needs to convince a significant number of editors to agree as explained in ]. Of course he is always free to post an RfC (See ]) and see if getting outside editors to weigh in will turn the consensus his way, but first I want to verify that everybody understands his argument and are not convinced by it. As I said before, I am going to do the same for the arguments on the other side a bit later, so don't assume that I support either side. | |||
I will be very happy to do such culling. | |||
::Rebroad, you state ''"Most people upon hearing the word "assassination" imagine that it is a) planned, and b) involving more than 1 person, i.e. a conspiracy, and c) politically motivated."'' I don't think that the first two are at all convincing. If assassinations involve more that one person, then ] wasn't assassinated and there is a serious debate about whether the deaths of ] and ] were assassinations. Likewise, if you want to argue that the Milk killing wasn't planned, you would have to explain why White had a gun, why he entered City Hall through a first floor window, thus avoiding City Hall's metal detectors, and why he was charged with first-degree (planned) murder. I really don't think you are going to convince anyone that it wasn't planned. | |||
But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Misplaced Pages pages. This is acknowledged. | |||
::So that leaves us with the "assassinations are always politically motivated" argument. First off, your anecdote about the Harvey Milk Diner must be disregarded under Misplaced Pages's rules. It was ], the patrons of the diner are not ], and the sample is biased and too small. | |||
However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Misplaced Pages editors. e.g. According to ] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''" | |||
::The Merriam-Webster dictionary gives us the following definition: | |||
:::1: to injure or destroy unexpectedly and treacherously | |||
:::2: to murder (a usually prominent person) by sudden or secret attack often for political reasons | |||
::The terms "a '''usually''' prominent person" and "'''often''' for political reasons" argues against assassinations always being politically motivated. | |||
::On the other hand, Wiktionary defines it as | |||
:::1: Killing or murder for political reasons | |||
::...which would tend to support the argument (Please note that Merriam-Webster is a more reliable source than Wiktionary). | |||
::Of course what I think (pretend to think, actually; in a day or so I will be doing my best to refute the arguments on the other side) doesn't matter. What matters is ]. Have you been able to convince anyone? Do you have a good reason to believe that the editors that have been working on the page have a systemic bias (conscious or unconscious) and that an RfC is likely to go your way? --] (]) 00:34, 24 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article. | |||
== Scott Joplin == | |||
In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Misplaced Pages editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in ] "''With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism.''" | |||
{{DR case status|closed}} <!-- Bot Case ID (please don't modify): 930 --> | |||
{{drn filing editor|PennyLane415|17:00, 23 October 2013 (UTC)}} | |||
{{DRN archive top|reason=No extensive talk page discussion as required by the guidelines of this noticeboard before seeking help here. Talk page discussion is required by all forms of content ] at Misplaced Pages before seeking dispute resolution. Ask for discussion at the article talk page, and if the other editor will not discuss, consider the recommendations given ]. — ] (]) 17:29, 23 October 2013 (UTC)}} | |||
'''Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Misplaced Pages page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%?''' | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you discussed this on a talk page?'''</span> | |||
If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Misplaced Pages standards. However, looking at the other Misplaced Pages policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users. | |||
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. | |||
The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Location of dispute'''</span> | |||
* {{pagelinks|Scott Joplin}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Users involved'''</span> | |||
* {{User|PennyLane415}} | |||
* {{User| Hoops gza}} | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Dispute overview'''</span> | |||
Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic. | |||
I need help deciding which kind of grammar to use, American or British. I was under the impression that the grammar used was specific to the origin of the subject. In this case the subject is Scott Joplin, an American, therefore I deviated to American grammar and its practices with regard to quotation marks. I'd love someone who is familiar with both types of grammar to give their input as well as best practice involving American/British disputes. | |||
Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome. | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''Have you tried to resolve this previously?'''</span> | |||
Thanks. | |||
Described the changes I made and why. | |||
] (]) 06:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC) | |||
<span style="font-size:110%">'''How do you think we can help?'''</span> | |||
I need someone to be a mediator. I've looked up the correct use of grammar on Misplaced Pages and I could only gather what I mentioned above, that the grammar used is specific to the origin of the subject. | |||
==== Summary of dispute by Hoops gza ==== | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.</div> | |||
=== Scott Joplin discussion === | |||
<div style="font-size:smaller">Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.</div> | |||
*'''Uninvolved editor Binksternet''': This DRN request is too soon. OP should have discussed the matter on the article talk page at a minimum. ] (]) 17:23, 23 October 2013 (UTC) | |||
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Dragon Age: The Veilguard
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Sariel Xilo on 20:06, 5 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- Sariel Xilo (talk · contribs)
- BMWF (talk · contribs)
- Wikibenboy94 (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
1) Disagreement on if WP:SYNTH is occurring in the topline summary sentences. The arguments for including these sentences is that one sentence in the lead is an accurate summary of the article's reception section & follows MOS:INTRO/Misplaced Pages:Summary style & the second sentence is in a reception section paragraph & follows WP:VG/REC advice for opening sentences. The argument against is that SYNTH is occurring & these summary sentences should not be included. 2) Rewriting a sentence on review bombing to remove context on negative reviews after a November talk page discussion came to consensus. 3) Other more minor disagreements about exact prose.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
- Current discussion: Talk:Dragon Age: The Veilguard#Prose
- Previous discussion: Talk:Dragon Age: The Veilguard#Review bomb context
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
An independent review of the prose to ensure it is following policy as it seems the discussion has stalled out & to help us reach a consensus on the main content disagreements. The back and forth has led to the article being under a full lock until the dispute is resolved.
Summary of dispute by BMWF
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by Wikibenboy94
The edits and justifications on the article by BMWF, who appears to have an ardent approach to following certain rules and guidelines, I have found particularly questionable. In my opinion:
1. The aforementioned summaries, in both the lead and body, of points in the reception section do not amount to WP:SYNTH, and reception summaries in leads for countless articles would be removed if it did.
2. Including the Steam player base numbers is not relevant for the lead, at least not in place of the lack of official sales figures, and where the sales section largely consists of theorising how much Dragon Age: Veilguard has sold.
3. Identifying each platform for the game that was given a Metacritic consensus of "generally favorable" is redundant when the consensuses are the same for all the platforms; they should only be identified if there are differing consensuses, or at most should be written as "for all platforms".
4. The invoking of WP:SAID while changing the wording so that a critic of the game "said" instead of "thought" and "referred to" instead of "criticized" I don't find warranted for what was initially written (note there are other instances of the words "thought" and "criticized" still remaining in the section). Similarly, the initial wording of "offensive reviews" I feel is more neutral and less loaded than "abusive reviews".
5. I am less invested in how the review bombing is outlined, though do think some mention should be made on how Steam requires proof that you have played the game first before reviewing it, unlike Metacritic (or vice versa). Wikibenboy94 (talk) 19:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
Dragon Age: The Veilguard discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.To expand a bit a on the listing, I believe that at this point both @Wikibenboy94 and I agree that there are no WP:SYNTH issues in the topline summary sentences removed by @BMWF in this edit and agree on restoring them which BMWF opposes. I also agree with Wikibenboy94 on points 2-4 that they outlined in their summary of the dispute.
In terms of the review bomb sentence, I think the following compromise version should satisfy the request for clarity on Steam users (bold is the text added by BMWF) while restoring context (underlined) that was in the November consensus on this issue: Veilguard was also subject to review bombing on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "woke". Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative, the user reviews of Veilguard on Steam, which requires users to play the game before leaving a review, have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove offensive reviews. Sariel Xilo (talk) 17:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
I am ready to act as the moderator if at least two participants want moderated discussion. Please read DRN Rule A and state that you agree to the rules (if you want moderated discussion). The purpose of dispute resolution is to improve the article. So please state concisely what you want to change in the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:43, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Quick clarity question on DRN Rule A - my assumption is that the rule is to not edit war over the disputed content but updates/improvements in other sections are fine. This question occurred to me after the fact (I corrected a template in the awards table which is unrelated to the dispute but was a mistake I made). Sariel Xilo (talk) 02:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Clarification by Moderator (Dragon Age)
I generally prefer to have the parties avoid editing any part of the article, at least until all of the parties agree on what the area of dispute is. Since the other editors have not yet stated what they think the issues are, I am not relaxing the rule against editing the article, except with regard to the change that User:Sariel Xilo is asking about, that was already made. In that case, the principle of no harm, no foul applies to the change that has already been made. Leave the change in. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:06, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Dragon Age)
I agree to DRN Rule A. As outlined above, I would like to restore the topline summary sentences in the lead & reception section (ie. the sentences removed in the lead in this edit & in the reception in this edit), restore other word changes as outlined by Wikibenboy94's in their points 2-4, & I would like use the above proposed compromise version of the review bomb prose. Sariel Xilo (talk) 21:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
First statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
Do two editors want moderated discussion? The filing editor has said that they agree to DRN Rule A and has made a statement about what they want to change in the article. Another editor made a statement at the beginning, but has not agreed to DRN Rule A. If they agree to those rules, I will open moderated discussion, and we will try to work on the various differences. If they do not either agree to the rules or make some other statement, I will close this discussion as declined due to lack of response.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:20, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I've pinged the two other editors in case they only watched this noticeboard for a week & haven't seen that a moderator opened the discussion. Sariel Xilo (talk) 18:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- I have read and agree to DRN Rule A. Wikibenboy94 (talk) 20:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
First statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Second statement by possible moderator (Dragon Age)
It appears that two editors have agreed to moderated discussion, but that they have mostly agreed with each other and disagreed with the third editor, who has not responded on this noticeboard. Their statements of what they want to change in the article are not entirely clear, at least not to me. So what I will do at this point is to ask each editor to prepare draft versions of the sections that they think should be changed. I don't see a discussion in the current text of the article about review bombing, so that we can read a description of the review bombing.
I will comment that the article is no longer fully protected. The full protection expired, and the article is now semi-protected. However, I have asked that the editors in this dispute not edit the article while we are discussing its improvement.
I don't understand what the synthesis issue is, and I don't want to read through the history and previous discussion to determine what the synthesis issue is. So please state more specifically what the synthesis issue is if you want it considered, or let me infer it from the rewritten sections, or I might ignore it, which might be what you want. It seems that the two editors who have responded do not see a synthesis issue, so it can be disregarded if it isn't mentioned and the third editor doesn't describe it.
Please provide your rewritten sections.
Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
Second statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Proposed text:
- Lead
Dragon Age: The Veilguard released for PlayStation 5, Windows, and Xbox Series X/S on October 31, 2024. After release Dragon Age: The Veilguard topped Steam charts and broke BioWare's concurrent player record. The game received generally positive reviews from critics, who praised its cast, representation of sexual minority characters, graphics, and level design, but were more critical of the story, aspects of the writing, and combat. It was nominated for Game of the Year at the Golden Joystick Awards and Innovation in Accessibility at The Game Awards.
- Reception
¶1 Dragon Age: The Veilguard received "generally favorable" reviews from critics for its Windows, Xbox Series X/S, and PlayStation 5 versions according to the review aggregator website Metacritic. OpenCritic determined that 68% of critics recommended the game. Veilguard was subject to review bombing on Metacritic, with users criticizing the game for being "woke". Some outlets noted that while the user reviews on Metacritic are largely negative, the user reviews of Veilguard on Steam, which requires users to play the game before leaving a review, have a "mostly positive" rating. In response, Metacritic emphasized their moderation system which would remove offensive reviews.
Reception ¶2 is not under dispute but here for additional context if needed. |
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¶2 Hayes Madsen of Rolling Stone called Veilguard a "fresh start for the franchise" with the game "practically a soft reset". Leana Hafer for IGN similarly commented that the "story feels like both a send-off and a soft reboot, in a way, which was paradoxically a bit refreshing and disappointing at the same time". She also found it "cool" that the Inquisitor returns as "a fairly important character". Andy Bickerton of NPR viewed the game as a "well-executed action RPG". However, he called the decision to not include prior player narrative choices a "letdown", noting that "it's easy to see how this squandered potential, along with the tonal inconsistencies, could have arisen out of Veilguard's near-decade of troubled production". Lauren Morton of PC Gamer thought a downside of perceived streamlining and eliminating the "most common RPG frictions" is that it "can feel more action adventure than RPG at moments". |
¶3 Critics were mixed on the game's story. Matt Purslow from IGN thought that Veilguard was "at war with itself", as he felt that the game was not interested in exploring the franchise's past despite being its first direct sequel, and that the game sidelined major characters such as Solas and Varric. Malindy Hetfeld of The Guardian criticized the "surprisingly mediocre" writing in Veilguard, describing the protagonist Rook as more of a witty observer than a "person with opinions". She also found the "comically evil" new villainous gods disappointing compared to the more "compelling" Solas. Hafer opined that Veilguard has "weird" pacing, and that the overaching plot "is nothing particularly outstanding in its overall structure", with the only interesting factor being Solas. Madsen argued that Solas was "a secondary protagonist", with the game focusing on his choices, their impact, "and how your journey as Rook mirrors" his journey. Ash Parrish of The Verge appreciated how Solas' arc subverted her desire to kill him despite longstanding animosity; she praised BioWare for crafting "his story arc in a way that didn't soften his actions as villain backstories typically do, but in a way that I felt compelled to make a different choice". Reviewers were divided over how consequential player choices were to the narrative, with some finding major decisions "few and far between".
The rest of the reception section for context on lead summary. While it uses similar summary style sentences as above (see bolded text), it is not under dispute. |
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¶4 Madsen praised Veilguard for its attention to detail when showcasing the player's iteration of Rook and the game's companions, calling the characters "wonderfully written and well integrated into the plot". Todd Harper of Polygon emphasized the companions as the heart of the game, noting that they were "weird and idiosyncratic in the best ways". Kazuma Hashimoto of Them commented that at a surface level companions feel like "fantasy clichés and tropes", but with earned trust reveal "mundane moments" that make them feel closer to "normal people"; he also praised both the romance and non-romance options for interacting with companions. Hafer appreciated that companions are each "stars of their own story" with "complex, memorable, likable, distinct personalities", but was disappointed that in combat they felt more like extensions of the player character. Parrish enjoyed the "fun banter" of companions, and praised the romance options in Veilguard, highlighting that unlike previous Dragon Age games, it explicitly indicates when the player becomes locked into a romance path. Conversely, Oliver Brandt of Sports Illustrated viewed the choice to make all companions romanceable regardless of player gender expression as "a small step back" from other Dragon Age games. Harvey Randall of PC Gamer highlighted a lack of nuance in Rook's romantic dialogue if a player chooses to discuss Rook's gender identity. Morton thought companions lacked nuance and individual characterizations, noting that "good people don't make great characters". She further criticized the lack of a "functional mechanism for disapproval" and interpersonal group conflicts. ¶5 Veilguard generally received praise for its inclusive character creator and representation of transgender and non-binary characters. Alyssa Mora of IGN emphasized the character creator's "body diversity" where "the options feel almost endless". Both Robin Bea of Inverse and Brandt commended Taash's story arc, with Brandt noting while BioWare has previously "touched on queer stories", Vanguard "goes one step further, unashamedly and unabashedly calling one of its most compelling characters nonbinary". Bea acknowledged the "smart writing" in Veilguard in addressing transgender representation. However, she critiqued the use of a coming out narrative as "low-hanging fruit", and thought Rook's gender identity was not fully explored beyond Taash's storyline and so did not "always feel like a fully-actualized trans character". Stacey Henley of TheGamer appreciated the deliberate use of modern language in Taash's story in comparison to Inquisition's Krem, though noted the language has been contentious with audiences as potentially "immersion breaking". Randall was more critical, noting how Veilguard "both failed and succeeded" in the narrative aspects focused on non-binary characters, and that the overall "scattershot, clumsy, and unpolished" writing impacts the "use of queer language in a fantasy context". They found the lack of a fictional etymology connecting the word to the cultures of Thedas problematic, reflecting wider story issues as the game seems "barely interested in the politics of its own setting". ¶6 Critics enjoyed Veilguard's graphics and level design but were divided on the game's combat. Bickerton felt that Veilguard's strongest feature was its action gameplay, writing "mastering combat and party composition is a thoroughly rewarding experience from start to finish". He also highlighted the game's "accessibility and difficulty settings" as being welcoming for more casual players. Hetfeld viewed Veilguard's combat as functional but repetitive, without "much room for strategy", and similar to numerous other games. Hafer called the boss fights the highlight of combat. Parrish praised the combo system, the new elemental effects on weapons, and the ability for player mages to switch between melee and ranged for a "kinetic, almost chaotic energy". However, she critiqued the length of encounters from the "wave after wave of tanky enemies with multiple health bars". Harper thought the combat was "hit or miss", and that the combo system was less complex than Inquisition and the Mass Effect games. Hafer stated that the game has "visual splendor", and Harper called it "graphically gorgeous". Parrish opined that the "companions and environments are arresting in their design". Bickerton thought the level design was an improvement on Inquisition's "bland open zones", and praised side quests for their depth and the rewarding of exploration with "useful loot and impactful plot points". Morton viewed each area's "incredible visual design" as a standout feature of Veilguard. She found it was better off for removing Inquisition's "giant zones" and having "more constrained maps of coiled corridors and clearings". References
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In the lead and reception ¶1/¶3, I bolded prose which I think should be included & did strikethroughs on what I think should be removed. The lead & reception ¶3 summary sentences were removed for being synth although I disagree with that assessment. It would be helpful to have an outside opinion review them. Additionally, reception ¶1 (in bold & underline) includes the review bomb sentence that was part of the original November consensus that BMWF argued against; when raising synth concerns, they removed it again. I believe it adds important context as news outlets contrasted the two platforms in articles focused on what was occurring at Metacritic (ie. the negative user reviews on Metacritic were very different from the user reviews on Steam). Sariel Xilo (talk) 22:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
I fully support all the proposed changes Sariel Xilo has outlined above and have no further issues to raise, so a draft version from me will be redundant. Wikibenboy94 (talk) 20:34, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Third statement by moderator (Dragon Age)
The two editors who have responded to my request to provide a draft of changes to the article are in agreement on revised language. The other editor has not commented because they have not edited in the past week. I will suspend the rule against editing the article to allow the edits for which there is a rough local consensus to be made. If there is no objection to the edits within a few days, I will close this case as resolved. If there is any objection, we will resume discussion, but will leave the revised edits in place.
Are there any questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 04:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking a look at the draft. Just to confirm, I should go ahead and implement the above in the article? Sariel Xilo (talk) 04:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Third statements by editors (Dragon Age)
Autism
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Oolong on 15:46, 20 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- Oolong (talk · contribs)
- Димитрий Улянов Иванов (talk · contribs)
- Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talk · contribs)
- HarmonyA8 (talk · contribs)
- TempusTacet (talk · contribs)
- WhatamIdoing (talk · contribs)
- FactOrOpinion (talk · contribs)
- 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0 (talk · contribs)
- GreenMeansGo (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
Autism, in the wider world, is subject to a very deep disagreement about what it is, and what it means for society.
On Misplaced Pages, this schism (or paradigm shift) is manifesting in an interesting way, because the root of the disagreement is essentially about the degree to which it is correct or helpful to view autism as a medical issue - a disorder - at all.
Misplaced Pages has quite detailed guidelines for what to do within medicine, or outside of medicine, but it is less clear what to do when the dispute is about whether something is best thought of as a health issue, and/or something else (for example: a different way of thinking and experiencing the world, a disability, an identity etc.) There are many implications for this distinction, including (to some extent) what we include and (strictly) what counts as a reliable source for any particular piece of information. Many scientists have taken various positions on the issue of neurodiversity, as have autistic and other neurodivergent people, practitioners, family members and writers (all of these overlap greatly). The concept has greatly risen in prominence in recent years.
This underlying dispute manifests in many different ways, across many autism-related articles, often giving rise to tensions, and incredulity on more than one side, when people refuse to accept things that apparently seem obvious to the other side. These go back many years, but have reached a relatively heated pitch in recent weeks, with a number of editors making efforts to change the main autism entry in various ways.
A major point of contention is around systemic bias, relating to what I would call testimonial injustice. Who should be listened to, when it comes to what people should be reading about autism? What exactly should we balancing when we weigh viewpoints "in proportion to their prominence in reliable sources"?
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Autism Talk:Autism#Autism and disability Talk:Autism#Too little focus on anthropology and social dynamics; too intense focus on medical genetics. Talk:Autism#Extent of Scientific Consensus on Terminology & Reconciling Perspectives Talk:Autism#Glaring Omissions] Related: Misplaced Pages:Dispute_resolution_noticeboard/Archive_228#Applied_behavior_analysis
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
There are tensions and disagreements for which the resolution is not obvious, and neither is the route to a resolution; much of this has run in circles around what different sources do or do not demonstrate, and which Misplaced Pages guidelines apply, where, and how. There has also some agressive argumentation and editing which seems unhelpful. Outside input on how to work towards a balanced conclusion - conceivably even something like a consensus - could be helpful.
Summary of dispute by Димитрий Улянов Иванов
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.The central tension in the dispute revolves around how autism spectrum disorder (ASD) is characterised and the prominence given to this characterisation. Some editors have argued for either reducing, minimising, or entirely removing references to autism as a neurodevelopmental disorder with symptoms, impairments, and varying levels of severity.
This proposed reframing of the article stands in stark contrast to the scientific consensus around the world. As regards the scientific consensus, the validity and relevance of the terminology for ASD has been established by standardised diagnostic criteria (e.g., the World Health Organization's ICD-11 and American Psychological Association's DSM-5), the developers of evidence-based national guidelines (e.g., the UK National Institute for Health & Care Excellence and the European Society for Child & Adolescent Psychiatry), and consensus statements endorsing these guidelines (e.g. IAP Guidelines on Neuro Developmental Disorders). This is further substantiated by other peer-reviewed, secondary sources such as systematic reviews. For further details, see list of quoted references.
Since the article pertains to health where readers may rely on its information to make health-related decisions, restricting these high-quality references can have profound repercussions. Some editors have cited a series of blog posts and advocacy papers as sources supporting the notion that a neurodiversity-only perspective, which decouples ASD from these terms, is more, or at least comparably, appropriate for the article because of its publicity and acceptance amongst a subset of autistic advocates. However, it has been argued that relying on these sources is problematic for several reasons. First, Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines consider peer-reviewed sources as the most reliable when available; that blog posts are generally discouraged; and that it is the members of a particular scientific discipline who determine what is considered factual or pseudoscience. Second, while some advocacy sources are peer-reviewed, they are usually advocating for a future change that is not currently established. The dispute has since increasingly been over how Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines can be correctly interpreted.
In my view, a failure to properly reflect the international scientific classification in this article will contribute to the stigmatisation of ASD and its treatments to millions of people around the world. Your decision may disproportionately mislead the poorest and highest risk of readers due to economic and educational disadvantages. This will increase morbidity, create chaos in families and drive up health care costs.
While considering each reply, I urge reviewers to carefully consider and weigh in the scientific evidence in regards to their recommendations.
Summary of dispute by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Yes, as User:Oolong says, some of the dispute seems to concern epistemic injustice concerns and how to interpret standards of evidence here.
There is also definitely a strong debate going on over whether, per established standards of evidence for wikipedia and for medical claims within wikipedia, there is in fact a consensus of reputable sources (especially recent sources) supporting a traditional medical understanding of autism, or whether per such standards of evidence there appears to be a division between traditional medical and neurodiversity-aligned perspectives on autism. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan (talk • contribs) 20:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would like to reiterate that any drop in evidential standards could lead to the inclusion of debunked and dangerous practices, particularly as at least one editor has revealed themselves to be sympathetic toward facilitated communication - an anti-autistic practice which is often falsely claimed to be supported from a neurodiversity perspective - the inclusion of which has already been litigated on Misplaced Pages. The medical model being poor does not automatically lead to the populist online autism movement being good. Autistic people deserve the same standards as everyone else. 2A02:C7C:9B04:EA00:F104:371A:5F87:5238 (talk) 08:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't believe anybody is advocating for reduced evidential standards. The question is about which standards apply to what.
- My position on FC is that it is a dubious practice, worryingly open to abuse, but that we need to be wary of over-generalising from the evidence available on it (and that it is worth looking at studies publised since this was last 'litigated on Misplaced Pages'). Oolong (talk) 11:07, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by HarmonyA8
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by TempusTacet
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by WhatamIdoing
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.I think that only the first three editors in this list (Oolong, Димитрий Улянов Иванов, and Ó.Dubhuir.of.Vulcan) are very relevant. However, I'm willing to help (e.g., to provide assistance with the {{MEDRS evaluation}} of sources). WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Oolong, let me expand on Robert's directions below: Please post your desired changes in the #First statements by editors (Autism) section of this page. It will be clearest if you use the "X to Y" style (as if this were the Misplaced Pages:Edit requests process) and show your exact suggested wording. You can use Template:Text diff if you'd like to contrast your suggestion with the current paragraph.
- (I believe that the other editors are recommending no significant change.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:42, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by FactOrOpinion
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.The conflict seems to be very longstanding, and I've only participated in the discussion during the last week, so my understanding of the conflict is very incomplete. A significant piece of it is that there are contrasting approaches to thinking about autism — a medical model and a neurodiversity perspective — and the article currently emphasizes the first of those, which makes it feel unbalanced to others. There are differences of opinion about which views/content are significant (in the NPOV sense) and therefore should be represented in the article; and among the various groups who might seek out the article (e.g., autistic people, family members, allies, different kinds of professionals), some will not find much content, even though there are reliable sources for it. For example, there's little about the lived experiences of people with autism, and some content that one might expect to be touched on with a link to further info (e.g., autistic meltdowns) are totally absent. Arguably, the text is not as accessible to as broad an array of readers as it should be. Some of the conflict seems linked to the role of scholarship. Everyone recognizes that when scholarly sources are available, they're usually the best sources; however, some may think that if content cannot be sourced to a scholarly source, then it shouldn't be included. I recognize that MEDRS guides sources for biomedical info; but some of the relevant info for the article is not biomedical. FactOrOpinion (talk) 04:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am willing to try dispute resolution, but I have no experience with it. I have read the rules introduced by Robert McClenon below, as well as DRN Rule A, and I agree to these rules. It's not clear to me when I should move to the Zeroeth statements by editors section rather than responding here. Once that's clarified, I'll respond to Robert McClenon's questions in the appropriate section.
- Important note: I have no expertise in the subject. I ended up at the Autism talk page because an editor who is autistic posted a concern at the Teahouse about the imbalance in the article and felt that their Talk concerns were not being given due weight, and I hoped that I could be a bit helpful on the talk page. Given the breadth of the disagreement and my lack of expertise, it will be hard for me to suggest specific changes in the article, though I can make more general comments (e.g., comments about whether certain content might be introduced in order to address the needs of diverse readers who'd come to the article seeking information, whether the text is likely to be accessible to such readers, whether I think a given WP:PAG is being correctly interpreted). My guess is that I will not be as active in the discussion as the editors with subject matter knowledge / editors who have a longer history in the dispute, and it may be that my comments will simply be too general to be helpful and that I should therefore bow out. FactOrOpinion (talk) 16:30, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by 2409:40E0:102E:C01E:8000:0:0:0
(Pardon. My mobile IP keeps changing). I completely agree to the viewpoints supported by user @Oolong. I also want the people to know that there is no such division between "pathological symptom" and "non-pathological symptom". They are same features of a communication and socialization "disorder" where more than one neurotype is involved. It is the same, impairing symptom that can be credited to either neurotype, but unfortunately attributed to the cognitive minority solely. Although the article covers some aspects of neurodiversity perspective, still its language is too much negative and pathological, which isn't very helpful or uplifting for Autistic individuals. Too much importance given in biological causes and "epidemiology", while the more useful sress should have been on accommodation, accessibility, and AAC (Alternative Augmentative Communication). Trying to conceal the harmful effects of ABA therapies is misleading and un-encyclopedic. 2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 18:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC)Summary of dispute by GreenMeansGo
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Comment in your own section. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:13, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Autism discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Autism)
I am ready to assess whether moderated discussion will be useful to improve the article on Autism and to resolve any content disputes. If we do use moderated discussion, this is likely to be a long mediation, and I will probably have to develop a new set of rules. I know that the rules will include;
- Be civil. Civility is required everywhere in Misplaced Pages, and is essential to resolving content disputes.
- Be concise. Long statements may make the poster feel better, but they do not always convey useful information. Remember that an editor who sees a wall of text is likely to ignore it.
- Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. The moderator will ask the questions. (I will be the moderator.) Address your answers to the moderator and to the community.
- Comment on content, not contributors. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article, so discuss the article or proposed changes to the article.
- Do not make any reports to conduct forums while moderated discussion is in progress. One objective of moderated discussion is to avoid discussions of conduct and to resolve content issues first, because often the conduct issues resolve themselves when the content dispute is resolved.
In the meantime, my first question for each editor is whether you would like to try moderated discussion (mediation) in order to resolve content disputes. If you answer yes, I have a two-part question and another question. The purpose of moderated discussion, or of any dispute resolution, is to improve an article. I will split my usual introductory question into two parts. First, please state what changes, if any, you want to make to the lede section of the article that another editor wants to leave the same, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Second, please list the sections and subsections of the body of the article that you want to change. We can go into more detail about those changes later. Third, please provide links to any previous discussions of content or conduct issues about the topic that have not been resolved. I just want a list of all of the previous discussions. Do not comment on them, because I am trying to focus the discussion by asking my usual introductory question (in a two-part form).
I don't yet know whether DRN is the right forum to resolve disputes about autism, but I will try to make that assessment based on the answers to the above questions. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:21, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, I would like to try moderated discussion. Are you looking for responses as replies here, or in the section below (or...)?
- I've never participated in a dispute resolution procedure here (aside from the one linked above which was closed because I didn't get a notification, and didn't know to refresh the page daily, and which I didn't know how to reopen). Also, like many of the parties to this dispute, I am autistic. Explicit instructions will therefore be welcome! Thank you.
- Answering your other questions will be complicated, because what really needs to happen involves rather extensive changes. Even small changes have persistently been blocked by parties taking one particular position on this, so moving on to questions around the bigger changes required has repeatedly been stymied.
- I feel that I should flag up two essays that I've written, provoked by past discussions around all of this, to clarify my position - I hope you agree that this is appropriate here. The first is Autism and Scientism (published in the Middletown Centre for Autism Research Journal) and Autism, Misplaced Pages and Epistemic Injustice, posted here and published in Thinking Person's Guide to Autism. You are under no obligation to read these or take them into consideration, but they might help you to understand some of the issues at stake if you do so. Oolong (talk) 11:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
First statement by possible moderator (Autism)
I asked for specific statements of how the lede section should be revised, and what changes should be made to the body of the article. So far, the statements have not been specific. Please read Be Specific at DRN. I understand that one of the main issues is that the current article, beginning with the lede section, is focused on the medical model of autism, and that there is at least one other perspective on autism that is not medical. If sources that meet the ordinary standard of reliability describe other perspectives and provide evidence that these perspectives are supported by scholarly non-medical sources, then the lede section should describe all perspectives. Discussion of the non-medical perspectives should be supported by reliable sources, and discussion of the medical perspective and any aspects of the medical perspective should be supported by medically reliable sources. That is, discussion of non-medical perspectives is not required to meet the medically reliable standard of sourcing, but the sources must meet the ordinary standard of reliable sourcing.
If an editor thinks that the article should be revised to reflect multiple viewpoints, I will ask that they provide a revised draft of the lede section. We can wait to work on the sections of the body of the article until we have settled on the lede section, and then the body of the article should follow the lede. We need to start with something specific, in this case, a revised lede section. I will also repeat my request that each editor provide links to all of the previous discussions of how to revise this article, so as to provide a better overview of the issues.
I would prefer that statements go in the sections for the purpose, such as First statements by editors (Autism), because that is what they are for. However, I will not enforce rules about where to make statements, as long as basic talk page guidelines are met.
After I see at least one specific proposed revision to the article, preferably a draft rewrite of the lede section, I will know better whether DRN is a place to discuss the issues. Are there any other questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:05, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Robert McClenon! That helps clarify matters, including the question of evidence required for non-medical perspectives, which has been a source of much contention over the years.
- @Димитрий Улянов Иванов has has said that he won't "have the time to consistently respond within 48 hours. Hopefully that is not a strict requirement" - perhaps it would be helpful if you could address the implied question there?
- I will see if I can draft more detailed proposals tomorrow in the appropriate section; as I said earlier, part of the problem has been that the clash of viewpoints (with a supporting clash of readings of Misplaced Pages guidelines) has caused so much friction that it has been difficult to move on to the details of the rather large (and very overdue) project of rewriting and restructuring most of the page! I do at least have some fairly solid ideas about the lead, but of course, ideally the lead should reflect the rest of the article... Oolong (talk) 19:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
- " Autism, Autism spectrum condition (ASC), Autism spectrum disorder (ASD), or Autism Spectrum (AS) is a set of neurodevelopmental conditions, which have been described variously as a disorder, a condition, a valid human neurotype, and a socio-cultural misfit. No two Autistic persons are same, differing in their abilities and inabilities in multiple dimensions, and usually show a spikey or highly uneven cognitive profile. Many Autistics are capable of reading, writing, speaking clearly, or taking part in logical arguments, while having unnoticed deficits in working memory, information filtering, gross or fine motor skills issues, executive functions, sensory issues, trouble making eye contact or reading facial expressions etc. On the other hand, in some Autistics the deficits or differences can be immediately visible. In such cases the strengths might be unnoticed or ignored. Although an Autistic person may fall somewhere in between- and described better through a multidimensional approach than a unidirectional or linear "mild" vs "severe" categorization. Autistics often use repeatitive behaviour as a means of coping mechanism, and often requires structure and predictability to cope up. Autism is sometimes classified as a hidden disability or an invisible disability, as its features could be not immediately noticeable, and in some cases highly masked or camoufledged. Autistics may differ in the amount and nature of support they need in order to thrive and excell. Autism has close overlaps with specific learning disabilities (Such as dyslexia or dyscalculia), Personality disorders (Schizoid personality disorder, Pathological Demand avoidance), etc. that makes it often hard to differentiate from other psychological diagnoses. Autistic people are valuable member of society, regardless of their talents or impairments. "
- @Oolong@Robert McClenon I have made a semi protected edit request which is phrased like the follows (sample):
- 2409:40E0:1F:E636:8000:0:0:0 (talk) 01:41, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
First statements by editors (Autism)
Zeroth statements by editors (Autism)
Sri Lankan Vellalar
– New discussion. Filed by Kautilyapundit on 05:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
Dispute overview
A user repeatedly adds misleading edits to the caste article. In the section on mythological origins, they introduced misleading edits. If the source states "A," they modify it to say "B" to support their narrative. This constitutes WP:OR and WP:SYNTH. The sources should specifically discuss the origin of the Sri Lankan Vellalar, but they fail to do so, instead recounting tales of other caste groups. There are other sources discussing the mythological origin of Vellalars, but he dismisses them and continues adding misleading edits with synthesized sources.
Additionally, the user seems to be using AI to counter my responses. They don't fully understand my points and keep repeating the same arguments in different contexts.
We also sought a third opinion, but that editor doesn't appear to be active on the talk page. He has no idea on south asian group articles and its complex editing rules.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Sri_Lankan_Vellalar
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
This noticeboard might have more professional editors who are knowledgeable about South Asian groups and communities. I believe they can resolve the dispute by cross-verifying our points.
Summary of dispute by Luigi Boy
First and foremost, I would like to thank user Kautilyapundit for initiating this dispute. This discussion will undoubtedly help clarify and resolve the concerns at hand. From my perspective, there are two distinct issues that need to be addressed:
- Terminology differences
- The inclusion of the mythology section
Terminology Differences
The root of the terminology issue stems from my edit, where I restored information that had been removed without adequate justification or proof that the cited sources were WP:FRINGE.
To provide clarity, I included a sentence explaining the transliteration of the term Vellalar. Specifically:
- Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar refers to the context found in ancient Tamil literature like the Akananuru.
- Tamil: வெள்ளாளர், romanized: Veḷḷāḷar represents the caste name in contemporary usage. This distinction adds context about the societies mentioned in classical Tamil texts and the evolution of terminology over time. The confusion arises mainly because the parent caste Vellalar often uses this term Tamil: வேளாளர், romanized: Vēḷāḷar, whereas modern usage differentiates the two terms.
Inclusion of the Mythology Section
The second issue is the inclusion (or exclusion) of the mythology section. The claim that I oppose adding more mythology is a misrepresentation of my stance. I've never dismissed other mythological references. If additional, well-sourced myths exist, I encourage to include those as well.
The argument for removing the existing mythology section hinges on the fact that the parent article does not discuss this topic. However, this overlooks the fact that the mythology in question is specific to Sri Lankan Vellalars and does not pertain to the parent caste. Removing the section entirely would erase relevant, sourced context unique to this sub-caste.
Third-Party Opinion
Fortunately, user AirshipJungleman29 has provided a third opinion on this matter. They rightly suggested that if the sources in question are deemed WP:FRINGE or not WP:RS, the concerned user should raise the issue on WP:RSN. To date, no such dispute has been initiated, leaving the claim unsubstantiated.
I hope this explanation addresses the concerns raised by Kautilyapundit and provides clarity on the rationale behind my edits. I am open to further discussions and look forward to collaborative resolutions to improve the article.
Sri Lankan Vellalar discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.Kamaria Ahir
– General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by Nlkyair012 on 20:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC).Closed as also pending in another forum, the Reliable Source Noticeboard. DRN does not accept a dispute that is also pending in another content or conduct forum, and RSN is a content forum. When there are two types of issues about one article, it is not practical to try to resolve them in two forums at the same time, because often issues overlap, and because the resolution in one forum might change what is being discussed in the other forum. Finish the discussion at RSN and decide whether there are any remaining content issues that are consistent with what has been decided about reliability of sources. If there are any remaining content issues, resume discussion on the article talk page. If the subsequent discussion on the article talk page is lengthy and inconclusive, a new case request can be filed here. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:10, 25 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Have you discussed this on a talk page? Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved
Dispute overview The dispute revolves around the use of Raj-era sources, specifically K.S. Singh’s "Anthropological Survey of India," in the article on "Kamaria Ahir." One editor, Nlkyair012, is advocating for the removal of these sources, arguing that they are outdated and unreliable. However, these historical sources, particularly those from the British Raj, are still cited in reputable modern academic works as valuable historical references for caste dynamics and structures. The issue also includes the inclusion of living people's names without proper self-identification, which violates Misplaced Pages's Biographies of Living Persons policy (BLP). The goal of this dispute resolution is to determine whether the Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh’s work should be retained or replaced, and to ensure that the article adheres to Misplaced Pages's guidelines on neutrality and verifiability. How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here? ] ]
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute? The dispute can be resolved by carefully reviewing the reliability of Raj-era sources and K.S. Singh's work, considering modern academic citations that rely on these sources, and determining whether they meet Misplaced Pages's standards of verifiability. Additionally, we can remove any names of living people to comply with the BLP policy while maintaining the historical and sociological content that is well-sourced. Collaboration on improving the article is key, and I suggest that experts in anthropology or caste studies provide input on the appropriateness of these sources for this article. The current dispute is about the inclusion of Raj-era sources, particularly from the British colonial period, in the article "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Kamaria_Ahir)." I believe these sources are valuable for understanding the historical context of caste structures in India, despite their age. While I acknowledge that (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Age_matters) advises caution with older sources, it does not outright prohibit their use, especially when they provide unique historical insights that modern works may lack. Raj-era ethnographic works were written by government officials and are often cited in contemporary research for their firsthand observations, making them relevant in understanding caste dynamics. A central issue in this dispute is the use of K.S. Singh’s "(https://en.wikipedia.org/Anthropological_Survey_of_India)" (ASI), which I have cited in the article. The ASI, although created under government supervision, is a significant academic resource that continues to be referenced in Indian academia. While some may question its modern reliability, it remains an authoritative source, and dismissing it entirely without further scrutiny undermines its contribution to the topic. As per (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Scholarship), high-quality academic sources are essential, but older sources like K.S. Singh’s are still valid when used in conjunction with modern studies to provide a complete view of the topic. I also understand concerns related to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons), particularly regarding the inclusion of living people's names in caste articles. If specific names are a violation of (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:BLP_categories), I agree they should be removed. However, this does not justify removing the entire article or historical context that is verifiable and supported by well-established sources. The article provides valuable historical and sociological context that should not be discarded simply due to concerns over individual names. The sources I have used are critical to the article’s depth and accuracy. While there are concerns over the accessibility and page numbers of some sources, I am willing to work to improve verifiability, such as by adding missing page numbers or citing additional resources. According to (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Verifiability) and (https://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:Reliable_sources), I aim to improve the article's citation standards, but my main goal is to maintain the article’s historical integrity while complying with Misplaced Pages’s standards for verifiability, neutrality, and reliability. (https://en.wikipedia.org/User:Ratnahastin) has raised concerns about the reliability and relevance of these sources, particularly due to their age. However, rather than removing content entirely, I propose that we retain these sources while improving the article’s clarity and citation standards. The article can be collaboratively improved to ensure it meets Misplaced Pages's guidelines while preserving the depth of the subject matter. Summary of dispute by RatnahastinThe OP does not really understand the purpose of WP:DR. The proper venue for this dispute was WP:RSN. - Ratnahastin (talk) 02:06, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Kamaria Ahir discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
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Old Government House, Parramatta
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Itchycoocoo on 06:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- Itchycoocoo (talk · contribs)
- The Drover's Wife (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
Is a dispute regarding using non-copyright material used within the article Old Government House, Parramatta that extends to >90% of material from another website.
The User who posted much of this material contends that "The material is CC-BY licensed, as stated in the edit summary and correctly attributed, which is, and has always been, usable on Misplaced Pages, and was added as part of a massive project by a number of Australian editors to import quality CC-BY content from a number of heritage sources."
I think that this material should be placed subject under WP:EL/ External Links, and follow the clearly defined rules of WP:COPYPASTE/ Copying text from other sources, WP:Plagiarism & WP:PARAPHRASE guidelines.
Ignoring the numerous uncivil issues appearing on the Talkpage, the view is using material like this is legalistically quite correct regarding use of non-copyright material, but in my opinion, it exceed any 'fair use' of material in which it is almost completely paraphrased and could even be considered as plagiarism.
How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?
Talk:Old Government House, Parramatta#This is a mess
How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?
Could someone clarify and advise how and to what extent such external material can be used in Misplaced Pages pages?
Knowing this would be able to improve the page and remove some of the text it doesn't seem relevant.
Summary of dispute by The Drover's Wife
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Old Government House, Parramatta discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.Zeroth statement by moderator (Old Government House)
I am ready to act as the moderator in this dispute. Firstly, I would like to ask the editors to read Misplaced Pages:DRN Rule B and state their acceptance of it. This ruleset allows back-and-forth discussion, however, I would like to remind you to stay civil. The purpose of moderated discussion is to improve the article; we won't be discussing conduct issues.
It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain. Is this correct? I would like to ask Itchycoocoo what changes do you want exactly and why? Kovcszaln6 (talk) 11:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Zeroth statements by editors (Old Government House)
Firstly, thank you for taking this issue up.
I do accept Misplaced Pages DRN Rule B, and will avoid unnecessary interaction with the other editor.
You state "It is my understanding that The Drover's Wife wants the current state of the article to remain." I don't think that is the case, and as others are pointed out, there are many irrelevant statements relating to the subject, which can be used elsewhere or in other pages.
I will be very happy to do such culling.
But the issue is about using non-copyright text 'free use' to such an extent that it is place there near its entirety. It appears that any material that is deemed free use without copyright under CC – BY licenses can be used within Misplaced Pages pages. This is acknowledged.
However, elsewhere under paraphrase, copypaste, and plagiarism, it suggests that the amount of text using whole webpages should not extensively used by Misplaced Pages editors. e.g. According to WP:Copypaste "With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism."
I think the issue is a grey area. Using portions of an external webpage, whether a copyright or not, should be adopted sparingly and not cart blanch as example by this article.
In my opinion, the entire adopt the text should be scrapped, and should be written by a Misplaced Pages editor, but still extracting some of the CC – BY material either in quotes, as suggested in Close paraphrasing "With the exceptions of short quotations from copyright text, and text copied from a free source without a copyright, text from other sources may not be copied into Misplaced Pages. Doing so is a copyright violation and constitutes plagiarism."
Q: My question to resolve this dispute is how much of CC – BY license usage of another site can be used in a Misplaced Pages page? Is 100% acceptable, say 50%, 20%, or maybe just 5%?
If it is 100% acceptable, then the pasting of all of this material is acceptable to Misplaced Pages standards. However, looking at the other Misplaced Pages policies, it seems to me that significant section taken from any website is needed, really should be placed in quotation marks, and used to support statements made in secondary sources written by Users.
The alternative is to just place it as a simple external link, for readers who want to read the more extensive knowledge in more detail.
Based on the discussion and debate, if I do do this, I fear that it will simply be reverted to the original text in the alternate website. I would also like to add some new information that is occurred in the last year or two, has there been significant developments in the building and its grounds. Using the non-copyright source means it will have to be modified fairly severely and still read as if it were encyclopaedic.
Perhaps the other editor in this dispute may have some useful suggestions on improving this article with these thoughts in mind. They are clearly an experienced editor, so any ideas would be welcome.
Thanks. Itchycoocoo (talk) 06:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
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