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==Peruvian ''Repaso''== ==Untitled / unsigned==
As User IggyAU in already stated:
:''...regrettably all the references about the repaso are from peruvian sources...therefore its imperative to point this out in order to protect the integrity of this article....''

I have nothing to add to IggysAU words. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 07:16, 20 October 2013 (UTC)

Hi Cloudac,

do you agree to delete the biased theory of Repaso from the article ?. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 10:10, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
:You do not remove content just because of the nationality of the authors, prove they are unreliable first. ] (]) 15:59, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
:I am guessing you did not see me previous comment? ] (]) 11:06, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
:And you have used article tags instead of section tags? Do you not know how to tag a section? ] (]) 11:43, 21 October 2013 (UTC)

::OK, you are right. I deleted twice. If you think you can improve the tags, please, do it. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 12:12, 21 October 2013 (UTC)

===Discussion===
The disputed text and its refs in plain text are:

''After the Battle of Tacna, Chilean troops went as far as to enter ]s and execute all soldiers of the opposing Peruvian and Bolivian armies.''

* Reference={{cite web|url=http://books.google.com/books?ei=wm0oTs73IoT6sAPn75T9CA&ct=result&id=rsgXAAAAYAAJ&dq=Repase+heridos&q=Repaso |title=El expansionismo de Chile en el Cono Sur - Humberto Cayoja Riart - Google Boeken |publisher=Books.google.com |date= |accessdate=2012-11-02}}
*Reference={{cite web|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=OPJYAAAAMAAJ&pg=PA477&dq=Repase+heridos&hl=en&ei=y2soTuy1HYrmsQPpp4DxCA&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=8&ved=0CEwQ6AEwBzgU#v=onepage&q&f=false |title=Narracion histórica de la guerra de Chile contra el Perú y Bolivia. Por ... - Mariano Felipe Paz Soldán - Google Books |publisher=Books.google.com |date=2008-02-21 |accessdate=2012-11-02}}

''The ''repaso'' further incremented the number of Peruvian casualties in the battles of San Juan, Chorrillos, and Miraflores.''
*Reference={{cite web|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=ov0zAQAAIAAJ&pg=RA1-PA192&dq=Repase+heridos&hl=en&ei=y2soTuy1HYrmsQPpp4DxCA&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=4&ved=0CDcQ6AEwAzgU#v=onepage&q&f=false |title=Historia del patriotismo, valor y heroнsmo de la Naciуn peruana en la guerra ... - Carlos Marнa Muсiz - Google Books |publisher=Books.google.com |date=2007-01-01 |accessdate=2012-11-02}}

''In the aftermath of the Battle of Huamachuco, Chilean Colonel ] ordered a ''repase'' under the pretext that they formed part of an ] and could therefore not be considered ]''.

*Reference={{cite web|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=AGHrAAAAMAAJ&q=Gorostiaga+repase&dq=Gorostiaga+repase&hl=en&ei=M2QoTvvQIIG0sAO81Zj0DA&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=7&ved=0CEMQ6AEwBg |title=Historia de la Repъblica del Perъ, 1822-1933 - Jorge Basadre - Google Books |publisher=Books.google.com |date=2009-12-04 |accessdate=2012-11-02}}</ref><ref>Cáceres, Andrés. "Memorias de la guerra del 79" pág. 231</ref>

''Peruvian Colonel Leoncio Prado was among the few soldiers who were not killed during the Huamachuco ''repase'',
*Reference={{cite web|url=http://books.google.com/books?ei=6mYoTt-NL5LWtQOpp6XsCA&ct=result&id=1ywXAQAAMAAJ&dq=Gorostiaga+repaso&q=repaso |title=Revista de la Sociedad Fundadores de la Independencia, Vencedores el Dos de ... - Fundadores de la Independencia - Google Boeken |publisher=Books.google.com |date= |accessdate=2012-11-02}}

''but was executed shortly thereafter.''

That is the sources are
# Humberto Cayoja Riart ''El expansionismo de Chile en el Cono Sur''
# Carlos Marнa Muсiz ''Historia del patriotismo, valor y heroнsmo de la Naciуn peruana en la guerra''
# Jorge Basadre ''Historia de la Repъblica del Perъ, 1822-1933''
# ? ''Sociedad Fundadores de la Independencia, Vencedores el Dos de Mayo de 1866 y Defensores Calificados de la Patria, 1943''

The only acceptable source is Jorge Basadre ''Historia de la Repъblica del Perъ, 1822-1933'' and must be cited correctly.

Mariano Felipe Paz Soldán, ''Narracion histórica de la guerra de Chile contra el Perú y Bolivia'' (a primary source), Humberto Cayoja Riart ''El expansionismo de Chile en el Cono Sur'', Carlos Marнa Muсiz ''Historia del patriotismo...'', ? ''Sociedad Fundadores de la Independencia, Vencedores el Dos de Mayo de 1866 y Defensores Calificados de la Patria, 1943'' are Peruvian patriotic books edited to glamorize the country of Peru. As a historic source they are useless. If we acccept this kind of books, then we have to accept also such books from the other side. Then lost wikipedia any credibility. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 12:12, 21 October 2013 (UTC)

:<s>Please provide evidence for your claims, otherwise your accusations have no foundation.--] | ] 12:32, 21 October 2013 (UTC)</s>
::]. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 18:19, 21 October 2013 (UTC)


== I read the article with fascination. In the section titled "Land War" it states: Peruvians fell back to Tiliviche. But the map in this section identifies a town named Tiviliche. Which one is correct? Thank you. -- <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 16:04, 1 October 2020 (UTC)</span>
:<s>It's also worth pointing out that in this earlier edit (see ), you went as far as to even delete the '''Jorge Basadre source''' that you now claim to be "he only acceptable source". Please, Keysanger (or "KS"), you seem to have a major ] (Conflict of Interest) in this topic. I recommend you avoid it.--] | ] 12:36, 21 October 2013 (UTC)</s>
:I be confused, all those sources support the content, why is only one OK? ] (]) 14:04, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
:In fact, this source ''Andean Tragedy: Fighting the War of the Pacific, 1879-1884'' (used for how lovey dovey they all were in combat) has on the next page a passage on how brutal the Chilean troops actually were. An American observer said out of 600 dead in one battle the most had been killed after surrendering or while wounded. ] (]) 14:15, 21 October 2013 (UTC)


:Good point. There is an article in Spanish wikipedia on Tiliviche - https://es.wikipedia.org/Tiliviche - but that also mentions "La Hacienda de Tiviliche". -- ] (]) 18:02, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
::Darkness Shines,do you consider "Historia del patriotismo, valor y heroísmo de la Nación peruana en la guerra con Chile" by Carlos Marнa Muсiz a neutral objective and reliable source?. It is written to glamourize the Peruvian Nation. If we want to use this source as reference, we can do it, but then we have to use in-text attribution to the source, as in "According to the opinion of..." . --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 18:35, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
:::Darkness Shines, I looked in http://gso.gbv.de/DB=2.1/SET=1/TTL=1/LNG=EN/NXT (37,1 Mio. Titles),but there isn't present any title of Carlos María Muñiz.
:::* Can you transcript the parragraph of carlos maria Muñiz's text that support the sentence given in the article?.
:::* What do we know about this author?
:::* Can you cite any other reference to this unknown book?
:::We have of this book only a title, an author and a webpage of google books (no text), and we know that it was written before 1908, that is a primary source.
:::If you want we can bring the case to the RSN. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 10:08, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
::::Something written before 1908 is not a primary source, you may want to read up on ]. I have asked an editor to send me the full quote. Who is the publisher for History of Patriotism? You did not respond to a single question put to you. ] (]) 14:33, 22 October 2013 (UTC)


==Economic depression== == Casualties ==
This section of the article handles almost only about the economic ressesion in Chile, and doesn't mention with due weight the situation in Peru and Bolivia. In Bolivia for example, the ten cents tax was an economic measure. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 07:20, 20 October 2013 (UTC)


The casualties in the infobox need work. The Chilean casualties were wrong due to a bizarre misreading where lines such as "434-58" for the killed at Alianza/Tacna were interpreted as "between 434 and 58" instead of "between 434 and 458". The situation for Peru and Bolivia is even worse because the source gives "killed in action" and "wounded" separately for some battles, only the sum for others, and for yet others both separate figures and the sum, where the sum given by the source doesn't agree with the sum of the separate numbers given by the same source (I assume that's due to conflicting information on which the source's casualty figures is based). Also, for many of the battles the numbers are clearly rounded to the nearest 100 (or possibly even 1000) whereas for smaller skirmishes two dead might get mentioned. The proportion of dead to wounded for Peru/Bolivia seems off throughout; for example, at San Francisco (19 November 1879) they are said to have suffered 135-500 dead, but only 88 wounded - and a total of 400-6,000 "Killed in action and wounded". For another battle, the "Killed in action" outnumber the "Killed in action and wounded". The Peruvian/Bolivian figures given by the source are, in sum over all listed battles:
==Peruvian mediation==
*Killed in action: 12.934-18.213 (no estimate for one of the twelve considered battles)
The whole section is a original research of the author, sentences like ''Under the impression that previous Peruvian demands had favored Bolivia, the Chilean government stalled. Chileans were further discomfited...''.
*Wounded: 7.891-7.896 (no estimates for two of the battles)
*Killed in action and wounded: 4.367-10,467 (no estimates for seven of the twelve considered battles)
*POWs: 8.103-9.103 (no estimates for two of the battles)
The article currently makes it appear as if the "Killed in action and wounded" were the total casualties Bolivia and Peru suffered, which they're not due to both battles for which the source gives no such value at all and to the inconsistency between these figures and the others for the battles for which the source gives both kinds of data. I'll do the following:
*Correct the misinterpretation for Chile.
*For Bolivia and Peru, go with "about 25,000 killed and wounded, about 9,000 prisoners of war". This ballpark estimate avoids giving a false sense of accuracy.
Details should be covered in the body of the article. ] (]) 23:23, 26 December 2018 (UTC)


== Map of Chilean claims ==
I cite ]: ''produce implications not supported by the sources. Words such as but, however, and although may imply a relationship between two statements where none exists, perhaps inappropriately undermining the first or giving undue precedence to the credibility of the second. '' --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 07:52, 20 October 2013 (UTC)


The image used shows the Falkland Islands as Argentina's territory even though it was occupied by Great Britain at the time. Regardless of opinions of who should and should not own these islands, showing them as being Argentinean at the time is incorrect and should be amended or the map replaced with another colour scheme to show claimed British territories. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 12:07, 24 August 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
==Naval Campaign==
The section is confusing because it speaks of a ''tactical victory to Peru'' but ''Nevertheless, it was a Pyrrhic '' and later of ''the Peruvian navy still had some successful actions'' but ''but its remaining units were locked''.


==Over half of the lede is about the origin of the war==
Moreover, the Captain Grau is named 12 times, more than all Chileans sailors in the whole article. It is very interesting that for the rescue of the ''Esmeralda'' sailors, held off the Chilean navy, held off the Chilean navy by Grau, the article uses more than the half of the section. For the desicive action, Angamos and Punta Gruesa, where the Peruvian Navy was destroyed, the article uses only two sentences. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 08:00, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
I have noticed that over half of the lede is about the origin of the war. Some issues are also almost repeated in the lead. While I think the lede is balanced regarding the views on the origin, this is not place to discuss it at such lenght. There are more important things to include in the lead, like the phases of the war or its societal and political consequences. Any thoughts on this? ] &#124; ] 18:05, 24 April 2021 (UTC)


:I agree that more is needed on the phases and consequences. The entire article needs to follow the ] guidelines more accordingly.--] ]] 18:43, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
==Pilcomayo, Alay==
::Here is a proposal to shorten the origins in the lead.
The article lacks inforrmation about the capture of the Alay and Pilcomayo. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 10:05, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
:::The war originated from a dispute over taxation of nitrate between Bolivia and Chile with Peru being drawn in by virtue of its ]. Historians and commentators have however pointed out at deeper origins for the war including Chilean interest in taking over a resource-rich area, a long-running rivalry between Chile and Peru, as well as the unstable politics and troubled economies of Peru and Bolivia.{{efn-ua|] states in ''The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert'':
:<blockquote>Even though the 1873 treaty and the imposition of the 10 centavos tax proved to be the ], there were deeper, more fundamental reasons for the outbreak of hostilities in 1879. On the one hand, there was the power, prestige, and relative stability of Chile compared to the economic deterioration and political discontinuity which characterised both Peru and Bolivia after independence. On the other, there was the ongoing competition for economic and political hegemony in the region, complicated by a deep antipathy between Peru and Chile. In this milieu, the vagueness of the boundaries between the three states, coupled with the discovery of valuable guano and nitrate deposits in the disputed territories, combined to produce a diplomatic conundrum of insurmountable proportions.<ref>{{cite book |title=The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert |first1=Ronald Bruce |last1=St. John |first2=Clive |last2=Schofield |publisher=University of Durham, International Boundaries Research Unit |date=1994 |pages=12–13 |isbn=1897643144}}</ref></blockquote>}} On February 14, 1879 Chile's armed forces occupied the Bolivian port city of ], subsequently war between Bolivia and Chile was declared on March 1, 1879, and between Chile and Peru on April 5, 1879.
::I find the quote of Ronald Bruce St. John still very valuable so its should be kept among the footnotes. The secrecy and "anti-Chilean" nature of the 1873 treaty is irrelevant at this point. Also, I want to preventively state that whether Chile's actions were justified or not can be discussed elsewhere in detail. I find that the leghty origins section in the lead right now is just an unwarranted reminder that the origins were complex and that it was not just a ]. ] &#124; ] 20:17, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
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::{{ping|Dentren}} Instead of writing "originated", perhaps it would suit better to indicate that "The war began over a nitrate taxation dispute between Bolivia and Chile, with Peru being drawn in due to its ]"? --] ]] 02:28, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
==Mutual Defense Treaty of 1873==
:::], I added most of your suggestions but not the secretive nature of treaty since it would misslead the reader into thinking Chile was fought off-guard by an unexpected alliance. Regarding the defensive nature of the treaty I omitted it also for now as I recall som old arguments here about it and the Spanish version of the treaty article , which is well-crafted, problematizes it. ] &#124; ] 08:49, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
The whole paragraph presents the setcret treaty as a harmless alliance, but in reality the treaty was one of the causes of the war and during the Lackawamma conference Peru and Bolivia refused to deactivate the pact. It must be said that Chile saw pact as a aggressive one. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 08:03, 20 October 2013 (UTC)


== Salitre / salitrera ==
==Boundary Treaty of 1866==
The article says nothing about the Boundary Treaty of 1866.--Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 08:08, 20 October 2013 (UTC)


The article frequently uses the word salitre, which is the Spanish for saltpeter. Shouldn't it use the English word ?
==Argentine and the Secret Treaty of 1873==
The article says nothings about the Argentina and the secret offenssive pact


Also salitrera - is there an English word for that ? -- ] (]) 18:07, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
==After the war==


:Hello ], saltpeter is the word that should be used here. ], the source rock of saltpeter, however should not be translated. Judginf from that article ] a salitrera is a "saltpeter work". ] &#124; ] 23:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
the article states:
:''The national treasury grew by 900% between 1879 and 1902 due to taxes coming from the newly acquired lands. British involvement and control of the nitrate industry rose significantly. High nitrate profits lasted for several decades, but fell sharply once synthetic nitrates were developed during World War I. This led to a massive economic breakdown (known as the Nitrate Crisis). Many industrial factories had closed in the early 1880s to provide labor for the extraction industry. Loss of industry dramatically slowed the country's industrial development. When the saltpeter mines closed or became unprofitable, the British companies left the country, destroying many jobs. The former Bolivian region remained the world's richest source of copper and its ports moved trade between nearby countries and the Pacific Ocean. The former Peruvian region suffered because no new sources of wealth appeared after the Nitrate Crisis. ''


=="and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy"==
That doesn't belong to the history of the war and it is mostly speculation of the authors. --Best regards, '''KS''' (]) 10:15, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
This sentence which are apparently sourced (have not fact-checked these offline sources) is not completely correct. Peru as a political entity was not defeated by Chile's victory at sea. The Arica, Lima and Sierra campaigns show that the Peruvian state was unwillingly to accept the outcome of the naval war as its definitive defeat. By the time Chile had gained naval supremacy there was still a long way to go before a real victory. I therefore propose to remove the sentence "The Chilean Army took Bolivia's nitrate-rich coastal region, and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy." from the lead. Apart from not being completely correct it duplicates information already provided in the lead or that can be inferred from it, such as the fact the Chile won, that there was a naval war and that Chile occupied territories of the allies. ] &#124; ] 23:30, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

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== I read the article with fascination. In the section titled "Land War" it states: Peruvians fell back to Tiliviche. But the map in this section identifies a town named Tiviliche. Which one is correct? Thank you. -- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lytsar (talkcontribs) 16:04, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Good point. There is an article in Spanish wikipedia on Tiliviche - https://es.wikipedia.org/Tiliviche - but that also mentions "La Hacienda de Tiviliche". -- Beardo (talk) 18:02, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Casualties

The casualties in the infobox need work. The Chilean casualties were wrong due to a bizarre misreading where lines such as "434-58" for the killed at Alianza/Tacna were interpreted as "between 434 and 58" instead of "between 434 and 458". The situation for Peru and Bolivia is even worse because the source gives "killed in action" and "wounded" separately for some battles, only the sum for others, and for yet others both separate figures and the sum, where the sum given by the source doesn't agree with the sum of the separate numbers given by the same source (I assume that's due to conflicting information on which the source's casualty figures is based). Also, for many of the battles the numbers are clearly rounded to the nearest 100 (or possibly even 1000) whereas for smaller skirmishes two dead might get mentioned. The proportion of dead to wounded for Peru/Bolivia seems off throughout; for example, at San Francisco (19 November 1879) they are said to have suffered 135-500 dead, but only 88 wounded - and a total of 400-6,000 "Killed in action and wounded". For another battle, the "Killed in action" outnumber the "Killed in action and wounded". The Peruvian/Bolivian figures given by the source are, in sum over all listed battles:

  • Killed in action: 12.934-18.213 (no estimate for one of the twelve considered battles)
  • Wounded: 7.891-7.896 (no estimates for two of the battles)
  • Killed in action and wounded: 4.367-10,467 (no estimates for seven of the twelve considered battles)
  • POWs: 8.103-9.103 (no estimates for two of the battles)

The article currently makes it appear as if the "Killed in action and wounded" were the total casualties Bolivia and Peru suffered, which they're not due to both battles for which the source gives no such value at all and to the inconsistency between these figures and the others for the battles for which the source gives both kinds of data. I'll do the following:

  • Correct the misinterpretation for Chile.
  • For Bolivia and Peru, go with "about 25,000 killed and wounded, about 9,000 prisoners of war". This ballpark estimate avoids giving a false sense of accuracy.

Details should be covered in the body of the article. Huon (talk) 23:23, 26 December 2018 (UTC)

Map of Chilean claims

The image used shows the Falkland Islands as Argentina's territory even though it was occupied by Great Britain at the time. Regardless of opinions of who should and should not own these islands, showing them as being Argentinean at the time is incorrect and should be amended or the map replaced with another colour scheme to show claimed British territories. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.155.59.96 (talk) 12:07, 24 August 2019 (UTC)

Over half of the lede is about the origin of the war

I have noticed that over half of the lede is about the origin of the war. Some issues are also almost repeated in the lead. While I think the lede is balanced regarding the views on the origin, this is not place to discuss it at such lenght. There are more important things to include in the lead, like the phases of the war or its societal and political consequences. Any thoughts on this? Dentren | 18:05, 24 April 2021 (UTC)

I agree that more is needed on the phases and consequences. The entire article needs to follow the WP:SUMMARY guidelines more accordingly.--MarshalN20 🕊 18:43, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
Here is a proposal to shorten the origins in the lead.
The war originated from a dispute over taxation of nitrate between Bolivia and Chile with Peru being drawn in by virtue of its 1873 treaty of alliance with Bolivia. Historians and commentators have however pointed out at deeper origins for the war including Chilean interest in taking over a resource-rich area, a long-running rivalry between Chile and Peru, as well as the unstable politics and troubled economies of Peru and Bolivia. On February 14, 1879 Chile's armed forces occupied the Bolivian port city of Antofagasta, subsequently war between Bolivia and Chile was declared on March 1, 1879, and between Chile and Peru on April 5, 1879.
I find the quote of Ronald Bruce St. John still very valuable so its should be kept among the footnotes. The secrecy and "anti-Chilean" nature of the 1873 treaty is irrelevant at this point. Also, I want to preventively state that whether Chile's actions were justified or not can be discussed elsewhere in detail. I find that the leghty origins section in the lead right now is just an unwarranted reminder that the origins were complex and that it was not just a war of aggression. Dentren | 20:17, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
  1. Ronald Bruce St. John states in The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert:

    Even though the 1873 treaty and the imposition of the 10 centavos tax proved to be the casus belli, there were deeper, more fundamental reasons for the outbreak of hostilities in 1879. On the one hand, there was the power, prestige, and relative stability of Chile compared to the economic deterioration and political discontinuity which characterised both Peru and Bolivia after independence. On the other, there was the ongoing competition for economic and political hegemony in the region, complicated by a deep antipathy between Peru and Chile. In this milieu, the vagueness of the boundaries between the three states, coupled with the discovery of valuable guano and nitrate deposits in the disputed territories, combined to produce a diplomatic conundrum of insurmountable proportions.

@Dentren: Instead of writing "originated", perhaps it would suit better to indicate that "The war began over a nitrate taxation dispute between Bolivia and Chile, with Peru being drawn in due to its secret defense pact with Bolivia"? --MarshalN20 🕊 02:28, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
MarshalN20, I added most of your suggestions but not the secretive nature of treaty since it would misslead the reader into thinking Chile was fought off-guard by an unexpected alliance. Regarding the defensive nature of the treaty I omitted it also for now as I recall som old arguments here about it and the Spanish version of the treaty article , which is well-crafted, problematizes it. Dentren | 08:49, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Salitre / salitrera

The article frequently uses the word salitre, which is the Spanish for saltpeter. Shouldn't it use the English word ?

Also salitrera - is there an English word for that ? -- Beardo (talk) 18:07, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello Beardo, saltpeter is the word that should be used here. Caliche, the source rock of saltpeter, however should not be translated. Judginf from that article Humberstone and Santa Laura Saltpeter Works a salitrera is a "saltpeter work". Dentren | 23:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

"and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy"

This sentence which are apparently sourced (have not fact-checked these offline sources) is not completely correct. Peru as a political entity was not defeated by Chile's victory at sea. The Arica, Lima and Sierra campaigns show that the Peruvian state was unwillingly to accept the outcome of the naval war as its definitive defeat. By the time Chile had gained naval supremacy there was still a long way to go before a real victory. I therefore propose to remove the sentence "The Chilean Army took Bolivia's nitrate-rich coastal region, and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy." from the lead. Apart from not being completely correct it duplicates information already provided in the lead or that can be inferred from it, such as the fact the Chile won, that there was a naval war and that Chile occupied territories of the allies. Dentren | 23:30, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

  1. St. John, Ronald Bruce; Schofield, Clive (1994). The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert. University of Durham, International Boundaries Research Unit. pp. 12–13. ISBN 1897643144.
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