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==Untitled / unsigned==
== Bolivia-Peru alliance ==

I noticed in the right hand pane of the article that there're three belligerents listed BUT in my opinion it should only list two belligerents; Chile and the Bolivia-Peru alliance. I only put this up because in the Bosnian war article there're also three belligerents listed but in that case all three groups were fighting against each other with each group having their own individual causes. Unless I'm missing something I propose the belligerent section should only list Chile and the Bolivia-Peru alliance with a format consistent with the WW2 article. Any thoughts?] (]) 06:08, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
:Not a bad idea. I did it and the result isn't ugly. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 12:12, 2 November 2014 (UTC)


== I read the article with fascination. In the section titled "Land War" it states: Peruvians fell back to Tiliviche. But the map in this section identifies a town named Tiviliche. Which one is correct? Thank you. -- <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 16:04, 1 October 2020 (UTC)</span>
== About the "former soldiers of Taiping Heavenly Kingdom" issue ==


:Good point. There is an article in Spanish wikipedia on Tiliviche - https://es.wikipedia.org/Tiliviche - but that also mentions "La Hacienda de Tiviliche". -- ] (]) 18:02, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
The cited paper in the sentence (reference 135) did not talk about Taiping soldiers coming to South America at all. Instead, I suspect that the editor of this issue was misled by a faked text made up by some Chinese in the 2000s or earlier (the text and its falsification: http://lt.cjdby.net/thread-458569-1-1.html , in Chinese).


== Casualties ==
I removed the related description here; if any of you have record of this issue in language other than Chinese, please leave me a message as I will be happy to know.


The casualties in the infobox need work. The Chilean casualties were wrong due to a bizarre misreading where lines such as "434-58" for the killed at Alianza/Tacna were interpreted as "between 434 and 58" instead of "between 434 and 458". The situation for Peru and Bolivia is even worse because the source gives "killed in action" and "wounded" separately for some battles, only the sum for others, and for yet others both separate figures and the sum, where the sum given by the source doesn't agree with the sum of the separate numbers given by the same source (I assume that's due to conflicting information on which the source's casualty figures is based). Also, for many of the battles the numbers are clearly rounded to the nearest 100 (or possibly even 1000) whereas for smaller skirmishes two dead might get mentioned. The proportion of dead to wounded for Peru/Bolivia seems off throughout; for example, at San Francisco (19 November 1879) they are said to have suffered 135-500 dead, but only 88 wounded - and a total of 400-6,000 "Killed in action and wounded". For another battle, the "Killed in action" outnumber the "Killed in action and wounded". The Peruvian/Bolivian figures given by the source are, in sum over all listed battles:
*Killed in action: 12.934-18.213 (no estimate for one of the twelve considered battles)
*Wounded: 7.891-7.896 (no estimates for two of the battles)
*Killed in action and wounded: 4.367-10,467 (no estimates for seven of the twelve considered battles)
*POWs: 8.103-9.103 (no estimates for two of the battles)
The article currently makes it appear as if the "Killed in action and wounded" were the total casualties Bolivia and Peru suffered, which they're not due to both battles for which the source gives no such value at all and to the inconsistency between these figures and the others for the battles for which the source gives both kinds of data. I'll do the following:
*Correct the misinterpretation for Chile.
*For Bolivia and Peru, go with "about 25,000 killed and wounded, about 9,000 prisoners of war". This ballpark estimate avoids giving a false sense of accuracy.
Details should be covered in the body of the article. ] (]) 23:23, 26 December 2018 (UTC)


== Map of Chilean claims ==
] (]) 08:24, 12 January 2015 (UTC)


The image used shows the Falkland Islands as Argentina's territory even though it was occupied by Great Britain at the time. Regardless of opinions of who should and should not own these islands, showing them as being Argentinean at the time is incorrect and should be amended or the map replaced with another colour scheme to show claimed British territories. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 12:07, 24 August 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


==Over half of the lede is about the origin of the war==
Edit: I found the original addition of the issue described above by ip user 123.202.92.184, and double-confirmed that it is irrelevant to the noted reference. ] (]) 09:27, 12 January 2015 (UTC)
I have noticed that over half of the lede is about the origin of the war. Some issues are also almost repeated in the lead. While I think the lede is balanced regarding the views on the origin, this is not place to discuss it at such lenght. There are more important things to include in the lead, like the phases of the war or its societal and political consequences. Any thoughts on this? ] &#124; ] 18:05, 24 April 2021 (UTC)


:I agree that more is needed on the phases and consequences. The entire article needs to follow the ] guidelines more accordingly.--] ]] 18:43, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
== colonial maps before Wotp ==
::Here is a proposal to shorten the origins in the lead.
:::The war originated from a dispute over taxation of nitrate between Bolivia and Chile with Peru being drawn in by virtue of its ]. Historians and commentators have however pointed out at deeper origins for the war including Chilean interest in taking over a resource-rich area, a long-running rivalry between Chile and Peru, as well as the unstable politics and troubled economies of Peru and Bolivia.{{efn-ua|] states in ''The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert'':
:<blockquote>Even though the 1873 treaty and the imposition of the 10 centavos tax proved to be the ], there were deeper, more fundamental reasons for the outbreak of hostilities in 1879. On the one hand, there was the power, prestige, and relative stability of Chile compared to the economic deterioration and political discontinuity which characterised both Peru and Bolivia after independence. On the other, there was the ongoing competition for economic and political hegemony in the region, complicated by a deep antipathy between Peru and Chile. In this milieu, the vagueness of the boundaries between the three states, coupled with the discovery of valuable guano and nitrate deposits in the disputed territories, combined to produce a diplomatic conundrum of insurmountable proportions.<ref>{{cite book |title=The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert |first1=Ronald Bruce |last1=St. John |first2=Clive |last2=Schofield |publisher=University of Durham, International Boundaries Research Unit |date=1994 |pages=12–13 |isbn=1897643144}}</ref></blockquote>}} On February 14, 1879 Chile's armed forces occupied the Bolivian port city of ], subsequently war between Bolivia and Chile was declared on March 1, 1879, and between Chile and Peru on April 5, 1879.
::I find the quote of Ronald Bruce St. John still very valuable so its should be kept among the footnotes. The secrecy and "anti-Chilean" nature of the 1873 treaty is irrelevant at this point. Also, I want to preventively state that whether Chile's actions were justified or not can be discussed elsewhere in detail. I find that the leghty origins section in the lead right now is just an unwarranted reminder that the origins were complex and that it was not just a ]. ] &#124; ] 20:17, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
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::{{ping|Dentren}} Instead of writing "originated", perhaps it would suit better to indicate that "The war began over a nitrate taxation dispute between Bolivia and Chile, with Peru being drawn in due to its ]"? --] ]] 02:28, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
] <small>(])</small></span> 09:12, 12 August 2015 (UTC)]]
:::], I added most of your suggestions but not the secretive nature of treaty since it would misslead the reader into thinking Chile was fought off-guard by an unexpected alliance. Regarding the defensive nature of the treaty I omitted it also for now as I recall som old arguments here about it and the Spanish version of the treaty article , which is well-crafted, problematizes it. ] &#124; ] 08:49, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
In a Bolivian newspaper called "pagina siete" they published historical maps of colonial South America in where those maps seem to contradict Bolivian claims that the nation was born with the sea. In that map it does seem to show that Chile had a border with colonial Peru and Bolivia was landlocked. Even Bolivian president Evo morales criticized the publishing of the maps as being unpatriotic. Even more astonishing the VP of Bolivia made a press conference days later outing the editor of Pagina siete of having partial Chilean ancestry with a copy of the editors family tree. Anyway Is it possible to post those maps published by pagina siete on this article? <small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 08:30, 26 January 2015 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:The issue belongs more to "Atacama dispute" than to the war, but it is an interesting one. Can you post the link to the article?. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 11:20, 26 January 2015 (UTC)
::It's difficult to find the article on the pagina siete. As soon as the maps were published the newspaper suddenly changed its views and become more Bolivian nationalist than a objective news source therefore that article link doesn't work anymore. But you if you search Google hard enough you might find the article or reporting of the article. BTW the map i attempted to delete is not a professional map but a very feeble amateur drawing and it clearly doesn't follow the protocols for maps. I won't bother to pursue the issue but take in mind what I said before about pagina siete. <small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 12:31, 26 January 2015 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


== Salitre / salitrera ==
==Original synthesis issues==
The way the references are used to support the text in the section "Causes of the War" indicates this contains original research and/or an original synthesis. This is not allowed (])). ] | ] 09:26, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
:Hi Dentren, we know that since three days. It is the content of the tag template. We need your concrete arguments to improve the article. Would you be so kind to elaborate your claims?. Thanks in advance, --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 09:28, 12 August 2015 (UTC)


The article frequently uses the word salitre, which is the Spanish for saltpeter. Shouldn't it use the English word ?
::There are numerous cases in the text. '''Example 1''': Pike writing in 1963 "refuting" sources from 1992 and 2002. ] | ] 09:35, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
:::I insist: you have to elaborate in detail all your claims in the talk page, failing this we can't find solutions for it. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 10:41, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
::::Nope. I will discuss/point out each issue separately. Experience tells it best to do so. ] | ] 11:03, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::Good idea. Now explain what is the problem in example 1. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 11:51, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::That Pike (1963) can't be refuting authors and interpretations dating to 1992 and 2002. ] | ] 11:57, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
:::::::It's all?. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 12:02, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
::::::::What is your proposal to resolve the issue?. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 12:17, 12 August 2015 (UTC)


Also salitrera - is there an English word for that ? -- ] (]) 18:07, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
::::::::I am divided about what to do. Because even if these individual synthesis/WP:OR problems are solved (of which I have brought one into the light yet), what remains is an underlying structure ("Saters four reasons") that is itself original and undue weight. I page 37 of ''Andean Tragedy'' I can't see Sater make these 4 distinctions. In page 37 (and 38) he essentially discuss the economic view, being somewhat critical of it. ] | ] 13:12, 13 August 2015 (UTC)


:Hello ], saltpeter is the word that should be used here. ], the source rock of saltpeter, however should not be translated. Judginf from that article ] a salitrera is a "saltpeter work". ] &#124; ] 23:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
==What happened to the lead?==
I don't visit this article much often. I can see many aspects that have deteriorated over months ans years. Some others have obviously improved. I find the current lead unbearable. I is way too long and include long quotes, which is not the best way of summarizing things. I suggest shortening it to half its size and to give it stability avoid controversial stuff, opinion and interpretations altogether (this can be explained with due detail) and focus on well established facts. ] | ] 10:33, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
:Are you sure?. you say the opposite. Which one is your serious opinion? --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 10:44, 12 August 2015 (UTC)


=="and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy"==
::If you understood it wrong the comment you mention was mean for a apparently inexperienced newcomer that might have thought he could re-write the whole article. ] | ] 11:05, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
This sentence which are apparently sourced (have not fact-checked these offline sources) is not completely correct. Peru as a political entity was not defeated by Chile's victory at sea. The Arica, Lima and Sierra campaigns show that the Peruvian state was unwillingly to accept the outcome of the naval war as its definitive defeat. By the time Chile had gained naval supremacy there was still a long way to go before a real victory. I therefore propose to remove the sentence "The Chilean Army took Bolivia's nitrate-rich coastal region, and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy." from the lead. Apart from not being completely correct it duplicates information already provided in the lead or that can be inferred from it, such as the fact the Chile won, that there was a naval war and that Chile occupied territories of the allies. ] &#124; ] 23:30, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

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== I read the article with fascination. In the section titled "Land War" it states: Peruvians fell back to Tiliviche. But the map in this section identifies a town named Tiviliche. Which one is correct? Thank you. -- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lytsar (talkcontribs) 16:04, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Good point. There is an article in Spanish wikipedia on Tiliviche - https://es.wikipedia.org/Tiliviche - but that also mentions "La Hacienda de Tiviliche". -- Beardo (talk) 18:02, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Casualties

The casualties in the infobox need work. The Chilean casualties were wrong due to a bizarre misreading where lines such as "434-58" for the killed at Alianza/Tacna were interpreted as "between 434 and 58" instead of "between 434 and 458". The situation for Peru and Bolivia is even worse because the source gives "killed in action" and "wounded" separately for some battles, only the sum for others, and for yet others both separate figures and the sum, where the sum given by the source doesn't agree with the sum of the separate numbers given by the same source (I assume that's due to conflicting information on which the source's casualty figures is based). Also, for many of the battles the numbers are clearly rounded to the nearest 100 (or possibly even 1000) whereas for smaller skirmishes two dead might get mentioned. The proportion of dead to wounded for Peru/Bolivia seems off throughout; for example, at San Francisco (19 November 1879) they are said to have suffered 135-500 dead, but only 88 wounded - and a total of 400-6,000 "Killed in action and wounded". For another battle, the "Killed in action" outnumber the "Killed in action and wounded". The Peruvian/Bolivian figures given by the source are, in sum over all listed battles:

  • Killed in action: 12.934-18.213 (no estimate for one of the twelve considered battles)
  • Wounded: 7.891-7.896 (no estimates for two of the battles)
  • Killed in action and wounded: 4.367-10,467 (no estimates for seven of the twelve considered battles)
  • POWs: 8.103-9.103 (no estimates for two of the battles)

The article currently makes it appear as if the "Killed in action and wounded" were the total casualties Bolivia and Peru suffered, which they're not due to both battles for which the source gives no such value at all and to the inconsistency between these figures and the others for the battles for which the source gives both kinds of data. I'll do the following:

  • Correct the misinterpretation for Chile.
  • For Bolivia and Peru, go with "about 25,000 killed and wounded, about 9,000 prisoners of war". This ballpark estimate avoids giving a false sense of accuracy.

Details should be covered in the body of the article. Huon (talk) 23:23, 26 December 2018 (UTC)

Map of Chilean claims

The image used shows the Falkland Islands as Argentina's territory even though it was occupied by Great Britain at the time. Regardless of opinions of who should and should not own these islands, showing them as being Argentinean at the time is incorrect and should be amended or the map replaced with another colour scheme to show claimed British territories. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.155.59.96 (talk) 12:07, 24 August 2019 (UTC)

Over half of the lede is about the origin of the war

I have noticed that over half of the lede is about the origin of the war. Some issues are also almost repeated in the lead. While I think the lede is balanced regarding the views on the origin, this is not place to discuss it at such lenght. There are more important things to include in the lead, like the phases of the war or its societal and political consequences. Any thoughts on this? Dentren | 18:05, 24 April 2021 (UTC)

I agree that more is needed on the phases and consequences. The entire article needs to follow the WP:SUMMARY guidelines more accordingly.--MarshalN20 🕊 18:43, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
Here is a proposal to shorten the origins in the lead.
The war originated from a dispute over taxation of nitrate between Bolivia and Chile with Peru being drawn in by virtue of its 1873 treaty of alliance with Bolivia. Historians and commentators have however pointed out at deeper origins for the war including Chilean interest in taking over a resource-rich area, a long-running rivalry between Chile and Peru, as well as the unstable politics and troubled economies of Peru and Bolivia. On February 14, 1879 Chile's armed forces occupied the Bolivian port city of Antofagasta, subsequently war between Bolivia and Chile was declared on March 1, 1879, and between Chile and Peru on April 5, 1879.
I find the quote of Ronald Bruce St. John still very valuable so its should be kept among the footnotes. The secrecy and "anti-Chilean" nature of the 1873 treaty is irrelevant at this point. Also, I want to preventively state that whether Chile's actions were justified or not can be discussed elsewhere in detail. I find that the leghty origins section in the lead right now is just an unwarranted reminder that the origins were complex and that it was not just a war of aggression. Dentren | 20:17, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
  1. Ronald Bruce St. John states in The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert:

    Even though the 1873 treaty and the imposition of the 10 centavos tax proved to be the casus belli, there were deeper, more fundamental reasons for the outbreak of hostilities in 1879. On the one hand, there was the power, prestige, and relative stability of Chile compared to the economic deterioration and political discontinuity which characterised both Peru and Bolivia after independence. On the other, there was the ongoing competition for economic and political hegemony in the region, complicated by a deep antipathy between Peru and Chile. In this milieu, the vagueness of the boundaries between the three states, coupled with the discovery of valuable guano and nitrate deposits in the disputed territories, combined to produce a diplomatic conundrum of insurmountable proportions.

@Dentren: Instead of writing "originated", perhaps it would suit better to indicate that "The war began over a nitrate taxation dispute between Bolivia and Chile, with Peru being drawn in due to its secret defense pact with Bolivia"? --MarshalN20 🕊 02:28, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
MarshalN20, I added most of your suggestions but not the secretive nature of treaty since it would misslead the reader into thinking Chile was fought off-guard by an unexpected alliance. Regarding the defensive nature of the treaty I omitted it also for now as I recall som old arguments here about it and the Spanish version of the treaty article , which is well-crafted, problematizes it. Dentren | 08:49, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Salitre / salitrera

The article frequently uses the word salitre, which is the Spanish for saltpeter. Shouldn't it use the English word ?

Also salitrera - is there an English word for that ? -- Beardo (talk) 18:07, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello Beardo, saltpeter is the word that should be used here. Caliche, the source rock of saltpeter, however should not be translated. Judginf from that article Humberstone and Santa Laura Saltpeter Works a salitrera is a "saltpeter work". Dentren | 23:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

"and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy"

This sentence which are apparently sourced (have not fact-checked these offline sources) is not completely correct. Peru as a political entity was not defeated by Chile's victory at sea. The Arica, Lima and Sierra campaigns show that the Peruvian state was unwillingly to accept the outcome of the naval war as its definitive defeat. By the time Chile had gained naval supremacy there was still a long way to go before a real victory. I therefore propose to remove the sentence "The Chilean Army took Bolivia's nitrate-rich coastal region, and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy." from the lead. Apart from not being completely correct it duplicates information already provided in the lead or that can be inferred from it, such as the fact the Chile won, that there was a naval war and that Chile occupied territories of the allies. Dentren | 23:30, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

  1. St. John, Ronald Bruce; Schofield, Clive (1994). The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert. University of Durham, International Boundaries Research Unit. pp. 12–13. ISBN 1897643144.
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