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== colonial maps before Wotp == | |||
] <small>(])</small></span> 09:12, 12 August 2015 (UTC)]] | |||
In a Bolivian newspaper called "pagina siete" they published historical maps of colonial South America in where those maps seem to contradict Bolivian claims that the nation was born with the sea. In that map it does seem to show that Chile had a border with colonial Peru and Bolivia was landlocked. Even Bolivian president Evo morales criticized the publishing of the maps as being unpatriotic. Even more astonishing the VP of Bolivia made a press conference days later outing the editor of Pagina siete of having partial Chilean ancestry with a copy of the editors family tree. Anyway Is it possible to post those maps published by pagina siete on this article? <small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 08:30, 26 January 2015 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:The issue belongs more to "Atacama dispute" than to the war, but it is an interesting one. Can you post the link to the article?. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 11:20, 26 January 2015 (UTC) | |||
::It's difficult to find the article on the pagina siete. As soon as the maps were published the newspaper suddenly changed its views and become more Bolivian nationalist than a objective news source therefore that article link doesn't work anymore. But you if you search Google hard enough you might find the article or reporting of the article. BTW the map i attempted to delete is not a professional map but a very feeble amateur drawing and it clearly doesn't follow the protocols for maps. I won't bother to pursue the issue but take in mind what I said before about pagina siete. <small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 12:31, 26 January 2015 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
==Original synthesis issues== | |||
The way the references are used to support the text in the section "Causes of the War" indicates this contains original research and/or an original synthesis. This is not allowed (])). ] | ] 09:26, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:Hi Dentren, we know that since three days. It is the content of the tag template. We need your concrete arguments to improve the article. Would you be so kind to elaborate your claims?. Thanks in advance, --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 09:28, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::There are numerous cases in the text. '''Example 1''': Pike writing in 1963 "refuting" sources from 1992 and 2002. ] | ] 09:35, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::I insist: you have to elaborate in detail all your claims in the talk page, failing this we can't find solutions for it. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 10:41, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::Nope. I will discuss/point out each issue separately. Experience tells it best to do so. ] | ] 11:03, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::Good idea. Now explain what is the problem in example 1. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 11:51, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::That Pike (1963) can't be refuting authors and interpretations dating to 1992 and 2002. ] | ] 11:57, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::It's all?. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 12:02, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::What is your proposal to resolve the issue?. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 12:17, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::I am divided about what to do. Because even if these individual synthesis/WP:OR problems are solved (of which I have brought one into the light yet), what remains is an underlying structure ("Saters four reasons") that is itself original and undue weight. I page 37 of ''Andean Tragedy'' I can't see Sater make these 4 distinctions. In page 37 (and 38) he essentially discuss the economic view, being somewhat critical of it. ] | ] 13:12, 13 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::You can't copy word for word the text of Sater, it isn't allowed because of copyright law. So we have to do a '''synthesis''', that is we read the text and summarize it. But you don't want to do so because it is '''synthesis'''. How do you want to explain what Sater says in Misplaced Pages?. Do it!. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 18:09, 13 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::There are alternatives: for example employing quotes or rewording. ] | ] 18:16, 13 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::I have done it and you put the tag "OR". Do it better then. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 18:28, 13 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::::::Good! your edits are definitely an improvement. Now lets continuing fixing the section. ] | ] 20:47, 16 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::Well, I deleted your tag until you inform us about your problems. You have to explain in detail what are your claims, what is the reason for, what is your proposal. Misplaced Pages can't guess your thoughts. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 07:57, 17 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::As you should know, the bizarre theory about a Chilean premedited war isn't original from Salazar. In 1879, in its Memory of the Ministerio de RR.EE. of Peru, Peruvians invented such conspiracy theory that had been debuked by so many historians: "... abriendo nuevos cauces a su politica usurpadora y vastisimo campo a sus industrias y comercio quebrantados por terribles fracasos financieros abrumadora crisis mercantil y agotamiento de las principales fuentes naturales de vida de aquella republica". (pág. VIII) | |||
::::::::::::::--<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 08:04, 17 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::::::Undue Sater?. Are you kidding me?. If I cite Pike, you say "OR" because Sater was cited first. But you claim other autors aren't cited!. Do you want to cite other authors or not? which one? Salazar?, really?. He is already cited there!. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 10:51, 17 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
{{outdent|::::::::::::::}}Havent even mentioned Salazar and accuse me of supporting what is to you a "bizzarre theory". Clearly the section positions Sater as "the authority" and therefore conveys him undue weight in flagrant disregard of other scholars like L. Ortega (not just Salayar and Pinto). ] | ] 13:46, 17 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:Can you please finally come to the point?. What do you want?, what is your proposal? What does Ortega say that Sater doesn't say?. Please, elaborate your claims before you put the tag!. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 19:35, 17 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::To base the whole origins section on single author is ridiculous and contrary to a neutral point of view. The article as it is now places Saters views in the middle and construct a an ]. ] | ] 17:49, 18 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::And which is your proposal?. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 21:11, 18 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::Reduce Sater content and/or compensate with more content from other authors. Deconstruct the original research (or original synthesis) narrative so that authors not referring explicitelly to others are presented separately. ] | ] 18:09, 19 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::Hi Dentren, Sorry but I can't understand you. Would you be so kind to present a proposal that resolve your, in my opinion unfounded, claims?. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 10:08, 23 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::The claims are founded as explained above. The issue to resolve is not easy because I will probably require plenty of editing and a lot of research into the sources. I wonder what you have thought about the problem? I suggest we should invite editors from the Spanish Misplaced Pages to take a look on this problem. ] | ] 17:37, 27 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::The claims aren't founded above, this is the reason I invited you to participate in the solution but you are trying to sidestep. Please, simply say: | |||
::::::# What says other historians what Sater doesn't says or consider? | |||
::::::# Which other causes of the war would you like to see here? | |||
::::::# What do you think is overdue in the list? | |||
::::::# Why is it ridiculous to base (and to say it) the section in Sater's book? | |||
::::::# Where is the original research to summarize Sater's text? | |||
::::::# Do you still sustain that Pike (1963) can't rebuke the reasons given by the Peruvian gov in 1879? | |||
::::::# Have you found the places where Sater tells about the 4 reasons given in the subsection? | |||
::::::I refuse to have a discussion in Spanish Language in a talk page of a English Misplaced Pages article and remember that Misplaced Pages isn't a democracy. Please, don't be vindicative. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 08:51, 28 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::::As I have stated before the issues I have raised are about weight, point of view and violation of ]. I not, at this point singled out other theories/causes to be incorporated. The way the narrative of Sater is coopted and consturcted upon it in an original way is what troubles me. Pike (1963) certainly cant be rebuking things said by historians in the 1990s and 2000s. Also, nobody has proposed a discussion ''in'' Spanish, plase read again my comment above. –] | ] 11:49, 1 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
== Third Opinion: Original synthesis issues == | |||
A ] has been requested concerning original synthesis issues. Unfortunately, due to the length of the above discussion, it isn't entirely clear what statement or statements are claimed to be synthesis amounting to original research. Can one of the two editors state the question concisely as to what is said to be original research? ] (]) 02:38, 6 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
:I can't do it. Dentren, it is your turn. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 14:11, 6 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
::If the question is properly framed, I will try to answer. However, in view of how long disputes about this article have been going on, including an inconclusive stop at ], I think that ] might be in order. ] (]) 16:54, 6 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::Actually ] was about the ''economic'' causes of the war and I solicited a formal mediation, also about the economic causes, which was refused, see ]. We need help here and I support your engagement as far as I can. But the other side has to explain his claims, I can't speak for Dentren. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 20:19, 6 September 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::So Keysangger asked for a 3O but wanted me to state the question? That's not how ] works. ] | ] 12:48, 5 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
:::::Hi Dentren, nice that you are again there. Now, please, substantiate your claims and answer {{ping|Robert McClenon}}'s question: ''''. Of course, as I stated before, I can't talk for your claims. Thanks in advance, --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 23:03, 5 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
::::::The mediation request was declined due to the lack of a mediator in the northern summer. Maybe a new request for mediation might be more successful. I am willing to try to provide a third opinion, but only if the question about original research is worded concisely. ] (]) 00:19, 6 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
I requested again a third opinion and hope for a successful and happy end. Lets continue the conversation in "Third Opinion: Original synthesis issues (2. Attempt)". --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 09:00, 6 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
==What happened to the lead?== | |||
I don't visit this article much often. I can see many aspects that have deteriorated over months ans years. Some others have obviously improved. I find the current lead unbearable. I is way too long and include long quotes, which is not the best way of summarizing things. I suggest shortening it to half its size and to give it stability avoid controversial stuff, opinion and interpretations altogether (this can be explained with due detail) and focus on well established facts. ] | ] 10:33, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
:Are you sure?. you say the opposite. Which one is your serious opinion? --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 10:44, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
::If you understood it wrong the comment you mention was mean for a apparently inexperienced newcomer that might have thought he could re-write the whole article. ] | ] 11:05, 12 August 2015 (UTC) | |||
== Third Opinion: Original synthesis issues (2. attempt) == | |||
I will leave the Third Opinion request up in case maybe another volunteer can figure out what the question is. I still think that the question is too long and complicated for a Third Opinion. ] (]) 15:39, 6 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
===A third opinion=== | |||
Well, I've given a third opinion before that turned into an internminable, ''months''-long mediation. I'll give this one a shot and hope that doesn't happen! | |||
{{ping|Keysanger|Dentren|Robert McClenon}} I've skimmed through the "background" section of this article and your discussions on this page. As far as I understand, the issue is essentially this: can we, as Misplaced Pages editors, contrast the arguments of different authors when they do not explicitly mention each other? | |||
For example, can we write the following, if none of the four authors mentioned each other by name? "Smith (2009) argues that the sky is blue, citing spectrographical studies done in the 1980s. However, other authors like Johnson (2010) and Abdul-Majid (1998) have described the sky as green instead. Wong (2000) has rejected the debate entirely, saying that color is a meaningless notion. | |||
== I read the article with fascination. In the section titled "Land War" it states: Peruvians fell back to Tiliviche. But the map in this section identifies a town named Tiviliche. Which one is correct? Thank you. -- <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 16:04, 1 October 2020 (UTC)</span> | |||
I think that '''yes''', we can. As long as we present the authors' views and their level of acceptance accurately, we can place them side by side in whatever way would be most helpful for readers. We can't combine two arguments to make a third argument of our own (for example, we can't say that "the scholarly consensus is that the sky is blue-green"), but we can certainly compare and contrast. We should be careful to avoid implying that Johnson explicitly referred to Smith if she didn't, and we should indicate they year each author wrote in (because there's a general presumption in scholarship that later scholars are more likely to be correct), but otherwise, we as editors have a fair bit of freedom. | |||
:Good point. There is an article in Spanish wikipedia on Tiliviche - https://es.wikipedia.org/Tiliviche - but that also mentions "La Hacienda de Tiviliche". -- ] (]) 18:02, 9 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Casualties == | |||
:{{ping|Neil P. Quinn}} | |||
:Thanks Neil. I agree with you. There is nothing more to be said on issue. --<span style="font-family:times; text-shadow: 0 0 .2em #7af">] <small>(])</small></span> 15:16, 8 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
The casualties in the infobox need work. The Chilean casualties were wrong due to a bizarre misreading where lines such as "434-58" for the killed at Alianza/Tacna were interpreted as "between 434 and 58" instead of "between 434 and 458". The situation for Peru and Bolivia is even worse because the source gives "killed in action" and "wounded" separately for some battles, only the sum for others, and for yet others both separate figures and the sum, where the sum given by the source doesn't agree with the sum of the separate numbers given by the same source (I assume that's due to conflicting information on which the source's casualty figures is based). Also, for many of the battles the numbers are clearly rounded to the nearest 100 (or possibly even 1000) whereas for smaller skirmishes two dead might get mentioned. The proportion of dead to wounded for Peru/Bolivia seems off throughout; for example, at San Francisco (19 November 1879) they are said to have suffered 135-500 dead, but only 88 wounded - and a total of 400-6,000 "Killed in action and wounded". For another battle, the "Killed in action" outnumber the "Killed in action and wounded". The Peruvian/Bolivian figures given by the source are, in sum over all listed battles: | |||
::There is no reasong to elevate one authors writings to ], as it attempted to do with William Sater here. Authors statements should be independent and not embedded in an original way (specially when they do not even mention each other!). Embedding other authors in Saters anaytical framework is ] and undue favoritism towards one author. ] | ] 07:22, 9 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
*Killed in action: 12.934-18.213 (no estimate for one of the twelve considered battles) | |||
*Wounded: 7.891-7.896 (no estimates for two of the battles) | |||
*Killed in action and wounded: 4.367-10,467 (no estimates for seven of the twelve considered battles) | |||
*POWs: 8.103-9.103 (no estimates for two of the battles) | |||
The article currently makes it appear as if the "Killed in action and wounded" were the total casualties Bolivia and Peru suffered, which they're not due to both battles for which the source gives no such value at all and to the inconsistency between these figures and the others for the battles for which the source gives both kinds of data. I'll do the following: | |||
*Correct the misinterpretation for Chile. | |||
*For Bolivia and Peru, go with "about 25,000 killed and wounded, about 9,000 prisoners of war". This ballpark estimate avoids giving a false sense of accuracy. | |||
Details should be covered in the body of the article. ] (]) 23:23, 26 December 2018 (UTC) | |||
== Map of Chilean claims == | |||
::: {{ping|Dentren}} regarding specific paragraphs, I might agree with you. But in general, I don't. There's no requirement that we present each author's argument in clearly separated and non-referential sections. In addition, from a quick look at the bibliography, Slater seems to have written much of the most recent work on the war, so it doesn't particularly concern me that he gets more attention than other authors.—] (]) 17:53, 9 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
The image used shows the Falkland Islands as Argentina's territory even though it was occupied by Great Britain at the time. Regardless of opinions of who should and should not own these islands, showing them as being Argentinean at the time is incorrect and should be amended or the map replaced with another colour scheme to show claimed British territories. <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 12:07, 24 August 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
::::{{ping|Neil P. Quinn}}, I agree with your point of view in non-controversial articles. As with most articles of wars and deaths of contemporary political significance we need to take caution here. Misplaced Pages should not favor any particular view or use that view as framework to present the other views. By the way that Sater has many references in the article can be cretied to Keysanger and to the fact that there is preference in English Misplaced Pages for English-language sources (which of course does not mean views expressed in English-language material should hold a priviledged place). ] | ] 09:45, 10 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
==Over half of the lede is about the origin of the war== | |||
::::There are several Chilean, Bolivian, and Peruvian authors that have also tackled various topics regarding the War of the Pacific. Keysanger single-handedly decided to delete them and place Sater as the primary voice. I'd like to be able to further contribute here, but I am busy with things in real life (plus, I am more interested in dealing with other projects in WP than butting heads with a user that doesn't want to drop down the axe). The only reason I am messaging here is because I see that Rob and Neil are falling for the idea that this article is an easy one to understand; this is possibly one of the most (if not the most) controversial topic in the history of west South America. Even now Bolivia and Chile are disputing a case directly related to this war at the International Court of Justice. This article needs to be heavily reviewed and fixed by an editor other than Keysanger.--] ] 16:30, 10 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
I have noticed that over half of the lede is about the origin of the war. Some issues are also almost repeated in the lead. While I think the lede is balanced regarding the views on the origin, this is not place to discuss it at such lenght. There are more important things to include in the lead, like the phases of the war or its societal and political consequences. Any thoughts on this? ] | ] 18:05, 24 April 2021 (UTC) | |||
:I agree that more is needed on the phases and consequences. The entire article needs to follow the ] guidelines more accordingly.--] ]] 18:43, 24 April 2021 (UTC) | |||
* {{ping|Keysanger|Dentren|MarshalN20}} It sounds like this case is more complex that I realized. It still doesn't sound like there's a problem with original research; as I said earlier, I'm not inclined to think that "embedding other authors' statements in William Sater's analytical framework" is a big problem, although in specific cases I could be convinced otherwise. | |||
::Here is a proposal to shorten the origins in the lead. | |||
: However, it does sound like there could be real issues with undue weight. Keysanger, if you deleted valid sources without a good reason (and their being in Spanish wouldn't be a good reason, of course), that's very concerning. | |||
:::The war originated from a dispute over taxation of nitrate between Bolivia and Chile with Peru being drawn in by virtue of its ]. Historians and commentators have however pointed out at deeper origins for the war including Chilean interest in taking over a resource-rich area, a long-running rivalry between Chile and Peru, as well as the unstable politics and troubled economies of Peru and Bolivia.{{efn-ua|] states in ''The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert'': | |||
: I'm not sure how to help beyond diving into the substance of the article and checking sources for myself. However, given how fraught the issue is, I imagine it would take me quite a long time to get up to speed. I may try to do that, but if any of you have other suggestions about what I can do, feel free to suggest them. I do speak Spanish.—] (]) 19:51, 10 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
:<blockquote>Even though the 1873 treaty and the imposition of the 10 centavos tax proved to be the ], there were deeper, more fundamental reasons for the outbreak of hostilities in 1879. On the one hand, there was the power, prestige, and relative stability of Chile compared to the economic deterioration and political discontinuity which characterised both Peru and Bolivia after independence. On the other, there was the ongoing competition for economic and political hegemony in the region, complicated by a deep antipathy between Peru and Chile. In this milieu, the vagueness of the boundaries between the three states, coupled with the discovery of valuable guano and nitrate deposits in the disputed territories, combined to produce a diplomatic conundrum of insurmountable proportions.<ref>{{cite book |title=The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert |first1=Ronald Bruce |last1=St. John |first2=Clive |last2=Schofield |publisher=University of Durham, International Boundaries Research Unit |date=1994 |pages=12–13 |isbn=1897643144}}</ref></blockquote>}} On February 14, 1879 Chile's armed forces occupied the Bolivian port city of ], subsequently war between Bolivia and Chile was declared on March 1, 1879, and between Chile and Peru on April 5, 1879. | |||
::I find the quote of Ronald Bruce St. John still very valuable so its should be kept among the footnotes. The secrecy and "anti-Chilean" nature of the 1873 treaty is irrelevant at this point. Also, I want to preventively state that whether Chile's actions were justified or not can be discussed elsewhere in detail. I find that the leghty origins section in the lead right now is just an unwarranted reminder that the origins were complex and that it was not just a ]. ] | ] 20:17, 5 June 2021 (UTC) | |||
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::{{ping|Dentren}} Instead of writing "originated", perhaps it would suit better to indicate that "The war began over a nitrate taxation dispute between Bolivia and Chile, with Peru being drawn in due to its ]"? --] ]] 02:28, 8 June 2021 (UTC) | ||
:::], I added most of your suggestions but not the secretive nature of treaty since it would misslead the reader into thinking Chile was fought off-guard by an unexpected alliance. Regarding the defensive nature of the treaty I omitted it also for now as I recall som old arguments here about it and the Spanish version of the treaty article , which is well-crafted, problematizes it. ] | ] 08:49, 7 July 2021 (UTC) | |||
== Salitre / salitrera == | |||
===A fourth opinion=== | |||
] has broken the code of a question that I was unable to understand. ] turns out to be saying (as he has now explained) that he means that using Sater's analysis as the reference framework for presenting the views of other authors is ] amounting to ]. I agree with Quinn and disagree with Dentren that contrasting the analyses of other historians with that of Sater is original research. I would suggest that Dentren would have a stronger case, although still not a persuasive case, for saying that this presentation gives ] to the analysis of Sater. However, if Sater is one of the most recent and most thorough historians of the war, I don't consider it undue to use him as the reference framework as long as other scholars are compared and contrasted. ] (]) 00:07, 10 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
The article frequently uses the word salitre, which is the Spanish for saltpeter. Shouldn't it use the English word ? | |||
If Dentren still insists that use of Sater as a reference for comparison of other historians is undue weight, he can either use a ] or make another request for ]. In view of the length and complexity of the discussions here, and of the fact that the previous request for mediation met all of the requirements for mediation, but that a mediator was not available in the northern summer, I would suggest refiling at ]. Those are my opinions. ] (]) 00:07, 10 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
Also salitrera - is there an English word for that ? -- ] (]) 18:07, 9 October 2021 (UTC) | |||
:], I'm fine with your amendment to the case, if that is the best way to addres current bias (Anyways using a 1963 paper to refute a 2002 publication still accounts to ]). ] | ] 09:49, 10 October 2015 (UTC) | |||
:Hello ], saltpeter is the word that should be used here. ], the source rock of saltpeter, however should not be translated. Judginf from that article ] a salitrera is a "saltpeter work". ] | ] 23:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC) | |||
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This sentence which are apparently sourced (have not fact-checked these offline sources) is not completely correct. Peru as a political entity was not defeated by Chile's victory at sea. The Arica, Lima and Sierra campaigns show that the Peruvian state was unwillingly to accept the outcome of the naval war as its definitive defeat. By the time Chile had gained naval supremacy there was still a long way to go before a real victory. I therefore propose to remove the sentence "The Chilean Army took Bolivia's nitrate-rich coastal region, and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy." from the lead. Apart from not being completely correct it duplicates information already provided in the lead or that can be inferred from it, such as the fact the Chile won, that there was a naval war and that Chile occupied territories of the allies. ] | ] 23:30, 29 November 2021 (UTC) | |||
:] has attempted to answer this above. My concern is that it is undue weight and ] to embed other authors statements in William Saters analytical framework, in particular when they are not referring to each other. ] | ] 07:27, 9 October 2015 (UTC) |
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== I read the article with fascination. In the section titled "Land War" it states: Peruvians fell back to Tiliviche. But the map in this section identifies a town named Tiviliche. Which one is correct? Thank you. -- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lytsar (talk • contribs) 16:04, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
- Good point. There is an article in Spanish wikipedia on Tiliviche - https://es.wikipedia.org/Tiliviche - but that also mentions "La Hacienda de Tiviliche". -- Beardo (talk) 18:02, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
Casualties
The casualties in the infobox need work. The Chilean casualties were wrong due to a bizarre misreading where lines such as "434-58" for the killed at Alianza/Tacna were interpreted as "between 434 and 58" instead of "between 434 and 458". The situation for Peru and Bolivia is even worse because the source gives "killed in action" and "wounded" separately for some battles, only the sum for others, and for yet others both separate figures and the sum, where the sum given by the source doesn't agree with the sum of the separate numbers given by the same source (I assume that's due to conflicting information on which the source's casualty figures is based). Also, for many of the battles the numbers are clearly rounded to the nearest 100 (or possibly even 1000) whereas for smaller skirmishes two dead might get mentioned. The proportion of dead to wounded for Peru/Bolivia seems off throughout; for example, at San Francisco (19 November 1879) they are said to have suffered 135-500 dead, but only 88 wounded - and a total of 400-6,000 "Killed in action and wounded". For another battle, the "Killed in action" outnumber the "Killed in action and wounded". The Peruvian/Bolivian figures given by the source are, in sum over all listed battles:
- Killed in action: 12.934-18.213 (no estimate for one of the twelve considered battles)
- Wounded: 7.891-7.896 (no estimates for two of the battles)
- Killed in action and wounded: 4.367-10,467 (no estimates for seven of the twelve considered battles)
- POWs: 8.103-9.103 (no estimates for two of the battles)
The article currently makes it appear as if the "Killed in action and wounded" were the total casualties Bolivia and Peru suffered, which they're not due to both battles for which the source gives no such value at all and to the inconsistency between these figures and the others for the battles for which the source gives both kinds of data. I'll do the following:
- Correct the misinterpretation for Chile.
- For Bolivia and Peru, go with "about 25,000 killed and wounded, about 9,000 prisoners of war". This ballpark estimate avoids giving a false sense of accuracy.
Details should be covered in the body of the article. Huon (talk) 23:23, 26 December 2018 (UTC)
Map of Chilean claims
The image used shows the Falkland Islands as Argentina's territory even though it was occupied by Great Britain at the time. Regardless of opinions of who should and should not own these islands, showing them as being Argentinean at the time is incorrect and should be amended or the map replaced with another colour scheme to show claimed British territories. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 109.155.59.96 (talk) 12:07, 24 August 2019 (UTC)
Over half of the lede is about the origin of the war
I have noticed that over half of the lede is about the origin of the war. Some issues are also almost repeated in the lead. While I think the lede is balanced regarding the views on the origin, this is not place to discuss it at such lenght. There are more important things to include in the lead, like the phases of the war or its societal and political consequences. Any thoughts on this? Dentren | 18:05, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- I agree that more is needed on the phases and consequences. The entire article needs to follow the WP:SUMMARY guidelines more accordingly.--MarshalN20 🕊 18:43, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- Here is a proposal to shorten the origins in the lead.
- The war originated from a dispute over taxation of nitrate between Bolivia and Chile with Peru being drawn in by virtue of its 1873 treaty of alliance with Bolivia. Historians and commentators have however pointed out at deeper origins for the war including Chilean interest in taking over a resource-rich area, a long-running rivalry between Chile and Peru, as well as the unstable politics and troubled economies of Peru and Bolivia. On February 14, 1879 Chile's armed forces occupied the Bolivian port city of Antofagasta, subsequently war between Bolivia and Chile was declared on March 1, 1879, and between Chile and Peru on April 5, 1879.
- I find the quote of Ronald Bruce St. John still very valuable so its should be kept among the footnotes. The secrecy and "anti-Chilean" nature of the 1873 treaty is irrelevant at this point. Also, I want to preventively state that whether Chile's actions were justified or not can be discussed elsewhere in detail. I find that the leghty origins section in the lead right now is just an unwarranted reminder that the origins were complex and that it was not just a war of aggression. Dentren | 20:17, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
- Here is a proposal to shorten the origins in the lead.
- Ronald Bruce St. John states in The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert:
Even though the 1873 treaty and the imposition of the 10 centavos tax proved to be the casus belli, there were deeper, more fundamental reasons for the outbreak of hostilities in 1879. On the one hand, there was the power, prestige, and relative stability of Chile compared to the economic deterioration and political discontinuity which characterised both Peru and Bolivia after independence. On the other, there was the ongoing competition for economic and political hegemony in the region, complicated by a deep antipathy between Peru and Chile. In this milieu, the vagueness of the boundaries between the three states, coupled with the discovery of valuable guano and nitrate deposits in the disputed territories, combined to produce a diplomatic conundrum of insurmountable proportions.
- @Dentren: Instead of writing "originated", perhaps it would suit better to indicate that "The war began over a nitrate taxation dispute between Bolivia and Chile, with Peru being drawn in due to its secret defense pact with Bolivia"? --MarshalN20 🕊 02:28, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
- MarshalN20, I added most of your suggestions but not the secretive nature of treaty since it would misslead the reader into thinking Chile was fought off-guard by an unexpected alliance. Regarding the defensive nature of the treaty I omitted it also for now as I recall som old arguments here about it and the Spanish version of the treaty article , which is well-crafted, problematizes it. Dentren | 08:49, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Dentren: Instead of writing "originated", perhaps it would suit better to indicate that "The war began over a nitrate taxation dispute between Bolivia and Chile, with Peru being drawn in due to its secret defense pact with Bolivia"? --MarshalN20 🕊 02:28, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
Salitre / salitrera
The article frequently uses the word salitre, which is the Spanish for saltpeter. Shouldn't it use the English word ?
Also salitrera - is there an English word for that ? -- Beardo (talk) 18:07, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
- Hello Beardo, saltpeter is the word that should be used here. Caliche, the source rock of saltpeter, however should not be translated. Judginf from that article Humberstone and Santa Laura Saltpeter Works a salitrera is a "saltpeter work". Dentren | 23:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
"and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy"
This sentence which are apparently sourced (have not fact-checked these offline sources) is not completely correct. Peru as a political entity was not defeated by Chile's victory at sea. The Arica, Lima and Sierra campaigns show that the Peruvian state was unwillingly to accept the outcome of the naval war as its definitive defeat. By the time Chile had gained naval supremacy there was still a long way to go before a real victory. I therefore propose to remove the sentence "The Chilean Army took Bolivia's nitrate-rich coastal region, and Peru was defeated by the Chilean Navy." from the lead. Apart from not being completely correct it duplicates information already provided in the lead or that can be inferred from it, such as the fact the Chile won, that there was a naval war and that Chile occupied territories of the allies. Dentren | 23:30, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
- St. John, Ronald Bruce; Schofield, Clive (1994). The Bolivia–Chile–Peru Dispute in the Atacama Desert. University of Durham, International Boundaries Research Unit. pp. 12–13. ISBN 1897643144.
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