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Please read the discussion on US map color ]. Basically, it says that red is not neutral for a map color. I suggest we change permanently Iran's map color from red to green (as it has always been). ] (]) 22:09, 17 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
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I tried to change that once but my edit was undone.] (]) 19:50, 18 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
== POV on recent events == | |||
:Oh its a country! I'm sorry I thought Iran was a giant lake of fire, what with the 'Death to the Zionist Entity' and all.--] (]) 19:58, 18 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
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::::: Is it supposed to be ajoke or is this what you have learnt in your elementary school?--] (]) 11:20, 2 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Since Mahmoud Ahmadinejad's election, Iran has frequently been the target of verbal attacks by the United States. President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad's naturally outspoken nature has caused him to respond to this frequently by re-asserting that Iran's sovereignty is not dependent on the United States. Most recently, high level officials in the United States have even discussed violating Iran's territorial integrity by invading the nation over its nuclear ambitions. In a show of support, Russia and China currently oppose any military action against Iran and the United Nations has elected Iran to a vice-chair position on the U.N. Disarmament Commission. Iran claims that it was their sole right to develop nuclear technology on a "Peaceful scale". Although Iran had previously agreed to limit its activities to peaceful energy production, in response to the threat of invasion, Iran has recently announced that the nation is now researching the construction of a P2 centrifuge, one of the most important components in the purification of Uranium 235, the core of a nuclear bomb, and is mobilizing a large army in its own defense. | |||
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Please explain how this is neutral. It represents only the Iranian side of the facts, and does not even mention Ahmadinejad's remarks on Israel or the bomb which reflect a quite different course of events than is given above. | |||
I am taking suggestions on how to rewrite this paragraph to include both sides of the events. ] (]) 21:01, 22 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Cities == | |||
::True, what do you suggest we change it to? --]<sup>] | </sup> 22:15, 22 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::The easy thing is to just get rid of the section. -- ] 22:39, 22 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
The Major Cities section shouldn't contain a list of cities with information oon them. I'm going to rewrite it so it is the way it is supposed to be, i.e. in prose and mentioning about four or five cities not 8!] (]) 22:52, 18 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::I suggest you put yourselves in the position of a third-party observing the situation, and use the following as a basis for rephrasing with an extra reference: | |||
::::"Since the election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, there has been an increase in tensions between Iran and the United States, particularly with regard to the nuclear issue and the possibility of military action. However, military action is opposed by other members of the U. N. Security Council, in particular Russia and China. Significantly, Iran has recently been elected to the post of vice-chair on the U.N. Disarmament Commission.<ref>{{en icon}} {{cite web| url=http://www.cnsnews.com/ViewForeignBureaus.asp?Page=/ForeignBureaus/archive/200604/INT20060417c.html| title= Iran Elected to UN Disarmament Commission | first=CNSNews.com| last=International| accessdate=2006-04-22}}</ref> Iran claims the right to research nuclear energy for peaceful purposes, under the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty, which it has signed.<ref name="bbc">{{en icon}} {{cite web| url=http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/middle_east/4597738.stm| title="Iran breaks seals at nuclear site"| first=BBC| last=World News website| accessdate=2006-04-22}}</ref>. Most recently, President Ahmadinejad announced that Iran is now researching the construction of a P2 centrifuge, which "''American officials and inspectors say could speed Iran's path to developing a nuclear weapon.''<ref name="iht">{{en icon}} {{cite web| url=http://www.iht.com/articles/2006/04/17/africa/web..php| title= New worry rises after Iran claims nuclear steps| first=New York Times| last=Special Report| accessdate=2006-04-20}}</ref>" | |||
:::Obviously it needs a little tweaking. ] 23:02, 22 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== answer to inferno abt Russia and Kazakhstan == | |||
::::I like it, well done. --]<sup>] | </sup> 23:13, 22 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
you said that Iran has no borders with Russia and Kazakhstan and that if we include them then we should also include other states (in the Souths). | |||
::::: I disagree. The changes to the paragraph say nothing about the United States and its unwarranted aggression. Namely, for almost a decade Bush and his administration have repeatedly verbally attacked Iran, calling them names like "an axis of evil". It is the policies of the United States and their posturing, not the offhand comments of Iran's hotheaded president, that have caused these tensions. Words like "pre-emptive strike", "all options being on the table", not to mention the fact that everything coming from the US government mirrors precisely what they said before they went into Iraq, would naturally put any nation into a defensive posture. The coming conflict has the potential to destabilize into a significant nuclear action, making it one of the most significant threats to Iran in fifty years. We owe it to each and every individual who is residing within that nation to present the facts- and that means including both comments regarding Mahmoud's posturing AND the hostile peacocking that the US has been bristling for years now. ] 01:53, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Dear friend, you should notice that the Caspian Sea in different than the Persian Gulf. Aside from the territorial waters Persian Gulf is an international body of water. Therefore Iran is separated by international waters from Oman and UAE. But Caspian see in not international waters. it is an internal sea (lake) and belongs to the litoral states. There is no agreement on the division of oil resources, but the internal sea character of it is not in doubt. Caspian sea is therefore can be seen as territory/condominium of the litoral states. Therefore Iran has borders with Kazakhstan and Russia but not with those Arab statelets you proposed.--] (]) 08:24, 19 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:The statement that "There is no agreement on the division of oil resources" is '''incorrect''' and '''absurd''' and testifies to an utter ignorance of the international law at best. Iran has an agreement with Soviet Union (1921 and 1940) that the resources of the Caspian Sea are to be divided equally between Iran and Soviet Union. When Soviet Union fell apart, Russian Federation publicly announced that all international agreements binding for Soviet Union would remain binding for the newly independent states (legally, this falls under the heading of "the principle of the succession of states"). This naturally includes the aforementioned agreement between Iran and Soviet Union concerning the resources of the Caspian Sea. The much trumpeted claim that resources of the Caspian Sea should be shared equally between all the nations bordering on the Caspian Sea is devoid of any legality — it is just an unfounded claim and worth nothing (similarly as regards the lie that "There is no agreement on the division of oil resources"). Legally, Iran has and maintains the right over 50% of the Caspian-Sea resources and all the other nations (i.e. members of the now defunct Soviet Union) bordering on the Caspian Sea should come together and decide on how to divide the remaining 50% between themselves; Iran has no role to play in this decision making. If it is true that Islamic Republic of Iran is now aiming at 20% share of the Caspian Sea resources (which I doubt), then there is no word to describe such act but betrayal of Iran's rights. It seems that the old Russian Imperialism in Iran is still alive and well! It is ironic that on the one hand Iranian authorities constantly issue anti-imperialistic slogans against "the West" but at the same time ''seem'' (as I indicated above, I doubt that Iran would rescind her above-mentioned treaty with the now defunct Soviet Union) intent on selling out to "the North", just as Iran did in the 19th and the first half of the 20th century (above all else, one should not forget the shameful ] and ] treaties which were nothing but overt sell outs). Those interested, and not suffering from intellectual indolence, may deign to make an Internet search on the subject matter. See, for instance: . ] | |||
::The article should be a ] of the existing events. If you want to include words like "''Bush and his administration have repeatedly verbally attacked Iran''" then you need to find a verifiable source for this. We owe the citizens of Iran and the USA absolutely nothing of the kind being suggested. Present the facts with ]. Anything beyond this is entering ] territory. I am not saying that the paragraph changes I made are absolutely perfect but I tried writing it from a third-party perspective. ] 02:14, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Yes this is what I say, while there was a contract diving 50- 50 % after the collapse they do notagree on this. Then Iran came with a formula of each 5 litoral get 20% but they want t give Iran only 11-13 % which is unacceptable. The best thing is 50% for Iran and 50% to Russia as an heir of the USSR, if Russia wants o give the litoral states their share, each get 12,5 % , but then I ask why nt divinding on 15 republics? Because the whole USSR and not only the litoral states got 50%.--] (]) 10:02, 20 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:: You ''did'' say "There is no agreement on the division of oil resources", which I maintain not to be true! People may say all sorts of things, but the fact is that the issue has to my best knowledge never been referred to any international court for arbitration. When last year President Putin was visiting Tehran, almost all newspapers where parroting the same misinformation (the same misinformation in your above text), which is sad. You cannot play into the hands of a host of illiterate journalists (excluding Simon Jenkins of ''The Guardian'' for whom I have the highest respect) who increasingly reproduce the texts handed down to them by the officials whose motivations can be anything but pure. It is clear that Russia and all her former republics want a bigger share of the resources, but this does not mean that what has absolutely no basis in the international law (the link I presented yesterday makes this abundantly clear) should be given credence on the Misplaced Pages pages. ] | |||
::: With reference to the above discussions, I should like to propose that the above facts (most clearly discussed in ) be brought up in the Misplaced Pages entry of ], lest the fiction of "There is no agreement on the division of oil resources" be made into reality before long. ] | |||
::: well u are right maybe the better formulation was that there is a pact/ contract but the former Soviet Union do not respect it. Unfortunately Iran is too "soft" towards them. --] (]) 19:53, 20 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::: Verifiable source? Are you actually suggesting that you are not aware of the constant rhetoric being thrown out into the miasma by the administration of the US? Calling a sovereign nation "evil", let alone an entire "axis of evil", not to mention an "outpost of tyranny", has vowed ], and, most frighteningly, Bush is actually planning on being the first world leader since WWII to ! What we owe the citizens of Iran and the USA is the truth, presented with ALL the facts intact. Yes, these facts are, right now painting a very dismal picture of the US' role in Iran, but those ARE the facts. ] 03:18, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::: The fact is that if International Law counts for nothing, then Iran should also declare the ] and ] treaties as void. To get an impression, you walk over the Aras River, and you will see places like these that Iran lost through these shameful treaties: , , , , . Recall that these treaties were made between two dynasties which no longer are in existence! And I am serious in saying that should Iran's 50% get reduced to 12%, then Iran should absolutely renege on these two treaties, or at least make them part of a grand re-negotiation of issues by which 50% should get reduced to 12%: if the situation on the ground has changed to the degree that 50% can get diminished to 12%, then nothing else should be held as inviolable. It should never be a one-way street, otherwise they should be open with the people and put boards on the borders and openly announce "For Sale". As for Iran being "too soft" on these issues, Iran, like any other country, consists of people and if the people in charge are soft it must be owing to the ignorance of the general population of Iran of some basic facts of their history. Insofar as I can recall, the history books from which I learnt history of Iran (ages ago), did only mention the names of the above two treaties; the contents of these treaties were never disclosed to us. If this is the level of knowledge that one may assume of the people of their history, then this so-called "softness" (which seems to me to be indicative of a softness of their collective mind) does not come as a surprise. Of course, Iran having pushed herself into her present position, Russia can dictate whatever she wishes and who can blame them for that? Iran was in this position a century ago, and like an abused individual seems not to be able to avoid falling back into the bosom her abuser time and time again. Kind regards, ] | |||
:::: This section is supposed to be about the history of Iran. It's not the place to complain about Bush or the US. Perhaps we need another page on Iran/US relations? At the very least the one-sidedness of the content should be cleaned up. {{unsigned|Attila226}} | |||
::::: Our problem is that today there are people in Iran and Persheeyans in the USA who feel more at ease with Arabs and Pakistanis than with the real Iranian world. Ask them abt Ganje and Teflis they will shut up, ask them abt Dubai and they will BS for hours--] (]) 23:04, 20 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Dear Babakexorramdin, I do ''not'' subscribe to the sentiments as expressed by you. Humans are humans, no matter what their origin, race, sex or religion. We are all members of the same family, namely the great family of humanity. We are all brothers and sisters and should see each other's diverse cultures and religions as asset and not as liability. As it happens, I have come to know people from all corners of the world and have not noticed any fundamental difference between any of them; through our differing cultures and backgrounds we naturally respond to things differently, but on the most fundamental level we are all the same beings, whether Persian, Arab, Jew, European, African, etc. Amongst the people that I have known have been three Arabs, and I count them amongst the most kind and courteous people I have ever known in my entire life (when I once told to one of them of the name of my late mother, his immediate reaction was "What a beautiful name! I shall give that name to my child if it turns out to be a girl"). Love for Iran and Iranian culture should not blind us to the richness of other cultures. With reference to Pakistanis, to whom you explicitly refer, two things deserve mentioning. The owner of the Kebab shop in my area is a man from Pakistan. From the first time that he met me until today, whenever he sees me he calls me "my brother" — and he started doing this on knowing that I was Iranian (I have never seen him calling any of his other customers as his brother or sister). Secondly, please find some photographs of Pakistan, and you will immediately notice that as an Iranian you are able to read all the things on the boards hanging in the streets (the same applies if you look at similar photographs from India). You may not be aware of it, but prior to the rise of the British Empire, Farsi was the official administrative language in India (and Pakistan was until some 60 years ago part of India); all official documents in India were written in Farsi and the aristocrats spoke Farsi at home. Did you know that the mother of the late Benazir (''Bi-Nazir'') Bhutto is an Iranian from Isfahan (to be explicit, from Nasr Abad — see the website of Mr Mohammad-Ali Abtahi, the former Deputy of President Khatami: )? She speaks fluently Farsi in pure Esfahani accent! Have you read the Persian poetry of Pakistan's national hero ]? (In Iran he is best known as ''Eqbal-e Lahuri'', Eqbal from Lahore.) If not, please do that and you will notice that his poems rank amongst the finest of the Persian poems (when I was young, I knew several of them by heart). The point I raised above was aimed at bringing up the fact that as a nation we are generally uneducated in our own history. For instance, I am not aware of any Iranian newspapers ever making a point that Iran's attempt to raise 12% to 20% goes against the very fact that according to International Law Iran already owns 50% of the resources of the Caspian Sea. With kind regards, and above all, please never look down on other people! ] <br /> | |||
:::::: Dear Babakexorramdin, with reference to what you mention concerning ''Ganje'', it seems that the people to whom you refer must be illiterates. Have they not read the works by ''Nezami-ye Ganjavi''? ''Nezami'' comes from ''Ganje'' (''Ganjavi'' literary means "from Ganje") and if some Iranians have never read ''Nezami-ye Ganjavi'', I have no choice but call them utter illiterates. I have just checked it, and Nezami has already a Misplaced Pages entry: ] (coming from so-called '']''). Kind regards, ] | |||
::::: This section is about Iran- past and and present. Considering the ramifications that are occurring at this very moment, the threat of nuclear warfare against that nation is far more than "complaining about Bush". Certainly the events that are transpiring are possibily the most important thing that's happened to Iran itself since the Revolution in the 70s- most certainly as important as anything else mentioned in this article. Not to mention that, if the US DOES utilize a nuclear weapon, Iran would be only the third nation in history to actually have a nuclear device offensively used against it. To say that the ensuing conflict is merely "political views", or "complaining about someone" takes a far too simplistic perspective on the facts as they stand. Regarding the "one-sidedness", the problem is that the previous changes have taken it too far entirely, either completely removing any mention of the US' culpability in this (and thus attempting to make it appear as if Iran is acting out of only a desire for conquest), or have erased the article entirely. If you believe that a more neutral point of view, one that includes specific mention of US aggression against Iran, by all means, it should be welcomed. ] 03:41, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::::: Dear Behnam, I have no intention to discriminate Arabs or Pakistani nor are we talking about the Kebab shoop in your neighborhood. We are talking about the geopolitical disorientation and as you said the illiteracy. I do not mean it in a literal sense though. Yes too many Iranians do not know what is the Iranian world. The anti-Iranianist lobby in the West and the Persheeyan/ persian TVs in Los Angeles are contributing to the propagation of disorientation. --] (]) 11:17, 21 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::::: Dear Babakexorramdin, I apologise since I appear to have had misunderstood you. I am not living in the USA (so that "Persheeyan/persian TVs" are just black boxes to me), nor do I get my information about history from a TV station — although in the past I have seen some so-called history programs on some TV channels; they all look like opiates to me, as they take the information that covers at most half an A4 page and stretch it to a program lasting for one hour, enacting all the minor events in hazy images accompanied by some trashy background music (as though people had no imagination); have always wondered who would watch such trash, but apparently some do. It is perhaps time for someone with the right intellectual attitude to build a nice blog in which to discuss matters worth discussing, while managing to leave aside party-political issues which so much polarise Iranian community abroad; my personal experience is that in most of the blogs Iranians just exchange insults with one another, a pretty miserable state of affairs I must say. Incidentally, sometimes ago I put a message here: which you might like to read and act upon. In the meantime I have also written to , offering to write a comprehensive piece on the subject matter, but they have thus far failed to even acknowledge receipt of my letter (a very typical habit of Iranians). Kind regards, ] | |||
:::::: Its good to know where is the source of this misery. One more thing to add is: There have been some attempts in order to prsenet the Iranian history and culture to the public, but unfoprtunately some Iranian political groups notably the monarchists tend to hijack them and contaminate them with nonsense. E.g. if someone writes down an article about the past achievement of Iranians in the Achamenid or Safavid etc... period then there are always empty-headed monarchists who steal that article and put in their website and claim: " You see monarchy is a good thing.". If you write about the Kurdish language, some Fars ethno-nationaliaist will write: " You see Kurds do not exist, they are just Sunni Fars/Persians". If you write osmething on the Turkic-speaking Iranians, then some Pan-Turkists/ (with their American and israeli supporters) will write: "Sumerians were Turks" and nonsense like this. Violation of Iranian culture and history is a widespread phenomenon and the anti-Iranianist lobby is strong, but there is no reason for keeping silent. the independent scholars should always do their best in order to resprent the Iranian Culture and History as it is.--] (]) 10:03, 22 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::: Dear Babakexorramdin, few short remarks. As you may know, the official policy of Misplaced Pages is that if you (or anybody else for that matter) feel that others should not be using your text, you should not write it for Misplaced Pages. It is therefore a given that when you write something for Misplaced Pages, you must assume that others will use your text in a manner that suits them best and you have nothing to complain about. If you wish to maintain your copyright on your written text, you should, for instance, create your own blog and type at the bottom of each page "Copyright"; this allows you to sue anybody who without your written permission uses or abuses your text. Therefore my suggestion would be that if you feel strongly about certain matters, you (possibly with the aid of some of your like-minded friends and colleagues) set up a weblog and copyright your material. As it stands, your complaints are and remain just expressions of your personal frustration; legally, you are nowhere. As for "the source of misery" to which you refer, it is a question which sociologists, anthropologist and historians are best placed to answer. Although I am neither, I have a theory for that; being an untested theory, it is however worth nothing. You can gain some insight into this issue by reading a report that CIA has written in 1977 about the Iranian society (this top secret report was made public in 2000), which is very insightful as to the way in which Iranians interact with one another. For details please consult the New York Times file: . At present I do not recall whether the above-mentioned CIA file is included in this batch or not (I do however recall that I read that report around the same time as I was reading this batch). Finally, I propose that we close this discussion here, as the correspondence is becoming almost a book. Kind regards, ]. | |||
::: who was talking abt wikipedia? read my message. I was talking abt Media in general (also radio tv) and hence weblog is of no use. It is not a legal issyue, it is an issue of attitude. And an advice to you: listen more to people before condemning them too easily. | |||
::::Thank you for pointing out those links Never Cry Wolf, it is precisely what I mean't by verifiable sources. I wasn't suggesting at all that I am not aware of the events surrounding Bush and Iran but it is not good enough for an article for me or you to say we know this. It's necessary for us to show where we got this information. :P ] 03:44, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Maybe I am a hitorian/sociologist/ anthropologist, maybe I am not. Does not matter. I know what I am saying.--] (]) 05:57, 23 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::: Dear Babakexorramdin, you are already showing the very symptoms about which you were/are complaining: you are being aggressive towards me, while at no point over the course of the past days have I been disrespectful towards you. Please read your text and realise what I mean ("read", "listen", etc. — you may not realise that I may be as old as your father, if not older). Furthermore, I do not believe that I "condemned" anybody; I only said that Iranians rather than talking to each other on blogs, exchange insults with each other (you yourself have already taken the first steps towards that goal). This is an observation that you can readily verify; I have seen exchanges which I have not felt able to read, so debased is the language that some of these compatriots use. To be frank with you, I absolutely do not understand why you have felt necessary to respond to my utterly respectful texts in the way that you did? (I told you earlier that the TV's that you mention are black boxes to me; as a matter of fact, I have come to see almost all of the traditional news media as utterly useless; the level of their analyses and commentary is substandard and appalling — I get almost all of my information about the world from blogs that I consider good and reliable.) As for what the media do, it is nothing new; manipulating information has been one of the first things that humans mastered and brought to perfection almost immediately after they became bipedal. Complaining about this phenomenon will change nothing, except that after complaining one may feel better. You can bring about change by countering the flow of dis- and mis-information. Send letters to newspapers (each newspaper has a readers' column), send e-mails to TVs (all TVs have a public-relations department), make appropriate programs and put them on YouTube, etc., if you feel that someone is spreading lies. Being disrespectful towards me will change nothing, not least because of the fact that never in my life have I been party to any conspiracy; have not sold my soul (at least not yet) to any group or organisation — am only a great believer in the primacy of human dignity. In the event that you may wonder, I deeply feel about all my compatriots, no matter what their beliefs or political preferences; also even talk of aggression against Iran sickens me to the core of my being. Somewhere I also referred to "(a very typical habit of Iranians)". For the record, it was I who wrote a letter to Majlis in Tehran asking them to donate an appropriate photograph of the building of Majlis to Misplaced Pages. Did they acknowledge receipt of my letter? No! (My e-mail system is capable of tracing the trajectory of my e-mails, and I know for certain that they have received my letter.) Did they donate a photograph? No! If you check the history of the photograph of Majlis, then you will realise that as late as two days ago I saved it, for the second time, from being deleted from Misplaced Pages. Compare the quality of the entry on Majlis of Iran with that of the American Congress. Do you see any difference? If yes, then that shows you how great is the distance that we Iranians must still go. You will realise that an appalling entry on Majlis only strengthens the hands of those who seek to portray Iranians as barbarians (as recently as a week ago, standing on the other side of the Persian Gulf, the American President juxtaposed Iran and Al-Qaeda, naming them as the greatest dangers that the world now faces!). I should say, rather than getting worked up about the petty "Persheeyan/persian TVs", make an effort and improve the quality of the Misplaced Pages entry on the Majlis. Wish you success. This is, incidentally, my last correspondence with you. ] | |||
::::: Sorry if I offended you, but to be honest I experienced the way you responded a bit disrespectful, trying to teach things and not listening. I appologize if you did not have such intentions. On the Majles (I wont write it down as Majles): I am not an expert on that issue, but If I can do something please telle me. --] (]) 14:42, 23 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
== IRI section == | |||
::::: You are quite welcome, Green Giant. I look forward to seeing what improvements that you can make to the article. You seem to have a knack for writing- a good quality for sure. It'll be interesting to see how the prior discussed paragraph turns out. ] 04:52, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
The Islamic republic section should have more information about more recent history. I shall add MAJOR events up to 10 years ago. Please do not add anything insignificant which is mentioned before e.g. new sanctions.] (]) 13:26, 19 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::: Please tell me, what is this "US aggression against Iran" that you speak of? Are there specific actions (not speculation) that have occurred that you can refer to? Do you have specific quotes from US government officials that you'd like to point us to? {{unsigned|Attila226}} | |||
== Milestone == | |||
:::I've inserted a slightly modified version of the paragraph in place of the one that Wikiacc objected to. As soon as we have consensus on the wording, feel free to replace the new paragraph. By the way Never Cry Wolf, I made some improvements in the lower parts of the article, especially references about a week ago - . The only change anyone objected to was the size of the Farsi script - which seemed a fair argument. ] 23:23, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
The Iran page has reached a milestone in it's history. For the first time in years this article is now UNDER 100kb long. We shouldn't let our efforts go to waste and we should maintain it and even shorten it further. | |||
:::: It looks good, Green Giant. While there doesn't seem to be mention of the US' plans to attack Iran with nuclear weapons in it, the new paragraph follows the NPOV rules to a tee. Honestly, I'm not sure how one can word "The US is planning on nuking Iran, making it an uninhabitable wasteland for half a century" without POV.. :/ <br> ] 01:49, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I would like to thank everyone who has contributed to the article, either by adding text, or removing non-POV, too dettailed, irrelevant or incorrect and non-factual text. | |||
:::You could write that as "The Bush administration has raised the possibility of using nuclear weapons in any conflict with Iran"? Does anybody object to removing the big '''POV sticker''' now that the paragraph has changed? ] 02:10, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::Go ahead and remove the tag. -- ] 02:15, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I also suggest that we merge the Safavid,Af... section with the Pahlavi era section.] (]) 18:52, 20 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Saddam's reasons == | |||
::I'd like to push my POV button at this point as a few things are unsettline in this discussion. First, Bush has only been in power 6 years, he couldn't have been attacking Iran verbally for "almost a decade". Second, Iran achieving Nuclear capabilities is a big deal. Since the revolution, Iran has systematically propagated anti-semetic, holocaust denying, anti-American and inciting content on their state-run television for all audiences, from children to adults | |||
Saddam's reasons for attacking Iran is described in great detail on this page, but they are not explained on the ] page. I thought that the main articles should be more detailed? I thought that sections with main articles are supposed to be more general? | |||
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:I will transfer the text to the ] section. The reasons of Saddam's strike are not part of our history, rather the politics of Iraq.] (]) 12:35, 21 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::They have funded and harbored organizations such as Hezbollah that seek to destroy Israel, a key allie to the United States (whether Iran likes it or not), and each of it's leaders, vehemently called for the . Furthermore, Iran's leaders have become quite threatening as they've approached completion of , <ref>http://switch3.castup.net/cunet/gm.asp?ai=214&ar=1166wmv&ak=null</ref> to the Western Media that they're planning a civil nuclear program.] 15:20, 7 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
::This is a very disappointing article. A very important event preceeding the election of Ahmadinejad was the disqualification of many candidates by the Guardian Council. This could provide a transition between Mohamed Khatami and the election of Ahmadinejad since pro-democracy proponents were discouraged by the disqualifications. Citations can be provided for this. To balance the rhetoric about the United States and the use of a nuclear arsenal against Iran, a deeper context should be provided. What motivates the United States to use harsh rhetoric against Iran? Should an examination of ties between Iran and organizations such as Hezbollah be included? What about the speech Ahmadinejad provided (link is in his bio) that re-iterated a belief that Israel should be deposed of as a nation-state? In regards to the nuclear program of Iran, where is the mention of IAEA findings on Iran's program? As the author's of this article, I call on you to revise this article to make it more appropriate. ] 19:37, 10 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
==The picture== | |||
My input: | |||
== Geography pic == | |||
I personally think Ahmadinejad's picture doesnt belong on the front main page of Iran. It gives the impression to the reader that ''Iran is equivalent to ahmadinejad''. And that is not right. I vote for it's removal.--] 02:25, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Which pic would you prefer in the Geography section? | |||
:Photographs of ] appear ''twice'' on the ] article, and Bush certainly isn't the USA. I don't see how this case is any different; admittedly Bush has much more political power in the USA than Ahmadinejad has in Iran, but they're both key figures in international politics for their respective countries. Putting a photograph of an individual on a page about a country neither implies that the individual ''is'' the country nor implies that the individual is an utterly uncontroversial, unanimously-supported figure symbolizing all of the country's ideals and hopes and dreams. All it says is that the individual is a highly important political figure in the country in question, and that's certainly indisputable in the case of Ahmadinejad: the President of Iran is the highest directly-elected official in Iran. -] 02:36, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
] | |||
:: The photograph of George W. Bush does appear on the United States of America, but that's not the norm in all of the country-related articles. I personally don't think Ahmadinejad's photograph belongs on this article, as the article's focus is the country of Iran, not the current government. --] 03:02, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
] | |||
] (]) 14:33, 21 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
I prefer the latter; it seems more appropriate than a wildlife picture. Moreover, it shows snow and the mountains, which would help dispel myths that Iran is entirely desert. -] (]) 21:50, 21 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::The image of President Ahmadinejad is now next to the Politics section. He is effectively the chief spokesman of Iran, so I think an image of him is appropriate in the Politics section. Does that solve the objection? ] 02:13, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I thought that too. Wildlife isn't even mentioned in the section. I have seen at least two FA articles which have satellite images (] & ])] (]) 15:43, 22 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Nowhere on the US page does Bush appear alone portrait style. His image apprears in a different context such as "Patriot act" or "No child left behind". The president has its own page. This image should be removed. The article is about a large autonomous country with millenia old history and sovereignty. Not about who leads it. I can bring other reasons why the image doesnt belong here.--] 03:55, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== |
== FAC == | ||
I think we have now addressed almost of Iran's problems(the article!;-)) and so I now nominate it for FA. I hope it is accepted.] (]) 20:02, 22 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
I've read this article thoroughly and it is a good article with a thorough overview of Iran, but there are some issues that need to be resolved. This is just a rough set of proposals: | |||
'''Bold text''' | |||
# The lead is good and should be left for the moment. | |||
# The naming dispute section is also good but does that image have to be there? Could it be moved down to the History section where it is more appropriate? | |||
# The main body of text is forced into awkward-looking shapes by the images being at left and right side. Choose one side and make all images stay that side. | |||
# The History section should be condensed to a summary of about five paragraphs without the two subheadings. | |||
# The Politics section has too many short subsections and should be condensed to five paragraphs covering the President, Executive, Legislature, Assembly of Experts plus Councils of Guardians and Expediency together and finally the Judiciary. The numerous subheadings are unnecessary and clutter the article up. | |||
# The Provinces section should be renamed to something like Provincial and Local Government and expanded to include the City and Village Councils paragraph from just above it. Expand on the Provinces, in prose format – explain for example how the provincial system has evolved over the years. | |||
# The Geography section is good, but the subheading for Climate should be removed and the subsection merged into the main section. Also a source for the Cradle of Humanity sentence should be added as it’s a fairly big claim. | |||
# The Economy section needs condensing to four paragraphs, images moved to one side and some sources for sentences like "Modern Iran has a solid middle class and a growing economy but continues to be plagued with high inflation and unemployment." | |||
# Condense Demographics to prose form without subsections and remove the gallery of cities to Commons. Instead a table will do the job of presenting populations better. | |||
# The Culture section is good but again some condensing wouldn’t go amiss especially with the one-sentence paragraphs. | |||
# To maintain NPOV, it’s necessary to discuss positive and negative aspects within the various sections, like communal/ethnic tensions, economic and political issues. | |||
# Wherever possible subheadings should be done away with. | |||
# Some new sections are needed especially concerning sports, wildlife and holidays. | |||
# There is no mention of the Bam earthquake – such a tragedy is worth noting. | |||
# More in-line citations is better – at least one for every possible controversial matter. | |||
== Safavis-pahlavi merge == | |||
Once these are done, a peer-review would be a good idea and then I think Iran deserves to be a featured article. ] 03:14, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I have tried several times to merge the Sfavid, Afshar, Zand and Qajar period with the Pahlavi section. It is obvious that these two periods of Iranian history are connected. In both sections colonial powers influenced Iran greatly. I don't see any reason why they shouldn't be merged. Both sections are relatively small. Also the other sections span over 1000,800 and 900 years and it seems odd if this section only has 400 years of Iran's history. If we merge these two sections it will span nearer to 500 years which makes it more balanced.] (]) 21:39, 22 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks for listing these suggestion Green Giant. I agree with almost all of them, especially with the removal of the subheadings; while it is not policy, but a guideline the Wikicountry project suggests that there should not be subheadings, and everything should be summarized, with a link to the main article where the topic should be discussed heaving. Specific suggestions to the above are | |||
::: You can make a title like Monarchy in the modern period etc... or the Iranian Shia monarchy.--] (]) 05:50, 23 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:# Leave the lead as is | |||
::::The Afsharids were not Shia. The current state of sections is fine.--] (]) 14:20, 18 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:# Remove the picture, doesn't fit with section, and causes weird shape of text | |||
::::: Why you say this? Afsharids were Shiites. Nader Shah was a general in the Safavid army. He rescued Iran from the Afghans and Turks both Sunnis. I think the myth that nader Shah was not Shiite is coming forth from the fact that after beating the Afghans he took it easy on Sunnis and jews. He saw the late safavid religious intolerance as counter productive. Now adays there are members of Afshar tribe all over Iran, notably in Khorasan, Kerman and Azerbaijan, they are all Shiites.--] (]) 14:38, 18 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:# While I usually like images on the right, at times there might be a reason to have an image on the left. We shouldn't be too strict on this one | |||
:# The History section before the Islamic revolution seems ok, the post islamic section could be shortened. I don't think the picture of Ahmadnijed belongs here. Other countries usually have the picture of the head of state in the politics section. | |||
:# Some of the politics sections can be combined in a summary style paragraphs; right now there are two many subheadings. The city and village councils doesn't fit since this is about the government of Iran, not it's subsections. | |||
:# Agree need some prose for the Province section. Not sure we need a city section. Previously I've argued for such inclusion on the ] page, but I now see why it's not really needed. | |||
:# Geography should be renamed Geography and Climate, and the sections merged. Too many images in this section. | |||
:# I think the Economy section is ok. Images make the text look weird though. | |||
:# I think the Demographics section is ok, and the subheadings can be appropriate here. Remove gallery of cities. | |||
:# I don't think the persian text in the culture section is appropriate, as most people won't be able to read it. The english translations should be enough. | |||
:# NPOV doesn't necessarily mean that criticisms need to be marked. Instead, as you note all aspects (positive and negative) should be noted, without noting them as postive/negative. The reader has to make their own decision, that is NPOV | |||
:# Yes limit subheadings | |||
:# sports should be placed into culture, holidays is recommened by the Country wikiproject, also might need a symbols section | |||
:# Not sure we need the Bam earthquake in a summary article. | |||
:# Need general references (aka Further reading) for non-controversial statements and inline notes for more controversial statments -- ] 03:31, 23 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Some general remarks== | |||
== Foreign relations and military == | |||
Dear All, I wish that the intention to nominate this entry for FA would have been announced publicly and clearly so that interested people would have had chance to comment on its contents and quality. Below I present some of my comments which as yet may be incorporated into the main text: | |||
:(1) Concerning "settlements dating back to 4000 BCE", I believe that the correct figure should be 5000 BCE. This is based on the fact that Avesta is already considered to be 7000 years old. See the book by Siāvash Avesta (Hasan Abbasi) "Ā'ín-e Avesta — Haft Hezar Sal Pishineh Tammadon". The third printing of this book is dated "7024 Ā'ryāí-e Mitrā'i". Personally, I do not know how reliable these dates are, however, 7000 years is in very good accord with the recent archaeological findings in ] and Darreh Bolaghi. Consult for instance: , . That these cannot be Iranian propaganda is testified by the fact that the last-mentioned mass grave has been uncovered in collaboration with a group of German archaeologists. For details, please consult: | |||
:* Deutsches Archäologisches Institut (German Archaeological Institute), (in English). | |||
:(2) The title "Supreme Leader" is a mistranslation; according to real experts, it must be "Supreme Jurisprudent"; "Supreme" for ''Velāyat'' and "Jurisprudent" for ''Faqih'' (recall ''Velāyat-e Faqih''). In case of doubt, please ask about the details from Professor Juan Cole (University of Michigan). His blog is one of the best and most authoritative on matters related to Middle East in general and Iran in particular. The other person who may be consulted on this matter is Professor Farideh Farhi (Independent Scholar and an Adjunct Professor of Political Science at ], ]). In my opinion, she is one of the most qualified authorities on all matters Iranian. She regularly contributes to . As an aside, you may ask her (as well as Professor Cole) to be kind enough and comment on the contents of the present Misplaced Pages entry on Iran and possibly suggest improvements. | |||
:(3) The punctuations in the present entry are not perfect. What does the comma following citation do? Further, when a citation is given at the end of a sentence, it must follow the closing dot; as it stands, citation is correctly placed, but citation is not. | |||
The above were my comments for the time being; I shall return if I have more to say. In the meantime you may ask that the reviewers put reviewing the entry on hold until further notice (i.e. until various shortcoming are corrected). With kind regards, ]. | |||
We need a '''Foreign relations and military''' section. Maybe some of the content from the disputed paragraph can be moved into such a section. -- ] 00:59, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Euphemism == | |||
:Excellent idea, but where would you put it? Somewhere between History and Politics perhaps? ] 01:16, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::In ] which is a featured article, the section is after the ''Provinces'' section, but I think it fits best after the ''Politics'' section like in ]. -- ] 01:21, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Can I infer from this that "urban settlement" is the new euphemism of civilization? --] (]) 20:31, 23 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Agreed, it looks out of place after the States and Territories. ] 01:29, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:Don't worry too much. The statement has been reverted to state the obvious: the 6 thousand year 'continuity' of the civilization(s?) in Iran. ] (]) 23:35, 23 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Maps, Military section, Geography section, and recent edits== | |||
We dont have room for it. As ] will tell you, the whole effort was to trim down the page to guideline length, so that we can nominate it for feature status. Adding another section is basically reversing these efforts.--] 03:50, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I counted at least 10 maps of Iran for the entire article. May be we can replace some with pictures? | |||
I also merged the military section with the paragraph about foreign relations as per other similar articles: See ] (featured), ] and others. | |||
I also moved the geography section up for same reason. See Iran on the French Misplaced Pages (featured). | |||
:Which guideline length is this? The 32KB one applied a long time ago when browsers couldn't handle such sizes. At the moment 39 KB is not that long - look at ] which is 43 KB. By the way removing a citation request and saying ''read a history book'' is not acceptable. It's not the date of establishment the citaiton request was asking but the bit which said ''the world's first superpower''. ] 04:19, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I remember that a while back someone re-organised the sections to the current form(i.e. Etymology, history,politics, geog, admin divisions etc.) and everyone thought it was a great edit. I don't think this change is the best change. But something could be done about the admin divisions and geography. Maybe a merge? Thank you for your enthusiasm and contribution. ] (]) 18:11, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I dont know. Wikiacc insists on the length. The article used to be much longer than this. It was trimmed over and over again for this very reason. I objected that it was ridiculous to have only 1-2 sentences span 1000 years in the history section. Nobody listened.--] 04:36, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Contributions to Science == | |||
:Well we cut Pakistan from about 60KB down to 43 KB and nobody objected to the size. Similarily ] is also 43 KB and not so long ago ] passed at about 70KB. The important thing is not the quantity but the quality. However, articles have to adhere to summary style. The whole history section should have about five paragraphs - Ancient history, Post-Islamic conquest, Pre-20th century, the reign of the Pahlavi's and the Islamic Republic. All the rest of the detail should go into ] and any associated history articles. ] 04:57, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I wonder if it's vaild at all to discuss Iran's contribution to science and technology relying on the example of Persian scientists who live and work outsied Iran, and who are probablly all of them citizens of Western countries. I think since the article is on Iran, it should stick to what's inside Iran. If you want to discuss the work of these scientists, I think it should be in a section on "Iranian Immigrants in the West", or something like that. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 17:28, 26 January 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
::Here I will have to disagree. If youre going to give a good representation of Iran, you have to represent what it really is, not how the media and current situation defines it. Adding sections about the military and the current politics at the expense of even further trimming the history section is just wrong. Iran's history is something one simply cannot summarize in such a short space. Between the Islamic Conquest and the 20th century Iran went through at least 15 major dynasties that had continental influences. And all that is wrapped up in a feeble 1.5 sentences. I find that totally inaccurate in the representation of Iran. For Iran and the Iranian identity, culture and history play extraordinarily large defining roles. Those should be properly reflected in proportion in this article.--] 16:51, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==The history section is too big== | |||
:::I don't think length is an issue here, but more completeness. I think the page would still pass FAC if it had a longer length. The history section as it is ok, not great, but ok. I would remove the subsection headings though, to get the page more in summary style. -- ] 17:13, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
We need to trim it further. We need to MOVE the rest to the main articles. | |||
== Mahan Asemoon == | |||
I am not a "specialist" of the history section but I think we should give a clear mandate to those who are able in that field. | |||
I think '''triming 30% of the section''' would be appropriate. NO INFORMATION WILL BE LOST (JUST MOVED TO THE MAIN SUB-ARTICLES). | |||
The third image in the History section, the ] is pretty but it's very small and cannot be expanded beyond 100px width. I suggest replacing it with something like the ] image which is much larger and clearer. However as space is limited at the top, perhaps the new image can go into the Culture section? ] 02:35, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:I think there are too many images on the page, and they are scrunched up together. I would favour the removal of the image. -- ] 02:38, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::I have removed the Mahan Asemoon image and incorporated the caption into the main text. I agree there are too many images - dropping a couple of them would be good. ] 02:50, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Please state your approval or opposition below. Thanks. | |||
If you want to remove an image, at least remove one that takes up a lot of space (like the president image). The very reason we put the Mahan dome image was that it was space efficient and aesthetic for the page layout, AND, that it was representative of Iran's Islamic past. I especially cropped the image to those proportions. Now we have 2 images of Iran's pre-Islamic past, and none of its post-Islamic past, which is not right. I'm putting the Mahan image back. | |||
*'''APPROVE''' | |||
Second: The image of Azadi square has always been an image agreed upon by both royalist and post-revolutionary Iranians as the symbol to represent them politically. Now you have this president image messing things up. You are replacing an image everyone agrees on with one that people dont agree on, hence ignoring an established consensus. | |||
*'''OPPOSE''' Because Iran is one of the oldest countries of the world , then it's natural for it's history section to be so long .This debate was previously discussed here .--] (]) 08:35, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
*'''Comment''': I remember this subject was discussed but I forgot there had been a vote already. Secondly, I would like to add that the recent history of Iran (1988 - 2007) has not been added yet. We should probably make some room for it also, if we want to have the article nominated for FA status. So far it was NOT included because it was attracting many trolls to Iran's page, mainly because of the news surrounding the Iranian nuclear programme (I am not sure I want to include this part as of yet for the same reason). Also people tend to report "news" and wikipedia is not for that (see ]). Nevertheless, at some point in the future, the history section will get (30%??) bigger than it is today because of it. ] (]) 10:16, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
'''Comment''': Look at the ] page. The Iranian article needs to have something different to other articles; a WOW factor. It needs something to set it apart. I think we should have a history section slightly larger than the Turkey one. The politics could also be shortened a little. As some of you might have noticed I started a major one-man effort to shorten it and beat it down to a reasonable size and the article was under 100KB. But instead of maintaining it's small size the information came flooding back into the article. As I have done many times before, I will show my full support to shorten the article.] (]) 17:57, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
Please, if youre going to touch the main page, consult with the people who have spent many hours, if not days, and months, making it.--] 03:48, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
'''Comment''':Iran is not a special little snowflake.--] (]) 18:05, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:It wasn't the space that was the issue but more the lack of detail. If you put it there for efificiency and aesthetics then that is not a good reason to keep it. The image hasn't been erased - it's still on the server. If there is a larger image that shows more of the dome, I would support it's inclusion but as it stands the image wasn't doing any justice to the article. On a sidenote, the image removals you've done were good but why do you feel a gallery is needed for population statistics when a table does the job? You'll find that most featured articles on countries (such as ]) have tables and not galleries. The appropriate place for such galleries is Commons. ] 04:13, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
'''Comment''': I think it does need further trimming, particularly the Iran-Iraq war section. ] and ] both provide excellent models for countries with very ancient histories. As I had stated prior, many of these FA class country articles do not have a huge amount of headers; I think we are capable of slowly transitioning towards a merger of all the history sections. It would make the section much more fluid. -] (]) 18:10, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::An image representing the Islamic heritage of Iran is definitely needed. No question to that. Now, would you go with an image that takes up space and is not fitting to the format, or one that is spatially efficient in organization and aesthetics? We do in fact have an image of the same dome, in full, but I intentionally cropped it up to narrow proportions for this very article. I dont know why youre insisting on having big blocky images instead of a narrow slim one. | |||
*'''Oppose''', for this article to be promoted to FA status there is no need for further trimming. But still there is some unsourced stuff in there with "awkward wording" that should be corrected.--] (]) 19:12, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
'''Comment''': No history section needs to be trimmed. History is a valuable part of the description of a country. To fully understand a country, you must know where the country came from and how it came to be in the present age. What is that saying, "You can't know where you are going until you know where you have been." Expansion and contraction, Turmoil and peace, all of these are a part of a country's history. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 00:34, 13 February 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
::The US article has a gallery of cities. Almost every state in the US also has a gallery of cities. Texas has 2. But I have cleared up many redundant images from the article. I dont know why people are so persistent in getting rid of the gallery. It's a direct visual aid in presenting Iran.--] 04:29, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Iran image crisis == | |||
:::Where in the US article is the gallery and where are the 2 galleries in Texas? The largest cities are covered by a table and you'll note that neither the US article nor Texas is a featured article. ] 04:37, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I quickly counted the number of images in the article and we have 42!!!!! The ] page only has 24. | |||
::::Actually Texas has 3 galleries: One for the Nat. Geography, One for the cities, and one for universities. The US also has the city pics. Would you rather have the images stacked up on top of eachother, instead of a neat gallery? If a gallery is not allowed inorder to obtain feature status, then why does WP allow galleries at all?--] 04:42, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-number of images on the iran(not featured) page! | |||
:::My objection is twofold. Firstly the data for the populations should be in a table format. Secondly I think galleries are frowned on because they break articles up when most people seem to prefer a continuous prose. I think the population should go into a table and then keep a couple of images but eight is too many and it won't pass FAC. As a part of the code, I think it's difficult to remove the galleries so they have pretty much left it. By the way it's nice to see that with a few edits we're back to square one. Have a look at other Featured articles, especially the more recent ones and decide for yourself whether Iran would pass with the way it is laid out? ] 04:52, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-number of Pakistan(featured) images | |||
::I had already spotted the natural gallery but the cities and universities are just stacked on one another. Those aren't galleries, it's just people right aligning them - which is what I propose for all images on Iran except the ones in the infobox. ] 05:00, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-number of Turkey(featured) images | |||
:::So you WOULD rather have stacked up images on top of eachother than a gallery. I see. I dont think people here would agree with you on that It further clutters up everything.--] 05:02, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I will remove a few of them. I shall smite whoever stands in my way!(just kidding;-)) | |||
::No I would rather the population data was in a table and that the images were all right-aligned. That way the text goes down the left and centre and the images go down the right side. I'm not suggesting piling the images togetehr at the start of the article or anything silly like that. Have a look at ] and ] to see how the images are placed there. ] 05:10, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
] (]) 18:28, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Comparing it with other articles without giving any independant reason is '''FALLACY'''. I even saw that you deleted the IsmaillI picture, why? Did you know what you were doing? If only one pictue from the Safavids and Qajars should be selected, there is no other choice than him. List the images that you deem redundant here and ask for comment. If no objection was received delete them in 24 hours notice. Cheers. --] (]) 19:19, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
I disagree here because generally more images is a good thing. Having more than enough is never a problem. Most articles have fewer images because people don't want to go through the hassle of copyright licenses and whatnot. This is an area where more is always better. -] (]) 19:27, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::I very much agree with Green Giant. Gallery pictures will not pass a FAC, especially for cities, which are not part of the Country Wikiproject. Secondly, I think images with a long aspect ratio do not look good when there are other images with a wide aspect ratio in the same section; it makes the section look weird. -- ] 12:56, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:According to ] articles should ''avoid sandwiching text between two images facing each other'', as this happens in several paragraphs in the Iran article it might be a good idea to remove some pics. --] (]) 21:34, 28 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::How about if we trim the gallery to 4 instead of 8 cities (which I think will pass the FAC), and have a table with more cities (e.g. 10), plus information such as what provinces theyre in etc.? Compromise?--] 16:35, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I want to discuss the deletion of these images. Ideally '''SOME BUT NOT ALL''' of these should be deleted:] (]) 19:12, 29 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::::I still don't think a gallery is the right way to show that information. If the images of the cities are important they should be put inline into the text of the article. Personally, I would also get rid of the table, the information about the size of the cities is not important enough for a "Summary style" article which countries should be (see the Country wikiproject). We should have short or medium-length sections with the most pertinent information with a main link to the articles with more information, like Cities of Iran; that page could have a gallery. I think ] is a article to compare with. Imagine if we could get Iran to be a featured article, then people can really understand what Iran is with a neutral-POV (not from the media), but to do so, we have to structure it differently. -- ] 17:09, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::I have an alternative suggestion - why not put the images on a rotation template so that we don't need to remove any images? ] (]) 00:14, 30 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::Regarding your last sentence: from what Im observing, youre actually moving the opposite way, it seems to me. Youre advocating the removal of important information about Iran, merely because WP guidelines give it no particular consideration. I'm not against adding anything, but I am against trimming down sections like history, or not mentioning anything about the cities. How could one honestly have an article about Iran without, say, a depiction of Shiraz or Isfahan?--] 18:10, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Great idea; but I absolutely hate the Yakhchal/flower image and the mountain/grassland picture is misleading, so let's delete them anyway.] (]) 15:48, 30 January 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::::I really don't think having pictures, or populations of those cities says anything about those cities, and doesn't add anything to the understanding of Iran. The reader sees a picture of Shiraz with a number, what do they learn? not much. Spending more effort on improving the history section, foreign relations, and the culture section is much more appropriate. -- 18:49, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
<gallery class="center"> | |||
:::::::What do they learn? They learn that Iran is a civilized nation. That it has cities. That it has culture. That it has an identity far more deeper than they every thought. As far as the American hoi polloi is concerned, eye-ran is a desert dwelling camel riding backwater country with mysoginist fiercely bearded men that want a nuclear bomb. It goes without saying how a simple image can easily reverse such stereotypes. Not everyone is aware of Iran's true image, like me and you.--] 20:23, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Image:Bodleian J2 fol 175 Y 28 1.jpg|Avestan isn't mentioned in the article. we could mention it in the culture section but it is not spoken so it is not important.]] | |||
Image:Map achaemenid empire en.png|two maps is not good for one subsection, although it does show some important places. we could replace it with the green map which defines it's NE border or we could replace it with a picture of an artefact.]] | |||
Image:Carte Iran 1000.png|I added this picture but I don't know how to relabel it. If someone would volunteer I would be very happy.]] | |||
Image:Shah Ismail I.jpg|Good picture but '''FOUR''' images are too much for a subsection. It is a bit colourless. | |||
Image:Mossadeq.jpg|He is important in history, but the question is: Is he important enough?this image is also colourless. Generally, the history section needs colour | |||
Image:MohammadRezaPahlavi1977.jpg|this is a good image but yet again it is slightly dull. I think it should stay. | |||
Image:Saddam rumsfeld.jpg|I know why people want to keep this picture, but I think http://en.wikipedia.org/Image:Chemical_weapon1.jpg would show something that was happening to people and put a picture into people's minds that a '''war''' was going on | |||
Image:Fars.jpg|two images in such a small section is not right. Also, two scenery pictures are too much. Note that theyboth have green grass, but anyone who has been to Iran knows that Iran is not that green and I think two pictures showing green grass is misleading. | |||
Image:Iranmoney.jpg|One or two of the following images must go. This one only shows the English side of the note. Also, it is not the biggest note in Iran, there is now a 50'000 rial note too | |||
Image:Tehran skyline may 2007.jpg|I think this image should stay, but it isn't what I think, it is what everyone thinks]] | |||
Image:Dariushhotel1.jpg|as I said before, this is only a picture of a massive hotel(not that common in Iran) built on an island not connected to mainland Iran(obviously) built by Germans. The island isn't even mentioned! | |||
Image:Persepolis - The Gate of Xerxes.jpg|People have questioned this picture. I think we have two options: | |||
Delete the image and merge the tourism subsection with the main economy section or Leave it be until a more relative image arrives | |||
Image:Yakhchal.jpg|I don't like this image. It has a wierd shade and half of it is filled with roses. This image is obviously to promote tourism or something.: | |||
Image:NonFreeImageRemoved.svg|I added this image as a temporary replacement for an image with copy write issues. the culture section has three paintings and we have to remove one. We might remove this one; a great piece of art by a famous artist which is temporary, | |||
Image:Mehmooni2.jpg|Or this one, which has been in the article for ages and won in a pole. This is also a fine specimen of art | |||
File:Dizin snowboarding.jpg|this is a good image, but one too many in such a small sports section. Removing the azadi picture would be like cutting the article's hands off | |||
So instead of pictures of mountains and deserts, use pictures of cities. Images are used to reinforce the written article, and a gallery does not do that. I'm sure the FAC will object to it. -- ] 20:36, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Deserts? There are no pictures of deserts, far as I can tell. I am willing to trim the gallery however. Or, I can forget about the gallery until the article is featured and passed, so that then we can actually add some real information to it and not sacrifice information for the sake of some suggested guidelines.--] 23:10, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::I'm not sure what your comment above means, but what is this real information you talk of? You do realise that featured status isn't just a troublesome sideshow :P ] 23:36, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
===The Mahan pic=== | |||
As for ] and the Mahan picture, I'm not going to be too picky on it: As long as there are 2 pics in the history section, one for pre-Islamic Iran, and one for post-Islamic Iran. Post Islamic Iran must be somehow represented. The perseplois pic is fine. It represents Iran's pre-Islamic past. But we need one to represent the 1400 years that Iran went through. It could be a Qajar painting, or a portrait of Shah Abbas, like the one below, or an architectural masterpiece. Which one would you guys rather have? Shall we vote on this?--] 18:10, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
<center> | |||
<gallery> | |||
Image:Shah Abbas and Wine Boy.jpg|Scene of Shah Abbas | |||
Image:Khattati2.jpg|Calligraphy shot | |||
Image:Shah soleiman safavi.jpg|Safavid portrait | |||
Image:AbdolSamad Natanz.jpg|Natanz Mausoleum | |||
</gallery> | </gallery> | ||
</center> | |||
== Another image question == | |||
*I'm fine with any of these.--] 18:10, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Which image is better? | |||
:I am not against the Mahan picture. What I want to see is a bigger more detailed picture showing the entire dome and not just part of it. I agree there should be a post-Islamic image in History but it needs to be more detailed. ] 21:52, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
<gallery class="center"> | |||
] | |||
Image:Map of the Achaemenid Empire.jpg | |||
::You dont approve any of these either? Aww come one, What is up with this need for details of a dome, Im wondering? What would that prove? Detail is totally irrelevant here. The image is merely supposed to be a testament of sorts to Iran's post-Islamic heritage. Not a testament to doming craftsmanship.--] 23:06, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Image:Map achaemenid empire en.png | |||
:::Imagine if you had the choice of two images of the ] with one showing a complete view from one side such as ] and the other showed about half of the dome. The first image would be betetr because it shows the whole thing in context, whereas the second image would be hard to place in context. Does that make any sense? If we do go for an image from the above four, I would be inclined to favour the ]. ] 23:26, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::Yes, but that page youre talking of would be about the US Capitol, not about the US. The Mahan mausoleum is merely a Sufi shrine that visually expresses the post-Islamic culture of Iran. Nothing more. That's why its entirety (unlike the US capitol) is not important. The glimpse of the blue sky, the blue dome, the adobe parts, all convey the meaning sufficiently. | |||
] | |||
::::At any rate it seems I cant get through to you on this matter. No problem. How about this picture of the same dome? The only reason I didnt use it earlier was because I know some people are going to make a fuss about its copyrights. If you want the full picture of the cropped dome, youll have to wait a month or so. I'd have to dig out the hard copy picture and scan it once again. I personally prefer this one because it is a visual eyepleaser.--] 23:41, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Oooo, this is a nice picture, I like it quite a lot. Let's put it in, and see if we can resolve the copyright later. -- ] 23:48, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::GG, what do you think?--] 23:49, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::BTW, should I crop that picture to remove one of the trees so that the Mosque can be bigger when inserted into the article? -- ] 23:52, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::: I only gave the Capitol as an example of how an image should be. not whether it is representative of the U.S. or not. Yes I like this bigger image, it is all I was proposing. Yes to tree removal. :) ] 23:54, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::Oh c'mmon guys, lets keep the trees (tears accumulating). They add a sepecial grace and ambience to the scene. Especially that we would lose part of the building as well. I wish I had done a better job on the resolution so that the snow capped mountains would also be visible in their full majesty.--] 23:59, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
] | |||
:::::I'm ok with it as is, but I was suggesting removing just one of the trees, there would be one left. What do you think? -- ] 00:19, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::::How about if you cropped just enough of it so that the third cupola (seen peaking between the 2 trees) is still visible? Youd have to crop half of the first tree for that. Would that work? | |||
::::::Also, could you save and upload it as something else, under another name? It would be great if we could keep this image as it is, since it is being used on other articles as well.--] 00:31, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::::Jeff, plz scroll downstairs and vote before you forget. thnx.--] 00:38, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
ok, I've cropped it, as so. I'm not sure which one I like better. -- ] 03:33, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Picture in `Name`, and `Geography and climate` sections== | |||
Please do not keep moving/deleting that pic around, and submit it under different sections; this will clutter the artcle. Discuss it with others before you keep moving the pic, or deleting it. Thank you] 04:48, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:Please explain why that image is important in the Name section? I think you need to sit back and take a good look at the article because it is definitely cluttered the way you have restored it to. I find it quite amusing that both Zmmz and Zereshk have each defended an image they have uploaded without explaining the relevance. The Mahan image is too small and the Persepolis statue image belongs in History. ] 04:56, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::I didnt upload the griffin image. And I didnt move it from the naming section to the history section either. But if Zmmz wants to keep it in the name section, at least it would be good if he put a relevant caption so that it wont be deleted or moved. As it stands, a ''Homa'' griffin has nothing to do with "Iran-Shahr" or "Iran vaej", or at least that's what people will be wondering.--] 04:59, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Also, Green giant, smaller is better. I dont think any guidelines actually prefer big blocky images instead. It takes longer to download on many remote browsers.--] 04:59, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::My problem with your image is that it doesn't show enough detail. It's like looking at only part of a person's face. You can't deduce what it is from only part of the image. Perhaps if you could upload the whole image and then force it to about 200px in the article. Articles look better if the images are the same width and the same side - just like the city images in ]. ] 05:05, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::Again, agree with Green Giant, the picture doesn't fit in the Name section, should be in the history section if at all, and I really think there should be one picture from Iran's antiquity, not two. -- 12:57, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
As per the discussion here, I reworded the picture's caption with relevant information. --] 13:37, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:But the caption has nothing to do with the picture, the picture is about Iran's history. -- ] 14:14, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:IMO, the picture of a ] at Persepolis is irrelevant in the 'Name' section of this overview article, but perhaps more apt for another section (e.g., 'History'). In the 'Name' sxn, perhaps we can include a picture of an ancient inscription/translation (at Persepolis) or other script comparison instead? Or even one of the ''other'' images in the ] article, like the map (q.v. ])? ] | ] | 14:27, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:: I disagree, that Homa (please read ]) sculpture is considered one of the main symbols of ancient Persia in the Western perspective, as well as one of the national symbols in present-day Iran, and hence the explanation about the different names of the same country "Iran" and "Persia". --] 14:51, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::Just because it's an old and modern symbol (and that it existed when the country was called Iran and Persia) doesn't make it relevent to the Name section. I totally agree with ] that a better image would be ancient inscription/translation. The caption still doesn't fit the image; this image fits in the History section. -- ] 14:56, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::I wont be too picky on this one as long as the caption is relevant. An inscription is good, but I dont know of any particular one. Maybe Jeff knows one. For this reason, I think a symbol can also suffice. The thing about Homa is, if youve noticed, is that it is the national symbol Iran's national Airline has chosen as well. So it's not that irrelevant.--] 16:26, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::Others can be: as above, ]s are different from ]. This is analogous to adding a picture of the ] to ], ]s or ]s for ], or ] for a naming sxn about ] ... all of which make little sense. Why despoil a worthwhile picture by including it in a section for which it has little relevance? ] | ] | 16:40, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::Exactly, a symbol of a country has very little to do with it's name. It's better that there be no picture associated with a section, than a wrong picture. If the picture is important enough it should be moved into another section. -- ] 17:04, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::I dont think we can totally dismiss any connection between the name of Iran and its symbolism. Contrary to Canada or Australia, Iran's name has much to do with ancient symbolism. Iran's name literally means "Land of the Aryan", which comes from Zoroastrian concepts. So should we have a Zoroastrian picture? Maybe of ]? Aryan itself means noble. Nobleness is defined by ] as "good deed, good thoughts, good words". These are all related and conceptually intertwined. | |||
:::::I dont know, E Pluribus. Do you have a better image in mind, or are you just against any image for that section?--] 17:07, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::::I'm not dismissing connections: in this instance, though, the griffin is hardly relevant and a grand leap for the usual visitor. As I've indicated above, I opt for a ''relevant, better picture'' where the connection to the name is clear and – in absence of that – none. Including one of ] or the like is a possibility but ''might'' be too esoteric; perhaps better is Jeff3000's suggestion below or the map in the subarticle (given the roots of Iran/Persia (Persis)/Aryan (Ariana) and the country's location). ] | ] | 17:20, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::::I think the currency picture (and it's associated caption) from the Iran naming dispute article would be a better choice, and give the reader a quick idea about what the section is about. -- ] 17:11, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
]-era currency bill shows, with the phrase "Royal Bank of Iran" engraved on it.]] | |||
:::::::You mean the Erathostenes map? Fine with me. I dont know, Im not too preferential on this one way or the other. Lets see what others say.--] 17:17, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::::: No, this one -- ] 17:22, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::::::Yes: the map, which I prefer: harks of references in antiquity. The caption can be tweaked, though. I'm also fine with including the currency pic, but I think it more highlights the dispute of the name, not necessarily its etymology. :) ] | ] | 17:22, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::::::The map is fine by me as well. -- ] 17:31, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::::::::Im fine with either, as long as there is a befitting image. I'd go for the map though. But Im sure Zmmz and ManiF and others would want to give some input here.--] 17:32, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::::I think map is very relevant. --]<sup>] | </sup> 23:10, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I think the image is a major symbol, it blends to the section/next section nicely, and it also shows a slice of the biggest tourist attraction in Iran. Plus, it is aestethically appealing. | |||
] 23:19, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
The image in the `Geography and climate` section is also important, since it shows the snow filled mountains of Tehran, and many do not know Iran has the four seasons. ] 23:27, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Culture Section== | |||
Needs to be checked for NPOV. The whole section sounds like it's been copied from a web-page of the Iranian Ministry of Tourism, if there's such a thing. | |||
:Half of it (including the Persian verses and their translations) was edited by me. The other half, people just kept adding in until it took the form it currently has.--] 16:13, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Reversion == | |||
], you have effectively reverted most of the edits I and Jeff3000 made without explaining the rationale. Your edit summaries should be civil and should not include comments like "''do not keep moving/deleing picfs on your own, it is becoming disruptive''" especially when addressed to other editors. That is not an acceptable tone to use in edit summaries and I would appreciate you explaining on the talkpage why you feel other editors cannot make changes without requiring your express typed permission? In case you are not aware, I recommend reading the guidelines on ] and ]. | |||
You ask for discussion before changes but did you read the suggestions we made for Article Improvement? The very least you could do is to comment about the suggestions if you feel so strongly about the changes. This article '''<u>will not</u>''' pass FAC until and unless each of the editors fully appreciates the guidelines at ]. It would help enormously if you could take the time out to read the featured articles on countries like ], ], ] and ], especially the last two because they have only recently passed FAC. Note the criticisms and comments made on their candidacies and let's apply the ideas here. ] 23:18, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Please stay calm, and civil. Regardless of if it is ammusing to you that Zereshk and I defend pics, you cannot keeping deleting pictures on your own, then expect others to accept it. People work hard to gwet these images released, and if you have a personal preference, then you should come in the discussion page, talk about it, and reach a consensus with others. If you keep reverting others`s original work, they will revert it back. Thank you] 23:34, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Please feel free to read through any of my talkpage comments and come back and tell me I don't stay clam and civil. The reason I found it amusing is that in each case the only person to defend the image was the uploader. I didn't think I would have to remind an accomplished editor that Misplaced Pages is not about getting images released but about trying to write first-class articles. Before you accuse myself or Jeff of vandalism I suggest everybody freezes on the revert war and instead scroll up, read the ] and make a constructive comment as to how the article can be improved. ] 23:45, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Images == | |||
Zmmz has reverted much of the image work of Zereshk, and I have gone back to Zereshk's edits. I think the article is much improved the way Zereshk has modified it. There were too many images. -- ] 23:19, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:I was posting this as GreenGiant posted the above, I agree with what GreenGiant said above. -- ] 23:20, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Same here, I agree with Jeff's revert. ] 23:31, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::So it's me, Green Giant, and Zereshk who believe his edits in moving/removing the images is appropriate. There are too many images in the article, and they are all important, but decisions have to be made to remove some of them. -- ] 23:35, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
OK, but others don`t agree with your personal taste, or other. So please do not delete other people`s hard work on your own, and discuss it thoroughly first, or set-up a straw poll. Thank you] 23:36, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:This page is not owned by you Zmmz. I believe Zereshk's edits were hard work, and by your edits you deleted his work. But really wikipedia doesn't work that way, and if some of your edits were removed, you shouldn't take it personally, we are all working to make this article better. -- ] 23:39, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
No, you are mistaken; I was not the one that deleted Zereshk`s works. You need to set up a straw poll, instead of, deleting stuff. Thank you] 23:42, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:You don't make straw polls for every edit. How many straw polls have you seen on Misplaced Pages. The point is that most editors believe Zereshk's edits were appropriate. -- ] 23:44, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Zmmz, if and when Iran makes it to featured status, you can demand that no major changes be made without consensus. However, as it is a FACfailed, this article is open to positive changes by anyone. There is a "straw poll" of sorts above - make some comments on improvements instead of backing into a corner. ] 23:48, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Whatever the problem seems to be on this page, it needs to be solved here. Jeff3000 and Zmmz, I'm warning both of you to stop this edit war and do not violate ]. 3RR is not an entitlment to revert three times. Don't edit war. Use the talk page. ] 23:51, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
You , I ,or Jeff3000 cannot delete others` hard works, then expect them to let it be. Please stay calm, civil and try not to monopolize articles. Instead, before you delete pics, come and set up a straw poll. If you delete pics and ask later, how can others know which pic you are talking about? So, put the pic back, while I set up a poll.] 23:55, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Pepsidrinka warn users on their talk page please; not here please.] 23:56, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:Zmmz, please explain why the griffin image is relevant to the Name section. Is it not more appropriate in the History section? ] 23:58, 24 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Please also explain why three images are good in the Geography section? If we were to remove one, would you have a preference? ] 00:00, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Zmmz, no I need not warn editors on their talk page. Seeing how you've been blocked for 3RR in the past and I am aware that Jeff3000 is aware of ], I was merely making it known to everyone to this article, and you two specifically, that edit warring is unacceptable that the 3RR is considered policy and a blockable offense. Frankly, a 3RR block is not dependent on the user being warned of his impending violation on his/her talk page. ] 00:38, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I asked you before, please review the 3RR warning policies on the 3RR page; that is the standard procedure, and I am aware of 3RR very well. Please don`t use the discussion page to talk to another person; go to their talk page, instead. Thanks] 21:09, 26 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Vote on images== | |||
=== Vote on the Tochal picture in the `Climate` section === | |||
] | |||
] | |||
*'''Keep'''- The image in the `Geography and climate` section is also important, since it shows the snow filled mountains of Tehran, and many do not know Iran has the four seasons. Thank you] 00:03, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''Remove''' - Too many images. -- ] 00:15, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''Remove''' - This is the wrong question to ask. I don't think anybody else is personally opposed to that image but the section is simply not long enough to warrant three images. There is already an excellent image of a mountain, why do we need two images of mountains? The rationale for showing four seasons would presumably be extended to having four images each showing a season? ] 00:23, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''Merge''' (!): I suggest that inorder to resolve this issue, we put ONE image of ] that is both appealing '''and''' has '''snow''' on it, to hit two birds with one stone. The current Mt Damavand image isnt that great. I propose this one (seen to the right) for example. What do you say '''Zmmz'''?--] 00:26, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''Keep'''- As per Zmmz. --] 01:40, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Comment''' - good idea. Change my vote to '''merge''' as per Zereshk. ] 00:28, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Comment''' - sounds good, '''merge''' as per Zereshk. -- ] 00:46, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:*'''Comment''' - Note: the Tochal picture shows snow, as well as the the Telecabin, in Tehran, and from experience I can tell that many are surprised that both exit in Tehran, or even Iran. So, it is more useful than just a boring pic of a mountain.] 00:43, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
As per the discussion here, I replaced the picture of Damavand in summer with a picture of Damavand in winter to show diversity of climate in Iran. --] 02:17, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:All, how about if we agree to my suggestion for the pic here for the geo section, and instead have the snow/tochal/ski pic of Zmmz used as the image of the new section on sports that GG, ManiF, et al have been talking about?--] 17:32, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
This pic hits three birds with half a stone; so there is no need for extra sections. But, you guys do what you want.] 20:31, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
This time i vote for '''zereshk's picture above''', not the one that exists on the page now. --] 09:38, 27 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
=== Vote on picture in the `Naming` section === | |||
<p> | |||
<div class="noprint MainPageBG" align="center" style="border: 1px solid #f85101; padding: .1em .2em .1em .2em; font-size: 100%; color: #000000; background-color: #ffc166"> | |||
For the naming section we can only have one image. Which would you prefer? | |||
<center> | |||
<gallery> | |||
Image:Persepolis - The Sculptures 3.jpg|''Homa'' griffin of ancient Iran, with a caption stating what the country was called back then. | |||
Image:Yek toman qajar.jpg|Iran name on 19th century bill | |||
Image:Iran.jpg|"Iran"'s name on ancient map by Erathostenes. | |||
</gallery> | </gallery> | ||
</center> | |||
This vote will be held for three days (until thursday the 27th). (agree?) | |||
</div> | |||
*'''Keep Homa'''- I think the image is a major symbol, it blends to the next section nicely, and it also shows a slice of the biggest tourist attraction in Iran. Plus, it is aestethically appealing.] 00:03, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*I'd go for the '''map''', since it actually has the name "Iriana" on it. Though the other two are good too.--] 00:17, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''Map''' - Map makes a lot of sense in naming section -- ] 00:16, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''Move down to History''' - The straw polls are asking the wrong questions. All that is needed is for someone (it doesn't have to be Zmmz) to give a rationale for keeping the griffin image in the Name section and why it wouldn't be better in the History section. ] 00:24, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:*On the issue of which image, I too would prefer the map on the same grounds as Zereshk. ] 00:24, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*I prefer the '''''map''''' – ideal treatment of names for the locality in antiquity and modernity. The '''''bill note''''' is a secondary choice but more exemplifies the modern naming dispute, not etymology ''per se''. Effectively, the ''Homa'' is ''non sequitur'' and doesn't belong in the sxn but might elsewhere (e.g., 'History'). And as discussed above, I've made this change (to the map, w/caption) ... but I will support whatever a consensus might. ] | ] | 00:28, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''map''' ..It's the name of the article we are talking here. But I like the homa pic, perhaps should use it in the history or something. --]<sup>] | </sup> 00:29, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::We can definitely use it on other articles indeed.--] 00:36, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''map'''. ] 01:27, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''Keep Homa'''- As per my earlier explanation. --] 01:42, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''Keep Homa'''- In my opinion the first image of an important page like this should not be so '''ugly''', the map pic belongs to a name of iran page for example --] 09:24, 27 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
*'''No image necessary'''. The page looks much, much, much, much better without any image cluttering things up in that section. The beginning of the article is both more balanced and more elegant without any of the images, and anyone who's interested in the name controversy can easily follow the link and see ''all three of the above images''!! The "Homa" image is not directly relevant to the naming section, and, if it's included at all, it should be moved to the "history" section, where there is both more room for it (the last three paragraphs are currently unillustrated) and infinitely more relevance. The map, too, is a very poor choice for inclusion in the "naming" section, because although it doesn't have the problem of not being relevant to the section in question (indeed, it's very relevant to the issue), it still has the same problem of cluttering the page up too much and "smushing" the text into an extremely narrow margin (mainly because the "country template" for Iran extends all the way through the "name" section, which is ''only'' a problem ''if'' we add an image to that section; the same problem would occur if we tried to add another image to the upper-left corner of the lead paragraphs!), and it additionally has a ''third'' problem which doesn't exist for the homa image: it's completely impossible to ''see'' at the small sizes required for this article! What's the point of including a map if it not only causes layout problems, but if the text that makes the map relevant isn't even ''visible'' at the small sizes it's required at! The map should be reserved for daughter articles like ]; I removed it from ] for the same reason a while ago, and the article is ''infinitely'' better off for it. Overindulgence in images can very easily bloat and bury an article on such a broad topic as "Iran" if we are not extremely careful to be very selective and to ''allow'' images to be used on daughter articles like ] without them having to occur here too. Although I'm a big fan of images, the key to using them effectively is to balance them with the text: because "name" is so short and is already accompanied by the bottom of the template, adding an image would completely unbalance the section and make it a pain, rather than a pleasure, to read. Moreover, ''expanding'' the section would be completely unnecessary (we have a whole extra article for that!), so the ideal solution is to simply leave the text be and ''not have an image''. What's so awful about that? It completely solves all the problems and arguments regarding the matter, and has the added benefit of improving the article's flow, cohesion, symmetry, and balance, allowing the text room to breathe. The simplest solution is sometimes the best: let the text speak for itself in cases such as this, and you'll find that it words ring out much louder and clearer than if a fancy, pretty image were awkwardly shoved into its midst. | |||
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OK guys. Im tired. Im retiring for the night. I have a seminar to give tomorrow. Happy constructive negotiating. Keep kewl, y'all.--] 00:46, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
====Vote summary/result==== | |||
As of this note, the above vote has yielded the following assertions from 10 editors: | |||
* ''6 votes (5 at a mere cursory glance) prefer including the map image'' | |||
* 3 votes prefer including the ] image | |||
* 1 vote for not including any image | |||
Various users support including the Homa image elsewhere in the article, while minor varied support has been expressed about including the bill note. | |||
Thus, the map seems to be the choice of a majority and, arguably a consensus of editors. Thanks! ] | ] | 17:28, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== sub-section in culture == | |||
What do you guys think of a sub-section in culture about sports in Iran explaining Iranians' passion for wrestling, football, skiing and etc? --] 02:45, 25 April 2006 (UTC)\ | |||
:All for it (though I'm not sure we need the actual subsection title). Sports are an important part of the country. -- ] 02:49, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:That would be a good idea. I suggested covering sports in the ] above but it seems to have become lost in the middle of the talkpage. ] 02:49, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:Do it, and put the Tochal skiing picture there, so that Zmmz will also be happy, and so that we can have the previous problem (in the geo section) solved.--] 17:30, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Source provided for ] == | |||
Thank you for so promptly providing a source ManiF, but I hate to be the bearer of bad news. That link is to a page which does indeed talk about the Cradle of Humanity but it cites the Misplaced Pages article ] which unfortunately does not possess a single citation itself - which means at the moment the Cradle of Humanity is a personal point of view. We need a more verifiable source than one which relies on Misplaced Pages itself. Thanks. ] 02:47, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
: Yes, I didn't realize the source was a mirror of wiki. I'll find a better source but the statement makes sense to me considering how Middle East region is regarded as the Cradle of civilization. --] 02:59, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Thank for removing the link. Looking at that sentence I think it would be better placed in History rather than Geography. It looks out of place in a paragraph which talks about plains, rivers, coastlines and climate. ] 03:07, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::I've been trying to find a source for the quote, and searching journals through my university's website, but it seems that most references for "cradle of humanity" come up for Africa. Is there another term that is used, maybe "cradle of civilization" -- ] 03:10, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::Searching for "cradle of civilization" and Iran, I found the following reference from Forbes magazine in 1983: | |||
:::::"''Rumors abound that oil will drop to $15 per barrel, but 7 factors will probably keep that from happening. These are: 1. Too many powerful parties, including the USSR, are interested in protecting the price. 2. The massive oil inventory decumulation should be over. 3. Economic recovery is here, so the demand for oil supplies will increase. 4. The pricearnings multiples on the oils are low historically and in relation to the existing market multiple. 5. Dividend yields are usually high, and generally secure. 6. Most institutional investors underown stocks. In other words, the oils are sold out. 7. The possibility of war among the countries in the '''"cradle of civilization" - Iran, Iraq, and Syria''' - will probably boost the price of oil. Investors could profit if they treated the international oils as bond substitutes and refiners arketers as commodity plays. Oils which should yield good returns are: 1. Exxon, 2. Pennzoil, 3. Quaker State, 4. Texaco, and 5. Amerada Hess.''" | |||
:::::::(Brown, Ann C. Forbes , vol.131, no.7, pp.208, 1983) (emphasis added) -- ] 03:21, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Overnight changes == | |||
Perhaps I'm missing something here. Overnight changes have been made which have changed things back to previous versions. I can understand the images and things like that, but what concerns me is that the changes include removal of a citation request for Cradle of Humanity which ManiF at least made an effort to address, slight rewrites of two sentences in Demographics, and a grammar mistake in the History section. If you are going to change things back, at least check what you are changing back. If I didn't have faith in huan nature, I'd be tempted to think some people are blindly reverting without assuming good faith. ] 13:27, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:E Pluribus Anthony restored the Name section changes, and I have put back the new photo of the Mosque, as well as restoring your work to the Politics section, and put back the fact tag. I assume that the reversion was done to restore the picture of the president, and he didn't look that much more work had been done. -- ] 13:30, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Yeah, I'm unsure what happened there: I only restored those tidbits (upfront) that I've dealt with recently. Perhaps ] inadvertently restored a cached or otherwise halluncinatory version of the article? ] | ] | 13:34, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:Thanks for putting back the uncontroversial changes, I would have done so myself but I've been at work all day. ] 22:30, 25 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::I'm not sure what happened, but I tried to move the ''Cradle of Humanity'' line from Geography to History and for some bizarre reason a whole bunch of other changes took place at the same time including a reversing of the provincial wikilinks which I had fixed just minutes earlier to avoid redirects. I reverted myself and tried to move the line again and it worked. :) ] 03:35, 26 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:: You noticed that too? The only changes I had made were supposed to involve the image of Mahmoud, but for some reason it changed a part of the page back to a cached version. Strange... ] 07:16, 26 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
"Iran: The Logic of Deterrence" http://www.amconmag.com/2006/2006_04_10/cover.html | |||
== Changes needed == | |||
Zereshk asks in an edit summary "(→Politics - Why was this merged into the intro? The "Supreme Leader" has his own separate office and place in politics.)". Another eidt summary states "(→Parliament - The parliament has a title, similar to the Bundestag, Duma, Congress, Diet, etc...)". | |||
The simple answer is that further up the talkpage I made a list of suggestions for improving the article. The FAC failed eight months ago and it shouldn't take that long to get improvements made. Earlier edit summaries accused me of engaging in edit wars and making changes without discussing them on the talkpage. It is remarkable that people ask these questions in edit summaries and yet only one editor (Jeff) has actually responded to my suggestions. I would appreciate it if you guys would look at the suggesions and make some responses before you make edit summary comments like that. | |||
Just so we are clear, I don't think subheadings are a good idea as they fragment sections. The Politics section should really be a Government section and needs a paragraph on each of the main components of government. The City and Village Councils could move down to major cities which could become a section on it's own. As for the gallery zereshk, even the USA article you cited doesn't have the cities in a gallery. The images are stacked up on the right-hand side and the section has some prose about the cities. ] 12:01, 27 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:I agree, we should get rid of most of the subsection headings. The politics section has way too many subsections. I've expanded the cities section, and if you put the village and council sections into it, then there could be two images beside the prose, and we can get rid of the gallery. Since pictures of Tehran is already in other places in the article, we'd only be losing one image. -- ] 13:31, 27 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
I'm begining to think that making this article featured is a bad idea. Making it featured at the cost of taking out info? That's just not a good idea; squeezing all the politics section into one "government" prose is absurd, because Iran doesnt have a clearly defined "government". Unlike other coutries, in Iran, state and church are one. The supreme religious leader can veto the entire cabinet. The clerics ("council of guardians") can dismiss the parliament's decisions or its elections, if they so wish. | |||
That's why none of the editors involved in the feature article drive of this article are actually Iranian. To the latter, this feature article drive business is becoming actually counterproductive. Erase this, to make it featured. Erase that, to make it featured. Is this what we really want? As for myself, Im not so sure. I'd rather see an article that is comprehensive and informative (like the ]), rather than have a canned featured article for a day on the main page. | |||
Just my opinion.--] 17:09, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
And I dont understand this resilient persistence in removing the gallery in favor of piling up images. The latter highly disrupts the flow of the prose whereas a gallery is a crisp and clean way of making a befitting page. And it's only 4 images. Why do away with a visual table (aka gallery) of cities? I suppose we're trying to convey the idea that Iran has no big beautiful cities, and that people do indeed live in desert mud huts next to camels, guns, and barrels of oil, as the popular perception goes.--] 17:18, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:I think your making a lot of assumptions here so I'll put it simply. I find it unacceptable that the Iran article is not a featured article. Considering that it has not been nominated again since August last year is a crying shame. Attempting to conform to a few guidelines is not that difficult. It has to do with a lot more than just being on the front page for a day. Let's put it this way - when uninformed readers look at the article, wouldn't it be nice for them to have an article of a high standard? Quoting from ], the article has to be: | |||
::# "well written" and "comprehensive" - at the moment all it needs is a tidy up of grammar/spelling, and maybe a couple of new sections like Holidays, Sports, Wildlife etc. | |||
::# "factually accurate" - there is a decent References section which I fixed more than a week ago to ensure this isn't a stumbling block. | |||
::# "neutral" - we tackled this just a few days ago, when the post-revolution history was rewritten from a third-party perspective so there are no lines like "Iran has frequently been the target of verbal attacks by the United States". Manif made a decent attempt to address the "Cradle of Humanity" problem. | |||
::# "stable" - this is only possible if everybody refrains from reverting everything without calm clear discussion. If you see another editor has made changes, compare the versions to see what the changes are and check talkpage to see if they've mentioned anything | |||
:Other things that need covering are: | |||
::# a concise ], summarising the entire topic and preparing readers for a higher level of detail in the subsequent sections - this is pretty much ready and won't need major overhauls | |||
::# a proper system of hierarchical headings - the section headings are fine with the exception of Politics, which should really be renamed as Government | |||
::# a substantial but not overwhelming ] - the TOC is longer than needed because there are more subsections than there should be. | |||
::# ] where appropriate, with succinct ] - this means don't overload the article with images and don't write short essays in the captions. For example in the name section, the caption on the image should say what the image is, but leave the explanation for the main body of text | |||
::# All images should have ] - if you have an image you wish to use, be absolutely certain that the owner of the image has given clear permission. Zmmz has solved his particular problems with image copyrights by forwarding the relevant emails to "permissions@wikimedia.org" and by posting a note on "]. | |||
::# Appropriate length and tight focus on the main topic without unnecessary detail - the article is not too long and it won't matter if a few KB are added to it | |||
::# Usage of ] to cover sub-topics that have 'daughter' articles - this is the main reason I wanted the History section shorter | |||
:Featured article does not mean taking out info - in fact quite the opposite. The main ] article should be a summary of numerous "daughter articles" like ] and ]. In the Politics section what is needed is a well-written continuous prose, not single-sentence paragraphs with subheadings like '''Expediency Council'''. All of the information should stay but lets get rid of the subsections and instead write a continuous set of five or six paragraphs and three or four relevant images. It doesn't matter if Iran doesn't have a clearly defined "government" as the prose should be written in such a way as the reader understands that there is more than just a President, cabinet, legislature and judiciary. The "state and church unity" can be emphasised without subsections. | |||
:You should also avoid suggesting that we "non-Iranians" are being counterproductive - driving for FA status is positive and it is being done on hundreds of articles right now. The ] article you hold up as an example was a failed featured article candidate in 2004 and has not still not resolved the biggest problem - references. Look at the bottom of the page and there are seven notes under '''References''' of which only five link to an external source. It amazes me that some editors still do not understand why we need sources. To the uninformed reader most of the ] article could be completely made up and they would never know. To give an example of this kind of thing, I recently came across a new editor ] on inserting an estimated population in the ] infobox based on the fact that somewhere further down another editor had added an unsourced figure. It took him a little while to come round to the idea that that figure could be inaccurate and made up. | |||
:How exactly does the gallery not disrupt the flow of text? Even in the ] article, the population data is in a table and the city images are at the right hand side, piled on top of each other. We are not trying to do away with beautiful city images and we would rather that uninformed readers could read about Iran and realise it isn't just "desert mud huts next to camels, guns, and barrels of oil". If we could add extend the Major Cities section and a new section or two, there would be room for all the images, even the one Manif added to Economy. Instead of worrying about all this, you could make suggestions for improvements and assume good faith when us "non-Iranians" want to help. At the moment there is a pointless and wasteful war going on in Middle Eastern articles with people forgetting that the whole point was to write first-class articles. So let's work together to put ] in the top division of articles (thats less than 1,000 articles at the moment out of more than a million). ] 21:16, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::I agree fullheartedly with GreenGiant, especially noting that we're not taking out info, but moving to the relevent subarticles, which is the best way to organize the information, so tha the reader who is interested gets the info he needs without getting tired, and cutting out. -- ] 00:46, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::I give up fullheartedly. You can erase all of the article to a stub, so that it can be featured, if that's what WP policies require for featured status. Good luck.--] 04:35, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Main article template and images == | |||
I agree with Zereshk's and GreenGiant's edits to move the images above the main template in the wikisource. The doesn't effect the main templates text location, but reduces the whitespace, and allows for better flow of text. Darkred has reverted those edits, and I am in favour of putting them back. -- ] 02:56, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::First of all Zereshk did no such edit, second green and i have come to an agreement of what to do about this, you can read it here: --] 03:25, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::Zereshk did perform such edits, please see , and , and GreenGiant has not come to an agreement, he notes he doesn't want to get into a revert war, but still believes there is a reduction in whitespace. I don't want to get into a revert war either, but three editors believe those edits are appropriate. -- ] 03:47, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Zereshks edit in link one was the same thing i did with the images, greengiant as i showed you in the link did agree that the images '''should be in the line with the first sentence of the content itself not with a reference to another article'''. Furthermore i realy don't understand what the argument is here? As greengiant suggested if you want to help keep this article clean, provide more information so the whitespaces can be wiped out, do not ingage in editwars as i seen you and greengiant have been doing in this article againt zereshk and zmmz. --] 05:07, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:Let's clear this up. I understood your logic Darkred, but I agree with Jeff that the <nowiki>{{main}}</nowiki> template isn't affected by the images being above it. I am certain we all agree that the large amount of whitespace below Economy is not a good thing. The solutions are: | |||
::# Add extra content to Economy | |||
::# Move one of the images to somewhere else in the article | |||
::# Remove one of the images | |||
:I am going to try to go for option 1, but I don't think we should rule out the other options immediately. As for the edit wars, it should be noted that the proposed changes are still sitting up there near the top of the talkpage and not one editor (barring Jeff) has taken the time to comment. As I said on Darkred's talkpage, I don't engage in edit wars but on the other hand I don't appreciate people making grand gestures in edit summaries but not bothering to check if anyone has tried to discuss changes. It's called common courtesy and I haven't seen too much of it on here recently. As for Jeff, at least he went through my suggestions and commented on them. I don't think he can be accused of negativity when he was defending another editor's ] contributions. | |||
:On a sidenote, I hope Zmmz won't be gone on a wikibreak for too long because despite the disagreements it's good to have critical reviews. ] 13:16, 28 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==This has been going on long enough== | |||
First of all how come you are so eager to take out the images from economy section, as you did from the city gallery? With an excuse to clean it up! | |||
Second, it is obvious that neither you or jeff are iranian or have any academic knowledge about iran. | |||
So why is it that you keep editing, and are so concerend about this article? --] 01:09, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:1. I refer you to the edit I made under ] and to ] - Style Manual point d): | |||
::(d) Images where appropriate, with succinct captions and acceptable copyright status. (including images is not a prerequisite for a featured article). | |||
:::To look at how much some editors have defended particular images, you have to wonder what their motivation is for keeping the images other than they look nice. Example: the Griffin image looked nice but was it appropriate in the name section? Specifically in the Economy section, there needs to be either more content or fewer images. | |||
:2. I think you misunderstand what Misplaced Pages is about. There are no restrictions based on an editor's nationality, religion or academic qualifications. Anyone can edit any article they wish as long as rules are obeyed (vandalism etc). I can't speak for Jeff's nationality but is it particularly important that we are not Iranians? I am not French, Indian or Pakistani but I have contributed significantly to the articles on ], ], ] and ] which you can check here -> . I edit these and other articles simply because I have an interest in other parts of the world than my own. ] 01:35, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Did i say you can't edit or wikipedia does not allow that. No i did not, i said why edit something you have no good knowledge about. Why not leave that to the ones that have academic knowledge or have experince about the subject. | |||
:However i don't see why the images in the economy section do not belong there, they are perfect. | |||
I believe making a featured article takes more than deleting images to achieve it. Like you suggested yourself '''and i agreed with you,''' your than welcome to add more material to the economy section to delete whitespace. --] 02:54, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:Sorry, I wasn't intending to offend you, but when I have edited some articles, I have been asked the same question - if you're not from here, why are you editing this article? The reasoning is always to suggest that the article is not open to outsiders, because "''the media doesn't tell the real truth about this place''". I don't know what gives you the impression that I have no knowledge of Iran, but academic knowledge of a topic isn't a prerequisite in Misplaced Pages. What is needed is the ability to edit, to utilise sources, upload images and follow rules such as copyright tags and ]. | |||
:As for the Economy section, I am working on extra content but it may take me all weekend. ] 03:18, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Green Giant has put a lot of effort into improving this article. If you spend time reading Misplaced Pages policies and guidelines, you will see that Green Giant has been almost a perfect Wikipedian, discussing changes, not reverting, .... I believe, through my experience editing the Canada article, and looking at Featured article nominations for other counties, that his edits have lead to the article being made much superiour. Just a note, I am Iranian. -- ] 04:20, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Green giant i am not offended . I don't have academic knowledge about iran either, but if someone have academic knowledge about a certain subject it is best to leave '''most''' of the providing of material and utilising of sources at their hands. Hence zereshk whom i believe is qualified for the task, and it seems has done so for a long time in wikipedia. | |||
As jeff says you have done a great job cleaning other articles, and i know you have similar goals for this article. However it is important that we don't get in the way, and discuss the matter before changing everything ourselfs. | |||
Furthermore i don't think there is any need for discussing this subject any further, because it think that we understand eachother well. --] 04:52, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
Yeah I concur that ] has done some great editing work. The editing aspect can be done by anyone I'd say. As for expertise on Iran, much of the information, since it has to be verifiable, can be retrieved from academic sources anyway which makes editing the article a job many people can do. ] 07:11, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Can't really find citation for Iran being a Cradle of Humanity== | |||
Now Cradle of Civilization usually refers to the earliest civilizations of Egypt, Mesopotamia, the Indus, and China, but other than that, there isn't any mention of Iran which has contributed other things such as being the world's first multinational empire that encompassed much of the known ancient world. Plus, it's badly worded. ] 07:11, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::I think one of the major theories of CoH said that it is in Iran, sadly I can't remember his name but it was only a year or two ago and I read about his published work in a newspaper. --]<sup>] | </sup> 08:16, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::Yeah I looked at the article and it doesn't cite anything. I replaced it with some interesting stuff on pre-historic Iran that I think warrants inclusion though. ] 09:15, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
::It is interesting but I think we can definately improve on that, the fact that civilization from nearly 8000 years ago existed in Iran, (and not only they existed!, but they were civilized!) and they used to make wine, etc.. I think we should mention that --]<sup>] | </sup> 09:52, 29 April 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Unsigned question == | |||
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The page says the Bush Administration has revealed plans for nuclear strikes. After reading the cited article, it seems the press was responsible for the revelation, not the Administration. I'm new, any advice on changing it? {{unsigned|141.156.128.251}} | |||
:How exactly do you mean the press was responsible for the revelation? ] 01:51, 2 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
== ] == | |||
There were a couple of references to Iran being an elective monarchy but these are gone now. There is still one hidden link though behind the "''power to <u>dismiss and replace</u> the Supreme Leader at any time''". I'm not entirely convinced by the arguments given on the ] article that Iran fits such a description. The other states mentioned as modern elective monarchies (barring Samoa and Vatican City) are all constitutional monarchies. However, Iran is defined as a constitutional republic with an indirectly-elected Supreme Leader (for life) and a directly-elected President but this doesn't necessarily mean it is a monarchy. Anyway the article lacks sources and citations so I've placed an appropriate tag there and an appropriate on here until someone rustles up a source for Iran being an elective monarchy. ] 02:01, 2 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Iran a secular democracy?? == | |||
So up until the coup in 1953, supported by the British and US (in which the US mostly funded and planned it), Iran was essentially a '''secular democracy''' in the first place! It's amazing how ignorant we are about our own histories, and so naive to think that the Americans have a plan to "bring democracy to the Middle-East." | |||
Now I understand where the anger stems from. Amazing to think that they should put someone in charge, who has been accused of being a nazi collaborater, in control of a country and be responsible for the worst human atrocities in the country in the time he ruled. | |||
Had this not have happened, the Islamic Revolution may not have been necessary, Iran would already have a healthy secular democracy, and we could have been living relatively harmoniously now... Some how I think that with the current American foreign policy, we could be seeing a few more 'revolutions' - An uncomfortable thought.. | |||
R.A Uk {{unsigned|193.60.133.205}} | |||
Pure speculation. The Iranians didn't install a democracy to replace the Shah but an theocratic Islamic state. | |||
--] 20:56, 15 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
As far as i remeber, last Shah was installed by foreign countries (guess which) to control oil and not only resources which after nationalization suddenly were returned to inernational oil companies. As the realist i dont see any possibity of changing such governemts except the revolution, because each area of pseudo-democracy were military (economically) controled. | |||
== Sports? == | |||
Should there be a sports section. Many countries have this section. We should also add a military section. Im new, so I was just wondering.{{unsigned|70.68.185.170}} | |||
: The '''see also''' section has a link to the 'Sports In Iran' article. ] 04:53, 8 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
::Yes there should be a sports section but no there shouldn't be a military section, because it is something worth examining on a separate daughter article. BY the way, think about starting an account - it is far easier to edit with than without one. :) ] 23:27, 8 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
Yes, especially since the World Cup is coming up, there should be a section with emphasis on football as well as wrestling and skiing to show the popularity and diversity of sports in Iran. If someone takes the time to prepare such section, I will provide two appropriate pictures for the section. --] 23:43, 8 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
For the sports section I wrote an article in a bit of time. Please edit and once it is good we shall hopefully add this to the page. | |||
Many kinds of sports are practiced in Iran, both traditional and modern. Some sports, such as figure skating or professional dancing, are in conflict with Islamic Sharia law and therefore not practiced by Iranian athletes. The most popular sports in Iran are football (soccer), weightlifting, skiing, martial arts and wrestling. Iran also hosts and participate in major international sporting events to this day. For example, Tehran was the first city in the Middle East to host the Asian summer games in 1974. Football in Iran has become increasingly popular in Iran. The Iranian national football team is usually in the top 20 of the world and has qualified for 3 world cups. In weight lifting Hossein Reza Zadeh has made the world records in the Olympics and Is known as the worlds strongest man. Due to the low cost and the great benefits for the individual, martial arts have exploded in popularity in Iran in the past 20 years. Varzesh-e Pahlavani wrestling, commonly practiced in gymnasia called Zurkhaneh, is a century-old tradition in Persia. But also Greco-Roman, and particularly Freestyle Wrestling is incredibly popular in Iran, often even referred to as its national sport. With a history of great wrestlers, such as Gholamreza Takhti, and considerable success in Olympic and World Championships, Iran is considered among the elite nations in the sport (along with the US and CIS states).] 05:07, 9 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
: We need something better. I don't like that paragraph, it's too general and it's also factually inaccurate as skating or professional dancing are practiced in Iran by men or women only. --] 22:42, 9 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Formatting problem with images== | |||
There's a problem with the image in the "Name" section. The image is formatted on the left side of the page, but when the menu is displayed, the table on the right hand side of the page, which has the statistics, extends down into the "Name" section, in a way that causes the picture to obscure some of the text in the first paragraph (at least with my browser, Safari on MacOS X). If I try to move the picture to the right, the text is not obscured, but if I hide the main menu, the picture moves into the "History" section, where it is not intended to be. | |||
I do not know how to fix this problem. I hope that someone more knowledgeable than I can fix it. ] 22:44, 9 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
:It's just fine in Firefox, and I can't test it in Safari (I'm on Windows). --] 22:52, 9 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
==the return of banned users== | |||
*'''Note''': ] is suspected of being Aucaman's sockpuppet. Aucaman has been banned from Iranian articles permanently by ArbCom. Please monitor. --anon observer] | |||
:'''NOTE''': the anonymous user above, whose comment I've signed for him, is most likely a sockpuppet of ].] 03:21, 11 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
::See your talk page, Tim.--] 21:47, 11 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
'''UPDATE''': ] has been confirmed as a sockpuppet of ]. See ]. ] 20:58, 11 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::Seriously User:Timothy Usher, you have an agenda against user:Zereshk. You have made personal attacks against him. Have made these claims of sockpuppetry and pasted them publicly without going to the proper sources and finally accused him out of nowhere of being anti-Semetic or more accurately anti-Jewish. Why? Why is it that you and a group of Jewish editors are attacking user:Zereshk? I personally see a link to user:Acuman. Please stop these attacks against user:Zereshk. What you are doing in incivil and wrong. ] 19:32, 13 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
It's very interesting that the anon is angry at charges that someone is anti-Jewish, and believes that these charges are being leveled by "a group of Jewish editors". A curious lack of symmetry here. Calling someone anti-Jewish = slur, calling someone Jewish != slur. ] 22:01, 13 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
==Brief help== | |||
Would anybody be able to tell me the translation of the name of the Iranian national Anthem? Much thanks ] 14:20, 12 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
:The national anthem "Sorūd-e Mellī-e Īrān" can be roughly translated as "Hymn of (the) Nation of Iran" with "Nation". ] 01:03, 14 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Featured Article == | |||
I think this article deserves to be a featured article since it's well documented, precise, and very well written. What do you think? And since I'm a newbie please help to put this article as a featured article (move the last featured article discussion on Iran to archives and resubmit). Thanks ] 16:44, 14 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
:The article still needs some refinement, especially dropping the gallery and adding new sections like holidays. ] 00:03, 16 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
== a reader's comment == | |||
Just popped in to find out what kind of government Iran had. Then read the talk page. Personally, I liked the easy to read subheadings in the politics section. Helped me get exactly what I needed out of the article. | |||
Take this with a grain of salt, but after reading the talk page, I do feel a bit bad about the Iranian who seems to have spent a lot of time writing the article, and then was eclipsed/outvoted by multiple visiting editors. If you don't have passionate folks putting together the whole thing originally, you wouldn't have anything to come through and edit later. | |||
== 1000 Toman bill == | |||
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I think the 1000 Toman bill in this picture is both dirty and old (although, thanks to Zereshk for uploading it). Please if anyone has a newer version (cleaner and more respectable) upload it. It will improve the quality of this article a lot. Thank You. ] 21:00, 19 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
:I also uploaded a 2000 Toman bill (Isfahani side) a while ago. I dont know what happened to it.--] 03:22, 4 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
==New Iranian law to require Jews to wear yellow band== | |||
: This is all based on a National Post editorial, the story has not yet been verified by any major news agencies. To the contrary, Morris Mohtemed, the Jewish Community's representative in Iran's parliamentrant has said that the story reported by the National Post in Canada is false. --] 22:29, 19 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
:: First: This is completely false. I know the Current Iranian government is arrogant, irresponsible and corrupt but this is just far away from happening. I live in Canada, and I've seen this news on TV. This is not a Fact. Second this article is for Iran, so is it's discussion. Please take these news to some other pages or some articles related to Iran's News. Thank you. ] 23:24, 19 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::I would say the green one. We also defintly need the picture of Cyrus's cylinder. --] (]) 11:33, 12 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
It is unfortunate that people jump to conclusions and make headlines that are not completely true at the time. The link provided above states "A new dress-code law <u>reportedly</u> passed in Iran this past week". So even the Jerusalem Post is unsure whether the law has been passed or not. Therefore it is pure speculation and not fit for this article. The appropriate time for this link would have been if and when the law had been confirmed. ] 23:42, 19 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::I vote for the second one (on the right). I also suggest we replace ] pic with either the Cylinder of Cyrus or with Cyrus'tomb (below): ] lies in the ruins of ], now a ] ] (2006).]] | |||
:::] (]) 03:15, 13 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::: Choghazanbil belongs there. It is of a more ancient period of time.--] (]) 08:43, 13 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Definitely the green one. In the text it describes how the empire stretched '''''From''''' the two rivers to the Aegean sea (I just edited the Aegean sea bit), but here it clearly crosses the Oxus river so it is wrong and we should replace it with the '''Right''' image.] (]) 22:41, 17 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::: Yes the Northern i.e. the Scythian borders of the Empire were ambiguous, In addition the Green one covers Greece better. We know that all Greek cities except Athenes and its allies paid tribute to the Achamenids. And btw Athenes was occupied too. It has a weakness that it does not fully cover the historical Macedonia which was an Achamenid dominium. It is ambogius on the Caucasus. I also beleive that the border was Iaxartes (syrdarya) and not Oxus. This is the Area to the north of which lived the Massagetes, while for example Khwarezmia (to the northe of Oxus) was settled by the sedentary Iranian tribes, were early Zoroastrianis and and were loyal to the empire. But in general the Green one is better--] (]) 10:10, 18 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Origins of carpet weaving == | |||
:: This is disinformation at its best. The papers only source is an Iranian exile living in Toronto. So much for journalism. The story has been posted at high traffic sites such as reddit.com and digg.com where people take it as fact and think a second holocaust is about to take place. This site also refutes the story . --- ] 00:19, 20 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
They predate the Persians. Xenophon is a primary source, and you cannot use primary sources without violating Misplaced Pages policies on OR (since you are not a scholar and do not have the expertise to critique or analyze primary sources). Further, Xenophon wasn't alive when the first carpet ever was ever made, so its a weak example for this situation. Even more, the Greeks assumed all innovations by Easterners to be of Persian origin, since that was the ruling class. History of carpet making is too obscure to be claimed by one group. The previous wording was so flowery I thought Mohammad Reza Pahlavi wrote it. -] (]) 01:27, 2 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::The oldest known known carpet of the world is Scythian origin. Then there is Baharistan carpet of Sassanids. I suggest this sentence from the above link you brought be modified and put in there: "There is no doubt, that even Iranians can’t claim to have produced the first hand-made carpets, but the evidences specially finding carpet named “Pazirik” proves the great role of Iranians in creating this valuable art.". We can say that "There is no consensus on the origin of the first hand-made carpet, but the disocvery of the “Pazirik” carpet proves the great role of Iranians in creating this valuable art". --] (]) 01:36, 2 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I don't have an issue with Iranian contributions to the art being mentioned. We can include that. I don't think we should definitively say that we KNOW that the Persians were the first to make them, though. The wording should also remain neutral if we wish to present it. -] (]) 01:37, 2 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Okay. I agree we do not know who made the first one..So I included the neutral wording above. --] (]) 01:39, 2 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Looks like The National Post has removed the story from their site. --- ] 00:26, 20 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
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'''Highlight''': Maurice Motammed, a <u> '''Jewish''' member of Iran's Parliament </u>, dismissed the report as "a complete fabrication" and said: "It is a lie, and the people who invented it wanted to make political gain." --] 22:14, 20 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
*Canada retracts the same news as well: | |||
== Safavid/Pahlavi pics == | |||
==Image repository== | |||
Who thinks this version of the safavid to IR history section is better than the current one? I do. There are two pictures of the safavid dynasty and two from the pahlavi era, but nothing else. But this one has one of the Qajar era too;which was one of the most important eras in modern iranian history. The picture of the Shah is a lot clearer too and it shows the Shah's close ties with the USA.] (]) 17:05, 4 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I am pleased to announce that I have just finished making a special comprehensive gallery (repository) of images for Iran. | |||
:First, please upload a colseup from the picture of Shah wih Nixon, in you proposed version they are far from the camera. After that I don't have any problem with that. | |||
:About the other picture, I disagree with you. But, I will have no objection if other users prefer yours. --] (]) 23:10, 4 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::: the map of Safavid empire is not correct: it should contain much more of Dagestan anbd Georgia. Also Marv and the whole Persian Gulf area, someone please correct the map and download a map again.--] (]) 05:36, 5 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
What I mean is that we need a picture which shows something or someone in Iran's history from the Qajar era and I think the Naser Al-Din picture is a good picture. ] pointed out that the Safavid map is wrong. Should we remove it or leave it until it is updated? Is it better to have incomplete information or none at all? I don't know.] (]) 16:12, 5 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Please use it, and fill it up!!! | |||
>>>> good question. Generally no info is better than wrong info. But in this case you can let it be here, untill it is updated, rather rapidly. In this article, maps and puictures should be sharp and strong, because we do not have much space in the text. --] (]) 19:19, 8 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
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Thanks to all.--] 04:10, 24 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Tourism == | |||
==Sockpuppets of ] have been confirmed== | |||
In the tourism subsection it said that 1.8% of employment is generated from tourism. I wondered if tourism is important enough to have it's own subsection, so I moved all of the text to the Economy of Iran article and put a few sentences in the economy lead.] (]) 12:37, 9 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
The following Anons, have all been confirmed to be sockpuppets of ], '''just as I had suspected''': | |||
>>>>> Just note that its not all about income but about the attraction of this country. Interesting would be to mentiond that despite its potential there is not much foreign tourist, due to the bad name the western Media has created for the country, and give a link to Anti Iranianism.--] (]) 08:47, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
OK. I think I can do that.] (]) 11:14, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
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== History subheadings == | |||
Please notify Admins for any necessary measures. Thanx all.--] 02:47, 25 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
The Misplaced Pages's MOS it says that headings (and titles) should preferably be under ten words. One of the history titles violates this guideline and two other headings also contain a large number of words. All headings (except the Parthian and Sassanid empires) should be changed. I suggest we change the post Arab invasion to Iran under Islamic rule or Caliphate and Sultanate. The Safavid 'till revolution could be Early Modern Iran and the Pahlavi dynasty or Monarchist Modern Iran. I have no suggestions for the early history section.] (]) 16:58, 9 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Yet another drive for deleting Iranian related articles== | |||
>>> You can call that the early historic period or what I prefer the ancient and classical period.--] (]) 08:44, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:I don't like the "Classical" bit. according to WP the Classical Antiquity is '''Classical antiquity (also the classical era or classical period) is a broad term for a long period of cultural history centered on the Mediterranean Sea, comprising the interlocking civilizations of Ancient Greece and Ancient Rome.''' Half of this period would fall under the era of Sassanid and Parthian Empires. How about Rise of the Persian Empire? But this doesn't describe the section well, because it omits the Early history part. Should I change the others?] (]) 11:11, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::: Avoid Persian empire (whatever that might mean) at any costs. Early history and the Iranian statehood, I would say. Median empire can be seen as the first Iranian state in this part of the Iranian world. --] (]) 18:20, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
All, | |||
Maybe we could call it by that part of world history, like stone age or bronze age or antiquity or whenever it is(obviously this is not my strong point, but I will look it up). According to my dictionary statehood means ''The status of being a recognised independent nation'', which Iran still is. Maybe ...and early statehood?] (]) 20:27, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Please contribute to: ] whether you vote for or against the article. | |||
I looked and it falls under the Bronze and Iron ages and early antiquity, but the antiquty period focuses more on Greece and Rome.] (]) 21:27, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
The article has unjustly been nominated for deletion (by ]) despite the fact that there is an entire list and even category of similar articles. | |||
:::::: We want to discuss from pre-antiquity untill early antiquity. I would say consilodation of Iranian statehod, would be a nice title.--] (]) 22:39, 10 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I don't know what consilodation means. Maybe Inauguration of Iranian statehood, but I'm not sure it is the best word. If only we could shorten it, merge it with the next subsection (Parthia and Sassanids) and name it pre Islamic period or something! | |||
] has denied the similar nomination for the similar ] article. | |||
I just had a thought! How about we merge the Median and Achaemenid pat with the Sassanid and Parthian section and call it Pre Islamic Statehood, and leave the Pre-median stuff in it's own subsection (Early History). I think this is a good idea because with the statehood of Iran a new era of Iranian history started. I think it is also important that if we do this that we don't add any text to the section.] (]) 15:57, 11 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Your input would be appreciated. | |||
:::: Consolidation means becoming solid, beginning to get a form. But I agree with you the second solution is better. --] (]) 16:06, 11 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Thank You all. Peace.--] 00:51, 30 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
Thanks for the English lesson;-)! I'll now edit the history section. What do you think about the other headings?] (]) 19:05, 11 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Time Zone == | |||
::::: 1- Early ancient history 2- Pre-Islamic Iranian ststehood (or unity) 3- Early islamic period 4- Islamic era Iranian unity (or Early modern era; From Safavids to Pahlevi) 5- Islamic republic. This was my suggestions, --] (]) 20:48, 11 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Relating to the Safavid until IR, it could be early modern era, but I think the Pahlavi era is more recent than early modern. But I can't think of anything better. pre-Islamic statehood is good enough and no Iranian is necessary. The rest is good.] (]) 23:50, 11 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Since Mahmud Ahmadinejad was elected as president the time will no longer be set back or forth one hour. | |||
:: Its ok, then its good to include Elamite and Lulubian, manna etc... civilization as a prelude to the pre-SIslamic statehood. In the Early history then come the more remote history. --] (]) 11:32, 12 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
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:Could Elamite and Lulubian, manna really be considered Iranian ststes who ruled Iran? As it said in the history section "The medians are credited with uniting Iran" or something along those lines. Also, is there enough information about previous eras of iranian history? The sections should stay as they are until we shorten the PISH subsection. Then we might add some text but not before. I thought of a name for the Safavid section. Late monarchist era, or end of monarchism(although I think this might be more related to the Revolution)] (]) 13:31, 13 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I hope thats supposed to be a joke? --]<sup>] | </sup> 18:44, 4 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::: Elamites were not Iranianspeaking, About the Manna, Lulubian, Kashubian- Caspian etc... we dont know enough, but many say they were no Iranian speakers. Any how they, especially Elamites have influened the tradition of the upcoming empires especially the Achamenids who relied heavily on the elamite tradition. But they were not united and they do not deserve the label empire. | |||
As for the Islamic era, use the early Islamic era, or medieval times. Then use as islamic era Iranian empires. What I opt for is> a section from the Safavid untill end of Qajar and call it the early modern period, and then from Pahlavi till now we call it the later modern period or just modern era Iran. --] (]) 21:00, 13 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Interestingly, I also thought of the latter, but I dismissed it due to doubts on their similarities and also people's opinion. I think that the Pahlavi era is similar equally to the IR and the Qajar dynasty. It was similar as it was in the same political world as the IR is now (e.g. American supremacy) | |||
Theyll eventually revert their own decision. Economic pragmatism will be what counts et the end of the day. And even the conservatives understand the meaning of profit.--] 00:32, 10 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
but it was also greatly influenced and corrupted by western powers, like the Qajars were. I think to make things simpler we should put it with the IR section. With this move the Safavid Qajar section would have very little text and we should keep it that way! Many have talked about the History section's massive size. If we do this change we must keep the sections which loose text short and shorten the sections which have become larger. With this and a few reference and grammatical changes we could achieve the FA. I disagree with the initial suggestion about the Post islamic thing. Iran is still n Islamic country. I'm not sure if all of that part is medieval, but if it does I'm for it.] (]) 00:29, 14 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I looked at the ] page and this period of Iranian history starts 200years after the beginning of the Middle Ages and ends around the same time. I think this is a good heading, but I have to make one final suggestion. How about Islamic Golden Age and Mongol invasion. I like the first bit because Islam was very very important in Iran's history and culture of that time (even now!). But with the mongol Invasion bit it makes the heading a bit long and it doesn't include Tamerlane (Teymoure Lang). Could you think of any way that we could use the phrase '''Islamic Golden Age''' in the heading?] (]) 14:34, 14 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::: I wouldnt call it Golden age. Iranian Golden age is the Safavid 17th century--] (]) 11:34, 15 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I didn't say it was ''Iran's'' golden age, but '''The''' ].] (]) 15:14, 15 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::: I know, but I said that would bring confusion. --] (]) 02:28, 16 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Middle Ages it is!] (]) 10:57, 16 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
==New articles== | |||
::::Call it the Islamic Medieval period.--] (]) 11:58, 16 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::If you search for Medieval it redirects to Middle Ages, so there is'nt a ] page.] (]) 12:51, 16 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Official Language == | |||
please do add to: ]. Thanx all.--] 03:58, 12 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
I noticed a minor error on the page for Iran. The description of the country lists the official language of Iran as Persian. Persian is not exactly the official language of the Iranians. The actual official language of Iran is called Farsi, a semitic language very similar to Arabic and Hebrew. In fact Farsi takes many letters from the Arabic language into it's own. There are a few letters in Farsi that are not in Arabic, setting it a little apart from Arabic. I just thought that this should be clarified. Although the country is not a particular favorite of mine, it's culture deserves a little respect. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 00:26, 13 February 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
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Contrary to common belief, it is not a Semitic language. Persian belongs to the Western group of the Iranian languages branch of the Indo-European language family. Being a speaker myself I know that it was heavily influenced by Arabic due to the Arab Conquest of Iran (Persia), but the original words are Aryan. Farsi shares many words or words with the same origin with other Indo-European languages like English e.g. Bad, Madar/Mother etc. An argument has been going on for a while on Misplaced Pages and also in the International community; Persia or Iran?, Persian or Farsi? They are basicly the same language. Persian, the more widely used name of the language in English, is an Anglicized form derived from Latin Persianus < Latin Persia < Greek Πέρσις Pérsis, a Hellenized form of Old Persian Parsa. According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the term Persian seems to have been first used in English in the mid-16th century. Native Persian speakers call it "Fārsi" (local name) or Parsi. Farsi is the arabicized form of Parsi, due to a lack of the /p/ phoneme in Standard Arabic. So as I said they are the same thing. So it's like saying Francaise or French, Cymraeg or Welsh.] (]) 13:22, 13 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Like these folks , I feel so devastated, I dont feel like contributing to WP anymore.--] 04:34, 12 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
::: As Ardeshir babakan said Persian is the true name (Farsi is its local name* and it is not semitic. It is Indo_European language and belongs to the Iranian branch of it, together with Kurdish, Tajik etc... It has some semitic loanwords though mainly from Arabic and Aramaic (Assyrian) but not from hebrew. The alphabet in which it is written has more letters than the Arabic ones, and the alphabet does not deserve to be called Arabic alphabet any way, because it was taken from the Mesopotamian alphabets and were developed later by Iranians and Mesopotamians. Arabs used other Alphabets either Hebrew or similar to those of ethiopia, before the invaded the Sasanid empire--] (]) 21:04, 13 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Man, I know. It was .. well nevermind. It's only football at the end of the day. --]<sup>] | </sup> 11:27, 12 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
I never said Persian is the right name, I just explained where they came from. My personal opinion is in fact the opposite. I support the Farsi camp.] (]) 00:14, 14 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::I think because of politics and fear of riots the regime instructed the team to lose or else they be sent to prison. because for them to be in so low a morale is unusual. ] 12:09, 12 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
::::: Well I do support Persian over farsi. farsi is just a local translation. In English it suggests an ethnic language, while Persian can be suggestive of historic Persia. moreover there are not many languages which bear the local names in English, some examples are Paplliemnto, Urdu, Zulu, Lingala, and Inuit. Persian is definitly not of the same type/ level historically and in terms of literature.--] (]) 11:01, 14 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
The fact that most languages are known by their English name is a good point, but your initial point is incorrect. It would be more correct to say that Persian is from a Greek translation of Parsi (Farsi). As wikipedia talk pages aren't forums for general discusion, we should look at which one the UN recognises (the Persian gulf is correct partially because the UN recognises this but not the "Arabian gulf" or the "Gulf").] (]) 14:20, 14 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Whos the kid that edited Iran! == | |||
There is a problem with the official language on the right hand column. It states that the official language is "farsi". This is ironic since the article states itself that the language is Persian in the Language section. Moreoever, the wiki page on the Persian Language: (http://en.wikipedia.org/Persian_language#Local_names) notes that the Academy of Persian Language and Literature, the governing body that regulates the language, itself issued a statement saying that the correct ENGLISH name is Persian. Please have the right hand column language designation changed from Farsi to Persian please. 1 April 2008. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 07:36, 1 April 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
I need that Iran page for my World Studies assignment. Hope you get banned from Misplaced Pages. | |||
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== External links == | ||
User:BehnamFarid wants to keep a set of external links at the bottom of the article. My "motivation" for removing the "Faces of Iran" link are covered by ]: | |||
This article doesnt have one real pic. of an iranian. Maybe its just me but when i look up a country i like to know wut the people look like as to compare them to countrys around them. | |||
:* Sites that violate the '''copyrights of others per contributors' rights and obligations''' should not be linked. Linking to websites that display copyrighted works is acceptable as long as the website has licensed the work. '''Knowingly directing others''' to a site that violates copyright may be considered '''contributory infringement'''. If you know that an external Web site is carrying a work in violation of the creator's copyright, do not link to that copy of the work. Linking to a page that illegally distributes someone else's work sheds a bad light on Misplaced Pages and its editors. This is '''particularly relevant''' when linking to sites such as '''YouTube''', where due care should be taken to avoid linking to material that violates its creator's copyright. | |||
Well there is many diverse looks for Iranians from blond and red headed Nordic types to Oriental/Asiatic looking types to Indic and Mediterreanen types resembling Greeks, Italians, and Arabs. ] | |||
The uploader of the Youtube video that is linked to uses a large number of photos for which no source or licensing is given. Please do not readd it. ] (]) 02:28, 15 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== References in history section == | |||
::I agree. We must be very selective with external links, especially for a country. Otherwise, we might just provide links to 100 videos from Youtube or Google. Any external link must be very BROAD in scope and of good QUALITY and cover all the topics covered in the main article (or as much as possible). That's my opinion on this subject. ] (]) 19:32, 22 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
* There are 6 references in this section, 1 in the first paragraph and 5 in the last paragraph coincidently relate to the last year and Iran's nuclear program. For such an imporant section, I think more references are needed as some of the descriptions and chain of events seem vague and biased. Also the last paragraph should not be in the history section, as they are current events. Discuss. ] 00:42, 26 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
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== Early Modern pic == | ||
The early modern era (changed due to a consencus on this talk page) has two Safavid images. They only ruled for 200 of the total of 500 years described in this section. I think a Qajar image would do. how about one relating to the constitutional revolution or an image of a king.] (]) 23:38, 15 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I think we need more images for the History Section of the article. With such a long history and so many monuments, this section is really empty, one or two more images will do the job. Please give your opinion so we can decide. | |||
:::Safavids were so important in the Iranian political history that deserve two pictures. Constitutional revolution for Qajar is fine--] (]) 02:26, 16 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Thank you ] 04:31, 29 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
The Safavids are important. I'm not denying that; but it's not that important. We lost A lot of land during the Qajar period. Our current borders were formed the Qajar period. Nader Shah saved iran from permanent occupation.] (]) 10:53, 16 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Federal Court ruling against Iran== | |||
:It was '''that''' importnat, also for god's sake do not edit this article with what you perceived by reading High schools history books! | |||
:and can you show us your consensus? where is it?--] (]) 19:43, 19 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Consensus for what? Sorry if I've done something wrong but I've forgotten. If your talking about the Achaemenid pic it's under "Another Image Question". I would also like to say that all of my history knowledge is not from my history books, but that book was nearest to me. I would also like to say that the Iranian history books (later years) are very informative.] (]) 22:55, 19 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
A US Federal court can't just decide to give away a country's heritage. It doesnt belong to them. That's pretty fucked up. | |||
I've changed my mind. the subsection is too small for two images so let's get rid of the map. It is wrong (see Safavid/Pahlavi pic discussion section) and there is nothing special about the map. We have about seven maps & satellite images.] (]) 19:09, 21 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
See: ].--] 06:25, 29 June 2006 (UTC) | |||
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== Section language and literature == | ||
Section language and literature should be revised heavily. We are not dealing with the Iranian languages in the region but with the languages of Iran. In addition only Persian literature is reffered too. A good article of Iran pays attention to all (larger) languages of Iran.--] (]) 19:10, 17 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Hey guys, | |||
I read an article that said director Maziar Miri has created a documentory about how the clothing and culture of Iran has changed from the times of the achamaenids to the present. It will be shown on Channel 4 on the Iranian TV in 13 eposides, each 30 mins. I thought everyone might be intrested in seeing it. Now here is the problem.I don't know when it'll be shown and what time it will be on. If anyone knows anything please let us know, thank you. --(]) | ] 00:35, 1 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
Good point. fine with me. but delete some sentences on Persian.] (]) 20:30, 19 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Help keep this page alive! == | |||
== Banknote == | |||
Hello, the page ] is about to be deleted. Everyone, please help in turning the red links into blue and help keep the page alive and also in the talk page state your opinion on the page. Thanks --(]) | ] 18:30, 1 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
The banknote image only shows the English side of the note. Could someone make one with both sides. I would do it but i'm not in Iran and my note is a bit tattered. Also generally add images of other banknotes for the rial article.] (]) 20:30, 19 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
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== Ardeshirs Qs about the necessity of examples and the Safavids and the heart of persian Gulf == | ||
Dear Ardeshir. I think that those things were necessary, I had put some of those informations there myself because the anti-Iranianists are continuously abuse ambiguity in order to instigate ethnic and relkgious hatred and intra-state and interstate conflicts in the region. Also it is necessary that that The Safavid empire is explicitely is called an Iranian empire, at the moment The anti-Iranianists American and Israeli lobby are championing the idea that 1- Transcauacsus and republic of Azerbaijan were not Iranian 2- that Safavid empire was originated there and 3- They conquered Iran. They are violating the history. Unfortunately some obscure pseudo-scientists such as ] and company are very eager to abuse these things.--] (]) 08:45, 22 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I have never heard of these claims! This might be due to my ignorance or lack of media coverage or something. But Misplaced Pages wasn't made to prove some cowboy anti-Iranians wrong. Why should Kurdish and Azeri be in the infobox when languages like Pashtu or Baluchi aren't mentioned. I don't think that when people come to learn about Iran they just read the captions. Also I have suggested that we delete that image because (As you pointed out) it is wrong and it hasn't any significance in Iran's history. Maybe the Qajar borders would be good or maybe a picture of a famous person like a king. Or maybe we should just delete it and not replace it. The section is short now (Thank god) and two images might be too much. Also you shouldn't sandwich text between two images. Why is Iran in the heart of the Persian gulf? This implies that 1. Iran can fit in the Persian Gulf 2.It is an Island in the Persian Gulf 3.It has no neighbours 4. It can't border any other body of water(as it's in the middle of one). Another thing is what heart? Geographical, Political, Cultural, Historical, Economical or Demographical. All points can be contested. I won't undo your edit until the matter is resolved.] (]) 15:54, 22 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
The bottom of this page should have a list of all the organizations that Iran is a part of, like many other country articles. ] | |||
::: 1- You might not have heard these claims, maybe because you live in the USA. There the Iranian TV channels broadcast trivial things and live in the stone ages in general. 2-Baluchi could be there too, but it is a minor language spoken by some 2 Million peoples while Azeri and Kurdish are the biggest after Persian. Pashtun is ambigous because it is spoken by the Afghan immigrants. Iranian constitution does not speak about the immigrants languages status. But it could be a regional language after these immigrants live in a compact area for a long time 3- Safavids are the most important dynasty in Iran. The roots of modern Iranian state lies in that tiem. panturksist are now trying to change our histpory and say that they were not Iranians. 3- Iran lies in the heart of persian Gulf because the Iranian idlands are spread in the Persian Gulf from East to West and they often go very far in the International waters.--] (]) 16:30, 22 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::1.Actually, I have never been to the US. I lived in Iran for most of my life and have been in the UK for six months. I have watched Iranian-American channels mainly to laugh at their accents and their naivety.2.Your second point is a good one and has convinced me 3.Safavid isn't the most important dynasty in Iranian history. The Medians were the first state of Iran. Iran was at it's largest during the Achaemenid Empire. Under the Parthian and Sassanid dynasties we beat the Romans and kept Zoroastrianism alive (collected the avesta). During the Tahirid dynasty Iran re-emerged as a state. During the Afsharid dynasty we took Delhi for the first time. Iran became prosperous under the Zandieh dynasty. Iran's current borders were formed during the Qajar period and Iran lost alot of power and was corrupted. During the Pahlavi dynasty Iran was greatly westernised and became wealthy and now iran is getting N power.4. Just because iran has a few islands in the Persian gulf it doesn't mean that the whole country is in the PG. You could say Iran has some islands in the heart of the PG but that's not important enough for the heading. You could also say that iran is in the heart of the Caspian because it has a few islands in the north.] (]) 20:33, 22 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::::: Maybe all dynasties were important? I wouldnt say that. Zand and Qajar were not powerful, but the constitutional revolution happened during Qajar (You can use Sattar Khan´s picture btw). Safavids´importance was in the fact that they built a reunited Iran out of ashes. If they were not there was no Iran now, but many small states, or who knows maybe Iran was part of Ottoman Empire or any other secanrio. Nader Shah was important too because he kicked Barbarians out of Iran, but it was a short period. From the Medians untill the end of Sasanians Iran was a powerfull empire, but then Arabs and Mongols and Javd and Hushang and Abdullah and Khare and Sage came. Safavids managed to build a reunited state again and laid the fundaments of modern Iran, the same state in which we are living now. If you are going to use a picture during Qaar, you better use Sattar Khan or Iranian lost territory in the Caucasus (Golestan and Torkamanchay)--] (]) 22:07, 22 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:I think a sattarkhan pic would do.] (]) 23:24, 22 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
or maybe Jangali.] (]) 23:27, 22 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== PERSIAN/IRANIAN HISTORY NOT VERY GOOD== | |||
:::::: Sattar Khan is more notable--] (]) 09:29, 23 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I'll change it now. I'll change the "Heart of the Persian Gulf" bit too.] (]) 11:41, 23 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
http://www.thebritishmuseum.ac.uk/persia/index.html (GREAT SOURCE, NEUTRAL FROM BRITISH MUSEUM) | |||
Somebody please add things from this site and others. | |||
Which picture? the ] one or just ]?] (]) 11:44, 23 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== why the British were involved in Iran before oil was discovered == | |||
::::I would say that one with Sattar Khan--] (]) 12:06, 23 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I wanted to know why the British were involved in Iran before oil was discovered. '''Bold text''' | |||
== American or British? == | |||
* Oil isn't the only natural resource in Iran, as well as Iran being the main land access to the far east (silk road). ] 16:48, 5 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
I have a question. should this article adopt American English or Proper English. I support the latter because US English is only mainly used in the US.] (]) 15:02, 23 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:See ] for details.--] 01:32, 9 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
Also, should we use BC/AD or BCE/CE (see ]). I personally think AD/BC is better.] (]) 15:55, 23 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Tightening of the Culture section == | |||
:You shouldn't 'adopt' any style but follow the English of the original editor, per the ]. As for BC/AD you should probably again follow the established way, though I must strongly note my support for using BC/AD, the CE nonsense is just an American ultra-Politically Correct fad and the vast ''vast'' majority of the world uses BC and AD. +] <sup>(])</sup> 05:37, 25 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
The article can't be a mix of AmEng and proper English. Issues such as US or U.S. depend on it. I think Brit English should be encouraged. I would also like to say that I will change all BCE/CE to BC/AD. <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 15:55, 25 February 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
I just re-edited the culture section, but I wanted to make an appeal for help here. First, whoever continues to replace Farsi with Persian, please stop. Second, can anyone expand the film section, and also add a separate "internet culture" paragraph as well? I think the jump from film to "any and all media" is rather jarring. I did what I could to soften the transition but it could still use some work. ] 21:07, 7 July 2006 (UTC)spectheintro | |||
:Reverted. Please don't do that, per ]. ➪]! 17:47, 25 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:regarding the Farsi/Persian thing, it was long ago agreed that the article should use the "Persian (Farsi)" format when making references anywhere in the article.--] 01:35, 9 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
"Choose either the BC-AD or the BCE-CE system, but not both in the same article." Maybe you read this bit: "It is inappropriate for a Misplaced Pages editor to change from one style to another unless there is some substantial reason for the change". But there isn't a single style on this page. Some use AD and others use CE. I just changed the CE/BCE ones. We think it's better,] (]) 20:33, 25 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:what was the justification? It doesn't make any sense to use the word "persian" when no actual Iranians refer to the language unless trying to clarify for a non-Farsi speaker. Am I missing something?--] 19:09, 10 July 2006 (UTC)spectheintro | |||
== Territoial loss == | |||
::When you ask someone if he speaks '''French''', do you say: '''''you speak Français?''''' or do you say '''''you speak french?''''' --] 19:33, 10 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
I think it is important to mention territoal loss and the contemporary borders. Briefly the loss of Caucasus, Bahrain and Herat should be discussed. They both involved Imperial (Russian and British) envolvmenet and are still alive in the Iranian public mind as a major Trauma.--] (]) 08:36, 25 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Fair enough, but AFAIK people in America don't refer to it as "Persian" either. Sort of like people don't say: "Do you speak Indian?" they say: "Do you speak Hindi?" Maybe I'm hanging out in the wrong circles, but the rule you mentioned is not concrete. We do refer to some languages by their proper names. I believe Farsi is one of them.--] 20:10, 10 July 2006 (UTC)spectheintro | |||
When I checked some territorial losses were mentioned, but not Bahrain, Herat and Caucasus. I don't think such details are important on the Iran page.] (]) 20:25, 26 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Changing of persian to farsi is the same thing as changing the persian gulf to arabian gulf, with an exception of that its the peninsula arabs that want to change the persian gulf name, but it was the iranian government that began changing persian to farsi and spread it to the rest of the world. I still remember the first time i saw the word farsi in a list of languages after years of persian, in an internet site, i believe it was google. I was chocked, i think it was about 5 years ago, but since a couple of years ago it has begun going back to the original persian. Why they want to change persian to farsi you have to ask them. However the real name of the language is Parsi, arabs changed it to farsi when they conquered persia, so persian is alot more close to the original name. . --] 20:34, 10 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::: These are not detailles. these are major events which have shpaed the current borders of Iran.--] (]) 12:40, 27 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
The loss is mentioned, but no details are given. Mentioning the loss is enough.] (]) 16:22, 27 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Well, I would call the changing of the Persian Gulf to the Arabian Gulf a more politically motivated move, fueled by the rise of Arab nationalism. It has very little to do with history (no Arab cultures have ever exercised complete dominance over the area for an extended period of time) and much more to do with regional tensions, and IMO, the idiocy of certain Arab gulf states. I did not know that the Arabs renamed the language, but I'm less concerned with original names (i.e. Parsi vs. Farsi) and more concerned with using a term that is no longer academically viable. (i.e. Persian vs. Farsi.) If Persian is still used in academic circles to refer to Farsi, then I'm fine with it; otherwise, we should adopt the accepted standard, which to my knowledge is Farsi. But it's a relatively minor point. :) --] 16:35, 12 July 2006 (UTC)spectheintro | |||
:::: If you mean this :"resulting in Iran losing almost half of its territories to Imperial Russia and the British Empire, via the treaties of Gulistan, Turkmenchay and Akhal. In spite of The Great Game Iran managed to maintain her sovereignty and was never colonized, unlike neighbouring states in the region". It is not enough and is wrong too. | |||
Iran did not lost jalf of its territory but less than than. It should be mentioned that Golestan and Turkmenchay meant loss of Iranian territories in the Caucasus (modern day Georgia, Armenia, republic of Azerbaijan, and Daghestan(. Akhal dealt with territories in Turkmenistan. Then Iran also lost Herat to the British. From this time The British intervened in Bahrain, but Iran lost it in 1971. These are important information. Mentioning territorial loss has not much value without mentioning its location. --] (]) 23:03, 27 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I am not convinced and I have no more points to make. I'm not convinced so others must decide.] (]) 18:57, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Yes i believe Persian is still used in academic circles, and probably more so than Farsi. However most encyclopedias have Farsi in parentheses next to Persian. And i share your opinions of persian gulf and the arabs. :) --] 17:54, 12 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
:::: lets say this. Mentioning the location of territorial loss is OK with Iranian wikipedians. If Iranian wikipedians do not agree with something, they can always reach me by many means and I will say that to you.--] (]) 20:09, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I went back and replaced Farsi with Persian in the Culture section. If it gets decided otherwise, I'll switch it back. I also replaced the broken text in the section with my original edits. I'm not against someone editing my work, but since the only edits were deletions (I assume to make it shorter for legibility purposes) and improper grammar (I counted two sentence fragments), I would say that the intended purpose was not reached, hence my decision to revert to the old description. If anyone feels it should be shorter, please let me know, or feel free to edit it yourself--I just ask that the edits be grammatically correct.--] 20:26, 10 July 2006 (UTC)spectheintro | |||
Fair enough! I would like to tell every wikipedian to check the details and if there are any concerns mention it!] (]) 21:20, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
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== The interactive map is superior == | |||
The decision was made on the basis of the official statement of The High Academy of The Persian Language of Iran: See: ].--] 01:42, 13 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
:Ardeshir jan why did you changed my edit ? the interactive map is better because we can use the mouse as the pointer and there is no need of putting number on any part of Iran: If some one asks why did us numbered Tehran as number 1 , and south Khorashan as the 30th , what would be our answer? By ordering with alphabetical order, it's simpler to find a name in the list, but by using random numbers that would be difficult.Besides, the interactive map provokes the reader to click on map and know more about Iran.--] (]) 10:04, 25 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::: Good points. especially about the numbering issues --] (]) 10:29, 25 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::Thank you for the link, Zereshk. I am a second-generation Iranian, so it seems strange to me to see the debate at all. Farsi is how everyone around me has ''always'' referred to the language. I wasn't aware that the government of Iran took such offense to the usage of the word, as opposed to Persian. I also did not know how severely pan-Arabism has affected the use of Persian/Farsi worldwide. Looks like I've got more reading to do.--] 15:07, 13 July 2006 (UTC)spectheintro | |||
I personally support your changes, but we have to do these things democratically and properly. Otherwise we would be encouraging less established editors to change pages as they please. Let's start a discussion now. I am in favour for all of the above reasons and also because it is like the one on the Turkey (FA) page. I wanted to ask if the list of provinces next to it is necessary?] (]) 15:52, 25 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
I didn't know about the high academy of persian language decision either. Good decision :). But this statement: ''But many Persians migrating to the West after the 1979 revolution continued to use 'Farsi' to identify their language in English and the word became commonplace in English-speaking countries.'' which you can find in the link is just not true. --] 15:48, 13 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
As no-one has objected to the new map then i will put it back in the article.] (]) 18:05, 26 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
*Imported discussion | |||
::Better not to change the article as a parliament! If a change is right, it doesn't needs the opinion poll to be applied. If the change is wrong or there is conflict in a matter, it can be discussed and changed by consensus. I'm afraid acting like so, may disappoint the contributors!--] (]) 11:04, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
*The word "Farsi" has never been used in any research paper or university document in any Western language, and the proposal to begin using it would create doubt and ambiguity about the name of the official language of Iran. ] | |||
::'''Comment''' I agree with you in general that Persian is the ''correct'' term for the language, but I disagree that Farsi is not used in English. You may not consider these to be research papers or university documents, but ''never'' is a tough word to use correctly. Here are just a few recent examples: ] 20:26, 3 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
::*Hard numbers.(Currents). ''Columbia Journalism Review'' 43.6 (March-April 2005): p15 “75,000: Estimated number of blogs written in Farsi.” | |||
::*Women of the Afghan War.(Book Review). Shahrzad Mojab. ''Canadian Woman Studies'' 22.2 (Fall 2002): p160, “The English literature on Afghan women is growing, though it still lags behind the coverage of Afghan women's suffering, struggle, and resistance in Farsi (Persian), Dari or other regional languages.” | |||
::*The early phonological development of a Farsi-English bilingual child. Mohammad Hossein Keshavarz and David Ingram. ''International Journal of Bilingualism'' 6.3 (Sept 2002): p255, “Analyses of data from a longitudinal study of a Farsi-English bilingual infant, Arsham, supported the hypothesis that the child had acquired two separate phonologies with mutual influence; that is, he made occasional use of phonological features of Farsi in English words and vice-versa.” | |||
::*Afghan Buzkashi: Power Games and Gamesmen. (Book Reviews). Ali A. Jalali. ''Parameters'' 31.4 (Winter 2001): p156, “Reviewed by Ali A. Jalali, former Afghan colonel and author of several books on Afghan military history, including The Other Side of the Mountain, coauthored with Lester Grau. Mr. Jalali is Chief of the Farsi (Persian) Service at the Voice of America, Washington, D.C.” | |||
*Fārsi is a transliteration of فارسی that is why it was in parentheses after the word Persian. It was not out of ignorance, it was to help those who know Persian by the sound of its Arabic name. ] 20:07, 3 August 2006 (UTC) I have made this clearer in the ] article. ] 20:36, 3 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
The links on the map are enough and a list of provinces isn't necessary. I'll get rid of the list now.] (]) 19:45, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
:Hi. | |||
We can not just mess with the official names of the languages of the countries to help people who know little to recognise their wrong spellings of the names. | |||
--] 07:51, 4 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
Fārsi is not a ''wrong spelling''. It is a widely used term for Persian in Persia and elsewhere. Also you said that parallel names for the official language were not used for other Misplaced Pages country articles. Have you looked at India? What do you have against the use of the word Fārsi in the appropriate context of a transliteration of the official name for the country's language? ] 14:26, 4 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
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== 3 Achaemenid images == | ||
I thought ] was interesting.--] 16:34, 9 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
* very sad really ] 00:31, 10 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
: I removed the image because it falls under fair use and is not allowed on talk pages. See ]. ]]] 03:51, 10 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
There are currently THREE Achaemenid image in the early statehood section and one sassanid image. What happened to the medians, greeks and parthians? i'm going to replace the lion image with a Parthian image.] (]) 16:55, 26 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::I havent seen any WP policies specifically banning use of Fairuse images on talk pages, where they can be discussed. It would be great if you could show me such a directive.--] 13:07, 10 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
Thank you Pejman47. Your image is more relevant, but I think that there are much more relevant Sassanid images than the Shapur bust. I'll search for some.] (]) 20:40, 26 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
The map was the ugliest, saddest thing I've ever seen. The creator is mentally challenged and knows nothing about the cultures of middle eastern countries. ] 23:50, 26 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
== History == | |||
==A Template SHould be created listing all the organizations that Iran is a part of== | |||
I was thinking it would be better if we merged Early History and Pre-Islamic statehood and title it Pre-Islamic history. "Statehood" seems like an inaccurate term, since there was no such thing as ] or a ] until the modern era, at least we understand it today. -] (]) 21:56, 26 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
::: Unlike Europe you can speak of statehood in the Iranian realm. Europeans often arrogantly disreagrd the fact that statehood in other parts of the world is older than theirs and then try to downplay these forms of statehoods, Statehood in the Iranian, Chinese and Indian realms are much older than the European one. These were state with satet apparatus and bureaucracy.--] (]) 12:43, 27 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Iranians generally agree that the Medians started the chain of Iranian dynasties, and other states were smaller and didn't merit a "State of Iran" but merited an "Iranian State".] (]) 16:23, 27 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
A template should be created for Iran, much like the following example; | |||
::::: He was saying something else, which was very bad. He said that the Iranian states were not real states because a state cannot be ancient per definition. This is an arrogant European statement. because Europe had its states no earlier than the 17th century, they do not like to accept that there existed states in other parts of the world much earlier.--] (]) 22:56, 27 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
Please don't make this political. they were states.] (]) 16:27, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
{{Azerbaijantie}} | |||
::] | |||
:::the notion of STATE is allways political!--] (]) 16:38, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
== References Section == | |||
== Geog pictures == | |||
Is there a problem with the references section? ] 08:14, 11 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
There are two pictures in the geography section showing green grass. As most of you know, Iran isn't like that. There are some places like that but it is 2/3 desert and 1/3 mountainous, but it is hard to find a picture of a desert in Iran. I think one should be deleted so I'll delete the fars one(the damavand one kills two birds with one stone). <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 16:32, 28 February 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:fixed.--] 01:39, 13 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
>>> Iran is like that. Much grass, only central Iran is arid. North and West have much "grass". --] (]) 16:37, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
==By the Way here are pictures of Azaris from the Iranian Preisdents recent visit to the North== | |||
ok. to simplify it greatly, the Northwestern half of Iran is green and the south-eastern half is desert/mountains. I think one image full of greenery is enough.(forgive me for my unscientific terms but i can't be bothered to use them.)] (]) 17:51, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
http://english.farsnews.com/newstext.php?nn=8504200464 | |||
== Unification == | |||
] | |||
In the pagge's infobox there is a unification section; but clearly, someone has made some mistakes. Someone has added the first constitution, Islamic revolution and the sassanid dynasty! These weren't unifications or even reunifications!The Parthian and Safavid dynasties are noted as reunifications but the section in the infobox is called '''Unification'''! Why does it say unified under Cyrus tG? In the text it says that the medians made the first emipre/state of iran. It should only have the Median dynasty.] (]) 19:00, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Questionable content== | |||
Unification is very easy. The Median Empire unified Iran. It was kept untill the end of the sassanids. Even Alexander and Seleucides did not disintegrate Iran. In the middle ages the Iranian unity was lost and the safavids reunified it and it is still kept.--] (]) 17:47, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
"Many political commentators in the Middle East believe Washington's stance on Iran is more governed by the latter's substantial oil reserves and pressure from the Zionist lobby in the US who hope to establish free rein for Israel in the region and who see Iran (as they saw Saddam) as an obstacle to this plan. The US allegations in regard to nuclear weapons and support for Iraqi insurgency are thus a convenient vehicle to seek to achieve these means." | |||
I think the terms Unification and reunification as it is used here are not useful. It should be '''Established''' by the Median Empire and '''Restored''' or if you like '''unified''' by the Safavids. But we should keep in mind that the Safavids did not restore the Median or Achamenid Empire but the Sassanid Empire. their political system as well as the territories over which they ruled is virtually the same as the sasanid empire (proper)--] (]) 17:52, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
This is speculative commentary which has no sources cited. This paragraph suggests readers adopt a particular political view. It attributes motives to the USA which are arguable, and uses the phrase "Zionist" which many find objectionable due to it's connotations. Unless this paragraph can be attributed to a reliable source I suggest it be removed. | |||
So let's just mention the Medians and Safavids then. It feels strange. we're on at the same time doing the same thing!] (]) 17:52, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
"It has been reported that the Bush Administration has not ruled out using nuclear weapons against Iran which, if it were to occur, would be the first hostile nuclear bombing since World War II.. " | |||
I think '''Unification'''(I mean of Iran) is good enough for now. I don't think restoration is a good word here, but establishment seems better than unification, because if you say Iran was unified, it might mean Iran within it's current borders or historic borders or Iranian people or people of greater of iran or the unification of people who practice persian culture, but when you say Iran was established fewer questions are asked. You could say the Safavids Reestablished Iran (as a state) but restored suggests that they redid what was done in the median times.] (]) 18:07, 28 February 2008 (UTC) | |||
This statement is attributed to a source, but the source reports only speculation, which diminishes it's value as an unbiased source of information. In addition the statement is again only a speculative opinion and it's inclusion in this wikipedia entry serves no purpose other than to bias readers towards a political viewpoint (in effect it suggests that Iran is a potential victim of US agression through nuclear warfare, which opinion has no place in an unbiased and factual publication.) | |||
== Just copy a featured page's format == | |||
] 17:33, 16 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
Why not just copy Turkey's format... and please summarize the history section... overall this page is very shambly. lol <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 15:57, 8 March 2008 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | |||
:Most of the problems seem to have already been edited out, but I'll see if I can touch it up a bit more.--] 19:46, 18 July 2006 (UTC)spectheintro | |||
We do generally look at other pages (which are featured) for guidance, but to copy another page is deeply immoral as we both undermine the work of the contributors of the Turkey page, and the work of people constantly improving the Iran page. There is also the fact that they are two different countries and to "Understand" Iran we may need to focus more on factors of Iran like the History and Culture sections, as all Iranians are proud of our history and culture.] (]) 18:09, 8 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
I agree with Matic3d. This article makes it sound as though poor innocent Iran is being persecuted by the big bad U.S. I see no mention, however, of Ahmadinejad's assertion that Israel should be "wiped off the map". | |||
I'm not sure if I'm getting you right but, but if by two different countries you mean the historical Persia and modern Iran, I suggest you divide the history topic into to subs 'historical Persia' and 'Modern Iran', that would help everyone "understand" the difference between the two. I checked a number of other page's, all of them have much shorter history topics (e.g. Greece, Egypt, Britain) except for china which doesn't even have an economy topic. There is too much detail right now, I believe there is a page dedicated to 'History of Iran' isn't there? I'm Iranian, But I don't feel the need to force-feed our culture and history to others. | |||
==Attention== | |||
You really look at other page's? Featured pages look nothing like this one. Thank y'all anyway , I'm not even helping, I feel kind of guilty I'm just being whiny. ] March 12th | |||
I meant Turkey and Iran are different. I know how you feel about force-feeding people and many times I've been frustrated by this. But the page has improved a lot. If you look at older editions of the page you would see what we were dealing with. It felt like they were trying to convert people or something. The history section is big but people think it should remain big, and these people have demoralized people who want to shorten it; by reverting edits and expanding it.. It should be big but not as big as it is now. About three screen-fulls is about right.The Turkey history section is about this big.] (]) 15:43, 12 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
The article. ] is about to be deleted. requesting that the authors of that piece attend to it immediately.--] 06:10, 17 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
P.S. below the box thing where you write it says GFDL. go directly down and there are four wavy lines. click on that and save. | |||
:::: I also agree that Turkey format is not a good example. We have shorten the history section as acompromise, but shorter than this is not possible. Iran has a long history. In contrast to Turkey Iran has continous history, while Turkish historiography tebnds to neglect the long and rich history of Anatolia prior to the Turkish era. Therefore Iran and Turkey are not comparable in this respect.I think the history section is now good enough. I should say that we UNFORTUNATELY were FORCED to shortehn this section, Unfortunalety many information is lost, but it is shorter as you wished.--] (]) 09:31, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
What could be comparable were Egypt and China, but those articles are not featured either. We are dealing here with Historic nations, so we should set different criteria with regard to the length of history section.--] (]) 09:33, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
With all due respect to ] but the history section is still a bit big. No one was '''''Forced''''' to shorten the article. Most people agreed that it was too big. Also, none of the information was lost as the information is already in their respective '''''MAIN ARTICLES!!!!!'''''] (]) 20:27, 17 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
The usual people are at it again. Now trying to delete ] article.--] 16:31, 18 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
we Iranian wikipedians admitted to shortening only reluctantly, giving in to the demands of administrators hoping to elevate the article to the featured status. I do not know how many Iranian wikipedians were of this opinion. I was, and I know some. You can tyrace their discussion even in this talk page. --] (]) 10:43, 18 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
Please also see ] and my comments on ] - I have suggested a split into two articles, ] and ] since they have nothing to do with each other and the article is apparently a product of simple ignorance. There is a vote on the talk page. ] 04:00, 19 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
I am also an Iranian Wikipedian and I support shortening the whole page and I know other people who share my point of view. Stop implying that Misplaced Pages is wrong and a few proud editors are right. I am also proud but that doesn't affect my view on the issue. We don't have to force-feed and impose our history onto readers. If you want to expand Misplaced Pages's information on Iranian history PLEASE edit ].] (]) 16:57, 18 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Zoroastrianism and Ancient Judaism== | |||
::::: You act as you are very important but don't know certain things. I did not mean it in a rude manner though. I have spoken in favor of you to those "proud" wikipedians, but your behavior tells me I was wrong.--] (]) 17:31, 18 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
If my understanding and the ] entry are correct, the alleged "formative link" between Zoroastrianism and Judaism are not as certain as this entry purports to be. I intend to fix it if no objections are raised. It is quite a contentious topic. -- ] 02:49, 20 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
I don't think that I am very important but maybe I act like it and I'm sorry if I do. The only thing I need to say is that main articles are there for a reason. I appreciate that you make your comments with no harm intended.] (]) 11:29, 21 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:By "formative link" you mean this part: ''"Some scholars (Boyce, 1987; Black and Rowley, 1987; Duchesne-Guillemin, 1988) believe that large portions of the eschatology, angelology, and demonology (see Asmodai) of Judaism, a key influence on Christianity, originated in Zoroastrianism, and were transferred to Judaism during the Babylonian captivity and the Persian era, despite the numerous structural differences in the belief systems, crucial to the faiths, as in the issue over whether the evil spirit is a product of the good spirit.''"? I am not sure how you intend to fix that since this is the opinion of some scholars as the article clearly says. ] 03:56, 20 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
Very important, not important... too much drama! I'm a nobody here by that account, so what? | |||
::I was going to give the two equal credibility in the text, perhaps a little more NPOV. -- ] 01:14, 21 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
The history section is way too big. there is a HISTORY OF IRAN article, designated to inform anyone who wants to study History of Iran! this is the Iran page. it should be balanced. Nobody said remove the history section but man o man that's biiiig! no offense but keeping it this way for the sake of a group of people's "pride" is both selfish and foolish. I have no say on this though. Just giving an observer's opinion. ] (]) 18:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
You're right. It is big and we should shorten it to around the size of the Turkey history section.] (]) 11:07, 26 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
:::Done. -- ] 19:03, 22 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
== Late Modern era 1921 - == | |||
::::This section needs work. "Zoroastrian monotheism has had major influence on the religions of the middle eastern monotheisms in adaptations of such concepts as heavens, hells, judgement day and messianic figures. Nonetheless, claims of Zoroastrianism influencing ancient Jewish thought are disputed by some Jewish and Christian scholars, despite the various influencing elements being evident." This needs two citations, and I'm inclined to believe its redundant too. What do other people think? --] 20:25, 28 July 2006 (UTC)spectheintro | |||
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There is a mistake at the very beginning of the paragraph, as it says that Reza Khan overthrew the Qajar dynasty and became the Shah in 1921. This is not the case. | |||
==Standardizing BC/BCE/B.C/CE/AD/A.D. throughout== | |||
He overthrew the Dynasty in 1921, and what was left was effectively a constitutional monarchy without a monarch. He was Head of the Army for four years, if I am not mistaken, and then he was made Minister of War in 1925 by the Majlis. At the end of 1925, the Majlis passed a bill declaring that the constitutional monarchy would remain, and the foundation for Reza Khan to become the Shah was laid. Early in 1926, he was made the first Shah of the Pahlavi dynasty, not in 1921 directly after the coup. | |||
I was about to start go through and change all referrences to dates using these notations into the accepted ]/] format, since all of the above appear throught the article, but I figured it might be good to check and see what anyone's thoughts would be first :-) If no one has a convincing reason not to, I'll just go ahead and do it. ] 21:44, 20 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
In fact, the Iran article and the Reza Khan article on wikipedia contradict themselves. The Reza Khan article is more accurate in stating that Reza Khan was made Shah in 1925. | |||
Done and done. ] 15:02, 21 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
Albi ] (]) 11:11, 24 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
==New Images== | |||
You are right--] (]) 12:04, 1 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
may I suggest some images for this article: | |||
== Sports == | |||
The brief section on the main Iran page devoted to sports contains errors. The sentences explaining that Iran is the origin of polo and the youthful demographic aren't well written. | |||
Some of these images are from Iranian news agencies and others are free images released into public domain. | |||
<br />More importantly, the following blurb about football claims that Iran was a World Cup finalist three times, which is not true. As the Sports in Iran article states, they've qualified for the tournament three times, not reached the finals. There should probably also be a line break between the football paragraph and the details of Iran's mountains. Thanks. <br />] (]) 09:05, 28 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Avicenna's Canon of Medicine== | |||
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Picture of a book is not very interesting by itself (btw what are those glasses doing there?) | |||
: Beautiful pictures really. I added the Kurdistan Hills. Please feel free to add the ones (1 or 2 of course) that you think are the most suitable. Thanks again. ] 00:51, 29 July 2006 (UTC) | |||
Why not replace the book's picture with something else. Any opinion/idea? ] (]) 14:15, 28 March 2008 (UTC) | |||
==Twice removal of Farsi in parenthesis as official language== | |||
] has twice removed (Farsi) after the word Persian from the official language box. See history. Also see "Tightening of the Culture section" above. What is appropriate at this point? ] 14:30, 4 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
OK, what about this picture (from Timurid era) for a change?: | |||
: In my opinion it is a very good idea to remove the word ''Farsi'' from the official language box. The language's name in English is ''Persian'', not ''Farsi''. The latter is the local name of the language, but a quick look at other country-related articles (],], and ]) reveals that the local name is not mentioned on their pages. This is reasonable because this is the ''English Misplaced Pages'', not the Persian one.] 14:57, 4 August 2006 (UTC)shervink | |||
::I am not talking about substituting Farsi for Persian. I am talking about the entry as: official_languages = ] (فارسی (transliteration: Fārsi)) Also see India and Republic of Ireland for counter-examples. Read the section "Tightening of the Culture section" above for why it is valuable. ] 16:33, 4 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
::: The usage of the word has been repeatedly banned and condemmed by academic circles. Please visit ] as an example. Besides please read "Iranian Goverment Constitution, English Text": . --]21:47, 4 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
] ''"Rose Garden of the Pious"'', dated ]. The image blends ] and ] into one, as is the norm for many works of the Timurid era.]] | |||
A stupid argument. As anyone who speaks the language knows, it is actually called Farsi. If you're going to insist on using the antiquated and rarely-used word "Persian", then it's only logical that the modern name, Farsi, is used AS WELL. Deleting it is at the very least, extremely mis-leading. ] 12:15, 5 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
== ] article needs some attention too == | |||
== Category deleted == | |||
*I deleted the category:theocracy as there was already a category called category:contemorary theocracies. --]22:04, 4 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
*The category contemorary theocracies is under discussion at ]. It may be the one to disappear. ] 22:11, 4 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
: Thanks for the information --]10:20, 5 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
Dorood guys. Great job on this article, I am very proud of the great work here. Can you also give some attention to ]? That article is very poor right now and needs some improvement considering how important an ethnic group Persians have been and still are. | |||
== khomeini's picture == | |||
I think picture of khomeini should be removed from the page for the following reasons: | |||
1. He caused the death of tens of thousands of Iranians. | |||
2. He is dead. | |||
3. He is not popular among iranians. | |||
I think we should use the picture of an Iranian national hero instead of murderer. Dr. Mossadeq could be a good choice. | |||
(] 23:12, 4 August 2006 (UTC)) | |||
:: looks like a good suggestion. --]10:21, 5 August 2006 (UTC) | |||
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== Persian vs "Farsi" == | ||
Encyclopedia Britannica, ] and ] use the term Persian and it is has been the common name used by scholars and scholarly material. --] (]) 11:50, 1 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
== Discrimination against male == | |||
According to a number of other sites, Iran exports 2.6 million barrels a day in a 2003 estimate. Here is a site where it is stated. . | |||
I made the needed changes in the article. It now says Iran exports 2.6 million, not between 4 and 5. | |||
Why my example of gender inequality (that male are only 30% of students) is frequently removed? | |||
== Mt. Damavand picture. == | |||
**There is no ACTIVE discrimination against males in Iran that I know of. It is against women, mostly through the Iranian law (ie. witness, divorce, etc). The reason to remove your comment was that it was not material and you could move it to ] instead. ] (]) 17:44, 4 April 2008 (UTC) | |||
Please guys, do something about this pictures copyright problem. I'm sure we don't want it to be deleted. The picture can be found in the Geography section of this article. Thank you ] 18:59, 5 August 2006 (UTC) |
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Iran's map color
Please read the discussion on US map color here. Basically, it says that red is not neutral for a map color. I suggest we change permanently Iran's map color from red to green (as it has always been). SSZ (talk) 22:09, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
I tried to change that once but my edit was undone.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 19:50, 18 January 2008 (UTC)
- Oh its a country! I'm sorry I thought Iran was a giant lake of fire, what with the 'Death to the Zionist Entity' and all.--mitrebox (talk) 19:58, 18 January 2008 (UTC)
- Is it supposed to be ajoke or is this what you have learnt in your elementary school?--Babakexorramdin (talk) 11:20, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
Cities
The Major Cities section shouldn't contain a list of cities with information oon them. I'm going to rewrite it so it is the way it is supposed to be, i.e. in prose and mentioning about four or five cities not 8!Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 22:52, 18 January 2008 (UTC)
answer to inferno abt Russia and Kazakhstan
you said that Iran has no borders with Russia and Kazakhstan and that if we include them then we should also include other states (in the Souths). Dear friend, you should notice that the Caspian Sea in different than the Persian Gulf. Aside from the territorial waters Persian Gulf is an international body of water. Therefore Iran is separated by international waters from Oman and UAE. But Caspian see in not international waters. it is an internal sea (lake) and belongs to the litoral states. There is no agreement on the division of oil resources, but the internal sea character of it is not in doubt. Caspian sea is therefore can be seen as territory/condominium of the litoral states. Therefore Iran has borders with Kazakhstan and Russia but not with those Arab statelets you proposed.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 08:24, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
- The statement that "There is no agreement on the division of oil resources" is incorrect and absurd and testifies to an utter ignorance of the international law at best. Iran has an agreement with Soviet Union (1921 and 1940) that the resources of the Caspian Sea are to be divided equally between Iran and Soviet Union. When Soviet Union fell apart, Russian Federation publicly announced that all international agreements binding for Soviet Union would remain binding for the newly independent states (legally, this falls under the heading of "the principle of the succession of states"). This naturally includes the aforementioned agreement between Iran and Soviet Union concerning the resources of the Caspian Sea. The much trumpeted claim that resources of the Caspian Sea should be shared equally between all the nations bordering on the Caspian Sea is devoid of any legality — it is just an unfounded claim and worth nothing (similarly as regards the lie that "There is no agreement on the division of oil resources"). Legally, Iran has and maintains the right over 50% of the Caspian-Sea resources and all the other nations (i.e. members of the now defunct Soviet Union) bordering on the Caspian Sea should come together and decide on how to divide the remaining 50% between themselves; Iran has no role to play in this decision making. If it is true that Islamic Republic of Iran is now aiming at 20% share of the Caspian Sea resources (which I doubt), then there is no word to describe such act but betrayal of Iran's rights. It seems that the old Russian Imperialism in Iran is still alive and well! It is ironic that on the one hand Iranian authorities constantly issue anti-imperialistic slogans against "the West" but at the same time seem (as I indicated above, I doubt that Iran would rescind her above-mentioned treaty with the now defunct Soviet Union) intent on selling out to "the North", just as Iran did in the 19th and the first half of the 20th century (above all else, one should not forget the shameful Golestan and Turkamanchai treaties which were nothing but overt sell outs). Those interested, and not suffering from intellectual indolence, may deign to make an Internet search on the subject matter. See, for instance: . --BF 23:56, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
- Yes this is what I say, while there was a contract diving 50- 50 % after the collapse they do notagree on this. Then Iran came with a formula of each 5 litoral get 20% but they want t give Iran only 11-13 % which is unacceptable. The best thing is 50% for Iran and 50% to Russia as an heir of the USSR, if Russia wants o give the litoral states their share, each get 12,5 % , but then I ask why nt divinding on 15 republics? Because the whole USSR and not only the litoral states got 50%.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 10:02, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- You did say "There is no agreement on the division of oil resources", which I maintain not to be true! People may say all sorts of things, but the fact is that the issue has to my best knowledge never been referred to any international court for arbitration. When last year President Putin was visiting Tehran, almost all newspapers where parroting the same misinformation (the same misinformation in your above text), which is sad. You cannot play into the hands of a host of illiterate journalists (excluding Simon Jenkins of The Guardian for whom I have the highest respect) who increasingly reproduce the texts handed down to them by the officials whose motivations can be anything but pure. It is clear that Russia and all her former republics want a bigger share of the resources, but this does not mean that what has absolutely no basis in the international law (the link I presented yesterday makes this abundantly clear) should be given credence on the Misplaced Pages pages. --BF 19:35, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- With reference to the above discussions, I should like to propose that the above facts (most clearly discussed in ) be brought up in the Misplaced Pages entry of Iran, lest the fiction of "There is no agreement on the division of oil resources" be made into reality before long. --BF 19:43, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- well u are right maybe the better formulation was that there is a pact/ contract but the former Soviet Union do not respect it. Unfortunately Iran is too "soft" towards them. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 19:53, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- The fact is that if International Law counts for nothing, then Iran should also declare the Golestan and Turkamanchai treaties as void. To get an impression, you walk over the Aras River, and you will see places like these that Iran lost through these shameful treaties: , , , , . Recall that these treaties were made between two dynasties which no longer are in existence! And I am serious in saying that should Iran's 50% get reduced to 12%, then Iran should absolutely renege on these two treaties, or at least make them part of a grand re-negotiation of issues by which 50% should get reduced to 12%: if the situation on the ground has changed to the degree that 50% can get diminished to 12%, then nothing else should be held as inviolable. It should never be a one-way street, otherwise they should be open with the people and put boards on the borders and openly announce "For Sale". As for Iran being "too soft" on these issues, Iran, like any other country, consists of people and if the people in charge are soft it must be owing to the ignorance of the general population of Iran of some basic facts of their history. Insofar as I can recall, the history books from which I learnt history of Iran (ages ago), did only mention the names of the above two treaties; the contents of these treaties were never disclosed to us. If this is the level of knowledge that one may assume of the people of their history, then this so-called "softness" (which seems to me to be indicative of a softness of their collective mind) does not come as a surprise. Of course, Iran having pushed herself into her present position, Russia can dictate whatever she wishes and who can blame them for that? Iran was in this position a century ago, and like an abused individual seems not to be able to avoid falling back into the bosom her abuser time and time again. Kind regards, --BF 21:13, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- Our problem is that today there are people in Iran and Persheeyans in the USA who feel more at ease with Arabs and Pakistanis than with the real Iranian world. Ask them abt Ganje and Teflis they will shut up, ask them abt Dubai and they will BS for hours--Babakexorramdin (talk) 23:04, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Babakexorramdin, I do not subscribe to the sentiments as expressed by you. Humans are humans, no matter what their origin, race, sex or religion. We are all members of the same family, namely the great family of humanity. We are all brothers and sisters and should see each other's diverse cultures and religions as asset and not as liability. As it happens, I have come to know people from all corners of the world and have not noticed any fundamental difference between any of them; through our differing cultures and backgrounds we naturally respond to things differently, but on the most fundamental level we are all the same beings, whether Persian, Arab, Jew, European, African, etc. Amongst the people that I have known have been three Arabs, and I count them amongst the most kind and courteous people I have ever known in my entire life (when I once told to one of them of the name of my late mother, his immediate reaction was "What a beautiful name! I shall give that name to my child if it turns out to be a girl"). Love for Iran and Iranian culture should not blind us to the richness of other cultures. With reference to Pakistanis, to whom you explicitly refer, two things deserve mentioning. The owner of the Kebab shop in my area is a man from Pakistan. From the first time that he met me until today, whenever he sees me he calls me "my brother" — and he started doing this on knowing that I was Iranian (I have never seen him calling any of his other customers as his brother or sister). Secondly, please find some photographs of Pakistan, and you will immediately notice that as an Iranian you are able to read all the things on the boards hanging in the streets (the same applies if you look at similar photographs from India). You may not be aware of it, but prior to the rise of the British Empire, Farsi was the official administrative language in India (and Pakistan was until some 60 years ago part of India); all official documents in India were written in Farsi and the aristocrats spoke Farsi at home. Did you know that the mother of the late Benazir (Bi-Nazir) Bhutto is an Iranian from Isfahan (to be explicit, from Nasr Abad — see the website of Mr Mohammad-Ali Abtahi, the former Deputy of President Khatami: )? She speaks fluently Farsi in pure Esfahani accent! Have you read the Persian poetry of Pakistan's national hero Mohammad Iqbal? (In Iran he is best known as Eqbal-e Lahuri, Eqbal from Lahore.) If not, please do that and you will notice that his poems rank amongst the finest of the Persian poems (when I was young, I knew several of them by heart). The point I raised above was aimed at bringing up the fact that as a nation we are generally uneducated in our own history. For instance, I am not aware of any Iranian newspapers ever making a point that Iran's attempt to raise 12% to 20% goes against the very fact that according to International Law Iran already owns 50% of the resources of the Caspian Sea. With kind regards, and above all, please never look down on other people! --BF 06:43, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Babakexorramdin, I do not subscribe to the sentiments as expressed by you. Humans are humans, no matter what their origin, race, sex or religion. We are all members of the same family, namely the great family of humanity. We are all brothers and sisters and should see each other's diverse cultures and religions as asset and not as liability. As it happens, I have come to know people from all corners of the world and have not noticed any fundamental difference between any of them; through our differing cultures and backgrounds we naturally respond to things differently, but on the most fundamental level we are all the same beings, whether Persian, Arab, Jew, European, African, etc. Amongst the people that I have known have been three Arabs, and I count them amongst the most kind and courteous people I have ever known in my entire life (when I once told to one of them of the name of my late mother, his immediate reaction was "What a beautiful name! I shall give that name to my child if it turns out to be a girl"). Love for Iran and Iranian culture should not blind us to the richness of other cultures. With reference to Pakistanis, to whom you explicitly refer, two things deserve mentioning. The owner of the Kebab shop in my area is a man from Pakistan. From the first time that he met me until today, whenever he sees me he calls me "my brother" — and he started doing this on knowing that I was Iranian (I have never seen him calling any of his other customers as his brother or sister). Secondly, please find some photographs of Pakistan, and you will immediately notice that as an Iranian you are able to read all the things on the boards hanging in the streets (the same applies if you look at similar photographs from India). You may not be aware of it, but prior to the rise of the British Empire, Farsi was the official administrative language in India (and Pakistan was until some 60 years ago part of India); all official documents in India were written in Farsi and the aristocrats spoke Farsi at home. Did you know that the mother of the late Benazir (Bi-Nazir) Bhutto is an Iranian from Isfahan (to be explicit, from Nasr Abad — see the website of Mr Mohammad-Ali Abtahi, the former Deputy of President Khatami: )? She speaks fluently Farsi in pure Esfahani accent! Have you read the Persian poetry of Pakistan's national hero Mohammad Iqbal? (In Iran he is best known as Eqbal-e Lahuri, Eqbal from Lahore.) If not, please do that and you will notice that his poems rank amongst the finest of the Persian poems (when I was young, I knew several of them by heart). The point I raised above was aimed at bringing up the fact that as a nation we are generally uneducated in our own history. For instance, I am not aware of any Iranian newspapers ever making a point that Iran's attempt to raise 12% to 20% goes against the very fact that according to International Law Iran already owns 50% of the resources of the Caspian Sea. With kind regards, and above all, please never look down on other people! --BF 06:43, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- Our problem is that today there are people in Iran and Persheeyans in the USA who feel more at ease with Arabs and Pakistanis than with the real Iranian world. Ask them abt Ganje and Teflis they will shut up, ask them abt Dubai and they will BS for hours--Babakexorramdin (talk) 23:04, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- The fact is that if International Law counts for nothing, then Iran should also declare the Golestan and Turkamanchai treaties as void. To get an impression, you walk over the Aras River, and you will see places like these that Iran lost through these shameful treaties: , , , , . Recall that these treaties were made between two dynasties which no longer are in existence! And I am serious in saying that should Iran's 50% get reduced to 12%, then Iran should absolutely renege on these two treaties, or at least make them part of a grand re-negotiation of issues by which 50% should get reduced to 12%: if the situation on the ground has changed to the degree that 50% can get diminished to 12%, then nothing else should be held as inviolable. It should never be a one-way street, otherwise they should be open with the people and put boards on the borders and openly announce "For Sale". As for Iran being "too soft" on these issues, Iran, like any other country, consists of people and if the people in charge are soft it must be owing to the ignorance of the general population of Iran of some basic facts of their history. Insofar as I can recall, the history books from which I learnt history of Iran (ages ago), did only mention the names of the above two treaties; the contents of these treaties were never disclosed to us. If this is the level of knowledge that one may assume of the people of their history, then this so-called "softness" (which seems to me to be indicative of a softness of their collective mind) does not come as a surprise. Of course, Iran having pushed herself into her present position, Russia can dictate whatever she wishes and who can blame them for that? Iran was in this position a century ago, and like an abused individual seems not to be able to avoid falling back into the bosom her abuser time and time again. Kind regards, --BF 21:13, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Babakexorramdin, with reference to what you mention concerning Ganje, it seems that the people to whom you refer must be illiterates. Have they not read the works by Nezami-ye Ganjavi? Nezami comes from Ganje (Ganjavi literary means "from Ganje") and if some Iranians have never read Nezami-ye Ganjavi, I have no choice but call them utter illiterates. I have just checked it, and Nezami has already a Misplaced Pages entry: Nezami (coming from so-called Ganja). Kind regards, --BF 07:29, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Behnam, I have no intention to discriminate Arabs or Pakistani nor are we talking about the Kebab shoop in your neighborhood. We are talking about the geopolitical disorientation and as you said the illiteracy. I do not mean it in a literal sense though. Yes too many Iranians do not know what is the Iranian world. The anti-Iranianist lobby in the West and the Persheeyan/ persian TVs in Los Angeles are contributing to the propagation of disorientation. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 11:17, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Babakexorramdin, I apologise since I appear to have had misunderstood you. I am not living in the USA (so that "Persheeyan/persian TVs" are just black boxes to me), nor do I get my information about history from a TV station — although in the past I have seen some so-called history programs on some TV channels; they all look like opiates to me, as they take the information that covers at most half an A4 page and stretch it to a program lasting for one hour, enacting all the minor events in hazy images accompanied by some trashy background music (as though people had no imagination); have always wondered who would watch such trash, but apparently some do. It is perhaps time for someone with the right intellectual attitude to build a nice blog in which to discuss matters worth discussing, while managing to leave aside party-political issues which so much polarise Iranian community abroad; my personal experience is that in most of the blogs Iranians just exchange insults with one another, a pretty miserable state of affairs I must say. Incidentally, sometimes ago I put a message here: which you might like to read and act upon. In the meantime I have also written to TehranAvenue, offering to write a comprehensive piece on the subject matter, but they have thus far failed to even acknowledge receipt of my letter (a very typical habit of Iranians). Kind regards, --BF 22:17, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Behnam, I have no intention to discriminate Arabs or Pakistani nor are we talking about the Kebab shoop in your neighborhood. We are talking about the geopolitical disorientation and as you said the illiteracy. I do not mean it in a literal sense though. Yes too many Iranians do not know what is the Iranian world. The anti-Iranianist lobby in the West and the Persheeyan/ persian TVs in Los Angeles are contributing to the propagation of disorientation. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 11:17, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- Its good to know where is the source of this misery. One more thing to add is: There have been some attempts in order to prsenet the Iranian history and culture to the public, but unfoprtunately some Iranian political groups notably the monarchists tend to hijack them and contaminate them with nonsense. E.g. if someone writes down an article about the past achievement of Iranians in the Achamenid or Safavid etc... period then there are always empty-headed monarchists who steal that article and put in their website and claim: " You see monarchy is a good thing.". If you write about the Kurdish language, some Fars ethno-nationaliaist will write: " You see Kurds do not exist, they are just Sunni Fars/Persians". If you write osmething on the Turkic-speaking Iranians, then some Pan-Turkists/ (with their American and israeli supporters) will write: "Sumerians were Turks" and nonsense like this. Violation of Iranian culture and history is a widespread phenomenon and the anti-Iranianist lobby is strong, but there is no reason for keeping silent. the independent scholars should always do their best in order to resprent the Iranian Culture and History as it is.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 10:03, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Babakexorramdin, few short remarks. As you may know, the official policy of Misplaced Pages is that if you (or anybody else for that matter) feel that others should not be using your text, you should not write it for Misplaced Pages. It is therefore a given that when you write something for Misplaced Pages, you must assume that others will use your text in a manner that suits them best and you have nothing to complain about. If you wish to maintain your copyright on your written text, you should, for instance, create your own blog and type at the bottom of each page "Copyright"; this allows you to sue anybody who without your written permission uses or abuses your text. Therefore my suggestion would be that if you feel strongly about certain matters, you (possibly with the aid of some of your like-minded friends and colleagues) set up a weblog and copyright your material. As it stands, your complaints are and remain just expressions of your personal frustration; legally, you are nowhere. As for "the source of misery" to which you refer, it is a question which sociologists, anthropologist and historians are best placed to answer. Although I am neither, I have a theory for that; being an untested theory, it is however worth nothing. You can gain some insight into this issue by reading a report that CIA has written in 1977 about the Iranian society (this top secret report was made public in 2000), which is very insightful as to the way in which Iranians interact with one another. For details please consult the New York Times file: . At present I do not recall whether the above-mentioned CIA file is included in this batch or not (I do however recall that I read that report around the same time as I was reading this batch). Finally, I propose that we close this discussion here, as the correspondence is becoming almost a book. Kind regards, --BF 22:44, 22 January 2008 (UTC).
- Dear Babakexorramdin, with reference to what you mention concerning Ganje, it seems that the people to whom you refer must be illiterates. Have they not read the works by Nezami-ye Ganjavi? Nezami comes from Ganje (Ganjavi literary means "from Ganje") and if some Iranians have never read Nezami-ye Ganjavi, I have no choice but call them utter illiterates. I have just checked it, and Nezami has already a Misplaced Pages entry: Nezami (coming from so-called Ganja). Kind regards, --BF 07:29, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- who was talking abt wikipedia? read my message. I was talking abt Media in general (also radio tv) and hence weblog is of no use. It is not a legal issyue, it is an issue of attitude. And an advice to you: listen more to people before condemning them too easily.
Maybe I am a hitorian/sociologist/ anthropologist, maybe I am not. Does not matter. I know what I am saying.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 05:57, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Babakexorramdin, you are already showing the very symptoms about which you were/are complaining: you are being aggressive towards me, while at no point over the course of the past days have I been disrespectful towards you. Please read your text and realise what I mean ("read", "listen", etc. — you may not realise that I may be as old as your father, if not older). Furthermore, I do not believe that I "condemned" anybody; I only said that Iranians rather than talking to each other on blogs, exchange insults with each other (you yourself have already taken the first steps towards that goal). This is an observation that you can readily verify; I have seen exchanges which I have not felt able to read, so debased is the language that some of these compatriots use. To be frank with you, I absolutely do not understand why you have felt necessary to respond to my utterly respectful texts in the way that you did? (I told you earlier that the TV's that you mention are black boxes to me; as a matter of fact, I have come to see almost all of the traditional news media as utterly useless; the level of their analyses and commentary is substandard and appalling — I get almost all of my information about the world from blogs that I consider good and reliable.) As for what the media do, it is nothing new; manipulating information has been one of the first things that humans mastered and brought to perfection almost immediately after they became bipedal. Complaining about this phenomenon will change nothing, except that after complaining one may feel better. You can bring about change by countering the flow of dis- and mis-information. Send letters to newspapers (each newspaper has a readers' column), send e-mails to TVs (all TVs have a public-relations department), make appropriate programs and put them on YouTube, etc., if you feel that someone is spreading lies. Being disrespectful towards me will change nothing, not least because of the fact that never in my life have I been party to any conspiracy; have not sold my soul (at least not yet) to any group or organisation — am only a great believer in the primacy of human dignity. In the event that you may wonder, I deeply feel about all my compatriots, no matter what their beliefs or political preferences; also even talk of aggression against Iran sickens me to the core of my being. Somewhere I also referred to "(a very typical habit of Iranians)". For the record, it was I who wrote a letter to Majlis in Tehran asking them to donate an appropriate photograph of the building of Majlis to Misplaced Pages. Did they acknowledge receipt of my letter? No! (My e-mail system is capable of tracing the trajectory of my e-mails, and I know for certain that they have received my letter.) Did they donate a photograph? No! If you check the history of the photograph of Majlis, then you will realise that as late as two days ago I saved it, for the second time, from being deleted from Misplaced Pages. Compare the quality of the entry on Majlis of Iran with that of the American Congress. Do you see any difference? If yes, then that shows you how great is the distance that we Iranians must still go. You will realise that an appalling entry on Majlis only strengthens the hands of those who seek to portray Iranians as barbarians (as recently as a week ago, standing on the other side of the Persian Gulf, the American President juxtaposed Iran and Al-Qaeda, naming them as the greatest dangers that the world now faces!). I should say, rather than getting worked up about the petty "Persheeyan/persian TVs", make an effort and improve the quality of the Misplaced Pages entry on the Majlis. Wish you success. This is, incidentally, my last correspondence with you. --BF 08:38, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry if I offended you, but to be honest I experienced the way you responded a bit disrespectful, trying to teach things and not listening. I appologize if you did not have such intentions. On the Majles (I wont write it down as Majles): I am not an expert on that issue, but If I can do something please telle me. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 14:42, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
- Dear Babakexorramdin, you are already showing the very symptoms about which you were/are complaining: you are being aggressive towards me, while at no point over the course of the past days have I been disrespectful towards you. Please read your text and realise what I mean ("read", "listen", etc. — you may not realise that I may be as old as your father, if not older). Furthermore, I do not believe that I "condemned" anybody; I only said that Iranians rather than talking to each other on blogs, exchange insults with each other (you yourself have already taken the first steps towards that goal). This is an observation that you can readily verify; I have seen exchanges which I have not felt able to read, so debased is the language that some of these compatriots use. To be frank with you, I absolutely do not understand why you have felt necessary to respond to my utterly respectful texts in the way that you did? (I told you earlier that the TV's that you mention are black boxes to me; as a matter of fact, I have come to see almost all of the traditional news media as utterly useless; the level of their analyses and commentary is substandard and appalling — I get almost all of my information about the world from blogs that I consider good and reliable.) As for what the media do, it is nothing new; manipulating information has been one of the first things that humans mastered and brought to perfection almost immediately after they became bipedal. Complaining about this phenomenon will change nothing, except that after complaining one may feel better. You can bring about change by countering the flow of dis- and mis-information. Send letters to newspapers (each newspaper has a readers' column), send e-mails to TVs (all TVs have a public-relations department), make appropriate programs and put them on YouTube, etc., if you feel that someone is spreading lies. Being disrespectful towards me will change nothing, not least because of the fact that never in my life have I been party to any conspiracy; have not sold my soul (at least not yet) to any group or organisation — am only a great believer in the primacy of human dignity. In the event that you may wonder, I deeply feel about all my compatriots, no matter what their beliefs or political preferences; also even talk of aggression against Iran sickens me to the core of my being. Somewhere I also referred to "(a very typical habit of Iranians)". For the record, it was I who wrote a letter to Majlis in Tehran asking them to donate an appropriate photograph of the building of Majlis to Misplaced Pages. Did they acknowledge receipt of my letter? No! (My e-mail system is capable of tracing the trajectory of my e-mails, and I know for certain that they have received my letter.) Did they donate a photograph? No! If you check the history of the photograph of Majlis, then you will realise that as late as two days ago I saved it, for the second time, from being deleted from Misplaced Pages. Compare the quality of the entry on Majlis of Iran with that of the American Congress. Do you see any difference? If yes, then that shows you how great is the distance that we Iranians must still go. You will realise that an appalling entry on Majlis only strengthens the hands of those who seek to portray Iranians as barbarians (as recently as a week ago, standing on the other side of the Persian Gulf, the American President juxtaposed Iran and Al-Qaeda, naming them as the greatest dangers that the world now faces!). I should say, rather than getting worked up about the petty "Persheeyan/persian TVs", make an effort and improve the quality of the Misplaced Pages entry on the Majlis. Wish you success. This is, incidentally, my last correspondence with you. --BF 08:38, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
IRI section
The Islamic republic section should have more information about more recent history. I shall add MAJOR events up to 10 years ago. Please do not add anything insignificant which is mentioned before e.g. new sanctions.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 13:26, 19 January 2008 (UTC)
Milestone
The Iran page has reached a milestone in it's history. For the first time in years this article is now UNDER 100kb long. We shouldn't let our efforts go to waste and we should maintain it and even shorten it further.
I would like to thank everyone who has contributed to the article, either by adding text, or removing non-POV, too dettailed, irrelevant or incorrect and non-factual text.
I also suggest that we merge the Safavid,Af... section with the Pahlavi era section.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 18:52, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
Saddam's reasons
Saddam's reasons for attacking Iran is described in great detail on this page, but they are not explained on the History of the Islamic Republic of Iran page. I thought that the main articles should be more detailed? I thought that sections with main articles are supposed to be more general?
- I will transfer the text to the History of the Islamic Republic of Iran section. The reasons of Saddam's strike are not part of our history, rather the politics of Iraq.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 12:35, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
Geography pic
Which pic would you prefer in the Geography section?
Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 14:33, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
I prefer the latter; it seems more appropriate than a wildlife picture. Moreover, it shows snow and the mountains, which would help dispel myths that Iran is entirely desert. -Rosywounds (talk) 21:50, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
I thought that too. Wildlife isn't even mentioned in the section. I have seen at least two FA articles which have satellite images (Japan & Canada)Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:43, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
FAC
I think we have now addressed almost of Iran's problems(the article!;-)) and so I now nominate it for FA. I hope it is accepted.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:02, 22 January 2008 (UTC) Bold text
Safavis-pahlavi merge
I have tried several times to merge the Sfavid, Afshar, Zand and Qajar period with the Pahlavi section. It is obvious that these two periods of Iranian history are connected. In both sections colonial powers influenced Iran greatly. I don't see any reason why they shouldn't be merged. Both sections are relatively small. Also the other sections span over 1000,800 and 900 years and it seems odd if this section only has 400 years of Iran's history. If we merge these two sections it will span nearer to 500 years which makes it more balanced.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 21:39, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
- You can make a title like Monarchy in the modern period etc... or the Iranian Shia monarchy.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 05:50, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
- The Afsharids were not Shia. The current state of sections is fine.--Agha Nader (talk) 14:20, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
- Why you say this? Afsharids were Shiites. Nader Shah was a general in the Safavid army. He rescued Iran from the Afghans and Turks both Sunnis. I think the myth that nader Shah was not Shiite is coming forth from the fact that after beating the Afghans he took it easy on Sunnis and jews. He saw the late safavid religious intolerance as counter productive. Now adays there are members of Afshar tribe all over Iran, notably in Khorasan, Kerman and Azerbaijan, they are all Shiites.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 14:38, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
- The Afsharids were not Shia. The current state of sections is fine.--Agha Nader (talk) 14:20, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
- You can make a title like Monarchy in the modern period etc... or the Iranian Shia monarchy.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 05:50, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
Some general remarks
Dear All, I wish that the intention to nominate this entry for FA would have been announced publicly and clearly so that interested people would have had chance to comment on its contents and quality. Below I present some of my comments which as yet may be incorporated into the main text:
- (1) Concerning "settlements dating back to 4000 BCE", I believe that the correct figure should be 5000 BCE. This is based on the fact that Avesta is already considered to be 7000 years old. See the book by Siāvash Avesta (Hasan Abbasi) "Ā'ín-e Avesta — Haft Hezar Sal Pishineh Tammadon". The third printing of this book is dated "7024 Ā'ryāí-e Mitrā'i". Personally, I do not know how reliable these dates are, however, 7000 years is in very good accord with the recent archaeological findings in Tangeh Bolaghi and Darreh Bolaghi. Consult for instance: 7000-Years-Old Mass Grave Discovered in Bolaghi Gorge, Life Goes Back to 10000 Years Ago in Bolaghi Gorge. That these cannot be Iranian propaganda is testified by the fact that the last-mentioned mass grave has been uncovered in collaboration with a group of German archaeologists. For details, please consult:
- Deutsches Archäologisches Institut (German Archaeological Institute), Iran: Darre-ye Bolāghi (in English).
- (2) The title "Supreme Leader" is a mistranslation; according to real experts, it must be "Supreme Jurisprudent"; "Supreme" for Velāyat and "Jurisprudent" for Faqih (recall Velāyat-e Faqih). In case of doubt, please ask about the details from Professor Juan Cole (University of Michigan). His blog Informed Comment is one of the best and most authoritative on matters related to Middle East in general and Iran in particular. The other person who may be consulted on this matter is Professor Farideh Farhi (Independent Scholar and an Adjunct Professor of Political Science at University of Hawai'i, Mānoa). In my opinion, she is one of the most qualified authorities on all matters Iranian. She regularly contributes to Informed Comment: Global Affairs. As an aside, you may ask her (as well as Professor Cole) to be kind enough and comment on the contents of the present Misplaced Pages entry on Iran and possibly suggest improvements.
- (3) The punctuations in the present entry are not perfect. What does the comma following citation do? Further, when a citation is given at the end of a sentence, it must follow the closing dot; as it stands, citation is correctly placed, but citation is not.
The above were my comments for the time being; I shall return if I have more to say. In the meantime you may ask that the reviewers put reviewing the entry on hold until further notice (i.e. until various shortcoming are corrected). With kind regards, --BF 22:06, 22 January 2008 (UTC).
Euphemism
Can I infer from this that "urban settlement" is the new euphemism of civilization? --Pejman47 (talk) 20:31, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
- Don't worry too much. The statement has been reverted to state the obvious: the 6 thousand year 'continuity' of the civilization(s?) in Iran. 3rdAlcove (talk) 23:35, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
Maps, Military section, Geography section, and recent edits
I counted at least 10 maps of Iran for the entire article. May be we can replace some with pictures? I also merged the military section with the paragraph about foreign relations as per other similar articles: See Japan (featured), USA and others.
I also moved the geography section up for same reason. See Iran on the French Misplaced Pages (featured).
I remember that a while back someone re-organised the sections to the current form(i.e. Etymology, history,politics, geog, admin divisions etc.) and everyone thought it was a great edit. I don't think this change is the best change. But something could be done about the admin divisions and geography. Maybe a merge? Thank you for your enthusiasm and contribution. Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 18:11, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Contributions to Science
I wonder if it's vaild at all to discuss Iran's contribution to science and technology relying on the example of Persian scientists who live and work outsied Iran, and who are probablly all of them citizens of Western countries. I think since the article is on Iran, it should stick to what's inside Iran. If you want to discuss the work of these scientists, I think it should be in a section on "Iranian Immigrants in the West", or something like that. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 194.69.1.21 (talk) 17:28, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
The history section is too big
We need to trim it further. We need to MOVE the rest to the main articles. I am not a "specialist" of the history section but I think we should give a clear mandate to those who are able in that field.
I think triming 30% of the section would be appropriate. NO INFORMATION WILL BE LOST (JUST MOVED TO THE MAIN SUB-ARTICLES).
Please state your approval or opposition below. Thanks.
- APPROVE
- OPPOSE Because Iran is one of the oldest countries of the world , then it's natural for it's history section to be so long .This debate was previously discussed here Vote on trimming the History Section.--Alborz Fallah (talk) 08:35, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- Comment: I remember this subject was discussed but I forgot there had been a vote already. Secondly, I would like to add that the recent history of Iran (1988 - 2007) has not been added yet. We should probably make some room for it also, if we want to have the article nominated for FA status. So far it was NOT included because it was attracting many trolls to Iran's page, mainly because of the news surrounding the Iranian nuclear programme (I am not sure I want to include this part as of yet for the same reason). Also people tend to report "news" and wikipedia is not for that (see WP:NOT). Nevertheless, at some point in the future, the history section will get (30%??) bigger than it is today because of it. 69.116.247.26 (talk) 10:16, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Comment: Look at the Turkey page. The Iranian article needs to have something different to other articles; a WOW factor. It needs something to set it apart. I think we should have a history section slightly larger than the Turkey one. The politics could also be shortened a little. As some of you might have noticed I started a major one-man effort to shorten it and beat it down to a reasonable size and the article was under 100KB. But instead of maintaining it's small size the information came flooding back into the article. As I have done many times before, I will show my full support to shorten the article.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 17:57, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Comment:Iran is not a special little snowflake.--mitrebox (talk) 18:05, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Comment: I think it does need further trimming, particularly the Iran-Iraq war section. Turkey and Japan both provide excellent models for countries with very ancient histories. As I had stated prior, many of these FA class country articles do not have a huge amount of headers; I think we are capable of slowly transitioning towards a merger of all the history sections. It would make the section much more fluid. -Rosywounds (talk) 18:10, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- Oppose, for this article to be promoted to FA status there is no need for further trimming. But still there is some unsourced stuff in there with "awkward wording" that should be corrected.--Pejman47 (talk) 19:12, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
Comment: No history section needs to be trimmed. History is a valuable part of the description of a country. To fully understand a country, you must know where the country came from and how it came to be in the present age. What is that saying, "You can't know where you are going until you know where you have been." Expansion and contraction, Turmoil and peace, all of these are a part of a country's history. —Preceding unsigned comment added by HistoryHawk (talk • contribs) 00:34, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
Iran image crisis
I quickly counted the number of images in the article and we have 42!!!!! The turkey page only has 24.
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-number of images on the iran(not featured) page!
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-number of Pakistan(featured) images
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-number of Turkey(featured) images
I will remove a few of them. I shall smite whoever stands in my way!(just kidding;-)) Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 18:28, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- Comparing it with other articles without giving any independant reason is FALLACY. I even saw that you deleted the IsmaillI picture, why? Did you know what you were doing? If only one pictue from the Safavids and Qajars should be selected, there is no other choice than him. List the images that you deem redundant here and ask for comment. If no objection was received delete them in 24 hours notice. Cheers. --Pejman47 (talk) 19:19, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
I disagree here because generally more images is a good thing. Having more than enough is never a problem. Most articles have fewer images because people don't want to go through the hassle of copyright licenses and whatnot. This is an area where more is always better. -Rosywounds (talk) 19:27, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
- According to Misplaced Pages:Manual of Style#Images articles should avoid sandwiching text between two images facing each other, as this happens in several paragraphs in the Iran article it might be a good idea to remove some pics. --Victor12 (talk) 21:34, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
I want to discuss the deletion of these images. Ideally SOME BUT NOT ALL of these should be deleted:Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 19:12, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
- I have an alternative suggestion - why not put the images on a rotation template so that we don't need to remove any images? Green Giant (talk) 00:14, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
Great idea; but I absolutely hate the Yakhchal/flower image and the mountain/grassland picture is misleading, so let's delete them anyway.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:48, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
- Avestan isn't mentioned in the article. we could mention it in the culture section but it is not spoken so it is not important.]]
- two maps is not good for one subsection, although it does show some important places. we could replace it with the green map which defines it's NE border or we could replace it with a picture of an artefact.]]
- I added this picture but I don't know how to relabel it. If someone would volunteer I would be very happy.]]
- Good picture but FOUR images are too much for a subsection. It is a bit colourless.
- He is important in history, but the question is: Is he important enough?this image is also colourless. Generally, the history section needs colour He is important in history, but the question is: Is he important enough?this image is also colourless. Generally, the history section needs colour
- this is a good image but yet again it is slightly dull. I think it should stay.
- I know why people want to keep this picture, but I think http://en.wikipedia.org/Image:Chemical_weapon1.jpg would show something that was happening to people and put a picture into people's minds that a war was going on
- two images in such a small section is not right. Also, two scenery pictures are too much. Note that theyboth have green grass, but anyone who has been to Iran knows that Iran is not that green and I think two pictures showing green grass is misleading.
- One or two of the following images must go. This one only shows the English side of the note. Also, it is not the biggest note in Iran, there is now a 50'000 rial note too One or two of the following images must go. This one only shows the English side of the note. Also, it is not the biggest note in Iran, there is now a 50'000 rial note too
- I think this image should stay, but it isn't what I think, it is what everyone thinks]]
- as I said before, this is only a picture of a massive hotel(not that common in Iran) built on an island not connected to mainland Iran(obviously) built by Germans. The island isn't even mentioned! as I said before, this is only a picture of a massive hotel(not that common in Iran) built on an island not connected to mainland Iran(obviously) built by Germans. The island isn't even mentioned!
- People have questioned this picture. I think we have two options: People have questioned this picture. I think we have two options:
- File:Delete the image and merge the tourism subsection with the main economy section or Leave it be until a more relative image arrives
- I don't like this image. It has a wierd shade and half of it is filled with roses. This image is obviously to promote tourism or something.:
- I added this image as a temporary replacement for an image with copy write issues. the culture section has three paintings and we have to remove one. We might remove this one; a great piece of art by a famous artist which is temporary,
- Or this one, which has been in the article for ages and won in a pole. This is also a fine specimen of art Or this one, which has been in the article for ages and won in a pole. This is also a fine specimen of art
- this is a good image, but one too many in such a small sports section. Removing the azadi picture would be like cutting the article's hands off
Another image question
Which image is better?
- I would say the green one. We also defintly need the picture of Cyrus's cylinder. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 11:33, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
- I vote for the second one (on the right). I also suggest we replace Chogha Zanbil pic with either the Cylinder of Cyrus or with Cyrus'tomb (below):
- SSZ (talk) 03:15, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
- Choghazanbil belongs there. It is of a more ancient period of time.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 08:43, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
- Definitely the green one. In the text it describes how the empire stretched From the two rivers to the Aegean sea (I just edited the Aegean sea bit), but here it clearly crosses the Oxus river so it is wrong and we should replace it with the Right image.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 22:41, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
- Yes the Northern i.e. the Scythian borders of the Empire were ambiguous, In addition the Green one covers Greece better. We know that all Greek cities except Athenes and its allies paid tribute to the Achamenids. And btw Athenes was occupied too. It has a weakness that it does not fully cover the historical Macedonia which was an Achamenid dominium. It is ambogius on the Caucasus. I also beleive that the border was Iaxartes (syrdarya) and not Oxus. This is the Area to the north of which lived the Massagetes, while for example Khwarezmia (to the northe of Oxus) was settled by the sedentary Iranian tribes, were early Zoroastrianis and and were loyal to the empire. But in general the Green one is better--Babakexorramdin (talk) 10:10, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
Origins of carpet weaving
They predate the Persians. Xenophon is a primary source, and you cannot use primary sources without violating Misplaced Pages policies on OR (since you are not a scholar and do not have the expertise to critique or analyze primary sources). Further, Xenophon wasn't alive when the first carpet ever was ever made, so its a weak example for this situation. Even more, the Greeks assumed all innovations by Easterners to be of Persian origin, since that was the ruling class. History of carpet making is too obscure to be claimed by one group. The previous wording was so flowery I thought Mohammad Reza Pahlavi wrote it. -Rosywounds (talk) 01:27, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
- The oldest known known carpet of the world is Scythian origin. Then there is Baharistan carpet of Sassanids. I suggest this sentence from the above link you brought be modified and put in there: "There is no doubt, that even Iranians can’t claim to have produced the first hand-made carpets, but the evidences specially finding carpet named “Pazirik” proves the great role of Iranians in creating this valuable art.". We can say that "There is no consensus on the origin of the first hand-made carpet, but the disocvery of the “Pazirik” carpet proves the great role of Iranians in creating this valuable art". --alidoostzadeh (talk) 01:36, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
I don't have an issue with Iranian contributions to the art being mentioned. We can include that. I don't think we should definitively say that we KNOW that the Persians were the first to make them, though. The wording should also remain neutral if we wish to present it. -Rosywounds (talk) 01:37, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
- Okay. I agree we do not know who made the first one..So I included the neutral wording above. --alidoostzadeh (talk) 01:39, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
Safavid/Pahlavi pics
Who thinks this version of the safavid to IR history section is better than the current one? I do. There are two pictures of the safavid dynasty and two from the pahlavi era, but nothing else. But this one has one of the Qajar era too;which was one of the most important eras in modern iranian history. The picture of the Shah is a lot clearer too and it shows the Shah's close ties with the USA.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 17:05, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
- First, please upload a colseup from the picture of Shah wih Nixon, in you proposed version they are far from the camera. After that I don't have any problem with that.
- About the other picture, I disagree with you. But, I will have no objection if other users prefer yours. --Pejman47 (talk) 23:10, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
- the map of Safavid empire is not correct: it should contain much more of Dagestan anbd Georgia. Also Marv and the whole Persian Gulf area, someone please correct the map and download a map again.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 05:36, 5 February 2008 (UTC)
What I mean is that we need a picture which shows something or someone in Iran's history from the Qajar era and I think the Naser Al-Din picture is a good picture. Babakexorramdin pointed out that the Safavid map is wrong. Should we remove it or leave it until it is updated? Is it better to have incomplete information or none at all? I don't know.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 16:12, 5 February 2008 (UTC) >>>> good question. Generally no info is better than wrong info. But in this case you can let it be here, untill it is updated, rather rapidly. In this article, maps and puictures should be sharp and strong, because we do not have much space in the text. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 19:19, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
Tourism
In the tourism subsection it said that 1.8% of employment is generated from tourism. I wondered if tourism is important enough to have it's own subsection, so I moved all of the text to the Economy of Iran article and put a few sentences in the economy lead.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 12:37, 9 February 2008 (UTC) >>>>> Just note that its not all about income but about the attraction of this country. Interesting would be to mentiond that despite its potential there is not much foreign tourist, due to the bad name the western Media has created for the country, and give a link to Anti Iranianism.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 08:47, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
OK. I think I can do that.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 11:14, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
History subheadings
The Misplaced Pages's MOS it says that headings (and titles) should preferably be under ten words. One of the history titles violates this guideline and two other headings also contain a large number of words. All headings (except the Parthian and Sassanid empires) should be changed. I suggest we change the post Arab invasion to Iran under Islamic rule or Caliphate and Sultanate. The Safavid 'till revolution could be Early Modern Iran and the Pahlavi dynasty or Monarchist Modern Iran. I have no suggestions for the early history section.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 16:58, 9 February 2008 (UTC) >>> You can call that the early historic period or what I prefer the ancient and classical period.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 08:44, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
- I don't like the "Classical" bit. according to WP the Classical Antiquity is Classical antiquity (also the classical era or classical period) is a broad term for a long period of cultural history centered on the Mediterranean Sea, comprising the interlocking civilizations of Ancient Greece and Ancient Rome. Half of this period would fall under the era of Sassanid and Parthian Empires. How about Rise of the Persian Empire? But this doesn't describe the section well, because it omits the Early history part. Should I change the others?Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 11:11, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
- Avoid Persian empire (whatever that might mean) at any costs. Early history and the Iranian statehood, I would say. Median empire can be seen as the first Iranian state in this part of the Iranian world. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 18:20, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
Maybe we could call it by that part of world history, like stone age or bronze age or antiquity or whenever it is(obviously this is not my strong point, but I will look it up). According to my dictionary statehood means The status of being a recognised independent nation, which Iran still is. Maybe ...and early statehood?Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:27, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
I looked and it falls under the Bronze and Iron ages and early antiquity, but the antiquty period focuses more on Greece and Rome.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 21:27, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
- We want to discuss from pre-antiquity untill early antiquity. I would say consilodation of Iranian statehod, would be a nice title.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 22:39, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
I don't know what consilodation means. Maybe Inauguration of Iranian statehood, but I'm not sure it is the best word. If only we could shorten it, merge it with the next subsection (Parthia and Sassanids) and name it pre Islamic period or something!
I just had a thought! How about we merge the Median and Achaemenid pat with the Sassanid and Parthian section and call it Pre Islamic Statehood, and leave the Pre-median stuff in it's own subsection (Early History). I think this is a good idea because with the statehood of Iran a new era of Iranian history started. I think it is also important that if we do this that we don't add any text to the section.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:57, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
- Consolidation means becoming solid, beginning to get a form. But I agree with you the second solution is better. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 16:06, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for the English lesson;-)! I'll now edit the history section. What do you think about the other headings?Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 19:05, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
- 1- Early ancient history 2- Pre-Islamic Iranian ststehood (or unity) 3- Early islamic period 4- Islamic era Iranian unity (or Early modern era; From Safavids to Pahlevi) 5- Islamic republic. This was my suggestions, --Babakexorramdin (talk) 20:48, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
Relating to the Safavid until IR, it could be early modern era, but I think the Pahlavi era is more recent than early modern. But I can't think of anything better. pre-Islamic statehood is good enough and no Iranian is necessary. The rest is good.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 23:50, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
- Its ok, then its good to include Elamite and Lulubian, manna etc... civilization as a prelude to the pre-SIslamic statehood. In the Early history then come the more remote history. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 11:32, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
- Could Elamite and Lulubian, manna really be considered Iranian ststes who ruled Iran? As it said in the history section "The medians are credited with uniting Iran" or something along those lines. Also, is there enough information about previous eras of iranian history? The sections should stay as they are until we shorten the PISH subsection. Then we might add some text but not before. I thought of a name for the Safavid section. Late monarchist era, or end of monarchism(although I think this might be more related to the Revolution)Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 13:31, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
- Elamites were not Iranianspeaking, About the Manna, Lulubian, Kashubian- Caspian etc... we dont know enough, but many say they were no Iranian speakers. Any how they, especially Elamites have influened the tradition of the upcoming empires especially the Achamenids who relied heavily on the elamite tradition. But they were not united and they do not deserve the label empire.
As for the Islamic era, use the early Islamic era, or medieval times. Then use as islamic era Iranian empires. What I opt for is> a section from the Safavid untill end of Qajar and call it the early modern period, and then from Pahlavi till now we call it the later modern period or just modern era Iran. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 21:00, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
Interestingly, I also thought of the latter, but I dismissed it due to doubts on their similarities and also people's opinion. I think that the Pahlavi era is similar equally to the IR and the Qajar dynasty. It was similar as it was in the same political world as the IR is now (e.g. American supremacy) but it was also greatly influenced and corrupted by western powers, like the Qajars were. I think to make things simpler we should put it with the IR section. With this move the Safavid Qajar section would have very little text and we should keep it that way! Many have talked about the History section's massive size. If we do this change we must keep the sections which loose text short and shorten the sections which have become larger. With this and a few reference and grammatical changes we could achieve the FA. I disagree with the initial suggestion about the Post islamic thing. Iran is still n Islamic country. I'm not sure if all of that part is medieval, but if it does I'm for it.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 00:29, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
- I looked at the Middle Ages page and this period of Iranian history starts 200years after the beginning of the Middle Ages and ends around the same time. I think this is a good heading, but I have to make one final suggestion. How about Islamic Golden Age and Mongol invasion. I like the first bit because Islam was very very important in Iran's history and culture of that time (even now!). But with the mongol Invasion bit it makes the heading a bit long and it doesn't include Tamerlane (Teymoure Lang). Could you think of any way that we could use the phrase Islamic Golden Age in the heading?Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 14:34, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
- I wouldnt call it Golden age. Iranian Golden age is the Safavid 17th century--Babakexorramdin (talk) 11:34, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
- I didn't say it was Iran's golden age, but The Islamic Golden Age.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:14, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
- I know, but I said that would bring confusion. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 02:28, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
- I looked at the Middle Ages page and this period of Iranian history starts 200years after the beginning of the Middle Ages and ends around the same time. I think this is a good heading, but I have to make one final suggestion. How about Islamic Golden Age and Mongol invasion. I like the first bit because Islam was very very important in Iran's history and culture of that time (even now!). But with the mongol Invasion bit it makes the heading a bit long and it doesn't include Tamerlane (Teymoure Lang). Could you think of any way that we could use the phrase Islamic Golden Age in the heading?Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 14:34, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
Middle Ages it is!Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 10:57, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
- Call it the Islamic Medieval period.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 11:58, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
- If you search for Medieval it redirects to Middle Ages, so there is'nt a medieval page.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 12:51, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
Official Language
I noticed a minor error on the page for Iran. The description of the country lists the official language of Iran as Persian. Persian is not exactly the official language of the Iranians. The actual official language of Iran is called Farsi, a semitic language very similar to Arabic and Hebrew. In fact Farsi takes many letters from the Arabic language into it's own. There are a few letters in Farsi that are not in Arabic, setting it a little apart from Arabic. I just thought that this should be clarified. Although the country is not a particular favorite of mine, it's culture deserves a little respect. —Preceding unsigned comment added by HistoryHawk (talk • contribs) 00:26, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
Contrary to common belief, it is not a Semitic language. Persian belongs to the Western group of the Iranian languages branch of the Indo-European language family. Being a speaker myself I know that it was heavily influenced by Arabic due to the Arab Conquest of Iran (Persia), but the original words are Aryan. Farsi shares many words or words with the same origin with other Indo-European languages like English e.g. Bad, Madar/Mother etc. An argument has been going on for a while on Misplaced Pages and also in the International community; Persia or Iran?, Persian or Farsi? They are basicly the same language. Persian, the more widely used name of the language in English, is an Anglicized form derived from Latin Persianus < Latin Persia < Greek Πέρσις Pérsis, a Hellenized form of Old Persian Parsa. According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the term Persian seems to have been first used in English in the mid-16th century. Native Persian speakers call it "Fārsi" (local name) or Parsi. Farsi is the arabicized form of Parsi, due to a lack of the /p/ phoneme in Standard Arabic. So as I said they are the same thing. So it's like saying Francaise or French, Cymraeg or Welsh.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 13:22, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
- As Ardeshir babakan said Persian is the true name (Farsi is its local name* and it is not semitic. It is Indo_European language and belongs to the Iranian branch of it, together with Kurdish, Tajik etc... It has some semitic loanwords though mainly from Arabic and Aramaic (Assyrian) but not from hebrew. The alphabet in which it is written has more letters than the Arabic ones, and the alphabet does not deserve to be called Arabic alphabet any way, because it was taken from the Mesopotamian alphabets and were developed later by Iranians and Mesopotamians. Arabs used other Alphabets either Hebrew or similar to those of ethiopia, before the invaded the Sasanid empire--Babakexorramdin (talk) 21:04, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
I never said Persian is the right name, I just explained where they came from. My personal opinion is in fact the opposite. I support the Farsi camp.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 00:14, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
- Well I do support Persian over farsi. farsi is just a local translation. In English it suggests an ethnic language, while Persian can be suggestive of historic Persia. moreover there are not many languages which bear the local names in English, some examples are Paplliemnto, Urdu, Zulu, Lingala, and Inuit. Persian is definitly not of the same type/ level historically and in terms of literature.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 11:01, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
The fact that most languages are known by their English name is a good point, but your initial point is incorrect. It would be more correct to say that Persian is from a Greek translation of Parsi (Farsi). As wikipedia talk pages aren't forums for general discusion, we should look at which one the UN recognises (the Persian gulf is correct partially because the UN recognises this but not the "Arabian gulf" or the "Gulf").Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 14:20, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
There is a problem with the official language on the right hand column. It states that the official language is "farsi". This is ironic since the article states itself that the language is Persian in the Language section. Moreoever, the wiki page on the Persian Language: (http://en.wikipedia.org/Persian_language#Local_names) notes that the Academy of Persian Language and Literature, the governing body that regulates the language, itself issued a statement saying that the correct ENGLISH name is Persian. Please have the right hand column language designation changed from Farsi to Persian please. 1 April 2008. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikronium (talk • contribs) 07:36, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
External links
User:BehnamFarid wants to keep a set of external links at the bottom of the article. My "motivation" for removing the "Faces of Iran" link are covered by WP:External links#Restrictions_on_linking:
- Sites that violate the copyrights of others per contributors' rights and obligations should not be linked. Linking to websites that display copyrighted works is acceptable as long as the website has licensed the work. Knowingly directing others to a site that violates copyright may be considered contributory infringement. If you know that an external Web site is carrying a work in violation of the creator's copyright, do not link to that copy of the work. Linking to a page that illegally distributes someone else's work sheds a bad light on Misplaced Pages and its editors. This is particularly relevant when linking to sites such as YouTube, where due care should be taken to avoid linking to material that violates its creator's copyright.
The uploader of the Youtube video that is linked to uses a large number of photos for which no source or licensing is given. Please do not readd it. Green Giant (talk) 02:28, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
- I agree. We must be very selective with external links, especially for a country. Otherwise, we might just provide links to 100 videos from Youtube or Google. Any external link must be very BROAD in scope and of good QUALITY and cover all the topics covered in the main article (or as much as possible). That's my opinion on this subject. SSZ (talk) 19:32, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
Early Modern pic
The early modern era (changed due to a consencus on this talk page) has two Safavid images. They only ruled for 200 of the total of 500 years described in this section. I think a Qajar image would do. how about one relating to the constitutional revolution or an image of a king.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 23:38, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
- Safavids were so important in the Iranian political history that deserve two pictures. Constitutional revolution for Qajar is fine--Babakexorramdin (talk) 02:26, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
The Safavids are important. I'm not denying that; but it's not that important. We lost A lot of land during the Qajar period. Our current borders were formed the Qajar period. Nader Shah saved iran from permanent occupation.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 10:53, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
- It was that importnat, also for god's sake do not edit this article with what you perceived by reading High schools history books!
- and can you show us your consensus? where is it?--Pejman47 (talk) 19:43, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
Consensus for what? Sorry if I've done something wrong but I've forgotten. If your talking about the Achaemenid pic it's under "Another Image Question". I would also like to say that all of my history knowledge is not from my history books, but that book was nearest to me. I would also like to say that the Iranian history books (later years) are very informative.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 22:55, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
I've changed my mind. the subsection is too small for two images so let's get rid of the map. It is wrong (see Safavid/Pahlavi pic discussion section) and there is nothing special about the map. We have about seven maps & satellite images.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 19:09, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
Section language and literature
Section language and literature should be revised heavily. We are not dealing with the Iranian languages in the region but with the languages of Iran. In addition only Persian literature is reffered too. A good article of Iran pays attention to all (larger) languages of Iran.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 19:10, 17 February 2008 (UTC)
Good point. fine with me. but delete some sentences on Persian.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:30, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
Banknote
The banknote image only shows the English side of the note. Could someone make one with both sides. I would do it but i'm not in Iran and my note is a bit tattered. Also generally add images of other banknotes for the rial article.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:30, 19 February 2008 (UTC)
Ardeshirs Qs about the necessity of examples and the Safavids and the heart of persian Gulf
Dear Ardeshir. I think that those things were necessary, I had put some of those informations there myself because the anti-Iranianists are continuously abuse ambiguity in order to instigate ethnic and relkgious hatred and intra-state and interstate conflicts in the region. Also it is necessary that that The Safavid empire is explicitely is called an Iranian empire, at the moment The anti-Iranianists American and Israeli lobby are championing the idea that 1- Transcauacsus and republic of Azerbaijan were not Iranian 2- that Safavid empire was originated there and 3- They conquered Iran. They are violating the history. Unfortunately some obscure pseudo-scientists such as Brenda Shaffer and company are very eager to abuse these things.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 08:45, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
I have never heard of these claims! This might be due to my ignorance or lack of media coverage or something. But Misplaced Pages wasn't made to prove some cowboy anti-Iranians wrong. Why should Kurdish and Azeri be in the infobox when languages like Pashtu or Baluchi aren't mentioned. I don't think that when people come to learn about Iran they just read the captions. Also I have suggested that we delete that image because (As you pointed out) it is wrong and it hasn't any significance in Iran's history. Maybe the Qajar borders would be good or maybe a picture of a famous person like a king. Or maybe we should just delete it and not replace it. The section is short now (Thank god) and two images might be too much. Also you shouldn't sandwich text between two images. Why is Iran in the heart of the Persian gulf? This implies that 1. Iran can fit in the Persian Gulf 2.It is an Island in the Persian Gulf 3.It has no neighbours 4. It can't border any other body of water(as it's in the middle of one). Another thing is what heart? Geographical, Political, Cultural, Historical, Economical or Demographical. All points can be contested. I won't undo your edit until the matter is resolved.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:54, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
- 1- You might not have heard these claims, maybe because you live in the USA. There the Iranian TV channels broadcast trivial things and live in the stone ages in general. 2-Baluchi could be there too, but it is a minor language spoken by some 2 Million peoples while Azeri and Kurdish are the biggest after Persian. Pashtun is ambigous because it is spoken by the Afghan immigrants. Iranian constitution does not speak about the immigrants languages status. But it could be a regional language after these immigrants live in a compact area for a long time 3- Safavids are the most important dynasty in Iran. The roots of modern Iranian state lies in that tiem. panturksist are now trying to change our histpory and say that they were not Iranians. 3- Iran lies in the heart of persian Gulf because the Iranian idlands are spread in the Persian Gulf from East to West and they often go very far in the International waters.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 16:30, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
- 1.Actually, I have never been to the US. I lived in Iran for most of my life and have been in the UK for six months. I have watched Iranian-American channels mainly to laugh at their accents and their naivety.2.Your second point is a good one and has convinced me 3.Safavid isn't the most important dynasty in Iranian history. The Medians were the first state of Iran. Iran was at it's largest during the Achaemenid Empire. Under the Parthian and Sassanid dynasties we beat the Romans and kept Zoroastrianism alive (collected the avesta). During the Tahirid dynasty Iran re-emerged as a state. During the Afsharid dynasty we took Delhi for the first time. Iran became prosperous under the Zandieh dynasty. Iran's current borders were formed during the Qajar period and Iran lost alot of power and was corrupted. During the Pahlavi dynasty Iran was greatly westernised and became wealthy and now iran is getting N power.4. Just because iran has a few islands in the Persian gulf it doesn't mean that the whole country is in the PG. You could say Iran has some islands in the heart of the PG but that's not important enough for the heading. You could also say that iran is in the heart of the Caspian because it has a few islands in the north.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:33, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
- Maybe all dynasties were important? I wouldnt say that. Zand and Qajar were not powerful, but the constitutional revolution happened during Qajar (You can use Sattar Khan´s picture btw). Safavids´importance was in the fact that they built a reunited Iran out of ashes. If they were not there was no Iran now, but many small states, or who knows maybe Iran was part of Ottoman Empire or any other secanrio. Nader Shah was important too because he kicked Barbarians out of Iran, but it was a short period. From the Medians untill the end of Sasanians Iran was a powerfull empire, but then Arabs and Mongols and Javd and Hushang and Abdullah and Khare and Sage came. Safavids managed to build a reunited state again and laid the fundaments of modern Iran, the same state in which we are living now. If you are going to use a picture during Qaar, you better use Sattar Khan or Iranian lost territory in the Caucasus (Golestan and Torkamanchay)--Babakexorramdin (talk) 22:07, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
- I think a sattarkhan pic would do.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 23:24, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
or maybe Jangali.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 23:27, 22 February 2008 (UTC)
- Sattar Khan is more notable--Babakexorramdin (talk) 09:29, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
I'll change it now. I'll change the "Heart of the Persian Gulf" bit too.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 11:41, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
Which picture? the one or just ?Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 11:44, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
- I would say that one with Sattar Khan--Babakexorramdin (talk) 12:06, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
American or British?
I have a question. should this article adopt American English or Proper English. I support the latter because US English is only mainly used in the US.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:02, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
Also, should we use BC/AD or BCE/CE (see Misplaced Pages:Manual of Style (dates and numbers)#Longer_periods). I personally think AD/BC is better.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:55, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
- You shouldn't 'adopt' any style but follow the English of the original editor, per the Manual. As for BC/AD you should probably again follow the established way, though I must strongly note my support for using BC/AD, the CE nonsense is just an American ultra-Politically Correct fad and the vast vast majority of the world uses BC and AD. +Hexagon1 05:37, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
The article can't be a mix of AmEng and proper English. Issues such as US or U.S. depend on it. I think Brit English should be encouraged. I would also like to say that I will change all BCE/CE to BC/AD. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ardeshire Babakan (talk • contribs) 15:55, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
- Reverted. Please don't do that, per WP:MOS. ➪HiDrNick! 17:47, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
"Choose either the BC-AD or the BCE-CE system, but not both in the same article." Maybe you read this bit: "It is inappropriate for a Misplaced Pages editor to change from one style to another unless there is some substantial reason for the change". But there isn't a single style on this page. Some use AD and others use CE. I just changed the CE/BCE ones. We think it's better,Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:33, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
Territoial loss
I think it is important to mention territoal loss and the contemporary borders. Briefly the loss of Caucasus, Bahrain and Herat should be discussed. They both involved Imperial (Russian and British) envolvmenet and are still alive in the Iranian public mind as a major Trauma.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 08:36, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
When I checked some territorial losses were mentioned, but not Bahrain, Herat and Caucasus. I don't think such details are important on the Iran page.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:25, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
- These are not detailles. these are major events which have shpaed the current borders of Iran.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 12:40, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
The loss is mentioned, but no details are given. Mentioning the loss is enough.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 16:22, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
- If you mean this :"resulting in Iran losing almost half of its territories to Imperial Russia and the British Empire, via the treaties of Gulistan, Turkmenchay and Akhal. In spite of The Great Game Iran managed to maintain her sovereignty and was never colonized, unlike neighbouring states in the region". It is not enough and is wrong too.
Iran did not lost jalf of its territory but less than than. It should be mentioned that Golestan and Turkmenchay meant loss of Iranian territories in the Caucasus (modern day Georgia, Armenia, republic of Azerbaijan, and Daghestan(. Akhal dealt with territories in Turkmenistan. Then Iran also lost Herat to the British. From this time The British intervened in Bahrain, but Iran lost it in 1971. These are important information. Mentioning territorial loss has not much value without mentioning its location. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 23:03, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
I am not convinced and I have no more points to make. I'm not convinced so others must decide.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 18:57, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
- lets say this. Mentioning the location of territorial loss is OK with Iranian wikipedians. If Iranian wikipedians do not agree with something, they can always reach me by many means and I will say that to you.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 20:09, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
Fair enough! I would like to tell every wikipedian to check the details and if there are any concerns mention it!Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 21:20, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
The interactive map is superior
- Ardeshir jan why did you changed my edit ? the interactive map is better because we can use the mouse as the pointer and there is no need of putting number on any part of Iran: If some one asks why did us numbered Tehran as number 1 , and south Khorashan as the 30th , what would be our answer? By ordering with alphabetical order, it's simpler to find a name in the list, but by using random numbers that would be difficult.Besides, the interactive map provokes the reader to click on map and know more about Iran.--Alborz Fallah (talk) 10:04, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
- Good points. especially about the numbering issues --Babakexorramdin (talk) 10:29, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
I personally support your changes, but we have to do these things democratically and properly. Otherwise we would be encouraging less established editors to change pages as they please. Let's start a discussion now. I am in favour for all of the above reasons and also because it is like the one on the Turkey (FA) page. I wanted to ask if the list of provinces next to it is necessary?Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:52, 25 February 2008 (UTC)
As no-one has objected to the new map then i will put it back in the article.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 18:05, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
- Better not to change the article as a parliament! If a change is right, it doesn't needs the opinion poll to be applied. If the change is wrong or there is conflict in a matter, it can be discussed and changed by consensus. I'm afraid acting like so, may disappoint the contributors!--Alborz Fallah (talk) 11:04, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
The links on the map are enough and a list of provinces isn't necessary. I'll get rid of the list now.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 19:45, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
3 Achaemenid images
There are currently THREE Achaemenid image in the early statehood section and one sassanid image. What happened to the medians, greeks and parthians? i'm going to replace the lion image with a Parthian image.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 16:55, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
Thank you Pejman47. Your image is more relevant, but I think that there are much more relevant Sassanid images than the Shapur bust. I'll search for some.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:40, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
History
I was thinking it would be better if we merged Early History and Pre-Islamic statehood and title it Pre-Islamic history. "Statehood" seems like an inaccurate term, since there was no such thing as citizenship or a nation state until the modern era, at least we understand it today. -Rosywounds (talk) 21:56, 26 February 2008 (UTC)
- Unlike Europe you can speak of statehood in the Iranian realm. Europeans often arrogantly disreagrd the fact that statehood in other parts of the world is older than theirs and then try to downplay these forms of statehoods, Statehood in the Iranian, Chinese and Indian realms are much older than the European one. These were state with satet apparatus and bureaucracy.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 12:43, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
Iranians generally agree that the Medians started the chain of Iranian dynasties, and other states were smaller and didn't merit a "State of Iran" but merited an "Iranian State".Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 16:23, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
- He was saying something else, which was very bad. He said that the Iranian states were not real states because a state cannot be ancient per definition. This is an arrogant European statement. because Europe had its states no earlier than the 17th century, they do not like to accept that there existed states in other parts of the world much earlier.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 22:56, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
Please don't make this political. they were states.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 16:27, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
- the notion of STATE is allways political!--Babakexorramdin (talk) 16:38, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
Geog pictures
There are two pictures in the geography section showing green grass. As most of you know, Iran isn't like that. There are some places like that but it is 2/3 desert and 1/3 mountainous, but it is hard to find a picture of a desert in Iran. I think one should be deleted so I'll delete the fars one(the damavand one kills two birds with one stone). —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ardeshire Babakan (talk • contribs) 16:32, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
>>> Iran is like that. Much grass, only central Iran is arid. North and West have much "grass". --Babakexorramdin (talk) 16:37, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
ok. to simplify it greatly, the Northwestern half of Iran is green and the south-eastern half is desert/mountains. I think one image full of greenery is enough.(forgive me for my unscientific terms but i can't be bothered to use them.)Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 17:51, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
Unification
In the pagge's infobox there is a unification section; but clearly, someone has made some mistakes. Someone has added the first constitution, Islamic revolution and the sassanid dynasty! These weren't unifications or even reunifications!The Parthian and Safavid dynasties are noted as reunifications but the section in the infobox is called Unification! Why does it say unified under Cyrus tG? In the text it says that the medians made the first emipre/state of iran. It should only have the Median dynasty.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 19:00, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
Unification is very easy. The Median Empire unified Iran. It was kept untill the end of the sassanids. Even Alexander and Seleucides did not disintegrate Iran. In the middle ages the Iranian unity was lost and the safavids reunified it and it is still kept.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 17:47, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
I think the terms Unification and reunification as it is used here are not useful. It should be Established by the Median Empire and Restored or if you like unified by the Safavids. But we should keep in mind that the Safavids did not restore the Median or Achamenid Empire but the Sassanid Empire. their political system as well as the territories over which they ruled is virtually the same as the sasanid empire (proper)--Babakexorramdin (talk) 17:52, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
So let's just mention the Medians and Safavids then. It feels strange. we're on at the same time doing the same thing!Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 17:52, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
I think Unification(I mean of Iran) is good enough for now. I don't think restoration is a good word here, but establishment seems better than unification, because if you say Iran was unified, it might mean Iran within it's current borders or historic borders or Iranian people or people of greater of iran or the unification of people who practice persian culture, but when you say Iran was established fewer questions are asked. You could say the Safavids Reestablished Iran (as a state) but restored suggests that they redid what was done in the median times.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 18:07, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
Just copy a featured page's format
Why not just copy Turkey's format... and please summarize the history section... overall this page is very shambly. lol —Preceding unsigned comment added by Micronie (talk • contribs) 15:57, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
We do generally look at other pages (which are featured) for guidance, but to copy another page is deeply immoral as we both undermine the work of the contributors of the Turkey page, and the work of people constantly improving the Iran page. There is also the fact that they are two different countries and to "Understand" Iran we may need to focus more on factors of Iran like the History and Culture sections, as all Iranians are proud of our history and culture.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 18:09, 8 March 2008 (UTC)
I'm not sure if I'm getting you right but, but if by two different countries you mean the historical Persia and modern Iran, I suggest you divide the history topic into to subs 'historical Persia' and 'Modern Iran', that would help everyone "understand" the difference between the two. I checked a number of other page's, all of them have much shorter history topics (e.g. Greece, Egypt, Britain) except for china which doesn't even have an economy topic. There is too much detail right now, I believe there is a page dedicated to 'History of Iran' isn't there? I'm Iranian, But I don't feel the need to force-feed our culture and history to others. You really look at other page's? Featured pages look nothing like this one. Thank y'all anyway , I'm not even helping, I feel kind of guilty I'm just being whiny. I don't know how to sign by the way March 12th
I meant Turkey and Iran are different. I know how you feel about force-feeding people and many times I've been frustrated by this. But the page has improved a lot. If you look at older editions of the page you would see what we were dealing with. It felt like they were trying to convert people or something. The history section is big but people think it should remain big, and these people have demoralized people who want to shorten it; by reverting edits and expanding it.. It should be big but not as big as it is now. About three screen-fulls is about right.The Turkey history section is about this big.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 15:43, 12 March 2008 (UTC) P.S. below the box thing where you write it says GFDL. go directly down and there are four wavy lines. click on that and save.
- I also agree that Turkey format is not a good example. We have shorten the history section as acompromise, but shorter than this is not possible. Iran has a long history. In contrast to Turkey Iran has continous history, while Turkish historiography tebnds to neglect the long and rich history of Anatolia prior to the Turkish era. Therefore Iran and Turkey are not comparable in this respect.I think the history section is now good enough. I should say that we UNFORTUNATELY were FORCED to shortehn this section, Unfortunalety many information is lost, but it is shorter as you wished.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 09:31, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
What could be comparable were Egypt and China, but those articles are not featured either. We are dealing here with Historic nations, so we should set different criteria with regard to the length of history section.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 09:33, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
With all due respect to Babakexorramdin but the history section is still a bit big. No one was Forced to shorten the article. Most people agreed that it was too big. Also, none of the information was lost as the information is already in their respective MAIN ARTICLES!!!!!Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 20:27, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
we Iranian wikipedians admitted to shortening only reluctantly, giving in to the demands of administrators hoping to elevate the article to the featured status. I do not know how many Iranian wikipedians were of this opinion. I was, and I know some. You can tyrace their discussion even in this talk page. --Babakexorramdin (talk) 10:43, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
I am also an Iranian Wikipedian and I support shortening the whole page and I know other people who share my point of view. Stop implying that Misplaced Pages is wrong and a few proud editors are right. I am also proud but that doesn't affect my view on the issue. We don't have to force-feed and impose our history onto readers. If you want to expand Misplaced Pages's information on Iranian history PLEASE edit History of Iran.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 16:57, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
- You act as you are very important but don't know certain things. I did not mean it in a rude manner though. I have spoken in favor of you to those "proud" wikipedians, but your behavior tells me I was wrong.--Babakexorramdin (talk) 17:31, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
I don't think that I am very important but maybe I act like it and I'm sorry if I do. The only thing I need to say is that main articles are there for a reason. I appreciate that you make your comments with no harm intended.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 11:29, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
Very important, not important... too much drama! I'm a nobody here by that account, so what? The history section is way too big. there is a HISTORY OF IRAN article, designated to inform anyone who wants to study History of Iran! this is the Iran page. it should be balanced. Nobody said remove the history section but man o man that's biiiig! no offense but keeping it this way for the sake of a group of people's "pride" is both selfish and foolish. I have no say on this though. Just giving an observer's opinion. Micronie (talk) 18:55, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
You're right. It is big and we should shorten it to around the size of the Turkey history section.Ardeshire Babakan (talk) 11:07, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
Late Modern era 1921 -
There is a mistake at the very beginning of the paragraph, as it says that Reza Khan overthrew the Qajar dynasty and became the Shah in 1921. This is not the case.
He overthrew the Dynasty in 1921, and what was left was effectively a constitutional monarchy without a monarch. He was Head of the Army for four years, if I am not mistaken, and then he was made Minister of War in 1925 by the Majlis. At the end of 1925, the Majlis passed a bill declaring that the constitutional monarchy would remain, and the foundation for Reza Khan to become the Shah was laid. Early in 1926, he was made the first Shah of the Pahlavi dynasty, not in 1921 directly after the coup.
In fact, the Iran article and the Reza Khan article on wikipedia contradict themselves. The Reza Khan article is more accurate in stating that Reza Khan was made Shah in 1925.
Albi 217.201.108.108 (talk) 11:11, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
You are right--Babakexorramdin (talk) 12:04, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
Sports
The brief section on the main Iran page devoted to sports contains errors. The sentences explaining that Iran is the origin of polo and the youthful demographic aren't well written.
More importantly, the following blurb about football claims that Iran was a World Cup finalist three times, which is not true. As the Sports in Iran article states, they've qualified for the tournament three times, not reached the finals. There should probably also be a line break between the football paragraph and the details of Iran's mountains. Thanks.
SunMachine (talk) 09:05, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
Avicenna's Canon of Medicine
Picture of a book is not very interesting by itself (btw what are those glasses doing there?)
Why not replace the book's picture with something else. Any opinion/idea? 69.116.243.83 (talk) 14:15, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
OK, what about this picture (from Timurid era) for a change?:
Persian people article needs some attention too
Dorood guys. Great job on this article, I am very proud of the great work here. Can you also give some attention to Persian people? That article is very poor right now and needs some improvement considering how important an ethnic group Persians have been and still are.
Persian vs "Farsi"
Encyclopedia Britannica, Encyclopedia Iranica and Encyclopedia of Islam use the term Persian and it is has been the common name used by scholars and scholarly material. --alidoostzadeh (talk) 11:50, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
Discrimination against male
Why my example of gender inequality (that male are only 30% of students) is frequently removed?
- There is no ACTIVE discrimination against males in Iran that I know of. It is against women, mostly through the Iranian law (ie. witness, divorce, etc). The reason to remove your comment was that it was not material and you could move it to education in Iran instead. 69.116.233.143 (talk) 17:44, 4 April 2008 (UTC)