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Hardeep Singh Nijjar

Killed in Canada on June 2023. It's important to mention that: He was reportedly organising an unofficial referendum in India for an independent Sikh nation at the time of this death.

References

1. Aljazeera. "Who was Hardeep Singh Nijjar whose killing triggered India-Canada tensions?". Retrieved 20 September 2023.

Biasedness and reversing edits.

@Southasianhistorian8 Please mention your reasoning for reverting a perfectly healthy edit calling it "puffery". I haven't deleted anything, just added more information regarding the movement. The "independence struggle seeking to create a separate homeland" line gives us a very objective idea of this whole movement than just calling it just a "separatist movement". How is this false praise/puffery? Aren't you just presuming Bad Faith on my part at this point? Also I did some other minor edits in the same edit, which got reverted by your blanket reversal. Care to explain what were wrong in those edits?

I'm assuming you're somewhat against using the word "independence" and only use the word "separatism" for this movement but that's not how wikipedia functions. This isn't an ideological battleground where one word must rule supreme because it benefits one party's interests.

I have also seen your user history and it's broadly India related edits with a lot of them having an apparent ideological/subjective stance. This article is "controversial" as well as having the "contentious tag", which makes your edits come into more scrutiny.

You have been warned multiple times by other users for multiple reasons, and some of them as recent as August 2024, and yet you continue doing the same thing.

Lastly, I don't want to have an Edit War. If you don't respect the dispute resolution process and continue reverting my edits I will have to contact an adminstrator, and not just for this edit. A professional editor/admin can easily see the patterns of editing and vandalism much better than me. SoloKnowHow83 (talk) 15:29, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Contact whomever you want to contact, it's obvious your edit undermines the neutrality of the page, in particular through your removal of the descriptor "militant" to describe the Punjab insurgency, even though it is common knowledge and there is an abundance of scholarly work that detail numerous Sikh separatist militants committing violent acts against civilians during this time, and your addition of the word "struggle" at the end of the lead, which clearly intends to evoke sympathy for the movement/ideology.

@RegentsPark, could you weigh in here? Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 15:37, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

And contrary to your convictions, it is you that is violating Misplaced Pages's norms and guidelines. WP:ONUS states that the burden lies upon the person seeking to change the status quo of an article to gain consensus to implement their changes, as you are trying to do. Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 15:40, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

@SoloKnowHow83, I'm fine with calling it an independence movement, but for now you need to reinstate "militant" to describe the Punjab insurgency and remove "struggle" from the lead. Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 15:53, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

@Southasianhistorian8 The whole insurgency was not "militant", parts of it were. The next line in the article tells us that. People interested in the militant part can go the specific article. Using a blanket statement like that here violates the neutrality standards.

I am ready to change the word "struggle" if you can give an explanation why it is not apt. Also please recommend other synonymous words we can use here. Thank you. SoloKnowHow83 (talk) 16:04, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

@Southasianhistorian8 I already gave my reasons to change the status quo but you're using WP:Stonewalling tactics. SoloKnowHow83 (talk) 15:57, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

@Southasianhistorian8 Answer the substantative questions without deviating.

The descriptor "militant" was used without viable citation in that line. You're using your own subjective standards here. It doesn't matter if you have abundance of scholarly work if they arent cited or to the context.

"Struggle" is often used with "Independence" but sure you again assume bad faith of "symapthy". You could have atleast changed the word but you used a blanket reversal.

@RegentsPark, I don't know who you're but please look at this users edit history and Talk Page. This doesn't seem like a unique thing. SoloKnowHow83 (talk) 15:54, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Per Misplaced Pages's rules, a lead does not need to include citations as long as the topic is discussed in the body, which it does. There is no consensus for including the word "struggle" to label the movement, so you are again contravening Misplaced Pages's rules by adding it. Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 15:57, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

@Southasianhistorian8 Nothing is airtight. Citations may not necessary for general cases but unique cases can arise where it maybe necessary. Anyway I am not asking for citations because I accept this is a "separatist" movement as has been discussed in this article. That's why I haven't removed it.

Misplaced Pages doesn't need consensus until there is a conflict arising, which it has. But Misplaced Pages also demands substantative arguments for removal of a word, presuming bad faith like a user having some kind of "sympathy" doesn't exactly fits that bill. "Independence struggle" is a very popular word and is used everywhere to describe "Indpendence movements". I used it to make the sentence better flowing and grammatically accurate.

I am nonetheless agrreable to a change and again ask you to recommend synonymous words. SoloKnowHow83 (talk) 16:20, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

If I didn't use the word "struggle" and used "movement", the sentence would be "Khalistan movement is an Independence movement..." which isn't the best grammatical way to express the idea. Never knew that my struggle to find an appropriate word would lead to this immense debate. SoloKnowHow83 (talk) 16:25, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Just to clarify, my main point of contention is the sentence at the end: "alleging their involvement in violent attacks and homicides on Canadian citizens supporting this struggle which replaced the sentence "Canadian Sikh separatists". Firstly because the citizens in Canada who support this movement are predominantly Sikhs, by including a broad label like "Canadian citizens", it would imply that the movement has significant support across religious and ethnic lines in Canada, and there is no evidence whatsoever to support that.

The inclusion of "supporting this struggle" strategically placed at the very end, to me at least, seems to be a tactic to unduly elicit sympathy for the movement; "struggle" is often appended to militant movements, many of which target civilians, as a way to absolve said movement and to portray it as a group of people fighting a more powerful and insidious opponent denying them a fundamental right. Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 17:18, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Third opinion

To the third opinion provider, please indicate whether you support the ending sentence in the paragraph to be:

1) In October 2024, Canada expelled the Indian High Commissioner to Canada and five other diplomats, alleging their involvement in violent attacks and homicides on Canadian Sikh separatists.

or

2) In October 2024, Canada expelled the Indian High Commissioner to Canada and five other diplomats, alleging their involvement in violent attacks and homicides on Canadian citizens supporting this struggle.

My stance is that the first version contains far more neutral, encyclopedic language as per the paragraph above: Just to clarify, my main point of contention is the sentence at the end: "alleging their involvement in violent attacks and homicides on Canadian citizens supporting this struggle which replaced the sentence "Canadian Sikh separatists". Firstly because the citizens in Canada who support this movement are predominantly Sikhs, by including a broad label like "Canadian citizens", it would imply that the movement has significant support across religious and ethnic lines in Canada, and there is no evidence whatsoever to support that. The inclusion of "supporting this struggle" strategically placed at the very end, to me at least, seems to be a tactic to unduly elicit sympathy for the movement; "struggle" is often appended to militant movements, many of which target civilians, as a way to absolve said movement and to portray it as a group of people fighting a more powerful and insidious opponent denying them a fundamental right.

SoloKnowHow83 disagrees and believes it to be neutral and unbiased. Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 03:47, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

Response to third opinion request:

This is the first official Third Opinion I've ever provided. I'm happy to help. I support option 1 for two reasons:1. "This struggle" is very unclear and unspecific. You can describe basically any political movement as a "struggle" as there would always be opposition, right? Imo, this is WP:PUFFERY and extends the claim longer than it should.2. Basically what SAH is saying; the use of the word "struggle" also "elicits sympathy for the movement". SAH seems to have explained it better than I could, so I'll just leave it like this, I agree with him.3. Also what SAH said; changing "Canadian Sikh separatists" to "Canadian citizens" is too broad for no reason.Again, first Third Opinion I've given. I don't really know how formal this is supposed to be, so I'll leave this as my answer. TheWikiToby (talk) 02:06, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

Thanks @TheWikiToby. I agree completely with your assessment. Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 02:35, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

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Suggest changing "Pakistan has long aspired to dismember India through its Bleed India strategy." with "The Pakistani military has long fomented separatist insurgencies in India as part of its Bleed India strategy."

This phrasing is intended to present less bias.

Suggest replacing " Megalonychidae (talk) 19:03, 25 October 2024 (UTC)

See what the source says. Capitals00 (talk) 10:39, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

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"To date, Canada has yet to provide any evidence of Indian involvement in the killing of Nijjar." should be changed to "Canada has not shared evidence of Indian involvement in the killing of Nijar, citing the need to protect sensitive intelligence sources and methods."

Source: https://www.theglobeandmail.com/politics/article-canadian-authorities-have-intelligence-that-india-was-behind-slaying/

Justification The line "To date, Canada has yet to provide any evidence of Indian involvement in the killing of Nijjar." is true but lacks context. Canada has cited the need to protect sensitive intelligence sources and methods in not releasing evidence. This is standard practise in intelligence contexts. The US has also separately corroborated Canada's linking of the killing to the Indian government, stating that intelligence shared by five eyes was what made the link. (https://apnews.com/article/canada-us-india-sikh-activist-killing-intelligence-c475ac129e09e5f1c9ebf68eaaf247ab) Hex93 (talk) 12:54, 5 November 2024 (UTC)

 Done Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 13:01, 5 November 2024 (UTC)

Canada-India diplomatic row

@Nyttend:, let's discuss the removed content here.

So I'm a bit flummoxed by your characterization of the content as not being relevant, the who row was spurred by India supposedly playing a role in the killing of Hardeep Singh Nijjar, a Khalistan leader in Canada who was involved in organizing numerous referendums in Canada surrounding the secession of Punjab from India, and he was accused by India of heading various Khalistani militant outfits. At the very, very least we need to mention that, given the significance of the event, I'd also say it should be in the lead. Following that, India and Canada expelled each others diplomats, an event that was a direct consequence of the killing, so I'd say that's relevant as well. In October 2024, Canada's RCMP alleged that Indian diplomats were involved in clandestine and covert operations which involved homicides, extortions, attacks on Sikh separatists aka Khalistanis, so how can you say that isn't relevant to the Khalistan movement? Strange.

I'm also pinging the two most recent, uninvolved editors on this page @Capitals00 and @Ratnahastin to see if they can also provide their thoughts on whether the Canada-India diplomatic row ought to be reinstated here. and if so, to what extent? Southasianhistorian8 (talk) 23:31, 12 November 2024 (UTC)

A whole section does not belong here. Maybe a few sentences on a relevant section would be enough. Capitals00 (talk) 03:34, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

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Article full of Misinformation, disinformation and Indian state propegenda. Part-1.

Targeting one community: By specifically saying two Sikh men were arrested, instead it should be two men were arrested.

Missing information: Australian authorities aquated/released those two men without any charges after appearing in court.

Missing information: Pro-india mob left there assigned protest spot in Melbourne and attacked/provoked pro-Khalistan people.

During a Khalistan referendum vote held in Melbourne, Australia in January 2023 , two separate brawls broke out between Khalistan supporters and pro-India demonstrators, leading to two people being injured and two Sikh men being arrested. The Victoria Police Department issued statements afterwards:“During the fight, flag poles were used by several men as weapons which caused physical injuries to multiple victims in which two victims were treated at the scene by paramedics” and “As a result of each incident a 34-year-old man and a 39-year-old man were arrested, and each issued with a penalty notice for riotous behaviour.” Australia's High Commissioner to India Barry O'Farrell condemned the incident. Superhuman007 (talk) 21:42, 2 December 2024 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. – Closed Limelike Curves (talk) 18:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

Article full of Misinformation, Disinformation and Indian state propegenda

Part-2.

Wrong discription of Amritpal Singh:

Amritpal Singh, is a Sikh activist not a self styled radical preacher, there was nothing radical in his work.

False Information: succession described as illegemate.

False Information: numerous preaching tours advocating for the creation of Khalistan. He worked against drugs and Sikh baptism only.

False information: He glorified the use of violence and weapons during public events. He never advocated for violence, keeping weapons for self defense is part of Sikh faith.

False information: alleging the organization's involvement in attempted murder, attacks on police personnel, and spreading disharmony in Punjab.

No involvement in attempted murder, no attack on police personnel, was not spreading any disharmony in Punjab.

In August 2022, Amritpal Singh, a self styled radical Indian preacher, came to prominence after being appointed as the head of Waris Punjab De (a Sikh political organization which lent support to pro-Khalistan figures and groups) immediately after Deep Sidhu's death (a succession described as illegitimate by the relatives and some associates of Sidhu). He subsequently embarked on a campaign and numerous preaching tours advocating for the creation of Khalistan and for Sikhs to receive baptism, imbibe religious austerities, and to shun drugs and other vices. He glorified the use of violence and weapons during public events. On 18 March 2023, Indian authorities initiated a crackdown on Waris Punjab De, alleging the organization's involvement in attempted murder, attacks on police personnel, and spreading disharmony in Punjab. An extensive manhunt for Singh ensued, who absconded and managed to evade police capture for 35 days. He was arrested on 23 April 2023. Superhuman007 (talk) 21:55, 2 December 2024 (UTC)

Article full of Misinformation, Disinformation and Indian state propegenda Part-3

False Information:

numerous violent attacks were reported in various locations. (No violent protests occurred).

False Information:

A mob of protesters attacked the Indian consulate in San Francisco, another mob attacked the Indian High Commission office in London and attempted to pull down the Indian flag off a pole, broke windows, and inflicted minor injuries on security staff.

There was no attack on Indian consulate in San Francisco, someone light up garbage dumb near the side of consulate, which was extinguished by Fire Department. Windows were not broken, security staff was not injured in London.

Pulling down a flag is not a crime in democratic countries.

False Claim/information by Rouge entity:

The NIA claimed that a group of protesters in San Francisco were exhorted to kill all representatives of the Indian government. On 21 March 2023, two men poured flammable material in the entrance of the consulate and attempted to set the San Francisco consulate on fire.

No plan of killing anyone at San Francisco Consolate. San Francisco is outside of Rouge Agency NIA's area of authority.

False Information & Missing Context:

In Washington, Khalistan supporters verbally intimidated and physically assaulted an Indian journalist covering the protests. In a Surrey protest, Sameer Kaushal, a journalist, was allegedly assaulted and harassed by Khalistan supporters. In the aftermath of the Surrey protest, Surrey RCMP spokesperson Cpl. Vanessa Munn confirmed police were investigating alleged assault involving a different victim and that the RCMP was seeking witnesses and video evidence. She stated “There is an assault investigation into the assault of one person who was in the crowd and did appear to be swarmed and assaulted by multiple people”.

No jourlists were attacked or targetted by any khalistan supporters.

RCMP's press release information posted here in article is only 1 side of story, other side has been interntionally hidden by India state.

Misinformation:

The Indian Ambassador to the US Taranjit Singh Sandhu was threatened with assassination by Khalistanis.

It was a protest (he was asked to be accountable for his work against Sikh killings under actions of Indian government) not threatening call for assassination.

Numerous protests, particularly among diaspora Sikhs, occurred in the aftermath of the Indian police's manhunt for Singh. While many transpired without incident, numerous violent attacks were reported in various locations. A mob of protesters attacked the Indian consulate in San Francisco, another mob attacked the Indian High Commission office in London and attempted to pull down the Indian flag off a pole, broke windows, and inflicted minor injuries on security staff. The NIA claimed that a group of protesters in San Francisco were exhorted to kill all representatives of the Indian government. On 21 March 2023, two men poured flammable material in the entrance of the consulate and attempted to set the San Francisco consulate on fire. In Washington, Khalistan supporters verbally intimidated and physically assaulted an Indian journalist covering the protests. In a Surrey protest, Sameer Kaushal, a journalist, was allegedly assaulted and harassed by Khalistan supporters. In the aftermath of the Surrey protest, Surrey RCMP spokesperson Cpl. Vanessa Munn confirmed police were investigating alleged assault involving a different victim and that the RCMP was seeking witnesses and video evidence. She stated “There is an assault investigation into the assault of one person who was in the crowd and did appear to be swarmed and assaulted by multiple people”. The Indian Ambassador to the US Taranjit Singh Sandhu was threatened with assassination by Khalistanis. Superhuman007 (talk) 22:29, 2 December 2024 (UTC)

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