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== White supremacy and Cuito Cuanavale == | |||
Howzit all, | |||
Per several separate discussions on ] and ] talk pages, I've decided to open one here concerning the relevancy of white supremacy to the ]. | |||
Over the past few weeks, {{u|Marco.natalino}} has been adding multiple, unreferenced statements describing South Africa and the ] as "white supremacist" here. I have countered that this is contentious language which is also irrelevant to a summary or description of the campaign itself. Marco has contended that references to the SADF's "white supremacist" ideology are ''necessary'' to help our readership understand the campaign. | |||
I disagree, for the following reasons: | |||
*1) Yes, this is an article about a military action undertaken by South Africa while it was ruled by a white minority government. But not everything that happened during apartheid had something explicitly to do with apartheid. References to apartheid and white supremacy are therefore irrelevant here. | |||
*2) I could understand Marco's reasoning if it was a case like the campaigns waged by ], in which the Wehrmacht undertook conquests to spread the Nazi ideology and the borders of the Nazi state, but this is different: South Africa launched a limited intervention on behalf of a regional ally (]). The South African military's goal was not spreading an ideology (like apartheid) by conquest. | |||
*3) Marco is under the mistaken impression that the South African forces were composed primarily of white combat personnel, when in fact most of the soldiers of any nationality who fought and died at Cuito Cuanavale were black Africans. South African units and formations such as ] and the ], which played key roles in the fighting, were predominantly black. Lacing the text with references to South Africa's "white supremacy" is misleading and paints Cuito Cuanavale as primarily a ''racial'' struggle when it fact it was not. | |||
I hate it when politics become intertwined with military history articles, I really do. My take on the matter is let's focus on the tactical aspects of the various engagements, the casualties, the offensives, etc. Turning this into an ideological or political discussion is what I want to avoid, and I'm increasingly suspicious that this is an example of POV-pushing which seeks to vindicate one side by painting the other in a decidedly distasteful light. | |||
Thanks, --] ] 01:21, 7 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
:REPLY: | |||
:As an editor who has contributed to or written some of the articles on the South African Border War Operations, I would like to express an opinion on the ongoing issue of the last few days. Please note, I have not made major contributions to the article that has created this discussion though I do believe the article needs upgrading. | |||
:I have attempted, when contributing to Border war articles, to bring a neutral outlook to the battles and present the facts, which are sometimes hard to find. I have stayed away from some of the clearly outrageous articles, websites, disinformation and propaganda from the SWAPO, FAPLA, Cuban and South African sides. | |||
:I have stayed away from politically labelling SWAPO/PLAN and other organisations. That is for the SWAPO/PLAN article and other articles were editors can discuss its political ideology and motivation and a good reader can research that via the linking system. | |||
:FAPLA/MPLA's/Cuban and Soviet forces philosophy is again a discussion for a section within their own articles as it should be in South African Defence Force article. But all should be referenced from respected articles and publication and were there are disagreements, all sides of arguments can be presented. | |||
:I have treated all sides in this conflict as soldiers who did their duty, some reluctantly and others patriotically but with the aim that the service to their country was not forgotten. I have not labelled them as terrorists, white racists or supremacists. They did their duty and their effort, whether right or wrong, is a decision for the readers conscience. And this is what we have attempted to do when writing articles about South African history prior to 1994; present it as it was. There is no place for labelling. Will we need to describe the Vietnam War battles participants as the "imperialist Americans forces attacked the peasant peoples army of Vietnam?" Were will it end? | |||
:All wars have a strategic and tactical aspect. We have attempted to discuss the long term strategic aspect of the Southern African wars in two articles, the Angolan Civil War and the South African Border War and this is where the reasons for the wars origins and the political ideology behind the participants should be discussed. A good reader will always read further using the in-article links. The tactical aspect are the battles themselves and we have attempted, with sometimes limited sources to outline a daily account of all sides of the conflict. This is what those article are about. What happened, where, when and to who. Keep the philosophical arguments to the other articles. | |||
:As for the question concerning whether the South African Defence Force was racist, I will express an opinion. The SADF obeyed the philosophical ideology of the government of the day. Yes, they were used to enforce apartheid policies internally when the South African Police could not cope. Yes the SADF, through the Directorate of Military Intelligence, did use its power to destabilise Southern African nations on behalf of the government. Yes, the SADF backed UNITA to ensure that southern Angola would not be dominated by SWAPO and ensuring no early independence for Namibia. The SADF did have black members in specialised units but how integrated they were is open for discussion and another article. | |||
:Yes, a strong military will keep a political system in power and project its ideology, and this is happening in many parts of the world this very day. The SADF was mainly a white conscript army and therefore was made up of many political persuasions. Were some members of the SADF racists? Yes. And there were many who weren't. Most had no option but to serve while some just followed blindly believing their elders knew best. Some potential conscripts had the courage to join the other side, leave the country or go to jail for their convictions. Hindsight is wonderful. Save the philosophical arguments for the main articles about the origins and overviews of the wars, leave the tactical battles alone. ] (]) 11:21, 7 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
::I'm taking edits from Marco as an example (not sure if this is the full extent of the editing?). The reference to this being an action of the Apartheid-era SADF seems justified given that the so-called "border wars" were fought as part of the South African Government's attempts to sustain the existence of the entire apartheid system (the thinking being that it was necessary to have a layer of either friendly or greatly destabilised "buffer" states between South Africa and other African countries as part of efforts to suppress the pro-democracy/majority rule movement in South Africa). The SADF was a core element of that strategy, as well as being a core element of the Apartheid regime. As such, this helps readers to understand the context in which the battle was fought. The mention of "white supremacist" here seems unnecessary though: while it's factually correct, it doesn't seem to relate to anything at all in the text it was added to. ] (]) 09:48, 8 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::I edited it out after looking through several military history articles, in particular ones involving the ], and they didn't mention the white supremacy. For WW2 all of that is contained in links to the government of the era and all the other context that is naturally linked in such articles. The government they were fighting for at the time speaks for itself in this regard. Since the article uses the flag of apartheid South Africa and explicitly states it in the opening, I think such commentary should be left out.] (]) 03:06, 9 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
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Hello to all who have been working on this page selflessly and congratulations on your work. I find that the article is of better quality now, compared to what it was a few days ago. Thank you all those who have interacted with me on this topic in such good faith and blunt honesty. Hope you all the best, and keep on the good work. Now I must, in respect for Katangais and all the others, reply. | |||
We should all focus on writing accurately, using common language and proper concepts. I have no quarrel with specific words and sensitivities, and I don`t really care if the words "white supremacist" are written before the words "South Africa" or "SADF" here or anywhere else. What I care about is that when some kid comes here to learn about the subject, he or she will find a well written article with all the factual and contextual information needed for an understanding of the topic. For all I know, the "apharteid era" South Africa does accurately describe the context, and so does "white supremacist". It is a simple matter of basic logic and conceptual definition ("apartheid" is a member of the set "white supremacy"), which I believe we all understand without the need of further philosophical debates! Now, focusing on the reader, we all know that if we keep fighting over specific words the article will decrease in quality. I assume none of us wants that. Having that in mind, I agree with Nick-D on his last point, as in many others. | |||
On the other hand, to put it frankly, I urge you all to try and keep your personal opinions and feelings out of the way when writing an encyclopedic article. There should no space here for "I hate when people mix this and that". Also, accusations of "POV-pushing" thrown in thin air are, in fact, against basic premises of this website (AGF). I must also sincerely disagree, in very strong terms, with the idea that an article about a battle should only focus on military movements and casualties. This may be the case sometimes, but not always. The basics of writing about an historic event involve contextualizing it. Regarding war history, when a series of engagements achieve political significance, as this battle did, contextualizing the battle is important. And contextualizing a battle means, at least, giving context and meaning to those who are fighting. That is why I wrote to Katangais this: | |||
"The community of users that have helped make wikipedia a good starting point for information on military history is not supposed to be insulated. Excessive references to ideology should be suppressed in the name of good prose, of course. But, on this case, as in other historical cases (the most obvious being nazi germany, but there are others), such references help the reader understand the subject at hand better. Also, in the case of this specific article the very interest of the military event is intertwined with its historical-political interest (that is the reason the Cold War is discussed). I believe that it was with a good intention that someone first mentioned the marxist quality of FAPLA. If I didn`t know Angola history, I would like that information to be in the article. The same goes for SADF. So I will revert the change. Regarding the SADF article, I found it well written. Now, if you or others have an issue with the concept of white supremacy, I suggest you discuss it in the homonymous article." | |||
Then, after Kantagais kindly explained to me some of the minutiae of white supremacist law and practice relating to the mandate and recruitment restrictions of the SADF, he made the BOLD claim that apartheid had nothing to do with the Battle of Cuito Cuonavale, leading me to write this: | |||
"The point that white supremacy had nothing to do with the battle is misguided. We may all have our opinions, but that`s not what wikipedia is about, as we know. I would love (sincerely) to see a quotation for that claim, it would totally change not only my view but the view of historians in general. So I highly recommend Katangais to spread the word to the world, if this is true. As it stands now, it seems to be a consensual view - again, help me if I`m wrong - not only of historians but also of all the main powers involved in the conflict that white supremacy was indeed an important aspect of the whole thing. The idea that "the actual battle" is about casualties, military movements and whatnot contradicts one simple premise of war history (and history in general): why? Why were people fighting a battle? | |||
These are, in sum, my two cents on this article. Thank you all, and good night. | |||
::The battle was part of the Angolan Civil War, which in turn was part of the Cold War - an exact parallel of the Vietnam War of that same time period. Both superpowers had proxies, whom they supported with money, materiel and "diplomacy". The prima facie war here was the Angolan Civil War between the Marxist MPLA and their opponents UNITA. At the second level it was a battle between the Communist dictatorship of Cuba and the pro-capitalist South Africa. At the highest level it was a contest between the USSR who backed their proxies Cuba and the MPLA, versus the USA who backed their proxies South Africa and UNITA. All parties also had their own private objectives - MPLA wanted to establish a dictatorship and avoid the inconvenience of democracy, while UNITA wanted to escape annihilation. Dictatorial Cuba wanted to maintain the appearance of fathering a global Marxist revolution in Africa, while apartheid South Africa wanted to keep the armies of black Marxist dictatorship away from its own borders. We cannot rehash the ideologies of the entire war in every article about every battle ever fought, and we do not follow that approach in any other article about any other battle. This was not a battle about apartheid, it was a very small piece of the Cold War, where one of the parties coincidentally happened to be the army of an apartheid government. The anti-apartheid ANC likes to claim it was a battle about apartheid, and that they played a part in it, but that is just ANC propaganda. None of the many participants in this war had clean hands, but that is the nature of war. ] (]) 09:46, 9 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
:::This perspective is generally the one I took - simply because the apartheid government was the government of the day when South Africa intervened in the Angolan Civil War doesn't mean that the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale was a battle about white supremacy and apartheid. | |||
:::Marco says he wants a source for the above statement (the "BOLD claim" he references), but the burden of proof rests on him since he's the one who first suggested otherwise: I'd like to know where exactly he got the impression the principles of apartheid and white supremacy were integral to the Cuito campaign. He stated ] that it's due to South Africa "enforcing apartheid against black insurgency", which is a statement so nonsensical I'm beginning to wonder if what we have here is a language barrier (as well as a rather over-generalised grasp of the conflict's dimensions) instead of a serious content dispute. I if he was confusing Cuito Cuanavale and the ] with ], but Marco has yet to respond to my inquiry on that particular topic. --] ] 12:23, 9 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
Ok, then: | |||
== Equipment section == | |||
Davies, Robert. "After Cuito Cuanavale: The new regional conjuncture and the sanctions question." in: Orkin, Mark, ed. Sanctions against apartheid. New Africa Books, 1989. | |||
Gleijeses, Piero. Visions of freedom: Havana, Washington, Pretoria, and the struggle for Southern Africa, 1976-1991. UNC Press Books, 2013. p.359 ] (]) 17:46, 10 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
The chart and list of military hardware in the equipment section is uncited and unnecessary. Some of it also appears to be blatantly inaccurate, as well; for instance, there is no proof that FAPLA deployed Engesa trucks and BTR-40/152 APCs anywhere near Cuito Cuanavale, or that the SADF utilised Eland armoured cars and Westland Wasp helicopters during Ops Moduler, Hooper, and Packer. Yes, this equipment was in their respective inventories at the time, but none of it was actually used in the battle. Elands were replaced by the Ratel-60 and Ratel-90 in all external ops after 1984, and I've found nothing to indicate Westland Wasps were ever flown over missions in Angola. All the FAPLA trucks photographed and documented during the campaign were GAZs or Urals, and the very elderly BTR-40/152 series went out of service in the early 1980s, being last spotted during Op Protea in 1981. These are two examples; I could name others - such as the Walther pistols and the minibuses - which are also uncited and appear to be the product of original research. | |||
:OK, thanks for that but the (Gleijeses, pg. 359) just states what we already know: that the Cubans became determined to reinforce the FAPLA brigades south of Cuito with more men and weapons, that FAPLA persevered in spite of appalling setbacks, and that they realised the SADF's air superiority had to be broken. These are all tactical details. Nowhere is apartheid or white supremacy even mentioned. | |||
I say the chart and the equipment list must go, although a general summary of the equipment can be allowed to remain under that section header. --] ] 04:05, 9 January 2017 (UTC) | |||
::Agreed. Only include these details if its both correct AND useful. Sometimes, less is more. ] (]) 12:48, 9 January 2017 (UTC) | |||
== Edit warring and Warning to all editors regarding SADF casualties. == | |||
Katangais I am truly fed up with your lack of good faith. You`re lost, changing your position gradually without ever conceding that you`re wrong. First you said apartheid had ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO DO WITH IT. Then you weaseled your way through meaningless expressions like "integral part" and so on. Now you`re circling around the topic like a child. What do you mean by "direct impact"? Have you read it? Have you read the direct quotations from u.s. officials I have referenced just for you? Have you got anything to say about it, honestly? Forget the ghost you built in your head, nobody thinks that apartheid was such a big important part of it, and everyone agrees the cold war is an important part of it, bigger than apartheid. What these simple, non-paywalled sources point out, as everyone does, is that every single actor that has played a part in this battle saw apartheid as an aspect of the battle. It was particularly important for Cuba and the United States, as the sources make clear. Now, let`s try this like we`re in kindergarten: why was this "cold war" battle so lacking in u.s. support? We may wonder as much as we like, but the sources i`ve given, and there would be many more if paywall wasn`t a problem, all point out to apartheid. There, is that enough? Would you please give up? ] (]) 01:33, 11 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
I have changed the SADF casulties back to 86, the claim is backed here <br></br>. 79 dead at The Battle , +3 (On 11 Nov 1987),+3 (15 Nov 2987),+1 (25 Nov 1987) for a Total of 86.] (]) 13:00, 20 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:Marco, nobody here is contesting that apartheid must be considered in light of the greater strategic implications of the border war, as so helpfully noted by {{u|Nick-D}}. But as {{u|Wdford}}, {{u|ObscureFruits}}, and {{u|Conlinp}} have stated (and they are free to correct me if I'm misrepresenting their points here), it isn't ideal to go about rehashing the particulars of every ideology in articles about specific battles which had nothing especially to do with said ideology (ie "capitalist Americans" in ], "zionist Israelis" in ], and so on). I maintain, per Wdford's comments, that apartheid had nothing especially to do with the ''specific'' ], since it wasn't the motivation for the SADF's intervention (the dynamics of the then-ongoing Angolan Civil War were), nor did anti-apartheid movements play a significant role in the fighting (although of course SWAPO and the ANC's armed wings were present, their participation was minimal). That's what I meant by my language - "integral part of" and "direct impact on", and I'm sorry if that wasn't made clear to you. | |||
::Some problems arise. First, why do you title this thread "Edit warring and Warning"? What kind of attitude does that reflect? Second, Polack openly admits that all reliable sources place the SADF casualties around 40, but then adds the line "although other information suggested that at least 71 soldiers had been killed during that period ..". He doesn't explain who are the sources of the "other information", so readers cannot assess the reliability thereof. Are we expected to take this comment as fact? Misplaced Pages is based on reliable sources. A passing comment attributed to uncited sources, in a book written by a lawyer in a colonial tax haven, is not good enough to out-weigh the reliable military history sources on the subject. ] (]) 14:29, 20 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:Secondly I took the time to peruse your sources and they do not "all point out to apartheid" as you suggested, nor could I find a reference in either source for your opinion that "every single actor that has played a part in this battle saw apartheid as an aspect of the battle", which looks to be an example of ]. Reading a specific passage in Google Books is not difficult, and with regards to a single chapter can be easily accomplished by opening the same page in multiple browsers or on another device. | |||
::: All views should be considered so. Not Just the "Oficial" version.] (]) 15:46, 21 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
::::No, that's not correct. See ], which states that "Articles should be based on reliable, third-party, published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy." Polack actually mentions some of the reliable historical sources, admits that they all argue around a number of about 42, but then throws in the line that "other information suggested" a much higher number. He does not state where that other information came from, what it was based on, or how reliable it is. Then he assumes the "other information" is more correct than the reliable sources, without clarifying why he does this. Per wikipolicy, in these cases the article must be based on the information from the reliable sources, not on arbitrary uncited "views". You have been in enough edit wars to know that already. Please don't edit-war on this article as well. ] (]) 10:05, 23 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:: Read page 168 at the link.] (]) 12:25, 23 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::Page 168 is based on page 167, where he admits that the reliable sources state 42 casualties, and then he throws in the line that "other information suggested" a much higher number. Read pg 167 as well. You cannot over-turn the reliable sources with an uncited anonymous "view". ] (]) 15:13, 23 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:: I will only repeat this once, the book give deep details about the losses suffered by the SADF during the Battle, with names, dates locations and circuntances. If you dont like the fact that 86 South African soldiers died hence more reported losses than the oficial 31 dead, thats no reason to revert them. Thats VANDALISM if you think the author is not a reliable because it gives a higher tally than SADF officers gave at that time, thats your POV. And all your rethoric is just that, empty.] (]) 20:15, 23 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:: Extract from the book: "The SAAF casualties for the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale from Sep 1987 to May 1988 were 4 killed with 1 severy wounded, with SADF losses seventy five....." , "..a total of 79 South African dead", "..there was a increase to eighty-one", " there were three aditional deaths", "...together make it eighty six".] (]) 20:23, 23 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:: Read '''all majority and significant minority views''' at ], so dont revert my last edit ].] (]) 20:29, 23 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:::I'll repeat this yet again - Misplaced Pages articles are based on reliable sources, not arbitrary rumors. The list of named casualties in the book adds up to 42 - as you well know. The book admits that the reliable sources cluster around that number. Then the book adds the line that "other information suggested" a much higher number, without clarifying where this information comes from. On the next page it says "with SADF losses seventy five", as though this is now established fact, but it has no basis for this number except for the "other information suggested". This anonymous information is thus NOT WP:RS, and thus it doesn't qualify for Misplaced Pages articles. On the other hand, numerous official sources agree on the number of 42. | |||
:Furthermore I think a general consensus has been reached that we exclude the out of context references, whether to or the (you've added this adjective to both), as "white supremacist". You seem to have agreed with Nick-D that it doesn't particularly relate to anything in the lead, so that's something this discussion has accomplished. I certainly don't see it as an example of a circular argument. | |||
:::Where WP:RS says '''all majority and significant minority views''', it means '''reliable''' minority views, not arbitrary anonymous rumors. Even if this was a reliable minority view - which it isn't - you would need to say something like "the majority of reliable sources state that casualties were a maximum of 42, whereas one reliable minority view says 86". You cannot state the 86 number in isolation, as though its an uncontested fact. | |||
:::Please explain why you titled this thread "Edit warring and Warning"? | |||
:::] (]) 21:54, 23 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:'''Comment''' I agree with {{u|Wdford}} that Polack is not a credible source for the claim of 86 casualties. Unless Polack specifically names and specifes the time, place and circumstances of each of the casualties the claim has no real credibility. ] (]) 14:34, 24 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
:Regarding the mentions of apartheid, I continue to disagree with its inclusion in the lead for the concerns already stated above, and those made by the other editors already referenced - which you've repeatedly failed to address. --] ] 05:04, 11 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
::: https://books.google.com.pe/books?id=LzfEAgAAQBAJ&pg=PT170&lpg=PT170&dq=Casualties+of+the+Battle+of+Cuito+Cuanavale&source=bl&ots=N_88VvjjOA&sig=t-6MvP7oSGY3pQmcSkeS8hyQt-8&hl=es&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjt-MDegMnNAhVP5GMKHbhiB2E4FBDoAQgZMAA#v=snippet&q=Casualties&f=false | |||
::::As has been pointed out to you many times already, this book cannot match the proper historical works as a reliable source. Please stop edit warring. ] (]) 21:38, 24 March 2017 (UTC) | |||
== Linking CODESA to battle of Cuito Cuanavale == | |||
:::Let's also keep in mind here please that the Robert Davies cited here is in fact ], a leading member of the South African Communist Party and a long-serving member of the ANC government. He was still hiding in exile in Mozambique when he wrote this contribution, he is hardly objective on the subject of apartheid or the SADF, and we can reasonably question whether he can be regarded as a reliable source on the topic. As a senior member of the ANC leadership structure, he could hardly deviate from the ANC party line and tell the truth about events at Cuito, assuming he even had accurate information to begin with. However even he writes that Cuito was merely a "setback" for the SADF, rather than a defeat as has been claimed by some of his communist colleagues (pg 198), and he openly admits that the SADF never attempted to capture the town in the first place (pg 224). ] (]) 10:50, 12 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
This comment, which I'm copying here from my talk page for further discussion, refers to . ] (]) 10:12, 9 October 2018 (UTC) | |||
I don't wish to get involved in an edit war over the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale. I produced a TV series, ''Death of Apartheid'', which was written by Allister Sparks. I think the CODESA negotiations followed from De Klerk's decision to release Mandela and unban the ANC and SACP. The CODESA negotiations did not follow from the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale in 1988. The cited info, ''Shaking Hands With Billy'' does not look like a history book which is comparable with ''Tomorrow Is Another Country'', the book Allister Sparks wrote while I was collaborating with him. ] (]) 01:13, 9 October 2018 (UTC) | |||
Katangais, I understand what you are saying now, it is just that it is different from what you have written before. But let`s move on. Your idea of what Cuito Cuanavale is ("a battle" strictu sensu) excludes a lot of what the battle means, in terms of contemporary world history, to the people who has written about it, and, most importantly, to the people who will try to learn about it it right here. I`ll repeat: those who write about war history should not to be insulated from the rest of the wikipedia community. To profess your point of views on what the battle is does not follow the criteria we use here. | |||
: I reverted as the view seems fairly widespread (it's even mentioned in the lead), and was sourced, so I don't see it as ] as per your edit summary. I agree it's not particularly well-sourced, so further/better sources should be found. Rather tag with {{Additional citation needed}} than remove. ] (]) 10:17, 9 October 2018 (UTC) | |||
As I have said before, I`ve got no quarrel with the expression white supremacist being excluded or included, I have a quarrel with making the article worse because of personal sensitivities. When I first used it in the second paragraph there was a logic behind it: it just made good sense, since the ideology of one side was mentioned, to mention the ideology of the other! Then came arcane discussions on the nature of SADF and whatnot. Now the text is different, so be it. | |||
::{{reply to|Greenman}} What the Lead states is: | |||
Of course, one comes to wonder how come when the ideology professed by only one side of the battle is mentioned people think it is all good and well, congratulations to us all on our impartiality and objectivity. But when a simple, factual reference to South Africa ideological drive is mentioned then "oh, we shouldn`t be talking about this here", "oh, the article doesn`t look good that way" etc. And then a huge argument follows. All because of a simple factual reference! There must be a reason for that. | |||
::Today, the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale is credited by some with ushering in the first round of ], mediated by the ], which secured the withdrawal of Cuban and South African troops from Angola and Namibia by 1991. | |||
::This is undoubtedly true. Cuito Cuanavale did lead to the ]. That is not the same thing as claiming Cuito Cuanavale led to CODESA, which I still believe to be an instance of ] ] (]) 13:20, 9 October 2018 (UTC) | |||
Wdford, I 100% agree Davies is biased, but that is not the point. I knew this objection could come, and I think it would be a fair objection if I was making some claim on other aspects of the battle. But the page number I`ve given points to a simple passage where the Apartheid was discussed by u.s. cold warriors as an important aspect of the battle, and that was just me trying to give one reference to the generally accepted idea (but not here, apparently) that the powers involved saw apartheid as an important aspect of the battle. Now, I suppose no one is arguing that Cuba and South Africa saw apartheid as an important aspect... right? That would be crazy. ] (]) 03:26, 14 December 2016 (UTC) | |||
This article is quite clearly written with a South African (Apartheid era) bias. It will be wearisome to address and source but it's probably necessary, as the insistence that the battle resulted in continued stalemate obscures the associated Geo-political consequences - the withdrawal of SADF forces from Angola, and soon afterwards from Namibia, all important for themselves as well as for the ramifications in South Africa. The loss of its ability project military force across southern Africa was central to the South African government's realization that apartheid was no longer sustainable. This perspective represents the consensus of most regional analysts. When my calendar clears next month, I'll start to assemble the citations. | |||
:Please give us a page number in Davies' text to consult as a reference. So far you've only mentioned the chapter itself, without giving us an actual page number. Use of the term "generally accepted idea" suggests original research, which is why I've been somewhat wary of your claims that apartheid constituted an important part of the battle. However, I'm happy to be proven wrong. Again, please just give us something to work with - a page number of a text that actually says that, from a reliable source per ]. | |||
] (]) 03:11, 28 April 2020 (UTC) | |||
== History == | |||
:{{u|RileyBugz}} specifically asked that you provide a source for your claims on {{u|Dodger67}}'s talk page but you failed to do so. Since then you have provided sources that were either non-specific (Davies) or contained absolutely no information pertaining to apartheid (Gleijeses). | |||
To what extent did the consiquences of the battle of the cuito cuanavale influence political changes in South Africa in the late 1980 ] (]) 02:02, 29 April 2022 (UTC) | |||
:You're also mistaken if you think the ideology of one belligerent in this conflict is being afforded disproportionate emphasis. In the interests of fairness, I will remind you that I did put forth the suggestion we omit all ideological references to Marxism-Leninism in addition to apartheid (this is what Conlinp was also recommending per his comments above), but you . So don't pretend that this is solely because the editorship weighs down on one side more heavily than the other. --] ] 07:34, 14 December 2016 (UTC) |
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Equipment section
The chart and list of military hardware in the equipment section is uncited and unnecessary. Some of it also appears to be blatantly inaccurate, as well; for instance, there is no proof that FAPLA deployed Engesa trucks and BTR-40/152 APCs anywhere near Cuito Cuanavale, or that the SADF utilised Eland armoured cars and Westland Wasp helicopters during Ops Moduler, Hooper, and Packer. Yes, this equipment was in their respective inventories at the time, but none of it was actually used in the battle. Elands were replaced by the Ratel-60 and Ratel-90 in all external ops after 1984, and I've found nothing to indicate Westland Wasps were ever flown over missions in Angola. All the FAPLA trucks photographed and documented during the campaign were GAZs or Urals, and the very elderly BTR-40/152 series went out of service in the early 1980s, being last spotted during Op Protea in 1981. These are two examples; I could name others - such as the Walther pistols and the minibuses - which are also uncited and appear to be the product of original research.
I say the chart and the equipment list must go, although a general summary of the equipment can be allowed to remain under that section header. --Katangais (talk) 04:05, 9 January 2017 (UTC)
- Agreed. Only include these details if its both correct AND useful. Sometimes, less is more. Wdford (talk) 12:48, 9 January 2017 (UTC)
Edit warring and Warning to all editors regarding SADF casualties.
I have changed the SADF casulties back to 86, the claim is backed here
. 79 dead at The Battle , +3 (On 11 Nov 1987),+3 (15 Nov 2987),+1 (25 Nov 1987) for a Total of 86.Mr.User200 (talk) 13:00, 20 March 2017 (UTC)
- Some problems arise. First, why do you title this thread "Edit warring and Warning"? What kind of attitude does that reflect? Second, Polack openly admits that all reliable sources place the SADF casualties around 40, but then adds the line "although other information suggested that at least 71 soldiers had been killed during that period ..". He doesn't explain who are the sources of the "other information", so readers cannot assess the reliability thereof. Are we expected to take this comment as fact? Misplaced Pages is based on reliable sources. A passing comment attributed to uncited sources, in a book written by a lawyer in a colonial tax haven, is not good enough to out-weigh the reliable military history sources on the subject. Wdford (talk) 14:29, 20 March 2017 (UTC)
- All views should be considered so. Not Just the "Oficial" version.Mr.User200 (talk) 15:46, 21 March 2017 (UTC)
- No, that's not correct. See WP:RS, which states that "Articles should be based on reliable, third-party, published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy." Polack actually mentions some of the reliable historical sources, admits that they all argue around a number of about 42, but then throws in the line that "other information suggested" a much higher number. He does not state where that other information came from, what it was based on, or how reliable it is. Then he assumes the "other information" is more correct than the reliable sources, without clarifying why he does this. Per wikipolicy, in these cases the article must be based on the information from the reliable sources, not on arbitrary uncited "views". You have been in enough edit wars to know that already. Please don't edit-war on this article as well. Wdford (talk) 10:05, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
- All views should be considered so. Not Just the "Oficial" version.Mr.User200 (talk) 15:46, 21 March 2017 (UTC)
- Read page 168 at the link.Mr.User200 (talk) 12:25, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
- Page 168 is based on page 167, where he admits that the reliable sources state 42 casualties, and then he throws in the line that "other information suggested" a much higher number. Read pg 167 as well. You cannot over-turn the reliable sources with an uncited anonymous "view". Wdford (talk) 15:13, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
- I will only repeat this once, the book give deep details about the losses suffered by the SADF during the Battle, with names, dates locations and circuntances. If you dont like the fact that 86 South African soldiers died hence more reported losses than the oficial 31 dead, thats no reason to revert them. Thats VANDALISM if you think the author is not a reliable because it gives a higher tally than SADF officers gave at that time, thats your POV. And all your rethoric is just that, empty.Mr.User200 (talk) 20:15, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
- Extract from the book: "The SAAF casualties for the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale from Sep 1987 to May 1988 were 4 killed with 1 severy wounded, with SADF losses seventy five....." , "..a total of 79 South African dead", "..there was a increase to eighty-one", " there were three aditional deaths", "...together make it eighty six".Mr.User200 (talk) 20:23, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
- Read all majority and significant minority views at WP:RS, so dont revert my last edit User:Wdford.Mr.User200 (talk) 20:29, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
- Some problems arise. First, why do you title this thread "Edit warring and Warning"? What kind of attitude does that reflect? Second, Polack openly admits that all reliable sources place the SADF casualties around 40, but then adds the line "although other information suggested that at least 71 soldiers had been killed during that period ..". He doesn't explain who are the sources of the "other information", so readers cannot assess the reliability thereof. Are we expected to take this comment as fact? Misplaced Pages is based on reliable sources. A passing comment attributed to uncited sources, in a book written by a lawyer in a colonial tax haven, is not good enough to out-weigh the reliable military history sources on the subject. Wdford (talk) 14:29, 20 March 2017 (UTC)
- I'll repeat this yet again - Misplaced Pages articles are based on reliable sources, not arbitrary rumors. The list of named casualties in the book adds up to 42 - as you well know. The book admits that the reliable sources cluster around that number. Then the book adds the line that "other information suggested" a much higher number, without clarifying where this information comes from. On the next page it says "with SADF losses seventy five", as though this is now established fact, but it has no basis for this number except for the "other information suggested". This anonymous information is thus NOT WP:RS, and thus it doesn't qualify for Misplaced Pages articles. On the other hand, numerous official sources agree on the number of 42.
- Where WP:RS says all majority and significant minority views, it means reliable minority views, not arbitrary anonymous rumors. Even if this was a reliable minority view - which it isn't - you would need to say something like "the majority of reliable sources state that casualties were a maximum of 42, whereas one reliable minority view says 86". You cannot state the 86 number in isolation, as though its an uncontested fact.
- Please explain why you titled this thread "Edit warring and Warning"?
- Wdford (talk) 21:54, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
- Comment I agree with Wdford that Polack is not a credible source for the claim of 86 casualties. Unless Polack specifically names and specifes the time, place and circumstances of each of the casualties the claim has no real credibility. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 14:34, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
- https://books.google.com.pe/books?id=LzfEAgAAQBAJ&pg=PT170&lpg=PT170&dq=Casualties+of+the+Battle+of+Cuito+Cuanavale&source=bl&ots=N_88VvjjOA&sig=t-6MvP7oSGY3pQmcSkeS8hyQt-8&hl=es&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjt-MDegMnNAhVP5GMKHbhiB2E4FBDoAQgZMAA#v=snippet&q=Casualties&f=false
- As has been pointed out to you many times already, this book cannot match the proper historical works as a reliable source. Please stop edit warring. Wdford (talk) 21:38, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
- https://books.google.com.pe/books?id=LzfEAgAAQBAJ&pg=PT170&lpg=PT170&dq=Casualties+of+the+Battle+of+Cuito+Cuanavale&source=bl&ots=N_88VvjjOA&sig=t-6MvP7oSGY3pQmcSkeS8hyQt-8&hl=es&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjt-MDegMnNAhVP5GMKHbhiB2E4FBDoAQgZMAA#v=snippet&q=Casualties&f=false
Linking CODESA to battle of Cuito Cuanavale
This comment, which I'm copying here from my talk page for further discussion, refers to this edit. Greenman (talk) 10:12, 9 October 2018 (UTC)
I don't wish to get involved in an edit war over the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale. I produced a TV series, Death of Apartheid, which was written by Allister Sparks. I think the CODESA negotiations followed from De Klerk's decision to release Mandela and unban the ANC and SACP. The CODESA negotiations did not follow from the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale in 1988. The cited info, Shaking Hands With Billy does not look like a history book which is comparable with Tomorrow Is Another Country, the book Allister Sparks wrote while I was collaborating with him. Mick gold (talk) 01:13, 9 October 2018 (UTC)
- I reverted as the view seems fairly widespread (it's even mentioned in the lead), and was sourced, so I don't see it as WP:OR as per your edit summary. I agree it's not particularly well-sourced, so further/better sources should be found. Rather tag with than remove. Greenman (talk) 10:17, 9 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Greenman: What the Lead states is:
- Today, the Battle of Cuito Cuanavale is credited by some with ushering in the first round of trilateral negotiations, mediated by the United States, which secured the withdrawal of Cuban and South African troops from Angola and Namibia by 1991.
- This is undoubtedly true. Cuito Cuanavale did lead to the Tripartite Accord (Angola). That is not the same thing as claiming Cuito Cuanavale led to CODESA, which I still believe to be an instance of WP:OR Mick gold (talk) 13:20, 9 October 2018 (UTC)
This article is quite clearly written with a South African (Apartheid era) bias. It will be wearisome to address and source but it's probably necessary, as the insistence that the battle resulted in continued stalemate obscures the associated Geo-political consequences - the withdrawal of SADF forces from Angola, and soon afterwards from Namibia, all important for themselves as well as for the ramifications in South Africa. The loss of its ability project military force across southern Africa was central to the South African government's realization that apartheid was no longer sustainable. This perspective represents the consensus of most regional analysts. When my calendar clears next month, I'll start to assemble the citations. RobotBoy66 (talk) 03:11, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
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