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Agree with you totally. Naively, I tried a short edit to the ridiculously over-long opening over-view, and tried to expand some sentences for further clarification (all checked and double-checked, and all from Misplaced Pages sources) but was unceremoniously and undemocratically blocked. I doubt even a grammatical change would be tolerated, though God knows it needs it. I have fulminated about this in my own comment about it being a hagiography. Tried to take up the automatic conflict resolve option but was also unable to do so, which must come from the page author's end. Although a journalist my whole working life, I don't really understand how Wiki editing works, probably because I'm not computer savvy. It's very frustrating that people with a blatantly biased agenda can get away with this sort of stuff. Good on you for your comments though. ] (]) 22:45, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
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The heading for Public Image should be "Public Image" or "Criticism" either are fine. Putting down "Sexism of the Press" is not appropriate. It is an opinion not a fact and has no place in an encyclopedia. Freshacconci has reverted several times now from multiple user edits.
Additionally, the entire public image section needs work from someone a bit more experienced than me. I don't see how Tony Romo is relevant enough to Yoko Ono that it should be included in the article.
The "Public Appreciation" is also strange to have as a heading for an encyclopedia. The entire section reads like a recruitment for a cult of personality. If you read that section you would get the impression Yoko Ono is a popular person, not a widely despised figure. I don't see how anything is that section is relevant to a bio on Yoko Ono. The entire section should be nuked imo.
Parts of this article come off as written by people that have a massive bias towards Yoko Ono or sockpuppets. The entire article needs to be semi-protected and needs to be edited by a neutral experienced user.
Agree with you totally. Naively, I tried a short edit to the ridiculously over-long opening over-view, and tried to expand some sentences for further clarification (all checked and double-checked, and all from Misplaced Pages sources) but was unceremoniously and undemocratically blocked. I doubt even a grammatical change would be tolerated, though God knows it needs it. I have fulminated about this in my own comment about it being a hagiography. Tried to take up the automatic conflict resolve option but was also unable to do so, which must come from the page author's end. Although a journalist my whole working life, I don't really understand how Wiki editing works, probably because I'm not computer savvy. It's very frustrating that people with a blatantly biased agenda can get away with this sort of stuff. Good on you for your comments though. Mag Wildwood (talk) 22:45, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
The biggest issue with this BLP article is the lack of verifiable sources for some of the content. An additional issue is that considerable amounts of content seem to be WP:UNDUE. I think compliance with GAC#3b would be obtained with some trimming of low-relevance info, esp. in the later life section. (t · c) buidhe07:17, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
Delist - no improvements, and uses user-generated sources like last.fm and discogs multiple times. Needs sizable sourcing work, and at almost 12,000 words is probably too long. Hog FarmTalk22:40, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
I removed some categories that were incorrect and/or not applicable. One that would be correct is U.S. Residents/Green Card holders, which isn't there. I tried to find the correct "category" for that. If someone knows how to do that, please do. Hotcop2 (talk) 22:27, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
Short description edits
as per MOS:SDDATES, a birth date for a living person should only be included in the short description if the birth date is sourced in the article, which it is not in this article, so I've removed it. Also, Ono has permanent residency in the US and should be described as a Japanese American, I think. Matuko (talk) 14:29, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
