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* Insert word "the Great" after name. |
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* Get non-biased factual information here. Most of this is biased against the man. |
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* Most of this section was written by U.S. establishment lackies who support the corporate imperialists of the U.S.A. |
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* Point out that the U.S. mafia imperialists (and their politicians) wanted to keep Cuba as their personal colony, complete with lots of whores, good cigars, and casinos. They lost that battle, and still haven't gotten over it. |
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* fix word "despose" - it should be "depose" |
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* fix word "despose" - it should be "depose" |
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* Improve the Embargo section |
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* Improve the Embargo section |
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* Get a peer review |
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* Get a peer review |
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* Remove material well represented elsewhere - ie. much of the Foreign relations material. (see ]) |
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* Remove material well represented elsewhere - ie. much of the Foreign relations material. (see ]) |
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* Remove or reword material stating that "Castro repelled the Bag of Pigs invaders" or "Castro was forced to shut down 118 factories" - these were Cuban military and government actions. |
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* Add a survey of what "rank" Castro was during famous military actions -- has he always been ''comandanté''? what were the insignia on his lapels or epaulets, when he wore such things? |
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* "External links" section must be cleaned up and better categorized |
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* "External links" section must be cleaned up and better categorized |
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* Remove "struggle for power" weasel formulations, this misleads into thinking that the only reason for the Cuban revolutionaries was "lust for power", while in fact they '''say''' they sought a government by and for the people. |
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* Remove "struggle for power" weasel formulations, this misleads into thinking that the only reason for the Cuban revolutionaries was "lust for power", while in fact they '''say''' they had a social patos against the Batista regime (believe it or not). |
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* Change "...as part of their own global political game." to "...as part of their own global political agenda." in the fourth paragraph. |
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* Point out that the Batista regime was contentto oversee what had become, the Mafia's colony. |
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* Point out that the CIA and the US have persistently deviled Castro ever since the bay of pigs. |
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* Point out that Castro's regime has courageously and successfully stood up to the capitalist Goliath who wanted to more than anything to crush them. |
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* Include a note that the dreadfully deceptive and paranoid U.S. government has forbidden U.S. citizens from visiting Cuba. |
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* Include a section on "Operation Milagro" with facts about the hundreds of thousands of Latin Americans who have had their vision restored with free eye surgery since 2004 - as a gift from the |
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Cuban and Venezuelan people. |
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