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| Dear Spartaz, could you explain what exactly is POV and "wrong tone" in this article? You are also very welcome to improve the article yourself. I will try to improve the article as time allows. ] 21:28, 5 April 2007 (UTC) | Dear Spartaz, could you explain what exactly is POV and "wrong tone" in this article? You are also very welcome to improve the article yourself. I will try to improve the article as time allows. ] 21:28, 5 April 2007 (UTC) | ||
| :O'K, I have made a few changes. More should be done.] 21:55, 5 April 2007 (UTC) | :O'K, I have made a few changes. More should be done.] 21:55, 5 April 2007 (UTC) | ||
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| This article has a confusingly long list of references mixed with in-line URL links. But it does not have inline citation which would help the reader identify which items have been sourced from independent publications, and which items are "as stated by NGOWatch". | |||
| It would help greatly if, before the article grows bigger, it changed to using <nowiki><ref></ref></nowiki> markup for all references. | |||
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NPOV and other problems?
Dear Spartaz, could you explain what exactly is POV and "wrong tone" in this article? You are also very welcome to improve the article yourself. I will try to improve the article as time allows. Biophys 21:28, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
- O'K, I have made a few changes. More should be done.Biophys 21:55, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
Referencing
This article has a confusingly long list of references mixed with in-line URL links. But it does not have inline citation which would help the reader identify which items have been sourced from independent publications, and which items are "as stated by NGOWatch". It would help greatly if, before the article grows bigger, it changed to using <ref></ref> markup for all references. Garrie 04:19, 13 April 2007 (UTC)