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**{{tq|Since the adoption of Client Hints by major browsers}} you should say which browsers support it. | **{{tq|Since the adoption of Client Hints by major browsers}} you should say which browsers support it. | ||
**{{tq|overall adoption of Client Hints across the internet was low}} this seems at odds with earlier statements like {{tq|over 75% of all traffic on the internet supports client hints}} | **{{tq|overall adoption of Client Hints across the internet was low}} this seems at odds with earlier statements like {{tq|over 75% of all traffic on the internet supports client hints}} | ||
MediaWiki supports use of Client Hints as a counter-abuse tool. It would be disingenuous to not mention this. See https://www.mediawiki.org/Extension:CheckUser/Client_Hints. |
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Nominator: Sohom Datta (talk · contribs) 19:54, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: RoySmith (talk · contribs) 01:27, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
Starting review RoySmith (talk) 01:27, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
- With the proviso that Earwig is running in degraded mode now due to Too Many Requests, no problems found with copyvios.
- None of the items under WP:GAFAIL apply.
- Per MOS:LEAD, the lead section should summarize the rest of the article, not introduce new material.
- "application programming interface (API)" is not mentioned in the article (at least not by that name)
- The lead is heavy on material from History and almost completely ignores the Background, "Mechanism, and Privacy concerns sections, so the most important points from those sections should be added.
- Prose:
became an official Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF) draft
no need to say "official"The header was meant ... User-Agents became ... this information is used
The change of tense here is jarring.In 2020, Google announced their intention to deprecate user-agent (UA) strings ...
This is a statement about what happened in 2020 cited to a paper published in 2023. Are you sure that's the right reference?Brave also raised concerns about the initial proposal ...
Likewise, this is a source published in 2019 talking ostensibly talking about events that happened in 2020.As of May 2024, over 75% of all traffic on the internet supports client hints
It's now September; are there any more recent sources for this?Since the adoption of Client Hints by major browsers
you should say which browsers support it.overall adoption of Client Hints across the internet was low
this seems at odds with earlier statements likeover 75% of all traffic on the internet supports client hints
MediaWiki supports use of Client Hints as a counter-abuse tool. It would be disingenuous to not mention this. See https://www.mediawiki.org/Extension:CheckUser/Client_Hints.