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Thanks, ] (]) 17:08, 11 October 2024 (UTC) Thanks, ] (]) 17:08, 11 October 2024 (UTC)

====Comments from Z1720====

{{re|Titan(moon)003}} Sorry that it has taken so long to get comments. Here's some thoughts below:

*The lead should be expanded to include all major aspects of the article.
*Hatnotes, like the "see also" statement in the "History" section, should go under the heading, not between paragraphs.
*Keep looking for additional sources. Some places to look are Google Scholar, archive.org, ] or your local library system. This will help you expand the article.
*The first paragraph in "Abort modes" needs a citation.

I hope this helps. ] (]) 20:38, 19 December 2024 (UTC)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve this up to at least a B-class article and I'm not certain how.

Thanks, Titan(moon)003 (talk) 17:08, 11 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

@Titan(moon)003: Sorry that it has taken so long to get comments. Here's some thoughts below:

  • The lead should be expanded to include all major aspects of the article.
  • Hatnotes, like the "see also" statement in the "History" section, should go under the heading, not between paragraphs.
  • Keep looking for additional sources. Some places to look are Google Scholar, archive.org, WP:LIBRARY or your local library system. This will help you expand the article.
  • The first paragraph in "Abort modes" needs a citation.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 20:38, 19 December 2024 (UTC)

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