| Revision as of 21:19, 19 December 2024 editTitan(moon)003 (talk | contribs)217 edits →Comments from Z1720: ReplyTag: Reply← Previous edit | Revision as of 23:46, 23 December 2024 edit undoRoySmith (talk | contribs)Autopatrolled, Checkusers, Administrators92,153 edits →Crew Dragon Launch Abort System: section for meNext edit → | ||
| Line 21: | Line 21: | ||
| :Thanks, appreciate the feedback ] (]) 21:19, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | :Thanks, appreciate the feedback ] (]) 21:19, 19 December 2024 (UTC) | ||
| ====Comments from RoySmith==== | |||
Revision as of 23:46, 23 December 2024
Crew Dragon Launch Abort System
| Toolbox |
|---|
- Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch • Watch peer review
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve this up to at least a B-class article and I'm not certain how.
Thanks, Titan(moon)003 (talk) 17:08, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
@Titan(moon)003: Sorry that it has taken so long to get comments. Here's some thoughts below:
- The lead should be expanded to include all major aspects of the article.
- Hatnotes, like the "see also" statement in the "History" section, should go under the heading, not between paragraphs.
- Keep looking for additional sources. Some places to look are Google Scholar, archive.org, WP:LIBRARY or your local library system. This will help you expand the article.
- The first paragraph in "Abort modes" needs a citation.
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 20:38, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, appreciate the feedback Titan(moon)003 (talk) 21:19, 19 December 2024 (UTC)