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| *Neutralize the language by adjusting all '''absolute''' statements to carry '''qualifiers'''. eg "''It is '''claimed''' that four planes were hijacked...''" <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 06:41, August 27, 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | *Neutralize the language by adjusting all '''absolute''' statements to carry '''qualifiers'''. eg "''It is '''claimed''' that four planes were hijacked...''" <small>—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 06:41, August 27, 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> | ||
| - I object to this 'to do' --] 00:08, 5 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| *<s>Summarize the sections by cutting down on detail, which can be moved to the main articles specific to those sections.<s> | *<s>Summarize the sections by cutting down on detail, which can be moved to the main articles specific to those sections.<s> | ||
| *<s>Combine related sections and cut down on ToC</s> | *<s>Combine related sections and cut down on ToC</s> | ||
Revision as of 00:08, 5 September 2007
- Neutralize the language by adjusting all absolute statements to carry qualifiers. eg "It is claimed that four planes were hijacked..." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.91.95.124 (talk) 06:41, August 27, 2007 (UTC)
- I object to this 'to do' --Tarage 00:08, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
Summarize the sections by cutting down on detail, which can be moved to the main articles specific to those sections.Combine related sections and cut down on ToC- Better organization of pictures
- Provide more references
- Add effect on Northern Virginia, as the attack on the Pentagon occurred there.