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==Banfield== |
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The section on "posture" isn't working for me. Nobody outside of the The theory looks like it was created by a non-medical person who is trying to reinvent the wheel -- the "wheel" being garden variety ] and ]. I'd like to remove the last few paragraphs of the "History" section, beginning from the words "From 1982-1983..." Does anyone here -- that is, anyone here except Banfield, who has a clear ] in judging the merits and notability of his own work -- object? ] 01:08, 21 December 2007 (UTC) |
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The section on "posture" isn't working for me. Nobody outside of the The theory looks like it was created by a non-medical person who is trying to reinvent the wheel -- the "wheel" being garden variety ] and ]. I'd like to remove the last few paragraphs of the "History" section, beginning from the words "From 1982-1983..." Does anyone here -- that is, anyone here except Banfield, who has a clear ] in judging the merits and notability of his own work -- object? ] 01:08, 21 December 2007 (UTC) |
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:No objection here. I agree about the COI of his expounding anything to do with his own theory in this article, and have posted a note to that effect at ]. If necessary, it can go to ]. ] (]) 02:16, 21 December 2007 (UTC) |
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:No objection here. Nothing I can find in real medical literature sugests it merits such ], and I agree about the COI of his expounding anything to do with his own theory in this article. I've posted a note to that effect at ]; if necessary, it can go to ]. ] (]) 02:16, 21 December 2007 (UTC) |
Remade the article - No copyright material this time.
The section on "posture" isn't working for me. Nobody outside of the The theory looks like it was created by a non-medical person who is trying to reinvent the wheel -- the "wheel" being garden variety orthostatic intolerance and hyperventilation syndrome. I'd like to remove the last few paragraphs of the "History" section, beginning from the words "From 1982-1983..." Does anyone here -- that is, anyone here except Banfield, who has a clear conflict of interest in judging the merits and notability of his own work -- object? WhatamIdoing 01:08, 21 December 2007 (UTC)