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* Edit article using less one sided and subjective language. Article is worded from a bias pro-life point of view with use of such phrases as "expulsion from the uterus of a fetus/embryo, resulting in or caused by its death" (embryo's death;conveying the idea of an embryo's death is extremely subjective language and point of view)
* <s>Expand lead</s> * <s>Expand lead</s>
* <s>Properly source the majority of information under "Forms of abortion" and "Health effects."</s> * <s>Properly source the majority of information under "Forms of abortion" and "Health effects."</s>

Revision as of 02:54, 12 July 2009

  • Edit article using less one sided and subjective language. Article is worded from a bias pro-life point of view with use of such phrases as "expulsion from the uterus of a fetus/embryo, resulting in or caused by its death" (embryo's death;conveying the idea of an embryo's death is extremely subjective language and point of view)
  • Expand lead
  • Properly source the majority of information under "Forms of abortion" and "Health effects."
  • Create more balanced sub-section on abortion and mental health to better describe scope of controversy in both science and politics.
  • Source and write a sub-section on compulsory abortion for "Social issues" (see To-Do Items for a draft).
  • Add statistics on national abortion rates. Rework the table for "Incidence" (see To-Do Items for a work-in-progress version)
  • Discuss creation of "Historical perspectives" topic under "Abortion debate."
  • Discuss potential summary section of Religion and abortion article.
  • Discuss potential creation of "Abortion in art, literature, and film" section.
  • Streamline article per WP:SIZE. Copyedit to simplify prose and discuss content which could be reduced or removed.